Slave Pony Thread #79

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>>28871602
Ponies are for walkies

Second for piss filled hot tub.

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>>28871510
>>28871514
Baron Engel. One the best horse-ish ponies artists. Doubly impressive because he sketches it all by hand.

Has an unfortunate tendency to dip into shithro on occasion, but still pretty damn good.

>>28871602
I'm gonna do it jingles and you can't stop me from being a faggot!

I'll never read your FAQ, because I'm a fucking bear and can't read.

>>28871620
I honestly wouldn't mind if the whole show was in this style. It's cute.

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>>28871602
>"Come on Anon, you know I'm good for it, just lend me the bits!"
>The blue mare pleaded as she leaped across the table to grab your coat.
"I just do not believe that giving you a loan would be within the best interests of Equestrian National.
>"Not within the best interests of the bank, or not within your interests?"
>"hmph!"
>She pouted as she released her grip and sat back into her seat.
>Crossing her arms and looking away.
>You always hated these kinds of clients.
>They always felt like you owed them something.
>But you always used your classic go-to line whenever that came up.
"It is the duty of the crown to ensure the wellbeing of its citizens, as it is my duty to ensure the wellbeing of Equestrian National."
>You fix your glasses
"Perhaps you should take your problem up with Equestrian Urban development and simply default on your loan for the home."
>"You mean declare bankruptcy? Anon! That would ruin me! I'd be the biggest loser in all of Ponyville!"
"Well, we are not charity, we are a for-profit institution that is very much in the business of profit..."
"let's be frank, this meeting is a formality. Had you not been an element of harmony, you'd be talking to a low-level banker."
>She begins to tear up.
"And he'd be telling you the exact same thing I'm telling you now."
>"Please Anon, there has to be something you can do."
>She said, beginning to cry.
>"I'm....I'm desperate here...."
>That's what you were hoping to hear.
>You pull from your desk, a dusty old tome, with broad golden text across the front reading.
>Ye old Equestrian Laws.
"Well...there is something you could do for me personally, and perhaps I might be willing to buy the loan myself from the Peguese Union."
>"R-Really?"
>She muttered only half assured
>You flip through the pages and push the book towards her
>Pointing directly at a page in the book.
"Civil Code Section 22.2, if you'd be so kind and read it aloud for me?"
"You can read can't you?"

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>>28871646
>"Y-yea, I can...it says..."
>"Should an Equestrian citizen, be they of equine, minotaur or other decent, have the legal and freely given consent of the party involved, that party not needing to be of Equestrian citizenry, then they may issue a legally binding contract with aforementioned person that puts them fully indisposed to the contractor until a specified time so long as compensation of some kind is provided."
>You pull the book away from her
"Yes, yes, yes, and the contractor can terminate the contract at anytime yadda yadda yadda.."
>You say as you place the book into your desk and pull a pen and paper from your desk
>And begin to scribble away at it.
"Now, what does that mean to you?"
>"I...I don't know..."
"Of course you don't, your an idiot, but luckily for you I'm not."
>You finish up your last sentence on the paper.
>And pass the paper to her with the pen.
"Now, if you really want to save your home, you'll read this and sign it."
>"I-I don't know Anon...this is all kind of happening very fast."
"Fine"
>You begin to pull the paper away.
>"W-wait!"
>"I'll sign it give it here!"
>She said as she frantically grabbed the paper and scribbled away her name on the dotted line.
>You examine the paper once more and place it into your desk
>And extend your hand to Rainbow Dash.
"Congratulations Rainbow Dash, you are now under my employ for the next ten years."
>"WHAT?!?!"
"Well I mean you did read the law, and you did sign the paper, your now an indentured servant."
>"I-I didn't read the paper, I didn't know what I was signing honest!"
"But you did read the law didn't you?"
>"But I didn't understand it!"
"Nowhere in the civic code does it say that you must understand it, only that you willingly sign the contract."
>"Y-you tricked me!"
"No I didn't, I only said I'd pay your debt in exchange for ten years of unpaid labor, of which I would provide home and sustenance on the contract."
"You chose not to read it, and you chose to willingly sign it."

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>>28871653
>You press a button hidden beneath your desk
>"You can't do this Anon! It isn't right!"
"It's already done."
>"I won't honor it then."
"Then I'll have you thrown in prison and sue you for violating a legally binding contract."
>The once defeated mare is now enraged
>And she begins to climb your desk to lunge at you.
>"Give me the contract you dweeb!"
>As she begins to jump at you, she is slammed onto your desk by two stallions. Both wearing your corporate blue security guard outfits
>She struggles violently swinging her hooves at the guards.
>"I have rights Anon, this is assault!"
"Not only is this not assault, but even if it was, you've been stripped of your rights by me."
>You lean back into your chair
"I can do whatever I want to you."
>"Buck you Anon you greedy little troll!"
"Put her in the back, we'll have a heart to heart later when she's calmed down."
>Your guards drag her from the room and she curses your name.
"Oh and Rainbow Dash!"
>She glares at you as your guards hold her at the door.
"I'll purchase the debt on your home right now. Wouldn't want to be in breach of my contract after all."
>You wave the guards away and you begin to write another letter....

>>28871627
It's ok. Everything will be just fine.

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>>28871662
>Hours come and hours pass
>And you have your secretary carry your day to day letters to the post office, that and the newly signed contract with Rainbow Dash.
>It was a busy day.
>But you got a very precious pawn for this game of chess you were playing.
>You check the clock in your office and see the time to be around 10pm-ish.
>Another late night.
>You worked hard for these miserable creatures.
>These undeserving self-righteous wretches...always expecting handouts....
>But your getting lost in thought again.
>You leave your office and enter "the back room"
>To see Rainbow Dash, locked in a cell and being watched by a withered old guard.
>He's dozed off and she still shakes the cell door hoping in vain to break free.
"Shake it some more, I'm sure you'll break it this time."
>She stops and turns her attention to you.
>"Let me go, this is kidnapping!"
"No it isn't, I'm detaining my violent servant. It is within my right."
>You say as you walk towards the sleeping guard
>You tap him on the shoulder
"Why don't you call my carriage driver, and head home."
>"R-Really Mr. Anon, but...who will guard the bank?"
"Oh we'll survive one night without a watchmen."
>You say as you help the tired old stallion to his feet.
"Your getting old Sammy, you outta retire. Spend more time with your grand foals."
>"Oh, after everything you've done for me, the least I could do is stay on the payroll."
>You place your hand on his shoulder
"You're a good guard Sammy, you've been here since the beginning, I hope you'll stay with us for many more years."
>He smiles at this and you respond
"Now go get my fucking carriage and go home, that was an order."
>"Oh, r-right away Mr.Anon!"
>He scampers out of the room.
>And you lock the door.
>You grab a chair and pull it up in front of Rainbow Dash's cell and sit on it.
>She glares at you, and you stare back unblinking.

>>28871663
I was really hoping he'd start fighting with me. I like triggering people.

Though I'm sincerely confused about the difference between sub and slave.

>>28871674
>What is the difference between SPG and SiM?

SiM (Submission is Mandatory) focuses much more on abusive manipulation and psychological domination such as BDSM and non-consent. There is a small amount of slavery in SiM but it's usually sexual.

SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts. There is a very small amount of BDSM in SPG. Anything over the top belongs in SiM and will not be accepted in SPG.

TLDR:
SiM = BDSM oriented thread with few slavery elements
SPG = Slavery oriented thread with few BDSM elements

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>>28871670
>"You gonna say something?"
>You pause for a moment longer.
"You ever love someone?"
>You stand and walk towards the cell
"I mean like really love someone?"
>You place your arms on the cell door, elbows just above your head and lean into the bars till your face to face with her.
"So much that you can barely breath when you're around them?"
>"Is this the part where you tell me you have crush on me?"
>You slip your arms between the bars and grab her head.
>Then slam her face into the bars.
>"Ahhh!"
>She screamed as she fell back in pain.
>You open the cell door and enter.
>She regained her composer and yells
>"You little twerp!"
>As she flew towards you
>But you plant your fist into her muzzle midflight.
>Effectivly close lining her from the air.
>Her body slams onto the cold hard concrete floor.
>And you get on top of her
>She flails her hooves at you and you slap them aside and pin them.
"Do you have any idea how that feels?"
>"W-what are you doing?"
"When they stay in your mind and become an itch you just can't scratch?"
"It can be just so frustrating!"
>You say as you punch her on her side
>She wheezes
"Day in and day out to see her come and go."
>"C-calm down Anon, I-I didn't do anything!"
>She stuttered
>You exhale and look into her eyes
>They're full of terror and she's too scared to maintain eye contact.
"No...no I guess you didn't."
>You lean on to her, bringing your face closer to hers
>She turns away, her eyes beginning to tear up.
>and she starts to shake
"You ever take a ride in a carriage before?"
>"N~na, na"
>You slap her
"Out with it."
>"No."
"No what?"
>"No sir."
"Good..."
>You grab her by the scruff of her neck
>and shove her out of the cell.
>Your carriage driver wait just outside
>Door open
>You force her into your carriage
>And enter
>Then leave into the night.
>You say nothing to her the entire ride and just stare out the window.
>And she does her best to sit as far away from you as possible.

>>28871683
Okay well, then this would work for both threads. because there isn't consent...

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>>28871684
>After several moments pass...As time seems to elude you
>The carriage inevitably stops.
>The door opens and you have arrived at the Anon Mansion.
>A three story tall and 5000 by 5000 square feet victorian themed eyesore.
>Although it was larger than anything dash had lived in before, you knew it was a cozier sized mansion compared to what the elite could afford.
>It had begun to rain during your travel so the air was cold.
>"Wow this is a real nice place and all b-but maybe I should get going...."
>You raise your hand to stop her from finishing her thought.
"Its best that we begin your training now rather than later. Helps prevent misunderstandings."
>"T-training?"
>Shivering at the thought.
"It is important for you to learn that as of today, my life is worth more then your life. As such, you must ensure that my passage to my home is as comfortable as possible."
>"okay..."
"I suppose I wasn't clear enough. It is raining Rainbow Dash and I cannot be asked to hold my umbrella."
>you say as you point to the umbrella hanging just on the wall of the carriage.
>"it's a little small isn't it?"
"Its big enough for what I need it to do. Now take the umbrella and wait for your master outside the carriage."
>she takes the umbrella and leaves the carriage.
>You can tell there was some resentment but it did not matter to you.
>The umbrella was open and waiting for you just outside the carriage
>as a cold and shivering dash held it in place.
>Though there was one problem with this, she held it at her height level.
>This would never do.
>As you leave the carriage you jerk the umbrella upwards.
>forcing dash onto her hind legs and she stumbles about, trying to maintain her balance.
>Water seeps from the sides and splashes onto her the face
>"A-anon! I can't cover both of us like this!"
"Then you'll just have to cover me."
>With water soaked fur she grumbled but you ignored it.
>As you begin to walk directly to the left of your mansion.

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>>28871708
>"Where you going? The doors right there!"
"I don't feel like heading home yet."
"It's been months since I've seen my garden, I want to see how my peaches are growing."
>"In the pouring rain?"
"Nows as good a time as any."
>Dash grits her teeth and grumbles louder.
>but you ignore her again and begin your stroll to your family garden
>And dash hops on her hind legs trying to maintain her balance while keeping the umbrella just above your head.
>When out of the corner of your eye, you spot something shiny on the floor.
>Stoping abruptly you cause dash to stumble forward.
>And she nearly falls to the ground
>and you and rummaged through the dirt.
>"What, what's happening?"
"I think I see a bit on the ground."
>"Are you kidding me Anon? One lousy bit?!?!"
>"It's pouring rain, just leave it!"
>You wave your finger at her and say
"Mind the penny's Dash."
>As you rummage through the dirt, you find that it was in fact....a shiny rock.
"Darn, well better luck next time right?"
>"ERRR!!!"
>Dash's anger boils over and she quickly closes the umbrella and smacks you in the back of the head with it.
>The pain is sharp and stingy and you grasp your head.
>When you turn to face your assailant, you find that she has flown off into the distance.
>You really weren't sure what you were expecting....but you didn't care as you walked back into your mansion.
>You enter the foyer of the Anon mansion.
>With redwood floors and white walls decorated with many portraits of your forefathers, some serious, some smiling, some....just plain ugly.
>Waiting in the foyer was a small ivory unicorn, adorned in a black maids outfit and carrying your change of clothes.
>She was carrying your comfy red smoking coat and silk sweat pants.
>You disrobe and she looks away, and floats the respective garments to you as you call for them.
>And you begin to walk to your parlor and the ivory mare follows.

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>>28871736
>"Would monsieur like some cocoa this evening?"
"No, but prepare some anyways, were going to have a new guest joining us shortly curie."
>"Right away monsieur"
>She replied as she scampered off with your wet clothes.
>Curie, was a good mare. That is to say that your maid who is named Curie. She always knew her place, never overstaying her welcome or giving her opinion when it wasn't asked.
>She always did precisely what you asked of her...whatever it was.
>And you treasured her for this because respect and obedience was all that mattered to you.
>You enter your parlor, a massive room, with wooden shelves that reached the ceiling, covered in books, complete with a roaring fireplace in the rooms center, and a single red cushy chair with a single coffee table waiting just for you.
>You take your seat by your fireplace, and remove your glasses placing them on the table....and wait
>Before too long you begin to hear the familiar mulling of a not so obedient mare.
>"Let me go you psychos!"
>Tumbles and crashes could be heard in the hallways.
>"Ahh! The bitch bite me!"
>Screamed a stallion in the distance.
>Though the voices were getting louder but you maintained eye contact with your fire.
>"Help me! Somepony help me, anypony!"
>And at last tumbling into your room where two large pegasus wrestling a mud covered Rainbow Dash.
>They continue to scuffle
>And you hear what sounds like flesh being smacked
>Dash screamed in pain
>And you
>Well you hoped that none of your families portraits were damaged in this nonsense, but Curie would restore them should the need arise.

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>>28871743
>They finally drag her before you, and she's forced to sit on the floor by your guards
>You finally lose interest in your fire and make eye contact with Dash.
>Her nose had begun to bleed again and your guards had bruised her eye.
>After several seconds you felt it was time to speak
"You know, you have got quite a temper."
>"I've got a temper? Buck you! You're a freaking psychopath!"
"Dash, I'm hurt, really I am. I thought that we were beginning to have some kind of understanding back there."
>You lazily sit back into your chair and say
"But I guess I jumped the gun on this one, well it can't be helped."
>You make eye contact with one of your guards and he nods at you
>He then swiftly bashes dash on her cheek forcing her to fall onto the ground.
>Your guards force her back into a sitting position and you continue
"I'm just curious really, what was your plan?"
"You know I legally own you right?"
>"Go to hell Anon! You just wait until I tell Celestia about this, you can kiss your butt goodbye!"
"Was that your plan?"
"Who do you think received a copy of your contract?"
"Well that and Ponyvilles court but that's beside the point."
"What part of civil code did you not understand?"
>"I already told you none of it!"
"But surely the reality of your situation should have sunk in by now?"
"I mean, I thought that it was pretty clear back at the bank."
>"You just sucker punched me and kicked the shit out of me?"
"It was a display of dominance."
>"It looked like you were insane!"
>You sigh
"Figures..."
>You wave your guards away and they shove her to the floor as they walk out of the room.
>Dash remains on the ground, head down, and she curls up, you hear faint sobbing and you continue to stare at her.
>Curie enters the room with a damp towel, a cup of cocoa and more importantly a copy of today's newspaper.

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>>28871620
This guy's stuff is amazing.

>>28871758
That third pose where she's removing the back of the saddle looks really weird, but I don't think it'd look much better in the proper style.

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>>28871620
>>28871758

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>>28871750
>She places the cocoa and the newspaper on the table
>And then attempts to clean dash.
>Dash, recoils at her touch and shoves her
>"D-don't touch me! N-nooo!"
"I didn't realize you were so fond of dirt."
"I suppose it does suit you, but regardless, I dislike dirty things."
>You snap your fingers and Curie jumps to Attention.
>"Oui!"
"Curie, if Dash resists you again, I want you to break her wings...slowly."
>"Oui mon capitaine!
>Dash says nothing, but begins to sob visible now.
>The mare was mess
>Just a fireball of emotions
>First she's angry, then she's sad, and sometimes she doesn't even want say anything at all.
>You can't seem to wrap your head around this
>You watch her tears dribble down her cheeks.
>And you watch fall onto the ground.
>None of it made sense to you, and you didn't care.
>You felt nothing anyways
>You watched as Curie began to scrub away the dirt even cleaning Dash's nose
>And before too long dash was clean again
>Though her nose continued to bleed
>But curie gave her a handkerchief
>And forced dash to press it against her nose.
>"Monsieur detests messes, it makes him so violently angry, please keep this in place manquer"
>She complied but had the same sad look on her face refusing to say anything.
>Curie turns to you when the deed is done
>and you say
"That's all for now Curie, leave us, we have much to discuss."
>"I shall prepare dinner monsieur"
>You wave her away and she scampers off into the hallway

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>>28871777
"And then there were two."
>"Why are you doing this..."
>Dash whispered softly
>You decide to pause for a moment, letting silence fill the room.
>You then stare at the portrait of your father just over the fireplace.
>Letting quite gestate for an entire minute.
>before giving your response
"Because I think, that you can help me get something I want."
"Something...that's been just out of my reach for years now."
"Though, with your help, I figure....this little plan of mine may bare fruit."
>You grab the coco from the table and place it on the ground before her
>And push it towards her
"I figure it's only fare that you help me after all, I mean I did help you."
>She grabs the cup with her hooves and stares at it.
"Don't throw that at me, it's hot."
>"Why? So you can sick one of your goons on me again?"
>She grumbled as she took her first sip.
"Curie does make good cocoa, don't you agree?."
>"This isn't cocoa Anon it's chocolat milk."
"No it isn't, it's cocoa, I just prefer it with milk."
>"Cocoa is made with water Anon..."
"Look, I don't wanna talk about what is or isn't cocoa, I just wanted to know if you liked it."
>She glares at you and grumbles.
>"I've had worse..."
"And I've had better guest, but we can't always get what we want can we now?"


And that's it for now, I feel like it fits better her then sub.

>>28871777
Ya jumped the gun on the edge here, regardless of the law Equestria is a absolute monarchy, if Celestia found out about this he would likely be publicly executed and privately if not.

Try again.

>>28871787
PasteBin To Story: http://pastebin.com/iYu3Bjg2

>>28871788
And the plot thickens!

You've given me some ideas on how to move foward.

I refuse to change anything, please point out flaws so that I can just find ways to weasel around them later in the story.

>>28871758
>>28871620
>>28871615
You guys don't seriously want to fuck horses right?
Because I do.....
But I prefer rape.

>>28871602
>>28871615
>tfw Skittles will never get her walkies

shiny and corona update when?

>>28871788
I like it so far.

>>28871794
There's no way of weaseling around getting on the bad side of four of the most powerful individuals on that world, not just politically, but physically, did you forget dash is friends with one of the de-facto rulers of this nation Anon is living in?

How do you think she will take this being done to her friend given the power she hold by virtue of her position, let alone her very close relationship with the sole ruler of that nation for the last 1000+ years?

They could literally do whatever they want without worrying about the law because monarchs are above such plebeian things.

Do you even watch the show?

>>28871819
the writefag is on hiatus

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Finally one new thread

>>28869058
Good job CYOS

Mellowheart is an important element in the community for his healing abilities while the Pegasus has shown that he has the strength to fight, at least against a humans who is not armed with firearms, both of which are too valuable elements to dispense with them through a Severe punishment, but they should also set the example with them before Anonymous's patience runs out and decides the sentence for them.

It is necessary to know the name of the third pony involved and to discover if they are just an isolated movement or part of a larger rebel group, Candance could use a spell to force them to confess everything, unless she is not very good at using Such magic, otherwise humans will want to apply their own methods to know the truth.

It is necessary to put an end to all these rebellions so that the future plans work and that the ponies may feel that there is an opportunity to improve their life in the plantation, otherwise animosity and opposition to the authority to extend between the population and the ponies will lose respect for the princess and commit acts more and more daring and dangerous.

It would be tragic they plot something against the princess or against the others 'collaborators' of Anon and the other humans, and even plan to enter the property of Anonymous for the purpose of hurting or being hurt someone very close to him and Candace

I consider that Anon and Candance think in some intelligent way to motivate the population to orient their mentality and attitude to improve both the productivity of the property and to raise the morale and encourage the hope of a better future for all, perhaps to give to the fillies a place to play, a better school. . . . Or celebrate Christmas - Warm Hearts Day

Sorry for the bad english, use Google Translations

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>>28871819
Wednesday.

This stories pretty edgy, a bit too edgy for my tastes, actually. I want to figure out why, because I have no problem with other edgy stories like For You; Twilight.

Maybe it's because Anon is a smug asshole, and I can't insert into that. Regardless, if people enjoy it, feel free to keep posting it. I think you'd get a better reception in SiM, but there's a lot of cross posting.

>>28871825
>Do you watch the show
Sometimes
>Four most powerful
Here's a vida for you nigga
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rStL7niR7gs

>As far as weasling and executions

THEN I'LL MAKE HIM DIE SHINY AND FULL OF CHROME.
Or use his implied massive wealth to start a massive shit storm.

Plus your implying shit.

>>28871835
Fuck, this post is a mess.

*story's
*For You: Friends
*cross-posting

>>28871842
>>28871842
That video makes no accounting for someone who has lived long enough, and been in charge long enough that someones great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-grandparents would remember them, Imagine if Adolf or Stalin had been in power since 0 B.C.

Not a single person would ever speak out against them, those were just political giants, imagine if the had the power to look at you and make you die, or wipe your city off the map with a thought, rich people are only rich when the government allows it, just look at the October revolution.

i thing you would be better off at SiM, Anon seems pointlessly a dickhead and I'm guessing he's been doing this for some time, whilst somehow avoiding the secret police in the form of Celestia's mind invading sister.

No doubt you have some weak hand wave for that too, but I'm not even willing to give this a chance and wait and see if it gets better, much like cancer and herpes shit stories almost always get worse.

>>28871758
Isn't it?

He just straddles that line where they're horsey enough to make it abundantly clear what they are, and yet not full hoers - some of the show's style still in them.

...it's a real pity he hasn't done any proper slavery/bondage pics.

>>28871875
I like your energy. you've inspired me to keep going.

I'll do it for you senpai. I'll make sure Anon rapes Celestia, Dash, and anyone else I think you wiafu.

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>>28871683
>SPG = Slavery oriented thread with few BDSM elements

And White Knights elements

>>28871887
Not that guy but you're on /mlp/, you really think the threat of rape is a threat? I've personally came to a story of my waifu being burnt to death from the inside out while slowly being dismembered and eaten.

You're gonna have to do a lot worse than rape.

Stop being so needlessly edgy as well, you're scaring the children.

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>>28871887
>>(You)

Do what you want.

>>28871908
Rape was the farthest i'd ever go in a story, but i'm open to suggestions.

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>>28871909
K, i'm having fun now. All these you's are really making me moist.

>Me in pic

>>28871927
>Rape was the farthest i'd ever go

Weak. How am I supposed to get off if someone isn't in indescribable pain?

What does that even mean; where does rape fall on the spectrum? Is that above or below branding? What about piss drinking, is that worse than rape? Amputation, that's a good one, can you amputate a pony for me? Or encasement. I read this story once where Celestia was encased in cement before she was raped, can you do that for me?

>>28871955
hmm, I can swing that at some point, I'll put it in Anon's bag of tricks.

I mean, I already am implying allot about his character already.
>He has thugs
>He's a banker
>He's rich
>His family has been rich for awhile
>Curie seems okay with the idea of open abuse.

It wouldn't be out of character or even out of place for Anon to go full shitlord to get what he wants.

I'm gonna keep that in my bag of tricks.

>>28871983
Look, all I'm saying is, if this isn't a fetish thing that ends with Celestia getting ass raped, I may as well stop reading right now.

>>28871994
Well, I love allot of foreplay

I mean, I like to build up characters for a long time. It makes me cum easier when I get to the rape.

When Ass raping occurs, I wanna make it be allot more about a power fetish then an Anal fetish.

That's just me. Power fetish is my shit.

That being said, read it or don't read it.....I'm cool either way. Though I crave your approval senapi

I'll post if just one person likes it, or if just one person is triggered.

That condition was satisfied already. I'll work on it throughout my week when i'm not studying for my exams.

>>28872006
Oh, don't be mistaken, I fucking hate the story, and I fucking hate you, I just wanna know if it'll eventually appeal to my fetishes, which it doesn't seem like it will. You just won't go far enough.

>>28871774
ponies can pretty near canonically move in stupid ways like this. I try to pretend theyre all severely double jointed.

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>>28872038

>I fucking hate the story, and I fucking hate you
I don't suppose you can tell me where I went wrong so I can improve?

Or do you just hate it because you don't like the idea.
As in, there's nothing grammatically wrong with it, and it's well put together but you just hate it.


Please love me senpai, I crave your attention.

>>28871602
MARKER?

>>28872057
Grammatically it's fine.

I'm not liking the premise or its holes. I'm sure if I thought long enough I could single out the big ones, but really I can't be bothered. Maybe you even have a handwave for them, I dunno, but Breaking Bluebird, this ain't.

Anon is just a really unappealing guy as well. Which I could look past if there was actual sex, but without it he just comes off as a psychopathic asshole who's above the rules because LOL MONEY. Then you turn around and try to play him as this calm, intelligent, boss character sipping tea by the fireplace one post after he physically loses control and beats someone half to death. You can't have both.

The premise is flawed, the character is shit and there's no sex that ends in someone dead or screaming, so what's the point?

Also this list >>28871983
That's not implying anything. That's stating the obvious. Implying means you don't actually show that he has thugs, or is rich, or is a banker, all of which you've done in the first post.

But I'm done here. I've got a story of my own to work on.

>>28871908
who ate her and which waifu?

>>28872164
Twilight and Trixie.

>>28871602
Did you have to use the OC from the cancer of the board?

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>>28872149
Thank you senpai, I worship your feet for giving me actual criticism!

I will work harder on future dom story's.

Also breaking bluebird was good, but it never got to sex. That's what irked me about it, I was trying to make Anon like Patrick Bateman but I failed so.....i'll just run until i'm out of steam..... but knowing there's an actual flaw really hurts.....

You're saying there's a balance that must be made for characters. I agree, I just wanted Anon to be capable of rape.

SENPAI I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR GIVING ME REAL CRITICISM!

>>28872185
What do you mean, that's not Corona.

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>>28872185
Nice meme.

>>28871787
im interested, its different than what we normally get but im curious what happens.

>>28871794
>>28871825
eh seems like a minor thing to get caught up on, just think of it as an AU equestria with a constitution or something. Or a harsh celestial that rules with an iron hoof or a million other explanations, either way its really not the point of the story.

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>>28871787
Okay, I'm going to be honest : this is the most retarded story we ever had in this thread (yeah, even the one with Toilet Sparkle).

It's in Equestria, and not a version invaded by humans.
- Celestia and Purple are both alive and well
- Crusty Cunt is part of the country's elite Air Force, a national hero, a personal friend of one of the 4 most powerful ponies on this planet, and also an ex-part of Equestria WMD.

Your story premise is "I tricked her with a very old law that's probably illegal now and it's just there because ponies forgot to remove it".
And somehow, you expect us to believe that :
1) No Alicorns is going to just revoke that law and send Anon to the moon
2) Barring that, no one is going to just "kidnap back" Dash and beat Anon to a pulp
Even if Purple suddenly decide that "fuck friendship, laws are more important", AppleJack would rescue her, Discord would (after days of Fluttershy crying), the Wonderbolts would, etc. And you can bet that the ponice wouldn't give much fuck about finding the culprit in such a situation.

Your writing is good, but your premise is just dumb as fuck, there is limit to suspension of disbelief, even with magical pastel horses.

>>28871788
>>28871825
>>28872149
>>28873349
Wait, nevermind - someone already pointed it.

>>28873253
Need Appul

Appul is for hug

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>>28873425
appul is for consensual bondage with hard whipping

>>28873349
Your gonna be surprised because I came up with a solution to why Celestia can't do shit.

There's Gonna be rape, industrialization heavy implication as to anons grander scheme.....

I wanna tell you guys because of the salt mines this place is but I'll hint at.

It has everything to do with who Anon is....
Bigger hint Anons not immortal he also has no magical powers.

I've already said to much but I've implied shit enough that you'd see it coming if your not salty.

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>>28873556
>inb4 its some bullshit device that blocks magic

>>28873580
Nope, infact humans are doubly affected by magic in this story.
They just can't harness it in the same way and they get a super raw deal on the magic department.

Really think about it in the way magic could limit a society rather then strengthen it.
Everything has drawbacks.

>>28873603
doesnt matter, premise is just not appealing.

>>28873580
You mean like literally every slave story ever written here that involves enslaved unicorns?

>>28873612
Its fun to write.

Also I really expected you guys no to give to shits about slave abuse.

You guys do know how slaves are traditionally treated right?

Anon is just acting naturally. Like someone whose owned slaves before.


I didn't realize it was such a cuddle fest here.

>>28873622
Exactly, why would a creature living in a magical world not be affected by magic.

Humans tend to suck biologically it would make sense they suck at magic too and are weak to it.

>>28873626
We have other stories in which slaves are abused pretty badly that people like. It's just that the premise of your story is kind of stupid, which is a big reason I also can't get into the popular stories over on SiM. Most of the stories here are ponies on Earth that have been taken from Equestria and enslaved. Human in Equestria with slavery is extremely difficult to pull off in a convincing manner because in Equestria the ponies have a lot bigger home field advantage, and pretty much every SiM story I've read has Anon being stupidly powerful for garbage reasons and that kills any suspension of disbelief and interest I have to continue reading their stories.

>>28873626
>I didn't realize it was such a cuddle fest here.
Some called us 'White Knight General' in the past.
Just let that sink in.

>>28873638
Well Anon is very much a wuss in this story who just threatens and outsmarts people.
The only reason he beat up dash was because he sucker punched her.

We'll see though....I really like allot of foreplay so this is going to move slowly but it's gonna pick up traction and shit will go down faster then your momma at a dick sucking contest.

>>28873651
Then I shall write for the Anons who wish to grab ponies by the pussy and make equestria great again.

>>28873671
>Faster then your momma at a dick sucking contest.

I'm so hyped guys!

>>28871683
Tfw you actually realize your a bear in the wrong neighborhood.

Fuck it, in my defense i can't read.

>>28873730
I wish to do things to appul.

>>28873631
>humans tend to suck biologically
You're an idiot if you really believe this.

>>28873754
This. The human body is ridiculously resilient.

>>28873749
What about raping the apple?

>>28873768
Only if she's into that kinda thing.

>>28873730
That's a happy poner. Let's hope Applejackie can reach a state of happiness like this in Landscape.

>>28873942
Or at the very least unconsensual dick. Given violently.

>>28873622
Fucking shit up with chemicals is literally the easiest thing you can do with them, so a drug that disable magical ability isn't hard to imagine. Especially if it's only about unicorns, who need a bit of concentration and willpower for that : a lot of psycho-active drugs used nowadays would do the trick. Just a bit of R&D to increase the "fuck brain control over magic" side-effect and it's ready.
On top of that, remember that the average unicorn isn't Twilight and is pretty weak in the magical department. Trixie's level of magic is already enough to put 99% of PonyVille's unicorns in awe, Rarity was powerless against 3 barely-armed, famished diamond dogs, etc ..

A device that somehow nullify magic around it however ... ew. It mean human machines can interact with magic - and if mankind has the knowledge to do that, then they also should have magi-tech everywhere. Also, if said machine can prevent Celestia from blasting you to the sun, then it mean human devices are much better at magic than a god-level super-unicorn ... and we go straight into edgy territory.

>>28873948
This qualifies as unapologetic shitposting at this point, doesn't it?
Worse yet, it's not even particularly amusing.

>>28873971
I strive to be pure cancer as a writefag.

>>28871602
>>28871615
I want to walk pony and watch her pee

>>28873730
I said it before and I repeat it again; Applejack is the best pony

>>28871937
>me in pic
Wrong.

>mfw
Right.

>>28873969
I always liked to believe that the rings to suppress magic aren't human but from equestria itself

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>>28874000
>pure cancer
>writefag
I know who you are.

>>28874182
Shit man how'd you get my pick!
Look bruh don't go telling my moms she'll flip mang.

>>28873969
Honestly, I've always assumed that "magic suppression rings" aren't some special magi-tech but rather that horns just don't work well when something is directly touching them. It's 50% headcanon, 50% seeing them do things like 'put out' horns by touching them in the show.

>>28873349
>>28873556
you guys are way to hung up on the whole 'muh celestia' thing. we're here for slave stories not canonically realistic ones.

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>>28873942
Me too anon.
We can only hope landscape anon can find some time to write for us with his busy schedule.

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Seriously, I told you guys, ponies are too lewd to enslave.
Stop trying to do that.

>>28873349
>Toilet Sparkle

Toilet was Vinyl Scratch, bro. At least get your lore right. I didn't put five minutes of work into it for you not to appreciate the deep, in depth lore of Toiletslave.

Bookhorses continue!

> "Right this way. She's waiting inside."
"Thank you."
> A door is buzzed open, and the plastic card clipped to your shirt checked again before you pass through it.
> The room beyond is simple - two flourescent fixtures buzzing near the ceiling, drowning the room in their harsh light - but not uncomfortable.
> A cot had been provided, as had wood furnishings, a seats, and a window at the far end.
> Not much of a window, but a window nonetheless.
> Seated firmly at the center of the room, however, the mare held within seems unwilling to take advantage of any of those.
> Her head is bowed, giving you a good head-on view of her tri-colored mane - bound up in a... topknot? You don't know what to call it - and the top of her muzzle.
> But little else; Moondancer doesn't even look up when you approach and drop to a squat in front of her.
"Hey there, Moondancer."
> No response; her eyes - now that you can see them - are locked on your shoes.
"Listen, uh - I'm supposed to bring you with me, to introduce you to the pony you're going to be working with."
> Silence.
"Moondancer?"
> ...
"She's going to be very happy to see you, I think. We can talk a bit more in the car, but you're going to have to be going."
> ...
> "You're going to want this to get her moving."
> A leash is held out to you - though, you note, it does not include a bridle.
> Good; her profile hadn't said anything about a predilection towards violence.
> Sighing, you stand and clip the leash to her collar.
> This, at last, evokes a response from her; at the snap of the latch falling shut, Moondancer rises to her hooves and lifts her eyes just enough to see where she is going.
> When you walk, she follows just at your side - not too close, not too far.
> Though she looks around, Moondancer doesn't seem remotely interested in the bustling facility around her.
> Snaking fear worms its way into your head.
> She hadn't been broken too, had she?

>>28875753

> 'Strong enforcement required for obedience', the profile had said.
> But looking her over, you couldn't spot any open signs of abuse or mistreatment.
> Unlike how Twilight had been at first, her eyes were alert and responsive; there was clearly no sign of starvation - perhaps even a bit of pudge.
> There were, of course, methods that left no mark - look at what had been done to Twilight's mind - but somehow Moondancer didn't strike you that way.
> She wasn't lethargic, just... nonresponsive.
> Pausing at the doorway, the man who'd accompanied you in holds out a small package to you.
> "Her things. Medicine, snacks, a to read, so if you break them it's on you.
"She's on the magic pills, right?"
> "Of course."
"How much?"
> "A mild dose, enough to suppress all but her most basic magic. She won't turn you into a frog, if that's what you're asking, but she can still take a book off a shelf."
> So not an overdose, then.
"...that sounds about right. Thank you."
> Getting into your car, Moondancer automatically goes for the back seat - stretching out across it.
> You hesitate, then on a whim loop her leash around one of the headrest supports.
> There'd been no sign of violence from her yet, but even a hug could be dangerous while driving.
> She doesn't really seem to care about you, though.
> Her eyes remain firmly locked on the window, watching the strip malls and gas stations and bus stops flow past.
"So, I guess I should tell you exactly what you're going to be doing here."
> "Mmm."
> It's the first real response you've gotten out of her, and you take that as an encouraging point.
"Well, the first of it is that you're going to be mostly working in the labs and overseeing integration, but also spending a fair mount of time at my place. It's not a bad place, and you'll have a working partner there."
> Nothing, this time.
"I really hope the two of you will do well. She's a good pony - been through a lot, but... honestly, we're pretty close now."

>>28875761
> Moondancer snorts, her ears pinning - which, you suppose, is better than no reaction.
"Like... she's feeling pretty alone. And, while I guess I like to think of myself as someone important to her, I think she'll be really happy to see you."
> ...
"She's really been doing a lot to help the other ponies too. So, you know, once things get started you can probably help with that as well."
> ...
"You'll have your own room when you're staying at my place, and of course free run of the house - barring my room of course, heh - but the rest of it is very much open to you..."
> You trail away awkwardly.
> Damn, she was really devoted to-
> "Alright, look."
> You nearly spin around in your seat.
> Finally!
> "Look - Anonymous, that's your name right? - look, don't try and be my friend? Because I've run in to your kind before. You bought me because you want me to work. I get that. So just tell me what you want me to do and then leave me alone."
> Frowning slightly, you shake your head.
"I won't deny that, Moondancer. But, honestly - I honestly don't think working demands we have to stand off from each other and glare."
> The snort is louder, more forceful this time.
> "You're not my friend. You're my owner. Best-case scenario, you just want me to work. Let me just get it done, okay?"
> After a moment's hesitation, she adds:
> "And if I do good, give me some time to do a little bit of reading on my own. That'd be... nice."
"Of course I can. But - I think you should wait until we get home before making any final calls.
> She hops out onto the garage floor when you arrive, patiently waiting for you to untie the collar.
> Stepping through the portal, you barely have time to call out before the distant, rapid thudding of hooves on floor meets your ears.

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>>28875773

> Twilight comes tearing around a corner, man flying wildly and elation stamped on her face - traveling at such speed she actually skids on hitting the wood-panel floor near the garage, falling into a tumble that she quickly rights herself from.
> "MOONDANCER!"
> "Twilight?!"
> The new unicorn's jaw actually drops, mouth hanging open as Twilight rises again and unhesitatingly tackles her into a fierce hug.
> Simply standing back, a grin growing on your face, you watch the two of them nuzzle each other all over - nostrils flaring wide as they take in the scent of a friend long lost.
> "Twilight Sparkle... I... I can't believe it..."
> "I - I know."
> Twilight sniffs softly, resting muzzle-to-muzzle with her one-time friend.
> "Everything - everything was changing so fast, and then this, and I didn't know if I'd ever see you again, ever..."
> "...just about given up hope of seeing anypony from the Academy again..."
> The two of them brush muzzles again, and at last you step forward - unclipping your leash from Moondancer's collar.
"Why don't the two of you take some time to catch up? I'm sure there's a ton of stuff you want to talk about, and we've a little time before we need to get started on anything."
> "Thank you!"
> Ripping herself from her friend's side at last, Twilight brushes against your leg - flicking her tail against it as she passes - in a familiar manner of thanks.
> "We'll be down for dinner, of course!"
"Excellent. You can show Moondancer her room as well, if you like. And-"
> You give a small wink.
"-introduce her to the book collection we've got around here."
> "Ooooooh."
> Twilight does her little happy-dance-in-place thing, hooves tapping on the floor as she rapidly moves from one to another.
> "Yes! Yes, absolutely!"
"Have some fun, then. I'll be down around six to get started on dinner."

>>28875784

> Even after you settle down on the couch, a computer in your lap and the latest episode of your favorite show streaming down, you can hear the sounds of their distant reconciliation.
> Hooves echoing off floors, voices raised in laughter here and there, even the occasional squeal of delight as some particularly enjoyable memory was brought up.
> That brings a smile to your lips as well.
> Perhaps Moondancer was not nearly as recalcitrant as the file had lead you to believe - or perhaps Twilight was merely the catalyst that had been needed to crack her shell.
> It is the latter, you must admit, that seems more likely.
> The way she'd talked to you in the car - she would obey, yes, but you can definitely see how she might have gotten burdened with the 'insubordinate' tag.
> Another burst of distant giggles trickles into the room and your worries melt away.
> That, you supposed, was a good sign.

--------

> With careful focus you lift the fork in your magic, bringing it - and the hot dinner on it - to your mouth.
> Despite the attention required, your mind wasn't really focused on the food.
> It was good, to be fair.
> But every bit of your attention was aimed at the man sitting across the table.
> He wasn't really your owner, you'd realized, but a kind of a manager - he worked for the people who owned you.
> Confusingly, Twilight seemed to be owned by him directly.
> Twilight - the thought of your former classmate sends your eyes shifting to glance at her.
> She sat between you and the man Anonymous, also fully-focused on her dinner and struggling with her magic.
> Anonymous, she claimed, had not used the anti-magic pills on her.
> Something else drove her struggles, but whatever it was she'd locked it away behind a wall of emotion that you didn't yet have the keys to.
> He'd wounded her somehow, you're certain.
> How else could you account for the way she clung to him?
> ...
> Setting your fork down - the plate empty - you look up at Anonymous.

>>28875789

"I am done. Is there anything else you need?"
> "No, it's fine Moondancer. You're good to go - just take your plate with you and drop it off in the kitchen."
> "Um, can I go with her?"
> Twilight isn't done, but she looks plaintively towards Anonymous anyhow.
> "If she needs anything else tonight..."
> "Of course, Twilight."
> Anonymous' warm tones send a shiver up your spine.
> What had he done to make her talk like that?
> You're just happy to get away from him, slipping from your seat and heading for the kitchen as quickly as you can without appearing to flee.
> Twilight soon appears after you, still smiling exuberantly.
"...hey - can we just go back to, uh, my room?"
> It still feels strange to say that.
> "Of course! Come on, this way."
> You remember the way, but let her lead.
> Arriving in your bedroom, you're again struck by the simple pleasure of having your own space.
> But only for a moment.
> You climb up onto the bed and slumping down on with a heavy sigh, all the tension that'd built up within you flowing out with that breath.
> "Are you feeling alright, Moondancer?"
"Yeah. I..."
> Lifting your head, you knock the door shut with your magic.
"...I'm just glad not to be alone anymore."
> "Alone? They kept you without anypony else-"
"No, no. I... I just..."
> Your head drops again, chin falling to the pillow.
"...I've been by myself for a long time, Twilight. You and I... we weren't ever party ponies, you know? And then after you left... well, there weren't a ton of ponies I was close with."
> She nods, seating herself at the foot of the bed and tucking her tail around her hooves.
> "Yeah. I'm sorry, Moondancer, I-"
"No. No, it's okay. I was angry, but after all this... it doesn't matter anymore."
> "Doesn't matter?"
"Yeah. That -"
> You let out a little, nervous giggle.
"-that was nothing compared to how alone I was after they came. Being moved from place to place, owner to owner... I had nopony."

>>28875801

> A pause, and then a leg wrapping around your withers - little shivers running through your coat at the comforting touch.
> "...I'm sorry..."
"Like I said - it's okay. I'm - we're back together now. Celestia above, it feels so good to have somepony, anypony, I know anymore."
> Rolling over, you raise your head to hug her neck-to-neck.
"Twilight?"
> "Yeah?
"Could - you stay with me tonight?"
> "Stay with you... like, in bed?"
> Cheeks heating, you nod.
"It. Um. It doesn't have to be that close. If we can, um, find another bed, that's fine. But, um. Yes."
> Dropping your head again, this time out of shame rather than fear, you whisper:
"I just can't - can't believe it's you. I can't believe I'm not alone anymore. I can't-"
> Twilight brushes her nose through your mane.
> "It's okay, Moondancer. The bed's plenty big for the both of us, and I'm sure Anonymous wouldn't have any problem with it. Let me just go get some things and I'll be right back."
> Anonymous...
> That sends a far less pleasant shiver down your spine, your tail flicking.
> He truly did rule everything she did, didn't he?
> How had he managed that?
> Conjuring ever-darker images of what must have been done to your one-time classmate, you're caught by surprise when she slips back in - pillow, a pair of books, and an alarm clock balanced on her back.
> "Moondancer? You okay?"
"I - uh - yeah. Yeah, I'm fine."
> "You sure?"
> Shrugging off the pillow onto the bed, she peers up at you with wide, concerned eyes.
"Yeah. I am."
> In truth, now that she is back, you are.
> The specters that'd been circling ever closer in your mind now banished once again.
> Twilight was here.
> You were not alone.
> Not when you continued to reminisce with her of times passed and memories grown old.
> Not when you'd begun to remember all the little ticks and habits that made her uniquely Twilight.

>>28875810

> And not, long into the night, when Twilight had curled up and fallen soundly asleep - her leg twitching softly as she dreams - you remain awake, relishing in the simple joy of having a friend beside you again.
> In the utter relief of no longer being alone.
> By the time you lay your head down, an ear tilted to listen to Twilight's soft breathing, your own fears have been driven back.
> For the first time in hours, you close your eyes and drift into a peaceful rest.
> Morning comes far too quickly, but Twilight is up - as, you remember, her habit had been - bright and early, the alarm clock she'd brought ringing out its alert and raising you as well.
> Stretching, she reaches forward with both legs - her back rapidly popping, ears flicking.
> Settling back down, she shoots you a warm smile.
> "Hey. Good morning, Moondancer."
"Good morning, Twilight."
> Stretching out each leg at once, you yawn mightily.
> "You sleep well?"
"Amazingly."
> Then, more softly, you add:
"Thank you."
> "You're welcome."
"Do we have anything to do right now?"
> "Weeeeell... not really. Anonymous doesn't usually get up for a little while yet, so there's plenty of time to shower and even gets some reading in before..."
> She goes on, but your mind has latched on to one thing in particular.
> Anonymous.
"Twlight?"
> "Yeah?"
"Before we do that... um.. Do you remember that 'bubble of silence' spell you used to do so we could study?"
> "Yeah?"
"Can you do it now?"
> "I - um - maybe. Yeah. Let me focus."
> Squeezing her eyes and gritting her teeth, Twilight tries - really tries - and after several false starts the lavender dome pops into existence - coating the walls and nearly reaching the ceiling.
> Immediately the distant whisper of the central air drops out of existence, and you breath a sigh of relief.
"Thank you, Twilight."
> "I - I'm just glad I can actually do that. So, what did you want to tell me?"
"Actually, I wanted to ask you - something."
> "Sure! What is it?"

>>28875822

"Anonymous. What - what's he really like? I mean, when he's not trying to be all... 'best-friend buddy-buddy'."
> Twilight tilts her head, brows knitted.
> "What do you mean?"
"I mean..."
> You drop to your haunches as well, facing her.
"He was being all friendly yesterday, presumably because I just showed up. He wanted me to feel at ease, comfortable. I've seen owners do that before. But, what's he like when he's working you?"
> "He..."
> Pausing, Twilight seems actually confused.
> "Anonymous is really, genuinely nice, Moondancer. He - he's helped me so much..."
> Your heart sinks, barely able to comprehend what you're hearing.
> Just how deeply did he control Twilight's mind?
"Please, Twily. I - I want to know. I've seen masters like this before. I know it's not always that simple. He can't hear us in this bubble, and I promise I won't tell. And, you don't have to lie to... protect me."
> "I'm not protecting you, Moondancer! He's not cruel, not hurting me. He's good!"
> He truly had Twilight's heart clutched in his fist, if this was how she talked about him.
> The freeze spreads in your chest, heart cracking and shattering entirely.
"He's your owner, Twilight. He's not a friend. He bought you to work. Trust me on this - I've studied how they operate!"
> "He is!"
> Twilight rears up - eyes narrow, angry, and tear-filled.
> "He is a friend, and I won't listen to you talk like this about him."
> For a moment the two of you lock eyes - a silent contest, a clash of wills.
> Twilight breaks first.
> Looking away, she turns for the door.
> "I'm... going. To take a shower. Breakfast will be in about thirty minutes, but you're free to take anything if you want."
> You can hear her voice quivering.
"Wait, Twilight-"
> "I'll see you at breakfast. Then, show - show you where the stuff we work on is."
"Please, wait-"
> And then she is gone - the door slipping open and the last fringes of her tail vanishing through it.

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>>28875833

> For several long minutes, you stare dully at the open door before slamming it shut and sinking your muzzle into your hooves.
> Tears flow freely, rolling down your cheeks.
> You were wrong.
> Twilight's... turned into one of them.
> All the hope that'd filled you, buoyed you through the night, you now see to be rotten and empty.
> And you are still alone after all.

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>>28875725
Sweetie Belle's request:
Free Twilight and Pinkie from captivity. Their are being help captive in Mr. Mous' manor in the southern parts of the town..
Expect intensified safety measures. Bringing a
>Infiltrate the manor
>Find the ponies
>Find the keys
>Free the ponies
>Escape

Optional:
>Break into the server room and look for informations about the whereabouts of Rarity (Hard)

Rewards:
>Anything (?)
>6500 EXP

Accept Quest?
<Y> <N>

>>28875844

I also forgot to mention, there is now a paste for this story: http://pastebin.com/ukyeBuxe

Once again I have returned to continue!

Though I didn't get to the part I wanted to...

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>>28875956
Oh good, I can't wait to see what hackneyed excuses you manage to pull out of your ass.

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>>28871787
>She continues to sip her Cocoa, and you refuse to think of it as anything else.
>She sits quietly
>It's almost cute really, this angry battered and beaten mare sipping away at cocoa, before a roaring fire in your parlor.
>But that wasn't important to you
"So Dash, what do you know about agriculture?"
>"Not much..."
"Do you even know what that word means hmm? Agriculture?"
>"Of course I do, it's got something to do with farming right?"
"Basically, but it's a little more grand than that."
>You let an awkward pause sit in the room for another minute.
>Dash sips her cocoa and the two of you maintain awkward eye contact, you had your same hawk-eyed gaze and unblinking eyes.
>Until Dash, eager to get whatever she thought this was, over with speaks up
>"So what about Agriculture interests you soo much Anon?"
>she groaned
"I'm glad you asked Dash"
>You say as you take the newspaper from the table flipping through the pages.
>Until you reach the Equestrian commodities section.
>You pass the paper to Dash and she stares at.
"As it stands today, the Equestrian commodities market is dominated not by Gold, or not by precious metals, but Algaculture"
>You sit up in your chair leaning forward so that you can be closer to dash
>To better emphasize your point
"Corn, Wheat, pears so on and so forth, trade for ridiculous amounts per contract."
"In the Free Cities where I hail from, futures in corn would cost you around $4.00 a bushel."
"Here, however, these prices are as high as 80 to 90. It's just insane."
>Rainbow Dash sips her cocoa some more.
>"I don't understand."
>You sigh
"Do you know what contracts are?"
>"Yea."
"Well these are like contracts, except their agreements between investors, factories, and producers."
"You following me so far?"
>"Well I guess so."
"Good, these agreements state that if the company wanted to mitigate it's risks, all it would need to do is buy a contract with an investor."
"These contracts have a locked in price to buy or sell a commodity."

>>28876000
No excuses yet, but Celly will make an appearance soon enough...and she won't be happy.

But I will make it happen.

>>28875885
No.
Fuck fetch quests.

>>28876000
Trips confirm that Cindy needs to stop shitting in the thread and go back to shitting in the woods.

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>>28876032
Friend, I tell you this with complete honesty.

Your story would get a much better reception over in Submission is Mandatory than it would here. We're more of a rehabilitation general, nursing ponies back to health and such, similar to the homeless pony general that appeared a few years back, rather than buying ponies to do what we want and use as we please. SiM is much better for the kind of aggressive, dominating personality you've got going on here.

>>28876058
I know, but I like the hate.

>>28876064
Sou you're just attentionwhoring?

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>>28876064
Well, at least you're putting effort into getting hate. I can't say I can understand wasting all that time on something that people out-right hate, but at least you're productive.
Now that I know you only want (you)'s though, I think I'll stop replying to you.

I'd really appreciate it if you went to SiM, friend.

>>28876067
Yes, if you've been reading the thread i've made it very clear that, that's all I'm doing.

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>>28876024
"What the agreement states is that if the price were to rise higher or lower, the investor would cover the loss or gain the profit as the company in question agreed to buy or sell at that set price. It's like insurance for companies."
>"You lost me."
"Never mind."
>You say as you lean back into your chair.
"Look, all I want to know is this."
"Have you ever been to Sweet Apple Acres?"
>She stops drinking her cocoa and becomes serious.
>Sternly she says
>"Why?"
>This was all the confirmation you needed.
>Her body language, and lack of tact betrayed her.
"Well, Equestrian National is not interested in investing in the commodities market.
"If that's what you think."
"Too volatile and the leverage is too high."
"But....the Incognito family has always been looking to experiment with a silly little idea in Equestria."
>"Why can you ever get to the point? You always wanna just dance around things."
"It's part of the game sweetheart, you approach every conversation like your assaulting a castle."
"You don't just charge head in and expect the best outcome."
"But if you want me to get to the point...You ever heard of factory farms Dash?"
>"You mean like a factory that grows corn?"
>"We already have those Anon, their just called farms."
"So you haven't, I'm not surprised. This is a secret from the Free Cities that's only been known by the incognito family."
>You gestured at book in the corner of the room
"Why don't you do me a favor and bring me that book on the wall labeled Miracula Magica Ipsum in red letters. Can't miss it."
>She scoffs
>"Don't you do anything yourself Anon?"
"I'm more of a thinker than a doer."
>She rolls her eyes and gets up to rummage through the shelf you pointed at.
>After around five minutes of rummaging she finds the large black book referred to.
>And places it on your lap
>"Here"

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>>28876087
>You flip through the pages and find the chapter containing diagrams, you pass the book to her and she looks at them.
>She sees images and diagrams depicting humans and magic ruins, she can't read the language of the book as it's in latin
>The de facto Free City's language.
>The pictures show humans using magical ruins and shoving them into the earth, the crops are growing
>The ruins also pull water from the air
>Dash is confused, but she continues flipping through the pages
>She sees more images of humans gathering the crops and storing them in silos also adorned in ruins.
>"So what, you wanna use magic to grow corn?"
"Why...yes, that's absolutely correct."
"Can you read latin?"
>"No, but the pictures make it pretty obvious."
>"It's not gonna work Anon, I've already asked a friend about this and she said it cost too much energy."
"Well, maybe for you ponies, but humans are incapable of biologically producing magic but...manufacturing it, that's a different story. All our magic comes in the form of ruins, blessed by our ancestors.
"These ruins are highly potent and capable of rivaling even an alicorn's magic."
"The drawback is that each ruin only performs one function."
"Likewise there are millions of different ruins."
>"So what's all this have to do with Sweet Apple Acres?"
"Well, I can't start a farm if I don't have land do I?"
"And sweet apple acres has plenty of space."
>You wait for a response
>And dash glares at you before replying
>"Applejack would never sell it Anon, especially not to a slimy grease ball like you."
"Well, with you by my side, I'm sure we can work something out."
>"Fat chance I'd ever help you."
>You Smile a toothy grin at her.
>and Curie enters the room
>"Monsieur, manquer!"
>"Dinner is served."
"Right, well that's enough fun for one night Dashie, why don't you go get some food and Curie will show you to your room."
"Rest up, we've got a big day ahead of us."

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>>28876110
>Curie and Dash leave the room together
>And as they walk through the winding redwood floors and white walled halls of the Anon mansion.
>Dash can't help but wonder.
"So what's the deal with you and Anon?"
>"I beg your pardon manquer, what do you mean?"
"I mean why do you work for him?"
"He's clearly not a good guy....but you and other ponies seem to be just....so loyal to him and I can't figure out why."
>"manquer, Anon...is a difficult man, with many less than flattering qualities sure....but you have to understand...he's not all bad."
"Sure seems like it."
>"Well, you have never worked for him."
>Curie stops in front of one of the many portraits in the hallway.
>"My family has served the Incognito family for generations, and every generation they have been generous to not only us but the kingdom as well."
>"They've paid for our foals schooling, they've covered debts, they've built roads for Equestria when the crown could not afford them"
>"Why they've even paid the guards salaries at one point to ensure that they did not form a coup d'etat."
>"You need only read one of their portraits of Anon's forefathers to see"
>She said as she pointed to a portrait
>Dash had never noticed before, but every portrait had words of wisdom from each Incognito.
>The Anon Curie was pointing to was named, John Ebaduser Incognito the 2nd.
>He was a slier looking man adorned in a hunters outfit complete with pointy mustache.
>In gold letters below it read
>A rising tide shall lift all boats, take care of those at the bottom and we shall all prosper.
>"Or manquer can read this one"
>Curie said as she pointed to the portrait just above that one
>This one read Fredrick Incognito 7th Serine Doge of the Free Citys, he was adorned in silk robes with a pointy hat holding a telescope
>No man rules alone was his only word of wisdom.

>>28875844
All of this is just SO good. Can't wait for Moondancer to confront Anon about being a brainwashing monster. He should take her for a walk through a park or something and have a 'get to know you' conversation.

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>>28876176
>"All incognitos have treated their employees very well, with the firm belief that they are what makes the Incognitos great."
>"Why when my father broke his leg and could no longer serve Anon's Father, did he fire him and kick him to the curb like most ponies would?"
>"No, he offered him what he called a severance package and pension. These words were foreign to us, and knowing the Incognitos violent history we feared for his life."
>"But it was for nothing. Anon's father paid the medical bills and continued to give him full salary until the day he died."
>"How can you not love a man like that manquer ? How can you not forgive the evil in his heart?"
" but I saw him yell at one of his loyal employees for wanting to stay overtime."
>"Obedience and loyalty manquer is all they ask of you."
>"They shall do the rest as they say."
"Humans are weird..."
>"They are enigmas to be sure, none being entirely evil nor entirely good manquer , but Anon told me that in the free cities all that ever mattered was loyalty."
>"Everything else can be forgiven, all that is needed obedience they shall teach you the ways."
"What even is the Free Cities?"
>"Why, the human Trade republic."
>"It is a place where anyone may become noble regardless of race so long as they prove their worth to society."
"How come I've never heard of them?"
>"They are not on good terms with Celestia, and rather than allow Equestria to know of their existence, she believes it to be better to maintain a relationship of convenience."
>"Humans are to be thought of a weak and small race, and while the Free Cities is a series tiny Island off the coast of Gryfondom, the are hardly weak."
"Can't be all that tough if Celestia won't even acknowledge their existence."
>"One of the things you will learn from Anon manquer ...is that power comes in many forms."
>Dash scoffs at this, but Curie ignores her
>And they continued to walk down your massive halls

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>>28876235
>and you, well you have been sitting alone in your Parlor the entire time.
>Unaware of Dashes and Curies exchange.
>You'd turned on an old record player since they left
>And the old song echoed throughout the room
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG-_ZDrypec
>You'd been drinking since they've left.
>Staring into the fire, thinking of God, thinking of your father, thinking of anything.
>You tried so hard to feel.
>But nothing came
>So you drank more
>You drank until you could feel something
>Until you could feel anything
>But it never came only blackness as you lost consciousness
>You'd pass out drunk again in front of the fire
>And Curie would clean up your mess
>This is how you lived...day in and day out of every day of every month of every year for thirty years of your life.

>>28876232
I haven't read the update yet, but this comment alone has given me hope that Anon will jump out of a bush screaming "BLUUUH, THE RAPE MOSNTER GONNA GETCHA" and then feel super guilty when Moondancer runs away - straight into a lightpole, knocking herself out.

>>28876291
Hi Ferb.

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>>28876291
>The next day she served breakfast to you and Dash
>And saw you both off as you rode away in your carriage once more.
>Inside the carriage Dash seemed beside herself.
>She kept staring at you then looking away.
>and it was getting on your nerves.
"What?"
>"Nothing..."
"Well don't look at me, I can't stand the sight of your beady eyes."
>"What's your deal man!"
>"Why do you have to be such a jerk all the time?"
"Nice people don't rule the world Dash."
>"Well Celestia does and she's one of the nicest people I know."
"Celly? You think the world is at her mercy?"
>You chuckle and look away from dash out the window.
>You see the farm approaching near by and you reach into your coat.
>Slipping a series of metal rings onto your fingers
>You see Dash looking out the window away from you, with a still bruised eye
"Hey Dash"
>"What?"
>You quickly pull your hand from your coat and swing your fist at her face.
>You'd carried brass knuckles with you for this particular deal.
>Dash is caught by surprise and her head bobs back from the impact slamming into the carriage wall
>and she collapses onto the seat in front of her, her body going limp after impact.
>You pull from underneath your seat some rope.
>And began to tie her up.
>By the time she regained consciousness
>She was completely restrained.
>"What the buck Anon?!?"
"Look I said you're gonna help me with a deal today, and now your helping."
>"I would have let you tie me up Anon, it's not like I'd have choice in the matter."
>"You didn't have to sucker punch me."
"I know, I just really don't like you."
>"See Anon this is what I'm talking about, just unnecessarily aggressive."
>You pull a handkerchief from your pocket and begin to shove it into her mouth
>She gags but you don't care
"Yea but I'm trying to sell a lifestyle her, now hold still I have some finishing touches to put on you"
>From your coat you pull a switchblade
>And dash pleads for mercy, though she does it in a muffled voice.
>"Mff mfff mmmmmmmmff!"

I like how this just keeps going and going and going. It's the best.

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>>28876348
>You begin to cut at her face
>Just little slashes here and there though.
>She squirms and screams
>And you hold her face down with your hand and her body with your knee
>And slice slowly but carefully above her head
>On her cheek and just below her eye
>Dash begins to cry
>She couldn't begin to understand the genius of this plan but you didn't care.
>You manage to draw blood without cutting too deep.
>This was for showmanship, it was nothing personal after all. You didn't want to scar her.
>Before long her face was covered in blood, not drenched mind you but blood leaking from the wounds slowly.
>Just enough to dampen her fur.
>The carriage pulls up to the main cottage
>And there's a sudden halt
>And you can hear the annoying squealing of a filthy mud horse.
>"Applejack, that monkey from the bank is back again!"
>An old more mature voice calls back and you open your door
>"Now if I ain't told you once Anon, I told you twice I wasn't interested in borrowing any bits from you!"
>You step out of the carriage and walk out
"Applejack! My friend, how are you doing?"
>"Cut the small talk fancy pants, I ain't interested in what your selling, I don't need no help buying equipment neither, we'll manage just fine."
"I don't know, last time I checked the market for your apples was pretty slim, and your output isn't so great either considering that your equipment's out of date too."
"Plus whose gonna take care of sweet old granny of yours when winter time comes around and you don't have the capital to survive?"
>You hunch over and say in nasally voice
"Ohh Apple jay, looks like were havin fritters for dinner again, it's that or no heat this winter dear."
>You thought this was funny as shit
>Applejack, on the other hand, was not amused
>And she began to march at towards you huffing and puffing
>She slams you against the carriage
>And your carriage drive begins to stand up
>but you wave him down

>>28871684
>pastebin.com/cqLCYveb

I am really, really enjoying this

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>>28876438
"Look, it was in bad taste, I'm sorry okay."
>"I want you off my property Anon, I don't like you, and I sure as sugar don't trust you."
"Well at least have a look at what I have to offer this time?"
>You punch your window breaking the glass to reveal your cargo
>Rainbow Dash screams a little from the terror of glass shards landing on her
>"Wha, what?"
>"Why I outta!"
"You touch me, and my driver rides your friend off a cliff."
>You grab Apple Jacks hooves and slowly place them back on the floor then dust yourself off.
"Now I think, we can make some kind of deal here...that can make everyone happy?"
"Hmm?"
>"Give me one reason not to report you to the guards for this."
"Because even though you don't trust me, you know I'm not stupid."
"I wouldn't be here if I didn't think I could swing this."
>"Y'all got five minutes, then imma hog tie you and take my friend back myself."
>You open the carriage door and gesture to jack
"Best decision of your life AppleJack, I can assure you that Equestria National strives to serve it's potential clients to the fullest of its abilities.
>Applebloom speaks up worried and confused
>"Wah where ya going sis?"
>Apple jack turns to her and smiles reassuringly.
>"It'll be okay Applebloom, I'm just gonna have a chat with Anon here for a few minutes, and then I'll be back in a jiffy!"
>She enters your carriage and you whistle at your driver
>And the two of you begin to ride off.


and that's all for now kitties.

>>28876455
>pastebin.com/cqLCYveb
I do it for you senpai!

We're gonna make Equestria great again!

>>28875844
Eh, nothing that some months together can't fix.

>>28875844
Ah, such sweet agony.
Its wonderful.

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>>28875844
Yellow book horse is my favorite book horse. It hurts, but what can anon do?
I guess it'll just take time.

*Bated breath.

>>28875844
What a dramaqueen.

Yeah, you have a right to be suspicious, but when an old friend tells you he's a perfectly good guy, even going so far as to cast a 'silence' spell which doubles to show she really IS off her medication and you for some reason think she's brainwashed is just silly.

>>28876458
>inb4 Applejack becomes slave too

>>28876804
This is her initial reaction. I think I'd be wary, too, especially if none of my masters before were good people. She can't fathom a nice human yet, that's all.

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>>28876824
Wrong

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>>28876804
>>28876834
The fact that Twilight was so hurt by the mere accusation of him being a bad person was pretty cute though.

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>>28876863
Twiggles a good mare

>>28876698
You shouldn't admit things like that, lest one of the writefags decides to hurt you.

>>28876968
I don't read green that's obviously not to my liking. Lurker seems to like book horses too so it's all good.

>>28877206
>obviously not to my liking
and that's the trick

>>28871385
>>28871475
Yeah, I'd ride Flutterhorse, hard. And when she's all hot and sweaty from a nice long ride I'd make sure she gets plenty of rest and water, and probably give her coat a clean so she doesn't smell like a pile of dirty gym socks and attract disease.

>>28875784
The gif is qt

>nein

>>28876804
Be patient. Moony's been around Anon less than 24 hours at this point, and it doesn't seem like she's ever run across a master who really cared for her before.

>>28876342
Ferbs got a dark past.

>>28876458
still interested, a very different take than what we usually get in here. go on.

>>28876458
K well I'm actually gonna scrap this Anon and make a more manipulative business heavy Anon.

>>28878565
>>28878545
>>28876458
K well if there is at least one person who either hates it or likes it, then I must keep going.

THE EDGING SHALL ONLY INTENSIFY!

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>>28876849
this doesnt look like a bill clinton impersination or impeachment it looks like fgsdts

>>28876458
>>28876438
>>28876348
And it's becoming even more dumb and edgy. The Sonic fandom would be proud.
But since you are doing this for attention, have a (you)

>>28879564

>>28878708
>0.02 shekels have been deposited on your account!

>>28879891
Your really getting on my nerves.
No one wants your cringey story on this thread!
Fuck off!

>>28878601
Ya keep going. Not quite what spg is about, but close enough for me. Let's see more of Curie; what's her deal?

Bump for Corona getting her ass whipped.

Sad that people want to see Corona whipped again. Remember, guys, she's a good girl and will take her punishment like one, but she is still best thread waifu.

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>>28871602
>pastebin.com/cqLCYveb

Rupture thorugh space and time is my namefag. The story's called "Butter Cookies and Cream"

>>28871602
MR.JINGLES YOU FAGGOT!

Add my story to your pastebin!
I've already written a shitton!

Name of the story is

Equestrian Monopoly
http://pastebin.com/iYu3Bjg2

I prefer to use two different titles.

>>28875801

Is this story chronologically situated before Twiligth and Moony meet again in canterlot?

>>28881005
>attacks her master
>good girl
Choose exactly one.

>>28875844
This is the result of a life full of isolation and suffering, I am afraid that Moondancer, on having stuck to his vision of the world, commits a terrible error

Good job Lukernon, thanks for return this story

>>28881292
It wasn't an "attack", she was just trying to let the pony get away. She didn't want Anon to hit his head. It was a big mistake, and she would have been punished for it even if he hadn't hit his head, but she had a PTSD attack. Poor thing needs help mentally.

>>28881314
I don't know. This felt more like she empathized with the stallion more than a PTSD attack. She let her emotions get the better off her for a split second and it caused her to exhibit poor judgement. She's completely culpable for her actions this time.

>>28881292
She has decided to accept her slavery to Anon, but seeing Sparky in distress reminded her of Merribelle and she was a good pony for a moment. She tried to confess to 911, but kept getting interrupted! She's as good a girl as she can be.
>Wednesday is so far away...

>>28881314
>>28881331
>>28881359
I wonder who it's gong to hurt more when he punishes her, anon or Corona

>>28881373
He still loves his little mare but he needs to teach her a lesson.

>>28881373
If he does punish her in this way, it's going to lead to a similar intimate moment like the one he had with Shiny after his punishment. I think both of them will be crying, and I think Corona will have to be practically pried off of him due to hugging him so hard and nuzzling his chest so much.

>>28881373
>>28881397
>>28881421
>none of this comes to pass because anon dies in the hospital

>>28881427
Yeah fucking right, lolol

>>28881373
I think Shinys belting was about all the punishment Anon has in him to give, and the next step is the market. Not saying that will happen, but they might have to come up with something else.

>>28881449
Corona would beg for the harshest punishment he could deliver if it meant getting to stay with him. He's the only human in this world that's ever cared about her. She would insist that whatever pain he inflicted on her was her fault, and that it would be worth it for her to go through.

>>28881464
>I LOVE YOU PLEASE TORTURE ME

>>28881482
The healthiest of relationships.

>>28881482
>>28881503
>I LOVE YOU
>PLEASE WHIP ME AND CALL ME A BAD GIRL, MASTER

>>28881464
I think she will try, but Shiny sort of did the same thing and we've already seen the harshest punishment he could deliver. Anon's just not a 'harsh punishment' kind of guy. Whatever happens I doubt 'Moar Belting!' will be it.

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>>28881511
L-lewd

>>28881511
>>28881532
I think anon telling her she's lost his trust would be worse than the most severe whipping he could give her.

>>28876477
So, lemme get this right:
>Hypermillionaire trumpsonality tier anon
>Tricked Top Cunt into slavery
>Cunts must be treated as cunts

kek

>>28881559
Which is why she'll do anything to get it back. It all starts with and comes back to the punishment she'll receive.

>>28881598
I've just been reading his lines in Trumps voice.

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Punishment: no punishment.
She can lash herself with the guilt FOREVER!

>>28881608
She's probably going to have some serious guilt over this.

>>28881608
>>28881705
>Anon paralyzed.
>Corona has to do everything for him.
>Seventy lashes, slavebox, everything SiM can imagine, etc etc, and she has to do all the work too!

>>28881709
She fucking should feel guilty.

>>28881705
Don't punish her, and she'll have her mind muddled with guilt her whole life. She'll never be the same, she'll never have spirit again.

Whip her ass, and you'll absolve her of it. Just like with Shiny, it will be a real start over from square one. She needs that.

>>28881014
Fixed.

>>28881812
This kind of transgression calls for a HARD whipping too, not just a few swats with a belt like shiny got.

>>28881243
Twilight is still a unicorn at this point, so yes. I imagine Buying a Bookhorse broke from the show somewhere in the middle of Season 3, but it's been a while since then.

>>28881831
Add me to the pastebin Jingles!!!

I've contributed already!

>>28881893
Thank for the information, I think that Twiligth's accelerated ascension to Alicorn ruined much of the character's development, she should have gone through more trials before gaining her wings

>>28881705
The worst thing that could happen is that some of the dismissed human guards of the plantation of Anonymous now works for the hospital or for the police and recognizes to Corona, he even could have ill-treated her in the past and want to make use of the opportunity to accuse her of runaway and to claim a reward for the capture

>>28881864
That's not even being sadistic. She seriously fucked up, and if she doesn't have welts on her butt after this I'll be shocked.

>>28881974
Highly unlikely. Getting fired from a position like that for doing something illegal or unsavory pretty much guarantees you'll never work in security or law enforcement again.

>>28882008
It could be that he was arrested for causing problems in a bar and is treated in the hospital because he was injured in a fight and there he recognizes the mare that accompanies the human being taken to surgery

>>28882008
A felony conviction make the next gig a bit harder to land. Just getting fired for corruption, cruelty, or general assholism does not seem to be that big a deal. There seems to be a culture of impunity in the law enforcement community, and the sheriff next county over will take them if they are willing to travel.

>>28882344
It also depends on the way society sees those who mistreat or abuse the ponies, in a world where people can own living beings as intelligent as humans morality is ambiguous

Moonie a good book horse.

>>28882758
but can she be a good girl?

>>28881331
>felt like she empathized
>split second reaction
>immediate regret
you are a moron aren't you?

>>28883012
Wut? Not that anon, but did not seem all that moronic.
>unless... I'm one too!?

>>28881864
Know what would be better than a whipping? Forgiveness. That would be the tipping point for Corona. Being forgiven would show that master really is someone that deserves her love. Any lingering resistance she has to pursuing him romantically would evaporate. She might even kiss him right there on the spot.

>>28883588
No matter what happens it's pretty much a given that Corona's going to be okay. I'm more interested to find out what happens to sparky.

>>28882917
Yes, she can. Moonie is a stubborn horse and will require a big revelation in order for her to finally trust Anon, but she is a hard worker and is very smart, and will always do her best.

>>28883598
He's sentenced to 1000 hours of community service giving pony rides at children's birthday parties.

>>28883598
People seem to hate Sparky, but I'm super interested. I want to see him have a happier life, too. I'm hoping we learn more about him like we learned more about Corona.

>>28883608
I don't think they'd let a dangerous horse like him around children. Ever.

>>28883620
Speaking of children I need, NEED more ShinyGrace. It's too heart meltingly cute seeing mister "tough guy" eating out of the palm of her hand.

>>28883637
Shiny is a good pony at the end of the day. Still wants to do the right thing and be fair/kind to others regardless of his circumstances. What a great stallion.

>>28883588
I think Corona would be able to see that a punishment, given calmly with Anon under full control of himself, is a fair response on his part. She would see Anon at his worst with her, and realize that even at his worst, he's still a good man and truly cares about her.

Corona is going to be so wracked with guilt and shame and fear that she may even ask Anon herself.

>>28883637
>>28883646
This is a big reason Anon can't take in Sparky. He'd have to go back on his promise to let Grace come and visit Shiny, he couldn't risk having a kid around such a dangerous stallion.

>>28883667
10 lashes with the belt like Shiny got.

>>28883680
The belt isn't good enough. She needs a taste of that driving whip across her rump.

>>28883667
I think something as simple as Anion distancing himself from her for a while would be drastically effective. Imagine how she'd feel if he completely waved her off the next time she came to him with her brush in her mouth, or even stopped touching her altogether except when putting on her harness and working her. I think it would dawn on her just how much she's gotten used to her master's touch and how much she actually MISSES being brushed and pet by him.

>>28883674
Magic suppressants. Bam, danger problem solved. Although, Shiny would probably have mixed feelings...

And Sparky isn't evil, just desperate. Desperation can lead you to do all kinds of things.

>>28883735
I don't think Grace would have the same effect on Sparky that she had on Shiny.

>>28883734
I have to agree with this. Corona might not openly admit it but she CRAVES affection. Withholding that from her would hurt her a lot more than the lash.

>>28883734
Weird as it sounds for me to say, I think that would be the worst thing he could do. She doesn't need distance, she needs to know he can trust her again. The relationship needs to be repaired.

She doesn't need to be reminded that she likes Anon's affection, she already knows that. Adding distance is honestly something that would hurt her in the long run far more than a belting ever would.

>>28883785
That's why things would go back to normal after maybe 2 weeks. She would see that there are dire consequences for breaking his trust - mainly withholding affection from her. And it would make her hesitate before making such mistakes in the future.

>>28883765
It would hurt in a different way. A way that isn't good for her relationship with Anon. That's what's most important, here, for both of them.

>>28883785
>she needs to know he can trust her again
But that's the point, he might not trust her anymore, at least for the time being. Once that shit is broken it takes a while to mend.

>>28883735
Do you guys really see this working out in any way such that Anon ends up with Sparky?

>>28883843
What if sparky was being sexually abused by his master and that was why he was so desperate not to go back.

>>28883843
I'll let ShinyAnon decide on what will happen. I don't, but maybe he has a plan.

>>28883827
A belting may help that, actually. It's just as symbolic as it is physical in this context. Similar to how it was with Shiny, in some ways.

>>28883843
I don't see it as probable, but rather desirable. I want to see more of this character, and his interaction with the other three.

>>28883904
He has an owner and he can be identified. So he's probably going to be sent back to his owner.

>>28883702
no need to turn her rear into Landscape Applejack's, belt's all she needs.

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>>28885516
You're gonna eat the pear, AJ. You're gonna eat it.

>>28876110
>>28881920
You know you could at least stop sucking in 2 different languages.
>ruins
I am fairly certain you meant runes.
>manquer
You mean mademoiselle, the french word for the title miss, not manquer which means to miss. Lrn 2 google translate you autist.

Something I find common in /spg/

>Rainbow Dash
>Buck this, buck that
>buck

>a bear named cindy (aka ferb) still thinking he's accepted here but he's not, by producing SiM content
>as shit as he had been before

>>28886293
Dude I write this shit on my bus rides home from campus.

I'll stop calling it that if it's triggering you that much.

>>28871617
Sounds hot.

>>28886293
wait a minute, fuck you!
Language is fluid.
People talk however the fuck they want.
I ain't changing shit.

Plus, Curie isn't from france, she's from some space in the MLP universe that would be most convenient.

But I got nothing on runes. I just went with whatever spell check said was fine.

>>28886964
>is objectively wrong
>"language is fluid"

lol ok little kid go eat your vegetables

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>>28886996
>lol ok little kid go eat your vegetables
>Vegetables
Nigga, I eat sushi....

This has nothing to do with anything, but I felt like I needed to say something back.

Eat a dick.

>>28887092
>Nigga, I eat sushi....

embrace your inner weeb

>Eat a dick.

Make me

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>>28887183
>embrace your inner weeb
I actually prefer American Comics
Captain America
Superman
Faggotman
Luke Cage (Power man)

You know the shabang

>Make me

....would you be against sucking on mine?

>>28887200
>You know the shabang

Cool

>....would you be against sucking on mine?

Yes

>>28887214
It wouldn't be gay, it's just i'm trying to help you out.

I have a gf man, I ain't letting suck on it cause I'm a faggot.

It's just you know....I think I should help you out.

I like seeing people happy.

>>28887232
>"I like seeing people happy."
>loves that people hate his stories

Cool story bro

>>28887265
Look, this isn't about who said what, or who is or isn't trying to shitpost.

I'm offering you 12" of hot bear dick man. You really gonna turn that down?

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>>28887319
>Everyone telling you to fuck off
>Still here

>>28887452
The best part is, I am fully capable of writing a good green for this thread.

I just refuse too.

I'll continue Anon's epic quest to kuck the ponies tonight.

Guys, I'm pretty sure this is fagfag's older cousin, FerbFag. Pretty sure the same rules apply to all fags, just leave him alone and he'll lose interest.

>>28883637
>ShinyGrace
>eating out
NOPE. STOPPED READING.
>kept reading anyway
Oh.
Yeah.
I agree.

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>>28871787
Im just catching up on the thread and can give feedback just to this point.
But the story feels a little odd.
As if there were scenes missing, and Dash acts out of character a little. First she acts up then obedience then acting up? Also she acts a little too stupid.
This makes it a little weird.
Plus his grad plan feels weird if he didnt manipulate her into debt somehow.
Also you should explain how other pones are alright with it. They have to know about that law to accept it. But you portrayed it to be something only a few know.

>>28887563
It's only been one day.

No one knows about Dash's situation besides Anons Cronies.

Although after Applejacks negotiations, Celestia will make an appearance as she got a copy of the contract as well.

But just based on the fact that Applejack threatened to report Anon to the royal guards, it's a law that is obscure.

So most people don't know about it.

That's it.

I feel like I revealed too much, but I felt the need to state the obvious.

The story will pan out over years and will take a few time leaps when needed.

>>28887558
I took a look at SiM and lookie what I found.
>>28871616
>>28871969

Just ignore him and report for admitting to breaking GR6 >>28887491

>>28887608
i mean in his defense i'm reading it and find it interesting, not sure why some people are freaking out so much.

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>>28887608
>general rule 6
Here is it for the lazy ones.

>>28887638
Because this thread isn't the place for this kind of thing. It belongs in SiM, but he insists on staying here because everyone's hating on him for ignoring not only GR's, but also the theme of the thread.

His story is nearly irrelevant to this sub, as its content is drastically different from the GOOD stories that pop up here.

>>28887558
only ones that sound like fagfag are the ones crying so much about a perfectly fine story. i mean its just started chill out.