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>What is this thread about?
This thread revolves around stories about ponies being enslaved.

>Can you elaborate more?
Sure! SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts.
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First for Pinkie Pie is worst pony
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I've actually had this pretty much ready since a week ago but been too lazy to post.
>>29917217

>The next competition came fast, but not without anticipation and impatience from Rainbow Dash. This event would have actual qualifiers and, in some cases, brackets. It would have grandstands, and corporate sponsors, and a massive media presence, and a massive audience watching. It was going to be the greatest show she’d put on since her days in Equestria.
>They arrived early to watch the qualifiers (Rainbow had been invited to every event) but were nonetheless delayed for two days by exceedingly poor weather. In that time, they met up with Autumn Winds and toured the city of Little Rock. With nearly constant downpours and no indoor sporting facilities willing to lend their services to the equine athletes, their group had little to do in those two days.
>By the time the rain stopped late into the second night, Buster and Rainbow had both grown tired of their company. Autumn Winds was a perfectly agreeable mare, but her owner was distinctly less enjoyable company. At first, neither could identify what was off-putting about him. But by the end of two full days, his pride and high expectations of Autumn had soured any impression he might have made on them before.
>With the after-dark skies clear and expected to stay clear, the two hastily said their goodbyes and set out to find an open strip of sky to get in some practice. Ultimately, they settled on the swelled river. Rainbow had ample width and length to practice, little fear of a serious crash, and Buster got the chance to idle his time away with a round of night fishing.
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>>29972582
>After affirming that her wait had not, in fact, had any major impact on her physical fitness, the two quickly retired to their hotel. A far cry from the modest accommodations they’d seen in Tuscaloosa, the event organizers had provided the two with a luxury suite in one of the city’s tallest hotels, gratis. From the top floor balcony, they had an excellent view of the artificially lit town.
“Human cities sure are pretty at night,” Rainbow commented as she sat on the outward edge of the thick guardrail. “Even Manehattan, our biggest city, it never had lights like these. It was so much darker.”
“Yeah, and this here’s a nice view. Don’t think I’ve ever had a room or lookout so nice.”
“I don’t think anything can match a view from Cloudsdale. But yeah, this is pretty awesome to look at.”
“Well then what you hanging out here for? Why not go out there and get a better view from above the building?” Buster asked, curious. He playfully nudged her forward, although not strongly enough to actually push her off the edge.
“It’s a pegasus thing, I guess. A view from a balcony is just, well, it’s just better than in the open air. Plus, you don’t get the company up there.”
“I get the company, I guess, but how’s the view any better from here than up there?”
“My friend Twilight actually did some research on that,” she said with a sigh. “Don’t think they ever found out, though.”
>The two were silent for a moment more. On the streets below, a siren roared to life as a police car took off from its roadside stop. The two watched it drive into the distance, its sound fading long before the piercing red and blue lights.
“You miss ‘em, dontcha,” Buster remarked, more as a statement of fact than a supposition.
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>>29972590
“Even after so much time to try and let go,” she muttered, frustration tinging her tone, “I still can’t stop thinking of them. All of them. And now that I know Applejack is alright, that’s only made it worse! They say we can’t go see them yet, but why?”
“I’m sure your friend wants to see you just as much, Dash. Gotta be something super important to keep you apart.”
“I guess.”
>Another moment passed before a chilling breeze swept between them. Buster, unused to cold high-altitude winds, retreated to the warm safety of his luxuriously spacious hotel room. After a moment, Rainbow followed him, closing the sliding glass door behind her.
“Probably time to get to bed, anyway,” the mare said with a shrug, diving for her sheets. “I want to wake up a bit early for a 30-mile flight.”
“Not before you shower, stinky pony.”
“Oh come on, I barely even worked out today!”
“And that’s the same line you gave me last night,” Buster said, firmly but lightheartedly. “Now go get your blue butt in the shower or I won’t tell you where the extra case of cider is.”
>Not willing to risk her precious beverage, the mare hastily clambered into the bathroom to get cleaned. Although the faucet controls were difficult to work with naught but hooves and teeth, she managed to get a good stream of water going. It was certainly more pleasant than the subpar plumbing at Buster’s home. Her expected three minutes of showering turned to ten, and then soon to thirty as she let the perfectly-heated water splash across her.
>When she finally left the bathroom, she found Buster sleeping soundly on his bed, the television turned to some news segment and a fresh case of cider cans resting on the table next to him. But as she grabbed a can and settled into her own bed, careful not to disturb him, his voice rose quietly from the opposing bed.
“Go brush your teeth, stinky pony.”
>’That better not be a new nickname,’ she mused.
>…
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>>29972597
>Qualifiers started at eight the next morning, but Rainbow was up and exercising by five. With the morning still shrouded in darkness and even some fog, she set out for a number of long, tiring exercises. She practiced distance flying, ascents/descents, endurance gliding, high altitude laps, and a full retinue of cardiovascular routines.
>Upon returning two hours later, she found the hotel room empty save for a note – ‘Dash: They got free breakfast buffet downstairs. Bring whatever you need, we ain’t coming back.’ A short flight down to the ground floor discovered Buster happily eating away any weight loss he’d observed in the past week through bagels, sausages, eggs, and other fattening breakfast foods.
“I leave you alone for one meal and you do this?” she said, somewhat incredulous at his meals of choice.
“Hey, c’mon, I gotta get back every once in a while! I swear, I paid all the money and you got the slave!”
“Gotta get you slim before I can put you to work,” she replied, playing along with his banter. “I demand you cease this meal at once.”
“You ain’t White enough for that!”
“What?”
“Never mind, never mind. Just go grab a plate of whatever’s healthy over there and come sit down,” he said, emphasizing and putting air quotes around the word ‘healthy’.
>As expected, the hotel buffet had zero accommodations for ponies in its breakfast display. Oh well, two bananas and two apples would probably be nutritious enough. At least it was better than the kibble she saw a leashed earth pony eating in the corner of the room.
“Anyone in the qualifiers you’ve got your eye on?” Buster asked before wolfing down a sausage.
“There’s a few names I’ve seen before, this time around. Most are from the Equestria Games, but at least one pony was in some other flying team full-time. Should be interesting.”
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>>29972602
“But you were the best of the best, right?”
“Damn right I was the best of the best! Competition or not, I sure hope we have room in the car, because we’re going to have to fit a few trophies in there.”
>In her sudden excitement, the mare had risen from her seat and was now hovering over the breakfast table. She looked around and blushed, having immediately seen the many heads turned her way. Buster just chuckled and pointed his thumb down, as if she needed any further encouragement to retake her seat.
“Just make sure you keep that excitement up for tomorrow, aight?”
>…
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>>29972569
What did Ponkfags ever do to you dude?
That s also not how you write Starlight Glimmer ^:)
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>>29972609
>Forty-five minutes later, the two were happily seated in their VIP box, watching the first contestants take their places. They weren’t even aware they had a private area until they arrived; Buster had just assumed they’d get in through general admission or perhaps an athletes’ entrance.
>But their accommodations merely matched the overall grandeur exhibited before them. The facility was new and shining, and was perfectly suited for the various events. It was a professional race track, completed not a year before, now rented out and temporarily converted into a general-purpose open-air arena. With no grandstands on the thin ends of the track, the facility was perfect for the kinds of low-altitude and high-speed finishes that many pegasi would be making.
>The event was privately organized, but exceedingly well-prepared. Even in the qualifiers grandstands were largely packed, with vendors easily meeting their quotas as they skittered up and down the stairs hawking their food and wares. Seating was thoroughly pre-planned as well: there were integrated sections, human-only sections, and a large pony-focused (but not exclusive) area. Overseers staffed the latter area so that owners could leave their equines alone, either to enjoy the pony-restricted stands or simply to go elsewhere for the day.
>Few had so good a view as Rainbow Dash and Buster. They’d been given the only unoccupied press booth, giving them an unobstructed view of as much of the competition area as possible. As they looked out over the balcony, they spotted large, expensive television cameras flanking them on either side.
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>>29972617
>By the time they had finished settling in, the final call rang out for contestants to approach the starting line. A simple event, the 100 meter fly, would start the day. Out of sixteen contestants, the top seven would qualify to compete along with Rainbow Dash. She could only recognize one pony among them, a stallion who’d failed to medal in the Equestria Games after being injured in a freak bird collision.
>The starting pistol popped, and before they knew it, the race was over. Rainbow’s eyes widened in response to their speed and acceleration, both easily at professional levels of fine-tuning. These ponies had been training, and they seemed ready to win. The stallion she recognized didn’t even qualify.
>The two lead times, in fact, would be no easy feat to overcome. But, Rainbow mused, she had expected this. This was a national-level competition, and interest was only growing by the day. To be unprepared for serious, professional opposition would be foolish.
>Within a few hours, she had a pretty good idea of how she would be stacking up in these races. Pure speed likely wouldn’t be an issue: even with the full roster of Equestrian competitors against her, Rainbow was the unopposed champion. Acrobatics and stunts would likely paint a similar picture. The ponies here were just lacking in the hardcore training of a professional performance crew.
>But endurance flying, specialty events, and gliding might provide too much challenge for her to beat. One stallion flying the ten-mile loop even posted a time within two seconds of the old Equestrian record. The closest Rainbow Dash had ever gotten to that score was five seconds off.
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>>29972619
>The dress of ponies in those races was telling of their performance. Every one of them bore a flight suit of some kind, and the majority clearly had custom fits. These ponies had trained to win, and their owners had spent to win. It made sense; most events had a cash prize of some sort.
“You think these ponies got bought just for this competition?” Rainbow asked Buster after the forty-mile loop, where two stallions posted times she probably couldn’t hope to beat.
“Some of them, maybe. I remember seeing some article online about some guy who’s making a fortune selling athlete ponies. Goes around looking for signs of strength or something, buys ‘em, trains ‘em, and sells ‘em to rich folk looking to win.”
>She was silent as she watched another group of contestants take their places at the starting line. Again, they confirmed an observation she’d been making all day.
“Lot of stallions.”
“Well, they’re bigger,” Buster responded. “Guessing they’re usually a bit faster, too?”
“No,” she responded, shaking her head. “Earth pony stallions are usually stronger than mares, but not pegasi. It’s about equal. Which is why it’s weird that we’ve seen, like, three in four contestants being stallions.”
“Well, don’t look at me for an answer. I’m just here so you can do your thing. Probably gotta ask the stallions themselves what the deal is.”
“Maybe.”
>…
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>>29972625
End update. Comments/criticisms always appreciated. Pastebin at https://pastebin.com/GNF8AcxU
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I miss corona
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>>29972649
Great Job HJ is good "see you" again in this thread

Now Dash need one true challenger,one pegasus train in the Earth for humans trainers, one prodigy with an really amazing ability and one eye of tyger spirit, or maybe one old friend of the Wonderbolts academy times
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Mare is for charging into battle
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I miss corona
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>>29973169
I miss sunbutt in space. And bipolar moonbutt
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"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
> Updates are posted in Part 2.

> Bravo pulls the armoured van into the familiar carpark, and stops the van behind 2 police cars. Leaving the engine and lights still on, he throws the door open and gets out. Foxtrot does the same, having been seated in the passenger’s seat beside him. Moments later, the back door opens and Angela and you jump out. You check your watch as your address the others.
“We have 4 minutes and 37 seconds. Let’s go! Let’s go!”
> As you run across the small field towards Block 45, all you can focus on are from the memory of chasing Starlight across this very path and the alternating rhythm of your legs and body. This time, the metallic clinks you hear are heavier, especially when there is a fucking 7-kilogram door-breaching tool on your back. The 4 of you cross the grass patch quickly, passing the rubbish chute where Sprinkle Medley’s body was found and into the lift lobby, where a pair of officers are already waiting. One of them has a hand on the button of the lift.
> “ECAD RT officers, right? We got your memo from AC Thor himself. How much longer?”
> The 6 of you pile into the lift and Angela jabs the button to the eleventh floor. Bravo answers the officer as he adjusts the weight in his arm; he is carrying Alpha’s ballistic shield.
> “3 minutes and 15 seconds.”
> That policeman who spoke earlier quickly nods, handing Bravo a sock with a white tube leading out of it. It is attached to a silver tube, which is in turn attached to a firing device via a beige cable. The firing device itself is a T-shaped plastic object with a removable cap on the top. Your eyes widen as you look at the crude object.
“A door-breaching charge? Really?”
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>>29973553

Sunbutt in space will return shortly, don't you worry!
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>>29973567
> The Police constable nods.
> “The Police Tactical Response Force gave us this as instructed. 200 grams of TNT flakes with 2 PETN primers. It is the fastest available option to take down that door, so use the ballistic shield and cover your ears.”
“Seems excessive; I mean, we have our tools here.”
> Angela pokes you in the arm.
> “The faster, the better. How much time?”
> You check your watch again.
“2 minutes 22 seconds.”
> The elevator opens. Bravo checks the sign for the unit numbers, then he heads left. The rest of you follow, stacking up on him with your weapons in a ‘low-ready’ position as the other 2 officers stay behind at the lift landing. In front of you are another pair of Police officers, and they wave as the 4 of you move along the corridor briskly and with purpose. The corridor is flanked on one side with doors to their respective units, while the other has a handrail and is open to the outside, allowing natural light and wind into said corridor.
> At least the explosion later will not be deafeningly loud, Boss. Place is not entirely enclosed.
> Aye, Brain.
> Your group stops in front of the indicated unit, pressing yourselves against the wall. Bravo hands the charge to Angela as she moves to place it on the handle, while Foxtrot orders the other 2 officers to retreat quickly further down the corridor. Angela comes back and glances at you.
> “Time?”
> Your eyes travel down to your watch yet again.
“1 minute 34 seconds. Weapons ready and face shields on.”
> You flip your face shield down with a hand, and several clicks can be heard as you switch your weapon to ‘full automatic’ and bring it up to your eye level. You made sure that everyone reloaded their sub-machineguns during the drive here. Pressing a button on your radio, you speak into it as Bravo braces the shield with an elbow, his shoulder and the side of his helmet.
“Det 1 to Zulu. We are in position and ready to breach. Over.”
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>>29973571
> “Zulu to Det 1. I am 6 minutes out. Do it. Breach now.”
> With a nod, Angela unscrews the cap of the firing device and pulls it sharply upwards.
> ‘BOOM!’
> The entire fucking world shakes as a concussive wave washes over you. It feels like a giant hand has slapped your entire body, knocking the wind out of you as a fuckload of wood shreds shoots out into the corridor.
> Brain and you are so wrong.
> FUCKING HELL THAT WAS FUCKING LOUD!
> Ears ringing, you register movement as Bravo storms into the flat, and you follow Angela closely. Passing the main door, which has flown off its hinges into several chunks, you scan the living room. There is a short passageway to the kitchen at the back, and on your left are 2 doorways; the one further down, nearer to the kitchen, has its doors closed. Moving swiftly, Alpha moves to sweep the first room as Angela and you stack up to the closed door while Foxtrot proceeds into the kitchen. You move to the other side of the doorway, and with quick nod to Angela, you reach over and twist the door handle. It opens.
> Swiftly, Angela uses her shoulder barge in, throwing the door open as you rush in after her.
> “POLICE! GET DOWN ON THE GROUND!”
> In front of you is a Caucasian man that looks to be about 30 years old, and he is rather handsome but thin. From the way he looks, it seems like he got dressed very hastily, as his shorts is worn the wrong way. Your eyes search the room. It is padded with what you can only assume to be sound-proof material, and there is an array of stands and recording devices in front of you, along with a small table that has an opened laptop on it. Further in, you see the mare in the snuff video. She is still tied on the bed, and you immediately see that her genital area is horribly stained with fresh blood, which covers the sheets directly below her suspended hindquarters. A bloodstained knife rests at the foot of the bedframe.
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>>29973573
> Angela orders him to get down again, and he compiles by kneeling, whimpering as he puts his hands behind his back. Then, your watch beeps, and barely a second later, loud snap echoes through the room. You look up quickly, and you see that the mare is choking and gasping as the device behind her pulls the ruffia string around her neck taut.
> Moving swiftly, you push aside the stands and recording devices as you swing the butt of your sub-machinegun across that man’s face, causing him to land on his back with a groan. Drawing your knife, you swiftly cut the string, causing the machine to snap back its arms and allowing the mare to breathe again; she coughs and splutters as her neck is released from the choking hold. Then, you turn your attention to the man who is writhing on the ground.
> With a swift movement, you pull down the pair of shorts he is wearing, and you see that his crotch area is covered in blood. Coco Pommel’s blood.
“YOU FUCKING BASTARD!”
> With that, you straddle his chest, twisting your body as you drive the back of your sub-machinegun repeatedly into every inch of his body.
“FUCK YOU, YOU SADISTIC PIECE OF SHIT! GOD FUCKING DAMN YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU!”
> The butt of your weapon slams into him on every alternate syllable with punishing force. When he tries to block with his arms, twisting and turning his body to avoid your blows, you simply move the butt of your weapon to another portion of him that is exposed. Head, shoulder, neck, chest, head again, neck again. Fuck him. All that matters to you now are 3 things: your panting, your body’s form as you drive the weapon over and over again into that sadistic fucker, and your sheer fury that is throwing you into a frenzy of rage.
> “Enough, Delta!”
“FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU!”
> This motherfucker! You want to hurt him. You want to hurt him so badly! You are going to kill him! You are going to-
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>>29973578
> Suddenly, you feel a firm grip on your shoulder and your face shield lifts up. When you spin to see whose hand that was, a fist comes flying at your face.
> Oh sh-
> ‘Wham!’
> That blow connected with the left side of your face, throwing you off balance as you topple to the ground. Your left cheek bone smarts painfully, and you can taste the blood that is coming from a tear on the left side of your lower lip. The cloth that covers that portion is becoming wet and sticky.
> “I said: That’s enough, Delta.”
> Glaring at the fucker who struck you, you see that AC Thor is the room, and he has his eyes on you. They are narrowed, and his gaze is hard as his flicks his right wrist a few times. Your eyes meet his, then they travel to the sadist on the ground, who is now just twitching and moaning. His face is covered in bruises and blood and it is swelling rapidly. He is missing several teeth.
> Holy shit, you went totally berserk on him.
> “Get up.”
> Hearing AC Thor’s command, you comply, but not before throwing a kick at the semi-conscious man in front of you. You stand up slowly, and you see that the other 3 officers of your detachment are in the room; they are standing behind the Assistant Commissioner, and the laptop is now closed under Foxtrot’s gloved hand. Turning your eyes on AC Thor again, you see that his face is a mask of rage. He points a finger at Sprinkle Medley’s killer.
> “Delta, this man has surrendered. Do I have to remind you that what you just did is a serious breach of the Criminal Procedure Code?”
> Fixing your eyes on AC Thor, you give him a glare of your own.
“Sir, I know the Code, so you don’t have to. This sack of shit used a knife to-”
> “I KNOW WHAT HE DID!”
> That shut you the hell up.
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>>29973581
> AC Thor turns as he moves his eyes slowly to each member of your detachment, making sure that every officer in the room is paying close attention to him. Settling his eyes on yours again, he speaks. His voice is slow and dangerously soft.
> “Delta, you are already in trouble, so don’t make it harder for yourself. Hand me your weapon, bring me that bloodied knife, and raise your hands as if you are guarding yourself from a boxer.”
> What the fuck. What is he-
> “That is an order.”
> Wordlessly, you reach your weapon out for AC Thor. When he grabs it, you walk over and pick up the knife, which you hold out to him handle-first. The Caucasian man pauses as he puts on a glove on his right hand, still holding the sub-machinegun in his left. Taking it, he tilts his head lightly as he waits for you to carry out the last part of his order. You let out a breath, glaring at him as you raise your fists in front of you, blocking him from your line of sight.
> You do not trust him, but he is the Commanding Officer for this operation and you are bound by-
> Pain erupts the back of your forearms and your left shoulder. Your eyes dart down, and you see half of the blade is embedded into the uniform of your left shoulder.
> “SIR?! WHAT THE FUCK?!”
> Angela screams at AC Thor as you recoil, gritting your teeth from the fire that comes from your wound. You stagger backwards and fall, feeling the door-breaching tool on your back impact the foot of Coco’s bed as you groan in agony. Gripping your upper arm just below the knife, your eyes travel up to AC Thor’s, and you stare at him in disbelief as Angela rushes to your side, already moving to check the extent of your wounds.
> Holy fucking Jesus, that hurts!
> The Assistant Commissioner turns as you groan again through your teeth, and once more, he looks at each of your team-members before he fixes his stern gaze on you again.
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>>29973586
> “All of you, I want you to listen to me, and listen well. Bravo swept the other bedroom, and Foxtrot swept the kitchen. Charlie, you joined Foxtrot because the both of you thought you heard noises from there. Delta, when you entered this room, this fucker lunged at you with a knife. Before you can raise your weapon, he brought you to the ground and tried to stab you. You manage to block his first attack, but he slashes your arms and stabbed you in your left shoulder. Charlie, you heard the commotion and rushed to help, and when you enter the room, you see the bastard on top of Delta as they wrestled with the knife. You order Delta’s assailant to stop, but he ignored you. Then, Delta gets an opportunity to defend himself when he manages to press the barrel of his MP5 to the side of the fucker’s neck. With his personal life and safety threatened, Delta has no alternative and is forced to squeeze the trigger, unfortunately killing his attacker in the process.”
> What the hell? But that bastard is still-
> Before either of you can react, AC Thor grabs the sadist by the t-shirt, pulling him up on to his hands and knees as he drags him forward. Then, with his right hand, he jabs your weapon into the man’s neck and squeezes the trigger.
> The deafening sound of gunfire fills the room, and you feel that your ears explode again as you clench your eyes. When you open them, you see 6 empty cases bouncing towards a corner of the room as AC Thor drops the body and thrusts the sub-machinegun into Angela’s vest. Bravo and Foxtrot simply stares at the Assistant Commissioner in shock. Your pain momentarily forgotten, you are sure that your eyes are as wide as those officers from your detachment.
> AC Thor… Murdered him. With your weapon.
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>>29973590
> Even through the ringing in your ears, you hear AC Thor’s next words.
“Charlie, untie Coco Pommel and bring her to the Animal Agency Shelter for emergency surgery. Get one of the pairs of Police officers to escort you there. Hurry please. Bravo and Foxtrot, bring Delta to the Medics below and report to back to Briefing Room 3-2 at PHQ. I will be there in an hour’s time, at 1527 sharp, to conduct the debrief. Charlie, I will see you there as well.”
> Turning to face you, AC Thor addresses you directly.
“Delta, after you get patched up, wait for DSP Koh to come down and escort you to his office. You will give him your statement of the events that happened here, and cooperate fully with him at all times. I will speak with you after the debrief.”
> Gritting your teeth again, you just glare and nod. You are in no position to resist as the pain flares again in your arms and shoulder. You can feel the blade moving lightly in your flesh as you breathe, and all you can focus on now is the intensity of the burning sensation that floods your senses. It is all you can think of.
> Fuck. That. Caucasian. CUNT.
> “Move. Now.”
> You yell out when Bravo accidentally hits the knife handle with his radio as he rushes to pull you up.
> …
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>>29973591
Updates!

I have planned this segment for a LONG time, and I am finally glad that I have written it.
> You will have many questions from reading this, but rest assured that answers are coming.

I will be working on the next update in about 2 -3 hour's time.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
> Updates are posted in Part 2.

Let me know what you think about this segment, as well as questions that you would like answered (both for this portion and for 'Because I Choose To' as a whole). With no spoilers, I will only say that this is important.

As always, I want to thank all of you for reading and for your support. Please post your comments, ideas, suggestions and criticisms below, yeah? I love to read them.

Stay awesome! ^^
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>>29973570

>The familiar whoosh and groan of your ship exiting a jump overcomes the surreal vacuum of witch space
>The dash display reads Kremainn
>Looks like you've arrived in record time
>Not that you have that much to spare
>You quickly locate Wohler terminal on the nav computer and send the coordinates to your HUD
>It's only 2000 light seconds
>No biggie
>The FSD in the back of your craft whirs to life as you speed past the local star and towards your destination
>This is the part of your job you really enjoy
>Just you and your ship coasting through space
>You find it relaxing
>Not that you are able to relax with your current battle against the clock
>A battle which you seem to be losing
>Fucking hurry up!
>In the distance you notice the presence of two large gas planets
>They have expansive rings filled with rock and ice
>Also pirates
>Lots of pirates
>"Attention! Incoming mission critical message!"
>Your ships computer announces the arrival of a message from your boss
>Did you run out of time?
>Nope, you've still got four... Three! Three minutes!
>You've still got a travel time of two, leaving you one to dock
>Without a docking computer...
>Fuck...
>You turn your attention back to the message
>It's a text file that simply reads 'U on ur way?'
>You bang out a similarly abbreviated message
>'Ye im just a sec away.'
>Feels good to be professional
>A ping tells you it's okay to drop out of supercruise
>Good shit
>A short moment later a blast of energy gives way to your sub light engines
>Ahead, you can see Wohler, the large polygonal station spinning silently in the void
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>>29972649
>ask the stallions themselves what the deal is
Uh-oh.
At the elite level, a stallion is more valuable then an equivalent or even superior mare because he can sire more foals. We are looking at the beginning of a selective breeding program. Catherine, Jacob, and others are thinking about what the next generation of earth-born ponies should look like, and how to profit from it. Athletic performance will be one criterion, as seen at competitions like this. There will be also be a show circuit where Equestrian ex-citizens are judged on colour, conformation, behavior, etc. A docile and obedient temperament will always be important. Intelligence is not required in either role, and may be a handicap. If slavery as an institution lasts another dozen generations, the species on earth might be unrecognizable to the Equestrian population!
A predictable, even inevitable, development but highly creepifying when applied to a sapient.
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>>29973604
Wow, AC Thor knows how to get things done! But as the saying goes: "Three can keep a secret, if two of them are dead". It's just too good a story know by too many people to stay buried forever. There was also far to long a delay between the door breaching charge and that last machine gun burst to make any sense.

>focus on are from the memory
>his shorts is worn

I don't see any real problems, everything is as good as it can be.
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>>29973830
Thanks for pointing those out; edits have been made in the pastebin.

Yep. Fewer people = a better kept secret. But what if a person is powerful enough to even crush rumors that are spreading?
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>>29973604
That Thor is a real piece of work and that's my kind of job he's doing. I want to know why he cares so much. If Anon ever sees his personal life I think it would be amazing if Thor is raising lots of little fillies at home that all think of him as their daddy.
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>>29973741

>"Gutamaya Echo X-Ray Oscar, please observe station procedures before attempting to dock."
"Yeah yeah give me a minute."
>You flick a few switches before opening the contacts panel to request docking
"This is Imperial Courier Echo X-Ray Oscar, requesting to dock for pickup of cargo."
>There was a short silence, presumably as the woman in flight control yelled at her coworkers
>"Affirmative, request granted. Please land at the designated pad, keep your speed low and make way for larger vessels."
>You were to go to landing pad 42
>And you had 30 seconds to get there
>Gotta go fast (within regulations of course)
>You approach the mail slot shaped opening at the stations entrance, flinching a little as you pass the through the shields
>That shit makes your hair stand on end
>42 has been marked on you HUD in blue, making it easy to align for landing
>The bleeping of your docking systems is unbearable, but you land like a pro regardless
>Well, you kinda were a professional courier
>But fuck everyone else, you didn't even hit the control tower once
>That's a success
>"And that's touchdown, ground crew dispatched, we hope you enjoy your stay pilot."
"Thanks control, it's good to be here."
>You rise from your seat and move to exit the craft, taking care as you descend the stairs
>You feel a lot lighter, but that's probably due to the difference in gravity between Wohler and your home planet
>A crew of 6 workers in a tug appear, and begin the short process of loading the cargo into your small bay
>You watch them work in silence, before a hand on your shoulder makes you jump
>"I see you're actually on time, I guess my message really got through to you, eh?"
>Your boss, a short stocky man in a high end looking suit, has appeared.
"Uh... Yes sir."
>"Look, I'm sorry about last night. I found out about what those interns had been up too, needless to say they won't be doing it again. There's no way I was gonna fire a pilot as good as yourself."
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>>29973847
>powerful enough to crush rumors
Sorry, not even God is that powerful. Rumors: truly an unstoppable force. The more you don't want people to know the better story it is! Cops can get away with this sort of vigilantism, but that's more because they're just above the law than because they are so good at keeping secrets.
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>>29973894
I can see your point, but some people know how to shut their mouths. especially when it could hurt someone that means a lot to them, and these aren't a bunch of scummy boys at a bar or little kids in high school/college.
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>>29973884

>>29973884

"It's fine sir, honestly. I've just had... Something, come up recently."
>He raises a perfectly kept eyebrow at you
>"What sort of something?"
"It's nothing really, just... Someone who's staying with me."
>Oh shit he's grinning at you now
>"Do my ears deceive me, or has Anonymous actually found a fucking girlfriend?"
>Shit, damage control time!
"W-what?! N-no it's not like-"
>"Gah, stop your yammering. This'll be good for you! Take it from me..."
>You don't want to take anything from him
>"You gotta get out more Anon, and this sounds like a perfect opportunity. Take your gal out and show her the stars! And maybe get something in return if you know what I'm saying..."
>You feel like mentioning the fact that sex in zero gravity is biologically impossible, bit that doesn't matter because you haven't got a fucking girlfriend!
"Err, thanks sir, really."
>"No problem kiddo, and just remember, if there's anything I can do for you, you need only ask."
>You look at the cargo care as they finish loading, and suddenly remember the other thing you needed
"Um yeah, about that, does this station stock Multi cannon ammunition, I need a top up."
>He just looks at you with a bored expression
>"Are you fucking serious? I go through with that whole speech and the only thing you can think to ask me is whether we have any ammunition for the autocannon on the front of your ship?"
"Yes."
>"You are a sad sad little man, but yes we do, any particular preference?"
"25 millimetre will do fine."
>"We'll have that wheeled out for you in a moment, good luck pilot."
>You give him a salute as he leaves
>Sure, he could be a dick sometimes, but you were glad he at least had a level head
>Those interns however... They were gonna pay
>You make your way back on board to check your courses
>Iota was first, as planned
>Maybe the pirates would just ignore you
>You didn't have anything of value on board, and your ship was soon to be well armed
>The question is would they care?
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>>29974044

>You are going to be carrying weapons, weapons that will be be used against boarding parties
>Pirates do lots of boarding, and it may be within their best interest to get rid of the weapons that will be used against them
>...
>Eh, maybe you'll just go unnoticed
>A rap on the side of your ship signals that the cannon is fully loaded
>Your systems confirm a whole 2100 rounds are present
>That should be enough to fend off any attackers, and you'll always have your lasers as a backup
>You wait until the ground crews are clear of the pad, before initiating the start up process
"This is landing pad four two, requesting permission to leave the station"
>There's a crackle as the tower crew pick up their microphones
>"Permission granted pilot, proceed with caution. May we thank you for visiting and wish you a safe flight."
>You doubt any of the next two hours will be anywhere near 'safe', but it's got to be done
"Thanks control, have a good day."
>You shut off the radio and focus on exiting the station
>While you were on the ground, multiple larger ships have appeared
>They must be in a hurry, as a traffic jam has formed at the station entrance
>Parking up behind a Fer-de-Lance, you wait patiently
>Holy Jesus that thing had to lot of guns
>You wouldn't want to get on the wrong end of one of those
>Eventually, the queue starts moving, and you find yourself outside of the station
>"Attention pilot, no fire zone cleared, station permitter exceeded, have a good flight."
>You wonder what Celestia is doing
>Probably cleaning, or watching TV
>Most likely the latter
>You'd better get this over with
>"Frame shift drive, charging."
>The bar in the middle of your heads up display begins to fill
>"Ready to engage."
>You pump the throttle, disappearing in a glass of light and a trail of smoke
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>>29974044
Sex in zero g is perfectly possible, it was apparent described in some detail in one of the books.
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>>29974859

Really, I remember reading somewhere that you could get hard because if the change in blood flow of something. I won't claim to know much about the nature of sex in a zero g environment, but it's the only thing I've ever seen regarding the subject, so I guess it was all I had to go off.

If I'm wrong then I'll just change it in the pastebin and actually research things in the future.
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>>29974859
>>29975005

Yeah, I'm wrong. It's possible but exceedingly difficult, and not even for the reasons imagined. More to do with the actual forces at play, meaning the couple need to be physically tied down for it to work properly.

Apparently Pornhub attempted a crowd fund to shoot a film in space. Pity they didn't get the required funds.
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>>29975197
It seems to me that zero g does decrease blood flow thus making erections difficult but this can be solved with Viagra and plus since we know sex can be had in zero g and not tethered in elite we can come up with any number of reasons for how and why. Considering pilots spend almost all of their time in zero g and the year 3302 we might assume they have been engineered to survive better in zero g.

Also, by the way, if you didn't know, loosing a limb isn'tthat big a deal in elite so celestia can get her wing back.
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>>29975197
>>29975462
>get erection
>obtain cockring
>put it on
>go to space
>maintain erection by never removing cockring until back on earth and healthy doses of horsepussi images
Problem solved
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>>29975462

All I'll say is that it's not that simple, because you've called out something I'm going to be addressing in a later update and i don't want to spoil stuff
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>>29976147
>get erection
>obtain cockring
>put it on
But thats wrong, Anon.
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>>29976150
Erections under water are no problem, for marine mammals or non-marine mammals on scuba. Micro gravity would be no different. The two partners would tend to bounce apart but there would be many interesting solutions to that problem.
Let's eventually see celly with a cybernetic wing implant! Will never be exactly balanced with the flesh side, but might have other cool abilities.
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Multiple personality Vinyl Scrach when?
>Squeezy only wants to help!
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>>29972649
>owners could leave their equines alone, either to enjoy the pony-restricted stands
What's going on in those pony-restricted stands? BBQ? Let's send Buster to check them out!
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>>29973784
One of the primary reasons African-Americans have such a presence in professional sports is that many were selectively bred for strength and endurance during the first half of the 19th century. Most plantation owners didn't care too much about their "stock" since many would die or be injured under cruel conditions, but there was another class entirely that treated their slaves well but only bought strong, able, and carefully-bred slaves.
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>>29973573
>>29973578


This piece of shit must receive punishment to the extent of his crime
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>>29976400
>crappy wing implant
Or she could, ya know, strap on a fucking ROCKET PACK!!! So awesome, she has the other wing amputated too! Who needs 'em?
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>>29976973
Probably nothing that isn't happening in other parts of the stadium. It's just racially segregated seating for anyone who wants to come out and watch but doesn't want ponies anywhere near them. It would probably be out of character for Buster to leave Dash somewhere and go to a human-only place. If anything, they'd go to the stands occupied mostly by ponies.
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>>29978119
>That pic
>"Aw man, they're out of ponies!"
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>>29973590

The special forces did their work and arrested a group of pony-smugglers and a sadist who tortured one of them and transmitted it through the net, at least 4 agents were seriously injured, and the suspect in the transmission not only was captured in the act but he resisted the moment of his apprehension and tried to hurt a member of the equipment reason why had to make use of deadly force to save the life of the officer.

And this is only the first day.
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>>29978119
I guess, next you'll be mentioning segregated bathrooms (not a bad idea, practically...), lunch counters, and water fountains and such. But it might be a small demographic that attends a pony show but doesn't want to hang with ponies! Why did they come?
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>>29973741
>>It's a text file that simply reads 'U on ur way?'
>>You bang out a similarly abbreviated message
>>'Ye im just a sec away.'
>>Feels good to be professional
kek
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>>29973604
As I said earlier this was only the first day and we have seen what special force can do to enforce the new law, the message is now clear for all the scum; There are consequences if you hurt a pony, the law is imposed among known criminal elements but I wonder if it can be applied equally with influential people who are considered above the law, and those people who by their age could not be judged
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>>29978582
>the message is now clear for all the scum; There are consequences
>The maximum sentences for ‘Cruelty’ will be a fine not exceeding $60,000 and to imprisonment for a term not exceeding 8 years.
Ya, not so much really. This sounds high, but it's the absolute maximum penalty; for the horrors we witnessed here or worse. Ordinary cruelty and neglect will be more like j-walking; not really worth the systems time unless it can't help but notice, or wants to nail you for something else too. There are 'consequences', and that's a big improvement over having to bust this guy for littering like we would have for Sprinkle Medley, but it's still more of a civil matter.
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>>29977638
Somepony need a few spankings to improve your attitude
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>>29978256
Segregation is implied and varies by region. Lot of factors going into it, including prevalence of ponies, local culture, etc. There hasn't been much mention of it yet because Alabama has a relatively low pony population and thus most places don't even need segregated spaces (I mentioned in my past fic that any ponies east of the Mississippi River had to have been transported there). In Arkansas, there are far more ponies around, and xenophobic attitudes are the norm. As for who would go to the show and not want to be near ponies, I imagine parents being dragged there by children, gamblers, businessmen (it's a new type of sport, and one that has very rapidly gained massive attention) and others.

As the story goes on, different regional cultures and attitudes will be explored a bit more.

>>29978218
It's really one of my favorite images. I like to imagine it's a specialty cider shop, and she spends literally hours wistfully looking in at a gorgeous array of products.
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>>29979252
Yes. This is needed. Spanking is literally the perfect kind of punishment for Rarity, and I'm not even that into spanking in general.
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>>29979898
Rarity's like an old printer, if she starts acting up then you give her a slap to get her back in working order.
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>>29980224
Huffy mares like her need some spanks to set them straight when they're being big for their britches.
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>>29980612
So what kinds of things would merit Rarity getting spanked for you, then? Simply talking back, or what? It's not a good idea to get too harsh and overbearing on your ponies.
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I miss corona
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JACK Is BACK

Greetings of /co/ anons
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>>29981421
>Anon is going to need to have Primrose sleep with Coffee and Swirl so he can keep HER safe as well.
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>>29981421
>Being raped continuously by some dude.
>Repeatedly having his foals.
>After months and months of sickness and feeling it move inside you, and then pain of childbirth. Only to having one after another of your little fillies taken from you.
>Not wanting to murder the pony that willingly helped it all happen.

Primrose is a saint.
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>>29982167
>Implying rape
>Implying Jacob did anything wrong

It was all consensual, you can't prove anything!
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>>29981834
I want to enslave Equestria, with our Lord and Master Aku's permission.
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sunhorse is for riding
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Is there an IRC or discord group for this?
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>>29983426
Sun horse is for snuggles and consensual riding, do not force yourself on sweet horse
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Yeah, it's in the OP
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>>29983637
Sunhorse is for raping and turning into a broodmare to show the superiority of mankind over these primitive beasts.
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Time since green: 26hr, 22 min.
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>>29981421
I want to severely cane Primrose and make her bow down and say sorry to me and Coffee in private.
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>>29984204

I heed your call Anon, more will be arriving shortly
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>>29983637
Well, yeah. She's a big pone and also a sun-controlling mage. If she doesn't want you on her back, it isn't gonna happen.
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>>29985807
RIP
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>>29986412
She controls the sun over Equestria. No guarantee she'd have such mastery over any other solar body. Even if she does, well, it's hard to concentrate when the whip and taser are hard at work.
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>>29985807

>You gaze out of your canopy at the swirling colours and endless void of witch space
>It's so beautiful, yet remains completely unknown to your kind
>Maybe one day humanity will come to understand the technology they've been using for hundreds of years
>You don't think you'll ever live to see it
>But the thought is nice
>Certainly nicer than most of the other thoughts your negating
>Celestia weighs heavily on your conscience
>You wouldn't normally be so worried, but if you didn't come back...
>What would happen to her?
>You promised yourself you would fix her, make her better, yet you know even less about her than you do about witch space
>But right now that isn't your main concern
>Iota is fast approaching and you've got to be ready
>Come on Anon, it's just in, and out
>No big deal
>You notice the approaching star is beginning to grow in size, like a heavenly light at the end of a dark tunnel
>Yup, that's pretty bright
>Really brigh-
"Oh shit!"
>You reach across the control panel for a single button that you always forget to press
>Not quick enough
>*BANG*
>You ship rockets out of frame shift
>Right into the radiance of a class O white star
"Fuck!"
>You futilely attempt to shield your burning retinas from the piercing glare as you fumble for the canopy dim
>It takes a moment, but you finally flick it
>The canopy polarises, making it easier to see
>But that doesn't stop the damage that's already been done
>When rubbing your eyes doesn't clear away the photo-bleaching, you just give up and hope they go away over time
>The radar in the centre of your display shows multiple different vessels, most of which are fighters and combat based craft
>Luckily they seem to be system defence force, therefore not a threat
>You still don't plan on sticking around to see what they do
>Jamison City isn't far, but every moment is vital

>>29986453

Sorry for the wait, got caught up in unimportant stuff
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>>29969886
>Tell her, but don't demand answers
Very much in agreement with this anon here >>29971616
We want Vapor Trail to trust us that we can look out for her, and if she doesn't feel like giving in her secrets to us, so be it. Make it known that we want to help her though, but I would say we shouldn't push even slightly. Not for her, whom we ddon't even know has done anything wrong yet
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>>29986731

>So far so good
>Most ships are keeping their distance, most likely because they think your a pirate
>It won't stay that way for long
>300 Light seconds to drop, you notice something on your radar
>A small blip, nearly undetectable
>And it's following you
>You check your sensors
>Whatever it is it hasn't targeted you
>Not yet at least
"Just what do you want..."
>Pirates tend to mock you just before attacking, but this one has made no attempt to communicate
>It's travelling faster than you, and is closing in
>Think Anon! Think!
>What sort of pirate doesn't scan cargo before intercepting?
>...
>...
>Oh...
>One that already knows what they're looking for...
>You punch the throttle, trying in vain to speed up your FSD
>It works a little, but is nowhere near enough to escape the pursuing vessel
>Hurry up god damn it!
>20 Light seconds
>Your slightly outside drop in range
>Just a few seconds longer...
>There's a read out on the comms panel, an incoming message
>5 light seconds
>2 light seconds
>1 light second
>'Gotcha'
>Your ship quakes as an interdiction takes hold over your trajectory
>You can feel and hear the hull groaning under the strain
>"Warning, interdiction alert."
"I know dammit!"
>You fight to keep you ship in a straight line as the subspace rapture pulls you further astray
>Your losing
>Whoever this pirate is they really know their shit
>You feel the the nose pulling to the left, and attempt to centre it
>It's not working!
>You pull harder to the right, desperately forcing the ship from flipping
>It begins to pull back ever so slightly
>And then it doesn't...
>With a final groan the courier flips backwards, and you are violently ejected from slipstream
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>>29986731
It's nice to read about elite dangerous. I bought it way back. played mostly though the tutorial. realized how tedious it is and never played it again. And though it's not bad to read a little about. Please don't get lost in nonpony stuff.
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>>29987099
This. You start making it about your flat 'Anon' character and his job you're going to lose interest along with everyone else.
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>>29986920

>"Thrusters, offline."
>"Shields, offline."
>"Weapons systems, offline."
>"Power plant, malfunction."
>The display in front of you flickers off as you drift through space at alarming speed
"Run system diagnostics."
>"No permanent damage, rebooting systems now."
>A ping signals the startup process of the power plant
>"Sensors online. Pilot, I am detecting a vessel approaching high speed."
"What kind of vessel!"
>"Cobra class, mark three. Hardpoints retracted."
>Yup, that's your pirate alright
"How long until system reset?"
>"System startup will be completed in thirty seconds."
>The control panel flickers back to life, cycling through various displays before settling
>The comms panel also comes back, and features another message from your new friend
>'What are those guns for, commander?'
>Shit
>You've got to come up with an excuse, and fast
>After a moments thought, you respond
'Private property, I'm delivering them to a buyer.'
>'That must be why they have Federation tags all over them, how silly of me.'
>You're sweating now, but you have to keep them talking
>Shields are at 50 percent, do not much longer
'They're stolen property, federation rifles.'
>'Really now? And why exactly are they onboard a Federation fracked courier?'
>Sweating buckets.gif
'The ship is also stolen.'
>...
>...
>'You're a shit liar pilot.'
>Just five more percent...
'Yeah well, you can't win them all.'
>"Shields, online."
>You deliver full power to the engines and speed off, breaking 500 metres per second instantly
>The Cobra is hot on your tail, firing bullets and lasers all around you
>You dodge some, but you shields take the majority
>The Cobra may not be as fast in a line as you, but it holds an advantage in a dog fight
>As long as you stay this course, you should outru-
>"Attention pilot, you have an incoming audio request. Open channel three."
>What?
>Who?
"Display caller location!"
>"It's from your home pilot."
>Ooooooh
>Your suddenly regretting giving her the phone
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>>29987150
>>29987099

Don't worry this bits nearly over, it's just some establishment for later space shit. I'd rather get it out of the way so we can get to the obligatory 'buying cool stuff for horse' section.
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>>29987240
Sounds good my famalam.
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>>29987185

>There's a crackle as your long range comms patch you through
>"H-hello? Is this thing on?"
"Yeah Celestia, it is. What do you need?"
>There's a rumble as a nearby explosion rocks the ship
>"A-Anonymous? Is everything okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine, just tell me what's bothering you!"
>"Well, I was wondering if I could maybe have a shower..."
>Jesus, really?!
"Yeah, go ahea- Gah!"
>Another volley of rockets tears at your shield, reducing it to 20 percent
>"Anon! What's going on?"
"I'm fine! Just some... unhappy customers. I guess."
>More rockets, looks like the fucker has a pack hound launcher
>"They sound pretty angry."
"You have no idea! But I really need to focus on staying alive, so if you please!"
>"O-oh, okay. So do I just twist the handle thing for water?"
"Celestia it's a fucking shower, of course you do!"
>"I'm sorry okay, your shower is just so confusing!"
"It's really not!"
>You swerve downwards, preparing the FSD for supercruise
>"Why is it glowing like that?"
"Because it's turned on! Now put down the phone and go and clean yourself!"
>The sound of a call hanging up fills the cockpit
>You hope you haven't offended her too much
>"Who's this Celestia?"
>Shit! This is an open channel, and now your pursuer is listening in
"Fuck off you, none of your concern."
>"Well I hope she enjoys being a widow-"
>You disconnect from the channel, silencing the cocky pirate
>"Ready to engage, please align with trajectory."
>Fucking finally
>You pull down, forcing the ship to face the direction of travel
>Your computer gives the regular countdown, and you blast away from the battle, leaving a very confused pirate behind
>"Celestia eh? Now where have I heard that name before..."
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>>29987185
>>"Attention pilot, you have an incoming audio request. Open channel three."
>>What?
>>Who?
>"Display caller location!"
>>"It's from your home pilot."
>>Ooooooh
>>Your suddenly regretting giving her the phone
kek

SURPRISE, CELLY
IM IN A DOGFIGHT
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>>29987470

That's all I've got tonight. sorry about the small amount of horses, here will be more horse stuff soon

https://pastebin.com/NFR8gGqz

^^Pastebin^^
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>>29982678
I wish to ride the Shiny.
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>>29987843
It's all good. Looking forward to more.
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>>29987860
But he doesn't wish you too.
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>>29988041
That's the beauty of slavery, he doesn't get a choice. Pony will wear the saddle. Pony will carry his master. Pony will be a good boy.

Or else.
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>>29988187
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>>29982797
Already wrote a fanfic with a similar idea, and I must admit that it is very good
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>>29986655
Moreover, it is probable that the Sun of his world is not of the same nature as ours, nor that he is subjected to the same laws of physics
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>>29988041
>pretends he's dead?
>oh well...
Pony wears the saddle.
Pony bears the weight.
Pony obeys the rein.
Or pony will get ate!
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>>29987470
>>29987843
Imagine a Capsuleer owning a pone. Taking her with him through the vastness of space when he is essentially the ship itself. How weird would that be for the poner?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5AtqXOe3Jw
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>>29988510
Nigger, you best be giving me that link.
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>>29988553
Whatever you are, I warn you that it is a story of most of 30 chapters but once you start it you will not stop until the end.

You are warned

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/190767/back-to-the-past
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>>29988546
>"Don't worry. I'm just going out for a quick delivery run."
>Pone watches your ship get torn to shreds moments after undock by suicide gankers
>Gets highly confused when you casually walk out of the cloning bay minutes later
Sounds like a good way to be tackled by a slave relieved to just see you alive.
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FYI,
R/Fallout Equestria has declared war on us for an unknown reason.

>>29988654
Or better, poner is with you and experiences the marvel of DUST mk 3 implants.
or mk 1 if you want it to occasionally spaz out in elder tongues.
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>>29989193

>leddit

who gives a fuck
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>>29989221
They do, they burned their own on a mass banning.
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>>29989193
>war
That's silly. We've done nothing.
I have never been to their threads, but it's probably just a couple jelly that their lack luster topic grew stale and we just keep trucking along.
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>>29989247
They haven't had a a thread in a while.
I think when the bread is dust in the wind, its no longer stale.
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>>29989229

Good for them?
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>>29989268

Ohhhh I had no idea what the "R/" even meant till >>29989221.

Still silly as fuck and childish.
Just ignore.

They can flood a few threads. we can make more.
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>>29989303
They used to post here, then they went absentee and proceeded to safespace all 4channers out.
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>>29989193
>Find Equestria in some barren ass-end W-space system
>They're already suffering, having been located first by some non-capsuleer mercenaries who had no qualms about snagging valuable new lifeforms to sell to the Angel Cartel
>End up having to run around New Eden desperately trying to recover those who've already been taken, while at the same time balancing trying to still protect Equestria from further attacks
>A strong defense around the planet would be impenetrable to even individual capsuleer raiders, but risks attracting the attention of the larger blocs
>A stealthier, thinner defense would be unnoticed - but potentially let more slavers through
>In the meantime, end up bouncing from system to system with [waifu] as your guide
>Searching through murky capsuleer markets, cutthroat pirate slaver rings, and black-market research labs
>She slowly becomes hardened to the vicious coldness of the universe, healing from her trauma but still remaining a changed pony
I wonder if a pony could make a magical capsule interface.
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>>29989423
Eve was the shittiest job I ever worked, and I worked in a factory making fertilizer.
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>>29989193
Really? I didn't see anything mentioning us.

Not that it matters much, there's like ten people active on that subreddit.
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>>29989465
It's really dependent on finding a cool bunch of guys to fly with. Lack that, and yeah - shittiest job you never got paid for. Have that, and when you all come together to get shit done it feels amazing.
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>>29989193
Weird, you'd think that fans of a thing like Fallout would be okay with themes of slavery and the nature of man.
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>>29989757
More like the shittiest job you ever paid to do, EvE isn't really the greatest of prompts either, unless things really changed there wasn't a whole lot of planetside lore for it, CDDA would be better since there is an actual backstory about the dimensional experiments and retrieval of organisms.
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>“Mmph…”
>A mumbling rouses you from your sleep, and as you open your eyes you spot the orange mare who had done so much for your life. You adoringly run a finger across her silky soft freckled cheek, trailing it down her neck and across the crease in her fur where her collar sits during the day.
>Untangling yourself from the bedsheets, you lean over and place a kiss on her forehead, just below her tangled golden mane before exiting the bedroom quietly and heading to the kitchen. Typically, she found joy in cooking you breakfast but today, you’d surprise her.
>She deserved it after all.
>As you walk through your homestead, you idly drag your hand across the family portraits lining the long hallway to your bedroom. If only Ma and Pa could see you now…
>Actually scratch that, you’d rather they didn’t see you now.
>You pivoted on a heel and headed back into your room, dragging a fresh pair of boxers and a t-shirt out of your dresser, as well as a rugged pair of denim jeans. Heading back over to the bed, you grab her nylon collar, which was dangling dangerously off the edge of the table. You jingle the bronze tag hooked onto it as your fingers trace the engraved name.
>Applejack.
>You quietly set the collar back on the nightstand, correctly, and head over to the mirror on the back of your door.
>Okay.
>You’d still rather they didn’t see you, but at least you'd be presentable when they discovered you slept with someone. Who happened to be a pony.
>Well, at least crazy Uncle Hank would be proud of you.
>You head back into the hallway and round the corner, ending up in your kitchen.
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>>29990527
>It was a simple affair. Wooden walls, an electric coil stove and a stainless steel sink with a window above it embedded in the white countertops. A pantry rested by the entrance and next to that sat an aging white fridge with all your pictures on it.
>You unclip your favorite one off of the fridge magnet and hold it in the sunlight. It was a picture of you and Applejack, a few months after you two had met.
>You had found her beaten and bloody, caught in the barbed wire fence around your property that you used to keep the coyote’s out. Some asshat had broken her ribs and skull and left her for dead on your property line before driving away.
>The cops said it was a hopeless case and the private investigator you recently hired had a few leads, but nothing substantial. In another month or so, you’d have to let him go unless he made a breakthrough. It was a pretty hopeless case, you only hired him to show Applejack you cared but you’d be lying if you said you didn’t want to catch the bastard who hurt her just as much as she did.
>The photo showed you two at the county fair, as you were trying to teach her what a selfie was. Her head was still covered in gauze and bits of her golden blonde mane stuck out from between the strips, but you thought she looked cute. You were turning to tell her that so you’d have a picture of AJ all flustered, but she was turning to you at the time as well.
>Your heads bumped together and your lips met just as you snapped the photo, capturing the beginning of your descent into madness. After that moment, you had started to realize how beautiful her shining emerald eyes were, how her blonde mane flowed with the wind like golden fields of wheat and how, er… powerful her magnificent thighs were.
>In the photo her eyes were as wide as saucers, crossed, as she looked at your lips and you?
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>>29990537
>You looked like a greaser from the 70’s with your hair slicked back from the wind, sunglasses obscuring your own eyes, which had an equally baffled expression, you remember, and the leather jacket you won in an apple bobbing contest earlier thrown over your shoulder.
>It short, it was the single most stupid, yet beautiful photo you had ever taken in your life.
>You clip the photo back on the fridge and open the door, bending down to the bottom shelf and grabbing your eggs, the cheddar cheese, a scallion and a handful of ripe cherry tomatoes. You grab a piece of sliced bread out of your breadbox as well, tossing it into your toaster and pulling down on the tab.
>You throw a pan on the stovetop and turn the heat to high as you place the scallion and tomatoes on the cutting board, dicing them into fine chunks before you pull a small bowl and the cheese grater out of the cluttered cupboard beneath you. A smile comes to your face as you glance up, looking at the now empty cupboards above you, a remnant of when the house happened to be “earth-pony proof”.
>You crack three eggs into the bowl and whisk them together as the pan heats. Snagging the block of cheddar cheese, you place the grater on the cutting board and quickly grind the brick against it for a few seconds, yielding a few generous handfuls of the stuff.
>You pick the cutting board up and scrape the ingredients into the egg bowl with a knife, before turning around and pouring the mixture into the pan, watching it sizzle. You rotate around once more, bending over to grab a plastic cup with a specially designed hoof-grip for ponies, and headed back to the fridge.
>You grab the jug of orange juice and fill the glass to the brim, taking a quick sip to ensure it didn’t spill. Applejack was, surprise, a connoisseur of all things apple, but you weren’t about to break the family tradition of OJ or milk in the morning.
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>>29990551
>It had become somewhat of a joke between you two, with her remarking about your horrific disregard for her life, forcing her to drink juices other than that of the apple variety. Truly, the day she started joking with you about her past abuse was the day when she started opening up your heart.
>You’d never met a woman as strong as her before.
>The toaster pops and you snag the bread out and head into the dining room, removing a tray from the stack you kept by the window. Setting it on the table, you place the cup atop it before rushing back to the kitchen. You move to the stove and pull a spatula out of one of the drawers, sliding it under the thick omelette and flipping it over.
>It’s colors turn to a delicious deep yellow with red and green accents from your additions, and the edges form a golden-brown. You turn the dial on the stove to off as you fish a plate out of a drawer, flopping the omelette onto it. Plate in one hand, you take the knife from earlier and open the fridge once more, this time grabbing the jar of apple jelly.
>Have to make AJ some concessions after all.
>You go back to the dining room and set the plate on the tray by the juice before twisting the cap off the jar and lathering her still warm toast with the orange-hued jam.
>You recap the jar and leave it and the knife on the table as you set off down the hallway to your bedroom. You back into the door and see Applejack just now awakening, stretching her forehooves above her head and quivering momentarily, before folding back on herself and dragging the covers to her neck once more. She reaches a hoof out to your side of the bed, batting around in the air a bit, searching for your body.
>Unable to find you, she cracks a sleepy eye open and sits upright, letting out a huge yawn, squeaking a bit as she does so.
>Her yawn’s contagiousness infects you, and you find yourself yawning as well, your own grunt grabbing her attention.
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>>29990563
>She rubs the sleep from her eyes with a hoof as she turns to look at you, offering you a small grin.
>“Oh, hey there maste… sugarcube. Thought I’d finally done scared you off after last night. Ah guess ah’ll have ta’ keep tryin’ then, huh?”
>You offer her a small smile, glad that she remembered not to call you master. Even after two years, the conditioning was still burned into her mind like a brand. She may have gotten over it already if you had pressed more in the past, but it wasn’t on your top list of priorities. You simply asked her to call you by your name whenever she slipped, but never demanded it.
“You know Applejack, if I leave it doesn’t mean you get the farm.”
>“Well, that just ain’t right. It should be mine by virtue of strength alone!”
>She flexes her forearm like a human, trying to look tough and failing as her mane falls over her eyes, blinding her. You cock an eyebrow as she parts it with her hoof, smiling at you sheepishly.
>Her nose twitches and her eyes go wide as she notices the tray of food you're carrying.
>“M-master, you shouldn’t have done this! Ah’d have made you breakfast!”
>She cringes at her mistake as you walk over to your side of the bed and sit down, sliding the tray over to her and offering the cup.
“It’s just Anon, Applejack. I think we’ve passed the point of any sort of formality haven’t we?”
>She blushes as she idly twirls a strand of hair with her hoof, before it falls back over her eyes once more. She huffs in frustration.
>“Ah still don’t see why ya’ll like mah hair straight. Jus’ gets in mah eyes all the dang time.”
>She flips her hair back again, and her eyes dart from the food in front of her and your eyes, torn between seeking your approval to eat and the knowledge that you told her she didn’t have to ask you for permission to do basic things.
>You nod your head and gesture to the food. No one said it was going to be easy or quick, rehabilitating a pony.
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>>29990566
“You know how I feel AJ. Do whatever you want. As long as you’re on my property, you don’t have to act like my slave, except for wearing your collar outside. We don’t need the uber-conservatives next door getting uppity again now do we?”
>She giggles with a melodic hum as she gratefully leans down and bites a piece out of her omelette, chewing slowly as the flavors dance around her tongue.
>And Mom thought cooking classes were a waste of time.
>“…ya know ya didn’t have ta do this fer me mas-Anon…”
>You smile as you run your fingers through her mane, grabbing a red scrunchie off her nightstand while you did so. You gather her golden strands together and tie it off a few inches before the end of her mane, just how she enjoyed it.
“Maybe not. But I wanted to.”
>You can see her freckled cheeks blush a bit as she continues to eat her breakfast, taking occasional sips from her glass of orange juice. Her muzzle scrunches up, conflicting emotions seemingly troubling her.
>“Ah still don’t get it Anon. Ah know ya tell me why time an’ time again but I still don’t get it… why d’ya treat me so well? As a slave, ah’m beneath ya…”
>You place your hand under her muzzle and gently rotate her head to face you.
“Because you aren't a slave. Not while you’re in this house at least.”
>You lean down and place a kiss on her lips, tasting a hint of orange juice upon them. Her eyes dart back to her food as she blushes furiously, trying her hardest not to smile.
>It wasn’t working.
“C’mon Applejack, you know I think you’re beautiful when you smile.”
>She buries her face behind her hooves and knickers softly, embarrassed by the honesty in your voice. You lovingly scratch behind her ear, coaxing her to lean into your touch as she pulls her hooves away.
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>>29990571
“Listen, I’m gonna head out to get started on work, I want you to finish breakfast and do whatever you think needs doing. And don’t go around kicking my trees again!”
>She giggles sheepishly at the memory, trying to buck one of your apple trees and ending up leaving two hoof-shaped indents in it and a fractured leg bone.
>“Ah think ah learned mah lesson the first time. Jus’ proves that mah apple trees are better though.”
“Uh-huh. You keep telling yourself that.”
>You move to leave, but find yourself lingering on the bed, still stroking her ear and watching as she devours her breakfast, spilling toast crumbs all over the covers. Ehhh, you’d wash those later. They needed it anyway after last night.
>As she takes a final draught from her juice and sets the cup down, you grab the tray and begin to get off the bed before a hoof on your back stops you.
>“Ma-Anon, did y’all eat breakfast yet?”
>Crap.
“Yep, had breakfast already.”
>“Anon… are y’all lying ta me again?”
>A small bead of sweat forms on your brow as you feel her hoof stamp your shirt to the bed.
>Why she was so obsessed with breakfast, you’ll never understand. You lived a perfectly healthy life by skipping breakfast and eating slightly bigger lunches and dinners.
>You weren’t fat, had some muscles that came with lots of walking and heavy lifting and had no health issues, although you tended to watch your cholesterol.
“I… was going to eat breakfast after I got you some?”
>You turn to see her large eyes narrowing at you, staring into your soul or whatever it is she does with those things. She speaks with an eerie calmness to her voice.
>“Here’s the new plan for today sugarcube. Yer gonna wait here while ah fix you up a proper breakfast, or ah’m gonna slap the collar on ya till you eat.”
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>>29990582
>It didn’t take a rocket scientist to know the correct answer.
“Well, I suppose staying in a little later wouldn’t hurt.”
>You give her a forced smile as she smugly grins at you.
>“That’s what ah thought.”
>She grabs the now empty tray in her mouth and extracts herself from the covers, flicking your chin with her tail as she leaves. You smile when she shakes her rump at you as she exits the room, pleased she found pleasure in teasing you without fear. She may never fully heal, but at least she had already made such huge strides.
>You grab your extra wide pillow prop it up against the backboard sit up on the bed, reaching over to the nightstand and pulling her collar over to you as you run your fingers over her name tag again. You found comfort in knowing you coaxed her into revealing her true name. Much better than when you called her Orangina.
>You believed it was an appropriate name, she is the color orange after all.
>The thought that she lied about her true name flashes across your subconscious mind yet again, but is quickly snuffed out by your higher thought processes. Applejack couldn’t lie to save her life.
>You loved it when she tried though, her scrunched up muzzle and darting eyes had become precious to you.
>Thankfully if you poked her snout, it achieved a similar effect.
>Tracing your fingers along the inside of the collar, you can’t help but imagine getting her a new one. Whenever you brought it up she always claimed it was the best collar she’d ever had, but you had your doubts. You were pretty sure her last collar was literally just rusty chains so she didn’t have much experience, comparatively speaking.
>Yet you always found yourself second-guessing yourself when it came to this topic.
>Did her current one chafe?
>Did it pinch out her fur?
>Did you tighten it too much when you put it on? She hates it flopping around her neck and insists you tighten it when you put it on everyday.
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>>29990590
>Yet the memory of those chains digging into the raw flesh of her neck, red from a combination of rust and blood, always made you try to keep the collar loose around her neck.
>You weren’t entirely sure why, but today seemed like a good day to surprise her. You remove her name tag from the cheap collar and fling it into the small wire trash bin in the corner of the room.
>Bending over the bed, you remove the bland cardboard box hidden underneath and pull it onto your lap. You open the flaps and pull out Applejack’s surprise.
>A brand new, and expensive leather collar.
>It was measured for her neck exactly, and you purchased an unlimited resizing option, allowing you to send it back if her size changed dramatically enough that her collar became too loose or too tight.
>Its body was a dark obsidian color, with a metal loop on the front for a nameplate/leash. The interior contained a silky smooth layer of… well, silk. The sunlight drifting through the blinds of your window cast a bright white sheen across the fabric as you hook her tag to the collar.
>Right underneath the ring were three different loops that served as the fasteners for the collar. They were very close together, as you did have this pre-measured for her. Yet, this was where your chosen venue for custom collars came back to bite you in the butt.
>There wasn't a buckle to fasten the collar, just the loops that you shoved a pink, heart shaped padlock into.
>But that’s what you get when you order custom collars from bondage shops.
>In your defense, you tried to order a custom collar from specialty pet shops but they didn’t have nearly as many options as the “Dangerous Secret” bondage shop. Really, the silk interior sold you on the collar.
>You were a little obsessed with making sure her collar was the most comfortable thing possible.
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>>29990601
>You didn’t think the padlock would be a problem as Applejack was a little obsessed with you being possessive of her, always afraid you’d discard her for another, healthier pony who “liked oranges”.
>You’d never get rid of her in a million years, but you noticed how she’d try to subtly lead you away from pony auctions while you were in town, not to mention her fear of “pony swap” programs that she sometimes saw commercials for on the television.
>Whenever you purchased a new pony, especially other mares, she’d always hide somewhere in the house, terrified that if you found her you’d throw her in the trash. Her behavior almost made you consider not purchasing any more, but they were valuable assets to your farm now. They were like employees with a single down payment instead of a salary.
>Sure, they could be expensive if bought “undamaged”, but you tended to go for the damaged ones. Partially because you felt bad for them, and partially because of how cheap they could be.
>One colt you bought nearly two years ago, even before you had AJ, was literally named Manuel Labor.
>Of course you fucking purchased him.
>Sure, he had whip marks across his back and he looked as skinny as a corpse, but he was fifty bucks.
>Fifty. Bucks.
>The cheapest slave you’d ever seen before him was five hundred dollars.
>Long story short, you bought him, gave him a spare room all to himself and fed him so much junk food he was now the “tubby” one on the farm. Despite his rotund appearance, he could haul with the best of ‘em and proved to be a valuable boon to the farm, as well as one of your closest friends.
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>>29990607
>Now you had total of about fifteen ponies on the farm, not including Applejack, and you’d had three additions done to your house so you’d have enough room to house them.
>The looks on their faces when they learned they each had their own separate bedrooms and five different kitchens to themselves was priceless.
>You’d rank it somewhere between “heartbreaking” and “Seinfeld-tier”.
>Still, your house would be pretty hard to sell now, should you ever move. Two-story, fourteen bedroom, ten bath house.
>Come to think of it, it was about to be seventeen ponies total, since most of your ponies had started relationships with others on your farm after you gave them such a wide range of freedom.
>Manuel was gonna be a father soon with his semi-official wife, a pegasus by the name of Ozone.
>Semi-official in the sense that your unofficial ass ordained it in the name of Flying Spaghetti Monster.
>All praise his noodly appendage! RAmen.
>Treat ponies with respect, dignity and give them a roof above their heads and you’ve formed an undying loyalty within them. It probably helped that you let them graze in your mother’s old flower garden whenever they wanted to.
>You’d think it would be bad for them, but no one's keeled over yet so you figure all’s well.
>Snapping yourself out of your thoughts, you remove the dozen keys and the two heart shaped padlocks from the box, placing those in your nightstand before tossing the box into the trash too.
>Hiding the collar under the pillow, you lazily browse the internet again as you patiently wait for your breakfast captor to return.
>Halfway through reading Becky’s fucking fifteenth post on social media about how McDonalds is sexist, you hear the door creak open and see Applejack return with a tray expertly balanced on her back. How she does that, you’ll never know.
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>>29990618
>You crack a grin as you see two sunny-side up eggs and three strips of bacon, arranged on a ceramic plate in a smiley face and a small plastic bowl containing apple slices off to the side.
>Of course.
>She walks to the side of the bed and waits as you remove the tray from her back, giving her the opportunity to hop back on the bed as well.
>As she scrambles onto the bed with all the grace of a legless kangaroo as her hooves fail to find any grip on the soft comforter, you reach into her nightstand and pull out a tablet and the special hoof glove you purchased for her. She sits by your leg with a quite frankly good pokerface upon her features, despite the fact that all of your queen-sized comforter now rests on the floor.
>She holds out her right forehoof expectantly as you slide the glove over, allowing her to use the touchscreen.
>You dig into breakfast as she idly pokes the device, browsing the various news articles that presented themselves to her.
>The bacon was perfect, chewy with a hint of crispness, just how you enjoyed it. The eggs were nicely done as well, but you didn’t have very high standards for eggs. As long as the whites weren’t runny and a bit of pepper was sprinkled atop, the eggs were perfect.
>Surprise, that’s exactly how AJ made them for you.
>You crunch a few of the crisp apple slices as you alternate between the bacon and eggs, savoring the flavor. Even though you weren’t much of a breakfast man, you had to admit Applejack got it done right.
>Having finished the eggs and bacon, you bite down on the last apple slice, feeling the tangy juice wash around your teeth and lips as you did so. You lean down to place the tray on the floor before grabbing Applejack’s barrel and dragging her over to your chest with a surprised squeak.
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>>29990626
Alright, I'll end my wall of green here. This is only half of the total piece, but I'll post the rest tomorrow so the wall of green isn't as obtrusive. When I finish posting, I'll give it a pastebin. Have an American Appul because it's the only other Applejack pic on my computer at the moment.
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I just want to say this is only the third or fourth time I've visited this board and this thread is blowing my mind in a terrible way jesus fuck OP couldn't you channel this into something more... I don't know, more universal?
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>>29990648
Well since the submission is mandatory general is gone. I started working on a green for this thread.

These guys tend to be little snowflakes so just post shit that reminds them what slavery really is.
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>>29990648
>I just want to say this is only the third or fourth time I've visited 4chan
FIFY

Besides
>He doesn't want to enslave his waifu.
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>>29990648
> this thread is blowing my mind in a terrible way
Elaborate, please.
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>>29990626
>>29990646
I'm suddenly really sad now.

>As she scrambles onto the bed with all the grace of a legless kangaroo as her hooves fail to find any grip on the soft comforter, you reach into her nightstand and pull out a tablet and the special hoof glove you purchased for her. She sits by your leg with a quite frankly good pokerface upon her features, despite the fact that all of your queen-sized comforter now rests on the floor.
This made me laugh though.
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>>29990648
Please go back to your home board
>>>/reddit/
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>>29990646
>who “liked oranges”
>that pokerface
keks were had.

Very comfy and soothing to the soul.

Thank ya kindly.

Though you started off so amazing. i can sadly only imagine it getting darker from here.
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>>29990814
No way, man. This is gonna be a comfy slice of life.
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>>29986920
Does Anon know nothing about basic interdiction prevention? The last thing you wanna do if you see someone chasing you is go in a straight line, that just guarantees they'll catch up. If you see someone who might be chasing you the first thing you do is do a 180 and see if they follow, if they do, then you slow down and get out of frameshift and immediately start charging the drive, when you see a blip come on your radar you jump, this way you guarantee they won't catch you.

This is basic stuff that every pilot should know. Admittedly, in my CMDR day I almost never followed this but that was only because I found the chase fun and challenging.
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>>29991050

He would have employed that tactic, but he was so close to the station that he was kind of hoping to outrun the cobra before it had a chance to interdict him.

Not the best choice, but the choice of someone who's against the clock
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>>29987470

>"Rough day huh?"
>You watch as the medical supplies are wheeled away on a hover barge
"Ma'am, you have no idea..."
>The overseer of Farpoint dock gives you a small smile
>"Maybe not, but I know the look of a man who's worked hard."
"I just got the job done ma'am, nothing more."
>"Well we are in you debt, this virus has become increasingly difficult to squash out, and it helps to have someone dedicated to delivering aid."
>You were dedicated, but not really in the way she was hoping
"Thank you ma'am."
>"No, thank you commander."
>She turns and begins to walk off, signalling one of her subordinates to fetch your pay check
>The scrawny looking kid approaches, wielding a card reader and a paper notepad
>"Alright that's... 10,000 credits."
>Your eyes shoot open in surprise
>That was a large tip
"You sure you haven't got that mixed up?"
>"That's what it says here, you are Anonymous right?"
"Yeah, that's me."
>"Well then it's for you, so if you could just put you card in here."
>You pull out your universal ID card and place it in the reader
>Did your work suddenly become much more valuable?
>"That's it, now is there anything else you need?"
>This station is pretty big, maybe you can pick up that shopping while you're here."
"Uh yeah, actually, does this station have a marketplace?"
>"Yeah, just take the monorail over there."
>Sweet
"Thanks kid."
>He just turns and waves at you
>You walk the short distance to the rail station, taking care when you cross the central highway
>Look right, fuck left, sprint
>Works every time
>The monorail pulls into the station just as you arrive
>It's not busy, so finding a seat for your minutes journey isn't hard
>"Next stop, commodities district. Please mind the gap when alighting from this train."
>The platform here is much more packed
>Hundreds of people moving around, preparing to board the rail system
>You stand from you seat as the train comes to a stop, stumbling the final bump
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>>29973591

> “Easy now, Anon. Take your time.”
“Sure, Sir… What time is it?”
> “5.41pm… And no, you are not doing your night shift after all that.”
“Yes, Sir.”
> DSP Koh moves you to the wall beside the door to his office, allowing you to brace yourself against it for support as he puts down your heavy green case. Reaching into his pocket, he draws out his keys and proceeds to open the door. He then carries the case in before coming out into the hallway to help you stagger in, being careful not to touch the sling that holds your arm in place. You drop down into a chair, leaning backwards with a groan as you feel the pain radiate from your wounds, and this is despite being on a dose of strong painkillers.
> According to the doctor at Florence General Hospital, you have: a 2-centimetre long puncture wound that goes straight through your left shoulder, a total of 6 slash wounds on both your forearms, a torn left lower lip, a bruised cheekbone, 3 large bruises on your chest, a bruised right elbow and a bruised right knee. His assessment showed that most of these wounds are superficial, and the shoulder wound affected only the deltoid muscle and just nicked the bone. He asserted that you will have full function of your arm in a month’s time, but there will be a permanent scar. With the bruises on your chest adding to those that are healing on your back, your torso looks like it belonged to a cow.
> One that is beige and purple, Boss.
> Sitting behind his desk, DSP Koh lets out a sigh as he fixes his eyes on you. His gaze is almost… Pained. It is as if it hurts the Deputy Superintendent to look at you.
“What is it, Sir?”
> “It’s... I am glad that Angela and you are safe.”
> You just nod and smile at the Asian man. Your gut tells you that there is more to that, but you decide not to press the issue.
“Thank you, Sir… I’m glad too.”
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>>29991260
> Smiling lightly in return, your supervisor reaches over and pulls out a document from a folder. He clicks a pen and fills up the basic fields, then, he sighs softly before looking up at you again.
> “Anon… I know you are not one for bureaucratic bullshit and pretence, but I need your full cooperation. What happened earlier is a trage-”
“For Alpha, Coco Pommel and all the other Rescue Team officers. Not that sadistic fuck.”
> Your supervisor frowns at your interruption, but you fix him with a hard look that matches the fire you feel with.
> He isn’t your enemy, Boss. Control your fucking emotions.
> Closing your eyes, you check yourself as you swallow the lump in your throat.
“I’m sorry, Sir… It has been a rough day for me, and that was highly inappropriate and uncalled for. My apologies.”
> “Understandable, given that you almost died today and that you had to undergo minor surgery and stitches, but don’t do that again, Inspector. I may be your friend, but I am still your superior in rank and appointment.”
> You nod slowly before opening your eyes again. Forcing yourself to look at DSP Koh, all you want to do now is just curl up with Starlight and sleep for a week.
> “As I was saying, what happened is a tragedy not just for everyone that you mentioned, but for you as well.”
> What.
> You frown.
“F-for me?”
> Tapping the form that he has written in, DSP Koh’s next words sends a chill down your spine.
> “Inspector Anonymous, you are now under investigation for the murder of one Andrew Pierce.”
> What the fuck?!
> Your jaw falls open as you regard the man in front of you. Murder? How? You didn’t do it! It was AC Thor! You only did your job! True, you bashed his fucking face in, but-
> “What does the Criminal Procedure Code and the Disciplinary Code say about extra-judicial killings, Anon?”
> You slump back into your chair as you groan, bringing your right hand up to pinch the bridge of your nose. Of course.
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>>29991265
> What happened earlier is, at face-value, an execution that took place without legal processes. It makes you a suspect for murder, and the onus is on you to prove that you did it to defend yourself.
> That fucking AC Th-
> Nevermind... Fuck that. You are just tired now.
“If convicted, a maximum of a death penalty and a dishonourable discharge from the Force, Sir?”
> Without saying a word, DSP Koh nods slowly.
> … Fuck….
“I didn’t do it, Sir. It wasn’t me.”
> Sighing, DSP Koh puts down the pen he is holding and slumps against his chair as well.
> “Everyone will say that, Anon. That’s why I need your statement.”
> Breathing out heavily, your eyes travel down to his desk. There is only one thing on your mind now.
“… I won’t get to see Starlight again… Right?”
> “Until cleared of charges, Anon, no. You will be detained in the Police Detention Barracks until then, and even after, you are required to be put on administrative leave for 2 weeks… If convicted, you will go straight to the Prisons and be placed on death row, and I doubt you will get the same privileges for Starlight as that vigilante did. Given past court rulings Anon, I must admit that the chances of being convicted are… High… I don’t like it any more than you do, but this is how it is and will be… I’m sorry.”
> Groaning again, you feel cold fury flood your being again. You have been framed by that Caucasian asshat, and you have been betrayed by your Commanding Officer for the raiding operations. The injustice of it burns intensely, and your mind is rapidly becoming clouded with rage. With a swift movement, you stand up quickly, not even feeling the pain that shoots from your stitches as you send your chair flying backwards. It crashes into the door with a metallic crunch.
“FUCK! FUCKING FUCK!”
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>>29991267
> Squatting down, you cup your hands over your head as you feel the rage quickly disappearing, being replaced by sadness and despair as the single most important thing in your life appears in your mind. Warmth gathers at your eyes as your vision blurs, and you feel a deep cold darkness in your stomach.
> Starlight. Your Starlight… You will not get to see her again.
> You press your palms to your eyes as sobs wreck your body. Even as you feel a pair of hands gently guide you onto a sofa, all that matters to you now is knowing that your pony girl will be crying in the future. For you, and because of you. Memories of her tear-stained face comes to your mind, and you feel the despair within you heighten as you realise that you did not even say goodbye to her when you left this morning. Helplessness and regret join the dark and cold mix that is already in your heart.
> You want to spend your nights sleeping with Starlight by your side and in your arms. You want her to have fun as she dances and runs, and have her palette bursting with flavours as she partakes in another frozen confectionary at Bridget’s. You want her to laugh as you tickle her, and you want her to enjoy the pleasures of an orgasm as you made love to her. You want to fulfill your promise to take her to the airport… You want her to feel loved, and you want her to be happy. You want Starlight to smile again.
> And you cannot provide all these now.
> It’s over.
> These will just be memories and dreams now.
> That feeling of hands on your shoulder and back is so distant, and the words you hear are echoes that you do not listen to. What do they matter now, when you are leaving her; the sweet, passionate and beautiful girl that you love so immensely? Wetness and warmth covers the inside of your hands as more tears escape your eyes. Your breath chokes in your throat as your chest heaves, and you can feel mucous dripping from your nose.
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>>29991270
> Starlight will be alone again, and she will have to face loneliness once more.
> And so will you, Boss.
> …

> Having just finished giving your statement to DSP Koh, you lean back against the sofa as you hesitated. You told him the truth; the details of the briefing, the interaction with the officers at the back of the van, the fall that stopped Echo from participating in the raid at the warehouse, the killing of the first M16 wielder by your detachment, the discover of Blossomfirst(?) under the desk, and the realisation of what was going to happen to Coco Pommel.
> Then, you proceeded to give an account of the ensuring firefight, providing detailed information on how you killed the purple guy with the M16, how you tried to save Alpha and how you nearly got killed yourself, how AC Thor gave what remained your detachment the order to storm Andrew Pierce’s place.
> Following these, you talked about the decision to use a door-breaching charge, the experience of being caught near a high-explosive charge as it goes off, the tactical decisions that your team made in the sweeping of the apartment, the scene that greeted you in Coco’s room, the bashing that you gave that sadistic fuck, and finally, the way that AC Thor murdered that man using your weapon and the version of events that he painted.
> When you finished talking, you waited as DSP continued to write. Clicking his pen, DSP Koh re-reads the entire account before passing the form to you and asked that you verify the details in it. You read it thoroughly as your supervisor opened a drawer and poured out 2 glasses of whisky. He took a drink from his glass and refilled it as he motioned to yours with a hand.
> You put the document down as you grab the glass, downing it swiftly in a gulp.
> “If you are satisfied with the accuracy of your statement, Anon, please put your signature at the top right hand of each page and another one at the bottom of the last page.”
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>>29991274
> Taking a breath, you ponder your next action as you pick up the pen that the Deputy Superintendent had used earlier. Should you point the finger at AC Thor? Do you have enough leverage to say that he was the murderer and not you? What is the weight of evidence that you have against him?
“Sir… May I have a moment to… Collect myself? It’s… Hard to talk about it.”
> Your supervisor nods as he rests the pen down and leans back into his chair. He smiles gently at you as he sips from his glass.
> “Take your time, Anon. Just sign when you are.”
> Nodding gratefully at him, you pause to think. You know that you are already in a ton of trouble; as with other cases of extra-judicial killings before you, you are being investigated for murder. It is not your fault and you know it, but the circumstantial evidence points heavily to you as the suspect. AC Thor used YOUR weapon to kill him and no other officer there opened fire, so that is already a pretty damning piece of information that can be used against you. Furthermore, if AC Thor’s version of events is to be believed and the other officers sticks with that, you are the first person to encounter Andrew Pierce in that room. He is dead, so it will be your words against any evidence that is stacked up against you.
> You frown as you consider your available defence: the one of acting out of self-defence. If all the officers in your detachment stuck to AC Thor’s version of events, including Coco Pommel and those pairs of officers outside the apartment, then there is no way for anyone to say that Andrew Pierce died as a result of an extra-judicial killing. He IS dead, after all, and the way that AC Thor executed Andrew will lead the Investigation Officer to conclude that the weapon was pointing upwards when he was shot. You know that as you saw it happen.
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>>29991276
> Reaching a hand over, you feel the stitches in your forearms under your fingertips. The medics and the doctor that patched you up can testify that your wounds are plausibly the result of defending yourself from an attacker, given the angle of the slashes on your forearms and that of the stab wound. AC Thor deliberately attacked you with that knife, and gave a version of events that puts you in a position of plausible deniability to cover for your earlier attack on Andrew Pierce with the buttstock of your weapon.
> It is then that you realise something, and that something that made your eyes widen even as they settle on DSP Koh, who was watching you the entire time. Your supervisor smirks at you as your mouth opens in shock.
> Holy shit.
> AC Thor… Planned this. The killing of Andrew Pierce and pinning it as you defending yourself? It is deliberate. He wanted Andrew Pierce dead for a reason, and he used you to achieve that goal whilst trying to cover for you… And by the looks of it, he may very well succeed. As for DSP Koh…
> Your suspicions about his involvement are confirmed when DSP Koh reaches into a drawer and pulls out yet another Statement form, which he hands to you. Still reeling in shock, you take a quick read of the document, and you see that the events described there are similar to the account you gave, except… What happened in Coco Pommel’s room.
> That section describes an account that reflects what AC Thor said in Coco’s room.
> Leaning back into the chair, you watch as DSP Koh leans in to refill your glass with whisky. Lifting his own in a silent toast to you, he smiles.
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>>29991278
> “You’ll get a Distinguished Service Medal for your actions today, Inspector Anon, and Andrew Pierce’s death will officially be an unfortunate occurrence when he decided to attack an armed officer, which forced you to take the necessary actions to save your own life and of those around you. Rumours of the way you fended off a strangle-hold from a burly 2-metre tall Andrew Pierce by sticking a chopstick in his eye will fly, as well as how you took down 3 guys in the warehouse office by using a tennis ball for a distraction… You still have to be placed on administrative leave for 2 weeks though, and you will have to spend the next week in the Detention Barracks as you wait for Special Investigations to publish their findings.”
> You just gape at him. Then, you speak the first thing that comes to your mind.
“Sir, what didn’t you say these earlier? You made me believe that I am going to be hanged!”
> “You may very well still be, Anon. Unless, like AC Thor and I said, you cooperate fully with us… And letting you realise the preciousness and fragility of your relationship with Starlight will only make you treasure and love her more… We human beings have a tendency to learn best when we are put out of our comfort zones, especially when we feel loss, fear, hurt and pain.”
> Taking another gulp of whisky, he proceeds to refill his glass yet again as he keeps eye contact with you.
> “Welcome to power politics in the Force, Anon… And please, for heaven’s sake, sign THAT form instead.”
> …
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>>29991283
Updates!

I apologise for taking so long to write this update. Got distracted by the new Maud/Glim episode, and I had some other commitments to attend to.

I have pictured this segment in my mind for a long time, and I have thought about it long and hard.
> Heh, 'long and hard'. Get your Brains to shut up too.
Oh, and if you liked this segment, you will like the next one.
> Remember that AC Thor wanted to speak to Insp Anon?

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
> Updates are posted in Part 2.

I will repeat what I said in an earlier post: "let me know what you think about this segment, as well as questions that you would like answered (both for this portion and for 'Because I Choose To' as a whole). With no spoilers, I will only say that this is important."

Thank you all so much for the support that you have shown me and by following. As always, leave your comments, ideas, suggestions and criticisms below.

Stay awesome! ^^
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>>29991167

>The doors slide open, and the people on the platform part to let you through
>At least they know train etiquette, even if they are all shooting dirty looks at you
>The shopping district looms ahead, it's massive billboards and bright lights beckoning you to enter
>You fumble in your pilot suites pocket for the list you made earlier
>1. Wall stuff
>It's written in early morning Anon vernacular
>Fucking great
>2. Bed for Sunhorse
>3. Food
>4. Another game controller
>Oh yeah, you need to pick up one so Celestia can witness the wonderful world of online gaming
>5. More headache pills
>That's where the list ends, but you'll remember other stuff as you walk, you always do
>You choose to start at the bottom, because you're cool like that
>You scan the environment for a pharmacy
>There's one!
>A big green cross signals a medical shop
>You approach the sliding doors, which open for you
>There's a few people milling about, but not too many that'll take long
>You browse the pain killer aisle, picking up various forms of medicine and putting them in you collected basket
>You don't need this many, but it helps to be prepared, especially since your house now has a second occupant
>You drop a final box of syringes into your basket and head to the till
>There isn't a queue, which is pretty good
>However, something behind the till catches your eye
>They do prosthetics!
>Maybe you could get Celestia a new wing
>That would definitely make up for your attitude earlier
>The young woman at the till grins at you as she scans your stuff
>"Will that be all sir?"
"Uh, actually, you wouldn't happen to do prosthetics for ponies, would you."
>You can tell what the answer is going to be even before she opens her mouth
>"I d-don't think so. What's a pony anyway?"
>That sentence pretty much sums up Celestia's current state of affairs
"Like a horse?"
>"We don't do prosthetics for animals sir, you could always try the vets across the street."
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>>29991303

Forgot the image
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>>29991296
>>29991303
awwww maaaan. ill have to read you guys tomorrow.

gnight
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>>29991283
> “Sir, why* didn’t you say these earlier? You made me believe that I am going to be hanged!”
Dammit.
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>>29991303

>You know she means well, but hearing someone refer to Celestia as an animal makes your blood boil
>You also doubt the vet will be able help
>"I'm sorry about that sir, anyway that'll be 900 credits"
>Fucking pricy space meds
>At least they're more effective that the ones you attempted to make yourself
>Bad memories
>You pay for your stuff and exit the pharmacy
>Taking a deep breath of the filtered air, you begin to walk to your next destination
>You pass the vets, and briefly consider entering
>They won't know what you're on about either
>You pass an alley way
>Wait a moment...
>Back-pedalling, you gaze down the alley with interest
>At the end sits a small and unassuming shop simply labelled EQ robotics
>The lights are on, but you can't hear any voices inside
>Somehow you feel that a solution may lie within
>Probably not, but al least you'll get to look at cool robots
>Walking slowly down the alley, you come to rest at front door
>You raise your hand and knock three times
"Hello? Anybody home?"
>There's a scrabbling sound as someone attempts rise from a chair, followed by the rustling of paper
>"Hang on! I'll just be a minute!"
>Well then
>After just over a minute, the sound of locks unpicking fills the quiet air
>The old wooden door creaks open, revealing an elderly gentleman with a thick pair of specs
>"Can I help you?"
"Um, maybe, do you know anything about building prosthetics?"
>"If it's prosthetics you want then the medical centre is that way."
"I-I've been there already, it's not for a human."
>"Then try the vet, they'll have what your looking for."
"It's not for an animal either..."
>...
>The old man narrows his eyes at you
>"Then what, pray tell, is it for..."
"A pony..."
>That got is his attention
>"Impossible, they've been extinct for- wait... Describe it too me."
>Dude, just open the fucking door already
"Well she's big, whitish grey, and has a sun on her flank."
>Yeah that about sums her up
>"By the stars.. Come in, we must talk!"
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>>29991421

>The man throws the door open, and walks back to a packed workbench that must serve as his desk
>He's muttering away to himself
>"I never thought I'd see the day..."
"Um, excuse me but, what's going on?"
>"He doesn't know what's going on, how hilarious!"
>This old fucker is obviously past his sell by date
"Riiiiiiight... So could you maybe inform me?"
>"In time, but first you must tell me a few things."
>He's leaning in his desk, twiddling a spanner in his worn old hands
"Sure... I guess."
>"Where did you find her?"
"She was dropped off by a couple of haulers near my home."
>"Did they say where she was from?"
"They just said that all the stuff came from an old guys estate..."
>He stops twiddling the spanner and raises it up to his grizzled chin in thought
>"Did they say why they dropped her there."
"They just said that someone was coming to get it..."
>"And did they?"
>You actually don't know, you never bothered to go back to the boxes
>You just shrug
"I didn't bother to check."
>He seems troubled by this, but doesn't press the issue
"Hang on, how do you know about her?"
>"Because I've seen her before..."
>Wait a god damn minute!
"Are you her previous owner!"
>His eyes widen as he waves his hands in protest
>"No no, do I look like I have the kind of money for something like that? I barely make ends meat here!"
"Then how do you know her?"
>He sighs heavily, dropping his spanner on the desk
>"I used to work for them, when I was younger. I was an on site engineer for their massive home. Occasionally I would see her inside, cleaning or doing other things."
>He places his hand on his head, almost in shame
>"I had know idea what she was or where she had come from, all I knew was that she was some sort of slave. So I decided to do some research."
>You nod in understanding
>He seems to be telling the truth thus far
"I take it all you got was a bunch on redaction?"
>"Pretty much, yeah. That and a physical description."
>His face then grew dark
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>>29991670
I'm sorry dammit, I keep getting distracted by shit
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>>29991531

>"It was going alright, for a time. I would come in to work and she would be there. I'd wave at her and she'd wave back."
>You can see him squirming at the uncomfortable memory
>"I was up late, fixing one of their fusion plants out back, when started to hear these noises, and shouting. I couldn't hear what was being said or by who, but after a while everything when quiet. And then I heard a gunshot."
>"The morning after, she wasn't there."
>Oh...
>"For years a kept on working, just trying to forget what I had heard. I knew they had no real rights, no true dignities, but I felt as though I should do something."
>"Then one day, she was replaced."
>Replaced? How could she have been replaced?
>"The new one was younger looking, and a dark blue colour. She did the same jobs as Celestia, only faster, and with a constant look of fear etched onto her face."
>Luna...
"I think I know her, did she have a moon on her flank?"
>"I think so yeah. But I never really waved to her, and she never waved back. It wasn't long before she disappeared as well."
>He slouches further down his bench
>"I quit a month after that, and devoted the rest of my career to this place..."
>You look around, taking in the sight.
>The workshop is large, with many half finished prototypes littered around
>"But hearing you say this now, that she's alive! I don't know what to say... I-"
"She's alive yes, but barely, when I found her she was in a right state."
>"How bad."
"Missing a wing and a large section of her horn. Both looked like they had been hacked off."
>You gaze at him with a hardened look
>"Oh... Is she doing okay..."
"She's doing fine right now, I had to yell at her earlier for calling me during a dogfight. I hope she's okay."
>"I'm sure she'll understand, but that's not the reason you came here, is it."
"No, I was wondering if you could replace her horn and wing."
>He thinks for a moment
>"The horn isn't too hard of a fix, you'll just need a sampler and an incubator."
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>"Her wing however, that's a bit more difficult."
>He pulls out a pad and begins to go through design options
>"From what I remember prosthetics were a rare sight on ponies, as if they were to lose a limb, they would probably just be put down."
>"That coupled with the fact that, Celestia? I hope I'm remembering that right..."
"Yeah, it's Celestia."
>"Yeah, she's a lot bigger than most ponies were, so big in fact that there was never another larger."
>"So any wing prototype would have to be built from scratch."
"So... Expensive?"
>"Yeah... I'd love to do it for free, but believe it or not I actually do have other customers."
"So how much are we talking?"
>"An experimental build like this usually costs somewhere around 100,000 creds, including research fees."
>Ooft
>That's a lot...
>But as far as your concerned she's worth it
>"Come here and I'll give you the stuff for her horn."
>He reaches up onto a shelf, pulling down a box of incubation tubes
>"Take one of these, and..."
>He reaches into a second box
>"One of these."
>You now hold both a small incubator and a sampler
>"There's just one more thing you'll need..."
>Inside open drawer, about twenty tubes of a glowing prismatic substance swirl away
>"When her new horn is fully grown, take of the incubator and open one of these close to it."
>"With any luck she should absorb the contents of the vial."
>You star at the case with fascination
"What is it?"
>"That son, is magic."
>Woah, neat.
>The stuff really died the get used for anything nowadays, for most of the advancements made from its discovery led to replacement technology that was cheaper to run
>"Since she's an Alicorn, you'll want a couple. Provide her with enough and she'll become self sufficient in generating it."
"I can't thank you enough, but I need to know one last thing."
>"Sure, what is it?"
"Where does this rich family live exactly."
>A grin slowly spreads across his face
>"Their estate is in 3447."
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>>29992043

"Really now, I think I might go and have a chat with them."
>Plus, they offer your first true lead on Luna, at least until you can fix Celestia's horn
>"Please do..."
"I never did catch your name."
>He lets out a slow chuckle
>"It's Edward Quasar, a pleasure to meet you..."
"Anonymous, but you can just call me Anon."
>You pay for the incubator while he attempts to process your admittedly bizarre name
>"That's an... Interesting name, but I guess Quasar isn't much better."
>You laugh as you walk towards the door
>"I'll draw up some plans free of charge for that wing, and we can go from there."
"How long do you need?"
>"A week tops, I'll just save your ship number so I can get in contact later on."
"Cool, and thanks again!"
>You close the door behind as Edward gets back to work
>"It really is a small galaxy..."
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>>29992075
Considering the smaller post I suppose this is it for now
Goddamit write faster you based...(You)
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>cuddling slave mare that's lived a pretty rough life before coming to you
>hear her whimper
>she's having a bad dream
>starts shaking
>pull her closer
>she suddenly wets the bed
>gets you pretty soaked
wat do?
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>>29992124
Tie her up and give her 50 lashes. Stupid piss mare.
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>>29992086

I'm sorry... I'll try better to ignore Tuner and his requests for Celestia cup holder wings
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>>29992124
Jokes on you, anon. Being peed on by mares is my fetish.
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>>29990646
Good Job Turner my boy!

Although the story focuses on Applejack and Anon I liked the way he decides to buy ponies to help him on the property and treat them not as slaves but co-workers and restore their dignity, I am sure that if ponies slavery was abolished the serious the first to celebrate, it is good to see a landowner who has the guts to take charge of his affairs and not delegate everything to an intermediary or a puppet leader

For you gallery
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>>29992124
>>29992197
All pissfags deserve death
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>>29992472
>not wanting to drink your slave mare's piss
what a faggot
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>>29991265
>>29991267

This seems like a trap for Anon to give away his comrades of force and this is dissolved, it seems an order given by a big fish who does not like the new law
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>>29992670
kill yourself
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>>29992075
Don't want to suck too much dick but I've seen good greentext writers and I've seen fast ones but (you) might be the first one to properly combine both
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>>29992043
>>The stuff really died the get used for anything nowadays
>died
Did?
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Sorry about the mini-hiatus, had some irl stuff to attend to. Shiny and Corona will update by the end of this upcoming weekend.
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>>29993720
Ok
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>>29993720
hows the horse famalam
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>>29991296
You had me going there for a bit.
Good update

Atleast maybe Angela can bring starlight in to visit him.
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>>29993720
Does Corona get a kiss from her master?
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>>29993906
Corona gets saddled and ridden because Shiny was a bad boy and hurt Gracie.
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>>29993924
Corona is not for saddle. Corona is for cart.
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>>29993827
I'm guessing if he's back it means she's stable.
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>>29990626
>Setting AJ’s back against your chest and her rump between your legs, you grab the tablet and hold it in front of her as she wiggles around, settling into your embrace and continuing to poke through news articles as you read them from behind her.
>You do this for a few minutes before she runs out of articles that interested her, prompting you to remove her glove and place the tablet back in her nightstand.
>You reach down to the tray to grab your drink, but find none there.
>Probably placed it on your nightstand.
>Sitting up, your hand shoots over to your right, but finds no cup atop your table. Looking to your left, you see none on AJ’s stand either.
“Applejack? Did you bring me a drink?”
>You didn’t really care if she didn’t. People occasionally forget things after all, but you just wanted to make sure you didn’t eat the cup or something.
>“About that Master…”
>She twists her barrel around and pushes off your chest into a sitting position between your legs and looks at you with a mischievous twinkle in her eyes.
>“Ah know y’all like milk with yer breakfast, but ya must have drank it all the other night. Wasn’t any in the fridge.”
>Oh.
>Well, she still could’ve gotten you something else but whatever, you’d go to the store later.
>“Seein' as y’all had none, ah went to the garage fridge ta see if ya had a backup gallon.”
>Oh.
>Oh shit.
>Sweat begins to form on your brow again as she places her hoof dead center on your chest and applies a bit of pressure, holding you in place.
>She was going to kill you.
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>>29994299
IT IS TIME
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>>29994299
>Her hoof begins tracing small circles in your t-shirt, mopping up the layer of sweat that was slowly forming on your skin.
>“Ya had some more milk in there, but it wasn’t the kind ah expected to find. Ah thought we had this talk before Master?”
>Well, might as well try to defuse the situation before she kills you.
“I uhhh… thought we had this talk before as well? You don’t have to call me master AJ. I’m just as much yours as you are mine.”
> “Mhm. Tryin’ ta change the subject ain’t gonna work A-Master.”
>Shit.
>She looks away from you, disgust written on her features, her eyes refusing to meet your own.
>“Ah can’t believe ya. Almond milk…”
>She practically spits out the word, literally spitting on the wooden floor as she does.
“A-almond milk’s good for you Applejack… I’m just tr-”
>A hoof smacks itself over your mouth halfway through your spiel, effectively silencing you as her elastic frog mashes against your lips.
>“Ah don’t care Master. Almond milk’s for sissies!”
>Her tone becomes irritated as her hoof press harder against your still parted lips.
>”If you’re mine jus’ as much as ah’m yours, then mah Master ain’t gonna be no sissy, ya hear?!”
“Y-yes ma’am!”, you manage to squeak out from under her hoof.
>Satisfied, she retracts it and goes back to tracing circles on your chest as a small grin forms on her muzzle.
>“Ah’ve been takin’ those pills again jus’ in case something like this were to happen again…”
>Pills?
>Oh…
>THOSE pills…
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>>29994313
>A blush rushes across your face as you remember the screw-up at the vets office about half a year ago. Instead of Applejack’s painkillers, the assistants screwed up and gave her medication that caused her to-
>“Heh… ah thought you’d be excited ta hear that…”
>Your eyes widen as her hoof traces it’s way down your shirt and over to the now noticeable bulge that had grown in your pants.
“A-applejack wai-”
>This time instead of her hoof silencing you, you feel her lips press against your own, the small fur of her muzzle brushing gently under your nose. As quickly as it began, the kiss ends and she pulls back, her eyes locked to your own.
>“Now don’t you go lyin’ ta me Master. Ah know y’all enjoyed it the last time…”
>Taking a day off wouldn’t be the end of you. Your other ponies would take care of it.
>The pressure of her hoof on your chest increases, and you adjust yourself as you let her gently push you down on the bed.
>“Good boy…”
>Now lying on your backside, she moves to straddle your chest, before backing up until her underside was positioned over your face.
>Her toned belly rises slightly with each breath she takes, and you can feel her tail swish across your forehead in anticipation. You eyes trace their way around the contours of her body, your eyes knowingly finding and counting all the scars that hid themselves under her orange-hued fur.
>Your eyes finally come to a rest on her teats, positioned strategically above your face, waiting for you. The heat emanating from her underside causing you to sweat just a bit more.
>You move your hands, one instinctively shooting to AJ’s head and scratching behind her ear, the other moving to cup her left mound.
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>>29994327
>Gently squeezing it, you hear Applejack let out a soft moan as a drop of white fluid leaks out, dripping down onto your chin.
>“That’s it sugarcube… why waste yer money on that almond garbage when you’ve got a perfectly good milkmare here at home?”
>Her sultry, southern tone washes away any restraint you had left as your head shoots forward to enclose her teat within your mouth. You hand moves from her mound over to her thigh, running over her cutie mark and squeezing the supple flesh.
>“Ah! T-that’s it sugarcube, drink up…”
>You suckle eagerly from her teat, your tongue swirling around its tip, coaxing a bit more of the liquid out.
>The creamy fluid sloshes around your mouth as you continue to apply suction to her teat, gathering a sizable mouthful of the rich drink before swallowing, sating your parched throat.
>Her milk, while mostly bland, was much more creamy than the average cows milk, and you could taste some fruity undertones.
>You move to her other teat, suckling at the base and letting her flavor wash over you as she watched from around her barrel, biting her lip and blushing heavily. She leans into your touch as you rake your fingers through her hair, scratching around a few of the hard-to reach bug bites she had accumulated from working around the farm.
>Your other hand trails up and down her thigh, admiring her form as you swallow your creamy treat. A thick, viscous liquid plops down onto your forehead, it’s texture not unlike saliva. Still drinking from your mare, your eyes glance up to her slowly winking marehood, her excitement dripping down onto you.
>You release her teat with an audible pop and lap at the few drops that eke their way out afterwards with your tongue, letting her saliva coated mounds glisten in the sunlight.
“Got a bit excited there, huh Applejack?” you teasingly say.
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>>29994336
>“A-ah’m sorry master ah was jus thinkin’ about last night an ah got myself all excited an’ ah couldn’t help myself an’ please don-”
“Shhh… It’s okay AJ. I ain’t mad girl…”
>Your hand stops caressing her thigh and shoots up to her head, stroking behind her ear as your opposite hand mirrors the other’s actions.
>She knickers softly as she relaxes in your touch, calmed by your apparently magical fingers.
>“Ah’m sorry master… ah’ll be a better mare for ya!”
>You try to keep the annoyance out of your voice as you respond to her calling you “master” yet again. She was doing pretty well up until she brought you breakfast.
>Resisting the urge to go back to her teats, you gently rotate AJ’s head to face yours, her eyes trying to look anywhere but your own.
“Applejack, what’s wrong? You know you don’t need to call me master anymore. I understand you’ll have some slip-ups and that’s okay, but you seem to be going out of your way to call me master now.”
>She flinches and her eyes dart from your own, to the nightstand, then the ceiling, the trash, back to the nightstand, trash again…
>Wait…
>You look over to the trash and see her cheap collar hanging limply over the side of the bin, right next to the box. You put two and two together and realize she’d been thinking you were gonna get rid of her or something.
“Oh Applejack… I ain’t gonna get rid of you girl, you mean too much to me!”
>You gesture to the trash bin and a look of relief crosses her features, but doesn’t completely disappear.
>“But… why y’all getting rid a’ mah collar then? Ah can’t go outside without it…”
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>>29994342
>You take one hand and slide it underneath your pillow, fishing out her present. You hold it in front of her face as she seemingly chokes on her words, the action of giving her a new collar having much more impact on her that you would've liked.
“I don’t think you’ll be needing that old thing anymore. My special mare gets a special collar after all.”
>Her orange mouth moves but no words come out, and you can practically see her chest pulsating with her rapidly increasing heartbeat. An incredible wave of heat emanates from her nethers, washing over your face like a wave.
>Since she seemed to be rebooting, you set the collar down and rotate the mare so her fore hooves are planted firmly on your chest. As her body rotates, her head and eyes stay locked to the collar at all times, like her neck was on a pivot.
>You drag it forward and offer it to AJ, who tentatively sniffs at it before running a hoof along the interior.
>“I-it’s so smooth…”
“It better be. Payed like, three hundred dollars for it.”
>Her eyes widen as she searches your face for signs of deceit, before pushing the collar away from her with a hoof.
>“Ah can’t accept that Mas-Anon… ah ain’t worth that much money. You should his return it an get yer money back…”
“Well that’s too bad, because I think you’re worth much more than that.”
>You reach over to your nightstand and pull out one of the heart padlocks, wrapping the collar around her neck and snapping the lock closed.
>Her eyes go wider as she realizes what just happened, and she curiously pokes at the heart-shaped lock with a hoof. She moves onto the collar itself, adjusting its position on her neck and admiring the soft interior.
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>>29994347
“Do you like it Applejack?”
>You didn’t really need to ask, you could tell she liked, or at the very least tolerated it just by her expression alone. The only thing you were worried about was whether or not she’d accept it. Your farmpony could be a stick in the mud about some things.
>“N-no…”
>Her muzzle scrunches up and her emerald eyes dart all around the room, trying to look anywhere but you. You lean forward and plant a kiss on her scrunched snootle, watching with amusement as her eyes cross and she tries to scrunch even harder.
“You’re a terrible liar Applejack.”
>Unscrunching her muzzle, she sheepishly meets your gaze, withering under your genuine affection.
>“Ah ain’t worth this Anon… why’d ya go and spend yer money on a fancy collar?”
“Because you are worth it Applejack. I’d buy fifty of those if it meant you’d understand that.”
>She still seems hesitant to accept, her eyes darting to the bedroom door, observing her new accessory in the mirror.
“I’ll cut you a deal Applejack.”
>Her gaze turns back to you as she cocks her head inquisitively, ears perked forward.
“I’ll give you back your old collar and I’ll stop wasting my money on presents for you, if you can take this one off by yourself.”
>“That ain’t fair! Yer cheatin’!”
>She stands upright and points an accusatory hoof at your face as you lay there and smile. You knew she didn’t really hate it, just that she was too stubborn to accept gifts from you. Seems like she needed a bit of convincing.
>You dig your hand through her mane and pull her into a much more passionate kiss.
>Applejack fights it for only a moment before she starts moaning into your mouth, her hooves shooting to the back of your head bringing you deeper into the kiss.
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>>29994356
>You close your eyes as your tongue swipes across her closed lips, demanding entrance, which she eagerly grants. Your short, flat tongue rushes into her, greeting her longer, thicker appendage in a flurry of passionate squelching noises.
>She quickly asserts her oral dominance, wrapping your tongue up in her own and guiding it over her teeth, letting you trace their familiar shape. You can still taste the remanent of apple jelly on her tongue.
>You pull your organ back into your mouth, her’s still entwined with your own as you re-enter familiar territory. Manipulating her muscle over your own teeth, you position her tongue between your canines and gently bite down as she attempts to retract.
>“Mmmpf…”
>Her hooves furiously rub the back of your head, pressing you deeper into her maw. Your tastebuds are overwhelmed by her flavor, and your olfactory senses weren’t much better off as you breath in her apple scented coat.
>You barely register the sound of your door creaking fully open.
>“Hey Anon! Guess wha-oh…”
>Both you and Applejack freeze as Manuel’s familiar voice greets your ears. Mouths still pressed together, your frightened eyes meet in an unspoken agreement that you ears weren’t playing tricks on you.
>“Hehe, sorry y’all! Didn’t realize you two were having relations.”
>You release your grip on her tongue and she retracts it at light-speed with an audible shlick.
>“Oh wow! How’s that mare-tongue treatin’ you Anon? OW!”
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>>29994365
>You lean out from behind AJ’s slowly rotating head, and see Manuel with his wife, Ozone, right outside your door. Most of Ozone’s body wasn't visible in the doorway, that was occupied by Manuel’s hefty frame, but you could see her head and the tips of her fully erect wings, a deep red blush very evident across her frustrated features.
>Manuel was sheepishly looking away now, rubbing a hoof across his chubby side, where Ozone had undoubtedly hit him.
>“Me and the missus just wanted to, uhh… yeah it can wait I guess… Have fun I guess!”
>Applejack groans and smashes her head to your chest with a dull thud as Manuel waves at you and walks away from the doorway, an oblivious smile on his dimpled face. Ozone, still off to the side, can do nothing but indignantly stare at her husband’s backside. Despite her “I’m going to kill him later” face, she musters the courage to step into the doorway.
>Her gray coat was slicked back from what you assumed had to be a recent bath, and a towel was wrapped around her light blue mane like a turban.
>“I’d uhh… like to apologize for our intrusion Master, Manuel was just excited to tell you that the baby started kicking.”
>Despite the awkward situation, you manage to smile at her, pleased the baby seemed to be developing healthily. Your eyes trace across her bloated stomach, in about another month two she’d be due to deliver.
“It’s just Anon, Ozone. You don’t have to call me anything else.”
>“Uhh, sorry Anon. For both things. I’ll uhh… leave you two be.”
>You hear the mare attempting to morph with your shirt breathe a sigh of relief across your chest.
>“Love the new collar by the way AJ. Really makes your coat pop. The heart lock’s a nice touch too, real romantic.”
>“Urghh…”
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>>29994379
>Applejack begins bashing her head into your chest at regular intervals as Ozone closes the door behind her, leaving you with your mare. You start scratching behind her ear again, stopping every time she hits your chest. Eventually she gets the message and just sits there, enjoying your touch.
“Still hate the collar?”
>She bats at the padlock a few times, smiling as she does so.
>“Ah suppose not. It fits perfectly and ah admit, it’s much less itchy than th’ other one.”
“I’ll leave the keys in your nightstand. They’re magnetic, so it’ll be a bit easier to get it in the lock. I’m thinkin’ if we tie a string around them, you can turn it by yourself.”
>Her ears flatten against her head as she glares at the door again, before turning back to you.
>“Ah don’t think we’ll need ta worry about that Anon. Ah could sleep in this thing without any problems.”
>She turns around on the bed and faces the door, admiring her new look in the mirror.
>While she spins and poses for herself, your eyes drift back down to her teats, tantalized by the small jiggles her modeling caused to ripple through them.
>You also notice her marehood still remained moist, and although she was no longer winking, the thought of her pleasure button poking out arouses you.
>“Whoops!”
>Her hoof accidentally steps on the semi-chub that had been slowly developing under your pants. She shoots you a half apologetic, half sultry look as her hoof traces itself on your restrained length, only making it harder.
>“Sorry Anon, forgot where ah was standing. Do ya… want some help with it?”
>Actions speak louder than words, so you place both hands on her rump and drag her closer to your face, dragging your tongue across her moist folds.
>The suddenness of it all makes her squeak, but she arches her back to you, giving you slightly better access to her marehood.
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>>29994397
>You continue to lap at her lips, tasting the salty flavor of her arousal as she undoes your pants zipper with her teeth, the padlock on her neck knocking against the brass button on your pants.
>She nuzzles the open slit in your pants, parting your boxers enough to let your member spring to life. Her hot breath blows across your throbbing erection as she kisses the head.
>Her winking had returned with vigor, and you decide to return the favor by kissing her clit as it pops out from behind her hood, flicking it with your tongue as you did.
>“Ah!”
>The sensation sends a chill up her spine and her body shudders in kind. A moment later she returns the favor by wrapping her lips around your head and swirling her tongue around your glans.
>You resist the urge to moan by darting your tongue in between her folds, slowly thrusting in and out at a steady pace.
>Resisting another urge to bury your entire face into her nethers, you grip her firm flanks and massage her mark with one hand, your other one tracing up and down her thigh, admiring the toned muscle underneath the skin.
>AJ moans around your length, the vibrations of her mouth sending a wave of pleasure through you. Her head begins to bob up and down as she continues to stimulate your head with her tongue.
>When her clit pops out again you drag your tongue across the moist bundle of nerves, sending another shudder through her body as she involuntarily bucks her hips, accidentally pushing your tongue deeper into her.
>She starts to retract her rump from your face but you pull back, holding her flanks in place as you lap and swirl your tongue deep inside her sensitive flesh.
>“Mmmm…”
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>>29994404
>The southern accent she held made her moans all the more attractive to you, encouraging your now rapid tongue motions.
>Inspired by your actions, she swallows your length to about three quarters of the way down and curls her tongue around your member.
>She unwinds her muscle before snaking it around you once again repeating the process in quick succession, effectively jerking you off inside her moist mouth.
>You move your mouth down to her hood and create a vacuum between your lips, pulling out her clit. You can feel flank trembling slightly in anticipation of your next move.
>Her button peeks out and you gently hold it in place with your teeth as your tongue massages around the sensitive flesh, sending pleasured shivers throughout her body.
>You stop fondling her flank and position your hand above her hole, sliding two fingers in wiggling them around before thrusting slowly.
>Your spare hand finds her teat and pinches the tip, eliciting a surprised squeal from her as your fingers become slick from your drying saliva and the few remaining droplets of her milk.
>The sensations of her tongue and hot breath across your shaft send pleasurable waves through your brain and you could feel yourself getting closer to the end.
“A-Applejack… I’m close…”
>Instead of responding, you feel the vibrations of her giggling dance across your shaft as she takes your entire length into her maw. She doesn’t budge, choosing instead to hum softly and continue jerking your length with her tongue as the insanely hot breath coming from her nostrils heats your pants, leaving a hot spot right over your balls.
>You continue to hold her clit in place between your teeth as you stimulate the top with your tongue, now penetrating her with three fingers thrusting rapidly as you hold tightly onto her dock.
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>>29994421
>You could tell she was close as well, but your own orgasm was rising much quicker than you would have preferred.
>You reluctantly release her clit from your grasp and position your canines over the spot where it peeks out.
>Memorizing the pattern in her rapid winking, you pinch down right as her button peaks out, sending a wave of pleasure through Applejack that pushes her over the edge.
>“Unghh!”
>The sensation of her vibrating throat as she moans with her climax finishes you off.
>Your shaft contracts and convulses as you launch your seed down Applejacks throat, who dutifully swallows it all without spilling a drop.
>Her legs finally give out and she flops onto your chest as your shrinking shaft slides out of her mouth. You continue to lap at the area around her folds for a few more moments before slapping your head back to the pillow, licking her cum off your lips and fingers.
>If you didn’t need a shower before, you definitely did now.
>“Hah… so, you ready to get to work now?”
>Your roll your eyes as AJ giggles on your stomach. Today was gonna be a lazy day for you two, no doubt about it.
“I think I’ll take the day off to be with my mare instead. Love ya’ Applejack.”
>You wrap your arms around her rump and kiss her flank, hugging her body tightly to your own as you close your eyes and relax.
>Applejack but does the same, laying her face down next to your flaccid penis and nuzzling it, before closing her eyes as well.
>“Ah love ya too, Anon.”
>Yep.
>Lazy day.
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>>29994432
You done?
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>>29994432
I'd like to apologize to those who thought this would be a pure comf story. I told the Discord I'd make fetish crap, they got fetish crap. Pastebin is here.
https://pastebin.com/BSvJ1hVZ
Sorry again.
;-;
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>>29994482
It's okay my dude.
I'm gonna post shit up right now too.
Some really hardcore fetish shit
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>>29972561
Buenos Trades fuck boys.
Mi Nombre es señor frijoles

And I have a tiny little story for you!
But it's a bit of a cuddle fest.
Is that okay for this thread?
Doesn't matter i'm posting it.

I might continue depending on if I'm feeling it.
I listened to this song when writing my first chapter of this thing if you wanna see an idea of what mindset I'm coming from.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=isgydm69YLE

Also this one when editing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x2Yl0ALK3-4


Okay starting now.
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>>29972561
>Ages come and ages go
>But war, war never changes.
>You know this best yourself.
>You, Lord Anonymous, of The Great House Incognito.
>King of Kings in the Human Empire.
>You sit upon your throne, your iron throne
>Your elevated throne, that sits mere twelve steps above ground level.
>Awaiting the arrival of a very much anticipated guest
>The room you wait in is empty aside from the guards stationed at each pillar of the large throne room.
>The pillars were lined up from the entrance of the chambers to the throne itself.
>Six total, three at each side, making a count of six guards.
>Aside from them the room remained empty.
>A long red carpet lead from the very top of the throne to the entrance of the chamber
>Your houses banner lay just behind you, and to your side, your red oak crossbow, gifted to you by another lesser race, as a sign of subservience towards you.
>The entire room itself was made of yellow sandstone. The walls themselves were engraved with the statues of the great men before you.
>Other great houses that held the throne. And someday, when you died you'd occupy a notch on that wall as well.
>The windows over the throne were the only source of light during the day.
>Light would shine from the outside into the room, giving the man on the throne an almost blinding presence.
>If only because the sun would be in the eyes of the onlookers.
>It was all rather quaint for your tastes.
>but these were hard times indeed...
>Before you can finish that thought your houses Chamberlin, Colliff as he where.
>walks into the room, clad in his usual black robes.
>He approached you slowly then bowed
>"My lord, her Highness lady Celestia has come to bend the knee."
"Do not address her as a nobility...those titles are reserved for men."
>"Apologizes my lord. Celestia has come to..."
"I heard you, bring the wretched beast in. It is time to see how these creatures handle defeat."
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>>29994549
>"Right away my lord."
>You sit up in your throne, straightening your back, staring forward at the door
>You would watch her come crawling into these chambers begging for forgiveness.
>Begging for the lives of her people.
>And you would drink her sorrow like a fine wine.
>The Colliff opens the large double doors at the end of your throne letting in a most unexpected sight.
>A white regal mare adorned in gold, with a matching tiara to boot.
>Proudly she held her head high, ears turned away from you. A sign of alertness and intimidation from her people.
>It made your blood boil to no end.
>But you remained composed.
>She cooly walked down the long aisle, upon the silken red carpet only great men where allowed to tread.
>But you humor her.
>She approach your throne and bows
>"Lord Anonymous, of the great House Incognito."
>"I have come to swear fealty to you and your people."
>"Let us put an end to this bloodshed, to this senseless violence."
>"If men must run the world, then we ponies shall help them remain virtuous."
>"I ask you pardon my people and to forgive them, for they acted upon my command, my lord."
>You say nothing, instead, you slowly descend the small staircase case.
>Your steps loud and heavy, in the silent room they echoed, each pat of your boot audible to all present.
>She remained bowed to you the entire time.
>Every now and then raising her head to make eye contact with you, but retreating back to her previous bowed position.
>Such blatant disrespect for the king of kings
>You, finish descending the stairs and stand before her now
>And you wait
>She seems to think this is a sign to stop bowing and raises
>And you slap her down
"I didn't tell you to rise did I?"
>"N-no my lord, forgive me."
"Forgiveness...your people want forgiveness for a war they started?"
>You say as you snatch the crown from her head.
>She flinches at your touch, but it remains with her head down.
>She was scared, but she did not want to show it.
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>>29994336
>>“That’s it sugarcube… why waste yer money on that almond garbage when you’ve got a perfectly good milkmare here at home?”
HHHNGGG
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>>29994571
>But you can smell fear, it leaves a wet taste in the air.
>And today, it was quite palatable.
"And yet you show me so much disrespect."
>"My apologies my..."
"Quite"
"You do not interrupt your betters. I see now why Equestria fell in this conflict."
>You say as you turn to ascend the stairs once more.
"You're people don't know their place in the world. They are lost, without proper purpose. They seem to think that everyone deserves to be treated as equals."
>You say as you finally ascend to the top once more.
"But it is the will of god and nature, that men reign supreme, over all life."
"A lesson you beast seem to have forgotten."
"Well, thankful, the empire of man will show them the way of things, they will put them to good use."
>"But, we had an agreement."
"You had an agreement!"
>You yelled
"You seem to think that an animal can decide their fate. Well in the kingdom of man, men rule over the lesser beings."
"And you Celestia are not a man."
>You say as you snap her crown in half
"Guards seize her."
>Celestia jumps to her feet, flaring her wings out.
>Your men begin to surround her
>They charge her one by one
>And she swats them away, one by one, with her mighty wings
>As easily as one would swat away a fly.
>Rearing back every so often she'd slam her mighty hooves down upon some and back kick others
>But humans are hardy if nothing else.
>Your royal guard came back every time, and every time receiving, even more, punishment from the former goddess
>Some of your men attempt to draw their swords every so often, but whenever they did her horn would glow and she'd holster them once more.
>You reach for your crossbow and begin to wind it up.
>And take aim
>She turns to you and shouts
>"Anonymous stop this madness at once!"
"I intend to"
>You say as you fire
>The bolt flies through the air at mythic speeds
>Her horn begins to glow but by the time that she had realized your intentions it was too late
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>>29994588
>The bolt flys into her front left leg and she is brought low from the pain
>Your guards pile onto her, one placing her in a headlock while the others subdue her wings and legs.
>Collif returns to the room, with chains, and before too long Celestia lay before you, broken, brought low and fully restrained.
>Blood leaks from her wound.
>But you did not fear her premature death. Her kind was every bit as strong as man, and she'd sooner loose consciousness before dying to a bolt to the leg.
>"Are you satisfied?"
>"Do you feel in control now?"
"The better question is do you no longer feel in charge?"
>"You'd assault me to prove a point"
"I'd do much less to show a hypothetical."
>You say as you place your crossbow to the side of your throne.
"You come in here, thinking that you'll retain sovereignty over your former subjects, and the empire of man would just slap you on the wrists for the crimes that you've committed against us."
"Well you're wrong Celestia, Men do not forgive, and we do not sow."
>"Someone had to take a stand against your cruel regime."
>She says attempting to stand once more but your guards tug at the chains forcing her down once more.
>Even now she tries to resist you. With no armies, no plans, and not even the full control of her limbs
>"I only hope that Equestria stands as an example for those fighting for what's right in this world."
"I certainly hope they do serve as an example. An example of what happens when you declare war on The Empire of Man."
>You say descending your throne once more
>You were getting quite the cardio today.
"I hope that they see that we placed your people in chains, like so many before them, and that we castrated your men, and forced your women to warm our beds."
"I hope they see how we force your children to work our mines and make us richer, how we force all your people into subservience."
"And above all how men rain supreme over all other creatures."
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>>29994608
"Let them speak of our greatness in these words."
"They shall say that men do not sow."
"We take..."
>You finish as you stand before her now.
>Tears are streaming down her eyes
>She has lowered her head
>Trying to hide her face
>You grab and yank it up so that her eyes meet yours
"You will not be my vassal Celestia, you will be my slave."
"And you will sow for me, you will make for me and I shall take them"
>She tries to shake her head out of your hand but you tighten your grip and force it in place
"Look at me when I'm talking to you!"
>And in her final display of defiance, she bites down on your hand, so hard that it draws blood
>You scream in agony recoiling back
>But she does not let go, she begins to thrash her head around now.
>Trying to maim you.
>Your guards began to beat on her
>And she releases her grip
>The sound of fist slamming against her soft flesh can be heard and every sickening wack brought some catharsis to your pain
>But it was not enough for you
"Take her away!"
>You bellowed
>Your guards nodded and drag the now limp mare out of your chamber. The successive blows have rendered unconscious.
>And in truth, she would not have let go of your hand had she not been.
>Collif grabs your wrist begins to apply pressure lifting it into over your head.
>"Someone fetch the physician. The king is in need of aid."
"Collif, listen to me"
>You stuttered grabbing his robe with your free hand
>"Y-yes my lord."
"If I pass out, do not hang the mare. Treat her wounds and place her in a holding cell."
>You're beginning to sweat now.
>You'd not noticed, but the mares attack left a more than mere bite, she left a full on gash, blood was leaking from it at an alarming rate, hence the concern of your Chamberlin.
>Under your command her wounds would be treated and then placed in a holding cell until a later time.
>And you would loose consciousness
>When you would awaken later that night in your chambers
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>>29994626
>Hand fully bandaged with a bottle of milk of the poppy left in plane view atop your drawer in case the pain still persisted.
>The only thoughts rushing your mind was that this was not how this saga would end
>This beast would not be left with even an iota of dignity, you would break her, you make her beg for death
>And then you'd make her love your whip. As you've done so many times before...


And that's it for right now, criticism is greatly appreciated, calling me a faggot is also appreciated.
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>>29994655
I hindsight I didn't write a lot and maybe should have continued more before posting. But fuck it. Call it the beginning and be done with it.
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>>29994655
It's shit, fuck off back to/tg/ and take your retarded 40k bootleg with you.
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>>29994706
I will definitely take that into consideration.
I'll be sure to update as soon as I am able.
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>>29993184

Why thank you!

>>29993355

That was actually meant to be 'didn't', but my shitty tablet auto correct doesn't know english.

Or perhaps it's just me...
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>>29994722

I liked it, even though it hurt to read. I guess that's what you were going for though. Plus, any more Celestia content is better than just me writing about unfunny video games
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>>29994482
It was cutelewd. The best lewd.

Is there more?
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>>29994760
>even though it hurt to read
What do you mean?

>any more Celestia content is better than just me
I think that Celestia is very gung-ho about her beliefs and her status. So it's necessary to reflect that even in the face of defeat. It wouldn't make sense for her to just lay down and die.

I'll try and continue to update if Celestia greens are really lacking.
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>>29994789

>What do you mean?

As in Celestia abuse is painful to read, because she is sweet horse and should be hugged
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>>29994819
It always gets better.
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>>29994655
Well, it's different from the norm I'll give you that. An interesting premise.

>>29994706
Rude.
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>>29994893
>Rude
He speaks true tho.
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>>29994931
I think Rude 2
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>>29994893
>An interesting premise.
I aim to please
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>>29994655
>>29994669
Where is the cuddle fest. I was lied to.
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>>29994655
I like it, though I hope it isn't all going to be this dark.
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>>29992134

>Tell me a bedtime story PhysicalAnontism.
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>>29994978
Oh Its coming trust me.
You just have to be patient.
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>>29995071
I don't know.
Celestia has her ways.
But Lord Anon is also a cunt.
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I want to saddle and ride the Cellyslave against her will.
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>>29995223
Wouldn't you much rather have an eager, willing Celestial mount that delights in bowing her head, submitting to the bit, and revels in the feeling of the leather saddle on her back, and shudders with pleasure when she feels it fill with the weight of her strong, confident master?
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>>29995223
>Needing a pre-slaved celly
>Not enslaving a fresh celly at the source
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>>29995275
Well, guess I have a riding fetish now.
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>>29995291
>>29995275
>>29995223
You see, why are you guys getting on my case when this is so blatantly part of slavery.
You can be chill later.
But only after dominance has been established.
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>>29994706
This is fagfag, ignore him. He's a staple of every thread.
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>>29994313
Oh SHIT.....

Applejack Has switched to YANDERE mode

This is exciting!!
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>>29995275
Who has the screencap of the Celly riding story.
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>>29994313
fucking almond milk...

god damn it anon. listen to the pony
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>>29995275
>>29995291
>>29995302
>>29995401
They're horses. Riding them is about the least creative thing you can do to them as slaves.
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>>29995142

>"Once apon a time, there was a pizza"
>"I put fucking pineapples on it."
>"And I enjoyed it..."
>"The end."
>Celestia didn't come back to Anontism for stories after that
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>>29995532
>im-fucking-plying
Don't talk to me or my mare ever again.
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>>29995401
There were also these two greens on a similar subject
https://pastebin.com/RweqAejj
https://pastebin.com/iVFXvHUR
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>>29995583
oh my
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>>29995566
Double dubs confirm.
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>>29995566
>>29995634
>>29995583
>>29995532
>>29995401
>>29995302
>>29995275

I bet none of you plebs has ever even actually ridden a mare before.
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>>29995675
You'd be correct in your assumption. I've been driving cars and four wheelers all my life.
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>>29995675
I know there's at least one person in this thread who has.
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>>29994482
It's alright. A little lewd never hurt nobody. I could live with some more of their flirting slice of life about the day that fallowed though.
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>>29994482
>milking
>drinking from the tap
FETISH STATUS: SATED
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>>29995695
I highly doubt anyone in this thread has any actual equestrian experience. That would require actually going outside.
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>>29972561
Is this supposed to be Fluer or Molestia?
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>>29995725
I grew up on a ranch. My whole childhood was spent riding horses. Made my legs sore as fuck, but it's quite fun when they gallop.
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>>29995748
yes
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>>29995583
I do not recall reading the second pastebin story. Huh.
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>>29995725
the shiny and corona author owns two horses and rides regularly
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>>29995760
>>29995815
>lying on the internet
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>>29995834
>is a newfag
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>>29995834
Horseriding isn't as elusive as sex, anon. Assuming no one here has done is it kind of stupid.
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>>29995583
>>29995791
Ah, because it was Shukaku. All his characters are flat and robot like.
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>>29995675
In a strange twist I've only ever rode stallions, not even intentionally just been the luck of the draw
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>>29994655
Get a trip so I can filter what I can already tell is going to be grimderp garbage with shit lines stolen shamelessly from a game of thrones.
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>tfw you will never kick Celestia's sides with your cruel, sharp spurs over and over until her sides are streaked with blood
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>humans used to be the only sapient species
>magic crap made the other sapients start popping up
>humans, being the oldest and most developed species, were viewed as a wise and benevolent master race(a bit like elves from lotr, those smug assholes)
>ponies, thanks to their domestication at the hands of humans before their sapience, held this view more strongly than the other races
>they were willingly subservient, happy to be in the care of those they saw as their betters
>discord appears, sees that humans are the balancing power keeping the world in order
>teleports all of them to another planet so !!!chaos!!! can ensue
>discord is defeated, but the humans are still gone
>Celestia and Luna, the beloved pets of the last human king, cobble together a society in the absence of human masters
>despite their success, they feel inadequate
>they believe the society they have built is nothing but a shallow reflection of human glory
>they refuse to take the titles of true human rulers, merely accepting the title of "princess"
>countless generations pass, and the princesses let humanity fade from history to spare ponykind the pain of knowing life was once, from their perspective, better
>eventually, they are the only ones to remember humans at all

>???? years later, cue Anon showing up in Equestria
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>>29996077
Luna would be hilarious.
>SNORT! NEIGH! SADDLE US ANON!
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>>29996095
>>29996077
The idea of such a powerful mare asking to be saddled and ridden, bowing before me as her master, makes my dick so fucking hard.
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>>29996077
I am HIGHLY interest.
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>>29996077
>anon has zero interest in owning a slave
>Celestia and Luna fall into a deep depression when their desperate need to be dominated is unmet, thinking there must be something wrong with them or that they're bad girls
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>>29996190
>thinking there must be something wrong with them or that they're bad girls
For some reason this made me sad.
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>>29996213
Probably because it evokes the sense of uneasiness caused by the pain of rejection, which we've probably experienced quite a bit more than the average individual.
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>>29996095
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>milking
>biting
>saddles
>riding
>god mares eagerly accepting their rightful place
The dick can only get so hard
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>>29996575
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>>29996575
truly it doesnt get any better
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>>29972625
>Ultimately, even if Rainbow Dash had decided to inquire about her observation, she wouldn’t have had the chance to. Shortly before the final qualifiers were completed late into the afternoon, the event host personally came to their booth. He was a massive, muscular man, with hands that betrayed hard work but eyes that shone with refined intelligence. From an oversized pocket he produced two postcards, with tickets to an exclusive dining event that evening.
“Been an honor having you two here,” he remarked in rough voice, dripping with New York accent. “Turnout’s been great, and a big part of that is just because you’re here.”
“Can’t say I blame them, coming here with their everyone but the kitchen sink,” Rainbow quipped, waving a hoof. “Even when I’m not out there in the skies, I’d say I’m a pretty great show!”
“But what a wonder when you are out there. Honestly, it ain’t about the profits for me, although we’re probably going to see plenty of that with these crowds. I just like the sport and the spirit, and if you’ve got anything, it’s that.”
“Oh come on, you haven’t even seen me fly yet. Save the praise for when praise is due!”
“Haven’t seen you fly yet? Of course I have, I was in the stands at the Tuscaloosa race! Wouldn’t have funded something of this size if I didn’t know there was real talent out there.”
>Rainbow was taken slightly aback by this claim. The man had a strict business air about him. She just couldn’t imagine him in jeans and a hoodie, hollering at the amateurs competing in that little Alabama race.
“Came all the way down from Manhattan to see it.”
“Manhattan?” Buster interjected, his eyebrows slightly raised. “Pretty big trip for a little event and, I say this with utmost courtesy, you don’t seem like the type with oodles of free time to work with.”
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>>29996655
“I just wanted to see the show. Had the tickets even before I knew you’d be there. My daughter, she has a pegasus of her own, and that pony’s got her head all full of stories about racing and stunts.”
“So you took your daughter down to see the race, saw what you liked, and decided to turn it big?” Rainbow asks to herself more than the man, her brow furrowed in thought.
“About right. Oh, hope you don’t mind meeting her tonight at the dinner, if you come. I bet she’ll want to meet you.”
>Suddenly, the man’s smartwatch started beeping. He glanced at it, sighed, and tucked it back into his sleeve.
“Well, I suppose I gotta run,” he said, almost in a groan. “So damn busy with putting all this together I barely have time to watch the show! Well, nice meeting you two, hopefully we’ll see each other again tonight.”
“Hey, wait,” Buster called out to him as he went out the room’s only door. “You got a business card? Just in case we need ya?”
>The man quickly removed a business card from his back pocket before turning back and jogging down the hall. Buster gave the card a good look-over before tucking it into one of his own pockets.
“Never got his name,” he explained to his pegasus companion. “And guys like that always got a business card.”
“Well then, who is he?” Rainbow demanded, suddenly curious about their busy benefactor.
“It says, ‘J. Nazario, Brokerage Services’. Must be some Wall Street type.”
“Wall Street?”
“Place way up north in New York. Lots of big business fellas up there, and lots of rich folks too. We’ll go there some time, I bet you’d like the skyscrapers.”
>…
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>>29996670
>The dinner was hosted at a nearby ballroom. Grand and gorgeous, it held hundreds of small, round tables elegantly covered by finely-embroidered eggshell tablecloths. Given the scale of the event they’d seen so far, Rainbow Dash and Buster weren’t surprised in the slightest by the expenses obviously taken to put on this show.
>If anything, it was more surprising that ponies constituted a substantial portion of the crowd. Throughout the ballroom, some of the best athletes of the past day talked, laughed, and even drank alongside their human company. It was far from an equal ratio of species, with perhaps one pony for every four humans, but Rainbow nonetheless expected to be largely alone in here.
>Once again, there were few faces either recognized, even counting those only seen from afar. None of the ponies she’d met and talked to at the prior event had outperformed the crowd before her, and this sort of crowd was entirely new to Buster. Sure, he’d been to dinner parties before, but never with company so high on the social ladder.
>Most of the attendees seemed to have nothing more than a financial tie to the whole scene. Suits, ties, and the occasional briefcase or light duffel bag covered the mostly-male humans. The way they talked, the way they laughed, the way they drank, it was all more refined than the ponies doing it with them. They held themselves with an air of wealth, this more likely than not being an entirely founded air.
>The two shuffled about a bit by the entrance, unsure of where to go or whom to talk to. They were recognized plenty and greeted by passers-by, but these greetings were only superficial. Past a wave or a nod, none attempted to converse.
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>>29996679
>At last, they were saved by their host, the same burly man who’d hand-delivered their invitations just a few hours earlier. He’d made a complete change of clothes, but the collar of his shirt was still stained with sweat. It only matched the rest of his appearance: his eyes strained with newfound tiredness, stubble poked out across his neck, and Rainbow swore he’d developed a few new gray hairs since they’d last spoken.
“Ah, here they are! The stars of the show!” he said, approaching with an obviously strained grin. “Glad you’s two could make it.”
“Wouldn’t miss such a fancy-pants gig, Mr. Nazario,” Buster replied courteously, motioning to the room around them.
“Ah, just call me Jimmy. Much less of a mouthful, eh? Especially for you ponies, your names make a whole lot more sense, don’t they?”
Realizing he was addressing her, Rainbow hastily responded, “Oh, I guess so, yeah. But humans don’t have a cutie mark, and that usually goes with the name, so I guess it’s not too weird for them not to make sense.”
“Sure, but I guess it’d make more sense if they called me Big Business, or something like that. Anyway, you’s two got a table already?”
“No, actually, we just got here.”
“Oh, great! Been saving you a spot at our table. If you’d like to join us, that is. My daughter would really appreciate it.”
>With little else to do, their group meandered across the room to a slightly larger table tucked into one of the corners. Seated around this table were a girl no older than nine or ten conversing with a pegasus mare, another man in an expensive suit, and a woman in a dress that would impress even the snobbiest of Canterlot crowds.
“Folks,” Jimmy began, “I’d like to introduce you to our guests. This mare is the one and only Rainbow Dash, and the fine fellow is her owner, Mr. Freedman.”
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>>29996689
“Howdy,” the seated man said with a smile.
“From right to left, we have Mr. Perkins, the owner of this venue, my dear wife Alyssa, my beautiful daughter Rose, and her pony, Caramel Cube.”
“Daddy, that’s Rainbow Dash?” the girl shouted, suddenly rising from her chair.
“Sure is, sweetie. Why don’t you see if the nice mare would be willing to chit-chat with you?”
>Rainbow suddenly found herself being almost dragged away by the bubbling youngling and her equally-excited pony. It didn’t take long for them to coax her into launching into a story-telling of some of her most exciting endeavors in Equestria. Buster, on the other hand, got to talk with the adults.
“So, Mr. Freedman, you’ve certainly got a lucky find in that mare,” the table’s sole female occupant opened with a silky, smooth voice. “How’d you get her?”
Buster shrugged, “Guess she drove her old owner bonkers and made him sell her off to the first taker. I just needed a pony to help me with my music gigs, had no idea I was getting a superstar.”
“Blind luck then, eh?” Jimmy asked, stroking the stubble on his chin.
“Had no idea she was an athlete ‘til she told me. But hey, I ain’t gonna get in the way of nobody’s dreams. So, I guess my music’s the side show now, and she’s the big star.”
“Must be profitable, I imagine?” asked Perkins.
“A bit, but I ain’t really a man for money. Got my tiny little home, got my music, got my pony, and life’s good. Being here, doing this, it’s mostly about making her happy.”
“I’d have thought EquiTech would be paying you something handsome to use their equipment so publicly.”
“No, but they did give us the stuff for free. That was nice of ‘em.”
>The two businessmen at the table exchanged a curious look, one that Buster couldn’t determine. But it was over in a moment, and Perkins again turned back to Buster.
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>>29996694
“Alright, enough talk of money, then. I bet we’re all about tired of it by now.”
“Oh, shoot, it ain’t really a bother for me. I’m not exactly comfortable at big-room gigs like this anyways, unless I’m up on a stage.”
“I can get that. You live in the country, right? Well, not sure if you’d been able to tell by the accent, but I ain’t exactly from a big city either. I come from Prattsville, little town south of here. You come to Arkansas much?”
“Not since I was a kid, growing up in Baton Rouge.”
“What you think of Little Rock?”
“Nice town, nice people. I think Dash likes it more.”
>The table looked over to Rainbow Dash, who was still engaged with the entranced child and pony not ten feet from their group. Evidently, they were at an important part of the story, as Rainbow pulled up into the air and took a few different martial arts poses.
“She likes the human cities?” Jimmy asked, returning the group’s attention to each other.
“I think she’s just surprised how big they are. Tuscaloosa ain’t such a big town, but the first time we drove in there, I practically had to pry her face off the car window with a spatula. Kept going on about how wide the city stretched. Lord help me when I take her to Atlanta.”
“Hah, that’s about how Caramel reacted the first time we brought her to New York. Up until a couple years ago we lived on an estate in New Jersey. Going from there to a Manhattan penthouse was a big change for all of us, especially that pony.”
“She ever get scared of heights?” asked Perkins.
“A pegasus?” he remarked, raising an eyebrow. “Well ‘course not.”
“Speaking of which,” Jimmy’s wife interrupted, “Honey, think we should discuss…”
After a brief moment of silence, Jimmy’s face lit up in understanding, “Oh, right, yeah. So, Mr. Freedman, you like your pony quite a bit, yeah?”
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>>29996698
“Don’t think I’ve ever had a better friend.”
“And you ain’t a man of money, yeah?”
“Long as I got a roof over my head and food in my belly, I don’t really mind it, no.”
“Well then I won’t bother asking to buy Rainbow from you. But if you ever do deign to sell her, be sure to give me a call, I’ll be sure to give both a better price and a better home than anyone else can.”
“I ain’t selling her.”
“Right, ‘course. But I did have something else in mind inviting you here.”
“Yeah?” he asked out of courtesy, already weary of any business talk to come.
“Well, you two need a sponsor. If the swindle those EquiTech people pulled on you isn’t proof of that, then I don’t know what is. I’d bet my whole fortune they were ready to send you a hundred thousand or more just to get her wearing that suit.”
“Thanks, but we ain’t looking for an agent. Already had a run-in with a bad soul, and like I said, we really don’t need the money.”
“Well if you don’t, then think about who might! Rainbow’s friends, I bet she’s told you about ‘em, right?”
“Plenty.”
“Well, before she showed up, nobody even knew if any of ‘em but Applejack were even still alive! Now that you’ve got Rainbow, there’s still four of ‘em left to find!”
“And?”
“Don’t you think millions of bucks in private investment might go a long way to finding them?”
“You think I should get these deals and spend the cash looking for Rainbow’s friends?”
“I think that’s what Rainbow would want,” he said, raising a finger to Buster’s right.
>He turned around in his seat, to find Rainbow now hovering silently and listening in on the conversation. The girl and her pegasus were happily chatting by the wall, likely discussing the tall tales they’d just heard from the cyan mare.
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>>29996704
“I think it’s a pretty good idea,” she said slowly, aware of the attention placed on her. “But Buster’s right, we’ve had to get rid of a snake already. Why should we trust you?”
“Because I ain’t looking for profit, I’m looking to help you’s two,” Jimmy answered, his voice growing a bit more serious, his New York accent growing a bit more pronounced. “Believe me, I know there’s a lot of folks out there looking to get rich off your fame, but I ain’t like that. I’ve got a place in some very important hedge funds, my wealth is secured. And after seeing the competition today, and the interest people got in it, I want nothing more than to see this sport blossom into a beautiful flower.”
“And y’all are right in the center of that sport,” Perkins added.
“Look, I ain’t even offering to be your manager or whatever. I can hire somebody for that. What I’m offering is to be a benefactor. Give you a nice place in Manhattan, pay all your plane tickets, set up some charities or whatever you want. It’s what rich guys do. Carnegie built libraries, Vanderbilt made himself a university. I wanna help the ponies.”
“How much would you be willing to pledge to us?” Rainbow asked, her interest growing. “You know, to help find my friends.”
“Well, I bet that can be done with just a few million. But I was thinking we could do more. Lot of ponies out there don’t have owners as good as yours, Rainbow. Could set up rescue homes, charities to help ‘em out when they need it most.”
“So, again, how much?”
“Let’s put it this way. I had about a hundred million set aside, ready to both buy you and turn you into a global superstar. How’d you like to tell me where that money’s gonna go, now that I ain’t buying you?”
>…
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>>29996709
End update. Alright folks, we have a choice to make. Buster has already dealt with one bad fellow and told him to fuck off. But this guy is different, and his offer is different. Rainbow is interested, but the final say is Buster's. I'm going to go CYOA for next update (and the rest of this story, as this crossroads will majorly impact plot). Does he take the offer?

PB: https://pastebin.com/GNF8AcxU
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>>29996213
Because it brings to mind images of sad ponies.
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>>29996749
That's probably it.
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This is one of our writefags
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>>29997019
cool

which one
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>>29997019
8/10 would go drinking with
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>>29997031
That's Handsome Jew.
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>>29997037
>Implying I have a chin that refined
My chin is worse than Leafy's desu

Can confirm it's one of our guys though
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>tfw you will never swat Celestia hard on the muzzle with a rolled up newspaper and call her a bad girl
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>>29997145
But I want to rub her fluffy chest and belly and call her a good girl.
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>>29996907
>tfw no master
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>>29996730
Much can be done to the ponies with that money but, this is something that Buster and Dash must think clearly and all the time it takes to make a decision, I'm sure Rainbow would want to know the whereabouts of Flutter and the others but Buster also considers that to make a deal thus imposes clauses that would put at risk the freedom that they enjoy now, if he is not sure what to do then they should consult a legal professional or put his own clauses.

I hope you continue with your story HJ and should not stop offering us a little some of the philosophy and musical ability of Buster in future deliveries
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>>29997203
>that feel
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>>29997019
What a cutie
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>>29995992
For you, I'll go out of my way to change my name every time.
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>>29991296
Jesus christ
I was raging hard tbqh, until he finally realized what Thor was up to
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>>29997340
Well, if you want to be a shitty little nigger then that's fine too, easy enough to scroll right past your gay G R.R. Martin ripoff story.

Also, Greyjoy was objectively the worst house after Frey, your taste a shitter.
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>>29997729
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>>29994655
>calling me a faggot is also appreciated
GB2 SiM, faggot.

It's well written, and SiM is starving for new content. This sort of thing is right up their ally, and they will love you for it! But Celly is a prisoner of war, or I guess a political prisoner now, not really a slave. Anon wishes to dominate her psychologically, rather than economically. Making her beg for death then love the whip is not practical management of an capital asset! As OP says, "It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts".
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>>29993720
>Not dead

LIES!!
Don't try to fool us with your undead deception Somewritefag, we've heard it all before. Back to the crypt revenant, before we bust out the holy water.
Please update, I miss Shiny, Corona, and Sparky too!
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>>29996730
>Does he take the offer?
We ask for time. At least to the end of the competition, likely more.

Is this a limited time offer? Why the rush? What most annoyed us last time was the hard sell and the artificial pressure to commit. If Jimmy is legit then the situation will be much the same next week or next year. Jimmy and Dash will both be very busy until this whole show is over, lets wait till at least then. But even then we should know him better before we make any commitment, and there is no shortage of music venues in New York; time for a bite of the Big Apple!
>And ya, There's something a bit off about this whole setup; Where's the mares?
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>>29997409
>>29997810
>>29997506
Remember a segment where Insp Anon was telling Starlight about the dangers of forgetting that people in power often have hidden agendas, and that to blindly follow something is "stupid"?
> Here we see that even if we KNOW something, we will benefit from reminders.

I am writing Insp Anon's confrontation with AC Thor now, and I would love to know what questions you have about any part of the story. Do leave them as a reply to this post.
> e.g. where are the missing ponies?
> e.g. why is AC Thor so invested in ponies in the first place?
> etc

Thank you so much for reading and for your support. I will be posting the update hopefully by the end of tomorrow (I wanna wait for more feedback).

Stay awesome! ^^
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>>29998043
I already ask that second question.
also.
did alpha die? what is being done for poor derps? The team NEEDS to make sure the ponies they rescue get the help they need and a good home. Not just put back in the system.
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>>29997729
I actually doubt like the grey joys.
I just felt they where the most likely to have slaves.
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>>29997867
SIM is dead this is my home now.
Also he's not going to dedicated ridiculous amount of resources to this.
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>>29989423
WH space is best space.
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>>29998043
The guy that was killed was the guy from the shelter right? I'm eager to know starlight's response to him being killed
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>>29998674
Nope. That shelter guy is one Thaddeus Benson; this one is Andrew Pierce.
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>>29998810
fuck
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>>29972561
I originally intended to post this in #105.
In ancient Rome slaves used to be seen as mentally inferior. Even today there are spiritual people who believe some humans simply don't have souls and this can be determined with relaive ease. According to this ancient civilizatory school of thought slaves were always more useful as slaves than humans. Even the oldest of civilizations and religions mention slavery.

tl;dr - human are above non-humans.
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>>29996575
"P-please, Master, fill our wombs with your noble sperm. It's been so long… O-our Sister never even had the honor before you all left. We need it…"
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God damn, I can't get that fucking Vinyl story out of my head. I wish I had the time to write it. It's just too good.
Also, has Regard's always been in the recommended stories list? I never noticed.

Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/GeEg7ELu

Posting one (1) or maybe seven Vinyl(s) for clarification.

>You find Rainbow wide awake, back resting against the bathroom door.
>With how many ponies you kept locked in there, it really was turning into the brig of the ship.
>You settle in next to Rainbow, sitting down.
>In return, Rainbow wraps a wing around you.
>Can’t stay too long though, you were only checking up on her, and then back to Coffee and Swirl.
>You can tell Rainbow’s nervous, and that there’s something on her mind.
>Which is fine.
>There’s something on yours as well.
“What’s wrong?”
>Rainbow just frowns sadly.
>”I should have stayed with them. What was I thinking, sleeping with everyone else? I don’t get to relax. Of course something like this was going to happen, I knew it was going to happen, and I let it happen anyway! Again. It’s my fault that Coffee and Swirl are injured. Everything’s my fault.”
“It wasn’t your fault. We both screwed up.”
>”C’mon, Anon, seriously? I feel like I need to be punished for letting this happen. I’m supposed to be better now! I’m supposed to see this coming. I didn’t even notice it was happening; you had to wake me up. And what if we hadn’t noticed? What if Coffee never told us where Twilight was and this just kept happening and happening and happening?”
>You lock eyes with Rainbow.
“This wasn’t your fault, Dash. Say it with me. This wasn’t your fault.”
>She doesn’t repeat it.
“Rainbow!”
>She sighs.
>”It wasn’t my fault. There, happy?”
>You continue.
“I know we should have been better. But what’s done is done. We need to focus on supporting Coffee and Swirl now, okay?”
>”And punishing Primrose.”
>Right.
>You’d nearly forgotten.
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>>30000606

“So what are we gonna do about Primrose?”
>”Alright, I have an idea.”
>You motion for her to continue.
>You’d be up for anything.
>”So you know how I thought you were gonna use me as fish bait?”
>Except that.
“We’re not killing her, Rainbow.”
>”Nobody said kill. Just…tie her to the net a little.”
“That would kill her.”
>Dash shakes her head.
>”No no, we’d bring her up for air. She’d be fine. She’d just wish she was dead. Big difference. Wishing you were dead won’t kill you, trust me.”
“No is no.”
>Dash slams her front hooves down.
>”And why not? Did you see what she did to Coffee? She hurt one of MY ponies. As far as I care, nothing is too extreme for her. Maybe we should cut her legs up, see how she likes it!”
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>>30000609
When the posts are short like this,
you know I went 100 characters over the limit.


>Dash takes a deep breath.
>”Are you sure we don’t have a whip here? She…we could whip her. Even a belt would work. Fifty lashes, that sounds fair, right? Or more!”
>You begin to agree, but Rainbow cuts you off.
>Her breathing gets heavier.
>”Or, or we could just beat her, screw the whip. Get everyone together and just kick her until she passes out. She wanted to do that to Coffee every night, over and over? We could do that. We could do that so easily.”
“Wait, Dash, let’s not go overboa…”
>Her eyes glaze over, staring up at nothing.
>She’s in a different place.
>”Pony hooves don’t bend upwards easily, tie her like that and she can’t sleep. We could just keep her up all night, every night. In a couple of days she’ll be begging for a chance to apologize.”
>She mumbles something you can’t understand.
>You push against her slightly, trying to get her attention, but it’s not working.
>”…just need to wait until just before the bubbles run out, it’s easy. That’s when the water rushes into their lungs.”
>Dash is completely out of it by now.
>She’s not responding when you call her name.
>”Acid! We could…we could burn her with acid. I bet she’d behave then. No more crying for her friends, I bet she’d be a submissive little bitch if we burnt her wings right off. That’ll make her obey.”
>You shove Rainbow roughly.
>She snaps back to reality as she falls over.
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>>30000611

>She takes a deep breath of new air as she scrambles back to her hooves.
>Pain flashes across her face briefly, before she fights it down.
>She looks around confused, before focusing on you.
>Like an anchor, it secures her to where she is.
>Safe, on the Celestia.
>She’s quiet for a second, before sliding next to you again.
>”…thanks.”
“No problem.”
>The two of you sit in silence for a moment.
“Are you okay? Maybe we shouldn’t talk about this right now.”
>”I’m fine, Anon. I just…got a little carried away. That’s all.”
>She wasn’t fine.
>You’d been with Rainbow long enough to know when she was faking it. When she had her ‘strong mare’ façade on.
“Do you wanna go to sleep? We can talk about this with ‘Shy in the morning.”
>”No, I…I’ll just go through it again in my sleep. At least here, you know when to wake me up and stop it.”
>Dash nuzzles against you.
“Do you wanna talk about it?”
>”No, I don’t want to talk about. I don’t want to remember it, I don’t want anything to do with it. I just want to…to…”
>She stops.
>You don’t think she knows what she wants.
>You can hazard a few guesses though.
>To be ‘normal’ again.
>To protect her friends.
>To stay here, with you.
>She shakes her head quickly.
>”I just want to know what we’re doing with Primrose, okay? I’m fine.”
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>>30000614

>You change the subject, maybe for the worst.
“I’m up for any more ideas you might have. I have nothing, I…didn’t think something like this would happen. I thought…”
>”That after you saved everyone, we’d all get along?”
“Yea.”
>”I know the feeling.”
>Neither of you says anything more on that.
>”What if we just abandoned her?”
>Dash says suddenly.
>”Like, when we go to save Twilight, we just leave her there. That’s a good idea, right? She’s proven that she can’t behave herself, so we’re kicking her out.”
>You give it some thought.
>It was tempting.
>Just ditching her was probably the best idea so far.
>You didn’t want ponies like her on your ship.
>The Celestia was a privilege.
>But you quickly realized it had one major flaw.
“You think Fluttershy is ever going to agree to that?”
>”What?”
“You think you can convince Fluttershy to abandon one of the ponies she’s trying so hard to save? If we leave Primrose on the shore, she’ll just go back to Jacob. And I don’t think Fluttershy would allow us to send someone back there. Even someone like Primrose.”
>”No, that’s good, cause, like, if she cares about Coffee, she’ll want to protect her, right?”
>You just stare at Dash until her brain kicks in.
>”No. No, you’re right. Fluttershy isn’t gonna let us get send someone back to Jacob, regardless of what they do.”
>She sighs.
>”Why does she have to be so damn kind all the time? Some ponies don’t deserve kindness. Not if they fuck up like this.”
>Dash thinks for another moment.
>”What if we had Coffee punish her? Like, we handed HER the belt? Then everything’s equal, right?”
>You chuckle morbidly.
“Yea, because the one thing these ponies need to see right now is Coffee whipping another pony and no doubt taunting her about it the entire time. That’ll make them trust her all the more.”
>”Good point. I think…I think you need to do this.”
“Yea.”
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>>30000619

“We’ll need her to publically apologize. Need to show that what she did was wrong and that we won’t tolerate it.”
>”Finally, something we can agree on. She better have the best apology in the world for what she did though. I’m not accepting anything less than grovelling.”
“Her magic is an issue as well. If she can fight down two ponies at once with it, I don’t want to imagine what she could do if she really set her mind to it.”
>”Agreed.”
“Is there any way we can just prevent her from using it? I mean, besides taking a hacksaw to her head?”
>Dash shrugs.
>”Maybe we should take a hacksaw to her head.”
>You glare at her.
>”Alright, alright. I don’t know. Maybe one of the other unicorns on the boat would know, but I don’t. I’m a pegasi, magic isn’t what I do.”
>She thinks for a moment.
>”Twilight always had issues when someone touched her horn though, maybe we just need to tie it up with wire or put something over it.”
>So it was just another thing you’d need to look into.
>Maybe Swirl could help, she was a unicorn.
>Though it did raise the question of why she didn’t use her magic to stop Primrose.
>Maybe there was something wrong with her.
>Or maybe Primrose was just stronger, magically.
>Magic was like a muscle, right?
>You weren’t sure if there were any other unicorns on the boat.
“We might just have to belt her. The others won’t be happy if we starve her or mutilate her by removing her horn, we could give her more work but that doesn’t feel like enough, we can’t abandon her, we can’t isolate her. We just…have no choice.”
>”No, we have a lot of choices. You just won’t do most of them. I still think we should give her more work and a belting. And something harsher on top of that.”
“Right. Anyway, we’ll discuss it with Fluttershy, see what she thinks. Maybe she’s got a better idea.”
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>>30000622

>You stand up, waiting a moment for Rainbow to do the same.
>She just sits there, watching.
“You coming?”
>Rainbow nods slowly.
>”Yea, just…gimme a minute. If I move too fast my headache flares up and I need to stop. Gotta stop spending so much time in the sun, gotta get more sleep. I’m fine.”
>You think for a second, before heading out onto the deck.
>You quickly find the first-aid box, and the bucket that Swirl was using.
>You made sure to empty and refill it.
>And then you walked back to Rainbow.
>”A…Anon?”
>Confusion is clear on her face.
>You dig through the box, before finding some generic pain relievers.
>Placing them in the palm of your hand, you crouch down.
“Eat these and spread your wings.”
>”What? Anon, I don’t think I need…”
“Eat the fucking pills, Rainbow.”
>She moves quickly to take them from you.
>They’re swallowed without chewing.
>Motioning for her to spread her wings, Rainbow quietly complies.
>She knows what you’re concerned about.
>Her burn isn’t looking any better.
>It’s red, and swollen, and hurts to even look at.
>Taking the rag out of the bucket, you press it against Rainbow’s side.
>And you begin to clean.
>She gasps painfully.
>You weren’t a doctor, you didn’t know how to treat something like this.
>Water and soap and pills didn’t seem to be helping.
>But…
>There was just nothing else you could do.
>You should have done more when you could.
>That foresight hurt your heart.
>You could only pray and wait.
>God, you hated waiting.
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>>30000631

>Rainbow is silent while you help her.
>Most of her attention is going towards fighting off the pain.
>Clenching her teeth harder and breathing properly.
>After a few minutes though, she tries to lighten the mood.
>”I’m going to be fine, Anon.”
“I know. But I want to be certain.”
>Dash groans a little, before coughing.
>Slowly and carefully, you help Rainbow the best you can.
>The water in the bucket is dirty with pus and hair.
>Standing up, you extend a hand to Rainbow.
“I want you to wash that three times a day from now on, okay? And if you don’t, I’ll have someone hold you down, and I’ll do it, understand?”
>Rainbow looks away.
>Like you assumed, she was probably only cleaning it once.
>”I…understand.”
“Good. Now come on. We’re sleeping with Coffee and Swirl from now on.”
>Rainbow grabs your hand with her hoof, and pulls herself up.
>”Okay.”
>You turn to leave, but Rainbow stops you, grabbing your leg.
>”I don’t understand.”
“Fucks sake, what’s hard to get? Wash your burn three times a day; it’s not a confusing demand.”
>Dash flinches slightly.
>”No no, it’s not that, I mean…I don’t understand.”
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>>30000636

>Dash sighs, and covers her face with one of her hooves.
>”I mean, I just can’t understand why you’re doing this for me. Me! I can’t understand trying so hard to make sure I’m okay, and set me free, and keep me safe. I can understand Fluttershy, or any of the other mares out there, they deserve it, but me? Rainbow Dash? The mare who probably kick-started this whole slavery thing with her fucking big mouth? I just…I just keep fucking things up and making them worse. I don’t deserve to be happy. I don’t deserve any of this!”
>You try and think of the right words to say.
>The correct tone, the correct feel.
>The magical sentence that would make everything better.
>But you can’t think of one.
>So you simply tell her:
“Rainbow, you didn’t deserve the things that happened to you either.”
>They’re not perfect, but they’re good enough.
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>>30000639

>And then, it’s like a key finally unlocking a closed door.
>Rainbow struggles at first, takes a few steps back.
>”What? No, I mean, of course I…deserved it. I’d…back in Equestria I’d…I mean I…”
>She goes on the defensive
>”I hated humans! And…and I’m a pony, we killed, like, millions. I…I hurt you! And Fluttershy! And all my friends. I KNEW and I…I do deserve it. I do! How dare you try and…try and lie to me. I…”
>She takes a shuddering breath
“You didn’t deserve it.”
>”I did! I know I did.”
“Rainbow.”
>She fights back the tears, memories burning her mind.
>”I deserved all of it. I was an…awful slave. And an awful pony. I needed… NEED to be…”
>She goes silent.
>No one should want to be hurt.
>Dash is silent for a moment more, fighting back tears.
>With a raspy voice, she finally speaks.
>”I don’t…know what I deserve anymore. I just…see them. When I fall asleep. All the people I’ve hurt, they won’t leave me alone. I only want to say sorry because I…I couldn’t help them but they never accept it.”
“You don’t deserve to be hurt because of someone else’s mistake.”
>Dash shakes her head.
>”But I do deserve to be punished for my own mistakes”
“Failing to help someone when you’ve done everything you can is not a mistake”
>”But I should have done more. I should been more aware, been just a little bit smarter. I didn’t do all I could. If I was smarter, or stronger, no one would be hurt at all.”
>Dash takes a deep breath
>”I don’t deserve to be here. I’m not…good enough. Not when there are other ponies who deserve it more.”
>You’re not sure if you can say anything to change to her mind
>So you simply walk over to her, bend down, wrap a hand around her midsection and lift her up
>Pulling her into a hug, you say
“You’re good enough for me”
>She doesn’t say anything in response
>Her fur is warm against you as you walk back out into the cold night air
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>>30000646
Boy, this would be a nice place to put in a sex scene.
Anyway, that's all.
Next time! Beltings! Tears! Justice!
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>>30000655
Pretty sure someone else pointed out earlier that punishing Primrose is the exact opposite of any kind of justice.
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>>30000664
I read that more as an argument of why Primrose would do it, not if it was right. Either way, dooming the rest of the ponies back to a life of slavery because you can't control yourself is hardly a good thing anyway.
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>>30000655
>that fucking vinyl story
It has potential, but it can wait. As you said, no sense slowing down your current work. Having the two personalities find a way to work together, both to adapt to slavery and to make new music, would be a good end.

>"You're good enough for me"
Sometimes Anon can find the perfect line.
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>>30000646
Poor broken little pegasus.

She needs extra cuddles tonight.
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>>30000655
>why do ponies always make everything so difficult?
So much this, the painful feels are becoming too much! Can't they just head to BC and live there as refugees? This was mentioned in Slaveventure too. No shortage of fish or freedom on the Canuk Coast, and should Celestia should have the range...
>tfw I'm heading over there on a motorcycle / scuba vacation today!
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>>30000655
>That Vinyl story
Heh, glad to have fed the brain juices. Maybe once you're done with this, but I agree - finish this first. Maybe write down your basic thoughts, then leave them be for a while.

>”Acid! We could…we could burn her with acid. I bet she’d behave then. No more crying for her friends, I bet she’d be a submissive little bitch if we burnt her wings right off. That’ll make her obey.”
>Wings
Considering Primrose isn't a pegausus, Dash is maybe repeating something she heard before she acquired that burn?

A tough spot there for sure.Dash herself makes a good microcosm of the way this must be wearing on all the ponies there; hopefulness is still there, but giving way to frustration, fear, and anger. Hopefully they can rely on each other in the same way Dash relied on him, though.
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I'm gonna write some more of Celly now, here's the current paste

https://pastebin.com/NFR8gGqz

I shouldn't be long... Hopefully.
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>>30002218
AWW YISS

CELLY MY FAV SHE A QT
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>>30002218

>The soft hum of your engines as they break the atmosphere signals another successful work day
>You've got to admit, for all the shit you out up with on a daily basis, you really wouldn't have it any other way
>You pull the ship into a glide over the landscape, a blue field of excited particles building up around the ships nose
>It's late evening, and the sun is just dipping down below the horizon
>The view is fucking spectacular up here
>You ne ear really appreciate how nice a good sunset can be
>The couriers insect like legs touch down on the concrete pad outside your home, just as the bizarre constellations begin to twinkle overhead
>The lights are on, which is a welcome change to the empty horse you're used to returning too
>Now all you had to do was get everything in here, out there
>Shouldn't be too hard, since you've come prepared
>Exiting the ship, you slam you hand onto the cargo bay doors
>They hiss ominously as a platform holding your loot from the day descends
>There's a flat pack bed (of questionable quality)
>A more reliable mattress that is big enough for a horse to sleep in
>The box containing the incubation kit
>Wall plaster and paint
>A small hover pallet
>And lots of groceries
>You load your stuff onto the hover pad and close up the cargo hatch
>Thank fuck for the shopping trolleys of the modern age
>You could only imagine how much worse this would be if it had wheels
>It glides effortlessly up the stairs, and you unlock the door with your key card
"Celestia! I'm home!"
>No reply
>Maybe she's just in the bathroom
>You paler down the cart and proceed further into the house
"Celestia? Where are you?"
>"I-I'm in here, m-master."
>She's back to calling you master?
>That's a bad sign
"What's with the title? You know I'm not your- HOLY SHIT!"
>Celestia is lying in the middle of the kitchen floor, multiple sharp objects surrounding her, and to make matters worse, she's bleeding
>A lot.
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>>30001835
>That Vinyl story
Every SPG story needs a bath scene, and this one has them on a regular basis as a core story element. It's like Christmas in July! Loss (or rejection) of identity is a powerful theme, and somepony who's identity was a bit artificial in the first place is appropriate to explore it. "Squeezy" the happy slave polka pone is that perfect mix of heartbreaking and hilarious that IHLAOY does so well.

>She’s in a different place.
Dash has become an expert on torture, and she just zoned out there and got lost in her memories. When something doesn't break as easily as expected, her previous owners just reach for bigger and bigger hammers until they do. Like that we just see edges of it without going all grimderp torture porn.
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>>30002574
>hiss ominously
Of course a space ships cargo doors can't just open with a click and a whir. It's always the ominous hiss, even if it's just groceries inside; glad you appreciate that.

>multiple sharp objects
Guessing she had another critical fail with levitation, like with that coffee cup?
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>>30002574
>she's bleeding
>>A lot.
I never thought this would happen in /spg/, but time to fap!
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>>29986811
>>29971379
>>29969961

> ...actually confronting her, interrogating her like some kind of criminal, would do no good.
> At the most you could tell her what you've found - maybe the next time you're sharing a quiet moment together, to make it clear you're not angry with her.
> Because, in truth, you aren't.
> Concerned, perhaps even scared, yes - but not angry.
> She was a mare who'd been quite clear about her desire not to bring a new life into this miserable existence; was it any surprise the resistance would start courting her?
> But that didn't mean you couldn't start gathering the metaphorical clouds so they would be there and ready when it came time to act.
> Leaping from the roof, you glide around to the front entrance of the kitchen.
> It's nothing special, but the moment you step through the front door you're hit by a veritable wall of scents assaulting your nose.
> What little had leaked outside was nothing compared to the veritable hurricane of flavors that hung suspended in the air here.
> Truly, the camp's cooks were miracle workers - providing excellent food even with the modest means Anonymous provided.
> Only second later do you realize you'd paused in the doorway with your nose lifted and nostrils flared, looking like a fool.
> An embarrassed grin plastered to your face, you're only a few steps further in when a familiar voice calls out:
> "Thunderlane, hey!"
"Hey, Vapor!"
> Waving from her position perched over the massive pot she stirs, Vapor Trail beckons you over.
> "I'm sorry; I can't step away from this right now or it'll stick."
"It's fine, it's fine."
> You, instead, move to her - dodging other ponies and sacks of supplies alike to come to her side, peering over the edge of the pot to the bubbling stew within.
"This smells - fantastic."
> "I know!"
> She giggles softly, and your heart softens - this mare...
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>>30002786

> "It's not my recipe, but it's fantastic. I just hope I can keep working here when... it gets bigger."
> There's no need for her to even glance to her swollen midsection for you to know what she means.
"Bah, you'll be fine."
> You hope.
> Vapor Trail laughs softly again though, so she apparently doesn't share your concerns.
> "Anyway, what's brought you in here, Thunderlane?"
"Just needed a break from things, you know? I've had a lot on my mind, so I decided I'd come in and steal a little bit of the scent of tonight's dinner."
> A hearty roll of her eyes tells you all that you need to about what Vapor thinks of that response.
> Even so she is still grinning, though.
> "Well, you'd better complete your theft and get out of here before Focacia gets back. He's head in here, and if you're standing around when he spots you then you're going to get conscripted into cooking too. Now, why are you /actually/ here?"
> Was it that transparent?
> Sinking a little bit, you sigh and drop your voice.
"Just... thinking about those ponies I brought in. Some of them are being treated pretty hard still, you know? Especially the young ones like Crescent Moon. And some ponies are saying even more were involved and might get taken down too..."
> Thankfully Vapor's turned her attention back to the stew.
> It lets you watch her reactions carefully when you speak, and the results are revealing.
> There's no sign of a reaction when Crescent Moon is mentioned - not beyond a mild lowering of her ears that you think has more to do with the thought of what had happened to the poor filly.
> But when you mention other ponies being taken down, though...
> Was that flick of her tail just nervousness with the topic, or something more?
> The sudden stiffening of her neck a reaction to the thought of you having to do another raid, or of who might be caught by that...?
> "Will they have to be whipped too...?"
> Her voice is soft and fearful.
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>>30002792

"Not unless they fight back. I think - I hope - that we gave that message: Even for running, they won't be flogged."
> "I..."
> Head dipping, Vapor, sets aside the stirrer she'd been using and looks at you.
> "I don't want it to get to that point..."
"Then - then the best thing you can do is ask them not to. Beg them not to. It does help, I think... especially coming from a mare as good as you."
> "Y-Yes. We can't - can't let another raid like that happen. Once was bad, twice..."
> The tremble entering her voice, the lack of a grip on the stirrer... she's scared, you realize.
> Not just for you.
> You'd suffered from seeing the results of your work, but not from the raid itself.
> She's scared of another raid period.
> Why...?
> What - or who - is she worried about?
> If only you could ask her directly...
"It'll be okay, Vapor. We'll all be okay in the end. And-"
> Your muzzle dips towards her belly.
"-I mean all of us."
> And she does smile again, a weak smile but a smile nonetheless.
> "Yes... but you should go, Thunderlane. Before Focacia comes looking."
"Alright. I'll see you later, okay?"
> "Yeah - oh, wait. Here!"
> A spoon is dipped to the stew and presented to you.
> "Thasthe!"
> You do, grinning, and it is indeed delicious.
> Stepping out from the kitchen to resume your patrol, you've barely gotten more than a few blocks when a pony charges around the corner.
> Skidding to a halt, the mare points back from where she came with a hoof and explains between panted breaths:
> "Go - guards - need guards - hurt - go now!"
> You don't wait.
> On pounding hooves you take off following the direction she'd pointed; soon enough the sound of raised voices meet your ears and guide you the rest of the way to a small knot of ponies gathered around the mouth of an alleyway.
> Seismic Shift and another guard were already there, and open a path for you to join them.
> At first you don't even recognize the collapsed, filthy form behind them.
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>>30002801

> The maid's uniform is shredded and caked with dirt and blood as to be unrecognizable, and her coat is no better:
> Then she moans gently, and your heart stops.
"Oh, no no NO!"
> Instantly you're at her side, nuzzling her desperately.
"No, no - hey!"
> Lifting your head, you bellow into the crowd:
"Somepony to the clinic, now! Have them bring a stretcher!"
> "Lacquer already went!"
> You barely hear the reaction, leaning back down to tend to the beaten and broken body.
"It's going to be okay, Mocha. Do you understand me? It's going to be okay."

> The clinic's room is little silent but for the distant rumbling of central air and regular beep-beep of the heart monitor.
> A nursemare had been in there when your arrived - puttering needlessly around the bed.
> But she had fled the room immediately after confirming the state of the pony within, to fearful to be around her owner in such a temper.
> Not that you blamed her.
> And so you'd sat in the room's sole proper chair, shifted over to be beside the bed, with elbows on your knees and hands cupping your face.
> Mocha had been cleaned, wounds stitched and bandaged, and was now ensconced in her sheets - still but for the slow rise and fall of her chest.
> Two legs were swathed in casts; another held the IV line entering her bloodstream.
> Even after being cleaned, her coat was still mottled with blue-black bruises.
> Why?
> What had she done?
> Fingernails dig in as your hands form tight fists.
> When you found who-
> "Masterr?"
"Mocha?!"
> Voice weak and scratchy, she is still somehow awake and watching you through dim brown eyes half-open.
> "M-Master..."
> One hoof - her one good remaining one - rises to reach for you.
> All remaining defenses fall; you leave your chair to seat yourself on the bed and draw her into your lap.
> Mocha goes limp as you do, snuggling down against you once your grip is certain.
> "I-It hurts, Master..."
"What hurts, Mocha?"
> "Everything..."
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>>30002817

> Your eyes squeeze shut, and your arms tenderly encircle her.
"I'm sorry, Mocha... this is my fault."
> "N-No-"
"Yes. This isn't yours. You did exactly what I'd asked of you; I - failed."
> For a few seconds Mocha is still, a bundle of tan coat and brown-and-cream mane in your arms.
> "Th-they kept saying I deserved it. B-Because I was just y-your b-b-bitch taking things away b-because you were too s-scared to come. I t-tried to tell them, I just b-brought it a-all back but they just kept k-kicking..."
> What?!
> The papers!
> They must have seen her take the papers from Cadance...
"Shh. You're safe now, Mocha. Don't talk."
> Shivering, she instead continues:
> "I t-tried s-screaming f-for y-you and they s-stuffed something in m-my mouth and l-l-laughed."
> You're thankful Mocha cannot see the way your hands are balling into fists, so tight you're half expecting blood to run where nails dig into palms.
> But neither do you scold her for disobeying; if she needed to say this, you would be there to hear how you'd failed.
> Instead you remain there, holding her and forcing your hands to uncurl from fists so they could stroke through what parts of her mane were not bandaged over.
> "P-Please don't l-leave, Master... not yet. Everything hurts so much..."
> Tears stream from her eyes as she struggles to speak - from pain both emotional and physical, you guess.
"I'm not going anywhere, Mocha."
> "T-Thank you, Master..."
> Stirring, Mocha Cream laboriously raises her head to look up at you, then aside.
> "M-Master, I..."
"Don't strain yourself. You need to rest now."
> "I lo-lo-"
> Shudders wrack her body.
> "I love y-y-"
"Shh..."
> A finger is place before her lips, and you lean over to place a soft kiss on her forehead just below the base of her horn.
"I know."
> Not that the signs could have been missed.
> You might've not have encouraged them, but the feelings she held for you were unmistakable.
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>>30002574

"Jesus Christ what happened here?!"
>You frantically sprint towards the cupboard, wrenching out random objects in an attempt to reach the med kit
>"M-master?"
"Shhh, save your breath. You'll get through this..."
>You hope
>God only knows hoe much blood she's lost be this point
>"M-master, what are you d-doing."
"What does it look like, trying to save your life!"
>She looks confused and scared, which can be expected from someone on the brink of death
>There's also something off about these wounds
>They're not the serrated cuts you would expect from a knife falling on someone
>They're clean and precise
>And every single one is horizontal
>That's when it hits you
>These...
>These were intentional...
>She did this to herself
"C-Celestia?"
>"Y-yes master?"
"How long have you been like this..."
>"I-I'm sorry, I know..."
>You finish wrapping up her leg, which still has the bandage from the burn at it's end
"W-why? Why did you do this?"
>"B-because I'm suppose too, It's my p-punishment."
>No...
>Oh god no...
>This was your fault
>You did this to her
>"If I'm disobedient, I'm to lash myself across the leg five times..."
"N-no, I didn't- No."
>You give up on words, instead opting to wrap her in a tight hug
>"M-master?"
"I'm sorry Celestia, I'm so so sorry."
>You pull her close, burying your tears in her soft strawberry mane
>Remain strong Anon
>Do it for her
"I-I know I said this before, a-and I know you might not understand... But I swear on my life that no matter what, you will never come to harm while under my care."
>You point with a finger at the far wall, in the general direction of LHS 3447
"That monster, he made you like this. But I swear I'll remake you into the kind and selfless being that I know is in there."
>For emphasis, you plant a finger in her blood stained chest fluff
"But in order for me to do that, I need to know..."
>You look into her eyes with a steely resolve
"What did he do to you?"
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>>30002824

> At your reply Mocha sinks back down, a tiny happy mewling noise replacing any coherent response.
"Rest now, Mocha. You need rest."
> And so she does, eyes falling shut and breathing eventually falling to a softer, lower level.
> Only then do you let your teeth grit to hold back the moisture gathering at the corners of your own eyes.
> You couldn't bring yourself to tell her the full extent of what the nurse had passed on to you.
> The full extent of the damage on her little body, the danger she was still in.
> Instead you just stay there, hands gently stroking and providing the only reassurance you could now.
> This - this was your fault.
> Cadance had been right; you should have been the one engaging with the camp rather than sending emissaries.
> That mistake had now born its bloody fruit.
> And-
> Your head whips up as the door slams open, almost crashing into the wall if not for the doorstopper.
> Unexpectedly, however, your eyes meet a familiar grey colt standing in the portal.
> Rumble's eyes snap between yourself and Mocha for a few moments before he awkwardly speaks:
> "I'll, uh... I'll try later."
"No. Come in..."
> After a second, you think to add:
"...please."
> Rumble flinches, looks between yourself and the filly in your lap, and then does - much more carefully shutting the door behind him and climbing into the seat you'd recently vacated.
> But he does not speak, and the awkwardness of the standoff soon begins to fill the room thick as smoke.
"Rumble, I - I just want to say... I didn't want this. I know you don't like me, but however much that is... I wanted her to be safe. Please believe-"
> "Yeah, I know."
> It sounds like it hurts him to admit it, but Rumble does anyhow.
> "I can tell. You like her, and she likes you."
"I wanted her to have a proper home, with people - or ponies - that would care about her."
> Maybe that was why you hadn't acted on the obvious crush she held for you.
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>>30002828

> Immature as she was, a relationship like that would only ever be between a master and slave.
> "Yeah. How is she...?"
> Looking down at the sleeping filly, you speak the words you could not tell her:
"Bad. One leg broken, one leg badly twisted, ribs cracked, and they don't know how bad the damage is inside her. Head trauma, major organ trauma... they're looking for a doctor who has the tech to do a full examination."
> You can feel your fists squeezing again as you speak.
> When you found out who was responsible for this...
> Slipping from his chair, Rumble moves to the side of the bed, nuzzles Mocha's side, and sighs.
> "I didn't want any of this either... I - I don't like you, but Mocha Cream always tried her best..."
"She wanted the best for you, too."
> "Yeah."
> He's quiet a moment longer, then abruptly looks up.
> "She's going to be... out of things for a while, isn't she? No matter how hard it is."
"Yes."
> Seeming to nod in affirmation of his point, Rumble draws a deep breath.
> "Sir-"
> And it's the first time you think he's called you that in recent memory.
> "-somepony has to keep being a messenger between the camp and yourself. Taking the suggestions up, bringing information down... I know you kinda don't trust me, and I don't really like you, but Mocha would want to know it's being taken care of."
"...what's your point?"
> "Let me be the messenger. Let me take over her duties. I - want to do it. For her. Nopony'll question me doing it. And Mocha Cream would want to know that somepony is still doing it."
> For the briefest second the idea that he might have been involved - might have had Mocha beaten by his rebel friends just so he could take over - passes through your mind.
> It is violently thrown aside; the two of them by all reports had become actual friends, and whatever Rumble had done in the passed he deserved too be fairly judged now.
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>>30002836

> But Cadance was also right; you should be the one getting involved more directly.
> No more messengers.
> Or maybe it would be good to have a former rebel leader take over this; after all, there wasn't much damage he could do even if he did try.

So, do we allow him to take up her former role delivering the camp's messages and suggestions to you?

What else do we do now?
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>green overlap
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>they beat Mocha

I want blood.
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>>30002840
No more messengers. Anon gets involved directly from now on.
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>>30002840
Kill.
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>>30002825
Oh god, that's horrifying. I really hope Celestia survives this without permanent damage to her body.
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>>30002840
No, we handle things personally from here on out.

And we're going to start by letting the camp know that there's going to be fucking blood to pay for this.
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>>30002825

>She visibly recoils
>You almost want to back down
>No! You must know!
"Please... It's the only way I can help you..."
>She stares at the ground, unmoving
>Then, after a moment, she speaks
>"500 years..."
"Excuse me?"
>"That's how long I worked there... 500 years."
>Woah, that's a long time
>You were well aware that Alicorns had ridiculous lifespans, history had taught you that much, but to work in one singular place for half a millennia?
>That was nutty
>"I was bought by that family as part of a set, at l-least I think so..."
"With your sister, right?"
>"You know of... How?"
"I just looked it up, but please, continue."
>"Y-Yes, I was purchased with my sister, along with another pair of Alicorns."
>Another pair? Just how fucking rich were these cunts?
>"We didn't get to see them very often, they were assigned to another part of the estate..."
>"I was made to do things, like cleaning and cooking during the day, and at night I... I did... Other things..."
>"If I didn't do well, or didn't finish in time, I was made to hurt myself. He would watch me do it, sometimes do more than that... I-I tried not to notice."
>You were beyond angry, transcending above and beyond that emotion
>You made a mental note to shoot him right in his old saggy cock
>"Then one day he brought out Lu- My sister, and told me that he wanted us to... To.. "
"It's okay, you don't have to say it..."
>"I-I refused, and begged him for anything different. So he drew out his weapon, and he blew off my horn and-"
>She's crying heavily, and so are you
>Most of your tears come from pure unfiltered rage, but your crying none the less.
>"H-he b-beat me and cut my wing off, then he put me in a dark place for a long time..."
>"I was s-so sc-cared, I don't know where anypon- I mean one! Where anyone had gone..."
>The bleeding on her leg seems to have stopped, but you aren't in the right state of mind to make a medical observation
>You don't understand why anyone could possibly want to hurt her
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>>30002840
>Rumble as messenger
Can it be both?

We should be more visible in the camp, for several reasons. Cadance was probably right about that all along, we should tell her so and ask her for advice on fixing it. On the other hand we're pretty busy and a messenger will always be needed. Rumble is qualified, offering, and we trust him this far (but no further).

As for what else to do: not much. Vengeance is best served cold and we're feeling pretty hot at the moment! We already have comprehensive systems and well-motivated personal in place to find the attackers, they will work better without our 'help'. When (if?) they dig some someponys out of where they cower, they will face Cadances justice first. If we are not satisfied after they will just get sold to somewhere horrible. That's an option we can use anytime we want, and it keeps our hands clean. If we or Mocha want more vengeance we can look them up in a year or three and see if they're still alive and whole. Patience.

>and for Sunburst: don't sweat it too much if Cadance doesn't come through with that info after all. Slow and safe is the way forward. And who knows; if things work out like she wants perhaps our own library will get some special donations someday?
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>>30003144

"It's okay..."
>You run you fingers through the shivering mares hair
"It's okay... Your safe from him now."
>When she shows no improvement, you attempt to pick her up in your arms
>You're so angry that you somehow achieve the ability to lift up a horse
>As carefully as possible, you place your bandage riddled friend down on the couch, watched not to bump her leg
>After a moment, quiet snores can be heard
>You worry about her blood loss, but come to the conclusion that she's stable enough to sleep
>You were going to fix this, all of this
>You were going to find her sister, repair her body and make her better again
>But that would have to come later
>Right now you have a bed to build and instruction manuals to ignore
>Happy days
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>>30002817
Fuck no, no Mocha

They should not mess with her

Now Anon will demand blood for blood
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>>30003222

That's me done for the night. I'll update the pastebin in the morning.

See ya /spg/
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>>30002840
"I'm sorry, I can't risk any other pony getting hurt like this. Right now Mocha needs a friend around to help her get better. Though if I do need any help with messages sent around, We'll talk."
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>>30002574
>>You ne ear really appreciate how nice a good sunset can be
what
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>>30002824
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>>30002574
>which is a welcome change to the empty horse you're used to returning too
>to the empty horse
WHAT
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>>30003224
Good thing he has that rifle onboard his ship.
He will need it, either to avenge Celly, or to protect her when they come for her - that pirate will surely mess things up.
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>>30002840
>Mocha is beaten halfway to death
Fuck. Me. This was not expected and jesus christ does it hurt. Pic related.

>What do we do
Anon is furious. Who wouldn't be. Cadance and Thunderlane would both agree whoever was behind such a cruel and horrific act has whatever's coming to them coming to them, as they would here or in Equestria itself. Whoever did this to Mocha? They are the REAL animals. Not the frightened ponies who fought back in fearful self-defense that they were chaining and ringing/binding in the barracks. Whoever did this to Mocha has no excuse. They might even honestly need to be sold off if this is how they treat their fellow equine.

As to how to go about finding them, we let Cadance and Thunderlane handle asking the rebels. Show them what their fellow 'freedom fighters' thought was justifiable and then see what kind of twisted sort they had found themselves in with. Once they're found, though Anon may wish to relapse to a state of rage like with Corona, it would be best to let the ponies handle their own, and let them give whatever meager excuse they can provide for their actions or see if they hold even the slightest bit of regret before issuing their punishment.

>Rumble as messenger
Decline him, but think on something he can do to repay the colt's generosity. This situation has proven Cadance completely right: Anon CAN'T just rely on messenger ponies and make him feel as a distant tyrant ruling over the camp from the safety of his compound. There are times he'll need help and when that time comes, he'll think of Rumble. And Rumble is more than welcome to continue sorting through the suggestion box as he'd done in the past. But Anon probably doesn't want to put Rumble in the same danger as Mocha now, given Crescent has confirmed the rebels don't think much of Rumble himself anymore. We won't let our complacency lead to another bloodied foal in the street.
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>>30003222
love the sun horse
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>>30003322
Excuse me?

Wrong story friend
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>>30003337
Also may be worth noting: it may not have mattered if Anon came to collect the papers himself or not in the end. These ponies were probably just looking for ANY excuse to hurt Anon where it counts. That's not to say Anon himself isn't as fault: this was the culmination of several weeks' worth of negligence. But it's important to think of what kind of ponies we might be dealing with: the kind who are angry enough to just look for any excuse to hurt their slaver.
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>>30003337
We should sell those fuckers to the mines or some other glue factory where they can be worked to death.
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>>30002840
I fucking knew this was going to happen.

So, that's it then. Violent action has been taken towards an innocent. Maybe in retaliation for the raid, maybe for the whippings, maybe just because of a gradual building of tempers. Act 3 begins.

My vote is for Anon to take over collections. He's needed to be active in the camp for a long time. Plus, having Rumble do it would just put a target on him too. He'd been seen around Mocha quite a bit, so it's possible his status as former rebellion leader wouldn't actually help. Have Rumble reassigned so he can visit Mocha every day and if nothing else, keep her company.

And then there's the other matter. Who did this? This doesn't seem like something Haute would pull. She has nothing to gain from a camp-wide lockdown despite seeing other ponies as expendable. This doesn't teach anyone a lesson, which is what she uses violence for. Which means this is either linked to the rebel group and the museum and thus Vapor, or a part of Sunburst's group that's so far removed they don't know Mocha is helping indirectly. That's one major downside of compartmentalization.

There's not much we can do here. Maybe Anon and Cadence can make a public speech about how some violent group attacked an innocent pony who just wanted to help, and how this is exactly what hunting down the museum was trying to stop. This is why he had Cadence run the camp and let them govern themselves without his involvement. That everything he had done recently was to prevent this from happening, but it happened anyway. Now, he's going to be involved. The ponies need to know she was a good pony that the rebel group nearly killed for no other reason than to lash out. Thunderlane going into detective mode is the only option we have to find them. Punishing the whole camp wouldn't help. Another sweep would do nothing and find nothing. We're powerless and have no good options. In all likelihood, they're going to get away with this.
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>>30002840
It had to happen sooner or later, only until someone who cares is a victim of his inability to lead is that Anon awakens to the truth, what would have happened if it had been Flurry? Megan? Mocha had to pay the price of his incompetence

>>30003337
>Rumble as messenger
>Decline him, but think on something he can do to repay the colt's generosity. This situation has proven Cadance completely right: Anon CAN'T just rely on messenger ponies and make him feel as a distant tyrant ruling over the camp from the safety of his compound. There are times he'll need help and when that time comes, he'll think of Rumble. And Rumble is more than welcome to continue sorting through the suggestion box as he'd done in the past. But Anon probably doesn't want to put Rumble in the same danger as Mocha now, given Crescent has confirmed the rebels don't think much of Rumble himself anymore. We won't let our complacency lead to another bloodied foal in the street.

THIS

Now it is necessary to conduct an investigation, Thunderlane must PRESS To Vapor and to Moon for answers before Anon takes the situation in his hands and can lead to a bloody outcome, does not empathize with those guilty of the tragedy of Mocha, I hope they are found, shaved , Whipped, branded with the Blazing iron of 'Rebels' and sold to the worst place you can imagine
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>>30002840
Again this points it out, why the FUCK hasn't anon got this camp rigged out with CCTV.
knowing what goes on in this place 24/7 is worth any cost argument, and shit like this would have been spotted earlier.

anyway Anon is gonna have to back out of this before he kills or does worse to those responsible. We only just told Mocha the other day we'd take the whip to her should she deserve it, we can't go above and beyond on who did this just because they hurt us... no matter the anger.
i agree with other dude above sell them, make a point to the camp about it, those who would treat their own kind so badly will not be tolerated here.

tell Rumble you'll be doing things yourself, but we'll find something for him to do.
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>>30003238
I enjoyed it, but, I feel it needs more unf. A scene like this is very good in theory but it felt a bit rushed in your case.

For this you need to slow down, feel and describe more. I didn't feel immersed in the scene. The pace you were using works great for a fight or grocery montage, but when you want to evoke empathy, simpathy, happy, or sad it needs to feel real, not like a memory but like it's happening now. Reiterate what the lighting was like through the window or on the railing, what specific arrangement were the knives in, did the cuts look professional and straight or jagged and deep down to the bone, is her fur matted from crying, is her face one of resolve, fear, pain, or just blank. I need to feel what she feels and for that you need slow.

Or I could just be talking out of my ass, but this is what I feel at the moment.

Also, please spell check and reread, mistakes and typos seemed especially prevalent in this update.
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>>30003427
>In all likelihood, they're going to get away with this.
Don't be too sure. Ponies know about magic, but they are naive about what human technology can and can't do. If Anon is willing to hire human criminal forensic experts (he is) with DNA, recording analysis, and other whizzy stuff they might be in for a surprise! If Gene requests this you bet it will be made available.
And who knows how the ponies approach this problem. There will be magical solutions too, and Cadance will deploy them. They might not have understood how Anon feels about her, will have made subtle mistakes, and they're fucked.
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>>30002824
>> "I t-tried s-screaming f-for y-you and they s-stuffed something in m-my mouth and l-l-laughed."
...What'd they put in her mouth?
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>>30003427
>Punishing the whole camp wouldn't help.
Yes, it would.
>"Bring me all ponies involved in this or I will assume every pony was and act accordingly. You have until next sunrise."
Either they give up their own and become conspirators to their own slavery or they learn just how angry Anon can be.
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>>30003607
human cock dildo
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Anon needs to find out who did it and go full Punisher on them. No fancy on stage whippings or shit, just pure violence in the middle of the camp.
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Which would be more interesting to CYOA:

A poner owning a poner and being viscious to it

or

Slave poners trying to work together with their poner master in an Equestria wrecked by departing human armies.
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>>30003956
The second one.
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>>30002840
Let him just handle collecting the suggestions, but we handle the common correspondence ourselves from now on. Ponies won't be as forthcoming if done by himself. Also, set a guard to Mocha's room and have the incident investigated thoroughly. There's gonna be hell to pay.
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>>30003238
Pretty bad. I was expecting something like this. But what can one small delivery ship hope to accomplish against people so rich.
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>>29997031
>>29997019
Fuck you shinyanon finish your fucking story already you handsome cunt and quit making me question my sexuality
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>>30003956
Second one sounds pretty cool. Kind of a survival-before-rulership kind of thing.

Particularly for a CYOA, I think there's simply room for more of a plot there.
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>>30003956
Second one, but on earth instead. Pony does some spectacular heroic random thing and gets the 'special dispensation' of freedom, citizenship, and a large cash grant. Not everyone in the pony slave industry is happy about it. They want to buy out fellow ponies in desperate circumstances, but they also need a steady cash flow to keep on doing that and keep the lights on too. Not all the rescued are super keen to start slaving for this new pony-master, and the grant wasn't THAT big... Kind of like Slaveventure but on a smaller scale with none of Anons advantages.
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>>30004357
It's not gay just to notice.
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>>30005094
If only there was a way to get a steady cash flow easily. Maybe they should open a filly brothel.
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>>30002840
Those pony kinksters borrowing Anons torture dungeon will have to clear out, he is going to need it. Hope Eric did not have vacation plans...>>30005130
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>>30005160
Oops, ignore that last link.
Mobilefaggotry happening here.
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>>30005130
I just realized something horrible. Given sufficient time and the ability for slaves to buy their own freedom, filly brothel is a goddamn pyramid scheme.
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>>30005130
The filly brothel is just a facade of a railroad of freedom to carry escaped ponies to Canada, customers are willing to smear their image before a pro-slavery society by being part of the clientele while organizing leaks,falsify documents, bribing officers, and purchasing ponies to change their identities and bring them to freedom
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>>30005173
Good catch, but it's not horrible, it's wonderful! The whole species buying itself out of bondage with nothing but trust, friendship, and hard work. The trouble is the fraction that doesn't pay it forward; with humans it might be high enough the whole process fades out. With ponies it might be low enough the pyramid keeps growing and growing until it consumes the whole enslaved population!
It just takes a starting point and a bit of leadership...
>green practically writes itself
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>>29998043
>Thor
Anon needs to make damn well sure angela knows about Thaddeus so she can keep a close eye on things.
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>>29991283
> You are feeling restless and feverish. As you lay down on the couch, tossing and turning in discomfort, you cannot place where that feeling came from. Is it from being injured badly earlier, or it is because you are going to be missing the first shift of your career? Does it stem from your worries for Starlight, Alpha, Coco Pommel or Angela, or is it from the rollercoaster of emotions from your discoveries earlier that utterly wrecked many of your beliefs about the Police Force, especially that of your superiors and those in positions of power? It might also be because today is the first time you killed another human being, and you did that twice within mere minutes of each other.
> DSP Koh has left his office after telling you that AC Thor will speak to you before bringing you to the Detention Barracks. He left you in his office with silence and the half-bottle of whisky for company. Despite the urge to, you drank only the glasses that the Deputy Superintendent poured for you, as you want to be sober when you speak with AC Thor later. You have many questions for that manipulative fuck, and even though you understand the circumstances and consequences of your position, you are not afraid of him.
> Adjusting your body on the couch once again, you plant your sock-covered feet on the armrest as your gaze travels to the clock. 6.11pm. You sigh as you feel your stomach churning, but it is one of unease, not hunger... Strange, you should be feeling hungry about now.
> Pulling out your phone, you decide to give Angela a call. You have not heard from her since she left Pierce’s place, and you are anxious to find out about Coco Pommel.
> She did not take your call.
> Sighing softly, you then proceed to check the news. Nope, nothing on the raids.
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>>30005448
> As you are about to put down your phone, it vibrates and beeps. Unlocking it, you see Angela’s message. It reads: “Hey Anon. Busy at the Agency shelter, helping them with the ponies we rescued. Total 8 of them. Coco’s done with surgery. Looked bad, but nothing serious. Will recover in a week. Asked Thor if I can adopt her, and he said ‘Yes’! :D”
> Smiling warmly, you ask Angela if she is taking the night shift later and if she can help you to look after Starlight in the meantime, as you will be in the Detention Barracks. You are not sure if Angela is privy to what is going to happen to you, and you decide not to give away any information besides the bare minimum. Resting your head down on the armrest, you feel the discomfort in you heighten. Sleep sounds really damn good now.
> Then, your phone vibrates and beeps again. You lift the phone up, letting your head rest on the armrest as you read. Her reply states that she is taking a day of leave to spend the night at the Agency shelter with Coco, and that AC Thor has already taken Starlight into his care. Angela ends her message by wishing you good luck with the investigations, and that she-
> The door opens with a click, and you sit up as Assistant Commissioner Daniel Thor enters the room. Upon seeing that gigantic Caucasian again, you feel a mix of cold fury and disgust erupt within you. This is the man who used you. He took advantage of his position and appointment as Commanding Officer of the raids to manipulate you, and he has taken your pony. You will get up and punch his fucking face if you are not hurting so badly from your injuries.
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>>30005453
> Instead, you just watch him, fixing him with a glare as he makes his way over to a chair, which he pulls around for him to sit so he is facing you. AC Thor leans in, his eyebrows narrowing as he addresses you with a soft voice. His eyes are a deep blue, and in your anger, all that you can think of is driving that pen on the desk into one of those fucking orbs.
> “How are you feeling-”
“I DON’T NEED YOUR EMPATHY, YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE! YOU MANIPULATIVE CUNT! FUCK YOU!”
> Clutching your shoulder as pain radiates from the wound there, you groan as you grimace at him.
> Careful now, Anon, he-
> FUCK. HIM.
> To his credit, AC Thor does not even flinch at your outburst. Instead, he leans back into his chair and breathes out deeply, still keeping his eyes on you.
> “Your rage is understandable… And justified. I won’t pretend to know what you are feeling right now, but I can make it up to you. Tell me what you want, and I will see what I can do.”
> You cannot help chuckling bitterly at that. Curling your lip in disgust at how superficial his words seemed to you, you spit your next words at him.
“Make it up to me? Really? You think I will fucking trust you after that shit you pulled? You used me, Sir. You killed him. You murdered him! You murdered Andrew Pierce in my name! IN MY NAME, ASSHOLE, AND I AM GETTING FUCKING INVESTIGATED FOR THAT!”
> Again, AC Thor keeps his stoic expression under the barrage that you unleashed on him. Taking a moment to catch your breath, your rational mind takes over and you keep your voice level, but cold.
“You have Starlight with you now, don’t you? Angela told me. Are you going to use her like you used me? Mark my words, you fucking asshole; if you so much as harm her, I will kill you… I will do it with my bare hands if I need to, you psychopathic bastard.”
> Smiling lightly, AC Thor speaks. Again, he is so unnervingly calm.
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>>30005459
> “I won’t hurt her, Anon, and killing me will jeopardise the future of all Equestrian Citizens in this country. You know this, so don’t let your rage blind your rationality, Inspector… But, if you still want to…”
> He stands up. Ignoring your bewildered expression, he moves over to your green case and unlocks it with a key. AC Thor reaches in, pulling out your Glock 19 pistol as he removes the magazine to check that it is filled. Satisfied that it is, he slides it back into the weapon and cocks the weapon, chambering a round as he hands you the pistol handle-first. When you do not take it, he simply tosses it on the sofa beside you and reaches his hands to his side. With a few swift motions, he removes the ballistic vest he is wearing and tosses it away. He sits down at the chair again, letting his arms fall to his side as he looks at you once more.
> “Go ahead, Anon. You have 15 bullets with which to take my life if you want to, but all I ask now is just to talk.”
> You snatch up the pistol with your right hand. Gripping it firmly, you fix your eyes on the Assistant Commissioner as an array of thoughts and desires floods your mind. Many of them are very dark and impulsive. Your grip trembles, and your mind races.
> FUCK!
> With a swift motion, you toss the pistol at a corner of the room, causing a jolt of pain to run through your body. Glaring at AC Thor once again, you cover the bandages on your shoulder with a hand as you shake your head slowly. He smiles slowly.
> “You are angry that I used you, but it was the most feasible way for me to get Andrew Pierce. It was part of my plans, and you happened to be a part of it. A tool that I used, in other words, without your consent or even knowledge. Naturally, you will be pissed, and I am ready for that. So, if at any point in time that you feel like going over there to pick that pistol up and use it, I will not stop you.”
> You frown deeper. What the fuck is this guy playing at now?
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>>30005466
> “I want you to trust me, Anon, and I will demonstrate my intentions by making it up to you. I have already made arrangements for Starlight to stay at a village for ponies whilst waiting for you to be cleared of all charges. The other ponies there will look after and care for her, so you can be assured that she is in good hands, or hooves for that matter… And as I have said, tell me what you want and I will see what I can do. I owe you that much, on top of what DSP Koh has already promised you.”
“You are damn fucking right that you owe me.”
> AC Thor simply smiles even wider.
> “Take your time to think, Anon. Tell me what you want, and I will do as you say it… Short of killing myself, that is. Like I said, I am needed for the well-being of ponies in this country, Inspector.”
> Giving him a glare before moving your eyes downwards, you feel the discomfort within you building. It is almost like you are running a fever; you feel very restless and your stomach feels bloated. With a groan, you move to lie down on the couch, letting your head rest on the armrest again as you close your eyes.
> “You are not feeling well.”
“Gee, thanks for pointing that out… Sir.”
> That ‘Sir’ was heavily emphasised and forced. You did not even bother to keep the sarcasm out of your voice. AC Thor sighs.
> “I can understand your behaviour, Inspector, but it doesn’t make it any less appropriate or pleasant… And frankly, it is starting to wear my patience. I have been forthcoming and accommodating with you so far; the least you can do is reciprocate and not be so childish.”
> You feel a flare of anger at his words, but you agree with his point. After all, you are only an Inspector; a small fry in the Force, and he is a Director of 2 Departments and an Assistant Commissioner to boot.
> Fine, then.
“I want 3 things, Sir. Not just one.”
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>>30005482
> You open your eyes to look at the Caucasian brute, having made your decision. Wordlessly, AC Thor gives you a nod soft and a smile, which you take as permission for you to speak.
> Boss, you would have spoken out anyway.
> True, but he doesn’t need to know that.
“First, I want you to keep Starlight safe for me, and for you to return her to me at the soonest possible moment. At no point in time should she be in danger or harm, and she is NOT to be used for whatever political games that you play or are thinking of playing… And tell her that I miss her and that I love her.”
> “Done.”
> That is easy enough. Now for the harder ones.
“Second, I want information. I want you to tell me what I want to know, to the best of your knowledge and abilities, and I want honest answers... I want the truth, and none of your political horseshit.”
> AC Thor now fixes you with his trademark piercing stare. Again, you feel like you are being x-rayed.
> “And if these information are meant to be secrets? How can I trust you to keep them that way?”
> You sit up and let your feet rest on the ground, leaning in as you fix him with a hard stare of your own.
“Well, I covered for you, didn’t I? Andrew Pierce’s death was no act of self-defence, Sir.”
> AC Thor smirks at you.
> “You are learning fast, Inspector. It’ll do good for your career.”
> The Assistant Commissioner leans back in his seat.
> “Very well, Inspector. What do you want to know?”
> You ask the first thing on your mind.
“What is the outcome of the raids, Sir? Besides Alpha, were there any other casualties? What of the ponies that were rescued? How are they and where are they now? What’s going to happen to them? What-”
> Putting up a hand, AC Thor gets you to stop. He reaches over and grabs the pen that DSP Koh and you used earlier, which he uses to scribble on a notepad.
> “Slow down there, Inspector. Let me take down your questions before I answer them.”
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>>30005494
> The sheer humanity of that causes you to smirk; despite his tough and cold exterior, the ‘Big Man’ is still a person. You are still pissed at him, but your anger is slowly being replaced by a combination of anxiousness and curiosity as the need to know takes precedence in your mind.
> Waving a hand at you to continue, you repeat the questions you have already asked, adding that you would like to know what is the follow up to Andrew Pierce’s case and how he plans to keep the true nature of his death quiet. You expected AC Thor to flinch when you blatantly clarified that HE killed Pierce, but that man calmly ignores you as he re-reads what he has written. His blue eyes travel up to yours before he speaks.
“The raids achieved their objective; we secured the safety and lives of all the 7 ponies in that warehouse and brought them to the Agency shelter for medical treatment and surgeries. Fixing bones, mending cuts, and patching of a bullet hole in a leg for Babs Seed. Followed up with blood, urine and stool tests, x-rays, treatment for malnutrition, dehydration and parasites, and the giving of vaccinations… Coco Pommel had to get tissue glue for cuts in her vaginal walls, and she is lucky that the blade did not puncture her bladder; she will not have survived that. She is required to keep her hindlegs mobilised to prevent the cuts from tearing open, but the wounds she has are superficial, so she will be up and about in a week’s time… These ponies will be kept in the Agency shelter for a week for recovery before they will be transferred to the village that Starlight is in now. That village belongs to us; the Equestrian Citizen Affairs Department, and last I heard, they are having an election to determine the name of it.”
> AC Thor draws a breath before he continues. His facial expression remains neutral, but you detect a hint of… Sadness, in it.
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>>30005499
> “As for the Rescue Team, we have 9 casualties: 5 officers are killed, and 4 injured. All of the 4 are sent to Florence General Hospital’s Emergency Department for treatment, and the 3 who sustained bullet wounds have been stabilised… For those who lost their lives, their bodies have already been released to the families. A memorial service for them will be held in St Steven’s Church next week, probably Saturday morning.”
> Pausing, AC Thor sighs softly as his gaze travels to a spot on the floor.
> “The 5 killed were exemplary Police officers, Inspector, just like yourself. Officers that have friends, family, and lovers… And 3 of them even have children… It pains me greatly that I sent them to their deaths, especially when I personally selected each individual for the Team… I will be speaking to each every one of their families after this, and I will have to bear their sorrows and anger with me…”
> The Assistant Commissioner raises his eyes to yours.
> “This is the price that we pay. It is the heavy burden that we carry as Police officers... We do our jobs so others do not have to… We take on risks to our minds, bodies and souls, so others don’t have to… We see the horrors of the darkest facets of humanity, so that sweet, innocent children do not have to... So that the everyday man and woman are safe enough to complain that our security is insufficient.”
> Swallowing a lump in your throat, you nod silently to show your agreement. He did not need to say them, but his words resonate strongly with you, especially when many of your friends do not understand why you are moody at times after work. It is a burden of wearing that gold badge and that blue uniform. Like Inspector Noel said at the scene where Sprinkle Medley’s body was found, this job kills a person’s mind and soul slowly, even if the physical body manages to survive intact.
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>>30005509
> Your heart aches for the Caucasian man, but you ask him about Andrew Pierce and his plans to keep the nature of his death a secret. He gives you a small smile and asks you if you are worried that he will digress again.
“To be honest, yes, Sir.”
> He chuckles softly. It is… Weird, seeing AC Thor opening up like that. He is usually as friendly and warm as a church gargoyle.
> “Let’s just say that I have an extensive network of connections in the Force. Your detachment officers will experience something similar to what you experienced with DSP Koh, and those pairs of Police officers are… Shall we say, under my direct control… And rumours of what actually happened will fly, yes, but so will others… I think the tales of YOUR exploits with chopsticks and tennis balls in the raid will be especially popular, way more so than an Assistant Commissioner carrying out some vigilante justice himself.”
> Shaking your head, you cannot help but feel a mixture of fear, disgust and… Uncleanliness from looking at the man before you.
“Information and image management, as well as having your very own henchmen, Sir? I swear… You elites scare and disgust me.”
> “That’s because you are not high enough yet to play this game, Inspector. In time you will be, and from what I already seen, you will be good at it.”
> Shaking your head, you ask him why he chose you specifically as the scapegoat, and what is his interest in ponies. He narrows his eyes as he smiles softly again.
> “Before I answer that, Inspector, I want to talk about Changelings. Do you know what they are, Anon?”
> You nod slowly as you recall Starlight’s description of them being ‘shape-shifters’, and they apparently ‘live off love’, whatever the hell that means. Telling him as such, AC Thor puts up a finger as he nods.
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>>30005518
> “She is correct, but she left out the part where Changelings can sense ambient emotions. They are not able to read minds, but they can sense what a pony or a person is feeling; some examples being happiness, love, fear, and determination. An experienced Changeling can not only tell how a person feels, but can make a surprisingly well-informed guess of what that person is thinking at that moment. After all, most emotions are hard to suppress, and decision-making is often emotionally driven.”
> Again, you nod slowly, confused as to why AC Thor is telling you all these.
> “The ECAD is working closely with the Changelings of Equestria, Inspector Anon. They help us with the gathering of intelligence through establishing a surveillance network, and they provide assistance with our rescue efforts… They are the reason why ponies are going ‘missing’. That security camera footage you saw for Minuette’s case? That man is a Changeling agent specifically trained to rescue ponies who are suffering from their slavery, and unlike humans, they do not shed any of their hairs or skin when they transform.”
> Holy shit.
> You slump back against the sofa as your mind reels from learning that.
“… H-how many of them are here…?”
> “They are not a threat, Anon, if that is your concern. Like I said, they are working closely with ECAD. There are many of them here, and they have retained the ability to transform and use basic spells. Changeling magic uses love, you see, not harmony, and love is readily available here from the ponies we already rescued. That village I was talking about? That’s the haven that they built for ponies, here on Earth. A sanctuary, if you will.”
“Why are you telling me all this, Sir?”
> His response is quick and sharp.
> “Don’t you want to know? You asked for information, so I am providing you with it. After all, you handled those cases.”
> Fair enough. You raise a hand in a gesture for him to continue.
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>>30005530
“That’s why all missing pony cases revolve around the same circumstances, Anon: no DNA evidence, no theft, no broken locks or windows and why people sometimes changing into others. They don’t need to damage property, Anon, when a simple unlocking spell will do, and their focus is to save ponies who are suffering from slavery, Anon, not to harm humans. That is not the Equestrian way of doing things; and as I have said, they are not your enemy.”
> Wow… Just… Wow…
> These Changeling agents are perfect criminals. It seems almost… Unreal, that there are shafe-shifting aliens on Earth that are helping their fellow aliens. Then, a thought occurs to you as you stare at the Assistant Commissioner.
> Unless…
“… How do you know all these Sir? And how can you be sure that that is their only intention?”
> AC Thor tilts his head slightly.
> Your eyes widen. No… It cannot be…
> AC Thor smiles softly at you as he holds out his hands with his palms facing up. With a flash of green, the skin his right hand becomes a light blue as his left becomes purple.
“WHAT THE FUCK?!”
> You kick your legs hard as you scoot backwards into the sofa. Another flash of green and his hands becomes fair again. Stunned, you just gape at the Assistant Commissioner.
> “Like I said, we are not your enemy. The Changelings here on Earth are not your enemy… I want the same thing that you want, Inspector Anon, and I want the same thing that all your fellow officers in the Rescue Team want; and that is the safety and well-being of ponies here on Earth. We work to save ponies too, Anon, just as you do, because we are indebted to Starlight, Trixie, and Discord for their role in helping to re-form us, and to the ponies of Equestria for readily accepting us into their societies before the War. They gave us friendships and love, and they gave us hope for a new life. As such, when I heard that Princess Twilight has been captured, I went after her and took her place.”
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>>30005538
> Recovering from your position, you groan again as your stitches smart. Gritting your teeth, you frown as you regard the man before you. Fear floods your mind as you realise that the man you are talking to is not actually human.
> Nodding at the corner of the room, the Caucasian… Changeling speaks again.
> “Feel free to pick up that weapon if you want to, if it makes you feel safer. Even without tasting it, I can tell that you are scared of me… If you shoot me, I will die… I am just another living being like you.”
> He turns back to you, and you cannot help but recoil from his gaze. It may be irrational, but you are scared as shit.
“But, I am really hoping that you do not do that. Anon, there are still many ponies out there that needs my help and yours, and removing an ally will not bid well for what you are trying to accomplish. I could have killed you already if I want to, Inspector, but I want to be your friend.”
> You speak slowly, watching the Changeling before you for any sudden movements.
“You killed Andrew Pierce, despite you saying that it “that is not the Equestrian way of doing things”. Why should I trust you, Changeling?”
> He sighs and slumps against his chair, covering his face with a hand.
“That was a personal matter, Anon, and my behaviour does not reflect that of other Changelings. I wanted vengeance… Andrew Pierce killed somepony close to me in a horrifyingly sadistic way, and I wanted to avenge her... I know it’s wrong, but… Being here for so long, and seeing what happened to my friends has changed me… In ways that I could never imagine… In ways… That I despise myself for… I am not the same person when I left Equestria… Not anymore…”
> It is then that you notice that the ‘Big Man’ is… Crying. He is silent, but you can see the small heaves of his chest and the tears that roll down his face.
> Holy shit.
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>>30005556
> Slowly, you reach an arm out and touch him on the side of his elbow. He does not react to your touch, but he speaks again after a few moments. His pain is evident in his soft voice.
> “… She was the most beautiful little foal I have laid my eyes on, Anon… She had so much love and innocence, and she was one of the first to accept me for who I am… She was a special pony… And I loved her so, so much… She did not deserve that… Nopony deserves that, but especially… Not her…”
> Removing his hands, he sniffs as he fixes his wet eyes on yours. Any earlier rage you felt is gone now, and when you look into them, his blue eyes has lost that piercing look that he often gave you. His gaze is… Hollow.
> “You said that you will die before you let Starlight come to any harm, Inspector… What if she died because of him? Screaming in agony as she was used like a piece of meat to please the multitude of perverts and sadists watching her? Waiting for a death that came so slowly and painfully, whilst these monsters pleasure themselves at the sight and sounds of her anguish and torture? What… What will you do, Inspector Anon, if that girl is Starlight? What would you do, if you know you can get away with it?”
> You swallow. Whatever happened to that pony… You do not want to imagine it. Your eyes meet AC Thor’s, and you feel that familiar tiredness from being emotionally exhausted. It is reflected in his eyes.
> Your mind considers his last question, and shaking your head slowly, you close your eyes.
“It’s still wrong. No matter how you justify it, you should have let the legal system decide his fate. We are in no position to mete out sentences, Sir… THAT is not our duty and not our right… That is the job of the Justices and the High Court, and to do so is still wrong, no matter the circumstances…”
> Opening your eyes, you meet AC Thor’s gaze with a hard look.
“… But I would have done the same fucking thing, Sir.”
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>>30005565
> He smiles as he snorts softly.
> “From the intensity of your emotions as you answered my questions in my office that day, I knew I chose right… Especially when I found out what you did to Thaddeus Benson.”
> You are not even surprised anymore.
“You’ve been watching me with your Changeling intelligence network, haven’t you?”
> He chuckles softly.
> “Like I said, we are not your enemy, Inspector, and I want to make sure that Starlight is treated well... Thaddeus left the position, by the way, and has recently applied to work as a janitor at an engineering firm. He has been blacklisted from ever owning a pony again.”
> When he finished speaking, he holds out a hand. Your eyes linger on it for a second, then you reach out yours to shake it. He smiles, and you return it.
> Guess you’ve made a friend, Boss.
> …

> “You disrupted my plans for Starlight, did you know that? When Ms Heather told you that Starlight is going to be ‘euthanised’, it was actually a cover. We knock them out with a dose of anaesthetics under the guise of putting them down, then transfer them to the village... Then, you came in like a hawk and snatched Starlight from me. Ms Heather is new, you see, so she did not know the… Arrangement, we had in place.”
> Interesting.
> “As for your question on the future for ponies, the Bill that was passed by Parliament states that a pony that has been missing for 6 months will be free to be registered under another owner. The intent there is to protect ponies who are hiding from their previous masters, and for those who want to sell themselves back into slavery under new masters.”
> You frown when you hear that. As you open your mouth, AC Thor is already speaking again.
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>>30005573
> “You heard right, Anon. There are some ponies in the ECAD village that are willing to auction themselves to fund it for their brethren, as well as the projects we are undertaking for the betterment of ponykind. Their selflessness and love for others will go a long way in helping to secure a brighter future for ponies here on Earth. We were unable to get Parliament to agree on financing the village, as some feel that ponies are not citizens of this country and it would be not be fair to impose a new tax just to benefit them.”
> Even as you are listening, you cannot help but feel that discomfort within you rise again. You suppress a groan.
“What about those who are still suffering? What do you know of Cadance’s plans?”
> AC Thor gets up and guides you to rest on the couch, giving you a stern look.
> “I am afraid I will have to let Cadance answer those at a later time, Anon. You are not well, and you need medical attention.”
> Wait, what?
“Cadance… Is with you? The Princess?”
> He nods.
> “She is the only one that I have found, and she is residing in that village with the other ponies. Princess Twilight has sealed the Portal linking Earth to Equestria, and as far as I know, she is now the ruler of what remains of Equestria… As for Princesses Celestia and Luna, we are still searching for them.”
> Taking out his phone, AC Thor types out a message. Closing your eyes, you groan as you feel your stomach churning again. You feel dizzy now, and your body is strangely weak.
“… Sir…”
> He taps a button and puts his phone away. Letting your eyes close, you feel that dizziness become more intense as your stomach churns yet again. You hear AC Thor get up.
> “Medical attention will be here in about 5 minutes. Don’t worry, Anon, I will look after Starlight... She means a lot to you, but she does to me too. She is a heroine to us Changelings, and we will treat her as she deserves.”
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>>30005591
> You nod slowly as you hear him move to the door.
“Sir? You haven’t heard the last thing.”
> “Go ahead, Anon. Like I said, I owe you.”
> Forcing your eyes open, you meet his gaze.
“I want you to get me Trixie. Trixie Lulamoon.”
> The Caucasian man smiles as he shakes his head.
> “For yourself? Or for Starlight?”
> You smile softly in return.
“Both.”
> “I’ll see what I can do.”
> AC Thor walks back to you and places a palm on your forehead. You close your eyes again.
> “Rest now, Inspector. You’ll be okay… And thank you. For doing your job… For loving Starlight… And… For understanding me.”
> You just nod in return as you feel him removing his hand. The door opens again, and you hear his footsteps stop.
> “If you are wondering, Anon. My real name… Is ‘Thorax’.”
> He leaves, closing the door gently behind him. Again, you hear only silence as you reach a hand over blindly to the bottle of whisky. Finding it, you take a big gulp from it.
> That hit the fucking spot.
> You take another swing.
> …
> What the fuck kind of name is 'Thorax'? Is he like a bug, or what?
> …
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>>30005453
>Caucasian

Why do you feel the need to point this out every time?

Are you going to preface other characters with "Asian", or "Negro"?
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>>30005602
0 to 100 in less of one thread Mercury, amazing!
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>>30005614
Because it implies that Insp Anon is not one, and for some reason, it is important to him.
> Probably a bad habit of my writing. I will do the edits in the pastebin.
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>>30005173
>Implying the fillies are allowed to buy their freedom.

They work at the brothel until they're not fillies anymore, and then are sold to pay for someone younger to take their place. Just like God intended.
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>>30005628
It's faggy and annoying, it also glaring jumps out as unnatural, and makes the scenes not blend as well, like with movies back before it was all on disk and the guy manning the projector wasn't Jonny on the spot and the movie skipped a bit.
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>>30005602
Updates!

I am honestly a bit worried about this segment as it has a LOT of information in it. I tried to stream-line it so it flows well, and I hope that I managed that.

As >>30005614 and >>30005660 pointed out, I tend to not be very creative with describing people.
> Check out the pastebin for the updated version.
> I did not mean it to be racist in anyway, and I apologise if it came out as such.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
> Updates are posted in Part 2.

As always, thank you if you have been reading and following, and thank you for all your support. Do let me know what you think, and leave me your comments, ideas, suggestions and criticisms.

Stay awesome! (And sorry again if I caused any offence) :<
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When the hell are we going to get more Nightmare Luna turning the tables on Anon and making us HER slave?

It's been too god damn long since the last update
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>>30005776
And where's collegeanon with Derpy and Appuls?
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>>30003757
Yeah, it's fucking go time, mateys. No holds barred!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5QzoXz8XpY
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>>30005785
And where's some more Life of Honey?
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>>30005776
ew gross
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>>30000655
Rainbow needs some loving. Maybe not sex this soon but some love
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>>30005820
And where's Shiny and Corona?
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>>30005717
did not expect that
good job
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>>30005602
Outstanding update!

>AC Thor smiles softly
Mind = Blown
Did not see that one coming, and you gave us plenty of clues, including 'Thorax'. Thor has not been on earth that long, how did he build his legend? Good on ya!

>5 officers are killed
Holy Shit! I don't see how Thors career and project can survive the scrutiny this will bring. Rolling in heavy like that on the units first hour of existence with zero training as a team was indefensible. The life of the non-person Coco Pommel is meaningless to the politicians next to this. Police are not soldiers, they don't do "acceptable losses". We saw the death of Alpha, where did the other four come from?

>>30005614
I'm a gigantic caucasian ogre like Thor (190cm, 86kg, northern winter pallor, professional laborer), and I think Anon being a bit racist serves the story well. Especially when the damn round-eye turns out to be something completely different again!

Your grammar is better then most writefags, but I know you're picky so:
>hindlegs mobilised to prevent
immobilized.
>an election to determine the name
Elections only vote representatives to office. Should be 'plebiscite'.
>They gave us friendships and love
friendship
>killed you already if I want to
wanted
>What… What will you do, Inspector Anon
would?
>blacklisted from ever owning a pony again
Did Thaddeus ever own anypone? Thought he was just abusing his position.
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>>30005906
>>30005896
Thanks for reading, and thank you for your kind words.

>>30005906
Thanks for pointing those out. I have made edits in the pastebin.

> Thor has not been on earth that long, how did he build his legend?
> I don't see how Thors career and project can survive the scrutiny this will bring. Rolling in heavy like that on the units first hour of existence with zero training as a team was indefensible.
These will be deliberately left unanswered, but remember that he has Changelings to help him. Might do a section on the deaths in subsequent updates.

> Where did the other four come from?
Remember that there were 4 detachments of officers, each with 6 people.

> Did Thaddeus ever own anypone? Thought he was just abusing his position.
Meant for it to be more of a preventative measure than anything else. He cannot be charged for a new law for previous crimes.
> Unless... Insp Anon government were to... 'Make' something happen.
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>>30003303
>>30003314

I'm sorry about these, but most of the errors actually come from the fact that I'm writing this thing in the 4chan reply box on a shitty tablet, I'll start using an external program to write, then hopefully it'll get rid of both the spelling mistakes and the long update times

>>30003558

I hear you, and I felt the same way. This bit will probably get a bit of a rewrite today, and I'll go over the whole story to check for errors. Thanks for this critique :)
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>>30005984
>reply box on a shitty tablet
Wow, have to respect that dedication. Amazing it's so good, really.
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>>30005717
Was a heck of a twist.

>Thor - Thorax
Fuck that's corny, but not in a bad way.
Awfully hard to hear about his poor little filly. Also, quite a heavy casualty rate for ecad already. You should go easier on the lovers of ponies. They are precious.

Still not a fan of glimmer and trixy is just a "meh", but still enjoying the green.

Need to find them princesses.
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>>30006064
>You should go easier on the lovers of ponies. They are precious...
> Awfully hard to hear about his poor little filly.
The kicker is when you realise who that little filly is. That is when it will really fucking hurt and cursh your soul.
> Hint: Recall the scenes in the show when you see Thorax.
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>>30006104
> ... crush* your soul.
FUCKING HELL
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>>30005717
>racist
It's less that, and more, this dude is either a serious autist, or a robot in a human suit.

It's immersion breaking.
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>>30006134
>a robot in a human suit.
>"HELLO CAUCASIAN MALE HOMO SAPIEN, I AM ALSO A MALE HOMO SAPIEN, BUT NOT CAUCASIAN. WE ARE NOTABLY SIMILAR, ARE WE NOT."
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>>30006104
>Flurry the abomination that never should have existed.
lol nope.
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>>30006134
Seems natural to me. In a region where we are the minority, it's the first thing people notice. If they're a bit racist against us, they keep on noticing and it bugs them, especially if we fit the stereotype especially well. I find it makes Anon a more natural character, one of those little faults a robot in a human suit would not display.
Thor is also really well drawn, taking vengeance for Flurry and being so conflicted about it.
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I got banned on my PC for something I didn't even do but it's 3 days so I can't appeal. Which means 3 day delay on my update. Good thing the thread moves so fast now, plenty of green to fill in for me. If anyone still even reads my shit, lel
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>>30006295
I get the naturalness part, but I think I may have overdone it though. I kept some of the "Caucasian"s though, so I think it works out a nice balance.
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>>30003222
>>30003238
Praise be the sun horse!
>>30000000
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>>30005840
Wheres skittles?
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>>30006630
Where's Vadkram?
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>>30006687
Where's Marble breaking Redheart's heart?
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>>30007013
Where's Applejack and her New Landscape?
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>>30007141
Can Star feed the three starving changlings indefinitely?
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>>30007207
Link?
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>NEXT TIME, ON /SPG/ Z:
>>30005776
>>30005785
>>30005820
>>30005840
>>30006630
>>30006687
>>30007013
>>30007141
>>30007207
>>30007223
https://youtu.be/KyCAZkz4uVg?t=20s
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>>30007223
Black Mage Anon CYOA:
pastebin.com/Hr0jyC1Y
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>>30007439
Are you for sale or something?
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>>30007439
not your personal army
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>>30007439
Interested. How much?
But this board focuses on pony slaves, do you have any of those to offer?
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>>30006315
Sorry for the ban bruh, looking forward to the next update!
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>>30007246
So many incomplete greens. :(
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>>30008150
That pastebin is not even up to date. If you go through the archive the last update had the three changelings feed on Star. They are thankful and offer a more permanent alliance. The discussion in the thread took a rather grim turn, and murdering them in their sleep was contemplated (!), but no update since.
>ReebAnon, we miss you!
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>>30007496

Crazy Hassan has many emo camels.
Very cheap. And better than normal kind!
No whining here, and no My Chemical Romance!
Hassan only sells deluxe emos!
>He points towards a small group of camels
See? Two more legs than normal kind.
Only slightly used.
You want jacket too?
I give jacket too.
Very warm, good for stopping magic.
You'll need it my friend. Hassan's camels can get feisty.
HA!
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>>30008258
Yes, we do. Lots have come and gone. :(
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What would be an underused pony to oppressively write on.
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>>30008777
Fluttershy and Cheerilee. Or one of the CMC.
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>>30008882
Wait, wilting slut pony isn't popular?
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>>30008934
>slut pony

Who now
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>>30009043
Flutterslut.
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>>30009113
>Fluttershy
>slut

Wut
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>>30008777
Nightmare Moon. Back when SiM was a thing, I always wanted to see NM become a loving pet.
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>>30009779
You and me both, friend. It's one deep pity for me that we never got the chance to see Nightmare submit for once.

...okay, there was that one hunter story, but that turned out to be consensual.
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>>30009779
>I always wanted to see NM become a loving pet.
I want to be her loving pet
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It was the end of a long day, the days were always too long and wearing on your tail. It hadn’t helped much that you had ended up going through that portal to a strange new world with so many other ponies. So many others who had a slave brand, you’d had one as well. Of course, that was only an issue to be solved as far as you were concerned. One fateful night, you’d seen to that. You had often wondered what friendship was, where the magic lay. You found out it lay in bondage, a clawing thing that kept you down. You turned informant, worked with the humans until one day, you were free. Oh there had been and still were consequences. Ponies knew you betrayed them, your home. Humans didn’t trust you, after all you were a Judas they said. Your ear had been pierced, a stud set in it to show you were a free mare. It was a mark more heavy than the scar brand that had mostly healed.
But that was years ago, and you now had a simple enough job working in a foundry as one of the free ponies. It was rather easy to haul the ingots around in your magic, and profitable enough for yourself to finally have a chance at owning a slave of your own. Adventure though, that was what you wanted, desired. Daring Doo may not have been real, but the treasures she looked for could have been. Equestria was a wild place, and humans valued magical items. So clocking off your shift your minty green flank was in a slave market for the first time.
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>>30010104
The place was bustling with activity, you’d thought they would be some small affair, individual rooms and audiences. Instead it was bedlam, barkers were announcing the sale of their own kin, humans waved their hands about, calling for attention to a person in the crowd. All the while, ponies watched you, a few creeps followed you, looking to add you to their watch. And up above all that, security watched them all, a mixture of races, humans walked around as griffons looked down on the defeated, there were even some pegasi, but you never saw one without a brand. Idly, you checked the sandwich board that showed a rough idea of the sales sections. Your eyes were drawn to the criminal sections.
Criminal slaves were a rare treat. Humans had some laws dictating how slaves had to be treated, nothing too odious, just basic things like keeping them fed and in good health, teaching them the ways of the world through schooling, but the big one was no abuse. It was an interesting choice, they’d decided that slaves were animals, and actually had more laws protecting animals from abuse than their own kind. But criminals, they didn’t get that protection. Once bought, they were able to be treated the same as any human slave, and that was just what you wanted.
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>>30010109
Walking down the stalls, you realized it was very quiet in here. The slaves were quiet here, resting and waiting for their fates. The din of the market had faded quickly from the wall of the solid kennels holding the criminals. Each stall held one slave, separated by a wall of concrete save for the pony in front of them. Not all ponies you saw as you glanced down the rows. The dark blue talons of griffons gestured for you, a bat pony huddled in a corner as you approached, an angry red scar running down her face to her muzzle. Crime knew no race, no master, all would bow to it. The only thing you didn’t see was a human, and that left your striped tail close to your belly, ears laid back a little. It was spooky, but you were surer it was depressing. The criminals weren’t even worth the effort to flog in a market.
Trotting along, you thought of what you would need. Something fast, something that could go long distances hauling your gear, perhaps something even affectionate?
“Why those all sound like splendid qualities to look for in a slave!” A green man, no a man in a green suit, wearing a suit? Suddenly showed up radiating enough saccharine support you worried you got diabetes. “I have some loving offerings here today, but tell me, how do you feel about them potentially possibly killing you?”


>What persuasion of criminal do you seek?
Canon or OC are fine
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>>30010116
Go for a griffin.
Good mix of physical abilities to compliment our magic, and we can keep it in line with the best human technology ever: the computerized shock collar. We tested ourself against them with little success, now it's our turn to hold the cryptographic key.
Besides, a pony owning a griffin sends the right message, arrogant bastards.
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>>30009903
>"N-Nightmare, why are not you sleeping in the luxury bed (that you forced me to buy) with goose pens pillows that you wanted so badly?"

>"Silent subject! Your princess rests more pleasantly in your lap. Be grateful!"
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>>30010116
Green is not green? There's a bunch of grammar and logic problems here too. Are you using machine translation?
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>>30010399
Would you mind pointing them out?
I have been told this before, but not had it pointed out where the issues are.

As for green, I like writing paragraphs over individual line returns.
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>tfw you will never whip the mare
>tfw you will never ride the stallion
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>>30010116
Grammar is good, but the language is kind of stilted. The words just don't flow like they should.

>It was the end of a long day
Long day doing what, floating ingots? Are the ingots white hot so magic is the best way to move them?

>you had ended up going through that portal
Did we go through the portal during the long day, or is that the distant past?

>You found out it lay in bondage
Does friendship or magic lie in bondage? How does magic keep a magic-using unicorn down? This could be a poetic way of expressing it, but your words just don't quite work together.

>Equestria was a wild place
Are we on Earth or Equestria now? Do we plan to pass back through the portal with our new slave from Earth?

>you’d thought they would be some small affair,
But the criminal sales area is just so!

>looking to add you to their watch
Who are the creeps? What does it mean to be 'added to a watch'?

>all would bow to it
Not sure what this means. Are you saying that no species is incorruptible? Or that crime is more powerful than the law? Feels like this is a saying translated from another language or something.

>The only thing you didn’t see was a human
Where are the human criminals? Do humans not 'bow to crime'? Why is this spooky?

>enough saccharine support
The fake sweetness is supporting him? So we think he is lying?

It might be an interesting story, but I need to read it over a few times before I can guess what is going on. Would suggest you try to go slower and describe things more.
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>>30010425
If you like writing paragraphs, i would write an actual fanfiction instead of one on 4chan. People do greentext here because any other way is eyestrain incarnate. Most people skip over poorly formatted posts, myself included.
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>>30011104
Poor, poor Mocha...
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>tfw Skittles will never get her walkies
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FILLY BROTHEL WHEN?
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That's not a Mocha. This a Mocha.
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>>30011411
Who is the slave here?
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THE GAME
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New thread: >>30011448
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>>30011354
This is what Space Celly needs!
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last post lmao
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>>30012797
Suck it nerd.
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