Alternative Art/Stylization General

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Does alt support western?

>draw perfect eyes
>fuck up head

>draw perfect head
>fuck up eyes

nnnnaaaaRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAHHHHHHRRRRRGGGGHHHHHHAAAAAAAA

>>2940762
>perfect
mmh

>>2940766
delete this

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Check it ooout.

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Added back the BG

>>2940782
It's very cute, anon. I like it.

>>2940781
Quit art.

>>2940781
I'm sorry but I really hate your style. The legs look like you added a little bit of form to them while the upper body is completely one plane and paper thin. The eyes look boring and your mouths are just lazy even compared to 90s anime, pillowshading and the resolution ! fuck man only the hair is okay imo.
Sorry

>>2940781
Jesus christ learn to draw something appealing or just stop

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Workin on some yhorm art, i havent finished the values but i feel they might need to be darker

>>2940910
Yeah everything need to be way darker.

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>>2940912
i could prolly just fix that by turning down the brightness like so?

>>2940914
Yeah better but bring it down to 40-45

>>2940916
thats almost too dark though

>>2940918
Nah trust me it's perfect.

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>>2940926
:thinking:

>>2940929
Hmm. I think you could go to at least 45.
That seems about perfect.

>>2940933
i see what ur doin feelsbadman

>>2940823
No need to apologize. It's really quite amateurish and unappealing.

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smug
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>>2940964
Wendy's a cute

>>2940964
MUH FUCKING DIC

>>2940964
>no freckles

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sketch before work.
Her right leg is looking fucky. Any advice?

>>2940964
OH GOD

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Started about forty minutes ago. Thoughts so far?

>>2940805
>>2940823
>>2940884
stop giving trolls replies

>>2941139
Since you suffer from stiffness, I would say you could start using more curvilinear lines to offset that. Right now you have a lot of strong diagonals.

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>>2941195
But I'm not a troll.

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scaled down bunnies

>>2941204
I actually think your art style is cute. I would suggest you stop using programs like gimp/ms paint though.

>>2941197
It's easy to say and think that, but where the hell do they go? Also, scrapping the glasses because it looks too much like Shario.

>>2941218
Those outlined facial shadows look really weird and inconsistently placed

>>2941239
True. I'll have to work harder on a nicer way of drawing faces (especially shadows)

>>2940882
hori shet this is some nice painting

>>2941204
>I'm not a troll
>image.png
Hmmmm

>>2941218
Most of these faces are really cute, but like the anon said, get rid of the outlined shadows. Animu artists who use them do it when they're drawing the plane of the nose furthest from the viewer and abstract the nose solely on that plane. Once you actually start drawing the nose, it makes no sense.

Really like the poses and expressions, by the way.

Are these all /co/ girls? I recognize Shego, that one redhead by the Ren and Stimpy creator, French ladybug, and Rapunzel.

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thoughts

>>2941264
I enjoy the pastel, seamless kind of look it has, but the face looks distorted around the chin-cheek area. Lower the top half of the face and see how it looks. Also, any chance you could do a without-glasses version?

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>>2941204
the guy is a troll. He would repost pics even tho everyone and their mother tell him to fuck off.

>>2941264
have you ever tried doing papercut stuff? i think you would like it

>>2941255
Yeah that makes sense honestly. I think when I started doing it orginally a couple pictures ago it made sense and I just kept doing it out of context y'know? Gotta remember when and where to use it for next time.

Thank you though!! and yeah, they're all /co/ girls. I believe it's shego, edda and xiulan, mccafe commercial girl, aunt grandma, suzanne, mcclellan, monica, rapunzel, and lady frenzy. I'm honestly not sure where 5 of them are from but I really liked their designs

>>2941270
i really wanna know what this guy is even getting at. i tried reverse searching the drawings he posts, but it comes up with nothing. so does he draw them and then spam them? are they from some persons private oekaki? i really dont know. pretty annoying and weird.

>>2940882
it looks really appealing, but i feel like there is something off with the anatomy. i think the legs are too long? really not sure

>>2941284
A lot of images (particularly drawings) aren't reverse searchable. It's probably from some old abandoned DA of a 12 year old kid with no following or something.

There's been a lot of posters (or just one bored guy) seemingly posting art of other people, lately.

>>2941249
thanks anon!
>>2941287
yeah possible I did want to make him kinda lanky but I might have overdone it

>>2941289
Yeah I've noticed that too and some posts are straight up trying to pretend to be an artist as bait. It's really obvious sometimes and has me wondering whether the poster is autistic by definition.

>>2941284
He has a blog and if you ask him, he even posts it. It's always updated.

>>2941264
cant see jack

>>2941264
too dark. the highlight is WAY to strong to affect such a small surface area of her head, i like your brushes.

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knowing me, this sketch probably wont make it any further than this--

Does anybody else ever get that feeling? You start working on something, get decently far into it, then decide to work on something else, never to return to on what you were working on before? I haven't finished a drawing in what feels like ages because of it.

Maybe this is just another form of the whole comfort zone thing; I'm afraid to get past the sketch stage.

>>2941334
i totally know what you mean. sometimes the smallest things like "hm i just dont wanna draw hands right now" put me into a position where i just stop drawing on one thing and leave it to rot, even if i could probably finish it..
still, i like your sketch anon. i think you should keep going.

>>2941334
I really feel you, man. It's only been in the last year I've actually brought sketches into a near completed form (still unsure of how to tighten up a drawing), which is a nice feeling. So I do think it is a bit of a comfort zone for a lot of people.

Have you tried going grayscale and see if that makes moving past a sketch easier?

Also, love the sketch. Bottom girl's mouth looks a little odd, though.

>>2941334
I don't understand how drawing can be comfort zoning. I mean sure if you're drawing the same stuff but there are a million different things to learn about drawing. Unless you're drawing like kim jung gi i don't see how drawing can ever be a comfort zone.

>>2941381
>drawing isnt a fun activity you do voluntarily and feel comfortable in while finding particular things you like drawing more than others

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>>2941391
Anything can be a fun activity you fucking retard. What i'm saying is that you can't say i'm comfort zoning because you're only drawing since there are a million shit to learn in drawing from perspective to anatomy to composition. It's only a comfort zone when you like drawing a front view animu head over and over again.

>>2941446
Face looks squashed, you're missing some hip definition, and the raised arm looks odd with the foreshortening you used.

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>>2940782
SUUUUUUUUUUGOI

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>>2941334
Try drawing in traditional medium. You'll feel guiltier about not finishing things if the paper is nice.

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small practice

I feel like the ears are misplaced
should they be lower?

>>2941497
Bottom of the ears with the bottom of the nose, anon, for full frontal. Your dude is looking down, so the ears look higher. It's fine, but I don't think you did it intentionally, so remember to construct.

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>>2941526
Keep working your anatomy, especially in regards to the face. It completely lacks any sense of structure. Other than that it's okay.

Anyway, this is a piece i'm really proud of. The lineart actually took a long time but I finally think i'm making significant progress.

>>2940762
calm down bruh

>>2941553
>>2941526
>the gapingly eyesocketed blind leading the nearsighted
Pottery.

>>2941272
Aww, you're trying to be serious that's cute

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>>2941275
i think the second one from the left on the bottom is the girl from ladybug

also hey, i recognize your work

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>>2940258
I adjusted the back leg a bit and finished up her hair.
Might start coloring it later.

>Your art looks familiar too, but I can't put my finger on it.
I post from time to time. Maybe that's why?

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>>2941486
Ahaha, that's an interesting thought~ I suppose I've been wrongly conditioned by doodling in the margins of notebooks and limitless canvases.

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>>2941619
Tried coloring it.

>>2940964
Now I want Wendys

>>2931531
create pixiv, you stupid fuck
or update your HF

>>2941830
Giant little girl or tiny car

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>>2942043
kei car are quite tiny my dear Westerner anon, but still I might have make her too big accidentally, gotta recheck the proportion later

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>>2941847
you've gone and done it now

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>>2941470
pretty cute, but don't forget, all Friends also have human ears!

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>>2941315

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is it alright if I post this type of stuff here?
big legs are on purpose btw

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>>2941847
just take a seat and draw all of these
sure helped me

>>2942186
too stiff, works as a concept

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>>2941833

>>2942189
I will. Thanks.

>>2942189
Higher res http://kitasite.net/kr/cgkoza/muscle/foot/business_shoes_left.jpg and http://kitasite.net/kr/cgkoza/muscle/foot/business_shoes_right.jpg

>>2942475
>Drawing Research Site
What a useful site.

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>>2942524
>still no freckles
you should have kept your post deleted

>>2942524
it's not mcdonalds man how many fucking times do I have to say it so it can process through your dumb fucking head you fucking idiot.

>>2942538
Burger Queen?

>>2942544
that's it.

when I come home from work tonight your gonna get the belt.

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>>2942524
i love this way more than what i did fuck you

>>2942524
alwayse right version, good

>>2942524
GIMME YOUR BLOG RIGHT NOW

>>2942630
Im also dont have( i love ahegao

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>>2942639
I want to try ahegao soon, but I don't know if I have the courage.
Work in progress, and she's pointing at the viewer.

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I need to do less portraits

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>>2941266
>>2941272
>>2941315
>>2941320
thanks, I tried to make it less dark in this one though I swear the thumbnails makes it look darker

>>2942668
I think you could do with a little more contrast and saturation. As-is the shading looks a little muddy, more highlights would probably help as well. Really nice rendering of those forms, though.

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Open for critique, I am trying to get better at digital painting.

>>2942671
Wtf did he kill someone?

>>2940964
>>2942524
YES

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This is just a rough sketch so far but it feels very boring to me. I'd really like to make the cat design a bit more appealing too but I don't know what to add/change

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>>2942671

>>2942719
I'll help you out: make it a loli.

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>>2942719
>>2942789
not mine

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trying to push perspective a little bit more with these, i feel like i'm failing terribly.

>>2942797
your lack of gesture makes those poses look more like they're actually just posing for the camera instead of really doing anything.

like on the top left with the guy holding his sword mid-swing, it looks more like he's just holding it and not actually swinging it.

There's no weight to anything there, they all look like they're just stiffly posing for some camera.

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critique me pls gonna color this tomorrow

>>2942903
its alright

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What defines a style anyways? Is it the brush? Lines? Color usage?

>>2942909
The ways someone could shit on your drawing besides about anatomy or perspective.

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I started drawing 5 days ago
help me I don't know how to start

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I've been struggling with this head angle for quite a while. Can anyone give me tips on how I can improve and draw it better?

>>2942934
What's the point in tracing over the same spots constantly?

>>2942986
At the end I pick one line

>>2942903
The arm nearest the viewer from the shoulder to elbow looks too short; that or it's not foreshortened properly.

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Might color later.
Any comments?

>>2943050
the face is not aligned with her head

>>2943051
She's supposed to be looking down so her facial features are a bit higher.

>>2943050
the chin volume is just wrong, you made just a symbol

use some references for animu chins up

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>>2943051
>>2943084
I softened the line of the chin a bit.
I think it reads better than the previous one.
How is it?

>>2943095
Her nose and hairline should probably be a little down

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>>2942974

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>>2935067
yet another ones.
it's slowly turning into a series...

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WIP college assingment

>>2943201
Straight VS Curve

Variety in shapes - simplify certain areas to give shapes area of rest vs complex areas of noise

>>2943190
lol...

>>2943225
there's something odd going on with those tree leafs in the upper left, either aliasing or a texture that at this point in the illustration clashes something fierce with the rest of it. also the bottom of the frame of the pic next to the holly golightly poster my sister has in her apartment seems, like it dips in convexly while all the other corners seem nicely flattened off. again this could be some weird aliasing going on on in what i presume is just you screenshotting the work window. also the shadows under the bookcase shelves are are clipping over the white thing there, whatever that is going to end up being (or already is)
there's also a bit of green showing through on the white background of the holly golightly poster

i'm guessing this is all stuff you already know but just double checking, i've forgotten to go back and fix a few minor things like this and fuckin kicked myself after i hit upload/submitted them to the AD

from a stylistic standpoint i will say, i would super suggest simplifying that poster of holly, it's much more complex compared to everything else in the image. don't worry, it's a crazy iconic image and you can get away with only a few boxes and rectangles that still create the same basic silhouette

also the roundness on the middle poster i was nitpicking the frame of, there's no roundness anywhere else in this background approaching those curves, i would simplify that more too to fit with the rest of the aesthetic.

the books in the upper right feel a bit too complex shape wise near the top, maybe clean those up a bit more to fit the aesthetic as well

over all i almost want to suggest putting more stuff in the room, or at least on the bookcase but i'm guessing this is a background for an animation or at least that's the direction behind the assignment so in keeping with the style i think it's probably okay

few more things i wanna say but ran outta space, sorry for rambling, meds just kicked in, hope this helps

>>2942524
OHHHHH GOOOOODDDDD MY DIICKKKKKK

>>2943190
The ear doesn't matter in this drawing because it's going to be covered up with hair anyway, which is why I didn't draw it.

>>2943272
Thanks anon, I am gonna fix those clipping and anti-aliasing effects.

I was thinking that myself about the Audrey Hepburn poster and I am gonna try balance it out with more complex shapes on the bookshelf and the floor.

Yeah im gonna put way more stuff in the room :)

>>2943362
I know, I was dicking around. But from the angle of the jaw we should be seeing under it.

>>2943201
i really like that bunny girl!! your art definitely reminds of me borderlands. my advice would be to push the variation and vibrancy of your colours for a more punchy finish

>>2941218
fucking gross

>>2941218
looks like the typical tumblr art you'd see tbqh

>>2943397
>>2943398
Looks like the same faggot.

This is my attempt at emulating the sdc artstyle, but i think its nice.

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>>2943441
tfw it didnt upload the file

>>2943445
this is the farthest of an emulation I've ever seen, I think you should consider calling it more of a bargain bin bootleg. And just because you added shitty sound effects doesn't mean it's closer to the source material's style.

>>2943445
H. C. Brown is that u?

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>>2943415
.. Just because your shit at drawing doesn't mean everyone has to be a samefag.

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>>2942974

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>>2943494
Just because I'm trying to keep shitty critiques with no demonstration of knowledge down doesn't mean I'm that guy.

>>2943529
how is the critique shitty when everything said is 100% true?

>>2943529
>opinions aren't allowed
>on a place that fully advocates for people to say whatever the fuck they want
>trying to police other people's opinions simply because you don't think it's a 'critique' when it technically is.

inb4 you spit out the definition of constructive criticism, which is what you totally meant when you just said the word criticism

>>2943445
It's as if Lucky Land hired a Tumblr artist or something.

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Is this presentable? I'm not good with the fundamentals but I just follow what my mind tells me to draw when it comes to making funny pictures. I haven't put effort into a drawing like this in a while though, should I focus on the beginner thread instead?

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>>2943648
Yes. /beg/. And stop making threads about your shit on /v/, it's only embarrassing yourself.

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I tried messing around with it more...the face still looks really wonky to me especially. I'm trying to find this medium ground between realistic structure and cartoon. Any help, please?

>>2943656
Then how come people like
>>2940781
>>2941204
get away with it?

>>2943665
They don't. Those people are awful too. And stop making "how good are you at drawing vidya characters" threads, when all you're gonna do is deflect and falseflag.

>>2943668
>when all you're gonna do is deflect and falseflag.
i don't follow

>>2943671
Anon, we know it's you in those threads. Pretending like you don't know shit is nothing. Anyway, since this is /ic/, I'm going to give you some babby-tier pointers.

>interpret things in 3d shapes

Imagine things as 3d solids rather than lines on a paper. This helps you tackle more advanced items later on. and helps you learn perspective.

>construct drawings in 3d shapes

Helps you with above

>learn hands

For fucks sake, do this.

Overall, /beg/ and the sticky teach you shit better than I can. Feel free to ask for clarification.

>>2943677
but do I have to learn geometry first? If not then I'll get to it.

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>>2943682
No, learn the fundamentals. Includes 3d forms, anatomy, construction, color, values, and perspective.

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I'm stuck on the flow of this, should the fire be on the left side or right? what changes could I make?

>>2943694
just make the fire come out on both sides. There's really no other way to balance the composition considering the subject of the image is right smack in the middle of the page and the line of action is indicating towards the bottom of the canvas.

If the fire comes out on both sides, it'll help lead the eye more to the subject rather than trailing off and it will look a little more dynamic.

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>>2943698
I get what you mean. Now the question is, how prominent/long should the fire be? would long fire trails make it more dynamic, from both sides? or keep it short

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I have some form of dilemma that I wonder should I keep trying to draw the face with more detail or should I leave my style like this

>>2943731
you've already chickenscratched so hard that any additional detail will render almost certainly as pure clutter.

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Thoughts?

>>2943796
face is far too large - the jawbone in your case has gone all the way past the neck and well into the back 3/4 of the head.

>>2943803
kek, how did I not see that?

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Fuck, i don't now what to do with the background.

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>>2943871
You're playing coy, aren't you?

>>2943875
No, seriously. I don't know if the values are ok or if i'm just doing a mess, to me the colors just look kind of shitty. I always have this problem with backgrounds.

>>2943891
Try brightening the values of the strips on the floor that are in the light, the ones near the bent leg. I'm hoping they're not sources of light, because that would make your job hell.

>>2943891
Other than that, I'm blown away, you're doing great.

>>2943891
> if i'm just doing a mess
yeah everything is a mess tbhh. you have no sense of edges everything has a hard edge and no soft areas what so ever. reflected light means no sense to be that grey ect ect.

>>2943917
I thought of the background more like "focus on the girl". Maybe a different shade of gray would help, but I like it now.

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did a 2b

>>2943924
You've got some weird spots on her chin, looks like stubble. Great work, though.

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How is it?

>>2943917
>tbhh
Kill yourself. Or in terms you're familiar with, kys.

>>2943929
Chest looks a bit flat, despite the cleavage line. Simple and comfy, though.

>>2943913
>>2943915
>>2943917
>>2943922
Thank you. Now i think i know what to do.

>>2943238
Is there a example of your advice? I think you meant that mine has so spread out details, it obstructs overall shapes; which I agree especially with bunny + barbwire girl.

>>2943375
I used to play Borderlands too. True masterpiece it is.
What you've said is true... but problem is, I have to use downplayed color because it's supposed to have apocalyptic feeling. ( failed to to so, but still. )
But there's great artists portray apocalyptic environment despite of bright saturation... I can't see how...

>>2943924

very nice, but I second the other anon. I'd smooth out the chin to get rid of that stubble look.

andrae nuked his blog huh

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weeb stuff with fucky anatomy bls

>>2943971
You serious? Man, that's a shame. One of my favorite d/ic/ks.

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>>2943976
I'll focus on pic related first, but know that a full side view for the Latina would snap a neck with that turned body.

>>2943976
First, imagine her arms are extended. She would never be able to use jean pockets, so lengthen her arms.

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update for the sketch from earlier.
Might make more sense to just do the upper torso? Idk yet

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do i need a background for this?

>>2944044
the foreshortened arm needs to be worked on more, it looks like he has the arms of a baby

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I got an iPad and it's a lot different than my cintiq I'm struggling

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>>2943445
this is full of symbol drawing, you probably didn't construct the face based on actual proportions. Also, this isn't emulated at all, this is a generic tumblr art style. It looks like you went out of your way to make his nose big and ugly. if this wasn't so stylized, this would look obviously bad

on a personal level, I hate this artstyle, it never looks appealing, and it's used as a crutch to cover up lack of fundamental knowledge

good line work though

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copics are the funnest shit

>>2941274
I can tell this thread has shit taste bc no one commented on this. If you're still checking this thread great work anon, I love how the simple values give it form

>>2944144
"this caviar tastes so weird! i prefer good truffles tbqh"

still a pretty cute sketch mate

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profile 'study' for a character, interested in opinions.

>>2943495
Thank you this actually helped me a lot.

>>2941446
the bangs should be hanging down, shouldn't they?

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Relearning fundies and need to learn to color. This is the only shit I'm capable of right now

>>2943190
that's not how chins work, holy fucking shit. If your gonna do a red line or redraw of something, you better fucking have a grasp at what your doing or have some goddamn reference to back it up.

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thoughts? Second attempt at a cartoony style.

>>2944275
>says the anon who doesn't do a red line

>>2944282
here's your (You) faggot.

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>>2940732

Does /alt/ have a separate Discord?

I don't like the main /ic/ Discord because the fucking admin and mods are barely fucking there.

It's really gay dude. Plus I want to socialise with more weebs that are going for an alternative artstyle.

Pic unrelated.

>>2944316
You sound like a horrible person.

>>2944316
Check the previous thread

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Any good guide/tutorial/book to draw "anime" eyes?
Something that actually explains the proportions, the mechanics, perspective and "logic" behind the stylization?
Also something that relates and compares the realistic representation with the "anime" stylization?
I want to understand so I can draw any kind of eye from any perspective.
I don't want to trace shit over and over.
Please recommend me good stuff, don't even care if it is in japanese.

>>2944332
No one is going to spoonfeed you, just go figure it out yourself.

>>2944332
>anime requires a book that explains detailed rules and proportions and mechanics (fucking what?) every anime artist follows because they too are of understanding about this sooper seekrit book

>"I don't want to trace shit over and over"
>sounding like you were actually going to trace other anime eyes before asking this outstandingly vegetable-tier retarded question

I'm not shitting on anime, you're just fucking retarded.

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>>2943190
>>2943190
>>2943495
>>2942974

>>2944334
>>2944339

So everyone figured this out by himself?
Also your concept of spoonfeeding is too far fetched.

>anime requires a book that explains detailed rules and proportions and mechanics

¿?
Well "anime" certainely requieres rules and proportions like anyother kind of art, right?
There are always good and bad learning material
That is why people recomend Hampton or Vilppu books instead of other ones.
Thats why people recomend K&R C instead of Schildt books in CS.
I have never seen any good book on anime drawing, imho they are all bad ( poorly explained) or shit like how to draw manga by katy coope.
I understand that is there is no secret book but surely good learning material helps A LOT.
Also I understand that the basics of drawning are the same no matter the stylization and that I should learn to draw before
trying to stylize something.
I was just asking what are the most recommended material on this topic.

>>2944365
anime is literally the stylization of reality

if you need to read a book to learn how to stylize then you're fucking retarded.

>>2944339
>sounding like you were actually going to trace other anime eyes before asking this outstandingly vegetable-tier retarded question

I always thought that I should try to understand the logic and shape behind something before trying
to draw it and that I should draw as much from my imagination as I could
Should I do this? Should I trace a lot of eyes, Will this help me?

>>2944369
if you really need to ask someone else if something arbitrary will help you then you're fucking retarded.

>>2943731
Did you intentionally chicken scratch to make it look sketchy? A lot of people tend to think it's a style but it's pretty detrimental to developing any skill.

>>2944340

I enjoy your bluelines, varguy

>>2944374
It was originaly just a sketch but I fear that I may get used to it,I need to get rid of it

>>2944367
>I don't know what I'm talking about and I have a small peen.
>>2944365
I haven't really seen any decent books on eastern stylization, but I imagine the better ones are written by non-Westerners. You could also try flipping through art books of anime series that you like to see if they break down their style at all. American animation studios tend to do that for the art books of their productions so I think Japanese studios would do something similar. Let us know if you do find anything decent on the topic?

>>2944883
books on how to stylize are redundant, it's really only for people who don't know their fundamentals because the best those books offers to you is how to achieve a particular look by altering shapes and forms from how one would usually draw a human figure or anything else of the matter.

Once you remove all the lectures about how to draw shapes and forms, all anime books amount to is the author of said book teaching you how to pretty much draw how they would draw anime. You're not going to learn anything from the book, the only thing you will have accomplished is how to copy someone's style because you paid money for their book.

And yeah some books will have a small section in it that says some stupid shit like, "anime eyes are always 3/4 bigger than regular eyes and the facial features are like such and here's a rough sketch to how anime is officially drawn I should know" but again you'd get better education just fucking reading up on how to draw shapes and forms and building your detailed drawing from that cause that's basically what the fucking book is teaching you but in the shittiest manner imaginable.

Anime tutorial books are the biggest waste of time and exists only for faggots who don't want to learn their fundamentals. It also doesn't take a genius to be able to grasp the general characteristics that encompass the anime aesthetic. If you already know that anime has large eyes and a cartoonish figure you shouldn't need a fucking book to tell you how to draw like that if you learned beforehand your fundamentals.

basically: you're fucking retarded

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>>2944902
Mate...

>>2944902
When did anyone say anything about throwing fundamentals out the window? Knowing other artists' workflows and how they approach stylization in addition to having solid fundamentals can only be helpful.
You can take bits and pieces of styles that you like and make them your own and not just copy someone's anime doodle 1 for 1..
>anime is literally the stylization of reality
Really?
Dude, chill

>>2944902

How to Draw anime books are regarded as a meme but in actuality a lot of these books are pure gold if you want to draw in said style.

The reason you think they are shit is the way they are presented with minimal information. This is how Japanese school children learn; they take minimal information and use that as 'case study' in groups with their classmates. These books ref'd to American books like Jack Hamm make a great combination.

Don't blame your stupidity on why you don't know how to study. How to break down information is a skill unrelated to art, and very few of you guaranteed on this board don't know how to do. So...
>exists only for faggots who don't want to learn their fundamentals
Is not true. This used to be the case in the early 2000s with Americanized how to draw anime books but even authors like Chirs Heart buckled up his trousers and hired actual legit artists to illustrate his books.

>>2945035
>Chirs Heart
How the fuck do you find the artists for these books
Are they unlisted

>>2945046
Their names are in the contents but they're unironically using a separate penname.

>>2943939
what if its a trap

>>2945187
That's not what he means. He means it doesn't look three-dimensional, not small tits.

>>2941553
The shoes looks bad

>>2945270
that pose is kinda stiff and the torso doesnt seem to be in the right perspective as the legs i think, just an opinion

>>2943931
lol u mad bro XD?

>>2945270
my dick tbqph

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can i please get some red lines/help in here?
i dont know whether is the face or the legs/feet length that is bothering me about this

>>2944421
Sorry but that's not me.

>>2945270

a-andrae?

don't leave

don't leaaaaaave

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>>2944369
Study real eyes first, and get a grasp of the basic forms. Anime eyes are still "eyes" and believable ones require knowledge of how real ones work. For example, anime eyes tend to have some minor features removed, like the fold of the upper eyelid, the indentation of the bottom lid, the caruncula, and wrinkles (unless it's intentional).

Drawing from reality will make your anime better!

>>2945400
my mistake

>>2941274
underrated

>>2944171
lol dude theres barely any effort put on it

if lazy half assed art is considered to be good taste than boy youre in for a good one

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idk

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Anything I should fix before I fuck up the proportion further?

>>2945270
blog?

>>2945879
i hate it

>>2945879
Your line weight makes no sense at all. You've outlined the whole drawing like it's a sticker with an absurdly heavy line, then left the rest of it in this very light thickness.

I'd recommend you erase the outer outline and adjust all of your line weights to properly reflect what's happening - thicker lines for closer objects (the tips of the fingers) is one possible rule.

Similarly you'll need to vary line weight to deal with tension and relaxation in fabric and hair. Softer creases in fabric should taper off near the ends to 0 line weight and points of tension should similarly taper off, whereas sagging cloth and bunches should thicken up.

tl;dr learn to line weight before actually using it and don't say the sticker bullshit is "muh style"

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>>2940739
Stop drawing on lined paper. Take better photos and resize your work, up the contrast and brightness on Photoshop if you have it. Good perspective, but stop scribbling, focus on making confident marks.
>>2940781
>>2941204
I hate your style, please get off MSPaint or whatever you're using, draw with a pencil or use a better program. Your colors are basic too, stop drawing anime. Get back to your fundies. Sorry I’m being harsh but you’re only wasting time drawing this stuff.
>>2940782
Decent, just work on your value structure and composition before you start adding so many details. The light logic is also a little weird, and the highlights are a little dark, but overall kawaii-desu.
>>2940882
Pretty good, the hair and vest are weird, I would love to see you paint the whole figure with the same attention to detail you did with the face. Good job.
>>2940910
Look at your thumbnail, I can't see shit. I know you want it to be dark, but start with a good value structure and then if it still isn't dark enough you can use some adjustment layers at the end.
>>2940964
Super cute, only thing I can see wrong are some inconsistencies between the faces.
>>2941101
Good start. Wings seem a little low and the face doesn't look like its sitting on the head correctly, but keep going.
>>2941139
I can't really tell what’s going on here, definitely do a couple more gestural drawings of the pose like >>2941197 suggested until you find one that works. Also take better photos of your work.
>>2941218
Everything looks okay, it's just not appealing to me for some reason. There are some minor proportion problems. I think it's mostly your compressed values, bump up the saturation and contrast a little bit.
>>2941264
>>2942668
Alright, I like your stylization, and I really like the flat colors and what you did with the hair shape, but holy fuck stop with the intense highlights, tone it way done. Clean up your brushwork a little more too.

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>>2946158

>>2941274
Really great energy, I like it a lot. The poses are just a little weird, let them stretch out, also what is the red spine-looking thing on the bottom? Good job on this one.
>>2941334
>>2941833
Good pose and construction so far, watch your tangents and fully draw the hands and feet! They're super important to your rough drawing.
>>2941446
The length of the upper legs compared to the lower legs seem weird, all your colors seem really light for how dark your outlines are. Decent job but to me this is neither cute or that sexy for some reason.
>>2941497
Pretty much this >>2941508. The scribbling is fine for a rough but make sure to go over it with more confident lineart later.
>>2941526
I don't like the white outline, look at J.C. Leyendecker for good examples of that. Pose is a little awkward, and the warm palette is interesting but I don't think the gradient background is helping anything. Construction and anatomy needs work too.
>>2941553
Can't tell if trolling? (if not then I would suggest using paper and pencil before working digitally, you're very obviously a beginner and it'll be faster to get that mileage in, also make sure to read some of the books in the sticky too.)
>>2941619
>>2941847
Pretty good start, legs seem a little weird but at least it feels like she is actually resting on the ground, try more variation of lineweight and don't lose your gesture when you're cleaning it up.
>>2942186
Really stiff pose, don't forget color temperature while you're painting.
>>2942665
Look at more references while you're drawing the clothing, the pose is okay. Also a blue background was a terrible choice for somewhere wearing all blue.
>>2942671
Interesting work... I would say work on a delineation between hard and soft edges, and ffs don't sign it unless you've sold it or else it just looks refrigerator-tier.

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>>2946159

>>2942719
>>2943663
Really stiff, I know you're stylizing it but look at more cats while you're drawing. And if you want help with the design look at the cat from Kiki's Delivery service or even the cat from Persona 5.
>>2942797
Really good critique from >>2942807. If they're clashing swords you they're pushing their weight onto eachother, so you have to draw them as one unit. Look at the painting Stag at Sharkey's. That being said good start!
>>2942903
Foreshortening is a little weird but let's see how it looks painted.
>>2942909
Good ideas with the design but the pose and expression are kinda ambiguous. Really think through the logic of the fur and feathers. Personally I also think you should try a different approach to your lineart, it's not appealing and it looks like it took forever.
>>2942934
Look at the sticky, draw from life, draw what you see not what you think it looks like. And don't draw anime in the beginning.
>>2942974
Good basics, only tip I could give you is try to stay out of that uncanny valley, either push the realism more or push the cute or sexy angle more.
>>2943050
Cool line quality but fundamental problems in the hands and shoulders. You drew the tits but see how low her hips are?
>>2943169
Hands are small, but good job on the foreshortening.
>>2943201
See >>2943238. Cool stuff, you got a voice in your work, just don't be afraid to change it up.
>>2943225
>>2943272 Gave you a really good critique. There are a lot of other artists with this kind of style, David Doran is one I like personally.
>>2943445
>>2944044
Stylistically this is pretty interesting, I'd say fuck it, just finish it and see how it turns out. I think the white makes it look unfinished, try adding a background.
>>2943648
It's cute, sometimes that's hard to capture, other than that its really beginner, but it depends what you want to do. Illustration? It needs work. Webcomic, good enough I guess. Check out the sticky.

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>>2946162

>>2943684
This is utter shit, please read all your own advice. And jesus christ don't play with the fucking channel layers, all it does its make this turd vibrate.
>>2943694
This has some nice drawing. Your colors are really muddy, mix up the value range and don't forget your color harmony, it might be good to pick out a palette beforehand. Clean it up.
>>2943796
Cute, not making the most out of your pixels.
>>2943871
Good job! The value structure of your figure is really similar to your background, find a way to pop it out. Also the lineart is disappearing in the darker sections of the painting. But keep going!
>>2943924
Good start but the rendering gets muddy in some places. Don't overwork it.
>>2943929
Cute but stay confident with the brushwork. Also the purple doesn't work for that well for me, and watch how it tangents with the neck.
>>2943976
Good line quality but brush up on your anatomy, the shoulders, feet, and hands are a little weird, use reference if you have to.
>>2944144
Cute! Clean it up but don't lose the nice gesture you have. Don't give me excuses with the iPad, paper and pencils are cheap as fuck.
>>2944169
Take brighter photos, the way she is holding the sword is super weird. I'm not a huge fan of your style but try drawing some variations of the pose.
>>2944176
Reminds me of that girl from Atlantis. Good job on the hair but she has a really masculine face, unsure if that's what you were going for.
>>2944215
>Relearning fundies and need to learn to color.
Keep doing that and look at more clothing references. This will help with the folds and also your atrocious fashion sense.
>>2944277
Look at your thumbnail, its so fucking dark I can't see whats happening, separate everything into lightside/darkside before you start painting. The lack of a background really makes it hard to see whats happening.
>>2945270
Cute! Maybe work on your line quality? Draw the hands!
>>2945353
This pose seems a little weird, look at references.

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>>2946164

>>2945772
The bottom left drawing is shit, your edges are just weird. Every other drawing is really good tho! Keep going you're doing great, please keep posting more of your work.
>>2945827
This is a hard pose because of the perspective, I'd say try drawing it from an easier angle first to understand it better, then draw it in that distorted perspective.
>>2945879
There's nothing blatantly wrong with this but I hate the style you've ended up with. His right hand is also making a horrible tangent with his face. >>2946004 has some good points too.

>>2946166
avatarfagging is against the rules

>>2946174
kys

Hey do you guys recomend any collegeor can you learn most of what they teach at home. Maybe im not reading the right books or havnt found the right ones. I really want to improve my illustrating as a whole i just find it easier if someones telling me what to do.

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What should I do to make this less amateurish? I'm not used to drawing things other than people, I'm totally lost. Fucking roast me.

>>2946179
Collegefag here.

You can learn all the same shit at home. Lots of books cover the same material.

>i just find it easier if someones telling me what to do.
College might be for you. Helps you develop discipline and keep to those fucking deadlines while getting good.

But do be honest with yourself, if you're just lazy don't bother.

>>2946185
not that im lazy. I have a passion I just, im waiting for art to click with my brain if that makes sense, I know i CAN teach myself but im never sure of anything unless I have someone reassuring what I learn. I duno, im weird.

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>>2942668
last one

>>2946182
Your values are too extreme. Values should be relative to each other. Is the contrast of value on the wall of that house and the value of those dark shadows really as strong as the contrast between pure white and black?

>>2946280
I wasn't trying to be accusatory, just a heads up. I've seen a lot of people in my program who aren't gonna make it simply because they're lazy, and school ain't gonna fix that.
>I know i CAN teach myself but im never sure of anything unless I have someone reassuring what I learn.
Share your work, if people say it's good, keep doing what you're doing. If you start getting jobs you can take that as a tacit acknowledgement of your ability.

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>>2940732

>>2946327
'sup seth, you are the best!

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>>2946407

>>2946312
Yeah, I'm comparing it to some mango buildings and the whole scene seems to need a good value relation. I will keep changing it until it looks good.

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Trying to get better at dynamic poses and shape

>>2946182
The entrance looks very, very, very flat, and the sky is cheap. And the shadows are pretty unrealistic. Those are the things that ruin your image for me.

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sloppy trace to try understanding cartooning. looks like you'd play around with some slight proportion adjustments for a still somewhat realistic human result like this. take it to a bigger extreme to get something more stylized. who knew?

>>2946470
Do you know the path to reach the realistic shadows? "Things at shadow areas are darker" are making it too simple, should I blend them more?

>>2946182
Looks fine aside from the weird clouds and shadows that aren't consistent.

>>2943971
he's not that good tbqph,

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I feel like my style reeks of "My highschool art teacher told me not to draw anime so I'm trying my damnedest not to".
Design wise how does this gal look? Anything I could do to improve her?

>>2946566
You need Loomis.

However, I think purely from a design perspective it's pretty good. I like her poofy hair and how the pattern on the shirt matches that on her headband. Keep drilling your fundamentals and working on her.

>>2946567
I'm new to the /ic/ environment but I did grab all the Loomis pdfs, started with Fun with a Pencil. His method of blocking out facial features, must that always apply or only if you're drawing a character who could benefit from it like a comical chubby guy?
I appreciate the praise for her design. Is it alright if despite being striped, her headband and shirt have different color patterns? Headband is black and white, shirt is pink and blue.

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>>2946570
>His method of blocking out facial features, must that always apply or only if you're drawing a character who could benefit from it like a comical chubby guy?

Always; it's construction. You don't always have to draw the underlying construction, many artists don't, but you certainly have to understand it.

>Headband is black and white, shirt is pink and blue.

Might be pretty jarring, I don't know.

>>2940781
Try and actually improve or post somewhere else.Just facts.

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>>2946575
So something kinda like this? I don't normally draw out cheeks.

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>>2946158
Thanks anon.
Here's an update.

Just about done with this

>>2944332
/m/ lurker here, nice Mortar Headd

>>2946607
The right leg is weird. It's not comfortable to hold it up that far.

>>2947021
Not that Anon, but I don't know what leg you're talking about. For a character that is supposed to have her feminine qualities overblown, she's good.

I don't really see the issue.

>>2946607
The lower leg isn't just a big tube of some sort unless the person is extremely fat. Fantastic rendering, though.

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Redline me dudes. Just the core figure please.

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>>2947039
Shit forgot to resize.

>>2940781
Stop drawing those fucking eyes they don't read or look cute or anything mane

>>2946477
why did you decide the headband was the top plane?

>>2947040
Man, I hate that facestyle. It just looks amauterish and cheap-webcomic-y these days, not that it was ever desirable in the first place.

>>2947110
Alright what would you suggest?

Is kemono (eastern furry) welcome here?

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something

>>2947131
I really like the right picture.

>>2947137
Of course you would you weeb.

>>2947030
Ye.Lucky to have the liquify tool.
>>2947021
I kinda agree

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Felt like redrawing an old oc.

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>>2947039
Go back to basics.

>>2946182
practice drawing textures.

>>2947278
I'm not trying to be a Dobson but I don't believe you can just tell someone to go back to basics. It comes off as you knowing something is wrong but not wanting to put effort into articulating it. I did notice myself that when the canvas is flipped it looks wonky. I've been working on a digital do over of it which makes it more consistent. That's not exactly feasible on paper though unless you wanna get weird with a mirror.

>>2946182
Be more consistent with your brush holy shit. The default one of Clip Studio is such cancer.

>>2947288
> with your brush size

>>2946493
Give the shadows consistent depth. Since the overhang seems to be made from some kind of metal, it would reflect a bit of the reflected light from the glass door onto the wood above the glass, making the shadow less deep there. And double-check the shape of the upper overhang shadow and the lower overhang shadow.

>>2946162
Arigathanks I will stop drawing anime then, but can I draw anime girls later ?

>>2947112
get better taste?

>>2947349
Well art at it's core is about self expression so if I changed my style(improving it is another story) to appease you, then it wouldn't be me then right?

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Been a while since I posted, but I do legit need style critique/advice. I'm putting a lot of effort in the developing the "how" in how I do things.

I've switched from screentones to watercolors, as I think they look a lot nicer, and overall, they're a lot more flexible than screentones.

I think I'm overdoing it with the hatching though.

>>2947422
Nah, the crosshatching is fine.

You shouldn't mix screentone with grays though, you should keep it to one or the other. They clash a lot.

>>2942524
someone's got a hankering for fresh never frozen beef

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What artstyle is this?

>>2947112
Original poster here.

Something a bit more realistic is ideal for me and I think would make your artstyle much more appealing. Main things that make it ugly is the plastic hair and the cheap eyes and weird eyebrows.

Over-cartoonish realistic style is too oversaturated these days because it makes hack artists get away with not doing good realistic faces and instead just filling their lack of anatomy with cartoon. Just gotta keep a good dose of realism in your cartoon so it doesn't look ugly.

>>2947354
Andrew Dobson, is that you?

>>2948057
hyper unappealing

new thread >>2948265

>>2948268
This isn't /vg/. Make a new thread when the old one 404's and take your fucking trip off.

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>>2948363
(you)

>>2948095
Dobson doesn't improve. If he did take to improving anatomy, posing and proportions his art style would be fine.

>>2948729
He'd still be a cunt, though.

>>2948740
That's for sure

>>2948057
sycra tier