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Human becomes pony. How, why and what happens next are all up to you. New stories and art welcome!
Any type of transformation into ponies, dragons, gryphons, minotaurs, changelings, etc., whether OC or canonical, & Anonponies of all shapes and sizes.

Previously on PTFG,

Immense Power by Scribbli - new
http://pastebin.com/BgF7LQ86

One Lucky Pet by Buckett - new
http://pastebin.com/P3hFyJBK

Quarantine by PrismAnon - new
http://derpy.me/Ngh5I

Swapped by Woofr - new
http://pastebin.com/kGdtDZ6S

Pony Transformation Story by WallMixer
http://pastebin.com/ywdE9SGn
http://pastebin.com/u/WallMixer

Behind the Wire by WallMixer
http://pastebin.com/t22Pcuvi

Breaking Horse by Spacewolfe:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-Cuh8qxD-hk8oMxpuwrH0pD7858VmDOaf9gEjMGo8Ks/edit


Archive of over 250 stories, as well as additional links and materials:
http://derpy.me/PonyTF

Unrated TF image dump thread:
http://derpy.me/ptfgnsfw

Below are some suggested writing prompts.

Outbreak:
>A significant portion of a population undergoes drastic physical changes into small equines, with unknown implications if the changes are contagious. Follow a group of survivors or perhaps one recently changed through the continuation or aftermath of the epidemic.

Occult:
>Spoopy things are afoot, as some strange rites have been performed by a mysterious group. Following members of the cult or unknowing trespassers into the area of the ritual as people randomly start becoming small pastel horses.

Awful /soc/-type chatter's in #ptfg on irc.rizon.net

Previous Thread:
>>29367011
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>>29426556
>I smile as my professor gives me a troubled stare
>She opens her mouth to say something, then promptly shuts it
>The gears in her head are turning, processing the implications of what’s happening
>After a moment there is a loud popping sound, like a joint popping out of its socket
>Actually that’s probably what it was
>Several seconds later the coughing settles down
>I can hear the student trying to catch her breath
>Suddenly she shrieks
>”Where’d my dick go?”
>My professor seems highly disturbed by this implication
>I on the other hand am mostly reminded of my raging hard on, and shift to cover it up as best I can
>The professor takes a seat and blots her forehead as my fellow student trots up behind me
>I turn to look at her
>She has a red coat and blond mane, not to mention a pair of wings and a very sour expression
>”I should have stayed in bed” she states as she sits down next to me
>The professor takes a deep breath and speaks
>”Is it painful?”
>I shrug
“It’s rather uncomfortable, the legs are the worst of it”
>”At least you still have your…” the red mare mutters
>My professor nods, apparently coming to terms with what is most likely inevitable
>”Is there any warning? Did you notice anything before it happ-?” She coughs violently.
>She’s close, I can see little blue hairs popping up
“I had a hot flash, what about you?”
>”Same” The mare nods
>”oh god I think it-“
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>>29431319
>She breaks into a coughing fit and falls forward
>Icey blue fur is breaking out is patches across her body
>Her nose and mouth begin to elongate into a short muzzle as her ears migrate up to the top of her head
>I’m slightly alarmed at the sight of a small growth bursting through her forehead
>It presses forward becoming a spiral shaped horn
>Her hands and feet begin to stretch out as her fingers and toes fuse together
>Her upper arms shorten dramatically, while her feet rapidly grow in length
>Her shoulders begin shifting forward, under her new barrel
>The brown curls of her hair have become snow white and a matching tail is growing from of her new dock
>She coughs and sputters as the transformation subsides
>After a few moments she catches her breath and sits up
>”Well that was… Horrible”
>I shrug
“I think it’s kind of nice”
>She looks at me dumfounded, then muses quietly to her self
>”I suppose once it’s over it is rather tranquil”
>”I miss my dick” the red mare chimes in
>The professor opens her mouth to scold her, but then reconsiders
>We sit in an awkward silence for a moment
“So what do we do now?”
>”We should probably…” the professor considers her options
>”We should head up to my office, that’s where most people would look for me. If we’re still contagious we should stay together and avoid leaving the building. I’m sure someone will come for us”
>The two of us nod to her
>”Great, gather your things. We’ll head out as soon as we’re all ready”
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>>29431325
>The mare heads back up the aisle to her seat, while I gather my clothes up off the ground
>Thankfully my dick has receded into its sheath, I definitely don’t need that waving around as we head to the professor’s office
>Figuring I’ll never where them again, I simply wad up my shirt and pant and cram them into my backpack
>I’m slightly more careful with my notes, hopefully I continue my studies when this is over
>Holding the back in place with my hoof I grab the zipper with my teeth and pull it closed
>I look over my shoulder and see that the professor has gathered her things into her purse
>She holds it in her mouth and nods to me before walking back towards the exit
>I bite down on my backpacks handle and follow her
>The steps give me some difficulty, the heavy bag of books catches on every one of them
>By the time we make it to the back the Red mare has joined us at the door
>I hear a state of general chaos in the hallway, people are running, coughing and screaming.
>Our professor takes a deep breath and pushes the door open
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>>29431413
That's the worst possible thing, so we are safe now. Nothing bad will happen from now on.
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>>29431718
You mean best.
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/r/ing petfagging but with rape
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>>29432077
/r/ing green where a former anon turned pretty mare's sister keeps trying to play dress up on him
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http://pastebin.com/P3hFyJBK (actually updated this time)

>Steph picks you up and shows you off in the mirror so you can see
>You look fudging ridiculous
>In your opinion you look more like a wizard than a princess
>Steph waves your hoof with her hand and does a funny voice like she's doing a puppet show
>"Hello everyone! I'm Princess Lucky from PonyLand!" she says, rocking you as she speaks
>That's not what you sound like! You had a...well, you didn't sound like that, anyway
>Mercifully, her phone goes
>She puts you down and answers it
>You don't know for sure who it is, but the way she says "Bonjour" into the phone makes you think it was the huge Frenchie from the park the other day
>Steph starts acting all bashful, ducking into the kitchen and whispering
>As if you were going to start gossiping about this
>You try to shake your princess cap off your head
>It falls over your muzzle
>You struggle for a bit and eventually get the darn thing off
>It's heavier than it looks
>The dress can stay for now, though. Cause it's hard to get off with hooves, is all
>It occurs to you that Steph is busy with the phone, and that her laptop is unguarded upstairs
>Opportunity knocks!
>You race up the steps and into her room
>Her laptop is on the floor, thank the lord. Easily accesible
>You wake the thing up and enter the password:
".jvkuw3d"
>Whoops. Ok, try again
".ivluy234435"
>Ffffffff
>You stares at your useless hooves.
>Looking around, you spot one of the discarded pencils from your attempts at writing
>The lead is broken but that doesn't matter
>You pick it up with your mouth and, taking great care,tap the password out:
>Lucky123
>,,,
>Success!
>You're in.
>Now all you have to do is bring up a word doc
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>>29432101
Is this the only update for today?
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>>29432126

Depends how I feel. I'll be in bed in about 2 hours, so maybe not, but maybe I'll fancy it.

Sorry for drip-feeding it. I write very off the cuff.
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>>29432101
>>In your opinion you look more like a wizard than a princess
Yet he can't magic himself back human. How ironic.
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>>29432101
PUFFY DIAPERS WHEN
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>>29431331
It's the beginning of a more adorable world.
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>>29432094
Maybe also trying to goad him into the sisterhooves social.
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Anyone have any good pet pony greens from the list of stories? There's a huge archive and digging through that would be a huge hassle especially if someone could just direct me to one. Thanksies.
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>>29432194
Never
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>>29432551
soon
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>>29432543
The pet stories should all be tagged as such on the archive.
Or just skip straight to Zephyr:
http://pastebin.com/u/tfanon
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>>29432576
ew no gay
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>>29432576
talk about a diaper
this shit needs to be contained
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>>29432596
Ahh okay. Didn't know there were specific tags on the stories. Cool.
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>>29431784
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>>29432718
Enjoy.
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>>29432975
I've never read Zephyr, do you have a summary of it?
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>>29433123
Man becomes pone

Pone gets abducted

Nanites rewrite pones brain, but fuck up

Pone meets other pone who has a damaged personality because the nanites fucked up

Pone is told that she is now a pet and will eventually be sold once she accepts her new life

Pone gets raped

I stopped reading because this is not my fetish
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>>29431784
/r/ing green where pone is forced to perform her master's sick fetishes
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Oh God, can you post more than pet stories? I like the idea, but it's getting boring at this point.
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nuclear apocalypse but instead of dying from radiation poisoning you become a pretty pone
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>>29411373
>It’s been awhile
>Moonglow and I have calmed down enough to regain our hold on reality
>We’re not in the lab any more, we’ve been rescued
>If this was the lab they’d have us locked in isolation boxes, or Nick would be beating us
>Or both
>We definitely would not be laying together under a warm blanket
>They aren’t going to take Moonglow away
>Someone has been watching us behind the one-way mirror
>I can hear them moving around
>Occasionally I pick up muffled conversation, but they’re never clear enough to make out
>Suddenly there is a disturbance in the room
>People stir, the door clicks open
>Footsteps can be heard moving out of the room and down the hall
>The door handle of our room slowly begins to turn
>Man from before slowly sticks his head in and smiles
“Hey there, have you two calm down now?”
>He speaks in a slow, gentle voice
>We nod slowly and stare at his feet
>He has changed out of his lab coat and into jeans and a bright blue shirt
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>>29433740
PRETTY LESBIAN HORSE
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>>29433790
“That good. You have nothing to be ashamed of”
>He sets the laptops on the table and begins to scratch the backs of our heads
>After a few seconds we look up at him and smile
“There we go, no judgments here. Our goal is to help you recover, if something makes you uncomfortable just let us know”
>He pulls his hands away, and steps back
“Shall we talk?”
>He gestures at the laptops
>I nod. it would be nice to talk again
“Excellent I’ll get these set up”
>He boots up the laptops and provides us with typing implements
>The same messenger program is loaded, this time it has names instead of ID numbers
>Moonglow, Lightning and Dr. Jonson
I A M S O R R Y I P A N I C E D
>Dr. Jonson smiles and holds up his hand
“You have nothing to apologies for, I’m sure there are plenty of reasons you would be afraid of that room”
>”i was more worried that you would take lightning”
“Why would you be worried about that?”
>”in the lab they would separate us”
>”yesterday was the first time there werent bars between us”
>”but he was the only physical contact I had”
>Jonson sits patiently awaiting more, when none came he spoke
“Is that what you thought, that you were back in the lab?”
>”yes”
>He gives us a sympathetic look and nods slowly
“I know you said you didn’t want to talk about the lab, but any information you can give us will help. Not just to help you, but to help the others as well”
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human becomes pone

human pone goes on a filly-fuck fiesta.
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>>29433801
>Moonglow nods, after a few moments he begins to type
>”i was alone for a long time. I think it was three months. I couldn’t talk, or write. The cage they kept me in was so small I couldn’t stand without ducking my head. The only times they let us out was if we were being used or punished.”
>He stops typing and thinks over what he’s saying
>”they brought lightning in during the night, he woke up screaming like I did. I did what I could to help calm him down. He was just like me when they brought me in. he was cold and scared and confused”
>Moonglow paused
>”I knew he was suffering, but on some level I was glad to have a companion, and that made me feel horrible, and it made every time they took him away worse because I always felt like they were punishing him for something I did”
>Jonson nodded
“How would they punish you? You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to”
If we made to much noise or struggled when they took us out of our cages they would get Nick.
“And what would Nick do?”
Usually he would shock us with a cattle prod, sometimes they let him use a bullwhip or riding crop. They only intervened once, when he broke a mare’s leg for kicking him in the face, they told him not to damage the equipment
“I see, it’s terrible that you had to go through that. Is there anything else I should know about before we continue?”
>It’s important
>Better tell him now that have him find out later
They
>He looks at me sympathetically
“It’s ok, take your time”
Castrated me
>He gives me a look of complete and utter commiseration
“That’s horrible”
>Moonglow gives me a consoling nuzzle
“It’s good that you informed me, we can provide you with hormones if you want”
>A shudder runs down my spine
>That sounds like it will involve needles
“It can be patches or skin cream if you’re worried about injection”
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>>29433823
>I nod slowly
“You’ve been through a lot, all of you. But you can’t let your fear control you. That’s what we’re here for, to help you face your fears and get your lives back together”
>”thank you”
>I nod, affirming Moonglow’s message
“Your perfectly welcome, it’d be nice to know why they did this to you though”
Morning Glory could answer that
“Morning Glory? Why would he know?”
He worked at the lab before he was a pony, he was always so nice to us
>Dr. Jonson nods
“Thank you, you’ve been a big help”
>”Could we hold on to the laptops? I would like to talk with Lightning some more”
“Yes, that can be arranged. But how about we have another go at that physical, we can do it in here if you prefer”
>I nod sheepishly
“Don’t worry, it’s just a quick look over, nothing invasive”
>He does me first
>I can’t help but make it more difficult than it needed to be
>Every time he touched me I flinched, and I consistently tried to pull away from whatever instrument he brought near me
>Moonglow continued to support me through the process, often nudging me back towards the doctor, and providing a comforting nuzzle every now and then
>Despite this Moonglow only faired marginally better when it was his turn, and spent the entire time after the eye exam with his clamped firmly shut
“All right it’s over”
>The doctor declares, stepping away from Moonglow
>Moonglow quickly pulls me into a hug
>Dr. Jonson reaches into his pockets and pulls out two more chocolates
“And for being such brave little ponies you deserve a little treat”
>We both take one
>He gather up the laptops
“I’ll show you out, these need to be checked out before you can use them though. Ok?”
>I nod to show I understand
“alright this way”
>He leads us down the hall and holds the front door for us
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>>29433814
that's pretty gay
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>>29433823
so does this mean Moonglow will cum finally cum inside Lightning
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>>29434009
Hormone "Cream"
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>>29433827
when will Straightedge get her spankings
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>>29434223
no, she needs to be paraded around in a frilly dress
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>>29434284
Frilly dress anon will never rival eggy farts anon
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>>29433729
Stop being a faggot, Anon.
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>>29431331
What happens if I kiss the red mare? That would be safe?
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>>29431904
use it on someone to turn them into a unicorn, then have them turn me into a pone
write down "everyone" before my fingers go
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>>29432613
contained, clensed, and purged
or directed to
>>>/trash/
where it belongs
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>>29433729
There's only two people writing pet stories. I don't see why that should bother you. There's plenty of other activity.
Maybe we should summon Woofr or Ranger.
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>>29434425
You become a communist pony. That would not be safe in the slightest.
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>>29434459
Good plan.
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>>29433888
Seems to work out pretty well for the two of them though.
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>>29433123
Non-autistic summary:
Man becomes the little pone mare
Pone gets abducted
Nanites are meant to make the new pone enjoy being pone, but they fail, so pone panics
Man starts training pone to be obedient pet of his own free will, to eventually be sold

Stuff happens, and then you start wanting to be the little pet mare yourself

Pone never actually gets raped, but stuff does happen and feels ensue. All ends well though.

If you're not opposed to the idea then you'll enjoy it - I wasn't really into petfaggotry before reading it, and I certainly never wanted to be the pet, I can tell your that much.
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>>29433698
does it involve gooey chocolate kisses?
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>>29434425
She would probably call you a fag since she hasn't accepted the fact that she is now a mare.

You may also get infected, as she may still be contagious but most of us would probably want that
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>>29433740
You become the pretty pony while everyone else dies of radiation poisoning. Eventually the loneliness drives you mad. It's not fair. You were pone enough at last.
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>>29434353
Why?
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I really want to be a pone
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>>29436110
I have a secret for you, You are a pone
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>>29436131
Oh, thank you for telling me, I didn't have idea.
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>>29436147
Easy mistake to make, but a dangerous one. Who knows what could happen if you tried to turn into a pony while already being one.
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>>29431331
>The hall is filled with crowds of students trying to get out of the building
>Every one avoids us as we make our way down the hall, it makes going against the flow much easer
>Several people have fallen over and begun to transform
>”They say you’re not supposed to use the elevators in emergencies, so hopefully they’ll be clear”
>After fumbling with her hooves Prof. Pone presses the call button with her horn
>A few seconds later the doors swing open, revealing an elevator packed with students
>They all back further into the elevator upon seeing us
>We stand to the side to let them out and they quickly file one by one into the hall. Hugging the far side of the wall the entire time
>As the last one leaves we quickly climb on board and the professor presses the button for the third floor
>The elevator is an older one, The reek of heavy machine oil assaults my new nose
>In place of elevator music we have a cacophony of grinding gears
>”Maybe this wasn’t a good Idea…”
“Isn’t this the one that doesn’t always open?”
>”This wasn’t a good idea”
>There’s a ding and the door opens
>A group of students stand waiting to board
>I check the level
“This is the second floor”
>The one in front speaks “Uh, we’ll take the next one”
>Prof. Pone presses the “close door” button and we continue our assent
>”Professor what do you think is going on?”
>The unicorn shrugs “I have no idea, I’m sure we’ll find out”
>The red mare looks at me
>”I’m Cri- I mean I’m Calvin, what’s your name?”
“Hi Calvin, I’m, eh, Thomas. Nice to meet you”
>For some reason saying my name felt, odd
>I had this odd urge to correct myself…
>My thoughts are disrupted by a ding from the elevator
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>>29436411
>It opens to reveal that it’s a full foot below floor level
>”Great, now this” Calvin quips
>The professor quickly climbs out
>”Come on you to, it’s only a foot”
>About chest high for us now
>I rear back and jump forward. my hooves slide a little on the yellow linoleum floor, but I’m able to pull myself up
>Calvin follows after, instinctively flapping her wings as she jumps
>The boost is all she needed to land on all fours next to us
>Our professor nods and leads us down the hallway
>This level is deserted by now, all it had where offices, and there was a fire escape on the floor above us
>We stop in front of her office, the name plate reads Dr. Moore.
>I should have known that, but I didn’t
>The inside of her office is well kept, everything is nice and organized
>A leather chair sits behind a mahogany desk, two office chairs sit in front of it
>Against the right wall are two orderly bookshelves
>Dr. Moore passes between the shelves and her desk, taking a seat in her chair
>”Make your selves comfortable, I need to make some calls”
>We take a seat in the office chairs
>I contemplate taking out my phone, but I have no way of using a touch screen at this point
>I sigh
“that’s the real tragedy here”
>Calvin looks at me
>”What is?”
“That I can’t use my phone, I’m being sarcastic of course”
>She nods
>”Normally I would agree with you, but atleast you still have your dick”
>She didn’t sound to convening though
>Dr. Moore struggles with the phone, trying to hold it between her head and body
>Eventually she gives up trying to hold it and just lays it on the table
>She calls several numbers, unfortunately she kept speaker phone off
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>>29436418
>I start to play idly with my new ears
>They can turn back and forth, go flush up against my head
>It’s strangely enjoyable to just wiggle them back and fourth
>Calvin seems to be having fun preening her wings
>After a few moments Dr. Moore hangs up the phone
>”That was far less informative than I hoped. They said shelter in place, apparently no one know what’s going on”
>”So we’re stuck here until when exactly?” Calvin asks
>”Until they say we can go, don’t worry I’ll share my snacks if you get hungry”
“Mind if I look out the window?”
>She nods at me “Feel free”
>I step around her desk and look out
>A few stragglers are still running around, I notice several congregations of confused ponies
>There are several broken windows, and clothes littler the side walks
>If I didn’t know better I’d say it was one hell of a party
>Calvin joins me
>”What do you think is going to happen? Can they cure us?”
“I don’t know. I mean I feel fine now. What if the change is permanent?”
>Dr. Moore chimes in “They’ll figure something out, I’m sure”
>As though seeking a diversion she promptly pulls a bottle of water from the drawer
>”Are either of you thirsty?”
>Without waiting for a response she turns and begins to pull the lid off
>The bottle does not want to cooperate, sliding between her hooves as she twists it
>”Hold still”
>Her horn begins to give off a ghostly blue light
>The bottle glows as well and stays in place as she pulls the cap off
>”There weeeee-“
>She stares at the bottle now floating just in front of her face
>The glow quickly dissipates and the bottle falls to the desk, spilling everywhere
>There is a moment of silence as we process this new development
>Dr. Moore closes her eyes and concentrates
>Light begins to dance around her horn as the bottle rolls about on the desk
>After a few attempts she manages to stand it back up
>We all sit there, mystified at what we just witnessed
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>>29436420
Is this taking place in the same universe as starscribe's casualties?
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>>29436447
Basically what I was thinking too. It's like the same thing.
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>>29436469
No, I never read Casualties. There was just a cough going around my school, and I though "Wouldn't it be nice if this was the pony flu"
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Would you sell your soul to be a pony?
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>>29436411
>>”I’m Cri- I mean I’m Calvin, what’s your name?”
What was she going to say?

>>29436420
I'm liking this.
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>>29436666
Not today, pony Satan.
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>>29436666
I feel like if I said yes it would actually happen

yes
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>>29436909
If we could take your mind and transfer it into a machine, the closest thing we could get you to being the little pony, would you accept?

But would it really be you, beneath that array of wires and metal? Or an imitation, a mere copy of your old self?

Would there still be a Ghost in the shell?
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>>29437126
That could be cool. If being a pony doesn't work out you can always reconfigure into something else.
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>>29434918
Soon (probably)
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>>29436487
It would suck if your whole time as a pony was spent being ill.
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>>29427197

>He looks at you with a mixture of awe and incomprehension
"I'm glad you're here, Matt."
>He slowly sits down on the spot, his back resting against the door
>"… How?"
"Talked with a suspicious guy yesterday who may or may not have been a god of trickery. Woke up like this. That's all I know."
>He moves a hand on his forehead with a half-hearted laugh
>"I knew you were in some trouble, but man… we don't see each other for a couple of days and you've become a horse! Anon, I…"
"I'm am NOT a horse."
>The words are out of your mouth before you've even realized you spoke them
>The authority in your voice surprises even you
>You know the truth in those words, though. You were so much more than that
>Your interruption catches him off guard
>"Believe me, that's what I'm seeing. A small, grey horse."
>To you, it almost feels like an insult
>After all those years, even your closest friend doesn't call you by your title?
"I… am Queen Umbra."

>He shakes his head with a sigh
>"What, is it a character from that pony show? Damnit Anon, you know I've never been into that."
>… a character?
>You realize what you were thinking just a second ago
>You open your mouth in surprise
>This is getting to your head, more than you thought it did
>You are Anon
>Umbra is a character. She doesn't exist
>Well, she technically does now, but…
>It's you
>… no, it's not! You just look like…
>Gah, this is too weird
>Your concern must be visible, as Matt sits up and takes a step towards you
>"Hey, what's the matter?"
>You take a deep breath, trying to gather your thoughts
"Nothing. I… this is all just confusing. I'm not sure what to think anymore."
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>>29437992


>He gives you a smile as you sit up and tap your head with a hoof
>"Yeah, this is pretty far out. I can't even begin to understand how or why this is happening."
>"But you know what? There's one thing I know for sure. My friend needs me, and I'll do whatever I can to help. You can trust me on that."
>You look up at him, and return his smile
"That's why I called you, and not anyone else."
>As he rubs a hand against your shoulder, a single thought warms your heart
>You are lucky to have a friend so devoted to his Queen

>You sigh as you sit up
>Before you can even try figuring this out, you had a few more urgent things to do
"Matt? I haven't eaten anything since the morning. Could you give me a hand with that?"
>He looks perplexed for a moment before speaking
>"Oh yeah, those legs don't look practical for that. Sure, I'll go get something."
>You mouth a quick word of thanks before walking towards the couch, while he heads for the kitchen
>You lie down comfortably, relieved by the knowledge that food was finally coming
>"The fuck happened to your cereal, Anon? It's everywhere!"
>Damn, you'd forgotten about that
"Oh, it just fell. You should probably clean that."
>He pokes his head out of the doorway
>He looks clearly annoyed
>"You could at least ask nicely, you know?"
>You smile awkwardly
>That must have slipped your mind
"Err, please?"
>He sighs before returning inside the room
"Could you, you know, hurry up though? I've been waiting for ages for some food."
>You hear him mutter something to himself, but you can't quite understand what
>Hey, you've just been turned into a pony, and a Queen at that
>You think you're in the right to ask for some faster service
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>>29438157
Matt needs to learn to accept his new role
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>>29438157
This is glorious.
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>>29438157
Matt needs to learn that he's Umbra's concubine bitch
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>>29438157
HAREM
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>>29436420
>After a moment Calvin gives it a tentative poke
“Do it again!”
>The unicorn shakes her head
>”T-that shouldn’t be possible”
>”Could it be magnets or something?” Calvin asked
>”No, Magnets don’t work like that”
“What about the weak atomic force?”
>She shoots me a harsh look
“Hey, It could work”
>”What if it ionizes the air around it, and then moves it with magnets?”
>Dr. Moore contemplates this
>”There should be a temperature change if that happens”
>She looks at me
>”Thomas, stick your nose to it”
“Why?”
>”Because I don’t have a thermometer, and you suggested the weak atomic force. Now hope your right and let me know if your nose burns”
“But what about radiation?”
>She shrugs “A meter probably won’t make a difference in that regard”
>”This seems kind of harsh”
>Dr. Moore chuckled “Oh relax, he should be fine. It didn’t burn the plastic, I just want to see if there’s any temperature change”
>I hesitantly press my nose to the bottle
>After a moment it starts to glow
>”Anything?”
“My nose feels kind of… tingly, not temperature change though”
>The glowing stops
>”Hmm… Maybe it’s electrostatics…”
>”They would have the stuff to test for that wouldn’t they?”
>”Yes, down in one of the labs. But they said shelter in place”
“But Sciences!” I quip
>”Can wait until things settle down. Trust me, no one wants to figure out what this is more than me”
>She levitates the bottle and divides what remains into the cups
>”Have a drink, it will probably be a while”
>She sets the cup on the floor in front of me
>I contemplate how to drink it, no fingers, holding it between my hooves sounds like a recipe for disaster, and I’m far too proud to lap at it like a dog
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>>29438740
>After a moment I hold the rim in my teeth, seal the bottom with my lower lip, and tilt my head back
“I wish I had a shot of whisky”
>Calvin nods “I could go for a drink myself”
>”None of that here, this is a dry campus”
>I wonder how she would feel about the flask in my backpack
>A thought occurs to me
“Can ponies even drink alcohol?”
>There’s just a trace of panic in my voice
>The two mares ponder this for a moment
>”Considering that we are not normal ponies that question seems superfluous”
“Ok, can we still drink alcohol?”
>Dr Moore shrugs “I guess we’ll find that out latter”
>”Yeah later, when we’re in the internment camp getting vivisected”
>We both look at Calvin
“What are talking about?”
>”Come on, infectious or not do you really think they’ll just let us walk away?”
“If we’re not carriers they have to, we’re US citizens”
>Calvin gives an indignant look
>”We are three foot tall talking horses, do you really think they’ll treat us like citizens. Hell we’ll be lucky if they treat us like humans”
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>>29438748
they should be sent to horse training classes so they can become good ponies
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gay coffee horse tf when
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>>29439284
This general has already been taken over by petfag refugees from Anonfilly general. Now you're saying you want to infest this place with gay shit too? Fuck off /hhh/. No one wants you here, RGRE, Guardthread, or even bat general.
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>>29439298
it's not gay if he wears a dress
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>>29439253
>inb4 they are trained to be the good pet ponies
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>>29438748
Ponies deserve their rights. And their alcohol. I hope they aren't going to be treated too poorly.

>>29439253
All ponies are good ponies.
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>>29439964
but not all ponies know how to be pretty
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>>29440021
>Implying not all ponies are pretty
What are you fucking retarded
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>>29440103
some are just unlucky
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>>29436666
Absolutely in a sec
Also nice quads
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>>29434345
eggy farts?
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RETARD HORSE WHEN
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Just read this green and I have to say it's pretty great
http://pastebin.com/hUM8qKYK

Not a huuuuuge fan of the last bit of the continuation green, but the first 70% of it is really nice and cuddly. I want to be a pony pretty bad after reading these.
http://pastebin.com/LkW3Kkc5
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>>29432135
>>29432101
Update when?
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>>29440397
Never. Transform only into smart ponies.
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>>29440379
Do not summon the creature
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>stallion tries to make a potion to transform himself into human.
>it starts to work but reverts back into pone after changing only halfway.
>except he's a mare now
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>>29441412
>Zecora intentionally gave him the wrong ingredients.
>She promises she'll help him turn back... eventually.
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>>29440879
I hope Samsa comes back one day.
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>>29436131
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In case a writefriend needs assistance on what horses can and can't eat, here is some help.

equinerecline . org/fruits . html
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>>29440118
If I told her she's pretty would she be willing to turn me into a pony?
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>>29442385
I think tomatoes have been consumed on the show so this probably doesn't apply to cartoon ponies.
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>>29438748
I finaly made a PasteBin for this one
http://pastebin.com/RFLTBKjP
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>>29444166
Better late than never.
Added to the doc, http://derpy.me/PonyTF
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>>29440879
Oh gosh how have I never seen this before. This is so good.
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>>29442648
Yes, but it might not be the best one to become
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>>29440397
>>29440976
he tries
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>>29446372
Anonfilly is not for hitting.
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>>29446448
what if she likes being hit
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>>29446372
I'd become Twilight. Even if it means putting up with that little shit.
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>>29446524
Anon pls
Do not fuel my fetish about being domestically abused
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>>29446593
Filly is for punching
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>>29446448
>>29446524
Anon does not react well to being hit on.
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>>29446676
just feed her treats till she learns to love it
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>>29446690
don't overfeed the filly
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>>29446757
>>29446372
DoubleP is that you?
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>>29438157

>After a little while, he steps back in the room, holding a plate with one hand and a glass with the other
>"There wasn't much in your kitchen, so I had to make-do with what I had."
>He sets down the plate in front of you before joining you on the couch
>Some diced potatoes one one side, and grapes on the other
>Simple, but you're too hungry to really think about that
"This shall do. Thank you."
>You're starting to like the sound of your voice
>Melodic, elegant, but carrying the mark of authority no matter what you say
>Keeping your head level, you gaze down at the food in your plate
>Your horn feels more "connected" to your mind right now
>Maybe it's the rest, the hunger, or the enjoyable way your friend was serving you
>Er, helping you
>In any case, you feel compelled to try your magic again
>It takes you much less effort to concentrate this time
>The glow has barely formed around one of the grapes that it is already shifting towards you
>It comes cleanly off its branch, and you waste no time bringing it to your mouth
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>>29446875

>As you chew on the delicious, juicy fruit, you notice Matt is giving you an odd look
"What? Is it the magic?"
>He rolls his eyes before answering
>"You know what? This situation is already weird enough. I shouldn't even be surprised by details like that."
>You give a bitter laugh
"Guess so. Interesting part is that I could barely control it this morning, and it's pretty smooth just now."
>He seems to pause in thought for a moment as you float another piece of food to your lips
>"Say, in the show… that 'Umbra' character, is she… powerful?"
>That definitely gets your attention
>You smirk, nodding slowly to him
"Oh yes, powerful doesn't even begin to describe it…"
>He snorts
>"That much?"
"She ruled over an empire that even the Princesses feared."
>That was technically Sombra, but you don't care about that little detail
"And you know what? I certainly feel some power within me. Like some spark of potential just waiting to be harnessed… just within my reach."
>He seems a little surprised by your words, giving you an awkward chuckle
>"That's good then… should make finding the guy who changed you easier, right?"
>Oh…
>That was your intent, wasn't it?
>Some part of you almost feels upset
>How could you let such an opportunity go to waste?!
>…no, you've already thought about this
>You'll do whatever you can to find Discord, and you'll get him to change you back
>That's the best course of action

>…Right?
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>>29446875
>potatoes
not again
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>>29446888
Why give up all that glorious power before achieving its true potential?
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>>29446757
Can you really call her a filly when she's a recoloured mare?
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>>29447332

"Matt, would you grab the comb from the bathroom and fix my mane and tail?"
>He cocks his head to the side
>"Hm? Since when did you start caring about your hair?"
"It's just that I can't see behind my back. Makes keeping my appearance quite hard."
>"Really? I mean, it doesn't look so-"
>You press a hoof on his thigh, cutting his sentence
"Matt. I'd really appreciate it if you went to the bathroom… picked up that comb… and took care of my hair for a while."
>You lean towards him, your muzzle only inches away from his face
"Could you do that for me?"
>A tingling sensation passes through your horn
>For a split second, you think you saw something flicker in his eyes
>"Yes… I'll do that right now."
>Much better
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/r/ing Lyra/broodmare tf
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/r/ing anon turning into a pony while secluded somewhere (camping, hiking on a mountain, etc)
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>>29436666
You're not fooling anyone, uber-satan.

>>29437126
Yes, fucking niggers, that would still be me and I'd have no qualms about going through with it. I can't understand all the cunts who yell "muh ethical dilemma!" when faced with this situation.
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>>29447985
Have fun
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>>29435543
I hope so
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>>29447346
Why you deleted the previous post?
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>>29448418
>you will never shove a DS charger into a newly transformed pony's butt and control their every thought and action
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>>29440879
I just finished this.

My horse feels haven't been this strong since I first started frequenting ptfg back in 2013.
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>>29430588
Please tell me we will be getting more of the cute informend consent pet ponpon
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>>29449455
I mean if you guys want more
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>>29447346
Oh dear. Poor Matt.
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>>29447346
HAREM
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>>29449399
Wait so did I just waste the best story as the first story I ever read from here? Now I'm gonna have unrealistic expectations when I start the next one ._.
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>>29449861
Well there are plenty of great ones, but most are long and super shallow, or are really really good but never get finished. I suppose my feelings for it were subjective though, as that story checked off a lot of things I personally love.
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>>29449904
I'm mainly into the whole pet thing with a loving and caring owner that knows you know what they're saying and that you can talk. Maybe they don't know right away, but eventually they figure it out (just like that story)

It's pretty specific but if you know of any good ones from the Doc or somewhere else, I'd love 'em.
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>>29449804
Definitely
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>>29449804
If you feel like there's more story to tell, then absolutely.
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>>29447346
Very good stuff. Great work.
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>>29448418
>So we plug dis here dingle dangle into robocop's ear and it let us take gander with the screener scope here and see about what makes 'm chooch
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>>29450326
Borat say rape okay sometime
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>>29447346
>>29449098
Aw fuck, knew I had messed something up

Corrected version:

>You do your best not to think about all this
>After taking a moment to explain what happened yesterday in more detail, you keep chattering with Matt, occasionally interrupting the conversation to enjoy a piece of potato or grape
>Now that you roughly control it, levitation is becoming your new favourite thing
>It doesn't take long for the food to run out
>You give a satisfied sigh as the last grape disappears down your throat
>"So? What do you think we should do?"
>You bring a hoof to your chin in thought
"It's no use looking for Discord right now. I know he'll stay to admire his work, but I doubt we'll find him so soon after he's done it. It's better to wait until tomorrow."
>Truth is, you don't mind waiting a little longer before beginning your search
"I'm going to need you here, though."
>He hesitates for a second before answering
>"Sure, I guess I can't really leave you there. I'll pick up a few things at my place before tomorrow, then I can stay until this is sorted out."
>You nod briefly
>There was still the question of what to do with the rest of the day
>Say… wasn't there something you were having trouble with earlier this morning?

"Matt, would you grab the comb from the bathroom and fix my mane and tail?"
>He cocks his head to the side
>"Hm? Since when did you start caring about your hair?"
"It's just that I can't see behind my back. Makes keeping my appearance quite hard."
>"Really? I mean, it doesn't look so-"
>You press a hoof on his thigh, cutting his sentence
"Matt. I'd really appreciate it if you went to the bathroom… picked up that comb… and took care of my hair for a while."
>You lean towards him, your muzzle only inches away from his face
"Could you do that for me?"
>A tingling sensation passes through your horn
>For a split second, you think you saw something flicker in his eyes
>"Yes… I'll do that right now."
>Much better
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>>29440879
God damn why did I do this to myself again. I thought I was over the horse feels. Fucking top-notch.
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>>29451821
Obedient. He'll make a good minion.
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>You become a pony

>But you're Lyra, and now want to become a human
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>>29452681
>Oscillate between human and pony form forever.
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More lucky when
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>>29452770
>you've actually been doing this your whole life and you haven't realized.
THIS IS THE ONLY WAY I COULD FIND TO REACH YOU. YOU NEED TO REMEMBER. REMEMBER BEFORE THE NEXT TRANSFORMATION.
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>>29451695
focus, you fuck
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>>29436666
Yes satan, I will do anything to be the pony.
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>>29450326
jesus fuck that face
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>>29452681
>>29447433
broodmare Lyra when
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>>29452851
Why break a beautiful cycle?
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>>29438748
I'm liking this, keep up the good work!
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>>29454068
Neat
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>>29453562
But she's a lesbian.
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>>29454342
It makes the rape even better
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>>29454342
>this meme is stale

Although, All the better to make her learn to love it.
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>>29454371
>Lyra swaps bodies with Anon, then chases him around armed with a spray bottle.
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>>29453206
Would you become the demonic pony?
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>>29455176
Would it be a cute demonic pony or like, a creepy ugly one?
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>>29432101

>"Lucky? Are you upstairs?"
>Shoot,she's coming up the stairs!
>You panic, and the pencil in your mouth breaks
>You gag on the shards of wood and lead in your mouth
>The door opens and Steph sees you at her laptop
>You flail desperately at the keys with your hooves
>"No, bad pony! You'll break it!"
>You manage to type her a message:
"km a jjmasmn kmmsxd wjnh"
>She picks you up and puts you on the floor, before examing her laptop
>"Hmm, did I leave this on?" she wonders aloud
>You're immensely frustrated
>You try to clamber back onto the bed
>She sees this as a sign that you want attention and starts to stroke you
>No, for the love of all that is holy please understand what's going on
>"Hahaha, it's like you were typing! Did you see me typing this morning? Clever girl!"
>You want to scream
>You look at Steph with as much desperate intensity as you can muster
>She giggles and boops your snoot
>But you're not in the mood for it
>You were so close to blowing everything wide open, to making her understand
>And now she's back to coddling you like a baby
>Her cheerful obliviousness just makes it worse
>You can't even growl at her
>Steph goes for another boop
>You bite her finger
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>>29455416
>>You bite her finger

Shit just got real
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>>29455416
Oh shit lucky why
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>>29455416
>You regret it immediately
>It's not hard enough to draw blood-you pulled back the instant you felt your teeth meet flesh
>But she audibly yelps in surprise and pain and jumps away from you, clutching her finger
>Then she looks down at you, with a hint of tears in her eyes
>She doesn't seem angry. Just kind of sad and disappointed.
>It resonates with you, somehow.
>You feel rotten, your anger and frustration giving way to shame
>You feel your ears droop and you lower your head, looking away
>You're surprised when she gingerly approaches you
>She coos your name gently, slowly
>"Luucky....Luucky....hey girl..."
>It has a soothing effect
>She reaches her hand out again. The same one you bit
>You don't move, don't react. You just keep looking down at the floor from the edge of the bed
>She touches your mane, and slowly strokes it
>"I'm not mad" she says, quietly
>"Mommy's not mad at you"
>Your throat hurts. You swallow and blink.
>You let her pick you up and situate you on her lap
>She's very quiet now, still stroking your hair, ruminating
>You both spend some minutes thinking things over. Eventually she speaks
>"You know...the shelter guy did say...you might be like this..." she says, slowly.
>Like she's giving voice to her thoughts
>She continues to stroke as she goes on
>"People can be so mean to their pets...I don't get it. I really don't."
>No, you really don't. This isn't what you think it is...
>You don't remember much about the kennel. You were out of your mind at the time, either chemically or emotionally, or a combination
>You wonder how much they know
>"It's ok now, Lucky. I'm going to love you every day. You deserve it."
>You let her pet you for a good long time
>In a way, you really are lucky
>You'd hate to have anyone else own you.
>Steph was no Sherlock Holmes, but she had the heart of an angel
>You'd figure out something...she'd want to help you if she knew.
>You'd just have to be patient for now
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>>29455332
A mass of pure edge
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>>29455731

Pastebin updated: http://pastebin.com/P3hFyJBK

I think I'll call that the end of Part 1. Glad to see that people like it, people posting about stuff I made is always amazingly cool
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>>29455733
fug wrong pic
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>>29455759
I love this, Steph is an Angel and I'm looking forward to her finding out about lucky.

This is a great story
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>>29455733
Can I at least have a vagina?
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>>29455759
when will they scissor
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>>29455787
It's a bit used, but yeah
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>>29455971
I'll take it
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>>29455768
I want to be the edgy pony
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>>29456276
I want to be edged as a pony
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>>29456474
That doesn't sound too bad.
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>>29456474
That's my fetish
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>>29456474
I want to be raped as as pony
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>>29456605
Why?
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>>29456644
I don't know
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>>29456682
Alright then
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>>29455416
Shame that attempt didn't work out.

>>29455759
It's a highly cute story. Looking forward to part two.
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>>29455759
Hope you continue this soon. It's really cute and entertaining to read.
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Sorry that things took so long. My internet situation is finally sorted so I'll see about updating later today.
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>The five of you continued through the halls until reaching the office. Tin, Moon, and I wearing a shit eating grin the whole time.
>She's got us in some position of power over things now. We could use this to break out at some point.
>That being said, Glitter was still frazzled and trying to compose herself. Poor thing could barely walk, let alone fly.
>We finally reached the office of the sun, where Celestia sat down at a desk and sighed.
>"You three owe me quite a bit for this. I hope we can at least make some agreement after this is all finished."
>We chuckle to ourselves. Tin finally speaks up, "All we ask is to leave. Is that really too much of an issue?"
>"Yes. You know exactly why."
"So how do you plan to go about this 'celebration' anyways?"
>"You tell me anon. You've been such a great help with everything else so far, you might as well come up with these plans as well."
>I stop and think for a moment. The facility is pretty big so there's a lot of room for anything at this point. Then again, outside still sounds like a fun idea.
>"Well things already look like a city, why not try doing something to make it like a carnival?"
>We all turned to Moonlight. He almost never said anything and kinda just did his own thing while being in on our plans.
>"Sun themed too, but there's gonna be a special bit about it as well."
>Celestia looked confused. She already seemed to like the idea thankfully.
>"You're going to have to raise the sun."
>Tin and I both looked confused. That's impossible, even with bullshit magic. Warden Celestia, however, seemed to understand. At least that's what we gathered from the worry on her face.
>Linda finally entered the conversation at this point. "What did I miss?"
"We're planning the celebration, remember?"
>"The Summer Sun Celebration! Right!"
>That's not what she called it. What is that?
>"I'm so honored that you'd let us help organize that! I can't wait to see you raise the sun in front of everypony!"
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>>29457477

>You and Tin looked at Moonlight. He just nodded. Whoever he was before, he knew his shit.
>"Yes, neither can I," sun warden chuckled. "Now, how about I let you and Moonlight here sort out the decorations. Hotblood, Seashine, how about you two help with the events."
>You could see Tin cringe at the name. Knowing him, you should do the talking while Glitter's here.
"We'd be delighted to."
>"Wonderful. How about you two stay and discuss this with me. Team Decorations, I'll provide everything you'll need. Just list it out for me first, please."
>Moon simply nods while Glitter starts flying around happily. The two eventually leave the room and just the three of you are here to talk.
"So what kind of events do you have in mi-"
>"I have no idea. They never go over this in the show. You two are going to give ideas because otherwise, we're gonna disappoint a lot of people."
>Tin sat on his haunches and folded his arms. "And what's in it for us? Keep in mind, we could spill the secret very easily."
>"I can't let you go outside, you know why. As for anything else, well I do have magic. Think of something and I'll probably be able to do it for you."
>He sighed. "Fine. We'll be thinking of sun themed everything until then."
"I want to see some of the other facilities."
>The both of them look at you in disbelief. It was a stupid request, but curiosity is a powerful thing.
"I know there are others, you said it yourself. I want to see what they're like."
>"Anon, you know full well that's even less possible than just leaving."
>"Actually..."
>You both turn to Celestia. What does she have planned?
>"If none of the higher ups found out, we could do this. How does the Crystal Camp sound?"
"Why not do a circuit around all of them?"
>"No."
"Fine, crystal prison then."
>"Glad we could make an agreement." She walked up and opened the door. "Now you two go and make more plans. I need to call a few people."
>With that, you both walk out. Not to plot.
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>>29457698
okay i wanted to see about getting an update out and I'm a bit tapped on ideas atm. hopefully the next update(s) won't have such a large gap between them.
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>>29457698
Nice update, looking forward to more.
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>>29457708
doc updated as well with fixed typos and grammar such as "Now to plot" instead of "Not to plot.
http://derpy.me/Ngh5I
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I want to be the pretty hand horse
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I want to be a mute pony and live with other ponies in a large open pasture where a nice western family takes care of us all like they would regular horses.
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>>29457961
and the Dad forces you to be bred so he can sell them
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>>29432077
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>>29457982
b-but I don't want to sell my foals ;_;
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>>29458149
The best part is, you don't get a choice
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>>29458240
No reason he cant be both
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>>29458175
I'm okay with this.
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>>29458277
>ywn be the pretty mare
>ywn live on the happy farm
>ywn be strapped into the breeding rack as a stallion has his way with you
>ywn be pregnant with the little foal
>ywn feel the little hoovesy kick inside you
>ywn know the joy of giving birth to a healthy little pony
>ywn nurse your qt little foal, taking pride in the life you have brought into this world
>ywn have them taken from you, and loaded on to a truck
>ywn see them again

and then it repeats next year
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>>29457698
Nice one.

>>29457840
That makes more sense.
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>>29458149
>ywn feed your foal with your fat horse tits
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>>29458334
Really, I would love to know when this is ironic and when a real fetish.
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>>29458568
>he doesn't want to be a pretty broodmare
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>>29458613
No, I want to be a filly who everyone pets and receive compliments for being cute.
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>>29458629
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>>29458568
I would be fine with this up until they take my foal from me. I'd even be happy with getting bred every year, just so long as I can watch them all grow up big and strong.
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>>29458678
Exactly. I'd much rather be a caring mother than a broodmare.
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>>29458927
Could be nice.

>>29458678
Every year seems excessive. One or two foals would be the right amount.
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>>29458927
>ywn be the loving mother of two adorable little foals ;_;
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>>29458678
Mom goals. What a gal~
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>>29458678
I want to give pony rides to kids
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I want to adopt new little foals
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>>29460092
I want to be one of those little foals.
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>>29459885
Someone should draw anonpony giving pony rides to kids.
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>>29458678
Those birth control spells aren't going to help you have foals.
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>>29460092
>>29460187
I want a story about the transformed mare who has gained some experience in being the pony and now takes care of the new foals.
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>>29460187
Why would anyone want a foal that's was an educated grown human? That seems odd. Unless you had memory wiped.
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guys i'm sick and have been sick 5ever, does this mean i've finally caught the little filly flu
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>>29460974
Because it's hilarious seeing small ponies trying to act like adult humans.
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>>29460974
I want to be the motherly mare and help a recently transformed filly adjust to her new life
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>>29461190
Are you growing hair in odd places?
is your hair changing to odd colors?
are you finding your hands or toes oddly stiff?
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>>29431235
I'm a very silly bug
Forgot to pul out delivery, and instead fell to naps.
Delivery in a few mins.
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>>29462062
I was starting to wonder where you'd gone.
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>>29462062
Your arrival caused some heads turning, but when you explain your motives, you’re promptly taken up to the roof office.
“How did it happen?” You ask and look at Am.
“Wuzi decided to take eight pills and Russian Vodka. He, well, she is now drunk beyond all recognition.”
“Where is the little drunk horse?” You ask and Am shudders as he sees Juri enter the office. “Things gotten complicated, we’ll be dealing in business.”
“Understood, He’s on the table.”
You look to the table and see a snoring white and grey ball of hairs snoring peacefully.
The words “Peaceful cannot be used to explain all the carnage currently.
The office is just, trashed.
The books lay in disarray, expensive looking cabinets broken, their glass doors shattered by a shoe, or a bottle.
“Jesus Christ, how much damage can one mare make?”
“She ran around bucking everything, then threw shoes around, clothes, everything in range.
“Why?”
“You ask her.”
You walk to the mare sleeping on the table, and scratch the pony behind the ears.
You hear happy grumbles and you get a drowsy, drunk look.
Said look is quickly changed with full alert.
“Wuzi? Why did you do that?”
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>>29462226
“The mare of the table puts and makes the saddest and the sorriest look at you. She then hugs your hand and arm which you used to scratch her behind the ear.
“I’m sorry, Doe! I-I sold you out!”
“To the Russians?” you ask, and tilt your head.
“Yes, my business was taking water, and we were out of money, and after the jewels, Juri put up a bounty of two million dollars on anything that could lead to the culprits.”
You look to Juri behind you, and he nods.
“I did. You basically took my laundry machine for dirty money out. I did not take to that lightly.”
“And you sold us out?” you ask and look to the now slightly sobbing mafia boss on the table.
“N-No! Just you! I sold you for keeping so many people employed and fed!”
“A greater good?” you ask as you withdraw your scratching hand. “And you got regrets.”
“Y-yes, I did, and I see now it was a mistake.”
“It is okay.” You say and sigh, and continue scratching the mare with your healthy hand.
“Just don’t go around drinking and eating pills next time, okay?”
“O-Okay..” Wuzi seemed to calm down.
She then looks at herself, almost like looking at every fiber of her being.
“I’m in no shape or sense to run a firm.” She then looks at you. “John doe, could you run the local triad, until you find a way to fix me?”
“Uh, no, you’re just drunk! You’ll be fine.”
“Doe, I’m a horse.”
“But you know how to do this, I don’t”
“Well you have fingers, and I have the knowledge…”
“You want me to be your hands?”
“Yes, I do.”
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>>29462245
You sigh.
“I’ll think about it”

And that is it for this sunday.
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>>29462294
Nice update
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>>29462062
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>>29462345
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>>29462345
>>29462363
top-tier shitposting
oh boy wonder which of us did it
what a mystery
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>>29454068
Thank you so much, sorry for taking so long on this update

>>29438748
>There’s panic in her voice
>”Please Calvin, calm down”
>”No! I want to go home. I want to go home and go to bed and”
>She chokes up, tears streaming down her face
>”I don’t want to be a mare, I just don’t…”
>She degenerates into sobbing
“Calvin?”
>She lays down on the floor and continues to cry
>I move closer to her
“Calvin you’ll make it through this, we’l-“
>She suddenly throws herself around me, suddenly pulling me into a hug
>It takes me by surprise, but I return her embrace and pat her back with my hoof
“There, there. It’s going to be alright”
>She leans into me and cries into my shoulder
“We’ll make it through this”
>Fuck, I suck at comforting people
“It will all be fine”
>Generic reassurance here
>I decide to quit talking and just hold on to her
>To my surprise Dr. Moore joins us
>It’s difficult to read her face, but she’s definitely stressed
>We continue to hold Calvin quietly until she calms back down
>After a while she stops and sniffs
>”T-thank you” she says in a quiet voice
>Dr. Moore pats her back
>”It’s ok, out of all of us you’ve changed the most. But we will get through this, together”
>I give an affirming nod
>Calvin eases out of the group hug
>”I’d like to rest for a little if that’s ok”
>Dr. Moore smiles
>”Given what we’ve all gone through I’d say some rest isn’t a bad Idea. It’s not like we have anywhere to go”
>Calvin nods and shifts onto her side, resting her head on the floor
>Dr. Moore climbs into her chair and try’s to make herself comfortable
>After a moment she settles into a position with her head on one arm rest and her hind legs protruding under the other
>”Are you going to sleep?”
“Maybe in a little”
>Now’s my chance, I just need to wait for them to nod off, then all the whisky is mine
>”Ok, wake me if anything happens”
“Will do”
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>>29460974
Who wouldn't want to be a adorable little foal?
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>>29462585
Someone who wants to be a mom
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>>29462363
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>>29462677
Stop shitposting you undignified faggot
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>>29462677
At least get the new picture.
: )
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>>29462579
Poor Calvin.
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>>29462579
When will Calvin get rutted
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>>29462694
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>>29462793
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>>29462846
the best part is noone out of our weird clique thing will get any of this.
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>>29462677
it's too late for regrets
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>>29462585
Green is not an adorable colour.
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>>29462868
for you
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>>29462868
Looks white to me.
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>>29462868
I want to bully anonfilly for being ugly
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>>29462226
>eight pills
An excessive dose. That's four permanent ponies.
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>>29463014
That's not very friendly of you.
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>>29461850
Is there any cure?
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>>29464258
yes
becoming the pone
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>Be in class
>My hair is way to long, it's getting in my eyes
>I had a hair cut a couple of weeks ago, how is it so long already?
>I swear it's changing color as well
>it's getting lighter, still brown but not the dark brown it used to be
>A large strip is lighter still, almost a cream color
>I shake my head to get the bangs out of my face
>For some reason it feels really nice
>It continues longer than would be considered "Normal"
>"hey, that feel good"
"Huh?"
>I turn and look at them
>It's the guy from the other day, he gave me his coffee because he was about to go into a lab
"I'm sorry what?"
>"You where shaking your head, did it feel good"
>this is slightly embarrassing
"Oh, I was just getting it out of my eyes. I need a hair cut"
>He nods and grins
>Oh god, what was in that coffee?
>Unsettled, I turn back to the front
>As soon as the lecture is over I rush out
>That guy was...
>Rather handsome actually
>And that coffee he gave me was pretty good
>What am I thinking? I'm not gay, and I prefer tea.
>...fuck, I'm going to go ask him about the coffee
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>>29465018
Continue
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>>29465018
Please continue this. Very interesting so far.
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>>29465018
>It takes me awhile to track him down
>Finally I see him, sitting in a coffee shop
>Of coarse, he would be here
>He sees me coming
>"Hey there, I was hoping to talk with you after class"
>Why am I doing this, I should turn around and leave
"Sorry about that, I had something to do..."
>I glance around nervously
"Is this where you got that coffee the other day?"
>He grins wildly
>"So did you like it?"
"Yeah it was really good, where did you get it"
>"Oh it's a special blind, if you want I have some back at my place"
"uhh..."
>I should say no, and probably call the cops
"Sure"
>Stupid, stupid, stupid
>"Great, come with me"
>He leads me out the door and into his car
>This will end in rape, and possibly murder
>He get's on a road leading out of town
>I should get out, no coffee is worth this
>"So, how do you feel about the midterm?"
"Oh, I feel like I'm prepared. how about you?"
>He shrugs and smiles
>"You've made it kind of difficult for me to focus in class"
"I-i'm so sorry, I'll try to keep the head shaking to a minimum"
>He chuckles
>That's not what he meant, and I damn well know it
>I stare straight forward for the rest of the trip
>We're about fifteen minutes out of town when he pulls off the highway
>after about five miles of back road he pulls up a large drive way
>He has a decent sized house, three floors, plantation style
>I may not be raped?
"Nice house"
>"Thanks, it was my dads?"
"...was?"
>"Yeah he's dead now, never knew my mom"
"I'm sorry to hear that, mind if I ask what your dad did?"
>"He was an entrepreneur, had his hand in all kinds of stuff. He was working on getting this coffee imported to the US when he died"
"Oh, I'm sorry if I'm imposing"
>He sets a hand on my leg
>"You're fine, I didn't mean to drag you down with my family history. Please, join me for coffee. It gets lonely out here"
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>>29451821
Sorry for no updates. Rough days. Will try to write something tomorrow
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I want to be the pretty Russian trap horse
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>>29465362
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>>29465362
Well this guy's clearly not to be trusted.
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>>29465362
>He parks in the garage
>I can't help but notice he doesn't unlock the car until the garage door is shut
>we enter through the mudroom
>"Please, take off your shoes before you go in"
>I do as instructed
"So you live alone?"
>"Yeah, been that way for two years now. Make your self comfortable, I'll go get the coffee"
>He disappears into the kitchen, leaving me alone in his living room
>I should run
>I should go, get my shoes back on and run the fuck away
>Fuck I should call someone at least
>I take out my phone
>My finger hovers just over the "call" button
>If nothing else I should let some one know where I am
"Ehh"
>I slip the phone back into my pocket
>Why?
>I sit down on the couch
>Why am I doing this?
>Why am I smiling?
>Why do I want coffee so bad?
>Why do I want him to fuck me?
>...
>I want him to fuck me
>Coffee first, fuck second
>...
>Well, I guess he can't rape me now
>I sit there and wait for him to come back
>After a few more minutes he comes back with a tray
>It has a pot of coffee, cream and sugar, and one coffee cup
>"I'm glad to see you stuck around"
"Oh... Why would I leave?"
>He chuckles
>"You're easy to read. If you're not comfortable with this, I can drive you back to town. No hard feeling"
>I take a moment to maul this over
"What's in the coffee?"
>"At the moment, nothing. but I have cream and sugar if you want"
"That's not what I meant"
>He sighs
>"No, no it's not. This is very special coffee. It has certain side effects, they will all fade over time if you don't drink it"
"What kind of side effects?"
>"Oh, you've noticed haven't you? Trust me, they're quite enjoyable. That's why my father stayed"
"You said your father died"
>He nods
>"That's what the report says, you won't believe the truth until you have some more"
>He presses the mug into my hand
>"Drink up"
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>>29465960
This is some autist tier grammar that's for sure
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I want to do a crossover of MLP and Kumo desu ga nani ka? because I'm a fucking weirdo with no life.
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>>29457961
http://pastebin.com/hUM8qKYK
http://pastebin.com/LkW3Kkc5

Not perfectly what you described, but really close. Enjoy.
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>>29466428
This is the story that gave me those feels. I would totally live a life void of spoken word.
>ywn use adorable body language to convey your thoughts
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>>29466798
Agreed, to be honest. I'm still only partway through but I have to admit I was slightly disappointed when Sixpence started communicating more and more. Not that the story is turning out bad in any way so far.

WallMixer's lab pony story has mute ponies but they're not on a farm, the setting's completely wrong.

If only you could get writefags on demand.
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>>29466936
I'll do it
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>>29465960
>I raise the mug to my lips
>The coffee goes down smoothly
>Almost instantly, a state of euphoria comes over me
>My skin feels warm and tingly
>As I lower the now empty cup I notice the hair on my arms has turned white
>He refills the mug and gives me an encouraging smile
>I throw my head back, drinking it all in one gulp
>My position feels less comfortable
>I look down and immediately notice why
>My thighs are shrinking rapidly, meanwhile my feet are becoming much longer
>As I look closely at my feet I notice the toes are starting to fuse together
>Surprisingly unperturbed by my changing anatomy, I shift onto my hunches and take another drink
>I can feel my organs shifting inside my torso, and a slight pressure just above my butt
>I turn back and see a brown tail starting to grow
>"More coffee?"
"Yes please"
>I take another drink
>There is a similar pressure behind my shoulder blades, and I feel my spine shift slightly
>I have to hold my self upright with one hand
>The other hand has become so stiff I can barely hold the cup
>He takes the mug from me
>"I trust you still wish to continue?"
"Yes, please give me more coffee"
>He refills the cup and lifts it to my lips
>I watch as my hands fuse and harden into hooves
>My body is now completely covered in white fur
>From my neck down I am completely equine, sans my new pair of wings
>He picks me up and sets me in his lap
>"Last one"
>He holds the mug to my mouth once more
>My ears begin to tingle
>They start to twitch as I feel them getting longer
>My vision distorts slightly as my peripheral view widens
>He has to move the mug away gradually as my mouth and nose extend out into a muzzle
>Once the mug is empty he pulls it away and sets it back on the table
>"So how do you feel?"
"Absolutely amazing, how long will this last?"
>"It will fade in a week or two. Of course you could always drink more to refresh the effect"
"What's in this for you?"
>He smirks
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/r/ing green where the Bog's change people into ponies and sell them as pets worldwide with their Bogdabots
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>>29467025
I want to be bought and raise a happy horsie family on a farm
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>>29447433
I want to be the pretty hand pone
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>>29466428
>tfw getting hyped to read some good stuff and it's the exact stuff I linked earlier in the thread after reading it
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>>29467004
that smirk making me nervous
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>>29466428
I need more like these. They were so good. Links will be appreciated.
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>>29435486
>pone never actually gets raped
the other mare litterally holds her down and rug munches her until she says I want to be a good pony for master, then the master threatens absolute obedience or being thrown back into sensory deprivation. I would have prefered more fight but fuck, what kind of faggot are you that you don't think that was rape?
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>>29447985
t wouldnt be you unless you physically transfered your brain in a live process. you are not the object, but you are an event. if you delete the event going on in your head and just copy a replica it isn't you, if you move the event into different material it will still be you.
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>>29467107
I too wish for this future
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>>29466985
Good for you, Anon.
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>>29467004
This is why I only drink tea.
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>>29466985
Fantastic, looking forward!
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>>29467025
Isn't that basically Zephyr's story

We never do learn Master's real name. Master is the Bog confirmed?
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>>29468048
Alright technically yeah. I was thinking more of serious >rape involving emotional abuse. The first instance you described did make her cry but she recovered really quickly so I'm not counting that as emotional damage/trauma.
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>>29467203
You can be a pony or have hands. Not both, or you're heading into anthro territory.
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>>29467025
>>29467107

Give us a quick rundown
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>>29469481
ok
Anon is an autistic faggot, an no one wants him as a pony, because he does nothing but shitpost
the end
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>>29469532
A semi autobiographical story.
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>>29469119
Same Anon who wrote the first summery

At first I only read to part 3. I stopped because it was very rape/slavey, and those are not my fetish I am into pet pone's though

I have reread it to part seven, it does get less >rape, but the slavery subtext still bothers me

In short, I think it's good, would like it a lot better if not for the basement.
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>>29468048
It's not rape if the reader is self inserting as the character in question and wants it.
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>>29470717
So then it is rape if the reader is self inserting and doesn't want it?
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>>29470756
I honestly come here for exactly this, not the rape itself, but the unwanted abuse makes it seductive in an awful way, where I self insert into a character specifically to experience her will being broken down into obedience and slavery. this is why zephyr is also shit, its very sex focused and the panick and desire not to be property get glossed over, consequently the batponer side story is the one I keep coming back to because there's real fear for a long time.

poner or no poner, I will chase this high as I know my addiction to it is unbreaking. I'd be just as satisfied with human on human, but the idea of being made into something awfully crippled and treated like an animal is pretty good as a side dish now and then. I don't really like pet play, but it's different when you are actually turned into a cute little (or even big) pony.

>>29466428
the fear of predators and leashes make this one very very fun.
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>>29465408
There's only one Russian horse worthy of transformation.
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You get to be the little pony, but stay the same gender you are currently.

Are you satisfied?
>Y
>N
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>>29471925
>Y
Not ideal, but so long as I don't have to watch some lucky bucker become a little mare while I don't, I'm happy.
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>>29471925
>Y
Honestly I'm indifferent about my gender, I wouldn't mind having a horse cock.

Although I suppose it does put an end to my dreams of ever being horse mom.
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>>29465408
I knew it.
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>>29471925
I would take it, but I would not be satisfied.
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>>29471925
Sure. But I'd rather be a pretty mare. Either way I'd like to be a pet to a kind owner that loves me and gives great snuggles.
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>>29471925
Acceptable if someone else can become my little mare.
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>>29471090
I want to turn chechens into pretty pones and sell them
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>>29471925
as long as the stallion is girly
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I want to have my mane and tail brushed!
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>>29462579
>I pull out my lap top and boot it up
>After fiddling with the keyboard and dongle I finally settle on using a pencil to peck at the keys
>It’s agonizingly slow, but it gets the job done
>There’s got to be a shit storm of chatter on the internet right now
>I should probably message my family and tell them I’m…
>Well I’m a little horse, but I’m fine
>I try to bring up the internet
>My browser displays a “No Connection” Error
>I check my Wi-Fi settings, No networks available
>Crap, that can’t be good
>Well, I don’t have any way to fix it right now
>I sigh and close out of my browser
>There’s not a lot that I can do right now, I can’t play any games without fingers
>I look at the small camera built into the top of the screen
>May as well see what I look like
>The camera program opens up
>After a few seconds the screen displays my face
>I’m surprised that I actually recognize it as my face
>It’s covered in a coat of short and bristly pink fur like the rest of my body
>My hair now consists of a mane of light blue hair that runs halfway down my neck
>My neck is much longer as well, I can look directly behind me quite easily
>Turning to one side, I get a profile look of my head
>I notice that my peripheral vision is much wider, no doubt owing to the new position of my eyes
>My eyes!
>I just now notice they are much larger, almost cartoonish in proportion to the rest of my face
>Not only that, but my nose and mouth now form a large muzzle extending out from my face
>It makes up a solid third of the length of my head, and represents the entirety of my face below my eyes
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>>29472677
>I face the camera again, giving my new face another look
>A slight twitch draws my attention to the top of my head
>A pair of ears stand alert at the top of my head, periodically swiveling towards new sounds
>I smile as I give my ears a little flick
>I could almost pass for one of those big stuffed animals you see at the fair
>For some reason I’m ok with this
>I’m perfectly fine with being a small pink horse, even if I don’t get telekinesis or wings
>Suddenly I remember my original intent
>I look behind me to see if the coast is clear
>Calvin in snoring soundly in the corner, and Dr. Moore hasn’t moved from her spot on the chair
>Now’s my chance
>I carefully unzip my backpack and reach down into one of the internal pockets
>It’s a little difficult to get my snoot into, but after some struggling I’m able to bight down on the cap
>Making as little noise as possible I withdraw the stainless steel flask
>Half empty unfortunately, it was the last of the bottle
>I was going to save it for just after my Thermo exam, but events being what they are
>Now to get the lid off
>The flat hip flask is much easier to hold in place than a round bottle, even without magic
>Just as the metal lid flips open I hear Dr. Moore stir behind me
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>>29472690
>”Thomas, What are you doing?”
>I’m between her and the flask, I just need to think of something good
“Nothing”
>Brilliant, she will never see through that ruse
>”Mhmm, give me the flask”
“How did you know it was a flask?”
>”I was in college once too you know, now give it to me”
>I pick it up and set it on her desk
>”Consider this a bribe”
>She levitates it up to here mouth and takes a swig
>She blinks in surprise
>”This is surprisingly good whisky for a college student”
“It was a gift. I was saving it for a special occasion”
>She nods
>”Well, I’d say this is definitely a once in a life time event”
>Calvin opens her eyes and starts to shift
>”Sorry Calvin, I didn’t mean to wake you”
>Calvin instantly spots the floating flask
>”Can I have some?”
>Dr. Moore gives me a glance
>She probably needs it the most out of any of us
“Sure, but save me some”
>The metal bottle floats over to the red mare
>She holds it with her lips and tilts her head back
>”Thank you” she says, setting it in front of me
>I quickly snap up the flask and throw my head back
>There’s not even a full shot left, Damn
>I politely conceal my disappointment behind a grin
>At least Calvin seems a little happier
>”So did I miss anything else?” She asks Dr. Moore
>”No, I should probably check in. Hopefully someone has figured this all out by now”
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>>29470243
I am rarely bothered by fetishes (except scat/vomit probably).

Now I'm saying this because when I stated reading Zephyr, I very quickly grew to hate Master as a character, precisely due to all the basement stuff. I kept thinking about everyone saying the story will make you want to be the pet, and I was like "yeah, nah, not with an owner like that".

Then I kept reading it and the story made me want to be the pet. Yup, really. This is why everyone praises tfanon - there's a very obvious parallel between what I just described and Zephyr's own feelings, and that shows really powerful writing.

(Of course, you have to be open to it. You said you like pet pones so that shouldn't be a problem - but of course, if you go into the story with a goal of not empathising with any characters and not being affected by it, it's not hard to be successful in that.)

Oh yeah and a small word of warning - I found the last few parts ever so slightly disappointing. I heard there was a hiatus at one point and I think it shows. At one point it just went from cute pet pony slice of life into a bit of an adventure full of happenings. The actual primary happening was great (I'm not going to spoil it but you'll know it when you get to it, if you haven't already) but the fallout somewhat detracted from the Zephyr cuteness I was looking for.

The side story that stems from that (the pastes with Opal in the title) were nice, and also A LOT less rapey than the main story. I think you'll like them when you get to them.
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>>29470717
>zephyr art
There's nothing on derpi, where can I find this
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>>29471925
Nah. If I'm going to become the little mare I want the full package.

Thankfully my life has been pretty good so far, I'm rather happy, so I'm probably not going to give it up for a substandard pone package. Proper pet mare yes, some random stallion nah.
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>>29472445
I want groom embarrassed little ponies
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>>29472783
What I really loved with the Zephyr story is how strangely disturbing it stays all the way through it.
Even Zephyr admits that she isn't sure if she truly loves the Master or if it's the machines in her brain making her say that. But despite that strange feeling staying at the back of her mind, she loves her condition and the reader ends up feeling the same.

Probably wouldn't be in this thread if this story hadn't given me that damn fetish please let me out of here
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>MLP fans worldwide become the little pony
>You and your family freak out
>Your parents don't know what a brony is
>They're asking you what happened
>Someone says you look like something from that show little girls like
>Feign ignorance
>Pretend you hate it
>Protest loudly at your adorable fate
>They turn on the news
>"...And it seems like everyone involved in this event was "Brony", an adult fan of the My Little Pony franchise"
>They all look at you

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ag1o3koTLWM
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>ywn be Twiggles
>ywn be a pretty alicorn pet
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>>29472695
Booze will certainly help this situation.
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>>29473142
I want to have my wings molested
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>>29472802
I think there are only those two pieces of Zephyr art, >>29470717 >>29432975
So enjoy.
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>>29473064
As if turning into a pony in front of your family wasn't awkward enough already.
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>>29471925
Not satisfied
I mean my life is shitty but I'd rather stay human and end up killing myself than missing out on one of the integral parts of it to be honest
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>>29471925
As long as I can be a pet
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>>29472419
I want to turn Chechens into chicken pone.
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>>29473971
a fate worse than death, a tendie with useless wings
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/r/ing communist anon being assigned a job as a community pet pony
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>>29474105
/r/ing antifa-ggot being turned into a pretty mare and getting raped by anon
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>>29474105
>ywn literally become the town bike
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I did a thing because I like mute horses

>A pent up sigh of relief exits your lungs as you toss your keys and kick the door to your apartment shut behind you.
>You totter over to the sofa, and with and unceremonious flop, you bury face into the nearest cushion.
>Why.
>Why did you think it was a good idea to take 5 classes this semester?
>On top of your new full-time employment?
>Never before in your life do you remember being so consistently tired.
>You barely managed to make it all work, often finding yourself in sour mood by the time you’d finished your daily agenda.
>At least it kept you busy though, even if it did leave you with very little, if any, free time for yourself.
>Not to mention every second of your ‘free time’ was solely devoted to playing catch-up with your awful sleep schedule.
>To everyone else you looked like a champion, but you felt like a mess.
>Someday, though. Someday this would all pay off.
>You don’t know where it went, but you were at least on a path that lead somewhere, and that thought alone was enough to put your mind at ease.
>Your body struggles to retain its consciousness, the uncomfortable puddle of drool that’s collected on the cushion below is hardly a deterrent.
>You find yourself half-asleep when a loud notification from your phone rouses your attention.
>You wince.
>Of course.
>Lazily raises your head, you pull the phone from your pocket and swipe to view the alert.
>’One New Message’
>You roll your eyes when you notice it’s from your friend Andre.
>The unruly type, if you were to give a curt explanation.
>You flick open the message to read.
>’Yo brother, give me a call when ur free.”
>You lightly grind your teeth in annoyance.
>The fuck does he want now? Let a guy sleep for once.
>You elect to humor him, tapping the call button on his contact profile.
>The phone offers you a couple rings before you hear that signature Mexican accent you’ve come to hate
>”Hey brother, what’s up?”
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>>29474788

“What do you need,” you grumble.
>”Nothing much, just wanted to check with you to see if you were coming to the party tonight? Chu know, the one I’ve been hyping the past few weeks?”
“No Andre, I’m no-”
>”Anon I know you’re busy, you’re always busy, but hear me out. Just come relax for a night. Maybe letting loose will help you feel a little less… eh, dead?”
>You sigh.
>He’s got a point.
>Like you said, the last time you had any time to yourself was a mystery.
>It might nice to clear your head, if only for a couple hours.
“Alright fine. Your place?”
>”Yup! And don’t even worry about the booze, we got you covered hombre.”
“Sounds good. I’m not doing any hard shit, just so we’re clear.”
>He gives a cocky chuckle.
>”Yeah yeah mister big shot. Drug tests and all. I’m not that stupid.”
“Good, see you then.”
>Before he can say a goodbye you’ve pushed the end-call button and have plopped your face back into the sofa.
>A party.
>A loud party.
>With lots of people.
>...
>God damn it.
>By the time the party rolls around, you’d been fortunate enough to squeeze in a two hour nap before making your way over.
>You’d be a little late, but two hours of any sort of rest was a bargain these days.
>Luckily Andre’s house was only a short walk across the park from your apartment.
>His parents were pretty well-off, so he wasn’t confined to a small, paper-thin walled box like yourself.
>Nope, he had a whole house to himself.
>Albeit a small one, but a house nonetheless.
>You give yourself a moment to long for a day where footsteps from careless upstairs neighbors don’t keep you wide awake at night.
>Your walk to Andre’s is quiet, calm.
>Birds chirping as the sun slowly rests itself behind the mountains in the west.
>A brilliant pink ray of light jutting across the open sky and reflecting off the white clouds, offering you and everyone below with a vibrant sunset.
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>>29474794

>The air was thin, but it was clear.
>You award yourself a few deep breaths, each one filling your mind with the untroubled peace of nature.
>That is, until you start to hear the thumping of an obnoxiously loud, muffled subwoofer.
>Sigh.
>Well, you were here.
>You make your way through his somehow-still-clean front lawn and into his house.
>Upon entry, you’re greeted with exactly what you expected.
>Music, shouting, booze, weed, and even a puddle of what you assume to be somebody’s vomit.
>Right next to the front door.
>Classy.
>After observing your surrounding, you walk yourself to the kitchen to grab a beer.
>The only you’re going to enjoy this is if you don’t remember it.
>”Anon! I thought for sure you were gonna dip on us!” you hear Andre shout as you round the corner into the kitchen.
>You see your Mexican friend standing in the corner with a couple of ladies at his side, probably wooing them with stories of his fabulous life back in California.
“Well I don’t blame you. I hate parties” you respond, popping open a beer and raising it to your lips.
>He offers a chuckle, and quickly shoos the two ladies away so he can continue conversing with you.
>”Things been okay?”
>You finish with a large swig of your beer, burping loudly in his face.
“About as good as they ever seem to be.”
>He keeps quiet for a few moments while you go about drinking, nervously tapping his palms together.
>Well that’s not a good sign.
>”Listen Anon,” he eventually continues. “I know you said no hard stuff, but hear me out-”
“Damn it Andre, no. I work a job. I can’t be getting fucked up like we used to.”
>”No, no! It’s not hard, I promise you. It’s like, weed and ambien AND xanax mixed together. No ‘hangover’, no side effects, nothing. Just chill.”
>You sigh and shake your head.
“I knew you were going to pull this shit, too. Why do you have such a problem with me trying to not be a fuck-up?”
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>>29474802

>”Whoa, those are some strong words amigo.”
“No is no, Andre” you finish, raising your beer again to chug the remainder. “Now please for the love of god, let me get drunk.”
>Despite the brief argument, he wears a grin and tosses you another beer.
>”You got it boss.”
>The night passes rather carelessly, and as much as you had to admit it, you actually find yourself having quite a bit of fun.
>Dancing, grinding, more dancing, more grinding.
>All was going great up until your very last drink.
>You weren’t even three sips in before you began to feel your stomach burn.
>Nausea brewed rapidly, and you began to sweat like mad.
>Your balance was hardly there, everything felt disorientating as a dizziness clouded your mind.
>Fearing iminate vomit, you hastily barge your way through the crowd to the restroom.
>You reach for the handle only to find it locked.
>”Occupied” a voice calls from the other side.
>Fuck.
>You feel another billow of sickness course through your body, your muscles visibly shaking now.
>Without invitation, you rush your way into Andre’s master suite and into his private bathroom.
>Empty.
>Thank god.
>You fall to your knees in front of the toilet and sit patiently for what you knew happened next.
>Except it didn’t happen at all.
>A wave of extreme pain racks your nerves and sends you toppling to your side.
>What the fuck was this?!
>You knew better than to mix liquor and beer, but you’ve never had this reaction before!
>Again, another surge of agonizing pain, this one eliciting a small shriek.
>Fucking hell!
>You try to raise yourself back up, but another wave sends you right back to the floor.
“H-Help!” you cry hopelessly.
>With the deafening thumps of the subwoofer still blaring, you might as well be mute.
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>>29474809

>You attempt to crawl yourself somewhere, anywhere, but a shooting pain stops you in your tracks.
>Tears consume your vision as the agony becomes too much to bear, and you eventually surrender to it, curling your body into a fetal position hoping for it to stop.
>But it doesn’t, it continues. Mercilessly.
>You feel your skin burn like someone had set fire to your body.
>Your bones and muscles snap and twist as if you were being stoned to death.
>Were you dying?
>Better question: did you even care?
>At this point being dead might just feel better than this unwarranted torture.
>The pain trails up to your face.
>You wish you could pinpoint the areas affected, but it was everywhere, like an acid.
>Everything hurt.
>You would scream, but you couldn’t. The pain was so intense your vocals refused to respond.
>Your entire body felt like at any moment it was going to give up.
>The pain eventually reaches a maximum, and just as you swear you can see the bright light of the afterlife, it all stops.
>All of it.
>In one instant.
>The muscles in your body collapse limply, every inch of you drenched in cold sweat
>You take heavy breaths in an attempt to regain yourself, but your mind is clouded as it races frantically for an answer.
>What on god’s great earth did that to you?
>Was it an allergy?
>Poison?
>...Drugs?
>Lying on this floor certainly isn’t going to give you any clues.
>You needed to go to the hospital, like now.
>In one swift movement, you swing yourself upward in an attempt to stand, but your body disapproves.
>All you manage is a pitiful squirm along the tile of the bathroom floor.
>What?
>You try again, but you’re rewarded the same result.
>Curiosity brings you to look down, and you wish you hadn’t.
>Oh lord you wish you hadn’t.
>In place of your limbs were... stubs.
>Soft, brown… furry little stubs.
>All poking out of what was now extremely oversized clothing.
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>>29474822

>What in the mother of…
>You writhe wildly in your clothing, doing your best to shake it off.
>After some effort, you’re able to escape your pants and underwear, but your shirt just wouldn’t give.
>No matter, at least you can properly move now.
>You try to hop up again once you’re mostly freed, but deja vu, your face finds the floor.
>A high pitched whimper escapes your lips.
>Right, well.
>With some strength, and some serious determination, you’re able to hold the upper half of your body up with your front stubs.
>Only problem is your arms don’t move at all like they used to.
>They kind of look like…
>Your eyes widen as your mind begins to connect the dots.
>No. Oh no no no.
>You turn your head to look over at the full-body mirror hanging on Andre’s bathroom door, and the creature that gazes back looks nothing like you.
>Details are scarce, given your distance, but the mirror allows you to see what’s important.
>Its coat is a very light brown, while the mane bears a complexion identical to dark chocolate.
>It looks oddly reminiscent of a really small horse, and there’s a part of you that can swear you’ve seen one of these before…
>Your daze is cut short though, as a crippling ‘BOOM’ vibrates through the walls and penetrates your eardrums.
>The force of the noise sends you toppling over again.
>Another ‘BOOM’ follows suit, and soon you’ve realized it’s the start to another song.
>Did they turn the fucking subwoofer up?
>BOOM
NEIGH!
>...
>Did you just..?
>BOOM
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>>29474841

>You can feel your ears squeeze against your skull, your eyes clenching shut as adrenaline pumps wildly into your bloodstream.
>BOOM
>You tense even more.
>Logically, you knew exactly what these booms were, but your mind just didn’t seem to care.
>BOOM
>You shriek another loud neigh before scurrying yourself to all fours, somehow standing perfectly balanced on the tile.
>BOOM
>Each boom sends you deeper into a bestial panic, you dart your sight in all directions, desperately looking for an exit.
>BOOM
>That one sends you over the edge and your legs respond by frantically scampering toward the bedroom door you initially entered through.
>You’re not sure how you managed it, but you suppose ‘fear has a way of teaching you to run’.
>BOOM
>This one causes you to trip over yourself, and you land directly on your muzzle just outside the doorway, yelping loudly.
>BOOM
>You’re quick to your fours, but the moment you’ve stood you catch sight of the crowd.
>A few of whom have stopped to stare at you.
>Their eyes, their gaze, only worsens the terror.
>BOOM
>You scream, falling to your haunches.
>”Yo, who’s dog is this?” a man calls from the crowd.
>BOOM
>You’ve broken down into incoherent neighs of horror, falling to your side, squirming and kicking uncontrollably.
>Someone leans down in an attempt to grab you, but a meaty blow confirms he’s only managed to get himself bucked.
>”Fuck me!” he yells.
>BOOM
>Again, you squeal.
>”Turn down the music, it’s freaking it out!” a girl shouts.
>Thankfully her demands are heard, and the roaring booms quickly lower to a volume that’s tolerable.

That's all for now, this story is going places, unlike my dreams. Stay tuned and richfag might just deliver, unless of course richfag becomes the pretty little mare.

http://pastebin.com/phKzMLLw
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>>29474880
Can't wait to read this. I love me some good mute ponies.
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>>29467004
I'm appreciating all the gay around here lately, keep it up

>>29474880
yay you're back
I missed your writing, you've got much more polished sentences than the usual style around here.
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>>29474880
Scared mute ponies are always sort of more adorable for some reason

Can't wait for you to finish your story
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>>29474880
On a side note, I totally didn't edit this much before posting and I maybe sorta regret it after noticing all the typos. I'll clean up the next update a little more before posting.
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>>29475477
Typos or no, it was still fairly good.
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>>29474880
Promising start. Keep it up.
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>>29474880
Fuck yeah.
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>>29451821
Alright, going to have to take a break from this story.
Had it planned out poorly, having trouble getting even a few words in the proper direction.
May come back to it in a few days, but don't hold your breath.
Sorry.
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>>29474788
Andre has to go back
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>>29476168
That sucks.
It was a good story. I hope you'll be able to pick it up again.
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>>29476168
I know the feeling, hopefully a break will help you get some inspiration
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>>29474105
Communism doesn't work, even when it comes to ponies.
Instead Anon should sell his pony services.
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WHY ARE PONIES SO OFTEN DEPICTED WITH CROSSED EYES. WHY DO PEOPLE THRIVE ON WATCHING PONIES THAT LOOK RETARDED.
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>>29477120
I'm not saying it does work, I just want to read an involuntary pet story that isn't based in capitalism.

I want to read about an anon who is threatened with Siberia if he doesn't become the good community pet pone Or alternatively the pet pone of one of the more equal members of the soviet, because that's how all "Communist" states work
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How about a romantic Valentine's day pony transformation?
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>>29474880

>A circle of curious eyes gather around you, and they gawk at your panic like it were a sort of party trick.
>Your conscience screams ‘run’, but you can’t seem to move anything.
>You’re frozen with fear, and the only function your body seems to be capable of is rapid, shallow breaths to keep up with your pounding heartbeat.
>You hear disquieted whispers exchange questions while you lie helpless on the floor.
>’Is it a dog?’
>’Kinda looks like a pony.’
>’I’ve never seen a pony like that before.’
>’It looks familiar, though.’
>’Who’s is it?’
>Their whispers are soon muffled by a rustling from behind group.
>”Move. MOVE.” a feminine voice grunts as she pushes through the assembly of confused onlookers.
>She eventually breaks through and immediately directs her attention to you.
>The two of you lock eyes, and your body feels a pang of distress when she slowly begins to approach you.
>She notices this and, in turn, kneels down to appear less threatening.
>”It’s alright little one,” she coos. “I’m not gonna hurt ya.”
>The soft vibration of her voice offers some comfort, and she’s soon able to close the distance between you both without afflicting too much stress.
>She gently rests a hand on your side and spends a few minutes running it softly through your coat, whispering sweet nothings near your ears.
>This continues for quite some time actually.
>Enough time to have bored most of the group at least.
>Most of them had dispersed within the first few minutes, having already witnessed everything there was to see.
>There were one or two left watching, but it felt a lot less terrifying than the group of bloodthirsty predators stacked around you from before.
>And thankfully they refrained from turning the music up.
>It takes a while, but with some effort she’s able to lower your heartbeat to pace she seems satisfied with.
>Your breaths become less frantic and more relaxed.
>Your eyes aren’t darting about.
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>>29477985
whoops forgot to namefag

>And for the first time since your episode in the bathroom you feel like you had some control over your thoughts.
>”See? You’re just fine,” she reassures with a few scratches behind your ear. Wow that feels… huh.
>She takes a second to mull over your south-end, and you assume she’s just checking to make sure the rest of you is okay.
>”Good girl~”
>... Wait what?
>The peace is broken in an instant however, as Andre rushes into the room with a few drunken stumbles.
>”The fuck is going on? Someone told me there’s a goddamn horse in my house?”
>The aggressive, gravely, tone of his voice causes your muscles to tense.
>”Andre, chill, she’s terrified.”
>”I don’t give a shit, I’m not supposed to have animals in here. Get whatever it is out of my house.”
>”Well I sure as hell wasn’t stupid enough to bring my pet to a party like this,” she barks.
>Andre cups his hands around his mouth and turns to shout at the party goers in his home.
>”Yo! Who the fuck brought their pony to my house!?”
>...
>The crowd remains silent.
>”Seriously, someone own up to it or I’m kicking it onto the street!”
>Again… silence.
>”Alright! If one of you’s is missing a horse you can’t say I didn’t warn you!”
>He turns quickly and looks down at you, extending his arms in preparation to pick you up.
>The moment he begins to lean down your eyes widen and you kick your hindlegs in fear.
>”Andre, stop!” the girl shouts.
>”What!?” he throws his hands up defensively.
>”I’ll take her out, jeez. You’re so heartless sometimes.”
>He shrugs
>”Do whatever you want with it, but do it somewhere that’s not here.”
>She sends him off with a huff before turning to look back down at you, shaking her head in jestful disbelief.
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>>29477998

>”Well cutie pie looks like we’ll have to continue this outside. It’s a lot quieter out there, you’ll like it I promise.”
>You feel her arms wrap awkwardly around your barrel.
>”Sorry if this is uncomfortable, you’re at an odd angle.”
>She then hoists you into her lap, giving a few brief pets before effortlessly standing with you still in her embrace.
>The moment you two step out the door they’ve started the loud music again, but thankfully it’s far too muffled to disturb you.
>She wordlessly strolls over to her car which appears to be a somewhat new Toyota suv of sorts.
>She unlocks it remotely with her key and opens the passenger door, depositing you onto the leather seat.
>Your entire body fits with some room to spare.
>How small were you now?
>A hand meets the side of your face and brushes your fur.
>You look up to see her smiling down at you.
>She didn’t seem totally sure of herself, though.
>Her smile was tainted with doubt.
>”What are we gonna do with you?” she sighed.
>Your guess is as good as mine, stranger…
>You just hope it doesn’t involve sending you off somewhere you don’t need to be.
>You should probably tell her not to take you to some animal shelter or something.
>That could be bad.
>You’d probably be like, euthanized.
>That’s what they did to lost, wild animals, right?
>Unless they thought you were domesticated.
>Wait.
>Does this lady even know you can understand her?
>You hadn’t really considered that until now.
>If you did indeed look like the animal you saw in the mirror, you wouldn’t be surprised if she thought that’s exactly what you were.
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>>29478004

>An animal.
>Probably best to tell her now.
>You know, to avoid any confusion.
>You open your mouth to address her but you only manage to cough out a small whicker.
>What?
>She giggles.
>”That’s right, little miss.”
>Hey no that’s not what you meant!
>You flatten your ears and attempt to speak again, but a desperate neigh replaces your words.
>No no no!
>”Goodness me, someone’s talkative. Do you need something?”
>You try repeatedly to say something, anything, but the only sounds coming from your muzzle are whinnies and neighs of distress.
>”Hey, shh, shhh. You’re just fine. What’s got you so worked up?”
>No this can’t be happening.
>You collapse back into the seat.
>You stare upward with a blank expression, void of emotion.
>Of all the things that have happened this past hour that was the one thing that broke your mind.
>You couldn’t talk.
>You weren’t human.
>You weren’t even fucking male anymore, apparently.
>God forbid you look down to prove it.
>As far as you’re concerned any hope you had of fixing this was slowly dwindling.
>It’s as if life were purposely closing every outlet you had to turn to.
>Why was this happening?
>Why you?
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>>29478021
Really fucking nice. Can't wait to see how this continues.
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>>29478021
Poor pony.
At least horse noises are cute.
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>>29478021
Great work, so far both of your stories have succeeded in giving me horse feels.

Keep it up
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>>29478180
Unless they are horse noises of despair and suffering.
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>>29478021

Great story so far, really liking it

Mute ponies are in vogue right now. Talking is overrated
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>>29478300
It's weird how the themes in this general will change so suddenly like that.
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>>29478345

It's no surprise that this of all generals is the most suited to sudden, unexplained changes.
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>>29478358
Ahahaaa I get it
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>>29478281
Humans can't tell the difference and find it cute regardless.

>>29478300
It's the concept that everyone is talking about.
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>>29474206
as in people literally ride him around?
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>>29478021
when will the pretty mare start muff diving
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More lucky when
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>>29479020
Hopefully it's that. And not inanimate transformation into an actual bicycle.
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>>29479392

Plotting out the next few chapters in my head first. Got to make some decisions about what tone I want for it.
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>>29479265
>Not wanting the stallion cock
What general do you think you're in?
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I want to be a pretty maid pone!
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>>29479020
Are there any stories like that?
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>>29480130
I want to give pony rides
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>>29474880
>http://pastebin.com/phKzMLLw
Added to the google doc, http://derpy.me/PonyTF
I'll update the title when you have one.
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>>29477364
>Cadence turns a few lonely horsefuckers into ponies and sets them up on dates.
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>>29480831
In a really convoluted sense, that's what happened to the guy in Royal Duties
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Boomp
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Any possibility of cute bat ponies showing up around here?
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>You become the little pone

>You are mute, and can neither fly or use magic regardless of your race

still worth it?
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>>29482694
Yes definitely
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>>29482694
Do I get to keep my sentience?
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>>29482694
As long as I become the little mare and have someone to take care of me.
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>>29482694
Without a second thought
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>>29482694
in a heartbeat ;~;
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>>29482585
Anything's possible, Anon.
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>>29482694
I would cuddle such a pony but not become one.
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>>29482694
As long as I become the little pet mare, absolutely.
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>>29477174
Better dead than transformation into the red pony.
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>>29479901
It could be a nice life, to be the maid pony in the employ of the princess.
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>>29482739
>you become pone

>Your mental capacity is reduced to that of an Earth horse

Would you do it?
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>>29484237
No thanks. I don't want to be Applejack.
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>>29483621
>You're walking the dusty streets of ponyville in the late afternoon
>Your stomach, a-growling for some nourishment, and your feet aching from all of the walking about make you dip into Sugarcube Corner
>After getting your food and some water to go with it, you dip into a corner booth to relax and watch the locals go about their day
>You watch as Ditzy got her muffins, Pinkie bouncing about, happily serving all who came, and look out the window at the street you came in on, and all of the smiling faces out there
>You wish that people back home had all of the joy and vigor that they did as they did their jobs with heart and passion put into every action
>The jingling of the bell over the door puts your train of thought to a halt as you look at who came in
>A yellow mare, with a fiery-red mane and soft blue eyes trots to the counter, and asks the Cakes if they don't mind her singing in their business for a little while whilst the dinner rush is going
>Her voice is like melted chocolate to your ears as she belts out a melody that could put the birds to shame, every note ringing true as a bell
>You lose track of your body's feelings, just watching her, paying more and more attention to her and her wondrous song
>As her show goes on and on, you feel as though there's something missing that you could provide
>You get out of your seat and trot over to her, your singing supporting her own, lifting it even higher
>The two of you, standing side by side, putting on a show that some may never forget as you both sung in perfect harmony
>But alas, the show had to end some time
>For them, at least
>She looked to you, and you looked to her and she leaned in and nuzzled you
>That was when you noticed your ears weren't where they used to be
>As you looked into the window, and saw the reflection gazing back at you, your colors complimenting hers, you and her were of one soul
>and that soul belonged only to the tune of the song of life, bringing it to all who'd hear it
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>>29484290
Beautiful
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I like these thread, please don't die
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>>29484537
It's been around since June 2012. It's not going anywhere.
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>>29484290
here's the paste for it
http://pastebin.com/ij7jvnXt
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>>29484579
Added to the google doc
http://derpy.me/PonyTF
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>>29484237
I don't think so, because then how could you rightfully enjoy the change?
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>>29484290
Will there be more of this?
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>>29478021
>You sit there, motionless, in a long bout of silence.
>Your mind wanted to race, sift through all the questions, answers, possibilities... but it just couldn’t.
>You couldn’t.
>All of it would be utterly useless.
>You were here, and there was no changing that, or at least that’s what the world wanted you to believe.
>Life had something in store for you, and apparently there was no way out.
>Without the ability to speak you were essentially doomed to be stuck in this small horse’s body until ‘life’ decided otherwise.
>You suppose there were other means of communication, but without fingers those seemed about as useless as not being able to verbally speak anyway.
>You release a defeated exhale and look out toward the night sky.
>It was calm, undisturbed.
>Little pricks of light vibrantly shining through the mild light pollution of your little college town.
>So vast, that a problem as life ruining as this one probably meant less than absolutely nothing to the universe.
>But you still couldn’t shake the feeling that...
>That something up there really hated you, and really, really wanted to show it.
>”...Is somebody sleepy?”
>Your ears perk up at her voice.
>Oh, they move themselves too?
>That’ll take some getting used to.
>Sleepy huh?
>You ponder the question for a moment before you realize what you’d just done.
>From an outside perspective, it probably just looked like you were a tired and grumpy little pony.
>Your neighs and whinnies could have easily just been your conveyance of exhaustion for all she knew.
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>>29484983
Always forgetting to namefag

>”Hungry?” she continues.
>You tilt your head
>’Heh, right. Hungry? After that fiasco?’ you think to yourself.
>You huff at her through your nostrils.
>’Just leave me alone.’
>”Hmm… do you need to potty?”
>You reel back in surprise.
>’Excuse me?’
>”Is that a yes?”
>’No lady. Just shut your mouth for like three seconds, please.’
>She nods at you then slides her hands around your barrel again.
>Oh for the love of…
>She then carries you over to the patch of grass in front of Andre’s house before setting you down.
>You struggle to keep yourself balanced on your new legs once your hooves meet the ground.
>They shake a bit under your weight, and you feel like they’d give out if you made any sudden movements.
>Well this is awkward.
>You look over to her with pleading eyes.
>’Please just put me back in the car, lady.’
>She cocks her head.
>”Do you need me to look away?”
>’No. No don’t look away. Pick me up, and put me back in the damn car.’
>She waits for a moment as if expecting some sort of response, but when all she receives is your silent staring, she nods again and directs her sight elsewhere.
>Mother fucker.
>If you could talk, the things you would say...
>You huff at her through your nostrils again.
>She ignores you.
>Rolling your eyes, you take a small step in her direction and squeal a loud neigh.
>That had a bit more volume to it than you expected.
>She turns back around to find you staring up at her.
>She sighs.
>”C’mon pony, I don’t know what you want!”
>’Well I can’t rightfully tell you either!’
>Wait a minute.
>You’ve got an idea.
>With a snort, you grab her attention.
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>>29484988

>She looks at you inquisitively.
>”What’s that?”
> You then blatantly look at the car, then back at her, then back at the car.
>She follows your gestures, looking toward the car as well before looking back down at you.
>”You…”
>Yes?
>”Want to potty on my car?”
>Oh good lord.
>You fall back to your haunches and grunt a whinny of annoyance, which probably just sounded like any other ‘whinny’ to her.
>You hear her quietly giggle.
>’Yes, misfortune is hilarious. Thank you for understanding.’
>”You know what I think?” she questions, sitting herself down in the grass next to you. “I think you’re just exhausted from being so scared earlier.”
>Well, she’s not wrong.
>That, and you might also still be under the influence of alcohol.
>You couldn’t really tell though, you weren’t sure how different being a horse was supposed to feel from being human.
>You figure sleeping it off would help give you a better idea.
>And who knows, maybe you’ll wake up and realize this was just some super strange nightmare.
>That would be nice...
>She extends an arm and begins massaging the back of your head.
>A-ah~
>”And since we can’t seem to find your owner, I suppose it wouldn’t hurt if you came home with me for tonight. At least until Andre figures out who you belong to. Sound like a plan?”
>You’re far too distracted by the euphoric shivers her fingers are sending through your nerves to acknowledge anything she said.
>Not like you could anyway.
>You wonder why she even asked you questions in the first place.
>They were probably just rhetorical.
>Like one might talk to a dog, if only to alleviate silence.

Shorter update this time. Or at least it felt like one.
http://pastebin.com/phKzMLLw
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>>29484998
RichAnon, next to Zero&Infinity you're becoming one of my favourite writefags desu
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>>29485078
Fucking wordfilters, sorry
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>>29484998
Why is it that mute ponies are so fucking good? Great work mate.
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>>29467004
>He slowly with draw a collar from his pocket
>I watch with bated breath as he slowly slips the strap around my neck
>There's a sharp click as the latch engages
>He slowly pulls the collar tight around my neck, stopping just before it obstructs my breathing
>I shudder with excitement as he runs his hand through my mane
>"It suits you, don't you think?"
>He holds up a mirror
"Yes, thank you"
>His smirk intensifies
>"Thank you whom?"
"Thank you master~"
>I punctuate it with a breathy moan
>He caresses my ears
>"That's a good pony, I bet you know what comes next"
>He grins and waits for a response
"Y-you do, master"
>He chuckles, and reaches under me for his fly
>"That's right"
>I feel his hand moving under my back side as his pants slowly unzip
>"And when do you cum?"
"When master says I can"
>He nods
>"Very good. now tell me: what do you want?"
>I can feel his hot shaft along the inside of my thigh
"I want master to cum inside me~"
>He gives me a contemplative look
"Please master, cum inside my ass"
>"Alright, sense you've been such a good boy"
>He rests his hand on my flank and slowly guides me into position
>I can feel the tip of his head resting just below my tight ponut
>He grins sadistically
>"Are you sure this is what you want?"
"I want my master to fuck my butt, please fuck me"
>He raises an eye brow, I didn't finish the sentence properly
"Master"
>I give him a pleading look
>"I'll let you do the work"
"Thank you master"
>I ram my ass down hard on his stiff member
>The hard piece of meat stretches out my anus
>Disregarding my discomfort, I lift my flank back up before slamming it down again
>After several times my body falls into a rhythmic bouncing motion
>My fuckhole has adjusted to the girth of my masters stiff dick, which is now pleasantly message my prostate
>Masters pre is providing the only lubrication as I bounce my tight ass on his crotch
>I want the whole load
>I want him to dump a hot sticky mess in my ass
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>>29481688
That's not exactly what I had in mind.
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>>29485707
>"Remind me, what do you want again?"
>I pant as I continue to slide my ass up and down his hard cock
"I want -gasp- m-master-"
>I let out a deep moan
>"You want me too~"
"C-cum. In my ass. p-please"
>I slap my rear down hard on him
>He's sits and smirks at me
>Suddenly I feel his hot releases deep in my ass
"Ohhhhh~ thank you master"
>He chuckles
>"You're welcome little pony. Now-"
>He lifts my flank off his crotch and shifts me to the floor in font of him
>"Clean up while I get some more coffee"
>I immediately begin to lap at his package
>His cream intermingles with far less pleasant tastes, but I disregard them
>I continue to lick until his dick is completely clean
>Satisfied with my work he leans over and lifts my flank up into a standing position
>There's a gentle thud as he sets a coffee cup be hind me
>"You'll be taking this one with cream"
>He grips my shaft and gives it a tug
>"Don't forget our little rule~"
>He works his hand up and down, quickly beginning me to the verge of orgasm
>I begin to moan quietly into his crotch
>I draw a sharp breath as his free hand begins to fondle my balls
>He still hasn't given me permission yet, but that doesn't stop the trail of pre-cum from dripping off my flare
>Recognizing that I was nearing my limit he quickly slows back down
>Once my arousal teeters off he resumes his milking
>He brings me back to the edge of orgasm again and then slows back down
"P-please master~"
>He looks down with that same sadistic smile
>"This one will cost you"
"I'll give you any thing master"
>He gives me an appraising look
"Please, tell me what you want"
>"I want you, forever. Will you give me that?"
"Yes, just let me climax master"
>"Say it."
"I am your's master, I will always be your's, I will obey your ever command. Just please let me cum!"
>"Such an eager little pony"
>He jerks me off one more time
>"You may cum"
>Instantly a hot stream of jizz erupts from my cock
>I go limp and fall forward, twitching and moaning on the floor
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>>29485868
I'll never drink coffee again.

>your's
Yours.
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>>29485868
>My master chuckles at my display as he collects the coffee cup from the floor
>"oh you are just a treat"
>He lifts me into his lap and begins stroking my back
>His petting combines with my afterglow to create a state of pure ecstasy
>I barely notice when he starts nursing me on the cup of coffee
>The dark brown liquid has swirls of my white cream in it
>Much to my surprise it tastes creamy, with a hint of vanilla
>He continues to tilt the cup back until its empty
>He sets it aside
>"Did you enjoy that?"
"Yes master, thank you"
>I press the side of my face into his chest and begin to nuzzle him
>"Yes, I think you'll work out just fine"
>He pulls me close to him
>"Yes, You'll do nicely. I think I'll keep you"
"Thank you master, I look forward to serving you"
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>>29484998
This is gonna be cute.
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>>29484972
Not that I can foresee, but you never know
[Spoiler]besides, there'd have to be songs written to do it justice[/spoiler]
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/r/ing green of mass epidemic of pretty filly and colt tf
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>>29486988
Make that a pandemic.
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>>29487404
now i'm imagining Assad barrel bombing little fillies
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>>29487457
You monster
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Say you turn into a pony and go to Equestria.
Which pony would you befriend? Would you let them know about your former life as a human?
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>>29487721
the gay russian
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>>29487457
>>29487580
little fillies trying and failing to behead infidels with machetes
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Where did the other writefags disappear to?
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>>29486988
I wanna be Glim Glam!
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>>29488097
they became pretty little colts
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More Lucky and Steph when? Really looking forward to more.
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>>29431235
m y f e t i s h
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>>29488142
Still waiting for my right of passage.
Except not a colt ew. What am I, gay?
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>>29488251
See >>29479574
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Bottom of page 10 bump
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Page ten is not for you, little pony
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>>29489439
The thread is kinda close to the bump limit, letting it die wouldn't have been terrible.
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>>29489462
Letting it die before there's a new thread in place is always terrible.
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>>29487870
To a filly, an infidel is anyone who refuses to become a filly.
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>>29488097
To Celestia's training academy for new ponies. Learning to write with hooves takes time.
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Wake up, am pony
Alarm's going, you have to be in school in an hour
fumble with your phone to turn off the alarm, hooves don't work well with touch screens
Knock it off the desk, it lands face down, alarm still blaring
It's hurting your sensitive new ears
struggle to flip it over
pushing it around with hooves but can't seem to lift it
trip on your hooves and fall flat, sliding the phone under a cabinet
alarm STILL going
Try to reach it, but you can't even fit your hoof into the gap
curl up on the floor and cover your ears
it'll stop eventually, right?
feel tears welling up as you stare at your hooves
You've become the cute cartoon pony you dreamed of, you should be happy
so why do you feel so scared?
tears slowly drip through the fur on your muzzle
how are you going to get to school?
you can't even turn off a damned alarm
stare at the phone under the cabinet
nothing is designed for ponies
you probably won't even be able to unlock your door
how are you going to earn a living?
how are you going to get food for yourself?
you're just a helpless little pony.
you cry out pitifully
maybe someone will come find you
maybe someone will take care of you
you stay lying on the floor, sobbing, and try to ignore the incessant alarm
you'll just have to wait
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>>29490193
Go on.
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>>29485078
Despite being in this thread for years I had never read this Zero&Infinity story before, but I decided to give it a shot after seeing your reply.
What the fuck... How the fuck can these stories make me feel this way. I don't even know what the fuck just happened to me.
I just spent like 7 hours totally engrossed in that fucking thing. 10/10
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>>29490486
I'll have to read this next.
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>>29490486
Yeah, that's why he's my favourite, I'm a huge fan of things that can make me feel...
Also kinda why I like the CEO Anon story. Kinda.
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>>29490969
Sure, but the empty feeling you get inside for the next few days feels bad.
Why even live when you'll never experience anything like Radience's life?
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>>29491051
Yeah
Yeah I know
>implying you don't get that from almost everything here
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>>29491102
>implying you don't get that from almost everything here.
For the longest time I wanted to be Keyboard Masher, she's adorable and she's got a really cozy life with Chad.
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>>29491102
A lot of good stories do that, but I guess for me it's just those really extraordinary ones that really affect you afterwards.
I can think of three stories that really fucked me up more than usual, and it's sort of a love-hate relationship with those ones.
You hate the feeling it gives you afterwards, but while you're reading it for the first time you can really immerse yourself in it and vividly see the scenes playing out.
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>>29490193
More of this please
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>>29490969
That's kinda my goal, to make something that inflicts ultimate horse feels. It's pretty hard to cross that threshold I've noticed. There's fine line between short little one-offs that make you think "Oh hay that'd be nice" and the big, epic, crazy ones that ruin you for a good couple days. Always wanted to see if I was capable of that.

I feel like I'm getting close, though
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>>29430577
/R/ing more of this
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>>29490193
I hope this pony is up to the challenges of being a pony.
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https://derpibooru.org/1364719
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>>29492154
Adorable
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>Anon turns into a pony.
>Uses his horse powers to become a superhero.
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>>29491419
You're doing pretty well.
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Does anyone have the picture from Capitulation with the lady petting the pony and asking if it's a good boy?
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>>29493332
Of course
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I want to be a pretty filly pet!
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>>29493442
Freedom is the best way to be a filly.
Someone needs to draw a Braveheart anonpone rejecting pethood.

That is a good picture though.
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>>29493526
they may not take her freedom, but they'll take her virginity
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>>29493355
Thank you, Anon!
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>>29493771
Any time.
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>>29490486
Welp I know what I'm reading next.

>>29491051
That's part of the authentic experience!

Also you get used to it. I started with Zephyr and it immediately fucked me up completely, I spent like four days reading it and going about my day and work and studies thinking "what's the point, I'll never get a Master to make me happy". Then it took at least three-four more days to wear off.

Now I get horse feels while reading a good fic of course, but I can generally function pretty well and be happy during the day instead of thinking all the time about how I'll never be the pretty mare.
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You become a pony, the only problem is you'll always be less than a foot tall
what do?
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>>29494377
be adorable forever
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“All right, everything’s in order. I just need you to sign one last thing and we can start the procedure”
I look through the one-way mirror to my side. I can see half a dozen ponies playing happily in the “show room”. apparently most of them are here for the same reason: poor test scores. Finals week always brings a solid influx of new volunteers.
It’s hard to imagine that all those happy little fuzz balls where stressed out college students less than a week ago. Harder still that I would be joining them before the day is out.
“Second thoughts?”
I turn back to the representative and smile.
“No, I’m just looking forward to it”
I sign my name on the bottom of the form. The last time I ever will.
“Right, that’s done. Is there any last minute arrangements you need to make?”
I reach into my pocket and pull out a letter to my parents. I had written it last night to explain what had happened. I forgot to drop it in the mail before my appointment today.
“Would it be possible to mail this for me?”
He takes it and gives it a look
“Of course, we’d be happy to. Right this way now”
He leads me down the hall to a small exam room
“Put your clothes in the hamper and I’ll let the doctor know that you’re here”
I quickly striped. I guess I’d better get used to walking around naked.
I take a seat on the exam table and wait for the good doctor to come
After several minutes the door swings open and a woman in a lab coat walks in.
“All right, one last disclaimer before we begin. The effects of this are permanent: you will be stuck as a little pony, moreover you will not be able to speak, read or write in any form. There will be noticeable mental changes as your mind adapts to your new body. Do you understand this?”
“Yes”
“And you still wish to continue?”
“Yes”
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>>29494661
She nods and holds up a syringe

“Give me your arm and we can begin”

I extend my arm out towards her. She grabs it and injects me in the wrist.
The effect is almost instantaneous. Short lavender fur begins to grow on my forearm. My fingers begin to fuse together. I watch in awe as my hand begins to grow into the lower section of my front leg. There’s a slight pressure as the small bones of my hand compress together. The transformation moves up my arm, along with my elbow. The joint slowly ascends towards my shoulder as the lavender hairs move onto my back. I feel pressure on my shoulder blade as my new wing begins to sprout. I’m going to be a Pegasus!

“Can I get a mirror or something?”

The doctor nods and reaches into a drawer

“Try not to talk from now on, it could damage your throat”

I nod as she shows me my reflection. The lavender fur has covered my chest now and is working its way up my neck. My left wing is almost fully formed as my right wing begins to push through. The fur covers my face now. My mouth begins to push forward as my nose merges in with my face. A short snoot begins to form, dominating the lower half of my face. My vision blurs slightly as my eyes enlarge and shift slightly to the side of my head. I blink as I acclimate to the extended field of view.

“Don’t worry sweetie, you’ll get used to it”

It’s my ears turn now, they burn slightly as they grow outward and begin to climb up my head. There’s significant discomfort as the new muscles begin to take shape and anchor themselves to my skull. My new mane is coming along nicely, I like the pale sunset red so much better than the boring brown it used to be.
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>>29494675
With the external changes to my head finishing up I look down at my body. My barrel was almost formed, nice and petite, covered with the same lavender fur that coated the rest of my body. I shift forward slightly as my dock works its way out behind me. My thighs begin to shorten, pulling my knees up closer to my pelvis. There’s a tingling sensation in my toes as they being to fuse together, the array of nails covering them quickly merges into the beginning of my hind hooves. My feet begin to extend, quickly making up some of the length lost from the contraction of my thighs. My feet stop a little short of half way up my leg.

Now that transformation is at an end I shift my weight onto my front legs, and pull my hind quarters under me. I draw myself up and look in the mirror. I’m so pretty now. Unable to help myself I pose as though I where mid stride and smile.

“Aren’t you a pretty girl”

The doctor sets the mirror to the side and places a hand on my head. I quickly press myself into her.

“my my, and a snugger. You won’t be spending to long here”

She pulls me into a hug and I nuzzle the crook of her neck.

She giggles

“I might just take you home my self”
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>>29494377
cheaper to mass produce.
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>>29494396
This definately
>>29494683
Looks like mute ponies really are in fashion this time of year
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>>29494377
cave explorer
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>>29494683
I love this, please continue. Also, any reason you've strayed from greentext this time around?
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>>29485078
>>29490486
>>29491051
Oh wow. I...did not expect this. I'm very humbled you enjoyed my work. Thank you. That means a lot to me. I greatly apologize for being mostly silent in this general for a while now. I know I said around December that I was in the midst of rewriting the whole story in traditional prose formatting instead of the typical green text format. Well, considering how long it is, I’m almost done with revising chapter seven. Eight is a monster one due to its length, but since most of it is dialogue, I am hopeful it will be quick.

Going forward, I would like to put the revised versions on FimFiction and post the revised versions to my Pastebin in place of what’s there currently. There were quite a few errors in some parts of the story, and chapter six needed some fixing here and there. It’s all pretty much the same, but revised so that it reads better. I’m not sure when I’ll post the revised versions, but I promise that it will be soon. Once that happens, I’ll (finally) begin writing new material. And fortunately, I have some ideas to go with in terms of what I want to write next.

And lastly, I sincerely apologize for taking forever to make progress. Been kind of busy dealing with some things as of late, as well as doing “research” with respect to you know what (if you’ve read my story, then you know what I'm referring to). That has taken a bit more of a priority, and with what I have in mind, things should get VERY interesting. I just need a little more time.

“Soon. I promise. Oh so very soon.”
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>>29494858
It's seriously fine, don't rush, take all the time you need to make this shit good. t. anon who said it was my favourite story before and also anon who's your biggest fan
And personally I find it better to be silent than to be obnoxious with constant update to your progress and no real content (updates are fine if they have content sometime around), so I feel that's also perfectly fine aswell.
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>>29494377
>you will never own a pocket pony
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>>29494683
This is freaking adorable.
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>>29494925
<3
Thank you truly and sincerely. Can't tell you enough how much it means to me to see someone still enjoying my work.

Also, RichAnon and Wallmixer, you two do some awesome work. Especially you Wallmixer, I love your stuff. It's all so very fascinating. You wouldn't happen to have an actual copy of PetPone.exe, would you? It could be very useful for my research.
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>>29495386
I don't think he has it, but there's always petbgm.mp3 if you want to fuck up your mind.
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>>29495386
Sorry, I don't have that, honestly sadly no idea where I could get it too, but I do had the abovementioned pet hypno. wait a second why do you need pet for research
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>>29495386
>Especially you Wallmixer
I'll never stop trying
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>>29495415
>>29495454
Ah. I see. Thank you for the offer though. I have that original pet file, but I do agree with the first poster. It is dangerous, especially if the subject has a run in with an abusive individual. I do not recommend it. Then again, there are even more dangerous versions out there.

Regardless, I do have what I need in terms of research, but anything new could always be useful. And as far as why I would need it for my research, that will be revealed in time.

>>29495538
Don't ever stop trying. People like you are the lifeblood of PTFG. I give my heartfelt respect to anyone who has ever written in this general. There's just so many writers here that I tend to lose track. If that's you RichAnon, please trust me that your work is good. Please continue. I enjoy reading it and hope to read future pieces by you. Same applies to any aspiring or current writer here. There's easily other writers here that are way better than me. Some of them I even look up to for inspiration. There were times I thought my writing was bad and wanted to give up, but I kept going. If you want to write, write. Just don't give up and keep going so long as you enjoy it. Can you do that for me? You can do it. I believe in you. <3
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>>29495663
>tfw you keep losing the link to the giant stash of pony hypno files including the filly and pony ears and three different pet files
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Post contains minor spoilers for the Radiance story so DON'T read the spoilers if you haven't read the story, it might ruin an important element of the story.

>>29494858
Oh wow, I didn't think I would get a reply from the legend himself! Thank you very much for making such an amazing story. Can't really think of any part of your story that wasn't executed perfectly. It has now been almost 20 hours since I finished reading and it's going to take quite a bit longer to recover. Fuck you for doing this to me

Somehow you managed to really encapsulate the perfect pony experience into this one pony. I can't believe how I felt reading it through for the first time. It was bliss. Until you ripped it away. That fucking blackbox gift letter destroyed it and everything afterwards made me feel very uneasy.

If Dr. Money ever needs a willing test subject for any available VDM unit let me know.
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>>29495797
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HaNIUNBmck0gu8unbTkdT6lMleDGj81a-WNXbsIwXtw/mobilebasic#
This?
>>29495386
>>29495078
>>29494764

Thank you all, you have no idea how much I need to hear this. I love both of your work.

to answer your questions:

I'm experimenting with style, I plan to rewrite Leroy's story in prose and I have a more Orwellian story that I plan to write in either prose or stream of thought

Unfortunately no, if I did I would probably be off being the little pet pone right now.

Again thank you both, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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>>29493884
r a r e ly updated. poor horse
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>>29493442
I don't want to be a half human half hippo hybrid, though.
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>>29494377
I want to cum inside tiny pone
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I want to be turned into a pony and live on a farm not as livestock but as a companion to a nice owner that talks to me and stuff. Yes this is heavily influenced by PonySamsa's "Anonymous Bosch." Pic related.
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>>29495854
Legend? Do my eyes deceive me, or did someone call me a legend? Never in my entire life has anyone called me that. I'm flattered. You said you've been here for several years. Did you by chance write for the general? I'd be interested in reading whatever you may have written. And if you haven't written, write. Write what's in your heart, and write what you truly desire. Who knows what will happen if you do so? I can't promise you that you would be used in a VDM unit for I'm hoping to phase out of that form of technology. There's something more fascinating that I'm wanting to experiment with. Just need a little more time before I have the means to do so. Even if not me, maybe someone else here would be interested in taking you in. This general has a very rich history. Stick around and make a name for yourself. Who knows what will happen?

Regardless, I’m glad you enjoyed reading my story, despite how you may be recovering from it. I more than appreciate the kind words, though I still apologize that you’re feeling what you’re feeling currently from having read it. Still, those feelings you are experiencing are a mere taste of the true suffering that I have endured. Not everything in that story is purely fiction. Some of it is very real. And just you wait, the REAL fun will begin soon. On the upside though, the story does have a happy ending, and chapter eight will probably have been the darkest chapter in the entire story. After all, my end goal isn’t to make you sad and depressed forever. I just want to help make you happy and for you to live the life of your dreams. Happiness is what truly matters, right? : )

>>29495925
Sure, no problem. Keep it up WallMixer. Same with you RichAnon and everyone else here. So long as you enjoy it, never stop writing. And speaking of writing, I really should get back to it.
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>>29496295
Oh no, I'm afraid that during all of my years lurking this thread I have not meaningfully contributed at all. I've never really written and wouldn't even know how to begin, and I wouldn't want to pollute this thread with shitty practice green. However, I have recently picked up drawing and I hope that one day I can draw something relevant to this general. While reading your story I kept thinking how great it would be to draw out some of the scenes that so vividly played out in my head.

I forgot to say in my first post that I had to forcefully tear myself away from my computer to take a break because of how physically uncomfortable I got. Looking back I felt like I was in an almost trance-like state and around the seventh chapter I had to go calm down (which didn't help at the time).

I was scared when I saw that the eight chapter had come out half a year ago and thought you had stopped writing. I'm relieved to hear that the opposite is true. I'm very excited to see what you come up with.

I see. My offer still stands though. Doesn't have to be VDM, any pony-related research would work. In the event that no volunteers are needed, then I guess all there is to do for me now is to wait for the Technological Singularity and pray that it happens during my lifetime.
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>>29496535
If you don't want to write that's one thing, but don't be afraid of it. I never wrote anything before coming to this general and from what I've been told my writing is pretty good now.

If you have an idea for a story please write for us, even if you start off sloppy you'll improve with practice.
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>>29494377
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>>29496655
Writing in any form, even if you feel it to be “practice green” is more than accepted in this general. When I first started writing this story at the very beginning and looked back, I thought my writing was garbage. Believe it or not, there were tons of writers writing for this general at the same time I was writing, all of whom produced really good stories. Spacewolfe, Woofr, Pony Samsa, Super Gay Fag, Icarus, Fauvra, and Zenith were producing some really fantastic greens at the time I started writing. I admired their work and looking at my own, I felt I could never compete with them. I felt I was just polluting the general with my own junk. Especially compared to Shutdown64, 8bitberry, Jazzteeth, Emms, Twisted Spectrum, Croptool, and Zephyr, all of whom inspired me to want to take a jab at writing, I felt and still wondered if I’d stand some chance in writing something comparable to the masterpieces produced in this general. I know my writing’s not the greatest, but I’m doing it regardless because I enjoy it. And truthfully, I’ve enjoyed numerous stories in this general. Even if I haven’t posted much, I’ve followed it since the very beginning. And to every single one of you who’s written anything here, thank you <3 Even if I didn’t mention your name, you’re still awesome. Keep writing and producing content. You are what gives this general life <3
So in a nutshell, write if you want to try to. Even if you feel it’s not good, write it anyway. Like drawing, you never know where it will take you. Part of my trick to writing is that I literally imagine it all in my head and write about what I’m seeing and experiencing from my point of view as if it’s happening in real life. I actually have to do that, or else I feel my writing’s junk. As long as you can formulate something in your head that you want to show to others, then the rest of it will come out naturally.
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>>29496775
That same process can be used in drawing too, even though I can’t draw to save my life. I will say though that if you did draw, there’d be so much yes on my end coming from that. This general could always use more artists, and I would be honored if you ever did such a thing with my story or anyone else’s. Random tidbit, but there seriously needs to be more Zephyr art than those two drawings of her. If you did that and no artwork for my silly story, I’d still be so very happy <3

And lastly, it’s okay. Some parts of chapters seven and eight were even heavy for me. Especially writing chapter eight, it took me a lot of effort to write something that dark. I know it sounds crazy, but I think I actually enjoy writing sweet and loving stories more than dark ones. Some parts of this story were an emotional rollercoaster for me too, but seriously, thank you for reading and saying what you said earlier. It’s also people like you that inspire me to continue writing. So, fellow Anon, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind words.

Seriously though, if you’re wanting to, try picking up a name and produce something for this general. Whether it be writing or drawing or something, it might help to cope with the pony feels. My life has completely changed because of this general. Seriously, it really has. And that happened when I started writing this silly story. And ironically enough, I’ve been the happiest I’ve been in my entire life because of it, despite this story being dark. So share your heart regardless of your talent and make something. You never know what might happen. You might just get to be the pony of your dreams <3
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>>29496761
Correction:

This is the PasteBin
http://pastebin.com/wJD6G4Ek
disregard my previous post
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>>29496658
>>29496775
>>29496779
Well shit... You people might even make me want to try this. Though it will take a while before I'll feel confident enough to share my creations. English isn't my first language either, so I'm not sure how comfortable I'd be writing in English.
I'm afraid I've only been drawing for a very short time. I've mostly just been practicing pony anatomy so far and I've got a long way to go. So far I've only posted a few pictures on the drawfag improvement thread and I doubt I'll post outside of there anytime soon.
I wholeheartedly agree about the Zephyr art. The absence of it was one of the many things that finally lead me to take up drawing.

>I actually enjoy writing sweet and loving stories more than dark ones
It definitely showed. For some reason your style of writing really struck a chord with me during chapters 2-6 , and because of that chapters 6-8 hit extra hard. The madness aspect of it struck unexpectedly and fiercely. After finishing chapter eight I had to go back to read some of the earlier chapters again to try to get that feeling back (it didn't work). I'll very happy if it is true about eight being the darkest, and we get a nine with the feeling of chapters 2-6.
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>>29496775
tfw I'm still waiting for Bob and Gerald to update
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I'll just get this list ready for the next thread. Please correct me if there's anything missing.

Pretty Little Pony by WallMixer - new
http://pastebin.com/wJD6G4Ek

I don't have a title yet whoops by RichAnon - new
http://pastebin.com/phKzMLLw

A Simple Melody by CrushingVictory - new
http://pastebin.com/ij7jvnXt

Sick Day by WallMixer - new
http://pastebin.com/RFLTBKjP

Breaking Horse by Spacewolfe:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-Cuh8qxD-hk8oMxpuwrH0pD7858VmDOaf9gEjMGo8Ks/edit

Quarantine by PrismAnon:
http://derpy.me/Ngh5I

One Lucky Pet by Buckett:
http://pastebin.com/P3hFyJBK

Immense Power by Scribbli:
http://pastebin.com/BgF7LQ86

Behind the Wire by WallMixer:
http://pastebin.com/t22Pcuvi
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>>29496960
>>29496775
>>29496779

It's when I see posts like this one that I remember why I started coming here in the first place.
This thread really gets motivating and heartwarming sometimes, doesn't it?

Love you guys<3
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>>29497221
Love you too anon
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>>29497221
I really love how supportive you guys can be.

And I love your work Scribbli, please keep it up.

new thread when?
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With this post I condemn this thread to death
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>>29498344
>>29498344
>>29498344

New Thread
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