Slave Pony Thread #77 [ANNIVERSARY EDITION]

>>28783706
Happy first anniversary /spg/!

It sure doesn't feel like it's been a year but it has went by quite fast. If you've been here since the very start, I would like to thank you
for sticking with us for so long and if you're a recent newcomer, I would like to thank you for showing interest in /spg/. I'm also very grateful for having such talented writers
writting in /spg/. You are the ones who keep the content fresh and the thread alive. There were times where the future of /spg/ looked grim but through our determination, we
managed to pull through. This past year has probably been the best year of my life and if you told me last year that I would be running a popular thread on /mlp/ I'd tell you that
you're crazy.

Once again, thank you everyone for what you've done and I hope that /spg/ has somehow helped you in your day to day life, whether it's something you look forward to
or just a getaway of day to day struggles. You all mean a lot to me and it fills me with joy that you enjoy the content /spg/ provides.

Another year to /spg/!

Big shoutout to the drawfriend who made the awesome OP pic at my request. Make sure you give her a pat on the back!

Also, expect something big pretty soon.

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hey /spg/ i made an anniversary edition for you
https://www.dropbox.com/s/zv22tcjev4dnm9e/anniversaryedition.zip?dl=0

>>28783706
Coronaaaa!!!

Best birthday present EVER!

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>>28783706
Happy anniversary guys.

Alright, let's try to leave the image spamming and the piss greentext in the last thread and focus on what's important.

That is a cute slave horse.

>>28783735
HHHNGGG

this thread sucks. not as superior as submission is mandatory.

>>28783766
>SiM
>bump general

b8

Go post something there, then. They need it. It's not like we want them to die, we really don't.

I love you faggots.

>>28783805
Love you too, sovreign writefag

>>28783791
this. We're all sluts in the end, no matter how much we never want to merge, where do you think they'll go if the threads end? detroit?

Shamelessly reposting >>28783982 because I didn't see the bump limit at first.

Tell that writefag to do moar.

happy threadiversary

>>28783735
>anon just realized all of Corona's most sensitive marebits are pressing against this raw unprotected neck

>>28784133
Thank fucking god I wasn't the only one thinking this. Unf

>>28783735
Corona is the best waifu

>>28783058
Pretty historie Anon, was one happy for me

ayyy. Happy birthday thread.

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>>28782730
>without warning, your thoughts turn to your own daughter
>little Flurry, still a foal the last time you laid eyes on her
>and you hope above all hope that she's safe somewhere out there
>maybe even being loved like this
>you know the odds are against it
>but thoughts of the alternative are just...
>you start to tremble
>your lower lip quivers, ears flatten
>you raise a hoof and place it around Grace's back, chin pressing gently against her shoulder, pulling her tightly against you
>and a pair of tears roll down your muzzle, dripping onto the ground behind her

Maaan why must you hurt me so. You made my eyes water for a moment there. It didn't help that I was listening to this while reading:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3xbN67lkD0

>>28784142
Mare titty cushioning at the back of his head.

>>28784410
Perfect neck warmers during the cold winter months.

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>>28783686

Sounds interesting. I hope life isn't too bad for them.

>>28784133
There's probably a huge stain down the back of his shirt now.

Even if Corona does actually fall in love with Anon, I can't see him returning the feelings. It'd be like a little girl with a crush on him, he'd try to dissuade her from it.

>>28784683
With the way he dotes on her I'm sure he already loves her. It just needs a little coaxing into to the romantic form.

Just imagine that you are a very lonely anon like in the green. Now imagine your hard working beloved beautiful intelligent talking pet suddenly confessed it's love for you. Wouldn't you at least give reciprocating it a shot?

>>28784712
"b-but I always just thought of you as practically a child."
>"anon, how old are you?"
"t-twenty four"
>"I'm older than you"
>"Now you wanna go on this moonlight walk and cuddle out under the stars or not?"
"...ok"

Happy anniversary /spg/. Sorry for the depressing story in the last thread. Hopefully I can make it up to you guys later today with some short simple lewd as my anniversary offering.

>>28784856

Out of curiosity, which depressing one—the dual suicide, or the naïve child?

>>28784856
>short, simple, lewd,

None of that is what spg has ever really been about.

>>28784878
Spoilers, anon! The double suicide one.

>>28784891
Eh, I got into the mood for lewd so I wrote some. If it's not wanted, I'll try to come up with something different for you guys.

>>28784878
>the naïve child
>implying that particular writefag can do anything that's not depressing

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A whole year. You faggots kept it going for a whole year. Are you happy? Have you no shame? The board weeps every moment we live. Please God deliver us to a place of rest.

Happy anniversary, faggots. It's been fun.

'Green' incoming. Note the quotes. It's not really green. I just promised a guy that I'd post a letter I pulled out the recycle bin in memory of the early threads. Later, I may go dig up some of the other greens that people have forgotten.
It's too big to fit in this post, so it'll be in the next. I had to cut out most of the notes I'd attached to it, but mostly they came down to 'make this more ambiguous, don't use the word 'alive.'' Imagine those words at the end of every paragraph.

Anyway, it's the first draft for the letter in Regard's Anon, back when Vinyl was supposed to disappear.

Maiden Voyage is still not ready to update; good thing it's not a popular one like Slaveventure or I'd be fucked.

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>>28785468

>”I’m sorry.”
>”You can keep my glasses. I won’t be needing them where I’m going. I’ve got a pair waiting for me.”
>”I’m still sorry. I know how bad this must hurt. That feeling in your chest; like you just lost something that’s not coming back? I’m not gonna lie and say (well, write) that it gets any better. You’ll need to live with it now. If things were better, I’d have stuck around, and we could suffer it together. But…then you wouldn’t be feeling it. At the very least, don’t end up like me. Find your Equestrian sky.”
>”But I just can’t…live here anymore. I can’t keep lying to myself, and telling myself things are getting better, and letting you convince me that they are. So I’m going home, alright bro? I’ve got a friend who showed me the way. Octavia’s alive. Alive, Anon, back home. She faked her death to get away from it all, and then came back for me. You helped her find me as well! All those ponies we talked to, it trickled down to her!
>”Listen though. You…you can’t come with me. I wanted to say this face to face, but…you’d convince me to stay. Equestria…humans can’t stay there. Not yet. So don’t bother looking for me, okay? Don’t try and follow me. Don’t look too deeply into Octavia either. And just to be sure, try not to read any newspapers this week. They might tell you how we got home. Please, Anon, for me, please just don’t try.”
>”There’s a lot of ponies still out there, Anon. A lot of ponies who need someone like you to save them, like you saved me. Start with that white unicorn; it’s as good as anywhere. You’re the only human in the world with a half decent heart. You gotta put it to use till there’s nothing left. And then, maybe, it’ll rub off on people and things will get better. A little at a time, right?”
>”And when you’re done, I’ll be waiting. Tavi too. We’ll be a big ol Equestrian family.”
>”Regards, Anon.”

>Gracie has said "I love you" to Shiny at least twice now
>so many hugs and kisses
I wonder if she really loves shiny or is just a pony fanatic.

>>28785711
Both. Kids figure out pretty damned quickly if they like you or not, and they're brutally honest. There's no way that's not genuine affection she's giving to the ponies. Especially Shiny.

If she has a hard time making friends, that explains a lot too. She probably hasn't learned the true horrors of slavery yet, and has some idealized version of ponies ingrained in her brain from stories she's no doubt heard about Equestria about the magic of friendship and shit. So in her mind, Shiny and Corona would want to be her friends right away. She doesn't have to worry about doing anything that might "scare them off," or make them not like her for whatever reason, because ponies are friendly by default.

>>28783706
>Happy First Anniversary
>tfw RGRE don't have any anniversary.

>>28785761
>I don't get to make those sorts of decisions for myself
It sounds like Gracie is about to get a slaves-eye view of slavery. Very looking forward to it!

>>28785477
This is painful, but a good kind of painful feels. It's closure, in a strange way; Vinyl has finally set herself on her path in life and is comfortable with where she's going.

I honestly can't tell whether Vinyl is genuinely deluding herself into thinking Anonymous won't actually understand what she actually did, or knows he'll understand and is trying anyhow because it's the only thing she can give him at this point.

Either way... it's a bittersweet end, heavy on the bitter, but it's actually really good. Thank you for digging it up, writefriend; I do appreciate it.

>That spoiler
No. Don't do that popularity comparison thing. It's not right; your story is still damn good and somehow amazingly still manages to get my withered heart to feel. You better update Voyage soon!

>>28785796
She already asked about Shiny being skinny. Wonder what's gonna happen when she asks about the scars on his back/rump, if they're noticeable.

>>28785761
>>28785857
I wonder if there are any resistance/anti-slavery movements in the slaveventure/shiny universe. If magic is still a thing maybe there are unicorns scattered in various resistance cells that are adept at camouflage/illusory magic that have helped them stick to the shadows.

>>28785877
the only mention I can recall of that type of thing in either was the passing mention that a new slave-rights bill had stalled in congress in shinynon's story, so someone's trying to fight for them in some way at least, they may be trying to exhaust their legal options before turning to violence

>>28785887
Shiny has been a slave for at least 7 years. You'd think there'd be more of an organized resistance in that timeframe. Unless the authorities have been pretty brutal/merciless in snuffing out any signs of violent rebellion.

Oh man, I remember when entering in thread #25 or so when y'all were a big ol bag o comfiness wanting Skittles no matter the consequences, or that time when Lurkernon was giving Fire and Sky a big twist, or the crossover with RM and Fireking... Yeah, all the nonsensically spammed throughout the thread FIREKING WHEN and the hate towards Somewritefag because why not, despite y'all people loving corona like a new Skittles, of course. I watched this thread burn from the scruffening and rise again despite everything. Happy anniversary to y'all, /SPG/. You made me remember all the good and bad times.
Yep, ferbguy here. I wanted to give you a proper thank you without you people ignoring or anything like that. Sayônara!

>tfw you will never whip a pony with a pony leather whip

>>28786771
>have strips of pony's skin removed
>make sure he gets all the medical care he needs until he fully heals
>in the mean time cure the strips of pony skin into leather
>have them braided into a whip
>pony is whipped with a whip made from his own flesh any time he misbehaves in the future

>>28787053
>need a pair of mittens?
>Find your pony, Urist.

>>28785905
>Shiny has been a slave for at least 7 years
[Citation needed]

>>28787234
>Meanwhile, on the Bray 12 forums
>help my unicorns keep melting during the summer, pls fix bug

>>28787357
>are you remembering to set your foals on fire at the right time?

>>28787356
Have you even been reading the story?

>>28787414
Yes. He doesn't mention how long Shiny has been a slave anywhere.

>>28787436

Not that anon, but I think he's extrapolating from this:
>and hey, she wasn't even born yet when you became a slave
>"Well duh! I'm almost seven you know, I'm not a baby anymore, I know stuff! Like ponies are urba.. urba... herr-bih..."
Thus, for Grace to be born after he was captured but be near seven, he must have been a slave for a roughly similar length of time.

Of course, there's the whole unreliable narrator there as well - we don't know how good Shining was at estimating Grace's age, so he might be off when he imagined she was born after he was enslaved.

>>28787472
Shiny probably has no way of knowing exactly how long he's been enslaved.

>>28787579
He probably has at least a rough idea based on the passing of the seasons

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>it's been a year

>>28787472
>>28787579
>>28787647
>>28787649
>>28787649
>giving a shit about a story written by a literal faggot that has literally written gay clop
kys

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>>28787782

>>28787795
Check his pastebin.dude is a literal faggot.

>>28787807
So?

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>>28787795
>>28787825
>>28787807

>>28787807
And yet there's nothing faggoty in this story, so I don't care.

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>>28787807
>>28787782

>>28787867
Other than the anal fisting shiny received

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>>28785468
>Maiden Voyage
I really like Maiden Voyage. Glad it's not dead.

>>28783706
>>28783735
Who is this cutie patootie and what is her butt mark? It's kind of hard to see.

>>28788218
she be corona

>>28788218
She got her cutie mark removed so that she'd never be identified and be returned to her old master.

>>28788260
Edgy.

when is anon going to cum inside corona

>>28783706
Any Ebooks going or is all the writing in filthy pastebins?

>>28788317

Never.

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>>28788327

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>>28788317
Corona is for bathtime

Speaking of Corona-art, wasn't someone drawing Corona getting whipped?

I still want to see it.

I like Corona a lot.

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>>28788503
Corona a good girl.
Best for brushie
Best for petting
Best for pulling cart
Best pony

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>>28784798
this would be adorable I'd love to see it or something like it
but it's probably too pure for this thread though

>>28788485
>>28783735
I was but this took priority among other important things. I'll still do it if you guys like.

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>>28787782
>you guys should kys for taking interest in something

>>28788534
It's pretty goddamn cute how she automatically assumes the position now whenever she sees master with her brush. I don't think she even realizes how comfortable she's getting with Anon touching her. Brushing is such an intimate and personal act for her, especially considering her best friend used to do it to her. Anon has become her new best friend, even if only subconsciously.

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Sidestory for http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz

If you have not been following A Deal is a Deal, you might want read that before this. Or you might not. I'm not a mind reader.

>The humans have a saying: "Kill one man, and you are a murderer. Kill millions of men, and you are a conqueror. Kill them all, and you are a god."
>I killed half a billion. What does that make me?
>I ask myself that every night. After four years, I have yet to find a true answer.
>Murderer? Though my heart tells me I am, I know that I acted to protect Equestria. I may be a murderer, but that is not what I *am*.
>Conqueror? No. Never. Equestria wanted - *wants* - friends, not subjects. Partners, not servants. Besides, I conquered nothing, not even my own emotions. Their people stand strong, even if their world is stricken.
>God? Certainly not. A god would be infallible, something I most definitely failed to be. Most importantly, I didn't kill them all. Even accounting for the deaths after the fact from starvation or disease, the ones I did not personally cause, over half the human race survived. I don't know if that is why the nightmares come every night, or why some nights they aren't as bad. I could have killed more. I wish I had, almost as much as I wish I hadn't killed anypony at all.
>So if I am not a murderer, conqueror, or god, then what am I?

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>>28788649
>The sleepless nights have never given me an answer, only a commentary on my own nature. After four years, two facts remain the same: I am Twilight Sparkle and I am horrified by what I have done. A part of me welcomes the nightmares that come every night, because if I ever find myself accepting the deaths or no longer questioning the choices I made that led to them, I will know it is time to turn myself in.
>Of course, when that time comes, will I still feel the same way? Will I still think that I’ve become a monster?
>I can only hope that a part of me will and that on that day I am still a princess of Equestria. I hope that I can abandon my research and surrender peacefully to the first patrol I meet, human or pony. I also hope that by the time I'm dragged in chains before my brother, I no longer am.
>That, more than anything, is what keeps me here in the Everfree Forest. I cannot bear to face the others. Not while I am still, at my core, myself.
>The nightmares, the self-loathing, the sheer horror of that day mean that I am still me. And if I am me, I believe I can fix this. I have never come across a problem I could not solve given time, luck, and friends. But I have had time. Four years, in fact. I have had luck, with wondrous new discoveries that have benefited the people of both worlds, though they will never know their source. But friends? I am running short on those.

>>28788618
nope that's ok. not necessary.

Unless it's playful gentile consensual whips during sexy times.

>>28788649
your posting now? Dang. I'll just have to read it later. Thanks.

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>>28788667
>Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash were captured - or rather rescued might be the right word - by the humans when Ponyville burned. Rarity stopped talking to me when I was declared a war criminal. For Sweetie Belle's sake, she said. I don't blame her. Pinkie Pie... of all my friends, she's the only one to still seek me out, but she’s always been the most innocent. She could never understand and it would break her heart. Moondancer ceased responding to my letters when her husband died. Starlight tried to stand in my way. I think she's still alive, somewhere in Manehattan, but she said I betrayed everything I stood for. After all the lessons I tried to teach her about not taking the easy path to success, I'm not sure I have any right to disagree. I can't. The Element of Magic has chosen a new bearer. Or perhaps it hasn't. Perhaps it simply chose to *not* have me.
>Princess Luna no longer exists and Nightmare Moon was banished by my own hoof.
>Celestia is dead.
>I am alone.
>The Princess of Friendship is alone.
>Or did I abandon that post when I shut the portals?
>Did I cease to be the Princess of Friendship when I turned my back on the humans?
>I wish I could blame it on somepony else. I remember us urging Princess Luna to absolve herself of the guilt of what Nightmare Moon did. It wasn't her.
>Does her guilt equal my own?

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>>28788708
>When I closed the portals, I remember thinking for a fraction of a second that this was what it must have felt like when Princess Luna became Nightmare Moon, but I immediately squashed that thought. Nightmare Moon was born of jealousy and greed. Purely selfish reasons. *Subjective* reasons.
>What I was doing was justice.
>I didn't have to worry about losing control to an evil force, because what I was doing was right.
>That thought lingered.
>It's gone now.
>I was wrong.
>Not necessarily in my actions; nopony will ever know how things would have gone if I hadn't made those choices. It might have been the best thing to do.
>Rather, I was wrong about justice.
>Justice is subjective.
>What I did may have been the right thing and it might have even been just, but *only* from my point of view. Some days, I question even that.
>It’s been hard without Spike.
>Every day, I worry that a little more of myself is slipping away. Not the part of me that feels guilt or is trying to fix my mistakes, but the part of me that is *me*.
>If my friends – if they are still my friends – saw me, would they recognize me? If I had a chance to relax and pretend that everything is normal, would I still enjoy the same books? Would I read at all?
>I spoke yesterday. I don’t know to whom. Myself, I guess, or perhaps a ghost or fleeting memory. The sound terrified me.

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>>28788732
>I hadn’t heard a voice in months.
>Only when I screamed did I realize I was the one speaking.
>That’s why I have started to keep this journal, apart from my notes and research. That’s all it is: a journal, though I assume that if it is found, they will call it my manifesto like I’m some political revolutionary or terrorist. Perhaps this is. Perhaps I am.
>Even so, I cannot stop myself from putting this to practical use. This may be a journal, but it is still an experiment of sorts. Two years from now, maybe three, will I read this back and be utterly confused by what is written within?
>At that time, will I still be me?
>Will I still be Twilight Sparkle?

>>28788618
Please draw it at some point, there are literally 0 good pictures of a pony getting nonsexually whipped with something that'll actually leave a mark.

We NEED this.

>>28788618
Yes. Please.

Cute is good and all, but we also need some dark as well.

>>28788756
There you have it, folks. For everyone who has asked in the past 11 months what's up with Twilight in ADiaD, here's your answer.

Thanks to the ircabal for helping edit this.
Weird how it's shorter than the Halloween short but somehow managed to take take up about 10x the time.

Fun note: not only is this the first ADiaD bit to be in first person and Twilight's POV, it's also the first to intentionally use the POV character's name. (Key word being intentionally, as it's happened plenty of times by accident.)
Unlike the other POV characters, Twilight acknowledges what she has done and isn't passing the responsibility to anyone else.

>>28788618
please do all the malicious whipping pictures break my heart, seeing whipping for sexual would help my heart expand

>>28788618
please do, man!

>>28788642
>slave pony
>best friends with her master
Lol no.

>>28789114
Do you not believe in the magic of friendship, Anon?

>>28789157
Magic only exists in Equestria, anon.

Happy anniversary guys

>>28789235
the ded dont talk

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>>28789157
"Magic is dead, Anonymous."
"It died when we were dragged from our homes in collars and chains. It died when the squads set fire to the ruins, just to be certain we wouldn't have anywhere to go back to."
"It died when I was brought up on the block, poked and prodded, sold off like lumber or stone, money changing hands as screaming families were torn apart."
"It died when the only friend I had was shot dead in a yard just trying to get a mouthful of food to keep her alive long enough to see a brighter tomorrow."
"It died when I was shackled blind and deaf, screaming for mercy, as the prod seared into my teats."
"And it died when I had my cutie marks - my life, my talent, my potential to define who I am - torn away to have a hope of never having to experience that terror again."

"Magic is dead, Anonymous, and friendship with it. I am alive, and I savor the few good moments of peace and happiness I have. But I am not the same mare I was, and not a second goes by when I'm not reminded that it will not be coming back."

>>28789278
Welcome to the real world.

>>28789195
>>28789278
But Shining has to have a limiter jammed in him to stop him from using magic. Magic seems pretty damn lively for being dead, must be a zombie.

>>28789278
Sounds like someone needs to meet a certain little filly. She's a bit shy and you've got to be careful around her because she's a bleeder, but she's nice.

>>28788649
>I killed half a billion. What does that make me?

One Bad Pony

>>28789254
story not dead just hiatus

>>28788649
>>So if I am not a murderer, conqueror, or god, then what am I?
A rallying call for the combined strength and hatred of all of humanity for fucking everything up.

>>28788649
>>So if I am not a murderer, conqueror, or god, then what am I?

Someone who just wanted to save his people, and take an impossible decision.

You may not be a bad pony, but neither are a good...

>>28788649
It would be ironic to think that in your action, Twiligth joined not only humanity but also the pony kind against a common enemy; She herself

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>>28788649
>I killed half a billion. What does that make me?
My little pony.

>>28788756
i dont get it

>>28788732
Is she little by little going mad, truth?

>>28789278
You know it's possible Corona has been a slave a lot longer than Shining Armor as well. The mainland of Equestria might have fallen several months, even years, before the isolated Crystal Empire in the frozen north.

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>>28788820
If Twiligth recognizes his fault because reason has not been brought to justice? That journal is not only a confession of his crimes, is an escape from his responsibility, a testament to the madness that is claiming him gradually

Great return of ADiaD ttgame, one perfect gift for the first anniversary of this Thread.

>>28787782
> somewritefag gay clop
[citation needed, by me!]
>>28788323
Just the filth as far as I know, but would love to be proven wrong!

>>28789532
>twilight
>his
>his
>him
stop

>>28789278
>"Shut the snout Slave or I will use the whip again"

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Now all we need is the promised Buying A Bookhorse and we'll have our fill of Twilight for the week.

>>28785839
Ay, it's fine. Strangely, I feel better the less people read my stories. Really helps me push through the anxiety of 'holy shit, this is garbage, everyone will hate it.' An audience of one fits much better than an audience of ten for that.

>>28789561
Anon would never talk to Corona like that. He loves her.

>>28789557
I appreciate your help to correct my spelling errors, use Google Translator but still make mistakes

>>28789582
And also he has a functioning grasp of english

>>28789582
>Anon got tired of the attacks of panic of Corona and the rebellions of Shining Armor and the sold them another human, with the money will buy a coupleofs more obedient, grateful, and less whiners ponies

>>28789652
Why is there so much Engrish in this thread?

>>28789652
>attacks of panic
>less whiners
Why are foreigners so fucking cute

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>>28786045
>Tfw still waiting for that guy who wrote the 3 posts of green about soarin to continue.

I'll wait for eternity if I have to.

I wish nothing but the best for Corona.

>>28789688
Because is slav thread

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An American civilian finds his way around the gasoline shortage by riding his horse to work, 1943 (colorized)

>>28790664
>riding
>pegasus
>not flying

>>28790679
It's still riding if you're on her back using her as transportation, even if she's not on the ground

>>28790679
It is not to pay the tax for flying

>>28790679
I ride in a car.

I fly in a plane.

I'm sitting on both.

>>28790780
meant for
>>28790698

Fucking bullshit 4chan replying.

I'm ready for more landscape green now...

>>28790780
you are also riding in a plane when you fly in a plane

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>>28790845
>what writefag is thinking

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>>28783706
Ponies are bought by a entrepreneurial company in the hopes of spearheading a series of pony-related products before the market is exploited by anyone else.

It's a porn studio.

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Mare is for riding nude

>>28790902
holy shit that gif

oh my fucking sides

>>28790925
is he jamming a dildo into her

>>28790925
rarity likes being spanked, so she's probably not doing too badly

>>28790941
glad I'm not the only person who saw that

>>28790941
Nah, it kinda looks like a paddle or something. He's probably just giving her a gentle tap to ask if she could ever so kindly quicken her pace.

>>28790973
>gentle tap

nah nigga, he's turning that white butt red

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Happy first anniversary /spg/!

I love you guys. Thanks for everything!

>>28790996
and probably turn her tail white, given it's position

>>28789408
If I was Hitler. I would pet the shit out of that little pony.

>testing shit bump

>Dear Princess Celestia,
>I bought your student last month at the pony auction and I have to say, money well spent.
>Things were a bit rough at first. I had to punish her severely several times. Did you know that unicorn horn grows back after you cut it? Me and Mr. iron file sure found out. Say what you will about Twilight, but she can scream like a banshee when she has too.
>Anyway, It only took me two weeks to break her in properly. She really hates it when I fuck her in the ass, but she knows that if she doesn't let me do it to her then that filly I bought with her gets to take her place.
>I've not once had to fuck that filly. You should be so proud of her.
>You may be wondering how I even got to send this to you. I've been weening her off her magic suppressant drugs. You shouldn't worry about my safety though. If I should die then ownership will pass to my brother, and he isn't near as nice as I am. Twilight found that out on the two weekends I lent her to him.
>Sharing is caring after all.
>I've enclosed a whole photo album to show you how she is getting on and what wonderful things she's learned. Best wishes and love.

>Sincerely,
>Anonymous

>p.s. She was gagging on my dick the whole time I wrote this letter. If she knows what's good for her she'll finish the job when she's done being passed out.

>>28792118
some premium edge you got there senpai

>>28792118
>You may be wondering how I even got to send this to you. I've been weening her off her magic suppressant drugs
I didn't know you could send anything except by dragon fire, plus how could she have enough magical energy while still partially drugged to teleport something across dimensions? 3/10

>>28788756
its glorious, more.

>>28789417
don't get what?

>>28792293
why she randomly closed the portal and killed everyone

>>28789532
>>28789557
look zzzz doesn't really speak english, he tries.

>>28792300
my understanding was there was already some sort of ongoing conflict between humans and ponies. been a while though so my memory could be fuzzy.

>>28790925
>>28790946
this has always been my headcanon too.

>>28792118
>>28792145
edgy for sure but kinda hot for some reason to be honest.

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>>28792300
>why she randomly closed the portal and killed everyone

>>28788649
>If you have not been following A Deal is a Deal, you might want read that before this.

I wonder if the answer might be in the main story.

>>28792300
>>28792317
She closed them because of retaliatory strikes launched by humans in response to Luna going ballistic after Celestia was assassinated.

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>>28792145
>Premium

More like vintage. That green was written all the way back when our general wasn't a general.

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>>28790941
>dildos

>>28789278
"Welcome to the True Man's World, Corona"

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>>28788820
Twilight is still a good pony deep down.

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>>28793155
Sheep pony is for riding

>>28793155
She only did what she had to, the same as everyone else.

NoSpoon Appul

Landscape Appul

Where is Appul? :(

>>28793778

Anyone know where I can find comfiest PTSD horse stories?

>>28793778
Appul is dead and we killed her.

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>>28794408
>>28793778
Apple will always be in our hearts.

Here, maybe this will help a little. I just finished coloring it.

>>28794907
that's a nice appul

>>28783706
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tkg1mtt4yrbujbz/Slave%20horse3.psd?dl=0

Here's the psd in case you guys wanted a really high res version to use for anything else. Meant to do this earlier but forgot.

>>28795298
neat

>>28794907
>>28794978
Yeah, I just want to take her and hitch her up to a cart

>>28779604
>>28781688
"So you want to what - murder your own unborn foal? For what? To spite me? To state your own sense of morality?"
> Vapor Trail recoils, and you give her a moment to let your words sink in before pressing your attack:
"Now, humans and ponies may think differently, but choosing such a cowardly way out disgusts me. You have a child, a miniature extension of yourself, growing inside you. And you want to kill it."
> Shooting upright, Vapor Trail locks eyes with you - her glare every bit as fiery as your own.
> "I want to give my foal the only freedom I can! Every day - every day I see ponies crushed under the weight of what you're doing to us, and there's nothing I can do about it! It's a slow death - and I'd rather she never live than die like that!"
"That's exactly why I'm trying to make things better here! There's no need to condemn ponies to a death like that - hell, there's not even any benefit in it for me!"
> "You think this is any better? That you aren't grinding us down into compliance? Your cage is as much a cage as anywhere else."
> Collapsing back down, she nearly falls from the bed until Cadance catches her with a wing.
> "This is still slavery. And I will not have her be part of it."
> Lips drawing back into a snarl, you feel your hand tightening into a fist again.
> "Anonymous..."
> Cadance.
> Of course she'd be concerned.
> But she had warned you, hadn't she?
> Turning away, you spit out your reply:
"Fine. Cadance, have her watched to make sure she doesn't harm herself."
> Striding out the door, you send ponies scurrying from the cloud of fury that hangs over you.
> Soon enough hurried hoofsteps creep up behind you, and then Cadance is pacing at your side again.
> "Anonymous, Master - what are you going to do to her? You can't keep her locked away or constantly supervised for the next seven months-"
"I know!"
> You snap at Cadance, pausing to spin and face her.

>>28795504

> Looking around, you decide there are few enough ponies within earshot to have this conversation.
"Yes, I can't keep her just shackled up... wouldn't exactly help how I'm viewed by all the others, too."
> "Even if you put a watchpony on her..."
> Grimacing, you lean against the wall and rub your forehead.
"Do it. For now, at least, until she calms down. One of the nurses."
> "And her foal?"
"She doesn't have to raise it, but I can't have her losing it."
> Not to mention what message that might send to the other slaves...
> You should've let Cadance handle this on her own, honestly.
> Though you loved her, your own daughter had taught you all the pains that come with raising a child.
> There was no need to get wrapped up in pony families-
> Families.
> Snapping your fingers, you point to Cadance.
"Find Derpy Hooves."
> "Derpy-"
"Yes, Derpy. And have her meet me-"
> On second thought, better not.
> Your plan might be overheard and revealed - or worse, if you met her in a private place, imagination would invent things far worse than reality.
> Best to keep suspicion at a minimum.
"Actually, you'd better be the one to speak to her."
> Cadance tilts her head slightly, clearly uncertain of your intentions.
> Slipping into a nearby room, shut the door after Cadance - hopefully leaving the two of you to speak undisturbed for the moment.
> "What exactly do you want me to do, Anonymous?"
> ...evidently Cadance believes you are alone as well, if she is addressing you by name.
"Derpy still has a daughter in the camp. Used to have two."
> Cadance winces softly, but nods.
> There'd been no word of the one who'd fled; whether she'd made it beyond state lines or was laying cold in a ditch was beyond your knowledge.
"I think she may be able to convince Vapor Trail to keep the foal."
> "By telling her... what? That life is good in the camp?"

>>28795514

"By telling her that there is hope. That it is possible for a foal to be free. That if she tries something now, it will only lead to trouble - but if she waits..."
> The look of utter shock on Cadance's face is matched by the tone of her voice.
> "W-What?! You want to encourage Vapor Trail to rebel? Are you setting her up-"
"I'm setting her up for nothing, Cadance. She's hysterical right now, completely unreasonable. Maybe it's the hormones, maybe the transfer to a new owner. Maybe both. This'll give her time - give us both time - to cool our heads and reconsider."
> "And if she does try to flee with her foal?"
"Do you think a pony who cares that much would risk her foal in an escape attempt?"
> "If she is hysterical..."
"Then some time to reconsider will do her good."
> Kneeling down, you cup Cadance's cheek with an open palm and match her eyes easily.
"I trust you can do this. You want Vapor Trail safe and sound as much as I do, Cadance."
> "Yes, but..."
> She flinches, eyes falling.
> "...I am afraid of what will happen if she can't be calmed. If she does try something foolish."
"Afraid of what I will do?"
> "No - what I will have to."

> "Miss Cadance?"
> The wall-eyed pegasus peeks around a door, calling nervously into your 'office'.
"Ah - come in, Derpy."
> She does, slipping the rest of the way through the door with nervous, halting gait.
> Not bothering to seat herself at the opposite side of the desk, she instead circles around and stands just in front of your seat - neither eye managing to land on you.
"How are you, Derpy? It's been far too long."
> "I've -"
> Her head twists around, nosing at her barrel where ruffles in her coat still show the places you'd laid the whip across her back.
> "-I've been okay. They still hurt sometimes, but I think I'm just imagining it."
> Your heart feels squeezed in your chest, compressed between your ribs.
"...I'm sorry, Derpy. I... I don't have any excuse for what I did to you-"
> "Yes! Yes you do!"

>>28795523

> Stomping her hoof softly, Derpy finally manages to bring her eyes - or one, at least - to rest on you.
> "I knew exactly what I was doing. You did too, Your Highness! And I know you wouldn't be any crueler than he forced you to, because you helped us too!"
"Yes, but-"
> "But nothing!"
> Derpy reaches around to nose at your own back - at the ruffles in your own coat.
> "You were whipped too, Your Highness. You were with us, not against us."
> A shudder runs through your body - memories of the fog of agony and time seeming to slow to a crawl between the blows.
> How had she ever managed when you'd whipped her?
> At least you had the benefit of your alicorn constitution; Derpy had no such thing.
> Leaning in, you brush your nose through her mane.
> She smells, you conclude with a start, like baking.
"Thank you, Derpy. I am glad somepony here still thinks that... tell me, is your daughter well?"
> "Yes. Well, um - the one who's, you know..."
> Still here.
"Yes."
> "She's, um. She's doing... okay."
> Lowering her head, Derpy whispers:
> "I wish she were free too... but I'm glad to be here for my little Muffin even if we aren't."
> In a way, you're relieved and terrified both to hear those words from her.
> Relieved, because it meant she hadn't been crushed entirely by what you'd done to her.
> Terrified, because you suspected Derpy wouldn't ever rest until she'd seen her remaining daughter to freedom as well.
> ...especially with what you were about to ask her to do.
"Perhaps I should speak to her at some point. See if there isn't anything I can-"
> "Ohno! No, um - no, I don't think that'd be a good idea."
> You tilt your head, one ear dropping.
"May I ask why not?"
> "She, um - she's not..."
> Derpy's voice again drops to a nearly-inaudible whisper.
> "She doesn't like you very much."
> Oh.
"I - suppose I cannot blame her."
> "But you-"
"Hurt you very badly, even if I had to. She is right."

>>28795533

> Stepping up, Derpy leans in to brush her wing against your cheek.
> "S'okay, Your Highness. If any of us six forgive you, it's me. I know a mom's gotta do what's right for her foal."
> You give a pained little laugh.
> Only Derpy could be such a confusing mix of formality and irreverence - but that irreverence was exactly what you needed right now.
> The touch of her wing makes the ever-burning hole in your chest where you thought your soul might have once been close up ever so slightly.
"Well, Derpy - I think I may have somepony else who needs to hear you."
> "To - hear me?"
"Yes. There's a pony in the medical ward right now, Vapor Trail. She's new here, one of the other slaves coming in. She -"
> Halting, you hesitate.
> How do you convince Derpy to do this - to play at being Anonymous' pawn?
> She didn't hate him in particular, you thought, not like some of the slaves did.
> But she certainly hated that her children were slaves.
> Would she play along if she knew that Anonymous surely didn't intend to actually let Vapor flee with her child?
> If you hid it from her, conversely, what might she do when she inevitably found out?

So, how are we explaining what we want Derpy to do?

>>28795543
I say lay it out flat and simple, let Derpy decide and hope for the best.

>>28795543
>You were with us, not against us.
>She didn't hate him in particular
>>28795583
Pretty much this. Lay it out simple and blunt. Sure she's kind of being Anon's pawn, but he really is looking out for his slave's safety.

>>28795613
>but he really is looking out for his slave's safety.
Only because he cares about his bottom line. I don't think he honestly gives a shit about their suffering.

>>28795733
You just summed up the IRL horse industry perfectly.

>>28795733
>>28795740
I think he does, he's mentioned wanting to give them a better life multiple times. He just fucking hate his kindness not being appreciated. I would too, to be honest. They don't have to like being a slave but they don't have to be cocks to him either.

That's irrelevant though. Point is, he cares about his property and she should have no qualms about helping him keep her own folk safe.

>>28795812
Honestly if you were a slave and your owners' agents had you whipped bloody for being out too late, or committed other abuses against you, you probably wouldn't be willing to give him the benefit of the doubt at this point.

>>28795812
>trying to escape a life of torment and hard labor constitutes "being a cock"

>>28795888
They've, especially Cadance, has been fucking moody to him since the start of the fic. If he were really a tormentor he's have them whipped for looking at him wrong. All they need to do is work on a shift and don't break the rules, which he's made more lenient now.

>>28795917
In what reality do you live in should a slave be grateful to their master that they're a slave?>>28795917
>If he were really a tormentor
The fact he allows the use of a whip at all makes him a tormentor. The circumstances are irrelevant. Whipping, especially the kind of whipping that leaves permanent marks, is considered torture in civilized countries.

>>28795951
Again, I'm not saying they should be grateful. I just don't see the reasoning in pushing his buttons at every turn.

>>28796017
>I just don't see the reasoning in pushing his buttons at every turn.
Because they value their freedom, Anon. They've been ripped from their homes, some of them their families too. Look at Shiny, he's got the kindest, most patient master he could realistically hope for, but he's still not satisfied to be a slave, because his whole fucking world was taken away from him and he knows he most likely will never see his wife and daughter again. I don't know if you've ever had children but that's exactly the kind of shit that will fuck you up in a big way. When someone takes your child away from you, there is nothing in the world that would ever make you like that person or want to treat them in a civil manner. Why do you think divorces and custody battles are so nasty?

A slave can never be truly happy with their lot in life, and it's unrealistic to expect none of them to show any signs of rebelliousness regardless of how broken they are or any generosity Anon shows. And before you bring up Corona - she's a textbook case of Stockholm Syndrome. It doesn't mean she's actually happy. She said it herself, she will never be happy as a slave, and she will always long to return home.

>>28795543
I feel like you and shinynon's universe needs some sort of shared major event to serve as a frame of reference for time, in case you ever want to have candyass and fluffy fart reunite with their husband/daddy. Right now I'm not sure exactly how much time has passed in both stories, but I definitely want to see what happens if there's a reunion, or the very least she finds out Shiny is alive and being cared for.

>>28796070
I know they'll never be happy, it's just that if I were a slave, I'd at least try not to go out of my way to break rules as simple as don't go out late and don't verbally or physically attack the master or his staff.

>>28796099
The mention of the "most recent slaves' rights bill" dying in congress might have worked for that but it was a little too vague because there's a good chance this bill wasn't the first of its kind to be shot down.

>>28796167
>attack the master or his staff.
Corona wants to attack her master's staff.

>>28796184
the joke is that it's an innudendo where "staff" means "dick" and "attack" means "suck/be fucked by/[other miscellaneous sexual verbs]"

>>28796220
No, I'm pretty sure she wants to do some femdom crap with him and slap his dick around or some shit.

>>28796537
>Corona approaches Anon in the bedroom while brandishing a whip.
>"Today, I'M the master."

>>28796628
"No."
>She drops the whip and looks at the ground, guitily.
>"O-okay, master."

>>28796642
>no baths or hot tub for a week
>only cold showers

>>28796628
>>28796642
kek

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>"I-I'm not sure about this, master..."

>>28796628
ded

>>28796628
That riding whip that came with the cart, and Shiny took, has to be floating around somewhere!

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>>28797010
>riding whip
It was a driving whip.

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>>28797010
That anon, and ya my bad. They are quite different.

>>28782735
"Actually, I think I like you the most out of any human I've ever met,"
>it's not technically a lie
>the huge grin on her face hearing you say that is infectious
"it's just..."
>you look into her eyes, knowing you really should keep this to yourself
>let her cling to her simple worldview for a while longer
>you won't play a willing role in taking away some small piece of her innocence
>"just what?"
"Nothing," you sigh
>"so you're okay with me coming to visit?"
>you nod
"Sure. I think I'd like that, actually."
>"YES!"
>her arms are around your leg once again
>she has quite a strong grip for such a little thing
>placing her tiny hands on either side of your muzzle, she stands on the tips of her toes and gives you a big kiss right on the end of your snout
>"MMMUAH!"
>you stare at the ground quietly as she takes off toward her father - and Anon
>"Daddy! Daddy!"
>you guess it could be worse

>>28797344
>the rest of the evening winds down uneventfully
>after getting the okay from Anon and reassurance from her father that she'll be allowed to come visit you, Grace was right back at your side
>she's the only human here besides Anon that Corona seems unafraid to make eye contact with
>though she's just as kind to Corona as she is to you, she seems to have mostly escaped the little girl's attention
>you're not sure if you should envy the mare for that or not
>much to Anon's disappointment, introducing the two of you to his friends doesn't go as well as he seems to have hoped it would
>none of them take much interest in getting to know you
>which is fine with you
>Corona herself barely manages to stammer out more than a couple of words whenever one of the other humans addresses her anyway
>which leaves you wondering what her actual motivation was for this in the first place
>coming here was her idea
>you have a vague feeling about that, but you don't give it much serious thought
>that's unlikely to ever happen

>>28797378
>Grace eventually wears herself out with her enthusiasm for her newfound pony pals, leaning against your side as an occasional yawn escapes her lips, fighting to keep her drooping eyelids from staying closed for too long
>she protests emphatically when she's finally pried away from you, her father insisting it's time for her to start getting ready for bed even as she whines that she isn't tired
>tomorrow is a school day, after all
>unsurprisingly she isn't satisfied to go without one more final hug, which she almost refuses to break
>"pried away" isn't far from the reality of the situation as her father has to pull her arms away from your neck and pick her up
>resting her head on his shoulder as he carries her away, he barely makes it two steps before she's out like a light, and you breathe a silent, satisfied sigh as she disappears into the house
>it comes as a small relief when you're finally in the back seat of Anon's car once again
>he'd at least granted you the dignity of removing the ribbons from your mane once Grace was out of sight
>but you'd forgotten about your hooves until you catch sight of them sparkling in the dim glow of the vehicle's interior light
>"I'll pick up some acetone on my way home from work tomorrow," he reassures you when you prod him about it

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>>28797394
>he'd at least granted you the dignity of removing the ribbons from your mane once Grace was out of sight
>"I'll pick up some acetone on my way home from work tomorrow," he reassures you when you prod him about it

>>28797394
I have a little more written but I'm saving it for the next scene, which will probably come this weekend.

>>28797394
fucking adorable man

>>28797344
>>28797378
>>28797394
>Gracie grows up to be a SJW
>tells the story about giving Shiny a kiss on the muzzle as "the first time she was ever sexually assaulted"

>>28797617
don't ruin this innocent cuteness with this cancer

>>28797617
you do know that little girls tend to cuddle, hug, and kiss the shit out of cute animals they like, right anon?

>>28790925
>>28790941
>>28790946
>>28790973
>>28790996
Here's some lewd based on this pic for you fags.

>You are sitting atop your unicorn slave.
>Riding her down the road at a slow walk.
>Her gait is smooth and graceful, befitting her appearance.
>Her head is held high as her well-groomed mane lightly bounces from her walk, her horn gleaming in the sunlight.
>With one hand you hold her reins, guiding her as she meanders towards your destination.
>Your other hand is up to your face, holding your pocket watch.
>Oh dear, it seems your running a bit short on time.
>Pocketing your pocket watch, your off hand now holds a riding crop.
>You use the crop to give her a light tap on her rump, bringing her out of the hypnotic haze of steady, graceful riding.
>"Yes, master Anonymous?"
"Rarity, as much as I enjoy this leisurely pace, I need you to go at a brisker pace if we don't want to be late."
>Obediently, she quickens her pace to a trot and you continue forward at a more timely rate.
>Even at a trot she's still keeping a remarkably smooth gait.
>You really are quite glad you invested in a unicorn.
>Sure, she's a bit bigger than a regular horse, but you think she's far better at what she does than any normal equine ever could hope to be.

>>28797727
>>Sure, she's a bit bigger than a regular horse
>bigger than a regular horse
NIGGA YOU WHAT

>>28797736
The joke is that the only thing that matches the picture is that Anonymous is riding atop Rarity, with all other elements being incorrect, such as Rarity being the size of a large horse instead of a woefully undersized pony, and Anonymous giving her a gentle tap and a well-worded request instead of a harsh smack and a tersely barked command.

>>28797727
go on...

>>28796099
I've deliberately kept the timeframe ambiguous, with the exception that Corona has obviously been out for some time by the time Shinyanon finds her.

This is so that if the stories do reach a point where a reunion occurs, I can just make some equally ambiguous "a few weeks later" noises and have the timeframes match up again. It's a lazy tactic, but it works.

Bedtime bump

Go Cubs

>>28795583
Partial with this idea, Yes, Derpy is one good option for speak with Vapor and and help her have the baby convincing that eventually found a way to break free and live, what happens after the decide the time and circumstances

>>28797658

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more apple bump

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>>28794907
>ywn pick up two armfuls of thick muscular earth pone.

I-I just can't go on... Good byeGood night bump.

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>page 9
Wew

>>28795543
"Derpy..... Ditzy Doo, I need your help"
>On hearing his real name from Candance lips, the pegasus raises his head showing attention to his words.
>"That I can for you princess?"
"You know Vapor Trail ?, she was Cloudsdale as your"
(Here let the author decide whether Derpy know Vapor Trail or not)
"She is pregnant...
>The words following struggling not leave your lips, after having seen your daughter after years feel like a sacrilege
"And she decided not to have the baby"

>>28800578
>The expression on the face of Derpy is the same as any other mare would place even if we were in Equestria, she approaches me with mortification, his eyes struggle to focus on me
>"That's horrible!, as somepony might even think about doing something?!, Because it would be crazy like that?"
"Why Vapor Trail loves her filly too who prefers to avoid a life of slavery before bringing him into this world without freedom"
>Once again the words become heavy and sharp as blades, the effort to explain the situation to Derpy not let this crush your heart depleted the reservoirs of your will
"But the Master does not want that to happen, he wants her to have the baby..."
>"Of course he want him! So have another slave to put to work and punish at will!"
>Replied Derpy interrupting the Candance speech, his casual joy is replaced by bitterness and resentment
"Derpy, that's not the reason..."
>"Of course it is! For him we are only animals that can exploit to become more and more rich!, the greedy and selfish human!"
Ditzy...
"He ....is a bad pony!"

>>28797578
I eagerly await your next update writefriend

>>28800705
"He ....is a bad pony!"

>"He ....is a bad pony!"

>>28799445
Moar appul

Appul plz

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>>28802305
Rental AJ is grumpy

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>>28802338
Well, at least show pony AJ is pretty happy

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>>28802800
And this AJ is okay too i guess

>>28803447
I snrked

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>>28793778
Seems like I've been summoned. Things have been busy lately but I do have an update coming soon.

Have some apple for the mo.

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>>28803447
This one's kinda lumpy though.

>>28804163
reminds me of the Crazy Hassan AJ green
whatever happened to that one?

>>28804173
I got bored and did other things instead

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>>28804200
DUBS DEMAND YOU TO CONTINUE YOUR STORY!

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>>28804200

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>>28804215
Nah.
But seriously if I ever do go back to that story it'll be a rewrite, a lot of it's kind of a mess.

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>>28796628
>>28796642

>>28803810
Applejack is the best pony

>>28804441
good man

pastebin.com/P77Z3w4T

A New Landscape Continued...

>Applejack gently closes her eyes
>she looks like she’s trying to fall asleep
>her entire body ceases all movement


>it’s a display of total submission
>not to your demands, but to the consequences
>torture, starvation, it doesn’t matter what you have the power to do to her
>she’s given up.


>you stare, blankfaced
>the stubborn, enthusiastic pony of just this morning, now lifeless in front of you
>and you can sense a sob rising in your throat


>right now, you were her last hope.
>she had none left
>it’s just hitting you that you are talking to someone who is suicidal
>someone in a state of mind that warranted hospitalization…


>but she was a pony.
>mental issues? Suicidality?
>they wouldn’t take her
>whoever her master is, that was their problem to deal with
>and other masters?
>they’d just sell her
>hope to make a quick buck, cut their losses, and pass a broken soul over to the next man unfortunate enough to…
>to…

>>28805388
>You were that next man.
>Those tubby fat fucks in the car the day they’d dropped Applejack off
>they knew from the start
>but the only victim here wasn’t you
>it was the pony in front of you


>against all odds, she had tried to work
>tried to endure the pain
>but now, she was lying down and waiting for you to kill her
>she hadn’t been able to escape the agony of her past.


>you don’t know how to answer her
>it’s all so overwhelming
>but you have to try.
>you lick your dry lips, and approach her unresponsive form


“No, Applejack. You ARE worth it, hon. In so many ways… and you know, I ain’t just talking about the work you’ve done. Which is amazing, by the way.”


>Your voice is sincere
>gentle
>but you don’t even see as much as a twitch of her ear
>you gulp, and stay focused on your mind’s current track
>you have to speak calmly and carefully


“You were… I mean, I know I saw the scars and all, washed them… but tonight, I actually heard the pain from you. Just… hell. It was hell you went through, and you…”

>>28805396
>you pause, keeping your emotions in check


“...you’re still here. Against all odds. And knowing what I know now… I would have spent a fortune to rescue you from where you were. And it would have still been worth it. Hon… you are a wonderful pony.”


>you take a chance, and run your hand down the side of her neck
>she barely even flinches at your contact
>you grimace, but continue petting


“I care about you, hon. I do. Not just as a master to his slave, but a man to a living, breathing creature who deserves kindness, dignity… love. And I’m not going to give up on you.”


>you are taking what feels like a risk
>but you are going to do it
>you can’t just reach her with words
>so, you will try with the only other thing you can


>you don’t know why you do it
>but you begin to lift her
>sliding a hand beneath her shoulders, and another below her tummy
>her muscles, suddenly and for the first time, tense up
>and a tiny, surprised gasp escapes her

>>28805401
>you sit up, against the wall beside the bed
>and then, you pull her body into yours
>placing her head on your chest
>you wrap one arm around her withers
>and the other, you set gently atop her head


>Applejack’s eyes flutter as you begin to run your hand through her mane
>her body, tense as a rock
>but she isn’t resisting you at all


>then, as the minutes drag on, and the silence stretches on
>the tension slowly ebbs away
>until finally, without a word, Applejack just accepts it
>and with a long but soft exhale, she relaxes in your hold


>you stay there with her, petting her head
>the sun starts to go down, light dimming through the window
>not a word is uttered by either of you


>you won’t give up.
>not now, not ever.
>you refuse.


>you stay with her, not even noticing as the two of you fall asleep
>her body held firmly against yours.

>>28805405
Goodnight, everyone. Hope this update had something in it for you all. Take care, and hopefully I can write the next one sooner rather than later!

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>>28805405

>>28805460
Image goes so well

Appul is so damaged.

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>>28805417
Wonderful update.

Despite her own words she still tensed up showing that part her (maybe even just subconsciously) has some fight left. She's not completely gone yet, and she's in good hands.

hey wait i was promised content from lurkernon. don't think you can get out of this one lurker, i remember.

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yellow book horse

>>28797010
yeah, knowing shiny its probably floating around right now as arisols.

>>28805405
I like how Applejackie doesn't say anything here. She's just accepting anything Anon does to her. She's left herself willfully in his hands even if it means death or more suffering for her. Poor thing.

>>28797394
More shiny when?

>>28807370
nvr
is kil

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>>28805417
>All you green

Great job nameless anon, Great job...

Landscape Anon here. Thanks so much for the comments, guys. Glad to see my stuff is still liked and all. I'm going to try to get more out this weekend, but it's no guarantee. Apple can do it!

>>28808207
Apple is fucked.

>>28808207
Apple is gonna get better right?
R- right?
please Land this thread is already crushing me, just a small amount of hope is all I ask for

>>28808409
Apple has a long road ahead of her. All I'll say.

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>>28783725
and here's the game epilogues to keep the thread bumped.

>>28809191
1.)Awww good for AJ

2.)Awww good for earth horse

3.)Awww good for zombie pony

4.)FUCK YOU DICKFACE BITCH

>>28809247
I know, right? Corona is totally a cunt for dying. Worthless twatnag probably died of ugly and laziness.

>>28809370
>not liking best waifu

What are you, gay?

>>28809191
>Awww that's nice
>Well ok then
>Good for them
>well fuck you to

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Did a thing. I figured this thread may appreciate it.

>>28809590
Spot is scared of the ceiling?

>>28809609

Indeed.

>>28809590
I like it

>>28809590
Twily best pet

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>>28810134
Remember to feed her plenty of her master's delicious, nutritious oats

>>28809370
>ugly
>lazy
I believe you have mistaken Corona for some other pony.

>>28810232
>ugly
up for debate as with any pony
>lazy
she basically begs Anon to let her work

>>28810246
I don't think it's so much that she's desperate to work as much as she just really wants to please her master since he's been so good to her.

>>28810463
Still, she's a pretty hard worker either way.

Corona is for brushing and tender snuggles.

>>28810486
>>28810512
She's a good girl who loves her master.

>>28810561
She's a good girl
Loves her master
Loves brushies
And bath time, too

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>>28810594
I think Slave Pony Thread is a pretty good pony. Seh works hard and doesn't afraid of master.

>>28810606
Or she works hard BECAUSE she's afraid of master.

>>28810594
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lWJXDG2i0A

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Where's the green, Lurker? WHERE IS IT?

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>>28797727
Rara is a very graceful pony.

>>28809247
>4.)

must have a secret code to resolve this error!

it Must be!

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This thread needs more Tia.

>>28805405
>your eyes flicker
>and the room around you is totally dark
>holy crap, how long have you been asleep in here?


>that’s when you remember
>Applejack!
>you look down, and sigh lightly with relief when you see her there
>she hasn’t moved one inch
>in fact, she’s still just as limp
>but she’s breathing, so you’ll take it…


>suddenly, the room lights up
>a bright white flicker through the gaps in the blinds
>and then, there’s a faint rumble


>oh noooo
>what the hell is this?
>there weren’t supposed to be thunderstorms, were there?


>this is not good.
>you are a landscaper and a stone mason.
>rain is the devil.
>as if you needed more delays on your project from hell…

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>>28811742
Celestia is for riding.

>>28811755
>the next boom of thunder is much, MUCH louder
>and it rattles the house
>the flash of lightning is longer, too
>you can faintly hear the leaves of the trees outside rustling with the rapidly picking up winds


>greaaat
>this was almost a guarantee to be a day’s delay if this thing sticks around
>you don’t know what time it is, either, but if it’s early morning then it’s all but guaranteed to set you back


>as the sounds of the storm pick up, you find yourself in a pickle
>Applejack is still breathing softly in your arms, limp
>the hair of her mane flows down over your arms
>but you need to check the time


>another boom, and the wind continues to pick up
>that’s it, you have to get up
>sorry, Applejack


>very slowly, you slip out from underneath her, supporting her head before letting it down onto the blanket
>she doesn’t seem to wake up
>good

>>28811771
>you tiptoe out of the room, the flashes of lightning illuminating your path
>you go down the hall and take a look at the clock
>you stop a groan from leaving you
>4:45
>that’s early for most people, but not for you
>you look out the window, seeing the trees swishing back and forth
>you’re gonna have to phone it in.


>you walk over to the side table, next to your couch
>you pick it up and swipe the lockscreen aside, cursing quietly to yourself
>your workers aren’t going to like not being paid tomorr…


>You see the exclamation point.
>a big fat red exclamation point
>it’s your weather alert app


TORNADO WARNING: FROM 4:40 PM -- 5:10 PM…


>you stare at the phone for a few seconds
>then, you look out the window, hairs raising on your arms
>the trees are swaying
>the lightning is picking up
>you look back down at the screen, and then click on the notification rectangle
>it brings up the radar


>you know how to read radar.
>the little flag indicating your location is right to the northeast of the concentrated blip of yellow, red, and violet
>and hanging right out the bottom of that blip, you see it
>almost right beside your location, maybe five minutes away at most
>a pronounced hook in the doppler, indicating strong tornadic rotation


>and it’s right to your east


>your heart stops.

>>28811778
PANIC

>>28811778
fug

>>28811778
"It's a twister!"

-Applejack

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>>28790925
Now in color!

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>>28812140

>>28802338
and this too

>>28811778
Forgot to mention, that's it for today for me. Got to slip this last bit out there before I had to start on some work. Enjoy the cliffhanger till then!

>>28812222
Also, the times in the story SHOULD have said 4:40 -- 5:10 AM, not PM. My bad.

>>28812222
checked

>>28812222
QUADS