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JoJo Thread #11: I'll 「FIX」 that OP Edition

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Time to switch up the opening video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=swI6CoZB8XA

Have you ever wanted a Stand? Here's your chance to do it vicariously through characters that totally aren't self-inserts!

>Writefags/Pastebins (Alphabetized):

Ace_Sorou: http://pastebin.com/u/Ace_Sorou

A-nonMoose: http://pastebin.com/u/A-nonMoose

AusAnon: http://pastebin.com/u/AusAnon

Cameo: http://pastebin.com/u/Creamymemedaddy

Ditherer: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer

FrenchAnon: http://pastebin.com/Bun2pUFy

FriskyBits: http://pastebin.com/QivjKsiH

FuckFaceMcGee: http://pastebin.com/u/FuckfaceMcGee

Omnee: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

StarAnon: http://pastebin.com/u/StarAnon

Superkeaton: http://pastebin.com/jLVdFdQV

Writroplex (JoeJoe): http://pastebin.com/Tz6dVnwJ
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And seeing as I'm filling in for the regular thread makers, and fucking up because I forgot to link the last thread: >>29336011 here's your threadly dose of the「STAND」 Generator.

http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html
Follow the instructions, post your results!

As ordered by our fellow Sonic Youth, replace the ability you get in "Description" and write your own description of how your Stand looks and works!

Also if you want, chuck a link with the song or album you are referencing in your post, that's what cool guys do.

Have fun, and Stand Proud!
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How the hell am I supposed to read that OP pic?
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>>29496822
By opening it.

Remember kids, don't panic and make a thread because the last one died without thinking about what the OP's thumbnail will look like.
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Totally not a bump

And just to stroke our collective e-peen's, there's a group effort to write a number of All Star Battles pitting the Jojo's against the Anon's (and other protaganists) of our humble greentexts. Two are completed;

>Jonathan vs. 「Fire in the Church」 (Ditherer)
http://pastebin.com/si7M9A9f

>Giorno vs. Erich Rammstein (AusAnon)
http://pastebin.com/Atks9007

And the rest (I assume) are in various stages of being written.

Jolyne vs. 「Saturn's Children」 (Omnee)
Jotaro vs. 「Feathery」 (StarAnon)
Josuke vs. Rainbow Dash (Ace)
Joseph vs. Ziggy Stardust (Fuckface)
>Johnny vs. 「Planisphère」 [UNCLAIMED]
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>>29496822
As best I can tell it's left to right all the way across the page, despite that hink that makes it look like two pages.
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[BUMP]
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>>29496650
Also, our most recent writer's Pastebin is here:

phase 2: http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q

>>29497241
Don't forget

Gappy vs. Care Root (Cameo)
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Should we like repost some stories or is it too early to do that?
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>>29498443
Maybe one shots and shorts if we're truely desperate for bumps.

Though once all the Jojo v Greentext Protag stories are done I wouldn't mind them being posted in order of Jojo's.
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I finally put both Episode 5s online.

The Man Comes Around (CRBA)
http://pastebin.com/BYJ79Bi2

Evacuate the Dancefloor (Coco)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/5/
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>>29497241
>Giorno vs. Erich
>Atks9007
>ATK's over 9000.
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>>29496650
But could Josuke's crazy diamond fix MLP as it is now, fan pandering 'animation errors', meme faces and having maybe at a very very best 7/10 episode.
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>>29498886
It shows how strong they are.
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>>29499569
It has to fix the fandom first...
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>>29496650
Stand Name: Ride Wit Me

Stand Ability: [Concussion Beams]
Power - D
Speed - C
Range - B
Durability - C
Precision - B
Potential - B
I mek stand
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>>29501168
[Ride wit me]
>Just like the name suggests, it never ends.
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>>29502004
I also thought about Rucka Rucka Ali I Wanna Rape
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JoJo Friday sounds like a good time for some more CRBA.

>The alleyway’s dark, but your eyes have almost adjusted.
>It’s been a week since you last attended CHS.
>Keeping your head down around cops is enough work without being chased.
>None of them have their paws on you yet, though.
>Unfortunately, it’s also been a week since you last saw Wiz Kid.
>He was going to be the ultimate addition to your little army.
>When you had one.
>Turns out the higher-ups in this wargame could’ve disbanded you all at any time.
>You just hadn’t made them angry enough yet.
>Now that you had, they were out for blood.
>The only thing that made day marginally safe was that they had to keep going to school.
>They mostly had parents who gave them attention, who wouldn’t take kindly to hunting other students off-grounds.
>Not to mention that what you’ve stolen gives you a powerful bargaining chip.
>If you can get it to a safe area.
>You tried hiding it at your house, and someone broke in during the night to take it.
>Your Stand was the only thing keeping you alive.
>This stone needs to stay out of everyone’s hands.
>The coast looks clear.
>Midmorning and no cars, only half a city to go.
>You make a break for it.

Trixie Lulamoon’s Curious Caper, Episode 6: Magical Mystery Tour
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>>29502562
>Canterlot is a city in a loose sense.
>It’s got a few tall buildings and looks imposing on a skyline, yes.
>But there’s very little bustle, especially at the right hours.
>No one’s chased you for the last few blocks.
>And you’re starving.
>Actual food might not hurt you, but vending machine fare is livable.
>At least until you get to that place…
>You walk into the nearest business-looking building, one of those rented out by a bunch of tiny companies.
>It’s in the closest stairwell, that tall friendly box.
>Vending machines are the great comfort of modern civilization.
>In WWII, some were invented which dispensed paperbacks instead of food.
>On the other side of the world, there are machines which solely vend illegal goods.
>No risks.
>No one to impress.
>Just crackers and water for loose change.
>Civilization is wonderful.
>You make your selection, shove your food into your jacket pockets and go.
>You’d wear a bag or a backpack, but it would make you much more noticeable.
>Unless you wanted to pretend to be a hitchhiker.
>Not that anyone would hitchhike here…
>It’s only when you make it back out to the front that you see the motorcycle.
>A girl’s sitting on it, wearing a helmet, running it on the street just outside the door.
>Just… waiting there.
>There’s another girl sitting behind her, and her face is in view.
>Her skin’s almost the same shade as yours.
>She glances down at some sort of watch, or locket.
>Then she snaps it shut and pockets it.
>And turns to look at you.
>You activate your Stand immediately, watching her mouth words through the glass.
“「Abracadabra」!”
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>>29502580
>The helmeted one turns the motorcycle as soon as you summon your Stand.
>Its wavy star-speckled form dances over your head like an amoeba as the motornoise rattles the ground.
>She accelerates directly into the glass of the door.
>A high-pitched voice enters your hearing.
>“-OT THAT WAAAAY!”
>The rider screams, pressing her face into the driver’s back.
>Shards fly everywhere, but she lands in the entryway.
>And she doesn’t stop.
>She’s right on top of you.
>…And then she isn’t.
>You’re over at the stairwell, and she’s back at the door.
>You run up the stairs and out of sight.
>“Goddammit Indigo, we’re supposed to rendezvous with the others!” >They’re following you, on foot now. >How many exits are there?
>How far do you have to get to lose them?
>The second floor’s a good start.
>You wait outside the door, but they aren’t coming up.
>“Look, I know what I’m doing, alright! We’ve got code set up. Thumbs is a victory, middle finger is danger.”
>“That’s a seriously underthought code.”
>“Look, if we can just tire her out, we can take her. You ever hunt rabbits?”
>“Murdering animals is a filthy hick activity, and you’re wasting our time.”
>“You wouldn’t say that if you ate the stew, Sugar.”
>“I would and you know it.”
>Chuckling.
>“Yeah.”
>A pause.
>“She’s still here, right?”
>“The stone hasn’t left the building. It’s above us. They’re probably calling security on us by now.”
>“Good. Most of it. You take over and get nearby, I’ll go after her.”
>You get away from the door.
>This looks like it’s a three-story building, but there’s only one set of stairs.
>If you kept climbing, she would see you now.
>Looking around, you see a handful of doors leading to podunk offices, some bathrooms, bad carpet…
>An elevator!
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>>29502604
>You hit the call button, and it dings politely.
>Without a wait the doors open.
>You dash inside and jab the button for the third floor.
>It lights up.
>The doors don’t respond.
>You stand in one corner and keep hitting the button.
>It doesn’t do anything.
>You feel your blood pounding in your ears.
>Your power isn’t meant for fighting.
>You’re just good at putting distance between yourself and others.
>Finally, they react, and slide shut.
>You let go of a breath you didn’t know you were holding.
>“A-ha!”
>A light tan hand slaps between the closing doors in a karate chop.
>Attached to it is a blue-haired girl with goggles on her head, grinning like the Cheshire Cat.
>“Gotcha, lady.”
>You activate your Stand.
>The doors haven’t been stopped yet, so you separate them a little more.
>Then you let out your best attempt at a yell, and smack her wrist.
>She doesn’t retract it.
>In fact, she doesn’t act like it hurt at all.
>With a sudden twist, her hand’s gripping yours.
>She’s having a spectacular time.
>You call up your Stand and separate her from you.
>She’s still smiling outside as the doors close the rest of the way.
>The look on her face unsettles you.
>...Wasn’t it a victory to make it to the third floor?
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>>29502622
>When the elevator opens, you can already hear her jogging up the stairwell.
>You bolt out, looking around.
>Offices, more offices, and a long hallway with a plain door.
>Over it, the words “Fire Exit”.
>That has to be it.
>The next step toward getting to that place.
>Your Stand creates more space between you and the elevator, propelling you down the hallway.
>She bounds after you tirelessly.
>You throw open the door and run up the stairs beyond.
>Almost all buildings are required to have a set of stairs that grants access to all areas.
>This includes tricky places like roofs, basements, subbasements and back-areas, where the average person might get lost.
>However, most businesses and owners wish to keep regular people from trespassing in these places.
>For the average company, fire exits fulfill both of these needs.
>But proper alarms are often expensive, and wiring them in is tedious.
>Especially in cheap buildings, if you can’t see a mechanism affixed directly to the door, you should take the alarm warnings with a grain of salt.
>Especially especially in a building without alarms on its glass front doors.
>You’ve made it up to the roof safely, and from this vantage you have a pretty good view of the nearby city.
>There are some rooftops close by, but the further out they get the taller and shorter they become.
>A long way away, you can even see the park through a few of them.
>You know that these people are tracking you by range.
>Or else the stone.
>And you know that they have extra trouble finding it if you’re in a crowd.
>Once, one of them muttered about there being “too many living things nearby” when you slipped away.
>These facts are the basis of your plan.
>Indigo makes it up to the roof and stops.
>“You gonna run?”
>You don’t respond, backing up to a far corner.
>“It doesn’t matter if you do or don’t. You’ve already lost. 「Nails for Breakfast」!”
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>>29502642
>You flinch and prepare for battle, but nothing happens.
>Then she pulls out a little pill bottle and pops the cap.
>She grabs a few… tablets? And swallows them.
>“This is ALD-52. It’s called a prodrug, because it gets turned into LSD by the body. You can buy it online if you shell out a little cash.”
>…
>She stands there like you’re going to say something to her.
>Then you start to feel lightheaded.
>“Since LSD takes time, I made sure to mix it with everything else nasty I could get my hands on, of course.”
>You start to feel like your body’s too loose.
>You resist the feeling, and start to feel your body heating up instead.
>How is this happening…?
>Indigo walks over, cracking her fists.
>One of her thumbs shimmers like a mirage, and then it’s longer, and a darker orange.
“A-「Abracadabra」!”
>You jump backwards, and suddenly you’re on the next roof over.
>The distance is too long to jump without a Stand.
>Indigo frowns at you over the distance, and cups her hands around her mouth.
>“Fine! We’ll do this the hard way!”
>You feel your left leg go numb, and you realize, dimly, it’s hers.
>You wonder if you’re hallucinating more than you realize.
>While you head for the exit, she’s jumping in your peripheral vision.
>It’s like she’s bodyslamming an invisible man, or ragdolling.
>Then she cries out.
>You ignore her and make your way into the building.
>And then your leg comes back.
>You cry out as it flares up with pain, collapsing underneath of you.
>Stumbling, you fall down the first flight of stairs.
>Only with your Stand to help do you land on your back, leg up in the air.
>Your vision’s becoming jerky. It’ll start swimming soon.
>You are not doing well.
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>>29502652
>You test your leg on the floor, leaning on it a little.
>Then you seethe and retract it to your chest again.
>Sprained ankle.
>You know she did this, but figuring out her Stand isn’t in your power right now.
>She’s going to come over here, or call over the others.
>They’re going to find you in a stairwell unable to walk, and they’re going to take the stone.
>Your fear and pain keep you grounded enough to summon up your Stand.
>Until you learn why people wanted it so badly, you can’t relinquish that rock.
>Especially not given what they’ll probably do to you after they get it.
>You scoot on your back to the nearest flight of stairs and create some space between you and the nearest wall.
>In a diagonal shot, you’re halfway down the stairs.
>Another, and you’re on level ground again.
>You repeat this process as quickly as you can, ignoring the pain.
>Sometimes you fall anyway, and the stairs buffet your spine like a bad massage.
>But you make it to the ground floor.
>You need to get to a hospital.
>But first you have to make it.
>You have to get to that place!
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>>29502660
>Outside, you’re in the lobby of a closed business.
>All the lights are out.
>The architecture’s the same as the last building, but it’s cleaner, dimmer.
>You prop yourself up on a wall and lean as you hop toward the entrance.
>The blue girl, Sugar, is already outside on the motorcycle.
>She’s staring at you, expressionless.
>Unmoving.
>You grit your teeth, and your Stand unlocks the door.
>You lean on it, swinging, as it opens.
>You want to puke.
>You, Trixie, are a lightweight.
>But you’ve already seen your objective close by.
>The pain hasn’t cleared your mind, but it’s forced you into only one mode of action.
>You know what to do now.
>Sugar gets off the motorcycle and waves in the direction of the building you just escaped.
>Indigo emerges on ground level.
>In the distance, you see a couple more motorcycles.
>You ignore all of them, hopping determinedly like a woman on a mission.
>You look ridiculous, and you don’t care.
>Sugar where you’re heading, and stands between you and the motorcycle.
>“Is the stone on your person?”
>She stares at you, undaunted.
>You hop closer to the back end of the bike and balance yourself.
>She turns a few degrees to keep eye contact, holding out her arms to block you.
>The others approach.
>You look only at Indigo.
>Even though you’re sweating and there’s a buzzing in your head that won’t go away, the thespian in you can’t resist the moment.
>You raise your voice so all of them will hear you.
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>>29502675
“Trixie isn’t just a showstopper, she’s a patron of the classics. And two-thousand years ago, a man in China wrote The Art of War. He said ‘Build your opponent a golden bridge to retreat across’.”
>Indigo blinks.
“Desperate people take chances. The more desperate, the more bizarre their tactics get. And if you leave anyone with only one way out, you’re adding pressure to the barrel of a gun in that one direction.”
>Your Stand appears over your shoulder.
“That is why you lost on this day to the Great and Powerful Trixie!”
>You create space between the road and the motorcycle.
>Before Sugar can turn around, the vehicle crashes into her from behind.
>As she pratfalls, you reach out for the seat.
>You grab hold of it, and your Stand helps you up the rest of the way.
>As soon as you’re not about to fall off, you create more space and put yourself back on the road.
>And you peel out.
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>>29502678
>They’re right behind you, of course.
>Buildings rush by as your Stand pushes you along.
>You’re moving too fast to stop or turn now.
>The buildings thin out a little, long roads leading into neighborhoods nearby as you race past.
>You never stop hearing them.
>Even if you had unlimited fuel, you wouldn’t outrace them in your state.
>You only barely understand how you’re not crashing right now.
>You feel your right hand shimmer and go numb.
>Over your shoulder, you see Indigo wave at you with your own hand and reach out for the side of the road.
>No.
>You swerve, still zooming forwards, and swing her hand at a parked car’s side mirror.
>You hear her yelp over the turbulence.
>In a flash, your hands switch back.
>Just in time for your Stand to stop the collision.
“Agh!”
>It still hits your ring finger and pinky.
>They’re bent badly.
>You wobble in your seat and vent the pain by groaning into the wind.
>The motorcycle keeps running along underneath you.
>You’ve only got enough strength to use your Stand one more time.
>The stoplight ahead’s green, and you can see your goal now.
>You grip the accelerator with your three good fingers and reach into your jacket with your other hand.
>Everyone sees the glint of the red stone in the daylight.
>You’ve almost made it.
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>>29502691
>You spent endless summers in Canterlot Park.
>It was huge, and almost entirely wooded.
>It was also out of the way enough that not too many people came there.
>That is, it was populated, but not popular.
>Now, as you barrel toward it, you tense your body.
>Straight onto the green!
>The motorcycle jerks onto the sidewalk, past the gates, and off the stone path.
>When your front wheel hits the grass, it starts tearing into the turf.
>It digs ferociously into the same spot, but doesn’t move forward.
>Your momentum bucks you off, and you go sprawling end over end into the grass.
>Part of your impact gets your ankle screaming again, and you lay there.
>You’re not getting up.
>The others stop.
>There are five of them, on four motorcycles.
>Sugar and someone else got left behind so Indigo could make the trip.
>She dismounts first, letting hers thump against the stone, and scrambles over to you.
>Clenching your good fist tighter, you summon your Stand one more time.
“「ABRACADABRA」!”
>You say it loud enough to echo.
>Indigo braces herself, but no space appears between you.
>As soon as she sees that, she rushes over and grabs your wrist.
>“Hand it over!”
>She places a knee on your ankle, and you cry out.
>Your hand spasms and opens involuntarily.
>“…”
>She looks at you, getting her face close.
>“Where is it?”
>You smile through the pain, if only because the lightheaded feeling is getting worse.
>You wiggle your fingers in her grip and wink.
“Presto.”
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>>29502699
>She’s losing it now.
>“Where is it?! I saw it, you had it!”
>She reaches into your pockets, crushing the crackers, but finding nothing.
>You cough and speak.
“I threw it underneath of the wheel when I went over. I-into the hole.”
>A female voice you’ve never heard before calls over.
>“It’s not in here!”
“「Abracadabra」 put distance between it and the motorcycle. It’s one foot underground somewhere in this park, and only I, Trixie know where.”
>Indigo grabs you by the collar.
>“Where?! Where is it?!”
>You bitchslap her with your good hand, and then fall limp to the ground.
>She recoils, partly in shock.
>Before she can react, you turn your head to the others.
“I don’t know how her Stand works, or why you want the stone, but if I die of an overdose you’ll never get to it. You’d better call Trixie an ambulance.”
>They’re silent for a moment.
>Indigo glances back at the one standing closest.
>Something passes between them.
>He nods.
>She turns to you.
>“This isn’t over!”
>Then she rips the bike from the earth and sets it back on the path.
>A few minutes later, paramedics arrive.
>You’re the only one there.
>By the time they load you into the car, you’re barely there.
>But you’re alive, and the stone’s safe.
>For now…
「To Be Continued」

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APGJM37aRy0

Stand: 「Abracadabra」
User: Trixie
Ability: Creates space between a pair of objects or surfaces.

Stand: 「Nails for Breakfast」
User: Indigo Zap
Ability: Exchanges body parts with anyone the user's touched hands with in the last day; each exchange must be between the same body parts, lasts under 24 hours and cannot account for more than half the user’s or target’s body mass. The user cannot exchange the same body part more than once in the same 24 hours.
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>>29502722
The plot thickens and I love it.
We finally get to see the cristal prep girls and their "grandmaster" if the previous short is still canon.
I wonder how all of this will eventually mess with Care Root's life... and his car.
Good work as always!
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>>29502722
This is why you don't give Standos to rationally undeveloped, severely hormonal teenagers who'll follow the alpha of their social pack. Fucking incredible work, as usual. Your continued writings give me inspiration to keep jotting stuff down for my own story, and you have my thanks for that.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-b7xXWxKrAg
>[Charmy Green] 4lyfe yo.
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Stand Name: [Analog Kid]

Stand Ability: [Technomorphism](http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Technomorphism)

Power - B
Speed - A
Range - B
Durability - D
Precision - A
Potential - A

Description: The stand allows the user to transform into or have a physical body made of shape-shifting nano-machines that they can manipulate in any way they see fit. The stand generally appears as almost a thin metallic suit.

Song: https://youtu.be/ubhq2qiUVxY

Kinda broken except in harsh weather and around magnets. A little something I forgot had saved along with a few other stand ideas when I contemplated about writing a one-shot for this thread at one point.
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>>29502722
Great writing friend I love trixies character who can't actually fight for shit but mentally can devise a plan in the tensest situations. Feel sorry for Sugarcoat getting crushed like Mariah hope she ain't ded.
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>>29502722
Nice chapter. I loved Trixie in this!
Gotta wonder how this'll tie into Care Root's adventure.
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SBR Bible?
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What tarot card stand is the best stand?
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>>29507386
Obviously The World, but if you're talking regular villain Stand or non-overpowered Deus Ex Machina Stands like Star Platinum, then it's bar none got to be either The Lovers or The High Priestess. If Midler was smarter and Jotaro wasn't the archetypal shonen hero, she might have been able to kill a protagonist or two, and if Kakyoin wasn't able to help them the gang would've never defeated Steely Dan. Plus, the idea of being to force people to do what you want with coercion appeals to the shitty 12-year-old inside me. It's a good villain ability.

Yellow Temperance was good too.
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>>29507683
The world is pretty amazing for the first part where stands are introduced but honestly I felt like death 13 personally was the best he could beat Dio if he so wished without Dio knowing better. (Although saying that Dio probably knows his colleagues powers in case one goes awol)
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>>29509438
Shit, I guess he could. If Kakyoin wasn't able to outwit him he could've killed everybody, likely without retribution, because who the hell has it in them to murder a child?
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Moody Blues is cool even if I said something diferent in the other thread
https://youtu.be/JnSaC6aZvv8
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=J9Tn9k6XIvc

Is this accurate?
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>>29504415
nice taste in music, anon. Rush is one of my fave bands, and they have so many good Stand names.
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>>29510107
>He doesn't know about part 1 Dios zombie horde where he turned a woman into a zombie and watched said zombie
eat her own daughters face off.

Yeah part 1 was metal as fuck.
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>>29512348
Oh shit, it's been like a year since I read Part 1. There was some seriously fucked up shit in there.

Oh yeah, new update in a few minutes. Stay tuned.
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>>29512430
Sweet! Can't wait!

>>29512348
>When Dio decided to create man-cat abominations by just sticking a man's head on a cat's body

Part 1 was fucked up.
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Continuing from http://pastebin.com/aiHBKpuF

>Anon just teleported behind you guys, about 20 feet away
>Nothin’ personnel, colt
>A tumbleweed blows past his feet
>Wait, WHAT?
>Rarity nearly faints again and Flutters squeaks in fear
>”What the hell?”
>Anon backs away from you guys, testing something
>He suddenly teleports in front of you all again, back to where he was originally
>Another tumbleweed blows past his feet
>”What the fuck!?”
>”Anon? What’s happening?”
>”I figured you’d be able to tell me, Twilight!”
>He makes [Planisphére] show up in front of him, left fist raised for combat
>You phase [Dragonforce] into existence around you, facing away from your friends in order to protect them
“Is it a Stand, Anon? Can Stands do stuff like this?”
>”I’d bet my left asscheek this is an enemy Stand, Spike. From what I’ve seen of it, regular magic can’t do this sort of stuff. Keep an eye out for anything that might be a user. They can be anything, even cats and dogs!”
>A sudden moan sends a chill down your spine
>It’s directly behind you
>Oh Celestia, this is it
>You turn valiantly to face your attacker, since that’s what the heroes do, right?
>”Hey, Applejack’s okay!”
>Applejack squints at you through bleary eyes, stifling a yawn, when she pulls her stitches too far
>”AH! Mah cheek! What the hay? What happened to me?”
“You kinda nicked yourself with the Arrow AJ.”
>She looks back down to you, still squinting from her nap
>”Spike? What the hay’s goin’ on? Why’re y’all yellin’ so much? What’s this about coat stands and-“
>Her eyes shoot open, eyebrows rocketing into the ceiling
>”Spike? Ya got some, uh, stuff comin’ outta you. It’s pretty creepy.”
“Oh yeah, that’s just my Stand AJ! Isn’t it cool? I call it [Dragonforce], pretty awesome right? Ooh, look at Anon’s Stand!”
>AJ cranes her neck backwards to look at him, and grabs her head as she starts mumbling to herself
>”Did Ah hit mah head on somethin’ today? What is this? What the hay is happenin’?”
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>>29512604
>”AJ! Glad you’re okay! Help Spike and I fight this enemy Stand! Something’s teleporting us if we get too far from the table! Get up and figure out how your Stand works, and fast!”
>”Ah ain’t got a Stand! Ah- oh. Horseapples.”
>AJ hunches over and sighs
>”Ah think it’s me, Anon. Ah’m causing this.”
“Wait, how is that possible? How do you know?”
>”Ah just know. This is somehow connected to me. Anon, try movin’ away from me again.”
>Applejack shuts her eyes, trying to focus on something
>Anon teleports behind you again, with another tumbleweed rolling past his feet
>”Whoa. How can you tell it’s something to do with you, AJ? What makes you think that?”
>AJ rests her chin on her hooves, squinting into the distance
>”It’s just a feelin’ Ah get, like it’s comin’ from me. This weird teleportin’ business? That’s me somehow.”
“So it’s your Stand ability?”
>Applejack squints at you, uncomprehending
”Yeah, your Stand! Like the things you see around me and Anon! They’re really cool, and they let us do totally awesome stuff!”
>”Well uh, I guess. I ain’t no unicorn so I don’t know what else it could be. Looks like I’ve got one ‘a these Stands now too.”
>Dash pipes up from her seat on the floor
>”Hey Spike, try touching her with your Stand. See what happens.”
>AJ fixes you with a look that says, “just try it you dad gum lizard, I’ll whoop you good.”
>So you try it
>You extend [Dragonforce] to touch Applejack’s hoof
>And are promptly surprised when she slaps it away
>”WHAT!? THAT SHOULDN’T BE POSSIBLE!”
>Anon is freaking out over there, and you’re kind of scared too
>You weren’t able to touch [Planisphère] by yourself, so how can Applejack touch [Dragonforce]?
>”What’cha mean? Ah touched yer Stand, right? Isn’t that how it works? They’re like ghosts ya can touch, yeah?”
>Anon walks over, brow furrowed
>”Well, the way Stands work is that any Stand can touch another person, but no pers-er, pony can touch a Stand.”
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>>29512641
“Y-yeah! Anon showed me earlier. He was poking me with his Stand but I couldn’t even touch it. I had to make my own show up to grab it.”
>Anon puts a hand to his chin, deep in thought
“Maybe your Stand’s different Applejack, and it lets you touch other Stands! Wouldn’t that be cool Anon?”
>The rest of your friends have gathered close to the table by now, curious about the situation
>Pinke is shaking with barely contained excitement, while the others are just sitting around, heads cocked to the side inquisitively
>”Yeah, that may very well be the case Spike. Can you demonstrate again?”
>After AJ nods, he brings out [Planisphère] and begins slowly edging its left hand towards her pointer finger first
>She slaps it quick as a flash, and he recoils from the pain
>”Holy crap, this is crazy. It looks like you can touch any Stand with just your body, but can you turn off your own Stand?”

>Be Applejack again
>This is a tricky question
>You can tell you’ve activated your Stand and you can feel when someone passes through it, but you’re not actually sure how to deactivate its effect
>It’s gonna be really bad for all of you if you can’t turn your Stand off, because no one’s gonna be able to leave the basement or your side, ever again
>Spike’s moved over by the invisible edge of your Stand’s effect, near where Anon teleported the first time
>He seems to be tryin’ to find the exact boundary of your Stand’s influence
>As he sticks his hand through empty air, it comes into contact with the teleportation barrier
>Spike disappears completely
>”Whoa! That was so cool AJ!”
>He yells in excitement from the other side of the room
>A tumbleweed blows past his feet, guided by an intangible breeze
>”Spike! Stop messing with AJ’s Stand! She needs to shut it off.”
>>”C’mon Twi, stop being a killjoy, the dude’s having fun. But for real AJ, have you figured out how to turn it off?”
>Darn it, this is tricky
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>>29512661
>There’s this sensation of somethin’ around you, like a ring in the air or somethin’
>When Spike and Anon passed through yer Stand, there were tugs on that ring; it felt like someone was pullin’ on yer soul
>Can you pull it closer? Dissipate it?
>You try to retract the ring, to bring it in
>The barrier shrinks as it collapses in towards you
“Ev’rypony huddle up, I think I’ve got somethin’!”
>Your friends pack in around the table, squishing as close to you as they can
>”What is it AJ?”
“I’m pulling the ring closer!”
>”Ring?”
>Everyone looks at Anon and Spike for answers, but they ain’t got any
“I’ll explain later, just give me a sec!”
>The ring continues to draw closer, and it becomes harder to keep pulling it in
>But you feel more confident, and stop drawing it towards yourself
>It feels less like ripples in water and more like those fancy fabrics Rarity uses for the soft pillowcases she makes
>Gossamer? Silk? Something like that
>Like big silk curtains that you can feel with your mind
>You’re part a’ mah soul right? Well we need to leave, so Ah need you ta stop, please
>Obeying your will, your Stand disappears immediately, freeing everyone from being looped forever
“Phew, that was weird as heck, but Ah think we’re good!”
>Pinkie bounds forward, past the space your Stand used to occupy, and doesn’t teleport
>”Whee! We’re free! Great job AJ, I knew you could do it!”
>The rest of your friends follow her up the stairs after making sure you’re okay, and Anon and Spike stroll over to talk
>”So how’d you make it stop AJ?”
“Well, Ah figured that since Stands are part of yer soul, they gotta listen to ya. I asked it ta stop an’ it did. Next time I think I can just do that again. Didn’t even need to tighten the ring.”
>Spike chimes in
>”Could you explain that to us? I’m still confused about it.”
“Yeah, let’s go upstairs and Ah’ll explain how mah Stand works.”
>You follow the guys upstairs and talk to your friends about what your Stand is and how it works
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>>29512682
>”It feels like silk? Oh, that’s simply divine darling. It almost makes me wish I had one! Almost.”
>”Wait, so can we, like, zip through it and come out the other side forever? It’d be like falling into a bottomless pit.”
“Ah reckon Ah don’t know, Dash, would ya like to try it out?”
>”I dunno man, seems kinda freaky. Maybe later though, I’m pooped.”
>”Hang on AJ, I wanted to try something. Can you use your Stand again?”
“…Sure. Gimme a sec.”
>You feel around inside your own head for your Stand. It felt sort of like a new muscle or sense when you were using it earlier, so that’s what you look for now
>Gotcha
“[RAWHIDE]!”
>The ethereal power of your Stand emerges from your body, flaring out over a wide area and “looping” it
>”[Rawhide]? Is that the name you chose?”
“Yup, ain’tcha ever listened to the Blues Brothers? It’s ready.”
>”Huh, cool. Nice choice AJ.”
>Anon summons his own Stand, [Planisphère], and produces a needle from its finger
“What the hay is that? Ah thought you didn’t have any powers!”
>”Oh, I almost died fighting someone earlier, that’s where I got this power.”
>”WHAT!?”
>Everypony questions him at once
>Ow, yer ears are ringin’
>”Yeah, hang on, I’ll tell you about it in a sec
>He points the Stand’s hand off in a random direction and launches the needle out of its finger!
>It flies towards your Stand barrier and disappears
>”AH!”
>Rarity jumps a hoof in the air before landing and letting out a powerful sneeze
>You notice the needle embedded in her flank, but by the time she finishes smoothing her hair out it’s completely vanished
>”So yeah, needles that make everyone sneeze, fired at high velocity. They disappear afterwards and don’t draw blood for some reason, but they’re damn cool. Thanks for letting me use your Stand to torment Rarity.”
>>”One of these days I’ll pay you back in full you ruffian!”
>Twilight steps forward
>”Alright Anon, explain yourself.”
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>>29512691
>He spends the next half hour telling you all about how he almost died at the hooves of Blade Dancer, about her mysterious premonition, and how she vanished afterwards
>”Do you know any magic that works that way, Twi?”
>She’s exhausted from everything she’s been through today, but Twilight still takes interest in question
>”I’m really not sure. If it looked like sunlight then maybe we could ask Celestia, but I’ve never heard of magic that uses sunlight as a medium for casting spells. We’ll need to pen another letter, but I’m honestly ready for bed.”
>You look outside, and are greeted with the sight of Luna’s moon, suspended in the night sky like a great white apple
>It’s been a long day
>Stifling a yawn, you deactivate [Rawhide] and make for Twilight’s front door
“Ah’m about ready to turn in mahself. It’s been a crazy scary day today, and Ah’d like to put it all behind me. See y’all tomorrow!”

>Be Anonymous again, finally
>It’s been a hell of a day
>After you said good night to the girls and fist-bumped Stands with Spike, you reassured Twilight that you’d stop by for proper testing tomorrow and made sure she had the Arrow in a secure location
>On your slow waltz home, you shoot a few more pones out and about at this hour and are greeted by their olfactory evacuations
>What a cool fuckin’ power this is
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>>29512701
>It’s not good to think about after today, but you kind of want the rest of the gang to get their own Stands, because goddamn how cool would that be?
>You could be part of a gang of Stand users that go around righting the wrongs of Ponyville, and possibly Equestria itself
>That’d be pretty badass, in your humble opinion
>Just running around punching criminals all day
>It’d be fun
>But right now you need to rest
>Today you got up with a migraine, manifested a punching ghost that you thought was confined to a Japanese comic book, broke your hand, punched an assassin into oblivion, helped your friends manifest their Stands, and walked home
>It feels kind of like a whole month went by
>Oh look, you’re home
>Time to get some sleep
>You know you should be freaked out about the whole Blade Dancer thing, but honestly it’s too late in the day to give a shit about that
>The time for freaking out will be in the morning
>Right now it’s time to catch some z’s
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>>29512715
>Be n̵o̵ ̶n̴a̶m̴e̵ ̶d̷e̵t̸e̵c̸t̵e̸d̶
>Things are getting very interesting now
>He has obtained the unknown power of the Soveran Arrow and seemingly vanquished evil with it already
>His friends are likely to join him soon, you’re sure of that
>All you can do for now is wait
>You are stirred from your thoughts by your compatriot entering the room, and you turn from the window
>”Are you certain this is the path you wish to tread?”
“We only have a chance so long as his powers, and hopefully theirs as well, continue to grow. This is the only path I CAN tread.”
>”Then take care that along the way you do not become the very monster you seek to destroy.”
“My soul is not distorted by my actions. What I do has no effect on who I am. This is the correct path.”
>”Very well, I will hold you to that. I can only hope that for our sake they grow quickly.”
>They leave, walking out and closing the door behind them
>You turn back to your window, gazing out at the full moon
>All you can do now is watch and wait
>Things are getting very interesting indeed
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>>29512726
This concludes The First Day. Hell of a story, isn't it? I'm going to be dividing this story by day, and when more Stand users start cropping up I'll likely just divide it by battle with maybe a few slice of life stories in there too.

Story is compiled here: http://pastebin.com/aiHBKpuF

Please give me feedback and criticism; I'm always trying to improve what I write so whatever you guys can give me is appreciated. Thanks for reading everyone!
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>>29512754
Oh shit, almost forgot, I'm going to be splitting the current story pastebin in two: one for the leadup and one for the First Day of Standos.

And here are Applejack's stats.

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STAND NAME: [RAWHIDE]
STAND MASTER: APPLEJACK

POWER: N/A
SPEED: D
RANGE: C
DURABILITY: N/A
PRECISION: N/A
POTENTIAL: B

APPEARANCE: NONE
ABILITY: “Loops” space in a circle 15 meters in diameter around Applejack’s body, locking everything in that loop inside. If something moves past the 15 meter boundary, they are instantly transported to the other side of the loop from where they exited it. Objects that enter at an angle leave at an angle, which can be devastating with projectile weapons.
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>>29512801
Double shit, here's the Stando theme for [Rawhide].

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EYTydTMpcSc&feature=youtu.be
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quick bump, will be posting some green in a bit.
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>>29512844
>Blues Brothers
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>You are Anonymous, and you are about to escape your third period history class
>Normally you wouldn't be that excited, because you'd just have to go to your next class
>But fortunately for you, the day has something more interesting in store
>There's a Japanese exchange student arriving today, and you have the honor of showing her around school
>You think it's a bit weird that she's transferring at the end of the first semester rather than at the beginning of the year, but you don't know how that shit works
>All you know is that you have a "get out of math free" card for today
>And hey, maybe the new girl will be cool
>The minutes remaining in the class tick agonizingly by, but finally the bell releases you and your fellow classmates
>As you pull your backpack on, you're approached by a certain prismatic-haired athlete
>"Hey Anon, can I cop the math homework off you?"
>Your friend asks you with hopeful eyes
>You, however, smile smugly
"Sorry Dash. I'm not gonna be in math today."
>Dash furrows her brow at you
>"What, you skipping again? You're still gonna have to do the homework, ya know."
"Says the girl who's trying to copy mine right now."
>Dash opens her mouth to retort, but quickly closes it again
>"Not the point. Anyway, where're ya going? Can I come? Math sucks."
>The two of you begin heading out the door and into the hallway, merging into the flow of students
"Probably not. I got a note from Luna, I'm showing the transfer student around this period."
>Dash barks out a laugh at you
>"Wow, they're having you be her guide? How come they want her to leave so bad?"
>You smile wryly and fake-punch her on the shoulder
"Don't kid yourself Dash, you know as soon as she lays eyes on me she'll fall victim to my manly charms~"
>You layer the sarcasm on thick, striking a pose like one of those vaguely homosexual guys on Rarity's fashion magazines
>Dash, meanwhile, has doubled over in laughter, cackling as you walk
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>>29513664
>"Whatever you say, big guy. Don't scare her off too bad, you hear?"
>The two of you pause as you come to a corner
"Yeah, yeah. Go explain to Harshwhinny why you didn't do your homework."
>You wave her off, exchanging farewells before heading in opposite directions
>You make your way to the front lobby of the building
>Given the fact that the next period is about to start, it's mostly empty save you and the tall drink of water that is Vice Principal Luna, who stands to the side of the trophy case
>Catching your eye as you approach, she straightens up from her position leaning on the wall
>"Anonymous, good to see you're on time. I've informed Ms. Harshwhinny that you'll be doing me a favor this period, so you don't have anything to worry about in that regard."
>She looks down at her watch
>"The new student should be here any minute. She'll have a class schedule, so show her all her classrooms, her locker, the gyms and such. Oh, and you should eat lunch with her as well, so that she can learn how the cafeteria works."
>You figure that's a good idea
>If she's cool, you could actually introduce her to Dash's friends as well while you're at lunch
>And maybe, if you play your cards right -
>Your train of thought is interrupted by the sound of the front door opening
>Yours and Luna's eyes are drawn to the sound, and you take in the sight before you
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>>29513678
>Standing in the door is a girl around your age
>She's wearing a very stylized Japanese school uniform, with a huge bow on the front and a skirt whose hem just barely reaches her fingertips
>The tails of the bow have huge pins on them, one being a peace sign and the other being the word "JO"
>There's a splotch-shaped mark on the base of her neck, right on her exposed collarbone
>Her jaw-length black hair falls down in sheets, bangs propped up by a huge pair of sunglasses
>She has a school bag slung over one shoulder
>Her gaze meets yours, and she strides over, a confident pace in her step
>Luna speaks up as she reaches you
>"Ah, good morning. You must be -"
>The girl cuts her off, smiling and bowing slightly at the waist
>"Shizuka Joestar, miss. A pleasure to meet you both."
>She straightens up and looks at you
>"You're my tour guide for the day, I'd imagine?"
>Shizuka cocks her head ever so slightly at you
>C-cute
>You manage to contain spaghetti enough to form a reply
"Er, yeah. I'm Anonymous, but just call me Anon."
>You flash her your winningest smile and extend a hand
>SKILL CHECK: DIPLOMACY
>PASSED!
>She shakes your hand, smiling back at you
>Successfully avoided sperging out on contact, nice job Anon
>Luna pipes up again
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>>29513699
>"Well, I'll leave you to it then. Make sure to come by my office after lunch."
>You both nod in understanding and Luna turns to leave down the now-empty hallway
>You turn back to Shizuka, but yelp and jolt backwards as you discover her face mere inches from yours
>You clutch your heart as you watch her repeatedly don and remove her sunglasses, squinting at you
>Keep it together Anon, she's foreign
>You straighten yourself up
"So are you, uh, ready to go?"
>She pauses her motions and her eyes widen slightly
>"Oh, y-yes. Sorry, I thought I saw something on your face..."
>She trails off a bit at the end, hanging her sunglasses on the collar of her uniform
>Fuck, she's cute
>She doesn't say anything, so you take it upon yourself to converse
"Do you have your class schedule, or...?"
>She gets flustered for a second before pulling it out of her bag
>...
>Fourth period passes as the two of you meander around the school, her asking questions about how American schools work and you pointing out where relevant things are
>"Okay, so let me get this straight - I don't need four pairs of shoes just for school anymore?"
>You chuckle and explain again that America doesn't have the same stigma about 'indoor' shoes that Japan does
>"And you have people that clean the school for you? You don't have to do it yourselves?"
"Well, we do have janitors, but it's sorta expected that you try to make their lives easier. You know, don't throw your trash on the floor, try not to make messes, that sort of thing."
>"That's just bizarre. American schools are weird."
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>>29513708
>She smiles as she says this, which you return
"Whole country's kinda like that, honestly. Trust me, you'll figure it out while you're here."
>Eventually you find yourselves sitting on a bench outside the gym
"Well, we've seen everything important and we've still got some time before lunch. Tell me about yourself."
>You lean back and fold your hands, preparing to listen
>Shizuka leans back as well, placing her sunglasses on her forehead and lacing her fingers behind her head
>The lean causes her shirt to ride up just a bit, exposing a tiny strip of stomach
>...eyes up, soldier
>"There isn't a lot to tell, really. My adoptive father found me when I was a baby, but he died of age pretty shortly after, so I grew up in the town that my dad was visiting when he found me. I don't remember much about them, but..."
>She pauses for a second
>"I always remember my dad's smile. I always felt safe around him."
>She smiles wistfully before resuming
>"Anyway, I was raised by my dad's son Josuke and his mother in Morioh Town, where I was found. Then I decided to come here."
>Shizuka closes her eyes and tilts her head back
>"How about you, huh? What's your story?"
>...yeesh
>You rub the back of your head
"It's, uh, not pretty. My dad was -"
>Your sentence is mercifully cut short by a distant crashing sound and a shout
>You and Shizuka both bolt upright, hearing a voice coming from around the corner
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>>29513714
>"Hahahahaha! Nobody will make fun of me ever again! This is my power, my fury! This.. this is 「LOVETAP」!!
>Shizuka bolts towards the shouting, leaving you stunned for a second before you take off after her
>Rounding the corner, you both find a small figure, probably a freshman, holding out a hand towards a row of lockers
>Well, it was a row of lockers
>Now it's a massive concave hunk of metal on the wall
>The little grey girl has a manic look in her eyes as she turns to face you
>You blink - what's that shimmering thing behind her? You can't quite make it out, like your eyes refuse to stay on it long enough to identify it
>"Oh goody, now I get to try it on some people!"
>She leans backwards and throws a hand towards you
>" Go, 「LOVETAP」!!"
>That shimmering shape starts rushing towards you
>In an instant, Shizuka transitions into a battle stance and responds with a shout of her own.
>"「WILD HONEY」!"
>You feel a force push you from the side, moving you a few feet away from Shizuka
>Wait, where'd Shizuka go?
>"Hey, where'd you go!?"
>The freshman starts yelling again
>Wait, where the fuck did YOU go!?
>Your body is gone!
>Well, not gone, you guess. Just invisible
>Because that makes SO much more sense
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>>29513720
>Turning your head back to the freshman, you notice that shimmering force behind her, except it's different somehow...
>...and suddenly, Shizuka is behind the freshman, delivering an axe kick to the shorter kid's collarbone
>The kid shouts and falls to her knees, clutching her shoulder
>In an instant, Shizuka is gone again. The kid speaks through ragged breaths
>"So you have a power like mine, huh? Well it won't save you! At least, not both of you!"
>She casts her eyes in your direction
>You feel a tingling sensation as you witness your body fading back into view
>The freshman points again at you
>"Get him, 「LOVETAP」!"
>The shimmering shape rushes at you again
>You hear Shizuka call your name, just for an instant, as you feel a feather-light touch on your sternum
>You're sent hurtling backwards at an incredible speed
>You feel your back hit the wall before you lose consciousness
<---TO BE CONTINUED---
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>>29513720
>>29513725

>Shizuka's stand isn't 「Achtung Baby」

Aside from causing my autism to flair up, that was pretty good. Look forward to seeing more.
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>>29513725
Cool way to incorporate Shizuka into this story. It's pretty cool when characters get better fanon treatment than they do canon treatment, and I'm interested in where you're going to go with this green.
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>>29513797
This version of Shizuka is pulled from a Japanese concept art thing about a grown-up Shizuka, where Achtung Baby evolves into Wild Honey, which she can control.

>>29513850
Shizuka is someone that I really want to see again in JoJo someday, and I knew that I wanted to have her in this story. I appreciate the interest :)
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>>29513917
http://imgur.com/a/0VY8O

whoop, forgot to link the album
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UPDATE TIME

>”Alright! Aaaaaand done!” The unicorn finished writing on her notepad after inspecting some of your old junk of electronics. “And you don’t mind us taking it back?”
“It’s junk, anyway. If you can reverse engineer it somehow, be my guest.” You shrug and get a cup from the cupboards. “Want water or juice?”
>”No, but thank you, cutie.” The unicorn giggled as you put the cup back in. “I gotta get back up to Canterlot. Moondancer will have my head if I don’t get back with my notes and your stuff yesterday.”
>The both of you chuckled and you walked out the door with her
>You are Anonymous and today is a good day for exercise
>But, you have a meeting to attend to pretty soon
>”Here’s your first pay for the month, by the way. From the C.U.C.” She handed you a big bag of bits.
>It’s hard not to laugh at the initials of the Canterlot Utilization Committee
“Khehe. Thanks.” You ruffle her mane after getting a hold of your payment
>”Y-You too.” she mumbled before departing with her cart full of your junk
>Hopefully they’ll learn how to make internet by the time you’re old
>Putting your money in a safe place in your house and getting dressed with what you got, you depart to Twilight’s castle
>Lord knows you gotta get out and acclimate to pony society
>It’s been a month since you came here, three weeks since you obtained a Stand, two weeks since you partied hard with the whole town, and a week since you contacted the Princesses in Canterlot and setting up an appointment to see them to get citizenship
>They even set up a monthly meeting with C.U.C. so you don’t really have to work
>But knowing you, you need to get out the house
>You’ll ask Pinkie if there are some odd jobs around to do, she knows everybody in town so it can’t be that hard
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>>29514030

>The doors of Twilight’s castle was guarded by a couple of guards
>”Are you that Anonymous fellow?” One of the guards asked in a stoic tone
“The one and only Anonymous fellow as far as I know. Can I go in?” You smile as he nodded and moved his bardiche out of the way
>Walking in, you see the foyer is rather populated more than usual
>All the furnishings and decorations and finally someone is making use for them
>You walk through the doors to the halls and see it isn’t populated, just a couple of silent guards, who just nod your way
>You keep your pace and hear voices as you get closer to the end of the hall
>Must be those princesses and Twilight with them
>”I know, but be careful, Twilight. I’ve known this power since the day it appeared and it always seemed as if anyone with these abilities run into trouble.”
>”He did say that Stand users are always destined to meet. Paraphrasing from what Anon told me, of course. But there really isn’t no need for all this staff, is it?”
>”’Tis really a threat, dear sister?”
>”Only in the wrong hands. And I assure you, Twilight. The staff and the guards will be here for you, your friends, and the town’s safety should any become Stand users.”
>You decide now to knock on the door and make your presence known
“Hello, may I come in?”
>”Oh, yes! Come inside.” You gulp after hearing a motherly voice call out and make a cross across your chest before walking in
>The map of Equestria laid between you and the three ponies across from you
>There’s Twilight, the white and midnight blue alicorns must be Princess Celestia and Princess Luna
>You could feel the aura of royalty come forth from them that it leaves you making an effort not to quake
>Hopefully this goes well
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>>29514043

>”Hello, Anonymous. I hope you’ve been doing well in your time here.” Celestia’s voice was as smooth as velvet
"I have, thank you, Princesses." You bow
>”Before we can ascertain if you are welcome to this nation, we have some questions pertaining to your knowledge of the new threat.” Luna, as abrasive as she sounded and to the point, seemed to be the Princess that no one should fuck around with
>You likey~
“I’m guessing these Stands are what today is about?”
>”Don’t think you’re in trouble. No one could ever thought this would happen.” Celestia chuckled a little bit. “So, these Stands, are they in your world?”
“Only as a figment of fiction. It was...well, where I came from, time wise, it was 20xx, so the concept of Stands wasn’t around until 1989. But…” you stumble your words before clearing your throat. “It was fiction. At least, I thought it was until I came here.”
>”And you have knowledge on everything about it?”
“As far as you guys know, basically. What’s new is just the fact that the Arrow became Twilight’s Stand via magic. But as Pinkie says, “it’s magic. She don’t gotta explain sh- nothing!” You quickly recovered from cursing in front of deities
>”Thank you.” Luna smirked, knowing well what you did. “And you know full well you’ll be helping Twilight Sparkle with the mission to find a way to create another Arrow, right?”
“I gotta own up to it.” You shrug. "If I hadn't shown Pinkie my comic collection, none of this would've happened."
>”If only stallions understood the merits you possess.” Luna leaned back and smirked. “Now then, shall we progress to see if he is welcomed to Equestria?”
>”He already is, in my eyes, but in any case…” Princess Celestia’s horn shone and shimmered before a beam hits your head
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>>29514062

>A few moments pass and you notice the shadows and light being a bit different
>Even the difference from how Twilight and Luna were sitting
>You blink as Celestia looked into your eyes with a sort of look that you can’t really understand
>Maybe it was sorrow? It just looked unbefitting of someone like her
>”So much hardships you faced. I can’t imagine being in such a world like that. And for you to be as hardy as you are now.” She wiped her eyes with her wings
“Uhh, what hardships? Everything in my life was chill.” You stop and look up to her. “Wait, did you pry into my brain?”
>”I have to. It was the only way to see if what you speak, how you act, and what you knew was the truth.”
>...You know, it sorta sucks knowing she just looked into your memories with a snap
>So many embarrassing moments you try to forget and she just witnessed at them
>As angry as you want to be, you can’t. You are an unknown alien from a different dimension, of course they’d be pretty suspicious of you
>It’s a good thing they have magic like that, though
>”What did you see, sister?” Luna prodded her sister
>”A world where the stallions worked instead of the mares.” Princess Celestia started bawling her eyes out
>”WHAT?!” Luna rose from her seat
>Now you know why some mares acted like schoolboys around you
>"Anon, stop laughing! This is no joking manner!"
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>>29514073

>”So, now that you are a citizen of Equestria and a benefactor to our technological prowess, what’ll you do now?” Twilight asked you the moment Princess Celestia and Princess Luna flew off in their carriage toward Canterlot
“Truth be told, as much as I am making bank with all the bits the C.U.C. dropped off, I want to be lazy and just sit around and play my games at home and pray that the internet comes back before I get old.”
>”That doesn’t seem like a good way to live. Don’t you-”
>You chuckle a bit and ruffle her mane
“I was just getting to that part.”
>”O-Oh...g-go on.” She leaned a little into your hands rubbing her head
“Anyway, I have a shot at something. You see…” [METROPOLIS] comes out and you recreate the image in your head of some random city as a sort of hologram. “There’s a lot of us. So there really isn’t any room for adventure or making a name for ourselves.” You wipe the illusion away and your Stand falls back into you. “I think you can tell what I’m trying to say.”
>”Oh...Anon, I didn’t know.” Twilight stood on her hind legs and hugged you. “Here. To make you feel better.”
“It’s all good. Truth be told, Celestia’s act there distracted me a bit from those thoughts.” You chuckled\. “Thanks for listening to my tripe, though.”
>”It isn’t tripe, Anon. It’s what you’re feeling. You should never hold them back or demean yourself.” Her voice was stern as she scolded you
>You smile and hug her back
“Heh, man, you really are a Princess of Friendship, huh?” You joke a bit after breaking off the hug. “Thank you. So, let’s talk about the whole Arrow business.”
>Before you both said anything, your stomachs started growling
>”Actually, let’s discuss this over lunch. My treat.” Twilight giggled a bit
"A bit early to ask me on a date, ain't it?" You see her blush and try not to laugh
>You fail not to laugh
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>>29514101

>The both of you head out and slowly make your way downtown
>Walkin’ fast, faces pass
>The sun was high in the sky and the streets were lined with ponies; some shopping, some on their way to work, some chilling by the fountain, and parents taking their children home
>”Yo, how did that whole process go?” You heard Rainbow say as she lands next to you. “With you still here, I’m guessing it gone well?”
>Before Twilight said anything, you shut her up with your Stand shushing her silently
>She gets the message and you fall to your knees, fake crying
>”I’m...no...Rainbow, I have no time.” You hold on to her and look her in the eyes. “I’ve always wanted to say that you're the best bro a man could-” Your Stand creates an illusion of dark clouds and skeletal hands popping forth from the ground. “Oh god! I don’t wanna be banished!”
>”ANON!” Rainbow quickly went and wrapped her hooves around your arms as the bony hands drag you back
>She gripped your sleeves and pulled her head back
>With her sight elsewhere, you look at Twilight and nod your head to Rainbow
>She gets the message and pretends to help Rainbow
>”Anon, hold on a little longer!” Rainbow shouts as her wings beat faster. “I won’t let them banish you!”
>You look up and see Twilight’s Stand out and about, his face drooling a little as he stares at Rainbow Dash
>”Yes...a being that shows unwavering loyalty to not only her nation, but her friends, as well. I see it. Her mind. She is perfect for my gift!”
>Oh shit he’s gonna give her a Stand without Twilight’s knowledge
>You call off the illusion, but with nothing anchoring you to the ground, Rainbow's forceful pulling flung the three of you into the sky
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>>29514129

“FUUUUUUCK! Twilight, Eden wants to give her a Stand! Give it to her now!” You shout as your ascent slows down
>Unfurling her wings, Twilight goes up to Rainbow and gets a hold of her. “Rainbow, whatever happens here, you have to trust me and use this power I’m about to give you for good, okay?!”
>Rainbow looks at both of you weirdly before nodding
>[ASHES OF EDEN] connects the horn on his helmet with Twilight’s horn and, with their magic swirling around, shoot a beam toward Rainbow Dash and hits her with it
>She slowly widens her eyes at the sight of the Stand before her and freak out a bit
>"TWILIGHT WHAT THE HAY IS THAT BEHIND YOU?!"
>”Don’t freak out! That’s the power I’m talking about, Rainbow. Bring it out!”
“BRING IT FAST I’M FALLING NOW!” You yell as you feel gravity pull you down
>Rainbow Dash flies down to get under you before pushing with all her might
>Not even Twilight helping her could slow your descent
>”C’mon! I’m not...gonna…let you die!” You could feel some sort of rumbling as you feel yourself slowing down
>”Keep going, Rainbow, let him down a little slower!” Twilight shouted.
>You look down and see the ground coming slowly now. The banisters of Town Hall and few lingering ponies being blown back by some sort of harsh wind
>When you feel the ground was close enough, you jumped off and rolled on the ground
>The winds pushed you back a bit, but it came to a halt
>All three of you were panting. Twilight and Rainbow from exhaustion, and you from fear
>”Does…” Rainbow spoke up after she caught her breath. “Does anypony want to tell me what the hay just happened?!”
“Ooh boy, my legs are jelly.” You groan as you try to stand up. “Let’s...agh...have this talk over some lunch…urgh...”
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>>29514142

>You stop scarfing down your food just to see Rainbow Dash looking at both you and Twilight with a confused glare
“Are...you gonna be eating?” You ask
>The three of you had been silent since you got inside a restaurant
>”Anon! You were about to be dragged into Tartarus, we flew into the air, Twilight had a golden griffon appear out of nowhere that shot me with some magic that gave me something to stop you from crashing into the ground!” She listed the events with a seething whisper. “So sorry if I don’t find food to be a priority.”
“Damn, alright, bro…” You wipe your mouth with a tissue and put it off to the side. “So...hmm, I don’t know if what we’re doing should be kept a secret or not.”
>”It won’t.” Twilight gulped down her tea and concentrated before bringing out her Stand. You followed suit and Rainbow blinked, looking at both spirits floating from your bodies. “What you see before you is-”
>”Those are the things in that comic Anon has, aren’t they?” She flew up to their faces and poked at yours. “Oh my gosh, that’s cool! And I got one?!”
>She’s really taking this in stride
>”Try bringing yours out right now.” With Twilight’s motivation, Rainbow started to concentrate on bringing it out
>”I feel a sort of tug...I think that’s how...I…” She breathed a sigh and looked around. “I think I got it, but I don’t see it.”
>She started looking around for it, wandering around the restaurant and calling out its name. “[MONSOON]! Where are you? Here, standy standy!”
>You spotted something on her wings and see a pair of intricate metal designs seemingly fastened onto her wings and feathers
“There it is. It’s some sort of metal on your wings!” You call out to her
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>>29514160

>She looks over at her wings and cheers. “There it is! Whoo!” She stood and looked at them before looking up at both your Stands. “...Wait...this is my Stand?” She frowned
>”Don’t be like that, Rainbow. Spike has a Stand like yours. It’s an integrated Stand, I call it.” Twilight smiled. “And you used it to save Anon when he fell. Didn’t you notice all that wind?”
>”Yeah, but...I was expecting something like yours and Anon’s. All I get is wind blowing?” She sulked a bit
>Oh no. No sad bros on your watch.
>And you know just a piece of information to help bring her spirits up
>Finishing your food, you get up and pat her head
“I got just the thing to show you. C’mon, let’s finish up lunch and I’ll show you how cool your Stand can be.”

>You are Rainbow Dash now
>You feel a bit gypped that Anon and Twilight has these sweet looking ghosts at their beck and call while you’re stuck with some junk on your wings
>But your bro says he got something to make you feel better
>...it’s weird calling him that
>He acts like a sis, but is actually a bro
>And you would correct him, but he's really down to earth and chill so it feels like a dumb thing to point out
>Whatever, if Anon has something that’ll make you feel better, you believe him
>Throughout the month you got to know him, he’s a pretty chill colt
>For an alien
>”So, we go back to the thing that caused us all this trouble…” Anon chuckled as he brought out his lap computer and brought up that comic. “There is more to the comic than Stands.There’s two more powers from it. I won’t go into detail but there’s this guy who has the same powers as you. Not a Stand but...ahh, I’ll show you. Hope you don’t mind the gory scenes and action.”
>It icks you, but not by much
>You and Twilight hop on up his couch as he presses something called Battle Tendency
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>>29514196

>As the three of you read, you see that this Wamuu guy controls wind with a brutal force
>Looking back at how you saved Anon, you feel that there’s more to your Stand that you could do
>He's reading you a part where one of the Jojo guys is fighting him in an arena
>Whoa! Did he just-
>”That looks really dangerous! Do humans have-”
>”Not human, those three are Pillar Men. That guy that Rainbow is reading about has a strong sense of strength and battle.”
>”To the point he hurts himself to blow razor sharp air!?”
“Twilight, that sounds so cool! How could you not like that?!” You close the lap computer on accident as you go up to her. “I could tear my enemies up apart with two different air currents, squeeze the air out so hard that it becomes razor sharp, I bet I can fly faster to make a bigger sonic rainboom!” You hold her cheeks. “BIGGER. RAINBOOMS!”
>”Hey Dash, should we go into the Everfree Forest and mess up some timberwolves?” Anon smiled and got up, putting on a coat
>He definitely had the right idea!
>”Anon, you are being a bad influence! You can't just do that!” Twilight didn't approve
“But what else do we do? Hit clouds or wooden boxes? Why not Timberwolves?” You look out and spot the forest in the distance. “Anon is right there by it. Hey, wouldn't this be a good thing to do for a colt?” You nudge her a bit.
>”I'm standing right here. I can defend myself also…” Anon crossed his arms
“Yeah, don’t worry. The big mares can still help you out with them.” You open the windows and fly right out there
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>>29514218

>The three of you tread through the Everfree
>You used to be cautious about it, but now?
>Timberwolves beware
>A few minutes go by as you all go deeper into the woods, passing Zecora's hut, you think
>Twilight was bickering a little with Anon when he went ahead of you two
>”C’mon, bookworm, it isn’t that dangerous.” Anon stood up against her smothering
>”I’m not gonna have your first day as citizen be met with hurting yourself and scraping your body. Just let me put a little shield around you.”
>”Goddamn it, no!” Before he could reach out, branches around you broke, stopping all of you from moving. “Oops, we attracted them.”
“Heh, don’t you worry. I got this.” You bring [MONSOON] out and prepare yourself
>A horde of timberwolves show themselves and grit their teeth, growling back
>Ranging from bigger than you to “big as fuck”, thanks Anon, they surround you
>You see Anon and Twilight bringing their own Stands out, just in case
>”Alright, Rainbow, let’s see what you can do.” Anon encouraged you
>Nodding, you crouch before launch at the closest timberwolf, using your Stand to give you some speed
>Your hooves blow him to pieces and you use the leftover momentum to tackle down the ones behind it
>Howls came forth from one of them and they all started after you
>Anon just stood still as his [METROPOLIS] swiftly took down any that dared get close to him
>Twilight’s magic, along with [ASHES OF EDEN], tore apart each timberwolf lunging at them
>You used your Stand to dexterously weave through the trees, bushes, and the maws of the wolves as you bucked and blew apart any that came to your friends
"Watch it!" You yell out to Anon. He ducks and you ram into the timberwolf behind him
>"Thanks for the save!"
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>>29514244

>Soon, the three of you came together and gazed at their wooden broken bodies
>”Yeah, that was sweet, Rainbow.” Anon held out a fist, which you obliged with a hoof bump. He looked around and pursed his lips. "The way you guys talked about them seemed really dangerous, but we wiped them out so quickly."
>”I’ll say. She didn’t get to use even one of the powers you showed her.” Eden frowned
“Just hold up a moment. It’s gonna happen soon.” You held a hoof up to shush them
>A few minutes pass and the branches and sticks started to move on their own, one of them even tripping Anon who tried to move out the way
>"Oof, what the...oh...fucking..." He looked up at the branches forming together
>Slowly, but surely, they completed their transformation into a giant timberwolf, roaring and stomping towards you
>This was the moment you waited for
>You curve your wings as much as you can before blowing intense harsh winds toward the giant
>It lifts up and it snaps at anything it can hold on to, but to no avail as even the trees are uprooted and flung about
“Time to end this once and for all!” You shout as it roars its last breath before it breaks apart, leaving nothing unscathed
>You stop the winds and land on your hooves, unaware you were lifted into the air by the pressure you exerted to blow that wind
>”Would’ve been better if it was an actual enemy. But that’s still a high score in badassery.” Anon commented
>"I'm proud to see my gift be used in action." Eden smiled
>”Despite all of my complaining, that is a sight to behold. To see something other than magic help defend somepony is just…”Twilight was left speechless.
“Yeah, let the sight of my awesomeness flow through you, Twi.” You chided with a small smirk. “So...what now?”
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>>29514265

>”Well, we head back and think of someone else to give a Stand to.” Anon spoke up. “We do have a mission to find someone who can replicate Twilight’s Stand into an arrow form.”
>Before Twilight said anything, you piped up
“Why not see if the others can get one? I mean, from what you said, Eden found me worthy. What about AJ? Or Fluttershy?”
>”Hmm...that might work…” Twilight thought a little bit longer. “We are the physical representations of Harmony. We’ve been through many hardships.” She looked over to Eden. “You seen my memories. What do you think of my five other friends?”
>”I would be honored to give the rest of your friends the privilege of being granted a Stand. But, for now, we rest. Given time, we shall grant them all Stands.”
“Sweet! Pinkie Pie is gonna…” You stop and remember weeks ago what caused this to happen. “Pinkie Pie! I gotta see what hers looks like!” You dashed off out of the forest and flew back to town
>Today was an awesome day!

Stand User: Rainbow Dash
Stand Name: [MONSOON]
Stand Ability: [Wind Manipulation]
Power - B
Speed - E
Range - E
Durability - B
Precision - D
Potential - C

Description: [MONSOON] allows R.D. to harness the power of wind, to push foes away or boost her speed. She can even create two tunnels of harsh winds similar to Wamuu’s wind power
Appearance: A pair of thrusters attached to her wings

*insert to be continued meme here*

will update pastebin after a good fap
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bump~
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>>29513699
>Shizuka

SSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

I am bizarrely fucking hyped.
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Rerorerorerorerorerorerorerorero
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I want to send the JoJolion higashikata family to equestria and see what ensues.
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Emergency bump from page 10
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Could D4C send valentine to Equestria?
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>>29517720
Probably for all we know it could merge equestria and SBR together... that would be awesome.
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I don't often browse /mlp/ so are Jojo and MLP crossovers really common????
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>>29518334

Not really. This is the only thread of its kind, as far as I know.

Tbh, I want to see a Medaka Box x MLP crossover, as autistic as I sound
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>>29518891
There is now an even more autistic thread, and the guy running it actually planned everything out ahead of time. It's an MLP/Kingdom Hearts Crossover CYOA, and it's actually really damn good.
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>>29512801
I was waiting for an update to your story man. I like how the story will be organized by day. It sounds like every day will be eventful.
>>29513725
A new story with Shizuka Joestar? Count me in! I definitely want to read more!
>>29514280
[Monsoon] is back! I wonder what is to come for the rest of the M6.
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>>29518891
>Medaka Box x EQG
>Canterlot High divides the students in plus and minus classes.
This writes itself.
Let's go full throttle and divide the characters ITT into plus and minus or even styles
>>29519524
>Kingdom Hearts x MLP
That thing started already? Man, I got a lot to read...
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>all these crossover suggestions
>I don't even know what the fuck medaka box or whatever it is is called or about.

I-I only know mlp and JoJo... help me...

>pic related
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>>29516688

>Joshu having to take friendship lessons from Twilight and the gang, whilst whining that Gappy doesn't have to do it, so why should he?
>Joshu hanging out with Zephyr Breeze and being layabout assholes together

Man, this shit writes itself.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X4DHNXXHY7E
What are your thoughts on the latest chapter of Jojo?
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>>29521350
I was kind of surprised when Joubin directly intervened.
Pretty good chapter overall.
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>>29520148
Yeah, I'd say the buildup's about as slow as mine; Anon just got the keyblade in the last thread. It's a damn good read though.
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>>29496650
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>>29520302
Man, I have this idea I'm kicking around in the back of my head where all our protagonists switch Stands due to some multiversal fuckery. There's no way it'd happen without all the Anon vs Jojo ASBs being written now, but I like to consider it from time to time.
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>>29522173
I like where this is going...
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>>29522173
>One of the Anon's gets 「ANONYMOUS」 as their stand.

Fund it.
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>>29522273
>Care Root gets him
>He's stuck with a socially awkward adult punchghost who tries to give him life advice and poses like a retard every so often while encouraging him to get some of that Derpy pussy

>Fuckface gets him
>Constant insult slinging and cries of "You my nigga man!"
>They get along great up until he has to witness Fuckface fucking Twilight

>Erich gets him
>Argues with him about Nazis and constantly wishes he had [BENZIN] back while [ANON] needles him about Aryanne

I want this so badly.
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>>29522173
How would you decide who gets which stand?
>>29522378
It seems like you have already thought several scenarios...
Tell us more!
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>>29502722
Paste’s up and I love the url: http://pastebin.com/ZyeeJAQN

>>29503194
I’m happy I found a chance to introduce them. Indigo’s a great character. And the short’s like the ASB, not canon but close.

>>29503201
>Fucking incredible
>I inspire someone
Shit, thanks back. Like many writers, I’m principly powered by dicksuck, and praise like this really keeps me going.

>>29504881
Thanks. I like writing smart characters who have decks stacked against them, because they always do shit I’m not expecting. The Art of War bit was my favorite part to write precisely because of that. And Sugarcoat’s not retired. In fact, if she’d succeeded in using her Stand, Trixie probably wouldn’t have made it.

>>29504415
Who was the user?

>>29512754
Great Stand for AJ, and I liked how they figured it out. The final scene interested me because it seems like a nobler version of what's going on behind the scenes of CRBA. Using days is interesting, especially because it suggests a lot of stuff is going to happen in a short timespan. I use "episodes" because they give me a decent target, and I like the thought of a story someone could read weekly and look forward to like a TV show.

>>29513725
This reads like a pretty standard opening, but including Shizuka and giving her 「WILD HONEY」 shows a lot of creativity and attention to the source material, so I'm excited to see how it develops.

>>29522378
>Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash has fun shooting lasers and making pew pew noises all morning.
>"What do you MEAN the Wonderbolts split up?!"

>>29496736
I found Fuckface’s Stand! 「Bend My Dick」 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Vj9V_pX8yw

And mine is clearly 「Fog」 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQ1dlhN1uZ0

No idea what either of them do, though.
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>>29511539
ty, and yeah I agree that there's some creative potential for stands with their music.

>>29523036
From my drunken notes the user was supposed to be an officer that defected from the Royal Guard I guess. If I can ever decode anything I might just do the one shot. Most likely it'll never happen though.
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Bedtime bump.

>>29520513
>IMG_0420
Joshu's such a turd, I love him. Seeing Araki write an asshole who doesn't get offed in six chapters is fascinating.

>>29518334
No. There are a few stories on FiMFic, though.

>>29511539
Agreed.

Also, we need some Of Montreal Stands.
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here's the proper version of my green.

"Don't you believe that confronting yourself- this… other self, the solution?"
>She puts her head up for the first time.
>"Jojo, you're telling me to embrace myself?"
"Well, this other self. That's what- in your mind, you believe in."
>You bring down your head to her, and look her right in her eyes.
"Don't lie to yourself. That’s what you should be."
>You point to the picture of the tall, thin beautiful princess she's drawn for you.
>The flowing hair, as apposed to her still, lifeless wig.
>She's ready to take the mantle next to the glory of her sister.
"You're ready to take the mantle as-"
>"As the ruler of equestria?"
>You smile warmly. "That's what I mean."
>She smiles a little wider than your taste.
>You wave it off- though.
"Go to your sister, now. Tell her the news
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>>29523726
>At the wave of a hoof, the last of the delegates leave.
>Luna has confined herself to her chambers once again.
>It's been her rebellious phase, if you could even call it that.
>It's like her rebellious phase, phase 2- electric boogaloo.
>"I know what you're thinking, Celestia-"
>You look down on your court wizard.
"Next you're going to tell me you want to talk to her."
>"May I console her?" He giggles a bit- realizing that you were right.
>That pony, to you is considered the only reason Luna comes out to even lift the moon anymore.
>Your court mage and personal friend to luna- Starswirl The Bearded.
>He was a lanky fellow with a beard that touched the floor at all times.
>His hat hangs over his eyes, hiding most of his face from view most of the time.
>This time is different- though. This was Luna, and when talking about her he takes off his hat in respect.
>It's what she needs in a time like this.
>But you shake your head anyway.
"No, Starswirl, you remember how last time went."
>"But this time is different! I know I'm making way on her!"
"She won't even tell us why she'll leave."
>JoJo should be finishing up in there soon.
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>>29523731
>Jovial Journey was the pony sent to comfort Luna, and considered the most talented psychiatrist in equestria.
>Not renown for his triumphs, but he is the go-to for council.
>You've been looking into getting him into becoming an equestrian ambassador.
>He's a tall, strong brown earth pony with even darker brown hair, with a few strands of gray in it.
>You don't know his age, but he seems well into his thirties, yet un-bridled with children, like most stallions get these days.
>He has the eyes of a phoenix and the stride of an Ox, setting the walls ablaze with his aura wherever he goes.
>Starswirl, when he walked in, even commented on his production of Noren energy, or goodwill generated magic.
>Though- we don't know his capacity for actually using it.
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>>29523741
>The room lays quiet, only the sound of breathing making noise.
>Finally, the two appear from the corridors of the castle of the two sisters.
>Luna sports a smile, for the first time in years, and Jojo, that contemplative completeness you always see after an intellectual victory.
>You realize just how big Jojo is standing next to Luna, he's giant, and his head ends at Luna's horn.
>He could easily fit Star swirl underneath him- although Starswirl'd have to have his head down.
>Your mind wanders for a moment while your mind shouts out how tired it really is.
>Wordlessly, luna comes and sits on her throne, presenting herself regally for her position at the night.
>And, just as wordlessly, you leave your throne, to go off to bed.
>You graciously thank Jojo, however- and give him a note for the 2000 bits.
>Then, the thrones disappear into the shifting landscape behind you as you dive through the castle to your bed.
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>>29523748

>A few hours pass as you walk around in the beautiful forest around the castle of the two sisters.
>You've been invited to stay with the two princesses tonight.
>Well, not in their beds but it's close enough to hear them snore.
>Who would have thought that- of all professions a psychiatrist would get to sleep at the castle?
>Not even most princes of other countries get to do that.
>You sit down for a moment carving a reed with your skillful mouth and hooves.
>While your father, Windy Journey- was a buisnessman, his father was a farmer.
>You're a strange mix of the two, being able to carry the talents of the land while doing business with the princesses.
>It's about eight o'clock now, and the moon should be going up.
>Luna hadn't been a very difficult case, she had this vision of herself, taller- prettier, more powerful.
>You believe it sprouted from her envies of celestia, her shining over their kingdom more often than not.
>She should just take her place as ruler and the other half of this world, and all would be in harmony.
>At least, that's how it's supposed to go.
>Hopefully she doesn't get needlessly intimidated with the role like she might.
>Then we'd have a problem, back to square one.
>You blow a C sharp note on your reed whistle, before going back inside to go to bed.
>With a creak, the mattress touches the floor.
>You sigh, looking over your situation.
>Your body takes up the entire bed, and weighs down on the springs.
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>>29523753
>Soon, it's morning.
>But you've awoken quite early, it seems- as the moon still stands proud in your window.
>Probably in the early 5s.
>You yawn, stretching well.
>then, you crawl out of your sprawl, and begin down the hall- looking for a night servant.
>Maybe they can make you some toast or tea
>Just to keep you toastea.
>You giggle to yourself in your deep voice.
>Your head perks up at a bit of chatter echo down the hall, you head towards the noise.
>Yes!
"A servant! Come to Papa Jojo!"
>The talk gets louder, and more fervent as you hear crackles of magic.
>You reach the main atrium in your stumbles, to celestia facing the throne.
>"Luna, I will not fight you! You must lower the moon! It is your duty!"
>You watch in horror as luna fires at the ceiling, trying to kill Celestia with falling debris
>Luna's eyes go narrow as she steps forward to about 20 feet from celestia.
>"Yare Yare Daze, Celestia! If you will not fight me…"
>Her face goes to a wicked grin before she booms out
"THEN I WILL FINISH YOU RIGHT NOW!"
>She then immediately charges up her horn.
>"You've always been useless! USELESS USELESS USELESS! You can't even half ass yourself to do your duty!"
>She cackles loudly!
>"Even in the face of YOUR Kingdom crumbling, the moon rising and never falling!"
>"You could not even try to stop me?! I'm Disappointed, but moreso I'm FURIOUS with your inability!"
>Celestia begins again.
>"You are my Sister! How could you do this! Please, stop this fooli-"
>"Shut your peasant mouth!"
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>>29523761
>She points her head down to her, and you find yourself running to shield your princess.
>As you dive, you see a flash of light, blinding you as if you had stared into the sun.
>The event happens quickly, but you see luna for the first time, tall and dark, with sharp shark like teeth and a powerful stature.
>But she's stumbling back.
>You see the walls peeling around you from bright, white light, walls shattering and the castle crumbling.
>Celestia's incapacitated on the floor by you, and at this point you scoop her up with your massive, rippling muscles and dive out while she's dazed.
>At the steps of the castle you see the main atrium collapse, and hopefully for the better on the transformed Princess.
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>>29523770
>You scoop up Celestia and move on to the way out of this jungle.
>She's still passed out, but it's no big deal, she's not that big.
>And, in a bit- you're out of that infernal jungle.
>Something says you're going to have to get back here.
>Though It seems some power has been de-activated as the briars and brush are getting thicker behind you.
>And over the hills and over the dale you make it to the place you were going to meet the peagsi.
>The pegasi that were supposed to take you back to Manehatteon.
>You see the stallion in and the cart patiently waiting with a smile
>That smile turns to horror as he see's his ruler near death.
>Franticly, he begins.
>"Jojo, what happened back there in the castle?"
>You shake your head violently, presenting a face of worry.
"I don't know, sir. Please just take us somewhere we can get our princess some treatment!"
>You shout much louder than you think was honestly necessary.
>With calm, passionate courtesy he nods.
>"Yes sir! Please hold on master Jojo!"
>He takes off, struggling to keep you two as well as stay fast.
>But his loyalty to the crown kept him forward and quick.
>You couldn't tell the problems with the princess, but she wasn't waking up.
>Soon, you land in the mountain town of Canter's Lot.
>You storm down the cobble paved ways, to the town surgeon.
>You burst through the door, seeing the stallion cutting a mane currently.
"Sir! I need you to check her!"
>He stops.
>"Is that-"
"Yes sir! Now please take care of her!"
>Without hesitation, he nods, and takes her back into the place where the magic happens.
>Exhausted, you set out for breakfast.
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>>29523778
>You're shocked at how efficient ponies work when their ruler's on the line.
>And Celestia's flash of white, destroying the castle.
"Not so useless now, huh Luna."
>You walk the town, taking in the sights.
>It's beatiful, the view- it oversees the entirety of the valley below.
>And the amount of real estate is phenomenal.
>You notice a nice pancake diner.
>The sign on the front says, in hasted paint.
>The best pancakes in canter's lot!
"Ooh! This is going to be nice! I hope they have waffles, as well!"
>Behind you, a voice shouts out.
>"Stop right there, Jojo!"
>You jump, and freeze.
>The voice was grumbly, and controlling.
>You turn.
>And-
>Nothing. So you turn back around to-
>"Going somewhere?"
"WHAT!"
>A large, larger than you, stallion, blocks the entrance!
"How did you?"
>"Get here? In the door?"
>You stop, your face clenching at his speed.
>His face wrinkles a wicked smile.
>"It's simple, really. It's my special talent!"
>He poses, flanking his flank at you.
>You zoom in, and focus on the bolt climbing down his thigh.
>"It's a lighting bolt! I'm as fast as lighting!"
>"And tell me, I know that you brought the princess into town."
>He walks by you, before stopping to whisper in your ear.
>"I AM LIGHTNING TORRENT AND I WILL SEE ABOUT THAT!"
>He runs off. You shake your head.
>You quickly brush it off and walk on to the pancake parlor.
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>>29523787
>"You'll have the pancakes and strawberries with a side of coffee."
>You smile warmly.
"Yes ma'am! You do know your ponies well!"
>She nods a bit before adding.
>"It's my special talent!"
>You laugh pleasantly. As she walks off.
"It most certainly is."
>Soon, she walks off, and you wait, sipping on water.
>You finally process what the big stallion who stopped you in the door said.
>/I'm fast as lightning!/
>/We'll see about that./
"See about what, though."
>You have a sick understanding of something.
>Sweet celestia.
>He might be here to-
>Celestia's in danger.
>You hope you're not too late.
"I'm never going to get breakfast…"
>You jump up, and dive out the door, and into the street. Passed the smiling waitress- whom had your coffee.
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>>29523796
>With a heretical amount of speed you sprint your way to the surgeon's place.
>And with a horrible grimace, you see blood in the windows.
"Lots of-"
>You dive into the building, and you wish you haven't.
>The blood was on the floor, climbing its way down and up the walls and dripping from the ceiling, it was underneath the cash register and inside the chairs and filled the bottles of shampoo.
>The blood was in the Shoes of the deceased.
>Strangely enough, there were no hoof prints.
>but a menacing light shone in the room.
>This was a work of that pony from earlier
>You ran into the back to find the dead doctor and broken glass.
>You hear a faint-
>You dive right and the man from the store flies passed you.
>"Jojo! Where is celestia!"
>He looks, less menacing and more…
>Worried.
>You run over to him
"I thought you had done this! Who did this?!"
>He composes himself
>"I cannot tell you, but without Celestia I believe our chances of living are-"
>The sky turns black, the moon quickly usurps the sun, causing an eclipse.
>"Very slim."
>You fall out of the parlor and down the street, leaving a patron blood trail behind you.
>You get to the pad, where you see a few ponies carrying a coffin to a storage bay.
>"That's her. It must be."
>You grimmace.
"We won't make it in time!"
>"Like hell! Watch if you can!"
>And like that, he's over at the coffin, as if he had teleported.
>He swats one man down, cracking open to reveal the bagged from of an alicorn.
>The two ponies carrying them, were bat ponies, old night guard.
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>>29523809
and that's it for tonight. expect things to end setup soon and we'll get on our adventure.
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>>29523845
http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q
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I want to cum inside jolyne
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>>29523845
An eclipse, bat ponies taking Celestia in a body bag, teleporting powers.
For it just being setup it is quite hype!
And that hospital scene... it reminds me of what I would have written had you guys chosen Featherweight to lose his will to live on my second story... Good thing you guys wanted him to live!
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>>29522894
I'd use the same team generator that one of our writefags used to create the ASBs we're all working on now, but I'd replace the JoJos with the various protagonists of the stories around here. I've done it before, and probably the funniest combo was Fuckface with [Feathery].

As for other scenarios:
>Literally anyone else gets [Starman]
>They almost nuke their towns through overuse of the good luck stars

>Fuckface gets [Planisphère]
>Laments its poor strength and the fact that he can't make Twi horny on demand anymore
>Accidentally shoots her in the ass with a needle

>Ziggy gets [ANONYMOUS]
>Has a nice back-and-forth with him over a cup of coffee
>[ANON] quickly discovers that, from his perspective, Ziggy is fucking insane and does his best to help him out just so he'll shut the fuck up
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>>29523036
I think I found mine, and it's pretty calming.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kpchssWuK3A
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Made in bumpvean
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>>29523845
Awesome setup. JoJo's a great OC, the stakes are wonderfully tense already, and I'm looking forward to the conflict.
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Fear my stand [BYOB]

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zUzd9KyIDrM
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>>29523809
>You follow up Lightning's speed with a more normal pace and head to confront the guards.
>They see you, and burst out laughing.
>One jumps left, trying to flank you
>He laughs, giving up his element of surprise.
>"You've already lost!"
>The other one follows with.
>"Yes! Yes! It's all in place! Go ahead and have her! She-"
>You turn left, it jumping and freezing at realizing that you were a lot bigger than they had thought.
>You simply head-but him, and his head explodes under your mass.
>Then you turn to the other, fire in your eyes.
>You he tries to fly away, but lighting is there to hold him.
>Then, you do you- the fire in your eyes simmers and you take a deep breath.
"I- We're sorry I had to do this, my friend. Please forgive me. Why did you make those remarks from earlier?"
>You hear a muffled 'What the hell?!' from lightning, probably at the change of tone.
>"YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME! YOU MAY-"
>You gently put a hoof on his snout, shutting him up and hopefully calming him more.
"Woah, woah- I'm sorry if I said anything wrong. I just- please realize that this is my princess I'm fussing about."
>You sit down, the bat settling more.
>His 'eeeeees' and squirming cease as your calming words fall over him like a cotton cardigan.
>"I do suppose I'd do the same, if luna was in that place. But please, mister- I'm just under orders!"
"Exactly. My friend- and please- call me Jojo."
>"Well, Jojo. I-"
>He breathes in through his nose before exclaiming, more jagged than you'd expect.
>"I FORGIVE YOU AND YOUR ENTIRE BLOODLINE!"
"Wonderful! Now- mister-"
>"Sparkles"
>What a name!
"Mister sparkles, tell me why you're here in the first place."
>"Well, I guess it all started fourteen years ago with my childhood."
>The bat ponies' body finally hits the ground behind you some 40 feet.
>above you, you hear lightning say 'Damn, you're good.'
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>>29526973
>"And that's really how I got here."
"So- You're still under orders?"
>He realizes that he just told you everything.
>Apparently, he's just a city boy who ended up on midnight duty.
>Out in detrot.
>And, that evolved until Luna- Now considered 'Nightmare Moon' by herself is trying to bring eternal night.
>That 'Other self' was her.
>Now, they were trying to get Celestia so Luna could kill her herself.
>What a ditz, sending bat ponies to do this.
"Thank you."
>He starts crying.
>You put your hoof back up to his snout.
"I forgive you, remember- and I'm the only one who knows. If you fear what Luna-"
>"Nightmare Moon"
"What Nightmare Moon will do to you, then she shouldn't be ruler."
>You nod your head in intellectual victory.
"Start a new life, Hold on to this feeling of hope."
>"I won't stop believing, sir!"
"And thanks again."
>You look to lightning, who lets go of the bat pony, he then runs off, shredding his armour to go find an entry level job in Canter's lot.
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>>29527130
>Lightning's over by Celestia now, peeling off the bag, to a surprisingly-
>"Awake Celestia!"
"Right!"
>Her eyes were wide open, but she was still.
>But quickly, she gets up. Dusting herself off.
>"Did you just reform a bat pony?"
>She says with surprise.
"It wasn't that difficult, My Princess. He was just under orders."
>"It's not that, you took the effort to save a life, instead of ruin one."
"I still killed one!" you protest.
>"Nonono Jojo! That's the sign of an amazing heart!"
>You harumph.
"Well, It seems that Luna took place in an old Discordian castle outside Manehatteon."
>"The Castle Skynyrd!"
>Lighting pipes in behind you.
>"I Know that place! It's the perfect area for Luna to take up hold!"
"Dark, damp, and a pool of chaotic magic!" >"We must stop her, I know what she's trying to do!"
"What?"
>Celestia jumps up and starts stretching.
>"She's trying to bring Discord back!"
>Your face crumples into a scowl.
>You know who discord was.
>And you don't want to try to reform him.
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>>29527328
>Celestia Breathes normally for the first time.
>"We-"
>She pauses.
>"We defeated Discord with the Elements of Harmony, a-"
>She pauses again to think how she would put it.
>"They were created by the tree of harmony, think of them as the fruits of that tree."
>"Initially, they kept the forest clear of brambles and nasties, so we could build our home."
>You think for a moment.
"The hidden wing?"
>She jumps, her eyes widening.
>"How did you-?"
>You smile.
"Lucky guess, it's how I'd do it."
>Lightning steps in.
>"As I see it, we need back at the castle before we even begin to set in on Castle Skynyrd."
>Celestia nods, and you head on to the only way out of Canter's lot.
>An old road that climbs down the mountain.
>Loaded with bandits, as you were told.
>Before you left- Celestia had used her… Importance… to get the group some gear, and food.
>You got some Steel armour, a far cry from the gold armour that the day guards usually get and the silver the night ones get.
>Then you got a short sword for defense, but you don't think you'll need to use it.

and so we set out on our journey
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>>29523196
>Jacob's Ladder
>Red Barchetta
>Entre Nous
>Closer to the Heart
>Permanent Waves
>Vapor Trails
>Clockwork Angel
>Far Cry
>Test for Echo
>Caress of Steel
>Subdivisions
>Moving Pictures
>Limelight
>Different Stages
>Fly By Night
>Caravan
>Headlong Flight

just off the top of my head. they have a LOT of good material.
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>>29528140
>No Xanadu
>No Farewell to Kings
>No Hemispheres

fuck you.
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>>29528140
>>29528211
>no 2112

but that one's a given
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>>29528221
AN ENTIRE FUCKING SIDE FOR ONE SONG!

i'm sorry, had to get that one out.
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>>29528233
it's alright I understand. Also nice dubs
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>>29528211
>>29528221
didn't think of those, sorry senpai. haven't listened to Rush very much recently.
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>>29527816
I like the setup of Jojo, Lightning and Celestia going to stop NM from bringing Discord back. It kind of sounds like a D&D campaign.
I also like how Jojo chose to reform the bat pony, it kind of reminds me of Jonathan's mercy towars his enemies...
>"Castle Skynyrd"
YES YES YES
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>>29527816
This story is gonna be really fucking cool, I can feel it. Keep up the good work my man.
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Diamond Records is here!
https://youtu.be/TOpoLX1OoWQ
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>>29529905
Holy shit! If I could only read moon runes.....
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>>29529918
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTtv96J00dM

gotcha senpai
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Hey guys, fucko here. I'm sorry about coming back twice and promising I was going to write then dropping off the face of the planet. That was shitty. I'm about to blogpost so anyone who doesn't want to read that should skip the rest of this post.

I've been in kind of a funk lately, not full blown depression but I don't have my usual vim and vigor lately. On top of that, three days before I was set to leave my office job I went to the hospital for chest pain- the cardiologist said I was close to a heart attack based on stress. So that was fun. I've got about $20 left until Friday, so I'll make it, but it's a far cry from my robust savings account that I had once upon a time.

I don't know when or even if I'm going to finish Stand By Me, but I haven't forgotten about you guys. I think I'm just on a creative hiatus for the time being. I'll post something tomorrrow I wrote as a sort of experiment, I'm entirely too tired to get out of bed and fetch it from the PC. So here's a video of me playing with Apache and Eva.

Link is to twitter

/ffacemcgee/status/833nine0972676nine446nine12
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>>29527816
>You're about five miles away from the bottom of the mountain, definitely at the point of no return.
>"It's supposedly perfectly broken down this line, one half of the trail on this side."
>Lightning points to one side.
>"One half on the other."
>He points to the other, looking at Celestia.
>She giggles a bit.
>"I can't believe I know so little about my kingdom."
"Then getting out like this is good."
>In the weird red moonlight Celestia looks, strangely younger.
>You see the youthful eyes, like a Hairdresser on her first trip to another city.
>While she might be no less than forty years of age, she appears twenty.
>You simply giggle back and continue moving.
__
>A mile later of small conversation, you begin getting the vibes of bandit territory.
>Signs of Struggle, and what not.
>A few small gold breaks in armour where the guards were shredded.
>But it doesn't seem that this area will garnish any fright.
>The bandits only attack at-
"Oh Hell it's night all the time now isn't it."
>"What was that, Jojo?"
>Lightning turns, before a near lightning fast spear comes up from behind.
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>>29530800
>You couldn't speak fast enough, but lightning could react.
>It clipped his head, shredding his left ear.
>"Damn-"
>Another one came for him, this time he was able to get out of the way, running towards the spears.
>Or, you think he was running.
>You didn't see much before he was near the source.
>But you see him get slammed into the floor by another weapon.
>And then an axe went for Celestia.
>This time she shielded herself, and yipped to herself, then she dived behind a rock.
>Which left you and this bandit.
>By that time, you're able to speak again.
"SHOW YOURSELF!"
>He replies quickly.
>"Show myself? Stand and deliver!"
>His voice was surprisingly normal, like a cashier.
>An axe ricochets off your armour, but you don't do so much as flinch.
>You look in the direction of the bandit, and see a small, thin mass of black with a lit horn.
>A Unicorn, obviously.
"By Celestia please don't do this! We're trying to save the world!"
>"You're funny! I get heroes through here all the time!"
>Another spear comes by, this time chinking your side, you simply begin walking towards him, weak spot on your flank.
>"I'm serious, m-sir! Please let us pass in peace!" you roar
>A knife buries itself in your chink, sending a shockwave through you, causing you to bleed out a bit.
>"Are you crazy? You're not going to stop?"
>And another spear, this time you dive left, it flying passed.
>"If you were to give me some money then I'd be off!"
>You begin to run towards him, and he begins to run away, but you were faster, and able to kick his legs out from underneath him.
"Not so tough now."
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>>29530807
>"You're close enough, just-"
>He kicks you, allowing himself to get up.
>You still don't flinch, you're a hundred pounds heavier anyways.
>"Alright, you want my name? I'm SteelLight Sparkle! Son of Moonlight and Starfly Sparkle!"
>He brings up a weapon.
>"My talent? It's Magic!" He Poses "Obviously, how else could I produce these magically charged weapons?!"
>So that's what he's doing!
>The lighting charged blade, their speed! He's a Magician!
>"And you're going to die here, Earth pony, and I will rape your little girl friend!"
>He buries the blade into your armour.
>You feel that one, it was as hot as dragonfire.
"I don't want to do this, SteelLight, but if you will not let us pass in peace. I will make you let us pass in goodwill!"
>You pose back, Giving your moment to think while you two pose at each other.
>You pull your shortsword, and at that- you charge, letting the armour take his rapid fire magic weapons.
>Then, you touch sword to his leg, and he's blasted back as if you had hit him with a large hammer or rock.

>You stare at your blade. It glowing a light white.
>In a five foot radius is looks like honest day.
>"That-" Celestia calls out from behind you, poised for fighting now.
>"That is Noren Energy that you've channeled."
>You look back at the blade, it thumping quickly, you notice- to the beating of your heart.
>It's in sync with your heart, with your soul.
>"It is Channeled through your beating heart, sent out in waves along your blood lines."
>"Noren energy! The energy of goodwill!"
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>>29530833
>You feel determined, Steel's Light has recovered at this point, and begins throwing more powerful weapons.
>This time the blade seems drawn to protect you, making you want to dive here, and there, and move the blade there.
>The energy's guiding you, allowing you to dodge and weave.
>You make your way to SteelLight, who is stuck between a rock and a hard place.
>You throw your body on top of him, holding him down, biting down on his horn to stop him from producing magic. An old technique used in the guard, supposedly.
>Then he sees Celestia appear behind you, in the red turned white light.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Tdu4uKSZ3M
>"My Princess!"
>He Shouts.
>You look into his eyes, they're now beginning to form tears.
>"This is bad! I'm Really in for it now!"
>He begins babbling to the princess about his apologies.
>You let go of him, he seems to not be in a fighting state.
>Though you keep your blade ready.
>He's groveling now.
>"Oh Please let me have a chance!"
>and so on.
>Then you see Celestia look at you in the eyes, and then down to him.
>She gently lifts her hoof to his face, moving his head up.
>"I forgive you. SteelLight- My Little Pony…
>He stops, before clearing his eyes of tears.
>"You- You will?"
>"On a normal occasion, SteelLight, you'd be beheaded, but today someone showed me that there was much more to justice than just punishment."
>She sets down on the defeated bandit brigade.
>"Sometimes, there is more gratification to help a pony get off a troubled path than to force them onto another."
>"You must want to prove yourself good…"
>"AND SO FOR THAT I WILL OFFER YOU A SPOT ON OUR TEAM TO SAVE EQUESTRIA!"
"NANI!?"
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>>29530907
http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q
pastebin.

that's all for this episode.
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>>29530471
It's alright mate you were the guy who started all this the first OP and the first writefag you of all people here deserve a lot of recognition without you I don't think anyone wouldn't really have the courage to start these threads so from the bottom of one Anon heart who loves your story's and these threads. Thank you so much. Arrigato fuckface
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>>29496736
>>29497241
Rolled one for the hell of it, no idea what it looks like, feel free to use it if you want

Stand Name: Seeking of the Truth

Stand Ability: [Fog Generation](http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Fog_Generation)

Power - D
Speed - E
Range - A
Durability - C
Precision - D
Potential - E

Description: The power to create/generate fog. Sub-power of Vapor Manipulation and Weather Manipulation. Variation of Water Generation. The user can generate fog, making it hard to see them or anything. The user could use the fog generated to blind their foes so they can escape. They could also use it to fight, hit and run as their foes cannot see them.
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>You're in the club with your waifu and this dude slaps her ass.

What do?
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>>29530471
It's okay man. Take care of yourself, and of course Apache and Eva too. If you come back to writing more disadventures of Anon, then we will be happy to continue reading.
If you don't... then it was a pleasure to share a thread with you man.
Stand Proud!
>>29530907
>SteelLight Sparkle joins the party.
This may have future repercussions, right?
>>29531958
I think he made one fatal mistake.
>pic related
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>>29532381
i tried to make it more apparent that he's the ancestor of twilight
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>>29530471
Like the other anon said, you were the guy who started all this, so without you it's likely none of these threads would've happened in the first place. I'm sad to hear that you'll need a hiatus though, and I'm glad that you were able to come back into the threads a couple times before life sort of forced you to take a break. I'm glad I got to read your stuff, and I loved how you characterized your protagonist and [Fire In The Church], and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. Me and I'm sure the rest of the thread are waiting excitedly for you to return to us. I hope things go well for you man.
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>>29530907
That roundabout dropped right on
>"NANI!"
with the leadup on celestia's line
bloody hell, my sides are in orbit. that was executed flawlessly
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>>29532381
>Sunset realistically defeating Dio

StarAnon I'm sorry to say but Sunset even with her powers and sun ass could not kill DIO.
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>>29534012
Vampires are weak to sunlight, so as long as he got close enough to get the full effect and didn't know about it, she'd win. DIO would probably either kill her in the frozen time or get close enough to taunt her before dealing a finishing blow, she'd strike then.
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>>29534273
Dio is very smart guys if he was going to fight Sunset it would 100% be at night and also Sunset using her Sun-ass move during frozen time... no she would get roll rollered / kakoyoin'd without a seconds notice. Unless sunsets stand was the light equivalent of the sun itself and her ass could someone move through frozen time it would be Dio's victory.

(I love Sunset to bits as a British person I like to make sure the one British 100 year old vampire isn't killed by anyone and everyone.)
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>>29534707
Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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>>29534707
>"How many times can Sunset shake her plot on the frozen time?"
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