Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #39

>>28775121
Trixie giving Fluttershy her hentai fantasy with Anon when?

>>28775121
I never really considered how appropriate those costumes are for the characters

>>28775144
Possible one shot idea I had

>>28775215
Sweet.

test

>>28775222
A short one though as I already have a similar idea already written of it

>>28775244
Sounds good.

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>>28775121
Is anyone willing to make a comfy oneshot?

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>>28775301

>>28775301
"Sunny!"
>"Anon!"
>HighestOfFives.exe engaged!
>Perfect angle, perfect speed, optimal power for satisfying 'clap' without leaving a stinging sensation that itches the palms
>This was it
>This High-Five was Destined to be
>Impact in three...
>Two...
>One!
>'THWIP'
>Time stops as a cool, sticky mass fills your hands, entwining fingers and looping around your wrists
>Oh fuck
>Sunset stammers out apology after apology as you sigh, and struggle futilely to detach hands from your best friend
>Oh yeah, no, that's stuck
"Ah, Sunny, any idea how long this'll last?"
>I mean, you guys had been planning the hang-out session for forever
>"About an hour, give or take..."
>An hour, that wasn't so bad
>Just an hour of you and your best friend, h-holding hands
>N-No homo
>Right?
"Well, that kind of rules out videogames... wanna watch a movie?"
>"S-Sure, yeah!"
>Oh man, you hope webbing absorbs your sweat from your hand
>The pair of you settle onto the couch, watching old westerns, letting the time pass
>Before you know it, it's dark outside, and Sunset's resting her head comfortably on your shoulder, snoozing soundly
>You glace down
>Huh, webbing's gone
>You hadn't even noticed
>But...
>You test the boundaries, giving her hand a squeeze
>A moment passes
>Then another
>She squeezes back
>Yeah... you can work with this.

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>>28775460
Cute story. Although it would be quite uncomfortable to sit on a couch if both their right hands were stuck.
Hey Superkeaton, are you going to write that jojo story in the other thread?
They referenced it last time in another green.

>>28775563
I had honestly almost entirely forgotten about it
School got busy and I didn't have anymore time to spend on what Sunset's stand would look like.

I'm surprised people were still talking about it!

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>>28775586
If you feel like reading some other guy rendition of [Beautiful Liar] you should read it. That green is just begining.
Also, your designs were kinda cool.

>>28775613
wait, seriously?
where?
gib me link pls

I mean, I'm super honored anyone actually took up with my doofy designs

>>28775643
Here you go. Although it is just a little cameo.
>>28770882

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>>28775686
That's the dopest shit in the world, I literally squee'd like a little bitch

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>>28775121

>>28776264
treps is that you? If so, good on ya mate!

>>28776280
Not me for once.

Also No update tonight but I'll have a bigger update tomorrow

>>28776264
BREED THOSE SUPER HIPS, PAINT HER INSIDES WHITE!
>>28776301
Three posts then?

>>28775460
Comfy readings are at satisfactory. levels.
Thank you.

>>28776313
With the rate I'm going it might be 4 or 5. Maybe even 6

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>>28776264
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUCC

>>28776316
Huzzah!

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>>28776341
Hot damn your on a roll.
>>28776351
Bring out your hips best slut, my dick is ready.

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>>28776359
O-Okay, I'll expose my h-hips for you...

>>28776383
Your bones may be spooky white, but I WILL make them whiter. But seriously, I need some meat to rub on.

>>28776359
I make no promises but the ideas are flowing

>>28699517
>Be Femanon a.k.a Aether
>There is a lunatic clown that rigged all around the city with bombs
>He gave you one chance, if one of you kill him this will all be over
>"What will we do?" Sunset asks
>It should be you, you are the one with the sword
"W-we kill him." You stutter as you pull your sword out
>"Oh, I like that. You've got spirit. Do it. Cut me down."
>You smile bitterly under your helmet
>He's not wrong, you do have spirit
>Afterall, it wouldn't be the first time you killed
>You tighten your hold on the blade as you remember
>It shouldn't be hard to do it again
>You sigh and stand straight
>Clown's lips crawl up to shape a grin that should not be possible as you start walking towards him
>"NO!" Sunset grabs your arm. "Let me do it."

>Be Trixie a.k.a Screwball
>Two heroes that tried to stop you just yesterday are now arguing about which one of them should murder a person
>This is wrong, they are good people
>They try to help the weak with their powers
>Unlike you
>You used your abilities to harm people, not even just as Screwball, but as Trixie aswell
>You look at the clown
>He is looking at your friends with a mad glimmer in his eyes
>He is happy, he enjoys this
>Like you enjoy wrecking havoc in the city
>Fem and Sunset...
>They are different
>They don't break things, they fix them
>They save people not kill them
>But you...
>You look at the clown who is looking directly at you
>He nods
>He knew, this whole time he knew it would come to this
>A smile creeps onto your face as you snatch the sword out of Aether's hands
>"Trixcrewball! You can't!" You hear Aether calling for you, slipping up a little
>You don't look back as you slowly walk towards the mad clown
"Of course I can, I am the villain here."

Sorry guys, it's 5 AM here. I need to sleep so that's it for now.
Even though it's short I hope you like it.

>>28776264
>Sunset gained a little weight after having your daughter.
>You had to sleep on the couch after saying.
"I'm surprised that the suit still fits you."
>Worth it.

>>28776518
Implying there is anything wrong with the bountiful love handles she graced that TIGHT latex suit with, POUND A HOLE THROUGH TO HER PUSSY WITH YOUR DICK!

>>28776555
Is it wrong that Sunset's suit in my green is made of latex like material?

>>28776578
Hell no dude. I even support it.

>>28776578
Uh no, that just means the villains will see the cum stains sag a bit and drain down her legs when they fight. Sexy as hell distraction.

>>28776578
for mine, it's a latex kevlar hybrid.

>>28776591
and by sag a bit, I mean like bloat up to be noticeable like a tight condom. Sunset likes to keep the breed juice deep in her, and the suit helps

>>28776578
It would cause problems during summer.

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>>28776591
>>28776602

>>28776598
That's cool. Mine is a strange yet durable latex like spandex

>>28776752
hmm, sexy, but not very practical in the field.

>>28776846
It will get an upgrade later. Twilight will get some fetish gear and some other stuff to either give Sunset an upgrade or a way to get Anon.

>>28776872
>fetish gear
>upgrade
Nigga, it needs to be more /practical/, not sexier.

I've always pictured Shimmering's suit as the usual elastic cloth deal, with the hood, because how else would she hide her hair?

>>28776891
Can't it be both?

>>28776914
Kevlar corsets? The /k/ommando in me likes where this is going.

>>28776982
And I said she uses them the gear, not become some Spider Dominatrix.


I like that idea a little too much

Does Sunset go commando while wearing the suit?

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>>28776999
now I'm imagining corset plate carriers. What is this thread doing to me?

>>28777057
I don't know. But now I'm thinking of Spider Sunset "punishing" bad guys and girls .....and Anon for some strange reason.
I need to stop reading Highschool DxD

>>28777052
>implying the suit is not her underwear

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>>28777086
oh, I like you.

>>28777129
yup and then Sunset get a harem with Anon in it

>>28777175
And just when I thought I couldn't get any harder.

>>28777086
Well, you shouldn't read that trash anyways.

>>28777230
just read the first few chapters and don't want to read any more of it.

>>28777216
Who's luckier though, Sunset or Anon in that situation?

>>28777251
>>28777230
Is it that bad?

Also, depends on who else is in that harem.

>>28777278
people having weapons that could kill gods, chess based servant system, a leader of hell like power rangers and the other being a magic girl. There's other stuff as well.

I say the Sinister six plus a villain Vinyl, but that's my opinion

>>28777306
That does sound shitty.

throw in some scitwi and you got yourself a decent harem.

>>28777380
Knew I was forgetting someone. Who would SciTwi be though?

>>28777399
so many choices. I'd go with Scarlet Witch, but that's just me.

>>28777399
The Vision.

>>28777481
Forget what I said, this is much better.

>>28775121
>my paste in isn't listed anymore
Huh. Guess Spider-Shimmer will have to come back very, very soon.

Git ready

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>>28777659
Just post it.

>>28777703
I'm on mobile. Believe me though, I very well could.

>>28777659
Yay!

>>28777717
Then post it soon.

>>28777739
I'm planning to post the progress I've made. It's cute.

You all remember what's happened so far, right?

>>28777770
more or less.

>>28777784
Okay, so I guess I'll have to right a list of what happened too...

>>28775061
I think I should tripfag more and make myself important
At tge moment Im just dunping my green for the thread and get two replies or three.
Doesn't feel the greatest.
Mmmmmmaybe looking to do something else...

>>28777817
Do whatever you think you need to.
Fill space with little one-off greens, fulfilling prompts, whatever.

>>28777800
Admittedly, my memory of events is fuzzy
But that doesn't say much, my memory is often scattershot at best.

>>28777800
please, we've waited long enough.

>>28777833
Tomorrow. I promise.

Tomorrow Spider Shim continues.

>>28777845
And I will hold you to that, barring any unseen circumstances.

>>28777831
Just want to know if I should actually start new arcs or leave at a thightspot...
Maybe I'll just skip a little more
Also...
>>28775460
>not playing vidya co-op on one controller
casuals

>>28777963
I can't tell you where your story goes.

And I was running close to the word count, sue me...

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>>28776264
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VMnjF1O4eH0&index=136

>>28777659
Shut up and post, or stay quiet.

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>>28777800
post your damn story, your pastebin until you inevitably don't deserve the spot any longer, or get out you attention whore.

>>28778606
>>28778596
See >>28777845

Morning thread! How was your night, did you have pleasent dreams?

>>28776518
Kek.
Speaking of this, is there any green with Spider Shim and Anon are parents
I wonder what type of shenanigans they get into when they have a baby girl to look after.
>Anon tries to change the baby's diaper and gets webbed in the mouth by the baby and Sunset laughs her ass off while you try to get it off.

>>28779176
Afternoon... (you).

>>28779176
Good. Had plenty of time to think of ideas for the next part of my green.

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>>28775121

>>28779466
As did I
Untitled 7 will enter a hiatus soon
But Im pulling a stunt from trepps book and make another green here

>>28779584
Not sure how to take that.

>>28779599
Passive aggressively

>>28779706
That's fine.

New story or one shot?

>>28779740
Story but only two arcs.

Good morning, everyone

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>>28779799

>>28779799
I think I haven't hit on you in a while

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>>28779813
A-Ah?

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>>28779821

>>28779813
>>28779844
No. keaton is for hugging not fugging

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>>28779860
I'm okay with that...

>>28779860
what?
I only hit on him, a relationship has to develop before you could do either...

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>>28775121
>You will never share a milkshake with Sunset.

>>28778455
big booty bitches, queen style

>>28779895
keaton, stop being so lewd. otherwise I might just have to bend you over my knee.

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stuck at home on fright night duty.
My parents are theater and my sis watches dr. strange
TRAITORS

look at luna until no longer frustrated

>>28752201
>Be Shining Armor
>Your target, an old woman, freaked out when you hit her with the tranquilizer.
>You have had moral concerns about shooting her and if the tranquilizer may be too much, but she's still standing.
>Well, that, and the fact that she totally shattered the magical shield from your sister from the other world.
>Or something like that.
>Wonderbolts stuff.
>And you thought you were out of it.
>You hide behind the trees and reload another dart to continue.
>If she hadn't been until now, this had certainly made her hostile.
>This is not good, stay calm.
*crack*
>You spin toward the noise and aim the rifle at-
>Glimmer!
>The weapon was yanked from you in that pink-ish glow of hers and just as you pull another tranquilizer dart you're immobilized.
>“Shining Armor~”
>Her voice carries a sweetness which makes you sick.
>“We only saw one another in passing, but I sure remembered me.”
>There is no way you could forget her or what she had done to you and your comrades.
>“What do you say? Lend me your mind again?”
>Even through your inhibited movement you're able to press out a word.
“Never...”
>The strand of energy connecting her to you grows more intense and you're forced down.
>“Give me your mind...”
>Her voice sounds strained now too.
>You can't help but smile.
“No.”
>She can't control you again.
>Even her psychokinesis seems weak... comparatively.
>You pull yourself up again to your feet even through the force she's exerting on you.
>Then it's gone, and you almost stumble again.
>She released you from your grasp.

>>28780262
“Why?”
>“Why what?”
>She seems annoyed.
“They thought you could change.”
>“I am still a prisoner!”
“Considering what you did!”
>Your eyes go to the rifle.
>“They so desperately claim I can be their friend, and that's how they treat me? I learned my lesson, I just want to be gone. It's their hypocrisy, these mixed messages that make me sick.”
“You don't change. Instead of just making your exit you try to take control of someone again. Try to start a new private army?”
>To your surprise she smiles.
>“Try? No. Trying isn't the first I did. First I succeeded.”
>You grip the dart harder.
>You haven't heard any other movement so far, but you let your eyes go around now, still trying to keep that witch in your field of view.
>Her smile grows broader.
>“She can fly, so I'm just borrowing her, okay? And whatever Spitfire did to save her life, it intrigues me. Also, I think it's not that easy for her to start looking for a person she faked the death of by herself, if nobody is supposed to know, is it?”
>She laughs as you jump at her and a purple glow catches you mid air.
“Twily...”
>You're turned mid-air to face your sister, all suited up.
>The helmet hides her face, and a scarce armor now protects her chest and abdomen.
>Glimmer continues to talk as Twilight ignores you calling out to her.
>“We're seemingly the best buddies in an alternate dimension. Doesn't it fit?”
“Twily, don't do this.”
>She floats towards you.
>“Sorry, bro. But I want answers too.”
>Then she puppeteers your arms with ease around.
>You're almost unable to even resist how you had been with Glimmers influence.
>The dart in your hand finds its way into your shoulder.
>“Sleep now, Shiny.”

>>28780262
>>28780267
what did they do to green?

>>28780302
what do you mean?

>>28780330
the halloween skin looks ugly

>>28780341
Ooooh.
I needed to refresh to trigger it.

>>28780368
DON'T!

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God damn it.
>>28780378
I refreshed the page. What is with the damn pumpkin skeleington

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>>28780441
I like the skelingten.

Shit's goofy, I love it

>>28780267
>Be Anon.
>Okay, fact check.
>Take a step back and look at the big picture.
>Start at the beginning.
>You hatched from a test tube.
>You were created after Treehuggers image of having nanites flowing through your body to do stuff, but that failed.
>Wait.
“Auntie? Do I still have my own nanites? You know, the ones that Hydra created me with, not the one you gave me?”
>Treehugger looks up again and frowns.
>“That's an interesting question. I never really thought about it, but... I assume they were flushed out by mine. They had been harming you after all.”
“Mhm...”
>“Equally likely scenarios is that they are just barely helping you so they were allowed to stay, or that they are now inactive and still floating around, but we can't go for sure.
“Is there a way for us to know for sure?”
>“Well, we can ask around in Hydra to make a proper hemogram, but we should keep your identity a bit of a secret.”
“Yeah...”
>“I did kill all of the scientists who... created you though.”
“Yeah...”
>You don't know how to feel about that.
“So, like... there is no way of finding out who were... like the- uhh... DNA donors for... me?”
>Treehugger looks at you for a while.
>“It's likely they were students, who gave stuff for a little bit of cash.”
>That sentimental stuff is not important, all it gives you is...
>No, don't think about this stuff.
“So... why did you tell me you're my aunt and not my...”
>And it's gotten awkward and sentimental.
“Like... if I'm designed after you, doesn't that you my...”
>Why is this so difficult to phrase?
>“Mother.”

>>28780772
>Treehugger finishes your train of thought.
>Synergy tries her best to pretend not to be present, but you can't help but look over to her as if she'd give you strength.
>But she's not Sunset.
>You look back to Treehugger who was in thought herself.
>“Because I didn't think I'd... keep you.”
>Why does it feel like a stab in your heart.
>You had no family, you're a fucking experiment, and the only one who cares for you-
>...
>She does care for you.
>She had ever since she picked you up.
>You ease up again and smile.
>It doesn't matter what she had thought at one point, does it?
>Treehugger raised you.
>She is your family.
>You shake your head.
>How could you have been so stupid?
>The circumstances on how you got together change nothing about what you did together.
>The bond of family is real.
>She watches you intently as you had gone through this string of emotions.
“I know you don't have much longer...”
>You bite your lip.
“Which makes it all the more bittersweet, but...”
>Another deep breath.
“Can I... call you mom then?”
>For a moment you see Treehuggers eyes light up and her mouth opening in mild shock.
>Then both of you need to turn your heads as Synergy had a coughing fit.
>She's wheezing and desperately trying to suck in some precious air.
>Her arms flail around until she punches her chest repeatedly as she bends over.
>At least she's not faking.

>>28780779
>Huh...
>...
>You should help her.
>You jump up and hurry over, patting her back forcefully.
>Treehugger extends a red strand of her nanite-blood over.
>“Wait I got this.”
>What?
>The strand hits Synergy's cheek and moves to her mouth, from there on out you couldn't observe much more, but after a second she suddenly stops.
>Patting her chest for a moment before noticing the substance on her face and tries to wipe it away.
>“What the?”
>The strand had already retreated before Synergy was even able to reach it with her fingers.
>“I cleared your airway from the miss-swallowed saliva and put it back into your mouth. Between teeth and cheeks, both sides.”
>Synergy looks frantically around, trying to feel up her mouth with her tongue.
>“What the?”
>She repeats her words of wonder, now with a little bit more anger in them.
“Auntie, did you-”
>You bite your lip.
“I mean, did you... try and show off?”
>God, you're stupid.
>Asking her if you can call her mommy like you're some 5 year old, and following up with calling her 'Auntie' again.
>“Yes- a bit and... yes to the other question as well. I'd be happy to...
>She turns angrily to Synergy.
>“You ruined my son and my moment!”
>“I didn't mean to die. And you stuck your tentacle porn'd me!”
>Once again you can just look between the two women fighting.
>One of them is your new mom, and the other looks like your girlfriend.
>You'll not get much sleep in the next few days...

>>28780782
end of stream
comments, questions, concerns, praise?

>>28780791
Like how you used Glimmer and can't wait for more

>>28780791
That was super cute, I seriously dug it
Nobody likes to hear "I was thinking about aborting my test-tube science experiment" from their mother-figure, but I like that Anon moved past that.
Poor boy needs a hug.

>>28781014
he was already a crying baby when she picked him up
He doesn't know how to feel about all that, but he does remember that his childhood had been more good than paranoia inducing.
He's not a teenager who learns he's adopted and rebels, he's an adult

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>come home
>Shimmy is now a vampire
What do?

>>28781246
Get bit, have kinky undead sex. What's the issue?

>>28781246
>get out notebook
"Guess we have to add that to your list of abnormalities, Sunny"
>look up
"Also, get out of the tub fully clothed. Do you know what that does to your awesome leather jacket?"

>>28781256
No blood to your dick when your a vampire

>>28781264
>depends on the lore

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>>28781246
Ask her if I can have the mask too.

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Continued from pastebin:http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0

>You sit in the back of the police car with Barbara and none other than her father, Commissioner Gordon, who drives you two.
>The music he plays is alright you guess.
>Like, it's really nothing special other than some classical stuff.
>But hey, classical's pretty calming, so that's nice.
>It’s been awhile since he’s made those phone calls to your friends’ parents at this point, and finally a plan had been set.
>It was decided by the adults that you are going to Twilight Sparkle’s house where all the girls are meeting, then pick them up and go to Gordon’s place for the sleepover.
>Pretty simple, senpai.
>You’re pretty anxious to see the group.
>Wonder what they’ll think of Gordon?
>Or Barbara?
>Heh, truth be told, imagining Twilight and and Barbara meeting each other is really satisfying.
>Why is this satisfying?
>Because you wanna know how they’ll interact one on one for the first time.
>You know, if it is the first time they’ve met seeing as how they both went to Crystal Prep.
>...Yeah, you’re still hung up on how similar sounding the two’s voices are, but so what?
>You're just really glad you will be surrounded by friends...even if you pretty much saw the whole gang at school today.
>You've been vulnerable and weak before—everyone has.
>But this?
>This is different.
>You need to see these people in your life at the moment.
>And you don’t mean to pick apart everything and complain, but...
>It’s night outside the car and is spooky, Barbara is on the phone with her boyfriend and you’re pretty sure Gordon used his rear-view mirror to comb his moustache earlier.
>Other than that, you’re fine despite your Dad going missing and being left to deal with the trauma of leaving your Spidey-for-lifey behind at her request while fighting a crazy topless chick with robot arms of death that wants to do dirty things to you.
>But hey, everyone has those weird weeks, eh?
>...Ok, maybe not.

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>>28781398
You lay your head against the car window and observe the black night and what little is lit by the streetlights in the neighborhood.
>Streetlights are bright, but don't really illuminate the whole neighborhood.
>It does, however, tinge everything with low orange light and drenches the blacker shadows in even more black.
>It’s a nice neighborhood despite looking spooky at night.
>Nicer than you and Dad’s, but your guys’ part of town is kinda lower-class.
>From what you can tell, these houses are not lower or upper-middle class, just a solid middle.
>It’s a neighborhood for people who lack the ignorance of White-bread America, but also lack the knowledge of the real streets despite being aware of them.
>These houses, while looking pretty standard for your middle-class home, each are still differently built.
>Some look prettier than others while some are kept managed with minimal amounts of effort.
>Barbara finally starts to wrap up her talk on the phone.
>“Uh, hey Dick? I’m gonna have to go now, I think we’re almost at this friend of mine’s friend’s house.”
>...
>“Yuh-huh? Why?”
>...
>“Pfft, fine, I’ll tell him…”
>...
>“I love ya too, babe! Bye.”
>Then she hangs up.
>She looks at you with a giggly smile.
>“My boyfriend says that if you try something stupid with me, he’ll run down here and beat you with dual sticks.”
“How charming.”
>“More charming than you think. He's only kidding. You'd like him.”
>She turns her device off and looks out the windows curiously.
>“So...we there yet, Dad?”
>“I don’t know; I think we’re at least in their neighborhood,” answers Gordon.
>“You got the address?”

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>>28781460
>Sleepover scene
>*Doorbell rings*
>Pinkie: "Pizza's here!"
>Barbara: "I'll get it"

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>>28781517
I'm not screaming, you're screaming!

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>>28781817
This gives me a good idea for a comfy one shot

>>28781827
Lay it on us, mang

>>28781897
On a roll with the next update on Tonic but after that I'll do a short comfy. The idea is very sweet sounding to me.

>>28781943
Radtacular

>>28781246
"How much money did you spend on kool-aid?"

>>28781966
It won't be a long update but i feel it's gonna be a good one though.

>>28769315
Continued from the last thread

>Moving to the side, you let the girls inside your house as they all took a seat in the living room.
> You close the door and turn to see the girls are comfortably sitting down, clearing your throat and gaining their attention.
“Ok, I have to ask why’re you all..”
>The doorbell rang again causing you to stop.
>Confused, you go back to the door and open it to three people you really weren’t expecting to see today.
>You were greeted by Photo Finish, Violet Blurr and Pixel Pizazz standing at your front door.
> “Greetingz Anon. May we come in?”
>They giggle at what you suspect is your confused as fuck face.
>You move out of the way, to let them inside.
“Welcome to my home.”
>The three photographers walked inside and gave their thanks.
“Just grab a chair from the dining room while I try to talk to the others.”
>It was their turn to look confused as they said the same thing.
> “Otherz?”
>With a tired sigh escaping your lips, you point to the next room.
“In there.”
>You see them walk into the other room and gasp from seeing the others if you had to guess.
> ‘This is quite the predicament you’re in.’
‘I know. ….Let’s hope nothing bad happens.’
>Making your way to the living room, you see almost everyone pointing fingers at one another, with Pinkie getting in Photo’s face.
> “What’re you all doing here?”
> “Zat zould be my question.”
>Their respective friends try to break up their little face off before they try anything.
“Ok, I have to know. Sunset, what’re you and the girls doing here?”
>Sunset just scratches the back of her head while the other girls look just as sheepish.
> “Well I heard that Pinkie was having a sleepover at your house, so I figured the more the merrier.”
>You look at the other five girls as they nod and shrug as Pinkie looks surprisingly bummed.
>Whatever, you can try and figure out Pinkie later.

>>28782289
>Looking at your newest guest, you clear your throat.
“And I’m guessing you wanted to hang out, right Photo?”
>Photo nods happily with a small blush while her friends smile knowingly at their friend.
> “Yez, I waz hoping we could spend a little time together but zince you have company, I can leave.”
>Photo and her friends began to walk to the door with the intent to leave.
“You don’t have to leave, Photo.”
>She stops with her hand hovering over the doorknob and looks at you.
> “What? But your friends?”
> ‘Host tread carefully with-’
“What’s a couple more people? Besides, Pinkie would say you could never have enough people at a party.”
> ‘...this. I see something bad happening soon.’
>Photo has a conflicted look on her face as she looks at her two friends for support.
>Pixel and Violet both whisper something in Photo’s ears.
> “C’mon ….you …..him.”
> “Show ….heaven ….closet.”
>You could only make out a few words and they confused you.
> ‘Is this what females do?’
‘You mean whisper what some kind of nonsense? Eh, sometimes.’
> ‘Does this mean they’re planning something?’
>You were about to answer when you looked at Photo’s group with their little prep talk.
>Looking back at the living room, you see Pinkie writing something in a notebook furiously as Sunset is talking to Twilight and Rarity about something.
‘You’re not wrong, Tonic.’
> ‘Is it a way to defeat the other group and take you as their own to breed with?’
>You quietly let out a snort of amusement that went unnoticed by the girls.
‘It more likely they're planning on embarrassing me with truth or dare.’
>For some reason Rainbow, Violet, Pixel and Sunset sneeze at the same time.
“Gazuntite.”
>They say their thanks as Photo and her group walk back to the living room.
“Okay, I'm gonna order some pizza. Anyone want a topping?”
> “Pepperoni.”
>“Meatball.”
>“Bacon and chicken.”
>“Broccoli.”

>>28782318
>“Extra cheese.”
“Got it. I'll be right back.”
>Nodding to yourself, you began walking towards the kitchen to order the pizzas.
> ‘Is it wise to leave them back there?’
‘Pinkie by herself, no. But with the others there, she should be fine. Besides what's the worst they could do?’

>Be Photo.
>You’re off to the zide talking to your friends/partners in huzhed whizperz.
“Are you zure thiz will work?”
>Pixel gigglez at your nervouzness while leaning next to you.
> “Don’t worry Pho. When we get some games going, and trust me they will, I'll get everyone to play truth or dare.”
>Nodding to yourself, Violet puts a hand on your zhoulder while giving it a comforting squeeze.
> “And when that happens, it'll be my job to make sure Anon gets a little closer to you.”
“And your zure of thiz plan?”
>You hated zounding weak but your friends zmiling faces help calm your fearz.
> “Don’t worry, Pho. We'll help catch this guy.”
>Pixel cheerfully hugged you while Violet just giggled zlightly.
> “If he's as interesting as you say then I have no reason to stand in your way. Plus i always wanted to play matchmaker.”
>Giving them your bezt zmile, you chanel all of your energy into one important task.
>Getting Anon’s attention.


>Be Pinkie Pie and you're going over your game plan.
>Your original plan was to just enjoy the night at Anon’s and have a wonderful date that only you thought of.
>Now you have not only Sunset and your other five super bestest friends here, but also that girl and her group.
>All you need to do is get Anon close to you without hurting Photo’s feeling and this party will be a success.
>Or you can do what Auntie Quinn does and just take Anon but that's not very nice.
>Decisions, decisions.

>Be Sunset and you’re freaking out somewhat.
>You basically invited yourself and your friends into Anon’s house for Pinkie’s sleepover.
>And now Photo Finish and her friends are here.

>>28782327
>Many thoughts were going through your head.
>Why did i do this? Should I stay or should I go? Couldn't I had a better idea than this?
>While in your own little world, something touched your shoulder causing you to jump slightly.
>Looking to your right, you see Twilight and Rarity looking at you in worry.
> “Are you alright, darling?”
> “You seemed a bit lost, I think.”
>Taking a deep breathe, you give them your best smile and try to reassure them you're fine.
“I'm fine, girls. It's just been awhile since we all hung out i guess.”
>The two just look at you with their eyebrows raised.
“Ok, i just feel like some supervillain will crash through a wall and steal a fridge. I know what I said.”
>They were beginning to look at you like you were crazy or something.
> “You really need a day to yourself, Sunset.”
“Yeah.”
>You lower your head in despair at how stressed you feel.
>Being a hero is hard work.
> “Maybe we can all go to the spa sometime, darling. A nice message or dip in the sauna would help you relax a bit.”
>......That's not a bad idea.
>A day to let all your troubles wash away sounds really nice.
“I might take you up on that offer, Rarity.”
>Her eyes light up dangerously as you begin to feel a bit of fear.
>You just hope that nothing bad happens while you make sure Anon and Pinkie don't do anything.


> ‘You sure, host?’
‘Yes, I'm sure. Now i better get back in there and make sure Pinkie is trying to do a Robin Hood thing or using her aunt’s giant mallet.

>>28782333
Here's the next update for Tonic Anon. Now to work on a cute yet comfy with Twilight/Midnight Sparkle

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>>28781460
>“I wrote it down, hon. Don't worry. Anon, can you tell me if you see a house with the address 8891?”
“...You mean that house in that Cul de Sac to the right?” you ask.
>Gordon pushes his glasses further up to his eyes, reading the numbers on the mailbox while slowing down the vehicle.
>After a moment of inspecting it, he nods.
>“Yep, guess that’s it. Bit of an odd looking house compared to the rest, huh?”
>Yeah, no kidding.
>It's a regular middle-class home in suburbia, but during construction and planning, someone must’ve removed all the pointless touches by the architects.
>That’s the best way you can describe it.
>All unnecessary details from the initial plans for construction seem like they were removed in favor of efficiency and to pay less.
>It’s strange to say the least and whatever the interior must look like captures your curiosity.
>Gordon pulls up the vehicle to the house, eying it strangely.
>“So is this is it?”
>You shrug.
“No idea.”
>Barbara looks at the mailbox as you all exit the car.
>It's stuffed.
>Like, overflowing.
>God, there must be 200 of ‘em in there...maybe more...
“How long you think they’ve been there?”
>All three of you stare at it.
>“...Gimme a second,” says Gordon.
>He then sticks his arm into the mailbox, attempting to get one from long ago with the hope of getting the dates that the letters range through.
“Uh, you shouldn’t be investigating private property like that…”
>“Son, I’m a cop. I can investigate anything if it’s suspicious enough.”
“Yeah, but aren't you supposed to have a warrant before you—”
>He shoots a heavy glare, warning you to not finish that sentence unless you want to suffer.
>And you really don’t.
“...Uh, nevermind.”

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>>28782658

>With that out of the way, he pulls a letter out from as far back in the mailbox as he can.
>The streetlight above provides just enough light to read the envelope as he holds it on his wrinkly, yet surprisingly strong and healthy hands.
>As his eyes skim over it, they widen.
>“This letter is from today…”
>You raise your brow quizzically.
“Um, what do you mean?”
>“Nuh uh,” he says, further studying the letter in his hands. “It's from today, exact date and everything…”
>“Maybe it’s from last year Dad,” suggests Barbara.
>Gordon just shakes his head no.
>“Nope. It’s from today. Same year, date…” he pulls out another letter from just as far back.
>“Same.”
>And another.
>“Same.”
>Another.
>“...Same.”
“Are you sure?”
>“I’m positive. Take a look.”
“Christ, that’s from friggin’ Oxmoor!”
>Barbara’s eyes widen.
>“Wait, what?”
>She grabs it for herself, and stares at it.
>“...Wow. Says it’s for the Sparkle family.”
>“Guess we’re at the right house then,” says Gordon.

>>28776466
"I told you I'd do my part. As a villain, this is my part."
>"Why did you come here?" Sunset's voice stops you and you turn half way around
"Because you brought me here." You answer plainly
>"You could have escaped, you've done it before." She argues. "You can leave right now and no one here can stop you. So why did you come here?"
>There is not much to think about, you know why you came
"Because I don't want people to die." You say quietly
>She smiles. "That doesn't sound villainous to me. So come on give me the sword, let 'me' end this."
"No," you shake your head, "you're still a hero and heroes don't kill. This is my--"
>"Then I am not a hero!" Fem cuts you off. "I killed people before, I can do it again."
>You and Sunset look at her dumbstruck
>"Now we're getting somewhere." Clown says heinously

>"Give me my sword." You hear Fem say
>"I-I... No! I won't let y--" Trixie couldn't say much before Fem cuts her off again
>"GIVE IT!" Although she shouted with rage, you heard the sadness in her voice
>Guilt and pain...
>Things that you are all too fimiliar with
>You felt the same things when Twilight stopped you
>You still do, just like Fem does
>Whatever she did, who ever she killed, she wants to forget
>"I cannot let you carry this burden too." She says to Trixie, her voice trembling. "So please, give me my sword." She reaches towards Trixie
>You see hesitation in Trixies movements, but eventually she delivers the sword into Fem's open hand
>In that moment your eyes catch on to him
>Every moment you and your friends suffer he becomes more and more joyful
>A realization hits you
>The moment any of you kill him will be the moment you all suffer the most
>The moment that he will enjoy the most
>He truly is a mad man
>He did all this for... fun
>He is having fun watching you struggle
>He had fun shooting that poor lady
>But he will have the ultimate joy when he dies
>He 'wants' to die
>Once again you grab Fem by the arm
"We shouldn't kill him."

>>28782872
That's it for today, hope you all enjoy it

>>28782882
It is sufficient, but I do hope you will post more soon.

>>28782907
I will do my best

>>28782833
Sorry if I interrupted your posts Beans. I was writing that part for a long time and didn't refresh the page before posting

>>28782351
Based Trepp

>>28782963
Gonna do a comfy so I can plan what happens next. I just hope everyone likes today's update

>>28783008
It was great, cant wait for the sexy shenanigans.

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>>28782833
Beans.
Goddammit, Beans, where's the rest?

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>>28782833

>>28782327
>Auntie Quinn

>>28782333
>Should I stay or should I go?
Should I stay or should I go now~
You were one word off.

>>28782333
>dip in the sauna
I wonder how symbiotes do in that kind of environment


All in all: hmm... lewd sleepover, huh?
Let me call expert in lewd sleepovers

>>28781398
>>It’s night outside the car and is spooky,
Well at least it isnt night inside the car too

>>28782658
>>28782872
Courtesy, guys
You cant just dump your green immediately after someone else, give it a little time

>>28785038
Its Beans, courtesy isn't a thing.

>>28782934
No, no, it's alright. No problem at all, friend.

>>28785046
Muh momma says tuh always be nice to strangers>>28784510

>>28784510
I fell asleep on accident. Don't worry, there's a shit ton more.

>>28785060
Happy belated Halloween beans.

>>28785046
and spider-girl

>>28785038
Oh it willl be lewd and remember Sunset doesn’t have a symbiote

>>28785129
Not yet she doesn't, wait, does Anon's dick count?

>>28785140
......I'm gonna get back to you on that one.

>>28785038
That should be a clue on what i have planned for Pinkie

>>28785129
>Rarity does, and she suggested it, wasn't she?

>>28785164
True but I think Scream will stop her at some point

>>28785167
or we get to see her squirm
it's not fire

>>28785199
That’s an interesting idea

Thank god, that Halloween mode is done now.

>>28785259
I didn't see it at all yesterday

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>>28785900
it was very annoying, and hard to read.

>>28785907
I was on my phone and it didn't show up on a mobile device

Good not-quite-afternoon thread! How's everyone doin'?

>>28786912
surviving religious holiday, woo!
I had so much time to write and I didn't
but I'm making spreadsheets for some pony pnp game again, so this is always fun.
good mood here

>>28787114
Which pnp?

>>28787197
something something autistic...
fallout equestria, hexcrawl style using silcore and a bit of homebrew stuff

>>28787253
hmm. Never thought about making anything fallout equetria based. Could be a lot of fun.

>>28786912
I'm good. Working on some comfy green. Hoping it will come out good.

>>28787561
Most of the things that you do are enjoyable, so I think this will be, at the very least, quite good.

>>28787701
Thanks. Just don't expect a lot of lewd.

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>>28785907
The nightmare has yet to end for me

>>28788111
refresh the page, or go to the previous one, then come back in. that should fix it.

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>>28782833
The three of you walk up the paved path to the front door, getting a good look at the front yard as well.
>It’s grass is cut perfectly.
>TOO perfectly.
>Each blade of grass on the yard is all cut at the same length with not a single bit too tall or short.
>When you all reach the door, there’s even more mail in front of it in a huge pile.
>Sheesh, you’re trying not to step on it, but goddamn if it isn’t everywhere.
>It’s literally above your ankles for god’s sake!
>Gordon rings the doorbell to the house and fixes his tie, careful not to damage any important letters.
>Then you wait.
>And wait....
>Waiting…
>Waiting…
>Finally, a sound of somebody from within the house speaks up.
>“Just a minute!”
>The sound of unlocking signals the owner’s presence, and when the door opens, your pupils dilate.
>Her body’s rockin’.
>It’s clearly Twilight’s mom, 100%.
>They look very similar though with minor differences.
>Her skin is grey and appears very soft with hardly any lines at all.
>She’s a bit tall though, and by that you mean taller than most moms you’ve ever seen.
>From the looks of it, she stands at six foot two—just barely below two meters.
>She wears a tight cotton t-shirt that shows off the shape of her generous breast, and the color matches with her purple and white hair.
>And speaking of her hair, it’s nearly identical in shape to her daughter’s if not a tad bit more round looking and less angular.
>You dare not look at her jeans in fear of how they framed her incredible hips and ass.
>Oh, wait.
>You just stared at them.
>You dart your eyes to her’s, the blush on your face barely hidden by the darkness outside.
>Thankfully, Twilight’s mom does not seem to have noticed.
>She merely smiles warmly at Commissioner Gordon, Barbara, and you of course.
>You feel your throat grow dry upon gazing at her.
>Christ, if Twilight wore something more form-fitting like her mom, would she look this good?

>>28788210
Would have used a hotter pic of Twi's mom, but unless you want full-out pone or anthro, there ain't gonna be much. The version I've written looks nothing like the one in that posted pic. She's more "full" with rounder proportions, probably due to a lifestyle of good mental and physical health. She's a voice actress.

I just wrote her as a pseudo Tara Strong if she were an author/schoolteacher as well

Just wanted to clarify. Now for more green.

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>>28788210
>“Hi, sorry about that little wait! Just had to finish up a little project of mine,” she says.
>“No problem ma’am,” says Gordon politely, “the kids ready I assume?”
>“Just about. Here, why don’t you all come on in. Must be a bit difficult standing in all of Twilight’s mail.”
>This milf of milfs opens the door a bit more widely.
>You’re too distracted by her large mounds to notice Gordon’s suspicion.
>“So all these letters are for your daughter miss…?”
>“Velvet. Twilight Velvet,” she says with a smile.
>She roles her eyes.
>”Don’t worry, I know it’s a lot of mail, even for desperate colleges. I’ve tried contacting them so they’d minimize their letters to her, but you know how they are.”
>Twilight “Velvet”, huh?
>Velvet like her voice, you assume.
>Her dulcet tone has this softness and depth to it; her age is hard to place by the sound of it alone.
>You can safely say that the potential range she has with her unique voice, she could sound anywhere to a forty-five year-old cougar to a girl just out of grad school...maybe a shrill old woman if she tried to for some reason.
>It’s just that high and low at the same time.
>It’s just the slightest bit nasally like Twilight’s, but a lot less than her daughter’s voice for the most part.
>She sounds like her daughter in the same way Barbara does, yet even closer for obvious reasons.
>I mean, of course it makes more sense because she’s Twilight’s mother and all, but still….
>Her voice is just so...seductive.
>She begins speaking once more.
>“Here, the girls are being a bit slow so come in and have a look, kay?”
>She smiles wryly.
>“Besides, we made cookies,” she winks.
>Boner, plz stahp
>With no reason to object, you enter the house.

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>>28788381
>A few minutes later...
>You’ve been sitting at the kitchen counter on some stools with Barbara for a few minutes now, nomming away at some cookies.
>Freshly made, chocolate chip.
>Homemade.
>Nice.
>Twilight Velvet, along with Gordon, sit at the kitchen table a good yard and a half away from the counter.
>They’re talking about, you dunno, adult stuff?
>That or Gordon’s warning her about the safety of the girls if they agree to do this.
>You don’t really wanna eavesdrop.
>Like, that’s just rude, you know?
>Damn these cookies are good…
>And the view.
>The view is too.
>Look, you know you’re gonna sound kinda rude for doing this, but yeah, you’ve been checking out Twilight Velvet just about whenever you can.
>Hard not to, her figure is just so well developed…
>You don’t know if it’s because she’s done years of yoga and some other shit, but whatever it is, she should keep doing it.
>Mrawr.
>It’s like fucking cocaine staring at her body, your eyes appreciating the well-rounded curves on her, the extraordinarily defined shapes of her femininity expressed in their form with no intention of holding back their presence from any beholder.
>Her breast, her ass, her hips, her curves—all perfect in shape and curvature in a godly representation of maturity and experience with plenty of fertility.
>Oh sweet lawdy you could just—
>Ow!
>Jesus, what the fuck?
>Barbara’s elbow nudges you from the side.
>You look at her with your brows furrowed.
“What was that for?” you whisper to her, rubbing your side with pout.
>“Your manners,” hisses Barbara.
“What? Whaddya mean? I’m not eavesdropping.”
>She deadpans at you.
>“Yeah, I know you’re not.”
>Wait, then what does she…?
>Oh.
>Shit, play dumb, Anon, play dumb…
“Then what am I doing? I mean, dazing off isn’t a crime, know what I mean?”
>“Anon...” she says and folds her arms.

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>>28788432
“What?”
>“You’re not fooling me. I’m a girl at Crystal Prep, I know when people are checking each other out.”
>Your toes curl in your shoes.
“But—”
>“No.”
“But I wasn’t—”
>“Anon.”
“Look, I was just—”
>“Checking her out?”
>Dammit.
>With a pout, you lean your elbow on the counter to support your face.
“...Yes.”
>She rolls her eyes and focuses on her cookie, a wry smile faintly curved upon her clear face.
>“Gotcha.”
>She takes a bite of the baked dessert, a cute chuckle as she chews it.
>Barbara seems pretty normal for being the Commissioner’s daughter.
>She’s got a nice little charm of humor along with that mild naivety.
>You find that her sometimes flat-delivery on certain jokes or gags have taken it’s affect on you in a rather positive way.
>In other words, she’s grown on you pretty well considering the short time you’ve know each other.
>What was it, like, a few hours ago or something?
>Guess when a male and female of the same age are put together for every single minute for the rest of the day, an attachment, even a minor one, is definitely expected as a result.
>You’d bet money that Gordon knew this, but would think you needed the support of a peer.
>“...Oh, c’mon, now you’re checking /me/ out?”
>Fuck.
>You quickly go back to your cookie with a bet of scarlet on your cheeks.
“Erm, sorry. I'm not usually like this. My nerves are still racked up from today I'm guessing.”
>A single laugh escapes her.
>“You’re lucky you’re cute, or I’d get my boyfriend here to kick your butt.”
>You shrug, trying to alleviate the tension with meaningless talk.
“Heh, then I guess he’s lucky that he’s got to have someone to kick a person’s ass for. ”
>She smiles, a hint of false superiority in a mocking manner in her voice as she speaks.
>“Damn right.”
>“Barbara, watch your language,” warns Gordon flatly from the adult table.
>“Uh, sorry Dad, just talking about Dick.”

>>28788210
>>28788381
>>28788432
>>28788604
So far so good? Awfully quiet in here...

>>28788615
Sorry, I was losing my soul to Skyrim again.
Yes, yes all of these things are very good.
Thank you for not passing out on us again.

>>28788662
I'm just glad I'm writing again. I missed Spider-Shim.

>>28788604
Going to post more later. And yes. There is more. Plenty more.

>>28788700
And we missed you, Beans.
For all the nonsense we spew, I honestly do think you're our best writer.

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>Beans has become more reliable than keaton

>>28788754
I mean, you aren't wrong.

>>28788736
That means a lot to me.

>>28788779
I'm still not sorry about writing that skeleton threesome with you and your sister.

>>28788815
She's in the hospital by the way, hence my absence. Was gonna say more but I'm not gonna be an attention slut. She's fine, just appendicitis. She says hi.

>>28788736
Same here. Also glad that the story is still going.

>>28788777
Trips confirm.
Bully the Keaton now!

>>28788842
Appendicitis sucks.
Still not sorry.
Glad you're consciously keeping your personal life out of stuff.

>>28788895
Do not do this thing

>>28788210
>six foot two—just barely below two meters.
Yes, 187cm is barely below 200

>>28788615
not everyone has to be beautiful, you know? You're pushing the everythings perfect thing again. Racking up Anons potential harem by throwing in a milf in case people like that

>>28788736
>I honestly do think you're our best writer.
For what reasons?
The style is good, but I find myself not caring about the world or characters he writes about.
I think yours is much better in that regard.
His Anon is just an on rail protagonist with as much "place yourself here" value as they come.
How much has he contriputed to the story except being there?

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>>28789443
I just... I dunno, enjoy his writing the most?
There's a certain quality to it that I really enjoy.
I can't quite put the words to it, but that's just how it is.

>I think yours is much better in that regard.

muh heart
thanks, anon

>>28789443
This isn't a harem story. It never was. And Anon's deeper than I think you give him credit for. Have you read all of the green as a whole recently? I reread all that I wrote in one sitting, and I remembered how specific my Anon was. He feels like he's supposed to be alone, that he should be by himself and his dad, that he isn't suppose to want more. However, what a lotta people haven't caught onto was the slight oieus complex I slipped into his character. You see, Anon hates the fact that his mom left him, right? Well, unknowingly, he has filled that void with Sunset.

And the reason why a bunch of "perfect" girls see, to be popping up is because something's driving them. You see, his pheromones are out of whack, hence why all this weird interaction with females is starting up. I can't say why yet, though. It's a surprise involving who Anon turns out to be.

I tired to make unique in his position. He's a photographer/writer who was crazy enough to take the first pictures of Spider-Woman, a kid with no mother who needs to feel important. However, his investigative nature and the deeper he gets into this mess, the more tangled he becomes in this web. However, if you rally think my Anon is bland, what should I do to improve him?

>>28789926
>it's a surprise involving who Anon turns out to be
Poison Ivy

>>28789963
Nope. But he's green all the same.

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>>28789994
The Green...(Hornet)

>>28789994
I swear to Satan, if it's blue beetle...

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>>28790666
>I swear to Satan
>666

>>28790666
Hi Satan. How's it going?

>>28790737
Not bad, it's a little good.

>>28790862
*cold

>>28790666
So...is Blue Beatle a good thing or what Satan?

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>>28788604
Get ready for a sads...

>“Excuse me?” asks a confused Twilight Velvet.
>“Her boyfriend,” Gordon says plainly.
>She silently nods as she mouths the word “oh”.
>You take a bite of your cookie so you don’t laugh.
>Barbara blushes.
>Then, a knock on the wall outside the room...
>“Uh, mom? Are they here yet or should we...oh…”
>Twilight Sparkle, in proper sleep-over attire, meekly pauses at the sight of company, taken aback.
>Then, she sees you.
>Just a little bit of tension in her shoulders drops...
>“So, um, hi Anon,” she says awkwardly, but with a genuine attempt at sounding friendly.
>She must not know how to talk to you after all that’s happened today.
>I mean, what would she say?
>Probably something like, “Oh, hey Anon! How’s that there missing Dad search going?” or “So what was up with that crazy Doc-Ock girl that’s after you, huh?”
>Of course, she doesn’t.
>Her mom smiles at her.
>“Are the rest of the girls ready?”
>She nervously darts her eye towards you.
>“Yeah, I-I think so. I’ll tell them that we should get a move on.”
>She’s about to dismiss herself, but stops.
>“Er, actually, can Anon come up for a minute?”
>Twilight Velvet shrugs.
>“If he and Barbara want to,” she answers.
>When you look at the stare Twilight Sparkle gives you, you instantly know why.
“I’d love to,” you say, finishing the last bite of your current cookie.
>Barbara shrugs, remaining in her seat.
>“I think I’m fine down here.”
>You mentally thank her.
>You need to see your group, and while you harbor no ill feelings to Barbara, you said it yourself.
>You’ve only known her for a few hours.

>>28791401
Bring on the feels!

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>>28791401
Sad is still approaching...

>The hallway isn’t big nor is it a very long walk to the staircase from it either.
>It was a pretty moderate-sized house after all.
>However, you and Twilight take your time getting there, taking a much needed moment to finally talk about the recent events to your new little squad.
>You begin the talk.
“So...how’re you all?”
>“Um, we’re worried. For obvious reasons.”
>You scoff out a tiny, sad laugh.
“Ha. Figured. It’s been a long day. I’m just so fuckin’ tired.”
>“I’d assume so. You practically survived a school-shooting. But, um, with a super-villain instead of a shooter.”
“...Was anyone hurt?”
>Twilight shakes her head no.
>“Nothing fatal. Lots of injuries though. Some are in the hospital.”
>You let out a sad breath.
“How serious are they?”
>“I calculated that some won’t be walking for a while, but the press is being iffy.”
>She pauses, a sudden hesitance that shakes her entire demeanor that causes you both to stop.
>“Hey, Anon,” she starts. “Don't take this the wrong way...No, really, don't....but I know we may have been friends for just a really short time, but, um…I just want you to know you’re a nice guy. I'm glad you’re ok.”
>Right when you’re in the middle of the hallway, you stop.
>You give her a sad smile, one that she matches well as you look at one another.
>...
“Thanks.”
>For the first time since you’ve met Twilight Sparkle, you see all the nervous tension in her shoulders relax as she pulls you into a hug.
>“No hetero?”
“No hetero.”
>“Good. No offense, I just...don't really want to, er, begin something. Like a relationship. Definitely not a relationship. Relationships freak me out.”
>You pull back from the hug with her as you both chuckle.
“I got ya, f@m. Don't worry 'bout it,” you assure her.
>Her cute smile and curt nod give you courage.
>“C’mon, Sunset and the rest are really worried.”

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>>28791489
Still no sads yet...

>Walking up the stairs, you imagine what they’ll do when seeing you.
>God, it you know you just made there acquaintances like a day ago, but damn, with all that has happened in between, it might as well have been years!
>So much has fucked you up today...you were almost KILLED today.
>You survived an attack on your school, trapped in a bathroom for an hour with Spidey, and goddammit, you then find out that your dad is potentially dead or missing.
>All in a week filled with madness.
>It all started on that fucking Monday when you took the first pic of Spider-Woman ever, just having to get famous with it!
>Well, The Bugle pays you well on the following Tuesday, but it certainly doesn't when you're attacked by Doc-Ock on Wednesday after taking Sunset to that fuckin' cafe.
>Got in a fight with her, saved a little girl from a fire, made up through a voicemail.
>Then what happened?
>God so much happened...
>Oh, yeah, you ate with her friends—your new friends you're going to see now.
>Yeah, then you gave the photos of the fire you and Spidey saved a girl from to The Bugle and met her at Larson theater...almost got raped by some hoods...made out upside down after Spidey rescued you...
>Then today?
>Yeah, you ca,em to school today, had the random urge to suck face with Derpy from your class with Celestia...got caught by Scruffy and the new teacher Mister Barry Allan...
>Then a fire alarm in math class...
>Then you snuck back into the school to get your camera...got drugged by a sneakily placed patch put on you like a sticker.
>Spidey saved you, trapped in potty for hour.
>Left school like a pussy after Spidey yelled for you too...
>Escaped.
>Wake up,mind out Dad is missing, Commissioner Gordon takes you under his wing in Police Custody to protect you from Doc-Ock.
>Let's you invite friends over to cheer you up after getting his daughter out of Crystal Prep, then an interrogation with him and Harvey Bullock...

>>28791633
Sads are almost there...

>Now you're here, going to pick up the friends you made yesterday to go to Gordon's.
>You sigh.
>“Long week?” asks Twilight.
>You nod.
“Enough to change a life."
>You wonder what it'll be like to see them again.
>Maybe there’ll just be an awkward silence as they think of things to say to you.
>Maybe there’ll just talk about nothing but the experience.
>...You and Twi arrive at the bedroom door where the girls are preparing.
>You hear their muffled voices, all chit-chatting with one another, talking whatever, you, the school...anything on their mind, but all together.
>Twilight looks at you.
>“You ready?”
>Are you?
>You look at her with worry.
“Am I?”
>Twi smiles, a cute chuckle you haven't heard from her charming you a little bit.
>“Yeah. Yeah, you’re ready.”
>The door opens and…

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>>28791644
Good, let's see if you can make me cry like a bitch.

>>28791731
I cried while writing it...

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>>28791644
>...The entire stares in silence as all your friends freeze upon looking at you.
>Rarity drops her current baggage in surprise, others do as well, but the sound they make when each bag drops falls on deaf ears as all focus is drawn from them to you.
>The very air itself becomes rigid, still like a dead man's corpse, and just as uneasy.
>There’s a thick sense of awe, shock, and relief all at once that clashes together as each wide-eyed friend of your’s stares in mixtures of emotions.
>Adolf Hitler walking into a temple would’ve been less tense than this feeling right now.
>Their dropped jaws, after several long, tense minutes, start softening into looks of concern and worry.
>Each one of them is in pajamas, bags semi-full of belongings waiting to be brought to Gordon’s house.
>You take note that some bring instruments.
>Two guitars.
>One keytar.
>...huh.
>That's neat, you didn't even think keytars actually existed.
>You walk in further as Twilight stands behind you, closing the door for privacy’s sake.
>Everyone’s there, and they all remain in the thick dead-silence of the room.
>It's like a dead man walking into a kitchen full of family in a way.
>They all are glad, shocked, but ultimately don't know what to do.
>Standing in the wake of the deep and sharp quiet, you slowly step to the center of the room to get closer to them.
>You’re mind is a cloud of feelings, and it's just taken you to halt as you stand stiffly before then.
>You try to utter a word, but...but you can't.
>You try to smile reassuringly....but you can't.
>You try to nod.
>But you just can't.
>You feel warm liquid on your cheeks...

>>28791837

>You can't do anything, your body seizing up without your control.
>You’re frozen.
>Frozen with something strong.
>Something painful.
>Your bottom lip is quivering.
>Why is it quivering?
>What's going on?
>You find your chest starts to hitch with your breath sharply as your vision becomes blurry.
>Why is your face hot, why are you shaking?
>What the fuck’s going on with you?
>You feel as if something dark and moody has overtaken you.
>Sunset is the first to gain the courage to walk up to you.
>Her bloodshot eyes, red from tears softly gaze at you.
>Instead of saying something reassuring or comforting, she does something you think you need even more as you simply remain frozen.
>She holds you.
>She holds you tightly.
>So tightly you would never be let go.
>She holds you in a big hug that says pages more than any words could begin to even describe as your body breaks in her arms.
>She just firmly holds you tight in a hug that you never want to end.
>You feel small, practically cowering into her like a scared child as she embraces you caringly, comforting you like a devastated child.

>>28791837
>...The entire stares in silence
what? I think you missed a word, again.

>>28791863
>Then another hug to go along with Sunset's, one just as welcomed despite not knowing Fluttershy all that well.
>You don't mind her hugging you tightly though.
>Then, as you unknowingly let out a pitiful whimper—a sound you never known you could make—you feel a third party join the hug.
>It’s from Applejack.
>Then, another one from Pinkie.
>Then Rarity...
>Then Rainbow Dash...
>Then Twilight...
>Then...
>Then you realize what's happening to your body; why you’re eyes are hot and blurry and why’re you’re shaking.
>It’s because you broke.
>A dam had been built in your mind when you were young; a dam filled to the brim with years of suppressed feelings, like anger towards your mom for leaving you and how you wanted to hate her but can't because she's your mom, or the guilt of leaving Spidey all alone to face Doc-Ock by herself so you could run away, the fear of being hunted by psychopaths, the humiliation of being caught with Derpy by the janitor…your dad…
>Everything falls apart as you cry.
>No, you don't cry, you bawl for the first time since you were abandoned by Mom, wailing in the deepest muck of total sadness and despair as your friends all hold you tightly, love in each one’s hold on you.
>You bawl, you howl—but the anguish p, the grief continues to flow through you like a poison in your blood, sinking you into a deep, black, darkness wi no end in sight.
>“Let it out, Anon,” whispers Sunset. “We’re here for you.”
>Your face pours with red hot tears, the sadness engulfing you the exact same way darkness takes a room when a candle is blown out.
>Oh my god why?
>You just...
>God, please, you just want this pain to stop!
>You want Dad!
>You want Mom!
>You want Spidey, Sunset...EVEN FLASH SENTRY.
>Why do you always feel so alone?
>Your hands clutch Shimmer's jacket.
>You can barely speak.
“Don’t leave me. Oh god, please don't leave me…”

>>28791869
It was supposed to be "the entire room stares in silence"

Sorry

>>28791879
RUINED!

>>28791873
Meh, I was expecting something sad. So far its just natural progression. I thought you had something unexpected planned.

>>28791879
But no, yeah, them's some pretty strong feels.
Now kill him.

>>28791873
>anguish p,
did Anon pee himself?

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>>28791873
>“....Never,” says Sunset. “I know how you feel. Alone. Vulnerable.”
>Her voice tries to remain steady, but it breaks into hiccuping gasps.
>“But swear to God, Anonymous; I will never, ever leave you. I promise you my life. None of us will...”
>She sniffles.
>“I know how it feels....” pic related
>Your new family remains silent as unbeknownst to you, the majority of them hug you with silent tears tracing down the sides of their cheeks.

>>28791897
Im proof reading with a migraine at 1:00 a.m. I'm sorry.

>>28791873
>darkness wi no end in sight.
your inner emo would appreciate the proper spelling of words. Just a thought.
>>28791898
Sense Sunset is in contact with Anon and the rest of her friends at the same time, can they feel the same thing he is feeling with Sunset's empathy powers? That might make this a bit more compelling(or it wont) also an idea.

>>28791917
Empathy powers? Boi, what he talkin' 'bout?

>>28791912
Okay then, go to sleep and try again later. I want to make fun of you at your best. Well your spellchecking at any rate.

>>28791898
Is that it? I was hoping that you would actually be able to pierce my jaded heart. All you've done is told me what the characters feels, not bad, but not what you implied. Still, the story progressed admirably, so good on you.

>>28791922
Go watch Legend of the Everfree, the girls get magic powers. Sunset can read minds and has empathy powers, think Professor Xavier from the X-Men, just from touching though.

>>28791923
It'll be fixed in the pastebin. Sorry m8. Why must you bully me so?

>>28791936
...wait, they get superpowers? Fuck, that kinda ruins my green's continuity. This story takes place after Friendship Games, so I guess in this universe legend of the Everfree never happens?

And I'm not going to see it. Not unless I go “ok-school-Beans” and literally do a review on friendship games and Everfree like I did with Rainbow Rocks and EQG.

>>28791958
When in doubt, disregard canon.

>>28791927
...sorry. Guess I just really dropped the ball tonight.

Sorry everyone, I kinda failed you all.

I've been trying to write more but my real life schedule has become a pain in the ass due to some changes, but I promise I'm going to complete Spider-Shim, come hell or high water. I'm determined to.

I also have no computer anymore, so I'm writing on mobile too, hence the weird writing mistakes.

>>28791958
I meant "old-school Beans"
Fuck I realy need to sleep

>>28791958
Because for some reason, you just piss me off. I cant put my finger on why, just imagining your face while you write this, just makes me want to smash your skull in then gouge your eyes out and I don't know why. Also yes they get super powers, Rainbow gets super speed, Applejack gets supper strength, Rarity can make super hard energy shields, Pinkie is Gambit but with confetti and assorted party supplies, Fluttershy can talk to animals, Twilight now has telekinesis, Sunset with the empath powers. Its mostly magic anyways.
>>28791983
Okay, so long as you don't blog, fine. Sorry about you having to use a phone to posts it explains the writing mistakes. Go to sleep.

>>28791983
Go to bed, Beans.
We'll be here in the morning.

>>28791975
Amen to that.

>>28791999
I missed you guys. Night.

>>28792007
goodnight

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>>28791983
Sleep first, then try again. And as for your green, you have made me feel some things in the past, but never sadness, so I was just a little disapointed about that. However, writing mistakes aside, it was a fairly good update, if somewhat laking in the feels department. Not that I am any better.
Also, sleep tight, Beans.

>>28792029
.... how did I not have that gif already?

What the fuck I like Beans again

>>28792044
Do you not lurk on the main Shimmer thread? 'Cause it's been posted there several times.

>>28792061
I do not.

>>28792073
yeah, I would suggest you do that, seen this thread brought up at least three or four times in the last two Shimmer threads.

>>28792091
How often and with how much sincerity do they call us out on our faggotry?

>>28792111
Actually, I've seen them mostly complain that we "Don't Love Sunset as she is." Which, in my opinion, is horse shit. Pun slightly intended.

>>28792132
Honestly? That's a little disappointing.
Anyways, who cares? Nobody loves their waifu in accordance to canon.
Nobody.
Because waifus aren't about "canon" or "accuracy" or "character development", they're about what your waifu means to you and how shit that other faggot's waifu is in comparison.

>>28792111
Last I saw, they don't really like you guys.
But, uh, they're crazy. So...
Whatever.

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>>28792161
Are you talking shit about my Shimmy? 'Cause I will cut you.

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>>28792207
I'm talking shit about /every/ Shimmy, especially yours!
They all suck, by sheer virtue of not being /my/ Shimmy, who is the best Shimmy who ever Shammed.

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>>28792234
>not loving /this/ beautiful horse-woman.
What are you, gay?

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>>28792265
No, I'm really tired and going to bed!

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>>28792282
I hope you have good dreams then, you absolute heathen!

>>28792306
That confusing

>>28792866
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xECUrlnXCqk

>>28789926
>This isn't a harem story.
But it sure has all the elements of one.
Is there any reason you made her avtotal milf and needed ~3 posts to descripe how hot she is?

>>28792874
Beans is a cackteasing prick that cant help but make it look like a harem story. He is incapable of delivering on it though. Just call him a faggot when he does it and move on with waiting for the good writefags.

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>>28791958
>I'm not going to see it unless I get to use it to blogpost
Wew

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>>28791958
Afraid of getting cucked?

>>28792934
VERY.

>>28793004
Maybe you should've picked a better waifu

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>>28792934
>>28793004
>mfw I've always shipped characters rather than waifu them

>>28793009
>Implying you can simply pick a waifu.

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>>28793009
Is it such a crime to love Twiggy? Look at her beautiful eyes, and tell me she's not the most magnificent fuckingncreature on the face of the very Earth.

>>28793032
>tfw I fell in love with the character when I saw how much i enjoyed writing about her

God, I'm cringey.

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>>28793035
She's not

>>28793004
>My favorite character isn't allowed to fall in love unless it's with me!

>>28793041
>>28793030
For me, Sunset was the first character that I didn't just ship with another character.

>>28793048
No, I never said that, it's just that I'm less willing to see it is all. She can love who she wants, I don't have to approve. My main concern is truly if they wrote the love interest well. You should stop putting words in my mouth.