FOE: A Post-Nuclear Pony Thread

Tale x Snapple x Bestprisoner 3some when?

>>27670680
Or best prisoner wrapping her leash around Crafter's hoof and waggling her eyebrows?

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Reminder that the Enclave deserved Pip's retribution for an unwarranted exterminatus.

>>27670666
Based Satan Edition

>>27670680
>>27670697
Depends on if the Legion of exemplary politics allows one, and I finish the set of fics I have laid out before myself.

You know I wonder,
They said they were envoys from the Enclave, scouts meant to relay back to command intel.
This is odd as it means they forgot the SPP over Neighson and the reveal of them being lied to.
So was it just bluster to try and save the buck's life?
Or do the two not get that they are already exiled?


Also, dammit Fade, you killed all the pleasure slaves, now the pegasi or going to give you no peace when it comes that time of month.

>"This is an emergency message to all Commonwealth army soldiers. Emergency protocols One-Seven-Echo-Charlie-Niner are in effect. If you are in distress, please proceed to the south Boston military checkpoint for aid. Coordinates are available in your Emergency Handbook. This checkpoint has been designated as a safehouse in case of enemy invasion, and is currently stocked with additional food, water, and ammunition. This safehouse is for military personnel only. Citizens, including non-military family members, will be turned away for matters of national safety. This message will repeat."

>>27670723
Actually, as the Enclave were an established polity, with a direct descent chain from Equestria, it means they are a sovereign nation.
Littlepip is not a nation, in fact she arguably lacks a citizenship due to her government ceasing.
As such, Littlepip is nothing more than a terrorist.

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>>27671038
How high are we going here?

Alluh akabr levels or I do it for the greater good?

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Oh yeah. Drew a horse nobody wanted or asked for. But here it is anyways. https://www.derpibooru.org/1179879
It's lewd

>>27671043
Ted Kazinski.

She believed society exceeded her views on how it should be, and therefore tore it down.
She did not have a higher calling that would make her for the greater good, nor did she have an established culture she would replace it with under Celestia Snackbar.

She was nothing more than a brain damaged faggot that thought she knew it all while pissing her life away in seclusion, then got upset from her homolove going unreturned.

As well, she sought the assassination, and did so, of multiple leaders of new polities with the sole purpose of destabilizing the system that allowed ponies to exceed their primitive roots.

>>27671043
She's just a lone wolf, a crazed single mare who needs therapy and a stallion to love her.

>>27671059
>Snake?
>Snake!
>Quickly, get on the horse!
Gurgling horse noises of indignation
>Right, uh run!

>>27671059
Kale fucking pls.

Miss Stablepony lewd when?

>>27671059
I'd nom on her lake.
Ghoul mares are the best!

>>27671038
The Enclave renounced their ties to Equestria when they closed the sky.

>>27671070

Oh yeah I actually sketched out another stable horse comic thing like.. half a year ago. I'm still sorta going to finish it and have couple more in my mind.

Buut not making any promises.

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>>27671082
Well duh?

Equestria is a sovereign monarchy with no heirs. As both rulers died, the Grand Pegasus Enclave did the proper job in closing the sky to look after its citizens.

This is the advantage of a republic, we have a long chain of succession that includes nongovernment, nonhvts in it.

>>27671087
OMG PLS FINISH

I NEED MORE OF MY WAIFU

http://www.nexusmods.com/fallout4/mods/660/?

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If any of you fags are brave/stupid enough to Crystal Mountain, I'll be seeing you there.

>>27671172
finish your commissions you lazy shit

>>27671172
So why did you get a fud shit 1911 and not a nice S&W 9mm shield?

>>27671185
Utah tradition.

>>27670666
Lewd loving lesbians lavish lusty lecherous looks, letting lackwitz liftoff languishly learning lovely limmericks.

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What would be good ways to add the sort of horror that comes from this pic to a fic?

>>27668846
So who are Clipped Wings, Focal Length, and Icepick?

>>27671445
Littlepip magic goes wrong, she grows
Lewd unwilling macro stuff happens as she enters heat
Giant horse vagoo doesn't sound as fun when thr chance of being crushed to death is very real

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>>27671471
>Clipped Wings
This butthorse.

>>27671561
But why is he a slave, and Enclave birdie, and with this Steel Ranger pony populating Derpy now?
If he is from the latex stable, how does he get out, or is this before he gets in?

Who is Focal Length still?

I have many questions, biggest being:
Is this supposed to be lewd or not?
I mean they have a sentence of sex at the end, but the food is described a bit. Is it a feeding fetish fic?

>>27671596
The answers to most of those questions are "idfk nymph wrote it" but the questions I can answer are
A. the latex stable isn't really designed to make sense, that's just the only picture I have to hand that's not anthro and not porn (though I could always have linked https://derpibooru.org/tags/oc-colon-clipped+wings )
2. the Enclave-turned-slave is an excuse backstory for having a pegoose running around whose occupation is basically sex.

>>27671633
Why do you let nymph write stuff then?

>>27671633
Well I can't bloody well stop him, can I?

>>27671929
you could at least try god damn it.

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Enclave waifu in casual wear bump

>>27671929
Isn't he Canadian?
Just say no next time he asks.

>>27670666
Hail Satan!

Well in true RP fashion, Snap Roll wants to go find that griffon and flex her moral muscle because he fugged the local mares with impunity.

How strange that the OP pic is exactly what she needs.

>>27673664
Maybe the griffon will have a trick and help her with that.

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>>27670666
>>27673664
HAIL SATAN!!!

Hey Review Anon, wanna read this one?
https://derpibooru.org/1180312?scope=scpea476352960004f836301b650d79b3dce62b943f0

>>27673694
He could help both her AND Tailwind!
Never having a foal in the shared relationship problem, SOLVED

>>27673664
Now now, what she needs in the OP pic is a belly rub.

>>27673721
Killing him is too good, he must suffer as he gave.
Therefore, Fade must bugger his bumhole until it burns and he bellows boisterously.

>>27673712
Which one is Review anon?
We have several...

>>27673844
any of them

Preferably Readfag cus he's marginally entertaining.

>>27673712
....I think it says Devils?

>>27673953
it does. I check the derpi page.

>>27673953
Yep! It says devil(s).
I'd say give it a read, it has only like... two chapters and hasn't been updated in a year but, the author has said lately it will get updated.

>>27673986
>Hasn't been update in a year
Pfft, ha.

>>27673894
What does it take to be entertaining?

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>>27672537
I like what nymph writes.

>>27674002
Well, he made and uploaded that cover art recently so.

Since all the review fags seem asleep. Or too busy capping in Nymph's case, I'll give it a whirl.

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Hey guys,

I just wanna fullheartedly recommend this fic.
Having read about half of it so far I really love the characters and the way the adventure has gone so far.

MC's a gunslinging bitch of a bounty hunter, with a bumbling yet (in his own way) competent companion, indebted to her and dragged along to make himself useful.

It's already a complete fic but if anybody's looking for reading material between updates of our thread favorites, I'd recommend it for a read.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/124940

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>>27671596
Focal Length is my OC for a PnP campaign I'm doing. I'm thinking of using him in a future story, I'm not sure yet.

As the other anon said, I didn't want to stop Nymph, so don't take his Focal Length as what my Focal Length is. He essentially just used the name and description. What I have planned for Focal is very different.

>>27674333
>capping
I'm a bit scared to ask, but what?

>>27671295
How does Utah treat the blacks?

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>>27674584
>>27671929
>>27672537
>>27671714

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>>27675330
What blacks?

>>27675760
Whatever little you have in your state.

>>27675760
The standard Mormon geeks who spend too much time watching Battlestar Galactica the original with the flying motorcycles before taking a fateful step outside.


Alternately, those responsible for the out of wedlock childs.

>>27670666
>>>27675760
You mean the handful of Africans on some sort of business school or diplomatic trip?

The American nig is a rare sight here.

>>27675861
>The American nig is a rare sight
Good because I'm a massive oreo.

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>>27671471

>>27676050
Wait if she is like pure heterosexual, then how does that work for perving on gay stallions?

>>27674471
I second this story. Gamma is a pretty good author and this story is pretty good. You'll be rooting for the protags after a short while.

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>>27676076
She likes watching two males go at it. Lot's of straight men love watching lesbians go at it. The exact same thing.

>>27676151
I'm guessing you approve of nymph for the implied sex in this fic?
Or is it you wanted a story to go with the 55 submissions you have on Trixiebooru?

She looks like a wingless Derpi.

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>>27676224
I don't particularly care about the implied sex, I'm fine with it. A cameo is a cameo.

She has a similar colour scheme, dissimilar everything else.

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Tfw all my productivty has stopped thanks to vr
It was worth it, hopefully we get some vr pone booping sims

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>>27670666

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Ok, simple answers.

The fic was meant to be a colt cuddler fic. It just went places and had a lot less cuddling than I had thought.
Lesson 1.
Cuddling is hard if you don't have furniture.

The food focus was supposed to just be a way to chat, given previous points on talking head syndrome.

The backstories were made with contact from the owners, CaptainHoers and Focal Length.
These backstories are preliminary, the ideas made and were provided by them in a general sense.
THeir statements here are a bit odd, given this.
Lesson 2:
People seem to be cagey on their OCs, getting them on record is good.

The lack of sex was on purpose.
I did not want to write a sex fic, and if I actually hold to what I have going on, the next entry to the smut doc will be a long ways off.
This isn't something bad, I just want to be known for more than porn.
Mostly because I actually paid to register my trip as a DNS record, so I am now stuck with it.
Lesson 3:
Keep everything separate, even your name

So really all this was was a simple writing thing I made for the IRC, and it made me happy with that.
Which is really what counts, seeing as nobody is paying me for this.

Like really, its a bit awkward when I look at people doing commissions and then see what I've done.

So who wants to read about wasteland foxy boxing?

>>27677312
foxy boxing?

>>27676224
Maybe if she and ghoul Ditzy met, her smooth coat and undamaged mane, Ditzy's everything else would merge into showstyle Derpy in a matter-antimatter elimination of Icepick and Ditzy!

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sleepy bump

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Did any of you guys pick up pic related?

>>27678791
I want to, but
>$350
J U S T

>>27676128
and in more /foe/ ish terms, hat horsey is both pretty and pretty waifuable

>>27678791
Too 'spensive.
And I'm happy with the Pipboy app.
Haven't used said app much though, I've gone back to FNV in the meantime.

>>27677583
Sexy and lewd girl on girl wrestling.
Involves far more trying to make the other one cum than trying to knock them out.

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Steel Ranger stallion butt bump.

>>27679498
Looks like a kitty.

>>27679661
What is she playing?

>>27679679
Velvet remedy simulator With lewd mods

>>27679498
That poni isn't a steel ranger, he's an Applejack ranger

>>27679787
Close enough

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>>27679475
This intrigues me and I wish to read your publications.

>>27679475
This should be introduced as a martial art to make this the standard form of combat in the wasteland!

>Fight for dominance, and reconcile by getting to know each other rather intimately afterwards

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>>27660086
>>27660132
>>27660145
>>27660156
>>27660164
>>27660171
>>27660175
>>27660187

>>27680033
Its like a good hate rape, but with fewer broken bones.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NMLttzndL1dnyM707KV_fr5IDy0O-hAIKL8OCQRlQxc/edit

>>27680097
is that dog really looking down the scope or just sniffing his buddies' gun?

>>27680864
Think of it as interrogation, interrupted with kisses and teasing arguments about whose place the two of them will go to for the night.

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WAKE UP!

>>27682066
SHUT UP MOM

GOD

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plushies

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>>27682820
Pip and Blood plushies that can be velcroed together in various poses when?

>>27683045
bottleguy pls

>Day 18 of your quarterly trip to the big shithole down the road to trade for supplies and bring caps back home
>It took 18 days instead of the normal 12 because the Wasteland seems to hate you all of the sudden
>Raiders
>Critters
>A fucking storm in the middle of the goddess damned desert
>Must be those fucking turkeys up in their clouds trying to drown you
>Assholes
>Finally get to the gate with your exhausted crew
>Doormare is a comeplete bitch with less than a few brain cells to rub together
>Wanna shoot that bitch in her fuckin' mouth
>Don't do it because the stallion with the LMG nearby is giving you a dirty look
>Damn mercs around here are barely more than raiders paid to "behave"
>Finally get past checks and head to a barn to park the brahmin
>Have to leave an extra guard there because they don't trust the looks they've been getting from the locals
>Of course the extra guard is pissed because he wanted to get some R&R for watching the brahmin during the night
>Placate the whiny bitch with promises of liquor
>Head over to the local watering hole
>It smells like piss in there
>Every time
>Book a room and let the last two fuckers you pay too much go get some rest
>Take a seat at the bar
>Spend precious caps buying a bottle of cheap vodka
>Then a few more buying a sizable glass of whiskey for yourself
>Tomorrow better sell me out all your inventory or you're gonna be pissed
>Fuck, you're already pissed
>Down huge gulp of whiskey and nearly choke on it
>Couple of shiteaters laugh at you down at the other side of the bar
>That's FUCKIN' it

>>27683096
>Stand up and take a deep breath to tell those fuckers what's up
>Suddenly hoof on your leg
>8/10 QT, would pound her flanks is smiling at you
>Tells you not to mind the losers in the corner
>Shoots them a look and calls them "flat sacks"
>They get embarrassed and call her a bitch
>She just smirks
>Damn she's fine
>Buy QT a drink, maybe this trip won't be so bad after all
>More drinks
>She's laughing at your bad jokes
>Said she's heard worse
>Tells you a few she knows
>Nearly fall off the barstool laughing
>Brain says to marry this Flank Flirt
>No, you're just drunk and you just wanna hit that ass
>Fuck you just said that out loud
>Double fuck she heard you
>Triple fuck! Those assholes in the corner are laughing again
>QT shoots them another look but it does nothing
>Turns back to you
>Tells you to find her a good spot and she'll do it
>Goddesses that confident smirk
>Assholes in the corner finally shut up with mouths agape
>Suckers
>Tell her you gotta give your ponies in the barn some drinks first
>She says that's perfect and heads that way
>Follow dat ass
>Wanna smack dat ass
>When's the last time you had ass?
>Don't remember, must be why you wanna hit it so bad
>Back at the barn
>QT tells you to go take care of business first
>Yes maam!
>March in there and toss the bottle to your two employees
>Fucker barely catches it and leaves when you tell them a little lie about covering for them to make up for the wait
>Invite the QT in
>Suddenly get nervous cus the area ain't much to look at
>QT don't mind though, she just struts right up and pushes you on your ass
>Oh Boy
>She starts on your D rite quik
>Goddesses above she's workin' your cock like a sexy sorceress
>She stops and sits on you dick next
>Proceed to fuck town, all due haste!
>Smack dat ass
>Grope dat ass
>Fuck dat ass
>Everything with dat ass

>>27683102
>Eventually fall asleep
>Wake up surrounded by your crew next morning
>They're pissed
>A third of your product is missing from the brahmin
>How we gonna get paid they ask
>You'll figure it out
>At least you got laid instead of just robbed
>Fuckin' hate this job

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>>27681045
Poor horse flies.
Is there more? The ending is rather sudden and feels like there should be more.

>>27683110
The stoled stalwart stallion sinks sadly into sanguine saparilla.
Meek maliscious mare makes many men mourn mulching manhood with her.

>>27683350
Mediocre

>>27683718
Such furious fretting fingers fly forlornly from food for thought, fixations for fastidious posting first.

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>>27683138
Its debatable.
If I did how should it go?
Them both trying to finish each other off on the ground, rock in hoof?
Suddenly having to put aside the fact they were trying to kill each other a few minutes ago now that raiders are here?

A grand finality and parting of ways, contact with the surface having rendered any thought of their past lives moot?

Creepy weird ass place full of blood, dead ponies, and far too many robots?

Love blooming in the wasteland and some furious fucking?

What happened to all the fetish posting?

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>>27685106
It finally got stale for the fetishist posters.

Question for the thread: how much "realism" do you like in your fic reading? Do you like to limit that realism to certain aspects of the story(is healing potions, magic, armor, guns etc)? Is there a point where the suspension of disbelief is not enough to read comfortably?

>>27685901
I think the main fic was pretty good with the balance of realism and fantasy. Fics like MN7 and AbH had a good balance as well. However, PH became a little too unrealistic at times (the abomination in the tunnels and the weird wall thing were pushing it, but the Eater went way beyond my limit).

>>27686222
the original tended to use potions as a heal-all, I don't remember MN7 being like that...

>>27685901
I think a more realistic approach to healing is necessary, like potions being more of a band aid and surgery being required for grievous wounds.

Guns and armor sorta feel like you can play around with more of the fantasy elements.

>>27685901
It's ponies with guns and invisible finger unicorns.
I don't see a reason to incorporate magic, and many people spend too much time in their fics doing so.
I'd rather it be more Fallout than a show I don't watch heavy.

>>27683086
b-but they make such a cute couple!

>>27688512
The only proper couple is Littlepip x Blackjack.

>>27670723
The Enclave didn't touch anyone who wasn't a mutant already.

>>27681045
Who wrote this and why?
Its sadistic.
Its wrong.
Its horrible.
Why would Enclave soldiers attack each other?
And what is a brasshole?

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>All those negative comments about my reverse Trap Zigger character in the last thread

Why do you hate chairwielding zeeb /foe/?

>>27689130
ooh, who's cuddling whom?

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>>27689130
Degenerancy and race mixing

>>27689130
I want to cuddle that mare.

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>>27689239

>race mixing
>two mares

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>>27689130
Because it was me!
Its always me.

>>27689130
Because ziggers want to rape all our mares!

Support Equestria! Enlist today!

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>>27689130
chairwielding zeeb needs to upgrade to a chairsaber!

and is top qt to boot!

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>>27689321
>>27689239

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>>27689130
Her cuddlseome cheer with the chair captivated me into congratulating her as a cautious continous companion for continental crossings carrying cargo.

>>27689268
The unicorn is a guy

>>27689357
So what is the story of those two?
Something good?
Something bad?
A bit of both?

Me is to lazy to reead
Need audio book project horinsonz
Me also to lazy to look for more than 5 mins soo i came here to ask
P

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>>27689818
Noh! U read dem sidefics!
U read Frozen Skies, Tartarus Contingency, and Old Souls, u read Gardener, u read Outlaw, u read WEcon and Better Days, u read Heroes, Murky and also Project Human!

>>27689859
But already start horizon i don't want too spot now ill red the others otrher time not now please give project horizons please

>>27689130
>Reverse Trap
>Basically a bro with a vagina
>Be broing out all the time
>Would do cool shit
>Bro we can fuck!

>>27689896
Sounds most excellent!

>>27689728
The unicorn is a SPOY!

>>27689896
Soon what's the difference between a reverse trap and a tomboy?

>>27690277
Then it would be a fucking epic sexual need for androgynous people/pone in this world.

>>27690277
The ability to have a good dual thumbstick setup.

>>27689130
I actually am curious about her and would like to know more.

Why is PH back in the hot story list on fimfic?

>>27690421
he probably put a 'new' chapter up

>>27690421
David fucks Crystal Eclair and Vector Brony often enough for it to happen.

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>>27689130
I wanted to give her a supply of orange oil and clean linens along with liquid nail, but was too shy to speak up.

>>27689297
Eclair, C

Crystal Eclair.

Cuute, Darcy

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>>27690458
Superior hygiene bump

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>>27691090
Its an interesting question.

Just how much and with detergents, do ponies need to bathe?
They don't so much naturally, rolling in dew and dust to get clean, rather than fording a river or jumping into a lake.

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>>27691356
>do ponies need to bathe
pones clearly don't like being clean, anon

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>>27691375
Non-consensually bathe ALL the raider mares!

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>>27691356
Well your talking about a land with not much clean water, so no, wastland ponies tend to smell a bit. Though ponies living in more well off places would likely clean up more often, where on the other hoof raiders are likely walking piles of sick.

but for the mist part, I would say that most of the ponies would like to get clean whenever they can, as it would have to be part of their culture to want to stay dirty. (like mid-evil Eroup, when they thought the devil came from the water.)

Would a steel pony unicorn with augmented eyes be over the top for an OC?

>>27691515
>steel pony unicorn
>steel pony
dafuq

>>27691468
we will never shower with a cyberpony after unplugging all her legs

>>27691526
Its from Project Horizons, Khat said that the story continued as he wanted, but basically its a living synth pony.

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>>27676533
You and your booping fetish.

>>27691468
Is there a fic to this?

>>27691550
>PH
>kkat said
>>>/out/

So what would happen if somebody found a portable healing megaspell and instructions on how to use it one month after Littlepip showed up?
Let's say for fun its found 15 miles southwest of Friendship City and is packable in a saddlebag.

Let's say the finding unicorn is unsure of wanting to use it, repeatedly if possible, or just selling it and enjoying the body crushing amount of caps it would fetch.

>>27685106
Here is one then.


Do Pegasi get whiskey wing when drunk?

>>27692411
Pretty sure wings aren't penises, despite famous "wingboner" joke.

>>27691561
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/263354/fallout-equestria-dance-of-the-orthrus

Okay fella's I got a new one.

Imagine a slice of Equestria that is home to two major groups, there was an episode in season 5 that had something like this going on which don't like each other much.

How would you feel if these two groups were;

Both raider clans
One was raider and one was settler ponies
Or both settler ponies?

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>>27694438
A business mare who is for petting.
Just look at that back! Also scratchable ears.

>>27693237

Interesting, but i got a idea: How about this is like, 10 years post-pipening or so, maybe more, and the NCR is in the region tryng to prevent the two feuding groups from killing each other, causing them to find new ways to sabotage/Kill each other withouth the Sherrif imprisoning a bunch of em.

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Love, commitment and long term future bump

>>27693237
For raiders it would be fun, business even.
They want to fight and keep fighting to produce better ponies.

Things Grit is no longer allowed to do:

>Impersonate Alloy in her shop
>While doing so, tell male customers she loves mighty spears
>Tell them she'll gladly polish and sharpen the tips of their spears for a few extra caps

>Write fake love letters from other townsponies and hide them in various places around her home

>Impersonate the mayor and announce a lengthy spa retirement to lose weight

>As the same, announce mandatory swamp swimming lessons
What other kinds of shenanigans could he pull?

>>27695174
No longer allowed to impersonate Malice and challenge the 7 best fighters in 4 Corners for Alloy's hoof in marriage and win.
That wasn't me

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>>27695174
No longer allowed to implant ravenous larvae within Goldie while she sleeps
Sorry not sorry for the mental image

>>27695453
Meh, horses have a long history of dealing with burrowing larvae making deep holes in their skin and leaving blackened necrotic flesh in their wake.

Its a reason to inspect your meet first,and why a solid piece of leather is so hard to get.

>>27695425
No longer allowed to build up a bar tab under throwaway one-time fake identities.

No longer allowed to attempt to live among the zebras with an offensive and over-the-top stereotypical disguise.

So whatever happened to that crystal empire fic set in not Siberia with a vampire unicorn as the protagonist?

>>27695592
The Eerie? Hasn't updated since February.

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Yay, finished, back to drawing popular nuclear horses

>>27690404

Shes a tribal Zeeb who got unlucky while hunting and fell into the hooves of some slavers, ended up in Filly.

>>27689372
Congratulations

>>27689896

Reverse Traps are the best

>>27695988
Why Filly?

I mean I get its "the" slave city, but going from the main fic and Murky, it kind of feels overplayed, particularly with all these other places out there.
A lot like how its all bout the capitol of a country, and nowhere else.

>>27696053

They are from a PnP Game, the GM liked the setting. And I gues outside of MurkyNumber7, it hasnt been explored that much as to make it unfeasible for a gamesetting.

>>27696464
I suppose its the chicken alfredo of slave cities then.

>>27696540
all the fashionable captives wanna be taken to Fillydelphia!

I want to cum in Littlepip's mane while she sleeps.

>>27696593
I want to photograph pip when she sleeps and then put heart-shaped cutouts of said photographs in Velvet's bags

>>27695141
Clan rivalry or clan feud? Maybe some Romeo and Juliet shenanigans in the mix?

You ever just have one of those long boring depressed stretches in life?
The sort where you can function normally, but its just all hollow and you know you need something?
But it will just randomly break and suddenly you don't know what it was that made you sad and depressed?
Yes?

Well that's not this chapter.
In this one, Murky knows exactly why he is suddenly happy, and what it was the made him sad before.

While deathbed reveleations are a standard affair for many fictions, few have them acted upon by the deceased.
Even fewer have the deceased decide death is not for them and get better on their own willpower and a fucking magic healing nuke.

Murky now fully has his wings back, they're no longer some feathery tumors on his side, but things he can actually, well, control.
Flights not a thing, but he can now get them out and about for uncontrolled gestures.

That's not the big impact of this chapter though, its the fact that one should never let Glimmerlight throw their birthday party, even if its memorable.
Yep, Murky now has a lifeday party.

Its done fairly well, though it has the classic near ruin of the party by somebody bumping into them.
Frankly, this is pretty bad, as its overdone and doesn't do much beyond give Brom some ethanol.
If it had been a more known figure, it would have worked, but instead its just falling flat.

Now this game of intrigue in Filly, and its grandiose nature, unsurprisingly, Protege is only now aware and not long before when his entire inner circle colluded and betrayed him.
Frankly, this is odd as now that Protoge is up and about, he should just get a memory rip of the mall and have it looked over, along with Ragini for repudiation.
This is really odd, as memory orbs should be a standard affair in these cases, not something only Glimmer/Bonesaw can play with.
As a counter, and great discussion, it could be argued that Protege is still a slave scared to rock the boat and tattle on a master.

>>27697189
Really, it is notable that Red Eye doesn't ask, simply as a matter of father to son.
But I suppose that's just Fuzzy not wanting the plot to be cut out quickly as would happen with any other conspiracy.

The chapter itself is rather nice, Murky gets to have fun, and its frankly nice that Fuzzy is this kind.
Obviously this is the part where you realize one moment of joy is supposed to outweigh a lifetime of suffering, that "success is all the sweeter after suffering".
And oh what suffering there has been.
In a week or two.


Really and frankly, the sum of Murky is that everybody barely has time to do anything, what with all the slave work, the time Murky was an outlaw, the time he was a pet, the time he was just flat working...

Fuzzy's glaring flaw here is that he has everything happening at a stupid fast time line, but the story makes it seem all too slow.
I mean the original was awful with its 2 month thing, but this is even worse with its building and growing, plus down time, between events being nothing.
Its bad enough that I am wondering if secretly Filly grants everyone superspeed and perception so they can actually achieve all these acts in the short time they're not slaving away.


Also, the Pinkie Pie can time travel thing is still weird.
Like it made little sense to start, but now is even worse with her predicting her predicting actions and reacting to them in a way that only works by her watching her own alterations and then adjusting before they happen.
I get it being a thing with Murky being some temporal nexus, but still, its an issue given how little sense it makes.
As opposed to just having some ghoul pop in and explain that Murky is being drafted, and if he doesn't like it, then he can take it up with his past self for looking in the funhouse mirror.

>>27696593
I want to be cum inside Littlepip.

>>27696464
So what are their personalities?
Boisterous bruisers boasting being better banally?
Timid cuddling characters caring concernedly cooperatively?

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Pony mods for Pleb ONE?
Don't be a synth and ignore us, there are horsefuckers who still play the game or something like that.

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How would something like this work out in FOE?

>>27698093
Don't think there's a whole lot besides a few anthro ones.

I'm still waiting for my current mods to be updated for Far Harbor.

As for the game itself... I really need to start over and play survival mode on a new character.

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Another horse. I'm on a roll.

>>27699339
I like the way you rendered the magic!

>>27699339
Silly Hidden, there's no need to be so aggressive for belly rubs.

>>27699339
>TH art
lol why hnetu gave up writing, talk about a fucking waste of art

>>27699339
Nice! Shame about the fic but you do make Holsters look pretty good. I can't remember her fucking name god damn it.

And if you were on such a roll would you be open for suggestions?

>>27699467
You Fool!!!

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Which pone is best snuggling with?

>>27699467
Filth.

>>27700071
Miss Stable Pony.

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>>27700110
Pick
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hv1mXXzZPMU

>>27700110
back off you nigger she's my waifu

>>27699994

Her name is Slipstock.

>>27699467
The proper way to snuggle a raider waifu and be snuggled by a stable earth mare.

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>>27699388
They are very addictive.
You'll have to put thermal bandages on their tummy like nocotine patches to wean them off the addiction!
>Pic and
>Thread pic
Are classic examples of ponies you'll encounter begging for, even demanding tummyrubs from you!

>>27700110
>>27699339
Wasn't there another Miss Stablepony comic floating around?

>>27701465
Last one I remember is her tending to two of the colts who got in fights with molerats and scorpions

>>27699407
>>27699388
So sad.
I'm sure Slipstock continues to romantically tummypunch Hidden in the abandoned fic afterlife.

>>27699407

Gave up is a strong phrase. Lost motivation, hit her note limit, stares at the new chapter and hates everything she writes, wishes she was better at writing so she could continue, hates herself for being one of /those/ authors. I want to finish it, I really do. I just find myself unable to because every time I write something down I hate it and then go through weeks/months of being unable to come up with any sort of coherent continuity that makes sense and isn't straight up dumb.

I want to finish, I just suck. And I'm not saying that for attention or praise or whatever. I made a pisspoor planning mistake of not making sure my notes kept ahead of where I was in the story. I know how I want it to end and I know major stuff, but the inbetweens, the mundane stuff, keeps fucking me up.

>>27702408

She'd have shown up in another dozen chapters near the end, though I doubt she'd be a serious romantic option. After time to self-reflect, y'know? Plus Hidden is like, 95% straight.

>>27702443
Belly rubs are a universal thing, a hoof is a hoof.
In much the same way you only need cover your front in the sauna, everyone same in back.

Also because ass is best tight to look at.

>>27702443
Its good to know you haven't quit at least.

Unlike some authors!

Perhaps you might want to do shorts, little page or three things just chronicling random shit.
A fight over a sparkle cola somewhere, an attempt to get a specific piece of junk by increasingly convoluted means, a debate on something the reader might hold dear but the sisters have no clue what it is, etc...

>>27700071
Calamity, everyone should know this by now.

He's strong and goodhearted, and his long mane, wings and muscular build would ensure the greatest snuggling sensations.

>>27702443
Just quit it man ain't worth it.

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>>27703039
Calamity is only good for wrapping in latex and tracing e stims around.
He doesn't have the proper floof for cuddles and snuggles.

>>27700071
Fluffy boom loving pegasus, pegabooms.

>>27703068
>For what reason?


Hnetus doesn't shill, I quite honestly thought she had quit at this point and joined: Darcy, DILeak, Kip, the Brit doing Ouroboros You were supposed to ask for help, not run away, Datte, and many others.
Mostly though I am curious to see where a story that has a plot more twisted than my rambles goes.
Also how many times can Lost Art lose glasses before somebody squirts healing potion in her eyes.

>>27703200
Ouroboros is dead? damn shame.

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>>27703510
Not quite, severe life support.
I had a chat with the author, she is in the battlebot circuit and winning, so she's not working much.

Tried to get her to come here for an AMA and some pickup of a writing team, but she never showed.

Damn shame, I was hoping to make it happen with more authors.

>>27703521
Unfortunate that when they did pop in the IRC, many of the readers who could or would give advice worth a damn were AFK or otherwise absent.
Euro hours are hardly the best hours in there.

>>27703533
So what you're saying is if we have Fuhrer Trump take over Europe and annex it as bitch daddie AMerica, the problem goes away?

Would detached biting and moving feral ghoul heads be too much?
What about a normal ghoul trying to get a new body?

>>27703521
The author of Ouroboros male

>>27703918
n-noh, we've been through this before, all authors are actually the MCs of their fics. Tofu is actually a red pegasus named Mach, Relentless is Snap Roll, Eventorizon is Francium, whatsisname who wrote Gardener is zombie gardener, Datte is Leaky etc

>>27703918
Wow, now I've fucked up. For reference the bot preformance sounded waifish.

Are leg webbing holsters for pistols sexy lewd on a horse?
Should the waist strap run under the dock or in front?

>>27703068

I don't really want to give up. Treasure Hunting is a labor of love, but when it comes down to it I really do love my story. I just have issues with it, mostly with me writing, and a lot of those come down to inexperience.

The chapter right now is supposed to finish up with Hidden's recovery and tie up a few loose ends. Where'd the Splinterwolf pup go? What's in the other Ministry buildings? What's up with the mysterious leader of the group there?

The problem is that when it comes down to it, it's all sort of... boring. I don't want to handwave and just have there be a three-day time skip where Hidden is suddenly magically fine because A: I wrote myself into this corner by making it super important and to skipping it's bullshit, and B: I've always had in my head that if Hidden gets seriously wounded she has to take her lumps and heal because otherwise there's no danger. It's one of the big problems I had with PH. If every character can just come back to life repeatedly without consequence, then there's no tension. Who cares if you die? You'll be back two chapters later!

I'm also struggling with some of the NPC motivations. The leader of The Cinch has to have legitimate reasons for what she wants, and there's another character who needs to be a part of that because of how the city is set up. This is less of a problem because I have my ideas... but I'm still struggling on how to portray them without putting up a big sign that says "THESE ARE MY MOTIVATIONS!" because that's bad writing. Especially since Hidden is very much not omniscient and cannot know her motivations without being told them.

There's other issues, like that I constantly find myself unsure what to do with Fine Tune. He always seems to just be standing there and not actually doing or saying anything. And that's absolutely terrible for both him and the readers. It gets worse because, according to my notes from before I wrote even chapter 1... I still have one main party member to add.

>>27704662
>I constantly find myself unsure what to do with Fine Tune
>seems to just be standing there and not actually doing or saying anything
>one main party member to add

That's kinda the sign that your party is bloated. Either you have to deal with letting them sit there, conveniently send them offscreen so that they can work without being narrated, or you have to bloat your chapters to fit in those extra paragraphs of them doing stuff.

I don't think I've quit hit that level with some of my own stuff, but I still sort of get that feeling that I'm neglecting to describe or narrate something in the scene.

>>27704662
I've never read TH, so take this with a fat heap of salt.

It sounds to me like your story's suffering from a serious lack of forward planning. Your core characters' motivations should have at least a bare framework before you start writing, otherwise they're just "there" and you end up clutching at straws trying to justify their inclusion when it's too late to just write them out.

This ties into the thing you mentioned about injuries as well. As soon as you write something new into the story, whether that's a new character, or a major character getting hurt, you need to build up around that and justify its inclusion. If a character getting hurt is a big deal, either justify taking the time to hurt them (your own time AND the reader's!) or don't hurt them unless you absolutely have to.

This was where PH went wrong. Somber would add new characters, locations and even story arcs on a whim, which would require shoring up as part of the larger plot, which meant words, words and more words. And all those words were spent justifying gimmicks rather than actually telling the story. FoE and MN7 have the same issue, but not to the same extent.

Don't worry about subtlety unless you're convinced you can pull it off well. If you actually want to get moving on your writing, plan ahead, write forthrightly and concisely. You can add padding and fluff and clever bits later.

>>27704752

Pretty much. I hadn't intended for one of the characters to stick around, but when she was supposed to be killed off... things happened, and she wasn't. It created a part of this problem. But there's also that he's a changeling and that makes him harder to portray because he's categorically different from all the rest.

>>27704823

It's not that there's a 'serious' lack of forward planning. I had plenty of forward planning until the point where I stopped writing. I still have the 'frame' where I know the big picture stuff. It's the in between parts that get me. Transition scenes, character moments, stuff like that that happen between the proverbial boss fights. Were it a dungeon crawler? I've designed all the boss encounters but there's no mooks/trash/minions populating the hallways between boss rooms.

This is why I stopped. Rather than force myself to keep putting down words that might not make sense or might be made up on the fly.

As for core character motivations? I think you misunderstood. This is a tertiary character and potential antagonist at best. And I know why she does what she does, it's just that it's not a clean image in my head, lots of frayed edges. I don't know how to portray it. My main party's goals are all pretty set in stone already.

Anyway, I know all about Chekhov's Guns and Occam's Razors. I'm not against cutting stuff that needs to be cut, but... Especially when considering the character in question? She's kind of a big deal to the overall arc of the story and the setup for the finale. I can't cut her or the other characters related to her.

>>27704502
Depends if they pull the cheeks together and makes the cutie mark push out, or if they pull the cheeks apart and make the pony have to tuck their tail.

So when it comes to hunting for food in the wasteland, what's the most common animal to get food from?

A lot of stories tend to mention Radigators, Radhogs or bloatsprites but is that it?

>>27706038
pony
Pony is the most common food source.
There are many ways to eat it, some flavorful, some strenuous, but many worth it for the moist juiciness that ensues.


Otherwise, apples.
Buck loads of apples are eaten, along with radscorpions to your list.
As far as the original seems to go.

I'd add many of the animals we see with fluttershy, so pretty much standard livestock, possibly mutated.
Somebody has a story with a radshout cow.

>>27706099
but there aren't a whole lot of apples left after the bombs. Ground is dead in most of equestria and where it isn't it's poisoned by something else.

Radscorps work though, and that would be a source of food you'd need to *hunt* like I fucking said previously.

Personally I wonder more about like, how often Radroaches or rats are eaten. What about Manticore? Surely that can be eaten too, like yaoi guai.

>>27702443

SHUT THE FUCK UP.

Shut it. Get your ass to that computer and write to your ending! FUCK! "OH it's so ___. OH, I hate ___." SHUT IT. Every story is shit to everyone who doesn't like it. "Oh, I don't know how to write _____." We don't know what ____ is bitch! Write the damned story and FINISH it. You're tired of writing? Get to the end fast, put a fork in it, and move on. Come back later and REVISE the shit ending if you want, but HAVE AN ENDING! I'm a sick of 99% of FoE fics giving up because "It's hard! I suck! I don't know what I'm doing." WHO THE FUCK CARES!?! What we care is that you fucking write, that you fucking finish. And if no one throws a parade, who the fuck cares? At least you will have fucking accomplished something that 99% of others haven't. And if it's the shitasticiest shit on shit mountain of stories, then at least it will be FINISHED. And if your hurt little perfectionist feelings just have to be satiated, then finish and REWRITE THE FUCKING THING RIGHT THE SECOND TIME! Or the third. Or whatever. But stop the BITCHING and WHINING.

Otherwise, go join the ninty fucking nine other percent of people just just pussied out and gave up and pouted at how fucking hard it is it write and now no buddy reads them. Cause that is the fucking line, bitch. People who finish and people who fucking DON'T.

Now go fucking write!

>>27702443
I know this feel to a degree, but its starting my fic
>tfw have 30 reworked intro with only some barely touching the next chapter.

Feels bad man.

>>27706998

How about you go work on those anger issues.

And also go fuck yourself.

>>27706998
somber pls go

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>>27706998
Somebody's had a bad day

>>27704662

Do you magically get "Experience" sitting on your ass whining? Is that how it works? Write the fucking thing! Finish the fucking thing. Move on to the NEXT fucking thing. Are you a goddamned writer or not? If you are, then write! Don't bitch. Don't tell us 'Oh, I don't want to do ____." Shut the fuck up and DO WHATEVER! Time skip or don't time skip. Flip a fucking coin. Are you creative or not. Write it. Move the story on.

AND STOP COMPARING YOUR SHIT TO PH! WRITE YOUR GODDAMNED OWN STORY!

You can't work out your motivations, pick a seven deadly sin and GO. If this is an NPC then you don't need to get all hannibal lecter level in their head. Write them! Let us worry about how fucking blatant or not they are. And if you don't like it, WHEN YOU'RE FINISHED, you can go back and change it! That's the miracle of the motherfucking internet.

If there's no purpose to a character, remove them. Move the fuck on. If they have something to do in the story, have them do it, then move the fuck on. If what he has to do isn't important, take it the fuck out and move the fuck on. You are bitching about scalpel cuts when you need a fucking chainsaw. Write it! Finish it. Revise if you must, but FUCKING FINISH IT!

>>27705141
Jesus fucking christ, are you Somber? You write a character and then change the story and oh shit you have a Boo running around? DEAL WITH IT. Bullet through the head. Death claw attack! If the great and masterful Kkat whacked Steelhooves for no other reason than 'Life is cheap' then you cna get rid of this fucker. And if he's difficult to portray, then take him the fuck out!

Of for fuck sake, WRITE! STOP BITCHING AND WHINING AND WRITE THE FUCKING THING! Or go the FUCK away! It's not perfect? Who the fuck cares!? Nothing is fucking perfect! EVER! There's finished and not finished, and if you're not finished then STOP YOUR FUCKING WHINING AND GO WRITE!

FUCK!

>>27706998
>>27707092

Are you done now? Do you feel better having typed in all caps on the internet?

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>>27707092
>>27706998
u ok m89

>>27707067

How about you fucking blow me?

"I can't write it because _________" is fucking BULLSHIT. Until she's lost her fucking eyeballs or hands or something, and she's a fucking writer, then she needs to fucking write. Even if it's the shittiest shit that's ever been shat on a wordprocessor. Because just search Fimfic for the DOZENS and DOZENS and DOZENS of FoE stories that are on Hiatus, or incomplete, or just dropped! Fuck! Even Somber can't get Horizons the fuck up and it's been done for a year. I'm sick to death of hearing the WHINING and the MOANING and the "Oh, it's just not fucking perfect." FUCK YOU AND YOUR FUCKING PERFECT! PERFECT DOESN'T EXIST!!! It's an excuse to not fucking write.

Now, if she doesn't want to write, no fucking problem. That is her fucking perogative. She can give the fuck up like so many others. But if she's not quitting then she's writing, and if she's writing then she's NOT BITCHING ABOUT NOT WRITING.

>>27707092
Hahaha, are these threads always this entertaining?

>>27707149
No, it's usually half dead and half fetishposting.

>>27699339

Also, this is BEAUTIFUL FUCKING ART! Some one made this shit for your story and you're NOT FINISHING IT! Fuck! Get writing! Get done! Move it!

>>27707149

Only when I'm around. It brings out the anger in people that I exist.

>>27707132
Hey can you pep talk Ham and Tofu while you're at it? Their stories are better anyway. kthx.

>>27707165
nymph plssssss

>>27707173

No no, that one was me.

>>27707166

YES! IF THAT'S WHAT IT FUCKING TAKES! I WILL BEAT THEM ALL WITH ALL THE FUCKING CAPITAL LETTERS ON THE INTERNET TILL THEY'RE DONE!

FUCK! HAM! TOFU! NEXT CHAPTER! NOW! No more fucking lurking! Put the fucking game away and stop jerking off or whatever the fuck you're doing that isn't writing! If you're not fucking dead and you haven't fucking quit then get your ass in gear and get another fucking chapter out! NOW! I don't care if its shit or not! Do it! And Keep doing it till it's done! NOW YOU MOTHERFUCKERS!

>>27707178

WRIIIIITE! WRIIIIIITE! FUCKING NOW! WRITE IT! WRITE IT! GET YOUR ASS ON THE WORD DOC OR WHATEVER YOU WRITE ON AND DO IT! FINISH IT! TIME SKIP OR WRITE THE PAIN, BUT FUCKING WRITE IT! WRRRRRRIIIIIIIITTTTTTEEEEE!

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Have cum edit because this thread is starting to go bonkers.

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>>27707188
._.

Well fuck all kinds of duck. Yeah alright. I slacked off enough today.

>>27707173
Sorry, I am watching my egotism since I found out its approaching narcissism.


Wait, does this mean I fucked up?

Celestia's sulfur spewing tainthole, it does.


Actually I spent the day finding some nice thigh holsters and trying them on while imagining I was a nuke pone.

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>>27707197
>>27707188
nobody ever yells at me to write

>>27707661
WRITE! DO IT NOW!

That better?

>>27707661
I've done it.
But then, its not like I orbit around your story.

>>27707661
Thats because you are bae and update regularly with god tier chapters, Hoers bby.

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>>27707661
WRITE RIGHT NOW YOU FILTHY NIGGER
WWWRRRRRIIIITTTTTEEEE

Perhaps we should all stop shouting at each other and write something of our own.

I propose an FoE open writing challenge, all you faggots that arent already writing fics go and write something, doesn't have to be long, just something thats at least slightly readable, can be comedy, tragedy, romance or just an outright fetish fic, doesn't matter so long as it's FoE.

And don't give me any excuses about not being able to write, I want at least 3 replies or I won't finish that smashing atom CYOA that i started like a month ago or something.

Post the links to them as replies to my post and I will judge them.

So the FoE open summer writefagging challenge starts NOW, You want some, go write some!

You have until the thread dies, unless it dies too soon, then you have until the end of next thread.

>>27707852
Any length requirement?

>>27707944
>doesn't have to be long

can be any length, but short stories are preferred.

>>27707852
Gib until next thread and I'm down.

>>27707852

Here ya go. A concept I had rolling around my head from a while back.

Disclaimer: There's no proofreading or editing here. This is completely rough. It's only like, 5 pages though, 1600ish words.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bm9D7UI9Z0nafRVi5q_lb5dZO7MH5AoqTZiOCy2UzA0/edit

>>27707852
I uh, already submitted two things this week.
Do I have to write more?

>>27707852
I kinda wanted to continue that little experimental cyoa with the loner taking on those slavers from several months back but people seem to lose interest since it didn't wrap up in a day.

would that work?

>>27709795
I keep thinking she's about to fall over backwards

>>27709795
>meowing cat-pphire
>not doggy sapphire growling and barking at her

>>27709117
sure

So what are good magic/supernatural elements?

Like right now I have fraternal twin minotaurs who are unkillable only for lack of sufficient attempts that claim they when they were born, their mother saw the stars align in their image as a play on the constellation taurus and the stars being something.

Is this a good magical method? They basically are just returning villains, they don't resurrect in the same chapter.

>>27711283
Part of what I like with the stars in FoE is that there's many situations where they can be ambiguous - do they actually have any influence or is it just superstition ?
Sounds good to me, just don't go PH on it.

>>27711283
Never put them in a scene which confirms their death in the beginning. (shot in the head).

Put them in situations where they could have but would be highly unlikely for them to survive, like a collapsing building.

>>27711565
I was going for shoot and run, where they never never stick around to confirm its dead.

My debate is if they should die to a balefire bomb or not.
That I mean it worked on the Black Book, but at the same time, perhaps it would be worthwhile to have whispers and rumors of therm continuing given by traders from far off places.

Why does it seem like anonymous can write more than me?

>>27712116
because they're hackers on steroids?

>>27712245
Shit, I better install some curtains and buy a dog.

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>>27712328
I recommend this one the most!

>>27712116
That sounds like something anonymous would say....

>>27712407
We need more ponies with carry holsters and not battle saddles.
Especially of them being caught trying to draw and failing, their faces glowing and tails swishing as they try to hide it.
Only to be made to lay still as their assailant aggressively advances, their intent unknown but fearsome.

>>27712943
Plenty of pones have them, but they're not all drawn with them.

>>27712943
Like all wasteland combat, that should ideally result in forgiveness and fraternization.

>>27713084
So belly rubs and ear nibbles?

>>27713084
Nah, no, nope, nopadoodly do.

What needs to happen is the pone has to get their covert drawing skills right, else they keep suffering abuse.
Only when they can successfully and repeatedly draw and not be seen will they get to move onto the next part of the engagement.

Which will probably be theft and a cavity search with a very cold and dirty hoof.

Also
>rape
is boring and overused, it shows no skills, no love and is mostly just shit.

>>27699407>>27713224
Yes.
Extra lewd rubs and nibbles

>>27708207

This is gonna sound a bit bitchy, but... C'mon guys. Feedback. Please. Did you like it, hate it?

I know a bunch of you read it, and it was only 5 pages. There's literally no excuse for you to not have given the insane lack of content overall.

We writers thrive off feedback, we need it. Please. I'm begging you here. Say if you liked it, say if you hated it! Just something. Anything.

>>27714042
Loved it.
Had the tension and relief just right.
Made me care about these two horses.

>>27714042
Characterization in compact form.
Its good, could be expanded or stay on its own.

OK, so I've been out of the loop for a good three to four years.
Can anyone tell me what happens after Blackjack Dies and is then brought back to life in FoE: PH?

>>27714118
>>27714136

Thank you.

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>>27714141

>>27714141
Glory becomes a one winged pegasus and can never fly again.
She gets repeatedly placed in situations where flight would be critical to her well being.
She ends up seeing her mom die as well at Blackjack's hands ha its punny
Finally after more and more suffering, she gets a balefire bomb dropped on her.
It takes a bit to explode so she can enjoy the crushing pressure of the situation.

Then she magically comes back completely okay in a locked room onboard a spaceship in orbit with no mention of how this happened.

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>>27714141

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>>27714155
What it needs is more substance, you have it too focussed on the gala and the prom.
Give us some time to see the sudden drop into ferality, not just having it from the start.

>>27714141
>>27714236
>>27714297
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qeMFqkcPYcg

>>27714349

Nah, it was written as a one-shot off the cuff. I'm not going to edit or change anything at this point.

It was just for funsies. However, if I ever did want to expand it; I'll keep that in mind.

Does anyone have links to lyric anons FOE versions of songs?

>>27714447
what songs are you thinking of?

>>27714549
I was just curious what he has done beyond Queen.

Would you shoot a raider's dick off to stop them from raping an Enclave mare but now risk her life at the hooves of the raider, or wait and do a clean headshot when he mounts her?

>>27714927
I would take both of them prisoner and put them in the latex stable.

>>27714927
>Use NCR funds to compose and perform a PSA song about not raping others.
>Sorta like that "Poo to the loo" song

>>27715458
Due to the nature of their arrival, M. Spire and E. Gouger were given a special suit by the Overmare.
It is hoped that this provision will not lead the two to engage in unsightly activities that disrupt the safety of the stable.

They get admitted bound together mid rape/coitus and shall remain in the same suit stuck inside each other for quite some time.


>>27715459
14 mares and three bucks, plus one indeterminate have been raped in the time it takes for you to prepare your PSA song.
Due to the marked lack of televisions and radios amongst raiders, it has little impact.
On the upside, the NCR courts are experiencing a surge in use over claims of sexual harassment.

>>27714236
Jesus Christ, really?

>>27715691
Nah, she actually has zero cybernetics at story end, she ends up realizing its only by being a weak pathetic fleshie can she win.

>>27715708
I kindof want to read it again and finish what I haven't, because I loved it, but on the other hand I know I'll hate at least part of it, if not most.
Has anyone read it recently enough to remind me if it is actually good? Because at the time and thought it was awesome, but I was also in Highschool.

>>27714247
>Then she magically comes back completely okay in a locked room onboard a spaceship in orbit with no mention of how this happened.
that was rampage, glory doesn't come back

Arch Dornan, right here
>>27706998

>>27715691
yes really. That's what Blowjobs BODY looks like when the soul of Fake Luna is inhabiting it.

No. I'm not joking.

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>>27715749
Finished it a couple of moths ago. I had almost given up after roughly chapter 40-ish, but kept going to see how bad it could get.
Very good up to around 30. Going further only leads to edge and disappointment.

>>27716182
If only she passed away in a cave or chasm they'd name after her
>Glory Hole

Why do so many people cut pegasi wings off?

>>27708207
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bm9D7UI9Z0nafRVi5q_lb5dZO7MH5AoqTZiOCy2UzA0/edit

That's actually a really good short story. Short. Immediate. You tell us about the characters through the questions rather than exposition. Nicely done, actually. I'd like a little more description, and I'm curious why they haven't irradiated themselves since radiation is so common before Gardens cleans it all up. Might want to have it be post Gardens if you want some extra angst. Ditzy might be okay with eventually dying after the radiation's gone, but there's probably lots of other ghouls who aren't so okay with that plan.

>>27715749

Uh, read for yourself and decide? You can quit whenever.

>>27706998
>>27707092
>>27707132
>>27707188

Have to agree, though a far less angry agreement. But I've seen this anger among other creators, who are not just sick of people giving up on their stories, but also bitching about the people who are still writing theirs. It's just pathetic, and not healthy for the community. Other then a select few favorite, being the people who started early in the fandom, most new writers often just get looked down on, even after proving themselves in finishing a story. So ya, I understand rage that's going on, this Fandom can be overly bull headed sometimes.

On that topic, From a wrighter with finished work to anyone looking to start, or alredy started. I suggest to start smaller, and make something you know you can finish, then move onto the big one. Like Tolkien's "The Hobbit" wich was the setup for "Lord of the Rings" Trust me, it works.

>>27718015
Its to make them more like their superior urfpon masters.

>>27718015
BBQ chicken is delicious.
Probably because many people suck at writing flyers and want to remove the issue.
Its sort of a what do?

I mean look at Murky, the two flyers are grounded and can't do anything.
Sure Ragini used to fly, but rarely in scene.

On the other hand, it can be a lot of fun to write of them diving and twisting through a storm of shrapnel and slugs, twisting out of the way of primitive heat seeking rockets that relock on the Sun.

Even just simple parts of remembering pegasi will hover and can set their own ground level when they get startled.
Dash does this shortly before blowing up Applejack's barn.

So there can be lots of fun, and I hope Relentless and Team Stop the god Belmor write some more aerial manuver fights, rather than Tail Winds strafing shit.

I'd say Atomsmasher, but the fun is Scootaloo flies better than her.
I think its the orange fur on pegasi.

Mach, well I can't comment because write you fucking Loafer!
My penny shoes wrote more than you.

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>>27718222
>heat seeking rockets
Somehow I doubt a pegasus is hot enough to be tracked against background heat, or at such a close range you might as well use a gun.

This is FoE, they can probably guide with magic.

>>27718263
Nope, a simple temperature gradient imager programmed to focus on the hottest spot will work.
Also a major reason first gen missiles were shit.


I like the idea of magic missiles, but it gets down to the issue of pegasi having magic or not.
It is more thematic, but it then makes the question of why not poptart and snipe all the ponies with self guiding missiles.

Whereas heat seekers can be pointed of having little cluttet in the sky, but lots of issues with glints and reflections on the ground.

The other option would be to obviate it all and make a beam rider, that way sniping the shooter/painter works.
It aslso makes evasion more probable by ducking out of the radiator.

Dance of the Orthus guy.

Your Intro could use work, it has too much "and Stabletech had an answer".

If I am getting this, your metro has no filters?
I get your plot needs toxic hellhole, but its a bit notable for the issue.

Finally, are you setting this a century post war?

I'm reserving judgement on the mirage ponies and Orthus until I see more.

>>27718355
ANON STOP! DONT ENCOURAGE IT! We want Dice to angst and give up because no one cares like hnetu, or better still, see the error of his ways and write something good and stop shilling like a stubborn child.

>>27718222
You friend will have to wait for the next chapter it would seem.

>>27718904
No... NO! BELMOR I SWEAR IF YOU HURT THOSE PRETTY BIRDIES I WILL FIND YOU AND CUT YOUR DICK OFF!