Just finished this, I think it's decent. What do you think?

>>2950328
It's cool to look at for the first time. Nothing impressive though.

>>2950328
too much stuff going on, font is overdone and the red hand would be better off as just a contour

>>2950328
the lines don't fucking meet. what the fuck senpai? and keep your shit in >>/gd/

learn to topology

>>2950328
overall design concept: solid
execution: d+

font is bad choice, red framework is too busy on top of being sloppy
i'd either keep the red gun hand to an outline like previous anon suggested or make an actual low poly 3d gun hand and use the wireframe from that

also there's something weird going on around the edges of the photo of that fist/arm, either your photo's edges are getting messed up by body hair or you did a bad job of making a selection of the it

you'd probably have better luck on /gd/

>>2950328
I don't get the message. Turn guns into fists? Substitute one weapon for another? What did he mean by this?

>>2951409
I just assumed it was a cd cover for a garage band or something

also, wrong board
>>>/gd/

>>2950328

The geometric hand is not broken into polygons in a sensible manner. It's not too bad too look at, but after about 3 seconds of contemplation it certainly doesn't hold up too well. This would make for some decent soundcloud album art.