My Loyal Ponies: Submission Is Mandatory #90

>>28265311
not part of this general, but that op pic is really thumbs up.

i would write, but i'm applied elsewhere.

>>28265311
I will never understand how that shit gets your dick hard, but the animation is breddy gud. She woulda been lucky to die that quick though. Didn't know it had color now.

>>28265311
Who is this and why aren't her eyes purple?

>>28265549
her liver failed over the years of guzzling my intoxicating cum.

What methods are the most useful to get deep into her?

>>28265311
What's the difference between these threads and the slave pony ones? the premise sounds awfully similar

>>28266503
>SiM
the edgelords
>slave pone
the white knights

>>28266503
SIM seems to be trending to less about sex as clop, and more on the mental and philosophical parts of S&M, with some clop in betweem.

Slave pony is nothing more than a desire to fuck a mare and cause her pain.

>>28265311
Waiiiitamoment, I know that op pic. That's part of a guro animation, isn't it?

>>28266873
Nope. The anim has no guro in it.

>>28266884
Not? Is it based on a comic then? I could've sworn I've seen this in connection with guro. I think pissing was involved.

>>28265311
If one were so inclined to avoid the snuff/guro fetishes, this could be construed as the moments of panic before a public humiliation...

>>28266998
The OP is a shortened version of whole the guro clip. This one has just crying and heavy breathing in it. The original (not in OP) contains pissing and evisceration.

>>28267084
Thought so.

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>>28265311

>>28266824
SPG founder here, this Anon is spot on.

If domination and/or power play is your thing, SiM is the shit.


If you want to be a bleeding heart white knight who makes it all better, SPG is the way to go.

>>28266824
The white knighting in the slave thread is annoying. I want to see someone treating a slave like a slave and not some autistic sperg giving them a bubble bath, a hand job, and the keys to their house.

>>28268315
>>>/b/

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>>28267644

>>28268315
There are some darker ones

>>28268315
Yes, that's why we have both Slave Pone and SiM.

So was my fighting pegasi good?

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>>28269108

>>28268315
Romans cared for slaves like they were pets and maltreating your slave "too badly" could get you in trouble.

In other words, ponies are animals and humans are rightfully their superiors.

>>28268315
I like elements from both generals.

My ideal story would probably be set in a SPG style universe (slavery is wide spread and common), but would feature our kind of character, plot depth, and pacing... not to mention a decent amount of fetish material.

Tone wise I sit in the middle. I'd love an Anon that's not a total bastard, but at the same time has no problem with slavery nor is some kind of white knight trying to rescue abused slaves or similar.

The real question though, is what's the story? I mean you could go slice of life I guess, but I feel like even then you need something for the characters to do or be working towards to have anything longer than a one shot.

>>28267084
Well shit...

I made the OP and didn't realize this.. sorry about that guys..

>>28273105
For what?
I have a delicious story I found here that I changed some of that if halted at one point is a nice SIM, very close to the original, if finished is suddenly a snuff fic with a very shock ending that makes sense from a lore perspective.

>>28273062
>The real question though, is what's the story?
Anon outbids someone for his poner(s). Get a little bit of slice of life-y, some training scenes, then the guy who lost tracks down Anon and steals the pony, because he's a sore loser. Could be fun from either Anon's or the pet's perspective, if wildly different stories.

>>28273062
There is one very close to that. And one that lacks fetish stuff.

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>>28267644

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>>28275680

>>28268251
>SPG founder
No you're not.

>>28266824
>>SiM
>the edgelords
Oh, give it a break. When was the last edgy thing done in a story in this thread? Remember how, even in an in-story dream sequence, half the thread threw a hissy fit over the idea of actually hurting a pony? A dream sequence. That wasn't real, and nothing could be permanent. In a greentext.

This thread's still just as worshipful as the other one, it just takes a slightly different approach. If you doubt it, then take another look at who the reader is supposed to empathize with, and who's reactions and emotional states we care about.

I said this in the last thread, and I stand by it.

Hell, even Olibird's Safeword story had more people complaining about that Anon's newness to S&M than about Luna's idiocy about agreeing to it when she knew for a fact that she didn't understand what was going on. The idea that maybe, just maybe, all willing participants have some responsibility for being in their situation was beyond a good chunk of this thread. Maybe they're the ones who went off to populate the Slave Pony general, I dunno. Anon made efforts to make things clear and lay things out to the best of his knowledge. Luna was explicitly asked if she understood what was going to happen, knew that she did not understand, but agreed to things anyway. The only failure of responsibility from someone who knew better is on Luna's little hoers shoulders. That story's Anon only had half a clue about what he was doing, but he was earnest about it, and went through several instances of checking if things were still going well in the scene, while trying to not break the mood.

Where is the edgy stuff that this thread is supposedly full of? The stuff that has an excessively dark tone to the point of breaking immersion. Dark in a way that doesn't help the tone or themes of the story or characterization at all.

>>28276503
Cute.

>>28266824
>The edgelords.
Joining >>28276674 you want actual edgelords? Check Fall of Equestria, any slave porn is hard to enjoy when all the porn has cut horns, wings, and retarded as fuck edgy teen dialogue.

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>>28265311
>that gif

is it bad that the full version gives me a boner

>>28280991
No, I enjoy gore as well. Even have a story about it. Its really only problematic if its the only thing to you and none of the foreplay matters.

>>28280991
Nah, fetishes are like that man.

Actually I kinda like the full pick despite gore not really being my thing. That facial expression and the sense of fear/helplessness really does something for me.

I think it'd be nifty to see some green for the pic, with the whole thing being about the willingness to submit that far. Comedic cellophane tape holding everything together afterwards optional.

Don't usually write, but a quick lame attempt:

>Oh Celestia.
>Panic.
>Last night you cried in your cell.
>You'd pleaded with the guards.. you'd been a good pony, you'd obeyed.
>You'd served these humans, degraded yourself for their amusement.
>You didn't deserve this.
>And like that, a thought that hadn't occurred to you in years re-entered your mind.
>As though all your conditioning had melted away.
>Escape.
>You envisioned it over and over again.
>At some level you knew it wouldn't work, but damn it you were gonna try, you had to try, you wern't just gonna let them gut you.
>You'd rush the guards, you'd just run for it, you'd go down swinging and screaming..
>Very least they'd kill you then and there with no spectacle.
>But here you were.
>No fight, just followed the guards, let them hoist you up without so much as scream.
>And now as everyone takes their place you realize it's too late.
>The tears begin flowing freely across your face as you do the only thing you can, the only thing you've ever been able to do.
"P-please.. I'm sorry.. I promise I-I'll be a good slave.."

>>28281312
Go on, I like where this is going , especially is she's heading for severe punishment and not an actual execution.

>>28281695
Didn't really have any plans to go any further with this (truthfully no idea where'd I'd go anyway), I mean the full pic is kinda unambiguous about the ending.

If anyone else wants to have a go though by all means.

>>28281312
>"The time for that has passed my little pony. You have made your bed, it is time now you lay in it."
>Your collar, fittingly made from the old strings of your cello, tugged at your neck guiding you to the center of the square.
>The crowd quieted, the clop of your worn hooves overtaking them as they awaited what was to come.
>The execution of your sentence.
>You hadn't meant for it to be this way, you had only wanted to stop Vinyl's excessive lyrics.
>You never meant for the disk to take her voice away, her singing, her life.
>It was only fair you realized that they take yours as well.
>The sound beneath your hooves changed, you had already made it to the stand.
>The manacles on your hooves were lifted sharply and secured to well worn clasps on the poles.
>This place was not new to punishments, the crowd had learned their place from any sentences being carried out here, most far lighter than yours.
>A bar was pressed your withers, guiding you forward as a work boot fell on your tail and made you take the proper position.
>"We are gathered here today, the people of Gorge Town to bear witness to the proper sentencing of one pony, Octavia. Charged guilty with the crimes of assault, violence with a deadly weapon, permanent disabling, and destruction of property, she has been sentenced to have her insides shown to the world as per the Codexia De SIM as witnessed and signed by Celestia, ruler of Equestria, and the United Nations signatories."
The man folded the paper in his case over and continued.
>"This sentence shall be carried out now, with the proper tools and ceremony as befits this task."
>"Does the executor of these tasks find herself ready?"
>"Yes, sir" a seafoam green unicorn replied.
>"Is the tool sharp?"
>A measured section of rice matting fell to the ground in reply.
>"Is the catch basin in place?"
>Red magic pushed the basin forward from under the stage, the unicorn keeping out of sight as she fidgeted with something.
>"Then it shall begin."

>>28279214
>Fall of Equestria
Too busy laughing at the hilarious drama they have when the only competent writer in the group calls out the fucking colossal plot holes the group creator tries to enforce, resulting in said creator flipping a shit and going on a banning spree. It's one of those 'so pathetic, it's funny' moments.

>>28282333
Nice!

>>28282771
Who's the competent writer in that group? Every story I've tried to read was terribly written. I wonder what makes them so dead certain that it's haters of the genre as opposed to the content that makes them end up with 80% dislikes.

>>28283278

>>28283693

Bump yall

What would you do as anon pone after a bit of SIM goes wrong for your humanized pony partner?

They don't get how their new joints work and blow them out or break them pushing against their binds, unsteady walk leads to a face plant, chipped teeth and bloody nose, that sort of during and post session stuff while you wait for the magic to wear off.

>>28285610
If they actually seriously injure themselves, it's time to go get a doctor. One of the core rules of BDSM play is that if someone is injured, sexytimes are immediately over and you treat it as any other medical situation. Plus, let's face it: A little transformation magic is probably not the worst thing the doctors have seen.

If they merely end up with superficial injuries - a merely strained joint versus a broken one, or a bloody nose versus a tooth knocked out - and express a desire to continue, then I'd approach that in aftercare as with any other injury sustained in heavy BDSM play: A lot of cuddling, gentle treatment of their injuries, maybe a warm shower together to help them clean up, and since they're a little unsteady with their transformed body I'd probably be getting them things they needed until the magic reverses.

So, you guys get off to being edgy to your ponies?

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>>28265311
holy shit this thread is edgy as fuck.

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>>28288435

>>28259165
>>28269907
I'm sorry to be so negative, but it was pretty bad.

First, all the battle descriptions. Who is where, in what position, and what they are doing was all muddled and confusing.

Second, there were no emotions. Yes the characters /say/ they are now angry or desperate, but it doesn't show on them outside of their dialogue... it felt like a fight between two robots, not ponies.

Third, the characters were completely lacking... Seas is an experienced soldier who took Dust down 23 times in a row? How the hell does she give up after taking one hit to her feathers? I would understand if she started pleading and surrendered after she got her wing broken but before that? You told us she was a hardass but she didn't act like it at all. (Also she downs, half a bottle of water and 30 seconds later she goes get another one? How thirsty is she?)

Dust on the other hand, you told us she was attacking in a fit of rage, but as soon as as she takes Seas down, what does she do when the blood lust subsides? She should be freaking out that she went too far... and then she could, in her panic, realize that the only way to not have her career ruined or even go to jail as soon as Seas tells anyone, is to flat out murder her. But instead, dust stays perfectly calm and emotionless, and starts dragging the body like if she had the whole thing premeditated and has been casually murdering people for the past fifteen years.

How am I supposed to care about what is going on in the story if the characters themselves don't give a single fuck?

To not be all negative “Hold on, let me just put my hoof on it.” actually made me laugh, I liked that you went for pure-power domination instead of captured-and-raped kind of domination, Seas trash talking Dust was done surprisingly well, and I do appreciate that you didn't chicken out with the ending.

Overall, there were few good things, but... I had to really force myself to read the whole thing, and that's never a good sign.

>>28289612
Thank you for the honest critique.
All that said, how should I improve it from what you have read, seen, or otherwise have ideas on?
Looking at your critique one of the simplest things I can see would be to scale back some of the dialogue in terms of implied experience and just make it closer to an officer who was just commissioned and talks tough, versus a recruit who really has no idea what she is doing.

I went in regards to the amotional bit with Dust in the idea she is a functioning psychopath. She doesn't really have emotion, just gives the idea of it with the words. In essence, her being robotic is exactly what she should be.

Seas, yeah I agree looking at you she would need work.

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>>28289208

>>28287043

>>28291439

>grimderp: the thread

>>28265311
I... I have an idea for green based OP's image, but I'm not good at writing... Anyone interested in a crappy green attempt from someone who doesn't normally writes?

>>28291896
yes

>>28291896
Go for it man, the only thing that can happen is we tell you what to do better.

>>28291979
...or we could ignore him for days like the two pegasi guy. That's hurts a lot more than being told your green is bad.

>>28292112
I'm two pegasi one cloud guy...

>>28291844

>>28292253
lol

>>28290313
My first suggestion would be to focus a lot more on non-verbal communication of the pone's emotional state. Don't just have character say "I'm angry at you", but show them be angry. Describe things like changes in facial expression, or posture, or breathing... they can snarl, or start throwing things on the ground, before they go into a full attack mode. Anger doesn't just show up out of nowhere, it grows and bubbles, and eventual explodes. It's not like a on/off switch. Show, don't tell.

Second, focus a bit less less on what is happening and more on how does it affect the protagonists. Describing the action alone is not good enough, you have to describe the experience too.
>She drove her gravity assisted hoof into the magenta mare’s neck leaving her rasping for breath from the swelling trachea.
>Sliding her leg forward, she grabbed ahold of the neck with both forelegs, and slid her hindlegs down, pinning the wings at the first joint.
>Seas held tight, expecting the powerbomb to drop her onto the training cloud and near her gear.
You're telling me what happened, yes that's good, but what impact did it have on the characters? There is no emotion, no sense of urgency, no investment. Nobody is afraid to die, nobody feels humiliated, nobody feels elated to finally be winning a fight against their CO... the characters simply don't look like they care at all, and therefore neither can I. (Also, some of the descriptions are a bit confusing but that's another problem.)

>>28292253
And I'm the only one who noted and appreciated the time and effort you put into making content for this thread.

>>28265311
I don't understand what's happening in this gif. Is Octavia being put in a stress position? Cause that shit is pretty fucking brutal. Had that shit happen to me when I got arrested in China several years ago. I think I'd rather be horribly whipped than go through that ever again. I'm lucky to have escaped permanent joint damage.

>>28293545
the full version has her being disemboweled

it's pretty fucked

also, sorry that happened to you

>>28266824
isn't there also the element of slave pony being more of a PiE universe and SiM is more of a AiE universe?

>>28273062
I also like this idea of being somewhere in the middle with moral ambiguity.

>No I don't mind being part of the business of slaves
>It's not like I treat my slave like shit anyway, she's probably got it better than most
etc

>>28293556
sauce? I hate gore but I'm curious.

>>28293557
There's a story in SPG right now featuring Shining Armor where the Anon is kind of in the middle. He bought Shining Armor and is rehabilitating him (he was starved nearly to death by his former master in the story) but also made it clear that once he's better he's going to be put to work. He's also about to rescue/acquire a mare, but she had to agree to 1) be branded and 2) be his slave for the rest of her life

>>28293599
No, don't sauce. Shit's graphic.

>>28293599

don't say I didn't warn you

https://derpibooru.org/1091977?scope=scpe27647d8414f0536825a6cc08200335195f6cc835

>>28293643
same anon here. honestly, if you hate gore, don't watch it.

Was this the thread that had an Anon in Equestria green who build some kind of fortress and had taken RD hostage and over time she became seriously broken goods?

Eventually Chrysalis shows up, but when I was reading the paste bin (over a year ago) the story was incomplete.

>>28293664
Yep, we even have a knockoff version somebody made, like they were Chinese.


Rather fitting on this site actually.

>>28293643
>>28293654
>octavia pissing herself in fear
nice touch
I don't ever want to see anything like that again though. Jesus.

>>28293687
I told you, dude. That shit gave me a headache afterwards when I watched it. Felt dizzy.

>>28291896
>>28291916
>>28291979

Well, its not much of a story, more of a prompt?

Anon has a slave mare, who he surgically opened her belly and in a clean environment pulled her internal organs out (intestines, stomach), while not endangering any of her vital organs. She has to do chores within her clean room, and if she is a good little mare, Dr. Anon will put her back together some day.


I have a weird thing for non fatal gore.

>>28293664
Broken Bluebird, yep.

He's still not finished, although we're pretty close to the end by this point.

>>28293722
Go for it, I've written something along those lines.

>>28293722
dude what the fuck
that would not work on a variety of levels

>>28293701
Whenever something like that pops up, it gives me weird dreams for a while after.

IRL humans getting fucked up, does nothing to me, but something about ponies is just... I don't know, clashing flavors?

>>28293727
>Broken Bluebird
I haven't been following that one to be honest. Dropped it hard pretty early because it went full retard with the grimderp shit. Shame because it could have been a good story if done better.

>>28293728
That's all I have really, just a prompt.


>>28293734
Magical talking horses.

>>28273062

>Anon that's not a total bastard, but at the same time has no problem with slavery nor is some kind of white knight trying to rescue abused slaves or similar.

King Schultz in Equestria when

>>28293727
>>28293746

Huh, well.

Normally I don't like this kind of content, but it was interesting seeing psycological stuff like that, got any greens similar?

>>28293749
>Magical talking horses.

That's not an argument.

>>28293746
>>28293765
I find it interesting that opinions of Bluebird seem to skew to the extremes of either "It's good because it avoids the typical grimderp" and "It's bad because it went full grimderp".

I can only presume that this reflects differing opinions of what people find Grimderp to be - like, since Bluebird doesn't have the outright fetish-sex angle but still a lot of grimdark, some people tend to interpret it as just edginess. Others see it more as a played out tragedy, the darker aspects being played for tragic feels and horror rather than just edgy shock?

I dunno.

>>28294603
grimderp and unrealistic to the point of retardation/breaks suspension of disbelief is why I can't get into it personally

>>28294603
>darker aspects being played for tragic feels and horror rather than just edgy shock?
Is in this aspect where it tries way too hard and fails spectacularly as a result, and comes off as edgefaggotry.

>>28265311
Give me some one-shot ideas. Anything goes.

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What are your thoughts on this story that popped up on Fimfiction recently?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/344305/fishing-at-the-communal-cum-baths

>>28295421
I'd like something little action but lots of character and dialogue.

Two masters set up a meeting and both brings one slave with them. The masters then leave to do whatever, and the slaves are left lone, tied next to each other, waiting for their masters to come back. What we get to see is the interaction between two slaves, who for the first (and possibly the last) time in years finally have an unknown amount of time to interact with someone who's their equal and has a similar life experience (or one of the slaves could be part of a harem of slaves and the other one not, that would work too).

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>>28295421
Whatever happens to Octavia's parents, anyway?
Either that, or Anon gets revenge for the yogurt thing.

>>28294686
I respect your opinion, but I have to disagree.

The breathing mask scene for example was grim as fuck, and if the story ended there I would have called it edgefaggotry too. But the story then continues and we get to see people recovering and dealing with the consequences. It's not gruesome just to shock the reader. It's done to evolve the characters. Neither Anon nor Dash have been the same since it happened. It's not an edge for the sake of edge.

That is why, in my opinion, the darkness is handled perfectly and the story is not edgefaggotry.

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>>28293722

Please.

>>28295966
Really hot, honestly

>>28295421
I'm seconding >>28296138 's idea. That could be fascinating to read.

>>28296173
The problem I have with stories like this is they require Anon to be in a position of power he never could have reasonably achieved, as it would require an unrealistic level of incompetence or indifference from characters that, frankly, are incapable of it. The shakiness of the premise doesn't do the story any favors, and when it comes to scenes like this that fact tips the scale toward grimderp and away from character development in my book.

Are tentacles and mind control part of SIM? How would they go together against a pony and fit the more refined entry of the stories here, rather than just being straight to clop?

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>>28296906
>Twiggy Piggy finally gets Celestia to crack
>she now has permission to legally cooperate with Discord to explore unicorn-compatible interdimensional magic
>so many possibilities open up that Discord does her a favor and decides for her
>she will now study a creature from another dimension
>it's Anon
>he's magical but doesn't know it
>Twilight trains him but he slacks on his studies
>learns how to open a portal to tentacle world one day
>decides to use this ability to enhance his intrigues with a trashy urchin mare

I remember a story where Blueblood fucks up and gets a royal guard killed or something, and his punishment is first to be publicly whipped, but then agreeing to be Anon's slave for like a month or something when it's too much for him. Was that this thread?

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>>28296906
Tentacles can also be used for bondage or beating, rather than just straight up rape. All you would need to do is to have them attached to something intelligent, instead of a mindless rape monster.

Alternately, Anon having mane-iac as a pet would work too. Submissive tentacles are super rare but also super cute.

>>28296994
>Was that this thread?
Yes. I didn't get into the story itself though, so I can't tell you where did it end up, sorry.

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I just ended reading Rarity's Debt on pastebin, but story still net ended.

I like it.
Is there more?

>>28297094
>>28296938
Why anon? I was thinking of it being about ponies, with the tentacles maybe being a unicorn fucking with magic.

>>28297327
Tentacles are a pretty shit tier fetish.

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>>28296176

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>>28298333

>>28299417
I know the spic that made that, he's a dream.

>>28299417
Man, I'm not into the whole nazi thing at all, but there's so much ridiculously good artwork around it.

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>>28299417

>>28297839

>>28300873

>>28297344
Oh.
What about transformation induced mind control? THat is, turning the pony into something else and making them subservient to the casting unicorn.
Would coating them in latex and doing this separately be SIM?

That is, turning a pegasus into a loyal griffon slave, then coating said griffon in latex if they start to break through the mind control.

>>28301437
">What is this thread about?
This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.

>What exactly is welcome in this thread?
A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.

A few topics that are discouraged are NTR, vore, scat, and other similar themes."

Read the OP, best advice I can offer.
If it fits go right ahead, if you're 100% certain it doesn't fit hang fire, if you're unsure post your story and judge by the reactions you get.

>>28301661
I'm not going for story, just conversation.

>>28301676
>Tranfsormation AND mind control AND latex
Sure they all fit in here, but... that's a pretty specific combination. And I'd gladly talk about it but I can't think of a situation where the three wouldn't clash.

>That is, turning a pegasus into a loyal griffon slave, then coating said griffon in latex if they start to break through the mind control.
This just seems so pointlessly complicated. Why include transformation, when the original pony isn't there anyway due to mind control? Why include mind control, when both the transformation and the latex serve as as a way to imprison their mind inside their own body. And why latex, when changing both their mind and their body would only be useful to turn them into an inconspicuous member of society?

Why all three? I'm confused. Could you suggest some sort of setting or a scenario in which combining these three fetishes would work? I'll discuss it with you if you do.

>>28301856
It was more of meant to be two separate scenarios.

But as one goes, the unicorn turns a pegasus into a griffon, giving them the weird glowy eye stare of obedience in the process. Its only temporary as the show establishes with mind control. So the latex body theft comes into play to keep the domoinance.

Actually I just more wanted to know how the fetishes stack up and where since they seem somewhere vast and neboulous. Some mind control being total and others being like bondage words with a dominatrix liberally scattered about. Latex seems to go from hot stockings on out to even your DNA is now rubber. I kinf od feel like trying to drink a lake looking them up.

Bump b4 bed

Just realized I never added A few stories to my pastebin. If I'm missing anything else let me know, but I /think/ this should be accurate now.

A Spoonful of Fear (The Yogurt Story)
http://pastebin.com/EzEipWxP

Meeting Expectations (Empty Mansions II with Dirty Laundry and Rarity)
http://pastebin.com/7grTdJLh

>>28303215
I second that.

I should write something bump

>>28300453
that's super cute nigga

So what is the proper way to establish dominance in clop? Do you just have a pony take charge and say "I am the dom now" and get to it? Use some mind control stone and make them act as you wish? Little bits of rope and a very big puppet rack?

>>28306594
In a lot of cases the specifics of the establishment, presentation, and execution of dominance _is_ the story.

There's some common tropes, but you're basically asking "so how does one establish crime in a crime drama".

>>28306752
So one option would be to just start with it already done then?

>Rainbow Dash felt the claw clench around her leg and drag her up.
"Sleepy time's over dweeb. Its back to your lessons."
>Dash moaned, her throat still raw from the last set of lessons.
>She wanted to scream and protest, but nothing came out.
>The most Dash did in protest was let herself be dragged from her cell.
>She had wanted to be a griffon, she didn't expect it to end this way.

Do we have smething with enemas?

>>28266864
you seem to have lost your mind, the exact opposite is true, which the only noticable exception being blue bird.

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>>28273062
>>28273488
this story already exists. It's anon and shining armor though, so ymmv on weather you want on board.

>>28294603
Blue bird is edgy because it lacks hope. Grim dark is a very open term thanks to /tg/'s classifications,
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Noblebright
scroll down to double and read that for information on why people say blue bird is grimderp edge town. It's not shit, it's just not what everyone wants to do for fun.

>>28307255
Nah slave swapped two threads ago, they are getting pissy over gay content and a treacherous mare.

>>28301437
Transformation has always struck me as an odd fetish. On the one hand, there's focusing on the mental trauma of having even your very body warped to suit the needs of another, which I can kind of understand. But, most transformation stories seem to skip over that, so I've often been left with the simple question of "why?"

Latex, on the other hand... Even aside from how good it can look, I do love complete sensory deprivation. Putting the sub in their own little world blocked out from everything except for what is being done to them is top unf.

>>28307144
Starting with things having happened already is a very viable way to go. You just need to figure out how much into the breaking you want it to begin: How much damage has already been done.

>>28307144
Yes, just like that.

Establishing consensual relationship is a long process, so if you don't want to make the story about /that/, you're better of starting when the roles are already established, and write it as master-slave relationship from the get go. Alternately, if you're doing non-consensual story, you can do it with one quick beating/rape/kidnapping/blackmail, but the following relationship has to correspond with that.

Also, when you're starting with the relationship already established, you shouldn't bother doing a flashback and writing down how everything got to this point. Especially if you're writing something relatively short. Origin stories are not bad, but they are often completely unnecessary. You can as well just start the story with RD being rudely awoken, and make the whole thing about her trying to get throughout the day.

How does an attention whore deal with living a life where catching someone'e attention means being turned into their punching bag is way more interesting story, than how did Rainbow Dash finally manage to talk Twilight into turning her into a gryphon.

You know, an interesting take on mind control would be the sub creating the dom. Say a friend who can't actually raise a hoof like that, suddenly gets magicked into the dom of grim harshness and the sub realizes that it was a mistake to have done that.

>>28307570
>durr
most of the spammers posts get deleted, the only trecherous mare you are talking about was corona, who was directly trying to extort anon. Given what you guys talk about doing to celestia in blue bird and other stories you have no god damn room to talk at all. Finally, nobody in that thread has written a story afaik about fucking a mare as painfully as possible, much less enjoying it.

>>28309922
> Given what you guys talk about doing to celestia in blue bird
Were there any suggestions? I think I missed that bit.

>>28309922
And then you had people talking about wanting to shove a red hot branding iron up Corona's pussy or sear her clit off.

>>28310444
>slave trying to extort her master
Sounds like she deserves it fampai

>>28310460
Corona dindu nuffin

>>28310366
A few people were asking for an alternate end where Celestia trades places with Dashie to rescue her....because everyone wants Petlestia.

So body swapping. Would that make for an interesting bit of SIM as you beat yourself up, being able to switch hit at the same time?
Or would it be better for a story where you need to find yourself before something goes horribly wrong, from your sex life getting out, on to the shy wall flower you have been protecting gets broken,

>>28310801
The best outcome is Celestia offering herself up, Anon taking her offer, and Dash choosing to stay of her own free will regardless.
Just because Petlestia needs to understand true despair.

>>28310801
>>28312464
>petlestia
>pet
I hope none of you people have access to animals if this is how you think a "pet" deserves to be treated...

Since we're on mind control, transformation, and domination, I'd like to see a stallion get turned into a statue and charmed so that mares want to have sex with him. All the while he is edged as the statue, unable to cum, just left there as mares wander by and fuck him. No ability to move, not even to twist his legs a little or have hist shaft bob, he is just stuck there until the dom releases him with the cockatrice.

For a humor take, a random coackatrice does it to him in the middle of his private time and the fuck me spell is done by his girl friend so she can find him later after snagging the cockatrice. Whether she ends up stoned as well or is successful is up to the reader.

>>28313399
>wanting to dominate a stallion using a cock

>>28311958
>Body swapping... beat yourself up, being able to switch hit at the same time?
I think that this would be better done with regular body possession. Ideally were they can see what is happening to their body and can complain about it, but can't control their actions. Then you add the element that whatever you make them do, they will be the ones living with the consequences. Be it physical injury, pregnancy, criminal investigation, or whatever unpleasant thing you want them to to deal with afterwards. Letting them inside your body while you are in theirs really undermines the whole feeling of powerlessness the victim should have.

That said, body-swapping two victims sounds like much funnier idea to me (also it can also include swapping bodies of different sexes or species if that's your thing). The show actually got pretty close to it with the cutie-mark swapping spell. Yes, everyone still had most of their original body (except the cutiemark) but they were forced into living someone else's life, because their cutiemark told them to.

Starlight can still steal and store people's cutiemarks (remember, the stick was just a piece of wood she found in the dessert). It's not that far of a stretch of the imagination that she can put them back onto someone as well. Setup for a story like this would actually be pretty easy. Let's say that Rainbow wants to help Flutters experience how awesome flying really fast is and decides to borrow Flutters her own cutiemark to do it. Starlight gets talked into it because everyone knows she can't resist peer pressure. When it's done, either starlight gets removed for some reason (Twilight wants to take her somewhere...) or FS/RD's cutiemark gets called by the map, and the wrong pony has to go on a trip, while the other one (plus Starlight) is stuck in ponyville, waiting and living the other one's life.

>>28312741
>I can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality
Here, have a (You).

>>28313637
>my degenerate fantasies aren't degenerate because they're just fantasies
>I don't care that there are people that would act on these fantasies without hesitation if given the opportunity
>being aroused by the thought of inflicting pain on an unwilling victim is perfectly natural and totally not indicative of mental or emotional disturbance

>>28313399
>Can feel all the stimulation because magic, but can't cum because magic
This is the laziest possible way to do orgasm denial, and there is absolutely nothing good about it. The only way you could make the story any more boring and cliche is if you said that the stallion drank an aphrodisiac potion that "makes him ten times more sensitive and super horny all the time"

Would a story where a Dom seriously breaks his sub's trust by pushing her past her limits and doing things they specifically agreed he wouldn't do to her once he has her restrained and she can't get away be frowned upon here? I'm talking serious shit here, for instance agreeing to limit physical pain to light spanking, then lashing her with a bullwhip while she begs him to stop.

>>28313979
>Would a story where a Dom seriously breaks his sub's trust by pushing her past her limits and doing things they specifically agreed he wouldn't do to her once he has her restrained and she can't get away be frowned upon here?

That's pretty close to what Olibird's Her Kingdom For The Safeword was about. Long story short, the thread's pretty divided. Some people say that scenario's too close to what could go wrong in real life for them to be able to enjoy it, while others say "shut up, it's ponies."

You should write it. The arguments will be amazing.

>>28313979
The thread is divided, but my personal opinion is that as long as you don't try to claim that the dom is a "good guy" you will be fine and the story will be hot.

>>28314149
Nah, if I did write it it'd be clear that the Dom is a sick, manipulative fuck that only cares about getting off and doesn't care how much he hurts his partner in the process.

>>28313979
Go for it, it can be a lot of fun to read.
Also, the shitstorm will definitely make it feel worthwhile.

>>28314171
Ooh make it incestual as well then, that way it has even more down with the sickness.

>>28313979
>>28314171
No. Kill yourself.

>>28313979
HKFTSW was pretty well received because it focused on the awful horror a sub going through that experiences. It wasn't just that 'hey, this happened as an excuse for the story'. No, the story was mostly about how someone reacts to a situation going incredibly far beyond anything they expected and with no way to stop it.

I think the ending was more controversial than the bulk of the story itself.

>>28315575
>I think the ending was more controversial than the bulk of the story itself.
That's because the story was equal parts fetish fuel as it was horror over Luna's situation and because I'm a faggot who doesn't know how to end stories.

>>28316212
>That's because the story was equal parts fetish fuel as it was horror over Luna's situation
Bingo. My entire reaction when reading it was "I shouldn't be enjoying this, but it's fucking hot." And considering where I'm posting, it takes a lot to make me worried about what I'm enjoying.

Don't worry too much about the ending. I still consider it one of the top stories we've had here.

>>28316212
>>28316251
Just reading this right now. Is Anon on the fucking spectrum or some shit? How can you be so retarded as to plunge someone with no experience right into a BDSM play session without even explaining what a safe word is?

>>28316212
>>28316251
Just finished it.

I'd totally read a sequel about Luna getting her payback. But then again mare-dom is one of my biggest turn ons.

>>28316438
Also, isn't the sub usually the one that decides on a safe word and communicates it to the dom before the scene even begins?

Anyone know when the next update of Proportional Punishment is?

>>28317186
I think last thread BB said something about them both having real life troubles.

>>28310801
I was actually refering to the very angry anons who want to see celestia get a brutal comeupance for getting in anon's way.

>>28310548
She didn't but the point is that she was framed and the things people thought she did where enough to be very angry. Like bankrupcy angry.

>>28317009
>>28316989
>>28316438
Glad you like the ending and shit. It's pretty based. But yes, anon is fucking bananas and that's why all that happens

>>28296154
Some Anons think that giving any token amount of resistance to a despot who's in power is always a terrible decision. I'm almost afraid to speculate about what their real life political opinions are.

Otherwise, it was the author inserting an NTR fetish into things, which is one of only things in this thread that actually looks edgy and leaves a bad taste my mouth from this thread.

>>28318268
What is NTR?

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>>28294631
Maybe the pony prison threads, with the time outs and fingerpainting are more your speed.

If you're feeling adventurous, then might I suggest various kinderquestria themed threads (like what most of RGRE is turning into) that involve brutality like combat boops as martial arts, and maybe even pillow fights of you want to venture into war crime territory.

The point is, I don't think that 99% of people in this board have any idea what edge is. After m00t replaced all the mods with SJW faggots who nearly entirely hated the very idea of an mlp board (and there are chat logs to prove this), I think that most of you have just been masturbating in a hugbox becoming hypersensitive anything that isn't tonally similar to kindergarten.

Or maybe I'm wrong, and it's mostly white knights and other assorted prissy faggots who are flooding this board more often than before. Maybe the rational people who can understand that a good story needs conflict of some kind to prompt development and growth have been fading away over the years.

I guess it might also be possible that this thread just has a really dedicated "my narrow preferences are the only good preferences" shitposter who lies about the thread and other people just judge a thread without reading any of the green on it, or not reading enough green to have an actual idea of the character of the thread.

Think of how the average soccer mom might judge the Flutterrape threads. We know that it's light-hearted pseudo sexual shenanigans that only rarely result in actual sex, but they're going judge the book by it's cover and choose to interpret everything they read the worst way possible to justify their knee jerk prejudices. Actually learning the thread and absorbing enough of its culture to make an informed decision is beyond these people.

>>28318318
If a thread or story is legitimately good you wouldn't feel a need to be so defensive over its content. God forbid anyone have a legitimate criticism over one of the thread's most consistently (and in my opinion unreasonably) circlejerked stories. Don't pretend liking this drivel somehow makes you deep and mature and that nobody could possibly disagree with you but otherwise enjoy the theme of the thread.

But that's the status quo for /mlp/ I guess, isn't it? Whenever someone suggests they don't like one of the "untouchable" writefags/stories of a general it's time to circle the wagons and put on a false air of superiority instead of having actual discussion.

Kill yourself.

>>28318318
You can have conflict in a story without gong full retard and doing shit for shock value. And yes, regardless of how "2deep2mature4u" you think BB is, there ARE scenes in the story that are simply there for shock value and/or fetish fuel that do nothing to advance the story.

Get off your high horse and realize that people are allowed to disagree with you and that criticism of something you like is not a personal attack or even an attack on the general theme of the thread.

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>>28309922
>Nobody in that thread has written a story afaik about fucking a mare as painfully as possible, much less enjoying it.

Neither has anyone in this thread.

You're not trying to make a point, you're just proving that you're an ignorant sjw cunt addicted to righteous indignation.

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>>28318374
>Neither has anyone in this thread.
Isn't that EXACTLY what the last Proportional Punishment update was?
> ignorant sjw cunt
Buzzword harder there, kiddo.

>>28318273
Netorare. Cheating, basically.

Having a couple, and then having one member of the couple have sex with someone else. The fetish is about deliberately invoking the feelings of having a significant other cheat on you or watching them have sex with someone else.

Maybe it's the rape of a wife who wants to be faithful, or maybe she's a lying, cheating whore who's taking advantage of her husband's trust.

Either way, it's a lot more personal and purely damaging, unlike domination play, which most often reaches an equilibrium point and gets to a happy, or at least consistent, balance. NTR is only the worst moments of betrayal, with no real equilibrium that those involved will get used to while it's happening.

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>>28318812
You know the last time I saw Maniac doing something with her hair, it lead to mane vore. I haven't opened the tag since.

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>>28318812

I like the idea of forcing a new fetish onto a really subby mare. Something she finds vile at first, but over time is broken by her master in such a way that she can't orgasm without it being present.
I'd want a mare that wants to be pushed to her limits, the only agreement placed on our play time being no excessive whipping or cruel torture such as branding or cutting. Anything else at all goes, and she refuses to use a Safeword at all, implicitly trusting her master to take care of her. There's not much that's hotter to me than a total willing surrender of control.
I'm not into watersports really, but I think the first thing I'd do is break my little mare slave to drink her master's piss. She'd thrash and fight violently against her restraints at first, coughing, sputtering, gagging and retching as the steamy putrid liquid fills her muzzle. She'd be restrained in such a manner as to make it impossible to spit out, so she'd hold it in her mouth as an act of disgusted defiance, perhaps for several minutes. She'd be encouraged to swallow with little taps from masters whip here and there, but if she still refused I'd eventually grow tired of it and clamp my hands down tight over her nostrils so that her only choice to restore life-giving oxygen to her burning lungs is to swallow and breathe through her mouth. In subsequent play sessions she'd be forced to hold it in her mouth while stimulated to the brink of orgasm,maybe three or four times in a row. Then right when she's about to cum the last time, I'd repeat the same method as before to force her to swallow while simultaneously bringing her to orgasm.
Eventually she's physically incapable of cumming without the taste of master's piss in her mouth.
If, after the first session, she tells me the piss went too far, then I'd switch to something like stuffing a pair of my dirty socks or underwear in her mouth and strapping her muzzle shut tight around it while edging her for hours.

>>28319350
Holy shit... I'm not into piss at all but I still got a semi reading this. If you chose to write green of this scenario I'd totally read it.

>>28317547
It wasn't BB who said it. Olibird said himself at the end of the last section that he has very limited time to write and won't be able to update very often.

>>28319350
>piss fetish
Get the fuck out and die, preferably in an agonizing manner.

>>28319447
Wow rude.

>>28319350
I'd go for something like lubeless anal, that bite and pain as the toy goes up and the mild fact its not that stimulating on its own.

>>28319570
That seems kinda dangerous. I don't want to do anything that might cause serious or permanent damage.

>>28319593
That's why there are stories that take place in imagination land.

>>28319447
I dunno mate forcing a sub mare to drink your piss is kinda hot. It's not the piss itself that's sexy, it's the dominance and humiliation of it all, especially if she's conditioned to slowly begin enjoying it over time.

>>28319350
>the only agreement placed on our play time being no excessive whipping or cruel torture such as branding or cutting.
Why would you need an agreement like that? if she's
>implicitly trusting her master to take care of her
Then she should also trust him not to flay her.

It's not a total surrender of control, if he can't piss in her mouth and then whip her tits until she swallows. I'm not saying that's what he should do. But there shouldn't be anything preventing the dom from doing that, other than, you know... him not being a compete psychopath.

>>28319881
I dunno, maybe the relationship starts out with her feeling like she needs to set a few ground rules for her first few sessions before she reaches that level of trust with her master where she's willing to say "do whatever you want to me."

Earning her trust enough for her to say that would be a fun and rewarding experience itself

>>28320058
Yeah. Master has to show he's willing to immediately end a scene and take care of her if she decides to use the safe word before she's willing to abandon it completely. Telling her master to do whatever he wants to her with no limits or safe word from the start is a horrible idea. That kind of trust must be earned.

>>28319881
>>28320058
>>28320087
Do any of the fics on this thread include aftercare as one of the main important points to hit in the story? I feel that far too often that aspect is left out of a lot of bondage fics, and makes them seem overly grimdark sometimes as a result.

>>28320106
Honestly while I loved her kingdom for the safe word, I really wish this was one aspect that was visited in more detail toward the end of the story after anon realizes just how badly he fucked up.

>>28320058
>Earning her trust enough for her to say that would be a fun and rewarding experience itself
...
>meet a mare
>get into BDSM
>set up safeword
>play like reasonable consenting adults for a few months
>then, one day:
>"Master, I don't want to have a safeword anymore, please do whatever you want to me from now on."
I know it would be a horrible idea in real life, but I can't deny how hard does it make me.

>>28320149
It's definitely a huge turn on, the amount of love and trust she'd have to have for you is astronomical. It would probably have to be a more intense bond than any you've ever had with anyone else in your life. I'd probably be moved to tears if my little mare was willing to go that far with me.

>>28320106
What do you mean by aftercare

>>28320193
Basically everything that occurs once a scene is over to take care of the sub to reassure her that she's safe and loved and has nothing to fear from you. Incredibly important in maintaining a healthy bdsm relationship.

>>28320207
Sounds like something a total pussy would do. A sub is her master's plaything to be used as he sees fit and then discarded until the next time he needs her.

>>28320106
Might check out Equine therapy, it had a bit of it.

That said, it portrays a relationship with some unhealthy dynamics behind it and might hit a bit close to home for some.

>>28320220
>not sure if trolling, a psycho, or just someone with no actual IRL experience with bdsm.
>thinking probably all 3

>>28320220
That's like never changing the oil in your car. Sure, it's your to use any way you like whenever you like. But if you don't take care of it, it's going to break. Decent slaves are expensive and hard to come by. Not providing aftercare would be highly uneconomical

>>28320228
I had a girlfriend that always tried to take the bdsm component of our relationship beyond the bedroom and that always made me super uncomfortable. For instance she wanted me to refer to her as "slave" in public rather than use her name, as well as keep her on a collar and leash while carrying a whip. It ended up splitting us apart because she couldn't respect that I wasn't comfortable treating her like that in public for a variety of reasons.

>>28320282
I had a breakup for similar reasons, though in my case it was more she had a strong interest in that but didn't try to force it on me, and we eventually came to the decision (by which I of course mean she ended it.. but it genuinely was amicable) that we weren't really right for each other any more due to evolving interests.

>>28320321
I had to end my last relationship because of a domme that became increasingly abusive outside of the bedroom. The breaking point for me was one day we had a huge fight over something stupid and decided to have make up sex. Well during that scene she refused to listen to the safeword FIVE TIMES, hurting me pretty badly as a result (I have a few permanent whip marks on my back, things got THAT out of hand), saying that was my punishment for "daring to defy her like I did earlier that day" and "not knowing my place."

I didn't want to press charges or anything because I genuinely loved her, but I no longer felt safe in the relationship and had to distance myself from her as much as possible.

>>28320366
>femdom
Serves you right, faggot

>>28320366
That's my biggest fear as a sub, winding up in a scene where the dom chooses to ignore the safe word for any reason. I know my limits and wouldn't be able to handle someone not respecting them.

>>28320366
>she refused to listen to the safeword
Good riddance. Nobody needs that kind of cunt in their life.

>>28320366
That's rough. Out of curiosity how long did she keep going after the first time you said it until she finally released you?

>>28320481
Nearly two hours. I was legitimately tortured by her, I'd never been so terrified in my life.

>>28320106
Twilight's Submission has that. It's a genuine consensual story and the dom also makes it very clear that Twilight can end it any time she wants to.

It's also far, far too short.

>>28320490
Suck it up pussy. Nothing worse than a sub that wants to start drama because they made a conscious decision and got in over their head. You lost any right you had to complain the moment you decided to be her slave.

>>28320366
Yikes, yeah I'm with >>28320418

Most traumatic thing for me is sort of a really mild form of what's covered in equine therapy.

I'm a switch who usually plays sub, but was in a relationship with a sub. We were into pretty mild stuff, but I gradually figured out that she had what's best described as a really fucked up childhood, and she started getting really strange after some sessions. It made me uncomfortable as all fuck, she'd insist there was nothing wrong but somehow I always felt like I might be doing her some kind of harm.. it scared the fuck out of me and the breakup was really shitty because it was entirely me noping the fuck out of it all because of anxiety.

>>28320543
Oh fuck off. Stopping when someone gives a safeword is literally THE most important part of BDSM. But you wouldn't know that, because you're probably still a kissless virgin.

>>28320543
>>28320389
>>28320220
Assuming you're the same anon, grow up dude.

>>28320567
This. The moment you give the safe word you are revoking consent to the dom doing anything further to you, and it should always be treated with the full seriousness of that implication.

>>28320543
>what is a safeword

>>28320618
>t. Luna

>>28320567
It really worries me that a lot of people think a healthy BDSM relationship actually works anything like it does in the kind of stories we see here.

There are of course plenty of unhealthy relationships out there, hell I'm not going to claim I've always done everything correctly, but not respecting a safeword is (I think literally in most cases) criminally bad.

There are couples who let their play extend out into the real world, and I don't think that's automatically unhealthy (although I feel like one needs to tread more carefully when the demarcation points arn't as clear.. I don't think I'd be comfortable with being a dom to a full time sub), but I genuinely hope (and honestly do think) full on "do whatever you want, I have no say in any aspect of my life any more" type relationships are really damn rare.

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>>28320639
This is a serious matter. I shouldn't be laughing so hard.

>>28320647
>It really worries me that a lot of people think a healthy BDSM relationship actually works anything like it does in the kind of stories we see here.
I've found that most people who go on and on about how safewords and aftercare are for the weak, are people who've never actually done anything with a partner. BDSM is still just a fantasy to them, and in fantasy world, Broken Bluebird is a healthy relationship. They usually change their tune REAL fast after taking those first baby steps into RL play.
Of course, there are always going to be some abusive psychopaths, but that's the case no matter what you're doing.

>>28320739
If ponies were real I'd take a mare slave against her will and brutalize her daily. Her screams and cries and begging for mercy would go unanswered as I find new and more creative ways to inflict massive suffering with minimal damage. I'd laugh in her face as she stares at me in terror with tear filled, pleading eyes, asking me why I'm doing this to her. Maybe, after months of unceasing agony, I would grant her a slow death by disembowelment, at which point in time I will have acquired a new slave that will watch in sheer horror knowing she will one day share the same fate.

>>28320739
Yup.

Also I think people grossly underestimate the impact of stuff (both mentally and physically). A lot of scenes that are boring as fuck in story are intense in real life.

>>28320919
Are you just saying that, or would people here really enjoy story with over the top non consensual abuse?

>>28321015
I love a good torture/snuff fic. The more innocent the victim and more brutal the suffering, the better.

>>28321015
>enjoy story
Sure, if done well.

>have any interest in that kind of thing IRL
Nope.

I mean stands to reason there are people who would be up for it in real life, but they're why a lot of the nicer clubs are so selective about letting people join. There are definitely creeps out there, and they probably have their haunts, but I like to think for the most part they lay on the fringe of the community or more commonly live in a fantasy and never actually play IRL.

>>28320919
I bet pony crush videos would be a multi million dollar underground market.

>>28321138
This is really not typical of what's written here.. just some writefags having fun due to the (also out of character) OP pic.

>>28321153
Oh, good.

>>28321138
I prefer my ponies battered and broken, but not of spirit. The flesh may break and the body crumble, but it is the spirit and gleam within that shall forever live.

Basically, I didn't write more because to fit the pic is death of a main character, not something to be done so cavlier. I am not up for snuff.
A death is meant to be a tale of woe, of outrage and claiming your birthright in a glorious orgy of the blood of the oppressors. To die knowing that it is on your terms, from the works of your hands, the proclamations of your tonue.
Not of accident, of choice fortune and deceit. To die the inglorious death of a single shot with no retribution to come, a sudden and saddening death of no greater meaning, no grand design. Just the small quiet point of which is so common found for a bit of beef or a small frog before a snake.

This is none of that. It is the end of a capricious and willful disdain for another, the highest robbery of taking a pony's life while leaving them alive. To let them wake every day knowing what you have done, to feel that eternal suffering of their very destiny stolen as though the king's gold, only to be dumped into the sea, out of reach and of no use to any. Such is an ignominious fate to be dreaded, feared, for it surely was not of the most willful intent, yet only that of the damnable fleeting of an addled mind. It is the violence of the ephemeral moment, the demented bewitchment of ire, a rage that forever decides a life, yet has no prescence in time.
It is forever and horrible, accursed and belittling yet always a feature in life.

>>28321165
Don't get me wrong, we do like our grim and edge, but usually there's more purpose behind it.

>forcing slave mare to drink your pis
>not drinking slave mare's piss
Plebs

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>>28319306

I havent bumped in a while.

>>28321887
I would force her to hold her bladder for three days, then lay down in the bathtub with her on my chest in a 69 position before ordering her to unleash the flood gates. We'd roll around in her hot steamy piss until both saturated with it, then I'd eat her out, licking her piss-soaked mare lips clean before giving her the fucking of her life.

Any fics where anon forces a pair of straight mare slaves into hot kinky lesbian mare fetish sex?

>>28321971
She'd die after the first day. Waste of perfectly good product.

>>28322079
Surprisingly not. I'll have to write that at some point; it's always unf.

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>>28322550
>record scratch
>freeze frame
>"You see that mare right there?"
>"Yeah, that's right, the one with her muzzle full of rainbow pony cooter?"
>"You may be wondering how a straight, horsecock loving filly like myself managed to get into this position"
>rewind
>"well I guess I better start from the beginning"
>"It all started one hot summer afternoon..."

>>28323023
Goddammit.
>"That mare... is me."
Line got deleted somehow, dafuq?

>>28322079
>>28322550
I'd rather lesbian mares who have to serve anon/stallion, but that'd never go down well considering how attached mlp is to having ponies be attracted to them

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I'm all for the fun of this thread. Loving, beating, murder, gay shit, piss, even riding.

But on the off chance that this shit ever happens, and you assholes think you're going to be anything but the most caring white knight to these ponies, I need you to know just one thing:

I will be hunting you. High definition photographs of your skinned, salted, eviscerated corpses will be posted next to time stamped autographs of my alias, "The White Knight."

Not even in the medium of fiction, fantasy and magic can you conjure a notion as horrifying as what I will devote my life to doing to you.

Play nice.

A new auction has appeared in your town. A company selling pony slaves that are bread and raised with a religious like zealous need to be cooked and eaten. They must be watch far more closely than your 'normal' slave ponies, because due to their radical beliefs and wants, they will commit suicide from the depression of not being eaten. And if you do not eat every little scrap of their meat, they find it highly insulting and offensive.

What would you do at one of these auctions?

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>>28325303
>slave
>has their own wants an believes
>will damage their master's property if depressed
>gets insulted and offended
How does this auction manage to stay in the business again? Their product is shit.

>>28325894
Product is also cheap, and they make a killing off of weirdos.

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>>28325193
>Mfw he doesn't rape us, ravaging my body until I can no longer resist
>Mfw I could only twitch and gargle on his semen as I lay bound on the earthy ground
>Mfw the cum drips through my nose as he hoists me up and carries me to his camp to skin me
>Mfw he throws me down and goes to collect his gear
>Mfw his hunting dogs need relief and my cum covert cunt just so happens to be up in the air
>Mfw his dogs fuck the shit out of me for the next 15 minutes
>Mfw he comes back and sees this
>Mfw he decides to keep me as a relief for his dogs
>Mfw his dogs are as big as me
>mfw he just wants to skin and salt me
>Mfw he is boring at parties because he doesn't rape pent up nymphos

>>28325193
What if I get a big strong stallion that consents to being ridden?

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>>28328973

>YWN get to put a ponk in a giant press and turn her into a giant cherry malt
>YWN drain her into a jar and leave the lid on, taunting her by eating cakes and pastries
>She will never whine, wnating to get out and play with you, upset that you aren't letting her party.
>You will never carry the pink sauce jar around town, letting her see all her friends in this frantic state, but not know it.
>YWN feed Gummy for her as you leave her in that jar, and put her in a cupboard to be left like like an ingredient.
>YWN get to pur her out and wonder just how any of it worked when the play time is over.
>YWN discover ponk has a strict antipants policy for the next several hours as she goes and fucks you
>YWN get to wonder just who is dominating who in this relation as you lay on the bed, wondering just how crazy the book worm really is.

>>28320149
>>28320174
As a sub I sometimes think about this idea from the more nonconcentual angle. Common as it is, the idea of being made to obey with very few limits is aggrivatingly pervasive in my thoughts. I guess it's because even if I know that the things I dont want to happen wont, it's the kind of fear you feel when you don't have a safety net anymore and all you have between you and the ground is a tightrope of obedience and air.

>>28320207
This but it's a conciet to the say the sub. Masters need after care too, especially those who are still self concious about hurting you.

There's a neat picture of that with iirc Pinkie pie and rarity to get an idea.

>>28330619

>>28331880

I'm getting really afraid that both BB and oilibird are gone.... Without them this board is nothing....

>>28332468
Have faith, last they checked in they were dealing with real life shit.

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how about something a little strange in the mean time...


>Be Anon the dentist.
>You've been running a small practice in Ponyville for about 6 years now.
>Most of your time is spent providing routine dental care to a growing herd of patients.
>You love your life here, but while work the bills, lecturing ponies on their brushing and flossing is hardly your true calling.
>No, your real passion lies in the more specialized services you offer some of the town's more depraved citizenry.
>Today one of the stranger of your perverse clientele is due in, and he'll be bringing one of your more challenging patients with him.
>With your assistant getting everything ready for their visit and with no other appointments scheduled for the day you're left to wander impatiently around your empty waiting room.
>..
>It's a little after lunchtime when he finally shows up, making an almost mockingly ordinary entrance through your front door.
“Ah, good morning Discord!” you eagerly greet him before turning your attention to the yellow pegasus following tightly to his side.
“And of course Miss Fluttershy.”
”Now what can I do for you folks today?”
>Your smile curls a little as you finish the question, knowing full well what she's here for.
>There's a few moments of silence before Discord nudges her towards you.
>”Go on dear, don't be rude.”
>She tries her best at a smile as she looks up at you, sending butterflies to your stomach.
>”I-I'm here for my cleaning, a-and checkup, Dr. Anonymous.”
“Hmm, well of course Fluttershy, come on in.”
>You gesture warmly towards the hallway.
“Colgate should have everything all ready for you.”
>Her shoulders sag as the muscles in her cheek flex to maintain the forced smile.
>Discord does better at masking his body language, the pointed grin crawling around his face appearing mostly genuine.

>>28332846
>You weren't sure why he insisted on this whole charade, but then you weren't sure why Discord was doing any of this.
>In public the two of them made a lovely couple, and even among your kinkier circle he treated her as a beloved pet, and she seemed happy at his side.
>Today though you reckon she'd rather be anywhere else, but Discord's always been clear about what he wants from these visits.
>Taking your place just behind her right hindquarter, you allow Fluttershy to lead the way, following at arms length.
>It's not until you reach the final bend before the exam room that she finally caves, keeping her voice to a hushed whisper.
>”Dr An-Anonymous, I-I don't, please-”
>You slow to a stop, letting her take in a breath and steady herself.
>“Please can't I just have a normal appointment this one time? I-”
>You cut her off by placing your hand gently along her withers, maintaining your guise with a sympathetic frown.
“Now Fluttershy, you remember what happened the last time you had a normal appointment.”
>Her cheek turns a light pink as the memory of her first visit to your office floods back.
>It had been the early days of your practice, long before you'd met Discord or even discovered the erotic subculture hidden behind the cute pastel colors.
>Terrified patients were nothing new to you, ponies hated going to the dentist as much as humans.
>She certainly wasn't the first to panic during a routine cleaning, nor to make a scene fleeing the waiting room.
>Still, playing off the incident has always served you well.
>”Yes.” she mumbles, glancing briefly at a floor tile.
>”But I'm a lot better now, Discord's been helping me a lot..”
“I'm sure he has been, and he probably wants what's best for you.”
“..including your dental health.”
>You fight to hold back a smirk.
>”I-I know that, but I brush and floss every day”

>>28332847
>Her voice trails off to a mumble as her eyes fall back to the floor.
>”.. and I promise I'll be good this time.. ”
>You brace yourself before kneeling down beside her.
“Fluttershy, look.. ”.
>And she does, looking up at you with the expression you'd prepared for.
>She could be naive, but Fluttershy knew this wasn't about her teeth, and she likely didn't know why Discord was subjecting her to this any more than you did.
>Despite it never worked getting her anywhere before though, she still can't help finding hope in your apparent kindness.
>Her eyes plead with yours, begging that if she asked nicely enough this time she could somehow get out of here.
>Pressing out a smile you brush her pink forelocks to the side.
“I'm sorry, but I really can't.”
>Her dulling expression confirms you've hit the mark.
“Discord set this appointment up for you... you trust him right?”
>She grimaces, breaking eye contact with you, her gaze drifting towards the exam room.
>”Yes, of course.. but-”
“.. and you don't want to disappoint him do you?”
>She takes in a stuttered breath before answering in a flat whisper.
>”No.”
”Now come on then, we best get started.”
>Her shoulders slink back as you rise.
>You keep a hand on her side, guiding her the first few steps towards the room.
>She manages a few steps on her own before rounding the corner and coming once again to a screeching halt.
>You vent a disappointed sigh as you catch up to her, but you're left speechless as the room comes into full view.
>Colgate has really out done herself this time.
>Every drill, pick, scraper, burr, and pointed instrument you own has been strategically laid out on the counter in full view.
>The soothing taupe walls are all but covered in posters of grotesquely deformed teeth, dire warnings of periodontal disease and the evils of soda laid over top images of inflamed gums leaking blood and puss.

>>28332856
>Your trusty exam chair sits permanently fixed in the center, but has been rigged with institutional grade canvas restraints.
>For a few moments you float in stunned in awe, but are pulled back into the moment by the growing tremors in Fluttershy's breath.
>”D-D-dr...”
>She stutters, her legs involuntarily crawling her back towards the door.
>”P-please.. please can I just...”
>”C-can I at least talk to Discord first?”
>Before you can answer, Colgate appears from behind, blocking the exit.
>Her face is hidden behind a white mask, but you just know she's got a devilish grin on under there.
“Lift your tail please” she instructs in a practiced doctoral tone.
>Fluttershy gives you one last glance, but despite the warmth of her desperation you manage the prescribed apologetic silence.
>After a few seconds the crestfallen mare complies with the order, breaking eye contact and slowly raising her tail for your assistant.
>She lets out a series of muffled gasps as Colgate works an egg shaped electrode past her lips and deep into her vaginal canal.
>Meanwhile you slip on your own mask and take your position on one side of the chair.
“Ok, up we go.”
>Her tail lowers as she makes her way to the chair, her gaze remaining fixed on the ground as she shuffles along awkwardly, the cold metal shifting around inside her.
>With Colgate on one side and you on the other, you guide Fluttershy into the chair, sliding her tail and the thin wire emerging from her slit neatly between her legs.
>Fluttershy fidgets uncomfortably as the the two of get to work on her restraints.
>First you secure a cuff around each forearm, pinning her front legs at her sides.
>Following that is a series off straps looping across her chest and barrel, passing overtop her arms and wings and pulling her tightly into the padded chair.

>>28332865
>Her core secured, Colgate works at tethering her ankles to the end of the chair while you wrap a set of wide belts around her hind legs, cinching them up until her hocks press against one another.
>With the bulk of the restraints now in place, Colgate sets about connecting up the electronics while you move to the top of the chair to secure the final bit of the restraints.
>It's a thickly padded head strap designed to keep her head completely immobile.
>Up until now Fluttershy has been cooperative as always, but this bit always gets a reaction from her.
>Sure enough. as you bring it within her field of view she falters, whimpering and wrenching her head away from you.
>You run your hand across her exposed cheek, picking up a slight dampness along your gloved fingertips.
“Fluttershy...” you start softly, but she cuts you off before you can get into the usual spiel.
>”I-I know, I'm sorry..” she whines, catching you by surprise as her head twists back into position under her own steam.
>You can't help falling into your own facade as you continue tracing along the side of her face.
>She's just so polite in her misery.
>She repays the mistake by hitting you with that same look from before.
>Damn it.
>You know her too well to think it an intentional ploy for sympathy.
>No, she's literally the element of kindness, gifted in the art of being nice to others... and she'd caught your little slip up fair and square.
>You try to focus your mind on all the fun things you've planned for her as she searches your face.
>So maybe you do feel a little pity, a pang of guilt even, but once you get going what would it matter.
>Discord insisted your abuse be dealt out with a smile, but she was going to suffer all the same.
>By the end she'd know it was all an act, just part Discords silly ruse.
>Your month twists against itself.
>Heck, you'd show her right now.

>>28332873
>Despite the heat you feel in your own face as a dark pall envelops your thoughts, her eyes don't change.
>Sighing, you let the strap fall to the side.
“Ok Fluttershy”
>You hesitate for a moment, having second thoughts as her expression starts to brighten, but it's just not worth it.
>You can give her this small victory and still have your fun.
“...we'll see if we can do this without the head strap.”
>You can't help smile behind your mask as she whispers a relieved thank you.
“But if you fight me or start making a fuss it's going on and I don't any complaints about it, ok?”
>She gives you a quick nod.
>”Ok.”
>Colgate gives you a puzzled look but says nothing as she takes her place opposite you.
>You retrieve your single handed mouth prop from the counter, causing Fluttershy to take a deep involuntary swallow.
>The device resembles a pair of curved stainless steel scissors with rubber coated hooked tips and a ratcheting set of teeth in the middle.
>It's a bit of an anachronism, more appropriately found in a museum than a modern practice, but it suits your needs perfectly.
>As you bring it towards her face, she parts her lips, allowing you to slip the rubber hooks between her teeth.
>The instrument makes a series of sharp mechanical clicks as you close the handles together, forcing her jaw open.
>You space out the last few for effect, the final click wrenching her jaw to just past comfortable without being painful.
>She tries to say something but it only comes out as incomprehensible babbling.
“Don't worry, that's as wide as I need.”
>With the prop firmly wedged in the corner of her mouth, the curved handle provides you as much control as the headband would have... but it does tie up a hand.
“Colgate, hand me the number 3 explorer please.”
>”Of course Doctor.”
>Within a few moments Colgate places the instrument between your fingers.

>>28332877
>The probe is standard issue, a slender shaft with a little knurling along it's length for grip ending in a thin bit of curved steel.
>Not so standard is the small alligator clip fixed to the butt of the shaft, connecting it via a long thin lead to a control unit opposite your assistant.
>Fluttershy's eyes however are focused squarely on the needle sharp tip at the business end of the implement, a bright speck of light gleaming off it from the overhead lighting as you draw it towards her.
>Her eyes slam shut in anticipation as the as the steel passes between her lips, her tongue involuntarily retreating to the back of her mouth.
>You begin as you always have, sliding the tip of the instrument along the spongy pink flesh of the retreating organ.
>”Nhaaaughhh!”
>Her body spasms against the canvas straps as a circuit is completed between her tongue and the electrode nestled deeply within her, her back arching tightly as the current stings through her delicate tissues.
>The handle of the mouth prop twists slightly against your other hand, but you're able to keep her head in position without much effort.
>After a few moments pass you relent, lifting the pick from her tongue.
>Her body immediately falls limp within the restraints as the flow of current stops.
>A series of coughing moans and whines follows as she struggles to suck air back into her lungs, beads of tears leaking down the side of her cheeks.
>You give Colgate a quick nod, signaling her to dial it back to the more reasonable voltage you'll use for the rest of the session.
>The lingering effects of your first salvo are enamelled across your patients face.
>She breaths sporadically in long staggered draws, bringing in huge gulps of air, then letting it out in shaky piecemeal bursts.
>Tight wrinkles trace along her muzzle as her cheek muscles press her eyelids as tightly as she can manage.
“Fluttershy, I want your eyes open for this, ok.”

>>28332889
>Her snout quivers as she inhales deeply one last time, but she complies and forces her eyelids open, squinting uncomfortably up at you.
>Colgate is quick with a soft cloth, gently clearing the accumulated moisture around her eyes.
>Her eyes shift focus on your hands as you re-enter her mouth with the pick for the actual cleaning, a deep gurgling whine echoing up her throat.
>One by one you scale each tooth.
>Most of your time is spent cleaning the exposed enamel.
>While certainly not a comfortable experience, the work is mostly routine.
>Despite the cacoffiny of flicks and scrapes echoing around her maw, it's no more painful than any other cleaning as you tug bits of tartar off the non-conductive surfaces.
>It's only when you get under the gum-line that your electrified pick comes into play, giving her a stinging course of voltage as the tip comes into contact with her sensitive gingiva.
>By the fifth tooth she's got your rhythm down pretty well, wincing and tensing before the electricity even hits.
>Every so often you retreat so your assistant can get in with the air water syringe.
>The rinse is entirely necessary for the cleaning, but also allows Colgate to add some of her own torments.
>In particular she seems to enjoy being light on the suction, leaving Fluttershy to gargle and choke as the fluid accumulates in the back of her throat.
>Fortunately for Fluttershy she wasn't lying earlier when she said she'd been brushing and flossing.
>Her teeth are immaculately clean, and you're sporting enough to reward her by working through the painful bits quickly.
>Unfortunately for her though, she missed a spot.
>Truthfully you almost did to, but as you work to clean the 4th to last tooth, she winces out of time.
>It takes only a moment for Fluttershy to register what just happened, the color draining from her face as you stop your scraping and go in for a closer look.

>>28332894
>You probe around the area a few times before you find it, a small dark spot, her face scrunching tightly to hide the pain as best she can as you poke at it.
“Hmm, looks like we've got a cavity here.”
>Her ears fall as a stifled whine escapes past the mouth prop.
“It doesn't look too deep, but I'm afraid I'll have to do some drilling after we're done here.”
>Fluttershy goes stone cold for the rest the cleaning, her thoughts clearly overshadowed by the upcoming filling.
>It would be her first time having any kind corrective work done, but everyone and presumably everypony knows that getting a cavity filled isn't fun.
>Colgate gives her one final gagging rinse before retrieving the pick from your hand.
>A few moments pass before Fluttershy realizes you've finished the cleaning.
>Ordinarily at this point you'd begin undoing the restraints, signaling the end of the ordeal, but as she turns her head towards you it's clear she recognizes it won't be like that today.
>Looking down at your patient her misery is clear.
>Her eyes no longer plead with you nor look for hidden kindness, instead appearing mostly worn and just longing to go home.
>Your prized canvas restraints are now permeated with sweat, not to mention the chair itself, the sides of which are now marred with indents from where her hooves repeatedly clawed into the thick material.
>Truthfully both of you are at your quota, you've no more interest in drawing this out than she does of suffering through it.
“Fluttershy.”
>You pause, briefly searching for an easier way to what you've got to do next but finding none.
“You've been very well behaved, but I'm afraid I need both hands for this, and if you move you could get hurt.”
>It takes only a moment for your meaning to sink in.
“I'm going to have to put the head band on, ok?”

>>28332899
>Even in her resigned state you expected some protest, but instead she just breaks eye contact with you, nodding slightly as you release your grip on the mouth prop.
>The soft padding compresses tightly around her forehead as you fix the velcro band, along with a set of rigid foam blocks that press around the ears and insure total immobility.
“Lidocaine syringe please.”
>Syringe.
>You said the magic word without thinking, but the effect is almost immediately as a flurry of emotion returns to Fluttershy's face.
“Hold up Colgate..”
>Your assistant stops short of passing the needle across your patients field of view.
>You squirm a bit as Fluttershy's eyes fixate on your face.
>Whatever magic you saw in them before is now hauntingly absent for the first time, not a single hint of hope, just simple unconditional fear.
>And it was directed squarely at you.
>A queasiness forms in the pit of your stomach as the possible motivation behind these sessions finally hits you.
>You slide your mask down your face a bit to catch a full breath of air.
>Unfortunately for Discord you can't help yourself.
“This is gonna pinch, but it'll only hurt for a moment, then after that you won't feel a thing.”
>It's your standard speech, and even on a good day is mostly a lie, but to your relief her expression begins to brighten.
“You can close your eyes for this if you want to.”

---

And that's the end of that. As usual comments and criticism entirely welcome.

I know the whole story element of this is a bit thin, would love suggestions or possible alternates.

>>28332920
So what is the point, Discord wants her to have some fear here?

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>>28332468
I haven't gone anywhere, Anon. As I said before, summer is hell for me...hopefully after labor day, things will start to clear up.

>>28334021
Good to see you alive, buddy. Even though I'm never in these threads, I just follow your quest through anonpone

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>>28325193
>tab into SPG
>make this comment
>come back 24 hours later
>it's not there
>but it's in TWO other generals, clientside

You are given 3 pounds of hubba bubba bubble gum chew, three condoms and Soarin. How do you succeed in dominating him?

>>28336086
>using condoms when there's literally zero percent chance of impregnation or STDs

are the any stories where the mares slowly develop a stockholm syndrome or drug addiction?

>>28336124
>Bubble gum in you dick
You don't make cum bubbles, plus if you want to do anal.

>>28319350
I would certainly look forward to a green of this if you are indicating you'd write one. I'm not obsessed with piss, but the degrading and humiliating uses of it are too hot to ignore. Your description made me happy

>>28336289
>plus if you want to do anal
You don't need a condom for that.

>>28319350
are you by chance the same faggot who keeps posting about how you'd like to bully fluttershy into doing it or is that someone else?

>>28336303
Nah that's someone else.

>

>>28339945

>>28319350
I'll read it.

>>28339945

Before bed bamp

>>28332920
This is totally bizarre, but I like it

You know, I don't think slave pone is as white knight as you guys make them out to be sometimes.

>>28342257

>>28342302
The only difference between SPG and SiM is tendencies. They both have all of it, with the exception of me never actually witnessing any white knighting in SiM. Everything else is the same, to different degrees.

>>28342302
It depends on the story.

>>28342362
I personally enjoy both threads and don't see why we can't get along.

>>28342375
Because mutual synthetic hate is the most deep-seated and statistically utilized socioeconomic defense mechanism of our species. Nobody really hates blacks, gays, women, fans of certain musical genres, or SPG. They opt into it artificially because there are habitual benefits.

>>28342302
This is the shittiest drawing I've ever gotten a semi from. That description is definitely unf.

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>>28342408
Hate is the feeling you get when you are losing something that you love.
I love my country and blacks are destroying it.

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>>28343395
Giga nigga 4 elprezidente

So, aftercare. Let's discuss this.

The session is over, fun has been had, and now you are moving onto this little seen bit.
What does it involve?

Ointments, bandages, and injections to take the pain away and make it easier to move while the welts and swelling go down?
Careful cuddling and reassurances that you don't really think they're a worthless bitch?
Cleaning the equipment and disposing of used props?

What would you put into the green here?

>>28344203
All of the above. Great emphasis on the pain relief and cuddling and reassuring though.

Im not racist some of my best slaves are black niggggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!1111!!!!!!11111111!!!!

>>28344203
I'd say would depend on what the point of the story is and the purpose of having aftercare be a part of it.

>>28344266
Its an in media res, the actual smut scene is only so relevant as to the aftercare, such as helping them stand upright after taking them out of suspension, bringing over some alcohol wipes to try and remove master's urine, water to help with the lost voice, etc...

Question for the doms here: have you ever had to end a scene prematurely because the sub really wanted you to do something to him/her that went beyond your comfort level?

>>28272522
Source?

>>28345026

>>28332920
It's great to have you back, azenanon!
This was...interesting. You've managed to combine muh fetish with my biggest fear int he world. Fuck dentists. Seriously.

All your descriptions were absolutely amazing, you've gotten a lot better since last time we saw you. I could practically feel the pain Fluttershy was being put through, and the bit where they were strapping her down was fantastic. The building sense of dread as they prepared her for her appointment was masterfully done.

I have to admit, though, I spent waayyy too long trying to figure out if it was going to get outright >sexual or WHAT his "specialized services" were...riiight up until the electric probe. Oh dear god, why? Why?! I think...this was probably the first story I've ever wanted to white knight a character...and I'm one of those edgy faggots who loved seeing BB's Dashie in the cage. The ending was especially horrifying. I never expected green from this thread to get such a visceral reaction out of me. Great job.

>Suggestions
I would like to echo >>28333558 a bit and ask what Discord's motivations were, exactly? He doesn't seem big on dental hygiene, so why is he so eager to put Fluttershy through hell with this?

>>28345959
I'm tempted to post a fic I wrote about a prostrate exam, but at this point its not really simmy.

>>28345441

>>28345441

I really need to start writing green again but I know if I start I'll be writing for the rest of the night.

>>28347750
That's a good place to be, I'm a thousand words into a hopeful ten thousand piece chapter of a fic.

>>28347614

>>28347750
You say that like it's a bad thing

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this is on the front page ,
what the fuck is wrong with you people

/mlp/ are the juggalos of 4chan

>>28332920
This story is a prime example of why I hate those "what about X theme in a story..." questions. If someone had posted here asking "What about a story where a pony goes to the dentist", I'd have said "How the fuck does going to a dentist relate to this thread's themes?"

But you know what? You pulled it off, Azenanon. It's certainly an unconventional story but you've played successfully on a basic, instinctive fear many of us have that allows us to feel sympathy with Fluttershy, and then blended it with just enough of a Domination/Submission element that the whole thing actually works as a story. The head-strap, especially, was effective at showing Fluttershy's tenuous but willing submission - she doesn't want to be restrained, and is willing to submit to this plainly awful experience if it means she isn't made completely helpless for it.

So, too, is Anon an interesting way of looking at a dom who is actually uncomfortable with what he's being asked to do. The tug between sub and dom's wishes is something we don't see here often, and Anonymous' conundrum feels very sympathetic as well.

Certainly, you could have leaned a bit more on the sexual aspect of the scene (incidentally, electrostimulation is fucking hot... but dentists are not, which contributes further to the "why boner" feel of this story) but as it is, the story works well in a not constantly sexual but certainly very strongly S&M-feeling theme.

>Suggestions or possible alternates

Discord's been already asked about, so I'll ask about Colgate: What's her position in this? Is she a sadistic dominant who just happens to work with Anonymous? A switch who alternates between tormenting the patients and taking her own turn in the chair? Does Anonymous sometimes 'treat' her? Does she 'treat' him?

>>28290816
>SCP

STOP

What nonpony characters would you like to see in a story and in what context?

You are given Gilda and Lightning Dust to play with. Available to you is a vast supply of rope and various straps. What do you do with them, other than tie rope to the tits near their crotch and play jump rope?

Okay so what if instead of a statue sub, its a mind control one?
No true dom is present in the story, just the statue/icon/plot convenient item mentally dominates and convinces the finder to engage in sex, potentially with another who went along on the adventure?
Neither of them wanting to have sex, but the statue just keeps ordering and beating their minds into submission until they accept.

>>28352986
Like a billion times what >>28350487 said. Pretty much anything could be made into an on topic story here, just comes down to writing it as such.