Slave Ponies

>>25811066
you forgot my story anon

>flutter green when?

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This has been a great ride, everyone.

When the first few stories set the precedent of gentle, loving white-knighting for this general, I didn't think it could last. I thought it would experience an influx of Submission is Mandatory knockoffs and the direction would change.

It didn't, though. It just broadened out. A lot of feels have been had. Even if this dies tomorrow, I'd like to eject some spaghetti from my pockets and say I'd do it all again.

Anyone remember when the first post was? It was just over a month ago, I think.

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>>25811084
Oh shit, Jessi Jinx is back.

Also seems like only a few select stories are being put on there...

>>25811084
Shit, sorry, I just copypasted the OP from the last thread. Please don't hit me I wont do it again.

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>>25811084
What do you mean, Jessi? Your story is right there, in the dead fics section.

>>25811145
Skittles plz

>>25811129
>implying the ride ends
>ever
At least not until we help Skittles get her old self back.

God, do these threads move fast now...

I'll post more eventually. Holiday times make writing hard, especially when I'm out and about.

>>25811179
Very true. Skittles won't truly despair until she remembers what she used to be and knows just how far she has fallen.
Then the story can end.

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Damn another thread already?

By the looks of it I'll be dumping green every 2 threads. Sorry I'm such a slow writefag, if Jessi Jinx really is back you'll have some AJ from them.

>>25811179
>It turns out Skittles' old master was actually every abusive asshole in all of these stories ever.
>All of the fucking anons have to team up to kick his shit in.

>>25811202
That would breach white knight levels anon.

>>25811202
That would be cool actually

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somebody wants to suggest me how anon and applejack will fall in love and have sex?

>>25811232
Quickly and violently.

>Skittles' old master and her new master are actually the same person
>she's just so completely mind-fucked by his barbarity that when he starts to show her kindness her mind tricks her into thinking it's a whole new person and that she's been rescued by a new, caring, loving, gentle master
>it makes it that much more devastating to her when he starts to abuse her again

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>>25811232
Applejack has sex with anon out of pity.
Literally the only possible option now, considering how much of a wimp he is.

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>>25811249

>>25811232
Maybe she can't handle the fact that all her other friends are being raped and she isn't, so she forces herself onto him while feeling disgusted.
Then they have gentle, healing make up sex.

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>>25811249
We're reaching mindfuck levels that shouldn't even be possible.

>>25811243
لا

>>25811179

>not realizing that being Anon's slave is the ultimate expression of loyalty
>she'll do anything for Anon, because Anon is everything

sorry guys, i can't write now, i will write tomorrow if i can

>>25811066
That pic makes me really want to ride Celestia. Not even sexually, just like... fully decked out in horse-tack and forced to carry me around in public wherever I decide to humiliate her.

>>25811212
>>25811230
Let's take it further
>Skittles' old master is also a master terrorist
>Epic assault on his obligatory terrorist compound ensues
>Anons win with heavy losses
>Skittles' old master is shot to death by every surviving anon
>His death causes everyone's problems everywhere to be resolved
>All of the men killed in the fighting come back to life
>Society has a collective "My god" moment and end pone slavery
>The terrorists and pone abusers are reformed in true MLP style
>Rainbow Dash is back to her true self, along with the other psychologically damaged ponies.
>And then there's a rainbow
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6ZaCY0sToo

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>>25811275
>gentle make up sex

Ding Ding Ding Ding Ding Ding Ding Ding

>>25811345
Since we're giving wild theories about Skittles' old master have a few I've made up.

>Rainbow Dash's master doesn't exist, she just grew incredibly insane at some point, because something something Wonderbolts, and because she had a BDSM fetish she sold herself into slavery, renaming herself Skittles so either her friends wouldn't find her or that she would consider Rainbow Dash a separate mare entirely.
>Skittles' old master is Darth Vader
>Skittles is Flutterrape in disguise
>Skittles' old master was a human in the same situation as Anon, and apparently because he didn't want to be her master she theorized he was a bad master

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>>25811334
Honestly, I'd just like to ride her. Not even in a humiliation kind of way, just... for fun.

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>>25811400
>Riding ponies non-sexually

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>>25811179
Realistically, this will never happen. We can't cure soldiers' PTSD, and as much as war is hell, it's not a personalized, engineered kind of hell, cooked to perfection.
Her new owner will fuck the treatment up anyway.

>>25811249
>mfw

>>25811400
>ride Celestia bareback
>"We're going to have fun, Anonymo--- what's that pressing into my back?"
>"A...Anon?"

>>25811414
Did Gindle get to you yet?

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>>25811202
>Skittles knows his address
>Anon gets his balls up to kick his ass
>Finds out he's a basement dweller.
>Has rd explain to his middle age highly christian parents the kind of stuff he made her do right beneath their feet.
>Sack of shit has everything taken away from him. and is utterly destroyed before sinking into depression and killing himself.

Still too good for him to die that easily.

Pick highly related

>Anon becomes increasingly frustrated by his failed attempts to rehabilitate Skittles
>becomes more and more like her former master, giving her the life he thinks she wants because he just doesn't know how else to treat her any more that doesn't result in her having a complete breakdown
>things only ever seem to be "okay" when he actually treats her like a slave
>ends up becoming even more abusive than the old master was, but the change is so gradual he doesn't even realize what he's become

>>25811334
>>25811400
>>25811413
>tfw had my first orgasm while riding a pony

>>25811457
this basically. I imagine skittles last owner was some lanky, pale, acne ridden little noodle of a man who could only feel big by hurting little ponies

>>25811400
Exchange was a good fic...

>>25811492
>>25811457
Don't get me wrong, I like this idea.

But I think Skittles' former abuser should be a really rich, sophisticated alpha. Somebody who will make Anon cower and feel inadequate. And eventually drive him to greater lengths of manly white knightingness for Skittles' sake.

His love for abused pygmy pone will turn him into a man.

>>25811463
>Anon eventually sell her off like the asshole he has become.
>Meanwhile another lonely sap is looking for his own pone and sees an ad online for a rainbow-maned Pegasus on the cheap.
>Here we go again.

>>25811527
In this case Skittles' will have a tough decision if she's ever in the position to pick going back to her previous owner or sticking around with Anon.

I mean, her previous master treated her 'better' than Anon, right?

>>25811548
>>25811559
i dont like this idea anymore. This sounds worse than abusing her in the first place. This is breaking her heart.

Lets talk about how you would sex her the first time. All gentle like? or would you let her do it the way shes used to?

Is there something with rape too?

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>>25811202
>Skittles' old master was actually every abusive asshole in all of these stories ever
>Sterling, Lauren, and her father are all the same person.
>They've never been seen together.
Shit, it makes perfect sense.

There's even supporting evidence - humans captured the Element of Loyalty, but I never said what happened to her. Maybe she's Skittles now. AJ ran off - she could be ANY of these AJs.

Some stories have some pony overlap, and that's a bit of an issue. For example, both I and RM have Maud, but RM's Maud is obviously the real Maud because geology. Mine is obviously Marble Pie after going crazy. She knew she wasn't strong enough to survive in this world, so she adopted her sister's identity.

Now I just have to figure out this Lauren/Daddy/Sterling thing.
General Slaaneshi witchery?
T1000?
Time travel and a sex change?

Great, now I have to include a scene with Lauren and her father together just to disprove my own conspiracy theory.

>>25811248
daww, Fluttershy's so cute I almost feel bad about what I made her go through

but so is pretty much every former owner of any pony in this thread.

And I already established Fluttershy to be for lewd and feels

Sadly I never said anything about an happy end, But I hope I'll keep you on the ride

>>25811413
>>25811140
For every cute Flutterpic I'll write faster

>>25811575
She needs to be introduced to gentle, loving sex, and the concept that she deserves to get pleasure from it, too.

>>25811583
Obviously if more than one of them are in the same scene, all except one are that assholes' co-conspirators in the pone-rape Illuminati.

>>25811463
>>25811548
Nah, our Anon doesn't seem to be an abusive kind of guy.
In worst case scenario he'll probably just give up on trying to rehabilitate Skittles but continue to use her as a hug pillow and housekeeper.

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>>25811457
On top of that maybe he also had a new slave he was trying to breaking and they give her to anon. Terns out to be one of skittles old friends and is a big help on her road to recovery.

Even if she is broken I find it hard to imagine her not slipping back into old habits around friends.

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>>25811605
>Sadly I never said anything about an happy end

>>25811615
>implying the rest of her friends haven't already died of broken hearts from being separated from each other for so long

>>25811583
I wonder what stories here could conceivably share the same universe? I know Bookhorse and MOPP threw out references to being the same setting, but what others would fit?

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>>25811605

YOU HEARD HIM, MOREFLUTTERCUTE PICS ASAP

>tfw you need to close the thread for a while for your own mental health

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>>25811640
Here we have a cute picture of a cute Fluttershy enslaved cutely by a cute child.

>>25811642
>caring about your mental health
>on 4chan

>>25811610
>Lauren and her father raping RD together.
Well, that certainly would bring back the incest theme.

>>25811658
Where's that Anon that promised us cute green involving kidAnon and Ponk?

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>>25811605
And I already established Fluttershy to be for lewd and feels

Sadly I never said anything about an happy end, But I hope I'll keep you on the ride
o lawdy

Dumping kawaii flutters

>>25811666

>666

Trips confirm 4chan was made by saten

>trips also confirm m00t is satan

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>>25811605

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>>25811605
>Sadly, I never said anything about a happy end
>For every cute Flutterpic I'll write faster
You're playing us, you sick fuck, and it's working.
You brushed up on your intermittent reinforcement.
>mfw I told you to do it two threads back

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>>25811605
have you enough kawaii?

>>25811605
If you're going to just kill her off or make her suffering worse I would rather you just stop now never continue.

>>25811681
Be calm, anon, it will probably be a few hours. Usually by then the writefags are in full swing.

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>>25811605
fluttershy is for love

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>>25811583
>sex change
Story about anon buying a colt and turning him into a pretty mare when?

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>>25811605
love in all its forms...

>>25811717
no, more, I need MORE

seriously, don't spam the thread.
Uhh...
didn't mean for you guys to actually do it, but then again it might bw just a single weirdo reader

>>25811737
I'm not a monster
I can just neither confirm nor deny the existance of a happy ending


>>25811750
4 or 3 threads ago

>>25811754
>posts flutterwings
You're one sick fuck, you know that?

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>>25811605
I don't even

>>25811717
>No lip bite
How can you say that you're trying?

>>25811559
>>25811527
>>25811457
>>25811345

>A bunch of retards who can't read

You know what estaes sale means right? It means he's dead. Skittles former owner is DEAD. D-E-A-D. Dead. You can't do anything to him and he can't do anything to you because 'he' doesn't exist anymore.

>>25811642
It would be great ff you closed out of it forever

>20 Posters, and over 70 replies
Replys yet no green? Guess I'll have to fix that.
*cracks knuckles*
Be back in 30.

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>>25811761
look what you've doooone
you've ruined this thread with adorable butterpone
the only way you can repent is by writing more, austrianon!
>>25811767
i see we're both wingmen

I don't have a carlos face

>>25811800
>*cracks knuckles*
*grabs throat" BACK THE FUCK OFF!?!?!!

>>25811793
You need a numbing agent for your hypersensitive clitoris.

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>>25811816

>>25811066
Continuing from http://pastebin.com/VAG2qGzh

> There was nothing quite like sleeping on a cloud.
> No bed - despite how soft, how comfortable, how well it conformed to your body - could match the sensation of sleeping slumped over the fluffy girth of a cloud.
> Resting on it - adrift amid they sky - you feel perfectly at home, free of any concern or worry.
> As secure as any earth pony or unicorn in their citadels or a griffon in its aerie.
> The sun shone strong, warming your back and wide-spread wings with its rays.
> Waves of heat massaged and soothed the residual aches in your muscles, washing the last remnants of exercise from your body.
> This - sleeping calmly and warmly after a bout of solid flight - was the closest thing to heaven you could imagine.
> Foldings your wings against your side, you roll to expose your belly to the sun's heat-
> And instead found yourself tumbling to the aircraft's solid floor in a tangle of limbs and blanket.
> Nothing like a good fall to wake a pegasus up.
> Rubbing the aching bump on your head with a hiss, you glances across to ensure Anonymous was still sleeping.
> Though you could not see him through the curtain spread in front of his bunk, his breathing remained unchanged and soft - apparently oblivious to the tumble you had taken.
> Snorting softly with flared nostrils, you climb back onto the mattress and settle back down.
> Sleep is far from your mind now, however.
> Groaning, you pull the pillow over your head.
> The effort goes to waste, as all that fills your mind now are thoughts of Equestria past.
> ...would you even ever get to sleep on a cloud again?
> Even if he let you off the chain more often, would he allow you to fly that distant before he used the collar to stop you?
> Giving said chain a vicious, but pointless kick you pull the blanket around yourself as some kind of armor against the intruding thoughts.
> Not much use either.
> Already you can feel the anger welling up again.
> Anger, and fear.

>>25811793
>You know what estaes sale means

Goddammit I meant "estate sale"

>>25811816
>Immediately replies to a half assed insult
>Churns out a 'witty' reply to the person who dared insult his ego
>"Ha! Th-that will show him"

Oooh I struck a nerve didn't I.

>>25811874

> Fear that you would spend the rest of your life - certainly, the rest of your time as a useful slave - chained to this contraption.
> Anonymous called you by name now, sure.
> And in the last few weeks he'd allowed you a few more 'adventures' outside the aircraft on various duties.
> But compared to the dream whose memory now taunted you, that was nothing.
> Cursing softly, you lay down again and try to steady your breathing.
> That, at least, was something you still had.
> A part of the training every Wonderbolt was to learn how to squash their fear down.
> You cannot fly when paralyzed with terror at every maneuver.
> It works - your breathing slows - but something cold and wet runs down your cheek instead.
> Another oath breaks your lips; how long had it been since you'd cried?
> Not when they'd first dragged you into the cage or set the collar on your throat.
> Rage had ruled those moments, not sadness.
> But now...
> You shudder softly.
> Now it was harder to put the fear aside.
> You'd already been getting on in racing years, nearing the end of your peak.
> It wouldn't have been too long before you'd have been finding a new Captain for the Wonderbolts.
> If you were kept chained down here for too long, you'd miss the last prime years you had left.
> Not to mention the rest of your life...
> What if he kept you until you were too old to effectively work anymore?
> The thought of never getting back into the sky until your wings ached with arthritis and you could barely reach the clouds was enough to send terror spiking back into your heart.
> Normalcy, you realized - that was what had changed.
> When you'd been in the cages, it had ben just oppressive enough to prevent your mind from wandering.
> Keeping your sanity had been a constant and endless struggle, but no you recognized it as something of a merciful distraction.
> Now that you'd settled into a normalized routine of work, however - now you couldn't avoid thinking about the future.

>>25811583
>"Hey, Anon, bro, do we seriously have to do this?"
"Sorry Shining, or should I say Gleaming. It's the rules."
>You watch the white pony fidget around.
"Well? I'm waiting."
>You start tapping your foot.
>"Alright, don't laugh. This is so not cool bro."
>Gleaming on the leather collar around their neck.
>"There you go."
"'There you go' what?"
>"There you go, m-master."
"Good girl, Gleaming."

>>25811793
>Rainbow Dash couldn't handle the abuse and murdered her previous owner
>That's why she was so cheap when Anon bought her
>Anon doesn't even realise he can end the same way if he does something wrong to his "loyal" pone slave
This story is starting to get 2creepy4me.

>>25811888

> Again quieting another shudder, you hunch closer to the bed and try to focus on your training.
> It wasn't wrong to be afraid.
> That was the key, they'd taught you.
> Don't try to push the fear away; fear was natural.
> A reminder that you were alive.
> But don't let it control you.
> ...
> Easier said than done.
> Especially when you were literally owned by another now, shackled to his home.
> At least so far these moments had only hit you in private.
> Letting your master see you like this...
> It wasn't something that your pride could stand.
> What little pride there was anymore.
> So instead you grit your teeth and let a few shameful tears run down your cheeks.
> Again your hindleg delivers a vicious kick to the collar's chain, spite lending the blow its strength.
> Only then do you sink down again, rolling aside-
> Muscles lock as you freeze.
> From this angle, you realized the curtain separating Anonymous' bunk had slid back slightly.
> Just enough to see part of his face.
> And for there merest moment, you'd have sworn there was a glint of moonlight reflecting on his open eyes.
> Had he seen you?
> Been spying on you?
> If he had...
> Muffling your hooves against the metal floor and the clinking of the chain as best you can, you slip again from the bed.
> Four careful steps bring you across to face his bunk.
> At that height, his head was only slightly below yours.
> Muscles itch with readiness, urging you to spin around and lash out to punish him for intruding on your moment of vulnerability.
> No, for all of this.
> For the hell he put you in while pretending to be civil.
> It would end here, too.
> One good solid blow to the head and - then what?
> A quick death, if you were lucky.
> The labor farm, more likely.
> A few minutes of mental tussle, you conclude he was either fast asleep or exceptionally good at hiding it.
> Turning, you climb back to bed one last time, and-
> "Spitfire?"

>>25811902

Incidentally, do people want me to continue this? I realize it's not as straight-up feelsy or whiteknight-ey as some of the others are.

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>>25811878
>Oooh I struck a nerve didn't I.
Well I was striking all the nerves, it was time for you to get a shot.
Select all images with popcorn.

>>25811800
Do it, Anon. We believe in you.

>>25811915
oh god please, its my favorite. i love their relationship, not a sadist/white night just a guy who needs a slave. and your spitfire is amazing.

>>25811915
>Incidentally, do people want me to continue this? I realize it's not as straight-up feelsy or whiteknight-ey as some of the others are.
>not as feelsy or whiteknight-ey as others
Good, it means that you actually have an imagination.

>>25811243
>>25811253
>>25811275
>Believing that is the real Jessi

You know anyone can write Jessi Jinx in the name field right?

In the future don't reply to any namefag unless there is green in the post or some other way like a confirmed trip that otherwise confirms their an actual writefag.

Cause otherwise all you get is a situation like last thread where a bunch of namefags shit up the thread.

>>25811915
Fuck off with that green shit this is a shitposting and namefag arguing general.

Who is your favorite FoE artist?

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I dont even know what the fuck is going on anymore

>>25811888
check'd
>>25811915
Fuck yes, continue. It's one of my favourite stories. The relationship feels more real and so does the whole "shit i'm a slave".
If you don't want to continue that's one thing but man it's a good story.

>>25811889
Go on

>>25811915
meh. i've been reading. it's kinda like the maud story. Though this anon has absolutely nothing i can relate to. Don't really have any feelings for spitfire either. The whole story is just some guy wants a slave and his slave just want's to be free. The End.

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>>25811400
>Anon decides to buy a pone slave.
>He gets fucking Celestia somehow.
>Anon decides to take advantage of his brand new slave's abnormal size and decides to ride her.
>Celestia is oddly okay with this.

>>25811812
Calm down.

>>25811927
I believe in me too.

>>25794099

>After getting home and settling in for the evening both you and Rainbow watch the weather channel to see the forecast for the week.
>Still supposed to continue being clear for the couple of days with some overcast making it's way later.
"Hey Rainbow, you said weather was controlled where you lived right?'
>"Yeah, why?"
"Did you ever have to change the forecast for events?"
>"Well some strings got pulled from time to time for some of the higher up events, but not really."
"Huh, that must have been convenient."
>"Yeah, nopony liked having a party on rainy days."
"Anyone would hate that. Then again I didn't have many parties."
>She looks at you with curiosity.
>"What about birthday parties?'
"Eh, I had a bunch of 'friends' at school. At the end of the day though I was left with a small cake from my mother and a few presents."
>You sit forward on the couch.
"It doesn't bother me though. Never had a strong thing for parties."
>"Dude, that's kind of sad."
"Yeah well I live in a world where you'll know who your true friends are after you finish school. Turns out I didn't have as many friends as I thought."
>You let out a sigh and slouch back into the couch.
>Rainbow looks away for a moment and starts pondering to herself.
>Please don't give me a pity party. I was just saying.
>Your thoughts are immediately interrupted by a hit to the shoulder.
>"You got a friend right here, Anon."
"Yeah we established that not too long ago didn't we?"
>"Hey, I'm just saying that if you need anything I'm here."
>She leans in closer.
>"After all you did buy me.."
>She raises and lowers her eyebrows.
"Oh so we are gonna play by that card, eh?"

>>25812208
>The air got slightly intense, in a good way.
>"Heh, I'm not gonna let that go easily."
"Well, as 'Master' I will ask the 'servant' on her opinion on what to do right now."
>You give her a fierce stare with a sharp grin.
"So what did you have in mind?"
>Apparently this kind of confrontation only intrigues the pony even more.
>"Well 'Master', it's your rules so you call the shots."
"Well I will let you call the shots for once."
>"Huh? i didn't take you for being submissive."
"Well, there is always a first time."
>Both of you are not acting like yourselves right now.
>Actually is she trying to pull something here.
>"Well as 'Master' for the night..."
>She quickly grabs you on the shoulders and pushes you back on the couch.
>You forgot how strong this pony could be at times.
>She is looking at you dead center.
>And whispers to you.
>"I will repay you for all the kindness you've shown me~..."
>Those are some vicious bedroom eyes.
>Your heart just skipped a beat and you start feeling very nervous.
>I-is she for real? You try to speak but words aren't coming out.
>Not even a moment later her expression starts breaking and she starts cracking up.
>She flew into the air and starts laughing hysterically.
>"Pfffftthahahahahah! You should have seen the look on your face! That was great!"
>You aren't moving.
>Your body is still slightly in shock from what just happened.
>Goddammit Rainbow......

Small update and teasing, fun fun fun.

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>>25811915
You better not stop.
I get a pretty decent amount of critique and replies when I post parts of my story, but your story was the reason I started writing for this thread in the first place. Your parts are without a doubt the ones I anticipate the most when I come through here.

>>25812219

theres the pankster rainbow we all know and love!

>>25812219

rd's reaction was my own
almost spit my ramen on my keyboard

>You are Pinkie Pie
>How long have you been in this place now?
>You don't really know
>You guess it doesn't really matter anymore
>You lost any hope of returning to Equestria a long time ago
>Or of seeing any of your friends ever again
>You can't be sure how many of them are here with you
>But you know they all shared the same fate
>These "humans," they're called... decided for whatever reason you don't deserve the same dignity and respect as them
>Never mind the fact that you're just as smart
>You and all of your kind became their servants, their slaves
>You've had it fairly easy, the few masters you've had so far have been relatively nice to you
>Just asked you to keep them company and help around the house
>And most of them couldn't get enough of your baking!
>Most of the time if you got into "trouble" you could worm your way out of it with a sweet peace offering to your master, be it cupcake or cookie, pastry or pie
>But you've heard tales of others that weren't so lucky
>You shudder in your crate remembering some of the things you've been told by other ponies you've encountered
>You also feel the truck you're riding in start to slow down
>You must be approaching your destination
>Your new home
>Your previous owners had been really great
>An elderly couple; you were there mostly to provide them companionship and to help out with the house chores
>But they both passed away
>Within two weeks of each other
>It broke your heart, you had actually grown really fond of them
>In some ways they reminded you of Granny Pie
>They never had a harsh word or an unkind gesture for you
>You were treated nearly as well as their grandchildren
>Unfortunately that also earned you the ire of those same grandchildren
>None of them wanted you around after their grandparents were gone
>You were sort of thankful for that, they tended to be fairly mean to you every chance they got
>Oh well

>>25812329
>You haven't been told a single thing about the people that bought you
>You start to feel a little sick feeling in the pit of your stomach, hoping you were lucky enough to have landed another kind master and/or mistress, like your last ones
>The back of the truck opens up and your crate is rolled out on a dolly
"Are we finally here? My new home?"
>The delivery driver ignores you with an annoyed grunt
>You slump back in the crate
"Gosh, I know I'm just a pony but you don't have to be such a rude-y patootie..." you pout
>Through the bars you can see a very large house and expansive yard surrounded by hedges and fencing
>The house looks as big as a palace
>Jackpot! Your new owners are loaded!
>You can't wait to see the kitchen
>Oh the parties you're going to throw for them!
>Well... assuming they're nice that is...
>There's that little sicky feeling in your tummy again
>You gulp as the delivery man rings the doorbell
>No answer, he rings it a couple more times before resorting to knocking
>"I'm coming I'm COMING, Jesus hold your horses!"
>You can't help but giggle
>He IS holding his horses, mister!
>Well, at least he's holding YOUR horse...
>You do your best to perk up and sit as close to the front of the crate as you can when the door opens, plastering the biggest smile on your face that you can
>Gotta make a good first impression
"Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie! I'm your new pony!" you say with a little wag of your tail and flick of your ear
>The delivery man rolls his eyes
>"You Anonymous Sr.?"
>"That's me..."
>"Sign here."
>The man signs the paper and you're soon wheeled inside

>>25812329
ooooooo

>>25812339
"Whooaaa" you say in amazement, "this place is even bigger than it looks from the outside!"
>The crate is dropped somewhat haphazardly as the delivery man makes a hasty retreat
>"Have a wonderful day, sir..." he says with a clear edge of sarcasm, "fucking rich cunts and their pets, fuck all of em, swear one of these days I'm gonna..." he mumbles as he disappears and you hear him drive off angrily
>To your dismay you're left alone for a while
>You don't see the man that was at the door, but after about a half hour you hear two voices in another room, a man and a woman
>"You didn't tell me it was gonna be PINK, you realize Anon is our SON not our DAUGHTER, right? Couldn't you have picked out something a little more manly for him?"
>"Oh relax, honey, Anon won't care what color the pony is. Where is she, anyway? I bet she's just the cutest little thing, I can't wait to see the look on our little man's face when he sees--"
>You hear the voices gradually becoming closer and see the man has been joined by a woman
>They both look fairly young, you idly wonder how they acquired such wealth at their age
>You shrug it off
>Doesn't matter, fate seems has smiled upon you again, who are you to ask why?
>The woman practically squeals when she catches sight of you
>"Oh my GOD you're adorable!"
>She rushes over to you, with a bit of difficulty evident in her gait, nearly tripping - why do human mares wear those stupid pointy shoes anyway?
>She unlatches the door on the crate and hooks a leash to your collar, coaxing you out, though she's not strong enough to lift you up
>she kneels in front of you and starts hugging and petting you

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>>25812360
Ponk slave...
YES.
i want Ponk all over the place

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>>25812360
>You already like it here
"Hi, mistress! My name is Pinkie Pie! It's so wonderful to meet you!"
>"Hah, 'Pinkie Pie!' Isn't that the sweetest name you've ever heard, dear?" she says as she looks back over her shoulder at her husband who simply shrugs
>"Anon's probably gonna want to pick out a new name for her."
"Who's Anon?" you ask, looking from the man back to the woman and cocking your head to the side
>She squeezes your cheeks and rubs your nose with hers, causing you to giggle
>"You look just like a puppy when you do that! Anon is our son - and your new master, Pinkie Pie. Oh you two are gonna be best friends, I just know it!"
>You stand up on all fours
"When do I get to meet him?"
>"His bus should be dropping him off from school any moment now. OH! Come with me, Pinkie!" she says as she stands up and tugs on your leash gently
>Your new master is a child?
>You feel a bit nervous as you trot along behind her
>Human kids, as you've come to find out, tend to be either really super fun or nasty little brats, in your experience there's not many that fall somewhere in between

>>25812360
I hope he doesn't tern out to be abusive.

>>25812360
>Anon's mom chose ponka
Amommymous has good taste.

>>25812444
"Where are we going, ma'am?" you ask curiously
>"Oh! Pinkie Pie, sweetie, you're a surprise! Anon doesn't know you're here for him," she says as she leads you through the doorway of what appears to be her son's bedroom
"I love surprises!"
>she starts to look around with giddy excitement when she hears the school bus pull up outside
>"Quick, we gotta find somewhere for you to hide!"
"Hmm, I don't see anywhere big enough for me to fit, miss," you reply as you look around the room with her
>"Oh, I know!"
>she pats the bed and motions for you to get in it
>"Go on Pinkie, get up in Anon's bed, I'll throw the blankets over you, hurry, hurry!"
>She's practically dancing in place as she holds the covers out of the way for you and you climb into the bed as you hear footsteps coming up the stairs
>she takes off the leash and does her best to hide you from sight, surrounding you with pillows to try to make the surface of the bed under the blankets look even
>"Try to hold perfectly still, Pinkie," she whispers
>You feel your own heart start to race with excitement as the footsteps draw closer and closer

>>25812444

>cue anon doing ao 'oh my goooooooood!'and glomping the F*** out of pinkie

I'm surprised at how fast the threads end, but more with the good quality of the stories

>>25812456
and then they beat the lump on the bed with aluminum bats?

>>25812167
yeah but thats a really nice change from predictable white knight general. spitfire story feels more real.

>>25812469
When the green is good going, threads fill up like a fat guy's plate at a buffet.

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>>25811927
>mfw i didnt even say that

>>25811605
Faster I was, but I am not done with what i want to do yet
So you may need to wake early on a saturday

>>25812494
Ok, stay up until 6 AM like I was going to anyways? Got it.

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>>25812494
but fluttery is for now...

Awaiting analpluganons saviour of twalot

>>25812431
Ponk is for loving, snuggly, warm, and tender cuddles.

>>25812574

Ponk is love. Ponk is life.

get ponk'ed

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>>25812468
>"OUHHH MAY GAWD! MOMMY U GOT ME A PONAYYYY"

>>25811492
It sounds like a classic case of a victim of rape.

I think that the former owner of Dash was someone mentally NOT damaged by traumatic experiences or a victim of abuse, but it is as normal as any person in the eyes of society but that basically enjoys causing suffering to weaker creatures that to satisfy an empty fantasy of power or a feeling repressed sexual impotence, so harmed that Rainbow Dash is a Pony with an outgoing personality and a huge ego to destroy their self-esteem and sense of self, making it an emotionally housing empty to put in it all their wickedness and inner perversion

hope to Skittles find him in the future and show her that she could leave the hole where the throw with the help of Anon while he is nothing more than a pathetic little man stuck in a toilet full of his own shit and that is the only slave of his own misery

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>>25812574
i would snuggle and pet her so hard she would die from that. I wouldn't ever let go

>>25812219
you're fucking with my heart, Anon

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>>25811527
In other words, a Black Knight.

>>25811658
Fluttershy is the best mom for one child... in this history

>>25812665
Didn't that end poorly?

>>25811927
"NO YOUR THE ONE WHO'S MAD!" he quickly typed out
>His fat fingers frequently missing the correct keys or hitting ones close to them, but he endures
>With the help of backspace he corrects the mistakes his obesity inflicted on him revealing the post his mind imagine brought to life
"Heh." He slurred outloud to an empty room lit only with the dull light of a laptop "That will show him"
>Momentary a pang of guilt shocks through his body
>'Surely no one deserves to be burned so thoroughly so viciously' his concious cried out
>But, alas it is too late the post had been sent the damage done
>A single tear is shed the glimmering water leaving behind a trail of cleared skin as it wipes away the layer of Doriros (TM) that has accumulated on his face
"I-it h-had to be done"" he blubbers out
>Though sorrow stricken that yet another anon would fall to his peerless wit he takes comfort knowing that his demise was not in vain
>'I have reputation to defend on this anonymous image board people look up to me' his thoughts reassured him
"Maybe one day they'll learn to appreciate my genius and this won't be necessary" he mumbled to the empty room
>Placing his hand on the laptop smearing the screen slightly with the Doritos (TM) dust his hands were coated with he closes his eyes contemplatively
"One day" he whispers

tfw you could be updating your story but choose instead to elaborately shitpost

>>25812339
Liking this writing style. Everything between the dialogue is equally interesting.

>>25812456
dont stop

>>25812665
My inner edgelord has been dormant for a whole 20 minutes, Anon, don't make me dream

>>25812665
"I-I-I am gonna, er, fu-fuck yehhhh"
>The Black Knight gets off his Total Gym
>Holy shit
>He's built like a tank in biking shorts
>"WHAT WAS THAT, BEANPOLE?"
>His A+ pecs bulge with every fucking word as his perfectly chisled face hurls his words at you like fucking huge boulders.
>Though he probably could throw actual huge boulders at you too.
"Uhhh, n-nothing."
>"Good, because if you were gonna start something, I woulda had to dropkick you into the next decade."
>You then flee the Black Knight's gym with Skittles in tow.

>>25812634
>hope to Skittles find him
ESTATE SALE. Anon got Skittles in a estate sale. The only place they could find him is his grave assuming he has one.

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>>25812219
>rape

>>25812710
The greatest disservice I've experienced on this board is that nobody ever puts this much effort into taunting the real me.

Just kidding, that was rushed as hell

>>25812456
>"Did you have a good day at school, sweetie?"
>"MOOOOoooooOOOM why are you in my rooooooom?" you hear a young boy's voice complain
>"Oh, I was just doing some tidying up, honey," she replies as she kisses him and ruffles his hair
>Anon walks over and sits at his desk with a sigh
>"Sure doesn't look like it. And why are YOU cleaning, anyway?"
>You detect a wave of concern flash over his voice suddenly
>"The maid's not sick again, is she?"
>"Wha? OH! Oh no, dear, she's on vacation this week, remember?"
>He sighs with relief
>Showing concern for others, that's a good sign
>You hope so, at least
>"Oh right, I remember now..."
>he reaches into his bookbag and starts to pull out several books
>"So, um... I kinda got a lot of homework to do, mom... was there something else?"
>she glances over at the bed, the poorly-disguised lump formed by your body still having escaped the youngster's notice
>"Anon, you seem a little cranky, why don't you take a nap before you start on your homework?"
>"Aww, come on. I really need to get this done so I can go to the library before they close, I only have two more weeks to come up with a science fair project and-....wait, what's that on my bed?"
>He stands up, his curiosity piqued
>His mom stands in the way, feigning ignorance
>"Oh, just boring old pillows and blankets, but you said you don't want a nap soooo..." she says teasingly, holding him back from the bed
>A mile-wide grin creeps across his face as he struggles to get by his mom
>"You're hiding something for me, a present! What is it, mom? Come on," he giggles, "let me see what it is!"
>"Well, sweetie, you know how you're always asking your father and I for a dog?"
>"YOU GOT ME A PUPPY!?" he bursts out excitedly as he finally pushes past his mother and flings the blankets off of you
>the smile on his face evaporates, and his expression becomes unreadable
"H...Hi there, Anon! I'm Pinkie Pie, your new pony!"

>>25812750
Well, that's not a good sign...

>>25812807
he's gonna get a boner and have a threeway with his mom

>>25812750
Please don't end bad for the Ponk. Am a pessimist and I have a horrible feeling about this.

>>25812485
>real
I don't give a fuck. That's not what i'm in this thread for.

Don't get me wrong. I'm still going to read it. I just don't care for an unsympathetic emotionless pilot. and a slave that shockingly is sad to be a slave.

If there was any fucking real development at all it would change my mind and I would not regret reading as much as i already have.

>>25812750
>expression becomes unreadable
oh no

>>25812329
Good Begin!

>>25812807
He just wanted a puppy, not to get involved in this slavery nonsense. Now he's the protagonist of a story on the backwaters of a Belgian Comic Book Webpost

>>25812830
>>25812830
Seconded

>>25812837

>cue awkward silence

>>25812750
welp
rip in rocks pinkie pie.

>>25812830
just more engaging to read than, X was abused. omg let me love you. spitfire seems to have a greater emotional range than 'dont hit me' which i enjoy.

>>25812453
Ditto

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>>25812750
>as soon as the mom leaves the room he pushes her down onto the bed, covers her mouth, >rapes her and makes her look him in the eyes while he does it

>>25812748
Eh the other gut is better obnoxious cunt that you anyway. I would suggest going for the obnoxious newfag role but Herman kind of owns that.

>>25812750
oh..... bad signal

>>25812967
Agreed.

moar ponk or fluttershy green when?

>>25812750
>Buying a living thing as a gift
As much as they are polite now, I expect some abuse from the parents in the future.

>>25813147
I really hope this catches on.

ponk/flutter green when

>>25813147
Are you saying that all pet owners are abusive?

>>25812750
>His bottom lip starts to quiver as he slowly sits down on the bed next to you
>Oh no, this can't be good
"I might not be a puppy, but I promise we can be good friends, please don't be sad, Master!"
>He tilts his head as he looks at you
>"Master?"
"Yep! You're my new master! I'm sooooo happy to meet you, I can't wait for all the fun we're gonna have together!" you offer him with a timid smile.
>you wriggle yourself up under his arm and lean against him as you lay beside him
"I can even act like a doggy if you want me to, see? RRRUFF! RRRRRRUFF!!" you say, starting to wag your tail and pant, then leaning up and licking his cheek, drawing a chuckle from him as he wipes a tear away from his eye
>"Heh... I'm sorry Pinkie," he says as he pulls you into a hug, eliciting an 'Awww' from his mother, "I just... well, I've wanted a puppy for so long... you're just not what I was expecting is all, but I think I'll like you just as much."
>"Why don't I leave you two to get to know each other, hmm? Anon, if you and your new friend need anything I'll be downstairs trying to figure out dinner," she says as she kisses the top of his head and departs with a satisfied smile
"So, Master! I wanna hear aaaalll about you! How old are you? What kind of games do you like to play? What are your favorite treats? I can bake, ya know, I can't wait for you to try some of my special recipes!"
>For the next hour you're enraptured hearing your new master talk about himself, his interests, and getting to know what makes him tick

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>>25813294

>>25813294
Oh thank the lord, crisis averted, everyone!

>>25813253
Not really.
There is a world of difference between buying something for yourself and selecting a gift, especially if it's something that requires care, something thet becomes a responsibility.
Gifted pets become returned or abused pets more often than pets bought for oneself.

"Dog is for life, not for Christmas" and all that jazz.

>>25813294
>You learn his favorite treat in the whole wide world is chocolate chip cookies, and he seems excited when you tell him you're going to bake him some the first chance you get, with his mother's permission of course
>He loves almost every subject in school, especially science, and sitting out and looking up at the stars at night before he goes to bed.
>He's really into sci-fi and westerns, as evidenced by the various John Wayne and Star Trek movie posters all over his walls, and the little horse and cowboy statues and model starships on his shelves
>He warms up to you rather quickly, and so far he seems like a great kid, much to your relief
>He just turned ten years old about a week ago
>You feel sad when he mentions nobody came to his birthday party but his parents and grandparents
"You mean... you don't have any friends, Master?"
>He shakes his head with a sigh
>"I think that's why my mom and dad got you. They could probably tell I've been feeling pretty lonely lately. I guess it's pretty pathetic that the only way I could get even one friend was for my parents to buy me one..."
>You're quick to wrap him in a tight hug
"Everyone deserves friends, Anon. And if it makes you feel better, I'd like you even if your parents HADN'T bought me! If I met you any other way I'd still want to be your friend."
>That gets a smile from him
>"That's a really nice thing for you to say, Pinkie,"
"Well, I mean it! You seem super nice and I'm really looking forward to spending time with you, Master!"

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>>25813294
Penk master race

>>25813305

>thank god, anon just mental BSOD'd and needed to reboot

Just a thought, but if ponies are considered slaves, would you technically be able to marry one provided she were freed?

>>25813361

>cue legal argument on weather it would be consider xenophila (tuhs lega cus there aint no rule against it) or bestialaity

>>25813294
>"I can even act like a doggy if you want me to, see? RRRUFF! RRRRRRUFF!!"

muh heart

>>25813380
Well since they're sentient, bestiality wouldn't really apply. And I don't know of any country that has laws against xenophilia.

>>25813335
>into westerns
>horse and cowboy statues on his shelves
RIDE THE PONK
RIDE
THE
PONK

>>25813380
>legal argument
it's a slave, you own it. So you can do with it whatever you please

>>25813446
mfw anon is andy

>>25813361
Probably in time if they were given equal rights but there's that old saying

If You Love Someone, Set Them Free. If They Come Back They’re Yours

>>25813492
What if you set them free and they never leave like Skittles?

>>25813446
Don't worry anon, pony rides were requested and they'll be coming.

>>25813314
Yeah no. Getting someone a pet who clearly wants one and the household is ready/willing for one is a perfect way to bring a pet into your life, Hell gift pets are the reason most pets get adopted from shelters (source I work at one).

So you can fuck right off with that adoption shaming shit most animals would appreciate a home of some sort and there are plenty who need one badly. You don't have to be the best owner in the world and you don't have to have the noblest intentions when adopting one just don't be a dick to it and feed it.

>>25813573
>accidentally read that as "just feed your dick to it"

>>25813419

like i said, xeno would be legal cus there aint no rule against it

>>25813335
Ay, Anon, you gonna set up a pastebin for this heart-meltificating magic?

>>25813456
I think he means married as in the legal they are considered your dependent/spouse, they have the right to visitation, can act as an agent for you in situations when you can't, can get alimony, getting a tax break etc. etc.

If you mean just doing the wedding ceremony and taking non legally binding vows with each other then yeah sure I see no reason why the law would stop you... its just when you start asking for that tax break does it become iffy.

>>25813361
Depends if they are slaves in the sense of 'ponies are animals cattle less than humans so we have a right to own them' or slaves in the sense that 'these are prisoners of war and slavery is retribution'. If they are considered animals/cattle/pets then no if they recognized as intelligent beings and enslaved for political reasons I can could see a group of wealthy autist convincing their local senators to pass a bill allowing it. If anything it would be a state issue.

>>25813707
>If anything it would be a state issue.
That's what they said about gay marriage, Anon.

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>Everyone in this thread

>>25811066
Isn0t this basically /SiM/?

>>25813419
>>25813602
xenophellia isn't a defined term legally speaking.The laws as they are RIGHT NOW consider anything not human as a animal period. Should first contact happen those will probably rewritten quickly, but right now it would still be bestiality.

>>25813717
Yes and it WAS a state issue for decades just like the pony marriage thing would be. The problem is the way the supreme court legalized gay marriage required the participants of said gay marriage to be citizens and thus be treated equally. If the participants were slaves and by definition NOT equal then well... it would take another amendment being added to make a valid case for it.

Or some really creative interpretation.

>>25813765
Replace the fist with the words 'GET BETTER', 'FREEDOM' and 'THINK INDEPENDENTLY'' and you've perfectly described Skittles anon.

>>25813791
Hi there friend I would suggest actually reading a story from /SiM/ and here so you can see the difference between the two threads (here's a secret this thread isn't based around domination/breaking)

>>25802660

>He does a bad job hiding the slight smile forming on his face.
"Alright, find something to keep yourself occupied, I'll go make breakfast,"
>"Thank you, uh..."
"Anon. My name's Anon,"
>"Yeah, well thanks,"
>He's genuinely happy.
>You walk into your small kitchen.
>It is time for master chef Anon to shine.
>There's a loaf of bread in that drawer... Or so you thought.
>You spend a solid minute searching for the goddamned bread, finally finding it behind the microwave.
>How the fuck it got there, you haven't the slightest clue.
>With your culinary prowess, you burn the toast like it's Ponyville after the firebombings, then manage to completely mangle it while trying to scrape off the burnt parts.
>Comme un artiste.
>While putting it on a plate, you realize you forgot to ask Soarin what he wanted on his toast.
>Ah, fuck it. You're too lazy to ask, so you just go with butter.
>Who doesn't like butter on toast?
>You find Soarin in the living room.
>He doesn't notice you, he's just kind of standing around, looking at the photos on the far wall.
>There are a few ones with family that he glances at, but what catches his attention is one of you in a dress uniform, walking off the ramp of a C-130.
>You still remember that day, finally returning home was nice.
>He turns back to look at you.
"Well, I've got breakfast. Go ahead, take a seat,"
>"Alright,"

>>25813837

>Good to distract him from that subject, you're sure he has bad memories of the war.
>You can talk to him about those later.
>Soarin complies and plops himself down in an armchair.
>You hand him the plate, and he wastes no time digging in.
>Shit, was this pony starved or something?
>Yep, probably.
>He finishes the first piece, and attacks the second one with zeal.
>When he's done, he still looks hungry.
"Yeesh, want something more? I've got more food,"
>He looks up at you, eyes wide.
>"I can have more food?"
>Yep, those slavers sure do a shit job of feeding their ponies.
>You nod.
"Yeah. Want more toast, or something else?"
>He takes a second, absorbing what he's hearing.
>"M-more toast... Would be nice,"
>The way he's tearing up about the prospect of getting a third piece of toast reminds you of when you first were drafted into the army:
>After almost dying of starvation, your mind was fucking blown when you realized the military had enough MREs to provide *two* meals a day, not just one.
>Shit, you felt guilty for being a damn glutton because of those two measly packs of shit-tier food you received daily.
>Same thing is happening with Soarin here.
>He looks like everything he's ever known was blown away just because you said he could have a second serving.
>Tears well in his eyes as he embraces you with his forehooves.
>"Thank you, Anon. Thank you,"

>>25813837

>Not as bad as sweetie belle at least.

>>25812329
>But they both passed away
oh..
>Jackpot! Your new owners are loaded!
HA
>fucking rich cunts and their pets
Salty delivery people.
>>25812360
okay das cute
>>25812456
These parents seem nice
I like them
Can I have anonymous' mom...
>>25812750
[heavy breathing]
>>25813314
I'd agree with you if it were not for the fact that I used to breed fish and I got so many people trying to buy fish for christmas without proper gear
>Inb4 its just a fish
fuck you I spent time raising them, they mean something to me
>>25813335
O..oh..he's like me at probably the same age
but with money and not poor
I'm sad now
>>25813380
If someone can marry a video game, I'll be damned if i'm not going to marry my bug-pone slave

>>25813314
>"Dog is for life, not for Christmas"

If only my sister knew that. Dog was lucky I was too sympathetic.

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>>25813854
when do they fuck

>>25813335
I'm liking this Ponk story. It's more in character.

>>25813937

>sagata?

>>25811750
I was so confused until I realized that isn't Vinyl Scratch.

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>You stand above the changeling now
>Confused, and in a bit of pain
>But also very interested
>You just fed your little Ling a bit of onion to see if she liked it
>Apparently she did because she latched right onto you
>Didn’t bite, but she did spook you
>So you reeled back, and, in your own foolishness, sliced into your own arm
>You’ve always seen movie soldiers, the nitty gritty kind who know what to do and how to do it
>They’re often pretty good with medic work
>But work slower than the actual medics who have experience
>The medics are like lightening
>Like your new changeling
>You lean down to Ling and show her your arm
“Where did you learn this?”
>“I..its.. standard practice for fighters”
>You grunt
“Well, of course, but you acted like an expert”
>You can practically hear her gulp
“I’m impressed, but.. where did you really learn this”
>Ling looks very uncomfortable, she looks up at you and quickly runs off
>There is a loud slam and you shake your head
>Following the sound you see the spare bedroom is shut
>Instead of prying her for further information you decide to go to your bedroom
>Internet is best source of knowledge these days
>You turn on your computer and search up for any information of captured changelings
>You find some pretty simple but important facts
>Currently, according to humans, there are 4 tiers of changeling
>All but one look the same
>Medic, Warrior, Drone, Queen
>Queen is obvious, Ling called her mother
>Warrior and Medic also are obvious, they’re meant for war
>And Drones, who handle day to day life and fill in for warriors if need be
>The source for the info is more discouraging
>Some of those research centers everyone talks about
>More like prisons and autopsy buildings
“She has to be a medic”
>You shake your head and google ‘changeling medic’
>Now this is what you needed to know

>>25814085

maximum intrest

capatcha is giving me street sign hell

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>>25812718
Kek

>>25813361
Only if you get married in international waters and you're going to live on Mars with you mare/stallion

>>25813765
no

>>25813361
You can marry 'em, but not fuck 'em. Depending on your local bestiality laws and how they're worded.

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>>25812750
>>25813294
>>25813335
>Im your new pony
>I cant wait for all the fun were gonna have together
>Why dont I leave you two to get to know each other
>What kind of games do you like to play
>She wraps him in a tight hug
All of this just makes me want to rail her.

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>>25814296

ponk is not for sexual

>>25812219
My dick is disappointed, but my fancy is tickled

>>25814085

maor.jpeg

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I fucking love this thread, all of these stories are fucking amazing and actually being updated.

>>25795904
Expect an update midday tomorrow.

>Dear Princess Celestia, today I have newfound hatred of google,geico, and the dmv.
Love, Anon.

>>25814443
You hate these things like it wasn't obvious you should.

>>25814482
They were moved up the list, now they sit below wind chill and above the toronto maple leaves.

>>25814523
Makes sense

>>25814523
the Toronto maple leaves are far worse than any natural force.

>>25813854
Go on...

>>25814404
I want to ride the flutterhoers

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>>25814085
(sorry real life was a butt for a moment, had to get a christmas card ready)
>Medics are highly sought after, most of them retreated when the changelings begun to loose the small skirmishes
>The captured ones..turns out they had something extra to offer
>All changelings seem to share an ability to spit some kind of green goo
>Medics though, they had some kind of ability
>Actually it was pretty neat
>They could build cocoons and shit and were really good with natural herbs
>They seemed to be the best for anything from baby sitting to full on emergency room work
>Worth a lot of money
>well, fuck.
>You get back up and look back at your arm
>Its well bandages...with your favorite towel
>Son of a bitch..

>>25814793
>You march your way to the spare room, knocking a few times
>No answer
>You turn the knob
>SUCCESS
>You look around the room with a stern glare
“Ling?”
>You don’t see her
“Ling where are you?”
>You hear a small hiss then a squeak as she covers her mouth
>You look up
>She’s upside down on the ceiling
>Dude wat
>“D..don’t send me away master”
>You raise a brow as you approach under her
“You’re worth a lot of money”
>She whimpers “Don’t send me away! I’ll starve!”
>You open your arms
“Why would I send you away?”
>She gulps “You know why”
>You shake your head
“They wouldn’t pay me full price anyway, you’re injured”
>She blinks and looks at her hooves
>Then to you
>“really?” with a dead pan confused look
“Well, that, and I like you”
>She blushes
>“I like you to”
>You just nod
“Now get down here”
>She doesn’t move
“That’s an order”
>She gulps and lets go of the ceiling
>How did she even-
>No time to think
>Oof!
>She falls right onto you and you squirm around under her
>For a moment Ling stares at you in a daze
>She gasps out and scrambles off of you making you wheeze as you take in a breath
>Human body does not like bug pone on lungs
>Ling stares at you as you sit up, with her wide, scared eyes
>“S..so what are you going to do to me”
>You shrug
“Well all you did was lie to the slave auctioneers, I don’t care about your. Specialty”
>She looks away
>You can see something is making her uncomfortable
>“Y..yeah, but Mo…Queen Chrysalis told us not to tell them what we do”
“So you went with warrior?”
>“Well I’m not a queen”
>Fair
“How did she know what they wanted?"
>“She guessed they’d take advantage of our natural abilities”
“Such as?”
“Putting warriors to hard work, Medics to heal /them/”
>The way she says that makes a shiver shoot down your spine
“Se wasn't wrong, smart thinking on her part”
>Ling suddenly beams at you “The smartest!”

>>25814966
>“Putting warriors to hard work, Medics to heal /them/”
I messed up this line, it was suppose to be green with Ling talking

>>25812219
>A moment and a few deep breaths later you regain yourself and sit up.
"Goddamn Rainbow. That was a little much."
>"Nah."
>You just give her a blank stare.
>She land right beside you and puts a hoof over you.
>"Oh come on. You know that was pretty great."
*sigh*"Whatever, Rainbow."
>She takes her hoof away and pouts a little.
>"Killjoy."
"Sorry, you just really took me by surprise there."
>"Ohhhhhhh. I see. You never actually done "it" before have you?"
"Where is this coming from?"
>"Dude, relax. Admitting that you haven't is okay. I understand."
"O-of course I've done it before!"
>"Dude you were practically a statue on the couch when I did that."
"Okay fine. So what if I haven't?"
>"Then it's completely cool with me."
"Can we get off this subject, please?"
>"Fine by me, *snirk* 'cherryboy'..."
"Uggggghhhh....."
>She lightly taps you on the shoulder
>"Alright. Alright. I'll let it go."
"I hope. It's not like it needs to be talk of the world."
>"Yeah, yeah. I know."
>Both of you spend what remains of the evening having dinner and watching a show on T.V.
>Upon time to go to bed, you feel a tad bit uncomfortable sleeping with Rainbow tonight.

>>25815156
>You open up the curtain in your bed room to reveal that a full moon is out tonight.
>You turn off the bedroom light and the room is still dimmy lit from the outside moonlight.
"Even though we'll be sleeping it's still nice to have some natural light in here to see if we get up in the middle of the night."
>In this dim light her hair color and vivid eyes still stand out among everything else.
>"This does look pretty awesome right now."
>You lay on your side of the bed and cover up.
"Heh. If you say so Rainbow. Goodnight."
>"mm'night."
>You look to see if Rainbow can see you.
>She is facing the other way so you don't have to worry about going to sleep right away
>You stare at the white ceiling that hangs above.
>Sleeping in the same bed, what she did earlier, hell it's almost like you two are lovers or something.
>Your train of thought is broken by Rainbow moving on top of you.
"Rainbow, please don't do this aga-"
>You are stopped short with a hoof covering your mouth.
>"Shut up for a second."
>She takes her hoof away and you don't say a word.
>She lets out a sigh.
>"You know, all in all you're not a bad guy. You've actually been pretty cool these past couple of days."
>"Which is why I feel like I owe you something."
>Her body gets closer to yours.
>"I thought about earlier and how you haven't actually done it yet."
>Oh god you know where this going.
>"And since you've done so much for me..."
>She is making a circle pattern on your shirt with her hoof.
>"Maybe I can help you out, by giving you a first time. Though I'm not doing this out of love or anything."
>She hesitates for a moment.
>"Or maybe I am. It's doesn't matter. What matters is you've helped me. Now let me help you."
>The circular pattern has now changed to a stroking motion of up and down.
>"So, if you're totally down with it. Would you like me to be your first?"

>>25815160
>You are at a loss for words.
>Earlier she was just joking, but this definitely has a more serious tone to it.
>This time she is being completely real about it.
>But what do you do?
>Should you actually have your first time with her?
>So many things running through your mind right now, it's all a lot to take in.
>Without even realizing it you already had a hand running through her hair while you were lost in thought.
>She brings your hand to touch the side of her face and raises an eyebrow.
>"Hehe, so I'll take that as a yes?"
"I-I..."
>You don't know what to say.
>Your mind is so fucking scattered right now.
>Never been in a situation like this before.
>What do you do? What do you do? WHAT DO YOU DO?
>...
>God, she looks so beautiful in this light.
>It's almost a sin to have something so majestic.
>You take one deep breath. You know when you say it, there is no going back.
"...Yes."
>"Feel good after getting the courage to say it?"
>You just give a slight nod.
>"Heh, that's cool. Well, I'm just gonna warn you now."
>She leans into your ear and whispers into it.
>"Your night is about to get even better."
>This must be the side of herself when in bed.
>Everyone supposedly has a different side to them when in bed with the one they love.
>And right now, both of you are showing a different side.
>You are the innocent here, and she is the seductive beauty that will show you the way.
>...Tonight will be a night worth remembering.

Decided to write a bit more, but I'm truly going to bed tonight after this update. You'll get your sex scene later. Don't frown at me plz

>>25814979

moar plz?

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>"Shall we start the bidding? "

>>25815180
diamonds...

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>>25814966
>You pat Ling on the head and lead her to the near by bed
>She watches you until she’s invited up
>Then she hops up beside you
“Yeah.. about this queen”
>“Chrysalis”
“Whatever.. Look.. if she’s ..all the way in wherever you come from, how can you be talking to her?”
>“Well, like I said, mind over matter”
“But.. why doesn’t she just.. abandon you? I mean, there’s no way she can see you again”
>Ling looks down saddened
>“Because she loves us, and we love her”
>Now that you understand
“She’s talking to you a lot”
>“well, not just her, we all do, but yeah, she does”
“why?”
>“She doesn’t want to let us go, she wants to rescue us..”
“I see.. and how does she plan to do that”
>You see ling thinking
>Normal thinking procedure is to tap the chin
>She’s holding her temples
>“well..she wanted human help... but.. she isn’t sure if she can find it”
>You reach over, hovering you hand over Ling head, slowly you bring it down
>Pet pets.
>Ling coos into it, leaning forward and smiling at the kind gesture
>“ She really likes you, she says you’ve been nicer to me than anyone’s been to our species”
>You wince hearing that
“Surely there’s been one..”
>Ling shakes her head “we’re too scary looking..”
"No your not"
>Ling looks up at you with her adorable, hope filled eyes
"I think you're pretty cool..heck, a bit of..something, I dunno some makeup or something, you'd be very pretty"
>Ling blushes bright green
>"oh..no..of course not"
>You see her lick her lips and laugh

>>25814966
>not asking Ling if there is something wrong with the floor
I shouldn't have hoped for that line, but I'm still a little sad it didn't happen because I'm an idiot like that.

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>>25815450
FUCK I can't believe i missed that

>>25812634
sounds to me that the chucklefuck abused her, regreted it, and killed himself without daring to fess up after all, whats the point, with a soul that black?

>>25815351

well, if shes a medic, you should probably see what she knows about people. i mean, she was probably only trained in treating her own kind, and people are gonna be quite biologically different

>>25815468

moar plz?

>>25815351

"taste something good"
>Ling looks away from you and whistles innocently
>Damn cheese leg pones
"Well, non the less. I think that's enough for today, lets eat our dinner and lay down okay?"
>Ling doesn't look at you, seeming embarrassed, but she does speak up
>"dinner would be nice.. but where am I going to sleep"
"Well, There’s this room if you want"
>She looks around it and her wings buzz
>"This whole room, for me?"
"Well, its the smallest room in the house, but, yeah"
>"O..oh.. well, t...thank you"
"Or.."
>She turns to face you
"I don't have any extra covers for in here, so maybe if you want.."
>Her cheek turn even greener under her black skin
>She looks at you for a long moment
"Well?"
>"I.. I'd like that"
>You smile and ruffle her head
>And lack of hair
"Alright then, tonight you sleep with me, then tomorrow we buy you some blankets and, heck, if there’s any cloths you want, check em out"
>Ling isn't sure how to respond to such kindness!
>Its all so much for her!
>And boy does she love the attention
>Happeh bug is best bug
>She hops off the bed and hurries into the kitchen to help you finish dinner
>You follow behind and get back to work, with a new knife of course
>When both are finished you plop down and look across the table to Ling
>She’s already digging into her bowl
“Slow down piggy”
>As usual you get a playful hiss in turn
>Okay then
>You on the other hand take your time eating, thinking up questions
>What does a medic do, why would they want them to treat humans, would she even want cloths, and most importantly
>What is that queen planning
>You hear a huff and a knock on the table
>Ling is glaring at you
“Why are you staring at me like that!”
“Oh, uh, just thinking..”
>She huffs “don’t, its scary!”
“Oh? Well I say don’t order your master around or I’ll bite!”
>You take a big chomp out of your salad
>Both you and Ling laugh at it, and she sighs leaning her head down
>“So, whatcha thinking about?”
“You"

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>>25815687

Hit muh character limit, thats all for tonight

>>25815700
thx for the green
gnight

>>25815700
>>25815750
Oh and as always taking ideas for the green because lolwhynot

>>25815837

hold on, can she read english?

and do changelnigs even have a uniqe written or spoken launguage?

>>25815915
They're going shopping tomorrow, so we'll find out

>>25815941

welp, if they do, it would be fun anon tried to lern a little

(not that hard, i know like, 20-30 words of japanese just from watching anime, its lerning how to put words together and rembering whole lauguage thats the hard part)

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>>25812360
>>25813335
>>"You didn't tell me it was gonna be PINK, you realize Anon is our SON not our DAUGHTER, right? Couldn't you have picked out something a little more manly for him?"
>"You mean... you don't have any friends, Master?"

inb4 Anon is made fun of at school and bullied for having a girly pink pony and he starts hating her, Pinkie's new life becoming an ever-worsening hell as he starts abusing her to release his pent-up anger.

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>>25816056
all the people at school will just be jelly that they dont have a big pink girly furball pone to fuck every day

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>>25815180
>stopping there.
You devious bastard.
I love you

>>25815837
You haven't explored her transforming yet. Maybe to not frighten children or to not trigger the ptsd in vets that fought them.

>>25816484

and because a fluffy (not fluffle puff fluffy, just normal fluffy) pony is (sadly imho) even more cuddleable the a changeling.

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>>25811400
thats where my rarity story is going. progress update about 50% complete unless i decide to call it early. I try to always get about 20k in characters for each installment, right now i'm sitting around 9k. I'd keep writing now but I feel like my quality is degrading as I get more tired.

Honestly speaking it baffles my mind that people would take little pony sized equestria when bigger equestria means ridable ponies.

>>25816484
not gonna say much because i already have aplan for that

>>25816553

I wonder how defesive shes going to get of anon considering literly noboy other then him (whos not a changeling as well) has really shown her anything but contempt

>>25811334

>Celestia claims Anon wearing pants causes chafing against her fur.
>Refuses to let Anon ride her unless he's naked.
>Enjoys Anons embarrassment at being without clothes while riding her.

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>>25811915
Not trying to add pressure to you, but absolutely I would love if you continued. The way you describe how Sofie w feels, as well as her relationship to anon as master-slave is phenomenal. Your story feels very genuine and interesting. It makes me want to keep reading. Good job so far

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I just finished reading Regards, Anon. Dem feels...

>>25813937
>I'd agree with you if it were not for the fact that I used to breed fish and I got so many people trying to buy fish for christmas without proper gear
>>Inb4 its just a fish
>fuck you I spent time raising them, they mean something to me
So where exactly do we disagree?
In your case, gifted pets became dead pets. Ok.

>>25813573
Adopting an actual unwanted animal? perhaps.
Anything with actual market value? fuck no.
>Getting someone a pet who clearly wants one and the household is ready/willing for one
Anon wanted a dog.
Parents wanted a socially acceptable gender-appropriate pet.

>>25817515
>pink pony
>gender-appropriate pet
>for a boy

>>25817515
The dog is for life not christmas line
I seemed to have misinterpreted it for you thinking that people only buy pets for life and not gifts then let them be abused or killed
I was drunk and thats the excuse i'm keeping.

>>25813335
>"I think that's why my mom and dad got you. They could probably tell I've been feeling pretty lonely lately. I guess it's pretty pathetic that the only way I could get even one friend was for my parents to buy me one..."
To be honest this line sounds a bit too serious for a child who have just celebrated his 10th birthday.

>>25817570
How many friends did you have when you where 10? Trust me when it is actually 0 and has been 0 for a while you act a lot more serious and cynical than is normal for you age.

>>25811967
write some green then

>>25817529
>2015
>anon writing before thinking
Never change.

Oh, yeah, my bad, the father wants a gender-appropriate pet. The mother bought a living thing as a gift.
Gotta be accurate with this.

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>"Look Kid do you want a pony or not?"
"Of course I do! Why else would I be here?"
>You motion to the rows of cages around you filled with ponies.
>"Why don't you pick one than? You have been walking around here for over an hour "just browsing" and its getting on my nerves."
>Its not that you wanted to be here that long
>You love ponies and have wanted one since they first showed up...but they are expensive
"Alright here is the issue. I only have about $700 that I can spend."
>He cups his head in his hands
>"Kid our earth ponies run almost twice that. What made you think you could get a pony for that..."
>He stops himself mid sentence
>"Wait right here kid. I might actually be able to help you."
>Curious you stand by and idly stare down a cream colored mare that keeps shooting you dirty looks
>Her two tone purple mane just irritates you for some reason
>After a couple of minutes you hear the squeaky wheels of a cart coming your way
>It isn't long before the owner rounds the corner with a flat cart carrying a wooden crate
>"Alright kid this is the only pony we have that will go for that price."
>You take a peak inside through the air holes of the crate
>You cant see anything
"So why is this one so cheap?"
>"Well she is what I would refer to as "damaged goods". The mare is physically capable but is dumb as a box of rocks. She has been returned twice because of it. After the second time I just couldn't find anyone interested in buying her. I would be about to close the deal when they would read her previous owners statements in her papers. Since I couldn't sell her I was about to ship her off to the farm."
>Shipped off to the farm
>So she was about to be put down
"Can I see her?"
>He nods and opens a couple of latches on the chest
>Inside is a grey pegasus mare with blond hair and bubbles as her cutie mark who is laid down fast asleep
>She stirs a little at the light and mumbles out a sleepy "Morning"
"Sold."

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>>25817632
>Daapi story
Moar p-please

>>25817681
But Anon I only posted this because I thought Derpy was sorely underused in this thread.

I don't think I could turn this into quality green though if someone else wants to try they can.

>>25817690
I only know of one Derpy story and that was the original thread.
She immediately hugged her owner and flew into a window trying to get a muffin.

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>>25817711
She has a lot of potential and I would love to see more. I am just not very good at green and am pretty bad about dropping projects randomly so I am not the type of person you want writing a story.

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>>25817596
>Trust me when it is actually 0 and has been 0 for a while you act a lot more serious and cynical than is normal for you age.
Okay, you have a point there.
I worked as a summer camp counselor last year and there was a fatso child who constantly acted all "serious" and "adult". Needless to say not only he didn't make any friends, but also managed to become an easy target for bullying.
The only reason he didn't end being beaten up is because I looked after him and tried to prevent other kids from picking on him.

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Ay gibe da Skittles, b0ss.

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>>25817974

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>>25817974
Yeah here is the skedaddles I think

>>25816501
>normal fluffy
I'm having flashbacks. wan die

>>25817744
So, which causes which?

>>25797286
>Be Fluttershy
>“I'm taking a look at you, Fluttershy. I- want to see in what condition my property is, after all.”
”Oh...”
>Master's touching your gace, traces his fingers along your muzzle and head.
>And he wants to touch you all over.
>His gentle touch, you don't know if...
>“Do you want me to stop?”
>Your heart skips a beat.
>Does he want to stop?
>No, he can't stop, you've yearned for a gentle touch for so long
”No, of course not, Master. I- I can see why you'd want to do that.”
>Your hindlegs shift slightly as you try to hide any emotion in your worde.
>He removes his hands.
>“You don't have to, Fluttershy. I noticed you shaking in fear.”
>T-That wasn't fear.
>These words didn't manage to escape your lips.
>“If you don't want to be touched, I'll understand, and won't hurt you for it.”
>No, please, t-touch me.
>All that came out of you was a whimper.
>You had to collect yourself before you were able to form words.
”I understand, Master. It's...”
>You sigh. What can you say to make him continue?
”P-Please, be gentle.”
>You close your eyes to wait for Masters hands again.
>Yet he lingers.
>Why wouldn't he touch you?
>Then you feel his hands on you again.
>You put your hands on her again.
>It's as if a weigh has been lifted of you as he was petting your head, now seemingly going around the burns on your head
>“Hey, Don't worry, alright? I won't hurt you, I promise...”
>He'd never hurt you.
>“at least not intentionally.”
>You lean your head in his hands
>As one hand trails down to your collar, his other one stays at your ear massaging your scalp right behind it.
”mhm..”
>You let out a small hum. It feels so good, You want to melt into his touch and feel him more.
>Again you shift your hindlegs slightly.
>Would this lead to...
>Probably not.
>Master said he only wanted to estimate the damage on his property.
>His hands come to an rest though, and you open your eyes to look at him

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”Master?”
>He was smiling. You hadn't seen him smile before.
>“Hmm?”
”You're smiling.”
>You simply state, unsure of what exactly you wanted to say, but you want him to continue petting you.
>“I was just thinking...”
>You wonder what about, but it wasn't a slaves place to question their Master.
>He attempts to remove the collar, but you know the key required for it was-
>“Do you know it my mom has left a key for this?”
"There was one with the leash on the kitchen counter with the groceries she had brought, Master."
>You realize you had just formed a long coherent sentence without stuttering.
>This hasn't happen since you've been to this world.
>Until now that is...
>“Would you get the key?”
>He really want's to remove it?
“The co-collar is a s-symbol of my standing as a– as a slave, Master.
>You want to be /his/ slave.
“I'd rather not impose-”
>“Are you disobeying me? I ordered you to get the key.”
>You cringe internally your words.
>Giving a small whine at yourself, and quickly leave his touch
>You were so ashamed of yourself.
>You need to be a good slave for Master.
>He had wondered yesterday about returning you...
>And he's checking your body for damages.
>If he finds out about your wing...
>You shudder at the thought of what he might to.
>Maybe he doesn't want damaged goods.
>He already knows your mind has taken quite the toll, enough so to consider yourself damaged.
>You need to be good.
>You need to be good.
>When you return with the key you repeat it as a mantra in your head
>He had his palm open and you drop the key inside
>“I'll get you another collar if you want to keep it as a symbol, or an harness where you'll not be yanked at your neck if you'll eventually lead me around.”
>You nod. He needs the help. You need to be on your best behavior.
>“I don't see another reason why I would keep you at a leash, you seem quite well behaved.”

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>You? Well behaved? After all you did?
>“And, uhh... good behavior should be rewarded, don't you think?”
>No, it was the other way around.
”It's...”
>He begins to unlock the collar on your neck and you stay silent for the duration.
>Bad ponies need to be punished. Only good ones get to eat, sleep, and have some rest.
“I have n-not been a good slave for you to give me such freedom”
>You sniff as tears well up in your eyes again.
“I-I hesitate, I object your orders, and I-I even insulted you.”
>“Please don't cry, Fluttershy.”
>He grazes over you again.
>Your mane and wound neck.
>You almost feel the sparks of the collar on you again, but way weaker.
>Only a tingling sensation. Not something you had ever felt at the touch of another.
>not pony, and certainly not human.
>“Hey, you're not a robot. You're a living, feeling pony.”
>You have no idea what a robot is.
>“And I'll treat you with the respect one should have for all creatures, alright?”
>Yes. Yes! Kindness.
>A basic pillar of harmonious coexistence of all living beings.
>“I mean... if you want to cry you are allowed to do so, but I really don't mean you ill will.”
>“You've been a good sl- a good pony, Fluttershy.”
>He sees you as a pony? Not just as a slave?
”I w-w-won't cry, M-master. I won't be a bother to you.”
>By now you'd rather cry of happiness than of sadness
>“You're not a bother. You're-”
>He pauses
>“You're something I can focus my mind on. I mean- you saw me yesterday? You even called me out on depression.”
”I'm so sorry about that- I didn't know what came over me.”
>You had been so rude
“I just- I saw you to be in pain, and-”
>He interrupts you.
>“I know I'm in depression. Bad enough that I have some on-demand happy-pills, next to the ones I need to take in the morning.”
>He rattles with the box you had brought him earlier.