All critiques welcome as I'm trying to get better.
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 5:
This one is a sweetie; despite is monstrous size (about 2 meters) Containment #58456 is really calm. So this thing is a vegetarian and usually just sits in a cornor most of the time during my shift. The company doesn’t even have him in the more high tech cells. Pretty dormant most of the time, I usually just feed him some cabbages from home.
No one knows how he’s floating though…
Eggheads upstairs said the found him in [redacted] just wandering the woods. Scarred a few campers, but the the SRC (Supernatural Response and Capture) were able to bring him in with very little hassle.
I think I’ll name this guy, Smiley.
232 and counting
>>2848132
The pose is a bit strange, it's not clear that it's a floating creature. It looks like it's either supporting itself with the huge arms or that the tiny legs are hidden behind his right arm.
>>2848131
everyone report, nobody respond, always sage.
It's disgusting he's gotten away with this for nearly 2 months because we literally don't have a singular mod.
>>2848200
This. For once I agree with you.
Sage
Thats really good OP how many years have you drawn
>>2848200
And also note, if enough people will report, it will autosage.
And reminder for newbies, type "sage" in the box that says options and it won't bump the thread.
Get this fucking guy to stop shitting up the board with his own thread.
>>2848212
Stop samefagging op, reported
>>2848426
it's ironic, not samefagging
sega
>>2848162
that makes sense i see what you mean, what would you recommend to correct it?
>>2848188
but Obama said i could
>>2848200
saging is always good guys
>>2848206
HEre,here.
>>2848212
thanks, all my life as far as i remember
>>2848426
not me chief lol
>>2848673
bingo
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 6:
Today’s shift was pretty weird; I met the field leader/captain of the SRC (Supernatural Response and Capture), real silent badass type. Captain C. Montgomery Maul. All security was interviewed one by one (felt more like an interrogation to me) about our feelings towards the Contained and general feelings for the company. I was asked the questions by Human Resources Bill (whom interviewed me when I got the job) in a dark room; all this while Captain Maul stood in the corner; almost completely covered in darkness. I remembered enough of his features to draw my sketch, that cold stare and horrible scar being the stand outs. After my “interview” was over I asked Jim my supervisor about him. Jim (who’s been here 5-EVER btw) says he was here even before he started.
All he knows is rumors and gossip that are passed among the lower level security. Maul used to be a small town sheriff in [redacted], apparently had a rough life. Parents died of mysterious causes, always bullied in school, lost his wife 4 weeks after their wedding to [redacted]. Held down the sheriff gig for a while till a creature (later a Contained) wreaked havoc on the small town of [redacted]. This thing apparently was a level 5… An extinction level creature; Wiped out the whole town… save one man.
C. Montgomery Maul.
233 and counting
>>2849602
"A Professional Comic Book Artist"
on your website lmao
honestly off yourself
>>2849602
Suck my black dick faggot, no one cares about your turds
>>2848131
Lmao, I've seen this so many times.
It looks like an autistic ash Ketchum tripped over himself throwing a pokeball!
sage, report, hide
>>2849636
Don't bump this shit, nigger
>>2849643
Did you??
>>2848131
>All critiques welcome
Don't lie Op, you just want attention. If you wanted feedback you'd post in the appropriate threads. Saged
It's really nice! I like the colors a lot man.
Really good stuff man, keep it up!
>>2850047
the problem is there literally isn't a mod for this board, ive put in my candidature for janitor a few times and have not gotten a response either.
sega
>>2849649
>there's nothing against the rules
Spamming your work is against the rules. This board is for critiquing artwork not for advertising. Op obviously just wants to shill his work. Why else would he be making his own shit threads where his disregards every and all criticiques? I've seen literally no improvement since his last 3 threads. Sageroni
>>2849628
um yea, I'm a published artist who gets paid to do work. its no longer my main job but i still do side work... so yes. while my actual art I feel is not "professional" level just yet, I am however a "Professional" artist by definition of the word.
also 1.
>>2849630
should i get on my knees or would you like to sit down?
also two
>>2849636
yea, i would like to think ive gotten much better.
>>2849637
what exactly is everyone reporting exactly, which rule am i breaking?
also three
>>2849643
too late lol
>>2849648
KEK
>>2849649
that makes sense thanks, i plan to do another similar floating creature soon and this iwll help
>>2849726
care to provide some crits,then
also four
>>2849914
thanks man, wish i could still color, my tablet died a while ago.
>>2850037
Thanks
>>2850047
and five
dude we all know its just you samefagging on my thread. thats five times DUDE, JUST DONT LOOK! if you hate my art so much and dont want to help me get better, dont look... at the very least stop samefagging with these posts man we all know its just you.
>>2850122
yea they never listen or get back to anyone now adays sorry man.
>>2850802
i challenge you to show me one Critique that was given to me that i ignored that wasent either "stop posting your art" or "KYS fag" or something similar. just one... cause while you think i disregard all crits, ive used each and every one to get better and changed my art accordingly.
Ill post the journal in the following post below
>>2851038
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 7:
Pretty boring day,while waiting of the eggheads to feed Contained #12445 I decided to sketch my supervisor Jim while he was doing some paperwork. Says he’s been here for about 24 years now. Seems to love it here and helping others understand the Containments more than anything; now that I think about it Ive never once heard him call them monsters or freaks like other personal. Jim [redacted] used to own a small animal sanctuary. The [redacted] animal Sanctuary came under fire after one of the employees was found having “relations” with the baby animals. They found one of the puppies [redacted] with its [redacted] in [redacted] in the corner of its [redacted] [redacted] . After [redacted] city council shut them down, Jim met with the founder of the Ididian Containment Corporation, Mr. [redacted] (I haven’t gotten the chance to meet him yet), he explained he wanted his expertise in taking care of some of the more unique “containments”. He’d lost everything, this was a fresh start.
The rest as they say is history.
Jim’s shift covers some of the higher level contained; but mostly involves training the newbies like me. He sometimes seems rather awkward around us other security guards, but seems really chill around even some of the scarier contained.
Man walks among the scariest sons of bitches on earth, doesn’t even think twice…
Guess he finally found his sanctuary…
>>2848132
tangent where elbow meets the corner is jarring. consider moving it.
>>2851038
>what exactly is everyone reporting exactly, which rule am i breaking?
also three
spam
Why are you all pissed at this guy?
I don't see any rules broken.
>>2851313
That isn't spam at all.
He makes one thread that survives a month or two at a time and only post in it once a day. You could literally just hide this one and you wouldn't see another for a long time.
But instead you choose to be butthurt and keep posting on his thread, so inevitably someone will reply to you bumping his thread more than it would usually happen.
>>2851329
if all of us did it it would be a problem, hence, none of us should. It's spam.
sega
>>2851038
>dude we all know its just you samefagging on my thread
>Treats ic like a blog/spams work
>receives 95% hate comments
>claims it's coming from just a single person
Wew lad
>>2851329
I've been seeing the same thread with the same shitty artwork from the same artist everyday for the past 5 months. If that isn't spam I don't know what is
>>2851580
I KNOW HOW TO SAGE
I never said the proko threads are okay.
>>2851580
I don't care to hide it anymore, the only reason i'm replying to this thread is out of hate. I hate the OP. I hate how he values marketing above actual art. I hate how actual critiques people give go unpracticed, he replies with "okay, thank you" but never actually applies those critiques to his next piece. I hate how everyone that hates his fucking threads are "samefagging" or "jealous". I hate how he's been abusing this board for the past 6 months. I hate his attitude towards people. I hate how he makes his own thread when he could post in Draw/Sketchbook/Alternative Style threads. I just fucking hate everything about him.
>>2851622
I think you just hate yourself.
I usually get angry at people like you, but now I see you're more of a victim than just a regular asshole.
I implore you to go to the Settings > Filter > Hide thread stubs and then hit the hide button on this thread.
I don't care if you don't want to, You need to.
>>2851626
Now I hate you aswell, go fuck yourself
>>2851630
That's cool. You can act tough around here, but don't go lying to yourself, ok?
I won't bother you anymore. Get well, anon.
>>2851633
ok friend, have fun in the hugbox with OP
>>2851626
>I think you just hate yourself
I'm pretty sure he just hates how spammers run rampant on ic because there are no mods. You'd have to be retarded to not know Op just wants to advertise his shit. He's literally applied none of the advice that's been given to him. They're always the same poorly drawn wonky cartoony line drawings. I would be all for Op having his own thread if he was actually looking to improve himself
>>2851709
>rampant spamming
>it's one guy posting daily, only bumped by retards sperging
>wants to advertise
>his threads doesn't even have any links for blogs unless directly asked
But go on, keep bumping and sperging, anon.
Really nice colors OP. I like it a lot.
>>2851190
got it, i saw this post and tried to avoid it with this following one, cant believe i missed that tanget, thank you
>>2851313
ummm not spam, all the work is different
sorry try again...
>>2851325
bingo
>>2851329
Exactly
>>2851383
Sega, what rules am i breaking exactly?
>>2851554
dude stop samefagging dude, we know its you man.
>>2851557
it isnt spam, so tell what is it?
>>2851580
BIngo again
>>2851585
and yet i see noone over there causeing as much a stink
>>2851622
it makes me happy youre happy
>>2851626
ha!
>>2851630
KEK
>>2851633
T.R.U.T.H.
>>2851649
bring it in my man *goes in for hug
>>2851709
how am i advertising? and BULLSHIT, what advice has been giving that i havent applied to future drawings?... any? Give me one?
>>2851718
KEK
>>2851796
thanks man, like i said before i really wish i could color, but tablet isnt working any more
Journal 8:
This son of a bitch right here!!
Containment #132
Scientists had me cover this asshole with my company issued cattle prod while they fed it. Apparently they feed it every month a fresh pig (where are they getting all these pigs). Thing took a swipe at one of the eggheads when the pig got loose knocking him over; so I jabbed him in the (ribs?) with the prod. Contained #132 pinned me and was about to take me out of the fight for good.
Then out of freaking nowhere Jim comes in.
And I swear to GOD, no weapon, no nothing. Says “Jennifer, halt!.” Contained #132 stops its assault and cowers in the corner; scarred out of its mind.
Jim told me later he had special connection with contained #132 since it was brought in the same day he started.
The crazy part, he was completely in control, completely calm.
If I become half of what Jim is in my time here, it’s gonna be smooth sailing to a promotion, that’s for sure.
>>2848131
It's shit
>>2848132
That's shit
>>2849602
This is also shitty
>>2851038
This had a small spark of potential here yet you managed to turn it into shit
>>2852736
Shit
>>2852797
I will bump whatever the fuck i want, it's not against the rules faggot. kill yourself
>>2848131
Keep em coming op. I'll be here for you
>>2852736
absolute shit
>>2853079
What is your deal man?
>>2852785
thanks
>>2852786
k
>>2852790
makes sense
>>2852796
uh huh
>>2852797
KEK
>>2852798
Si
>>2852801
HAHA
>>2852806
THanks man that really means alot
>>2853079
kk
>>2853625
good question lol
Journal 9:
This thing is Contained #216.
Found around the country of [redacted] Contained #215 is actually the creature. The portal it is stuck in is Contained #216. Both have been categorized as Level 5 threats (5 being the highest) extinction level. Were the safe guards in place for contained #215 or 216 to fail, mankind is condemned to destruction.
In the year [redacted] the portal opened, it remained opened for 15 years. 2 creatures came out during this time. One was contained #12445 the other was eliminated by the SRC (Supernatural Response and Capture) due to [redacted] having [redacted] and needing [redacted]. All attempts to study contained #216 have failed as during this time all science personnel that approached the anomaly were driven mad before getting within 20 meters of it. (Which begs the question how they moved it here, I would think the building was built around it but this isnt the lowest floor.
It was during the 16th year the larger creature appeared and got stuck in the portal. The portal has widened exactly 3 meters in this time. However the maddening effects of the portal seem to have reduced. Contained #215 however must be kept heavily sedated, fully awake 215 can emit a low level sonic pulse, drawing organisms to it. Those affected by the trance will kill any and all in their way to (as best as the scientist can figure) “merge” with the contained. To date over [redacted] personnel have been merged to the creature. Once tranced the only known cure is euthanasia. To keep sedated, it is fed one pig (where the hell are they getting these things from) filled with 20 pounds of [redacted] hourly.
All attempts to communicate, or destroy the Contained have failed.
>>2854309
Shit
>>2854309
do you do anything other than these boring ass line drawings?
at least op posts actual works instead of shitposting threads like proko and ligameme threads
>>2854406
You mean the 2 people who post that shit? Wow i'm sure glad OP is here to keep the artwork flowing! If only we had multiply threads with tons of our own artwork in them
>>2854406
>a-at least x isn't y!
It's not the shittest post, but a shitpost nonetheless.
>>2854406
>itt Op talks to himself
sage
>>2854424
bump to hurt your feelings
also learn to spot samefags, anyone that isn't tech illiterate could do that
>>2854410
I meant criticizing his shitty works, because that's what he wanted after all ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Hey man, I like it a lot. Especially the colors.
>>2848131
So good, blog?
this art sucks, op
you should stop spamming /ic/ with this shit
You are such an attention starved child.
You will never change. No one will care about your art because you are a self absorbed person of no value.
>>2854412
how is it a shitpost? he doesnt break any rules unlike that retarded faggot complaining in this thread, the same retard behind ligameme shitposts
This is literally the best thread since the beginning of this board. So inspiring. Don't listen to haters, OP. They're jealous of you living off of art. The lack of depth, the repeated subject matter and stiffnes of your characters just add to your unique style, something even sycra could only dream of. It looks like nickelodeon cartoons from 2008 like danny phantom. Carry on and don't look at your mistakes, just keep drawing.
Man, the colors man. I like them a lot.
>>2854593
That's some hardcore projecting right there, anon.
Swear to god, some of you people are on the edge of being pathologically butthurt.
new mods when?
>>2854967
I wanna
>>2854623
To all the anons complaining about these threads, just stop it. Hide the thread, ignore it, pretend it isn't there and the artist in question will see no reason to keep posting.
Otherwise, you're just bumping, and or wasting your energy being angry at nothing important
>>2854364
thanks
>>2854396
nope, i feel i need to get stronger at line art before going back to color, also dosent help my tablet is broken
>>2854406
lol you think this guy is gonna listen to that level of reason lol
>>2854409
thanks
>>2854410
said the samefag lol
>>2854412
?
>>2854424
sure okay, any evidence of that?
or maybe people just like to see art? good or bad
>>2854450
yes learn to spot them, i can, anyone can
>>2854466
?
>>2854509
thank you
>>2854537
thanks for the critique, any other advice would help :)
>>2854539
not spamming but okay
>>2854593
how am i self absorbed asking for advice and then applying said advice
>>2854618
?
>>2854623
AHHH i see what ya did there lol
>>2854967
good question lol
>>2855050
good you have my vote man :)
just a heads up i would still not be breaking any board rules.
>>2855087
kek
>>2855329
sadely not true, i had no post on my second one and continued till the thread maxxed out. but if they hide it i wont be "hurting" them anymore i guess... But as of right now im not stopping anytime soon till i get better
Journal 10:
Today was terrible…
They brought the security in for blood tests; the worse part, they had the SRC (Supernatural Response and Capture) guys bring us in. Yeah, the guys they send to capture or destroy dangerous creatures. (Managed to sketch one of them while waiting in line for the test) Guns and all…
Guys are real bullies by the way; one of them kept pushing the shit out of me to get me down a hall faster.
Something I thought strange they almost never talk only to give basic instructions to each other; most of their communications were just hand signals and head motions. My theory is this must be a carry-over from working in the field (Cant imagine making a bunch of noise is helpful in catching contained in the wild)
They tests took all day.
Man
Of the
I like them;
the colors
>>2855493
thanks
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 11
WHAT. THE. HELL. IS. GOING. ON!?
Jim and I were checking on Contained #132; it’s been all bloated and crying lately. A far cry from the asshole that tried to kill my ass a few days ago; pretty sure it just ate one too many pigs… when out of F’in nowhere a bunch of the SRC (Supernatural Response and Capture) dudes come into the Containment unit and pistol whip the shit out of Jim. I tried to fight them off (4 on one is not a fair fight and then out of nowhere Captain C. Montgomery Maul grabs me by the throat and choke slams me.
“This is above your pay grade rookie, just remember we have rules at Ididian, and this little creepy fucker broke them in the worst way.”
After that they dragged Jim’s unconscious and bloody body away.
I sit there, licking my wounds, with only the moans of Containted #132 to fill the emptiness of the halls…
238 and counting
The butthurt is crisp on /ic/ moreso than any other board.
O thou that with surpassing man crownd,
Look'st from thy sole Dominion like the colors
Of this new World; at whose sight all the Starrs
Hide thir diminisht heads; to thee I call,
But with no friendly voice, and add thy name
O Sun, to tell thee how I love the colors man
That bring to my remembrance from what state
I fell, how glorious once above thy Spheare;
Till Pride and worse Ambition threw me down
Warring in Heav'n against Heav'ns matchless King:
Ah wherefore! he deservd no such return
From me, whom he created was colored really well, and with his good
Upbraided none; nor was his service hard.
What could be less then to afford him praise,
The easiest recompence, and pay him thanks,
How due! yet all his good prov'd ill in me,
And wrought but malice; lifted up so high where the colors man.
I sdeind subjection, and thought one step higher
Would set me highest, and in a moment quit
The debt immense of endless gratitude,
So burthensome, still paying, still to ow;
Hey OP! Here's some images I think you'll like for inspiration.
hope you enjoyed all these inspiration pieces, op!
>>2857061
lol
>>2857238
?
>>2857867
ohman thnks
>>2858169
those were great, thank you so much!!! they really helped
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 12
Oh Jim…
What the fuck did you do?
>>2858655
>anon responds to spam that made his thread autosage with, "Thanks! These really helped".
if you can't tell that it's anymore obvious this anon just wants to spam his art and isn't even giving a shit about the posts in between, this post is it.
>>2859387
i meant thanks for giving me the inspiration, you knew that and are just purposely being obtuse
>>2859868
love you to man
My name is [redacted] I work for Ididian Containment as a low level security officer. To pass the time I've been making these journals during shifts, little sketches of what I see here every night.
If you are reading this, something has happened to me...
And you are in grave danger.
Journal 13
So this little guy is Contained #89, apparently he is one of our oldest contained. Caught in 1992 in [redacted] by a descendant of the monster hunter [redacted] [redacted], one of our earliest agents. So what I can gather from the files I read on him he is ranked a 4 danger level (out of 5, 5 being the highest), and is well over 2,345 years old. Contained #89 I incredibly fast and dangerous, is fed one pig a week, but it prefers to feed on the internal organs of virgin, catholic females. For this reason it is only to be fed by male atheists, and only on Sundays as per [redacted] customs.
Contained #89 is highly susceptible to light and is kept in a pitch black cell with no lights. However his cell is suspended above a spotlight emitting UV rays. Even if he were to escape the cell he would immediately be trapped by the light.
While light has shown to hurt it severely, no known method of eradication has been found. Methods tried so far include, decapitation, gunfire, burning, stabbing, [redacted], exorcism, [redacted], [redacted], [redacted], baptism, [redacted], holy water, [redacted], silver stakes, [redacted],starvation, and [redacted].
So far contained #89 is just kept confined to keep it from attacking the general populace.
>thread is on page 10
>can't get bumped
PRAISE THE HEAVENS
of course he'll just make another and people still won't see how it's spam despite being his fourth "MY ART!!!" thread