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Post your +18 art and comment other's

I begin;
Any tips or critique ? I kinda struggle with it
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been drawing from photos trying to improve

>>2846897
I really like it
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>>2847370
The bottom left one looks like it's meant for a medical room.
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I drew this Pat & Mat R34 yesterday
Thoughts?
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>>2848252
DELET THIS
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>>2846897
Avoid symmetrical forms. Avoid too many lines and texture, it makes skin look old and wrinkly.
Maybe it's some sort of fetish, but personally I find huge, detailed, floppy vaginas incredibly unappealing. Keep it fresh and simple.
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how do I halftone?
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>>2847370
>...and then she farts!
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How to become famous on hentaifoundry is there a guide?
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>>2846897

if all you like to draw are babes with their tits out then fucking follow your dreams, just dont be surprised when Wizards of the coast don't hire you
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>>2851411
how did you do that dots effect?
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>>2851694
I mean how do I halftone that looks good, not literally how do I halftone.
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>>2851700
they're all too soft, you need some hard edges in there to better describe the form
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>>2851700
start wuth a halftone and then move to light/dark/
though my question about that dots effect still stands
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>>2851739
manga studio have materials in it that's basically B&W or colored repeating halftone/texture layers that you put under or on top of your lineart and start erasing the parts you don't want
what's how I did it
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>>2851710
This makes me want to throw up, what is coming out of her vag that is brown? Her vag also looks like an inverted penis.
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Thumbnail practice
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>>2851920

i see another furfag has ventured onto /ic/. How goes it?
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oh my god
these threads really died after BBC left huh
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>>2851710
The arms and neck look stiff and awkward. Was this done in watercolour?
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>>2851790
The poor, overly-metallic rendering and that melting expression with the nigger lips.
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>>2848252
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All I want to draw is lolis and dicks. k-kill me.
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>>2852008
doope did you draw that?
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>>2852099
yeah, this really isn't possible.

Side note: legs don't bend that way unfortunately.

That boi is thicc too
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>>2852398
i'm aware that that pic relies on porn physics and isn't actually possible
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>>2852099
All the heads you draw are propotionately out of whack and very unappealing.
I'd like to know what you strive for stylistically, what are your inspirations?
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>>2846897

how does one successfully pull in patreon followers? is there any tricks? just do great work consistantly? shill on /trash/ ?
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Holy crap this thread is hilarious.
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>>2852003
Goes good fella
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>>2846897
I think the lips need to be more subtle.
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>>2852432
I'm afraid porn physics are the least of your problems. What you should improve the most are perspective and gesture. Your lineart is way too flat to be appealing.
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>Try and draw porn
>My dick is too hard to think about anything aside from how hard my dick is
>Same reason I can't read text when I'm very horny

How do you guys get past this?
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>>2853312
Don't you need a boner to know what to do?
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>>2846897
are pokegirls allowed here?
also, do you guys think i will be banned if i stream porn pokegirls on picarto?
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>>2853312
we're not dickbrains.
usually you stop being one once you grow old enough or you simply never are one in the first place.
sorry, you're not gonna make it.
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>>2853325
if you stream underage looking characters, then yes, you will.
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>>2851920
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Not sure about this one, any critique ?
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>>2855641
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>>2855648
Oh thanks for the advice !
Is it better now?
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>>2855655
her mouth looks really odd, i think youve made her teeth curve at too high an angle, looks like a beak
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>>2855641
>>2855655
are you fucking serious?
there's nothing to critique. you are just a beginner artist that has no idea what he's doing.

here's my advice. post in
>>2853580
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>>2855678
Hahaha no problem thanks
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>tfw you want to move away from drawing nothing but butts but you really like drawing butts
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>>2855760
Then don't stop, obsession breeds excellence.
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>>2855765
I need to get out of my comfort zone
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>>2847370
These all look really beautiful, lovely lines and shape!
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>>2851576
Post often
Continue to do this for months/years
Don't be shit
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>>2856529
degenerate and its shit
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>>2857028
>degenerate

go away, creationis scum.
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Feeling a bit lost, am I doing good so far ?
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>>2857144
the eye of literal sauron right there friend
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>>2857146
Hahaha, what can I do to change that ?
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>>2857161
Look at a vulva and draw it. The color looks like she has been rubbing sand paper on her vag, that's a start.
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>>2857270
a start is to stop drawing porn and learn some fundamentals. stop giving bad advice to scrubs, tardo.
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is porn thread for real or is just for piss posting
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Anyone lost their anonymity.

Few of my friends found my porn/pinup blog, now I can't draw.
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>>2858290
close friends kinda kno but other than that i keep the alias separate an i presume anyone who puts two an two together would kno that since it's separate it's best not to bring it up
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>>2853312
Masturbate, though you may lose interest in drawing porn after doing so.
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>>2852008
the legs look awkwardly disjointed on the left one, I suggest moving the body down a bit

the right one's 10/10 fap material, although it wouldn't hurt to define that ass a bit more
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>>2857793
nice work, anon. very doxy-like.
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eh
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>>2858507
that's hot
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>>2855791
Then draw things being done to butts~
or add more of the body.
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>>2858507
learn to draw hands and feet.
how do I know an "artist" is beginner tier? they can't draw hands and feet for shit.
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>>2858741

I know how to draw hands and feet, but why should I put in the effort to appease nobodies like you?
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>>2859386
gr8b8m8
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>>2852097
The drawing is fine, but the colors hurt my eyes
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>>2857793
getting tired of your shit.
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>>2859476
that makes two of us. don't worry anon, i'll get bored soon enough and switch the style up again

>>2858453
danke
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>>2858741
desu, his hands and feet are on the same level as the rest, so I guess he should just keep improving with the same distribution as he has now.

While it's not bad, stellar hands and feet isn't the only thing keeping it from being considered good.
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>>2859858
of course not. the whole drawing is pretty much beginner tier crap.
the hands and feet just stand out the most, since he can hide his lack of skill behind anime stylization, tho with hands and feet you just have to understand the perspective and anatomy, and that's what gives them away the most.
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>>2859457
no, the drawing is not fine. like at all, kek.
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>>2860039

hahaha take it easy you autist
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>>2859476
boo hoo. an unsatisfied dickbrain. what a big loss this is for milkanon.
gtfo, autismo.
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>>2860046
I am an artist. I can't look at illustrations without a critical eye.
sorry for triggering you, tardo.
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>>2860048

I get it. Despite being critical you couldn't cut it as something more prestigious or technical like an architect or engineer. So all you could really do is bitch. I'm sorry.
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>>2851411
Her left breast is fighting against gravity it seems.
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>>2860075
I make more than enough money with illustration, and I'm better at it than anything else.
sorry for triggering you again, tardo.
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>>2848252
Torilla tavataan.
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Toughts?
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>>2861507
really stiff, blank expression. I feel like you polished a shit though, like it looks good in terms of finished work, it is just super stiff and expressionless.
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>>2861507
Her nose is fucked up and it's making me laugh. The rendering is good, but there's literally nothing appealing about this piece outside of that. You're on your way anon, but you need to refocus on line drawing and capturing character instead of painting.
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>>2861550
What? The rendering is horrible. It's too rendered and looks like plastic. There's almost no color variation in the skin.
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>>2861507
if you wanted to create a doll, then you were successful. the dead expression, stiff pose and plastic rendering all work. kek.

stop focusing on rendering and get your fundamentals in check. the only good thing in this pic is probably the rendering technique to an extent.
you lack perspective and anatomy knowledge, but MOST OF ALL your gesture is too stiff (in terms of line and painting).
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what's up my guys
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>>2862027
we're not your guy, friend
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>>2852097
>>2852099

years later you'll look back at these and be embarressed
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>>2862027
learn how to render pls
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>>2862040
>>2862044
>best thing in the entire thread and people are hating on it
never change /ic/
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dear anons,

i was recently commissioned to draw an x-ray shot of a very large dick penetrating a vagine. since there is nothing but dick and generic vagina walls in the shot, creating a sense of scale proved difficult. how would you all approach solving such an issue?
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>>2862082
People on /ic/ are a jealous bunch. They will be encouraging to people they see as below them, but the minute they see someone better than them they will tear them apart. They are particularly vicious toward mid tier to top mid tier people, who have some degree of visible skills, yet their work still has plenty of flaws to pick on. Anyone who doesn't join in on the lynching and tries to keep a neutral attitude will be branded as an ass kisser.
These mid tier artist are so divisive and invite so much shitposting around them they eventually leave, leaving only the bottom of the barrel to fester on the cesspool known as /ic/.

A sad tale desu, but personally I come here to laugh at these people.
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>>2862027
You better have a blog you son of a bitch
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>>2862027
looks pretty gud. I like. Always wanted to know your process tho. Like, do you sketch then paint then line, or do you sketch-line-paint Do you even sketch? or do you just go straight to painting. what's the brush settings you use for your linework?
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>>2862087
I don't understand the problem. The drawing is purely external, with nothing outside of the dick and vagina walls? You can't even draw the contour of the female?
If that's the case consider doing a tiny uterus? though that might not be enough. You could consider talking it out with the commissioner. Often times people who ask for commissions have weird ideas that work in their head but can fall apart at executing them. If you feel something doesn't work or would be difficult to do maybe go back to them for their input.
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>>2862101
i'm referring to something akin to the x-ray inset on the left of pic related (not mine). a uterus, tiny or otherwise, couldn't be used to intuit scale as it's not an object commonly seen irl.
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>>2862082
>we're not your guy, friend
>hating
uh, what
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>>2862044
jello detected.
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>>2862162
no for real its bad
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>>2862174
post work
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>>2857793
come back to LAS gave.
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>>2862174
please stop with your bullshit, tardo.
it's a fucking wip where he just blocked in the main values. gtfo.
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>>2862174
care to elaborate, or will you keep spouting shit?
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>>2862027
i think you should have made her skin more pale but since its erotic art i get why you used more healthy colors.
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>>2862027
kayle pls go
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>>2862189
regret to inform you that i've never participated in LAS friend, you might be mistaking me
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>>2862174
lets see what you can do then tough guy
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>>2860245

>I make more than enough money with illustration, and I'm better at it than anything else.

Haha. Okay man. Not everybody aspires to eat frozen dinners like you. Seeing a person working in art boast about his critical thinking skills is like watching a toddler being proud of making turds.
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>>2862144
Depends on the size, but I agree in general. Refer to the rest of the post.
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>>2862100
I sketch do a bit of render then the line art and finish the rendering. I also set the line layer to multiply and color it using the preserve opacity setting
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>>2862261
>Seeing a person working in art boast about his critical thinking skills
implying you don't have to be smart and have good critcal thinking, to be able to make exceptional art.
all my fucking sides.
go back turning your burgers, troll.
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am i shit?
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>>2863357
I know sometimes you have to break some anatomy, but this is not the time when you should have done so.
turn his back more towards the viewer. he's a guy, you don't need to show his boobs or something.
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>>2863365
I was gonna say "what are you talking about, that's a realistic pose" but then I tried to do it and hurt my back, kek

thanks
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>>2848252
Depressing
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am i good or hallucinating
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>>2863610
>what is perspective
>what is lineart
>what is gesture
>what is anatomy
>what is shading
you are pretty much shit.
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>>2852008
Why he left?
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>>2863706
some jellyfag doxxed him.
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>>2863711
What's the bad thing about being doxed and how did does one get doxed on 4 chan in the first place.
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>>2863610
Don't ask /ic/, they roast even the finest of artists. But you should add more detail.
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>>2862044
Kys
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>>2863722
not that I disagree with you, but this guy here is pretty much beginner tier garbage.
and I suppose so are you, since you go and give a guy who doesn't know how to draw the most basic things to add details.
fucking kek.
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>>2863751
what exactly is the worst parts of my drawing?
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>>2863718
dude lives off commissions, someone prolly slurped his name and country off a paypal payment (or the false promise of one) then proceeded to do the creepness

aka why i always advise against handing out your blog/handle on /ic/
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>>2851700

It a filter over a layer of soft brush shading.
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>>2863756
pointed them out here
>>2863691
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How do I draw tits

God fuck they never look right
They always look lopsided or positioned wrong

Please help.
Any guides, tips or advice would be MUCH appreciated
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>>2863977
post tits, literally almost impossible to help you otherwise.
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>>2863992
Going to have to give me a few minutes there anon, I have nothing prepared, I was hoping for a more text or
>>2855648 kinda advice.

I'll post again In A minute.
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>>2863992
Okay.
A SUPER quick sketch
Ignoring the rest of the body (for now at least)
How does the breast sit on the body, to what degree should it be falling and how do you create the half Dome structure on a body?
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>>2864026
this looks terrible, the tits don't look natural at all
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>>2864061
Thanks, that's really helpful.
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>>2863357
it's still more or less in uncanny valley but you are on the right track
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>>2864026
try this
http://prismblush.com/boob-toot-1/
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>>2864083
This is what I'm talking about, this is ACTUALLY helpful
Thanks
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>>2848252
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I have no idea what I'm doing.
I keep doodling on for a couple days then dont do shit for weeks so...
I know I have to work on the hands, and on the leather suit.
What else?
Are the nipples at the right place? Isn't her arm too small?
Is her butt too low?
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Sketch quality experiment \o\
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>>2864090
No, it's not. To be able to fully understand and use this tutorial you have to have at least your basic fundamentals in check (perspective in primis), but based on this >>2864026 I can say you have no idea what you are doing.

Stop trying to draw appealing boobs, and start trying to learn how to draw in general. <- This is good advice.
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>>2864316
>what is perspective
>what is line weight and line economy
>what is shading
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Are there any other places to post porn than HF and Tumblr?
I despise both places.
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>>2853314
Well, it at least points me in the right direction.
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>>2864760
what is line economy?
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>>2864957
>I despise
not gonna make it. grow up and stop being a delicate flower, you dumbass.
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>>2865070
no wasted lines, all lines serve a purpose, preferably more than one purpose
usually heavily coupled with line weight and how you can use that to imply form and other "lines" without having to actually draw them

if i may bastardize that one miles davis quote on jazz: it's not the lines you draw, it's the lines you don't draw
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>>2865109
That's all well and good but >>2864316
isn't a mess of chicken scratches. I'd say they used good line economy
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>>2865114
not the person who wrote >>2864760 but i wouldn't say that >>2864316 is doing very well line weight/economy wise, but i have neither the time nor energy to give them a good tutorial/explanation/redline, all i could offer at the moment was an explanation of a term

all i can add is that there's more to line economy than not being chicken scratch, it also ties in a lot to keeping your forms clear and readible, and the weight of line they've chosen to use throughout the sketch does not lend itself well to the amount of detail they want to show with said line
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Made these

1/4
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4/4
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>>2865381
>>2865384
>>2865385
>>2865387
from the thumbs i worried they were gonna be questionable doodles but then realized they were gifs, they move p nice, the designs are simple yet you keep the forms consistent and on model, good job

you might wanna check out the animation thread if you haven't already >>2858273
i'd suggest maybe with the current designs you're using, work more on making the movements a bit more exagerated (look into anticipation/payoff/timing/easing/overshoot/etc all that funstuff) as well as adding some more secondary action (things moving in reaction to the "main" movements, think hair movement, fat/muscle jiggle, the rest of the body bouncing in response to a thrust, etc)
also don't forget to give the guy a bit more love too, tho that's maybe more a personal taste thing, i've never really liked the whole "blank void person with a dick" thing
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>>2865381
>>2865384
>>2865385
>>2865387

lol so is this the kind of porn girls draw?
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>>2865109
>>2865124
this anon know their shit. respect.
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>>2865381
>>2865384
>>2865385
>>2865387
didn't you post these in an old porn thread a few months ago? why the repost?
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>>2865607
It's probably some other anon reposting their stuff. For whatever reason.
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>>2861507
It looks like the cumshot offended her.
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>>2862027
looks creepy (specially the face) unless thats what u goin for since its like a doll thing
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>>2863788
So there's no way to exchange money anonymously.
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I want to be a sassy boy like EHG...
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>>2866013
Isnt that what bitcoin is for?
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>>2851411
colorized
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Please help
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>>2862090
This needs to be the banner
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>>2867763
trying to fix some stuff
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>>2848252
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>>2868089
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>>2869340
right shoulder (our left) is off on the chubby laydown lady, also the shoulders/arms of the tied up demon lady are a bit diminutive compared to the rest of her body
otherwise look good/cute so far
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>>2858507
wow, mencret? it's been a long ass time if it is, you still draw cute af
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>>2869355
right. thanks for the feedback
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I hope this isn't considered furry.
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>>2866690
Very nice colors, but the proportions and construction are a bit all over the place.
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I want to start doing porn commissions.

Sadly my work looks like shit - I'll spend next 3 weeks doing studies to fix that.

But what should my studies focus on?
If I could learn how to fix only one issue with this drawing, what issue it should be?
Faces? Anatomy? Perspective? Learning how to simplify my style? Rendering? Composition?
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>>2871736 here
I know it's not finished, but I honestly felt like polishing turd at that moment.
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>>2870967
According to my chart you're good.
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>>2871736
Do yourself and others a favor and don't start doing porn shit until you've gotten better at figuring out what makes porn shit work. There's not a lot more cringe than a poorly-drawn or generally unattractive style trying to tackle nudity, sex etc.

>But what should my studies focus on?
>Faces? Anatomy? Perspective? Learning how to simplify my style? Rendering? Composition?
Looking at what you posted I'd say all of the above? Unfinished piece or not, from what's there you can already tell there's some serious uncanny valley shit going on with this mix of 2d- and 3d-like rendering, the face isn't attractive at all and there's something off about the arms. The pose is rather stiff, too. I highly suggest studying some successful porn artists and trying to figure out what makes your dick hard about their works that isn't being captured at all in yours. I don't see any reason why you can't focus on more than one point of improvement at a time
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>>2851694
its screentone probably from clipstudio/manga studio.
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Weird, how come the first 3 files got wiped?
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>>2870967
Do you have a portfolio with a more detailed style, incidentally? Or is this what most-a your stuff looks like? Sfw or nsfw. Just curious since I'd be interested to see if your draftsmanship if you were essentially going for realism.
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>>2871828
>Do yourself and others a favor and don't start doing porn shit until you've gotten better at figuring out what makes porn shit work.
I wish someone told me this and then broke through a concrete wall using my face when I didn't listen. I'm now stuck with something that isn't completely bad but isn't arousing at all either and I struggle to finish it because I don't want to drop yet another project but feel only disappointment when I work on it.
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>>2873638
I've never done realism.
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i could use a tip
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>>2873718
bretty gud
blog?
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Recently finished this, any crits?
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>>2874393
Id say the musculature from the knee down (the calf) is a little strange and really cartoonlike.

dat ass though. 10/10
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>sit down with the intention of drawing some totally self-indulgent weird porn
>jack off and finish to a blank canvas and lose the will to draw
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>>2874417
Spotted the horny underaged. Don't give in to hedonism, transform it into workflow. That's the key to being a good artist, really.
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>>2874393
i'm not going to lie. It looks wonky as fuck but it has a charm to it.
Do more anatomy and figure drawing studies.
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>>2874483
wonky how?
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