Alternative Art/Stylization General

>>3086411
high effort op

>>3086411
Finally a thread with a good picture, good job and thanks for the work.
But I still have to go
>>3081338
>>3085050
REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
because that manly Miku is included and those 2 arent.

>>3086466
I won't forget you next time, honey cooms.

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Made this a few weeks back for a friend. He has it hanging on his wall now.

>>3086510
I get the feeling those legs would look totally fucked if they weren't blurred.

>>3086513
well its a good thing they're blurred then isnt it

>>3086510
>abnormally large girl?
>abnormally small truck?
Something feels a lil' off here

>>3086766
well its a good thing they're blurred then isnt it

>>3086411
>something you drew got into the OP picture
What a nice feel, good shit

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critique

>>3086776
Move on to figures already, jesus

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>>3086782
im already drawing figures, painting the values in some, trying to get the gesture and stuff, but i have more fun in faces.

>>3086786
fucking into anatomy, you can't figures without it

>>3086774
get over yourself, the only remotely good picture in the op is the one in the middle. So you're probably shit anyways.

>>3086806
The Book of Michael Hampton: Figure drawing design and invention, introduces you in the first pages to figures and gestures. Learn prokos muscles and veins of the anus i guess is not a efficiente way.

>>3086834
>it's only good if they have cow tits

>>3086834
sounds like someone didnt make it into the OP picture

>>3086835
I second hampton.

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>>3086466
I'm always more open to critique for my manly Miku.

>>3086834
why do you have to shit over other people like this
I am just a lurker but I am happy for those who are posted in the OP and I can understand why they feel happy about it. stop being such an asshole, art itself is hard enough.

>>3086834
by good you mean the only thing that conforms to your taste and looks like anime.

>>3086842
so manly that she looks like a dude

>>3086855
Then instead of bitching like a child who's only into his 2D kawaii waifus, give me some fucking useful critique or go back and play Nekopara or Huniepop.

>>3086835
>>3086841
Study hampton. See Krenz for various applications of hampton with included gesture.

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I'll probably end up moving a lot of stuff around before I properly finish the sketch (arm, leg, eye maybe)

I feel like I rarely draw heads from the side angle because I can never thing of good situations of when to draw them anyways, but I guess that's just another thing to grind. I guess you can never really study too many head fundies

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my thing looks like a cheap version of some random generic riot art.

>>3086857
lol, you're so fucking salty. Think for yourself, if people say your faces are manly there's your critique, go research what makes a feminine face and do some studies.

>>3086905
I think you need to define your values, the hood especially is quite blurry and I couldn't really read the image well at first glance

>>3086919
I'm not salty if feedback is literally just simple shit. I'd like something more further than just "man face lol". I do have references to work with but I also like to have other people's feedback because that's what I find better than just doing studies and using references.

>>3086905
the edges on the face could be sharper, and the hoody is a little vague. It might feel embarassing, but maybe take a reference picture for yourself

>>3086928
The problem with asking for that kind of advice is that most people off the top of their heads probably couldn't tell you WHY exactly your subject looks like a man. It's important to understand that the majority of people browsing these threads are armchair philosophers, and hoping that someone gives you the answer you're looking for is akin to finding a $10 bill in the sand on the beach.

While I think /ic/ is a great place to improve and learn from others, it's important to realize what I just mentioned. Most people will give you their honest opinions rather than explicitly tell you what's wrong. Ie: "Your painting looks like a man" and not "Your painting looks like a man because 'this'".

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got a little sloppy with the markers, might make an attempt at coloring this one in photoshop

>>3086842
Okay. Not any of the people giving you shit.
To make her more feminin I would set the eyes a tiny bit down or reduce the chin (the smaller the chin the more feminin a character looks). Perhaps dont make the shadow unter the nose that much (dont know how the things under the nose are called, but they make character look less feminin too).
Otherwise you could make her eyes a little bit bigger or/and peraps give her a better lip color (more rose/red, makes the lips more feminin).

I dont think she looks that much like a dude, just like a very plain woman.

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>>3086943
Yeah, I kinda did expect that, seeing as though most of the replies to other things are just simple here and there, but I came here because I did want other's critique and to be honest, there seemed to be a lot of interaction here. I get that people don't want to go TOO deep but I'd rather people just rip off the bandage and nail down each part that needs working. Thank you though Anon, I appreciate your answer and am glad that you've explained it to me.

>>3086947
Hey Anon, thank you very much for the feedback, wanted to work on the areas before replying.
I did some little changes but I did work on moving the eyes down a little lower and changed the lip colour, as well as reshape the chin. Might have made it too round though.

Might need to lift up the lips a bit though.

>>3086983
make the neck thinner

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>>3086999
Like this?
Took out the ponytails to show you properly.

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Well this is my attempt at stylization. I'm a beginner when it comes to digital, so it would be great to get some critique. Original sketch was done with pencil and paper, scanned, then coloured and lined in krita.
>>3086786
This looks great! The rendering could be more crisp though. Was this done with references?

>>3086842
I agree with what the other anon said about feminizing it, but it could also use more vibrant colours and a defined light source. The palette would still look good with another character though. Otherwise it's a good start!

>>3086944
I love the way it's shaded, but the hands, clothing, and boots could be a little more detailed. Your line art is great though.

I always see you people spend time trying to adjust this and that while leaving that and this untouched when you could fix all your errors in one pass
Are you afraid of losing time or what? Why not just start over sooner?

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>>3087007
here i exaggerated it a bit to point out the steps you need to take, hopefully this helps you

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>>3086411
did a third strike sprite study
damn, they just don't make them like that anymore

>>3087122

>>3087124
It really is sad to see the decline in the art direction of the street fighter series, Alpha 3 and 3rd strike were top shelf

>>3087129
>tfw Capcom got rid of most of their in-house artists and your favorite Capcom artist hardly does stuff anymore as a result
Bums me out.

>>3087134
Which artist might that be? I have an old streetfighter art book that covers art from 2 and 3rd strike and some of the stuff in there is amazing, Akiman and Kinu are my personal favorites.

>>3087129
>>3087134
it is quite a shame, though I do understand why it happened.
For better or for worce, 3d is the future, and youy only need that much concept artists.
Too bad they can't do it as good as Arc System Works

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Requesting a critique, please.

>>3087232
Hands and feet are waaaaay to small

>>3087134

Capcom firing their in-house was one thing, but when SNK did it, I was mad.

>Firing the most talented sprite artists and animators in the industry for some cheap chinese outsource
>We will never get Metal Slug 8 HD

>>3087144
Kinu. I know she's had a lot of freelance work since then but her Capcom residency seemed to have a higher output. Also, random, but she just did character design and some promotional drawings for a stage play? Super wild.

That sounds like an amazing book. Is it scanned and uploaded anywhere?

>>3087232
Legs are really short compared to the torso (very evident in the thumbnail). Also the breasts seem inconsistent (left-side is full at the bottom while the right breast is squeezed under bikini restraint), and the bikini doesn't feel like it's being impacted by the weight of the breasts.

>>3087264
Don't know about any scans but the book is Street Fighter: Eternal Challenge

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>>3087124
nice tones my guy

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Alright I've made some changes. Thanks for the feedback!

>>3087322
troll

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modern = alternative

>>3087124
Damn man that's sweet.
Got any blogs where I can follow you?

>>3087232
The her left forearm is too long, she has no wrist or ankles, and the light doesn't reflect off the face properly (especially on the nose).

>>3086843
cry me a river you dumb talentless bitch

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Stacking heads and hands

>>3087329
chinese letters

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my hell is that I'm extremely popular with pretty girls but they are all underage.

Look, but don't touch.

>>3087606
Go to /beg/ this is shit.

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Is it worth painting over?

>>3087661
It's actually pretty good. The top hand is solid, the bottom one is rough but it's clearly a WIP.

Get off yourself faggot.

>>3087680
It's actually shit and you're blind if you can't see that. You're probably the artist desperately trying to defend their turdpile. Fuck off.

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>>3087692
Here's another anon to tell you you're just being a little bitch. Now go draw or fuck off this board.

>>3087696
Post your work.

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>>3087697

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>>3087292
what is going on with that right ass cheek?

>>3087656
this is aesthetic. How did you draw the texture on the choker?

pic related is my drawing btw

>>3087667
No

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>>3087692
Nah. I'm a better artist than you though, that's for sure.

also, it's super clear you're the same person that's been doing this. Just... what do you think you're doing? Do you honestly think you're bothering anyone? Do you?

I just want this to be over. I've taken more shit than you can imagine for no reason other than it makes a good show.

>>3087725
Ah crap I think you sliced my hand with all that edge. Oh man I guess you were right.

>>3087732
I know I was right.

>>3087734
Shut the fuck up you no talent ngmi slimeball piece of garbage.

>>3087725
i want to defend you, but the art itself isn't very good. It just has ton of potential, ill redline it once im done with my bowl of fruit
>>3087740
post your work you trashbag

>>3087740
I mean, if I have no talent...

Where does that put you?

>>3087744
I have talent. I'm sorry you were born with defective genes.

>>3087742
lol, please, redline it.

This should be good.

>>3087746
to be clear im redlining the work were fighting about, not sexygirlguy

>>3087745
I mean, go ahead and post some work.

And like... I've already made it. How many artists site you as being their inspiration? Like, my two favorite disciples are Tsuaii and Fernanda Suarez. Sprinkle in a lil bit of Andrew Jones and Kr0n... got yourself a Wakkawa sammich.

You are all my children.
(To be fair, they are better than I am now though.)

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I have a very strong sense of 'I have no idea what I'm doing', feels like I'm doing something wrong since it's taking so long
Layers from (bot to top): base grey, sketch, shading

>>3087129
>>3087134
Good sprite art and animation ala Metal Slug and 3rd Strike is expensive as fuck, do you know how much a single character from Skullgirls cost just to animate?

>>3087771
What crawled up your ass and died?

>>3087768
I'm digging this design! I think if I were to change it, I'd fill out the rest of the head, and then draw the teeth/tongue on the back side of that makes sense. As in, less of a concave shape and more of a convex one

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>>3087606

>>3087742
Not that you're wrong, but you do see much worse in these threads on a daily basis.

>>3087292
that face wtf

>>3087745
Post work dickhead.

>>3087024
why is it a tomato

>>3087415
you are pathetic

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Critique welcomed. I'm not sure the head fits with this kind of rendering.

>>3087888
Her right thumb is about as long as her index finger and the placement is bad. The left arm is completely fucked up, where is her elbow bending? it looks like in the front, you cant turn your arm like that. Literally go to a mirror and try and replicate the pose. Also the foreshortening is way off. All these things are more important than the head.

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total beginner i decided to draw something booby while going through figure drawing for what it's worth :)

>>3088105
I'm not an expert but boobies don't start at the collarbone

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>>3087714
thanks anon. It's... a combination of filters and layer adjustments. I made a tut video for it on my patreon (lololol)

>>3088105
Too high up, nipples would be pointing straight up if she was forcing that level of stretch. Also deltoids are too thin.

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>>3087732
>>3087742
Don't bully Jacecuck. He will kill himself someday.

>>3088201
we will all die someday

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>>3088201
one guy is being a worhtless fag and the other person wasn't talking about my work with the redline.

You guys try so hard. You have to be the most jealous morons in the world.

let me know when they have a superbowl half time show that's about you. Or where hundreds of music videos use your art and aesthetic as a base. Or when those songs are about you specifically. Or when women dress up specifically like your artwork in order to be noticed by "senpai." (pic related) or when countless artists depict who you are in extremely creative ways.

Even my all time crush, Maria, is dressing up in my aesthetic. Dying her hair white, calling herself "The Grey Kitten."

BreeBunn somehow has gotten mixed into this. Bunny.

Renee got coasted into this. She is the blackcat, I am the white cat. The lonely astronaut. Alice. The chosen one. Sir Lady Jesus. Starboy.

I honestly don't care all that much about those things. What I do love, what I love the most that has happened because of this... is how many people are embracing art, painting, and music. We are going through a second Renaissance. A digital renaissance with a digital computer boy.

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>>3088105

is this of any help

>>3088227
Those boobs are still way too high

>>3088239

but they are being pushed up? I guess if you draw the top contour it would -
you know nvm

>>3087656

I expected the text to say something about thots

>>3086776
blog please?

>>3088227
I never knew people on /ic/ gave support, thanks a ton

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more bnha shit. i'll clean up and color it someday

>>3088345
I was going to say "why the watermark" but then that saves you the "blog??" posts.

>>3088345
Needs more thicc and more sweat.

>>3088306
https://www.instagram.com/augcasarin_art/
https://augcasarin.tumblr.com/

>>3088149
blog?

>>3088345
didnt realize you posted here. recognized the frog girl in the OP so i was curious if youd upload this here.
pretty cute!

>>3087888
Why is she smiling? She dropped her cards.

>>3086510
not bad i kinda like the coloring

>>3087888
cute

>>3088149
blog?

>>3088853
very cute, my only issue is that the thighs in far right look a little short and her toes would be peaking out from behind her. Great job!

>>3088222
Oh boy, you sound a tiny smidgen deluded. But I guess that serves well as motivation.

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Trying Paintstorm by attempting to stylize Audrey

>>3086411 (OP)
Thanks for putting my there, I'm a bit ashamed I didn't manage to finish it before it got posted

>>3088904
didn't kr0n already do this?

>>3088365
exactly lol

>>3087714
More?

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>>3088926
Idk maybe maybe not
I don't follow the guy but Audrey is a popular subject so I would not be surprised if he did

<~ I wanted to depict tfw I realize that my posted work from days ago still has flaws

>>3089059
Blog?

>>3088222
where is that semen demon from

>>3089068
firez-tbr.tumblr.com

Thanks anon!

>>3087725
jace you take so much shit because you're a fucking sperglord if you would just shut up and draw you would be so much more tolerable

>>3089092
He posts more art than any of you faggots responding to his bullshit. I do agree with you though, sometimes he goes over the line.

>>3087656
wait, you aren't a girl yourself? I always though you are a girl by your drawing subjects and way you comment

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why does my art always suck? I still can't draw a face looking in a frontal view perspective even though that's literally all that I draw. The eyes are always fucked and aren't symmetrical with one another. I know the eyes are too wide and all, but it's not even that.. The left or right eye is always warped, and the jaw is always messed up. It's not like I even have autism. Are front views meant to be hard? Or is the human face supposed to be slightly assymetrical from the very beginning? I swear everytime I flip the paper to the light and look through the paper, the face looks fucked. Does anyone else have this problem or is it just me?
AND
Will I be cured of this illness if I study loomis??

>>3089094
listen breh I dont give a shit about him roasting people but dont act surprised when people start shitting on you for being a sperg

>>3089103
you ain't that bad anon, she looks pretty, but those eyes are really far away from each other, there should be an eye ball of distance between one eye and another.

>>3089127
Give up on giving him advice about the retarded eyes. He never listens. It's his "style" or something.

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more work for my fantasy comic...
king and queen portrait.
comments and crit is welcome.

>>3088904
>>3089059
>Audrey
who?

>>3089103
Actual faces are like two different halves put together but it's not the cause of your problem.
You need to make a concious effort to get it symmetrical, then after a while you'll be OK.
Maybe you're drawing at angle so that might also add to it

>>3089103
dont freak out so much anon.
it seems like youre aware of flaws in your work, so just keep drawing. i would recommend drawing from life so that you practice a variety of styles. if you can get used to drawing what you see, youll be more able to simplify complex shapes in a more believable way. sure, study loomis too.

>>3089158
I really like this. Cool lines and texture. Is your comic going to be less abstract than this, though? I have trouble reading parts of their designs.

>>3089159
Audrey Hepburn

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>>3089181
thanks anon. its probably gonna be around this level of abstract.... heres another example of the style im goin for.

>>3089158
>>3089195
What are your inspirations for these? Really like this kind of design, but I haven't seen it else where (aside from anything and everything fantasy but that's too broad), so did you take some parts of specific games or so?

>>3089195
>>3089158
Your inks look great, blog?

>>3089203
Excuse my idiocy, didn't see the corner

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>>3089199
ive been developing these characters and designs for a few years now... ive been turning them into papercraft characters for a table top game too.
i would say one of my latest inspirations is yoji shinkawa. in the last thread, some anon commented that he saw a bit of Yoshitaka Amano in the work also (which is pretty accurate).
heres a flat pic of one of the soldiers for a kingdom (its for the papercraft game)

>>3089203
>>3089204
i mostly post on instagram @bceman

>>3089195
that's cool. Has a sort of good indie castlvania type video game concept design.

>>3089206
That's cool too but... what is it? Some sort of military pig man?

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>>3089210
>>3089212
thanks anon.
theyre supposed to be pawns (the story is based on chess)

Should I use constructional drawing method for animay drawings? Since most pictures I've seen are physics defying.

>>3089233
construction should be used whenever you are lost/confused about how to make something look right. if you're still in the relatively early stages of learning this will be understandably more often, but even people who seem to miraculously draw straight ahead are still seeing/visualizing the underlying structure in their head while drawing usually unless they've drawn something so often that they can more or less pull it from muscle memory.

>>3089103
Maybe spend more time learning real human anatomy before copying muh 2d animus. You're trying to draw stylized before you understand the parts being changed around, without any basic understanding of how things work your stylized works won't ever be cohesive

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>>3086901

>>3089097
never heard of a lesbian before?

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How do i not be shit at values and inking?

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don't know what to do don't know what to learn
(here, take this portrait of Mr Vives)

>>3089103
>why does my art always suck?
Well, you don't seem to be making any effort to improve. You draw the same exact shit over and over again, always ignore critiques and insist on doing that awful wide eye shit. Watch this video to learn a few things about drawing heads: https://youtube.com/watch?v=2T7cDY7YDsg

>>3089103
Fuck the haters, nigga. I think your girls look cute. You need to branch out more though. You can't make it just drawing portrait sketches like that.

>>3087888
those arms are seriously fucked, but I like the way you showed the forms of the dress and the legs and the image is pretty qt overall.

>>3089401
i actually really like your linework... so i don't know what you're talking about

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>>3089499
It's not so much the outer linework that's the problem (I can actually do it much cleaner), but I just don't get how to get that "professional" look with inking and shading like pic related. Every time i try to replicate this look it looks like shit.

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Hair looks like clay and her expression is boring. Unfinished and unpolished because I dropped it due to it being shit.

>newfag
>pic is mine
is there any hope for me at all?

>>3089542
What's the twitter of that artist?

>>3089557
Also, sorry for the excessive blur :^(

>>3089557
Here's the attention you crave for. Try to be less of a crybaby next time.

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>>3089557
I mean, if you know what is wrong with it then fix it

>>3089401
Don't be afraid to apply full black, since its digital you can always carve out the light after.

>>3089557
I like it but I agree that there's not enough contrast in texture or values which makes it boring.

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>>3086411
That right eye still droopy

>>3089578
Right looks worse.

>>3089593
Ignore that, OP is a faggot with shit taste.

>>3089578
I honestly wasn't sure about how. This is a big help, thanks!

>>3089562
ok

>>3089601
Which thing did you draw that didn't make it into the OP, anon

>>3089103
attention whore

>>3089103
If you can't draw from life find an artist who's style you can easily mimic and study by drawing references of their straight on faces.

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Fucking around

>>3089674
What if they have no straight on faces

>>3089767
Then you're out of luck, find another artist. I used Metata, Kimura Takahiro and a bunch of random comic book artist.

>>3089597
youre retarded

>>3089836
No one likes you. Why do you keep coming here?

>>3089852
a ton of people like me, no one likes you.

>>3089836
You cant just slap colors on top of eachother and call it a good days work. The left looks smooth and stylized, albeit simple and the right looks like an unfinished mess.

>>3089852
I-I like him...

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crit pls. am I foreshortening right?

>>3089891
hes showing a direction, not the destination.

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>>3089990
and i like you back anon!

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Can you tell me what's wrong in this one? gf told me that the faces are ugly, don't know what to think about it, also the folds are fine?

>>3089206

thats sweet yo

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lil something for splatfest

>>3090116
>gf

gtfo normie.

>>3090135
This is why people don't like you

>>3090132
>>3090134
>mayonnaise and ketchup
nice

>>3090140
weve already established everyone loves me though!

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did this art request the other day. Any glaring problems?

>>3090132
>>3090134
dang i love these. not even a splatoon fan, or a fanart consumer. keep it up

>>3090186
The left one's legs, mang. Either she's got way too long of a torso and a really low ass, or her legs just aren't connected to her pelvis whatsoever.

>>3090135
Sir, I guarantee you that I'll gtfo after some advice

>>3090238
i see a lasso cutout around mouth

>>3090242
yeah it's a wip. but i'm not going to pick up for a few hours so i left it here for critique so far

>>3090189
>>3090160

thanks!

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>>3090092
I've done more now.

>>3090309
Nice shading, I like the rendering on that midriff, but you gotta pay more attention to your proportions. She's got a bit of a giraffe neck going on as well as tiny arms, hands, and feet.

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From a scale of 1 to 10 how cute is this

[spoiler]be gentle[/spoiler]

>>3090413
Stop drawing.

>>3090415
Don't be so rude.

>>3090413
It's cute but not very skilled. Try doing some realistic art for practice and then try stylized art again.

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>>3086944
Updated, not sure if it's an improvement or not

>>3090415
I will if you support me on patreon ;)
>>3090418
thx

>>3090116
both faces are elongated, maybe that's what she meant.

>>3090309
this is almost literal definition of turd polishing.
the shading is nice but worthless if you can't into basic anatomy.

>>3090413
I like the line work, but pose and expression makes it look more retarded than cute.

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some splatoon stuff

>>3090103
>nosebro defending my paintover
Also Nosebro you're from Quebec right? do you live in Montreal? We might even be in the same city.

>>3090743
Looks terrible

Learn to draw before stylization

>>3090745
is nb an asshole cause they're quebecois or cause they have to deal with quebecois

>>3090743
Holy shit, anon I think its back to /beg/

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First time poster, just looking for some feedback. It's not finished, gonna add some blackwork and colors but the spirit is here. I can post more of my stuff if you want to, hope you like and have advices.

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>>3090413
7.7/10 "it's pretty okay"

>>3090781
Poor demon. His ring and little fingers are broken
I think the hands don't match the face. They look quite cartoony (excluding the back of the palm) with the lower detail, spirals, squiggly lines

>>3090743
2 pieces of advice:

>Don't
>stay off

>>3088345
I followed your twitter yesterday, you gotta work on those lines, everything you put out has sketchy lines and it seems like a crutch more than a stylistic choice.

>>3090788
You're right, the fingers are underdone and the last 2 seems off (even if I was going for a crooked aspect for the hands) gonna work on that.

>>3090781
might be more suited to the draw thread, bit too good/arty for the animu thread

>>3090826
Will do, thanks for the directions

>>3089719
Learn how to draw jawlines. Study this shit or go back to tumblr

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>>3089861
Keep dreaming, autism fag. You've been here for 2 fucking years and everyone's called you an idiot consistently for your flawed way of drawing. you got trolled by dragon anon, got sucked on camera in that cringe video of a "gesture battle" that was posted a while ago, and yet you still think you have to right to critique anyone. go back to autistically recording your shit life and learn how to draw you, Dunning Kruger.

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Reposting

>>3090781
Kinda looks like a demon boss I'd see in some kind of RPG game with chiptune music. If you're going the crooked aspect of the hands, I'd say add more realism to the hands would allow you to really make the crookedness of hands be a lot more striking. Finding a way to show the side and top planes of the fingers could help with this

>>3090922
Yeah you're right no one likes him, but the picture on the right is better, the OP even admitted himself he didn't know what to do. Why are you still even going on about this?

>>3090932
I'm not the same anon as >>3090898
Nosebro needs the shit kicked out of him to learn his lesson. That's the only way autists learn

>>3089559
here https://twitter.com/neige_mar/media

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>>3090923
hey, i've seen you in the animation threads, my nigga! you're the robot girl anon, right?
learn how to draw ellipses because those form lines on her arms and those blue things are bad. on another note, unless she has stretchy extendable arms her left arm is both longer and slightly thicker than her other arm, and her feet look flat, fix that shit bro. also for being an animation guy, you still have an awkward pose here, it looks like she is holding that pose midair, instead of looking like she is in mid sprint slightly towards us which is what i think what you were going for

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>>3090947

>>3090950
>>3090947
edgy & cool

>>3090947
The wolf in sheep's clothing one is badass as fuck. Best one. Totally would get a tattoo of that.

>>3090952
>>3090954

thanks bois

>>3089103
Look up asaro's head.
Where you place your lines defines the features in space. If you're struggling with views you're struggling with perspective. If you struggle to stylize in perspective, you're still struggling with perspective. If you understand perspective, Asaros head, 0033 heads, krenz heads, loomis heads, and every other head should explain more than enough why your heads look wrong to you(and any other body part for that matter). You can find that same info in a photo or irl incidentally. Measure the angles of the face like a blueprint

I'd like to see you draw more, and I think you'll feel less frustrated the more you understand about your work and other people's work.

>tl;dr fundies

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>>3090966
>stylized or not, it's all the same whether you think so now or figure it out later

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>>3090969

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>>3090971
3/4 view is just a mix of the anterior and lateral view

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>>3090947
>>3090950

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>>3090973
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=1340203 incidentally

>>3087888
From the thumbnail it looked like shit, but when I opened it was actually above-average

Good work but you still have a lot to improve on, just keep it up and you'll get better

>>3087888
Does anyone mind telling me what program/brush setting I'd have to use to achieve lines like these? New to digital drawing

>>3091021
Hard round brush.

>>3090905
Elaborate

>>3091042
Not anon you replied to, but:
Do facial studies, focus on different shapes of faces. Experiment with shaping of the skull, muscle and flesh.
Use references of people on Google or use sites like line-of-action.com which offer life drawing sessions. There will be an option for you to focus on faces.

If you can't do it online, use your family/friends faces for studies.

>>3091073
I meant what was wrong with the jawline. I don't see what's wrong with it, so I don't know what I'm supposed to do to fix it.
I already do facial studies, but thanks anyways.

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tell me if I'm happy

>>3091042
The jaw seems to be connected to the ear in an almost vertical line which is incorrect. It'd be connected at more of an angle than what you have there. Until you try to redraw it and study from a reference you're most likely not gonna see it with all the crap coloring you put over it. Don't be afraid to kill your darlings to get something right, faggot.

>>3091078
Oh shit, sorry anon!
I believe what the other anon meant was that the placement of the chin is at an awkward place on the face, it looks too far to the left and the jaw itself looks too flat.

I think it's just shaping the face out so you can clearly see where the cheek ends and the actual jawline starts. Imo, the chin looks a little too small, so maybe move it down a little bit to lengthen the jawline and move it a bit more under the mouth than off to the side a little bit. Also, you'll need to angle the chin more on the side with the ear, so that both connect.

>>3091083
Also, this >>3091085

>>3091082
try head size consistency. this is too chaotic. its begging for recomp

>>3091101
its jus a bunch of sketches i've been working on chaottically ah fuck it

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>>3087768
dropping this, it's taking too long and I want to try other things.
I'm sure there was something wrong with the way I approached it since I'm not used to colouring wo lineart, there has to be a faster process. Also too many stupid anatomy/perspective mistakes

>>3087784
>As in, less of a concave shape and more of a convex one
I didn't quite understand what you meant by that, but I filled out the colours and rounded the head near the mouth a bit. hopefully that's what you meant

Anyone know where to find anime settei scans other than reddit?

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critiques on this?

>>3091379
i like the soft lighting very much, but the hair lets it down.

i'm not 100% sure but i think even if an eye is in shadow the reflected lights should still be as bright or brighter comparatively than the reflections in the fully lit eye.

the other thing i particularly like about it is the use of that quite saturated red for the darkest shadows around the nose and lips, and that it isn't carried into the eyes too much.

>>3091393
thank you

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Also added another element to this one, fixed some stuff and what not

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working on this for /a/

style target reference:
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56916575
https://twitter.com/issikiiiiiii/status/724127233044942848
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=57216053

current to-do:
redraw mio hands to fix blobbiness
smooth all the diffuse shading on the sweater; too shiny
add bleed-through/reflected skin color on sweater
more hair shading detail on the top maybe

anything else egregious?

>>3090947
man dont share these
>>3090947
>>3090947
>>3090950

>>3091465
u drew that?

>>3091465
The eyes are very distorted, the colouring looks very good though

>>3091465
Looks very alien-ish take that as you want

>>3091484
>>3091486
i mean sure, the eyes look slightly off, but you have to admit, it looks pretty professional, and it is quite rare to see this quality here tbqh

>>3091465
and if you really drew that picture, hats off to you man, you are now better than 99% of jealous non-talented ic fags.

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>>3091479
>>3091490
i am drawing it, yes, see pic attached w/ skin fill layers hidden
>>3091479
>>3091484
>>3091486
can't tell what is wrong with eyes, been staring at it too long
main eye shape is traced from reference (eyes i draw are usually worse)
might be positioned wrong?

will do some comparisons and check position/scaling
thank you for feedback

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>>3091484
>>3091486
>>3091488
>>3091494
cut-and-paste test with moved eyes to match a reference image
looks better but checking with anons just in case still not correct

>>3091519
>https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56916575
did i see a sketch of this at the wwd? or am i confused?

>>3091520
ignore the greentext, that was an accident...

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>>3091523
i posted unfinished lineart in the wwd
no one pointed out the eyes tho
should have posted here ig

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>>3091490
I'm sorry but you this >>3091465 is NOT better than 99% of /is/ nor is it close to professional. He traced the eyes yet he still got it wrong..that should give you an idea of this guy's overall ability lol.
As for >>3091519
Your fundamentals are weak and you seem to just be copying artists without trying to actually understand what you're looking at.
The way the neck connects to the torso is wrong and is shaded in an awkwardly flat way. Also, learn how to put a variety of shapes in all aspects of your design, you have way too many small highlight shapes in the hair and the edges between the light and shadow on the hair could be softened more and the way you drew her arms is very stiff and boring. The hands are even stiffer and don't connect to the hand correctly and are in the wrong perspective. I'd say for your search for and study Krenz tutorials about Cubes, and learn how to draw cubes as perfect as you can freehand. That and learn from the sketches of Yoshinari from the book thread and 0033 https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=31091817
If you can draw cubes within an acceptable margin of error, you can draw a scene inside a gridded cube and tilt it into any perspective and it is accurate enough to be professional without learning the advanced autism that is high-level technical perspective.

>>3091547
TL;DR
Hands and arms are stiff and put in the wrong pose, highlights and shading overall lack understanding of form and how light actually works. Unironically Loomis. Or if you wanna be a big weeaboo you can study 0033 and Krenz.
https://mega.nz/#F!2RARFaLA!VTiQb6eRXfV4V6mYQ6FJTA <------ Here's the basically the best thing about /ic/ if you're too lazy to find the resource thread yourself.

>>3091547
post work.

>>3091547
>>3091558
ah, cubes, that will help
thank you anon for suggestion
and for other feedback
>>3091559
critique always good
pls no bully

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>>3091559
Here's your (you)
>>3091563
https://mega.nz/#F!w34hQQwK!_hWHHzuihoWzkMe6GCOH9Q
Look in the Krenz folder and you should find the cube and perspective lessons. Practice with 3d models in google sketchup if you don't have a transparent cube in real life

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>>3091590
F U C K I N G T O P K E K

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>>3091590
Fucking hell m8, you make the best quality shitposts here. Were you the one who also painted this glorious image?

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Had some fun after a study session.

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Colored some sketches I posted a while ago.

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I feel like this may have been better off not-colored, but nonetheless I'm glad I finished it. Been putting it off for awhile now.

I have more than a handful to learn with coloring, but was my pose okay? I feel like the head came out a bit too flat, but I can't seem to see why. Any insight would be appreciated!

>>3091807
the warhound one is pretty cool man, the ball is a whimsical addition. the rest seem like there isn't as much effort put into their design

>>3091807
>isis

>>3091885
what is this meme?

>>3091082
Love this, blog?

>>3090745
im in montreal, 1v1 me gesture battle berri uqam

>>3092081
blog?

>>3092081
I like it a lot but I think you could push the face to be more feminine. The legs and clothing are nice but it wasn't for the text "Yeti Princess" I would've assumed it is some kind of lanky demon guy with winter clothes based on the last two smaller sketches on the right. I guess what I'm saying is that nothing about your design communicates "Yeti Princess" despite it looking aesthetically good.

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>>3092131
yaow12.tumblr.com though I've been inactive for like 2 months, trying to catch up.
>>3092088
You're right and I actually pushed the design even further away from the "yeti princess" theme, idk.

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>>3091807

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I need feedback. Am I ready to sell art?

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Wanted some advice on the foreshortening here, since I've never really done anything this extreme (I feel like the left is better). I'm also curious if the foot is done anywhere close to right. Any other criticism is appreciated.

>>3092437
Is that Kancolle fanart? From the headband and hair it looks like Haruna from the Kantai Collection

>>3092469
this makes me feel really uncomfortable.
Her mouth is huge and her head is small compared to her body, and she seems to be lacking a major part of her cranium.
Additionally i really dislike her arms, her lower arms are way to wide at the wrist.
I like her thighs though.
Her face really reminds me of something. Is this a character from something?

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Any help? doesn't need to be a red line or something big like that, but i can't get to make this work

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>>3092485
no, it's a character of mine

>>3092485
and i'm aware her mouth is kinda large, i've been working on not making my mouths as big as they've been in the past, but i'll take the advice on the other things

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>>3090950

>>3092486
Her arms seem really small and thin compared to the size of her head and torso

>>3092486
right forearm needs more muscle
Nose could be smaller

>>3092486

tiny arms, no neck, find a ref

>>3092508
>>3092515
>>3092511

>Her arms seem really small and thin compared to the size of her head and torso
>right forearm needs more muscle
>tiny arms
Figured, when i tried to make them longer, they looked a bit too long, i'll see what i can do

> no neck
She is supposed to have her head lowered, you sure her neck should be visible?

>find a ref
Yeah, i will do this

>Nose could be smaller
idk about this... i hate the current popular style of making really really small/pointy noses, but i'll keep it in mind

>>3092518
>you sure her neck should be visible?
i meant more* visible

>>3092472
Nope, it's utaha kasumigaoka from Saekano

>>3087909
>>3089496
Thank you for the help. I wish I could say I see how the arms are seriously fucked, simply need more practice to understand more.I do see your point about the elbow.
When I try the pose I can sort of do it, but it's very unnatural.

>>3088742
>Why is she smiling? She dropped her cards.
I wonder, maybe she is happy to get rid of them.

>>3088790
Thank you.

>>3091011
>From the thumbnail it looked like shit
So it might be a problem of composition you think?

>>3091021
It's a pencil-like brush I was tinkering with.

>>3092541
You're doing god's work then. I need more lewd shit of my other waifu.

>>3092552
Thank you!

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>>3092553

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>>3089557

>>3092553
Hey anon I see your stuff here all the time so you must be a regular poster. I'm glad to see you drawing so often that's some GMI attitude. However you REALLY need to work on your head and face fundamentals. I love drawing anime/cartoon faces as well but if you take the time to actually learn proper construction your pictures will look waaaaaaaay better.
(YOUR CHARACTERS NEVER HAVE FOREHEADS!)
Just some food for thought.

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buy'd a scanner

>>3092553
learn gesture/flow. Hair's kinda cool though.

>>3091379
Her hair looks dull, add some saturated hues in there to make it looks more like transparent reflective hair.
its qt tho.
>>3091082
it is chatoic but my adhd fueld brained likes that
>>3090947
go away instagram


why is everyone obsessed with splatoon

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tried making the forehead more visible in this one, i think i'll need to fix the arms later

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>>3092553
>>3092733
Dude.

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Been trying to color it too but it's being a pain in the ass.
>>3091446
Her neck pops sideways a bit too much.
>>3092733
:^)

>>3092429
shitty art can be sold, so yes

>>3092790
her hand looks off but otherwise a cool piece

a thread new >>3092936

>>3092790
her thumb doesnt look like one at all. Looks like 5 normal fingers

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>>3086411
I want my artsyle to ressemble Kentaro Miura's or Tatsuki Fujimoto (pic related) for the faces. what do? I'm week 1 and following book guides and am enjoying the exercises but I don't want my style to be too western.

>>3093087
The artist sure fucked up her face

>>3090420
>>3090420
Your elbows look kinda weird. They should be more sunken, below the wrists, so that it looks like she's resting weight on her hands; as it is now she looks like she's leaning on an invisible table. At first glance, I was actually left thinking about what the fuck the sword was, and why it was there, because I figured this was an anatomy study and you had intentionally left out whatever she was leaning against.
On that note, the gesture seems kinda stiff, and you could definitely exaggerate it so the figure has more weight. Your anatomy needs work and you might want to look into more constructive drawing so that the figure looks like it has more depth and weight.
Final note; the subject isn't particularly interesting. It's clearly meant to be sexual, but you need to put more focus into weight and volume, and especially properly exaggerated anatomy to make a piece seem sexy. Right now it's not that appealing.