Dragon Transformation General #3

>>29556278
>>You find yourself in Equestria
>>With the kick ass body of a dragoness
dropped

>>29556278
Dragon:
>You don't have any idea about what are you doing here.
>Or how you are supposed to do dragon stuff,of who you are, to start.
>But well, looks like Equestria has a awesome new Dragon resident.

>Let's see if you manage to settle in!
>Who knows what awaits you on your new adventure?
>It's your chance to make the best out of it!

Authors:
Finished:
Kurgash's "Scholar with Scales": http://pastebin.com/u/Kurgash
Buggernon's "Anon the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/u/Buggernon
Fiber's "Dragon Anon": http://pastebin.com/ADkW9G2Q

Unfinished:
Sergeant Nonymous's "Anonymous the Wise Dragon": http://pastebin.com/CY698CQ0
Clarissa's "No Fury at All": http://pastebin.com/U5q2gcBr
Alcrowholic's "Mountainous": http://pastebin.com/7iJzrFDt
BlackRose's "Blackened": http://pastebin.com/9BiiAwiq
Harmonyrla's "Dragula": http://pastebin.com/m0i4tGEK
BizarreCoyote's "Rukodiora's Romp Around Equestria": http://pastebin.com/u/BizzarreCoyote
Tambourine's My Tiny Ponies: http://pastebin.com/sBQrS8ZR
Bubblewolf's Crystal Draganon: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8dlbvjaz3emxv2h/Bubblewolf%20Crystalanon.txt?dl=0
(hosted on dropbox as a notepad file)
Dracononymous' Deceitful (Not a) Dragon: http://pastebin.com/GQiUeKe7
Woofr's pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/Woofr


Previous thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29441804/

Other previous thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29232265/

If you are a content creator, please use a Name so we can refer your work to someone.

>>29557011
I had the feeling I forgot to post something after making the thread.
Thanks anon.

>>29557011
>Fiber's "Dragon Anon": http://pastebin.com/ADkW9G2Q

>ERROR, PASTE ID IS INVALID, OR PASTE HAS BEEN REMOVED!

>>29557011
http://pastebin.com/u/Kurgash
Kurgash has no public pastes.

>>29557095
>>29557112
I guess I'm gonna fix that in my template. Thanks

Mornin' Anons. Part 3 coming tonight. Have to meet with some family during the day, but I'll try and churn out a two-parter tonight to keep the thread alive.

Why do I always pick the dying generals to write for? It's not fair ;_;

>>29557129
>dying
Nigga we're practically a newborn general.
Wait 'till we go through, like, a dozen threads before drawing conclusions.

>>29557129
Stay Cheeki Breeki.

I'm here since DragonAnon started the "You are a female dragon in Equestria thread". We had harder times. Even through we aren't that old.

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>>29557149
That's sorta' reassuring to know. I've sort of had a bad history with picking generals to write for though - Stompy Slippers, Peppermint, Wolfpone, and a few others that were mad-hot during their conception, but then fizzled out shortly afterwards. Obviously posted under a different name back then though.
>>29557134
At this stage, we're starting to look like a cot-death. I hope that shit starts to pick up when Kolaghan, Mage, and Woofr eventually come back. I'll try and remain optimistic, but EHH...

Super cute to see my dragoness in the OP either way (I'm so proud, they just grow up so fast.)

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Which is superior lads, western or eastern dragons?

Pic related is my vote.

>>29556278
http://pastebin.com/1rWgR6vg
Made a Template for future Thread-OP's.
Also I will reupload Kurgash's "Scholar with Scales" in a few hours.

>>29557190
Top taste, Anon. Pretty sure the majority of the dragons ITT are a weird mix the two.
>>29557191
Based Anon. Thank you. Mind if I make a back-up of this on my pastebin? Just handy to have more than one copy floating around.

>>29557204
Na, no problem. I kinda created this bin just for these kind of files and backups of the thread. Like Kurgash's bin, for example. Backups are always important.

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>>29557235
Yeah, you're telling me. I know that a fair few stories from AiE have been lost to the sands of time because pastebin auto-deletes posts when they're not getting enough hits these days. Only way to really protect your content is to have a pro account.

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>>29557184
Did somebody say Kolaghan?!


Yeah, I'm here, and I'm more than ready to continue Khoa's story.

>>29557328
Based Kolaghan! Welcome back friendo. Look forward to seeing where things go.

>You were sitting under a tree, writing lazily.
>It's been a couple weeks, a few weeks you designated as a vacation of sorts.
>You wouldn't exactly call it anything lavish, just you relaxing.
>For starters, you actually spent some time with Fluttershy.
>Most of your first week with her was spent sleeping or just away.
>Which, considering that she's been letting you stay with her all this time was awfully shitty.
>A lot of the time you spent with her was very quiet.
>Going for walks, getting something to eat, just watching clouds.
>It was surprisingly nice.
>You honestly didn't spend much time making friends though, you mostly stuck to Fluttershy and Twilight.
>And you guess Spike counts too.
>You should probably try socializing a bit more in all honesty.
>But right now you have got to make some attempt at working.
>All play and no work makes Khoa a dull dragon.
>Chuckling a bit, you go to start a new paper.
>Might as well try writing down some stuff about your other life.
>"I was human once."
>That's a good start.
>"My name was..."
>Weird, it's not on the tip of your tongue.
>Guess it's because you've been wiring yourself to go by Khoa.
>But, it's not coming to you at all.
>You're actually straining yourself.
>And it's NOT coming.
>You can't remember.
K: "O-oh shit..."

Goooood morning Vietnam!

>>29557403
That'll be quite the blow if she truly can't remember. It's like Khoa's mind is drifting. Every time she tries to remember or record memories her thoughts suddenly switch to something else. Self defense mechanism? Might help to be straight with someone, a confidant.

I think boople is kill

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>>29557560
Nobody is kill yet. It's early morning. Everyone will wander in later tonight.

>>29557542
Only time will tell!

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>>29542089
>>29542195
I will try to continue then

>>29541817
>You pursue your quest into this nightmare
>It must be 11 pm now and the storm don't seem to soothe
>The downpour and this gusts of wind slow down your progression in this jungle, and your only light source come from the regular lightning
>If you encounter a predator, you will not be able to flee this time
>A part of you just want to give up...
>Yeah that what you are going to do, just lay down on the ground and let the mud cover your dying body
>You don't have a purpose anymore, you just want to sleep, stop feeling...

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>>29557578
>And then you see it, the end of the forest... and a house!
>You can't believe what you see, a house? like that? in the middle of nowhere?
>A spark of hope light up inside your heart while you run toward the cottage
>You can't contain your excitement, you are no longer in this hell made of tree, and maybe you will find someone who will be able to help you
>You take a last look of the forest who is now behind you and stick out your tongue
"Looks like I'm not dying tod-"
>You don't have the time to finish your sentence, your right feet slips on a puddle and you lose your balance
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!"
>Is the only thing you manage to say before your head crashes on a random rock
>You lay on the ground and your vision begin to blur
>you touch your forehead and the last thing you see is your right hand covered of blood until consciousness failed you

>>29557584
>You are Fluttershy
>And right now you try your best to calm your friends
"Don't worry, everything gonna be alright, Rainbow Dash said the storm will stop in a few hours"
>But a new lightning is enough to put back the chaos among your animals
>The squirrels started to eat the sofa for some reason
"No no don't do that... plea-"
>"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!"
>You and your pets stood still
"Wh-what was that?"
>You look out the window and you see something white lying down in your garden
"Oh dear, a pony has been caught off guard by the storm, we have to help him!"
>Your pets stare at you puzzled while you walk toward your door
>Barely open, a gust enters in the room and most of the animals went to hide behind furniture
>You place your hoof in front of your eyes and try to see something despite the tempest
>Two of your dogs jumped outside and ran towards the dying body and began to drag it
>You're waiting for your two friends to enter in the house before you close the door and take a proper look on the one who need your help

>>29557586
Now it begins. Do we have our first male dragon entry?

I'm kinda busy today, but I'll see what I can do later. Definitely more tomorrow though

>>29557878
>Do we have our first male dragon entry?
One can only hope. God knows we need more to balance the child-molesting female dragons we have already.
>Definitely more tomorrow though
hype

>>29557011
God fucking damn it anon at least revise the links before posting

>>29557190
This dragon is my native flag and seeing it peped terrifies me

>>29556278
The hell of it all lies in the discovery that dragons not only breathe fire, but fart fire.

>>29558796
Like it's hard to do.
Gimme a match and I'll show you the fire.

Hey dragonfriends, gonna be posting something soon with any luck. Promise to have part 3 ready for you at some point tonight. Just had a busy day is all ~ I'll get back on this ASAP.
>>29558117
>God knows we need more to balance the child-molesting female dragons we have already
I kekked, totally agree with this, it's refreshing to see a male dragon as opposed to a pure fem thread. Although.. Not all of the female dragons are child molesters.

We dead now? We dead now.

RIP Drago thread

>>29560307
rip in 404

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>>29560307
>>29560838
I'm at work but I'll be back tomorrow nig nogs

>>29561066
Doomsayers, man. They're probably right, but still.

Also, for anyone who gives a shit; Yes, I am still posting tonight, I just have to do some shit before I get on that.

p.s, Where was that fantastic drawfriend from the last thread who drew the qt dragons?

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Part 3 - 3.5/4 coming soon. Currently just going over a few things and finishing up before I post. Expect something within the next 1 - 2 hours.

We're gonna learn a few things in this part, including our new name, and the general direction I'm gonna be taking the story.

Hope that someone out there is lurkin' around and enjoying the stories and content that our writefags and drawfags have been turning out.

Stay tuned, boiz.

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Continued from last thread - If you're new and want to read the previous two parts, please head on over to my pastebin to get up to date!

>....
"Mrmph"
>You roll onto your side and wince slightly as a shooting pain goes through your leg and up your side causing you to jolt and roll back onto your back.
"FUCK, ow, ow, ow!"
>Well, shit, at least that confirms that you're still alive.
>How? You haven't the slightest idea. Anyone else would have been granted the sweet release by now, but you? Nope, no fucking way.
>You can picture some all-knowing being sat on his fat lazy ass on a cloud while stroking his beard, just being like "Nah mate, I'll turn you into a big white lizard woman instead, because fuck you, that's why."
>Fuckin' laws of the universe and shit.
>Sods law.
>That's what it is.
>You wet your dry mouth with your newly serpentine tongue as you flicker your wide eyes open to glance around your surroundings.
>You roll your head around in order to scout your surroundings, and find yourself in a huge room that appears to be made out of some sort of high-quality frosted blue glass or maybe even fucking crystal.
>Either you've been crowned the kin- Erm.. Queen.. Of this land, or you're not in a hospital at all, and have stumbled into either the home of someone VERY wealthy, or some sort of high end hotel thing, because holy shit, this place is breathtaking.

>>29562224
>Shit, nevermind the room, this bed, these furnishings, these SHEETS.
>This whole thing just screams luxury and dollar signs.
>Maybe you're in fucking Dubai or some shit. The Arabs have some crazy ass rich people that could probably afford this sort of thing.
>Nah, that's fucking retarded.
>You haven't been beheaded yet, so you can't be in the Middle East, and you can vividly remember falling from the sky.
>You think up the stupidest shit sometimes.
>Speaking of thinking, you should probably weigh up the state you're in, and try and piece together what happened before your host shows up so you ask them what the fuck is going on.
>You use your good leg to kick your silky covers off of yourself and glance down over your body before jumping slightly.
>Right, big reptile.
>That's gonna' take some getting used to.
*shudder*
>Your entire left leg is bandaged up with some sort of splint-brace-thing on the bottom half of it, your midsection, and your upper arms are covered in bandages as well, but barring that, you seem to be mostly unscathed aside from a few scratches and cuts here and there.
>Right, body is as A-OK as it can be given the circumstances. Couple of bandages, some cuts. You can take that for now.

>>29562228
>Now onto the real meat of the puddin'; Piecing shit together.
>Right, so how did you get here?
>You and M.. Uh.. Marvin? No.. That's not right.. Marty! That was it! You and your stupid cunt of a friend were at the club, doing your thing.. What happened next though?
>Fuck.. What DID happen next?
>You don't remember an awful lot aside from being in a night club one minute, some scattered memories about some bitch slapping you, and then all of a sudden you were falling backwards, and then crashing through the treetops back in those spooky-ass woods.
>There must be more to it than that, surely.
>Searching..
>Files not found. Nothing there, boss.
>Some fucking use you are brain. I thought you had my b-
>Your thoughts are interrupted by a light tapping on the door, before you answer them with a slight lump in your chest.
"C-come in.."
>Wow, you sound like a faggot. Man up, woman.
>Again, fuck you brain.
>Just saying it how it is, sister.
>As the door opens, you are met with the ridiculous, yet oddly terrifying sight of a short-ass lizard man carrying a tray with a sheet over it.
>Oh fuck, you remember something like this from /x/.
>Lizard people abducting people from their own dimensions and performing fucking weird experiments on them and breeding with them and shit.
>You scramble up as you recoil in horror and pain against the back board of your bed, your eyes growing ever wider as he uses his little claws to remove the white sheet from the blanket to reveal the horrifying sight of..

>>29562236
>.. Two slices of toast, and a glass of orange juice?
>wut
>"Breakfast is served! Hope you're feeling a little better! You look like you took a few hard hits last night."
>Fucking hell, you thought your heart was going to explode there.
>You let out a sigh of relief as you wobbly half-crawl to the foot of the bed, and reach out slowly towards the tray he's holding in front of you.
>You snatch up a piece of the crispy golden goodness that is before you quickly with a look of suspicion in your eyes, looking it up and down as though a single bite may kill you.
>Because it fucking might.
>Better test this fucker, just in case.
"You eat some"
>"Huh? But I've already ea-"
>Sneaky fucking lizard, it takes a lot to pull a fast one on lil' ol' you.
"No excuses lizard man, take a bite and swallow"
>"Sheesh, whatever you say"
>He doesn't even break a sweat as he picks up a piece of the toasted bread, tosses it into his mouth.
>Well shit, now you're just angry you don't have as much toast.
>Fucking fat cunt.
>Suddenly, the little dude speaks up with an inquisitive tone in his childlike voice.
>"m-mphs spych by the wah, wts oor naym?"
>Okay, that was a little funny, but ufookinwotm8?
>You giggle a little before taking a bite of your own slice and answering his apparent question.
"Wanna try that again little buddy? I don't speak greedy cunt."

>>29562241
>He sharply swallows his food, a look of discomfort flashes across his face with a blush both out of embarrassment, and on account of that toast being nowhere near well chewed enough to go down.
>"Oh.. *cough*.. Sorry. My name is Spike, what's your name? When we met you were kinda' well.. You know.."
"Fucking dying, no?"
>"That's one way of putting it I guess! So what's your name? We don't get many other dragons around Ponyville, so I'm pretty excited to get to know you! Twilight's on royal duty in the Crystal Empire right now, she had to leave first thing morning, so you won't get chance to meet her until next week."
>Well, this is awkward, but oddly explains an awful lot at the same time.
>Big fancy room, crystal building, nice ass furniture, you're in a palace of some sort.
>Mental note; Steal their bathtowels and bathrobes if they have any.
>Dude, that's fucked up, these people saved your life.
"Uh, well, about that, I'm a bit of a daze- Woah, Woah, Woah, hold the fucking phone - did you just say dragon?"
>"Daze, huh? That's a weird name, and uh-huh, dragon. What did you think you were? A pony?"
>Well, well, well, you did half-guess this last night if your now jumbled-to-shit memory serves you well.
>That's pretty badass either way.
>You could have made a fortune off of this back home, pimping yourself out at furcons and shit.
>Fucking gross. Maybe not.

>>29562252
"No, no you fucking idiot I meant that I'm confused, my name isn- Ah, fuck, know what, nevermind. Sure, nice to meet you too, Steve."
>"Spike"
"Yeah, yeah, whatever. So what is this place? Ponyville? Where's that?"
>"Uh, mid Equestria, what makes you ask?"
>Oh, no reason, just that I fell from the fucking sky and used to be a hairless clothes wearing ape.
>Right then, it just sinks in, and you begin to feel incredibly concerned about your current situation.
>Wherever you are, you're pretty far away from home, and because you have no idea how the fuck you ended up here, how the fuck are you going to find a way back?
>This is bad, very fucking bad in fact.
"Because I'm from somewhere very, very, /very/ far away from here."
>"Oh, well.. Are you going to be in town for long?"
"Considering I have absolutely no reference as to where the fuck I am, how I got here, and how I ended up like /this/, I don't have much choice really, so yeah, you could say that I might be in town for a fucking while"
>Wewlad, you needed to get that off of your chest.
>You feel tears of anger and sadness building in your eyes as everything just hits you. You're in an alien land, know nobody, and the worst part? You don't remember shit-all about where you come from aside from scattered memories that are forever fading.
>"O-oh.. I'm sorry.."
>Spike gives you a genuine look of concern and sympathy upon hearing your development before his little smile drops into a frown.
>Wow, you're a bitch. It's not his fault. Or you're pretty sure it's not anyway.
>Maybe you came off a little strong there, this nigga did make you some breakfast and keep a roof over your sorry ass for the night while making sure you didn't fucking bleed to death in his hallway.
>Fuck it.

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>>29562256
>You reach out and pat him on his shoulder before lifting his chin up and looking him in the eyes.
"Look, sorry little dude, I've just had a rough time of it lately. Things are a bit weird for me right now, that's all."
>His face appears to brighten up at this, and he gives you a warm smile.
>"It's OK Daze, don't worry about it, I understand. I also kinda' washed your clothes as well, so if you want to wear them, I've folded them and put them in that dresser over there. We can go for a walk around town when you're ready so you can meet some of the locals if you're going to be living here for a while. You know, if you want to, of course?"
>What a fucking bro. Marty was always more the type to vomit on your stuff, or just outright break shit to piss you off.
>Fucking Marty.
>This guy here has known you for five minutes and he's already cleaning for you and feeding you and shit, the least you can do is go along with what he wants you to do. Might even prove to be useful.
"That sounds cool little man, I'll give you a shout when I'm sorted out and prettied up so we can get going, but I'm going to need some time to take everything in if that's alright."
>He hums a little tune to himself as he starts to gather up a few pieces of stray cloth from your bedside table that have obviously been used to fix your sorry ass up before he starts to head out of the door at the bottom of the room.

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>>29562275
>"Yeah, sure! Take your time! No rush at all."
”Oh, and uh.. Spike?"
>"Mhm, Daze?"
"Thanks.. For all of well.. This. I'd probably be dead if it wasn't for you and your uh.. Twilight was it? Taking me in last night."
>"Don't worry about it, it's no big deal, that's what friends are for, right?"
>He smiles at you before closing the door and heading off out of the room and down a hallway.
>Things are starting to get interesting.
>....

That's all for tonight - I tried to make it a little bit longer in order to make up for not writing last night. As always; Feedback, criticism, praise, etc is always welcomed, encouraged, and appreciated.

I really hope that these threads don't die out. We have some really cool content creators here, and I'd hate for them to go quiet.

Sorry, got busy!

>>29562749

Long day of running cameras and playing against Brago stax, I might knock out some more of The Gold Standard before i pass out though.

>>29562294
Really enjoying it so far. The character interaction is great. I keked multiple times, plus I'm an uncultured American swine so reading the presumably British slang makes it even funnier to me. (In a good way)

>>29557403
>You can't remember your name.
>Your human name.
>Your male name.
>Your real name.
>It's gone, not in your head.
>Other details of your past life are clear as day, but that is gone.
>Your mind only recognizes Khoa now.
>Which is not good!
>What if this continues?
>What if you're slowly becoming a resident of Ponyville?
>You shudder a little, wondering if you were a character already.
>Are you on the show?
>Questions upon questions.
>You sigh a little, until you figure out this name thing, relaxing would have to take a little break.
>You see a pony approaching you, Fluttershy.
F: "I thought I would find y-you here!"
K: "Y-yeah, right here..."
F: "You p-probably are wondering where I've been disappearing to..."
>Not really the time to focus on this, but she has been going off a lot lately. Like the morning you wanted to start journaling.
>She's been off somewhere.
F: "I have an... interesting friend."
K: "A friend...?"
F: "He's not very popular, but he's been wanting to m-meet you...."
>Wait a second.
>"He"?
>It can't be.
K: "What are they l-like?"
F: "Ah, um... very eccentric?"
>It is isn't it?
F: "Their name is D-Discord."
>You have no idea how to feel.
>Discord was always awesome to you, yeah.
>But now they're /real/.
>This might not end well.
F: "I mentioned your memory issue and they might can help... he's not very t-trustworthy but he listens to me..."
>Your memory issue.
>For once, that sounds like a real issue."
K: "Sounds like I have a friend to make, eh? Just tell me when!"
>Much to your dismay she says.
F: "H-he's not too far off!"
>Oh boy.

>>29563378
It's happening

>>29563378
>enlisting chaos to try and return order to someone.
Should go well.

This is the start of Chapter 2: Separation.
>You awoke to song, a seeping tune of…
>Sorrow?
>”Melancholy.”
>Yes, it was melancholic and nostalgic.
>Which was strange, because you’d never heard any sort of melody like it before, and you didn’t understand a single word that was being sung.
>But you could picture the owner of the voice just from her timbre, a dusky, hidden beauty.
>Your eyes cracked open slowly and you stared around, searching for the singer.
>The ward was as bright as yesterday morning, all but one corner.
>To your left you could see a shadow cast by nothing, onto the silhouette of a slender mare.
>The singing stopped.
>It was jarring, the sudden silence combined with the unexplained darkness.
>The mare was wrapped completely in the umbra of the shadow, you couldn’t make out if she was looking at you or not.
>Your brow furrowed with concern, were you about to be attacked?
>Was this some sort of siren come to steal you away?
“Good morning Columba.”
>You nearly jumped out of your scales, wrenching your head around to the right.
>Celestia, it was Princess Celestia, smiling and radiant as ever.
>Just as quick, you wrenched your head back to the left.
>”Princess! There’s a-“
>The shadow and the mare were both gone.
>This was the first time you’d ever felt truly unnerved here in Equestria.
>That shadow… It just didn’t match up, it was like a puzzle piece from the wrong set.
“Is something the matter youngling?”
>You slowed yourself down a little and took a few deep breaths.
>It had been a long night, you’d been through a life or death experience.
>Chances were that that had been a waking hallucination, maybe even a dream.
>You smiled at Princess Celestia.

>>29563923
>”Nothing, just a dream.”
>You swore you saw a glimmer of magic in Celestia’s eyes for a moment there, but it was gone before you could be sure.
>Celestia nodded.
“I see. And I see you’re more than ready to leave the ward.”
>Your smile turned up into a grin, sharp canines jutting.
>”I can’t wait.”
“Let us walk, we can get breakfast on the way up to my quarters.”
>You jumped out of bed, your claws clicking against the wood floor.
>With a big yawn, you stretched your arms out and up as high as you could reach, feeling your muscles stretch and warm up.
>Then you knelt down into a squat, tensing and testing your thighs.
>Celestia looked pretty surprised, seeing your little routine, happy, but surprised.
“You’re astoundingly diligent, Columba. And your resilience shows as well, I don’t know any ponies, dragons, griffins or even minotaurs who could jump out of bed with such energy after being so severely poisoned by magic.”
>You shrugged and stood up slowly, still grinning.
>”I had a good doctor.”
>Princess Celestia giggled, holding her fore hoof up to her mouth.
“Oh come on then, I’ll move your gems ahead for you.”
>With a quick flash of magic, the gems you’d left on the table were gone, presumably moved up to Princess Celestia’s room.
>You walked after Celestia at a brisk pace, right out the door alongside her.
>The hallway was exactly what you expected, bright and luxurious.
>Marble floors stretched on further than your eyes could see, every inch of them was polished to a mirror finish.
>The entire right side of the hall was lined with stained glass windows, depicting what looked like scenes from myth.
>Brass studded double doors were interspersed along the left side, opening every now and then for a pony to trot through.
>This was nice and all, but you didn’t really have too much time to bask in the sights.
>Your entire face blushed a deep crimson.

>>29563926
>You were naked, and painfully aware of it.
>There were at least thirty ponies milling around you, staring at you, waving at you, saying hello.
>Not to mention the two armored guards by the door that were probably staring at your ass right now.
>You’d been expecting this sort of thing, but it was still so strange, seeing loads of little ponies just walking and talking like it was nothing.
>You even saw plenty of other creatures too, there was a clutch of griffins sitting in a corner pouring over some scroll, a donkey was staring at you almost defiantly to your left and a red, quadrupedal dragon about three times your size walked right past you and up the hall.
>…Naked. You were naked, and you hadn’t even taken one step yet.
>Your hands itched to cover yourself, but you held them to your sides.
>Your tail twitched back and forth, almost slapping one of the guards behind you.
>Relax, you needed to relax a little.
>At least enough to keep moving.
>You sucked down air, and forcefully breathed out through your snout in a puff of fog.
>Princess Celestia hadn’t stopped, and was trotting away from you to the left.
>Blushing even harder, you chased after her with your head down, claws scraping on the marble.
>You could feel eyes on you like little probing fingers, taking in your nakedness.
>You swore every little conversation fragment you caught was about you.
”…walking around like that…”
“Embarrassing, she really just had to go ahead and…”
“…and then you get dragons like that one, who…”
>The palace halls seemed to go on forever, but it had really only been five minutes, two left turns, a set of stairs and one right turn before you and Princess Celestia reached the cafeteria.
>Five minutes straight of trying to walk without bouncing your boobs around.
>You shuddered, following Celestia through an especially large red pair of doors, expecting another huge crowd.
>”Ahhhh…”
>The room inside was big and blessedly empty.

>>29563927
>Rough-hewn wooden tables and benches were pushed up against the walls, leaving a clear path to the kitchen entrance at the other end of the cafeteria.
>Your blush faded and your arms went limp, you were finally able to relax again.
>Celestia turned around to look you in the eyes, smiling playfully.
>Your eyes narrowed suspiciously.
>If she was relishing in leading you around the castle naked like this…
>Princess Celestia rolled her eyes.
“We took the most direct route possible, I promise. Now, what would you like to eat?”
>You tucked your suspicions away for now, putting your mind where it really mattered.
>Food.
>Simple, staple breakfast foods came to mind at first.
>But then you remembered you were dining in a palace, and you threw all of that nonsense out instantly with a big grin.
>”I’ll get a raw Arctic Char, a solid 8 pounder, no head, with one fresh pearl and a tall glass of Sunny- Sorry. Orange juice.”
>Celestia nodded, and trotted off to the kitchen with your order.

Done for tonight, g'night dragonbros.

>>29563930
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/YUgjpmUL

>>29561196
im here, had some stuff going on,,hopefully will get a few more things up for tonight

>>29562294
Good stuff. You've got a strong, vulgar voice to your writing, really accentuates Daze and her spunky speech. I can see you're improving or at least working in a nice groove the more you write.

>I am not blind or deaf. I see the dirty looks. I hear the giggles and the muttered "is that a man or a woman." They make me want to slice my face off with a razor. There's a reason that the old cliché about being trans is being "a [y] trapped in an [x] body". I am trapped in this ugly 5'11" frame of meat and bone. I cannot change that. Specifically, I say that "I" am trapped because, again, I am my mind, my brain. My body & my chromosomes do not define my gender. Only my mind does, or can.

Hmm so if in my mind I'm a 2-year-old Africa-American dragon and someone comes up to me and calls me "sir" should that make me want to slice my face off with a razor? Or should I understand that people are reacting to the way I look because they can't see what I am in my mind?

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>>29557573
>>29561196
>>29563937
let me know what needs to be fixed/tweaked on her

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>>29564092
B-based drawfriend.

>>29564089
>I am trapped in this ugly 5'11" frame of meat and bone. I cannot change that.
so the problem isn't that he's male, it's that he's ugly
well boo fucking hoo, most ugly people don't think chopping off their dick and popping estrogen pills like candy will fix that, they just save money for surgery to fix their face or kill themselves

>>29564092
I like this. I like this a lot.

>>29564092
I'd fuck her.

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>>29562294
I had a chuckle

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>>29564089
>my chromosomes do not define my gender. Only my mind does, or can.
Those are some bomb-ass delusions.
People like those should be put into mental institutions for their own good, before they hurt themselves.

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>>29556278
>>29561196
>>29564092

>>29564500
top unf

>>29564500
HANDLEBARS

Which stories would recommend reading first? Dragons are hot.

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slowly chipping at that group pic,,

>>29564695
>Spike's_harem.png

>>29564710
Daze doesn't look very interested.

>>29564714
Well someone has to be the responsible one while the others busy themselves with seducing the only male dragon in Ponyville.
She just isn't interested in fighting for him, waiting instead for the perfect moment to get Spike alone and lewd him to her heart's content, away from the others.

>>29564500
I'd fuck it

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>>29564092
child
bearing
hips

very nice

>>29563378
>You were trying to psych yourself up for this little meeting, but in all brutal honesty you were terrified.
>Discord was so...
>Discord.
>That was about the most apt way to describe him.
>But here you were, walking towards him.
>At least Fluttershy was with you.
F: "He's right past these trees! If anything comes up, yell for me.
>Oh god no.
K: "S-sounds like a plan."
>If you aren't already dead you're going to did.
>With a deep breath, you cowardly crept into where he was.
>They were just lounging there, a big smirk on their face.
>They looked great in person, but still that did not help your nerves.
D: "Why hello Khoa."
>You wave in reply to their overly happy voice.
D: "Oh don't be shy! I'm quite certain you only forgot your name, not how to speak!"
>"Wait what the FUCK?"
K: "H-huh...?"
>Discord laughs heartily, reaching over just to pay your head.
D: "You came here, and right off the bat started lying to those around here! I'm just helping you not be a liar. Aren't I so noble?"
K: "Wh-why?!"
D: "Because I can! That's all the excuse I need to offer a runt like you!"
K: "Why did you... o-open my window?"
>Discord raises an eyebrow.
D: "What window?"
K: "Don't p-play coy! You did this to me!"
D: "All /I've/ done so far is remove one small memory. I'm proud of my work, not that of others!"
>You went to argue that, but it did make sense, in a way.
D: "But anyways, shall we get to the actual matter at hand?"
>With a sigh, you nod.
D: "You have two sets of memories, one from before and your new ones here, yes?"
>You nod again, and Discord leans in even closer.
D: "Isn't one enough Khoa? Not even I have two sets of memories!"
>This can't be happening.
D: "So, each experience you have here you lose an old memory. I'll count experiences as... let's say moments of any personal or societal reference, is that fair?"
>You find yourself unable to move as he slowly pushes your head up and down.
D: "Good! Now onto Option B!"

>>29563317
>>29564016
>>29564391
Really glad that you guys are enjoying it so far - as for the vulgar language; I incorporated that because of where Daze originates from. She's (pretty obviously) British as one Anon noticed, and I was going for that 70's punk-girl vibe. Y'know, hard exterior, but with a good heart.
>>29564541
>>29564537
[Worried Laughter]
>>29564552
I know I'm biased, but I'd say probably mage's.

It has nice pacing, and it's a really good story to read if you're wanting to get into these threads. We don't really have any /bad/ writefags actually. I haven't read a story here that I don't like so far, and people seem to like my stuff as well, so hey. Some other Anon might be able to give you the quick run-down on the personality type of each girl if you ask nicely.
>>29564714
I think that fits her character perfectly. She ain't really the type to be very interested in anyone. Or at least that's how I'm writing her anyway.
>>29564695
Based drawfriend.

>>29564944
I have to agree with Mage being the starting point. That's what pushed me, a newfag to mlp all together, to actually write here. Well written and fun to read.


Though I will also shamelessly plug The Gold Standard because I'm petty and have no soul. Apparently people have liked it so far (Which is still kind of surprising) but hey, maybe you will too.

>>29564092
Beautiful. Nothing needs tweaking that I can see.

>>29564695
Hype as hell.

>>29564954
Nothing wrong with self-plugging Kolaghan, I can whore myself out with the best of em'.
>>29564092
She's really beautiful, not gonna' lie.

>>29564092
>>29564500
Putting Tonic to shame...at least she has the best horns???

>>29564695
This is going to be so kick ass.

>>29564944
>>29564954
Awe shucks, I try! If only I could actually update with more than 2 or 3 greens at a time I might get somewhere.

>>29564898
K: "Option B...?"
D: "But of course! Why not make things more interesting?"
>You had this awful feeling deep inside you.
>The first option was awful enough.
>Losing yourself just for doing, well anything.
>It made you want to throw up.
>You already can't remember your name and that was shocking enough.
>At what point would you even recognize who you were any more?
K: "Let's hear it then..."
D: "Wonderful! You see, in your situation, you're new to this little community, a complete unknown! Accurate, yes?"
>Another forced nod, courtesy of Discord.
D: "I want you to be my little assistant! Do three easy tasks and I'll never toy with your memories again!"
>Well, that probably won't end well for you, but what can you do at this point?
K: "Will I know these tasks in advance?"
>Discord simply laughs.
>It was worth a shot.
D: "I /probably/ won't make you do anything you'll wind up regretting!"
K: "We both know this probably won't end well for me."
D: "Doesn't that make things all the more interesting?"
K: "I suppose you could call it that."
>Discord moves back a bit, obviously satisfied.
D: "Now then, I assume we should make our little arrangement official, yes?"
>A contract and quill materialized out of thin air.
>The first thing you do is read it over.
K: "Um... this says lifelong servitude."
>The contract burns up almost as fast as it appeared.
D: "Looks like I've got myself a smart one! This should be very interesting! I'm honestly rather excited with this whole deal!"
>The real contract appeared, and you begrudgingly signed it.
>It's going to be hard to investigate with Discord getting three favors from you.
>But it'd be a lot harder if you couldn't even remember what you're investigating.
>Besides, maybe, just maybe he'll let slip some information about you.
>At this point that's about the best silver lining you've got.
>You're just hoping you're missing one right now.

>>29565661
D: "Looks like we're done here!"
K: "Wait!"
>Discord looked over at you again, curious.
D: "Did we have more to discuss? This is normally where you would slowly hobble out, choking back tears!"
K: "Do you... do you know what happened to me?"
>Discord scratched his chin a little, looking up.
D: "I suppose I might know something about your peculiar circumstances."
>Your heart skipped a beat.
>You had a feeling he knew something, even if he wasn't involved.
D: "You want to know, yes?"
>That smirk came back again, he was enjoying this more than you'd like.
>You give a quick nod, this time voluntary.
D: "Then we'd best get along! That's some heavy information, I just can't give that to any old employee!"
>Just to accent that, you suddenly found yourself in a maid uniform.
K: "I get the point Discord. You're powerful and weird! And probably know all sorts of things just based on what you've seen of my mind. But I am not wearing this."
D: "Of course not! Not in town of course. But I think it gives your position a more professional look for our private meetings!"
>He's doing this to fuck with you.
>Probably trying to dig at you not being male anymore.
>He'll probably get bored and forget this outfit even is a thing.
>Right?
D: "Humor me and I can eagerly humor you! It's not that hard Khoa! I'm positive you will know where that tape went!"
>Dammit he's pulling you in.
>You want this.
>You need this.
K: "Then... let's be friends."
D: "It's not that easy! We need to bond! Maybe once you've earned the rights to your memories we can talk."
>So close, yet so far.
>You're standing in a dress, as a dragoness, in the woods, talking to the embodiment of disharmony trying to be his "friend" and to protect your memories.
>You owe them three very vague tasks, that could be just about anything.
>You're going to have to do his bidding no matter what.
>And you have to do more to actually learn anything.
>He must be doing his job right.
>Because this feels like fucking chaos.

Recitifed a few mistakes with the thread starter. Let me know if I need to fix anything, and I'll get on it ASAP; http://pastebin.com/tXGYPirv

>>29566223
Looks good, maybe change Unfinished to In Progress though.

>>29566245
On it - I was debating creating two sections for unfinished stuff, and active WIP stuff, but I'm not too sure which ones are still being worked on and which ones aren't. Should be OK anyway. If the thread gets a little bigger, I'll move all of the story links to one organised pastebin if someone wants me to in order to avoid clogging up the OP.

>Discord and Twilight continue their back and forth, but you're already walking out the door with your purchase.
>Might as well lead the charge. If you don't, you'd be there for hours.
>The librarian will thank you, it's been a pretty exciting day for her.
>She was damn near catatonic the last time you glanced her way.
>Spike follows you outside shortly after.
>S: "Thanks, I was wondering when we were going to leave."
>You look back at him but he still has his eyes elsewhere.
>You think about fucking with him a little.
>You are armed with this new information after all.
>Just then you feel a pit in your stomach.
>This mating cycle thing is going to happen to you just like it's happening to him.
>Suddenly you don't feel like joking about it anymore.
>It's starting for him. Presumably for the first time, at least that's how Twilight made it seem.
>When is it gonna start for you?
>Has it already started?
>What is it going to feel like?
>Will you be able to control yourself?
>What if you get pregnant?!
>No. don't think about that.
>Like Twilight said, you'll have friends to help you. You'll be fine.
>You're about to explode when Twilight and Discord bring you back to reality with their continued bickering outside the library.
>The sight of it brings a smile to your face and gives you some hope.
>You get a little ridiculous when you're left alone with your thoughts.
>It's not like you're a werewolf, you'll be able to control yourself.
>Focus on your new life, don't worry so much.

>>29566063
>You soon left the little clearing, thankfully the outfit left too.
>You've probably never been so glad to be nude.
>Fluttershy was waiting for you, a big smile on her face.
F: "They weren't too abrasive were they?"
>Causing drama probably wouldn't work out too well for you right now, so as much as you wanted to say he was being awful...
K: "It went... relatively well"
>You didn't.
>The two of you walked back together.
F: "Any luck with your memories?"
K: "He knows something, but... needs time to work on it."
>You swear you can see Discord give you a thumbs up from the corner of your eye.
F: "Oh! That's good! It makes me happy to see him exercise some good will for once."
>"Good will."
>You'd hate to see their bad will then.
>After a while you were back home, but you didn't exactly just want to sit around right now.
>So you went into town.
>You'd gotten a lot better at navigating the town.
>No more freak outs in the middle of the street thankfully.
>Now all you had to worry about was a god-like being extorting you with hints and memories!
>You really have made no progress.
>Your plans for the rest of the day had mostly been to walk around until you got your Discord issues off your mind.
>Although, something did come to mind while you were walking around.
>Your wings.
>They were definitely there, as small as they were.
>It made you wonder if they had any function.
>"Sure, I got into this whole issue by plummeting through the air, let's try it again for /fun/."
>But, now you were very curious.
>Plus either flying or pain could get your mind off of Discord.
>So, you went to find a hill.

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>dragon pornfics general
why is this on /mlp/ and not /trash/?

>>29566744
Not even going to insult the writefags directly? Oh I feel so honored! Thank you so much! You've truly blessed me this fine day. Shall I compose a sonnet to your mercy?

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>>29566744
>Pornfics
Try reading some of the stories Anon, most of them aren't pornfics ~ I know for sure mine ain't. They're just dragons causing shenanigans in and around various parts of Equestria.
>>29566771
Pic related. Don't let it bother you, Kola. You keep writing your story.

>>29566744
all of /mlp/ belongs in /trash/
>>29566830
>most of them aren't pornfics
*notices ur bulge*

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>>29566830
Well, the OP surely makes it sound like dragon pornfics general.

>You are more interested in exploring your new body
>With the kick ass body of a dragoness
>The quest for the dragon D

>>29566771
Wew, it's rare I see such a silly tantrum. Calm down whiny faggot.

>>29566830
I'm not bothered per say, more disappointed! If you're going to take the effort to insult someone, at least make it sting, right?

At least make the wasted space have some weight to it.

>>29566871
>You are more interested in exploring your new body and the environment first.
>and the environment first.
Missed that bit. "Exploring your new body" isn't necessarily sexual m8, but I do see how it could be interpreted that way.

Either way, feel free to either stick around if you wanna' try some dragon, or just hide us and move along if you don't. I get that this sorta' thread isn't for everyone.
>>29566852
>all of /mlp/ belongs in /trash/
Also, this.
>>29566883
Welcome to /mlp/.

>>29566626
>The little 'dinner party' wasn't very eventful.
>It was interesting seeing all of these characters in one place interacting with one another.
>Sunburst was rather excited to see you.
>Glimmer had told him about you while they caught up, and he relished the opportunity to study a mature dragon without his life being at risk.
>Which, the latter may not be the case depending on what about you he decides to 'study'...
>In all honesty though, he was a pretty cool guy, and very knowledgeable on many subjects.
>You enjoy surrounding yourself with- as Dash would call them- 'eggheads.'
>Being able to actually have intelligent conversations is nice.
>All of your friends back home were...well, they weren't eggheads let's say that much.
>Twilight had a harder time enjoying the party, she was too busy keeping an eye on Discord.
>The only feats of magic that he performed were harmless ones like passing the different dishes by making them walk.
>Otherwise, he was on his best behavior. Probably because he could see what it was doing to Twilight. He created chaos by not creating chaos.
>The time Discord spent away from his antics he spent conversing with Sunburst, Glimmer and you.
>He had been sitting next to you, and looking across the table at Spike, you could tell he was bothered.
>Spike was still avoiding your gaze, but the amount of time you spent with Discord was evidently getting to him.
>It's very strange seeing him act this way. You'd think he's gotten over the whole dress thing by now.
>Come to think of it, Twilight was acting weird too.
>Shit, maybe they had a talk about Spike's new markings while you were buying your books.

Might not get an update in tonight - I'll try, but I can't promise anything. Gonna' be super busy tomorrow.

>>29567470
>Well this certainly explains a few things.
>You didn't think Twilight would actually talk to him yet!
>Knowing her, she probably had a list for that somewhere. You thought she would just wait until she had it!
>Wait...did she have it?
>Just how prepared is she for everything?
>So Spike has been walking around with the same pit in his stomach that you had.
>Now there's this tension between you.
>You both know what's happening but neither of you acknowledge it.
>You fuck with him a lot, but you don't want this experience to drive you apart.
>You resolve to go on normally. It might drive Spike crazy, but you aren't going to let this keep you from hanging out with him.
>What were you thinking about before? Oh yeah, dinner.
>Princess Celestia and Luna left before dinner was ready.
>Not that you're complaining, you can't really look at them the same way anymore.
>Cadence and Shining armor just kinda sat awkwardly while Twilight led an inquisition on every little magical act Discord performed.
>You'll definitely have to visit the Crystal Empire again sometime.
>But now you sit in your guest room at the Crystal Palace.
>It's not too different from your room back in Ponyville, complete with crystal walls.
>What /is/ different, however is the view from your desk.
>The desk your sitting at is positioned looking out the window.
>By now the moon is high in the sky, and the silver light of the moon and dancing fire of the torches scattered throughout the city makes for quite the light show when it reflects off of the crystal everything.
>It almost shines as bright as it does during the day.
>You were planning on reading a bit more, but as soon as you sat down and glanced out the window you found yourself staring out into the night with your hand on your cheek just thinking about the day's events.

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>>29566744
>>29566852

>>29568181
>The spell that the city has on you breaks, and you stare down at the pile of books in front of you.
>You move your hand to open one of the books, but as soon as your hand makes contact you become aware of how heavy your eyelids are.
>You draw your arms back and place them at the edge of the desk.
>You push yourself up from the desk and make your way to the bed where you plop down onto it with a pomf.
>As you lay staring up at the ceiling you feel like something's off.
>Oh yeah, you're still wearing your dress. It's probably not meant for sleeping in.
>Again, you get up and walk to the middle of the room where you strip off the dress.
>It's a bit of a struggle, but as soon as
You get the dress off you let out an involuntary ragged sigh as you exhale a breath you didn't know you were holding in.
>God damn that thing is tight. It almost makes you feel fat when you take it off.
>You look into a vanity mirror that's attached to a dresser across from your bed.
>Yep, still as hot as ever. Can we get a side view?
>You turn to the side and strike a pose- but what's this?
>Your finger guns will have to wait...there's something on your side.
>You walk closer to the mirror to examine the spot in the low light the moon provides.
>That's what you thought...an orange spot...

Hope you enjoyed this update. I pushed myself to write more than I usually do, even if it's still a piss poor excuse for an update. No spoilers, but this night at the crystal palace is gonna be busy

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Had an idea for a one-shot story. Absolutely not in the canon for anything, just a little humorous thing. Anybody interested?

>>29568536
I don't see why not.

>>29568536
Very, post away.

Here it is! "A Situation" it might suck or make you laugh, I dunno!

>You are Princess Celestia.
>Recent times have been rather peaceful, all things considered.
>You've actually had some time to just relax for a little while.
>However, you just knew this morning would be different.
>You could feel it.
>Almost on cue, a stallion rushed in, breathing heavily.
C: "Is something the matter?"
RS: "Your... Highness. There's... been another sighting.
>Your eyes widen.
>Another one?
>There's been so many recently, it was starting to alarm you.
>The first was innocent enough, a funny little happening.
>Then more started to come.
>You could tell it was affecting the general population.
>Nobody knew what was going on, they could only watch as it happened.
>Twilight Sparkle had even been forced to move Spike into hiding after both threats and advanced.
>You dismiss the concerned guard, walking to the balcony.
>You look over your kingdom, fear in your eyes.
>How many will there be?
>How many dragons?
>Almost all of them were female and very secretive about their pasts.
>Was this some kind of invasion?
>The influence of Discord?
>You shudder at the possibilities.
>Even you have gotten involved in the dragon matters.
>At least two currently lived in the palace.
>Granted, you may have had a hand in bringing one-
>No!
>You did not cause this.
>But some eldritch, bizarre force must have.
>But what?
>What could make so many dragons appear here?
>You would have to prepare yourself for the worst.
>A single tear rolled down your face.
>You must stay strong.
>You must find the explanation for these dragons.
>Before even more appear...
>You've seen them all, at least from afar.
>Each stranger than the last.
>Tall ones, small ones, the rare male one...
>Yet never once have you seen them together.
>Mysteries upon mysteries it seems.
>This draconian menace was wearing you thin.
>But, as princess, you must persist.
>As you look down, a dragon waves at you shyly.
>That /fiend/.
>It never ends.

>>29568860
That was me by the way. No clue where my name went!

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>>29557011
>people are still linking my Draganon story
Should I finish that? It was my favourite but I've not been actively writing since the original prompt thread (and the bimbo tjreads) disappeared.

>>29569159
Fucking yes. Please. I've been waiting for this. These threads are finally starting to pick up some steam, thank God.

We need all the writefags and drawfags we can get right now in order to draw more people in, and you're a very good one at that.

Bump for later writefaggortry

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Bumpin' before bed. Should be turning out part 4 of Daze's story tomorrow night with any luck. Would have gotten it done tonight, but I need to catch up on my beauty sleep.

Stay fresh, dragonthread. Looking forward to seeing the group picture from drawfriend. I feel as though a lot of people will be encouraged and inspired to write if they see the colourful array of characters we have at our disposal, and it may even inspire a few of them to think up some new dragons for the thread.

G'night, love you.

>>29568860
It's like Tarkir. Ugin just forming dragons out of nowhere

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>tfw Sir Booplesnoot Von Fluffytufts II is kill
>tfw it's for real this time
>tfw spike will never be teased out of his mind by Selena
Fuck I miss that glorious bastard. He wasn't even in the last thread. Sleep tight my sweet prince.

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Who is your favorite dragon, /dtg/?

>>29571211
Anonymous

>>29571211
Anonymous the Stale from Woofr's story in the old dragonanon thread. Motherfucker banged like 10 gryphon whores in one sitting.

>>29571113
>>29571211
Rip in kill Selenia, she was my inspiration to write.

>>29571643
RIP in piss, forever miss. F

>>29571211
Of all the current dragons we have? Tonic is my favorite.

Haven't read all the finished stuff so I cant give an overall statement on best Dragon.

>>29571211
punki's Daze. Stylin', and similar to Selenia personality-wise.

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Continuing from the end of
http://pastebin.com/U5q2gcBr

>Celestia walks along, further away from the village, heading towards a mountain range in the distance
>Surely she wasn't going to walk all the way to the peaks, but she marched doggedly on without speaking
>The wide trail through the forest left by your enormous steps and swinging tail was followed by dozens of gryphons
>All of them were painted in dizzying arrays of runes and designs, many sang as they walked along with you
>The guards-
>'Dragonslayers' a whisper tickled through your mind
>The Dragonslayers kept the avian people back a fair distance from you but seemed more concerned for the safety of their princess, always leaving a half dozen guards around her person
>You did your best to pointedly ignore them, instead absorbing yourself with reflection
>After finding that you hadn't been dreaming on the first day, one thought had been slowly consuming you
>How?
>How did you come to be in Equestria? How were you inhabiting the body of a dragon?
>How were you going to get back home?
>Perhaps Celestia had some or all of the answers, perhaps she had none
>But first you needed to find the answer to a more pressing question
>How were you going to communicate with her?
>Well you are a magical, mythical beast, and even if you're incapable of speaking you must be able to 'talk' in some way
>Another word rumbles through your consciousness and a force presses down on your head
>'Mind'
>As quickly as it comes, the feeling is gone but the word itself lingers
>You recall your earlier thought as Celestia had glared at Tremble
>Yes, perhaps that would be the way, you are a being of magic as well now
>You focus on trying to push your mind “outwards” from your head
>Or more specifically, above it to the little weight nestled among your crown of horns
>You feel the little pony on your head shifting around

>>29572040
>You try and sharpen your mind towards that sensation, and you hear a little gasp
>Finally, you're rewarded with a glimpse inside her mind
>It's a busy place, and right now full of fear and...pain?
>Startled by the sudden realization, you think less of a sharp focus and more of a gentle embrace
>Her pain lessens a great deal, and she stops shifting, but you hear her panting as though exhausted by the experience
>Suddenly it dawns on you
>How do you plan to talk like this?
>With all the thoughts that are racing through both yours and her mind, any words would likely be jumbled
>But you can use feelings perhaps, or visions?
>With nothing to lose, you try and impress an image of you shaking her hoof
>A great deal of confusion emanates from her mind, and you realize you'd given her an image of the human you shaking her hoof
>You try again, this time with a vision of a smaller version of the dragon you are performing the same action
>She speaks aloud from the top of your head, seeming quite distant to you
>”A-are you trying to communicate with me?”
>Over your new mental connection, you make the projection of yourself nod
>”Uh, well, I'm Tremble. I'm a seismologist and avithropologist. I'm the uh, the pony you saved from that hydra.”
>You snort out loud, you knew all this already, you weren't some old man dammit!
>Tremble lets out a little 'eep' as the wave of annoyance goes over the telepathic connection
>Is that how it works?
>You suppose it makes sense that it would send feelings as well, got to be more careful about that
>Now you send a calm feeling, and in return you feel a sense of relaxation
>A yell comes from below you and you notice one of the Dragonslayers blocking your path

>>29572047
>You were so distracted that now your foot is hanging just above him, but now stopped
>Celestia's voice echoes up from the woods below you, sounding far louder than any normal yelling could even be
>”We're here, creature. Let my subject down.”
>While it irks you on some strange level to follow the orders of a pony, you lower your head under the trees and rest it next to the princess
>Her personal guards have their lances leveled at your face, you notice
>As if you even wanted to attack her
>That rank stench hasn't disappeared from her though, it sits heavy in your nostrils
>You feel a pressure deep within rumbling, well under your conscious mind, but it begins to concern you
>But time enough for mysteries later, and you put the thoughts out of your mind
>Tremble clambers down your craggy face and bows before her princess, though Celestia just glares up at you
>”So, beast, do you know where we are?”
>You look around the little clearing you've found yourself in
>There are several rows of what look like long, overgrown trenches plowed across it
>Much of the greenery is short grasses and wildflowers, unlike many of the clearings you had passed though
>In fact, it reminded you a bit of the space you had awoken in
>But still, you slowly shake your head
>You didn't want to attempt to communicate to what may as well be a god with your mind quite yet
>The princess scoffs and makes a sweeping gesture with her hoof
>”Fifty years ago, this was an outpost of the Equestrian Expeditionary Force. They were guarding a group of scientists who were bound for the Wastes to the North of here.”
>She turns towards the dark line of mountains in the distance and her eyes narrow

>>29572058
>”Shortly after making camp here, all of them vanished. When an investigation team finally came, all that they found was a burned out crater. They asked the villagers, who all claimed ignorance of anything happening. But one of my cartographers noted a large elevation nearby that had not appeared on any maps before.”
>She twists back to face you, her brow creased with lines of anger
>”So monster, why did you feel it necessary to kill my ponies?”
>You squint your eyes at her, confused at the accusation
>You'd never harmed a pony, and you certainly hadn't done it fifty years ago
>Tremble stop kowtowing before Celestia and moves herself into the princess' sightline
>Her voice quivers as she speaks up
>”Y-your majesty, please pardon me but, I don't think this is the dragon that destroyed the expedition.”
>Celestia's glare turns from you onto Tremble, who makes like her namesake and begins shaking
>”And how, my little pony, would you know such a thing?”
>Tremble raises a shaking hoof to her forehead
>”W-well, I can...feel it in here. I d-don't know how, but I know he doesn't know what you're talking about.”

>>29572077
>Oh right, the mental link
>You look at Tremble's back and do your best to exude a calming warmth
>It's not easy, the subconscious rumble keeps growing the longer Celestia stares
>But the seismologist's shaking lessens and she stands up straighter
>Celestia's voice turns from angry to sounding abhorred
>”You mean you let this creature inside your mind?”
>Tremble shakes her head and scratches at the earth
>”No, he just started...communicating with me. While we were walking out here, I had this image of him in my mind. But I knew it wasn't from inside, somehow. And at first it was him, but wasn't you know, him? It's all...”
>She sits on the ground, rubbing her temples, and Celestia lays a hand on her withers, speaking in a voice holding a note of interest
>”So you can speak with him?”
>Tremble nods her head, slowly
>Celestia's face softens as a smile grows on her face
>”Well my little pony, and dragon, let us have a proper conversation.”

Well look who's back from the dead! I'll try to make daily updates, but I can't promise that it'll happen between school and work. Hope you lads enjoy!

Woo all good updates

>>29564695
>>29556278
>>29564500
>>29564092
Do you have any Tumblrs we could follow or something? This is some bomb ass art.

>>29572180
purple-blep on tumblr i tend to update more,

>>29572275
Some pretty good stuff fampai.

>>29572348
thanks senpai ,,this thread has been getting me thru some shitty times

>>29572086
I like you

>tfw you can't possibly compete with the speed and quality of other writefags.
Just fuck my shit up, senpai.

All shit aside; I'll try and get part 4 ready for tonight. If you have any suggestions for the story, please let me know.
>>29572086
Thank goodness you're back.
>>29571211
For me? Probably Khoa or Tonic. I like both of them equally but in different ways. You can't make me choose ;_;
>>29571890
Shucks, thanks Anon.
>>29572275
I'll hit you up with a Tumblr follow for sure, you should have self-plugged earlier friendo.

>>29572086
welcome back

>>29573534
Wah! I'm glad Khoa's one of your favorites! For curiosity sake, what are your reasons for liking her and Tonic?

>>29573604
With Tonic, I find her interaction with Spike and Discord feels natural and comical. I dunno' how else to explain it really - I find her to be a nicely balanced character. She's funny, cute, and serious, all at the same time.

With Khoa, I find her interesting because of how little we know about how she wound up in Equestria, and how little we know about her in general. Did she fall, or was she pushed? Y'know, the element of mystery and all that. I really like how you're slowly revealing more about her as time goes on as well. That, and she's super cute.

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>>29573534
i had once but it ended up a hassle have some twat having a go at me,, but that might of just been that draw thread

on i side note i cant draw tonic as a babe, ive drawn her as a cutie too much

>>29566691
>After some "experimenting, you have learned something.
>Equestria dirt tastes as bad as Earth dirt.
>As you lie there, regaining the air that was knocked out of you, you can only wonder what you expected.
>Even if you /can/ fly, you haven't even really flexed those wings before.
>And had absolutely no skill or technique to back yourself up too.
>There was one little upside though.
>You were too busy recognising how stupid you are to be afraid while falling.
>Does this mean you aren't traumatized?
>Or were you lucky this time?
>As you lie there at the base of a luckily small hill, you can't help but feel watched.
>Discord?
>No, he would have found this too humorous just to watch.
>Sighing, you roll over on to your back, and instantly see the culprit.
>There's a pony circling you in the sky.
>When they see you turn over, they fly down.
>You recognize them pretty much instantly.
>Because apparently you /only/ ever meet main characters.
>Rainbow Dash walks over, looking dowm at you and your dead pan face.
R: "Looks like you fell, eh?"
K: "Does it? That's odd. I was going for more of a 'plummeted' look."
>You haven't really had a chance to exercise sarcasm your whole time here, save for in your head.
>But you figured that if anybody wouldn't care, it would be them.
R: "So... we're you trying to... fly off that hill?"
K: "Actually, I was jumping into a pond but it walked away at the last second."
>This was part you just trying to get out your seething passive aggression, living with the nicest pony possible makes one bottle up frustration.
>But also in part you were actually pretty much checked out about now.
>Rainbow Dash chuckled.
R: "Either way, your form was- well nonexistent."
K: "Oh thank you Rainbow Dash, your wisdom knows no bounds."
R: "You know me?"
>Well shit.
>This is why you bottle this stuff up!
>Time to cover your ads.
K: "Doesn't... /everybody/ know who you are?"
>You can see her think for a second.
R: "Good answer!"

>>29573778
>You sit up, thankfully Rainbow Dash had something of an ego.
R: "So, who are /you/ exactly?"
K: "My name is Khoa. I've been here for a few weeks now, and I have retrograde amnesia."
>She cocks her head.
R: "What-tograde?"
K: "I can't remember anything before I got here."
>Recognition washes over her face.
R: "Well, that sucks."
>You nod, a simple but very true statement.
>Sucks even more considering you're fighting just to keep it a lie.
>The two of you sat there for a moment.
>You were honestly shocked she didn't go back to flying almost instantly.
>You guess that means you interest her.
R: "You seem to have forgotten flying along with most everything else."
K: "Pretty much. Oh well, I'm sure stubby legs are a far better mode of moving."
>You chuckle a little, honestly a little disappointed.
>Rainbow Dash seems to be thinking something over.
R: "Well, I'm not sure my flying equates to dragon flying, but I don't think it could hurt to try and help you relearn."
>Well you didn't expect that.
K: "Really?"
R: "Why not? You seem decent enough to hang out with. And flying is /pretty/ great."
K: "Me? Decent enough? I feel so giddy!"
>You both chuckle a little.
>This is nice.
>Save for feigning amnesia, you're pretty much being yourself.
>Fluttershy is sweet, but you have to censor yourself.
>Twilight feels more like the start of a study group than a close friend.
>You like her and all, but you feel so obligated to get something done when around her.
>But right now, even though you just met in the most embarrassing situation, you're having fun.
>Plus flying still sounds really appealing at some indescribable primordial level.
>And Discord hasn't started screwing witj you that much yet.
>Nope, no excuses!
>Not that you really wanted to find one.
K: "But, seriously, I think that could be fun."
R: "Great! Meet me here in... two days!"
K: "Any specific reason why then?"
>She shrugs.
>You both soon leave.
>You finally feel relaxed again.

Bumping, busy crying tears of joy at damnation and zendikar fetch reprints

>>29574391
Gotta get my hands on a damnation for my commander deck

>>29574597
Got to get a hold on the foil scalding tarn to sell and build a new commander deck

Also Mage, do you have a Discord? Just curious

>>29574391
wait battle for zendikar? or what is getting reprints? I started after that came out

>>29574623
The enemy color fetch lands (50 to 70 bucks) have been confirmed for MM17

>>29574609
I use a friend's discord, but I don't have one myself.

It's actually really funny because when zendikar came out I actually got the foil full art scalding tarn! It was right when it came out so the price hadn't dropped from 350 yet so I sold that shit faster than Gary Numan's music career

>>29574654
Gotcha. Was just wondering if we should set up a match on Cockatrice sometime through it!
And don't worry non- magic players I swear I'll get back to writing soon

>>29574671
I'll probably end up making one soon, although I've never done cockatrice because people say it's a pain in the ass.

And I'm about to start writing again soon as well

>>29574689
It's not much of a pain at all. More like playing paper magic really.

>>29574712
But now I can't blame my losses on not being able to buy the cards I need.

>>29568518
>You are Spike, and you are staring out at the same night sky, but in a different room of the palace.
>Using a chair as a stool, you stand at the window with your elbows resting on the windowsill.
>You've seen nights at the Crystal Empire before, but something about tonight made it all the better.
>Maybe it's because Tonic was on your mind.
>The way the torch light flickers off of the crystal reminds you of how Tonic's scales glisten in the daylight...or something.
>You never were that good with words.
>You're more literate than most, Twilight made sure of that.
>But she never told you what to do when a pretty girl comes around!
>Whenever Tonic is around, your words fail you. You feel like...what does Tonic call it?
>...Like you're being 'fucked' with?
>You barely spoke at dinner, you were too embarrassed by your spots, and their implications.
>Twilight gave you the talk when you were going to meet back up with Tonic, but she only told you about ponies.
>She wasn't able to gather enough information about dragons from the diagrams in that book she read.
>You don't imagine it would be too incredibly different...
>You have a hard time /not/ imagining it.
>Sometimes you get lost in thought, and it feels right, but then you come back to reality and it makes you feel guilty.
>Your thoughts are interrupted by a stirring behind you.
>You look back to see that Twilight had rolled over in her bed.
>How long have you been up thinking?
>You should probably get some sleep, you'll need it for tomorrow.
>Maybe you can show Tonic some more comics on the way home.
>You quietly make your way to your smaller bed beside Twilight's and try and get to sleep.

Hey friends, gonna start writing soon. Part 4 should be coming tonight, so stay tuned!

>>29574887
>You open your eyes to a blinding light.
>You cover your face with your hand and squint your eyes until they focus.
>It's a very sunny, cloudless day.
>You're sitting in a field, and your on a blanket with a basket and several different gems strewn about.
>Sitting across from you is Tonic, only she's wearing a longer white sun dress that flows gently in the soft wind.
>She's covering her mouth and giggling.
>To: "Tell me more about how you drove away those diamond dogs!"
"Well, I-"
>You choke up, something feels weird.
>You feel a deep desire well up from deep within you.
>Your eyes can her up and down hungrily.
>To: "Spike? What're you-"
>She gasps and covers her mouth with both hands dramatically.
>You look down to see that the orange spots on your scales are expanding.
>The orange ink blots spread across the entirety of your tail and arms and work their way across your whole body.
>Your mind starts going blank...did you get taller?
>You've felt this way before...that's means...
>you let out a primal roar and stare down at Tonic...fifty feet below you.
>To: "S-Spike! You're a monster!"
>You look around you. At this height you can see the landscape in all directions, and you set your sights on Ponyville.

I guess he would have weird hangups about getting bigger after some of those episodes. An excellent thing for him to grow past

>>29575219
>You reach down and grasp Tonic in your right claw.
>Closing your digits around her, only her arms and head poked out from the end of your fist.
>She tries to part your fingers but you're too strong.
>You begin walking toward Ponyville, taking long strides that shake the earth and leave craters behind.
>Another roar escapes you and green flames accompany it, scorching the nearby trees and grass.
>You enter the city limits and crush a few houses underfoot.
>At this point you see Rainbow Dash and Twilight flying toward you.
>T: "Spike?! Oh, not again!"
>You spin around and whip the two of them with your tail, sending them sailing back the way they came.
>Suddenly you feel a burning sensation in your hand.
>You look down to see Tonic breathing a cloud of acid onto your scales.
>The acid eats away at your scales and you drop Tonic in response.
>You drop her!
>You watch as she falls, tears streaming from her eyes.
>Your giant eye meets her despondent gaze and you're hit with a moment of clarity.
>You transform into your old self in the blink of an eye and begin plummeting yourself.
>You're still much higher up than Tonic, there's no way you can reach her!
>What would you do if you did?!
>Seconds feel like hours as you watch Tonic flailing through the air.
>You let out a hopeless scream as she makes impact and contorts into impossible shapes.
>You close your eyes tight and everything turns to static.

>The feeling of violent wind rushing past you is replaced with a feeling of warmth.
>You open your eyes to the darkness of your temporary room.
>You start silently weeping as you think about the monster that you could become.
>You then notice that your legs are extended beyond the edge of your small bed.
>That isn't right, you fit in this bed perfectly before...

>>29575536
Puberty, the greatest evil!

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Hey guys, gonna' be continuing on from >>29562294. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, please feel free to let me know. This part is going to be a relatively short update, but I promised I'd get something out, and I intend on sticking to that, so here we go!

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>You are Daze, the totally not confused dragon.
>Okay, maybe that last part was a massive fucking lie, you're still confused as all hell, but fuck you.
>You're currently wondering around your room trying to get ready for a trip around the local town with that little short-ass dragon-dude you found out had saved your life just last night, as he seems to think integrating you into society might make your chances of settling in here a little bit better.
>However, right now, you really can't be fucking bothered. You were just woke up, scared shitless thinking you were about to be dissected by one of the lizard-people that /x/ told you about, and now you're just expected to go out and mingle with a society full of them.
>Makes perfect fucking sense.
>Are you always this much of a pessemistic cunt?
>Fuck you brain, you know I don't like mornings to start off with.
>Ugh, you were never a morning person, and so it seems, you most definitely are not a morning dragon either.
>You're currently holding onto a bed post trying to awkwardly slip your newly grown tail through your jean-shorts along with your awkwardly shaped legs, and you're slowly but surely starting to lose your fucking temper with it getting in the way.
>I wonder if I cut it off, will it grow back like it does with a lizard.

>>29576001
>Yeah, self mutilation, the best possible way to make a first impression on your host, shut the fuck up Daze, you halfwit.
"AHHH FUCK THIS!"
>You kick the bedpost beside you before letting out a "YELP!" in pain while hopping backwards on your good leg and falling backwards into a dressing table as your now poofy white hair falls in front of your eyes.
>Fucking great.
>Oh well, at least among the chaos you managed to slip your tail and other leg through your shorts.
>Banging your head, and landing on your ass, sacrificing what little pride you have left in exchange for getting your pants on? You'll take that.
>You reach up to the table top and pull yourself to your feet trying to take it easy on your healing leg before catching a glimpse of yourself in the mirror in front of you.
>This reminds you actually, you haven't really gotten a good look at your new face yet, but as luck would have it, there it is before you.
>Staring back at you with red pin-pricked pupils, and messy hair is a white dragoness with a shocked yet curious look on her face.

>>29576009
>You opt to stick your tongue out of the side of your mouth just to doubly-double confirm that it is in-fact you that you're looking at.
>Eyup, that's you.
>This must be what it's like to do bathsalts, only with less zombie-like attacks on the public involving fucking face eating.
>God, you're glad you never went to America when you were back home. That place scares the everliving shit out of you.
>You'll take dragons and crystal palaces over being torn open like a fucking chicken dinner under a motorway by a naked black guy any day of the week.
>You shudder before running your hands over your new face and frowning slightly as it hits you how very little you seem to remember about how you once looked before winding up where you currently are.
>Screw it, you're here now, let's make the most of what we're given, if there's one thing you remember from back home, it is that no matter what life threw at you, you were most definitely not a giver-upper.
>You give your new form the classic Daze™ (patent pending) finger guns and blowing yourself a kiss in the mirror.
>Still the hottest shit this side of the globe.
>You giggle to yourself and smile a bit as you open the drawer and pull your now crop-top over your head, stuggling a little with your newfound horns, and you then proceed to grab your leather jacket off of the hanger Spike had hung it from next to a large oak closet at the end of the room.
>Ready to rock.
>You look around the room before nodding in approval and heading out through the door into the large hallway that you saw Spike head out of just a couple of hours ago.

>>29576014
>If your memory ain't totally shot, you vividly remember him walking off to the right as he closed the door, so you guess that's where you're heading as well.
>Man, this place is gorgeous.
>The way the sun above glistens through the roof lighting the entire building up without it being even the slightest bit offensive is quite spectacular, you must admit.
>When you get yourself set up here, you need to get yourself a totally bitchin' house like this instead of one of those midieval looking shit-hovels you saw last night when you hobbled into town.
>Big crystal palace, just like an Arab prince, that's what you need.
>Next thing you know, you'll be wanting to buy a Ferrari with a gold wrap on it and crash it into lamp-posts in and around the local town.
>Fucking cunts.
>As you near the end of the hallway, you catch a glimpse of a purple tail entering through a large archway entrance to another part of the palace.
>This place is fucking huge.
"Spike!"
>He didn't hear you.
>Oh for fuck sakes.
>You power-walk to where you last saw shorty's tail, and as you pass through the archway where you spotted him, you are met with a big-ass library full to the brim with shelves upon shelves of books.

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>>29576020
>No shit, it's a library, you fucking idiot.
>Brain, I swear to God, if you don't fucking stop, I will come up there an-
>"Daze!"
>Your thoughts are interupted by Spike walking over to you carrying a huge stack of books that reach more than twice his height.
>It'd be a crime not to seize this opportunity.
>Brain?
>Do it, faggot.
>You point a finger out in front of you, making contact with the wobbly stack of books causing them to topple over as Spike dashes around trying to prevent the inevitable before he is buried under a mountain of literature.
"Pfft... Ahahah, oh GOD, that was good."
>Fucking hell, that was too rich, if you get kicked out for that, it was worth it.
>"Ow.. Hey! Why'd ya' do that?"
>You simply point at his angry expression and boop his nose as he scrunches up his face slightly at your touch.
"C'mon man, you can't tell me if I wasn't the one where you are right now you wouldn't be laughing. Lighten up."
>"Mm. I guess it was a little funny.."
"Only a little? Well, shit, that's a start I guess. *snicker* You wanting to show me around town or something anyway?"
>"Oh shoot! I nearly forgot! Let's get going, I gotta' pick something up for a friend while I'm out too, so are you OK with us dropping by?"
>You shrug.
"I couldn't give two shits, sure, let's go."
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That's all I got for tonight. I'm pooped. Hope you're all enjoying this so far - I'm making an effort to try and post at least once every two days in order to keep some content rolling into the thread at a steady pace. Loving everyone else's stories thus far. Comfy general is comfy.

>>29575536
Oh no not again

>>29576034
good stuff

>>29573629
Columba looks gorgeous there.
Haha get it? GORGE-ous

>>29563930
>Yawning, you pulled up a bench.
>But before you could sit down, Princess Celestia was already back.
>”That was fast.”
>She didn’t have a plate or anything with her though.
>You blinked, confused.
>”Where’s the food?”
“I’ve teleported it into my chambers.”
>…
>”Couldn’t you have done that from the ward?”
>Princess Celestia smiled and nodded.
“Of course!”
>Your brows furrowed deeper as you thought on it.
>”As a matter of fact… couldn’t you have just teleported us and the food up to your room?”
“With ease.”
>You groaned and sat down hard on the bench.
>Your mind’s eye filled with staring crowds of ponies, and you frowned.
>”So that was all just to mess with me.”
>Princess Celestia smile turned down into a concerned stare.
>Quietly, she sat beside you and gently wrapped one of her wings around your back, pulling you closer to her.
“Of course not Columba. I was trying to help you get accustomed to being naked in public. You wanted this, yesterday you abandoned your clothing.”
>You raised your voice, your anger was sparked.
>”They were all staring at me, talking behind my back.”
>Celestia nodded.
“Yes. They were.”
>You looked into her eyes in complete disbelief and shock.
>That was all she had to say to you?

>>29576034
Yeah, America is pretty much like mad max at all times. Except Michigan, there's snow there

>>29576656
“You’ve been holed up in the ward for three days with no visitors except for me. Rumors have been running up through the palace like wildfire ever since you arrived. And I don’t know what you heard but-“
>”So what!? I’m a showpiece now? You just brought me out for everyone to finally get their peek at me?”
>The room felt stiflingly quiet after you hollered.
>It was like a weight over your chest, you breathed raggedly, in and out with no rhythm.
>You tried to ignore it, but the pressure was immense.
>You gasped and stood up, away from the Princess.
>Princess Celestia just frowned, sitting demurely on the bench.
“No. You are how you carry yourself Columba. Out there, you were cloistered and shy, putting the weight of all that perceived shame onto your shoulders. That has caused you to panic and it is stopping you from thinking clearly. You need to calm down. And, if you would be so kind, listen to what I have to say.”
>Three words came to mind.
>Fuck, you and cunt.
>You pointed a claw accusingly at the Princess and opened your mouth, ready to abuse.
>But the words never left your mouth.
>You stood there for too long, staring Princess Celestia straight in the eyes.
>The look she was giving you wasn’t cold, but it wasn’t warm either, it felt analytical.
>Like she was sizing you up.
>You cursed softly, lowering your claw.
>”Fuck.”
>With a sigh you plopped your butt down on the marble floor and pulled your legs in up to your chest.
>Wordlessly, you motioned for Celestia to continue.
“Some lessons are ruder than others. But, Columba. Those ponies out there, they weren’t just staring at you because you’re new or because they’re curious. They were staring at you because you’re beautiful. I heard no cruel words at all, quite the opposite.”
>You could feel your cheeks burning, you pulled your knees up to cover your face.

>>29576665
“There is no shame in that. In fact, you should be proud! Your first time in public wasn’t perfect, of course, and you felt a great deal of embarrassment. But you’re only embarrassed for yourself Columba, none of the ponies, griffins or minotaurs in the hall thought any less of you at all.”
>You stopped acting, and started thinking.
>There was no sense of shame in being naked at all for them.
>You nodded, finally understanding what had been in front of you from the beginning.
>Slowly, you stood up, meeting Celestia’s eyes again.
>”They don’t care, so why should I?”
“If that is how you think of it, then yes, Columba. Walk proudly knowing that.”
>Your frown pulled up into a smile.
>You could feel the serenity building inside you, and you carried that feeling with you, striding confidently to the door.
>Worries fell from you like dead leaves from a tree.
>Without hesitation, you pushed the double doors open and walked out into the hallway.
>Again, many eyes were on you and the chatter started up.
>But you ignored it and walked on.
>You still felt strange, but it was like wearing a new pair of clothes.
>Not quite right, but not uncomfortable either.
>It was a good start.

S'all I got for now, be lurking.

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>>29576240
Thanks Anon. Now, time for me to kick back and read the latest gold standard update before bed.

>tfw I'm going to be tired as hell tomorrow night, so I probably won't get an update in.
I'll see what I can do, but I don't wanna make any promises that I can't keep.

>>29576681
The secret to having people support your writing is to have other writers be the audience.

Seriously, you guys rock! Nowhere else really gives a shit about what I write.

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>>29576746
I've never been called a writer before, it's nice.

If it makes you feel any better, I haven't written anything in like 3 or 4 years. I guess that the more you write, the more you get praised, especially in a general as small as this one. Don't put your skill down at all though, I really enjoy your stuff, and I'm sure that a lot of other /dtg/ posters do as well, so keep it up!

I'm amazed that more people aren't hanging around the thread, actually. This seems like something that the pony transformation general guys would really enjoy if they gave it a try.

Bumping for art and green.

>>29573860
>Lying in your small but comfortable bed, you tried to sort the mess that were your emotions.
>First off, you had been forced to enter some bizarre contract with Discord- that made you feel shirty.
>But on the other hand, you genuinely enjoyed your time with Rainbow Dash today.
>Why can't emotions just come one at a time?
>All the conflict in your head was exhausting, so it was no wonder that you soon fell asleep.
>You were in a big black void, sitting at what looked like a table.
>Not your normal dream, but it best your free fall nightmare.
>The next thing that was evident was you bring dressed in a rather dainty looking dress.
>How quaint.
>On the other end sat none other than your new employer, Discord.
D: "Rooting around in that human mimd of yours has yielded so many interesting things!"
>You give Discord an inquisitive look.
D: "For example, it seems you were rather proficient at... what did you call it Khoa? 'Collecting unemployment'?"
K: "Fuck you."
>Discord sneers a little, you've taken his bait and you both know it.
D: "You must reach me sometime! I'm dreadfully uneducated in such delicate arts!"
>This sucks.
D: "Honestly the more I pry the more lucky I recognize that I am!"
>You swallow back some bile.
K: "Why's that?"
D: "With a life like yours, I'm surprised you aren't jumping at the bit to forget!"
>Your claws dig into your seat as you grit your teeth.
D: "I mean, where do I begin? Oh and pardon me if I butcher any of your human words!"
>You want to wake up.
D: "High school? College? Signing up for welfare? I hardly know what any of these are yet abd they're all so juicy!"
>You sniff a little, holding back both anger and tears.
>He's not going to make you cry.
D: "Oh! I know where to start this tale! How about with Va-"
K: "SHUT UP! SHUT UP!"
>You know what he's about to say.
>But you can't take it.
>Discord looks you over, studying the discomfort on your face.
D: "Very well. I won't mention /Vanessa/."

>>29577308

>>29574712
Bruh you got Overwatch?

>>29578410
I wish I did haha

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>>29557586
>Back to our protagonist
>And right now you're in heaven
>Yeah that's it, the fall kills you and you're now relaxing on your cloud
>But something was wrong... Something was... bouncing on your chest?
>You slowly open your eyes and see a little bunny waving at you
>You straighten your body and analyze the surrounding
>No you aren't dead, you're in a bed... in a room...
>Of course the cottage! Now you remember it
>The owner of this house should have find you and saved your ass
>Your attention get back to the bunny who seems happy to see you
>You stare at him for a moment, you aren't tired anymore but you're still pretty hungry...
>In fact he seems very delicious... Maybe just one bite?
>As if the animal reads your mind he points with his pawn something on your left
>You turn your head and spot, on a nightstand, a bowl fill with some sort of soup
>You stare at the bunny who was expecting your reaction
"Th-that's for me?"
>In answer to this, he simply nods at you
>You slowly take the bowl with your claws and inhale the content
>Vegetable? meh, you'd rather eat some fresh meat but it isn't the time to be picky
>You take a first sip and savour every drop
>And in fact, even for vegetables it was delicious
>You devour your meal and appreciate the feeling of being full

>>29578618
>You wanted to thanks the rabbit but he wasn't here anymore
>You analyze once more the room and spot something interesting on the wall... a mirror
>Despite the pain in your legs you get up off the bed, you want to look at yourself
>And well you aren't disappointed
>Bloody hell, you look terrible, months of roaming have ravaged you
>You're skinny as fuck, you're scales usually bright are now gloomy, even your eyes have lost their color
>Your body was covered with some spots of dried blood and mud, plenty of scars are here too, fresh wounds however have been bandaged
>You touch the one on your forehead as you remember your fall...
>Fucking random rock...
>Your savior did a amazing job, you owe him your fucking life
>Well time to check your wings... but you think you already know how they look like
>You begin to spread them and the pain at the base of both wings tell you it isn't good at all
>Ignoring your suffering you pursue your effort until you reach your maximal wingspan
>Well, it's not bad... IT'S FUCKING TERRIBLE!
>Too many holes are decorating the membrane of your wings
>There is now way you could fly with this soon
>You take a last look at your reflection in the mirror
>It seems you came back from the dead...
>And that's what probably happened

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>>29578638
>"You shouldn't do that"
>You spin in the direction of the voice and stare at a yellow quadruped with a pink mane
>You can see the bunny on her back too
>"I-I mean, spreading your wings like that, they're still broken, y-you know"
>You slowly fold your wings on your back while thinking about the creature in front of you
"You are a pony, right?
>You spot her wings on each side of her back
"A pegasus more exactly?"
>"y-yeah"
>You remember to read a book about them when you were a kid
"So am I in Equestria?"
>She doesn't respond to you but you don't really need it
>She shakes like a leaf... You're scaring her obviously dumbass
>Maybe you should change the subject
"So I assume you're the one who save my life back there"
>"Well... yeah..."
>You slowly walk toward her and lower at her level
>And then you did something you have never done before
>You hug her
"Thank you so much, without you... I will be dead by now"
>She seems to relax a bit
>"Oh it's nothing, I love taking care of animals... I-I mean everyone"
>You break the hug and chuckle a bit at the embarrassment of the pony
"Anyway, I owe you one"
>She indicate you the bed
>"Well maybe you should get some rest, you have still a lot to recover"
>The idea to return in your paradise seems good to you
"I guess you're the doctor"
>You start to walk toward the bed
>"Oh and my name is Fluttershy, what's yours?"
>You stop your walk and can already feel the sweat forming on your face
>You keep your back turned and simply say
"Hope... Call me Hope

>>29578941
Such nice greens,, great work

>>29578659
I'm still reading. Got an idea for a namefag yet?

>>29576660
Amrerifat here us mountain people are fucking crazy so stay out

>>29576660
Mad max with snowmobiles and chain tyres.

>>29577506
>Fuck this.
>You've been dressed up, put into a chair, and are having your whole life be mocked by Discord.
>You want to scream.
D: "You really are squirming Khoa, have I struck a nerve?"
>Their cool, inquisitive demeanor was all the more frustrating.
>He's having no end of fun in tormenting you.
>But you just want this to be over.
K: "Yes you did! You win! You win!"
>Discord frowns at you.
D: "Giving up on our little tea party? Shame! I was going to give you some information for playing along..."
>They never make things easy for you.
>You can leave this awful nightmare, or get information.
>With a sigh, you sit back.
>Pleased by this, Discord then oats your head.
D: "So strong willed. You've already grown since your time as- ah! Best not confuse you by saying a name you don't know."
>You only roll your eyes, you'll probably never get that name back.
D: "I don't get your sour mood here Khoa, looking back on the past is good for you!"
K: "Oh yeah, and I feel /great/."
D: "Good! If your behavior persisted we would have had to talk about a certain woman!"
>He needs to stop mentioning her.
>It's tying your stomach more and and more into knots.
>They don't need to know that.
>Vanessa isn't a name for some one in Ponyville so nobody should know.
>But Discord has rifled through your mind.
>They know.
>They know and that alone is driving you mad.
>He's not even from there but he can insult you.
>Using terms and words he just learned he can deconstruct you.
>Why is he doing this?
>You agreed to help him.
>But he's doing this now.
>You clamp your eyes shut, stinging tears trying to push out.
D: "Come /on/ Khoa! Let go of your past. Isn't it so hard to hear it?"
K: "I-I signed your c-contract! Quit trying to convince me!"
D: "Convince you?"
>He shakes his head a little.
D: "I don't need to convince you of anything. Just reminding you that you're no innocent little victim here. No, no, not in the slightest!

>>29580652
K: "Then cut the whole 'Let go of your past' shit!"
>Discord smiles at you devioisly.
>What you wouldn't give for a change to punch that face right now.
D: "But it's so fun to make you consider it! You can only blame yourself for being so entertaining! Even now when you're trying to hold back you are a riot!"
>A year wriggles free from your iron grasp.
>You're crying now, in a dream.
>it in part was due to Discord's manhandling of your ego.
>But also tied to /her/.
>That can of worms was one you didn't expect to be opened again.
>Especially not like this.
>You need to do something.
>Discord is just going to keep hammering into you until you snap.
>But you can't give him that satisfaction.
K: "What about... you?"
>Silence for a moment.
D: "Pardon?"
K: "Your life can't be that good either, you know. Lonely for so long... using the misery of other to fill the void..."
>You snivel as you trail off.
>You're just pulling this out of your ads, but at this point it's all you have.
D: "Oh trust me Khoa. I know my social shortcomings. My idea of fun never translates well to others. But /unlike/ you, I can live with it."
>You just sigh.
K: "Why can't /I/ live with it?"
D: "You can't handle it. Even now you're crying like a baby over a name! It's sickeningly funny to watch. Right now, you're burying it, not living with it."
>Is Discord... lecturing you?
>This is probably to just cover his ass while fucking with you.
>But in some twisted way, you get it.
>What the message is.
>You look up, wiping your eyes.
K: 'Thank... you?"
>Discord is already gone.
>You're floating alone now in the void.
>Seeing nothing better to do whole in the dream, you let yourself cry, cry over everything wrong both old and recent.

>>29580700
>pulling this out of your ads

The dangers of typing on mobile.

Not even once.

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Still standin' firm by that no updates thing for tonight, sorry to anyone who's keeping tabs on the story - It's only 10:52, and I'm already starting to burn out.

Send help.

#savepunki

i dont really have any drawings for tonight,, but i can offer a nightmare i had,, its kinda old but its just been playing on me abit and also its not really related to this thread tho

>>29556278

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>>29580785
i had another go at tonic yesterday too,, image didnt post

>>29580785
Go for it Anon. Love your artwork by the way.

>>29580785
I apologize in advance,, ive never done any fancy greens before,,

>youve never been to the circus before, but its always filled you with a child like wonder
>it just so happens that you are standing in the grassy feild where the circus has setup in
>its overcast, quiet and it seems like youre the only person there, but you dont seem to notice odd with the whole situation
>you walk up to the big top, its big, red and yellow stripes cover the whole tent
>running your hand along the tent, you walk along the side to an opend slit, your fingers catching slightly to the pastic feel of the canvas
>you enter
>its surprisingly dark except for the center if the big ring, lit by 4 dim spotlights, but still its not that strong of light
>it reminds you of the light of a street lamp standing in the darkness
>the grand stands are just visible circling around the arena
>you walk towards the centre, stepping over a large thick rope that make the outer edge of the performing area
>walking towards the centre feels like its going on for ages
>as you walk the slit you had entered from has closed, leaving no trace that it was there
>the grand stands pull back into darkness fading into nothingness
>the ring grows but stays dimly lit, until what seemed like an hour you reached the center
>you heard a loud clunk and suddenly are blinded by light
>you try to shade your eyes from the sudden light, raising one hand up above your head, you try to find where the blinding light is
>it suddenly dawns on you
'is this a dream?
>you spin yourself around trying to take in your surroundings
What happed to the stands?
Wheres the exit??
>you get snapped out of your train of panicking thoughts by music
>the music starts out very quiet and slowly starts to get louder
>you get a cold chill go down your spine, the music is that clasic old timey melody youd always heard play when you thought about the circus,

1/2

>>29580700
>You woke up the next morning pretty lost for words.
>Was Discord really using some sort of shock therapy?
>Or was that just tacked on at the end?
>So many questions, questions only be could answer.
>He probably never /would/ answer them anyways.
>At least your "Khoa's a Fuck Up" party left you well rested.
>Rubbing your face you wonder what you should do.
>The mystery of you being here remains a big issue.
>Speaking of, didn't Discord promise to tell you something?
>You sigh, he probably worded it /just/ right to avoid the commitment.
>You didn't expect much anyways from his promises.
>After all that's happened, writing it all down couldn't hurt.
>So, you did just that.
>You even wound up doodling Discord a bit in the margins.
>Granted it didn't look great, but it helped pass the time.
>You get more than a little invested in writing and doodling.
>So much so you didn't catch yourself from writing about something.

>>29580988
>After a bit you look down, actually reading back what you read.
>"Things have been, well, sort of hellish for parts- but I can't say I exactly hate this. I haven't worried about money, about eating, about just about anything I used to. Sure, I have my worries, but they're different. Being Khoa honestly is very-"
>Your face instantly goes flush, and you tear the page up into tiny pieces.
>Did Discord make you write it?
>That would... not make sense.
>Not nearly enough self degradation.
>Your mind must have just ran wild and started spewing this.
>You re-read your other notes to see if anything similar appeared.
>Not really, just reflecting on the insanity of yesterday and some drawings.
>You put aside your journal, thinking about this.
>How happy /are/ you?
>You can't really say in all honesty.
>There was good, there was bad, and there were things that were still shrouded in mystery.
>You've just been thrown into all of this and told to sink or swim.
>A part of you feels like you're sinking.
>But you can't deny you're at least treading water.
>If you could go back to your old life right now, would you?
>Who misses you back there?
>Guilt begins to swell.
>When was the last time you called your mother?
>It's been a while, for sure.
>But now you definitely /can't/.
>There's no way you can contact anyone.
>They have no clue where you are.
>Not many people would give a shit, but at least a few would...
>You throw your covers over yourself.
>You need to sleep in today.
>Sleep to not focus on stuff like that.

>>29580984
2/2

>this music was different, it made you feel weird , scared and unnerved
>your heart starts thumping, almost like it wants to break out of your chest and escape
>thats when you see it
> and when they see you
> the music still going louder and louder but now its acompanied but manic laughing
>shapes start to shift from side to side in the darkness where the grandstands should of been
>the laughing gets louder and the shapes turn into silhouettes
A-are those clowns?
>as your eyes strain to adjust to the shadows, a glint of silver sparked out from some of the silhouettes
>you heart stinks,
This isnt normal,
>your heart starts racing, youve never thought your heart to beat as fast as it is
>adjusting your stance you hear a high pitched chuckle behind you
>the silhouettes are advancing all around you
>the laughing is ear peircing and the loud eery melody is making you feel sick
T-this cand be real, it has to be a dream
>your cornered, well more like surrounded you know this is a dream but you can wake up
>you try calling out but nothing happens, all you can feel are the hot tears running down your face and the pounding of your heart
>the shapes have reached the outer edge of the light
> your able to see more of them, as one steps in from the darkness, you see how much danger you are really in
>they're clowns but as luck would have it, its the worst posible thing that are clowns
> the silver glint that had caught you eye now has a fucked up source
F-Fucking zombie c-c-clowns


(whoops this seems to be more tha 2 so 2/?)

>>29581082
Kinda' enjoying this. I honestly think that it could probably be adapted into some sort of dragon one-off if written right and reworked a little.

Totally off-topic as it currently stands though - Still super neato' none-the-less.
>>29581066
Holding off the temptation to read this, as I want something for later tonight.

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>>29581082
I hope this is reading ok,,
ive never really wrote this dream down as like a story before,,
I just got to figure out how to write the next part,, its also pretty much the end part too

>>29581106
could probably turn it into like a fear dream thing with spike, having it click for him that dragons have a longer lifespan than ponies

>>29581106
Haha, I'll probably /try/ to do a few more posts too before the end of the day- so maybe I'll have a nice big update for you to read!

>>29580984
>>29581082
>>29581126
Would it be better if i finish this somewhere else tha i here since it is off topic ??

>>29578941

>>29573629
Babes can be cute
>>29580789

I really appreciate all the drawfriends out there. I never dreamed anyone would give a shit about my story

>>29581159
This is what I was thinking. Could prove to be a mix of funny and spoopy.
>>29581221
Possibly a better idea to post it elsewhere as it isn't on-topic and runs the risk of derailing the thread. Has potential though. I know that a lot of writefags have none-/mlp/ content on their pastebins as well as their green stories.

If you wanna try your hand at some writing as well as drawing - I recommend pre-writing, proofchecking, and double-proofchecking over your work in notepad before posting. Very few Anons have the gift of both drawfaggotry and writefaggotry, but those who do can turn out some fucking amazing content.

Would love to see a dragon story from you with your own dragon in it, you seem like you're capable of turning something pretty sweet out in time.

Once upon a time I was a drawfag. Then I realized I think my writing is a lot better.

>>29581066
>You woke up around midday.
>Your sleep had been thankfully dreamless.
>It probably wasn't the best to sleep away your worries.
>But you're an independent dragon, you can do whatever you want!
>And what you want is to not worry about... everything.
>Getting up, you had the weird desire to look in the mirror.
>You've seen yourself, sure, but you haven't really looked yourself over.
>So, you walk over to a full length mirror and just kind of look.
>There you are!
>This being you was still surreal in a way.
>You're a girl.
>You're a dragon.
>You're going to learn how to fly.
>All surreal.
>You stick your tongue out, watching your about rear back as you do so.
>So, so weird.
>But not bad in all honesty.
>Physically you felt fine, like you'd always been like this.
>Save for things like flying, you operate just fine.
>The more you look yourself over, the more it dawns on you.
K: "I'm fucking cute..."
>You have no idea how you should feel about it.
>The closest you had ever been to cute before was that one Halloween you were dressed up like a princess.
>You still have unbridled resentment towards your aunt for that stunt.
>Wait.
>Is /that/ why Discord has been dressing you up?
>You let out an agitated groan.
>He can't even be original in his tormenting!
>Speaking of that psychopath, he's been uncharacteristically quiet.
>Sure, you've only known him for a day- but still.
>He's a nosey shithead.
>Satisfied with the mirror, you go and sit down on your bed, stubby legs dangling over the edge.
>Shall you be serious today?
>Or go and have fun?
>Both options sounded viable right now.
>And daylight is burning while you hesitate.

And that's over 1000 lines! Yay milestones!

Also, are any of you interested in reading some of my other work? I can drop a story in my pastebin if you're curious.

>>29581934
She is a qt

>>29581947
By all means feel free to drop some of your stuff on pastebin. I'll give it a read. Just give me a quick synopsis before each story so I know what I'm getting myself in for if you can <3

>>29581965
http://pastebin.com/aqQQyUeE

Wrote this a year or so ago. A young cleric finds herself succumbing to a cure similar to lycanthropy and must balance duty and self preservation. It's just a short thing I remember liking when I wrote it.

>>29582051
Curse not cure. I hate autocorrect

>>29575536
>You are Tonic, and you just woke up from what you believe to be a nightmare.
>With each second that goes by, the memory of the dream escapes you.
>Something about a very big dragon, or was it a dinosaur?
>Every detail you grasp at explodes into shards of half truths.
>All you remember for sure was that near the end you were falling.
>It's probably best that you don't remember. Your dreams have been insane ever since you got here.
>You're actually surprised you don't remember, all of your dreams have been so vivid...
>You make a quick trip to the bathroom before getting back to bed.
>You think you're finally getting used to your new parts.
>Your trip was a little different than usual though, considering the halls were lined with guards.
>So this is where all the males go. They just get paid to stand in hallways all day and night.
>Well their jobs just got a bit more interesting, 'cause now they can stare at your ass walking by them while you awkwardly try to not make eye contact.
>You thought that you had confidence built up over these past few days but the human in you still doesn't like walking naked down a catwalk-like hallway with dudes just standing around.
>Whatever, you probably made their night, now it's back to bed.
>You make your way back to your room, this time with more enthusiasm in your strut.
>being sexy is tiresome, you hit the bed and pass back out within minutes.

>>29579419
Thanks dude, i really appreciate your feedback. Your story is awesome, keep going

>>29578659
>You're Hope and you're relaxing on your bed
>It's the middle of the night and you're staring at the ceiling in the dark, thinking about your situation
>How long have you been wandering since you left your homeland? 3 months? Maybe more
>You kinda lost track of the time during your exile...
>You wanted to explore new lands, defeat fiends and learn about the world and his wonders
>So you just took your armor and say goodbye to dragonland
>And oh boy you weren't disapointed
>You have seen a lot of place, some astounding... Some deadly...
"Plain, forest, swamp, desert, mountains, badlands, waterfalls..."
>You have fought countless of foes, most of the time you won... Sometimes you had to flee...
"Bear, Yeti, giant spider, elemental spirit, reanimated skeleton, wood wolf..."
>The start of your journey was exciting, discover new things everyday
>But after a while, the adventure caught you...
>The lack of proper meals and rest have weakened in the long run
>At the end of the day, you couldn't even fight a bunch of wood dogs...
>You sigh
"You're weak Hope... Like always"

>>29582320
>And now you're in Equestria, home of the pony
>You have always heard a lots of tales about them
>They put a great importance into the concept of friendship, kindness, and selflessness
>While the dragon was more interested in the idea of strength, bravery and honor
>You guess both side have their arguments, but you never understood the hate of the dragons against the equines
"Maybe we're just too different"
>So what are you going to do now?
>Stay here a while, you guess, just the time you fully recover from your wounds
>You are pretty seriously injured now, but nothing impossible for your young body
>Every scars fade away eventually
>In a few week you'll get your sexy body back and will be able to go away
>You don't want to stay here forever
>You're in this bed since 3 days and already feel like shit
>You still have to find a way to pay back Fluttershy too
>You close your eyes, you need fresh air
>Tomorrow you'll go out

>>29582213
>You hit a pretty deep sleep, and it's nice and quiet.
>No dinosaurs, no falling, no running for your life, no molestation.
>But then you start to see colors.
>They fly past you like a kaleidoscope, and soon start to take form.
>So much for the quiet sleep.
>They start taking shape in the form of architecture, a great hall to be specific.
>You come to realize that your walking through this building, but much like your first dream, you have no control of yourself.
>You can only look around when your dream self does, like your looking through someone else's eyes.
>The building is massive, the ceiling is at least eighty feet up.
>Near the sides of the hall there appear to be groups of...dragons.
>Dragons. All shapes, sizes and colors are huddled together in small groups of four or five like it's a hallway back in high school.
>Some of them are naked, others have small plate and leather pieces on various parts of their bodies, then there are really important looking dragons that are wearing full plate or decorative robes with plate accents.
>It's hard to say from all of the different sizes of dragons, but from what you can tell, you seem to be a bit taller than you usually are in this dream.
>Your...dream self looks around at some of the groups of dragons, but looks none of them in the eye.
>Further down the hall, many dragons are gathered around a very big archway.
>Apparently this room is where you're headed.

>>29581221
My dear writepone, feel free to finish here.

>>29582412
Wew lad

>>29582412
>As you near the crowd, their conversations become an amalgamation of indistinguishable words.
>The colors and shapes of the dragons and their armor creates a color vomit in the doorway that you can't see through.
>One dragon stands out, however.
>He stands at the edge of the crowd, twitching involuntarily as he looks on.
>He's wearing black robes with various pieces of golden jewelry decorating them.
>A leather bandolier carrying vials of colorful glowing liquids stretches across his chest and ends in plate armor at his right shoulder.
In his shakey hands he holds a sturdy looking walking stick with a few jugs tied to it with ribbon-like string.
>Even through his robes you can tell that he's quite thin and snake like.
>His scales are a dark blue, and white spikes that look more like bones run down his back and jut out from his elbows.
>His head is topped by a deep red mohawk of feathers.
>The red feathers also bush out on his face and make crazy looking eyebrows.
>The symmetrical horns that come out of his forehead look more like a stag's antlers.
>As you walk up to him he turns his head to face you with speed unbecoming of his twitchy form.
>You look him in the eyes and realize that While his right eye is a bright yellow, his left eye is completely blank and white. There's a scar running diagonally down his face and over the dead eye.

>>29582866
kek
>filename
make it a double kek

>>29582337
Got a pastebin? I'll start following this.
>>29582866
Fucking kek.

Trying to sit down and get creative!

Almost want to try drawing again, but we've already got an awesome artist and i /do/ have ideas for more of The Gold Standard!

>>29582863
Wanna play a game of who's that dragon?

I'll post the next part in a bit, I'm just busy sorry

>>29583411
Don't let your memes be dreams. Try drawing again, there's never enough art

>>29583765
Might as well! Don't expect something as good as what we've been getting, but it will...

Definitely be lines on paper

Hey, not sure if anyone gives a shit, but I should be back to writing tomorrow night. Just totally pooped tonight and unable to really get anything done.
~
Enjoying your story so far Kolaghan, your qt Khoa reminds me of myself from when I was like 15 or 16 so far, and it's really nice being able to relate to her. Looking forward to more green and (possibly???) Some art from you!

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>>29583417
It's cool Mage, we get that you have a life outside of the thread. Just got up to date on your story. Really love your use of language. Paints a nice image of what's going on, and it feels like I'm there, y'know?

Got a question though, how did you get so good?

>>29583765
Please do, always good getting variety, and cool to get different variations of how the dragons are seen as

>>29584245

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>>29583765
>>29584386
>>29584579
Here's a kinda shitty sketch of Khoa. Didn't do any pencil lines so it's not proportioned well and I couldn't erase the kind of fucked up horns. Wasn't really up to dumping a lot of time into a drawing this moment, so I screwed around with sketching.

>>29584568
I said it before in a previous thread, but I don't really have any previous writing experience. However, I have been lurking here since the beginning of the fandom so I've learned a bit from reading countless greens

>>29584983
Better than anything I could pull off, keep at it m80

>>29585056
Haha, thanks. I thought about trying something a little more refined- but all that came out was that!


Maybe I'll do something more cute or serious when I have more motivation

>>29582863
>His one good eye stares at you intently.
>It's like his resting face is one of intensity, as he almost looks crazed.
>His eye seemingly bores into your soul as he looks you up and down, judging your worth.
>"You must be the new blood. You're young and fit, but I sense the naivety that comes with those perks. That can be fixed..."
>His voice is hoarse but stern.
>He sounds like whatever his name is should have 'Darth' before it.
>"You look confused, did your instructors not tell you who I was?"
>Your dream self shakes their head.
>He scoffs and puffs out two stacks of smoke from his nostrils.
>"That's because they fear me kid. They all think I'm crazy but they can't deny my power!"
>He gets a little loud near the end and quickly corrects himself.
>"You're going to learn from the Grand Alchemist of the Dominion of Scales, and one of the few dragons to ever embark on the path of wizardry: Sizzle the Wise, at your service.
>Sizzle brings a fist to his chest to salute you, a gesture that you quickly reciprocate.
>From inside the archway you hear a bell suddenly toll, and the congregating dragons start shuffling into the room.
>"Your first lesson begins in there. Politics run the dragon lands, and they're cut-throat! Just lurk in the shadows and watch them, after a while you may have either the charisma or power to gain a voice amongst these fools..."

Alright, at least I didn't leave you on a cliffhanger. More tomorrow.

>>29584983
Nice :D

>>29585328
Is it really though?

>>29582866
lel (nice dubs btw)

>>29585362
Well...
Kinda looks like a cartoon character that normally wears glasses, but took them off.

>>29585790
Not a bad idea. Khoa could use some cute glasses

>>29584888

>>29556278
Whoever makes the next thread should put /dtg/ in the title.