Whoa...

>I let a guy finger me even though I didn't really want to
that's beautiful

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This is deep!

>>8942089
>legit can't tell if real or not

>>8942089
Is that me or does this work better as a sentence than as a poem?

>>8942098
Also this

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I... Wow...

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Stunning!

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What do we need those silly dead white men for?

This is profound!

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i want to hear Harold Bloom's opinion on this

>>8942115
>>8942125
>>8942153
All of these strike me as halfway decent aphorisms but utterly incoherent poems.

Is this what passes for poetry now, or just some mediocre brain fart needlessly spread across several lines?

Is it both?

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>>8942171
.
.
.
4real?

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Why haven't you folks picked up the book nu-males the world over are going crazy over?

You aren't sexist are you?

how can mirrors
be real if
our eyes
aren't
real

>>8942186
I'm not a sexist, no. But the poetry isn't good.

Why are we giving this girl all this attention?

Is this serious? I can't believe this is actually published.

holy... I want more

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This is what you get when you google image search

>>8942194
she's a brown woman from Canada

that's why

>>8942197
You are aware of the kind of society in which you live right? Commercial 'art' is of poor quality in all fields.

Justin Bieber is popular in music.
Cape shit is popular in film.
etc.

Why would poetry or literature be an exception? The general mass of consciousnesses that are produced in this mode of production do not cultivate an appreciation of high art

the drawings make it twice as bad

>>8942216
True, but I just can't comprehend how anyone besides an SJW reads this and considers it good.

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>>8942222
>>8942234
the piss is filling the cup

>>8942248
What makes you think anyone else reads it and considers it good?

>>8942255
Very good

>>8942260
It has more than 1300 reviews on amazon and a nearly 5 star rating.

>>8942204
That happens though

Holy Moley!

>>8942266
I don't know what that means.

Nor do I know why anyone would active seek this shit out to get outraged over. Stop being emotionally invested in shitty commercial pop-culture.

>>8942096
Well, i mean its decent advice, but its terrible fucking "poetry"

>>8942115
No, just no. Rousseau was such a hack

>>8942246
Is that from The Death Grips?

>>8942284
I don't think anyone is that outraged or emotionally invested, we're just laughing at a shitty poet.

>>8942275
So what? People also shit themselves on occasion. Should we photograph that and sell it as artwork? It isn't artwork and it proves nothing.

>>8942284
I'm not outraged, I am amused and confused.

>>8942204
Who was taking the picture?

>>8942115
I'm tired of all this self-aggrandizing body positivity. Where are all the authors telling us that our bodies are shameful and repulsive?

why wont she capitalize anything REEEEE

>>8942171
New meme if real

>>8942246
OOH KIL CAPTIN ALEX

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>>8942329

>>8942369
Good question.

>>8942286
It's not even good advice damnit

>>8942089
>>8942096
>>8942115
>>8942125
>>8942171
>>8942188
>>8942193
>>8942196
>>8942200
>>8942209
>>8942213
>>8942222
>>8942234
>>8942246
This board is so God damn stuck up. Stop shitting on things that you dont understand.

We fucking get it, youre sheltered and privileged and can't relate to feminist art, maybe it just isnt for you then. Stop pretending it doesn't have artistic merit, because in a few decades time youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is.

Also Id like to see you all write something even close to this.

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>>8942234

>>8942257
>Piss
>coming from inside the vagina
Check out an anatomy book sometime.

>>8942286
I'm going to stop showering and tell my gf to fuck off if she thinks I smell

>>8942461
wjere does the peepee come from then

>>8942457
>youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is.

You almost had me there for a second

What frightens me is that serious people in our culture will actually deem this a masterpiece of femlit

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>>8942457
It's time to stop

>>8942095
first post best post

>>8942478
Women have a special appendage that unfurls from the vagina when they have to pee.

>>8942457
>feminist art
>art
...Hm...

>Stop pretending it doesn't have artistic merit
It doesn't

>in a few decades time youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is
doubtful

>>8942457
but its not revolutionary, these types of lukewarm vague sentences have been clumsily made by teenagers since the dawn of the internet. There's nothing deep about them.

>>8942457
>2017
>feminist
>revolutionary

brah

>>8942498
thats hot

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>tfw my mind is expanded with thoughts conceived mainly from white men

>>8942498
Is that what they call a feminine penis?

>>8942153
I mean, a lot of guys need to hear this particular one too.

>>8942200
Real

Eyes
Realize real

Lies

>>8942461
no it just looks like the pee from the dick in >>8942222 is filling up the cup in >>8942234


lighten up it's a funny little visual gag

>>8942284
Le high class man [|;^)

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>>8942478
>>8942498
Meant to type "Coming from a penis inside the vagina" Face the wrong way. W/e

>>8942567
I know I know. I'm always light

Am I the only one who has serious doubts about butterface being female?

>>8942576

Are you mad that you have not reached the intellectual achievements that I have reached?

>>8942627
That would certainly explain the lack of "honey".

>>8942461
>>8942619
Sarah, I love you. Please be my gf.

>>8942461
>implying it's piss

>>8942627
I don't mind that you do. I never announced it back in the beginning. They dragged it out of me.

>>8942457
Saved for future use.

Should be able to adapt it for shitposting on /tv/ as well.

Thank you.

>>8942716
seconded

>>8942089
Bruh, this is such a waste of paper

>>8942089
this is huh, wow

>>8942457
Will laugh so hard of this post is quoting the parody comics, I mean poems.

Unfortunately, I legitimately can't tell the difference.

>>8942540

That is a rather effay pepe, friendo

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rupi kaur is kinda /lit/

>>8942966
>omg she knows who Cervantes is
>must be /lit/
le get the fuck out

>>8942213
>>8942209
These are literally eliiot Rodgers quotes what the fuck is happening

>>8942096
I don't understand what the point of enjambing "warn him to" and "again" even is.

>>8942209
This would unironically be a good poem if the lines were arranged differently.

>>8942966
She makes Cervantes look better? What is that supposed to mean?

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>>8942089

>>8942627
>>8942704
Continuing off of this, I sometimes have doubts that I'm a female too.

>>8942716
>/tv/
Go back there.

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>>8943028
Trolls make tripfags

I'm glad I'm a woman.

>>8943010
When a
Woman
Has sex with a
Beautiful man
she probably feels like she is in
heaven.
But the world isn't supposed to be
heaven
For some humans
Feeling such heights of heavenly
pleasure is
selfish.

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I'd like to see any of you guys try and create something better than pic related... it's simplistic and yet incredibly beautiful at the same time, that doesn't mean it is easy or that it is nonsense. Go ahead /lit/, prove to me that you can do something better than this. Kaur truly is a modern master poet.

>>8943053
If you're really a lesbian then you're basically a man anyway.

>>8943060
when it rains
it poors
on the Moors
an old man snores
They sneer
As I peer
Off the pier
A pear
So There.
- Anonymous

>>8943060
Posting poems I have saved written by /lit/ anons:


We pushed our infant hands through reeds
We felt the Tiber's ice recede
Wet mouths wail in hungry need
So comes along the she-wolf

Latching on to feral teat
Fed from winged dryad's beak
Sprouting strong from muddy creek
There happens now some shepherd

Wrapping us in wool and furs
Delivered from those teeth of hers
But did not from us wildness purge
We grew into two brothers

Two young men of Holy birth
Grew up in some meagre hut
Martian fire in our gut
But lived as simple shepherds

Then one day they took you brother
From the arms of our shared pasture
Bound you to their gloomy capture
And brought you to the tyrant

My blood boiled with Holy Thunder
My steadfast wish to tear asunder
Those foul men my kin did plunder
So beat a sword from ploughshare

So I shepherd many men
And march to brother's caged pen
I liberate my kin and then
I look upon the tyrant

He with wretched, twisted face
He sitting in grandfather's place
So raising blade with godly grace
I depose the tyrant.

Leaving now this older land
We journey backward to the sand
Creek where did our cradle land
And seek our kingly fortune

But at last you split from me
And on this thing we disagree
Where our empire founded be
I scale the Palatine

From that cut-sole dusty hill
I see your form, distant and still
And see fortune fall in quill
The vultures now surround you

So my head to mesa fell
The sorrow in my eyes did tell
Your kettle did divine blood quell
And finish with my singing

So testing rock beneath my feet
I do make my slow retreat
Then round my head twelve wings do beat
And make my call to empire

I hurry down the winding way
Past rock and sand and shale and clay
As for your form I do make way
Upon the field of battle

I thrust my blade, I feel you bleed
I sense the Tiber does recede
I cast your body out to sea
I weep and build up Rome.

>>8943100
2/4

A man has told me god is good,

and stands above all men,
that he will never cast us forth,
though drenched with lust and sin,
That though we heed him little,
and pursue our own accord
he will not seek our bane nor yet,
unsheath his deadly sword
that he forgives excesses
and will not our prayers reject.

There was rumor in Gomorrah,
to that very same effect.

A friend avers that government,

has all our cares in mind.
And will not neglect the comfort of
the poor, the halt, the blind.
he maintains unreservedly,
his faith in policy.
to bring the fruits of honor to
the strong the just, the free.
he says the great in power seek
the profit of all men

It was mentioned in Treblinka,
but I did not heed it then.

Technology will save us,
i have heard a stranger say.
The wonderment of science,
skill, and tools will win the day.
Our comfort and our safety
we may leave to wise devices.
And men who build and train them up,
will coddle all our vices.
they'll see the futre clearly
and avert all waiting dooms.

I think I heard it spoken in
Titanic's smoking rooms.

The forgiveness of the strong is great,
I'm sure most meen agree.
The wisest and the best of us
will surely all be free.
the bold men, wise in letters
with their eye on public weal.
will never be cast out or forced
their knowledge to conceal.
Time alters soon the hearts of kings,
and all will be put right

I heard it in the Gulag
almost every single night.

So go forth with the banner
of redemption wafting high
and shout the slogan "Liberty!"
in land and sea and sky.
Of justice, peace, forgiveness, love,
proclaim the coming reign.
And cry the truth to power,
and the vanity of gain
That mercy always triumphs,
and that men will all be free.

Go tell them in Gomorrah,
but you didn't come from me.

>>8943113
3/4

Jesus in Belfast

When Jesus walks in Belfast
He wears his collar up
he keeps his blessings to himself
and stoops before his cup
when Jesus comes through Belfast
he spends his wisdom dear
And when his name is spoken
he makes as not to hear
He keeps well back in company
and shuts his fuckin mouth
and when he can he does his trade
a measure further south
When Jesus walks in Belfast
He keeps his cap pulled low
his step away he quickens
and those returning slow
He'd have a merry welcome
if he should take the whim
to ask the sods he suffered for
to suffer more of him.

>>8942457
here's your (you)

>>8943121
4/4

"Pray What is the news from Babylon?
Does Xerxes ancient town,
Still hold inside the Lion's Pride?
where once the world bowed down?"
"There is no tale of Babylon,
that great long-storied land
The Lion's gates are broken now.
The fields are choked with sand"

"You Tread the Path from Illion
Where gods and men did greet,
Does Priams mighty fortress still,
Show all assault defeat?"
"What gods have sown, the raven reaps,
I offer you no joy
neath broken stones her treasure sleeps
I bear no news of Troy."

"Speak, pilgrim, of Jerusalem,
I know you passed that way.
The palmer's badge adorn's you yet:
does David's line hold sway?"
"Where prophets sowed the seed of love,
the weeds of hate now grow:
the peace that was Jerusalem
was broken long ago."

"well, traveller, What of Camelot?
does Arthur's blood still reign?
Do boldy go the shining knights
across the feudal plain?"
"A trusted friend's betrayal;
a bastard's vaunting greed.
The moon that watches camelot
sees stones upon a mead."

"Good host, I beg you, ask no more
you waken in my mind
the shadows of vain, fallen hopes
I fain would leave behind.
You long for comfort; this i know,
that grandeur might abide,
that strength of stone and arms and hearts
can bear the waxing tide,
And Gilgamesh the strong yet stands
upon his mighty wall.
That works endure the waning sands,
that towers might not fall.
Content yourself that legends live
where men are just or brave,
and deeds of lives may yet survive
their castles in the grave.
I will not comfort you with hopes
that Rome may live again;
don't ask me of Tenoctitlan,
I've no news from Berlin.
In sorrow i depart you now;
regretting lenten cheer.
But the road is long
towards London town,
i cannot linger here."

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>>8943129

all I have to say to that "poem" is pic related. /lit/ BTFO by rupi kaur haha!!!

>>8943147
The scars on my arms
Tell stories
Of self harm
Give my my nobel prize
Thank you
- Anonymous

>>8942204

My fat digestion is sometimes a little off. It's called steatorrhea. It basically means that my shits are huge, yellowy, slimy, covered in grease, and smell like they came from the bowels of satan himself.

Many people have it. It's a fact of life. Therefore, I am going to take picture of it the next time I have a shit like that, upload it on the internet, and demand that you celebrate my bravery. It's natural, and people who find it unappealing are bodyshaming me.

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>>8943147
>dead white men

Isn't that a little... racist?

>>8943179
You can't be racist against white people, you dumb nigger.

>>8943156
i have a vagina
I HAVE A VAGINA
im also a minority
did i mention
i have a vagina
- give me a nobel prize, rupi kaur

>>8942457

Could you please stop discrediting feminism by claiming that this trash is feminist art?

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>>8943053
WTF, this isn't me. I'm the original butterface, and I still sometimes have doubts I am a woman.

>>8942983
>>8943011

lurk more

>>8942457
>We fucking get it, youre sheltered and privileged and can't relate to feminist art
I like feminist art when it's good.
The fact I have a peepee doesn't mean I have to defer to half-arsed aphorisms and pretend they're not half-arsed aphorisms because the poet doesn't have a peepee.

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>>8942457
gotta be bait, rupi kaur is trash.

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>>8943208
Question is, is this the real Twiggy?

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>>8942457
>youre[sic] sheltered and privileged and can't relate to feminist art
The thing is, the vast majority of women I've met who're(heh) way into idpol and feminism are sheltered white girls. I've never met a third worlder coming west that believes any of that shit.

>>8942096
>>8942115
>>8942125
>>8942153
>>8942188
>>8942196
>>8942200
>>8942209
>>8942213

Now that's what I call poetry
>>8942222
>>8942234
>>8942246
>>8942255
Wow so deep
Much line break
Such wymminZ

Rly fires the synapses

>>8943305
2 of the ones you quoted in the first block are from Elliot Rodger's manifesto.

>>8943271
Sublime taste for a Commie faggot

>>8943060
>saying
>statement that people say this
>why can’t this be like this
>+line breaks
>-punctuation marks
>tumblr title
>rupi kaur

Not even hard.

live each day
as if it was your last
they say
if only
we loved another
as if they were
our last

false love-rupi kaur

>>8942457
>Write a sentence in microsoft word
>Use a feminist theme
>hit enter after each phrase
>call it poetry

Ok.

>>8942457
See >>8943404, which I wrote in just about five minutes.

>>8943404
lol that's like looking at Klein's IKB 79 and still doing a shitty copy. this is the reason why u are an anon on /lit/ and rupi is world famous - she is simply so much better than you are!

>>8943129
>>8943121
>>8943113
>>8943100
I like em, but I don't get why so many anons seem to feel this need to write "epics" of some sort.

Maybe I'm a pleb in poetry, but one of my favorites has always been William Blake's ecchoing Green. Just because it feels so honest, and so sincere. It doesn't have to be concerned with pretentious or message. Its clear:

The sun does arise,
And make happy the skies.
The merry bells ring
To welcome the Spring.
The sky-lark and thrush,
The birds of the bush,
Sing louder around,
To the bells’ cheerful sound.
While our sports shall be seen
On the Ecchoing Green.

Old John, with white hair
Does laugh away care,
Sitting under the oak,
Among the old folk,
They laugh at our play,
And soon they all say.
‘Such, such were the joys.
When we all girls & boys,
In our youth-time were seen,
On the Ecchoing Green.’

Till the little ones weary
No more can be merry
The sun does descend,
And our sports have an end:
Round the laps of their mothers,
Many sisters and brothers,
Like birds in their nest,
Are ready for rest;
And sport no more seen,
On the darkening Green.

>>8943491
lol that's like
looking at Klein's IKB
seventy-nine and
still doing a shitty
copy.

this is the
reason why u
are an anon on
/lit/ and rupi is
world famous

she is simply
so much
better than you
are!

>>8942089

Of course this is some pretty deep shit, but do you guys think Rupi Kaur's work is as good as this:

Holy spirits, you walk up there
in the light, on soft earth.
Shining god-like breezes
touch upon you gently,
as a woman's fingers
play music on holy strings.

Like sleeping infants the gods
breathe without any plan;
the spirit flourishes continually
in them, chastely kept,
as in a small bud,
and their holy eyes
look out in still
eternal clearness.

A place to rest
isn't given to us.
Suffering humans
decline and blindly fall
from one hour to the next,
like water thrown
from cliff to cliff,
year after year,
down into the Unknown.

I think she's pretty dank, but this is a little bit better imo.

>>8943491

success is better
vain
in all in all
fame
it's all

Diary entry #328, Rupi Kaur.

>>8943060
The ocean
is made of millions
of drops
but woman is a delta
and the levy has broken

if
every grain of sand
on all the world's beaches
became two
woah
-rupi kaur

>>8942172
But aphorisms in general suck.

>>8943491
>rupi is world famous
Because she has the balls to assume people care about goddamn Instagram poetry
>u are an anon on /lit/
Because he knows his fucking place, unlike rupi

>>8942457
Please be real, please be real, please be real

>>8942089
i'm not sure if its real or if it was made by you guys

>>8942115
>>8942125
>>8942153
so being a poet now means being good at writing tweets?

I
Have a vagina
A baby was conceived in it
Then passed out of it
Fun things happen there
Sometimes blood comes out
That
Isn't so fun
I don't really enjoy poems about vaginas

-Femanon #326

Here's a poem
About a dick
It's cool how they get big
And red
You guys look funny when you come

-Femanon #763

>>8942193
why does that salt shaker look like a dick. By salt, does she mean semen, and by sugar, does she mean cocaine? I'm missing something

>>8942457
knice beight

the best thing
that could ever happen
is being raped
by the guy you love
- rupi kaur

niggers hate me
because i didn't gave them
any fried chicken
-rupi kaur

when i see my brown skin
i feel ashamed
for it looks and smells
like shit
-rupi kaur

>>8944085
fucking kek

Potayto, potahto, they say
But I say
Nah
I'll just make some rice

I wonder if...
You know how...?
I mean
Yeah...
Never mind
No really, it's ok

It's remarkable
How anything can be poetry
If you say it just right

Once
I thought I was just the best
The smartest
The coolest
The most insightful

But then
I got some perspective

Am I white?
Not really
I am kinda beige, rosy in parts

Am I racist?
Lol, nah
My friends, my family
My world
Is multicolored

Mom and dad
Marched for civil rights
Went to jail
And stuff

We grew up
All us multi kids
With sushi
And greens
And tacos
And cornbread
And Sunday roasts
And red beans and rice

Black is brown is tan
We all rolled together
Like puppies

And now you tell me
I am less?
I oppress
You
?

I never met you
I know my people
We are
All colors
We are
Love
And dancing
And good food
And music

And we fight
Together
Against oppression
We don't separate by color
Or privilege
Cuz I help you
And you help me
And we climb together
To enlightenment

>>8944211
She's rephrasing *snapsnapsnap* quotes from Jerry Springer guests.

"I'm too much for you to handle honey! You missing out on alllllllll this."

>>8943229
>why dad

geg

>>8942096
>t. Tumblrina

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>>8942457
I wonder who is behind this post

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>tfw trying to imagine what Shakespeare, Dante, Milton, Goethe, etc would think of this
>tfw they were lucky enough to live in a time free of this shit

>>8944318
If you ignore it, it goes away. At least for you. Keep her in her bubble, now she will complain about us cyberbullying her.

>>8944188
Audibly chuckled at this one.

>>8944318

How are you not realizing that what Shakespeare was back then is what Rupi Kaur is now.

In a hundred years or so, Kaur will be hailed as one of the giants of 21st century poetry. She's just that good, but you are all too narrow-minded and, quite frankly, too stupid to understand that.

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>>8942457
Look at the woman in the pic related,she drank an ENTIRE bottle of vodka and is smoking a WHOLE pack of cigarrettes by HERSELF , while you are complaining on a imageboard!! what a hell! just man up and roll with it girl.

>>8944319
Holy

>>8944362
Go back to youtube, reddit, or tumblr. I know you're from one of those three.

>>8942468
Youd be fine in doing so, but she would also be fine in leaving you

>>8944202
Nice try, David Duke

>>8944085
I am nominating you for the nobel prize in literature.

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>>8944333
This is quite literally the funniest post I have ever seen. I really hope this isn't bait, because if these people actually exist, I will never stop laughing. Comparing rupi kaur to Shakespeare. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>inb4 not an argument
I don't care.

>>8944403
>posting the dead frog meme in 2027-10

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>>8942089
>86.940 likes from a instagram post of her photo last two weeks.
>poo in the loo looking ugly bitch who writes feminist bullshit.
What the fuck man.

>>8944410

Yeah, Pepe was fun while he lasted, but he's getting to be a bit stale and maybe too pol associated for my tastes

>>8944378
>>8944410
Think I might start posting stale memes for the sole purpose of baiting people like this.

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checkm

>>8944318

O, but of course they were not so lucky. People like Kaur (though she at least has the virtue of being not exactly verbose) are to the cult of neoliberalism what those contentless and hateful pamphlets churned out by the various religious sects were to Christianity. There has always been and, I think, will always be bad writing. Indeed, the overall stupidity per capita of today is much lower than it was in Shakespeare's or in Goethe's time.

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this one really fills me with emotion

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>>8944441

FTFY

These are my favorite slams they are so powerful
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=1QbPSBxpF4E

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=C4eTo5tMsVw

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ax--RpnVumI

>>8944430
"""baiting"""
how new are you

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=a8E_tkD3dco

>>8944478
Score! I LOVE acrossticks!

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GzAnxgNeJQw

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=657rUVgyA98

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ApdjBCbcHbg

Such beautiful slams

>>8944471
>Gorgasm

Patrician detected, have a link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgO_meL_9W4

>>8944475
Old enough that I don't use "new" as an insult.

>>8944509
This is my favorite by them
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uerMNmU8ukE

>>8944333
This beautiful slam is for you
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aPQshzYk2tc

>>8944319

beautiful

>>8943229
>that fucking drawing

>>8944089
>why does that salt shaker look like a dick
Anon, I have bad news for you...

>>8944531
Very nice,top 3 of this album for me, i'm getting into psalms lately but have something diferent: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ya9aCL2baik

>>8942405
>2016
>asking a WOC to accept the shackles of European male writing conventions

This Indian bitch is shit at writing. Even the blowjob eyes girl is better.
Feminism is cancer.

>>8944791
Congratulations on providing the fuel to their talentless flames

Please do keep it up, more publicly next time

This girl you're mocking has gotten a book deal with a major publisher and sold millions of copies, so if she's a talentless hack what does that make all of you unpublished bitter virgins on /lit/?

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>>8944817
>implying I'm not published

>>8944940
What a fucking eyesore that is

>>8944791
this Indian bitch
is shit at writing
even
the blowjob eyes girl
is better
feminism is cancer

>>8944465
I RECOGNIZE THAT BULGE

>>8943160
Sounds kinda neat. Do they pass more easily than normal poop-poops?

>>8944986
Makes me think

>>8944817
Talented writers that will never get published because we aren't women of color. Published != skilled

>>8944986
>Feminism is to blame!

>I have a rash
>Feminism is to blame!

>>8945024
It's even sadder if you're white. You somehow screwed up even in spite of the massive privilege with which you were born.

>>8945028
>shit feminist poetry
>feminism isn't to blame
encourages one to reflect

>>8945030
kek

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>>8945028

>>8945038
this is huh... wow

>>8945040
actual kek

>>8945034
>Shit thread of high school BS poetry
>Posted by a male for ridicule.

Are you sad we have baginas and you don't, or are you sad that you came out of one?

Pajeet, go to the
designated shitting street,
where you must release~

a haiku

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>>8945057
>The book was on the top-seller list for Canadian literature on Amazon, amongst writers such as Margaret Atwood. It also landed in the number two spot for Amazon's bestseller list for poetry. The collection even made it to the New York Times bestseller list and remained on it for 25 consecutive weeks. As of October 2016, it has sold over half a million copies.
>high school BS poetry

but muh ideology

>>8945057
ebin

>>8942329

True love will find you in the end. . .

>>8942125
Cookie-cutter
cunt worship

>>8942194
because she has a cunt

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lol

>>8944478
kek

>>8945126
Why did we give women rights again?

>>8942089
This is the best thing to happen on /lit/ in a while now.
Bravo, chaps.

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It's hard to contain my inner Schopenhauer on this one: If a man had written exactly the same ,instead of a "female, underprivileged, feminist [...]", no one would give a fuck. And rightfully so, this is just abysmal, fucking horrible from start to finish. That's why the author particularly states it in her bio to cater to sexually frustrated, single moms and "underprivileged, opressed, feminist" bla bla bla, you know the drill. Not even mad, just sad. The There are way better authors in any field who get no exposure whatsoever.
>inb4 "name one then!"
I can't, because they get no exposure. But I highly doubt there aren't a shit-ton of people who are way better than... this.

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I know this is a dead meme now, but we're leading a crusade against Rupi Kaur. Basically, we're creating a social media persona like hers and spreading fake poetry. We need you fags to join our mission.

Doc link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xryu0eX2TcLTafLcWo25wdNaUQ2zY_BMSGvEDvLZ4Ks/edit?usp=sharing

Discord:
https://discord.gg/KRcwHHe

Come on, you jews. Join the fight.

>>8945057
you sound more like a tranny than a real girl

2
b
h

If my soul falls
in the misty woods
but no one is there
to help it stand
do I still exist?

>>8942246
LALALALALA ACTION

>>8942096
>outstep his welcome
What did she mean by this?

>>8942096

Why is it okay to tell men to shave and cut their hair but not women?

>>8945126
this one can't be real

>>8945126
Oh brother.

>>8945057
Lol. in all honesty tho, these poems suck.

>>8944807
Yes, making posts on a Polynesian totem pole carving bulletin board system is really gonna make her even more famous. Nothing newsworthy has ever happened on this board.

>>8945030
>>8944817
Why do people take this seriously?

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>>8945068


>>8945057
What kind of person obsesses over being a "female" as much as you do? It isn't natural, normal people don't constantly refer to their vaginas in every other post. Which leads me to believe that maybe you are only a delusional tranny and don't even have one. Plus trannies are usually mentally unstabke which would explain the tone of most of your posts.

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>>8945595
What kind of person generalize like an ass (referring to this thread). And how else should she reply to someone who is scared of girls lol.

>>8945608
>And how else should she reply

Preferably by keeping her mouth shut

>>8945637
Epic meme my friend,
Now can this hatred for feminism end? I mean it's irritating how you guys only ever talk about some modern day try hard harlots, but never about any good woman authors in regard to feminism.

>>8945650
>Now can this hatred for feminism end?

No.

>never about any good woman authors in regard to feminism.

Oxymoron.

Do we have any other poetry tanslators here? I am just starting.

Since /lit/ is almost certainly full of foreigners, just like the rest of 4chan, I find it surprising not to see much talk of translation on poetry threads.

Here is one I started, and ''finished', one or two hours ago, from the Brazilian poet Olavo Bilac about the last flower of Latium (Rome), i.e., the Portuguese tongue:

LAST FLOWER OF OLD LATIUM

Last flower of old Latium, fair and brute,
Thou art, at once, the splendor and the tomb,
Pure local gold that guards, amid the gloom
Of residue and rocks, the coarse mine’s fruit.

I love thee as thou art: unknown, mysterious;
A roaring, blasting tuba, a tender lyre;
Who hast the tempest’s furious-sounding choir,
And yet a lover’s tune, almost delirious.

I love thee in thy freshness, and aroma
That smells like virgin forests and the sea!
I love thee, torn and suffering child of Roma,

In which from Mother’s lips I’ve heard: ‘My son!’
And in which Camoens, exiled, sang his plea
About the ill-fated mind, by sad love won.


This is just the first version. I might come back to it to do some revision work. There are some things I don't like, such as rhyming 'brute' with 'fruit' and, although I kind of like the fourth verse of the second quatrain, it distances itself too much from the original. Also, the syntatial inversion is the last verse also bothers me. There also might be some erros that I haven't notice - maybe even English mistakes. Indeed, I will have to do a revision some day.

What do you think of it?

>>8945659
Wow man, you are like super eloquent, I totally understand why you hate women now.

>>8942457
I can never relate to anything about feminism. The radical pro-feminist followers seem to think that we are on the verge of converting our entire society to a liberal safe haven, without having any views on more important matters such as our continued breakdown of the environment. There won't be a society to reform in a few decades, there is no time for any "revolution".

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>>8945170
Why? It'll just result in her gaining more attention. The media will parade her as a feminist martyr and 4chan will get another influx of newfags. Don't piss in the popcorn.

>>8942457
Oh bother!
I won't sleep at night now, knowing that I can't comprehend such beautiful art!
I will compose an haiku about it:

I see shit on my screen
I see it smeared on your page
Rupi, could it be 4 your age?

>>8945721
Here, I wrote you a feminist poem:

I baked a cake
with my vaginal
yeast,
but my gender studies
professor told me that
cooking
is a tool of the patriarchy;
I wept
for my oppression.

>>8944318
bad poetry that hides behind whatever political poetry is currently popular has always existed, people just forget about it pretty quickly

>>8944469
10/10 :DDDDDDDDDDD

>>8945833
I agree poems ITT are terrible, but why are you so dense about women overall?

Victim me.
Victim you?
No, you white male,
probs cis too.
Trigger warning: body shaming.
Don't mansplain! That's degrading.
You can't make me shave my legs!
I'm With Her, you racist dregs.
I see you manspreading over there!
More Muslim migrants will make you care.

>>8945881
I don't dislike women. I dislike feminism.

>>8945934
I dislike third wave liberal feminism.
Second wave socialist feminism is where it's at.

Stop laser focusing on hating this distraction politics and maybe people wont accuse you of hating all women.

Sage for the umpteenth time

>>8946249
I dislike all feminism.

>>8945126
Comes LOL! I get it!

>>8946302
>doesn't want women to have the same rights
>"I don't dislike women."

>>8946329
>If you disagree with my political movement it means you hate me

Thanks for pointing out one of the reasons I dislike feminism.

>>8946332
you are going to fuck a girl one day and feel like an idiot for being so mad so long

>>8946340
>If you disagree with my political movement it means you are a virgin.

Thanks for pointing out one of the reasons I dislike feminism.

>>8946343
haha boy that's cause we know. it's not even being mean. the other day there was a thread and like 6 posts started out with "I'll go ahead and qualify the claim that I've never been touched by a woman..."

Not to mention your identity politics are on-par with Saudi Arabia and other countries where men are virgins until their 39.

>>8946332
>disliking all forms of a political movement that gave women equal rights means you hate women
yes

>>8945833
Actually laughed at this.

>>8946353
>>8946357
>Ad hominem, ad nauseam

So it goes

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>>8946371
Not an argument.

>>8946371
>doesn't know the difference between ad hominem and inference
Memorizing a list of logical fallacies does you no good if you can't understand them.

>>8946376
>>8946379
yawn

>>8946381
nobody wants to actually engage in an argument with you because you're a virgin loser that hates half the population because you have bizarre expectations and theories and probably a handful of mental disorders

>>>/r9k/

>>8943060
it's weird
that pirates would go from shore to shore looking for buried treasure
when the real treasure
was in the friendships
they were making

>>8946397
>engage in an argument

No one has attempted this yet.

>more insults

What a surprise.

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>>8946400

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>>8946405
This.

>>8946405
>having autistic views on women
>being called out as a probable virgin
>proving everyone right

w e w

i've got molly
i 'vgot white
i've been trapping
trapping
all day
all night

>>8946433
see >>8946381

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>>8945753
>muh normie influx boogeyman

I've always found it funny that when faced with disagreement, feminists automatically resort to shaming people based on sexual behavior, mental disabilities, bodily appearance, etc.

my fucking gf dragged me to the one of her live reading. it sucked ass

just some rich indian girl memeing her way to the top

>>8946450
>I've always found it funny that when faced with disagreement, feminists automatically resort to shaming people based on sexual behavior, mental disabilities, bodily appearance, etc.
no it makes sense. the only ppl who waste time arguing with them usually have one of those things or all
feminist are getting their ass kicked by other woman.

>>8946443
usually a pretty peaceful person but there is nothing that rustles my jimmies as this kind of semi-deep vague bullshit that usually the most rude evil people use as a badge for how empathetic they are. REEEEEE

>>8946460
One day we will have sexbots and be done with this silliness.

>>8945595
>dat pic
Holy shit lol

>>8946461
It's one of ours

>>8944091
lol'd

>>8946532
Why? Those weren't even clever.

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>>8946443
>i-it's just a boogeyman! it's not real!
Stupid fuck

>>8946561

They're from /pol/, I guess...

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doot doot doot

jus sittin here

writing, composin

a poem

in my lil poem book

>>8946593
i have a thing for indian women. too bad none of them do porn

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>>8943147
>GET ON WITH IT LADS, IT'S NOTHING COMPARED TO SCARS ON ARMS

>>8946565
That graph proves my point you dumb cunt

>>8946598
yeah it's kind of a shame, priya rai was good but she never did anal

>>8946593
I would skullfuck her while we listen to skinny puppy

>>8946601

LOL who cares about stuff like that now?? I mean it was like 100 years ago sheez. Guess what else was a major problem back then? Female oppression! And this is still a problem today. Women have suffered for so much longer and so much more than men. Who cares about some stupid white men fighting each other because some stupid men told them to so they could see who's dick was larger. Absolutely pathetic, they had it all coming.

>>8946633
>priya rai
she was okay but she kept moaning like the cookie monster her scenes just because laughable
sunny leone was good

>>8942457
All these replies to this post..

I choose to believe that /lit/ isn't actually retarded and we're all just trolls trolling trolls trolling trolls

Why don't we submit these fake ones to a poetry journal

>>8946638
edgy teenager detected

>>8943100
Write with your own voice, from your heart. Stop writing like a Victorian ffs

>>8946640
This is bad bait but if I know lit you're about to get 20 responses. Godspeed, and brace yourself.

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>>8946664
cuck opinion

>>8942988
Some of them are mock images made by /lit/ users

ugh where can i get me a gf like her. i'll put up with her pretentious writing just to be able to enter that sweet sweet vulva of hers

>>8946673

I've been progressively lowering the bar in this thread.

>>8946685
T b h, I wouldn't be surprised if I still got responses after these posts.

:-)

>>8942922
Poopi for a rupi?

>>8943404
This is dead on jaja

>>8942089
None of these "poems" read well. How is it possible that her book is a bestseller?

Women are fucking shit

>Muh vagina muh vagina

Ill add another poem

My vagina
I coast throught life
Because my vagina
Im a slut
Im a victim actually even though i whore myself out
My vagina

>>8946680
Those two are real.
I have the book on my shelf.

>>8946690
I wouldn't. Most people who post on this site are really, really, really, really, really, really stupid.

"Why do I love" You, Sir?
Because—
The Wind does not require the Grass
To answer—Wherefore when He pass
She cannot keep Her place.

Because He knows—and
Do not You—
And We know not—
Enough for Us
The Wisdom it be so—

The Lightning—never asked an Eye
Wherefore it shut—when He was by—
Because He knows it cannot speak—
And reasons not contained—
—Of Talk—
There be—preferred by Daintier Folk—

The Sunrise—Sire—compelleth Me—
Because He's Sunrise—and I see—
Therefore—Then—
I love Thee—

by Emily Dickinson