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Art Request Edition

ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost

List of stories: https://www.anonpone.com/

Read this advice first:
https://www.anonpone.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice

>What day is best?
http://strawpoll.me/10160199
>What time is best?
http://strawpoll.me/10160202
>What genre are you interested in?
http://strawpoll.me/10160203
>What if I cannot into art?
http://strawpoll.me/10160205
>What race would you play?
http://strawpoll.me/10160997

Remember: It's okay to ask

Last Thread: >>27696765
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First for kill yourself
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>>27718341
>It's okay to ask
No, it's not.
Learn to draw and do it yourselves.
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>>27718364
This tbqh
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>>27718341
Uh, b-baby? I-if you wouldn't mind, c-could you maybe, uh, r-rock that grill?
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Active threads

Heart of Iron: >>27713241
Super: >>27713508
Lyraquest: >>27627145
FOE: >>27670666
Miracle: >>27708382
Frostbitten: >>27656859
JAD: >>27675931
Alchemy: >>27569338
Experimental: >>27668371
SIM: >>27658879
War in the North: >>27614266
Spicyquest: >>27579988
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>>27718341
>Art Request Edition
Right then. What do you want?
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>>27718430
We want you to teach us to draw.
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>>27718430
Draw a sexy pony.
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>>27718430
Something for a quest you haven't drawn for.
>inb4 "I'm not an artfag"
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>>27718430
Could you draw the MC of custos? I'll get a description real quick.
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>>27718476
Unicorn filly, deep grey-blue coat, waning moon cutie mark, long straight silvery-white mane and tail.
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>>27718476
Linkeh PLS, your addiction goes too far. Get some professional help
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>>27718495
Shut up and let me ask for art for you.
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>>27718506
>implying I am the fag running the quest
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>>27718476
>>27718488
Will do, brb.
>>27718473
Works for this too.
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>>27718572
Thanks, mate.
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>>27718488
Eye color?
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>>27718626
Surprise me.
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>>27718626
Hasn't been decided.
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>>27718626
How about a light blue, like Midnight Glider?
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Who's your favorite barren mare?
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>>27718703
Yours.
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>>27718703
Chalk
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>>27718679
That's actually what I ended up going with. I colorpicked filly Luna's hair.
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Sorry it took so long. I had a hard time tracking down a non-NMM version of the Equestrian moon.
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>>27718703
The one that's just as forced a meme as this is.
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>>27718832
It's adorable mate, thanks a lot!
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>>27718832
No. That's too cute. You fucked up.
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I miss Res.
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>>27718855
>

>>27718832
I wanna snuggle it
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>>27718985

Res was a kindhearted and majestic bat. He will be missed dearly.
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>>27718847
>>27718855
>>27719010
Commander horse is not for snuggle
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>>27719011
[Kee's internally]
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>>27719031
But that's wrong. I must snuggle all of Luna's lieutenants.
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>>27718832
Wait, do you really get to overthrow the government in custos?
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>>27719011
Res was an angry zigger with bat wings
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Res pls respond
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>>27719107
No.
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>>27719107
You get to overthrow Celestia.
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>>27719190
But it seems like they were two opposing governments. Like the solarians against the lunarians.
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>>27719190
Sombra please.
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>>27719198
They are. And you get to overthrow the other one.
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>>27719198
But I thought that before Nightmare Moon rose Celestia and Luna reigned together in peace and harmony.
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>>27719225
The other what?
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>>27719107
>>27719189
>>27719190
>>27719198
>>27719214
>>27719225
>>27719252
Fixed. Does that work for everyone's interpretation of Custos now?
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>>27719256
The other government.

>>27719262
Now I want to snuggle her even more.
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>>27719262
why doesn't she have a tail?
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>>27719281
Would you believe... she offered it up as a sacrifice to Luna?

Shit, brb.
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>>27719270
What other government?
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>>27719310
The one that's run by Celestia.

Seriously, kissfag. Two princesses. Two sides of the war. Kinda the whole point of custos.
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There. Now with a tail.
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>>27719331
The what that's run by Celestia?
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>>27719384
hnnnnnnnng
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>>27719384
there is something wrong with her leg
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>>27719418
She's got four of em friend. You'll need to specify.
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>>27719422
The one that has something wrong with it.
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>>27719422
The one closest to us, her right foreleg. The shoulder area has lines that make it looks like it breaks into her torso, its sort of weird.
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>>27717116
for the anon that wanted a mottled deek.

http://imgur.com/r9fquOY
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>>27719451
Better? It looked fine to me both ways, but if anything I do is registering as off to anyone, I want to know.
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>>27719630
Yes. It's perfect now. Thank you.
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Curwhibbles when?
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>>27719707
when custos or circle return :^)
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>>27719630
Custos when?
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>>27719733
Can you please stop this shit, it wasn't funny the first time and is just piss annoying now. The QM's in Secret Club, go annoy him there if you have to but keep this shit out of this thread for fuck's sake.
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>>27719733

>>27719776
This. He's said when he's returning, fuck off.
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>>27719776
>t. thread authority
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Memes when?
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>>27719796
Fucking hell, I'd be glad if he never returned at all, but unfortunately you can't have everything
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>>27719818
>he
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>>27719776
I'm not part of secret club. When did he say he was coming back?
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>>27719861
Go and ask you shit eating retard
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>>27719871
I did ask. Right here: >>27719733
You told me to ask in the club. If I'm not part of club and if I can't ask here then how am I supposed to find out?
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new op pictures when
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>>27719861
Next week, he's moving.
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>>27719733
>>27719803
>>27719896
Never, you needy fucks.
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>>27719885
You DO know that the club is open to people, right? You'd just need to ask for links, ultrafag
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>>27719903
Thanks.
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If this is drawing request themed then I would like to some one do this for CQ, with Emerald.
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>>27720285

I would, but I think the sexulization of minors is kind of really bad.
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>>27720285
>derpi memes
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War in the North continues:
>>27720328
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>>27720285
Fucking pedos, get out of my thread.
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>>27720285
Here you go
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>>27719896
Now
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>>27720434
Kek.
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>>27720434
Oh spicy, you card.
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>>27720434
I want to be inside chooser.
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Resuming Miracle: Explosive boogaloo.
>>27720553
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New. Memes. When.
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>>27720635
>>27720635
"Barren mares" seemed to start being a thing.
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>>27719011
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>>27720635
When the old ones run out.

JAD is perfect Whispen is a pretty stallion Tara has a stupid face Hijijijijijijijijijijijijijiji I care I don't care new thred wen custos when Choosie is god Wolvan a qt Wolvan get out Doxel pls SLOW RIDE TAKE IT EASY coltquest coltquest coltquest we are not a general op is a fgt.
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>>27720796
You just gave me meme poisoning. Thanks, anon.
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>>27720796
>>27720811
Meme overdosis confirmed for real thing.
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>>27721152
Resuming Friendship maker
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>>27721257
aaand it's down
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>>27721257
>>27721300
That was fast.
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Why is 4chan so slow today? First, the pages wouldn't refresh, now the images won't load.
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>>27721472
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>>27721488
I'm interested.
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>>27721626
Dirty Work is back!
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What was the current /mlp/ archive again?
I forgot what address they're using now that dusustorage was taken from them.
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>>27721683
cuckchan.org
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>>27721685
Like seriously? I thought it was something close to their old domain. I would look it up in the archive but I currently don't know where it is, and Google seems to think that Desu and Moe are still up.
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>>27721683
Wait what? Desu is down now too? When did that happen?
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>>27721728
Last week, if I remember right.
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tfw no baron mare to cuddle with
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>>27722029
>baron
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>>27722029
>>27722045
No, we don't need another "billy".
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>>27722045
I know what I wrote
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>>27722063
Just who the hell do you think I am!
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>>27722065
Etherbreeze is gone, anon.
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>>27721728
desu isn't down, they moved domains
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Where are the gay poners
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>>27722816
all ded
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>>27722816
Do lesbians count?
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>>27722816
ded
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>>27722858
That's a huge bulge.
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>>27722855
yes
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>>27722886
Very tight dukes, and he has a boner.
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>>27722816
>>27722855
>>27722891
Any quest with a female MC
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>>27722960
>Rocky
no
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>>27722992
>Shovelsexual
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>>27722960
What about the female MCs who never had a specified sexuality?
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>>27722960
Happy Harmonica is straight and Sharpie is Asexual. We actually have a pretty nice diversity.
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>>27723120
Most likely would have been lesbians
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SJW quest when
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>>27723000
>Not into shovels
You're just mad because she isn't real.
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>>27723143
>Sharpie is Asexual
Don't trigger the straightfags.
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>>27723150
Right now.
On tumblr.
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>>27723150
Sharpie is asexual and NE had fags of all flavors.
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>>27723143
Can you name anymore?
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>>27721713
It's fucking cuckchan you retard, it's an old domain name.
>>27722310
Technically its down, since the Host boycotted him because of some CP not deleted on some board.
Hope anonpone can adapt.
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>>27722960
The MC of super is currently "mushy mushy" with a mare. Res be damned

>tfw no art of Voltage yet.
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>>27723481
Tink will get his super hot gf and Easy will get the electric chair.
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>>27723481
>someone asked for a Volt ref
>never drew her
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>>27723509
Maybe he's just drawing a very lewd picture that requires a lot of time and detail
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>>27723481
"mushy mushy" as in she has the hots for her or "mushy mushy" as in they're banging?
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>>27723601
The former. They've gone on one date so far.
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>>27723601
We've only banged our Dildo and Storm.
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>>27723613
We should have a girl's night that ends in a threesome. The power of alcohol.
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>>27723629
>getting a mare who can play with electricity drunk for sex.
Oh boy.
Though right now we have some bonding to do in the hospital.
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>>27723629
>Tink was so shit he turned Easy lesbian
lel
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>>27723646
I'm sure storm can generate some electricity too what with eating that statue and all.
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>>27723678
Gem*
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>>27720285
Hey, I saw some people shitting on you earlier in the thread. I'm sorry I missed thatkill yourself
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>>27724346
Better late than never I guess...
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>>27724368
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Fun Fun Fun is a fantastic CYOA.

If the QM's here, thank you- i don't know what it is. but this CYOA is fantastic, probably the concept.
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>>27723433
it wasn't the host that boycotted them, it was the domain registrar
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>>27724824
Agreed. If anything, I'd suggest adding some conflict sooner rather than later. Spice things up.
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>>27725073
hey, they've only started.
inb4 the MCs go and become sex slaves after a great deal of bad choices.
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>>27724824
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>>27725251
>>27715359

check it out for yourself.
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>>27724824
definitely a breath of fresh air.
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>>27724824
What's good about it?
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>>27725393
it's just- the QMs really good at SoL so far, and he has a real good knowledge of the time period he's writing about, it's lighthearted and nice, while at the same time is really neat as it is exploring topics i never thought about doing myself. plus the time period is very original when it comes to ponies being placed within it. so it's bringing a culture i've never really seen to my fingertips while being cute and lighthearted at the same time.

i really, really want to see where this is going.
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>>27718341
Are there any horror CYOAS going on right now?
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>>27725812
Frostbitten is post-apoc survival, but I'm not sure it qualifies for horror
Experimental, just like everything bath touches, seems like a close call too
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>>27725404
>lighthearted SoL
Nice
>>27725354
>cars
>ammo
>guns
And dropped.
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>>27725812
Not anymore.
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Reading the second to last thread of Miracle, I just want to praise Cammy's artistic creativity and also his playerbase for giving more in-depth suggestions than just "ok".
Especially >>27669528
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>>27726649
t-thanks
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Reminder that batfags are the cancer killing this board.
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>>27726649
I can't tell if it's ironic or not
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How are you liking that CYOA?
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>>27726918
>current year
>still reading/playing cyoas
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What was the stupidest/funniest action you suggested which threw that specific quest you played off course?
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>>27726942
Most recent thing that comes to mind is Doggo.
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>>27726942
>lick it
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>>27726697
Looking back I was probably acting impulsively as usual, I just really liked that particular reply.
But I do maintain that sometimes, players get really creative, and it's a pure bliss when that happens

>>27726942
In SWEETSQUEST ( >>27691384 ), players have been resolving most encounters (or trying to, at least) literally by casting belly rubs.
I haven't checked the thread lately, I hope it's still as fun.
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>>27726942
>What was the stupidest/funniest action you suggested which threw that specific quest you played off course?
I suggested we use a rubber band, a button, and a watch repair kit to build a reciprocating motor assembly as a means of propulsion for a helium balloon.

The quest was kind of never the same sense.
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>>27727048
*never the same since
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>>27726438
found the liberal.
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>>27726438
there's literally no problem with cars being in a CYOA set in a 1960s culture, same with firearms.

it's the whole point of the CYOA to basically make stories based on equestria if it paralleled certain time periods of culture.
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>>27727023

So it was you, you bag of dicks.
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>>27727195
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>>27726942
It didn't have that big of an impact but charge them.
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Choosie with Whispen and RITSpone op picture when.
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>>27727301
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La Marionnette D'ombre is back up.
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>>27727643
lel who cares
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>>27727643
>Cough
>>27727574
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>>27727655
Probably nobody. This is the CYOA that nobody cares about!
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Reminder
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>>27727664
it's just a meme senpai
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>>27728127
Thank you anon
Now let me give you a reminder
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>>27728250
Best family in all of cyoa.
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>>27728250
>All of them are dead
Quick, we need a inter-cyoa family picture. Which ponies have a similar color scheme?
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>>27728271
Now call me a heretic but Choosie and the MC of Frostbitten have a very similar color scheme. His cutiemark is luck based too.
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>>27728271
Lith, Lily, and Shanty
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>>27728271
Gully, Tinker, and Cold File.
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>>27728313
And Angel.
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>>27728319
Angel and Grape Vine are very similar.
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>>27728127
>tfw its been so long i forgot Treads' cutiemark
>mfw always thought that this one was just a picture of the sun but realize its a gear
I dont have a pic to accurately describe how sad i just made myself
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>>27728352
Thanks Hero
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>>27728352
I believe there's supposed to be a star inside of the gear as well.
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>>27728358
Yeah
Thanks Hero
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>>27728392
Its there
You just can't see it
Only she can
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Reminder that Treads is a kinky horse.
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>>27725812
>tfw would make a Metro CYOA as a survival horror
>tfw I fucking hate metro with ponies
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War in the North continues:
>>27728513
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Amm, I do not by any chance mean to be rude or demanding, but could you please add epilogue of YRWYS to it's nonexistent pastebins whenever you will be able to? I don't know if it counts as quest paste, if not, feel free to disregard previous request.

One fucking word
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doxel cyoa when
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>>27728656
Hopefully never.
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>>27728659
If the gods are just.
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>>27728563
I second this
I'd hate to miss the epilogue after eventually catching up with every thread

You should probably provide a link though
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>>27728710
>someone still reads it

>link
http://pastebin.com/XDSrQNZ5
There we go.
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Where were you when GS was /vg/ tank general
And Dirty job became /k/?

Do you senpai-tachi know of any CYOA's that have experimented this?
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>>27729029
Happens all the time. Tinepone was /sci/, CurseQuest was /ck/, Semantic Error even got a little /o/ in there.
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>>27729029
>Dirty job became /k/
Whoa what

>>27729061
Tinepone was kinda diy, and probably still is


Which cyoa is /x/?
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>>27729143
>Tinepone was kinda diy, and probably still is
>probably still is
Oh wait
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>>27729029
>Where were you when GS was /vg/ tank general
Enjoying GS.
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>>27729143
LOST?
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Seems War in The North has turned into Too Many Waifus.
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>>27729143
Miracle is /x/. At least normally. Right now they're building catapults.
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>>27729289
> Right now they're building catapults.
To try breaking gray goo.
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>>27729302
>gray goo
Every time I hear about that quest I come away disturbed.
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>>27729263

I might have to pick it up then :^)
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I have some free time right now and wanna draw a poner.
This IS art request edition after all. Got anyone you want drawn?
(I'll need a ref or description if possible, as I still don't know a lot of characters yet)
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>>27729492
Applejack, from Miracle.
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>>27729492
Chance from Frostbitten.

He's grey on grey, choosie style. Brilliant green eyes with a four leaf clover inside a golden horseshoe.
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>>27729492
Octavia in a pool of bandages, Scrooge McDuck style.
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>>27729492

>>27727301
>>27727327
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>>27729492
A pony from Vamp that isn't Mango
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>>27729511
Remember to make her afraid.
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>>27729511
You forgot to give him a reference anon.
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>>27729511
Dubs demand you draw the pony who kissed Mirria because she didn't die.
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>>27729513
This. Frostbitten seriously needs some art. It has like one pic.
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>>27729523
Oh right, references.

There's Crim, Mango and June on the bottom

Dust, Baron, and Patwrite on the top
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>>27729521
Super's up. Again, don't have any pictures saved on this device, but we're running anyway.
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>>27729537
This should work.
I can also give you a version without the ilumination (It gives a small coloration to everything) if you want it.
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>>27729513
Oh yeah, he has a long and messy mane and tail.
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So whatever happened to Planeswalker? I'm still waiting for that thread to show up.
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>>27729573
A HUNDRED PLOT TWISTS PER LINE
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>>27729573
It's a summer CYOA. It's probably not coming back.
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>>27729552
Meant to quote >>27729525
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>>27729573
It never comes back.
That's the ultimate plot twist.
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>>27729511

I kept it sorta sketchy it that's okay.

I'll get on Chance next.
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>>27729786
Saved.
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>>27729786
I see the appul in the hat but not the apples on the butt. There is only one explanation.

>>27729801
Nobody kissed AJ's cutie mark so it died, right?
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>>27729850

I keep seeing references to kisses and dying. What the hell happened in Miracle? Did we revive someone with a magic kiss or something?
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>>27729861
AJ and Mirria didn't die this one time so they kissed instead.
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>>27729850
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>>27729513
>>27729541

This an okay Chance?
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>>27729786
Oh and I almost forgot, any artist tag I should give you in DB? Or do you want artist: anonymous?
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>>27729861
Pull up a chair, anon. It's a tale worth the telling.

>Cammy: "You dive into the water. It is hard to breathe."
>Anon: "Did we just die?"
>Cammy: "What? No."
>(five minutes later)
>Cammy: "Mirria seems upset."
>Anon: "Is it because we kissed her?"
>Cammy: "...what?"
>Anon: "You said they didn't die so I thought that meant they kissed."

This was born the legend of kissfag.
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>>27730000

Quads confirm the legendary quality of the birth of kissfag.
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>>27729947
Nice! Only the horseshoe should be inverted and mane a bit longer. Still, thanks.
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>>27730009
>tfw you don't die because you kiss
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>>27729861
Its pixel art, two characters were on the same y axis, they faced each and their snouts overlapped. Looked like kissing to me when I was shown.
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>>27730036
I get that, we are just making lighthearted fun of it.
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>>27729516
I don't understand the reference all the way, but it seemed funny enough.

>>27729979
I'm already on DB, actually.

it's davierocket if you feel like tagging. I don't care though.
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>>27730185
She just wanted bandages...

https://www.anonpone.com/octavia/
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>>27730338
I miss cute alien dogger.
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>>27730489
I miss Sam.
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>>27730338
That's one cyoa I wish would come back.the other one is cutie clash
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>>27730338

I dont know if its just my phone or what, but this image is nearly completely black for me. Was the whole quest like this?
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>>27730659
What do you mean anon? I can quite clearly see Octavia punching one of the monsters in their face as she liberates the earth pony slaves.
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>>27730659
Yep, people mentioned it to the QM more than once.
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>>27730659
>>27730721
Cammy does the same goddamn thing.
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>>27730731
Can't tell you how many times I've put my screen at every angle trying to figure out what the fuck is going on.
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>>27730590
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Are you happy with who the MC has gotten with?
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>>27731135
He isn't with anyone yet. A bunch of waifus are competing for his affection and he's completely oblivious to their advances.
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>>27731148
Who's that?
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>>27731148
It's just like my animes!
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>>27730731
>>27730751
Oh good, I'm not the only one.
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>>27731325
Tenchi Muyo?
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>>27731337
Exactly what I was thinking.
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>>27731480
>>27731480
Lets do this again.
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>>27675931

Choo-choo muthabuckers!
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>>27731329
>>27730751
>>27730731
I utterly despise cartoon darkness where night is dark only not really. This is actually something that'll come up in-universe, in a way. The Tower is dark. Don't expect to see without a light source.
That said, turning your monitor around (My mental image is, and I don't mean this as an insult, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQGX3J6DAGw ) is pretty unnecessary. Just use a decent program to see images and increase the gamma, if you want to do that.
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>>27731532
>last thread I swear
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>>27731546
>Don't take it as an insult, I'm just calling you retarded.

I'd rather spend a few seconds fucking with my screen than go through the effort you're describing. Mainly since I pretty much never have that problem and I don't play your quest.
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>>27731960
So hostile
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The final boss is a brush. I'm not joking.
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>>27732382
Brushie?
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>>27732417

Brushie!
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>>27731546
>don't turn your monitors, but still do even more work than you should ever really have to in order to play
i'd rather just not play
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>>27732489
No quest-vital element has ever been fully hidden from perception. All you get if you want to go through the trouble is the full layout of the room (In case it, for example, has two areas separated by a wall) and maybe some decoration.
Pic related is an example, the example I posted earlier with the light layer disabled. All information the character gets, you get.
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>>27732526
There was an upper half of the room? I couldn't see that at all in the first picture.
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>>27732791
Neither could AJ.
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>>27730338
Reminder that at one point, there was a healing potion that we were intended to find.

I don't have the picture, but I distinctly remember someone pointing it out.
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>>27732802
It was in a box we never saw, because it was out of frame.

The QM wanted us to 'search further' or something
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Do we know when the Admin will be back for a move of the links to >cuckchan?
Or maybe he waits to see if they move to a different name.
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>>27733293
Are you talking about amm? Vacation right now
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>>27733331
Yeah,forgot his name.
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Which cyoa pony would you babysit as a filly/colt
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>>27733693
I know who I wouldn't.

Bottlecap and Harmony. Cap would be running around trying to eat dangerous shit and getting into stuff and Harmony would likely end up hurting herself by doing something stupid.
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I want to cum inside Mojo
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>>27732796
Then why include its existence at all in the first place?
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>>27734029
>Harmony
who
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>>27734315
Bard "Blord" Quest
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>>27734325
the trap?
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>>27734254
If I'm not mistaken that room was seen in Rarity's side mission.
The hole in the ceiling is the one she fell through.
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Did you do fun things?
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>>27734709
>1917 + 99
>having fun
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>>27734709
>Never coming back ever
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>>27734719
Purple pls. You're dead.
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>>27734746
I shouldn't be that obvious outside muh sekrit.
Am I still banned?
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>>27734709
4legged seapones
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>>27734802
neuro pls
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wolvan a qt
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Hey guys, jut a note, I'll be able to run tomorrow. I'm not sure if it'll be a long session or not, probably not, but still.
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>>27735000
I post just to let you know I'm moderately happy you will run.
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>>27735007
I am happy too.
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>>27735049

I am extremely saddened and angry. Not at you though, just in general. Good luck with your session.
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>>27735076
Brexit?
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>>27735076
I am extremely sad too. Wanna sing sad songs together?
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>>27734447

the reverse trap aka best kind
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>>27733693
Peppermint
She's pretty much mature enough to take care of herself.
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I want to shave Whispen's legs.
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I want to hug a player.
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>>27735911
that's gay
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>>27736052
hugs are not gay, anon
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>>27735911
Don't distract me while I'm shitposting.
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>>27735911
Fuck you,
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>>27735600
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>>27736168
>droids
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Might be able to run tomorrow.
No promises though.
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>>27736304
>spoiler
Okay. Hope you can make it.
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>>27736168
>that fuckin' Digimon-ass looking Gar from H&B Guy

I still find it hilarious.
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War in the north horse, because Fins deserves more fanart.
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>>27736451
No he doesnts
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>>27736451
That's a handsome looking stallion but I'm not sure if like those colors.
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>>27736561
colors are hard
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>>27736655
Swc confirmed
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>>27736561
It's cause the colors are actual vomit. Poners should be bright.
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and we are back!
>>27715359
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>>27736451
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>>27736716
Maybe the player who suggested the color scheme for Knit plays Curse.
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>>27736686
>bright colours
Fucking kill yourself.
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>>27736730
Or maybe Knit is a Changling?
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>>27736781
Never mind how 80% of the ponies in the show are brightly colored, let's make everyone dreary and bland.

Or white coat with a yellow mane. Because boring > actual creativity.
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>>27736809
I like not being confined to the warm end of the spectrum, colors can tell a lot about characters, and having darker tones opens for more possibilities.
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>>27736827
Edgy pones?
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War in the North continues:
>>27736847
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>>27736827
I'm not saying you can't have darker colors, even the show has some darker colored ponies, but >>27736451's color scheme is actual vomit.

I think most of the time, people play it too safe when designing a pony. They're afraid to make it something that'll stand out and be called 'wow special snowflake shit oc,' hence white coat, blond mane, or whatever. I'm not saying you always have to be bright one hundred percent of the time, but ponies are colorful, not drab, blah color schemes.
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>>27736676

I will confirm or deny nothing.
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>>27736168
Who's Han?
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>>27736676
>>27736716

I am not responsible for Fin's horse colours, although the similarity to Basil is striking.

Do you think I can sue?
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>>27736861
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>>27736866
Han wasn't in that scene, dingus.
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>>27736932
So?
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>>27736917
>The Money Store
>Exmilitary
>Richard D. James
>An Empty Bliss Beyond This World
>BoC
When did /mu/ get here?
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>>27736953
When you showed up.
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>>27734765
you weren't banned in the first place, fag. Get your arse back in here
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>>27737119
Resuming Heart of Iron
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>>27736866
This slave owning nigga!
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>>27736904
Hey speaking of horse colors, I've noticed that Lithy's keep changing. Which do you prefer, or is it still undetermined?

Muted Lithy...
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>>27737145
...Or bright blue headed Lithy

I think I answered my own question. Bright blue Lithy is older/and done by other artists
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>>27736904
I bet they're related. Oh hey, they can be our new inter-cyoa family!
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>>27737224
Can we name all of the inter-cyoa families?
Can we think of any that have yet to be discovered?
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>>27737280
The only one that's stuck is Gar, Treads, and Blitz. I think Knit and Basil works bcause Basil is half changling and doesn't remember her family.
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>>27737145

I think pic related is the most recent Lithy I've made, and I dont think I'm gonna change her colours any further.
Basil I actually might destaturate a little bit.
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>>27737280
Nina Rauser, shop-pone from Foal Quest and Butternut Dubs.

Speaking of cross-CYOA stuff, can we try placing them all into a convoluted time-line again? That was fun the last few times.
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What about a CYOA based on "The Nightman Cometh"?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OR4zefzP7d0#t=317.127687
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>>27737835
What about it?
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Tell me why I should care about your CYOA?
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>dirty work died
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>>27738012
I won't slap your waifu's ass if you do it.
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>>27738012
Because you're not Spitfire.
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>>27738012
It has art :^)
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>>27738012
Because despite its failings in some regards the players say it's charming, so your caring of the quest may directly enhance your happiness if it's the kinda thing your into.
Though if that answer isn't meme enough for you then.
baecus is best qwest :^)
BIG
SUPER
HOT
SUCC
kekekek
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>>27738250
>SUPER
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>>27738169
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>>27738169
This had art.
Doesn't mean it was good.
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>>27738348
>HOT
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>>27738386
>SUCC
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>>27738421
>kekekek
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Rubber duckies are for sexual
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>>27738452
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>>27738012
You shouldn't
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Someone should run Vampony.
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>QMs still all busy playing D&D.
>They have another session tomorrow.

This isn't fair. I want them to come home to us.
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>>27738625
Mango's too busy DMing our session right now, sorry
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>>27738761
>implying every single qm will be doing that shit
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>>27738772
what about fruit?
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>>27738761
Player uprising when?
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>>27738772
That's it, someone give me the link to secret club. so I can ask them if I can play
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>>27738854
0nJocSHiijFGPRP2
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>>27738761
>QMs still all busy playing D&D.
Inept isn't. :^)
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>QMs DnD in sekrit club
>QMs don't care about their players or their CYOAs anymore
>QMs just abandon their CYOAs in favor of DND sessions
>QMs stop being QMs and just DnD players
>CYOAs in general just die because all of the QMs are too busy playing DnD
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>>27738761
>>27738772
"Sekrit Club isn't bad", they said.
"It's just a harmless chat", they said.
"You're all being stupid", they said.
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>>27738931
>this once a week thing where barely anything gets done and required planning is at a minimum totally interferes with them running the other six days of the week
Keep on shitposting, friend
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>>27738931
>>27738934
>QM's aren't allowed to do anything other than run their quest.
>QM's need to spend every second of free time questing
>QM's aren't allowed to do what they want.
FTFY.
Seriously, though. Give them some space. They are allowed to have fun.
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>>27738997
>>27739049
Most of it is just overreacting for the hell of it.
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>>27739073
Yea, that's what we do here, calm down. What I actually think about them playing DnD it's cute, I hope those nerds have fun
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>>27738997
>>27739049
QMs spotted
pls come back
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>>27739182
But I ran today.
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>>27739195
I drove today
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>>27739144
Fucking choking.
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>>27739203
I ate today
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>>27739215
>we're never getting our long hair again
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Desustorage links are now updated to cuckchan. If anyone notices links that still link to the desustorage domain please tell me.

>>27728563
Pastebins, much like fanart, can be user submitted. I'm not a requirement in the process. Regardless, it's there and the last post of YRWYS is now a link to it. I also cleaned out the last few threads, so if you're interested in the stats at all they're locked in.

I'd also like to remind everyone that I don't read every post in /cyoa/ so I'm likely to miss things like this. If you want to make sure you get my attention about something and that I'll remember to do it, submit a report or use the contact page. The red number doesn't go away until I actively do something about it, which is why it's better than PMs on Discord or posts here.

I'll still answer other methods of contact of course.
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>>27739299
And trip.
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>>27739331
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>>27739370
PLOT
L
O
T
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>>27739370
This is what happens when you let a hornhead off the leash.
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>>27739370
God damn. That sounds....fun?
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>>27739370
Way to make me nope.
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>>27739370
I wonder if birthday candles killed his father.
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>>27739470
I wouldn't be surprised, birthday candles is a bad poner.
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>>27739470
And his mother. Then he went on to be a night guard.
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>>27739370
holy shit
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>>27739370
Bath is going to have to step up his game.
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Can this be a /cyoag/ header?
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>>27738625
>>27738761
>>27738772
Sorry, you're right.

I really like D&D and I always wanted to play a pone version of it. I even homebrewed a bunch of shit for our session.

I got kinda excited about it and I thought I was going to hand off Vamp to Fruit. That's not exactly gonna happen (I'd rather Fruit explain it but the skinny is that he doesn't want to fully take over.) I had kinda stopped planning with Vamp, so I need to get back into the swing of things.

I plan to start a new thread Tuesday, so look out for it.
I hate asking this, but if someone would do some line art for a Vamp OP that would be dandy. I can color it, but I can't draw for shit.
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>>27739785
Okay I guess
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How many plot twists per line would an ace attorney-esque cyoa have?
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>>27739818
At least 291
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You guys heard that JAD will continue as a sekrit Club only D&D game right?
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>>27739818
The average between Unique and Planeswalker.
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>>27739832
Neato, I wanna play as Wispy.
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WARNING
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>>27739899
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uggrc_rcpm0
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>>27739736
Wait shit, I have art already, at least for this thread. M-more can't hurt right?
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>>27739370
WEW
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Just one question before I go to bed. Should I include sky pirates or nah?
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>>27740112
LAD
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>>27739370
>starts new thread
>doesn't run
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>>27740173
>Not starting your thread off with a full session.
Amateur QM
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>>27740173
THE ULTIMATE PLOT TWIST
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>>27718449

Not that Anon, but here:

1. Learn to draw circles, then rectangles, then triangles.

2. Learn to look at any figure ( in this case a Pony ) and break it apart in to the utmost simplest shapes. See all the circles, triangles, and lines that make it up.

3. Try to better distinguish a particular style, and then mimic it. ( in other words, the art style of MLP doesn't look like the artstyle of Sea Lab 2021 ).

4. Draw the shapes on the paper in the way you want, as well as in the pose you want.

5. Fill in details around the shapes.

6. Erase the shapes leaving only the details.

7. Pen the important lines, and then color it in.

Congrats, you now know how to pony.
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>>27740001
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>>27740203
>how to draw
Allow me to offer a counterpoint.
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Remember that combat test I ran with Cold File, Spearmint, Nadine and numbers!? No?
Well I finally finished the Lewd reward for winning that.

http://imgur.com/a/gIeug
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>>27738359
I loved pony simulator...
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>>27739832

I didn't say that was a sure thing, just that I was considering it as an alternative since I can't make the time commitments for a full-blown CYOA.
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>>27740408
You mean that number heavy thing that made me afraid to play your quests?
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>>27740410

good, because a faggot like you will probably end up in the next one somehow
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>>27740410
it will be back
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>>27740481
Yeah, that one that played nothing like my quests. Cause that's it!
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Post yfw inept is dead.
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>>27740843
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>>27740843
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>>27739299
Thank you very much Amm. I see it's now tagged as complete instead of cancelled. Heartwarming.

>>27737086
Well then, I don't know why I was convinced otherwise.
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>>27741223
get the fuck back in the club you shitter, you were pretty cool we miss you. And your getting triggered by >hybrids
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So I found out I had a couple of cyoa threads still downloaded on my HDD.
Looking back at a thread from May last year, things didn't change all that much. I think the only most notable difference was that there was just a tiny bit more collaborative work, and maybe pitch/discuss more ideas at a time.
Like, there would be a random post about an idea, and then 2 or 3 anons would reply to it specifically. Nowadays, there's one Anon asking one question to everyone, and a batch of ten replies to that specific post. I'm not sure if one method is really better than the other.

There was a good deal of memeing, things didn't actually change too much in that regard. The memes were just less centralized around Choosie, Whispen and bats.
>Can I give you consolation sex if I get you a bear?

I also found a more in-depth critique of Shooting Stars. I remember we had someone do that for a couple of cyoas maybe a month ago or two. If someone could muster the effort to do that for Frostbitten, Planeswalker, or Heart of Iron, that would be cool.

Here's the thread I had saved. There's a gigantic red anon hiding in the pictures, can you find it? http://cuckchan.org/mlp/thread/23023812

Hey let's discuss here what we should do when the next thread start. There was this Lord's Supper thing that never really took off. If nobody got the original template, I'll dig up something and post it here later today.
Does Planeswalker have a drawfag or fanart yet?
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>>27740843
Who?
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>>27741527
Who are you?
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>>27741527
Ah, found it
http://cuckchan.org/mlp/thread/27176487/#27187563

>>27741650
I'm Anon
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>>27740408
At least Nadine got some. Good for her.
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>>27741673
:3
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>>27741527
Some of those reviews for the newest cyoas that seem to be sticking around would be great. The FFF cyoa escpecially. He has solid and enjoyable characters but it's very clear he's never run nor read any other cyoa. With some refinements FFF would be amazing.
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______ Quest when?
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>>27741726
When _________
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>Hijack
>-51d
Right
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>>27741527
>that was the thread where I ruined the CYOA title card
>tfw I still have the printed out version and packed it into a box a few days ago
That's the good kind of nostalgia
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>>27741698
It's shit
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>>27742030
I miss slutbat.
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>>27742352
Me too Anon.
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>>27741698
>Some of those reviews for the newest cyoas that seem to be sticking around would be great.
Heart of Iron is quite good and I enjoy it.
FFF is almost as good and is very enjoyable too.
The frostbite/numb thing didn't really grab me, but hope other people enjoy it.
The planeswalker cyoa rubbed me the wrong way. Don't really care for the gm style or how he handled chargen.
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>>27742428
>Heart of Iron is quite good and I enjoy it.
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>>27742508
>muh opinion is better than yours
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>>27741698
Heart of Iron is pretty neat so far. It's not really a critique, since it's still the beginning, but I'd like to see the scope of the story expand a bit. So far we've interacted with Twilight, Choosie, Discord, and the ponies that made us. I'd like to see more interactions, have the MC challenged more. Other than some foreboding mothpony, there hasn't really been much conflict, apart from the small bit with Gear Grind.
Marionette CYOA isn't my thing. I know it's a buzzword, but it's simply too edgy for my tastes. The brooding character that was Mohammad rubbed me in all the wrong ways, the first encounter involved a pony getting their flesh and bones melted, and the writing style wasn't that interesting. Unfortunately, it reads like a 13-year old's first fanfic.
It did update fast, which was nice.
Planeswalker just wasn't good, and the reasons have been documented in previous threads.
Frostbite thing didn't seem that interesting to me. There wasn't anything that grabbed me or that made me feel like it was worth sticking with, so I dropped it pretty fast.
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>>27741698
Haven't caught up on the second thread, but I think Planeswalker can be a good exploration/adventure cyoa. I know nothing about the system he's using, but the concept of exploring universes and different types of magic sounds neat. I liked the desert thing.
The QM forcing a backstory upon us is a huge drawback though. That 3 day coma ending up in destroying our hometown, that's bullshit and everyone knows it. But hey, the QM said we could revert it, right? I'm keeping my hopes up, maybe something nice will happen. And if not, well, at least I get a greentext out of it. It's something.

I like the setting of Frostbitten so far, too.
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>>27742508
I just wanted to let you know that posting that Autumn made me feel happy. Thank you.
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>>27742705
SPES?
When's your next cyoa?
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>>27742727
>SPES
>Making a CYOA
Good one. He's just planning characters forever.
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>>27742552
I thank you for the review of my CYOA. I will admit that it could be better and I'm trying to fix Mohammed's character as well as encounters to be less one sided.
And, the story is obviously written like a 13-year old's first fic. It isn't my first fic and definitely better than the first fic I posted on Fimfiction as I think I have people that actually like it. And, the updates are the only thing going for it as I am a guy that has nothing better to do with his life than sit in front of computer and do nothing.

I thank you for the criticism, so I can write the CYOA better though I'm not sure if that was the original intention. Thanks anyway!
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Not any of the newer ones, but I recently had time to read up on a few of the longer older ones I've been meaning to get to, so here's a few reviews. Keep in mind that this is reading, not playing.
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>>27742794

Super Pony: https://www.anonpone.com/capeshit/
The setting is the comic book world from that one episode. The world is chock full of heroes and villains with super powers, to the point where they're professions. From lowly muggers to insane super villains, from bubble toting goodie two shoes to the Power Ponies themselves. Stupid puns rule the city uncontested.

Easy Ride was just an average mare working as a mechanic in a shop when a super busted in and started wrecking the place. As any good natured mare would do she busted their face in. Turns out, that particular super was a hero. By the end of the next day she's in jail. Once out she swallows some magic unicorn essence, becomes Nicholas Cage and starts beating up supers, villain or hero as she feels like, all the time keeping an eye out for the normal citizens. Mistakes are made, victories are had, mares are made out with.

The quest was hijacked after the second thread 16 posts in out of 870, so while the summary includes that, the critique doesn't.

The writing is overall pretty good. The QM knows how to prompt and how to loosely direct players without shoving them along, so the story progresses at a nice clip and doesn't bog down anywhere. There's minimal spelling/grammar errors. Player commands are integrated smoothly with little backlash. The plot and world are coherent and are as detailed as they need to be. The characters are well written and there are attempts to avoid the out-of-sight non-existence syndrome, though whether it succeeds is questionable.

The only real criticism I have to levy against it is that the current arc has an unfocused/uncertain tone, which makes sense for where the character is at/was at, but is sticking around for a bit too long.

Aside from that if you want a mixture of action and SoL with super hero tropes sprinkled on top then Super Pony might be for you.
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How long should a single session last?
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>>27742861
3 to 6 hours.
But really, anything goes as long as you stick to a schedule.
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>>27742861
37 hours a day.
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>>27742861
3-6 hours.
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>>27742861
at least 1
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>>27742861
I prefer long sessions with slower updates to short sessions with quick updates, because I work and don't want to miss things. Just my personal opinion, though.
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>>27742941
3 hours with frequent updates and 5-6h if the QM can't get out more than 1 update per our or so.
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>>27742803

Good review Anon.

Can we get one for tine pone now that it is basically finished.
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>>27743135
What's a "frequent" update?
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>>27742803
You forgot about the most important thing:

SUPER
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>>27743162

HOT
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Big mares? More like big shits.
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>>27742861
Long enough to feel like there's been progress, however minor. How long that is depends on your writing speed and how far you go with each update. If you go for an hour or two and players feel like something happened, they'll be satisfied. If you go for 12 hours and nothing happens they'll be glum or bored.
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>>27743157
Anything less than 30 minutes.
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>>27732597
This guy in Super asked me for a Volt. Figured I'd post it here since it's Art Request edition.
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>>27743185
And another with her hair unelectrified. Easy should waifu this horse.
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>>27743185
>>27743191
Looks awesome as always, Dox. Thank you so much!
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>>27743185
SUPER
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>>27743204
LIGHTNING
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>>27743209
JIGGAWATTS
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>>27743185
>>27743191
Had to double take and make sure it wasn't Treads.
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>>27743191
Volt a qt
>>27743185
Volt a dangerous qt
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>>27743185
Her cutie mark only has four bolts.
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>>27743224
Another member of the family, I guess.
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>>27743272
What the hell?

>>27743233
Fixed.
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>>27743224
There are a lot of light yellow ponies.
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>>27743185
>>27743191
Basd
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>>27743191
This pony is making me feel things.
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>>27741698
>Heart of Iron
Entertaining, the robot MC feels so refreshing.

>Frostbitten
Probably enjoying this one the most so far. It read weirdly at first, still does at times. But I have been hooked. Chance and Misty have fun chemistry.

>FFF I hope it's not rude to say I prefer "Good Vibrations"
Surprisingly interesting. There's potential, but I'm still waiting to see some conflict. I'm quite anxious to see how the QM kicks things off.

>Marionette
I was prepared for enough edge to cut through diamond like butter. Still, it feels like pricking my fingertips trying to type a reply when shit goes sideways. I hardly know where to start with fixing up.

I like the MC and her companion. This would be a lot more enjoyable, if not one of my favorites, if it weren't for the gore.
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>>27743146
I haven't read a significant amount of it so any review I'd give would be superficial and more of a review of Inept than anything.
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>>27743596
Forgot Planeswalker. Need to catch up, from what I read it felt haphazard and the pacing was pretty fast. Hard to form any sort of interest in the characters or situation that way.

As for Potion, it's cute, but why the fuck did the QM making a new thread for the second session, while the first is still alive?
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>>27743638
Potion QM is the newest of newfags, or makes us think so.
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>>27743638
>why the fuck did the QM making a new thread for the second session, while the first is still alive?
What
Is he a complete newfag or what
That probably won't make me enjoy the quest any less, but that QM lost some respect from me
Not that I'm particularly important, but yeah you get the idea
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If I do run today, it's gonna be quite a bit later than usual.
Sorry about that.
>>27729947
Forgot to comment on this.
This is great, even though I imagined his colors being a bit lighter. Nice touch with the scarf.
Thanks.
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>>27743185
>>27743191
>Aryan pony #99999
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>>27743750
>yellow and yellow
>aryan
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>>27743780
>""""yellow""""
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>>27743798
Yeah, Volt is yellow. What's your point?
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>>27743823
White people ain't white either champ.
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>>27743885
>GM says character is yellow
>"well then obviously she isn't yellow"
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>>27743908
>""""yellow""""
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Yellows are sub-pon trash
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>>27720434
This is gonna be the next OP, right?
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Resuming Miracle: El boogaloo de los extranjeros.
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>>27743986
At least she's not a pinhead.
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>>27744090
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>>27744062
Cammy can you give me a tldr of your quest. It looks like it's become the kinda high concept fantasy I dig. naw ill catch up at anonpone
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>>27744101
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>>27744113
Your too late!
I'm so sorry.
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No one make a new thread! I wish to be free once more! Please!
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>>27744134

Okay. Gimp, don't you dare start a new thread or I swear I will drop your quest.
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>>27744134
You will never be free.
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>>27744134
You have no power here!
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>>27744062
Fuck, forgot link >>27744050
>>27744106
>TL;DR
I've had a pastebin in mind for a long time, but the TL;DR would invoke TL;DR from people.
Pic related is a small part of Miracle, for example.
But you could pick it up now, since we are at a flashback that doesn't really require previous knowledge and is the high fantasy you are probably seeing. I could write a tl;dr of that if you wanted me to.
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>>27744175
Thanks, I think it's best played, a tldr seems to defeat the point. I'll catch up at anonpone, I was playing the first thread but got distracted and accidentally droped it. Cause muh ADD, not the quest.
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>>27744134
>>27744147
Maybe if someone draws Zero he'll let us go
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>>27744307
Here we go.
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>>27744325
But someone did...
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>>27744400
And I enjoy that someone did.

>>27744547
Speaking of. Live again.
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>>27744552
make a new thread fucker
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>>27744556
No, don't.
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>>27744464
Got all afternoon to spill some spaghetti. Come for the hype, stay for the disappointment.
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>>27744552
Ah, figured this was just a random roboponer other than Zero due to the style difference
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>>27744572
It's the snoot

>>27744556
>>27744601
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>>27744606

Nooooooooo
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Last for you have a bland waifu
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>>27744730
Last for you all have great waifus and to hell with anyone who says differently.
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>>27744738
Thanks dox.
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>>27744738
Last for kill yourself.
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Last for nothing in particular.
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Last for questing with ponies
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Last for not actually last.
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>>27744908
Last for unrelated shitpost from a mobile.
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>>27744945
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Last for pretty husbandos and handsome waifus
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>>27745290
You're not last anymore.
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