rate my drawing

>>2940573
>>2940732
Go post here instead and delete your thread.

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Overall neat cartoony rendering

But why da fuck is her left hand not holding the sword from underneath? Looks pretty awkward. Flip it and clean it up

3/10 for now

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For starters, your linework is very dirty, which seems to suggest this is either unfinished or very lazily done. The hands holding the sword are very awkwardly placed and look very unnatural, and additionally the right hand isn't even a RIGHT HAND. The mouth isn't aligned correctly with the rest of the face (it looks slightly Ctrl+v'd imo), and the left arm seems to clip through her boob like a 10 year old experimenting with Garry's Mod.

For what it is, it makes an okay thumbnail.

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>>2945451

Other critique guy

Yeah going back thats what it is. Thought at first glance both hands were overhand like how do you hold a sword that way? Turns out is more fucked than I thought.

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>>2945452
You've got some promise, though. Blog?

>>2945456
https://twitter.com/bocodamondo

holy christ those hands what the fuck man

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>>2945456
Thank you bruh

That was an old digital trace. Trying to draw ink since last october. --->

https://www.instagram.com/joshua.smith.art/

>>2945458
I see some great ideas, just don't forget to apply fundamentals, and go outside your comfort zone! >>2945460
Muy bien, anon! Love the linework, I think your stuff would go great with color.

>>2945451
I did kendo for 5 years, that's the proper way to hold a sword

>>2945554
I have a 3 star headband in the void moon koi fish style of okinawan iaido, you're full of shit.

>>2945554
I've done HEMA for 8.
That's a longsword.
Her hand is fucked up.
1v1 kendoka fag