Dragon Transformation General #2

Dragon:
>You don't have any idea about what are you doing here.
>Or how you are supposed to do dragon stuff,of who you are, to start.
>But well, looks like Equestria has a awesome new Dragon resident.

>Let's see if you manage to settle in!
>Who knows what awaits you on your new adventure?
>It's your chance to make the best out of it!

Authors:
Finished:
Kurgash's "Scholar with Scales": http://pastebin.com/u/Kurgash
Buggernon's "Anon the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/u/Buggernon
Fiber's "Dragon Anon": http://pastebin.com/ADkW9G2Q

Unfinished:
Sergeant Nonymous's "Anonymous the Wise Dragon": http://pastebin.com/CY698CQ0
Clarissa's "No Fury at All": http://pastebin.com/U5q2gcBr
Alcrowholic's "Mountainous": http://pastebin.com/7iJzrFDt
BlackRose's "Blackened": http://pastebin.com/9BiiAwiq
Harmonyrla's "Dragula": http://pastebin.com/m0i4tGEK
BizarreCoyote's "Rukodiora's Romp Around Equestria": http://pastebin.com/u/BizzarreCoyote
Tambourine's My Tiny Ponies: http://pastebin.com/sBQrS8ZR
Bubblewolf's Crystal Draganon: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8dlbvjaz3emxv2h/Bubblewolf%20Crystalanon.txt?dl=0
(hosted on dropbox as a notepad file)
Dracononymous' Deceitful (Not a) Dragon: http://pastebin.com/GQiUeKe7
Woofr's pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/Woofr


If you are a content creator, please use a Name so we can refer your work to someone.

Previous thread:
>>29317569
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29317569/

>>29441806
Other previous thread:
>>29232265
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29232265/

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>>29441818
>tfw the thread died because you weren't awake to bump it

>>29441833
Bamp

>>29442111

>>29442946

>>29441804
Sweet new thread, I'll probably be at it later tonight

>>29444387

>>29445904

Dragons are pretty cool. The old dragon anon thread was basically my writing outlet for all of my first year of uni so it's cool to see this up.

>>29446408

>>29447686

>>29448318

>>29448986

>>29449421

>>29449445

>>29449465
Why is the board moving so fast?!?

>>29449971
Shitposting probably.

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I'll be honest, I'm stumped. I don't really know where the story is gonna go at this point. All of the things I can think of would take the attention off of Spike, which is what most of you are here for. However, doing a mostly romantic story is really out of my element. I'm kinda stuck

>>29450692
Tonic can always go on an adventure for some rare ingredient for her alchemical bullshit.
Nothing too dangerous so that Spike can tag along and/or be her guide.

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>>29450692
Tonic could go on a journey to the territory once owned by the humans, some sort of badlands at the edge of the map. Take Spike along for reasons, ie they have to go through the dragon lands to get there or something.

Or do something different; you could have another anon pop up, you could have Tonic wrestle with the fact that she may or may not be comatose back on earth, hell you could even have ayylamao humies come outa nowhere and start blasting everybody with lasers.

It's your story, do what you want man.

>>29450692
Don't force the romance. It might be more interesting if she moves at her own pace. Let her delve into new knowledge and explore the world, figure out what end goal you have in mind and an end goal she has. Figure out something that will disrupt her journey and cause her to grow and change her path to match your intentions for the story.

>>29441804

bumping this thread

Where did the Chocolava thingy go?

>>29452216
soon™

>>29452199

>>29450739
>>29450809
>>29450986
I'll try and get myself back on track. It just seems like these last few greens are as awkward to read as they were to write. I feel like I've destroyed my pacing and overall seamlessness

>>29452922

>>29453581

>>29454647

Mage, I just read Gears in the Void on fimfiction. It's about a human turned earth pony adjusting and dealing with emerging threats in Equestria, but it handles character progression very well with forcing the protagonist to deal wit hand change behaviors, not to mention a healthy dose of foreshadowing. It also managed to deal with Equestrian sciences and alchemy a bit in a satisfying manner. I would recommend you give it a read. I feel like the human machine and the banishment by the sisters could be a decent gem or seed to start with for an overall threat to deal with. Whether you have another earthling take up a villainous role or not, there are issues that Tonic has regarding baggage with her old species that should probably be addressed in order for her to truly feel liberated from and at ease with her past. Dreams may provide an avenue for confronting her issues, whatever they may be and whatever memories they stem from, and her having met Luna may serve as a good starting point to build from for such endeavors.

>>29456141
Don't listen to this fool. That story is a shitfest.

>>29452922
Perhaps the banishment of the humans did not get rid of them. Their greed is a palpable thing, perhaps the effects of the Sisters' banishment of them separated them from their bodies and scattered them throughout time in new forms. Perhaps they ARE dragons. You could very well run with humans having been sent into the past in new bodies, and they became the beginning of the dragons in Equestria. They would have had language and odd understandings of things unheard of by other races, and over time those understandings would change, perhaps into what would be found in the old draconic tomes. Perhaps Tonic might find that the very enchantment which 'banished' them is what gave her her new form upon arrival, perhaps that old spell is a part of that world itself now. Humanity is no longer about in Equestria, and can never exist again there. If Tonic found such a thing, her distaste for humans would be a source of conflict, something she might hold against the dragons of Equestria, something that she might well even hold by extension against Spike. She would need to address her issues with humanity, come to peace, and perhaps be able to face what it is to be a dragon, not as a departure from her old race, but as a joining of it, but with her own goals in mind. I am not suggesting she fall back into human ways, just that she address her hatred now that it would be more than just an abstract thing and would bear a very current and real significance to her new form.

>>29456220
GitV has zombies. Zombies are shit. It does manage to handle issues of traditional Alchemy as if it were expanded to a proper science and how it would differ from modern concepts in chemistry. Tungsten being called Wolf's ore, as per "Wolframium" an understanding of beryl, ruby, sapphire, and emerald that does not include its actual chemical makeup (Twilight insisting that there's no way they contain aluminum) -- this sort of thing isn't shit. There are some good concepts to glean. Particularly the whispering voices from the first chapter and how the author wraps them into the final conflict, and bridges the conflict on Earth to the conflict in Equestria, or the foreshadowing with the character's leg and the use of repetition in injuries (3 is the magic number). The character herself is a bit of a Mary Sue, and I am not saying to copy this story or see it as a bible, merely that it gets some things right that this story could bear to improve upon. Foreshadowing, Alchemy, Equestrian race relations. Treasure Mage's story should in no way embrace that alternate timeline or those understandings of the multiverse from that author. Also, one must admit the humor in GitV is well-executed. Pinkie is very much Pinkie, the wording on things is a bit Pratchett- or Adamsesque, and the reason for the tone turns out to be the coping mechanism of the main character, hiding from tragedy in humor and the absurd.

Treasure Mage just needs a good idea of where this story is going in the big picture, how to give us little snippets of where we are going without giving it away, and a true conflict for his protagonist to deal with and grow from.

>>29456266
If this is the case, don't go for a full reveal of it right off the bat. Have it a bit where Tonic has to piece it together and realizes it later, maybe after sleeping on it, or maybe after having read several of the ancient draconic texts.

>>29452216
They said they'd post here. Guess they're still working on the next update and coming up with a trip. Hopefully they'll put it in a pastebin.

>>29456266
Neato. I could see this too

>>29455683

>>29456141
>>29456266
Sounds interesting. I'll give it some thought. I do appreciate the help

Okay, I've been lurking here for ages and I think we should have more writefags. Time to try making some shit.

>You're Anon
>You've been having nightmares for the past week now
>Consistently it's been you being terrorized by some creature out of mythology
>Last night was a hydra, the night before a chimera, and before that minotaur.
>You're curious as to what awaits you tonight. Is it gonna be something stupid like a unicorn impaling you or are you gonna try and run in vain from a dragon.
>Dragon would at least be predictable.
>As you finally drift to sleep, your dream starts playing out before you.
>You're falling above a large forest.
>This is new.
>Knowing how these go, you're gonna wake up just before you land.
>You decide to look around and take in this dreamscape before leaving it in a matter of a minute.
>Everything around you just seems to be normal nature stuff save for a town in the distance.
>Other than the large crystal tree in the center, the town looks generally bland.
>Then again, you can't get that good of a view from this distance.
>Speaking of distance, how far is the ground?
>You crash into a tree as you wonder that and land on the ground.
>It hurts quite a bit but not dying from impact isn't really surprising you.
>This is a dream after all.
>So why didn't you wake up?

>>29458439

>You get up shakily as the feeling of soreness washes over you.
>You quickly dust yourself off and feel your shin as much more rough than before.
>You look down and see that you're covered in lime green scales.
>Upon inspection in a nearby puddle, you see a reptilian face staring back at you.
>Two horns jut out and back from your head like large spikes.
>Rounded spines go down from along your head to your tail.
>Oh right, you have a tail now.
>Sitting right above a surprisingly nice ass.
>Why do you have a nice ass.
>You look down and notice that you also have lizard tits.
>This is a dream.
>Dream logic says lizards have tits and that you're a girl because why not?
>Once you pry yourself away from your shapely lizard butt, you notice that you have wings.
>Very oddly bent wings.
>You try moving one.
>The feedback of pain tells you that is a bad idea and to stop.
>There's no doubt about it, you're a dragon.
>You didn't expect a dream to put you as the mythical creature this time, not that you're complaining.
>It obviously has a lot to offer if your mind made an entire town for you to explore.
>Or terrorize.
>Maybe you should just go and see about meeting someone that could fix your wings.

And that was me attempting contribution to the dragon flood. I might add more later.

>>29458530
Though it lacks emotion, I think it has potential.
Add some pizazz, Anon!

>>29458530
Good start. I especially like the fresh anon with no knowledge of the show. Adds a layer of realism.

>>29457891

>>29458844

>>29458306
If you go with humans as dragon's you could have all of them having died off long ago having had clutches who in turn had their own and so forth until what is now dragonkind, though I would suggest that perhaps the first dragons may have been in a time before Luna and Celestia, making them unable to exact their revenge and leaving the sisters in the dark about their true nature.
Perhaps the sisters thought they had simply gotten rid of humanity and know not of their presence. This could have been due to their own power being relatively young at the time. They would have fulfilled a closed loop in time, the dragons off the land influencing their lives over the years merely by being on the timeline, one that caused their own creation, giving us, the reader, something to mull over regarding causality.
If you need an eventual villain, you need merely a dragon to usurp Ember and for them to be a former human who slipped through the cracks, either separated from their brethren in time or having slumbered or been frozen over the millenia. They would potentially turn other dragons against ponykind, leading to a war that perhaps Tonic, armed with the realization of the villain's true nature through studies, could prevent with the help of her new friends. Perhaps Ember is exiled and her father killed, and they learn of the peril of upcoming war through her. Tonic would be forced to see dragons as humanity, something she tries to distance herself from in embracing dragonhood, while all the same recognizing the good in some dragons whom she would bring to her side. But in the end, do what you want, I'm spitballing here.

>>29459303

>>29460472

>>29460766

>>29461171

>>29459855
Noice. Spit ball away.

>>29462163

I hope edgy dragon anon shows back up. The chocolava story has all of the hallmarks of something actually in MLP abs their characters are enjoyable.

>>29464014

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>>29464801

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>>29464801
>>29465858
>>29465859
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Why are there two transformation generals?

>>29466769
Because dragons and ponies are 2 separate species, anon.

>>29467232
That really, doesn't warrant a second GENERAL.

I mean I like dragons as much as the next guy, but why did you split from the main thread?

>>29467255
We didn't. This general was started because one anon was writing an interesting green that was SUPPOSED TO continue, but the writer got sucked into a black hole or something because they haven't posted any more of their green since a month or so ago.

>>29467281
He started his own general just to post his story?

>>29467296
I think so, but my memory is rather shitty.

>>29467303
Well even if he did my point is that you guys dont need to be in two separate threads. You'll get more readers and feedback if you consolidate anyway.

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>>29466485
I'm calling the pony FBI on your ass, creep

>>29467311
FOR THE LAST GODDAMN TIME, WE'RE NOT MERGING WITH /PTFG/ YOU DROOLING, MOUTHBREATHING TROGLODYTE.

>>29467311
>>29467255
Doesn't having more generals taking up space on the board bump down the shitpost threads faster? Why are you complaining? Merging would just make room for more glimmer threads and shit.

>>29467488
>>29467517
I just want to know WHY NOT

>>29467612
Because fuck you and your general, that's why.

>>29467676
Alright, have fun bumping.

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>>29441804
What happened to Kurgash's greens?

>>29467709

>>29441804
Tonic is cute.
CUTE!

Sadly all we are is bumps no one else seems to even be giving feedback to the writers

>>29450692
I'm not so sure about the apparent lack of self refection within the story about the hinted at disconnect between hormones and tonic, but, other than that it's seems to be gud. I rike it.

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>>29450692
Tonic should fug bookhorse instead.

>>29469436
No. We came here for/ss/, we're gonna get /ss/.

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>>29469444
Let's make it a threeway then.

>>29467709
Alwaysthe same shit. The Pony Transformation General doesn't want us. This may be a bumpfest but when one of our writefriends posts some of his work, I'm always happy to see some great Green. not joking: in this thread I never had a green that is bad. All greens run smoothly and I thank everybody who makes this possible.

>>29469436
>Twilight fucks spike to mark her territory.
>Tug of war ensues for that sweet sweet ss.

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>>29469502
>Pony transformation general doesn't want us.
Not saying you guys have to or should merge, but PTFG almost certainly wouldn't mind having you at all. The general covers all transformations. There are griffin tfs, draconnequus tfs, dragon tfs and changeling tfs there too.

Sorry guys, I'm not dead. I recently found an opportunity for a job that would pretty much set me up for life. I'm trying to focus on the story but it's not that easy since all of this shit is going on

>>29470484
Congrats, man.

>>29458530
Sounds interesting, I like it so far

>>29469815
>>29467488

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>You yelp as Twilight suddenly teleports right in front of you with a flash of light and a loud poof.
>T: "Tonic! I found th-"
"Hell! Is it a running theme to scare the shit out of me today?!"
>T: "What do you mean?"
>Fuck. You didn't mean to say that out loud.
"Oh, n-nothing. I've just been a bit jumpy today..."
>T: "I suppose it has been a pretty big day. But it's about to get bigger!"
>She's smiling ear to ear, it must be something pretty exciting.
>T: "I found the dragon section, and its huge!"
>What?!
"What?!"
>That's amazing! This could be what you hoped for!
"What are we waiting for, let's go!"
>Twilight leads you through the maze of bookshelves that is the crystal library.
>What's this?
>Is that a wall at the end of your path?
>So this place has an end after all.
>And at the end is....one small bookshelf?
>T: "There it is Tonic! The dragon section!"
"You're joking right? I thought you said it was huge..."
>T: "This IS huge! The most you ever see on dragons is a few books at most. I still can't believe that Rarity didn't show me the dragon book she has until now."
>Gee, I wonder why. Maybe she actually wanted it back.
"Well, I guess it's something...let's see what we have to deal with."

Alright I'm gonna try and get back into it here. This is all I can get for now because I gotta work, but I'll try for some more later

>>29472320
He's back and congrats on the job bump

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>>29458530
good stuff man. you should keep going

>>29474600

>>29475423

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>>29467612
Why not? Because PTFG is a shitty thread filled to the brim with fetish fags. All they post is weird ass pictures and boring greens (In my opinion on the greens.) That and every fucking thread i see that has anything to do with Anon turning into something one of the faggots from PTFG post "Merge this with PTFG! " and never fuck off. It's so bad even Anonfilly refuses to merge.

>>29441804
>Fire Rooster
We need a fire dragon Anon addicted to chicken.

>>29472320
I hope you get that job bruh
Also
>I would run that card in my commander deck

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Durgons

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>>29477334
It's a staple in my decks, along with Trinket Mage and Trophy Mage

>>29472320
>Twilight and you walk up to the bookshelf and examine all of the tomes there.
>There only appears to be about twenty books on the small shelf. But from what Twilight said, that should be more than enough.
>These tomes are dusty.
>Every book here has been kept in prestine condition, especially through their thousand year stasis, but these ones are dusty.
"When was the last time anyone looked at these?"
>Twilight levitates a few of them and dusts them off.
>T: "It's hard to say, not many people study dragons. All they need to know about them is portrayed in their behavior."
>She looks over at you and blushes.
>T: "n-no offense..."
"Right..."
>She levitates one of the books into your grasp and then she starts flipping through a book of her own.
>The book in your hands is heavy, and leather bound with parchment pages.
>Some of the pages are loose and sticking out of the sides.
>What really catches your eye is the title: Draconic Reagents.
"This book is on alchemy!"
>Twilight looks up from her book at you.
>T: "how do you know that?"
>Fuck! She doesn't know you can read draconic!
"Uuuh, well...look at this!"
>You flip to a random page with an illustration on it (pic related).
"That looks like some alchemy stuff to me..."
>Good save.
>It also looks weird as fuck, why is the dragon in a beaker?
>T: "Oh I see, I've been trying to connect some of the illustrations I've seen myself. It's too bad we can't read that, it could help you."
"Right..."
>You turn the book back toward yourself and find a paragraph next to the picture to start reading.

>>29477863
Ye boi

>>29477863
>'We dragons are the best mages and alchemists because we know what makes them elite: Sacrifice.'
>This is legit. A book written by dragons before their apparent decent into madness.
>At least, you assume multiple dragons worked on this...
>Before continuing, you look around the page to find the author of this particular chapter.
>This is the mad ravings of one...Sizzle the Wise.
>Alright, he sounds like a G. What about this sacrifice he was talking about...
>You run your finger along the words until you find the spot you left off.
>Being careful not to tear the book a new one with your claws of course.
>'The more primitive races such as the minotaurs and yetis could be brought to light, but their shamanistic ways would bare little fruit in the persuit of true power.'
>Maybe it's just Sizzle here, but perhaps dragons were always batshit. Maybe they just traded the arcane for brute force.
>'The ponies and horses of this world, they infuriate me the most. They know nothing of sacrifice. They deem it to be taboo and unlawful, they would put restrictions on the truth itself.'

>>29478113
Oh boy it's a " the dragons sacrificed virgins " episode

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Dirgins

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>>29478482
Dorgons

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>/mlp/ has has THREE transformation generals going at any one time.

wew lad

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>>29478486
Dergens

>>29478113
Bringing out that classic dragon shit, makes me wanna post the dragon anon OP pic.

>>29478113
>At the end of the last sentence, you can see an ink blot where Sizzle must have broken his quill from pressing too hard.
>'We dragons put our blood, sweat, and tears into our craft. It's because of this that we have risen to the top, that none dispute our land claims, that none surpass the drakes!'
>Laying it on a little heavy there aren't we Sizzle?
>Well, maybe you can be a bit excessive at times too.
>The next paragraph is like a whole new world.
>The hand writing is still the same, but it looks a lot more neat and organized.
>Maybe he had to take a breather.
>In the paragraph that follows, he details the findings of his personal sacrifices.
>All things in Equestria are infused with magic of some kind. None more than alicorns, but dragons are a close second.

>>29478492
There are actually four.

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>>29478492
Welcome.

>>29478631
Fuck, really? What's the fourth one besides /ptfg/, /dtfg/, and Anonfilly?

I do believe we confirmed that Tonic was bisexual in the last thread? I know there wasn't really any opposition

>>29479004
yes

>>29478588
>It looks like Sizzle found a way to make potions using...parts of himself.
>His scales, his saliva, his own fire, even his blood.
>All of these things have certain properties that can be used in potions or rituals.
>The ponies must have outlawed this kind of practice because crazy assholes might start hunting people for reagents.
>Even still, the power that some of these potions could produce...
>You have to try some of this.
>What sort of potions could you make from an alicorn?! That's a dangerous question.
>You wish you could just keep this book...
"Hey Twilight, you think the library would let us buy some of these? They probably wouldn't miss-"
>You turn your head toward her mid sentence and find that she isn't meeting your gaze.
>Rather, she appears to be...checking out your ass?
>She keeps glancing from your ass to her book and then back again.
"Uh...Twilight?"
>Twilight's cheeks had slowly been gaining color, but she fully blushed when you catch her.
>T: "Oh! Sorry, Tonic...this book is..."
>you take the book from her and start looking over the page she was on.
"What's in this book that has to deal with my ass?"
>T: "Well, it's more about your tail..."

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>>29479399
Go on.

>>29479399
Tail was up.....tots checking out your Vag-Cloaca thing a magiger, WHAT EVER FUCK HOLE SHE HAS!

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>>29479399
>>29479004
Yess yess

Fug the twiggle horse

>>29479399
2 motha fuckin dubs in a row, the gods of green have blessed my return.

>You look closer at the illustration on the page.
>Sure as shit, it looks like a diagram on dragons during certain seasons.
>Dragon scales become lighter tints during winter and then darker shades during summer...guess that's interesting.
"What's this got to do with my tail?"
>T: "Um...the previous page."
>You turn the page back and see another diagram, this one looking more lewd.
>When dragons are ready to mate, some of their scales turn an orange color, but it's mostly on their tails...
>Wait, when do they mate?'
>Looks like...around spring?
>The dragon in the drawing has an orange tail just after the winter months.
>What time of year is it? It's not winter, but you haven't exactly paid attention to any of the leaves on the trees.
>The weather doesn't feel particularly warm or cold since you're resistant to just about everything.
"What season is it...?"
>T: "It's spring..."
>Fuck.
"Fuck."
>T: "Maybe your new body just hasn't realized the season yet."
"But when /will/ it? I don't think I'm ready for this shit, humans aren't that crazy when it comes to this!"
>Well, males aren't that crazy anyway. The point is you've never dealt with this shit!

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>>29480516
3 dubs...

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>>29480556
>off by one

>>29480556
Damn near got trips.

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>>29481126

>>29481154
>>29481126
You both missed.

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Three ponies means trips.

>>29480500
Bisexual shipping bump

>>29481159
Well I attempted at least

>>29481632

>>29481632
I like to think my first smut went well. Now I just gotta think of some lesbo shit to do. It's harder than it sounds

>>29482705
I know this feel.

>>29482187

>>29483548

>>29483969

>>29484431

Beep

>>29465859

>>29481632

>>29485760

I'm gonna start working on a few updates, still got nothing on the lesbo thing. Does anyone got tips on lesbo smut? If so, why aren't you writing yourself

>>29486518
>Why aren't you writing
Because I'm lazy.
>How to Lesbo Smut?
I've only done humanized stuff, but in my experience, try to play through it in your head. If it's hot, then put it in words. Also use a lot of details, like describing the curve of Twi's ass, or the sheen of Tonic's scales in the lantern light of the library. Details help pull the reader in, get their imagination going so they can visualize it clearly in their head.

>>29480500
>T: "You'll be fine, Tonic. I dont imagine it's very different from us ponies, me and the girls will be here for you."
>What if you've already been experiencing it?
>You've been quite the deviant since you got here.
>Maye your scales haven't turned color but you still feel the effects of your spring cycle.
>DOUBLE FUCK!
>This also means you missed winter wrap up!
>T: "Tonic!"
>Your brought back to reality by Twilight's voice.
>You just now notice that you've been staring into space, inches away from hyperventilating this whole time.
"Wha-?! Oh, yeah, I'm good now."
>T: "It's not that big of a deal. I remember my first time in heat. It was...an experience."
>Twilight tries to reassure you by placing a hoof on your hand, but it takes you off guard.
>'Back away book horse, I'm dangerous right now!' you think to yourself.
>'Any minute I could go all rapey!'
>You think you feel your eye twitching again.

>>29486873
>T: "Tonic..."
>God damn, you almost lost yourself again.
"What about Spike?"
>T: "Spike? What about him?"
"Has he ever...you know...?"
>Twilight begins to look as panicked as you.
>T: "what?! No, he's too young for that!"
"He's more mature than you think, Twilight."
>T: "Even still, I think I would've noticed if he was going through something like that."
"There's always a first for everything, it could happen this year..."
>Now you're scaring yourself more than Twilight.
>You need to lock yourself away.
>T: "N-no...he's too young..."
>In your panic, Twilight and you were ignorant to some approaching footsteps.
>S: "Hey guys!"
>You yelp rather loudly as Spike greets the two of you.
>Twilight and you turn to face Spike and freeze.
>There are a few small spots on his arms that appear to have changed color.

>>29487243
>Twilight and you share a knowing but worries look.
>Twilight goes limp and damn near faints with a weary sigh.
>You catch her with your arms and keep her upright.
>You talk to Spike and simultaneously slap Twilight's face to wake her up.
"Hey, uh...Spike! How's your...day been?!"
>Twilight's eyes are open but rolled into the back of her head.
>S: "Um...is she ok?"
"What?! She fine! Just look at her!"
>You deliver a hard smack to her backside and her eyes roll forward again as she yelps in surprise.
>T: "Ow! Oh, hey Spike!"
>Twilight regains her balance and you push her out of your arms.
"See? She's just just a little tired."
>S: "You girls are so weird. Anyway, I let Starlight know about dinner later, and it looks like Sunburst might be able to make it!"
>T: "That's...great! That's great, I'm looking forward to seeing what he's been up to."
>S: "I can say the same with you guys, you've been here for a while. What's that book you have there Tonic?"
>You clap the book shut and put it behind your back.
"Oh this? It's nothing too interesting, just...anatomy."
>S: "Well that sounds pretty boring. Please tell me you found something interesting."
"Y-yeah, I was just...gonnagoseeificouldbuythesebooks! Bye!"
>You scoop up the books you're interested in and make your way to Twilight, where you take the sack of bits she has.
>She gives you a narrow eyes stare as you hurriedly walk down the row of aisles toward the front desk.

>>29486665
Nice off-by-one family

That actually does really help. Just those examples you gave sounded pretty hot. Good shit

>>29487583
>You are Twilight, and you were wrong.
>It looks like Spike is exhibiting the signs of maturity laid out in the book you just read.
>Tonic was right, it's happening.
>Spike is becoming a mature drake.
>No! You won't let it happen!
>Now now Twilight, it has to happen eventually...
>But right now?! There's too much going on right now! Your own cycle isn't too far away!
>To: "Bye!"
>Tonic grabs her books and then makes her way over to you, where she takes your sack of bits.
>She winks at you and then quickly walks away.
>Darn her, now you have to face Spike.
>You continue to stare her down as she makes her way to the front of the library.
>S: "Twilight?"
>You shift your gaze to Spike beside you.
"Yes, Spike?"
>S: "Why were you staring at her like that?"
"What do you mean?"
>S: "You've been staring at her walking away for about fifteen seconds..."
"Uh...no reason."
>Wait, why were you staring at her?
>You think back to the previous seconds of staring.
>You were lost in thought, but your eyes had a mind of their own during your inner monologue.
>Your eyes explored every inch of her that they could...but why?
>You've never felt like this before...

Sorry if I'm annoying you guys with my use of ellipsis, I just...fucking love them.

Not even into MLP, but a friend directed me here due to my love of writing prompts.

>Temptation grows

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>>29488399
DO IT FAGGOT

>>29488435
Good God this is his master plan to indoctrinate me isn't it?

>>29488399
These guys deserve better than me, do it family

>>29488499
So, story in green text yes?


I just might actually do this

>>29488499
>better than you
Is that even possible? You're one of the steadiest green producers I've had the pleasure of knowing.

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>>29488451
Not necessarily, although it would certainly make things simpler.
I think he just wants more green.

>>29488399 here, deciding to try

>You had been having an off
week.
>Balancing work with your own personal wants as best you can.
>It's not always easy.
>Sometimes you just want to bury your face in a pillow and scream.
>Tonight was one of those nights.
>You had been drinking, cheap wine clinging to your breath.
>Everything felt so unfair.
>The world just seems to be against you.
>You slump down at your computer desk, your haggard eyes glued to the screen.
>"Why do I do this?" you mutter.
>The longer you stare at that damnable screen, the more it hurts.
>So many people with promise, yet here you are.
>Drunk and alone.
>Just waiting for your next fucking shift.
>You feel emptiness in you. Your thoughts echoing in the void.
>It can be over.
>You take one last swig of booze, staggering to your window.
>The window of the shit flat you can hardly afford.
>You look down at the busy street below.
>"This world doesn't need me" you mutter as you squeeze your eyes shut.
>You're falling.
>The sensation is scary, yet serene.
>It's so fast, it's a race to the end.
>Your end.
>You'll hit the ground soon, you know it.
>But, right as you go splat, that's when you woke up.
How's that for an opening? Should I continue?

>>29488595
Interesting...
Continue, please. I'd like to see where you take this.

>>29488625
I'll try to! I know very little about MLP, so I might have to do some light research before diving in full, y'know? If I'm gonna write something, I want to know what I'm talking about dammit!

>>29488642
Take your time, m80.

>>29488595
>Everything felt so different.
>You pondered if this was some afterlife you've found yourself in.
>It's possible, but suicide gets you into hell.
>But you felt just fine.
>You see the grass in front of your face, the vibrant green grass on the ground.
>Your flat wasn't anywhere near plant life, let alone grass this picturesque.
>"Something is weird..." you mutter.
>Your voice.
>It's higher, more smooth, effeminate even.
>The details of your body begin to be more clear.
>Scales, a light golden layer of them cover every bit of your body.
>You run a clawed hand over them.
>So rigid and smooth, it's almost mesmerising.
>And your face.
>You can't see it all, but from the bottom of your vision you can see something.
>A snout.
>It feels so weird, to look at it no matter where you look.
>Yet, even so soon it's starting to feel normal.
>Almost as normal as being nude.
>"What?"
>Your body is only covered by your own scales.
>The sunlight gleams off your skin.
>Did you actually just blush?
>You swish your tail back and forth a bit.
>Tail.
>You decide to focus on that later.
>It's pretty easy to tell what you are.
>Even if you still felt drunk you could tell that you were a dragon.
>Well, a draginesd.
>It made absolutely no sense.
>Was this some dying hallucination?
>Was this hell?
>Did you really make the cut for heaven?
>Your head is starting to hurt from all of this.
>What is going on here?
>You manage to push those thoughts aside, standing up shakily.
>You feel smaller too.
>After a few embarrassing attempts, you can slowly start walking.
>The surroundings...
>The brightness when it was just nighttime...
>Your form...
>Why was this starting to make a little sense?
>Why did it feel familar?

>>29488756
Ugh. Autocorrect typos. My punishment for not being at my PC 24/7.

>>29487830
Damn, I was close. Didn't even notice. Also I can link a paste for one really lewd story I did a while ago, if you want. Not at all dragon related though.

>>29488399
>A friend.
>Kolaghan
Is this your doing, Mage?

You're doin great by the way, new writefag.

>>29488221
Nice update

>>29488914
I'd like to read your story. I'll try my best to not borrow any material

Kologhan's arrival 'twas not my doing, but it is a welcomed blessing

>>29488756
I really like your descriptions so far
>Light gold
Wew lad, nice color

>>29489333
Alright, here's the link.
I made this for /incest/, it's humanized and is AiE with Octavia and Vinyl. Also, don't tell them or /mom/ I'm here.
http://pastebin.com/FAvzE2da

Also feel free to borrow to your heart's content, I don't give a fuck.

This thread is getting good

>>29489896

>>29488914
Hah. Their name inspired me. "Oh hey, an MTG card for a screen name that's cool!"


So I did the same

>>29488642
it's time to get on the ride Kolaghan

>>29490351

>>29490572
Looks like I have, seeing as how I'm still here!

>>29491096
good now all you need is a waifu

>>29490432
Dromoka is best dragon, sorry m80

>>29491601
Run her in Atraxa, but I gotta love my mardu

>>29488059
>S: "So, did you find any good history books for Tonic? I know you said that you were going to try and teach her eventually."
>You shake yourself free of your strange thoughts.
"I took her to the history section and had her learn about the different recess here in Equestria, but the lesson was cut short."
>That's right! Tonic used to be a human, you had almost forgot!
"Tonic told me that she used to be a human, Spike! This is big news!"
>S: "What?! You mean those things from that book you used to read all the time? Monkeys from space or something...?"
>You give Spike a dead stare.
"Simians of the Great Expanse..."
>S: "That's kind of rediculous don't you think?"
"What about her arrival here /isn't/ ridiculous?!"
>S: "But she said she was always a dragon when she first got here."
"She wanted a new start, Spike. It took a lot of courage for her to tell us the truth, and I think your support would mean a lot to her given how close you two have become."
>Spikes face gets a little red.
>S: "'close?' Who said we were close?! Was it Tonic?! Did she say that?"
>You roll your eyes.
"There's no need to be shy around new friends Spike."

>>29491829
>S: "Right. Friends..."
>He looks a little forlorn for some reason.
>You were about to say something but he speaks up instead.
>S: "So if you were learning about history, why are you all the way back here? It took me forever to find you guys."
>That's right...you have to face Spike.
>Maybe you could do it later?
>No, now is the perfect time.
"We were just looking st this shelf here. It's the dragon section."
>S: "Wow! That's a lot more dragon books than you have!"
>You growl at him.
>S: "Right. Sorry."
"Anyway, Tonic and I found some pretty interesting books. We couldn't read them of course, but the illustrations told us enough."
>S: "What were they about?"
"Weeelll...uh..."
>Where do you even begin?
>You aren't prepared to have this talk.
>Well, you are...but the guide you wrote up is back at the castle!
>Note to self, bring all lists with you, no matter how much you think you won't need them.
"What, uh...what's that on your arms there...?"
>S: "Oh these spots? I don't know, they just appeared this morning."
>This morning? How did you not notice?!
>Maybe that whole incident with Tonic distracted you.
>And then she got that dress from Rarity.
>That is a /very/ nice dress...
>She looks amazing in-
>S: "It doesn't hurt, Twilight, honest. I think my scales are just acting weird because of the weather again."

>>29492078
"I don't think that's the case Spike."
>S: "What is it then? Is it some kind of disease?! One that you read about in one of those books?!"
"No no, it's just that...in one of the books it stated that dragon's scales turn color when..."
>S: "When the seasons change from warm to cold. I thought we already figured that out."
"Well, yes, but..."
>S: "I gotta say though, I've been feeling a lot more energetic and strong lately."
"I think that's because-"
>S: "I think I'm growing a bit taller too! I'm above the notches in the doorway-"
"Spike you're getting ready to mate!"
>You throw a hoof up to cover your mouth, but it's too late.
>The heat in your cheeks is intense.
>You just had to yell it out didn't you?
>You're not handling this correctly Twilight, your messing it all up!
>S: "I'm...getting ready to mate?"
>Might as well just come out with it. All pretense of subtlety is gone.
"The dragon's mating season is in the spring, kind of like ponies. But when a dragon is ready, some of their scales turn an orange color."
>S: "You read that...in one of those books? Which one? Let me see!"
"It was one of the ones that Tonic took with her."
>Spike looks mortified.
>S: "Tonic knows?! Did she see my scales?!"
"I think so."
>The redness on Spike's face mirrors your own.

Sorry about all of the typos guys. Being a mobile fag isn't all that great.

>>29492614
No replies yet? Shame.

Wonder who Tonic is gonna get it on with first. Probably Twilight.

>>29492614
liking it so far Mage, looking forward to further updates and when Tonic and Twilight get lewd together

>>29492614
i want more asap please! sorry if that was a bit too rude...

>>29441804
Where's my chocolava story?

>>29493830
ded

Tomorrow me and some buddies are going LARPing. It's gonna be a ton of fun, but that also means I wont be able to update all weekend again. Stay strong m8s

>>29494384
were are you protesting?

Any pitfalls I should avoid when writing with preexisting characters? Have little to no interaction with these characters and don't want to disappoint!

>>29495122
Watch the first two episodes, that should have you a basic understanding of the six main characters. Spike (dopey little purple durgon) is the comic relief character that sees little to no development throughout the series.

>>29495222
>little to no development
>implying

>>29495244

yeah alright.
He gets some development, but that's not until halfway through the entire damn series.
Do YOU think there are any other episodes Kolaghan should watch for reference?

>>29495222
First off, good digits. Second, I'm watching now. So far, more into it than I expected

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>>29495122
>>29495222
>>29495244
>>29495488
>4 gets in 5 posts
Kek wants you to become a horsefucker, Kolaghan.

Okay, I think it's safe to say I'm a fan.

>>29495730
ONE OF US, ONE OF US, ONE OF US...

>>29495843


Yes I am! Yes I am!


Good God what have you done to me?

>>29495730
I've been on the ride since season 1...it's never gotten old

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>tfw never actually watched the show
Guess I'm just here for the greens then.

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>>29495488
>So far, more into it than I expected
here we go boys

>>29497278
Wouldn't say it's the greatest thing ever, but I've enjoyed what I've seen so far.

>>29497552
better than we usually get from normies, we don't expect people to worship the show and characters, watching it because it's enjoyable is the only reason any of us are here anyway

>>29497704
Ah, am I but a normie? That stings me so anon!

>>29497793
unless you've fapped to superior pony pussy then you are a normie

>>29498416
Duly noted I suppose?

bamp

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Bump

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>>29499562
DELET

boop

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>>29499562
fucking hell you got me

Sitting down and actually aiming to finish season one tonight, so here's a bump for you

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>>29498854
Give it time.

>>29501407
Seeing as how I'm probably sticking around, who's your go to pony?


Not something I ever thought I'd ask when working on a writing prompt.

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>>29501180
Good luck fampai. Two little things to keep in mind from now on:

YOU'RE HERE FOREVER
and
THE RIDE NEVER ENDS

>>29501433
I think Twilight is the easiest to write, as from what I've seen you can literally give her any personality you want and people are cool with it.

>>29501446
Watching as I type this. Can't say I'm upset about my one way ride.>>29501469

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>>29501486
I wasn't really thrilled about the first few episodes either, but I was entertained enough to keep watching.

Don't think I was really hooked until I'd seen the first few really good songs like Winter Wrap Up, Smile, and This Day Aria. But if you're not a sap who loves musicals those probably wont do much for you.

>>29501531
So it's going to appeal to my love of musicals too?


I'm getting more and more on the hook.

>>29501581
Oh man. You're in for a treat. Let us know what you think.

Speaking of musical numbers, I wonder if any anons turned dragon will experience spontaneous musical numbers in this new land

>>29502941
Man my story is kinda more grounded so far but I now really want to do that.

>>29488756
>Walking took some effort at first.
>You had always been so used to being a human.
>No tail to worry about for sure back then.
>You can't help but look back at it as it calmly sways behind you.
>By all means you s hpuld be having something of a mental breakdown.
>Or maybe you were in the middle of one.
>You feel immensely stupid for doing this, but you try pinching yourself.
>Firsty: Scales.
>Second: You wouldn't be dreaming of you fell from a building.
>Or did you jump?
>Now that you're sober both options seem incredibly stupid.
>Isn't hindsight a bitch?
>As you slowly walked, looking back at your tail and staving off an existential crisis, you weren't paying much attention to ahead of you.
>A sharp thud knocks you to the ground. >In the short moments of you fallimg you feel like you did when you went out that window.
>"Do I really need to add vertigo to the list of things wrong with today?" You think as you start picking yourself off the ground.
>Someone is profusely apologizing to you.
>That voice.
>Where do you know that voice?
>You look up, confusion reading at you.
>And then it all hit you.
>It hit you the moment you saw that yellow pony.
>In what seemed like some cruel running joke the universe is playing on you, you fall yet again.
>You, a small dragoness just fainted.
>Fainted in front of what you assumed was a fictional character.
>And things were only just starting to get weird.

>>29504263

>>29504950

>>29503578
oh boy, flutter butter

>>29505578

So, MC is going to get a new name next chapter? Paragraph? Reply? Whatever you want to call it. Any suggestions, or shall I take it into my own hands?

>>29506522
how about Anduin ?

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>>29503578
Maybe Khoa? It's Lao for gold.

>>29506690
Hmm, I like that!

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Daburu Doragon

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>>29497133
Watch Season 1 and 2 at least

That's before everything goes to shit.

>>29507465
Nah. I watched like a dozen episodes from here and there on some streaming service.
I liked it, but I wouldn't deliberately seek to watch the show. That doesn't mean I can't enjoy a good green though.

Emerald? Emerald! EMMMMMERRRRAAAAALLLLLLLLLD!!!

TIME PARADOX

>>29510387

Write fag says bump

>>29513027

>You started to wake up soon after.
>Well, you hoped this was soon after.
>The first thing you noticed was that you were still a Dragon.
>Unless you were pulling some weird Inception stuff, it was safe to say this was 100% no dream.
>The next thing that came to your attention was your surroundings.
>Not outside anymore, and it seems that you were put on a bed.
>Put on a bed by her...
>That had to have been fake, there was no wa-
>"Ah! Y-you're awake!" Exclaimed a very familiar voice.
>Sure enough, a pony ran over.
>No denying it, this was Fluttershy.
>Well, this probably rules out hell too...
>But you are a girl now.
>Okay, maybe this is hell.
>You can't help but chuckle at the thought.
>Then feel really guilty considering she's staring right at you.
>So many weird feelings right now.
>But, either luckily or unluckily, it seemed any prior attraction was just a memory.
>"U-um... hello?" Asks Fluttershy.
>"Huh?" You ask.
>Smooth. You meet an apparently real pony and you zone out on her.
>"A-Are you doing okay? I'm so sorry for running into you!!" She asks, looking down a little.
>"No! It's okay! I ran into you, I should be the one apologizing!" You spit out quickly.
>The apology back and forth went on for a while.
>In the end, it was agreed that both should look where they're walking.
>You never thought apologizing could be so taxing, you wanted to go back to sleep.
>But... Fluttershy is still right there.
>Attraction or not, this isn't something that happens every day.
>Now just what to talk about?
>...
>Literally nothing comes to mind.
>You can't just say "Hi! I'm actually a man! And human!"
>"You uh... never told me your n-name" said Fluttershy politely.
>Leaving the shy one to break the ice, another smooth move.
>Regardless, that's easy enough to share.
>Or it would be if your name fit a golden Dragon.
>Well shit.
>Time to think fast! What's a good name?
>"I uh..." you stammer.
>Here goes nothing.

Hey everyone! How am I doing? I've actually bitten the bullet and included character interaction! Would love some feedback on things so far!

>>29514463
Is good.

>>29514472
Thanks, any specifics?

>>29514522
Whaddaya mean, specifics?

>>29514529
Like, specific things that are good. Or perhaps things I should work on.

>>29514535
Sorry, but I'm shit-tastic at specifics like that.

>>29514549
Eh, it's fine! As long as you think it's good, I know I'm on a good track

>>29515306

>>29514449
aurum

If you haven't picked a name yet
It's Latin for gold

>>29514463
Try and slow it down and paint a good picture of the surrounding, it helps for immersion. I'm not perfect at it but I try.

Also LARPing is going great, I'm sneaking a peek at my phone for the time being

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>>29515509
[patient waiting intensifies]

>>29515509
>LARPing
I know what it means but what do you actually do?

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The writefag will surely deliver, we just have to be pat

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>>29514449
Yeah, try slowing it down just a little. Remember that you can use as many words, sentences, even paragraphs as you need to get everything from surroundings to characters expressions described and into the readers head to imagine it all for themselves. Great stuff so far, good work on describing the protag with actions and events. A couple implications go a long way.

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>>29441806
Woofr is under unfinished, but isn't his green finished? He said it was done back in the old dragon anon thread and officially named it "Echoes" from what I remember.

>>29514449
>"Well, before I ran into you, I woke up outside with... no recollection of anything" you lie.
>Amnesia, now you sound like some stereotypical RPG protagonist, but hey- if it works, it works.
>Fluttershy gasps at the mention of memory loss, instantly burying you in concerned questions.
>"Are you okay?"
>"Is your head hurt?"
>"Can you remember anything at all?"
>And on and on.
>You wince a little as you raise your voice to get her to calm down.
>"I honestly feel fine, save for my mind. The only thing I sort of remember is... what I think is my name..." you manage to say.
>Fluttershy looks at you expectingly.
>In the time since her original question, you did come up with a half decent name.
>In all honesty it was just the name of one of your Pathfinder characters but it would do, especially when considering your scales.
>You nod a little to her, saying "Y-yeah, call me Khoa."
>Well, it was official.
>You were rolling with this.
>Whatever was happening, you had accepted it was in some form reality.
>You've even named the creature you've become.
>Khoa...
>Until you figure things out here, or find a way back- that's you.

>>29516284
You dress up in period accurate clothes and paint yourself to look like a fantasy race (or just be a human) and then you walk around and kill monsters and make allies with your weapons and magic

>>29517448
What do you LARP as?

>>29517471
Basically a Frankenstein's monster with a huge axe

>>29517957
Huh, cool!

I'm pretty much all table top myself.

>>29517168
Very cozy.


“Good morning.”
>Your eyes opened slowly, almost all on their own.
>And you were instantly blown away by what you saw.
>Sunlight seemed to have become super condensed above you, shooting just below the high arching marble ceiling above in strange arcs and even tights twists and turns.
>Everything was… blurry, it was strange.
“Ah yes, try blinking.”
>That voice again, it was coming from your right.
>It was so very feminine, soft and soothing like a mother might be.
>You blinked and noticed that shortly after opening your eyes again the blurriness was gone.
>You smiled, seeing how beautiful everything above you really was.
>The light was dancing between floating crystals that glowed every color of the visible spectrum, rebounding silently and constantly.
>Golden orbs hovered up there too, sometimes passing through beams of sunlight and glowing even brighter.
>You could see the bright blue sky outside through the tall, old English style latticed windows in the wall at the other end of the room.
>Beds in lines were arrayed from one end of the room to the other.
>As far as you could tell, you were alone in this vast chamber with whoever was speaking.
>This was all very strange, but you couldn’t really complain and there didn’t seem to be any reason to panic or worry at all.
>Sighing happily, you spoke up.
>”Where am I?”
“You’re in the medical ward at the Royal Palace in Canterlot, youngling.”
>That voice again, you turned onto your side to face the speaker.
>She was a horse.
>You did a triple take, your surprise and confusion building.
>Her mane was a flowing rainbow, all shimmery in the light from above, and her fur was pure white.
>She even had a unicorn horn and wings, both as pristine as alabaster.
>There was a tender, loving smile on her snout, and her eyes shamed amethysts with how deep and purple they were.

>>29518228
>Just looking into those eyes seemed to calm you down.
>It would be fine, you were in some sort of hospital and this lady horse almost certainly wasn’t going to hurt you.
>You instinctively pulled your covers over your body, heartbeat slowing.
>But at the back of your mind you noticed there was something very different here.
>More so than the talking horse or the strange lights above you.
>Unless you were imagining things, your voice was at a much higher pitch than it should be.
>And your skin felt different too, the way it rubbed against the covers was smoother and there was no static at all.
>Above all, the way your weight was distributed was obviously different.
>Your hips and chest were pushing into the mattress much more than they should be, and you felt a strange heaviness around your backside.
>The horse set one of her fore hooves on the bed and gazed into your eyes.
“I’m here to help you take all this in slowly. This land is called Equestria, and it is filled with magic.”
>You laughed.
>”This is definitely a dream. But what’s your name?”
>The lady horse giggled, her mane bobbing a little.
“I’m Princess Celestia. What makes you say this is a dream little one?”
>”There’s no such thing as magic.”
>Yeah that was much easier, this was all just a dream.
>That’s why you felt all weird, you must be having some sort of lucid dream.
“If the dream is lucid then you should be able to change it as you see fit, right?”
>You blinked and focused on Princess Celestia again.
>”Can you read my mind?”
>She smiled wider.
“Sorry, that was a little obtrusive of me. But your Stream speaks to me, it seems to speak to everyone in fact.”
>Your brows furrowed as you mulled that over.
>”So you’re saying everyone can read my- No. Stop. Dream, it’s just a dream. And you’re right, I can change this, I’ll change it right now.”

>>29518234
>Celestia pulled her hoof away and sat up straight in her chair.
>She didn’t say a word while you focused hard on the dream, she just smiled.
>You’d give yourself a mug full of hot chocolate and a fresh pair of pyjamas, it was impossible not to be comfortable with all that.
>You closed your eyes, sat up in bed and thought hard.
>Hot chocolate.
>Pyjamas.
>…
>You opened your eyes and looked down at yourself.
>Pearly white scales covered your entire body, and your fingers ended in claws.
>Your features were slimmed down in the waist and more than just “noticeably” widened in the hips.
>You gulped, like you were staring down a double barrel instead of a pair of breasts.
>Which were attached to your chest.
>Your breasts.
>They were maybe uh…
>You pushed the left one up a little, it was surprisingly heavy.
>Yeah, you were a solid C cup, probably pushing up to D even.
>”How…”
“The latent magic in Equestria changed your form shortly after you arrived.”
>You looked at Princess Celestia again.
>She had a mug of what was unmistakeably hot chocolate hovering in front of her.
>Floating, wrapped in a golden light.
>”Magic. This is all real.”
>Celestia sipped on her hot chocolate.
“Yes.”
>You felt your blood rush up to your cheeks and you knew you were blushing a deep red through your pale scales.
>”Could I get a pair of pyjamas then?”
>Giggling, Celestia popped a pair of pyjamas into existence for you.

S'all I got for now. Later dragonbros.

http://pastebin.com/YUgjpmUL

>>29518249
looking good so far

>>29517168
(Going to change the formatting on my dialog, going with the flow and all that!)
>Going on from that name, things were relatively smooth.
>Relatively.
>Fluttershy offered to let you stay with her for a while, at least until memories came back and you got back on my own feet.
>Well, the whole memory thing wouldn't technically ever happen, but you weren't going to point that out.
>In the end, you couldn't really say no to the offer.
>You had no place to stay, no real identity, and you knew Fluttershy would be a caring house mate.
>Once everything had been stored away, she left you alone for a while to collect yourself.
>Finally alone again, you could reflect on whatever was going on.
>Your memories leading up to everything are still all fuzzy.
>Looking past that you were in Equestria. And a dragon.
>There's no way this just happened without reason, something had to have caused this.
>Magic came to mind, as crazy as it sounded.
>If you are a dragon right now, surely a magical explanation isn't totally off the table.
>That did leave open a lot of suspects, and that's assuming this was an intentional use of magic.
>Maybe you could start asking around, see if anybody caused this.
>Assuming this wasn't some "dying hallucination".
>You fall back onto the bed with a sigh.
>Focusing on all of this at once was just going to eat away at you.
>For now... more sleep would probably be nice.

>>29518249
Now we got a white dragon too!

I'm loving this btw

>>29519400
Gonna make ourselves a crayon box of dragons soon enough

>>29518868
looking good so far

I'm gonna start in tomorrow when I'm back in the daily grind. I'm glad there's some new writers to keep you guys reading when I decide to be a deadbeat

>>29520803
Can't wait to read more!

>>29522514
I mean, if the person becomes a Dragon in apparently dying- have they technically killed a Dragon? Yet, are they truly dead at all if they're a Dragon?


Khoa's existence raises too many questions even for the author.

>>29520803
Bamp

>>29518249
>The pyjamas appeared neat, clean and folded at the end of your bed.
>You blushed harder, staring at them, holding your covers up to your chest.
>You’d hoped she would just magically poof them onto you.
>But instead, Celestia was staring at you expectantly, and still with that smile.
>”Do you mind uhh, turning around?”
>Princess Celestia blinked, looking bemused, but she nodded and hovered herself and her chair around anyway.
>You quickly got up out of bed and grabbed the white satin blouse that was laid out for you.
>Fumbling a little because of your claws, you did up the buttons.
>It covered you comfortably, the implication of Celestia knowing all of your measurements was a little unnerving though.
>You still grabbed the pants anyway, and tried to pull them up, but to no avail.
>They just kept bumping against something.
>You blushed and cursed softly, thinking about how you must look with your butt hanging half out in front of a princess.
>Still cursing, you looked behind you, down at your posterior.
>Ah, you had a tail.
>It was quite thick at the base, thicker than both of your arms, but it tapered off before flaring out into a soft looking, feathery spade.
>Your first thought was that there must be a some sort of-
“Would you like some help?”
>You spun right around to face Celestia, or at least, Celestia’s side.
>She’d craned her long neck out and had obviously been staring at you this whole time.
>There wasn’t any sort of perverse lust or stiffness in her expression at all though.
>Princess Celestia just smiled, looking mildly confused.
>You on the other hand, you blushed and pulled up desperately on your pants, practically wedgying yourself.
“Also, is there a particular reason for me turning around? Is this a custom where you’re from?”
>”I’m naked!”
>You hollered.

>>29523775
>Princess Celestia tilted her head a few degrees, very, very confused now.
“Yes?”
>You groaned and ran your hand up your snout and over your face.
>But then it hit you, horses.
>They must all be horses, if Princess Celestia was a horse, then there must be a shitload of other horses.
>Horses don’t wear clothes.
>Hell, all Celestia had on was some fancy golden jewelry.
>You needed to articulate a little.
>”Where I’m from, being naked is embarrassing. We always wear clothes and avoid being in the nude in front of pretty much anyone except for family and lovers.”
>Princess Celestia’s eyes widened noticeably and she immediately turned again to face completely away from you.
>Her voice came out as calm as ever.
“I’m quite sorry youngling. I did not know.”
>You took the chance to redouble your efforts trying to get your pants on.
>As it turned out, there was an extra bit of gold patterned satin attached to the seat of the pants, intended to wrap around your tail.
>Once you got that buttoned up you were all set, and seriously comfortable.
>The satin felt incredible sliding smoothly against your pearly scales.
>You stared down at yourself a bit more properly, taking in your features clearly.
>There was a lot of strength in your tail, from what you could tell, and immediately you found that you could move it with surprising precision.
>You might even be able to pick things up with it, it was that dextrous.
>Your legs were digitigrade now too, not too extreme where you had no thighs, but noticeable enough in your toes and where your ankles started.
>And you were a lot shorter, standing at only four feet tall.
>It was all very weird, but somehow it wasn’t quite so surreal as before.
“Is it alright to look now?”
>You gasped softly.
>”Oh, sorry. I got distracted. It’s fine.”

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Still waiting for the colored version family.

I need it.

Where did you go?!

>>29523788
>Princess Celestia turned herself around one last time as you got back into bed, sitting up.
>She was still sipping on her hot chocolate, and had a second one ready for you.
>You took it graciously, remembering that you were speaking to royalty here.
>”Thank you.”
“It’s my pleasure, I love drink and talk.”
>You giggled and took a big sip out of your mug.
>Hot but not burning, incredibly well balanced between both dark and sweet to hit the mark on perfect chocolate taste.
>Immediately after swallowing, you pulled the mug away from yourself and stared at it, brows up in disbelief.
>”That’s the best I’ve ever had.”
>Celestia winked, smiling with something like pride.
“The best I’ve ever made.”
>The two of you were quiet for a bit after that, just sipping hot chocolate.
>Eventually though, you had to ask at least one question.
>”Dragons don’t wear clothes do they?”
>Celestia mulled her answer over a little bit, absentmindedly stirring her hot chocolate with magic.
>You swore the mug she was using must be enchanted, it looked to be completely full, even though you’d seen the Princess take loads of sips and even a big gulp or two.
>Celestia definitely had a huge sweet tooth, despite how mature and perfectly refined she seemed.
”Yes, they do not wear clothing, at least not at all times. Remember though…”
>Princess Celestia raised a hoof and set it gently into your open palm.
>Her hoof was warm, and her fur felt even nicer than the satin on your scales.
“You can wear clothes, if you want to. No one will think badly of you.”
>Maybe you were being a little prudish, you thought.
>It wasn’t like Celestia or anyone else could actually see you naked, your scales covered you completely.
>And they didn’t see any sort of shame in nudity at all.
>When in Rome…
>You handed Princess Celestia her empty mug back, and she promptly poofed it away.
>Blushing again, you undid your blouse, folded it up and set it aside.
>Then you did the same with your pants.

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>>29523800
Done for now.
http://pastebin.com/YUgjpmUL

>>29519400
>>29518305
Thank ya.

G'night dragonbros.

Pearl dragoness a cute

>>29523789
Ive been sick with a mystery virus, gimme a bit and ill fix you up something

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>>29523789
>>29524583
hope this is ok,,

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>>29524810
blehb

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Sad to say I'm back to University today! I'll try to harvest some green in my off time.

>>29524810
based

>>29518868
>Fluttershy walked over to you, obviously wanting to bring something up.
"Um... K-Khoa? Maybe it would be good to get some fresh air?"
>You stared at her flatly for a minute.
>"Have I been over staying my-" you start to ask before she cuts you off.
"No, no! It's just... it's been a week and you haven't left the bed."
>Wait. What the hell?!
>Have you really been in bed for a week?
>Granted you're not by a window, so you haven't exactly been watching the days pass but still!
>You quickly shoot up from the bed, a look of panic in your eyes.
>"I completely lost track of time!" You stammer out.
>Fluttershy tries calming you down a bit, saying that it's okay and the like.
>But, you're already halfway out the door.
>"I'll be back before night!" You promise heading out.
"O-okay then..."
>It was bright outside, probably midday at the earliest.
>No more time to just lie around all day!
>As you approached the small town you've only seen on a screen before, you knew exactly what you were going to do.
>There was a pony you had to find!
>Maybe she had no part of this at all, but as long as magic was on the table, it couldn't hurt to investigate.

>>29524810
I needed this in my life

>>29523800
Nothing better than Wintersleep and a bit of writing in the morning.

>Celestia looked surprised, but also amused.
“I see, you’re going to go without.”
>Your pyjamas popped out of existence and already you felt a twinge of regret.
>Princess Celestia was looking at you.
>It wasn’t like she was staring straight at your knockers but damn if you didn’t feel exposed.
“If you were brave enough to take your clothes off that quickly, then I imagine you’ll get used to it quite quickly youngling.”
>You nodded, picking your courage back up.
>You could do this.
>Right now though, there were some things you needed to sort out.
>Sighing, you laid back in your bed, letting your head sink into the pillows.
>A long feathery plume fell into your eyes, all shimmery and white.
>Must be your hair now.
>You blew it out of the way, up over one of your long horns.
>”How long was I out for?”
>Princess Celestia poofed her hot chocolate away and pulled her chair up closer to talk.
>The emptiness of the room seemed emphasised now, and the condensed sunlight above dimmed just a little.
>You hadn’t noticed before, but a surprising amount of time had gone by, the clear blue sky outside was a stunning array of reds and oranges now as the sun set.
“You were unconscious for three days and three nights. You’re quite lucky.”
>You blinked, surprised but not exactly shocked.
>”Lucky?”
>Celestia smiled, you could see a curious twinkle in her eyes, like amusement.
“Yes. Very lucky. Out of all the places you could have popped up in Equestria, you appeared two feet above my bed at seven in the morning and landed right on top of me.”
>You groaned and ran your hand through your feathers.
>”Of course I did.”

>>29525989
“What’s lucky however is that I am almost certainly the only one in Equestria who could have prevented you from dying that day.”
>Now you were shocked, you sat back up in bed, paying rapt attention to Princess Celestia.
>”I almost died?”
>She nodded, smiling brightly.
“Almost. The transformation started as soon as you appeared, but it wasn’t taking place fast enough to protect you from the magic in the air.”
>”Protect me? Isn’t magic… well I dunno, magic doesn’t seem evil or bad.”
>Celestia touched her chin with her fore hoof, pondering.
>After a minute or two, she spoke again.
“Magic is neither good, nor evil. It is simply a force. As best as I can tell, your body before the transformation could not handle magic, and weakened rapidly once exposed to it.”
>A blackboard suddenly popped up next to Princess Celestia.
>Immediately she drew a stunningly accurate depiction of you when you were still human, then she added arrows labeled “magic” pointing at you.
“Pure magic has an effect very similar to fate on anything that arrives in Equestria. Even foals are susceptible to it. They’re imbued with their cutie mark, a representation of their talents that appears as they grow up, the second they are born.”
>Celestia looked at you expectantly, and with some concern too.
>You nodded to show that you understood.
>Smiling again, Princess Celestia drew a new arrow, pointing from your human form to the right.
>Where the arrow was pointing, she sketched you out now, as a dragon.
“But, foals have some resistance to magic, which they get from their parents. You had no magical resistance at all. So the magic acted according to fate, pouring into your body and changing your form to give you a resistance.”
>The Princess drew a sort of magic radiation around you, in squiggly lines.
>”As I said, you weren’t changing fast enough. Luckily, I was able to stabilize you and slow down the flow of the magic so that you could take the change gradually over the period of three days.”

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>>29525996
>Celestia blinked.
>”Yes?”
>You smiled.
>”You sound just like my Chemistry teacher in high school, it’s actually really uncanny. Makes me feel at home again.”
>Princess Celestia blushed immediately, averting your gaze.
>Your eyes widened in surprise, compliments seemed to be her soft point.
>Tapping her chair with a hoof, Princess Celestia cleared her throat.
“So. Humm… What do you call yourself youngling?”
>”Well, my real name is Cole… But it doesn’t really suit me anymore.”
>Celestia looked curious, her head was tilted again.
“You want to change your name?”
>You thought hard on it.
>If anything, you wanted to turn back to normal, so changing your name was a bit against your interests.
“Perhaps you could simply reword your name a little?”
>You peered up in surprise at the Princess, you’d forgotten she could hear your thoughts.
>…Which was probably why she got so flustered when you talked about your Chemistry teacher, she was the local hottie for five straight years.
>”Reword it?”
>Celestia nodded, her lips pursed at your lewdy thoughts.
>She smiled again soon after though.
“Yes, maybe something with similar lettering, from your heritage.”
>Huh.
>That was a pretty solid idea actually.
>Heritage…
>Had to be Irish then, you thought back to some old saint names.
>Colm, Colum, Colman, Coilean…
>”How about Columba?”
>Princess Celestia beamed.
“I see the meaning of it etched into your face Columba. You’re already a beautiful dove, I’m excited to watch you soar.”
>You blushed and giggled, balling up your covers in your fists.
>This wasn’t so bad.
>This was really, really nice actually.

>>29524810
>>29524918
>>29525137
Adorable.

>>29525217
Khoa is taking a running start I see

That's it for now. Later, dragonbros.

>>29524583
Hope you get better soon senpai, I never get sick myself.

>>29492614
>Spike buries his face in his claws.
>S: "This is so embarrassing!"
>This is a big moment for Spike, but he's being a bit melodramatic isn't he?
"Relax, Spike, it's not the end of the world. Tonic is a dragon too, remember? In fact, this is going to be her first time dealing with this just like you. You could figure it out together! That will be a great lesson in friendship! Two friends bonding over new experiences...and, uh..."
>You start trailing off when you notice that Spike isn't all there.
>His scales are now taking on a more pale color and he's doing a thousand yard stare.
"Spike?"
>Spike keeps staring past you.
>He tries to focus back and and gulps before speaking again.
>S: "Uh, yeah. It'll be n-nice..."
>Why is he acting like this? Was it something you said? What did you say that would have this effect?
>All you said was that he and Tonic could bond over this new experience.
>Then you felt it.
>Like something drilling through the thickness of your skull.
>You had been feeling it for a while but never took notice.
>You told Spike that he and a mature female dragon could bond over their first experience with their mating cycle...
>It all hit you at once. Everything.

>>29508989
it does make you a colossal faggot and cancer though.

>>29526260
Touché.

>>29526251
>The say he looks at her.
>The way he acts around her.
>It's the same as the way he acts around Rarity.
>All of those times he got distracted.
>The way he got set off by everything Tonic said.
>How could you have been so blind?!
>You feel something inside of you snap at the realization.
"Spike! You /like/ her?!"
>The voice that just came out of your mouth didn't sound like your own. It was incredulous, almost betrayed.
>S: "What?! No, I-"
"How could this happen to my Spike?!"
>You hear another voice in your right ear.
>'Maybe you shouldn't make Spike feel bad about his feelings...'
>Then another voice booms in your left.
>'Hush! Spike isn't ready for this!'
>S: "B-but Twilight, I used to like Rarity before, what's the problem?"
"What's the problem?! What's the /problem/?!"
>The problem is that Tonic is yours!
>...what?
"...nothing. I'm sorry, Spike. I shouldn't have reacted that way. What you're feeling is perfectly normal, I just didn't notice it."
>S: "Uh...thanks...Twilight."
>You notice that you're still wide eyed, twitchy and panting hard.
>You correct your behavior and continue.
"You took me off guard, Spike, I just didn't know how to handle it. If you have any questions you know you can come to me, right?"
>S: "Right...what do you say we meet up with the others and forget about this for a while."
"I'd like that."
>What you would like to do is make sense of what just happened.
>a Freudian slip?
>Just what does Tonic mean to you?

>>29526602
Twilight knowing what a Freudian slip is? This raises lots of questions!


Great work so far Mage, loving it.

>>29526602
>The problem is that Tonic is yours!
oh god yes

>>29526602
Hey, arrived on this thread yesterday and picked one of the pastebins to go through. Just to say I love what you've written and hope you can keep it up! Take care, my dude.

>>29526007
Nice

>>29526882
I know I know, I tried to put it into words without saying that, but it was hard to do.