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Pony Transformation General

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Your one stop shop for all MLP-related transformation needs. Writefags, drawfags and lurkers alike are all welcome.
Any type of transformation into or from ponies, dragons, gryphons, minotaurs, changelings, or any other beings from the MLP:FiM universe is fair game.

Previously on PTFG,

CRUNCHTIME: http://pastebin.com/SLiRMr3v
Changelings!: http://pastebin.com/ym0WgtVv
The Adventures of Bob and Gerald: http://pastebin.com/VLxEmNMG http://pastebin.com/0Yy376dA
And some other stuff that's not yet on pastebin.

Below are some suggested writing prompts.

AiE Going Native:
>Somehow anon managed to get stuck in Equestria. It seems that the magic in the world around them is catching up to their mundane body, and in amusing ways. Watch as anon adjusts and makes sense of the new world and soon to be new body.

Pon-E:
>A pill of questionable legality is now available. Taking one results, over the course of a minute or so, in a complete transformation into a little pony lasting twelve hours. The caveats are twofold: First there is no way to predict in the appearance that will result, pegasus, unicorn or earth pony; stallion or mare. Secondly taking two pills within a day renders the transformation permanent.

Occult:
>Spoopy things are afoot, as some strange rites have been performed by a mysterious group. Following members of the cult or unknowing trespassers into the area of the ritual as people randomly start becoming small pastel horses.

Story archive and additional links and materials:
http://derpy.me/PonyTF

Unrated TF image dump thread:
http://derpy.me/ptfgnsfw

Official /soc/-type chatter's in #ptfg on irc.rizon.net

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>>25637787
No problem man.


I'll post more later, probably at an ungodly time of the night. Right now I'm going to eat pizza and play vidya like a lazy fuck.
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Would I be scum if I was somewhat interested to see how fun playing the role of master for a cute pet pone would be? I probably wouldn't anyway because I can't be fucked with anything irc, but it just sounds fun.
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>>25638694
I'm sure many would be interested in being your pet. Myself included.

Fuck irc though.
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>>25638694
Nope. You'd probably have to deal with irc for a bit but in the end you could pull a pet pony out of there and onto kik/skype/text or whatever.
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>>25639133
I think its the pone from the one where its a marriage or something

Where the wife is all like 'Husband I am horse' and then antics ensue.
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>>25639133
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/78216/my-little-marriage-mary-is-a-mare
Comes from this story, which I haven't got around to reading yet.
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>>25639179
Spoiler: Wife becomes hose.
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>>25639191
I heard it gets messy at that point, she starts having an affair or something.
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>>25639191
>Wife becomes hose.
>Hose

You had one job Anon... and you fucked it.
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>>25638942
>Joining established irc communities
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>>25639211
This isn't really relevant to anything, but I'd love to untangle those horses.
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>>25639191
>>25639211
>>25639239
>>25639609
We /hose/ now?
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>>25639654
Or transformation into the tangled up snake pone.
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>>25639908
yes pls
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I realise it was a couple of months ago now but I only just got around to reading it, so Zenith, if you're still about, your latest chapter was really damn good.
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>>25642270
Every fuckin thread
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Delivery today. Just as a Pastebin.
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>>25640739
Well, that slithered in fast.
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>>25642439
Nice
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>Come back to new thread.
>Hoses.

Love it.

Quick update.

“What?”
>You shake your head, away from the meat, back to Chad’s meat.
>…
>Back to reality.
>Wiping the drool from yourself, you peer down at the duct tape still tangled up in your fur.
>It was a hell of a mess.
“Sorry about that, I was distracted by your meat. It’d be good to get this out yeah.”
>Chad nods and swallows a forkful of his steak.
>”It’s real juicy. Here, follow me.”
>You hop down off of the bed and Chad gets up out of his seat.
>Humming Whole Lotta Love by Led Zeppelin, Chad casually grabs a bottle of olive oil, some shampoo, and a towel.
>You follow Chad outside his room and across the hall to the bathroom a few doors down.
>He opens the door for you and you trot in, all business.
>”Can you get up to the sink?”
“Easy.”
>Fore legs up, hooves on sink.
>Chad pops the cork off of his olive oil bottle, sets his shampoo down and hangs the towel he brought up on the door.
>”Lean in a bit, over the sink. This is high quality stuff and I don’t want to waste a bunch of it on the floor.”
>You oblige, sticking your neck out as far as you can.
>”Naw not quite.”
>Sighing, you drop back down.
“Just pick me up then, and hold me over it.”
>”I’d say no homo but I don’t have sex with possible ghost affiliates anyway.”
>Before you can ask him what the fuck that’s supposed to mean, Chad’s hands wrap around your barrel and he takes you up in the crook of his arm.
>You can’t help but notice that you kick your hooves a little out of some new instinct.
>Chad hefts you up so that he can get you over the sink properly.
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>>25642659
>You peer up at him as he pours the olive oil out onto the duct tape and your fur.
“How is this supposed to work anyway? Why the olive oil?”
>”Olive oil works on everything, except things that would be better done with butter, and butter doesn’t work on tape.”
“Are you fucking high right now?”
>Chad just rubs in the oil, working away at the adhesive bit by bit, getting all the sticky parts cleaned free.
>Eventually he just takes the tape off, with no resistance at all.
“Well shit. Consider my words eaten.”
>Chad leans over, with you still in his arm, and picks up the bottle of shampoo.
>Back over the sink again, you get the idea and twist the faucet handles on with your mouth, getting a nice even and warm stream of water going.
>Without warning he dunks you under it, and you’re gasping, mane and neck instantly soaked.
“Dude come on now.”
>”Sorry I thought you were expecting it, here.”
>Chad reaches down and pushes your sopping wet mane out of your eyes.
>You try not to shake, but you wind up doing it anyway, mane flipping everywhere and ears flopping around.
“Shit, soAHCHOO. *sniff* I’m sorry man.”
>”It’s fine, this is my cheap bathrobe anyway.”
>As you sniff and snort at the water getting in your snout, Chad lathers up your mane and neck with the shampoo.
>Feels…
>Good.
>Although you’d never actually say it.
>The smell was nice too, like strawberries.
>It felt especially good when he rubbed around your ears.
>”You okay? You’re snorting an awful lot.”
“It’s fuh *snort* It’s fine. Juhs… *snort* Just instinct. Fording the rrrr… *snort* river and all that.”
>Chad dunked your head back under, rubbing and washing away all the suds.
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>>25642670
>You kept your eyes shut and snorted extra hard to keep the shampoo out.
>With a flick of your head, you got your mane swept behind your head.
>Chad set you down easy, and again you kicked, right till you were firmly on the ground.
>”You’re pretty cute for a xeno.”
“And you’re a fucking heretic. Toss me that towel.”
>Chad obliged, lighting up a cigarette as he watched you struggle awkwardly to dry your mane.
>It was hard to really rub in the towel with nothing but your hooves.
>”Here.”
>Chad knelt down and took the towel.
>Quick and efficient, he got your mane nice and dry.
“Thanks.”

That's all for tonight. Goodnight /hose/.
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>>25642681
Thanks based writefag
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>>25642659
>>You shake your head, away from the meat, back to Chad’s meat.
That slip sounds freudian. But then Chad's pretty helpful, I can see the appeal.
The story continues to be awesome.
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I want a pony to suck my finger.
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>>25642439
And where, pray tell, would that pastebin be?
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>>25643786
That's pretty neato. Are feral TFs "ok" with the rest of the general?
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>>25644942
I don't mind it, but no doubt there's that one sperg who will freak out and eat their own feces at the faintest suggestion of it
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>>25638726
Is cute mare?
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>>25645007
Of course~
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>>25645092
Hmm... You drive a hard bargain.
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>>25644063
Pony'll suck your fingers clean off. You won't have any more use for them when you become the pony.
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>>25644597
Once I finish the today's delivery, I'll paste all the work i've done today and send the link out. If it doesn't get added to the OP, I'll add it at the end of the daily delivery.
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>>25646211
In related news, Delivery soon!
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>>25646223
And people say this general is dead...
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>>25646293
It sure will be dead for the weekend, as i won't have a way to post. But i'll try to write. That being said, i could also be too busy and write on sunday, 2 in the morning. Timezones, i tell you.
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>>25638694
It seems fun in theory, but you have to realise that the person at the other end will likely sperg out and betray you and make it all 'reverse submission' where you become the pet or some shit.

That's what all the 'pets' boast about, anyway. None of them really want to have a solid bro / master.
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>>25646364
But we're all spergs.
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Reposting last delivery to get the wibe, and to remind where we left off.

>Later you're awoken by a scratching pain on your neck, around the bite.
>You groggily walk over to the bathroom of your hotel room, and check the area around the bite.
>The near vicinity is swollen, and the top of the pimple is black, hard, almost looking like a bug's elytron.
>Must be an allergic reaction to the bite.
>Thankfully you took some basic first aid things with you.
>Like sterile gauze squares, and an antihistamine unguent.
>It's simple. You put some of the liniment on the swollen bite, flinching slightly as you tap it in. Then you put the sterile gauze squares onto the affected area, and a couple spins later, your neck is wrapped in a permeable bandage.
>And not too long after, you feel quite a good bit better.
>You look at the clock on the wall, and see that it's around the time when lunch starts.
>Yeah, you're famished.
>You make way to the reception, and are given an armband. Something about identifying your all inclusive reservation.
>You make your way to the restaurant, and pick up a meal.
>Some rice and a sauce, is what you pick, though you have much more available.
>You don't feel like stuffing yourself anyway.
>You sit at a table with a view of the sea.
>The food is nice but something else catches your attention.
>The air has something sweet to it.
>Something that smells terribly sweet.
>But strangely you don't mind.
>The scent is intoxicating your mind, clouding your thinking.
>But, god, it smells so good.
>Suddenly, you snap back.
>The scent isn't there anymore.
>But you know it was there, you know from where did the smell emerge.
>Strangely the smell seemed to emerge from a young couple next table.
>You finish your lunch. Though, after the incident, you aren't too hungry anymore.
>You leave the restaurant.
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>>25646513

>You get to your hotel room, and unwrap the bandage around your neck.
>Holy shit. This isn't an ordinary allergy.
>The bite itself is hardly visible. But that is because the tissue around it took the same colour and shape.
>Your veins that come through the affected area are coal black.
>With each of your heartbeats, the affected veins pulse, the black spreading more and more.
>It doesn't hurt.
>But it looks scary. Real scary.
>Alright, Anonymous. Think.
>The portfolio said that there is a doctor in the hotel.
>Yes, a doctor should know about what you're affected with.
>And doctors are bound with a promise to stay silent.
>Yes, that's he best idea.
>You fix your bandage and move to the reception.
>The black blood vessels edge over the bandage.
>The receptionist kindly directs you to the doctor's office.
>The waiting room is empty.
>You knock.
>No answer.
>You knock again.
>No answer.
>You press your ear against the door.
>You can hear clear snoring.
>The good doctor is asleep.
>Not that you're surprised.
>The hot air makes it hard to stay awake.
>You try to open the door, and to your surprise, it's unlocked.
>The doctor has his legs kicked up on the table.
>And he's spreaded over the entirety of the office chair behind his table.
>You cough.
>No response.
>You cough a bit louder.
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>>25646526
>The doctor wakes up, and quickly sits properly.
>"Sorry. Had a night shift in the hospital. What can I help you with?" The doctor says.
"I've been bit by a bug in the jungle, and I think I've got an allergy. I've applied an antihistamine unguent, it helped with the itching."
>"Alright. What's your issue, then?" The doctor ask.
>You unwrap the bandage, and show your neck to the doctor.
>The veins have almost spreaded over your check.
>One half of your neck is covered in the black chitinous material.
>The second half is well on it's way to being completely covered.
>Heck, you swear that the neck is a bit longer as well.
>The doctor gestures to take your shirt off too.
>The veins have evenly progressed to the start of the collarbones.
>Fuck. It looks terrible.
>The doctor comes close, examines the bite area, and the spread area.
>He gets some thick rubber gloves, and touches the affected, chitinous tissue.
>It isn't painful, you feel it as if there was normal skin there.
>But you know there isn't, because normal skin bends under force.
>And the changed tissue doesn't.
>It's rock hard.
>Something else catches your attention.
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>>25646535
>An odd scent.
>Something like a library with hundreds of books that just beg to be opened.
>The scent is subtle.
>But it's there.
>And it's coming from the doctor.
>The doctor's words send you back into reality.
>"I'm pretty sure this is an allergic reaction, Sir. No need to worry. I'll administer stronger antihistaminics. " The doctor says, and prepares a prescription.
>You take it, thank the doctor, and go to he pharmacy next door.
>Along the way, you try and read the paper.
>After some deciphering later, you've finally found out what's the medication assigned to you.
>Levocetirizine, and Pentomer.
>Yeah, Levocetirizine is an antihistamine. But Pentomer is a vein dilator.
>You decide to believe the doctor, and pick up your medication.
>You should go to your hotel room.
>What a bummer. You're sick on your holiday.
>So much for hoping to get an easy rest.
>You get back to your hotel room. Unnoticed, thankfully, you would really make heads turn.
>Sleep heals, so you kick in the medication, and go to sleep.

God damn fucking 2k chars post limit.
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>>25646543
>Around twenty minutes later, you're awoken by a strong pain in your arms and fingers.
>Groaning, you groggily open your eyes.
>The display that lays itself before your eyes is undescribable.
>To your horror, the chitin spreads before your eyes, onto your arms.
>>You tear down your shirt, and witness the substance spreading on through your chest.
>You wince as the hard black substance envelops your fingers, creating a black numb flat surface on where your fingers used to be.
>You look at your other hand, and see the same happening there.
>You want to scream, but you can't.
>You can only breathe and see your body losing what it used to be.
>Your hand joints painfully reorganize themselves.
>You wince as a sharp pain hits your stomach and back.
>You can feel your organs shifting.
>Something grows out of your back, making a couple buzzing sounds in the process.
>The chitin spreads even further downwards.
>Right around your crotch.
>You moan silently, as your manliness retracts into your body
>Oh, fuck.
>This did just not happen.
>You look at your arms. They look like hooves.
>You wince as all your lower half bones crack, and change.
>Pelvis, then the leg bones.
>Something pushes out of your spine end.
>Your neck painfully shifts, and he chitin spreads all over your head.
>You feel something pushing out of your forehead.
>You see your nose shift in front of you, into the same black chitinous material as the rest of your body.
>You pant.
>The thing is hopefully over now.
>You try to stand up.
>You wiggle, and fall back down on the bed.
>Everything is so different.
>You're still panting.
>You would be sweating, if you could.
>After a few tries you manage to stand up, and a unsteadily walk to the bathroom mirror.
>It's too high.
>Fuck.
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>>25646543
>God damn fucking 2k chars post limit.

You gotta master it, bro. It's the fun part of greentext - you gotta shed the fluff and optimize as best you can for 2000 characters until it's solid (BnG being an example)
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>>25646559
>You can turn your head quite well though.
>You turn around a bit, and see that you have wings now. Bug wings.
>With a couple little holes.
>Speaking of which, your light blue mane, which you've only found out because it fell into your eyes, seems to naturally hold a couple holes too.
>And one more look reveals your legs are filled with a couple holes as well.
>Now to try to fly those wings.
>You focus, and hear a buzzing sound.
>You try harder, and you feel yourself lifting off the ground.
>You open your eyes.
>You're buzzing your wings, flying at the mirror's level.
>Back at you is staring a black coatless tall mare.
>She has a horn too.
>A horn crooked in multiple places.
>YOU have a fucking horn. You are the mare in the mirror.
>Fuck.
>You look at the wall clock. It was roughly 20 to 30 minutes.
>And you know that medicine given per os, through the mouth, takes that long to take effect.
>That doctor.
>The vein dilator.
>It must've given off a light tachycardia as a side effect.
>Dilatated veins mean higher volumes of blood transported with each beat, and with the beats being faster...
>You couldn't figure out a better way to spread....whatever the heck the thing that caused this was around your body.
>You want to scream and push your fingers into your eyes.
>This is the worst thing imaginable.
>There's one last thing you have to check.
>You fling yourself to turn around, and try to swish your tail, to the side.
>It's not there.
>Little Anonymous isn't there.
>This is the last nail into your coffin.
>Tired, exhausted, and frustrated, you pass out on the floor of the bathroom.
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>>25646567
Noticed that, I just got on a roll. Surprised that after all the twitter i do, i'm not used to croppping my things. Minor setback.

>>25646569
And, heck yes, I'm done for today.

Pastebin here : http://pastebin.com/6DT4tXbg
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>>25646586
Nice update
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>>25646592

Yeah, spent some time on it. Next update hopefully on Sunday.
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>>25646364
I mean, are there none that actually want to be good and obedient or are they all out to be little shit heads?
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>>25646920
Probably the latter, but who knows. If they had a 'previous master' then that's a warning right there.
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>>25647225
I'll keep that in mind...

>>25645092
Is that a greenlight?
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>>25647225
>tfw looking for seventh master and read this
Shit...
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>>25646586
Really nice and quite creepy. Looking forward to the next update.
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>>25647473
That's actually really impressive. How much do you have to suck for that to even happen?
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tfw you get to the last chapter of a story and it's been on 'hiatus' more than a year.
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>>25647656
You must be worse than Snowdrop and Nyx for that to happen
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>>25648241
Which story was that?
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>>25647473
>>25648245
Scribbles pls
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>>25648340
When you think you're posting anonymously, but the whole squad knows it's you, and you know you gonna get roasted for it later
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>>25648463
It's because you're the most obnoxious of the petfags, and pretty much the reason they have a bad name. Ya drama queen. It's like you even attempt to hide who you are.
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>>25648486
I thought there were a handful of them that gave them a bad name. You know, like all of them?
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>>25648486
>Most obnoxious
I just got back onto the general a week ago
You don't even know me
I've been in /pol/ for months
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>>25648520
>I just got back onto the general a week ago
Trust me, we noticed.
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>>25648501
Debatable.

I don't think there's anything wrong with wanting companionship, even if it's just symbolic roleplaying over the internet with a stranger. I also don't think there's anything wrong with having fantasizes, regardless of how strange or impractical they are.

However there's a time and a place for everything, and if you never turn it off to the point there seems to be no self-awareness or shame. then yes you're being obnoxious.

>>25648520
>I've been in /pol/ for months

Explains a lot, m8
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>>25648501

99% of them give the rest a bad name.
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>>25648557
It's not my fault.
I try to make sure my posts are of excellent quality.
I've even gone to workshops and classes on how to post nice content on 4chan.
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>>25648241
>tfw a story you follow and really enjoy suddenly stops updating and the writefag completely disappears forever
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>>25648566
I have nothing wrong with anyone having that sort of interest, nor am I ever really bothered with the noisy ones that post here. It's just fun to mess with them.

>>25648599
So who's the other 1%?
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>>25648669
Eggy fart guy
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>>25648686
I fucking love eggy fart guy.
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>>25648686
>>25648721
I am always here my children, both reading, writing and shitposting.

Just when you least expect it.
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>>25648741
You're an inspiration.
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>>25646586
The link's been added to the google doc. Keep up the good work.
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>>25648741
What about Nigbreezie?
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>>25648967
No clue if they're still around. I assume that, they too, continue lurk in the shadows.

>>25648957
You're neither Globe nor Blackbox. Who are you, mysterious document update?
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>>25649047
Why the fuck does my brain keep missing out words or letters

Maybe if I were to re-arrange all the words and I've missed it spells out "YOU ARE PONE".

I've been huffing my own gases too long
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>>25648967
I miss Nibreezie. Y'all niggas making me nostalgic and shit.
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>>25649097
Don't ever think I left, nigga
Yall ain't my kid
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>>25649916
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>”Eira, Sit.”
>You nod, heeding the order as if doing so was in your blood
>Your hind legs gracefully folding in to rest you on your haunches
>”Good girl.”
>There’s a brief fluttering in your heart at his praise before you’re back to business
>Staring doggedly at his right hand as he’d so firmly trained you to do
>Waiting for even the subtlest of movements to provide you with your next task
>Your Master gave you silent commands via finger gestures
>Two fingers pointed out like a “peace” sign meant sit at his side
>The brusque squeezing of his fist meant lie down
>Your favorite though was when he made the “live long and prosper” sign, because that meant you were to retrieve something for him and, more often than not, receive an ear scritch or maybe a mane stroke in return
>Your Master was firm, direct, and for a long time, he was cold
>But you know why
>You were a bad pony
>You were controlling and manipulative despite knowing your role in life
>Your Master is never to be controlled
>And that is something that had been made very, VERY clear to you
>As your Master exchanges pleasantries with a friend he’s brought you along to visit, you continue to glare strenuously at his digits
>And before long, you’re offered a fist squeeze followed by the peace sign
>Lie down, but at his side
>There’s no bout of thought or consideration once you’ve deciphered the command
>Standing up from your sitting position and tottering over to his side before lowering yourself to lie down alongside his feet
>”Impressive, right?” Your Master gloats
>”I’ll say. I recall her being little shit last I saw her.”
>”An understatement, really. But now she’s anything but. Isn’t that right, little Eira.”
>Your ears perk up as you catch your name
>Master never wants you to talk much
>You’re hardly ever given a reason to speak at all
>But you would never ignore being addressed
“Y-yes, Master.” You murmur timidly
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>>25650092
>Since you lack any line of sight to directly look at his hand, you fold your ears back and cast an intent stare to the wall ahead of you
>No looking at anything else
>Blankly stare off until otherwise instructed
>Just as your Master trained you to do
>”U-um, sir? Why is she so… quiet?”
>There’s a voice similar to the pitch of your own from across the room followed by the “clopping” of hooves on the hardwood
>And in your peripherals you catch sight of a vibrant, moving entity
>You can only assume this to be another pony
>Your Master’s friend’s pet perhaps?
>It’s been months since you yourself were last here
>It wouldn’t surprise you if this was a pet he’d adopted since then
>Either way, you weren’t to look at her or even acknowledge her presence
>Just lie at Master’s side and stare at the wall
>That’s what you were told to do
>And that’s all you can do
>”Because I trained her to do so, sweetie.”
>Your Master answers the unknown voice in the same authoritative tone he often uses with you
>”B-but why does it have to be so strict? I-is she happy?”
>There’s a crisp silence following the mare’s question, presumably because your Master had taken a moment to formulate a response to suit the question
>That, and it probably caught him a bit off guard...
>”An obedient pet finds happiness in itself. You’re good for your master, aren’t you? Doesn’t that make you happy?”
>You can see the mare in the corner of your vision nod in response
>”Exactly. My little Eira here is happy because she is good for me.”
>You can’t help but grip your lower lip in a small bite
>Indirect praise or not, you’ll take it
>You are good for him
>By god are you good for him and only him
>Because you’re his pony to command
>And he’s your Master
>”I-is she allowed to play?”
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>>25650099
I'm not sure how to feel about this or where the transformation enters into it.
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>>25650328
I totally realized this after posting. Usually the I've lost count of how many I've written at this point petfag stories I write have implied tf or tf worked into it. I totally spaced it on this one. There's tf behind it I just forgot to provide the implication in this one. My baaaad.
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>>25650382
>forgot to imply the tf.
This gets a chuckle out of me.
It's not too late fix that, and don't leave us hanging. Is she or is she not allowed to play?
Judging by the master's demeanor I'm gonna suspect not.
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>>25650509
Well I'd only post more were there interest to justify it. I like "starting" my stories in the middle of a scene I have in my head because it helps drive the story behind it all. Why is she there? What will she be doing? Etc.

Obviously there's more to this one, I just wanted to test the waters. I write shit like this almost on the daily without sharing it just for the sake of putting my thoughts into words. So scrapping after a few pages is nothing new.
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>>25650630
I wouldn't mind seeing more of your writing. Seems a shame to let it go to waste.
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>>25651111
I wouldn't mind sharing more, this general just seems really tame as far as the pet subject is concerned. Breaking pets/mindless pet clopfics are nowhere near as well received as they used to be.
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>>25651449
Pet pony tf stories are pretty nice (and Belle was pretty well-received by the thread so I can't be the only one that thinks so), but some of the surrounding conversation has gotten a bit out of hand recently. Oh well.
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>>25652550
Do ponies procreate by extended periods of cuddling, then?
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>>25652550
>no dick
>no cumming inside
>no pleasure
Truly a fate worse than death.
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>>25652563
Assimilation
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>>25652563
mitosis
that is why there are so many bonbons
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>>25650099
Kinda sad. Whatever makes your penis erect, I suppose.
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>>25653328
why is it always pinkie?
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>>25653884
Cause fandum
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May deliver a little something today, before Sunday. Don't count on it, though.
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>>25654358
No need for constant updates, we'll just see it when we see it.
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>>25654495
Seing as the general is half dead, i kind of feel the need to do so. To not make it seem like i abandon you, because I'll be away for the weekend. <3
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>>25654661
We have bump Anon for that.

... Right?
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>>25655282
>>25655650
Delete your bums ya hairy vagina
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>>25655773
>Delete your bums
But how will I poop without a bum?
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>>25655946
By shitposting. You see, the majority of 4chan users have deleted their bums and thus have no way to relieve themselves. Shitposting is the closest thing to shitting they can do.
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>>25650099
>The voice continues to pry, but this time eliciting an interjection from her own Master
>”Now sweetheart, let’s not bombard my friend with questions.”
>”It’s alright, Tom” Your Master asserts before returning his attention to the mare in question, “I’ll suppose it depends on whether or not Eira wants to.”
>W-whoa, what?
>Wants to?
>He’s letting you decide?
>When you tagged along for a day trip with Master, never once did you assume that meant you’d be making any sort decisions
>Maybe it was because you were around others?
>Maybe he was trying to… show off?
>Or maybe when he came here to “let loose” with his friend he assumed you’d be letting loose too?
>This all sounds too good to be true
>But would questioning the gesture get in you in trouble?
“E-excuse me, Master?”
>”You heard me correctly, dear. Would you like to play with Tom’s pony?”
>You refuse to break eye contact with the wall ahead of you, but you can’t help but shake a bewildered expression that molds into your features
“I-I… would love nothing more.”
>He notes your confusion and offers a diffusing chuckle
>Kneeling down a bit to ruffle your mane
>”I trust you’ll be good?”
“O-of course, Master!”
>Holy christ is this for real?
>Maybe you should beg him for little adventures like this more often
>”Alright then, off with you two. Your masters are going to chat for a bit.”
>There’s hesitance in your movements, but you eventually raise to all fours, turning around to give your Master a questioning look
>He offers you a nod of confirmation and before your pony brain can think, your little legs are skittering across the hardwood in the direction of the other mare
>You can’t recall the last time you’ve had a friend!
>Surely Master was your friend, but a friend you could treat as an equal
>Another pet!
>She seems to be wearing the same, anxious smile as you trot toward her
>Oh this was so exciting!
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>>25656357

Master POV

>The two of you share a small laugh as you witness the ponies scamper off to go do god knows what
>Though, you had little to no worry in the prospect
>Your Eira was about as docile now as a pony could get
>And the stains of her manipulative past have easily been wiped clean by this point
>You’ve done this plenty of times
>Granted this one was a re-manufactured human turned pony
>And could talk back
>But any ‘pet’ is is malleable, you just have to heat them up the right way
>”I take it she doesn’t get to call shots very often?” Tom starts up again
“She had plenty of time to do that after being turned. You saw how she was. You were her master once, were you not?”
>”I know but… Well shit, I never thought someone with a mind like hers could be turned around.”
“Sentience is a minor obstacle in breaking anything into obedience.”
>Tom turns to give you a dry look of sarcastic amazement
>”You really are a cold bastard, you know that?”
>You can’t help but wear a condescending smirk at his remark.
“Sadly, but there’s really no other alternative. You have to break them hard from the start, then they earn little perks and freedoms as time progresses. See how she reacted to making a simple choice? She used to stomp all over you and now almost tears up at the notion of being able to make a decision.”
>”It’s sad in a way, but I suppose you’re right. Really no other alternative.”
“She’s loved and she’s happy. I can promise you that.”
>It may seem depressing from the outside in
>But this was the process
>You’ve been through it countless times
>You can’t say you took pleasure in it
>But a pet is a pet
>And sometimes driving that point home entails things that don’t make them happy
>”I really am I glad I gave her to you.”
“I should hope so. I would never pay money for one of your cartoon horses.”
>Tom chuckles
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>>25656366
>”That may have been true a few months ago, but I wouldn’t be so sure now, Mister
Stone Face.”
>He’s right
>You weren’t a fan of the show to begin with
>Nor did you originally have any interest in owning a person-turned-fictional horse creature
>But after Tom made the ingenious decision to adopt the man-made-mare as a pet from some loon in the backcountry, he nearly begged you to take her with how unsightly Eira had become after a few weeks of living here
>So given your profession, you accepted… barely.
>And since then you couldn’t be happier with the decision
>You may not have been a fan of the pastel equines at first, but you’ll have to admit there’s a soft spot for them there now
>Hell, you even sat down with Tom to bear a few episodes of the show that inspired all the madness
>And you’re almost ashamed to say you enjoyed it
>Whether you wanted to or not
>”So, beer?”
“Sure. You know you’re never getting her back though, right?”
>”Haha, I figured as much.”
“Good, she wouldn’t listen to anyone else anyway.”

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Eira POV

>Your heart was pumping so fast you could hardly catch your breath!
>You never assumed such a small gesture of freedom would get you as riled up as it has, but you’ll be damned if you weren’t so excited your tail could wag itself off
>N-not that freedom was something you were too keen on having
>But to be allowed a decision of any kind was a rarity nowadays
>And being given that luxury, if only just this once, was almost magical
>The mare, whose name you still don’t know, had lead the both of you to an area away from the living space your Masters occupied
>You used to live here, but your memory of the floorplan was hazy at best
>So you hardly recalled the room she enters after rounding a few corners with haste
>It resembled a mini-library of sorts
>A…
>What’s the word…
>A study!
>Books lining the walls as a sofa reside in the center of the room
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>>25656374

>A faux fireplace facing the sofa as if to offer a “traditional” study aesthetic
>Maybe the room had been repurposed since you were last here?
>The man was made of money, it’d hardly surprise you
>It seems, however, your newfound mare friend has little interest in the room and wastes no time jumping into conversation
>Climbing herself atop the couch with coordination that seemed pitiful compared to your own before beckoning you to join her
>”I’m Aspen! Nice to meet you!”
>Her upfrontness jars you a bit
>Probably because, for the most part, you were a quieter mare
>And being pulled into a discussion that required your verbal participation was something that hadn’t happened for… well… months
>You can definitely see how the name fits, though
>A light green coat with a toffee-shaded brown mane to boot
>It sounds outlandish, in terms of oc design
>But in practice, flowed a lot better than you’d think
“I-I’m, well you already know my name, heh. Nice to meet you too.”
>A disquieted giggle escapes your lips following your response
>Your face colored with nervousness
>For having such an infamous past, you’d really become a skittish little thing, haven’t you?
>Was talking to others really that terrifying to you now?
>“I um, hope you don’t mind me asking but, why are you so… um…”
>You figure she’s inquiring about your obscene servility
“Military about everything?”
>”I suppose that works.”
>There’s a hint of caution in her voice
>Almost as if there’s intent to know something she’s not allowed to
>But what is there to say that could possibly get either of you in trouble?
“Well, simply put, I used to be a bad pet. Very controlling without even knowing. Your master used to be mine, but then he gave me to my Master to train me and make me better.”
>Your explanation seems to only further her look of curiosity
>”S-so you had my master and were just… handed away to some random guy for being bad?”
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>>25637919
Ideas on timber Jack?
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>>25656379
“Huh? No. My Master is good friends with yours. He trains service pets for a living so your master figured him to be the best guy for the job. The plan was to give me back when I was good, but… well. My Master is my Master now.”
>”You talk as if you’re just some regular animal, though.”
“Not a regular animal, no, but a pet all the same.”
>”So it doesn’t bother you that, even as a pet, you had all that power and now it’s gone?”
“Why would it bother me?”
>”Well, if you were so naturally manipulative, then wouldn’t there still be a lingering aspect of you that still craves it?”
“Not really.”
>Why does she seem so interested in this?
>When you set off to go play with the other mare you didn’t assume you’d be playing 20 questions about your past
>You can’t really blame her though, you’d probably do the same with all the mystery you represent
>”S-sorry if I seem annoying, it just amazes me how much a perso-- err, pony, can change.”
>You can’t help but giggle
>A little ball of pride swelling in your chest at her reverence of how disciplined you are
>You were curious as to why you were being barraged with an arsenal of questions
>But soon enough you’ve put two and two together and her behavior starts to make sense
>The questions
>The nervousness
>The clumsy fumbling up to the sofa
“You’re new to all of this, aren’t you?”
>Her ears droop
>The guilty, “deer in the headlights” expression she wears is nothing short of adorable
>You scoff at her reaction with another bout of giggles
“When did you turn?”
>”I-I’ve only been a pony for three or so weeks now.”
“That’s all? Oh you poor thing, my story must have terrified you.”
>”I-I won’t um… be like you will I? Not that you’re bad or anything, a-and I like being a pet and all I just--”
>You offer her the comfort of an interruption before she can finish the thought
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>>25656387

“No, you don’t have to ever worry about that. You’re a good pony, and I was very, very bad. I’m only the way I am now because my Master knew what was best for a pony like me. I’m still happy, and I love my Master more than anything. My circumstances were just different.”
>This seems to ease the worry written in her features
>Her muscles visibly relaxing as you reassure her
>But given the interrogation you just endured from said mare
>There’s now way you’re going to let her relax
>At least not yet
“Now…” You assert, drawing her attention toward you again.
>You sit silently, offering her a skeptical squint, almost as if you were examining her
>Naturally, she sinks a bit under the glare
>A few more long seconds of awkward silence linger before you slowly begin to raise your hoof
>Her curiosity turning to worry once more as she fearfully stares at your rising appendage
>She shuffles back a bit as your squint becomes a devious grin
>Your hoof continuing to rise at its agonizingly slow pace before suddenly...
>Boop
“You’re it~”
>You fumble yourself hurriedly to the floor before darting off
>The mare musters an adorable whine as you round the corner out of the study with what you can assume to be a “no fair!”
>Ah! This was so great!
>You haven’t had a day like this in forever
>And whether it gets you in trouble or not, you’re smothering your Master in love tonight

Hope this story isn't a shitposting annoyance, I'm just having a lot of fun with this one
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>>25656395
Nah it's cool man, written really well. Enjoy the spark of a new story.
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>>25642681
I just realized that the Anon pone in my story looks pretty much exactly like pic related.

>You smile and nod at Chad, felt nice to finally have that duct tape off.
“Seriously, thanks man.”
>Chad just waves it off.
>”It’s no big deal. Anything to help out a bro.”
>While you turn the faucet off, Chad gathers up his things.
>You’re prancing all the way back to his room, feeling nice and clean.
>Good shower vibes.
>Chad seems a little muted though.
>He sits down at his desk without a word, while you hop up on his bed.
>Shit was comfy man, fleece on fur.
>Warm and cozy.
>Like really warm, it felt a little weird actually, your muscles were tingling a bit.
>”Possible evil spirit influence aside, you should seriously get some sleep Anon. This is what? Day three you’ve been awake? And it’s 5:05 AM outside.”
>He tosses you a brush, and you catch it with your mouth.
>You give your mane a few hard, even brushes before tossing it back to him and quipping.
“You’re no better. What the fuck are you even doing cooking shit this late at night?”
>Chad leans back in his chair and brings his cig up for another puff.
>You can see his hand shake a little when he does it.
>”Its Mushroom Monday dude.”
“Oh.”
>…
>Chad smokes on, you stare at your hooves, watching them clip and clop against each other.
>Idly, you flit your still damp mane around, trying to get it to drape just right.
“Are you okay Chad? You’re super… quiet.”
>He doesn’t answer right away, instead he takes one last drag off his cigarette before dumping it in his coffee mug with all the others.
>Immediately he grabs another cig from his pack, lights it up.
>His face is straight, but you recognize it.
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>>25657443
>It’s the same one Chad uses when he plays poker.
>His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy.
“Dude, holy shit. You need a beer or something?”
>”I’m just a little freaked out to be honest. I mean fuck. I don’t know if you’re like…”
>You begin to seriously consider the possibility that Chad is high as a kite right now.
“Yeah?”
>Chad shakes his head and takes a puff.
>”I don’t know if you’re an unwitting agent of the NWO or maybe just a victim of the Masons. If I help you I could be advancing the regressive agenda and if I don’t I might just be undermining my own resistance efforts against the puppet government in Israel.”
>Chad leans forward, staring at you as though to beg you to give him some sort of answer.
>What the fuck.
>You’d forgotten how much of a paranoid, red pilled motherfucker Chad is.
>No.
>Wait.
>You hadn’t forgotten.
>It’s just that he hardly ever acted like it around you.
>It was only when he…
>Was around girls.
>…
“What the fuck. Dude it’s me here. Anonymous. I may look like a pretty white pony, I may BE a pretty white pony. But it’s still me. Anonymous. I’m not a girl.”
>”Man do you hear your voice right now? Say fuck. Do it.”
“Fuck.”
>”See, that shit is adorable. Which is right up the NWO’s alley. That is exactly the sort of disguise they’d put on an agent of theirs, cute, outwardly harmless. You could be sending this entire conversation straight to them through extraneural interfacing and I wouldn’t even be able to tell.”
>You roll your eyes and slam a hoof down in frustration.
“Chad. You’re fucking retarded. Is that why you do this shit to girls? We’ve already gone over my identity. I AM Anonymous. You asked your questions, you KNOW it’s me. I’ve just been… Changed or whatever.”
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>>25657454
>Chad shakes his head.
>”See, that’s my point. You’ve been changed. By who? For what? How far do the changes go? How are you not scared shitless right now?”
“I don’t have time to be scared. I need to finish my Psych essay. Could you help me with that by the way?”
>You wave your fore hooves around.
“I’m having some issues typing.”
>Chad grabs himself a beer.
>”And you call me retarded.”
>Chad starts digging around in his desk, still talking.
>”You are literally a pony. A little pony with a cute little mane that’s all clean but adorably unkempt. Soft white fur… And a tail. Goddamn it the swishy little tail…”
>He tosses you a pen.
>”And then there’s your snout, fucking small and rounded and adorable. Especially when you scr-“
>You furrow your brows and scrunch your muzzle, starting to realize just what’s going on.
>Chad points and hollers.
>”Like THAT! Just like that, when you scrunch it up. Not to mention your voice, feminine but teensy.”
>He throws you another pen and a pair of Velcro straps.
>Getting up and walking over to you, Chad shakes his head.
>”And an itty bitty flank with a cartoonish mark of a broken keyboard on it like your talent is being shit at typing with your little hooves or something. You’re fucking adorable. You are now a pony, likely due to reptilian interference, and your top priority is to finish your fucking Psych essay.”
>And then he starts strapping the pens to your hooves.
>Not another word.
>That weird tingly feeling from before is back, and the warmth too.
>You ignore it, and look up at him in disbelief.
“Are you crushing on me right now?”
>”J-just because I find you cute doesn’t mean I’ve fallen for this obvious trap put together by the Illuminati. You understand, right?”
>Chad is trying his hardest not to look at you at all right now.
>Fucking what.
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>>25657464
>Fucking.
>What.
“Chad.”
>Nothing, but he fumbles a little bit with the Velcro.
“Chad!”
>”Yeah what’s up.”
“Are you seriously crushing on me right now?”
>”Of course not. What w-would make you think that?”
>You sigh and smack your tail against the bed, frustrated and a little weirded out.
“That long ass fucking rant about me being cute maybe? Or maybe the fact that all of a sudden you’re stuttering like an idiot all the while you sputter out the NWO conspiracy tier shit you usually only spout when you’re around a girl you like?”
>”If I tell you that I have to return some videotapes, will you leave me alone?”
>As much as you wanted to deny it, you were seeing Chad in a new light.
>Hell, your whole outlook on the world was shifting here.
>Chad wasn’t just some friend, just some guy you knew.
>He was also a GUY.
>Like, a man, a male.
>And you weren’t anymore.
>And what the fuck was that tingly shit.
>Seriously, it was like someone was playing with electrodes on your butt.
“Just strap these fucking pens to me and hand me your laptop so I can write up my essay.”

Donesies for now. Probably post some more when everyone SHOULD be asleep.

What do you guys want for Christmas?
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>>25657478
Gotta admires Anon's dedication to completing his work, not letting the little setback of becoming the mare stop him. Chad is hilarious with his conspiracy theories/crush.
Great stuff.
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>>25657478
I don't want to be a jerk, but I don't like Chad's character. It's just a bit too lolsorandumb for my tastes.
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>>25657687
What could I do to improve him?
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>>25657728
Kill him off in an spectacular gunfight
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>>25657728
Others seem to enjoy the character, I'm pretty sure it's just me, but he's just too over-the-top for my tastes.

Maybe tone down the conspiracy stuff? He's hardly had a line of dialogue that wasn't a tongue-in-cheek illuminati confirmed thing.
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>>25656395
This is really cute.
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>August 9, 2207
>You were Anonymous, well, not actually all that anonymous
>The human race has finally advanced to where genes can be spliced and rewritten with little consequence
>That was a hundred years ago
>Now, in 2207, genetically modified humans were the lower class, while purebred humans hoarded the wealth of society and controlled the cities and infrastructure
>Some genetically modified humans were put into combat roles, paid to help keep the peace and fight wars
>You were one of them
>You were also one-quarter purebred human because your grandma was a gene-traitor and fucked a Splice
>Granted, you were a Splice, but because she couldn't keep her legs closed you were physically weaker and the selective genes your father wanted you to have were watered down
>But you did gain some interesting genes
>B-142-F, which allowed you to process tranquilizers and anesthetics like water
>You couldn't be tranquilized, plus
>But you'd have to have all surgeries fully awake, big minus
>Being a Splice, you were stronger than any human alive, but that didn't matter much because you'd be fighting with other spliced humans, who were stronger than you
>Even if you did fight humans, they'd be in exo-suits, 10-foot-tall suits of robotic armor, so you were pretty fucked in that case
>You sat up out of your bunk and reported to the mess hall for your first deployment
>For the past eight weeks you'd been living here, training for military service, getting your ass beat by everyone you met
>You sat down at an empty table and stared at the food you'd been issued
>16 fluid ounces of a nutritional gel and a bottle of water
>You'd feast like a king this morning, today was already looking up
>You looked at your ID card
>It had all your information on it and a barcode
>The same barcode was imprinted on the back of your neck
>It also had a picture of you, taken three months ago
>A general list of your stats
>And the company that bred your grandfather, father, and by proxy, you
>Zephyr Ind
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>>25657844
>Zephyr Ind
OHHHH SHIT
please continue, it's well written and that gives me hope
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>>25657844
>Zephyr Ind

This honestly might as well be the 'Eternal Zephyr wank' general.
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>>25657958
Eh, give it a chance. It's just a name.

>>25657844
Go on.
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>>25658110
It's not just a name anon

it's a way of life
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>>25657844
>Not exactly known for its Grade-A Splices, Zephyr Ind started out using nanomachine reformation to make pet ponies out of people for particularly rich people
>A very very crude process that hasn't seen much advancement
>It wasn't until recently that it'd began making Splices and creating genes
>You had genes that were property of several different companies, but Zephyr Ind owned the vast majority of your genes and therefore, your body
>You'd never be taken seriously in this military role, but you managed to keep your parent company under wraps
>You were the Splice equivalent of a Hasbro brand assault rifle
>Even though you were a Splice, nonetheless, you were pretty laughable, especially to some of the government-bred Splices
>They were the top, they had the highest-paid research put into their gene development and they were the pinnacle of evolutionary achievement
>All Splices had a model tag assigned based on the company that made them
>The company label, and the lot number
>Most of the government Splices in your platoon were Gov-32s, the latest version and probably the most expensive purchases your contractor ever made
>You, on the other hand, were a Zep-6, the latest was Zep-7 but there wasn't much improvement
>Zep-7s could handle bright light much better but couldn't see in darker situations
>The entire lot was destroyed in a bombing on Mars, the desert environment they were bred to thrive in
>Which left you and a handful of other Zep-6s to be bought out by whoever needed you for whatever purpose
>You'd find out if you were going to be a meat shield during briefing
>After your lovely breakfast you checked your phone
>It was an ancient chunk of technology from when it was first blooming into existance
>You were a cheap model, not much would be spent on you
>Your Blackberry was a neat thing, it's been issued to you three weeks ago, your first phone
>The background was your model number followed by your individual product key
>Zep-6-105
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>>25658301
>Not Autumn Ind
Some company that is
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>>25656395

2 months prior

>”Eira, you are going to stare at that wall until otherwise instructed. Do you understand?”
>This seemed pointless
>You both knew you weren’t going to do it
>You haven’t fulfilled any command since arriving to this dork’s house
>What makes him think you’re going to now?
>Not to mention the man was total softy
>He would never hit you or cause any sort of physical harm
>So what reason did you have to fear him?
>Putting up with his bullshit has been more of a challenge than the other guy, that’s for sure, but it was nothing you couldn’t handle
>It’s been… 3 days here? And so far all you’ve managed to accomplish is disobey while he stared at you with that same, blank, lifeless face
>A minor accomplishment in your book you suppose
“Annnnd… why?”
>”You are going to stare at that wall until otherwise instructed. Do you understand?” He repeats
“Yeah I heard you the first 20 times numbnuts. Doesn’t mean I’m going to.”
>Persistent this one is, that’s for sure
>Though, the most unnerving part about all of this was his expression
>It never once reflected any sort of emotion
>No matter how hard you tried to elicit one
>You just assumed you were shaking a bottle in hopes it would eventually pop
>But so far it seemed this man didn’t have a threshold
>Which, you’ll admit, made fucking with him less enjoyable, but it was still manageable
>”Last time. Stare at the wall.”
>Ohoho
>Last time?
>Let’s see what he has in store for you
“Mmmm no.”
>The room falls silent for few short beats following your declination
>And without another word, he calmly exits
>Huh, that was easier than you thought it would be
>A victory, you guess?
>This guy knows how to make this whole process painfully boring
>Maybe he just wasn’t in the mood toda--
>His reentry ropes your attention
>Though, this time, he’s holding something in his hand
>Interesting...
>You try to nab a glance at the mysterious artifact, but to no avail
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>>25658503

>All you could decrypt was that it was black and had… latches?
>A leash maybe?
>This should be fun
>He walks over to you and reaches for your collar
>But you wouldn’t be yourself if you didn’t move your neck to the side and avoid his grasp
>Not that you thought you could get out of being leashed, but anything you could do to cause him even the slightest bit of irritation was the route you were going to take
>Eventually, though, he’s able to grasp your collar firmly in his and latch the leash to it
>Extending it to a bolt on the wall adjacent to you and latching the other end there
>You suppose it was more of a chain at this point than a leash
>So was his plan to keep you stuck here?
>Shouldn’t be too hard...
>What he pulls out next, though, is what really shocks you
>A muzzle
>You’ve um… never dealt with that before
>Surely he doesn’t intend on using it, does he?
>You decide to call his bluff
“Listen pal, I hope you don’t plan on-- HmmMmphH!”
>In one swift movement, he forcefully wraps the muzzle around your face and tightens it to an almost uncomfortable degree
>Okay…
>M-maybe this was a little too far
>You’ll be sure to make him pay for it once you’re out of this mess
>”Now, you listen to me, because you’re going to be doing a lot of listening for the next couple months. You, Eira, are going to stare at that wall until I tell you otherwise. You are not to move, you are not to talk, and you are NOT to disobey. If I so much as see an ear twitch, that muzzle will stay on for another week, only to come off so I can feed you nothing but hay. Do you understand?”
>Um...
>Well this is… new
>The past couple of days have just been repetition, repetition, and more repetition.
>But this…
>This went from one to a hundred real… really fast
>Maybe this was the reaction you were trying to elicit
>But instead of throwing the tantrum you were hoping for
>The fucker just got real
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>>25658512

>But it didn’t mean you were going to give in
>Not now
>Not ever
>So you elect to give him a nasty sneer, which, considering your inability to verbally convey how much you hate this man, was all you could do
>And to your dismay, his response was simple a curt
>”Another week it is.”
>W-what!?
>He can’t be serious!
>Y-you… you can’t survive off of just hay… can you?
>Much less with a muzzle on for so long!
>How were you going to tell him you were thirsty, or needed to use the restroom, o-or if you had an itch!?
>”For every minute you’re not looking at that wall is another day you’ll be wearing that muzzle, sweetheart.”
>To avoid any further consequences, you desperately direct your sight to the wall he so thoroughly wants to you stare at
>Your heart rate seems to rise as well
>You felt scared
>Painfully scared
>But nothing ‘scary’ had really happened
>Was it because you couldn’t talk?
>Or maybe...
>It was your loss of control
>You hadn’t obeyed anyone since turning into a mare
>Well, until now of course
>And even then it hardly counts
>You did so because you had to!
>You can’t eat just hay
>Is the fucker trying to kill you?
>Maybe your body could digest it now..?
>Either way, you didn’t want to test it
>He, on the other hand, seems to note your increased pace of breath, mulling over you as if to examine your state before wearing a satisfied smirk
>The first time you’ve ever seen his face become something other than that blank, empty, slate void of emotion
>He seems satisfied
>The notion of just… not having control
>It terrified you
>And he…
>He knew it
>”Good girl.”
>He offers a halfhearted pat to your head
>”Scary, isn’t it?” He quizzes, the ominous tone in his voice causing the fur along your spine to rise, “Not having control.”
>You say nothing, staring directly at the wall ahead of you
>He didn’t deserve the luxury of a response
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>>25658526

>But by refusing to do so you’re giving him what he wants either way
>F-fuck...
>“Well get used to it, because there’s going to be none of it while you’re here. You’ll eventually see what it means to be a pet, and the only decision you get to make is how awful the road there is going to be.”
>The words float in your mind
>It’s not that you doubted yourself in retaining control
>But rather, how he made it seem as if it were the inevitable
>That’s what horrified you
>”Now I’m going to leave you be. I trust when I return you will not have moved an inch. Have fun.”
>The man then turns himself to face the door before promptly taking his leave
>Which meant, you were here alone
>No eyes to watch you
>No orders to be given
>No rules to uphold
>How could he stop you from doing the opposite of what he just told you to if he weren’t here to see it?
>You could just as easily just look awa--
>...But what if he IS watching?
>What if there’s a camera or something?
>Yeah fuck that
>The wall is fine
>You could survive this...

Decided to namefag because lots of stories
Also, I wonder if I shouldn't just update a pastebin for those who are interested. I don't want to spam the thread with more pet shit if it isn't necessarily wanted.
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>>25658540
Nigga stop being so self-conscious. Your content is fine, and this general needs content to survive.

A pastebin for your story would be useful, but keep postin' it here too.
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>>25658571
S-sorry
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>>25658626
Good girl.
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>>25658631
Th-thank you, sir.
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>>25658301
>You opened up your downloaded games and played some word game
>It helped you with your vocabulary since you only learned military terms during childhood from Zephyr Ind.
>The buzzer rang as you finished typing out a particulary difficult word on the little keyboard
>'RIDICULOUS'
>A loud buzzer rang followed by an announcement, shocking you and making you enter a typo
>'All soldiers bound for deployment today please report to Hangar 9 for mission briefing and equipment instructions'
>The Gov-32s around all got up quickly and left, leaving behind the corporate Splices who got up begrudgingly
>They all knew what was to come
>You'd get shitty equipment and be sent in first so that the more expensive models would have a lower risk
>Or maybe you'd be stationed as a civilian guard
>That'd be sweet and probably end with you not dying
>You got up and headed to Hangar 9, it was already filling up with other Splices, standing in formation
>A man and a stallion walked out, both wearing what looked to be high-ranking military uniforms
>The stallion was about 4 feet in height and heavily armored
>You could tell it was a Zephyr Ind. home defense pony, military-grade
>You'd seen the advertisements for civilian-grade ones
>You could tell the man was a pure-bred human by the way he walked, he was unsure of himself in a room full of supersoldiers
>"Would all Gov-32s step forward and head there for equipment briefing." he said coldly
>You all watched as the expensive soldiers were gifted the latest weaponry and armor
>A solid projecting holographic bodysuit would protect them from just about anything
>They were also given compacting hoverbikes that could be deployed at a moment's notice
>The other Splicers left and got slightly cheaper things, the quality trickling down until only you and six other Zep-6s remained
>He checks his clipboard, moreso a holographic screen than a clipboard and looks to you with an eyebrow raised
>He laughs to himself and looks at his screen again
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>>25657679
Thanks man.

>>25657754
I guess he's just said so many of those because of the whole "walking redpill around girls thing", but I see your point. I'll probably try to tone it down a little. So long as I don't get too filled up on Christmas spirit/beer.


Also, I'm putting a name on since there's a few more writefags showing up.

>Chad obliged, pulling the straps taught so that the pens wouldn’t slip.
>You tested the fit by poking the bed a few times while Chad got his laptop off of his desk and passed it over to you.
“Thank you.”
>Chad nodded, then booted up all the programs you’d need.
“Windows 10?”
>”It’s my burner PC.”
“Oh.”
>Word up and running, Chad backed away and took a seat in his chair while you worked.
>The next few hours passed pretty quietly, you’d turned on some ambient instrumental tunes to help you work, but that was pretty much it.
>Chad just tip tapped away on his real computer and sucked down some beer, shitposting on 4chan from what you could tell.
>You were hitting the Zone again, sans caffeine this time, all mellow word flow vibes.
>Shit was pretty comfy, working with a bro in the room, laying on that fluffy blanket.
>Hell, you were starting to get pretty quick typing with the pens.
>Paragraphs zoomed by, graphs practically built themselves and you were turning phrases on a dime.
>”You want a drink Anon?”
“Huh?”
>You looked up from your work.
>Chad was holding out a steaming mug of hot chocolate.
>He had a hoodie and a pair of jeans on now, along with some warm socks.
>”Dunno if you’re cold or not?..”
>Chad pointed to the window.
>Wow that was a hell of a storm.
>Snow whipped past the glass, down and down into the ever growing drifts of it that were gathered on the campus square below.
>The sun was just barely rising, considering how much light there was.
>You shivered a bit, your fur was standing up.
“Yeah, I guess I just didn’t notice. Thanks.”
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>>25658845
>Chad started to hand you the mug, but then he realized the spilling potential.
>”You don’t mind if I put this in a bowl, do you? Does that even count as racism?”
“Naw I don’t mind man, I did the same with my Monster when I was still in my room.”
>”Alright.”
>You rubbed your hooves together and moved around a bit to try to get the chill out.
>Your fur kept some of it out, but it wasn’t quite adequate.
“Here.”
>Chad set the bowl of hot chocolate beside you.
“Thanks.”
>You took a few sips of it.
>Ahh, it went down nice and smooth too.
>Like liquid warmth flowing down your neck and all through your barrel.
>And then there was a different sort of warmth.
>Right up your crotch.
>Your butt tingled and practically started tossing sparks.
>You started to drool a little.
“F-fuh. Fuck.”
>Mother Nature herself had you in her arms.
>Cradling you, singing softly.
>Peace pervaded, it was a feeling of newness and kindness.
>It was the kind of feeling one would get from a mother.
>She brought your head up to hear her, to listen and learn from her.
>Smiling, she put her mouth right against your ear.
>AND SHE FUCKING SCREAMED.
>”YOOOOOOU HAVE TO HAVE SEX NOOOOOW! RIGHT FUCKING NOW! DO! IT!”
>”Are you alright Anon? You’re sweating bro.”
>And there was Chad, looking at you, brow furrowed.
>Fucking Chad.
>Fuck Chad.
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>>25658859
>NO.
“I-I’m fine...”
>”Dude holy shit you’re bleeding. Get up man.”
“What?”
>You stand up.
>Chad wasn’t lying, there was blood all over the blanket where you’d been laying down.
“Fuck I- AH.”
>That fucking burn, that desire.
>It was like you had a week old fucking hunger.
>For dick.
>Your snatch felt like it was being pressed against a red hot iron bar.
“I’m sorry man, I, ahh, I didn’t mean to get your buh-blanketallmessedupandimsorry.”
>You shivered and kept on trying to stutter out apologies.
>Chad just looked worried, he was looking all over your legs and your barrel, trying to find where you cut yourself.
>And then you noticed the bit of blood on your tail.
>The realization hit you like a brick.
>Your vagina was bleeding.
>You started going through your memory for everything you’d learned about the sexual biology of horses in that one vet course you’d taken.
>PRESENT.
>W-what?
>PRESENT.
>Your legs moved all on their own, bringing your face down and your ass up.
>Fucking lordosis reflex.
>It took every last bit of your will not to flick your tail up too.
>Chad just stared, confused.
>”What are you doing Anon?”
“Just stretching is all! Gotta stay l-limber right?”
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>>25658872
>”I don’t see how that’s relevant to you being wounded. At all.”
>You stand straight again and hop off of Chad’s bed.
“Well I… A-alright I’m, AH…”
>Confusion and worry growing, Chad starts rummaging through a first aid kit, still watching you closely.
“I’m going to bah-be honest Chad. I’ve uhhh, the cut is on my butt.”
>”Your… Butt?”
>You nod, face hidden behind your mane.
>Don’t even have to pretend to be embarrassed.
“Yep. M-my butt. So uhh. Just, just hand me a bandaid and I’ll take care of it ok.”
>”Sure thing man. Must be tough not wearing any pants, sorry if I put you on uhh... On edge. That shit almost got real awkward.”
“HAHA. YEAH. Awkward crisis averted am I right?”
>…
>Chad just stared, mouth pursed, trying his best not to fuck up the situation any more like you had just done.
>You snatched up the bandaid in your mouth and barged out of Chad’s room.


And this >>25658845
was supposed to reply to this >>25657478
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>>25658788
>"Well, you seven are in for a surprise. It turns out you'll be a tactical sniper squad."
>He gave a fake smile and looked around at you all
>"That means you'll be using the really long guns with the scopes on them."
>You all nod, this type of patronization was typical for lower-cost Splices
>They all thought you were idiots
>He checks his screen once more
>"You'll each be assigned Grade-D armor, one plasma bolt pistol, and," he says, taking out a long rifle and setting it on a table next to the pistol
>"One, TellBlue Corp long-distance railcannon."
>He gives the command to approach the table
>"Total cost of troops, $70,000, equipment cost, $14,000,000."
>He glances up at your group and gives a smug smile
>"Less than the cost of my daughter's first car. Be careful with the rifles, I know they're cheap but you're cheaper."
>Someone else takes the set on the table while the rest of you grab from the rack
>"You there, 105. You'll be the squadron leader as you scored slightly higher." that was you
>You smiled
>This was your time to shine
>You weren't some cheap product shelled out by a company that makes pets
>You were a genetically superior soldier
"Yes sir." you answered
>You saw the Grade-D armor, it was archaic to say the least
>It was the same as what was used in the civilian uprising against GreenNorth in 2154
>It would probably protect against small arms but not much else
>So, in short, avoid being shot
>"If none of you die, and keep your equipment in decent shape, you'll be the more profitable squadron we've ever had." the man says as he walks off
>The stallion stays and stares at you
>"So. You're all produced by Zephyr Industries too?"
>You nod
>He looks you up and down and glares
>"A Zep-6 like you isn't fit to shine my hooves, why don't you go back to the discount rack?"
>104 puts his hand on your shoulder
>"It's not worth it. Just let him say what he wants."
>The stallion sneers
>You couldn't do anything to him
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>>25659318
>You could easily kill him, despite being a lower-tier Splice, but they'd put you to work in the transit tunnels
>The thought of it made you shudder
>Working in the dark tunnels with high-voltage electronics pressed into your front-side while vehicles blazed by inches behind you at 200 mph
>It was a death sentence
The stallion walked off, giving a huff of victory after you said nothing
>Such was the life of cheap product
>In your platoon was 104, 103, 102, 101, 100, and 099
>You picked up your equipment and led your platoon to the drop vehicle
>You all settled together with a larger group produced by MetroPCS
>Even after 200 years it stuck around providing phone services and genetically altered troops
>Your group was too small to get a ship of their own so you squeezed in with the other discounts
>The whole ride seemed awkward, you were outnumbered by strange people as the ship's cabin cooled down you realize you were headed somewhete cold
>104 is sleeping on your shoulder
>He always stuck around with you
>One of the MetroPCS troops extended his hand
>"Metro-66-001, nice to meet you."
>You shake his hand
"Zep-6-105, you know where we're headed?"
>"Greenland, there's a farmer's revolt going on and we're supposed to stop it. So you're a Zeppelin?"
>His neighbor butts in
>"Nah, ZPL is Zeppelin, he's a Zephyr."
>"Oh cool, you guys can see in the dark?"
>You nod
>"We'll be doing police and patrolling, you?"
"We were told we're going to be a sniper squad." you hold out your gun for him to see
>"That's nice. I got a Splinter crowd-control rifle. It's got an arc caster on it."
>He holds out his gun for you to see
>It was indeed, a very nice weapon
>After an hour-long pissing contest the dropship landed, the doors opened and you got out
>It was fucking freezing, but the grass was green as ever
>GreenNorth was trying to turn Greenland into farmland, it was too damn cold and the farmers wanted to leave
>Unfortunately, they too, were indebted and company property
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>>25659558
I'm not sure how I feel about this. It's well written but hard to keep up with
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>>25659594
Imagine a dystopian future where government is at the will of megacorporations that hold all the wealth
People can become indebted and trapped in servitude to a company for a plethora of reasons, who's going to say anything? The police?
Some companies make a profit by breeding armies to suppress the populi, now it becomes a competitive market as companies try to outdo eachother and make better soldiers. Government soldiers are the best because they are funded by many corporations that are running the government.
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>>25659646
I'm going to bed
See you all tomorrow
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>>25658540
Pony seems pretty accustomed to being a pony. No thoughts of escaping and trying to turn back to human?
Liking it anyway. I hope the master isn't too hard on her.
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>>25658885
>>25659558
>>25658540
Mfw blessed with three glorious writefags.

>>25658885
You especially. Don't stop you fuck.
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>>25660028
She's got an easy ride.How could you deny being fed, not having to worry about money, and having a place to stay, all while getting to fuck with your "owners"? She's playing the system, silly.
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>>25658885
I dunno, I kind of feel like the dialogue is like an edgy 14 year old 4channer skype chat.
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>>25660087
How can I improve that? What's lacking?

>>25660068
Thanks bruh.
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>>25660068
>Mfw blessed with three glorious writefags.
Don't forget the changeling queen guy.
And I wonder where Bob and Gerald, Belle, and the guy with story at the party that had a very promising start went.
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>>25660656
The most recent update is completely written I just don't know if I like it and can't be bothered to re-edit it yet.
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>>25658872
>>Fucking lordosis reflex.
I just learned a useful new term.
Don't give in too easily, Anon.
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Can we take a moment to talk about Shawn?
I think he's absolutely perfect.
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>>25661069
Shawn?
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>>25661077
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0t0uCWjQ6Og
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>>25661252
made me giggle
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>>25660656
>the guy with story at the party that had a very promising start
The one with the pone pills? I agree, I love it so far, hope he comes back soon.

>>25658885
“Shitshitshitshit.”
>You galloped down the hall, barreled through the exit door and down the next hall.
>Doors rushed past, all you could hear was your breathing and the sound of your hooves clopping away.
>A peek behind you showed that you were leaving a trail of blood in your wake.
>Looked like someone had just committed a fucking homicide.
>3rd door on the left.
>You ran straight inside, bucked the door shut and jammed your hoof against the push lock till it worked.
>The solitude of the shower room was like an oasis.
>Panting with desire, you set your bandaid down on the sink, then you jumped into the shower stall.
“Fuckfuckfuckfuck.”
>What the fuck do I do?
>You flipped over onto your back, legs spread wide.
>Your cunt was soaking, most of the blood had been replaced with pussy juice.
“Howdoieven. Howhowhow. FUUUUU-ACK”
>Shivering and shaking, you lowered a hoof towards your crotch.
>It felt like you’d pulled a sparkplug out the second your hoof rubbed against your lower lips.
>Just a jolt of pleasure shooting up your spine.
“AH! FUCK!”
>Without even thinking about it, you started to rub your pussy more, harder, faster.
>You let your tongue loll out of your mouth as you pleasured yourself, panting and mumbling and moaning incoherently.
“HAhoholy fuakk yuss.”
>It was almost mechanical, rub and rub, fondle and feel.
>You weren’t even looking, your eyes rolled back.
>All you knew was that rubbing down there felt incredible.
>Soon the pleasure began to build, you felt yourself pushing down on your pussy, breath quickening.
“Mhm, hah, hah, hah.”
>A flurry of images were flashing through your mind, dicks, Johnsons, cocks of all shapes and sizes.
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>>25664324
>You focused on them, and your rubbing just got more intense.
>Just the thought of shoving one of them so far up your virgin snatch…
>To fill yourself up to bursting with cum…
>Finally the pressure hit a peak and you felt your cunt twitch.
“AHHHHHHH~”
>You came, hard, spurting all over the stall.
“Guh-God, damn.”
>The haze of the afterglow was extraordinary, it felt like you were trying to swim through sand.
>With all the energy you could muster, you reached up with a hoof, trying to turn on the shower.
>You came up a few feet short.
“Fuuuuuuccckk.”
>You laid there for a second, taking a few deep breaths before rolling over onto your stomach and moving again.
>Inch by inch, you started to get up.
“One hoof...”
>You got your right fore hoof firmly planted.
“Two hoof…”
>Your left fore hoof was next, although it did shake a little.
“F-four hoof.”
>Finally, you pushed yourself up, dragging your hind legs up and into position.
>You smiled.
“I can do this. Easy.”
>Hop up, onto your hind hooves.
>You turn the shower knob on, straight to the middle of the road setting.
>Water comes jetting down, but suddenly quits out.
>A loud gurgling starts up, and you hurry to turn the knob back off.
>Just now you notice the laminated poster that was up on the shower head.
>”All dorm floor shower stalls are closed for maintenance. Please use the gym showers downstairs on the second floor.”
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>>25664332
>You stamp your hooves in anger, slamming them repeatedly against the plastic of the stall floor.
“Fucking, fuck fuck.”
>Huffing, you look yourself over.
>There was blood all over your tail and your butt, marecum all down your legs and around your crotch.
>Definitely not passable.
>You couldn’t go back to Chad looking like this.
“Just going to have to make a run for it…”
>Gathering up your courage, and your bandaid, you opened the door and got into a sprinting position.
>Breathe in.
>Out.
“Go.”
>And out you galloped, as fast as you could back up the hall.
>You got a quick look at a clock on your way to the stairs
>7:12 AM.
>No way there would be anybody actually moving around on the second floor, everyone was just taking the elevators straight down to the lobby.
>You skipped going through your floors’ main hall, and instead you went through the family suite section.
>Up on two hooves to push the bar to open the exit door, down the stairs you went.
>You nearly went headfirst down the first flight, but by the second you were trotting solid again.
>Your own stamina was surprising you at this point.
>Guess it just came with the horse.
>Finally the second floor came, you did your running, two hooves trick that you did earlier with the stair exit door.
>Out into the second floor hall, mercifully empty.
>You took your time now, prancing up to the gym shower room doors.
>Men’s.
>Or Women’s?
“Huh. Is this what it’s like to be a tranny?”
>You laughed and walked into the men’s room.
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>>25664346
>Through the changing room, into the showers.
>Pretty standard, blue tiled floors and walls.
>The whole place was bone dry and every noise you made echoed on and on.
>Had that chlorine like smell that showers always did.
>The showers were all in a circle around a central pillar with indentations to put bars of soap on.
>You set your bandaid down on one of them, then you hopped over to and turned on the nearest shower.
“Ahhhh.”
>The warm water felt great on your back, it seemed to just immediately cleanse that sticky feeling you’d gotten from masturbating.
>You let yourself soak a bit, before leaning forward and letting the water at your butt.
>Giggling, you watched your blood and marecum wash away, straight down the drain.
>Relief.
>That was the best way to-
>There was a dude watching you.
>Looked like he just got out of the gym downstairs, six foot six.
>Body built like a Greek god, carrying a towel and wearing absolutely nothing.
>Immediately the heat kicked in full force, your cunt was on fire at the sight of his sizeable dick.
>Three responses came to mind.
>FUCK YOU.
>GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE.
>And: PEEP SHOW’S OVER, LEAVE ME ALONE.
>But what came out instead was:
“GET THE FUCK OVER HERE AND FUCK ME!”
>Silence.
>”W-what?“
>You ran over to the six foot six sex god and ripped his towel out of his hands.
>As fast as you could, you dried yourself with it, tossing it on the floor and rolling around on it.
>Gym dude just stared, not uttering a word.
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>>25664358
>Sufficiently dry, you got up and ran back into the showers, picked up your bandaid and carried it over to the guy.
“Opfen fhis.”
>He shook his head and blinked.
>”I don’t-“
“OPFEN FHIS.”
>Spooked, mister 10/10 obeyed, taking it and peeling away the covering strips of your band aid.
>”Why did y-“
“PUT IT ON MY BUTT.”
>You turned around and presented your butt to him, your tail just barely covering your unmentionables.
>”But wh-“
“PUT. IT. ON. MY. BUTT.”
>You felt him stick it to your left ass cheek.
>Immediately you stood at attention and gave him a salute.
“GOOD WORK PRIVATE. YOUR EXCELLENT BEHAVIOUR HAS BEEN NOTED.”
>Before he could talk again, you galloped back out of the showers, leaping over a changing room bench on your way to the door.


That's the last update for me tonight. Goodnight PTFG, I'll be lurking.
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>>25637919
canon
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>>25664324
>The one with the pone pills
Yeah, that's the one. The same sort of pills as caused the tf in this story?
Forgive my ignorance of biology, but is this bleeding estrous-related?
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>>25634737
well, mostly im the kind of sub that thrives on competance and doing things for my owner, rather than be spoiled rotten, what i want is to cater wonderful meals for my master, sew and do arts and crafts.
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>>25648245
not that im implying this anon is not a fag, but most people into rp or erp disappear quickly, normally after they get their jollies or grow bored and want a faster thrill. the fact that this anon is still looking shows persistance.
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>>25656374
>she wont listen to others anyway.
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>>25665694
<insert average undertale determination meme here>
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>>25665694
The persistence just doesn't pay off.
I don't know why I keep searching.
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>>25665694
>tfw no adorable mare pet to dote on and spoil
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>>25666342
Then why are you here?
You won't find any pets worth your care here, they're all faggots.
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>>25666373
From what I understand you don't find pets worth your care anywhere. Irc is far too autistic to bear and the only mildly decent couple I've "seen" linger the threads. Even then you're probably correct in terms of them not being worth it. I don't want some bitch that's going to take advantage of the mindless spoiling for nothing in return. Pets are pets, not rotten ass, shit face children.
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>>25666373
Cause it's the TF general...
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>>25666436
This is like the adopted home for all the pet stragglers that lived through the death of their own threads and the hilarious drama that ensued.
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>>25666452
We're all sinking together.

Refugees of other generals, IRCs and related shit. Dwindling until that final /ptfg/ thread, or indeed final /mlp/ post.
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>>25666464
And when the time comes, we will face that death as one, big, unbearably autistic family.
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>>25666505
Then, in the future, we'll look back, and question how we wasted our youth on such insignificant things and truly grieve the potential we never reached and now never will.
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>>25666516
This desu senpai
I already grieve
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>>25666516
I can already feel the pain of future me cringing.
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>>25648649
You're not the first, and definitely not the last. Too many times has this happened.
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>>25667328
>>25648649
Any specific writers? If you say their name they might magically appear because someone actually gave a shit about the time they spent writing stuff.

It can happen. Never lose faith.
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>>25666579
>"Gee I wish I hadn't been so focused on being a pet pony, maybe I could've finished college and gotten a better job. Well, time to get back to flipping these burgers."
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>>25667753
I don't see how a pony would get a job cooking meat
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>>25667753
>>25668123
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>>25667753
>Implying I'm not already a rich fag that spends their free time longing to be a pet
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>>25665271
Yeah, the acetaminophen tablets he took at the start were pone pills.

The bleeding is the proestrous stage of the estrous cycle. Bascally like periods, the uterine walls are being replaced. Although I've obviously sped up the process a whole lot here.
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>>25668243
Yeah I have lots of money but I want to be the pet pony.
My engineering degree is rolling in mad dollar dollar bills yo.
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>>25668678
How pathetic are we? Completely set and we want to be pets.
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>>25668753
Sure, you have lots of money now, but when socialism takes America, then the world, by storm, you won't, you'll have equally as much money as anyone else.
FEEL THE BERN, RICHFAG
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>>25668306
>>25668678
>>25668773
>>25668753
Hello, my brother brothers.

Don't you want to be happy and free from fear? Do you live in constant social agony? Did you know the world is only 157 years old?

Look no further: Join the Epsilon Program. We all believe in the TRACT. Although the TRACT has not yet been written, it can still be read by those that are willing to read it.

All you need to do to join is send me your money, and all will be explained. People who believe in something live much longer than atheists, and they have eternal life thrown in for good measure.

Kifflom.
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>>25668919
I'd gladly be a pet if i had to give up my money and possessions. Alas, it's not possible.
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>>25668919
I kekd. This is a pretty dead on comparison.
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>>25668773
That's not how the world works, sweetheart
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>>25669214
Not yet anyways, you've yet to feel the Bern
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>>25550161
Continuing because you guys liked it for some reason

>You’ve been screaming incoherently for a solid 20 minutes now
>Thrashing about with vigor as the two struggle to keep you from moving
>For supposedly being as small as you were, you seem to be putting up a rather decent fight
>But soon enough one of them has you pinned and the other has hushed you by shoving a pillow in your face
>The moment you’re human again you’re going to squish these niggers like a bug
>They were already awkward, scrawny little fucks
>But given the… circumstances
>You were, at the current time, smaller and scrawnier than them
>Which also meant your energy was beginning to wear thin
>On any normal day the adrenaline could carry you through hours of struggle
>You would know… you used to live with 3 older brothers
>But today was not a normal day
>You were indeed something that shouldn’t exist and thus you were unable to properly use it
>There’s a small period of extra struggle before your muscles finally give in
>Collapsing under their strength and being held completely at their mercy
>This seems to please your creepy fuck of a “friend” and the bone chilling smile returns to his face
>”Giving up already?”
>You ignore his meager attempt at brewing fear
>Breathing heavily to try and regain yourself
>”Lift the pillow” He demands
>His friend abides, raising the pillow to expose your face and allow your breaths easier access to the air around you
>Though it’s not long before a hand is gripped around you barrel and has you firmly held against the bed again
>And by this point, you’re almost too tired to care
>”You see this?” The creep asks
>Raising a little pill into view
>The same type of pill that he coaxed you into taking downstairs
>There was little to no interest in what he had to say
>Until of course, he said it
>”This is what made you what you are right now.”
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>>25669559
>You perk up a bit, the ears on your head involuntarily reflecting your curiosity despite wanting them to
>”It will last for 12 hours and you’ll be human again.”
>Well at least that much is comforting
>You weren’t going to be stuck like this forever
>”Unless…”
>What?
>No
>No no no
>Don’t you “unless” me you shit
>”I force another one down your throat. At which point, you’re stuck like this forever.”
>Your eyes widen
>F-forever?
>Maybe he was just bluffing…?
>That doesn’t make any sense
>A second pill that could just, keep you like this
>But then, being a fictional creature doesn’t make much sense either
“I.. I… ah--”
>He places a finger against your lips before you’re able to muster a response
>”Be good for my friend and I tonight, and we’ll let you turn back come sunrise. Understand?”
>This is beyond fucked
>Fucked to the point where you were almost ready to accept this as just some bad nightmare
>Close your eyes and pretend you weren’t actually here
>You were given an ultimatum
>And either choice was worse than death in your opinion
>Why the fuck was this happening?
>There’s a small period of though before the waterworks begin
>Sobbing in this monster’s presence as he prepares to use you
>Like some toy
>Completely helpless
>Weak
>And utterly at his mercy
>.... f-fuck
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>>25669533
Politics < Money

One has control, one will always have control.
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>>25669570
>>25669559
Holy shit yes. Come on anon pone find a way.

YOU GOTTA FIGHT. FOR YOUR RIGHT.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBShN8qT4lk
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>>25669577
Only until the Bernmeister takes office
Shit's about to change, are you on the right side of history?
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>>25667346
I've tried doing as much a few times, but he's never come back.

It was Captain Scrappie, he was doing a pony apocalypse story "It was a Thursday"

I just read through the three chapters he had down the other day again, I followed it when it first came out. http://pastebin.com/u/captain_scrappie
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>>25669872
If I recall, it was an edgy zombie-type fic. Why does it resonate with you so much?
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>You and your squad headed to base along with the other Metro soldiers and would be briefed on the immediate actions to be taken
>As you take a seat at your desk, another man walks in wearing a heavy coat
>He turns on a slideshow and begins explaining what's going on and what everyone is to do
>"Currently, the insurgency is as well-equipped as civilians can be, they are based out of this building here." his whiny voice called out as he pointed to the projected map "But they have been known to move about the city."
>About the size of New York, the massive city of Densboro has been growing quickly
>The city government is run by GreenNorth, which has recently expanded to annex all rural land within 40 miles
>GreenNorth spread seeds of plantlife that could grow in the tundra environment and now claims that anyone living on the land is now indebted to them for their improvements on said land
>A brutal, unmanaged policeforce keeps the city maintained through violence but does little outside the city limits
>"We'll be engaging their known base tonight in hopes that this can be ended swiftly and we can all get out of this cold, dark shithole. Everyone understand?"
>The room answers, the combined voices producing a large amount of noise
>You and your squadron would be sitting on top of a ridge to the north of the building to cover the entering team
>You were going to be riding out of the city and across 20 miles of farmland
>On something called a rice burner
>You were to leave first to get stationed on the ridge
>While everyone else continued their briefing, your group was quietly ushered out of the room and lead to the garage by a woman who had a pleasant demeanor
>"Alrighty... Zep-6s are going to be issued a modified Mitsubishi V, please note the silenced muffler and weapons rack on the tail."
>You got one look at this thing and knew you were fucked
>Two wheels in a line, how the fuck were you going to ride that thing?!
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>>25669907
Edgy, zombie? What story did you read? No, ponies somehow appeared on earth and began spree hugging people to turn them into ponies, the protagonist was trying to escape them.

Not sure how you got edgy and especially zombies from it.
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>>25670130
Ponies turning people into ponies?

Going around with a shotgun?

I see similarities.
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>>25670153
Similarities I guess, but that was the point. It was a pony apocalypse story. I certainly wouldn't call it edgy, people throw that word around too often. If you want to read something that's edgy, go read Celestia's Relaxing Vacation on FIMFiction. It makes Cheerilee's Garden and Cupcakes look like they were made for a general audience.
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>>25669921
>You just stared at the motorcycle
>None of you knew how to ride it
>You knew how to run, shoot, and try not to get shot
>That thing looked like a two-wheel deathmachine
>"Go, you need to leave like now."
>Everyone stood still
"How do we ride it?" 104 asked
>The woman stared in shock at you all
>"Get on, twist the handle to go, pull the trigger to stop. When you're stopped, balance using your feet. Okay?"
>Well it was either this or walking
>You approached one of the seven machines and figured you should straddle the seat
>As a group, you discovered the secrets of the motorbike
>After about ten minutes, the garage door was opened and you all shakily exited onto an empty road littered with garbage
>Flying cars whizzed by overhead and homeless people trapped in eternal poverty laid below
>Just ride it, 105, it'll balance itself if you keep going
>The depressing scenes of poverty and dreary cement gave way to a more open view as you transitioned into the countryside
>You all, no doubt, looked like a biker gang of sorts as you sped down the empty country road as the sun set
>Finally, you'd made it to the ridge and set up camp by the building
>Not really camp, just parked in the grass away from the road and got your guns out
>104 was unpacking his rifle when he looked at it he called everyone over
>He held up a handful of sharp metal rods
>"How are we supposed to shoot these?" 103 asked
>"I don't know, just put them in the gun and see if it fires." 099 chimed in
>"Do we have an instruction booklet?" 102 started looking through the gun's case
>"105, do you know anything?"
"Nope, nothing. I say we just try to fire it and see what happens."
>Despite the sun having already set, it was slightly less than bright as day to your sensitive eyes
>104 put a handful of the metal rods into a magazine and put it into the gun
>He took aim at a nearby tree and pulled the trigger
>Nothing happened
>He pulled out the magazine and you all looked at the rifle
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>>25670474
>It had a small touchscreen on the side and a power button
>104 pressed it and the screen lit up super bright
>You squinted to stare at it as it dimmed down
>It had an operations menu
>GPS, targeting, calibration
>Fuck, you had to set this thing up
>You tapped calibration and a window popped up with a friendly animated man explaining how to use the targeting system, gps, and then began calibration
>The scope whirred as it powered on and began aligning the scope
>The friendly drawing said you were ready to shoot now
>The screen displayed an infrared version of what you could see through the scope
"Everyone, we gotta set up the guns for this. There's a little power button on the flip-out screen, press calibration and then you watch the video and you'll be ready to shoot."
>It took ten minutes but you got everyone set up
>"105, everyone's showed up." 101 pointed out to the farmhouse you were overlooking
>Four hummers pulled up and the soldiers got out and began firing on the large building
>No danger assessment or anything
>You were almost taken aback as they entered and started shooting everyone in the building
>Suddenly a few trucks pulled up on all sides of the building
>They had... Mounted guns in the truck beds and were firing on the soldiers
>You snapped out of the carnage-induced trance and aimed down the scope at the trucks
>You told everyone to wait and took the first shot
>A tall farming man, he was wearing a camoflage jacket and jeans
>He was blonde, bearded, and wore a scowl under his fishing hat
>You gun activated when you pulled the trigger and silently flung the rod forward using magnets
>It pierced the mans stomach and went right through him, causing an impact in the ground behind him and he stopped firing at the building
>He looked down, shocked at the blood spilling from him and fell over the side of the truck, out of your sight
>You'll never know if he died instantly, or of he struggled
>He didn't get back up
>You gave the command to fire
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>>25670631
>It wasn't right, it was in fact the opposite
>But you were bred for this
>You were bought to do this
>You were company property and needed to complete your task
>The rest of the squad felt the same as they cleared the field of opposition in a silent hail of tungsten-wrapped iron
>You heard a crunch in the grass behind you above the whistle of the weapons
>You rolled over and saw a man in a suit
>He had a nametag that read John Smith Rep.
>Zephyr Ind.
>He held a hand behind him
>Your hand wrapped around your pistol, ready to coat him in a layer of lethal ionized plasma
>"Good evening, Zep-6-099 through 105. I'm here with your parent company, Zephyr Industries. We need to have a talk." he was smiling too wide
>He was creepy about this grin
>"We here at Zephyr Industries try to provide the best products we can to all of our customers, and after a little mishap with our Zep-7 models being destroyed on Mars, we needed to make sure all of our products were running ship-shape."
>He took out a gun from behind him and pointed it at you all
>Surely he didn't think he could kill all of you
>"We discovered a gene in our Zep-6s and below that sometimes can inhibit the obedience training we work so hard to instill in our soldiers. All of you, attention!"
>The group and you instantly stood at attention and fell into formation in front of him
>"We at Zephyr Industries can't have this at all and since we can't test for this gene, we've been forced to discontinue the Zep-6 and below. But don't worry, you'll be replaced by the new and improved Zep-8!"
>He pushed the gun into 099's temple and pulled the trigger, his body fell limp
>You wanted to scream but were frozen in place
>You needed to save yourself and your brothers
>"I can see you're all distressed, but I'd like you to know GreenNorth will be reimbursed for the value of your squadron, you can rest easy knowing this."
>100 dropped
>Fight it, 105
>Step out of line
>You took a step forward
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>>25670837
Went from okay and twisted to "oh fuck"
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>>25670837
>You rigidly turned to the left to face the man
>Moving was a great labor because it felt like you were wrapped in restraining belts
>"Well, looks like we found one of our genes. I'll skip to you, champ. Present arms, 105."
>Your right arm went up into a salute
>You were hopelessly frozen
>The man's phone rang and he answered it as he tapped the barrel of the gun on your face
>"Uh huh, yeah, I found them... I killed 099 and 100 already... Alright... I can do that, sir... Yes sir... Have a good day, sir."
>He turns to you and smiles again
>"Turns out you all just got a governor's pardon, sorry about your pals, guess the call didn't come fast enough."
>He puts away his phone looks up
>A smaller dropship is lowering down nearby, the drone of the gravity-generators drowning out the firefight at the farmhouse
>"You all get to be moved to a different product line. I'm so sorry..." he says grimly, losing his smile
>He boards the dropship sits
>"Board the ship, soldiers."
>You all walk onto it and sit down
>He looks up at you as the ship lifts off
>"If I give you freedom of movement, will you kill me, answer truthfully."
"Yes sir." you answer, not of your own accord
>"I see, stay in those seats."
>"Permission to speak freely."
>You just stare at him
"You monster."
>"Don't blame me, in my eyes, I spared 099 and 100 from your fates."
"What?"
>"Product reassignment. You're being shifted to another product line to be resold."
"What line?"
>"Security-grade ponies. You'll be put through the nanomachine reconstruction process and auctioned off."
"..."
>"I know it must be upsetting."
>You were freaking out on the inside, 101 started to tear up
>You forced yourself out of the seat in a final act of defiance and tried to wrap your hands around the man's neck
>They stopped, you couldn't grasp his neck as if there were a forcefield around it
>"Looks like you can't do it. You can't, because of your training, harm a Zephyr Industries employee. Now sit down and keep silent."
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>>25669570
Yes, pretend to be the weak and helpless pony to lull them into a false sense of security. Then strike when they least expect it. Good plan, Anon.
Really glad to see this again!
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>>25671083
After this I'm going to bed
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>>25671083
>You take a seat and feel your body lock up
>The ride is chilly and silent
>There are no windows for you to look out of
>As soon as the ship touches ground, the man hurries off
>A group of men who look very similar to you walk on and stare at you five
>Their vests read 'Zep-8' on the shoulder
>"Stand up." one of them barks
>You do not comply, and are shaken loose
>You and the rest your four remaining brothers slowly stand up after being locked for over and hour
>"Zep-6-101 through 105, follow me." another Zep-8 says and leads you out of the hangar, the dropship leaving
>Here you all were, Zephyr Ind Splice breeding hq, the place where you were born and raised
>Every memory you have is of here
>Maybe, maybe you could overpower this guy and run?
>You had four others to help
>The Zep-8 stops at a steel door and enters a code, it slides open revealing a long, white, hallway
>"Come with me, please." he says
>You wait until he turns to throw a nasty punch into the back of his head
>He lurches forward and slowly turns around
>He frowns and cracks his knuckles
>You leap into him and slam your fist into his cheek
>Not much, but you managed to knock him back
>You were about to go for a finisher when he jumped up and grabbed your neck, throwing you into the wall
>Fuck
>It felt like you were dead
>You fall to your knees and he kicks you once more
>You remember the one move a government soldier taught you
>You reach up and grab onto the space between his legs with both hands and yank down
>He calls out and doubles over, stomping on you in the process
>104 rushes over and tries to fight as well as the other three
>He fights them off just as easily and then backup arrives
>You're all cuffed and brought to a large room along with about 20 other Zep-6s
>You were 105 in a series containing 150 soldiers
>You were forced into a chair while the room remained guarded by a handful of Zep-8s
>A podium at the front of the roon became occupied by a Hunger Games-esque woman
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My motive to write definitely isn't for praise.
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>>25672148
That's just how it goes, m8. You start a green and it flows out brilliantly. People like it, and you try meet your expectations. Suddenly, you doubt yourself, and the words don't flow easily.

Then it starts to feel like a task. A chore. The spark is gone. The story dead.

It's okay sweetie, it happens to the best of us.
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>>25671995
>She smiled and then spoke
>"Hello to all of my little children, those of you left are very lucky indeed. I, Ms. Cloudrunner, have decided to shift you from our discontinued product line to another item in the catalog, you'll all live long happy lives." she starts a slideshow
>"Those of you here include 1-19, our beloved demo team who displayed their skills right here for everyone to see, 24, who was recovered after going rogue in South America, and 101-105, who were bought back from GreenNorth. You'll all be helped to become Security-grade ponies, a job we believe will help you transition smoothly." she clicks to the next slide, it shows your fate
>Blue coat, white mane, same as the rest
>No longer would you be Zep-6-105, you'd be assigned a new product ID
>It wasn't much of a name but it was all you'd ever known
>You remember 24, he was always a hotshot who couldn't deal with authority
>He stood up
>"Hey fuck you! You can't do this to us! We're pe-"
>He was pierced by a bullet and fell
>Ms. Cloudrunner looked over to him
>"Don't call a medic, we'll save more by not treating him."
>You instinctively reach for your pistol even with the cuffs on
>Holy shit, it was still there in the holster
>You sit calmly pretending you didn't have a gun on you
>You strain your arms a bit, there wasn't any guards nearby, if you could just break out of the cuffs quietly
>You gave them a tug and sat down on your wrists to muffle the snap of the chain
>You cracked a link and put it back onto your cuffs so it'd look like you didn't break out
>You could easily break them open again and grab your pistol
>"From here, you'll all be sent to our nanomachine reconstruction center to begin your new life!" Ms. Cloudrunner exits snd everyone is forced up and through another hallway
>104 tried to stay close as you slowly accepted the inevitability of your existence
>You were a genetically altered part-human, bred and raised by a company to be sent off to die in wars
>It was a bleak life
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>>25672148
>>25672205
On that note. Same deal here. Probably no update from me tonight, I feel like the story is lacking conflict. Be a while before I can get something proper together.
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>>25667346
If I could bring one writer back from retirement I'd pick Chromewasp. I need more Someone Came With Her.
I could probably list a dozen more stories that are tragically forever incomplete.

>>25668306
Learning is fun, particularly with hooves-on experience.
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>>25672205
I actually write my stories regardless of demand or even being seen by anyone other than myself because I just love doing it. P-praise is just a super bonus
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>>25672519
I'll praise you however you want if you do an update.

Even if that includes butt fun
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>>25672550
If you chose your praise wouldn't that make it less rewarding?

I'll start writing!
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>>25672246
>You finally settled down and walked along with them
>You were all sat against a wall outside another steel door
>This was where you'd spend the rest of your time as a human
>Maybe if you could shoot the guards
>You counted them
>You'd be filled with bullets before you could get all five
>1-15 were sent in first, they never walked out but after a while the rest of you were forced into the room as well
>There were fifteen seats, you sighed and took a seat
>Steel clasps locked your wrists in place and a mercury-like serum was shot into your arm through an iv cord
>You felt a swelling pain in your arm and groaned
>It was burning, you called out in pain
>Eventually the fire consumed you and you fell into the blackness of unconsciousness
That's all for tonight
Tomorrow will be pone
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>>25672697
Had oats for the first time today
Holy shit
Amazing
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>>25672697
Well, at least he should be used to being obedient. That should make pony life a bit easier.
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>>25672697
Really liking this so far. Sci-Fi pone tf is in short supply, seeing how most stops right at nanomachines and doesn't go much further.
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>>25658540

>The ficking of a lightswitch rattles your already fragile senses
>Footsteps approaching from the entrance of the room signals his return
>S-seven… hours…
>It’s been seven, fucking, hours
>For seven hours you’ve sat here and lifelessly stared at nothing but a blank wall
>For seven hours you were at his mercy because you were terrified
>For seven hours you’ve been thirsty, starving, and holding in a gallon of piss
>For seven hours you wallowed in horrid thoughts of the possibility that you might actually give in… be broken
>For seven hours… you were obeying him...
>You try painfully hard to keep your ears folded back as to not warrant any other punishments
>He did say the twitch of an ear would earn you another week in the muzzle
>And not to mention week’s worth of hay as well
>The haunting footsteps slowly walk in a circle around you as you sit still
>You assumed he was taking time to examine you again
>Mulling over you like an artist admiring his work
>All the while you refuse to move a muscle
>Were you obeying or rebelling?
>Was not acknowledging his presence a good or a bad thing?
>Either way, you weren’t going to move regardless
>There’s a few more slow-paced steps around your side before the man walks into your vision and stops in your line of sight
>Your entire body quivers in emotional and physical exhaustion
>Your eyes red as you strain to withhold the army of tears that beg for release
>You want nothing more for this man to just show the slightest bit of empathy
>You were miserable
>Seven hours with your ass planted to a hardwood floor was a lot more grueling than it had originally sounded
>And the silence worsened it to a degree you’d rather not talk about
>But to your dismay, your trembling state of misery only seems to cultivate his amusement
>”Is someone ready to be good?”
>No
>Fuck this man
>This was torture
>You weren’t being trained
>You were being toyed with
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>>25674615
>The last thing you wanted to do was reward this monster with the response he wants
>But it seems the state of your ‘wellbeing’ is doing that much for you already
>”The muzzle comes off so you can eat, then goes right back on. I don’t want to hear a single peep from you, or you’ll end up sitting and staring a lot longer than you’d like.”
>You can’t fucking do this anymore
>You gotta make a run for it somehow
>You have to shake this leash and leave
>You’re going to die in here if you stay any longer
>He closes the gap between the both of you before reaching his hand behind your head and unlatching the muzzle
>Then, with caution, he pulls it from your mouth to allow it freedom
>Endless streams of mindless, hateful, things you wanted to scream at him suddenly flood your mind
>Anger swelling to an unholy level as you’re given the freedom to rain verbal hell down on this man
>But you…
>You can’t do it...
>You can’t bear the idea of being stuck like this for so long
>And the only way out is to just, listen to him
“I…”
>Your voice shocks you a bit
>For having dealt with your own silence for that amount of time, talking seemed… intimidating
>He shoots you a glare as you attempt to speak, easily defying his order to not make a “peep”
>But you couldn’t help yourself
>What else were you to do?
“I-I need to pee…”
>His expression seems to lighten a bit, but not as much as you’d hoped
>”Well luckily this is wood flooring. Now hush.”
>W...
>WHAT!?
>DOES HE REALLY?
>He’s okay with you just, pissing yourself on HIS floor?
>Your indignation causes your chest to swell with air as you take a furious inhale
>The quivering in your frame becoming more intense
>Your conscience screaming for you to just sit still and deal with it
>But your fury pleading for you to lash out
>Maybe if you were just good he’d reward you with--
>No
>Now you’re letting him mess with your head
>You’re giving him exactly what he wants
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>>25674623
>”Eat up.” He affirms, scooching a bowl of bland hay toward your hooves
>You don’t acknowledge it and continue to stare straight ahead
>But your rebellious staring hardly does much to irritate him
>”I could hear your belly grumbling from the other room, sweetheart. If you choose not to eat, the muzzle goes right back on.”
>No response
>Keep staring
>Silence
>.....
>”Alright then.”
>Your feel the cold metal of the muzzle wrap around your snout again before it’s promptly snapped together once more
>The man then stands himself and looks down at you
>”Your eyes are not to break contact with that wall until I return in the morning. If you’re good, maybe I’ll allow you to relieve yourself somewhere more appropriate. Goodnight.”
>More staring?
>You weren’t surprised at this point
>You survived 7 hours
>But you weren’t sure if you could another 8 or so
>Which was just fine with you about now
>He couldn’t punish a dead pony, now could he?

This is only half of the update I wanted to post, but I'm tired and the words stopped flowing as naturally. S-sorry, but I'll post it tomorrow!
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>>25674636
All is good, don't push yourself too hard
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>>25674636
Pretty harsh
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>>25675517
I-is that bad?
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>>25675775
Not in and of itself. Your writing is good quality but I'm not yet sure how to feel about the story.
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>>25674615
ears folded back is aggression from ponies. not sure if the guy would know that but you said hes some kind of animal trainer
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2 deliveries today, depending on wheter i finish my psycology essay sooner than later.
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>>25674636
Good stuff. It is harsh, but that makes it compelling - how far can our protagonist go?

Personally I'd keep disobeying until I'm nothing more than a crumpled blob on the floor. Would that finally illicit a response from him?
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>>25674636
Nice update.

Such a good man-pony.
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>You wake up on the cold bathroom floor.
>You check yourself.
>It is real then.
>You're this bug thing.
>To add a bit more of a screw up, you also switched genders.
>Damn.
>You stand up.
>Ew, gross.
>Once you stand up you see a chitinous mash below you, in the vague shape of your body.
>The hell is this stuff.
>The hell is anything, for that matter.
>The black substance seems to be growing over the floor.
>Spreading, slowly.
>Spreading out in multiple strands.
>Ugh, whatever it is, you've caused it.
>It's spreading.
>It's almost mesmerizing.
>A couple knocks on the door rip you out of thought.
>Someone wants to get inside.
You shout. "W-Who is there?"
>Holy shit. Even your voice.
>It sounds so different, and womanly.
>You hear a familiar voice.
>The doctor!
>"It's me. Let me in!" He says.
>Let him in?
>He may very well be responsible for whatever happened to you.
>"Let me in, please! I know what happened to you!"
>No other thing to do, you guess.
>However, how will you open the door?
>You don't have a hand.
>Nor fingers for that matter.
>You bite on the doorknob, and pull it down.
>The door opens, and the Doctor walks in.
>You close the door behind him.
>He immediately rushes over to the windows, and pulls down the curtains, covering any view to the outside world.
>"It worked!" He exclaims.
"What worked? Don't you dare tell me you're behind this." You say, unhappiness leaking from your voice. A voice you're still getting used to, too.
>Heck, you're getting used to this surprisingly well.
>Your psychology teacher told you that the mind reacts more to inputs to which are tied memories.
>You don't have an experience in turning into a bug-horse-thing. Nor do you have experience in changing genders.
>So your head doesn't know what to make it this.
>You know what to think though, you know that you're absolutely lost.
"Answer me!" You say and demand an answer with the most despair in a voice ever heard.
Absolutely sperged out again. Need to split it
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>>25676798
>"Yes and no. I accelerated the change, but I'll explain! I have a very good reason!" He says. Almost scared, too, from what you can hear.
>Scared? From what you see you're mostly harmless, except maybe for that teeth of yours.
"Then it better be a good reason, or I'll throw you out of the window!" You stomp your hoof on the ground.
>The doctor snaps his fingers and a green circle of flame envelops him below his feet, progressing up.
>One blinding flash of green later, you don't see the doctor.
>But a creature similar to you.
>He lacks any sort of a mane, only a fin in it's place, nor does he have any sort of a tail.
>His horn is curved, and only once, for that matter.
>He does have a few holes in his legs, and his wings, and a same chitin shell as you.
>But the most striking difference are the eyes.
>They're almost like two lakes of blue on his face.
>He has no white in them.
>He doesn't have a pupil.
>Nothing else.
>Just blue.
>"Didn't your mother ever tell you it's rude to stare?" The doctor says with a slightly deeper voice.
>You want to reply, but you end up stuttering.
>Once you carry over the initial shock, you blink, and think about whether are your eyes deceiving you.
"What the fuck are you?" You manage to say, still under the effect that the doctor was a four legged small bug, that burnt it's disguise off.
>Right in front of you, a larger, four legged bug.
>This is one heck of a day.
>One heck of a stupid day.
>A stupid day you won't be waking up from.
>"I'm what was called a changeling. A mere drone." He begins explaining.
"Was? But you're here, and I'm too." You say.
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>>25676807
>He shakes his head. "A long time ago, this island was full of changelings. We thrived, had a strong, ruling Queen, and a big hive. Everything fell to ruin. The only things that stayed over are the catacombs under the city, and the queen grubs that fly around the forest. One bit you, correct?"
You nod. "Yeah, something bit me. I think right on the neck veins. It hurt a bit. I didn't see it over the darkness of the forest, though."
>The changeling in front of you nods. "The larva had bitten you, and emptied itself inside your veins. I have simply accelerated that change by use of modern medication, Cool huh?"
You shake your head. "Look, I don't like this. Change me back! I have a life to live, I'm here on a holiday, I have nothing to do with your lost and dead civilization!"
>Now, the doctor shakes his head for a change. "I'm afraid that isn't possible, My Queen."
"Not possible? I'm stuck as this!? Look at me! I can't even get out of my room, because people would shoot and capture me on sight!"
>The fact that he addressed you as a Queen slips your attention.
>Holy shit.
>You're stuck like this aren't you? It's permanent!
>A look at the doctor's face confirms your suspicion.
>He's serious.
>"Look, how about I get some food, and we talk over this again after? You must be hungry. And it'll be easier for the both of us to talk with a full stomach." He says and chuckles.
>Trying to lighten up the atmosphere.
>He's trying to be nice too.
>His horn glows a bit, and a flash of green flames later, you see the doctor again, as if nothing happened.
>He looks at you, expecting an order.
"Fine. A snack does sound good." You say and sigh.
>"I think I saw something spreading out in the bathroom. You should go and lie on it, it'll make you feel a bit better, before I come back."
"If you say so." You sigh.
>He is nice to you, and even tries to comfort you.
>He does seem to have oblique intents with you though.
>You can't get rid of that thought.
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>>25676812
>He did seem happy to see another one of his kin though, so he may have been only lonely.
>You know what loneliness in a crowd can do to an individual, psychology had taught you a lot.
>But this conversation had brought something useful.
>You know what kind of a god forsaken creature you've become.
>A Changeling.
>You waddle over to the bathroom door. The doorstep, and it's near vicinity in the room itself are covered in the black chitin, the bathroom floor itself entirely covered, and the black begins to spread over the walls.
>Interestingly enough, there are some green lines within the material. They almost look like veins.
>They even pulsate, as if there were a heart behind it.
>You sigh.
>Speaking of which, do you even have a heart anymore?
>What is inside of you anyway?
>Do you still have a brain, a heart, lungs...
>Bugs don't have lungs, nor they have a brain.
>You touch your chest.
>After a minute of looking, you feel something beating against your hoof.
>It's there. A heart.
>Something else catches your eye. The lines seem to pulsate with your each heartbeat.
>As if you were the core of the structure.
>The heart of it.
>In the middle of the entire action.
>But you have no idea how to feel about anything.
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>>25676812
>The idea of sitting on the cold ground doesn't seem lovely though.
>Just as you think about how more comfortable a chair would be, the mass of the black chitin pulses, and forms something that looks like a throne.
>Unsure, you stand on it.
>You barely fit on, so you decide to back up onto it.
>How do you sit down though?
>You try to sit down.
>It can't be that hard.
>You manage to sit down, accidentally rubbing your flanks against the backboard of the chair.
>You unintentionally scrape the new parts that replaced your pride and glory.
>It sends a shiver down your entire body.
>Damn it is sensitive.
>You manage to sit down.
>It does feel comfortable, though.
>Your tail wraps around your hind legs, keeping them warm.
>And like that, comfortable, and snuggly, you await the return of the doctor.

And there. I should really watch out how much i write. Next eliery probably tommorow, or in the evenening. Central EU time.
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>>25676822
I eagerly await more and I suppose so do some of my drones
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>>25676833
Pastebin updated, link is in the google doc, and here, for your convinience, http://pastebin.com/6DT4tXbg

There will be more, more green, and more bugs. <3
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>>25676631
>psychology essay

Are you also going to transform into the little mare?
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>>25676326
To each their own, I suppose? I like putting my characters through hell, it makes them less expendable.

>>25676550
Service pet trainer. And even then folded ears can reflect a spectrum of emotions, not just aggression.

>>25676773
Demeaning, but I'll take it...
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>>25677095
Whatever ya do, don't stop. /ptfg/ is alive again, it's pretty amazing.

I'd smother you snuggles but I don't want to shit up the thread tooooo much.
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>>25677029
Hopefully, yes.
Secondary medical school, getting busy with stuff I was supposed to do last month.
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>>25677098
I-I'd gladly accept were shitting up the thread not a worry~
And wasn't against the rules.
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>>25677098
Everyone tries their best.
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>>25677144
I don't, really, but I've shat out the occasional green for this place. It's good to see new (?) people offering content.
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>>25677154
Even bumping this god forgotten place helps.
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I wish we had more drawfags. Even if they were just little doodles like the Anonfilly general gets.
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>>25674119
Scifi is awesome, it allows for so much creativity
I can write my characters into situations more stressful, scary, and cruel than ever before
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>>25672697
>You finally came to, you were in a large room with steel walls, there were about 20 other ponies in there with you
>Some were up and trying to walk, some still out, some sitting
>You tried to approach one of the other ponies and shuffled face-first into a clear wall
>You were in a cell block
>Each pony had a door to exit on side wall, and three clear walls surrounding so they could see into the other cells
>All the ponies were dark blue with snow white manes
>At least you could be comfortable knowing you were among your brethren
>You hoped...
>You banged against the clear wall and it wobbled and jiggled but did not break
>This wasn't just any glass, this was a special type of glass designed to be bulletproof in all situations
>There was no way you were getting through this without intense heat
>Maybe if you could somehow generate the heat of a star
>What the fuck were you thinking, 105, you'd die
>You shakily stand up on your hooves and try to figure out walking
>With little experience, you fumbled, with no group to plan, you fell
>Had your brothers been with you, you would've worked together and found a resolution quickly
>Were they really your brothers?
>After all, you were born in an artificial womb, with DNA copied from Zep-6-1
>You were all clones, so yes you were related and you grew up with them
>Whatever dissenting thoughts were in your head got pushed away
"We need to work together here. Hey! Can any of you hear me?!" you called out
>None of them noticed
>You tried banging on the glass again and the pony adjacent looked at you
>He tried to yell something to you
>You couldn't hear a word
>You pressed your ear to the glass and still couldn't hear him
>You couldn't fog up the glass and write a message with these hooves
>Maybe you could use your tongue and write something on the glass
>The moment your tongue touched the glass, you recieved a shock and fell back
>A musical chime went off overhead, catching all the ponies' attention
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>>25677675
>'Do not lick the walls.'
>'Inspection is in 12 minutes.'
>Inspection?
>What the hell was going on
"Let us out of here, asshole!"
>A buzzer rang and surprised everyone in the room
>The lighting in your cell turned dark red as the buzzer continued
>'Good ponies do not use foul language.'
>It went back to normal, but everyone was just staring at you
"Shit..."
>The buzzer rang out again and your cell was reddened
>'Good ponies do not use foul language.'
>The buzzer went off again and this time another pony's cell turned red
>'Good ponies do not bang on the door.'
>The buzzer let everyone know who did what wrong until it was time for inspection
>The doors opened, leading into a bright white hallway
>'Get out of the room.' the voice above repeated over and over until you stepped into the hallway
>There were white walls on all sides, even the doors were white
>The fluorescent lighting above colorlessly lit the room
>It was far too bright for your tastes
"What's going on?" you asked
>No answer
>You heard a whooshing above you and saw that there was a mist being sprayed over you
>It smelled like vinegar and paint thinner and clung to your fur, coating it in a tacky black substance
>Suddenly you were shot with jets of frigid water and the substance washed off onto the floor and down a drain that opened up for long enough to take in the black water
>Soaking, you were then subjected to a scalding ventilation wind that swept around the roon
>It hurt to breathe and felt like fire going down your throat but you were dried quickly
>Another door opened, leading into a much larger room where you could interact with the other ponies
>The walls, floor, and ceiling were steel
>A door opened and a man and woman walked in
>You and 9 other ponies either glared or cowered
>The suited man didn't tower over you as much as you'd expected, you estimated yourself to be about 4 feet in height
>Both were wearing some kind of navy blue armor
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>>25677862
>"Good morning recruits, my name is Amber, and this is Ivan. For the next three weeks you'll be trained on the art of being a security pony. You'll be guards, watchponies, sentries, and members of espionage after this so learn well or you will die. You have fifteen minutes to socialize today."
>Amber sits down on a fold-out chair with Ivan and you walk up to them
>They both stare at you, waiting for you to speak
"I want to go free."
>Your demands are met with a light smack across the face by Ivan
>They were human, or holding back
>They definitely weren't any Zep model
>Ivan shakes his hand and rubs it on his thigh, you saw a tinge of pain in his face
"What was that for?"
>"You do not ask to go free, you are company property, we all are." he says
>"And you don't make demands of your higher-ups." Added in Amber "Now go talk to your little friends."
>You nod and walk over to the group
>They were all confused, angry, and scared
>No one knew how they got here
>Surprisingly few of them were Zep-6s, there were a bunch of humans-turned-pony in the mix
"104? 103?"
>"I'm 101, and 104's here too, 102 and 103 are somewhere else."
>You, 104, and 101 group up and start talking
>"Where is everyone else?" 104 asks you
"No idea, no one's marked and I can't tell anyone apart."
>"You're 105, right?"
>You nod
>Another pony walks up and stares at you three
>"Hey, why do you guys call eachother numbers?" he asks
>"That's our names." 104 says
>"But why?"
>"We used to be Zep-6 Splices."
>"Ew. So why are you here, shouldn't you be out in a desert killing people or something?"
>"Our product line got discontinued. What about you? Shouldn't you be out doing an office job and buying groceries or something?"
>The human-turned-pony scowls
>"For your information, this happened to me because some indian fucker stole my bank accounts and I couldn't pay my bills because of it."
"Okay? Can you fuck off now? We're trying to have a converastion here."
>The pony left and walked back
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>>25676736
>illicit
It sounds easy enough when said, but in practice... you'd break pretty easily.
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>>25678155
>illicit
elicit*

My bad. Please don't hurt me.
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Belle POV

There’s a muffled groaning that gently sweeps you back to reality from your blissful slumber. Your ears perking up involuntarily to face the source, as they always do, and decipher the sound as being one of an opening garage door. It hardly takes a second of thought before your subconscious has you standing on all fours, frivolously stumbling your way across the house toward the front door. The lingering grogginess posed a minor obstacle as it begged for you to retain your state of relaxation, but your reward for refusing to succumb to its nagging urges will be a million times more gratifying. It always is~

You plop yourself to your haunches a yard or so from the door, sitting up politely with “good pony” posture as your Mistress refers to it. A fetlock is raising to your lips to conceal a mild yawn before 100% of your attention is directed toward the entry way. Your tail isn’t much for remaining still as excitement courses your body, but by now you’ve learned to exaggerate its movements to provide more of a “waggy” tail for her. She always seems to giggle at her little wiggly-waggy pony, and you’ve been through this ritual enough now to know what puts a smile on her face.

There’s a short-lived period of silence before the handle is gripped and the door is gently opened, your Mistress calmly making her way inside with her work bags in tow. It takes an obscene amount of effort, but you manage to remain seated in place as your body helplessly quivers before her in waves of unbearable happiness.

“Well look who it is~” She hums softly in that all-too-familiar sarcastically surprised tone.

“Welcome home!” You chirp amidst your wiggling, a massive smile glued to your face.

You could never pinpoint exactly why, but you’ve progressively become more and more accustomed to this unbearably warm feeling you received while in her presence.
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>>25678170

Eye contact with her was soothing enough to calm any tier of anxiety and a simple stroke of the mane could send you into a coma. Not to mention praise. You’re not sure there’s any english vocabulary to describe the feeling you receive when being praised.

“Why thank you, Miss Belle. When I took in a little mare I hardly expected to be greeted everyday I returned from work. A pleasant surprise I suppose?”

“As if I’m anything but.” You retort, your grin molding to one of faux overconfidence.

“And you’re painfully good at it, aren’t you?”

She deposits her equipment atop the kitchen table before kneeling down to reward you with a brief scratch beneath your chin.

“Alright, sweetheart. Go fetch me your leash, we need some exercise.”

An instinctive “Yes ma’am” is given before proceeding to fulfill the command. Trotting to the area nearest your bed and retrieving the leash from its resting place on the floor. You canter back with a little “hop” in your step as if to shake off some of the excess excitement still leftover before rounding the corner back into the kitchen where the leash is handed off to your owner.

“Good girl. Now look at the sky!”

You obey, raising your snout to the ceiling as you allow her easier access to your collar. There’s a faint *snap* as your leash is clipped before you’re given a gentle tug.

“Okie dokes, let’s get a move on girly.”

The both of you then set out on your normal trek. A ravine not far from Mistress’ backyard housed a little dirt path that spanned about 4 - 5 miles into a small cluster of trees you could consider a ‘forest’. Luckily, the houses is this neighborhood were spread far enough apart with a fair density of trees in between, so being seen was hardly a worry.
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>>25678179

You trot wordlessly beside your Mistress, keeping her same pace as to allow slack on your leash. A simple task in theory, but when you first began your walks with her it was an oddly difficult thing to grasp. Often times you’d trot a bit too fast and gag yourself before trying to slow down enough for her and gagging yourself again. It was easy enough to retain a consistent speed with 4 legs, so as your mind numbed from the therapeutic motions you’d forget about Mistress’ altering pace as she went up and down grades. Though, as with anything, it eventually became second nature and you adapted. You suppose now you somewhat understand a puppy’s struggles when they have their first dance with a leash.

The quiet sounds of a calm fall evening are soothing, and as per usual you’ve lost yourself in thought, but it seems your Mistress isn’t too keen on the silence today and attempts to strike up a conversation.

“So, Belle, have you been keeping in touch with Max lately?”

“Huh? O-oh. Not really. He said he was ‘in a bit of a bind’ and wouldn’t be able to message for a while.”

“Well that’s alarming. Did he specify?”

“Nope.”

“Odd. I hope he’s alright.”

“Oh I’m sure he’s fine. He’s kind of a badass.”

“A badass, huh?” Your Mistress questions with a mild hint of suspicious interest.

“Y-yeah, why?”

A quick glance up at her reveals a condescending grin and a raised brow being worn as if it to tease you.

“I’ve seen the way you two talk. If I didn’t know any better I’d think you two were starting to grow quite fond of each other~”

“W-wait… what do you mean?”

“A girl wants what a girl wants, love. There’s no shame in it.”

Wait what? Is she... Is she really suggesting that you’re crushing on your best friend? How is that even possible?
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>>25678185

Sure you were a girl now and aspects of your femininity have either significantly amplified or have completely forged from nonexistence during your time as a mare, but never once did you think you’d be able to date a guy! And definitely not your best friend! He wasn’t even a pony anyway! Or a pet! That would never work! You two lived totally different lives now. You weren’t even on the same tier of the food chain as Max, let alone the same species. It’d be like trying to date someone’s dog. Kind of… Okay maybe less weird. But still!

“M-Mistress! I wouldn’t--!”

“Oh hush you” She giggles, “Wasn’t it less than a week ago you told me about a dream where you kissed a stallion?”

Your head naturally reels from her sight, attempting to hide as you’re certain your cheeks are now burning red enough to be seen through your fur.

“B-but he’s not a stallion…” You justify.

“Maybe not, but he IS attractive. You can’t deny.”

Is this… gossip? I mean, yes, of course it was gossip, but were you really taking part in it? For the past few weeks the extent of your conversations rarely strayed beyond your innocent altercations of witty back and forths. Unless this was just a way to get you all flustered for her amusement, which would be fitting, but the tone in her voice says she’s out for a little more than just a blush on your face.

“But…” Mistress continues with a short pause for suspense, “What if he were a stallion?”

She offers you a genuine glance of curiosity. This one stumps you, freezing in your tracks in a sudden bout of deep thought. What was she even getting at? You being made a pony was completely on accident. She found you left for dead in a dumpster after being nearly raped by some freaks who decided to use some miracle drug on you. She can’t possibly be considering someone else willingly taking this form for the sake of a romance? Especially not Max.
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>>25678189

You wouldn’t allow it. Or rather, you’d protest it as much as you could. You didn’t have much say in the world around you anymore.

“B-but he can’t be a stallion! He has a human life!”

“So did you, right? And calm yourself Belle. I would never encourage someone to give it all up for something so uncertain. Your circumstances were different. BUT, if he were ALREADY a stallion? That’s what I was getting at.”

Your ears droop as your bewildered tone doesn’t go unnoticed. Guilt being the more prominent emotion now as you try to offer an apologetic whimper. She nods in acceptance and gestures for you to proceed with your response.

“W-well… if he were already one... “ An unwelcome fluttering grows within your chest, “I suppose I might toss an interested glance here and there…”

Mistress seems satisfied with your answer and displays another knowing smirk.

“How adorable~”

To avoid any further signs of embarrassment, you hang your head and idly kick at the dirt on the ground with a hoof. It’s not long though before a light yank on your leash gags you back to reality as Mistress sets course on the path again.

“Alright cute stuff. Let’s finish this walk before it gets dark.”
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>>25678193

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Max POV


It’s pretty late, and you know you should be asleep, but the clusterfuck of anxiety and fear assaulting your sanity has you about as wide awake as ever. After a good 2 hours of rolling about under the covers in a futile effort to grab some sleep, you’ve settled for mindlessly scrolling through some deviantart libraries of those colorful horses you seem to enjoy more than you should.

You’re not sure why, but it was comforting. Surely nothing you would have thought to do in the past, but was now a common routine after Belle’s departure a few weeks ago. Maybe it helped you cope with the fact you were pretty much all alone now? With Anon-Now-Belle gone and Ali out of the picture, the only people you really had were the “friends” you’d hit up to get wasted or buy some weed from if they had any extra. Well them and your psycho parents. They weren’t much for comfort either, unless your idea of comfort was a long conversation about how Obama is going to burn down the country and the end of the world is perpetually around the corner.

Yeah, looking at ponies was definitely the only viable option right now.

It was kind of funny actually, you couldn’t help but smirk every time you looked at the overabundance of pony art the littered every square inch of the web. Not because the pictures brought joy, but because there was this temptation to rub it in everyone’s face that you got to meet a real one. Albeit an aesthetic restructure of a human male, but a pony nonetheless. All they have is art, and for a few days there you had the real deal. Max: 1 Horsefuckers: 0

Though you suppose galavanting about /mlp/ with intent to brag about meeting a real pony would probably just earn you some responses telling you that you were mentally deluded with a tulpa or some shit, followed by the posts telling you to kill yourself.

Eh, the best things in life are the ones that don’t need to be shared, right?
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>>25678200

You continue scrolling through the endless libraries of pastel equines, hoping that, maybe, you might be able to find solace from your worries as you’d done the past few times of doing this, but you still can’t seem to calm yourself enough to relax. Your heart rate was stuck in overdrive and your body quivered from the adrenaline that refused to relent.

You suppose it might be fitting to mention the police having a warrant out for your arrest? A small detail you might have skipped.

After the incident with Belle and Ty, you figured the bastard would just accept the loss and move on. Sadly, that wasn’t the case. He went to the authorities afterward and is now attempting to press “assault” charges on you, and considering what you did to him, you’re quite certain you’d be spending some quiet time behind bars. If you could, you would gladly face the fucker in court if “defending a fictional creature” were a valid argument. That and there’s no way you’d be able to afford the legal fees when all was said and done. So for now, you resorted to nestling yourself away in your new studio apartment until the inevitable came.

Since you had yet to submit a formal change of address, the po-po still just assumed you lived at Ali’s. And after telling Ali why they were looking for you, there was no way she was going to rat you out, but even then you weren’t going to be able to hide forever. Delaying the inevitable was a sickening thought, but it was better than sharing a cell with “Bubba”, at least for the time being...

You sigh and toss the phone to your side. It was useless. Your mind was running at ludicrous speed and there was hardly anything you could do to distract yourself.

You weren’t a bad person. If anything, you tried to do the best you could when the opportunities presented themselves.
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>>25678204

You thought you’d done right by the world when you ransacked Ty’s face for taking advantage of a girl literally a sixth of his size. So why did the universe want you in jail? Why did whatever almighty deity that controlled the mechanizations of the world around you want a good deed to be rewarded with imprisonment? Not like you did what you did for the sake of doing what was right, but still!

There’s a sudden vibration from your phone that halts your flurry of thoughts.

Huh, strange. It’s like, 2am.

You grip your phone and lift if up to read the message still lit on screen.

>“Yo u free?”

The sender was a name you weren’t too fond of seeing. One of the many shit heads that distributes and trades the “doses” and “antidotes” for turning people into pones. He’s basically the reason Belle is the way she is now, but in his defense it was completely out of his control. Wrong place, wrong time. That was really the only justification you had for that situation.

At least he was willing to hook you up with an antidote for free at the time, even though you didn’t end up using it. Antidotes are crazy expensive, and the “doses” are 3 times as pricey. There’s a reason you don’t see many people-made-pones running around, because the shit is scarce and it don’t come cheap.

You turn your attention back the message still glowing in your face. Normally you would have just ignored him, but if his purpose for messaging you was a means to keep your from your thoughts then you were game.

“What’s up?”

>“I need you to meet me somewhere.”

“What, why?”

>“I got a job.”

“Right now?”

>“Yeah. Lotta money for this one. You’ll get a split.”

The prospect of earning money before being arrested sounded kind of useless, but why the hell not?

“Alright. Let’s meet at ihop or something.”


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>>25678227
Good stuff. Can't help disliking Claire / The Mistress though.
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>Eira
>Spacewolfe
>Soup
>Eugenic
>Woofr
All these writefags at once. This is the peace we strive for.
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>>25678314
Oh? What about her character are you not fond of?
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>>25678393
She just seems a bit manipulative.
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>>25678469
Gee, someone that wants to own and keep another sentient creature as a pet is creepy and manipulative? Who'd have thought!
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>>25678481
What, if your dog talked you'd blame yourself for being creepy and manipulative?
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>>25678481
>Implying you wouldn't do regrettable things to be in the pet's position
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>>25678491
I figure at the point it's completely subjective. Is owning a dog morally wrong?
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>>25678534
Right of conquest
It's a moot point after thousands of years of domestication
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>>25678769
Humans have had slaves for thousands of years. Wouldn't that make a remanufactured blank slate prone to the same treatment? Regardless of sentience.
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>>25678830
Just remember:
No one actually has a right to anything because someone more powerful can come along and disregard your rights.
Rights are no more than a courtesy if you're unable to defend them.
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>>25678981
Which is why I despise living the illusion of free will. Just put a fuckin collar on me and make me do shit. We're all figuratively doing the same now, why not eliminate the stress factor?
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>>25679010
Not everyone is that smart, hence, the illusion of free will.
If someone doesn't want to know the truth, forcefully showing them will only make them mad.
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>>25679010
Sure. Wanna come live in my basement? You can be my slave.
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>>25679048
If you make me a cute mare, sure.
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>>25679097
That can be arranged.
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>>25679125
Julz pls
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>>25679125
Saw that one coming.
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>>25679254
it made me hack up a lung
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>>25679254
>>25679263
Real cutting edge humor there
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>>25678356
Glad to be here, alongside good people.

Speaking of which, delivery soon.
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>>25679285
This just won't cut it.
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>>25676822
>You wait.
>Waiting eventually tires you, and you fall asleep.
>A couple knocks awake you.
>It's dark outside.
>You know that by seeing street lamps lit.
>Other than that, the light does seem dimmer.
>But you can see just fine, despite the night shrouding the island in it's dark veil.
>You hear the doctor again.
>"I'm back!" You hear muffled over the door.
>What took him so long?
>Is it that hard to grab a couple sandwiches?
>You open the door.
>He doctor comes back in, and immediately closes the door.
>He isn't carrying anything.
"So what have you brought me? I'm famished!" You say and smile.
>The doctor's disguise burns away.
>He sits down, and stares at you.
>You're curiously looking back at him.
>"Nothing?" He asks.
"What?"
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>>25679338
>He sighs. "Changelings disguise as someone's loved one, and they sustain off the emotions. I was doing that the entire afternoon."
"You've been swallowing emotions for the past six hours?"
>"Yes, Queen! Now focus, so you won't get weaker. You need to be strong."
You frown. "Would you stop addressing me as Queen!? I have a name. And it's Anonymous."
>"But you aren't Anonymous anymore, are you? You're not a man, anymore either. How long will you cling onto the past, and let it slow down your flight?"
"You want me to throw twenty three years of my life behind me?! Just to forget, start again?"
>"I know it may be hard, but.. "
"Hard? HARD? You have no idea, you seriously have no idea, I can't just flip a page. I can't just leave what I am behind. Why should I help you anyway!? For all I know you could've caused all of this! Do you think I enjoy this mess? Do you think I enjoy losing my humanity? Do you?" You shout at the changeling before you.
>The poor little bug looks down.
>And turns slightly away from you.
>You flinch slightly.
>You even feel bad for the little tyke.
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>>25679351
>Surprising, honestly. He could've gotten you into the whole mess.
>You swear that if he could, he would cry.
>You reach out with your hoof to the changeling, and pat his back.
"L-look, I'm sorry. Just give me time. I need to think things through. I'm just not sure what to do next."
>"I-If you say so. I'll stay here, if you'll feel hungry."
>You look over the spreading black matter.
"What's this thing anyway?"
>The changeling comes over, and happily steps on it, as if it were a patch of a beloved home.
>"It's the base for a new hive! And it looks great."
You sigh. "So you didn't know that this was a hive spreading out in the bathroom?"
>"Some changelings make nests in the absence of a collective. Look, this is probably at the foundations of the building already, just awaiting your orders. It's kind of a flexible structure, you can bend to your desire. Just as you did with the throne, over there."
"But how? How can I do anything? Can I even disguise as you?"
>"All in time, All in time. You'll learn it all."

Done for today! Pastebin updated. http://pastebin.com/6DT4tXbg
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>>25679360
Very nice
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>>25679899
More tomorrow. I would appreciate if the Pastebin got added into the OP, on next thread, since I won't be finishing this any time soon.

Would it be okay to do multiple POVs? The island isn't too small, nor is the hotel, so introducing more characters wouldn't be that of a problem.

Should all drones have a dick?
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>>25679899
Nice dubs
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>>25680087
>tfw no trips ever gained.
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>>25679360
I think fact this got my attention and interest even if I didn't read it from the start should be considereded as compliment for author
thanks for something to pass my time
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Moondancer really likes you, but she would never be seen in public with a dirty monkey.
She'll turn you into pureblooded unicorn husbando material!
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>>25680971
Sounds good to me.
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>>25680971
I'm cool with that. I'd happily succumb to her fragrant muff.
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>>25680971
Downside?
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>>25680490
Happy to provide. Pastebin mentioned earlier, if you're interested. It's also in the Google doc.
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>>25680971
Aryanne really likes you but she doesn't want to be with a dirty monkey, so she asks Twiggle Spriggle to turn you into a glorious aryan stallion to be her bf.
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>>25681887
I'd kerb-stomp her for being a terrible OC.
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>>25681910
>2015
>not wanting to breed masterrace mare
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>>25681887
Now this is an offer I'd take. Moondancer is alright but Aryanne is a qt, all aryan pones are.

>>25681910
s,mh tbqh family

>>25679360
I was never really into Changelings, but this green is bretty gud, and got me thinking a little more about their potential in stories. Thanks Wolfe. Good work so far.

>>25664367
>Adrenaline pumping, heart beating, lungs sucking down air.
>It takes you the whole second floor hallway and three flights of stairs before you fully realize what just happened.
>How close you just came to fucking some random guy in a shower.
>Or at least how close you came to forcing yourself onto a random guy in a shower.
>You stopped at your floor, huffing and puffing from the exertion.
“H-holy shit.”
>Elation flowed through you.
>The look on that poor gym goers’ face came to mind.
>Utterly baffled and just a little bit turned on.
>You imagined him trying to tell his friends what he saw.
>‘ I swear! There was this tiny horse in the showers! It was washing it’s ass in the shower when I showed up, then it hollered at me! Asked me to fuck it, and I didn’t even know what the fuck to say. Then it stole my towel and dried itself off before forcing me to stick a band aid on its ass!’
“HAHAHAHAHA! HOLY SHIT!”
>Your laughter echoed down the hall, you just up and collapsed, rolling on the floor.
>Eventually though, your worry at being seen again caught up with you.
>Still giggling, you got back up on all four hooves and started back to Chad’s room.
>Riding off of that adrenaline high, the hallways didn’t seem nearly as intimidating.
>Clip clop, clip clop and you were at Chad’s door, knocking.
>”Anon?”
“Yeah.”
>The door swung open and you waltzed in, Chad was already walking back to sit down in his chair.
>”You’re alright then? That was a lot of blood.”
>You hopped up on Chad’s bed and started up his laptop.
“Yeah, I’m good. It was no big deal.”
>You looked at Chad and smiled, to show that you were okay.
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>>25682294
>Staring at Chad, there was a hint of that heat in your loins, but it seemed like masturbating had quelled you for now.
>You weren’t trying to present your hot pocket to him on reflex anymore at least.
>Chad smiled and chuckled.
>”Good. You freaked me out there, running off like you had a poker up your ass.”
>He reached behind him and pulled two pairs of wool socks out from his drawer.
>”You clothes don’t fit you and all, so I figured some socks might keep you warm.”
“Thanks Chad.”
>Chad tossed them over and with a bit of tugging and biting, you got them on.
>He was right, the fit was snug and they kept your legs from shivering.
>The design though…
“These look like granny socks man.”
>Chad nodded and raised his cigarette.
>”Nice huh? I get a new pair from her every year.”
>You supposed they looked fine, with little Christmas designs all over them.
>The front pair was green and brown with a snowman and snowflake theme, the back were red and brown and all alight with red nosed reindeer and red baubles.
>And again, they were nice and warm.
>Just felt like you were wearing borrowed love.
>”Seriously, don’t worry about it Anon. I’m not the only one who gets them, she makes hundreds of pairs of socks and mittens to donate to poor kids and for the Salvation Army to give to people.”
“That’s a bit better then. Mind strapping these pens back on? Just a few more paragraphs to go.”
>Chad shook his head as he got up to help.
>”Still. Goddamn you’re stupid.”
“The polite word is persistent.”
>”Coming from the pony who calls me a paranoid fucker like I don’t hear it?”
>You can feel the blood rushing to your cheeks.
>Blushing.
>It probably looks adorable.
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>>25682316
“Sorry. You know I don’t really mean it. And you ARE a little paranoid sometimes. You just gotta chill out with the NWO shit man. All this conspiracy stuff makes you look like a nutcase.”
>Chad shrugs and smiles.
>”If being a nutcase is what it takes to not get either killed by the NWO or subjugated by the Masons. Then I’ll be a nutcase.”
>You roll your eyes.
>But Chad wouldn’t be Chad if he wasn’t a paranoid fucker.
>Then he’d just be a dude who smokes and cooks a lot.
>There was that heat again, down in your crotch.
>Goddamn estrous cycle.
>How long was this shit going to last?
>It can’t be that long since you’re so tiny.
>Either way you-
“Hey Chad?”
>”Yeah Anon?”
“Mind um… Mind if I lay in your lap while I type this up? To stay warm?”
>Your face adjusted on its own, forming an irresistible and completely innocent little smile.
>You even tossed in a mane flick.
>What the fuck.
>This was not a lordsosis reflex.
>Chad stared, eyes wide and brows up.
>Come on bro don’t fall for it, don’t be fooled by my bright blue eyes and my pretty blonde mane.
>There’s a demon in here.
>A sex demon.
>Chad nodded, kind of confused and starting to go into crush mode again, but he seemed to have accepted the logic behind it more than anything.
>”Sure, here.”
>He finished strapping the pens to your hooves and then Chad picked you up and got himself comfortable, back against the wall and lounging on his bed, before setting you in his lap.

That's all for now. More later.
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>>25682294
>s,mh tbqh family
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>>25682336
*lordosis
Woops.

>>25682347
I'll use better memes next time Shimmer fag.
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>>25681887
I'll take it!
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Pastebin has been updated as well. Up in the OP.
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333rd post
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I've written stories way back that people want updates to, but I'm afraid rereading/editing them will just make me cringe.
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Anyone know the name of the fic where Bubble Berry fucks and breaks a little man turned mare named Pedals?
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>>25683478
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/125144/a-full-tummy
Petal, she's not a cyclist.
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>>25683516
Hehe, my bad. Thanks based anon.
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>>25678086
>"Alright! Time's up, off to training, tofay we'll be learning the basics of how your body moves." Amber took a stretchy band and pulled her hair up into a ponytail
>Everyone slowly followed her out into a small field with artificial lighting
>The black dome the hung above was a massive screen that could simulate any skyline or environment
>Amber sat down at a desk right next to the door as Ivan herded the rest of your group into the room
>The floor was astroturf
>Amber clicked a few keys on the keyboard and the black walls of the room lit up to look like you were all in a parking lot in a congested city
>The large skyscrapers hung above you, flying cars cast shadows down on you as the noon sun burned bright above it all
>The air became thick and abrasive as the whir of gravity disruptors combined with honking of near-misses from bad drivers
>The astroturf turned to concrete under your hooves
>It was hard and hot
>Amber continued switching through different environments, some scary, some peaceful, some fun, some comfy, until she stopped on an olympic stadium
>Ivan walked out to the middle and called you all out
>The astroturf was more like real grass now
>The bright blue sky lit up the room as if your were all really there
>Suddenly a few objects began to materialize around you all
>First a wireframe of the object appeared, then it started to flesh out and become a real solid object
>It was a two-tower structure
>A steep incline with a ladder on it led up 10 feet to a rope and board bridge that went across to a second tower with a pole to slide down
>"The challenge is simple, climb up, walk across, go down the pole. Okay?" Ivan stated, his russian accent was thick
>It looked pretty difficult
>It got even harder when the whole structure began to rotate around the second tower
>"Whoever does it, wins, whoever does not, loses. You are all competing for who gets food tonight."
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>>25683759
>You stare at Amber to see what she's doing
>She's in control of this simulation
>She makes eye contact and smiles at you
>You look at the structure and think of how you'll approach this
>"Okay. Who will be first to try?" Ivan asks
>You step forward immediately
>No better way to approach something than to go all in
>Or, balls deep, as you heard from someone before
>You wait for the ladder to swing by and leap on
>By sone miracle, your hooves attach and you have some grip
>Now pull yourself up, 105
>Easier said than done
>You didn't have fingers, so your hooves didn't grasp the handles very well
>You raise one hoof up and grab onto the next rung, followed by the other front hoof
>You hugged yourself close to the ladder and shimmied your rear hooves up
>One step down, 7 more to go
>Your progress continued slowly as the room swirled around you
>You tried not to get dizzy but you slowly started to feel sick
>Just keep going, 105
>Ugh, oh god you were going to vomit
>You manage to get your hooves on the top platform of the tower
>Thank god you were almost done with the ladder
>Vertigo, dizziness, fatigue gripped you tightly as you pulled yourself partly up onto the platform
>You locked eyes with Amber across the room once more and she gave you a cheeky grin
>The typed something on her keyboard and the strutcure stopped and started rotating the opposite way
>Unprepared for this sudden change in forces, disoriented by the spinning, and fatigued from hauling your new body up a ladder, you rolled off the platform and fell 10 feet to the unforgiving ground
>You struggled to stand up as the structure came around again and threw yourself out of the way of the tower's base as it swung by with a new victim clinging to it
>You shakily stood up, the world spinning around you and then collapsed back to the ground as the next pony was thrown from the structure
>You needed a rest
>None of them made it by the end of the day
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>>25684011
Goodnight ptfg
Posting during the week will be much less than during the weekend
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>>25679360
Anon has joined the Zerg. Spread the creep and rebuild civilization.
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>>25684209
Zephyr is very much for sexual
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>>25684341
>Not joining Zurg
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>>25677366
I wish...
Wasn't someone taking requests in the previous thread? Maybe they're working on something.
Those threads have the advantage of a convenient oc for everyone to draw, giving them a clear art target that we don't really have.
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>>25685296
Yeah. We have a bunch of different pones and changelings. Especially with this many writefags active.
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>>25685296
I can take requests for one-shots, because I can't be bothered to write changelings right now.
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I should be angry at you for stealing my alicorn powers Anon, but it allowed me to evolve into my true form, a bookworm! I have never been happier! Now I can spend every day crawling around my library!
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Bumparoo
Pony turns into you
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>>25686769
Do I at least get to take pony's place as pony?
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>>25686762

I would not love her if she were a worm.
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Hey thanks for turning me into a griffon Anon. I never could get Twilight to do it.
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>>25687175
Sure thing Dash. Your topknot looks like shit though.
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>>25680971
Give me some time and a rewatch of the episode and I might see what I can do.
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>>25688019
A SILLY PONY APPEARS
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>>25687175
species swaps are neat, griffon ones especially so
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>>25678227
So Claire's gonna have him turned into a stallion? Evil but pretty convenient.
Becoming the pony is a great way to evade the police. No one ever suspects the pony.
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>>25679974
>Would it be okay to do multiple POVs?
I don't see why not, so long as you're a bit careful with it to avoid making the shifts jarring.
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>>25684209
is that zephyr? poor thing.
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>>25679360
>Next few days come by, and you're getting used to the entire mess that you're in.
>Liam, that's the doctor's name, has proven to be quite a nice guy, considering the circumstances.
>The hive had taken over the entire room already.
>All the furniture had been either assimilated, or is on the way of being melted to nothingness.
>But you keep on holding the spread back, only letting it spread secretly throughout the walls, foundations, where it won't be seen until you give the order.
>Liam has been helping you adjust, learn the ropes. You can fly, even though slowly, and pretty low.
>You can finally disguise, even if only to a female version of your original body.
>It's only a shell, though.
>What matters is what's on the inside.
>And you don't know what is there.
>One day, you and Liam stroll through he beach.
>You two have became quite the good friends, almost bros, as one would say.
>"So what will you do?" He asks, as you walk between deck chairs, towers and parasols, of the beach.
"Well, I thought of staying. Maybe root down properly. And the entire thing interests me." You say, and look over at the hotel.
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>>25690865
>"So gaining back the island for us?"
"But I'm not open for your idea of draining them to dust."
>"But it would provide enough emotions to sustain the entire hive for years!"
"We went over this before." You say, and frown at him. "I. Won't. Be. Laying. Any. Eggs."
>"But it'd be a great way to start! A strong first generation."
"I said no, for Christ's sake. If we manage to take over the island, we need to maintain positive standing to the outside world. No unnecessary slaughter. And that's if I decide I just won't return home. I still think it's a mad idea."
>Liam proposed that you should be a proper queen for the hive. You aren't so sure. It'd mean walking over bodies one way or another.
>But the poor little guy does really want to see a return of his race.
>A volcano eruption destroyed this island, and he is what was left.
>It's hard to admit, but you're feeling like you. want to help him.
>And you start to care for body count less and less.
>Is it because you're not human anymore?
>You should be worried.
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>>25690877
>But you aren't, you're slipping deeper and deeper, and you're enjoying the ride.
>Heck, you wouldn't mind if you could just drain one half, and use the other as drones.
>Wait, what!?
>What were you thinking?
>This is madness.
>Liam looks at you in mild surprise.
>As if he knew what're you thinking.
"I think that's a perfect plan." He says and laughs.
>But you know he is serious.
>And it doesn't seem like a bad idea either.
>God, what the heck.
>You're seriously pondering murdering thousands of innocent people.
>But they're still people, and you aren't human anymore, why should you follow petty things like morale, or humanness.
>Why should you be mind to any of these beings?
>They aren't of your kin.
>They pollute the air, water, spread like a disease.
>The only thing they're good for are snacks.
>You aren't even objecting at this point.
>You know that those thoughts will come sooner or later.
>Four in the morning.
>Everyone is asleep, or hung over.
>Lock down the main doors and all windows, take over anything, and use the most promising ones for your cause.
>Just in one swift move.
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>>25690889
And that's it. Maybe something today. Don't count on it, though.
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>>25686246
Half changeling half pone. I wonder how that would go
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>>25690996
As a shitty mary Sue.
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>>25690996
Like Fruity here, probably.
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>>25690889
>"I. Won't. Be. Laying. Any. Eggs."
I get the feeling that the new queen may have to take that statement back at some point.
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>>25691047
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>>25682336
>“Mind um… Mind if I lay in your lap while I type this up? To stay warm?”
With no ulterior motives whatsoever...
This is really cute.
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>>25691026
not necesarrily. go the opposite and have both pony traits and changeling traits but downgraded significantly beyond the point of much use individually. Have a horn, but at best your only have limited telekinesis, wings but you only really can ever hover a couple feet from the ground, changeling morph but you can only hold it for 30 minutes with long rest periods afterwards. jack of all trades, master of none etc, etc. Just cause you have all the cool abilities doesn't mean your particularly good at them
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>>25672697
i would have gone for broke and shot the ceo.
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>>25691184
Still, I doubt someone here has the nuts to pull that off.
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>>25683355
I'm curious, which stories were those?
I think everyone feels that way about their writing.
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>>25691453
I can confirm that. Whenever I read my old things, I cringe my balls out.
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>>25691453
>>25691541
That's art in general, I've never met anyone worth their salt who was really satisfied with their own work.
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Of course I would visit this general and it would pull me back in with the good green.
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>>25691191
We all would have...
But we all secretly wanted to see where the am horse path would lead
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>>25691618
Which good green?
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>>25691692
Everything in the thread.
I like it all.
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>>25691721
Enjoy the ride, then. ^:)
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>>25690889
>You're Ami.
>A rich fashion designer, stationed at this lovely island.
>You're staying on this part of the island, to suck up inspiration.
>You lay on the bed, staring into the ceiling.
>You blink a couple times.
>Are your eyes deceiving you, or is the ceiling really moulding?
>The mold seems to be getting closer.
>It suddenly drops onto your body, muffling any resistance you try to put up.
>The entire mass seems more like some sort of a slime.
>It painfully invades every entrance in your body.
>Ears, nose, mouth.
>Through the ass, through your pussy, sending you into moans, forcing you to take in more of the slimy fluid.
>The fluid snaps onto your face, forcing out a strong new muzzle.
>A horn snaps itself out of your forehead.
>Your finger bones snap themselves together, creating a black flat numb surface.
>You panic, struggle, as you can't breathe, only succeeding in spreading the slime everywhere.
>You manage to let out a loud moan, as a new mass of flesh erects itself from between your legs.
>Your legs follow the similar fate as your arms and hands.
>A new tail pushes out itself from the end of your spine.
>Your mind snaps.
>Queen will want you to report.
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>>25692310
>You're Anonymous again.
>You walk the hallways, as the hive spreads before you, changing the hallways as you walk.
>A thousand new drones.
>And five hundred bags of emotions.
>You've done a perfect job.
>Secured a future for your children.
>You continue trotting.
>A door opens, and a man, half way to becoming a drone, stumbles out, and falls in front of you.
>He reaches out, in a futile hope of you helping him, as the chitin shell overruns him, and a new drone stands up, and follows you.
>The feel of distress and fear fills the entire hotel.
>He scent is amazing.
>Such concentrated emotion is arousing, a single emotion pouring from everything living around you.
>Distress, pain.
>You trot on, your ranks swelling by the door you're passing through the hallways.
>You've locked all the snacks in the restaurant.
>How ironically appropriate..
>A drone vanguard opens the door to the restaurant, your loyal drones cover all entrances.
>They all look the same.
>They're all perfect.
>You enter the room.
>The strength of the fear of you and your drones hits you so hard, you swear it brought you a concussion.
>The arousal, blood rush, it feels so good.
>And you hadn't even started draining them yet.
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>>25692320
And that's it for tonight.
More tomorrow, you cute spergs.
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>>25692337
Pastebin here, for added convenience.
http://pastebin.com/6DT4tXbg
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>>25692320
More recruits for the new hive. Things are looking good.
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Neat
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>>25684011
Shouldn't have gone first, but rather taken the time to learn from the other ponies' mistakes.
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>>25693298
That's one philosophy, but going first shows courage and leadership.
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I dunno, I always found fear tasted terrible.
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>>25693341
It's more about the feeling, she may not necessarily feast on the emotions.
Anonqueen may just enjoy the sight of the puny little apes pissing themselves at the sight.
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>>25693504
And if you fear nothing?
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>>25693614
>>25693504
>There is one human at the back who does not kneel.
>He stands tall, proud and obstinate.
>The queen rolls her eyes and then stares him down, channeling all of her anger and wrath into a single soul splitting gaze.
>The man does not kneel.
>"Kneel, pitiful human. Your new queen commands it."
>"I have no queen. No king. No lord. No master. I do not kneel."
>The queen laughs, then releases her anger, striking the man with her hoof.
>The man does not kneel.
>"KNEEL."
>"No."
>The queen's anger is at its apex, rippling through the air, breaking the minds of all humans present.
>But not the man.
>The man does not kneel.
>"Become a drone. And kneel forever."
>The queen employs her magic, transfigures the man into an insect like her.
>"Kneel."
>The man does not kneel.
>"I will not kneel."
>The queen strikes him again, breaking his new chitin.
>"WHY?"
>The man smiles.
>"Because I am not afraid."
>Suddenly the queen is aware, she sees the man truly.
>Where all the others balk at her presence with fear radiating from their very cores, this man only stares.
>There is no emotion from him but hate.
>A pure and unadulterated hate for her and her kind.
>The queen now fears.
>An in her fear she strikes the man down, killing him.
>But the man does not fall.
>The man does not kneel.

Something I wrote while waiting for my PC to restart.
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>>25693977
It is better to live a day a volkishe than a lifetime a degenerate
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>>25693977
>Something I wrote while waiting for my PC to restart.
You must be a really quick writer or have a shit PC.
What do you call a changeling that rejects the monarchy? A rebuglican?
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>>25694481
libugtarian
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>>25694481
Neither, (and both I guess, wrote that in about 20 minutes) I have Windows 10. Botnet edition. It reset to install updates.

Getting real fed up with it too. I've done all I can to stop it from doing telemetry, but I have to check that again and again after each update, and each update is just worse and worse. I'm seriously considering gentoo. This shit is just unnaceptable.

/end blogpost
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>>25686845
>That Billy and mandy reference
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>>25693504
Well, if the comics are any indicator of changelings, Chrysalis specifically goes off on Sombra saying his rule will not be supported by her as she and her kin can not feast upon the despair that everyone would endure under him. Love is satiating but ire is not. Were it viable as food there would be no need for disguises to begin with.
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Big dump incoming.

>>25682336
>Wow this was…
>Surprisingly comfy, and definitely warm, you weren’t getting any chills at all.
>Estrous mind was onto something.
“Thanks.”
>”No problem.”
>Chad kept on keeping on, puffing away at his cig and watching you type, tossing in some advice here in there.
>Checking your spelling and what not.
>Every now and then he’d give you a scratch behind the ears, or he’d muss up your mane to catch your attention.
>Felt good.
>He stole the laptop from you for a moment and put a song on.
>Atmosphere, Sunshine.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpqOWO6ctsg
>You laughed and shook your head as you got back to work.
“It isn’t even sunshine out.”
>A quick peek at the window showed the blizzard was still pounding the university campus.
>”Yeah, but this is a damn good song for a morning smoke.”
>You laughed and eyed Chad up.
>He looked, so… At peace.
>Just casually lifting his cigarette up to his mouth, breathing in, breathing out.
>His chest, rising and falling in time.
>Chad worked out.
>It was something you’d always known.
>But never something you’d really paid any attention to.
>You were certainly paying attention to it now, watching him move, it was like every movement was predestined.
>He wasn’t a big meathead either, lithe would be a better way to put him.
>Movements were controlled, not surgical but… Powerful and meaningful.
>All of a sudden you realized what you were feeling, lying in his lap.
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>>25696686
>Safety and comfort.
>You felt safe because you knew he was strong, and you felt comfortable because you knew you were with him as an equal, not as someone lesser or greater.
>Chad noticed you staring and looked back in surprise.
>”W-What?”
>You smiled and giggled.
“Nothing, just checking you out. You’re looking pretty fit, man.”
>Your hips move on their own, rubbing your flank around on his crotch.
>You can feel his “red pill” poking you.
>He puffed furiously at his cig, trying to make time so that he could come up with a response.
>”A strong body is less susceptible to mind control and black helicopters.”
>There’s the actual red pill poking your brain.
“How does smoking help?”
>”Nicotine is a natural counter against aspartame.”
>You rolled your eyes and got back to work.
>Most of the essay was complete, just needed corrections, a proper conclusion and a bibliography.
>The bibliography was a cinch, you just used a web citation maker to get it all together.
>Corrections went by smoothly.
>Lastly was the conclusion.
>This was always a key part for you, you saved it absolutely for last.
>You’d write it in one go, no correcting at all, you found that it often turned out better that way.
>Got straight to the point, through the meat and mash, helped avoid weasel words.
>As you started writing it though, getting that word flow to flood your mind, there was a certain fire building in your snatch again, slowly and steadily.
>Unbidden thoughts came to you with that flood, images of Chad.
>First fully clothed.
>Then shirtless.
>Then lewd.
>Mmm…
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>>25696700
>”You alright Anon?”
“Uh!”
>You shook your head, mane flying and ears flicking.
>”You’ve been staring at your essay, not typing at all for about five minutes now. You got writer’s block?”
>You checked the clock: 10:37 AM.
>Not enough time to be horny, essays were due at 2 PM.
“Had it. Not anymore.”
>”Alright. Write your fucking conclusion then you lazy fuck.”
>Chad was smirking, you gave him a light jab to the chest with your hoof.
>Now, that was encouragement.
>It was time to type.
>Type up a word flood to drown all the lazy fucks in, a forty day storm to flood the earth with.
>Your conclusion came out like a lightning bolt, down and done in a flash.
>Job done.
>Save, wireless hook up to Chad’s printer, hit print.
>You loathed to get out of Chad’s lap, but you had to get your finished essay in.
>Chad got up and headed to your room to get your laptop so you could print the others.
>He came back just as you were walking out.
“Alright man, hand it over, let’s go pass this shit in.”
>The printing went by quick, just hit the button and go.
>Chad stuffed all your essays into a manila envelope and you snatched it up into your mouth.
>You tried to take a step outside of Chad’s room, but he stood at the door, leaning against the frame.
>…
>You set the manila envelope down.
“Chad wh-“
>”Hey Anon?”
“Yeah?”
>”Weird question. But, did you take any pills tonight?”
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>>25696713
>Well that was oddly specific.
>You tilted your head and frowned.
“Yeah. Acetaminophen, extra strength.”
>Chad had that poker face again.
>You could see his hand shaking like before when he flicked his cigarette butt away and into his coffee mug.
>”How many did you take?”
“You alright Chad? I took… I dunno, like 2 or 3? Why?”
>Why was he so freaked out?
>”I’m… Fine. I was doing some research while you were fixing your cut up, trying to find out how this happened to you. And…”
>Wait, seriously?
>Pfft.
>Probably just browsed around on some conspiracy Web 1.0 tier shit and found a page saying the NWO wanted to replace the thinking population with ponies or some crazy shit.
>”Well I found a few news articles talking about this new drug that’s been making the rounds. You know the kind, parties and stuff.”
>You stare back at Chad, frowning, brow furrowed.
“As in actual news articles?”
>Chad nods.
>”Here.”
>He pulls out his phone and shows it to you, he has the Chronicle newspage up.
“ ‘Pon-E: The newest daterape drug.’ You saying I was drugged?”
>The article didn’t really go into detail, all it said was that there was a new date rape drug going around called Pon-E and that parents should warn their kids about keeping an eye on their drinks at parties.
>Apparently it only took two pills to overdose.
“Ch-Chad. What are you trying to tell me? Are you saying this is what I took?”
>Chad doesn’t say a word, just navigates over to an official police report on the effects of Pon-E.
>He starts to read it off.
>”Pon-E comes in tablet and pill form. It can be crushed and dissolved into drinks, the taste is negligible and the scent hardly noticeable. Pon-E is fast acting, transforming whoever consumes the drug into a small pony within minutes. The appearance and gender that the person takes on is random and persists for 12 hours after consumption.”
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ol' Saint Nick turns you into worst pony for Christmas. Watdo?
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>>25696723
”So those acetaminophen… Those were Pon-E’s? Chad I definitely took more than one.”
>You shiver.
>Fear is rushing through your veins, you can hear your heartbeat.
”Chad. What the fuck happens when you OD on this shit?”
>Chad stares at you, expression guarded.
“CHAD. WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENS WHEN YOU OD ON THIS SHIT?”
>He sighs and keeps on reading.
>”The amount of Pon-E required to overdose is almost always around two pills within 12 hours. This, counting for the weight of the person consuming them and also on the resistance they may have built up after taking the drug before. The effect of overdosing on Pon-E is… is…”
>Chad coughs and scrolls down.
>”That the transformation becomes permanent. Experts agree that becoming human again would be impossible for someone who’s overdosed on Pon-E.”
>…
“Pfffft, HAHAHAHAHA!”
>You collapse, legs buckling as your laughter gets louder.
“HAHAHAHA!”
>You’re bent over, still laughing.
>Chad is looking at you like you’re a crazy person.
>You start wheezing a bit, your sides are paining from all the laughing you’re doing.
“HahHAHa! Hooly shiet. Chad. Oh my god Chad you scared me for a second there.”
>”What? Didn’t you hear me?! This shit is permanent. You CANNOT GO BACK. You got fucked over by some random creep working at a fucking pill bottling factory somewhere.”
>You fall over and crawl over to Chad and tap at his leg, still laughing in spurts as you try to speak.
“Dude, HA, dude. Do you have any idea how fucking lucky I am? Just think about it for a second.”
>Chad looks kind of pissed right now, probably because you aren’t taking this seriously at all and he’s confused as hell.
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>>25696740
“Think of all the shit people have put into medicine over the years, cyanide, ricin, every goddamn disease on earth, hard drugs. I thought I was going to fucking die for a second there, hell you were talking like I was!”
>”Anon y-“
“When I heard overdose, I was thinking like a ticking time bomb, as in I could just keel over at any second. But no, I wound up with the ONE recreational drug where you DON’T die from OD! Holy shit man. I hit the fucking jackpot, I should be out there buying lottery tickets!”
>Chad doesn’t look angry anymore, just bewildered.
>”Aren’t you mad at all? You’re a pony, forever.”
>You shrug.
“Why would I be? What does this change? I mean sure, I’ve got horse parts and well… Girly parts too. But whatever. I’m still ALIVE. I’m still here. And that’s a win if you ask me.”
>You laugh again, the look on Chad’s face was priceless.
>”But… I…”
“Does it bother you? That I’m a pony?”
>Expression serious, you catch Chad’s eye.
>He matches your expression, brows knitting together.
>There’s that cigarette draw again, but he isn’t shaking this time.
>”I don’t know. It did, at first but now…”
>Chad sighs and lights up.
>He takes a few puffs, you back up and sit down.
“You’re gonna kill yourself smoking that many in a row.”
>Chad chuckles.
>”They’re my rollies, and it’ll take more than just 7 spread over a day to kill me.”
>More silence as Chad thinks on it.
>All of a sudden he shrugs and then laughs, rubbing at his temples.
>”Yeah I think I see your point now.”
>He points at you and tosses in a coy smile and a playful wink.
>”You’re adorable like that anyway.”
>Instant sploosh.
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>>25696746
>All that heat comes right back with a vengeance and you’re left there blushing and wet.
>Chad doesn’t notice and starts to walk out.
>A few steps later though, he notices you aren’t following.
>He smiles, bemused.
>”You coming Anon? You still have to hand… Well, hoof your essays in. Should be fun trotting down the halls, freak some motherfuckers out.”
>You stare at him, tongue lolling out, panting.
>Three responses come to mind.
>They all sounded like something a sane person would say, which is why you didn’t say a single one of them.
>You didn’t have time to be a sane person.
“GET THE FUCK OVER HERE AND FUCK ME.”

And so ends CRUNCHTIME.
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>>25696756
>Not writing epic horse sexual to finish it off
I'll give it a bretty outta good.
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>>25696805
You really want me to write a clop scene? I'll do it if you guys really want me to.
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>>25674636

>”Eiraaa.”
>Your ears twitch a bit as rustling from the outside world nudges you toward consciousness
>”Eiraaa. Wake up, sweetheart.”
>The soothing, faceless voice beckons you to join its reality
>But you can’t…
>Not just yet...
>You offer a whimper of protest
>Wanting nothing more than just another minute in the void of worriless escape
>”Eira.”
>The voice seems to take a sudden change of tone
>Its firmness confusing you for a moment
>It takes millisecond of consideration before your mind registers whose voice is being heard
>And without any hesitation, you’ve flung to yourself to all fours
>Shaking the grogginess as best you could if only for your Master’s sake
“Y-yes, Master?”
>Your hasty awakening seems to please him
>”Good girl.” He smiles, running his fingers through your mane, your tired eyes meeting his
>A giddy chill runs down your spine as he gazes at you
>An overwhelming presence of lust washing over you as the one man that meant everything to you had his sights set on his beloved pet
>What a blissful thing to wake up to
>Not often are you rewarded with such lovely treatment just for waking yourself up
>And even then you protested him at first
>Which you find a bit odd he didn’t make mention of
>Over the past couple of weeks he seems to dimming his rigidness toward what would usually be unacceptable behavior
>Was he testing you?
>Or maybe he was just beginning to trust you more?
>You wish he knew he could trust you with any and everything
>You’d die for your Master
>And never once would you even allow the consideration of defying him to enter your head
>You were his loyal, faithful pet until the day you died
>And no outside factor could dream of changing that
>”Someone must have worn themselves out. I take you enjoyed yourself?”
“L-lots! We played tag, then hide and seek, a-and Aspen even pulled out some board games for us to play!”
>”Sounds like fun.”
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>>25696829

“It was! So much! I haven’t that much fun in forever, and I…”
>Wait
>You stop yourself
>Were you really about to ask him that?
>You direct your gaze downward as a ball of instantaneous guilt consumed your stomach
>It wasn’t necessarily a bad thing, what you were about to say, but one night of fun surely didn’t warrant begging for another the morning after
>You just couldn’t help yourself
>You felt so happy
>Having another friend
>Someone who didn’t reside in that tier of ownership your Master did
>Another pet to talk about pet things with
>Another mare to talk about mare things with
>But you knew it would be selfish to just assume you were entitled to more nights like the one you had just because you enjoyed it
>Afraid of digging yourself a hole, you cease the thought entirely
>”And you..?”
>He seems far too interested in what you were about to say
>And despite feeling as though you shouldn’t ask him
>You would never not respond to him
>Great...
>Now you have to say it
“I-I… um… really hope we can do this again soon.”
>What you feared would elicit a stern refusal only seems to make him smile
>”Trust me, sweetheart. If you keep being good, you’ll being seeing a lot more of Aspen.”
>You bite your lip
>Was this for real?
>For a couple of months, just hearing your own voice had become a rarity, and now he’d just hinted at allowing you to travel with him, away from the house, to play with your new friend?
>... Just for being good?
>There had to be a catch
>Being good for him was second nature
>Asking for something so simple for something so big in return just seemed so… easy
>It had to be too good to be true
“Y-you mean it?” You question, curious to see if he’ll bid you with any unmentioned tasks to earn his proposal
>”I mean it.” He answers softly
>You can’t help yourself from quivering
>Holding back a tsunami of happy wiggles
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>>25696849

>The bite on your lip tensing to conceal a flurry of high pitched, girly squeals
>There’s a brief, tense moment of stillness in the room as you sit, quivering wordlessly
>His confident expression slowly molds to one of concern as he witnesses you starting to tremble before him
>But soon enough, you’ve thrown you forehooves around him to give the biggest hug you can
>He chuckles and places his own around you
>”I love you too, Eira.”
>You’ve been such a spoiled mare recently
>There’s no way deserve all of this
“M-Master?”
>”Hmm?”
“W-why um… why are you letting me do so much stuff lately?”
>”Because you’ve been such a good girl for me.”
“B-but even then , I--”
>”Try not to question it too much, sweetie.”
“Err… yes sir.”
>”Now, go say goodbye to Aspen. We need to get ourselves home. I hadn’t necessarily expected us to stay the night last night.”
>That much was obvious
>If the alcohol on his breath was of any indication
“Y-yes, Master!”
>Your chest was on fire!
>All you ever wanted was to be the best pet for Master you could be!
>And now it’s suddenly given you so many things to look forward to!
>Surely you didn’t deserve any of this
>But he’s giving it to you
>Because you’re good for him
>B-Because he loves you!
>You topple off the bed where your Master lies, probably hungover, and skitter off to go say your goodbyes
>Yissss!
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>>25696825
Please
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>>25696829
Oh man, it's supposed to say "The present" at the start. I messed up ;~;
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>>25696912
Starting. Delivery today, if not, tommorow.

>>25696923
I know that feel. I've missed entire sections before, right in the middle of a green.
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>>25696950
Eh, I would have Chad say no go on that front, personally. He'd probably be a little spooked that his formerly male friends was so willing as a mare. For the pacing, I'd personally put off the lewd until a bit further in. However, I haven't a clue how long you plan on this being
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>>25697052
I agree.
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>>25697052
>>25697072
Y'all niggers are such divas
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>>25697052
>>25697072
It's going to be long, don't worry. Going to make another bin. I already know how the actual sex is going to play out so I'm going to write that first, then I'll be writing the build up to it. I'll try to keep the amount of time realistic. Although I'm not sure what you guys would call realistic. Keep in mind that Chad's attraction to Anon has been building already throughout the fic.

I guess I wasn't clear on what I meant by "And so ends CRUNCHTIME." There's a little more story I want to tell, I just consider this arc over since Anon has finished his essays and he came to terms with being pone.

>>25697126
Kek. You want me to just put the sex scene in a private paste and post it before I write the buildup?
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>>25697212
>You want me to just put the sex scene in a private paste and post it before I write the buildup?
You're a god.
yes<3
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>>25686769
Good luck in your new life, pony. Meanwhile I'll be stealing yours, and you won't be getting it back.
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>>25697555
No, just two of you
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>>25697636
Sweet. The other me can go to half of my classes, I'll go to the other ones.
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>You are Anon.
>And you're the little mare now.
>You smile as you run the brush through your soft mane, and feel your tail between your hooves.
>You look in the mirror.
>Such a pretty mare...
"I'm a pretty little mare..."
>You let a hoof sink into your soft, plush rump.
"I'm a pretty little mare..."
>You try to hold back the tears.
"I-I'm a pretty little mare..."
>Good little mares don't cry.
>The fake hoof slips from your hand as you wipe away the tears.
>You slump your head, and the wig falls off.

"I... I'm a p-pretty little m-mare..."

>You wobble on the stool, adjusting the noose around your neck.

"A-and I'm coming to Equestria..."


My apologies to this thread and to the person who wrote the post from which I stole this.
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>>25698581
That escalated quickly.
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If I end up writing lewdy stuff, would it be okay to post it here? I don't feel like taking a vacation.
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>>25699191
It must be pretty lewdy if you're worried about getting forcefully vacated over greentext. Maybe you shouldn't :?)
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>>25699191
Yeah, it's up to you, but lewd in thread has gone for many stories before and many to come.
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>>25699191
For real tho, you won't be b& for green, no matter how lewd.
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>>25699313
Thanks may deliver some Sexy time green tonight.
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>>25698581
>Be anon's neighbour
>Haven't seen him in about a month
>He doesn't come out of his appartment often anyway
>Place starts smellig kinda bad
>Go to anon's to check the smell
>knock door. No response.
>Open door with my duplicate key
>Smells like rotten eggs
>Old food and pizza boxes al around the place
>There's a path of cheeto dust torn paper leading to the bedroom
>Door to bedroom closed. It smells even worse that the rest of the apartment
>Force open the door
>A swarm of flies hits you in the face
>After the swarm dissipates, you get shocked
>In the middle of the room you see anon hanging from a rope
>on the ground there is a bunch of girl cartoon drawings
>Some torn papers read:
"I'm a pretty little mare"
>and
"I'm coming to Equestria"
>Pay cheap burial because none of his family claimed his corpse.
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>>25699419
Topkek.avi
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>>25699419
so dark the popo shot it
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>>25695278
I thought I said thus before.
One doesn't need to do something only to stay alive.
The fear from the "poor" and worthless humans is something that the Queen enjoys.
Kind of like dark coffee. Don't do more than 17 cups a day.
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>>25699555
>99555
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>>25679899
>>25680087
>>25680304
>>25699555
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>>25698581
Basically my death someday.
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>>25696756
This is so fucking cute and silly, I love it. Keep it up!
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>All these other people writefagging so you don't have to

Feels good man
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>>25664367
I don't get the blood thing. It doesn't even seem like there's just a little blood. No. There's a whole fucking lot. What the fuck?
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>>25700396
You still have to. You can't escape it.

>>25700971
See >>25668306
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>Almost finished a lewdy chapter.
>Didn't save midwork
>Text editor on phone shuts down.
>3 hours of work lost
Well, time to start again.
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>>25701188
That still doesn't explain it. Proestrus never causes profuse hemorrhage. Vast tissue damage does. I still wonder what possessed the writefag to think it a good idea to put heavy bleeding in a story like this.
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>>25697987
twilight sharkle resisting her urge to eat the yummy pones. thats the kind of psychological trauma i love.
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>>25701247
Technically speaking, the body shuts down all blood connections to the tissue, and it dies out. I don't know about horses, but the human uteri tissue us wraped in many spots, covering more space. So theoretically speaking, there is massive tissue damage.
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>>25701277
If that made any sense, that is.
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>>25701277
There is as far as only the outer endometrial layer is concerned, but the underlying tissues containing larger blood vessels should be fine.
It's just the bleeding. Why... Are people into this?
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>>25701315
Why are we into people transforming into cute cartoon horses? At least it isn't diapers.
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>>25701188
It's easy when your work is mediocre and forgettable
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>>25701418
Why are you describing my work?
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>>25701203
You're not the first of the last to have this cruel twist of fate happen to. So much has been lost this way.
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>>25701941
Worst part is, that the scene was so damn good.
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>>25692320
>Mumbles echo throughout the room.
>Worried, scared mumbles, from women and children.
>Men, on the other hand, are silent.
>But you know of their fear.
>And their fear is much stronger.
>But there's an underline.
>It's not fear, worry, nor angst.
>It's anger. And it's boiling up slowly.
>Anger you bask in, it's directed to you personally, to the tour legged hooves being that hurdled all the hotel guests into a single room, using falling ceilings and tubes.
>One of the men stands up. "Who, are you?" He asks. Even though you're standing at around three quarters of his height, and your drones do stand at half of it, they're still afraid of you.
>Some kind of primal instinct, perhaps?
"Cooperate and no one will get hurt." You exclaim, looking around once more. "You all have something we need."
>Another man shouts from the crowd. "What do you want to do with us!?"
"You'll see in time."
>"Leave the women and children!" someone shouts from the crowd.
You shake your head. "So would you rather split your families? Leave your loved ones to god knows where?" You say, and await their response.
>It's a mix of love, defiance and confusion.
>The love being sent to the family members.
>But you're leeching on it.
>Never say no to free food.
>"Monster! Let us go!" An another voice from the crowd shouts.
>Monster?
>How dare he!
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>>25702346
>You walk into the crowd, in the direction of the individual who dared to insult you like this.
>The crowd splits and separates, as you walk.
>You could literally close your eyes, and get guided by his fear.
>He looks like a Christmas tree in comparison to the forest of emotions around you.
>You stand before him.
"Say that again."
>He just stares in horror.
>He just stares.
>He's shocked, his jaw is moving.
>"M-Monster." He blunders out.
You smirk. "You've shown you have a backbone. Take him away." You say, and two drones drag the man out of the room.
>This demonstration of power was an excellent idea.
>You smirk as the rest of the people are still staring scared at your ghostly figure.
>You buzz your sings, and fly back to your original post, near the door.
"Please introduce our guests to their new quarters. Please try not to separate families too much." You say, with a smirk, and a big load of sarcasm in the second sentence.
>Cruelty is fun.
>But it's love you're after.
>Hate gives you strength but love fills your stomach.
>Some will be tough nuts to crack, but the inside is going to be that more tastier.
>You walk out and head out onto the top floor, where you have moved.
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>>25702363
And moar later tonight.
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>>25700971
>>25701247
>>25701315
I mostly did it for laughs to be honest. To give Anon a problem to work around and freak out about. I tried to do some research on proestrus bleeding in mares but all I found was estrus behaviour, so I based it mostly on my experiences with dog breeding. They actually bleed a surprising amount, to the point where you have to put a diaper on them so that they don't leave blood everywhere. The whole homicide thing is actually based on me following a trail of blood up all the way from the basement to the living room one day, half expecting to find a corpse on the floor, then just meeting a panting bitch laying on the sofa, still bleeding. I'd forgotten that she was in heat.

I uh... Don't have a blood fetish...

>>25701329
>At least it isn't diapers.
Yeah no, that shit is just creepy as hell.
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>>25702431
I'm a writefag, and I don't edit my stories AT ALL. Maybe a once over, but that's it. Is this normal?
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>>25702304
It always is. and then redoing it you're not sure if you'll be able to recreate it but eventually you work something out (Hopefully) that meets or sometimes even betters what you did before
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>>25702827
No, that's why there's people called editors. Most writers have someone who's sole job is to check over their work for any errors. Sometimes several editors.
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>>25702869
Yeah, but usually my stories do better if I don't edit them.
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>>25702827
I generally re-read what I wrote at least once, almost always twice. Helps get rid of the more blatant mistakes and I usually add extra details then to flesh out the green. Things can still slip by though. Just do what you find natural.

I know people who don't review their things at all though. They say it just makes their stuff come out bad. It's like fucking magic with them, they just up and don't have typing errors. I'm not like that.

tl;dr
Do what works for you, find what's best. Generally checking your work before posting is recommended but there are exceptions.


Or you can just get someone to edit for you like this >>25702869
Anon is suggesting.
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>>25702827
>don't edit my stories
>just a once over

I don't care about pet fagging eg they bland their leaving to the pet faggotry the train station and the world will never know what you want to be the pet pony of a little girl who you are looking for a bit of a shame that the protagonist was previously human then it might be a 20 min delay in getting back to the pixel model to test this painting program out of the vein hope that something happens.
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>>25702886
Autocorrect on my android love central does a quite good job correcting my shakey nicotine pumped fingers.

I also read my stuff over, but that doesn't leave any margain of error.

"To err is to human."
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>>25702917
It's like someone vomited word suggestions on this post
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>>25702917
The only thing is I don't have your number and I'll never get tired and hungry but I'm still not sure what the actual number one in a while ago but the best of the day before I go to sleep now goodnight my beautiful girlfriend and her husband and wife and kids and adults alike in the morning and I'm still not sure what the heck out of the year before that government has been the most recent version of this month
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>>25702431
>I mostly did it for laughs to be honest.
It was pretty disturbing.

>The whole homicide thing is actually based on me following a trail of blood up all the way from the basement to the living room...
This is also pretty disturbing.
Is it normal, though? My former flatmate had three dogs, two of them female, but I don't remember them ever going through anything remotely resembling this. Does it vary from breed to breed?
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>>25702974
>>25702917
Not a single difference found.
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>>25703081
If they're spayed, then they won't go through heat at all and there won't be any blood. It does vary from breed to breed and dog to dog.

Don't see how it's disturbing to be honest. I guess I'm just used to blood.
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>>25703107
>tfw actuall secondary medical shcool student on practice in hostpital.
>surgery
>not giving a flying fuck about blood, vomit and feces from my first day there.
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>>25702363
>>"M-Monster." He blunders out.
Most unwise to insult a queen. I wonder what's going to become of him.
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>>25703149
An obidient little bug.
C:
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>>25703136
I just do a lot of hunting. Always grew up around my dad cleaning deer and moose, helping him skin them. My family has always been heavily invested in the woods.
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>>25703172
Interesting.
I can't understand how some people can pass out seeing an open fracutre, or a simple venous bleeding.

There are way worse things.
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>>25703107
Well, when someone starts to bleed out of an orifice out of nowhere in quantities that aren't exactly small, a normal person who doesn't know what's going on and whether it's going to stop might get disturbed by it. I hope this makes sense.
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>>25703136
>>25703199
Why are you using your trip for this?
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>>25703256
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>>25703267
Because why not. Claryfing I'm parttaking in the discussion.
And that it's me who does all th autistic shit.
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>>25703279
Don't. It has nothing to do with your content.
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>>25703256
Wait, are you saying I'm not normal and you are? Rude dude.
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>>25703274
Oh noes! It's the twifu stealer!
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>>25696756
>“GET THE FUCK OVER HERE AND FUCK ME.”
Heh. I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
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>>25703284
Nah, you knew what was going on, since it was you who wrote it, right? So nope. Yeah, I totally meant to imply that.
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>>25703354
You're just making me want to put even bloodier scenes in the next arc. Maybe I'll use this anon's suggestion >>25657742
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>>25703397
I wouldn't mind reading a gorefic. They're pretty rare around here.
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>>25696868
Very cute
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Damn it, I can't figure out a good way to make the lewd seem elegant.
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>>25703734
Let your boner show you the way.
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>>25703757
My boner is blind. It wants to do it rough, and straight on. :l I wouldn't mind, not sure about you spergs, though.
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>>25703734
The first step would be to avoid too explicit descriptions of the act and with that also the usual anatomically incorrect nonsense. Basically, don't write it the same way 98% of clop is written.
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Will return tonight
What way should my story turn?
Lewd or gore
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>>25704173
I don't remember your story leaning towards either really. But sex sells so I guess go with the first.
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>>25704173
I don't really enjoy gore so I guess lewd
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>>25704282
>>25704355
So lewd followed by an intense period of despair?
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>>25704681
Why not just 'good'?
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>>25702363
Delivering some foreplay before I go onto the thing.
>It's almost like a throne room.
>Well, it is supposed to be a throne room.
>Yours throne room.
>Fuck, everything is going according to plan.
>Hopefully the Murphy's law won't come into effect.
>You sit down on the throne, your flanks touching the black material.
>It's cold.
>It slightly bends under your weight, creating a comfortable seat.
>Almost like a cushion.
>A cold cushion, forcing your flanks into a light spread.
>The lips of your marehood are exposed to the black surface.
>Damn, it is sensitive, and demands more and more attention.
>Urk.. What will you do?
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>>25704718
>You can't ignore the need forever.
>Shaking, you edge hooves to the labia of your mare parts.
>You wedge the hoof between them, moaning slightly as you do so.
>You begin to move the hoof around in-between the lips, not being able to move the hoof any further than the entrance.
>Your pleasuring is interrupted by a sound of the door hinges creaking open.
>You quickly sit properly, looking as if nothing happened.
>The seat isn't so lucky, though.
>You've managed to stain it.
>It's wet, and clearly visible.
>Fuck, here's to hoping on wild luck.
>It's Liam, the only changeling drone beside you that isn't a walking husk obeying your every order.
>He trots to the throne, and bows down.
>"My, Queen, I'm very happy to report that everything is going according to plan. We've managed to herd all the people in, with minimal use of force. We're draining them as we speak."
"Good work. What about the local forces?" You say, and try to cover up the damage you've done, but you only succeed in smearing it further.
>"They're in absolute chaos, my lady."
>He curiously looks at your lower half.
>"Is something the matter?" He asks eagerly.
>You're stricken by how straight forward he is.
>How will you put that you need to bleed off some heat?
>And the doctor just seems, so big.
>Liam surprised, looks at you.
>Holy crap.
>Did he seriously got what you thought?
>He did say something about changelings in a hive being connected telepathically.
>He shakes his head. "Well, if there are any things you want to do?"
"Nonono, I'm fine. Monitor situation. Tell me when they're onto something."
>He nods and leaves.
>Crisis adverted.
Still working on the main event.
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Where is the bump limit?
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>>25704870
We hit it.
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>>25704887
Crap, we'll need a new thread.
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>>25704915
Nah.
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>>25704938
I dunno, I'd like to finish my daily deliveries.
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Are there pastebins for these three stories, so that they can be placed in the OP for the next thread?
>>25669570
>>25684011
>>25696868
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>>25705127
Nine that I can see. We'll see and wait.
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>>25704702
There can be none
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>>25705399
I agree. We can't ever have nice things.
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New thread,
>>25705629
>>25705629
>>25705629
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>>25705399 sex and then feeling really bad about it. Huh. I bet that's how it would go down. Virgin as a human and the first sex you have is as a pone. Mindless ramblings
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