JoJo Thread #10.1 「BITES ZA DUSTO!」Phantom Blood

>>29336011
Last OP here since I dun goofed as an OP I'll literally be a bump machine between 6am-10pm britbong time

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It's only fair I throw the newest part of my story up again, right?

>”Is that...his stand?”
>”It can’t be.”
>Giovi let’s out an unconscious groan of pain as the roots over take him.
>Anon swipes at it, pulling away chunks of dead wood in his hands.
>This does nothing to deter the roots however, as before your eyes they slowly stretch back to fill the gaps left by Anon’s assault.
“This has to be the work of an enemy stand user.”
>You cast your gaze over the rest of the alley, looking for anything out of place but finding nothing.
>The only thing you see is the walls of the surrounding cottages and, apart from Giovi’s laboured breathing, the only sound is the nearby hustle and bustle of the market.
>”Why attack Giovi though? Wouldn’t they be on the same side?”
“Maybe Nightmare doesn’t want to leave any evidence.”
>A scream echoes through the alley, and you and Anon shoot off without hesitation towards its source.
>The two of you burst back into the market, and push yourselves through the assembled crowd towards the sound of sobbing.
>”Somepony help him! He just collapsed!”
>You break through, and find yourself looking at a mare bawling her eyes out over prone form of an older stallion.
>It takes you a moment to notice, but you spot the same roots encasing Giovi creeping up the stallion’s legs.
>Another startled cry to goes up from the crowd and you spin yourself to face it.
>”I, I can’t move! Help!”
>A mare twists her body in vain against more grasping vines, wincing in pain as the bandage around her midsection slowly fills with red as the exertion rips her stitches.
“Oh Celestia…”

Chapter 10: ｢LIVE｣ and let ｢DIE｣

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>>29336011
StarAnon not really it's actually Cameo here with your threadly dose of the「STAND」 Generator.

http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html
Follow the instructions, post your results!

As ordered by our fellow Sonic Youth, replace the ability you get in "Description" and write your own description of how your Stand looks and works!

Put a link with the song or album you are referencing, that's what cool guys do.

You can also use this link to make a graph about your stand stats!
http://www.onlinecharttool.com/

Have fun, and Stand Proud!

>>29336260
It's cool

>>29336288
No problem

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>>29336288
>More screams and cries of alarm erupt from the marketplace and you whirl around, trying to figure out why the stand is attacking the ponies that it is.
>Anon yells in frustration, and you watch as he delivers a flurry of blows at the roots entangling a nearby mare’s hooves and, before the roots can recover, hefts her onto his shoulder.
>The roots twist around each other, then slowly sink back into the ground.
>”Well, looks like they can’t latch onto someone if they’re not touching the ground.”
“Great, so the entirety of Ponyville just needs to play the floor is lava until we defeat the stand’s user.”
>”Not everyone.”
>You and Anon turn to see Bon Bon slowly making her way through the crowd.
>At first you think she’s just having trouble making it through the crush of ponies, but as she gets closer you see that every other step she’s breaking roots off of her hooves.
>"Look around, it's only attacking the old, or the sick and injured."
>To punctuate her point, Bon Bon rips another clump of roots from her hooves, and allows Anon to scoop her up and deposit her on one of the stalls next to the other mare.
"But what about me and Anon? You got some pretty good hits on us before, why isn't it attacking us?"
>"Not directly, but look around. By attacking everyone else they're still hurting you."
>"Bastard..."
>You don't reply, but you don’t have to for Bon Bon to know what she says is true.
"Alright, well how do we find him then?"
>"Hmmm."
>You see Anon crouch next to small cluster of roots protruding from the ground where Bon Bon stood, and with a grunt of exertion grab it and pull it upwards.
>The roots rise out of the ground with a shower of dirt, but don't break.
>Anon starts to walk as he continues to pull and more of the root rises out of the ground, guiding Anon back to its source.
"That works. Lets go."
>The three of you follow the roots deeper into the market, helping anypony you see being attacked by them.

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>>29336308
>The trail leads you past (and in some cases through) numerous market stalls, and eventually you exit the market altogether.
>At one point the roots lead you right into a wall, and Bon Bon reluctantly lets the roots ensnare her so that you can pick up the trail again.
>Before long you leave Ponyville altogether, and you recognise the trail your on as heading towards…
“Oh Celestia, Sweet Apple Acres.”
>You hope in you gut that the enemy stand’s range isn’t that far, but you know that if it’s stretches all the way to the Apple family’s farm, then there’s only one pony it can be attacking.
>With a flap of your wings you take to the air, leaving Bon Bon in the dust as you shoot off toward the orchard.
>Apple trees zoom past, leaves and branches spiraling in your wake.
>The wind blows cuts against your face and blows through your mane but you push through, not stopping until you reach the front of Applejack’s house.
>You practically throw yourself through their front door, the painted wood slamming against the wall with a loud bang that startles Applebloom.
>”That tha’ hay? Rainbow Dash, what ar-”
“Where’s Granny Smith?”
>The interrupted filly cocks her head at you.
>”In tha’ back garden, wh-”
>The rest of Applebloom’s sentence is swallowed by the wind as you speed through the house and out the back door.
>You spot Granny Smith almost immediately, seated in her rocking chair next to Applejack, and your heart sinks as you see the tangle of vines snaking up the aging wood of her rocking chair.
>But then you’re stopped short as you hear… laughter.
>”I didn’t even know a filly could eat so many apples, but you did. You wouldn’t touch a bite o’ food for days after you were so full.”
>Gone is the grim expression you last saw Applejack wearing as she launches into another fit of laughs.

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>>29336328
“Applejack…”
>It’s Granny Smith that responds first, turning her head and waving her one unbound hoof at you.
>”Well howdy Rainbow Dash. What brings you to Sweet Apple Acres?”
“Applejack can I… can I talk with you for a moment?”
>Applejack gives you a confused expression but stands up anyway.
>”Ah’ll be right back Granny.”
>The elder pony waves her off with a smile, and you lead Applejack inside the house.
>”So, did you have to wake up Rar-”
“Stop.”
>Applejack seems taken aback by your interruption, and you continue before she can object.
“What the hay is going on? Why aren’t you at the market? What’s with the vines on Granny Smith’s chair?”
>”I… it doesn't matter why I left the market. As for the vines they were here when I got here.”
>”Horseapples it doesn't matter! You’d never leave the market early, especially if you were the only pony there!”
>”Look, I wasn’t feeling all that well ok?”
>Applejack doesn't have to be the element of honesty for her poor poker face to give her away, and she knows that too and decides to deflect the conversation.
>”Now if you two’ll excuse me Granny’s feeling better than she has in weeks. I’ll talk with you later.”
“Applejack wait, those vines are hurting ponies.”
>You see the farm mare visibly stiffen before she turns her head back at you.
>”What?”
“It’s some sort of enemy stand. At the marketplace vines just like the ones out there are attacking old and injured ponies. We managed to follow the vines all the way here only…”
>”They’re not hurting the oldest pony here, despite her being half tangled in them.”
>”That don’t mean nothin’! Maybe you got the wrong vines. Maybe that stand doens’t reach this far.”
>A knock at the door interrupts your conversation, and you turn to watch at Applebloom opens it, revealing a haggard looking Bon Bon.
>Despite only standing there for a few moments, the vines have grown all the way up her legs and Anon steps over to her to help rip them off and carry her inside.

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>>29336345
>”Did...that pony just float…”
>”Applebloom, go upstairs!”
>The filly pouts but follows her sister’s advice, grumbling as she goes.
“Believe me now?”
>”Well maybe they’re different vines...”
>”Or maybe Granny Smith’s the stand user.”
>”NO!”
>Applejack’s yell comes as a surprise, but not as big as a surprise as who she was yelling at.
>”You can see me.”
>”’ah… I guess so.”
>”Wait, Applejack has a stand too?”
>The gears in your head turn, leading to one terrible, terrible conclusion.
“Applejack… Are these vines your stand?”
>”I… I don’t know.”
>Applejack turns and looks out the window at Granny Smith, still rocking away in the garden.
>”After you left, Big Mac showed up. He told me that he reckon’d Granny was close to… to passing.”
>”’Ah ran all the way home, and I was terrified when I saw her covered in all those vines but then I… saw her. She looked better than she had in weeks. Vibrant. Alive, like the Granny I knew.”
>Bon Bon gives a startled yelp as the floorboards under her hooves splinter, and vines erupt out of the gaps to embrace her.
“Applejack, these vines are hurting ponies.”
>”It’s just temporary! Soon she’ll be right at rain! Pinkie Swear it!”
“Then why isn’t it effecting me?”
>”What?”
“Bon Bon got me and Anon pretty good in our fight, but the vines attacked her and not me.”
>”W-what does it matter?”
>You turn on your hooves and walk out the front door, planing your hooves firmly in the dirt as you turn back to face Applejack.
“Well it it’s only temporary and it helps your Granny fine. Use me too.”
>”Dash, ya’ll don’t need to-”
“Am I not injured enough for it to work? Fine. Anon, break my wing.”
>”What?”
“I need to be injured for Applejack’s stand to activate. Break. My. Wing.”
>”Dash stop this isn’t-”
“IT IS APPLEJACK! Because you know, deep down it’s hurting ponies! That’s why you’ll hurt everypony in town if you can but you won’t let it hurt those you care about the most. Your family and your friends!”

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>>29336356
>”Dash please-”
“No. Either have your vines attack me or deactivate your stand.”
>”It I stop it’ll kill Granny!”
“If you don’t it’ll kill Celestia knows how many ponies in Ponyville! Do you think Granny’ll want that!”
>Applejack surprises you once again, this time slugging you straight in the jaw.
>”You don’t know what my Granny wants!”
“No but you do, and you know she wouldn’t want you to do this.”
>Applejack gives a shuddering breath and casts her gaze downwards.
>”But… she’s all we have left.”
“You have each other. And you have the elements… us.”
>Applejack just offers a sniffle in reply, but she turns around, dragging her hooves as she walks towards the back door.
>As she walks you see the vines binding Bon Bon recede back into the ground, all but disappearing by the time she passes the cream coloured pony.
>Applejack disappears out the back door and you let her go, taking a seat on the couch to wait for her to return.
>Bon Bon excuses herself and leaves, using the excuse that she can go check on Ponyville.
>You don’t know how much time passes, but eventually Applejack re-enters the house, her features streaked with tears.
>She doesn't say anything, and she doesn't have to. You open your hooves and wrap her in a hug, and she does the same.
>At some point you feel a much bigger and a much smaller pair of hooves join you, and you welcome it.

>Given the size of the Apple Family alone, you’re surprised by how small of a funeral Granny Smith actually has.
>As Applejack puts it, she knew so many ponies that the barn would barely be able to hold half of them.
>It is a good service though. Succinct and to the point, a lot like Granny Smith.
>And at the end they take her all the way to the far east corner of the orchard and plant (of course) an apple tree to mark the spot.

https://youtu.be/lfavaxRNlMM

<=To=Be=Continued==

>>29336383
And pastebin'd; http://pastebin.com/sbazh1PH

Hopefully the thread doesn't die this time.

>jojofags are the ponyfags of /a/
>now they're here

like pottery

When I come back from classes today I'm going to be posting the first part of something new that I wrote for shits and giggles yesterday morning.

Man, it's really sad that the thread died. A lot of the writefags are really busy this month. Also I'm sorry to everyone that's a part of these threads that it's taking so long for me to post stuff. I'm distracted and tired and have to do stuff for college so it's taking a while, but I promise that I am getting stuff done. See you guys tonight.

Most retarded name used for an attack?

I say Space Ripper Stingy Eyes!

Is anyone realistically hype about part 5 anime? I feel like it will make the manga / part as a whole less shit

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>>29336390
Awesome chapter man. I couldn't read it yesterday so thanks for posting it again.
>>29336307
Thanks for covering for me and making the new thread. You are a real Jobro.
>>29336788
Looking forward to it!

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JoJos bizarre logic bump

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>When you prefer the dubbed versions compared to the original anime voice cast.

>turn 21

oh shit where's [BITES ZA DUSTO] when you need it i made a big mistake

>>29339282
>tfw 20
Man 1 more year and I will become a wizard with my V-card protected and also 19 more years and I am realistically expected to be in my house with kids and able to pay multiple bills.

All these responsibilities scare me I just want to work earn money and browse 4chan in my free time I don't want to drown in bills.

>TFW 29
>TFW lost v card @ 21
>TFW I will never get the powers of the cosmos.

And I promised myself I'd be married by the time I'm thirty.

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>>29339282
>>29339680
>>29339830
But at what age do you become a stand user if you didn't lose your v-card?

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>>29336011
Thanks, Cameo.

>>29336390
Glad you reposted. I like the way the characters interacted here, and how the Stand had to be figured out in real time- I remember you did that with ｢BEST OF YOU｣ too, which was one of my favorite fights in this thread. The way information gets parsed made me realize things at the same time RD and Anon did, from thinking a Stand was Holly-ing Granny to knowing the truth.

RD demanding that Anon snap her wing was awesome, but I also wish he'd actually done it, or that there had been some other bizarre grandstand to convince AJ to quit like Bruno vs. Giorno., especially given the drama of the situation. I try to measure bizarreness in stories like this by thinking of how many moments or images would be completely puzzling or silly out of context, and the best ones here were Granny laughing in this vine-wrapped rocking chair and "Break. My. Wing."

For added feels I would include something like Anon staying behind a moment after RD leaves, invisibly watching Apple Bloom cry because "she's probably sleeping" and "she was j-just fine a minute ago". Or, for more JoJo-style feels, I'd have AJ deny the heroes and retreat to tell Granny she'll be back in a moment, only for Granny to tell her she knows (generally) what's going on and advise her granddaughter that she needs to be honest with herself and walk her own path now.

>>29339680
>1 more year and I will become a wizard with my V-card protected
>1 year younger than me
F-funny. Repost-pic related.

>>29339830
If you're still trying, good luck. And pluck.

The roadmap of my life is full of badly-scribbled quotes from The Chase and ends with the note "cryonics?". My only hope is either to outgrow my natalist ambitions or find a wife or wives to shoulder them with me. Neither sounds likely.

>>29340212
30, same as magic.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSH-EAVPHEI
From the 155 stands seen in Jojo so far, which is the WORST?
And on a related note, which is the worst greentext stand?

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>>29340719
>pic related

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wow you motherfuckers are still alive
thank god

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Now for something new.

“FUCK! YOU FUCKING BASTARDS CAN’T STOP ME!”
>That little SHIT, little bastard Hayato
>He did this
>Ruined EVERYTHING
>All he had to do was just play the fool, keep things together until every single one of these complete SHITHEADS was dead
>But no
>He fucked it all up, the rebellious shit
>”[STAR PLATINUM: THE WORLD!]”
>FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKING JOTAROOOOO-
>THOOOM
>OH GOD YOUR HAND IS BUSTED
>THAT FUCKING JOESTAR BASTARD
>TIME-STOPPING SACK OF SHIT
>NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
>WHUMP
>
>
>You…
>You can still move
>You can still push the switch!
>Bites The Dust will still work, and if you use it on yourself, even that little shit kid won’t be able to remember anything!
>You’re almost home free!
“I’ll push it… I’m gonna push it… Bites The Dust will activate again…”
>Your hand hurts so, so much
>But that doesn’t matter
>You need to roll over so you can hit the switch…
>I’m gonna push it… I-I’m gonna push it… I’m gonna push the switch right now…”
>Everything’s going fuzzy
>It’s hard to focus, but right now it’s just you, [Killer Queen], and your right hand
>Gotta push the switch…
>The mangaka’s saying something, but it doesn’t matter to you
>Gotta push the switch…
>Someone behind you is yelling frantically
>Need to push the switch…
>He just keeps going
>Doesn’t matter, just hit the sw-
>SKR-SKLUTCH
>…
>…
>No
>NO
>You can’t be dead, you can’t be dead, it’s not possible
>This girl, saying that you’re dead and gone…
>It’s not possible!
>Blood pours into your eyes as you feel your head begin to split open
>The wounds from the ambulance are reopening!
>NO
>”It looks like you remember, Yoshikage Kira. The exact way you died.”
>NO NO NO NO NO
>”It looks like you remember now!”
“Just what are you!? Who the hell are you!?”
>In response, she simply turns around
>That scar…
>Even after everything you’ve done, everything you’ve become, you can’t forget it
“It’s you… Reimi Sugimoto.”

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>>29341370
>It’s really been fifteen years?
>Seems like only a few weeks have passed since this all started
>Since you became a killer
>She seems to be trying to goad you into looking at her from the front
>But that would be completely foolish if you are where you think you are
“You wouldn’t be showing me that wound on your back to get me to come around to your front, would you? My father told me about a particular location in this town a while ago, a place where the dead arrive before they pass on. He said that spirits should never turn around in that place, for they will be taken from this mortal realm by an insurmountable power. You wouldn’t be trying to get rid of me in that fashion, by chance?”
>She’s stunned
>You were right on the money
>Let’s see how she likes a taste of her own medicine
>Your right hand finds a nice soft spot on her left cheek, and begins twisting her head backwards
>Just a little more…
>A fresh feeling flows through your body, from the top of your head to the tips of your toenails
>The blood on your head dries and flakes away, and the wounds the ambulance inflicted on you close up
>A golden lock falls across your eyes as your physical form begins to shift
>You’re back in your old body again
>This is a brand new start for Yoshikage Kira
>One final loose end to tie up, and you’ll be home free
>”Did you really think we’d wait here for 15 years without a backup plan?”
>’We?’
>AAAAAAUGH
>HER DOG
>HER DAMN FILTHY MUTT
>NO
>NO NO NO NO NO
>Arnold’s teeth slice clean through your arm
>Numbness fills the space where your right hand once was as, unsupported by Reimi’s shoulder, you tumble forward, twisting around through your momentum-
>And face directly backwards

>>29341382
>You have turned around in the Ghost Alley
>Beyond the boundaries of life and death, there is only blackness
>And hands
>Dozens of hands, hundreds of them, all grotesque and limp and pale, surge forth from the abyss around you, each grasping a different part of your body
>NO!
>You won’t go!
“[KILLER QUEEN]! MAKE THEM EXPLODE!”
>Summoning your Stand proves useless, and the disgusting appendages grasp it as well, immobilizing it-
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!”
>-and breaking it into tiny pieces
>The pain is indescribable, but with the last bit of life left in you only one question bubbles to the surface
“Where… where are they going to take me!?”
>Her answer is cold and cruel
>”Who knows? But I’m sure it’s somewhere you won’t be able to rest in piece.”
>Gale-force winds blow from the other end of the alley, and the hands drag you back into the abyss
>Wind
>Fracture
>Pain
>A universe, born and unborn
>Great rainbow gates, spanning space and time
>A voice, ethereal and regal and stunning in its tone and timbre
>”Perhaps you will find the light within you… Perhaps you are indeed worthy…”
>Another universe, surging and undulating in its cosmic dance
>Spiraling galaxies
>Celestial bodies
>The sky aflame with the glory of Creation
>A perfect sphere, stunningly blue and verdant, rushing up from the background to meet you
>And then darkness

>It’s a bit warm
>That’s the first thing you notice
>It’s a bit warm and you’re lying down on your side, upon what feels like a bed of silken grass
>The sun is shining through your eyelids, and you’re relaxing in a field, or maybe upon a hill
>It’d be a nice place for a picnic, and maybe you could take your girlfriends with y-
>Wait
>Josuke
>Okuyasu
>Koichi
>Jotaro
>HAYATO
>No no no no no no NO NO NO!
>You LOST, and now you’re dead and those FUCKING SONS OF BITCHES-
>Hang on
>You’re feeling sensations, but you’re dead
>Shouldn’t the afterlife not feel like anything at all?
>Time to see where you are
>And perhaps WHAT you are

>>29341392
>Very slowly, you open your eyes
>A rather pastel-colored tree stretches gracefully overhead
>Its boughs gently shade you from the sun
>The trunk is sturdy and rough, but very hardy-looking
>The sky is much the same as the tree: graceful, pastel, gentle on the eyes
>In fact, this entire place seems to be like something from a children’s anime
>Brightly lit, brightly colored, heavily saturated, very cutesy
>How curious
>Is your body alright? Everything where it needs to be?
>A perfunctory examination reveals that everything is in the right place
>At least you’re still in one piece, even if your life is in tatters
>…Can the same be said of [Killer Queen]?
>Oh no
>No no no
>You call your Stand out into reality
>And are rewarded with a single black gladiator’s glove
>It’s missing the little metal [Killer Queen] skull on the back
>Oh God, this isn’t possible
>If [Killer Queen] is fractured like this, how are you still alive?
>How are you going to get new girlfriends without making a mess?
>Can you even wear this glove?
>To your surprise, it fits perfectly
>Well, if this is what remains of your Stand, then there’s a chance that it works the same way
>You tentatively touch the tree trunk with your left index finger
>A tiny cat-styled egg timer appears on the bark
>Better back up, since [Killer Queen] protected you from close proximity to your explosions, but it’s not whole anymore so there’s no telling what could happen
“Switch on.”
>Ka-chick
>There’s a very quiet boom and a small gouge in the bark appears where the bomb was planted, about the size of a 100 yen coin
>What’s left of [Killer Queen] isn’t very powerful, but it’s better than nothing at all
>It tears at your gut to see this happen to your Stand, after everything you did and were able to do because of it

>>29341405
>Maybe there’s still a chance to undo everything, and if it works, you’ll be the most grateful man in the universe
>Set the bomb on the tree, prime your thumb, say the words
“[Bites The Dust], switch on!”
>This time, you actually do push the switch
>And nothing happens
>The Primary Bomb is severely weakened, [Bites The Dust] is almost certainly gone, and-
>Wait. If you’re dead, you should be your true self again, right? Which means you should be able to do one more thing
“[Sheer Heart Attack].”
>Nothing comes out of the glove, the tiny tank doesn’t appear, and your mood does not lift
>You’re alone in a strange land, probably several kilometers from civilization, with only your wits and a very low-powered explosion to help you along
>Time to pick a direction and start walking
>Before you can, a massive pink blur darts from the nearby glen and nearly knocks you over as it streaks around the clearing faster than you can follow
>”OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!!”
>It jerks to a stop in front of you, revealing itself to be-
>What
>It… it’s a small horse? Perhaps a pony?
>It has a mane and tail, and doesn’t seem all that different from the horses back home…
>You’ve really accepted it, haven’t you?
>Accepted that you’re dead and in another world, without most of your Stand to help you
>Well, nothing you can do about that now
>The only real difference between this horse and the horses back home is that it is brightly and unnaturally colored like the rest of this world, and it has 3 balloons on its flank
>Also it can apparently talk
“…Hello. Can you understand me?”
>Its face lights up in what you think is joy
>Very human-like expressions on this horse’s face
>”WOW IT’S SOOO COOL TO MEET YOU! MY NAME’S PINKIE PIE WHAT’S YOURS!?”
>She is very, very loud
>And also speaks perfect Japanese for some reason

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>>29341422
>You need to lie to her though. You may have escaped Jotaro, but there’s still a chance that allowing anyone here to know who you really are may be detrimental
“…Josuke. I’m Josuke. Where might I be, and are there more creatures here like me?”
>”Well, you look kind of like a minotaur, but I’ve never seen one so slim and short and bald, so I think you’re something else. Maybe a monkey?”
“Er…The term would be human. That’s what my species calls themselves.”
>”COOL! And to answer your first question, you’re in Equestria, just outside of Ponyville! Me and my friends were going to go to the mountains in a bit to take a look at this weird place that our magical table map showed us this morning so maybe you could tag along since you look like you’re not from around here and possibly not even from this universe and so we could educate you about Equestria as we go and maybe you could tell jokes or show us magic tricks or something?”
>She… she didn’t even breathe once during that explanation
>How…?
>You know what?
>If she and her friends are going to help you acclimate to this world, you might as well go with them on their trip.
>You could pick up some useful historic or general knowledge on the way, and maybe even figure out how to piece [Killer Queen] back together
>And once you’ve learned everything you can and gotten your powers back, you can be rid of them and move on
>Perhaps you’ll even find a few girlfriends to spend your time with
>Once again, a feeling of freshness flows through your body, from the top of your head to the tips of your toenails
>This is truly a brand new start for Yoshikage Kira

>>29341430
I have the distinct feeling that this story will update even less than my first, and that it will stink, but we won't know until we get there, will we? I had the urge to write this last week so I just kind of shit all over a .txt document and this is the result.

Critique me please, it's 3am over here so I'm loopy as fuck and don't know if this is shit or not. ASB is on the way, probably this weekend at the earliest.

Story is pasted here: http://pastebin.com/G5AdpJET

G'night everyone.

>>29340366
Thanks for the feedback mate. I considered having Anon actually go through with breaking RD's wing, but I didn't want to limit myself if I needed it unbroken in future chapters. Not that handwaving recoveries from injuries in Jojo is rare but w/e.

>>29337986
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2CKKV4Z44A

This Spoke Kishibump Rohan

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I love jolyne's lewd reaction and jotaros face of disgust

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Do you even /fit/ my little JoJo?

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>>29343812
Do we?

>>29343812
>Jonathan was anime Zyzz/Scooby
>Jonathan died in our lifetime

>>29341454
I like that the Stand's changed. I was going to include a suggestion for a remix-name, but I couldn't find any popular ones, so my best idea is "Flick of the Wrist". Besides that I'm interested to find out how Equestria will leave him so restless, and I wanted to congratulate you on using the map well as a plot device.

I've noticed this story and your other green which I'm halfway through both have trouble with pacing - important things don't happen gradually. Anon has to touch the arrowhead for there to be a story, so everyone kind of goes along with it. (There is buildup, but until the arrow's revealed it's a story about dinner with the Princesses. Keep in mind how fast Part 3 introduced Star Platinum.) Kira has to meet up with the M6, not have an OCD breakdown and not try to kill them for there to be a story, so he accepts everything that's going on. It feels rushed and sometimes OOC, but at the same time it's a tradeoff between that and actually doing the whole song and dance for everyone, which is often unnecessary and just as unexciting for the writer as it can be for the reader.

Stephen King says that writing the difficult tedious scenes is part of being a writer, but bear in mind he writes Stephen King novels. The best solutions in my book are to make them fun to write (ex. Pinkie does typical Pinkie fare while Kira has an inner monologue acclimating to freaky talking horses) or skip them entirely (start the story after the important event and catch up with how it happened in some brief exposition, in medias res style, or not at all - greentext readers are pretty good at diving into wacky premises without much setup). Neither of those work for me all the time, but a little siren should go off when you feel like things are dragging.

Of course, that'll porbably just make your writing more streamlined and impatient like mine is, so it's really a good idea to build a better tolerance for slog-scenes.

Bumperella bumperella

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To love and win is the best thing.
To love and lose is the next best.

>>29345862
Would gyro still stick to plain mozzarella pizza in today's times? There's so much variety im sure he would at least like pepperoni

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I drew a thing fitting into my Rarity themed part 4 doodles, so if you guys feel like they're good enough to see here you go.

I may take a request or two if you'd like, if you can keep it simple.

hey guys, fucko here

so, changing jobs took a while, and after that was done and i had enough time to fart i have to go to the hospital for a heart problem (mostly stress, bad diet and smoking cigarettes). So, now im going to be staying home for a few days and making sure my ticker gets fixed. what this blogpost boils down to is that ill be writing! maybe!

>>29345862
Hey man! Haven't heard from you in a while. Are you going to continue your story?
>>29346549
Can you draw Anon with [FITC]? Or maybe Erich and Care Root toghether?

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>>29346992
>yfw when fuckface is back.

>>29346992
Hey, the original is back! Nice, can't wait for more adventures with Wigger Anon and [Fire In The Church]!

Also, can you give us a new pastebin link? The links in the OP no longer work.

>>29345273
I gotta say, even your critiques are fantastic. I actually hadn't considered changing [Killer Queen]'s name, but I may keep that in mind for the next update, if Kira decides to rechristen himself. If you don't mind, I'd like to steal your idea for the upcoming Pinkie and Kira scene, because that sounds way better than what I had in mind. I'll do my best to take what you've told me to heart, because it's all very good advice.
Thanks for being one of the coolest guys in this thread Ditherer.

bimp

>>29340719
Cheap Trick.

>>29346549
Very nice Anon beats me by miles I love how innocent and cute your made killer queen look, really gives him the mlp look

>>29346992
Glad to see you're back old friend!

>>29348498
I want to cum inside Trisha

>>29350298
She's 15, anon.

>>29350344
If she's old enough to bleed she's old enough to breed and the JoJo universe doesn't exactly make age difference look back Steven Steel is 51/53 and Lucy Steel is literally 14 and at best looks slutty at most times

>>29350560
>Tfw Yasuho is the only legal sidekick in the series after Lisa Lisa and Hermes

Araki sure likes em young

Let the voice of bump take you higher

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>When you've spent a week trying to understand how king crimson works realistically and still can't figure it out.

King crimson is the discord of JoJo

>>29350560
Except Lucy wanted to marry Steven, and he just rolled with it. He never touches her.

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>>29352534
I wonder what her ass feels like on my face...

[BUMP THE DUST]

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I just realized I forgot to Pastebin my previous chapters

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>>29347851
Y-you're welcome.

Green in a minute. Wanted to get it in for JoJo Friday, and it's a little late for some time zones, but I don't feel like waiting another week.

>>29355878
>Be Care Root.
>Yet another early morning for you.
>You’re walking onto campus way earlier than you should.
>Not having a car only makes the distance more noticeable.
>But it beats taking the bus.
>And you resist the urge to make a new ride out of light and save yourself the trip.
>You checked over your future last night, and more’s missing than you took.
>It terrified you at first, because maybe it dissipates whether you use it or not.
>But you think it’s just that removing some happy moments stops others from happening.
>Can’t enjoy a marriage if you never get to the wedding.
>Already, you have less than you were planning on.
>But at least you can get out of bed in the pre-morning.
>The whole city has a gloom cast over it, and the faculty aren’t even here yet.
>You were called here by Derpy, and she said it was important.
>It takes a lot of glancing around to find her, even though the grounds are modest.
>She’s standing in the front of the school, waving at you.
>Next to her is... Silver.
>It’s been a couple of days since you rescued her, but you haven’t seen her around.
>When you cut across the grass and walk closer, you notice that she’s smiling, thinly.
>Before you can ask what’s up, Derpy hugs you.
>You’re no major connoiseur yet but it’s warm and gentle compared to her general tackles and hand-holds.
>You realize that her hugging you in general, and not because you’ve escaped certain death, is rare.
>She’s been in too many life-threatening situations already.
>For a moment, you see Golden’s face in your mind’s eye.
>You promised her, didn’t you?
>Before you can ruminate, Derpy turns a half-step and pulls you with her.
>You’re cheek to cheek now, and facing the horizon with your backs to the school.
“What’s going on?”

>>29356037
>”Silver wanted to thank you for keeping her Stand from destroying her.”
“Oh. Uh.”
>You turn your head toward Silver.
“You’re welcome.”
>She smiles broadly.
>”Just watch.”
>The sky’s already turned a lavish pink.
>And in the distance, the sun starts rising.
>Are they showing you the beauty of nature...?
>No, something’s moving in the air, in the distance.
>It’s not a clean shape, so the silhouette doesn’t offer you any clues.
>But it gets substantially bigger the closer it comes.
>Derpy smiles, and you can feel her teeth move.
>It takes far too long for you to realize that it’s the wreckage of your car.
>You stare as ｢Spinal Tap｣ hauls it across the sky and to your school.
>What on Earth…?
>Silver waves a hand in your peripheral vision, and the front of the school opens up.
>Derpy and you turn, and watch ｢Spinal Tap｣ dump your totaled ride into the first-floor hallway.
>Then, through the hole, you watch as it rusts and falls in on itself even more.
>“｢Tin Cup Chalice｣!”
>Your car collapses into a pile of rusted simple machines and explodes.
>The shockwave doesn’t leave the hallway.
>Derpy’s still smiling, but you don’t know why.
>And then it hits you.
>The shockwave reverses, pulling itself inward, and starts to knit itself into a more solid form.
>Before your eyes, it assumes its original shape.
>It looks a lot better than when your parents bought it for you, actually.
>Then Derpy snaps something, and ｢Spinal Tap｣ carries it back out of the school.
>You’re dumbstruck.
>Silver sees your expression and smiles.
>”Thank you.”

>>29356055
>Later that schoolday, be Golden Harvest.
>Math class continues to be insufferable.
>The only class you actually like is Language Arts, when you get to do the readings.
>Unfortunately, that’s your first period, and now it’s close to lunchtime.
>The day’s only going to get worse.
>You can feel yourself extending out the window through your Stand.
>｢Fineshrine｣’s on a right angle, jutting off of the side of the building.
>The last bird you caught was a few minutes ago.
>The area’s running low, sadly.
>It’s been your one distraction, for as long as none of the teachers have Stands.
>You wonder why that is.
>Then a little buzzer rings, and everyone resorts their backpacks.
>Lunchtime.
>Even the teacher, you don’t remember his name even though it’s on the door but he looks a lot like Bill Nye, he’s a chaperone.
>You smile apologetically at him and pretend to have trouble with your backpack, and he leaves ahead of you.
>Then you take a deep breath and count to ten.
>...
>No one else comes in.
>Canterlot High has a surprisingly strong sense of security.
>Which is to say, you can’t leave if they don’t want you to.
>If you were a regular student.
>Most Stand users could, if they absolutely had to, but most of them aren’t that smart.
>And the ones that are expect to make some kind of money for lending their help.
>Screw them all.
>You’ve already done a daily check-in with your sisters, and they’re just fine.
>So you open the nearest window and vault out.
>Your feet touch your Stand almost immediately, and you try to avoid crushing the birds.
>They’ll be fine.
>Then you grab one of its branches, and it leans to lower you most of the way.
>The impact on the ground still jars your heels, but you’ll live.
>Now at the side of the school, you sojourn back home.

>>29356037
Damn, forgot the title. For the record, this is Care Root's Bizarre Adventure, Episode 5: The Man Comes Around.

>>29356077
>Be Silver Spoon.
>The other kids have finally stopped avoiding your hallway.
>Mostly because they’ve got to.
>You’ve seen them opening their lockers and looking relieved that nothing exploded.
>At lunch, more of them are willing to walk through than go upstairs and take the long way.
>Derpy tells you people forget embarrassing things really fast, but you don’t really believe her.
>Diamond would’ve embarrassed them back.
>But if Diamond were here, people wouldn’t be avoiding you in the first place.
>She was like the ocean, she made sure all the fish knew where to swim.
>You wanted to go visit her, but you’re not allowed.
>You wonder what will happen to you if she doesn’t wake up.
>Or she wakes up ten years from now!
>You wish she was awake so you could tell her how scared you are!
>But since you’ve got nothing to lose now, you might as well eat lunch with your sister in public.
>What worse could happen?
>”-seen her in the last few days?”
>”Not since she helped out. She was carrying something red, and she looked like she’d been sneaking…”
>”Oh, hey sis!”
>Derpy turns away from Care to wave you over.
>Her smile is contagious.
>He looks lost in thought.
>You take a seat.
“What’s the matter?”

>>29356138
>You are Filthy Rich.
>You could have hired someone to do this, but you didn’t.
>Especially now, you could hire anybody.
>But some things are more important.
>Your favorite novel is The Count of Monte Cristo, but you aren’t a man for fantasies.
>This is for your daughter.
>Which is why the backdoor collapses under your touch, clattering into a small pile of gold coins.
>You step inside of the home of your daughter’s friend’s family.
>It’s noon, long before the buses come back from Canterlot High.
>Still, you proceed quietly.
>You’re wearing streetclothes, which you had to purchase from a thriftstore and will burn as soon as this errand’s over.
>As you stand in the doorway, you listen for sounds of footsteps or running water.
>None of the lights are on, but even in the daylight the place is immaculately designed.
>Not that it matters now.
>...
>There’s a saying that goes “There are some things money can’t buy.”
>It’s true, but not in the way people usually mean it.
>People often like to deride currency, saying “The paper’s not worth anything!” or “It’s all arbitrary!”
>They tell themselves they’re smarter than the corporate fatcats, because they don’t chase after slips of paper with big numbers on them.
>What they miss is that money is the ultimate equalizer.
>It’s the middleman that gives everyone a perfect standard.
>Money will tell you exactly how many candybars a paperback is worth.
>Or how many cups of coffee you’d have to sell to buy a private jet.
>It’s a symbol of nearly ultimate freedom, to have anything you can imagine.
>Nearly.
>Because there are some things money can’t buy, only make promises about.
>Happiness, safety, love, the future.
>When those things are threatened, there’s no point appealing to money.
>You don’t know how, but you have to remove the Stands of everyone in this family.
>Then the only diamond that matters to you will be awake again.

>>29356200
>Be Golden Harvest.
>You’re making excellent time, especially on foot.
>Canterlot is a pretty decently-sized city, but it’s not a full-on grungy metropolis.
>It’s like a compromise between crime-free suburbia and mutli-level shopping malls.
>You’re glad your mom left you with a housekey.
>And also that she doesn’t really care when you come home, as long as you mumble something about being excused.
>There won’t be much to do at home, but you can at least do some reading.
>When you reach your house, only your dad’s car’s in the driveway.
>He uses a post office vehicle.
>You wonder why your mom isn’t there.
>Oh, right, she said she’d be going to the store.
>Whatever.
>You unlock the door and let yourself in.
>Which is when you see a shadow dart out of the end of the hallway.
>Your breath catches in your throat.
>Are you seeing things, or is there someone in your house?
>Has something happened to your parents?!
>Throwing off your backpack, you tear down the hallway.
>As soon as you turn into the dining room, someone’s there.
>A man in black.
>He’s familiar, although his clothes are dark and ratty, and he’s pointing a gun at you.
>You recognize him from all the sleepovers you had to drive Silver to.
>That same face was always waiting out on the porch when you turned into his community.
“Diamond’s dad?”

>>29356248
>His eyes are steady and level with yours.
>”If you want to live, tell me how I can remove your powers.”
>You barely register his words.
“Where’s my mom? What did you do to her?”
>His expression doesn’t change.
>”She left to go to the store, without seeing me. She doesn’t need to see me, if you’ll tell me how to destroy a Stand.”
>What?
“Who cares? What does-”
>His voice becomes a bellow.
>”I CARE! My daughter’s life depends on it! Tell me how!”
>The ferocity radiating from him makes you step back.
>It’s a protectiveness you feel too.
“Y-you can’t destroy a Stand! It’s a part of someone! It would be like taking someone’s heart away!”
>His expression sours a little.
>”I was… afraid you’d say that.”
>Then he fires.

>>29356325
>Be Derpy.
>”What’s the matter?”
>Silver takes a seat and puts down her tray.
>Care answers her.
>”We don’t know where Trixie is.”
>”Is that a bad thing?”
>”She was very interested in pulling me into her little group. Then she seriously helped me out and I haven’t seen her since. No one has.”
>”You’re worried about her?”
>”A little. I don’t know if she’s just being secretive on purpose or if she’s really in trouble.”
>You worry that he’s getting paranoid, but you don’t tell him that.
>People have left vague, threatening notes in his locker, apparently.
>He’s stopped getting perfect grades, although he doesn’t seem to mind.
>You’re worried you might be paranoid, too.
>You knew a lot of people in this school, and did a lot of vigilante stuff on your own, but it’s all dried up lately.
>Not much random bullying.
>Maybe everyone’s just happy with their Stands.
>Silver hmms for a moment.
>”I bet the Crusaders would know.”
>Care leans forward and thinks about it.
>”The Crusaders…”
>”Freshman girls. They’re connected to everybody, kind of like the Rainbooms.”
>You nod.
“And just as hard to learn about, sometimes. I met Applejack’s little sister a few times while I was reclaiming things, and she’s got a lot of attitude.”
>Care considers that.
>”Do they have any Stands?”
>Silver shrugs.
>”Diamo-... uh, we used to make fun of them a lot, so we never really asked them anything.”
“I haven’t seen them using any. But I haven’t seen the Rainbooms using them either.”
>He nods and sits back.
>”I think I saw one of them use their Stand, actually. When I was with Rainbow Dash and Applejack in the hallway, my Stand’s power stopped working too soon. Maybe one of them shattered it somehow...”
>Your phone vibrates.
>Golden’s calling you.

>>29356357
>You’re Filthy Rich again, rushing outside the house.
>The last two minutes have been very unpleasant.
>Your shot was perfect, but it didn’t hit.
>The girl’s Stand appeared in an instant, some kind of macabre tree, and took the shot.
>You were startled enough by it that she had time to run back the way she came.
>Then, just as quick, it disappeared.
>When you reached the hallway for another shot, she was already dialing a number on her phone.
>She was too far away, and it might have been an emergency number.
>So you activated your Stand.
“｢Johnny Cash｣!”
>The hardwood flooring was pretty expensive, but it turned into a couple bills just the same.
>She fell into the basement below, and you took another shot.
>This time for the phone.
>The tree blocked again, and you heard her cry out.
>Pushing the sound out of your mind, you fired again.
>But before you unloaded the rest of the clip, a couple of the animals on the tree came unattached.
>They were birds, maybe pigeons, but grotesque and bloated.
>Their wings were massive to compensate, and one flew right for you.
>You emptied another three shots into it before it stopped spiraling and squawking.
>By which time the other one had already latched onto her shoulders and lifted her up toward the front door.
>You took aim again, with her back to you.
>She was wounded already.
>Another squeeze of the trigger, and…

>>29356405
>Nothing.
>Your clip was cheap, and now it's empty.
>She threw open the door and paused to look at you while her bird flew your way.
>You tossed the gun and created another one from a hundred-dollar-bill in your pocket, pulling it into the world like a magic trick.
>Her eyes widened, and she ran.
>The bird was short work, but she and her Stand are gone.
>Things are getting complicated.
>You turn a wall into coins and jump through, only to see her climbing into the car in the driveway.
>She’s shouting into her phone.
>”-to the hospital! I’ll distract him until-”
>She sees you and shuts the door.
>She couldn’t have had time to grab the keys, wherever they are.
>You walk up in time to hear it start and puff out some exhaust.
>The keys must’ve been inside!
>She peels out, heading into the neighborhood.
>You rip a small stack of large bills out of your pocket and let ｢Johnny Cash｣ do the rest.
>A monster truck materializes in the driveway, sheer shiny black.
>You climb in without wasting any time.
>You’re not letting them get to her.

>>29356441
>Be Care Root.
>Driving yourself, your girlfriend and her little sister toward the hospital.
>As soon as Derpy got the call, you all headed out.
>The doors are usually locked during the school day for your protection, and the few that open are one-way, but no one monitors the halls.
>Silver took you out through her Stand in no time flat.
>You just hope that you don’t total your car again.
>Silver’s tapping away at a phone, giving directions from the back.
>”Next left!”
>You hit it.
>Most people are out to lunch, but the lights are favorable this time of day.
>You’re not clear what you’re going to do at the hospital.
>Derpy’s nursing her phone and frowning.
>...This probably all ties back to you somehow, doesn’t it?
>”Right, then straight!”
>You were worried about that before, but worry implies doubt.
>You brought the hand of destiny down on yourself somehow.
>Probably by eating up too much of your own future too soon.
>...
>Is it just going to get worse from here?
>”You should be able to see it in a few blocks…”
>You decide you have enough worries in the here and now.
>What’s Golden planning to do?

>>29356464
>Be Golden Harvest.
>Phone’s in the passenger seat, on speaker.
>You’re not talking.
>Mr. Rich is bearing down on you.
>He doesn’t care if people see or not, but your dad’s going to kill you if you crash this thing.
>You summon ｢Fineshrine｣ on your trunk as you turn off into the back-alleys.
>You really aren’t good enough at driving for this.
>What do you have?
>A couple squirrels, three more birds...
>You wish your deer-catching project would pay off already.
>They’re all communing with each other slightly, trading traits.
>If you left them on there for a few months, they might meld into one organism.
>That would be too messy, though.
>You need to get to the hospital before he does, and then you can negotiate.
>Once you can threaten her, you can get him to stand down.
>Afterward...
>You’ll think of something.
>Or Derpy will, she’s coming.
>Even if you don’t make it, they probably will.
>You switch into the oncoming lane to get around a line of cars and-
>Fuck, fuck, there’s someone coming!
>You dismiss ｢Fineshrine｣ and call it back underneath your car, propelling the whole thing upwards.
>You feel like you’re holding up the car and you’re about to crash all at once, and then you let go.
>They pass straight beneath you, and your car hits the ground shuddering.
>You wrestle with the wheel and get back into your lane.
>Everyone’s hung back for you now.
>You expect to hear Filthy’s new truck crush the car, but you don’t.
>Your heart skips, and then you glance in the mirror.
>He’s gone.
>The hospital’s straight ahead, and…
>So is he, further along.
>He took a different path.
>He’s going to beat you to it.

>>29356499
>Be Derpy.
>Mr. Rich has snapped, and he’s coming after your family to save his daughter.
>You’ve got one way to summon your Stand right now.
>Normally you’d have at least two, but you used one up helping Care with his car.
>You’re pulling into the hospital now, and so are a couple others.
>Golden’s been quiet, but there was a lot of bumping on her end.
>You didn’t hear a crash, though.
>From the far entrance you see a monster truck entering.
>That’s definitely him.
>Care sees at the same time you do, and he tenses.
>You put a hand on his shoulder, and he softens again.
“He won’t recognize you. Just don’t look suspicious...”
>The monster truck slows as it entered the parking lot, and then disappears in an instant.
>Mr. Rich drops out and hit the ground normally.
>He looks so different.
>Part of you wonders if he’s been drinking.
>Then your dad’s car pulls in, and he’s turning to face it.
>Something giant, green and boxy appears in his hands.
>He staggers with its weight for a second, almost kneeling.
>Then he levels it right at the driver’s side of the car.
>It’s a rocket launcher!
“Care!”
>He’s ahead of you.
>｢Timbuk Three｣ is already out, and it points at Mr. Rich.
>A beam of light slices through the underside, and the box part clatters onto the pavement.
>He’s left holding the trigger, looking confused, then angry.
>He turns to look at the source, straight at you, and then Golden speeds up.
>She’s going too fast to stop.
>She can’t really be trying to--
>Mr. Rich throws out a hand and slaps the hood of the car.
>It disintegrates on the spot into a cloud of glinting silver.
>Golden tumbles in the air, her momentum rocketing her past him.
>Care turns to her and concentrates, but a shot whizzes into the windshield and it breaks his concentration.
>Your big sister hits the parking lot on her side, rolling.

>>29356525
>Be Care.
>You don’t feel as freaked out about being shot at as you would’ve expected.
>It helps that you can throw up a field around the car.
>You don’t know what you’re doing now, though.
>Even if you made it inside, you’d have to get past the front desk, up several flights of stairs, find the right room...
>Derpy talks.
>”Silver, do you know which floor Diamond was on?”
>”Uh…”
>Another shot glances off of your shield.
>Where is he getting these things?
>Is it his Stand?
>”The same floor I was on! Fifth!”
>Derpy’s hand’s on your shoulder again, damn it you wish you could enjoy that right now.
>”Get to Golden. I’ll take care of the rest.”
>As your wheels swivel and you head between Rich and Golden, she turns to the back.
>”Silver, open the other backdoor!”
>You move fast enough to unlock the car doors, and she throws it open.
>Another shot bounces off, and Derpy snaps a twig.
>｢Spinal Tap｣ flies out of the door.
>You have to let down the shield for it, but it scoops up Golden and throws her in.
>You’re moving too slow, Mr. Rich is rushing for you so he can touch the car.
>You throw up another shield and he slaps his hand on it, turning it into a wafting mess of paper money.
>Then he levels the gun at Derpy.
>You’ll have to fire another laser at his head to stop him, or blow up the gun, or...
>The car rises off the ground.
>...You’re still surprised how strong her Stand is.

>>29356543
>Be Silver Spoon.
>You try to ignore your fear of heights as the car lurches and rises up.
>Your sister’s beaten up pretty bad.
>She’s got road rash up one arm and on one of her cheeks.
>She’s still kicking, though, just loudly catching her breath.
>The car’s at the fifth floor now, and it’s moving in a circle around the building.
>They’re looking for her room.
>You remember it was right next to yours...
>There were a lot of tall buildings outside the window...
>Yeah, that’s right!
“It’s around this next corner!”
>Derpy nods.
>Below, you hear a faint, choppy rumbling.
>｢Spinal Tap｣ zooms you around the corner.
“I think it’s the middle one!”
>Care grimaces and holds out a hand.
>A giant circle of wall shines brightly for a moment and then disappears.
>You can make out rows of flowers and a single chair next to the bed.
>And in it, something pink.
>You’re here!
>The others seem to know too.
>Golden sits up straight.
>”There’s no way a car’s going to sit on that floor. We have to leave the car.”
>Derpy nods, and her Stand brings you all up to the hole.
>Care and Golden climb out, and you get over and join them.
>Your head spins at the feeling of not being lifted up any more.
>Then you look for Derpy.
>She’s trying to get past the divider, and it’s not working.
>The ceiling’s too low.
>And behind her, rising into the air, is a helicopter.
>With Mr. Rich at the controls.
>You can see how deranged and freaky he looks from here.
>She sees him, and immediately brings the car out of the way.
>She’s running out of time, and you don’t see her Stand raise her back up again.
>It’s only when the car’s gone that you see the gun.
>This one’s long, powerful, and aimed at all three of you.

>>29356573
>Golden unleashes everything on her tree, all of it black and covered in scales.
>Care throws up a shield and holds it.
>Mr. Rich only flies closer.
>Then, like the cars, the helicopter stops existing, and he’s just floating in the air toward you.
>Everything feels like it’s in slow-motion.
>He hits the force field and it shuts off.
>Care throws up another, and it breaks.
>Another.
>Another.
>They don’t even block him, they just turn into money.
>The birds swoop, but when they hit him they vanish.
>So do the squirrels.
>As soon as he steps through those, he grabs Care by the shirt and spins, throwing him through the hole in the wall.
>And then he’s in the room with you.
>And then you’re staring down the long barrel of a weapon.
>You try not to cry or flinch.
>You can see he doesn’t want to do this.
>Maybe even he doesn’t know it, but he doesn’t want to hurt anyone.
>That’s what Derpy would say…
>”Hey, bastard!”
>You both move your eyes.
>Golden is standing over the bed, holding onto Diamond.
>Her Stand’s sticking out of the wall, one of its branches touching your comatose friend.
>”One false move and she’s part of my Stand.”
>He stares at her.
>The indecision’s left his eyes.
>”Don’t think I won’t! And I can just switch off her brain, too! If she’s gone, you don’t have a reason to do anything to us!”
>The staring contest continues, and the gun doesn’t move.
>You realize, with teror, that your big sister isn’t bluffing.
>She’s really going to use her Stand on Diamond.
>This is a situation that nobody wants, but you don’t have any powers to stop it.
>You’re just Silver Spoon.
>...Wait...
>That’s it!
>It’s stupid, but it might be her only chance!

>>29356621
>With newfound energy, you leap across the room.
>Both of them start shouting, and you can’t make out the words, so you don’t listen.
>Mr. Rich swivels the gun, and Golden pulls Diamond onto the tree.
>On impulse, he shoots at her.
>More of the tree comes out of the wall, and it splinters as she cries out.
>You bound onto the bed, in front of Diamond, and he doesn’t shoot you.
>Golden shouts at you through her pain.
>”Get under the bed, Silver!”
>You ignore her and leap the rest of the way.
>And then the tree grabs you too.

>>29356637
>Be Diamond Tiara.
>Alone.
>There’s no real beginning or end, you just find yourself in the entryway from time to time.
>Outside, there are only copies of you
>All of them are broken or disgusting.
>They bang on the doors and windows incessantly.
>Reminding you of themselves.
>You don’t remember why this happened, except that it hurt.
>You don’t remember ever stepping outside.
>They would take you.
>”But you have to step outside, Diamond!”
>Wh-
>You look around your entryway.
>Who said that?
>”It’s the... only way!”
>The voice comes from all around you, changing in focus halfway through.
>Great, now you’re going crazy too.
>Serves you right.
>You’ve always wanted to be someone else, and so have the people you’ve hurt.
>You grew up in luxury and style, you had all of the power you could want, but...
>No one wants to be Diamond Tiara.
>”That’s not true! I’ve always...”
>It trails off.
>Always what?
>”Always wanted to be you! You’re the strongest person I know!”
>The door starts cracking.
>They’re coming again.
>“Even when people don’t like you, you still make them do what you want, because you don’t care!”
>The walls shake a little, too.
>They don’t do that.
>Or, at least, they never have before.
>“I wish every day that I was more like you, Diamond! You’re unbreakable!”
>The walls crack, and the hands and faces of other yous get in.
>The people you don’t wish you could be.
>Longer teeth, greasier hair, skin conditions, eyepatches, giant sores and burn scars.
>Reaching.
>”You have to let them in, Diamond! And I know you can!”
>You find yourself partly agreeing with the voice.
>It’s like some kind of wound has healed over.
>...What are you doing here, anyway?
>”Dreaming! Now wake up!”
>You step up to your buckling front door.
>Then you… throw it open!
>Bad copies swarm you.
>They sink into you, bubbling under your skin.
>An army of them fall into you.
>Something hums to life.

>>29356648
>Be Diamond Tiara.
>You wake up falling.
>Face-first, you hit a hospital bed.
>What you see on the way down is enough to frighten you.
>But when you look up, you see that you were just imagining the gun.
>And by the time you resurface, you realize you’re in a hospital gown.
>...This is a hospital!
>Your dad hugs you like he hasn’t seen you in years.
>You have too many questions.
“Wh… what happened?”
>Next to you, Silver bites her lip and then breaks into a small grin.

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>>29356654
>Be Derpy.
>By the time you and Care get up the stairs, it’s already resolved.
>Which is, you have to admit, a nice change.
>Mr. Rich replaced the car without much trouble, and repaired the damage to the hospital.
>The news stayed exactly where it was.
>Still, Care’s troubled.
>It took a lot of ramps and platforms to break his fall.
>And he’s replaying being thrown in his head right now, probably.
>Besides that, there’s only one thing that keeps this from being a truly happy ending:
>It’s around fifth period now.
>You all have to get back to Canterlot High!

｢TO BE CONTINUED｣

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APGJM37aRy0

Stand: ｢Johnny Cash｣
User: Filthy Rich
Ability: Converts items touched by the user into a currency of their choosing, equal to the market price of the item; this effect wears off outside range. When used on items the user owns, the currency is pooled, and the user can convert some or all of it into any object of equal or lower market price.

Stand: ???
User: Diamond Tiara
Ability: ???

Glad to see this chapter finished. More when I wake up.

>>29355242
Okay, problem solved, everything's been updated

>>29356037
YAY! MORE CRBA!
I'll have to read this up, but for now, I need some sleep.

>>29244566

>Button starts toward you.
>His body is now giving off the dark energies that the parasite is imbuing him with.
>You don't need any special power in order to see it.
>He seems really angry, now.
>”Just because I don't have my attention on you, that doesn't give you the right to ambush me!”
>Despite his current state, you can't help but develop a teasing smile.
“Oh? I thought Ronin weren't afraid of such cowardly tactics.”
>This only appears to feed his anger.
>Wordlessly, he leans towards you, and dashes, his power allowing him to jump far, parallel to the ground.
>With an underhand, you toss one of your balls, trying to kick up a whirlwind to blow him away again.
>He's unable to alter his course if he's already traveling through the air. It's amazing he hasn't realized that by now. It won't matter if he sees your ball coming.
>Wait, did he just slam his foot down?
>Oh, no!
>He was jumping, but he was so close to the ground!
>You didn't notice that he was capable of putting his foot down!
>Now he's capable of dodging the whirlwind!
>As he brings his sword around to slash at you, you go to block it with your other ball!
>You're only just capable of intercepting it, but your wrist hurts!
>Maybe your wrist took more damage than you thought when he stood on you!
>While you can block the blade's cut,you're not capable of sustaining the strength to keep you rooted!
>You go flying back, skidding to a halt on the ground!

>>29357061

>Your body hurts.
>You cough.
>Looking down, you see there's tears in your baseball uniform.
>There's minor cuts on your arms and legs from skidding on the ground.
>And worst of all…
>Worst of all…
>...
>There's dirt in your hair!
>The mud you got in it will cause tangles!
>It'll take forever to get your hair looking prim and proper again!
>You're going to have a rat’s nest on your head if you don't go home and wash up tonight!
>You almost feel like lamenting for it.
>But then you remember that the one who put you in this situation still has functional legs.
>Forming a scowl on your face, you turn to Button Mash.
>He approaches as you try to stand.
>But you spent so much strength on blocking his attack, it's taking you time to recover.
>He's charging at you, his sword raised overhead.
>He's gonna try and bring it down on you.
>He probably expects you to throw your ball again, since he keeps glancing at your hand.
>Instead, you lunge at him at the last minute, trying to tackle him to the ground.
>You're just about to collide when you feel a knee enter your gut.
>It knocks the wind out of you, and you feel what must be the sword's pommel strike you.
>You unceremoniously fall to the ground.
>Button gets ready to gloat again, but stops.
>Instead of wasting words, he decides to get ready to finish you off.
>You grit your teeth. You're scared, but you're too proud to show it.

>>29357065

>Oh dear, oh dear!
>Button is about to kill Gioia!
>You have to do something!
>...Maybe you can tackle him?
>You vaguely remember playing soccer.
>Maybe it's an innate skill you didn't know you had.
>You start rushing at him, and-
>Oops!
>Who put that root there?
>You tripped, and now you're directly in front of Button Mash!
>Oh dear, oh dear!

>Darn it all!
>Did Poindexter really just step in front of you?!
>You have to save him!
>Your body seems to move on it's own, as you throw your ball at Poindexter, imbuing it with the Spin!
>It hits him in the shoulder a split second before Button’s blade cuts him!
>Suddenly, the sword bounces off of Poindexter, as if it ran into a plate of armor!
>Your ball spins on Poindexter's back, moving towards his chest, and shooting at Button!
>Your ball slams into Button's chin, sending him up in the air!
>With the time that got you, you get to your feet.
>You see out of the corner of your eye that Jojo just finished helping Angel.
>She stands over Dinky, who lies unconscious on the ground.
>It's distasteful, since you hate having to rely on others, but you call out to her.
“Jojo! I need your help!”
>She looks over, and rushes toward you.
>”Hamon…”
>Jojo slides over towards Button, kicking him with her foot.
>”...Overdrive!”
>There's a bright flash as a wave of energy goes over Button’s body.
>You breathe a sigh of relief, as you stumble over to your ball.
>You begin to fall, but Jojo catches you.
>The energy she was channeling finds its way into your body.
>You somehow feel... Revived.
>Not only that, but your body doesn't hurt anymore.

>>29357067
>You stand up straight, nodding to your friend.
"Thank you very much, Jojo."
>With a grin, she gives a thumbs up before checking on Angel.
>Going over the events in your head, you remember that Poindexter did something very…
>Stupid.
>Brave, but stupid.
>You can't help but admire him for it.
>Speaking of which, where is he?
>You take a look at prince Poindexter, and see him sitting on the ground.
>He looks shocked.
>Well, duh! Of course he's shocked.
>He probably thought he was gonna die!
>...He was really brave to throw himself in front of you, though.

>Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear.
>You are Poindexter.
>And you are trying hard not to wet yourself.
>Why did your clumsy feet make you trip?!

>You are Gioia again.
>And you're considering giving Poindexter a hug.
>But you're a little peeved off at him.
>Why did he try to interfere, knowing he doesn't have any powers?
>...Forget it, he needs a hug.
>You go up to him, and crouch down next to him.
>He doesn't notice your presence until you throw your arms around him.
>He seemed nervous at first, but as you hold him, he seems to settle.
“That was really brave of you, Poindexter.”
>You pull back, and smile at him.
>He looks at you, and smiles back.
>But then you form a scowl.
>You need to make what you say absolutely clear, so you stick your finger in his face.
“Don't do it again!”
>Message delivered.
>You stand, and walk back to your friends.

That's it for this update. I'd love to hear from you guys, and hear what you think.

>>29356670
Great update! Filthy's stand is amazing. And another car chase! You really dote on us too much man.
>>29357080
I said it before and I'll say it again, Gioia and Poindexter are hilariously adorable.

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>>29357080
I'm a little behind, but I like how smoothly your fights flow and how well the characters banter. I can see clear relationships and traits between them even without knowing everything I should.

>>29357541
Aw, that was just JoJo Friday. Don't forget Pone Saturday. 10:30 Eastern, 9:30 Central Standard Time, only on The Hub. Check local listings.

Coco's Bizarre Adventure, Episode 5: Evacuate the Dancefloor

Princess Twilight Sparkle was laying in her favorite bed on the night Sombra attacked.

The castle came with a decadent assortment of bedchambers, and her alicorn physiology had only worsened her natural jitteriness, so that she routinely wandered the halls at night taking bleary turns with them. For Spike, this was a hidden blessing; he quickly learned he only needed to remake certain beds at strategic times, and even when her weekly circuit veered and she drifted into some forgotten unblanketed wreck, she wasn’t usually aware.

By now, he’d remade all of them, dusted, finished some of her leftover booksorting, cleaned the bathrooms, washed the stained glass windows and tried, twice, to activate the Map. At no point did he move her from her stockstill, curled position, or even approach within a few hooves to examine her closely, for fear that the half-imagined motions of her breathing might collapse like cobwebs under a puff of foreign air.

It was the least of the beds, a meager zero-poster without any tricky corners to tuck into the mattress. Just a headboard and an end, wooden and curve-flourishing, afforded begrudgingly to prevent it from being a mattress on the floor. In another age, maybe one to come, it would’ve suited a staff cook. And in the dim light, from outside the door, Spike could almost see the wooden walls that weren’t there, and the balcony that looked out onto the town, and the spiral stairs he’d pattered down every morning in the name of breakfast...

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>>29358445
Besides her room, he avoided the libraries more and more now. Filled with ponies, concerns and lives, they faded into the background, but standing in their doorways alone, he felt completely separated from the earth below the stone and the stars above the ceiling. He felt like he might step in just slightly too far, and exit to find himself in the Human World again, the world where everything was so disturbingly close to truth but mangled, where nothing had the right amount of limbs and the world was defined by pushing and grabbing and taking.

He never came within eyesight of them once the sun went down.

He couldn’t risk leaving the castle halls, or giving some opening for normal messages, but he’d instructed a few townsponies on a simple message-spell. If they needed something urgent, he would belch up their request. The outside world had contacted him earlier that evening, and this was how he learned that his town was on fire.

So, as the first wave of the battered and bewildered neared the doors, he waved his claws around the inner mechanisms and loosened their protections. There was little food in the castle, and few comforts, but they couldn’t want for space or protection.

When the doors swung and let in the night air, Spike could see the smoke clouding in the distance, and ushered the Standless foals and their parents inside.

Instinctively, from years of experience, he knew that it was going to be a long night.

***

“Why are you setting fire to everything?! Are you working for Sombra?!”

The voice was shrill, the kind that wasn’t supposed to be loud. Berryshine’s ears were muffled, but it rang clearly even through the hood. She was aware that her hooves were tied only because they wouldn’t budge from each other.

She was beginning to consider Stands more trouble than they were worth.

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>>29358455
Her assailant did something. The fabric around her mouth disappeared, and night air blew over her face. It was a moment of peace, and enough to concoct a plan. When it passed, she immediately started crying and struggling.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about! I was just caught in the middle of these fires! Why are you trying to abduct me!?”

Her enemy spoke back, “I know you’re the one responsible for all of this. Don’t pretend that you’re innocent! Now tell me why you’ve been sent here!”

“I really don’t know what you’re saying! I’ve lived in Ponyville my whole life! My house is burning! Please just let me go!”

“Stop playing games!” The voice moved closer, and become sterner. Berryshine smirked.

“Fine. ｢Simply Red｣!”

Her Stand appeared, and lashed out at the source of the noise. A punch landed, and then the enemy jumped back. The fabric held, but with a little effort her Stand tore it apart like packing tape.

She stood and tore off her blindfold. On the other side of the road, or path, or whatever it was, there stood a cream-colored pony, plain and without the trimmings just like her, no magic and no wings to fly away with.

“I didn’t want to be violent about this!” Berryshine yelled. The fires were burning healthily all around, slowly converging into a single inferno, and she knew the town was over except for the crying.

“What’s Sombra offering you?”

“Nothing but the chance to sculpt a new paradise with my own hands!”

The enemy looked confused at that.

Berryshine charged.

***

Scootaloo was unmired from a dreamless sleep by a hoof ruffling her mane. Woken up any other way, she would’ve summoned ｢Go Zone｣ and struck the attacker, subconsciously terrified that it might be the foalnapper who wanted Cheerilee. But the motion was so familiar, so much like what Dash had done in those few fleeting moments of big-sisterly affection, it soothed those instincts.

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>>29358476
Finally, Sweetie got tired of trying to noogie her friend awake and started pressing agianst her skull like a jambed door. Scootaloo groaned with foreign pain, rolled over and opened her eyes.

Sweetie was a silhouette against the stars and the now-encroaching firelight. Her face was unreadable in the dark, but Scootaloo knew it was a compromise between sympathy and seriousness. It was the only expression she’d been able to make, lately. Scootaloo’s head started pounding, and she turned weakly to cover most of the light with her friend’s face, wondering idly if she’d slept all the way until the next night in a tiny coma.

“You too, huh?” Sweetie asked.

Scootaloo tried to answer, but her mouth was too dry. After a moment of coughing, which made her brain rattle even more, she replied, “How’d the fight with Diamond go?”

“Good. I’ll tell you about it later, but Diamond’s with us for right now. Everypony’s evacuating to Twilight’s castle.”

Even behind the grimace of the hangover, Scootaloo felt like she’d slept through a final exam. The castle had been their first and last failsafe, and she hadn’t done enough to keep them out of it.

Sweetie was scanning the area now, trying to keep the pegasus in her shadow. “Where’s the mare who brought you inside?”

“Coco...” Scootaloo’s eyes opened and she shot up to her hooves. “She went to fight the pony who’s burning everything!” Her eyes darted around for her scooter and found it, bent from the crash and discarded on the grass.

Before she could dive for it, Sweetie put a hoof on her shoulder.

“If she’s not at the castle yet, somepony will find her, so there’s no point worrying. For now, we need to make sure that the Elements get inside safely, and I need you for that.” Her voice was soft and reasonable, and Scootaloo hung her head.

“Yeah, you’re right. Are the others already there?”

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>>29358493
“Twilight is, and we took Applejack with us. I just left the team securing Pinkie, and Diamond and Button are going to get Fluttershy right now. We’ll make a second trip to look for stragglers after we’ve moved Rarity.”

Scootaloo nodded.

There was nopony left inside the Carousel Boutique besides Rarity, now, still where they’d left her. When Sweetie turned the lights on, she gasped and ran over. Over the Element of Generosity, there was a blanket now, stitched together seamlessly and tiled with images of Rarity’s cutie mark.

Scootaloo looked at it through the headache of the lights, and her face became a mask of worry.

“Coco...”

***

Berryshine tripped before she could lunge into range, pulled back by the same tattered fabric she’d just ripped apart with her Stand. The strips clung to her back leg, glowing with wavy cyan fairylight.

When she stood, ｢Simply Red｣ tore up the pieces again. Then, once they were on the ground, it grabbed a random, burning piece of wood and torched them. They didn’t even burn, so much as evaporate.

When that was over, she turned back to the enemy.

“If you step over here, I’ll forget that any of this happened and probably so will you. You’ll wake up tomorrow with the rest of the ponies, and live a new life with them. And if you don’t step over, I’m not responsible for what happens to you.”

The mare’s eyes hardened. Was that alcohol, or determination...?

“Nopony’s responsible for what happens to me.”

A shadow appeared over Berryshine, and she looked up to see a dull blanket blocking out the sky. ｢Simply Red｣ struck it with its makeshift torch, and it disintegrated before it reached the ground.

The enemy continued, “It looks like my Stand has a longer range than yours. I don’t need to get close to stop you.”

Berryshine snarled back at her, “Neither do I!”

Then, her Stand flung the burning wood directly at her opponent.

***

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>>29358500
Even with the town in trouble, and on an important mission, and with a bunch of ponies to worry about, there was still something exhilarating about moving quickly. It was like trying to be poignant while riding a rollercoaster, the wind resistance on Scootaloo’s cheeks kept her too occupied. It even sobered her up a little.

Sweetie was holding on and standing over Rarity on the couch, keeping a watchful eye in dark corners and holding her big sister in place. There was no need, but it made her feel better. Scootaloo was perched on top, looking straight ahead to the castle, and keeping the ground below the couch frictionless in the right directions. It was like sledding, but with brakes, and a ghost gave her the push.

When they reached the castle, the front was open, but nopony was waiting to get inside. Scootaloo increased speed straight up to that gaping door, and she realized she’d never been inside without the sun shining. Right now, it was just… eerie.

｢Go Zone｣ pushed the couch the rest of the way inside, and the two followed in after it, scanning the horizon for an ambush or nearby townsponies. It was only once they were inside that they realized they couldn’t see anypony in the castle either.

“M-maybe they’re not here yet?” Scootaloo asked.

Sweetie looked extra serious, held out a hoof and summoned her Stand. After a moment, she’d clicked through the reel. When she lowered it, she looked even more concerned.

“I don’t see anypony anywhere.”

Then, the doors slammed shut.

***

Coco sidestepped the wood, irritated, and it clattered to the grass beside her. She hadn’t even needed her Stand to dodge. She felt a little warm and woozy besides the time spend around the fires, and she wondered...

“Your Stand lets you make alcohol.”

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>>29358520
The arsonist barked a harsh laugh. “It’s something more than that! I turn a universal liquid into something completely different, just by thought! Alchemists have dreamed of my power for ages before I was ever born! I’m Nature’s herald! And I’m going to bring all of you back to zero, and show you a new path to peace and prosperity, through me!”

Coco stared. Alchemists have been doing a lot better than -that- for centuries. But before she could respond, she noticed the fire spreading between her hooves.

She startled, and almost jumped back before she felt the fire spring up there too. Her saddlebags started to scorch, and she was forced to drop and roll away. Behind her, the green kept igniting, and in the dizzy spinning of her vision she could make out a trail leading back to the burning plank.

“When I was over there, my power even affected the dew on the grass! I’m invincible!” The earth pony cackled to herself.

Coco only put out the fire when she made it onto the road and away from the blaze. Her coat felt sticky, and not with sweat; that had been converted.

“If you try to move back now, you’ll go up in flames, and if you stay where you are, you won’t be able to dodge my attacks! ｢Simply Red｣!”

The Stand appeared and flew straight for her, already punching. Unlike hers, it had fists. Hands. ｢Something for Nothing｣ struck back with its hooves, but the corners of her vision swam just the same. She retched, and held it in for a moment, taking a step backwards and stumbling. With a sudden push, her Stand shoved her out of the way, and she went flying.

***

Scootaloo spun, and stared into the darkness the doors had been covering up.

“Look out!” the voice was exhausted, strained.

“Spike?” Sweetie asked, spinning and her voice bounced the length of the entryway.

“She took everyone! Everyone except Twilight! She’s still looking for Twilight!”

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>>29358536
Then the darkness shifted, and broke into a run. A Stand appeared next to it, one Scootaloo recognized. The cloak, the bubbling magical darkness now stripped away to reveal a white coat and violet eyes, not even bothering to make eye contact as the metal pony raced silently beside her.

This was the one who tried to take Cheerilee.

Sweetie turned in time to see the mare bearing down on her, on the couch, on her sister. Shocked, she moved to block the path to Rarity, but -

She vanished.

***

As the enemy went flying towards more burning rubble, Berryshine laughed uncontrollably. No Stand could hold up against her, not as long as it was being piloted by something that ran on blood! No thing could resist the ultimate Nature that presided over life! It was the ultimate equalizer, the universal change that gave her the power of the gods!

Through these heady thoughts, and in the flickering, ever-present light, she made out the fabric tied around the flying pony’s middle. (Stomach? Barrel?) Her eyes tried to follow it, but this one was colored, green and grey to camouflage against the grass and the road. But why?

Then it went taut, and Berryshine felt herself being ripped from the ground. It was around her front hoof this time!

“When I was looking up at the blanket, that’s when you wrapped it around me! You only just attached the rest of it to yourself! A backup plan!” she yelled at the pony whose momentum was launching her toward her own fire, and then summoned her Stand, shouting, “Well, it -won’t work-!”

｢Simply Red｣ smashed a hole into the fabric, and it immediately started to fade, but it was too late. Still catapulted, Berryshine fell into the fire.

In that moment, she wished desperately for water.

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>>29358553
Coco hit a poorly-made, lumpy cushion in the roadway, and moved no further. Beneath her, the fabric, the long grass-colored ribbon and even her Stand dissipated into so many particles. And then it was just the sound of the fire, and the light was dim but enough to block out the stars, and oh, Rarity, I did my best to keep it safe for you.

And then she passed out.

***

Sweetie had just disappeared! And in her place was a… CD?

The pony she formerly knew as Vinyl stepped over it, and her Stand came in contact with it. It sank immediately into the metal surface, and didn’t emerge. Then, the pair turned to Rarity.

“Don’t let her touch you with her hooves!” Spike’s voice called from higher up in the castle, “Get away from her!”

Then came the moment.

This was an important moment for Scootaloo. In this moment, she truly felt ｢aligned｣ with another’s purpose! She felt as if the protective spirit of Sweetie Belle lingered in the room, even while she was gone! As if Coco, her most recent friend, was standing beside her! Like the blood of every Ponyvillian ran in her veins! They had given this to her, this spirit to continue in the face of adversity, and now she was duty-bound to carry it on.

“｢GO ZONE｣!”

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>>29358569
She flew straight at Vinyl, who looked over her shoulder too late. If it had been a slow flight, if there had been some hesitation in her action, then Scootaloo surely would’ve suffered the same fate as the other two Crusaders.

Instead, she unleashed a punch straight into the enemy Stand’s barrel, stunning it for a moment. With those extra seconds, she sailed the rest of the way onto Vinyl’s head, and kicked off of it, flipping through the air for another dizzy moment until she finally landed, sitting on the couch.

With a slight effort, ｢Go Zone｣ shoved the couch, and the floor below it became as slippery as possible. As she rolled deeper into the darkness of the castle, Scootaloo stared boldly at the sudden rage on Vinyl’s retreating face.

Beneath her, Rarity laid under the blanket. If anypony had been paying close attention, they might have said that she looked quietly, strangely peaceful.

｢To Be Continued｣

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78yioWJhUJA

Stand Name: Antennas to Heaven
User: DJ PON3
Stats
Power: B
Speed: C
Range: E
Durability: B
Precision: B
Potential: C
Abilities: ???

>>29358585
Amazing as always my man, and Coco managed to pull off some Joseph-tier tricks this time. It was awesome to see [Simply Red] defeated and the glimpse of Spike's life we got in the aftermath of whatever event gave Equestria Stands was really rather grim. You penned this chapter perfectly.

Anyone seen xforts latest video on diamond records the idea of having eyes of heaven on your phone sounds pretty awesome even if it's only the four animated parts right now.

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Posting griffon Pet Shop.

Someone should draw a Diamond Dog Iggy.

>>29358585
Pone Saturdays and Jojo Fridays. The best things come during the weekends.
Nice chapter by the way.

>>29336011
They should of made AJ a background character... speedwagon

Professional Shitbag and the real [FITC] review Jojo OP's
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvZxLMmcJ8A

>>29361571
very nice to be honest these guys really make the OP's of JoJo Araki's genuine genius when designing these OP's. you can really see some deep and hidden meaning behind every second if you pause and analyse every frame.

>>29361571
And then this guy completes the analysis
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bNGkVVx2_7U

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>>29361659
Multi analysis Analysing!?!?!?

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>>29362192
[Actos Sucios A Precio Barato]

Part 2:

>A few days were spent learning about your Stand and your abilities
>Safe to say that the ponies are a bit panicky because of you
>”Hahaha! Roseluck’s face, too! ‘Who’s there?! Who touched me?!’ Then when you made one of her flowers look like a dick...” Pinkie started cracking up, you laughing along with her
>The both of you started hanging out more, she was the only one who could truly understand you
>Well, because you two have Stands
>And the two of you pulled many pranks
>But you kept it small enough so that no one questioned it
>You chew into your donut when you finally calmed down
“We gotta stop. They’ll catch on, eventually.” You chuckle a bit as you gulp down your donut with some milk
>She smiled and looked up at you a bit
>”Say, Anon.” You look toward her. ”You don’t have any questions about all this, do you?”
“What, this Stand stuff and the arrow?” She nodded her head. “Well, yeah, I have been wondering how you got it, but I figured not to ask since we’re chillin’."
>”I know, but know that we’ve gotten close due to this, I think I can tell you about it.” She smiled and finished her chocolate milk. “It’s like HuniePop, the more you-”
“Stoooop.” You sigh. “I can’t believe you wanted to play that.”
>”I can’t believe you played it with me” She giggled a bit. “Well, whenever you’re ready.”
“Alright. So, the arrow, how’d you get it?”
>”My father found it cleaning up around the house when I was little, a few days after I got my cutie mark.” You nodded, following along. “He spoke about his forefathers telling the young generations of the family of a madpony that assaulted both my great great great great-”
“Great times a couple more greats grandparents?”
>”Yeah! That! So then, the madpony walked away thinking they died but the two rose up alive and gifted the abilities of the arrow! They took him down and took it as a sort of trophy!"

>>29363152

>That was actually pretty badass, considering this is a world where all things here are kinda cute in a childish way
“That’s pretty cool that your family has a story that lasts through the ages like that. I do wonder...did you accidentally nick yourself picking it up?” You keep your drink on the table, so you don’t do a spit take when you hear some weird shit from her
>”Actually, it’s tradition that the next generation of the Pie family be granted Stands. It’s been at least a couple generations since we lost the arrow so-”
“Whoa whoa whoa, hold up, you’re saying your father just stabbed your family and himself with it?” You stop her right there. “I gotta say, that’s the most fucked up shit I’ve heard.”
>”I know it sounds bad but I’m still here, aren’t I?” She smiles and bounces on her tail, the table shaking a bit and you catching your drink before it spilled. “And besides, it’s only tradition within the family!”
>Everything inside you was saying that the arrow was bad news and what her father did was wrong, but she is fine and lively
“Alright. Maybe it’s just me since I was never raised on tradition. There’s a lot of cultures in my world so it was hard to keep up…” You shrugged and finished your drink. “Also...Kee, why is that your Stand’s name?”
>”It’s short for something that’s been stuck in my head since I got my Stand. [KEY ENTITY EXTRACTION]! It sounds really weird and foreboding so I called it Kee because it’s cuter that way.” She summoned it and nuzzled against the tentacly appendage. “Isn’t that right, Kee~?”
>Be still, boner
>Pls be still
>”But I like your Stand, Anon! It has a question mark like halo and it’s nose is spikey wikey like Rarity’s name to Spike.”
>You snicker and nearly spray milk out of your nose
>Some ammunition to tease your buds are always welcome

>>29363168

fuck i mean Rarity's nickname for Spike

I'm gonna check a bit for any mistakes for a quick moment. Here's this:

Stand User: Pinkie Pie
Stand Name: [KEY ENTITY EXTRACTION] (Kee)
Stand Ability: [Cartoon Physics]
Power - E
Speed - A
Range - A
Durability - A
Precision - A
Potential - D

Description: (Kee) gives Pinkie the ability to bend the laws of physics in such an absurd way (Falling down only to suddenly stop and calmly dive in a pool of water, stretch her body without hurting herself, whipping out a party cannon out of nowhere, etc.). The only drawback is that she cannot use her Stand to harm.
Appearance: dark pink tentacles that is attached to her back.

>>29363185
I'll look it over as I post. Now...

>You walk out of Sugarcube Corner and bump your fists against Pinkie’s hooves
>It was nice getting to know her more through your Stands
>Now you’ll be off to Twilight’s to check on that research
>Also to make sure she doesn’t fuck up and somehow turn evil
>Gonna set your jimmies to Defcon 3, just in case
>As you near the castle, you see Spike coming out and spotting you
>You go to wave, but you see him make a sort of motion, like pulling
>What is he doiiiiiiAAAHHHH
>Oh shit you’re somehow speeding on ahead toward him!
>Pls stop pls stop pls stop pls stop!
>Before impact, you stop right in front of him the moment he put his hands up as if to stop you
>”Oh my goodness, it worked…” He said as he looked up at you. “TWILIGHT! IT WORKED!”
>Defcon 4 it is, jimmies
“What worked? And what the hell did you…” You stop for a moment and think
>Oh no she didn’t...
>You walked in and shut the door after a moment, watching Spike bring in Twilight
>You put on a fake smile and wave at her before putting your hands behind your back, walking up to her as calmly as you can
“Sup, Twilight? So, uh, want to tell me why Spike has a Stand?” You bend a bit, leaning to be face to face. She backed away and nervously smiled
>”It must’ve been pretty obvious, huh?” Spike stammered a little, looking away
“Yeah. Flying 50 miles an hour isn’t something humans can do, nor survive if they have no means of stopping.” You frown a bit and glare at Twilight. “But never mind that, explain why you stabbed the arrow into-”
>”Wait, Anon! I didn’t do that! I…I...” She looked down and seemed to concentrate
>After a moment, you see the most kingly looking catbird ever known
>The griffon had a golden helmet that looked like a head of a beetle
>”The Stand that I was given after piercing myself, it’s name is [ASHES OF EDEN]!”
>Jimmies, we Defcon 5, now

>>29363204

>“Ooh, Anon, bring yours out! I wanna see what it looks like!” Spike cheered
“Hold on a moment. Twilight, what does your Stand do?” You stop Spike for a moment and look at her inquisitively
>”Oh, nothing fantastic, just, uhh…”
>”Through me, she can gift any living creature a Stand of their own and track them.” Oh shit, he spoke
“Without the stabbing, I take it?” You pointed at the horn on its helmet
>”Twilight Sparkle decided that it shan’t be done. I channel my power through her and she, via magic, shall bestow a Stand among those she see fit.” it looked at her with a piercing gaze. “I pray she doesn’t give it away carelessly.”
“I hope so, too. Twilight, what made you do this?! That was a pretty dangerous move you did.” She reeled from your yells
>”It wasn't reacting to any magic I threw at it. Nor could I detect any hints of magic. It's something completely alien to us so I had to do what I had to do!” She smiled and slowly frowned. “But, getting stabbed by an arrow isn't something I'll do again.”
“Yeah. Good, because that…” You looked over at Spike and held your tongue
>You couldn't up and say that she could've died right in front of him
>It'd cause a lot of unneeded drama
>Pinching your nose, you summon your stand and attempt to flick Twilight
>[ASHES OF EDEN] held its hand out and stopped [METROPOLIS]
>Wait, no, your commands are just met with refusal. As if your Stand refused to get by hers
>”Heheheh, your Stand can't hurt us. We tried with Spike’s Stand and even it refused to attack me.” She smirked.
>You shrugged and walked by her Stand, flicking her horn yourself
>She yelped and rubbed her horn
“Stands, not users.” You tease and ruffle her hair a bit. “I'll talk to you later about it. Spike, what's your Stand Name?”
>He hopped up and down and concentrated before his skin started looking sleek, sheen, and shiny
>Ooh, it's one of those Stands, no wonder you didn’t notice it

>>29363220

>”I like calling it [RISE]. I can change the momentum of an object in motion.” He took out a small ball from his- wait, how does his body have pockets? “Like so!” he threw it hard at the nearest window and before it crashed, he made it stop completely and it fell.
>”Great. Now I'm gonna be wary of any broken windows in case he doesn't stop them.” Twilight joked a little.
>Well, it's not so bad
>These two seem to be having fun with their Stands
>Not only that, but it seems only you three plus Pinkie are the only ones who knows about this
>You might have to ask Twilight to keep it secret and under wraps
>Maybe Pinkie could help with your point
>”Hmm, you know, now that I think about it, I think this is something that shouldn’t be tampered with…” Twilight thought aloud
“You think?” You purse your lips and shake your head. “Look, give me the arrow. I’ll hide it or at least give it back to Pinkie. It was hidden all this time so she should know where to-”
>The door slams open and Pinkie, dressed in a sort of weird...oh god, she’s dressed as the Flying Spaghetti Monster. "RAAAAWRR!"
>”AHHHHHH!” Spike jumped and hid behind Twilight and her Stand was prepared to lunge at her
>You and Pinkie just laugh your asses off, even your Stand is on the ground laughing
>”Hey Twilight! Anon gave me a good idea yesterday for this year's Nightmare Night: dressing up as food! What do you think?” She bounced up and down, waving her noodly appendage around
>”Pinkie, take that off. You scared Spike!” She scolded. Pinkie frowned a bit and nodded, taking off her costume.
>You chuckle to yourself when you see her Stand take off the costume, despite the fact that it itself is still a sort of spaghetti monster
>Praise Kee
>”Wait, Pinkie, what's that on your back?” Spike asked after a few moments, wiping his eyes
>”You see it? Spike! I didn't know you had a Stand! Twi, did you….OH HI THERE!”

>>29363236

>Wow, so her Stand really did allow her to do anything
>She zipped right by you and up to Twilight’s Stand, scaring him as well
>”I never seen a golden griffon before! What’s your name? Do you like to party because I like to party and I can THROW YOU A WELCOME TO PONYVILLE PARTY WITH ANON’S-”
>”SILENCE!” [ASHES OF EDEN] reached out to clamp her mouth shut, but Kee wrapped its tentacles around his arms and stopped him
“Whoa!” Your Stand rose and prepares itself
>”Pinkie’s Stand!” Twilight pointed. “That’s the spaghetti thing you were talking about, Anon!” She started looked at her hooves. “And I can feel it. But it’s not touching me!”
>”Never mind that!” her Stand yelped. “Her stand is attacking me! It shouldn’t be able to do that!”
>”Attacking you? I didn't attack you, you attacked me!” Pinkie frowned. “That’s mean and you shouldn’t be doing that, anyway!”
>”I was just going to clamp that trap of yours shut!”
>”Ooohhh.” Kee let go of him and he rubbed his wrists. “Sorry, I usually do that to defend myself sometimes, but that’s it! Kee can’t attack nobody.”
>”Hmph, that’s good. I don’t feel like sullying my hands.”
>Pinkie started getting bubbly again
“So, I guess Pinkie is gonna be filled to the brim with parties. But before that.” You extend your hand to Twilight. “The arrow. Give it”
>You feel [ASHES OF EDEN] tap your shoulder and wave
>”Right here, fool.”
>You stood there for a little and look back at Twilight, shaking slightly
>”Ahhahaha, yeah, when I used that arrow on myself, I think some of my magic fused with it and the arrow itself got out of my body and transformed into that.”
“I...ha...what?” You try to make sense of what she said
>Pinkie bounced beside you and noogied you a bit
>”It’s magic, Anon! She don’t gotta explain nothin’!” Pinkie hummed as she brought out her notepad and started writing. “So, what does your Stand do?”

>>29363256

>”He can give non-users Stands. So basically, he is the Arrow, but in Stand form. Plus, he can track other Stand users, no matter where they are.”
>”Not to mention that no Stand can attack her or her Stand at all.” Spike added. Pinkie stopped and grinned
>”OOH! WE CAN GIVE OUR FRIENDS STANDS!”
“Nuh uh!”
>”Absolutely not!” Both you and her Stand disagreed with her. “I am not just some tool! I only gift those who I deem worthy! That dragon there, as small as he is, has proven worthy of my gift for the deeds he has done.”
>”Oh, so you can read minds, too?” Twilight and Pinkie looked up to him. He stared blankly at them and sighed, nodding
“But as I was gonna say, that is a big no-no. You guys are gonna abuse the hell out of these powers. Plus, Pinkie, that’s your family heirloom. They’re gonna-” Pinkie fell to the floor and gripped her head. “Pinkie?”
>”Oww! Mom, stop it! All that yelling hurts!” She clenched her eyes shut and curled into a ball. “I accidentally gave it to my friend. I’m sorry, mom.”
>”Uhh, is she fine?” Twilight backed away
>”My new friend knows about Stands, mom! I had to show him. I know it should be kept in the Pie family, but he had to know!” She started rubbing her head as she got up. “No, just Twilight and Spike. No one else but me, Anon, and those two.”
“I think her mom has a Stand herself. Pinkie’s family had the Arrow for centuries. Hey, Eden…” you bring his attention to you. “Do you have any idea about her ancestors?”
>”I did gain sentience just moments ago, so no, I don’t.” He looked about and phased into Twilight. “Now if you’ll excuse me, I shall nap. Do call if there’s an emergency.” He spoke before fully entering her body

>>29363270

>”Eugh, that’s an odd experience.” Twilight shook her head
>”Darn, I’m not going to throw a party any time soon with all these things happening!” Pinkie stomped on the ground. “I’m getting frustrated. I haven’t thrown Anon’s two parties. I need to plan one for Twilight and Spike. Now my family wants to see you guys.”

Stand User: Twilight Sparkle
Stand Name: [ASHES OF EDEN]
Stand Ability: [STAND GIFTER]
Power - A
Speed - C
Range - A
Durability - C
Precision - A
Potential - E

Description: [ASHES OF EDEN] is the arrow in Stand Form, utilized to give and track all Stands he finds worthy. Other Stands cannot attack her or [ASHES OF EDEN], as if they refuse to do such thing. He can even read the minds of others and judge them or know what Stand a user has.
Appearance: A golden griffon with its helmet the shape of the beetle on top of the arrow, each sharp talon bright like a blade

Stand User: Spike
Stand Name: [RISE]
Stand Ability: [Momentum Manipulation]
Power - C
Speed - B
Range - A
Durability - A
Precision - D
Potential - D

Description: [RISE] allows Spike to change the momentum of an object or a force, even changing the direction and magnitude of it. He must either see or touch said object or force in order to do so.
Appearance: A fluid amorphous being that functions as an integrated stand. It covers Spike’s body, making him appear shinier

>>29363280

”Okay.” You sigh and blink a couple of times, your Stand going transparent on your glasses. “They shall arrive in a moment. I’ll inform Marble Pie to return Pinkie Pie to us.”
>”I thank thee, Quartz. I shall be in the kitchen to fix supper.” Your husband, Igneous Rock Pie, smiles. You can see the relief in his face as he walks in the kitchen
>You are Cloudy Quartz and you’re a bit frazzled after the Arrow disappeared
>Walking up the stairs, you reminisce of the day your husband found the artifact
>You never thought to be gifted of these things...these Stands
>Each of your daughters gained their own Stands, also
>While you understand yours perfectly, you don’t know about your daughters
>Limestone Pie has a sole metal cuirass that protects her body, but that’s about it
>Maud Pie has all these stone butterflies that, you know, can do something. But what?
>Marble Pie has a simple-
>”Mom? Hello?” You blink and spot Marble waving a hoof over your face
“Oh, goodness me. I’m terribly sorry.” You feel your face grow a little red
>”It’s okay. Is there something I can do?”
“Yes. Thy Stand has Pinkie binded, yes?” She nods at your question and you sigh in relief. “Most fortunate. Your father requested her to be brought here. Can thou recall her with it?”
>”Mm-hmm.”
>You follow your daughter outside and toward the windmill, where there is a tall tower of steel jutting high into the sky
>So many intricacies that detail the monolith suggest that it is of a future design, but it is simply a Stand
>A Stand that only your daughter could use, sadly
>She stops in front of the screen and it reacts to her touch, her hooves swiping down and selecting Pinkie Pie
>”Alright. I’m bringing her over now.” She pressed a button and the machine shot a beam of light into the sky
>A few seconds pass and it rained back down in front of the house, revealing Pinkie Pie
>”HIYA! WE’RE HOME!” you hear her cheer

>>29363298

>Out from her hair came the Princess of Friendship and...oh my word
>”Damn it, Pinkie, warn us before you do that!”
>”Haha, sorry, Anon. It slipped my mind.”
>”Ooh…” the Princess of Friendship rubbed her head and spotted you. “Oh, I’m terribly sorry. Hello there, I’m Twilight Sparkle.”
“Charmed, I’m sure.” You stare at the green minotaur ape hybrid. “And thy friend over there?”
>”Oh, that’s Anon. He’s been in Equestria for about a week. Discord botched one of his chaos spells and brought him here.” She explained to you.
>He turned around and pocketed his hands in his shirt
>”Hey, miss…” He looked at Pinkie and she whispered in his ear. “Cloudy Quartz. I’m Anon.”
“Nice to meet you. Come, I’m sure Pinkie’s told you what you’re here for.”
>You lead them into the house and stop them before they entered the dining room
“Before we enter, hast thou the arrow on your being?”
>You see Anon staring at Twilight
>Before your eyes appears a golden griffon with a beetle shaped helmet behind her
>”Ta-da...hehehe.” Twilight nervously giggled
>Igneous will not be a happy pony
“I-I see.” You stammer before continuing along
>”Hold on a moment, Mrs. Quartz.” Anon stopped you. “Excuse my paranoia, but I need to know this now: will your husband freak out and attack us with his Stand?”
>You stopped and started to think on this
>In all your years married to that stallion, you couldn’t see him doing such a thing
>He may have been raised in tradition, but to attack a princess and an alien, who has knowledge of this whole ordeal?
>Preposterous! You do pray that he knows better
“He shan’t lay a hoof to any of you. But do listen to his request. This Arrow means much to him. It’s a heirloom to the Pie family for many centuries.”
>You smile as the three of them nod and follow you to the dining room

>>29363312

>Igneous put the pot of rock stew on the middle of the table and looks over to you
>”Ahh. A pleasure to meet one that has knowledge of mine heirloom. Come, sit. The girls shall be back at any moment.”

>A few minutes pass and your sisters finally arrive
>OOH! You must be Pinkie Pie
>While you are excited to be you, you can feel the air tense as supper starts
>Maud is staring at Anon with dreamy eyes, Limestone minds her business with the stew, Marble shies away from him
>Your parents have the thickest air around them
>How can you tell the air is thick, anyway?
>Maybe it’s a metaphor?
>Or it could be-
>”Now, Pinkie, before thou bring out dessert. I want to-”
“Oh shoot, how did you know?!” You shout, a bit startled your dad caught on
>”You do it every time we have dinner, Pinkie Pie.” Limestone groaned after finishing her soup
>”Anyway, I wish to see my heirloom returned to me.”
>You see Anon and Twilight staring at each other than at you
>You do hope mom is right and that he won’t lay a hoof on you or your friends
>”I’m sorry, Igneous, but when I studied the Arrow, I wanted to see how it worked. And-”
>”Twi, just show them.” Anon interrupted her rudely
>As much as you like Anon, he can be a meany pants
>But anyway, Twilight brings out [ASHES OF EDEN] again and he squaks at her
>”Insolent user! What reason must you bring me out this time?!” But at least he isn’t as mean as her Stand
>”My word! My heirloom became your Stand?!” Your dad stood up and stared at the Stand standing on the table
>”Ahh, this is the family the pink one told me about? I see...hmm.” He crossed his arms and stared at all five of them, as if judging them.
>”Why does she get a cool Stand but I didn’t get one?!” Limestone sulked as she laid her head down

>>29363327

>”Don’t be mistaken. Of course you have one!” Ashy, you decided to call him, exclaimed. “Hmm, it is a powerful one, and it’s triggered in a certain way. I shan’t tell you how. It’s extremely dangerous.”
“Ooh, what about me?!” You raise your hoof
>”Silence!” He looks over to Maud and widens his eyes. “That is an interesting ability you have there.” He grins as she starts to visibly sweat. “I shall keep my beak shut.”
>He looks over at Marble and cocks an eyebrow. “Peculiar. But it did bring us here. Binding one to a machine and able to recall them is a nice ability.”
>”What is the judging for, if I may interrupt for a moment.” Your mother asks. Your Stand shrugs and loosens its arms to its sides
>”To judge the current generation that has kept me safe.” He looked over to her and hummed. “To link your minds to anyone within the world and communicate with them, or scramble their thoughts is a useful ability. You can read them, as well. This...Twilight, the guards that your nation has?”
>”Oh, the Royal Guards?” She answered
>”That’s it! That’d be an amazing ability for them. But, I can see that you have a duty to this farm. A shame it’s wasted like this.”
>”Now you-”
>”And now, the main event, the stallion of the hour.” He shouts and hops off the table, wrapping an arm around him. “Now, granted, I can see what the abilities of everyone in this room, but this one is the most interesting.”
>”Twilight, please restrain thy Stand.” Your dad is sweating a bit, looking a bit uncomfortable
“Yeah, I think my dad got the point, Twilight.” You try to convince Twilight, who just stared at the whole debacle
>”Huh? Oh, right…[ASHES OF EDEN], return!” She commanded and he flew back into her body
>Anon is snickering to himself from Twilight’s command. “Oh lord, Stands are pokemons. Hehehee.” You’ll have to ask him about that later

>>29363335

>”I see thou hast a predicament of a Stand. No matter, I desire mine heirloom. So I ask of thee, Princess: seek out a Stand that can recreate the powers of the Arrow, and I shall be grateful.” Your father bows to her, which causes Twilight to blush a bit
>”Oh, umm, I’ll try my best. It shouldn’t be that hard to-”
>Anon interrupts her. “I have to object to that.”
“Anon, why? Don’t you think that’ll be cool to give-”
>”Yeah! I do, I really do, Pinkie. It’s just...ahh, I feel that this type of power will go into somepony’s head real quick.”
>Your mother giggles a bit and takes of her glasses. “I understand thy concerns, but don’t think meekly of the disposition of ponykind! We are a race pragmatic on the words of friendship, isn’t that right, Princess?”
>”Yes. In fact, in the things you shown me about the Arrow, Stands, and all that was contained in that advanced screen of yours, leads me to believe that your race is just violent.” Twilight sighed as Anon hung his head a little
“Twilight! His race isn’t mean! Look at him, the-”
>”Pinkie, it’s all good. I will admit it, humans are very selfish and violent.” He waved his hand to stop you. “But that ain’t me. I'll defend myself if I have to, but I’m not a violent person. I mean…” He stood up and brought out his Stand. “I have a Stand and in my world, they’re seen as ghostly guardians that’s used for fighting and harming others. So I guess I projected that sort of thought onto you guys.”
>”I forgive thee, Anon. The Princess did explain thou art from another world. I can’t imagine the intricacies of a new society.” Your father smiles. Anon breathes a little calmly and places a hand over his chest
>”Thanks. That makes me feel better.”
>”So I guess this is goodbye?” Maud says, finally wiping off the sweat off of her face
“Nonsense! We can sleep over for the night and take the train back home! It’ll be a slumber party!”

>>29363359

>”While the festivities go on, I shall retire to bed.” Your dad give you a hug and kiss. “‘Twas nice to see thee again, Pinkamena.”
>You giggle and give him a hug
“You too, dad. I promise I’ll keep it down.”
>While you bring out the games and start the slumber party with your sisters, Twilight, and Anon, none of you notice the flash of light in the hallway as your mom and dad walks out of the dining room
>The night continues on and soon, everyone is asleep
>Well, except you, Twilight, and Anon
>You couldn’t help but hunker down with him
>His fingers are amazing on your hoovsies
>”I wonder if those names mean anything.” You hear Twilight mutter to herself.
“Names? What names?” You couldn’t help but ask, despite knowing she was talking to herself
>”Oh, sorry, I thought you were asleep.” Twilight apologized
>”Nah, I’m still trying to fall asleep. What’s up, Twi?” Anon scratched the top of your head.
>Ooh, yeah. That’s the stuff~
>”I have a mental link with my Stand. And I can see what he sees, read each other’s thoughts and all. I know the names of each of their Stands, but he can also withhold any information about them. I guess I can do the same with him. It’s a symbiotic relationship between-” You tune out the noise and focus on the fingers digging into your head
>You even guide his hands to stroke your back, making Kee disappear so he can scratch your back properly
>Awww yeah, make momma proud
>”so then I wond- Can you stop petting Pinkie?! That’s embarrassing I can’t keep watching this!” Twilight whisper shouts at you and Anon
>”What’s wrong with that? Every time I do this, no one has complained. They just look away and…”
>”It’s a bit of an intimate thing to do, Anon…” Twilight mutters a bit.
>When his hands go away, you weakly reach for it
“Noooo, they feel so good. I didn’t know I felt itchy on my back! It itches now, Anon! You did this to me!” You giggle a bit

>>29363368

>”ANYWAY, “Anon tries to get back on track. “Their names...you went off track there, Twi.”
>”Oh right...it’s just...really peculiar. I may be reading this a bit too much, but I can’t ignore it. [DOMINO THE DESTITUTE], [HOLLY WOOD THE CRACKED], [VIC THE BUTCHER], [EVAGRIA THE FAITHFUL], [SENTRY THE DEFIANT]. Respectively to Igneous, Cloudy, Limestone, Marble, and Maud.”
>”Maybe the names has to do something with their Stand? I dunno, but truthfully, those are cool names for their Stands.” Anon chuckled, unconsciously scratching your head again
>Ooh yeah...today was a good day~

*insert to be continued meme here*

>>29363376

And to finish, here's this:

Stand User: Igneous Rock Pie
Stand Name: [DOMINO THE DESTITUTE]
Stand Ability: [???]
Power - ?
Speed - ?
Range - ?
Durability - ?
Precision - ?
Potential - ?

Description: ???
Appearance: ???

Stand User: Cloudy Quartz
Stand Name: [HOLLY WOOD THE CRACKED]
Stand Ability: [Telepathic Communications]
Power - D
Speed - C
Range - C
Durability - B
Precision - A
Potential - D

Description: [HOLLY WOOD THE CRACKED] can connect, read, or scramble the thoughts of an individual she desires, permitted if she concentrates hard enough
Appearance: A pair of glasses with one half being the screen to perform the abilities of her Stand

Stand User: Limestone Pie
Stand Name: [VIC THE BUTCHER]
Stand Ability: [???]
Power - ?
Speed - ?
Range - ?
Durability - ?
Precision - ?
Potential - ?

Description: ???
Appearance: A metal cuirass covering her body

Stand User: Marble Pie
Stand Name: [EVAGRIA THE FAITHFUL]
Stand Ability: [Multi-Binding]
Power - E
Speed - A
Range - B
Durability - D
Precision - B
Potential - A

Description: [EVAGRIA THE FAITHFUL] can bind users and Stands to her via a machine next to the windmill of the farm. No matter where they are, she can call them back to her.
Appearance: A long thin piece of complex machinery jutting next to the windmill of the farm

Stand User: Maud Pie
Stand Name: [SENTRY THE DEFIANT]
Stand Ability: [???]
Power - ?
Speed - ?
Range - ?
Durability - ?
Precision - ?
Potential - ?

Description: ???
Appearance: hundreds of grey butterflies within 100 meters of her

And that's it for Part 2. Part 3 is now underway.

Fuck my ass. I forgot to put up the pastebin for Part 2

http://pastebin.com/awsgCMAq

There you go. That's for part 2. Should I keep the green in one thing or keep it separate?

Would star platinum or any other punchy ghost be able to beat any mlp villains?

Sheer fucking strong strength vs magical magic creatures

Would star platinum or any other punchy ghost be able to beat any mlp villains?

Sheer fucking strong strength vs magical magic creatures

>>29363416
Considering how long these chapters are, and how accessible individual pastebins are as opposed to one huge dump, I'd say you should separate them out into one chapter per bin. Awesome chapter, by the way. Your concept for the arrow is pretty unique, and the way the characters interact feels really genuine. Seeing the entire Pie family have Stands reminded me of the Higashikatas from Part 8, is that what you were going for? I can't wait for more of this stuff, dude. Keep it up.

>>29364548
Provided Jotaro could get anywhere near them, it'd be an instant win against Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, Sombrero, low-power Tirek, and Starlight, but Discord wouldn't allow himself to be taken by surprise or allow Jotaro close enough to hit him, and max-power Tirek might just annihilate Jotaro with his huge fuck-off lasers.

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>>29364765
Apologises for the double post omnee Senpai and a good reply Have a keijo-jo-girl

Jotaro kujo would probably be laughed at by all stand using ponies thinking as long as they keep a relative distance away from jotaro they're fine but that only fuels his passion to beat them into a bloody pulp.

Star platinum after it loses its ability to stop time it may be just punches but those punches will lead to either a hospital trip on life support or if you piss him off a trip to the morgue

>>29363416
I liked this chapter, as Omnee said the Pies do remind me of the Higashikata of part 8. Even the names of their stands seem themed acordingly.
I see no problem in srparating the story in chapters.
Keep it up!
>>29364548
I do believe stand users have a shot at beating the MLP villains.

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If you had to assign the mlp characters a stand from the already existing ones in Jojo, or why not the greentexts,which stand would you give whom?
>pic related

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>>29365756
Josuke Rarity is literal perfection.

(More OC, will polish up later)

>>29366841
Is Rohan flyer there I can't tell or is it trixie I know you'll polish it but curiousty seems to be getting the better of me.

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>>29366971
I intended for it to be Sassy, since I felt the hair was somewhat similar and I wanted to make as many Part 4 characters Rarity related as possible.

I've been doing a bit where each part, at least the first 6, goes to a Mane pony with the cast themed around them, with some exceptions. So far I decided:

Part 1: Fluttershy
Part 2: Pinkie Pie
Part 3: Twilight
Part 4: Rarity
Part 5: Applejack
Part 6: Rainbow

>>29367055
Ah I like that sassy could be essentially a Rohan, she tries to be the main star / hero going out of her way to be the hero only for rarity to put her back in her place via some DORA's but after being sent to fashion hospital she realises how she was being so controlling and arrogant and listens to rarity to take control of the canterlot boutique branch.

She herself by the end of their adventure while still following raritys orders becomes a fashion-mangaka (clothes fashionista anime version) and makes her own designs which rarity approve of.

Also like the line up can see both the protagonists and potential antagonists for each part

>>29367500
So for part 4, Sweetie Belle is Koichi and Coco is Okuyasu? Suri Polomare as an antagonist?

>>29367622
Suri polomare and maybe some minor rarity rivals I.e fluer dee lis could be highway star maybe even give sapphire shores a minor villain cameo jealous of rarity liking and talking about Countess colortora / Rarara more then her (weird tsundere yukako stalker?) plus rarity did call her last year. And who could forget about the diamond dogs.

>>29367500
Thanks. I did also think of some others that could be used, and I want to sketch a group shot with several characters for each part. Here's what I have so far.

>Part 1
Jonathan - Fluttershy
George Joestar - Fluttershy's dad
Zeppili - Tree Hugger
Dio - Trixie (really only to pair with Twilight down the road)
Speedwagon - Zephyr Breeze

>Part 2
Joseph - Pinkie
Ceasar - Cheese Sanwhich
Lisa Lisa - Maud Pie(?)
Kars - Adagio
Esidisi - Aria
Wammu - Sonata

>Part 3
Jotaro - Twilight
Avdol - Zecora
Kakyoin - Moondancer
Polnareff - Flash Sentry
Iggy - Spike

>Part 4
Josuke - Rarity
Koichi - Sweetie Belle
Okuyasu - Coco
Keicho - Suri
Rohan - Sassy
Kira - Lyra
Kira's Dad - Bon Bon
Stray Cat - Opal
Shigechi - The spoon girl from Saddle Row
Mikitaka - Photo Finish

>Part 5
Giorno - Applejack
Bruno - Cherry Jubilee
Narancia - Apple Bloom
Fugo - Rara
Trish - Thorax
Diavolo - Chrysalis

>Part 6
Jolyne - Rainbow
Pucci - Starlight
Emporio - Scootaloo
Ermes - Lightning Dust
Anasui - Soarin
Weather Report - Starburst

If you have any suggestions, I'd like to know so I can round off some of the casts.

>>29367875
I like the cast you made for each part. I would have used Big Mac as Bruno and Braeburn for Abachio, but that's just me.

>>29367875
>Part 6
No Foo Fighters...

>>29368832
That's a good one, I'll add that in for Part 5 for Abbachio. I just went with Cherry for Bruno because I was wondering if there was something more fitting for Big Mac I could do.

>>29369568
I did say I didn't have everyone. Do you have any Foo Fighter ideas?

>>29370317
Star glitteranum

Actually makes a lot of sense

>>29370991
Should be trixie stands and vice versa

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>>29367808
Rarity's Fashionable Adventure

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>>29367875
Part 1: Kind Blood
Part 2: Party Tendency
Part 3: Sparkle Crusaders
Part 4: Fashion is not Crash
Part 5: Golden Apples
Part 6: Rainboom Ocean
Part 7: Shimmer Ball Run
Part 8: Derpolion

>>29372680
All those sound like good mlp name parts could probably make decent episode titles too.

Something to tide us over that I did in another thread.

>Holding your umbrella, you ring the doorbell, and wait.
>Your friend stands next to you in his police uniform.
>Combing back his pompadour, he looks over to you.
>"You sure about this, Rick?"
>Your nostrils flare as you try burning down the door with your eyes.
>But you're not Superman.
>You're Erich Rammstein. Or Rick, for short.
"I know what I saw, Josuke. And I can feel them, still. They're down in the basement."
>Josuke sighs, and puts his comb away.
>"Alright, but remember, there's a procedure to these things."
>Yeah, a procedure.
>You've got your own procedure.
>You ring the doorbell again.
>A voice sounds from the other side.
>"Yeah, yeah! I'm coming!"
>An irritated looking man swings the door open.
>"What?!"
>It's show time.
"[BENZIN]!"
>A giant ashy fist with skulls for knuckles appears from the shadows of your umbrella, and slams into the guy as your Stand cries it's signature battlecry.
>"AUF!"
>The guy flies back, colliding with the opposite wall.
>Even as you walk in, folding your umbrella, you can feel Josuke's eyes glaring at your back.
>"Erich! What did I just tell you about procedure?!"
>You ignore him, grinding the heel of your boot into the guy's temple.
"Relax, Josuke. I'm not a cop. And if I'm wrong, no one's going to believe him. No one is supposed to know about Stands. But if I'm right..."
>You give a sadistic grin as you look down at the degenerate.
"... Don't worry, I won't do anything to this Fichfehler that you can't fix."
>You suddenly hear muffled voices coming in from the vents.
>You can't make it out, but they seem to be crying for help.
>You look over and see Josuke heard it, too.
>"I'll find them. You keep an eye on him."
>You smirk. That won't be a problem.

>>29373208

>Switch over to Josuke Higashitaka.
>Fucking Erich. He might've ruined this arrest.
>But that doesn't matter right now. You need to find those girls.
>You break down the door to the basement.
>It's dimly lit down there.
>You call to the dark.
"Police! Is anyone down there?!"
>You hear muffled cries down there.
>It sounds like Erich was right on the money.
“Hold on, I'm coming down!”
>You move down the steps.
>Normally, an officer would have his pistol drawn, but thanks to [CRAZY DIAMOND], pistols are just cumbersome for you.
>As you reach the bottom step, you gasp in shock.
>No less than four girls, posed and dressed like dolls, yet somehow still alive.
“Oh my god…”
>This is one of the sickest things you've ever seen, and that's saying a lot.
“Hold on, I can fix you girls up!”
>There's a questioning him from all of them.
>You walk over to the one with the poofy hair, first.
>Despite how bad she looks, she's amazingly still alive.
>You sigh in relief.
“[CRAZY DIAMOND].”
>Your Stand comes out.
>These girls won't be able to see a magical punch ghost suddenly appearing next to you, but they will appreciate the effects yours has.
>Your Stand begins throwing it's fists at the first girl.
>”DORARARARARARARA!”
>With every strike, you revert the girl to the state she was in before she was kidnapped.
>Plastic coating peels away, wounds close, and tears in her outfit stitch themsel back together.
>Soon, she's back in shape.
>Her breathing steadies, and she slowly sits up.
“Easy. You're alright now.”
>Trembling, the young woman looks at her hands, before she starts crying as a small smile forms on her face.
“Wait here, I need to help the others.”
>She wordlessly nods, hugging her knees to her chest.
>You get up, and begin moving to help the other girls.

>>29373210

>Back to Erich.
>You see the first girl come up from the basement.
>You nod a greeting, making sure to firmly press the heel of your boot into this guy's head.
>You wave to each of the girls as they're led out by Josuke.
>As the last girl exits the house, you get ready to turn your attention to the sicko that kidnapped them.
>But Josuke grabs your shoulder.
>”You know this can't be a clean arrest, right?”
>You turn to him, holding down the degenerate with your foot.
“Why not?”
>”You struck him as soon as you opened the door! I didn't even get a chance to question him!”
>You smirk.
“And why would you need to talk to someone while a random civilian was assaulting him?”
>”Huh?”
>Your smirk turns into a devious grin.
“Remember? You were on patrol when you saw me suddenly start pounding this guy. You rushed to stop us, but after the fighting settled, you heard voices downstairs.”
>A look of realization hits Josuke.
>”Ohhh. Right. Hey, Erich. Didn't he resist arrest?”
>A fearful grunt sounds from beneath your foot.
“You know, I think he did, Josuke.”
>He gives his own grin.
>”That’s just great! In that case, I'll leave you to it. Have fun, and don't do anything I wouldn't.”

>>29373213

>You watch as Josuke leaves you with the perp.
“Danke Gott. I thought he'd never leave.”
>You bring out your Stand.
>Unlike most others, anyone can see your Stand.
>Because it inhabits a physical object, people can see the objects your Stand inhabits.
>In this case, your shadow.
>The nature of your Stand gives you a whole slew of possible uses, one of which as convenient storage.
>Your Stand gifts you with a jacket and hat.
>That you can't wear in polite company.
>Because of the Nazi insignias, the death's head on the hat, and the SS badge on the collar.
“You know, Schwein, seventy years ago, my people would gas degenerates such as yourself.”
>You put on the garments, and look down.
“But I think I'll just make you wish I'd do that.”
>You grin, adjusting your cap, and get ready for some fun.

So stands can defeat pretty much all the villains in equestria however can it's lesser cousin the spin / ripple be able to defeat magical evil doers?

So after puchi fucked over the universe and jolyne and co were replaced by alt universe versions was that universe the steel ball run universe where the events of part 8 were happening in Japan or am I wrong?

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>>29373217
And that kids is how JUSTICE is delivered...probably.
>>29374401
It is up to interpretation, but I'd like to think it is.

https://youtu.be/s7sCJ75ZXrw

https://youtu.be/Tvc1AW4NJIM

https://youtu.be/1DEvFaKP3CI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2ZMCzF8BoE
All these videos...

>>29374912
I personally like think the spin is great against discord and his BS and Shanon could stop chrysallis where magic fails

Boop

>>29378402
While I love araki and his art work if I ever saw someone with that abomination of a haircut I'd probably ORA them into next week.

>>29378402
Is Joshu growing into a JoBro? Will he be the Okuyasu to Gappy's Josuke?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQhsvydJZ_4

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>>29379005
>His yt channel pic

I don't know if it's intentional cringe or genuine


Also who is the biggest asshole in the JoJo world? I just want to team them up with the biggest asshole in equestria

>>29379005
Suck my cock, antibrony.

That's right, I said it. Cringers are undercover antibronies. Who said having fun and being creative is "Cringey"? Someone that wants the fandom to die, that's who. So go on, keep calling everything cringey, keep grinding away the content creator's will to keep creating until all you've got left are egomaniac patreon writers. Have fun in the dead fandom you killed, k?

>>29379112
Biggest asshole would be either Part 1 Dio, pre-character-development Rohan, Cioccolatta, Secco, Part 3 DIO, pre-character-development Joshu, Jotaro, or Alternate Universe Diego.

>>29379112
Also Diavolo

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>>29379208
Literally wat

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It's that time again lads

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>>29379995
Can villains be girls too? A bit THICC then your average jo-girl

Alright lads, I want your opinion on something.

Which would be the better Stando theme to use later on in my story?

This?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Z9PU2ve2V3
Or This?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1deAbkUS9H3

>>29380799
The second is pretty hype inducing but I feel like the rock from the first one fits more into your story.

Both fine choices

>>29380799
It depends on the scene, but I like the second one the most.

>>29381373
>>29381041
Oh, I was asking for advice in the context of the Stando themes I've been slowly working on, but maybe I'll just post a song during some of the bigger fight scenes. Thanks for the feedback m8s.

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I want to send gyro to equestria to test equestrian cuisine especially pizza.

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This is the worst thread I've ever seen. Take this stupid shit someplace else and stop putting JoJo into the cesspool that is /mlp/

>>29384022
It's better then fallout equestria

>>29384066
At least Fallout Equestria isn't in /v? This shit should be in a chatroom or something.

Delete this

>>29384066
this

/v/ is making fun of you guys guys right now

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>this entire thread

jesus fucking christ why does this board still exist. i forgot it was even a thing until someone crossed linked it

>>29384604

>>>/v/366008654
>>>/v/366008870
>>>/v/366008934
>>>/v/366009325
>>>/v/366010257
>>>/v/366010684

>>29384604
>>29384997
>implying anyone on any board gives a shit about /v/ and their hot opinions.

>>>/v/366003026
>>>/v/366003034

>>29384604
Oh no not the guys who have a thread / general dedicated to undertale and fnaf, calling us autistic and sad. Why what ever shall we do? Not give a shit? Probably.

To everyone here saying 'this threads shit' or 'this makes me sick looking at this' or anyone who just dislikes the ideas we have here of crossing over jjba and mlp:FiM / EqG well no one is forcing you to stay or look at our content.

There's plenty of boards (and a little thing called filter) on /mlp/ I like the community this thread has built and that's all that matters so if you don't like this then I'm just saying you're not forced to stay.

Just go back to your \v\ or \hm\ you guys usually lurk in or just go to another mlp thread.

>>29384022
How about you fuck and kill yourself, sweetheart?

>>29384022
>>29384112
>>29384720
It is nice to know that you faggots on /v/ are pissed off because of us. I wish only the worst upon you and your piece of shit board

Whoa damn, the worst board is mad at us now? That's fucking hilarious, makes me wanna post more shit just to trigger them.

>>29385427
Nah man leave it don't feed them with replies just get back to normal, we shouldn't give them the time of day or be butt hurt like /a/

Like >>29385020 said let them circle jerk over splatoon or minecraft, whatever the vidya community considers 'quality games'

>>29384966
>>29384720
>>29384604
>>29384368
>>29384112
>>29384022

Yes! Yes! Feed me your tears, for they give me power!

>>29385650
I'm not the pathetic faggot writing autistic fanfiction for attention, kill yourself