looking for feedback here i got some pieces to look at http:

i feel like your going for an off style but its not working that great for you. if anything work more with shapes and try to get a better grasp of color. it would at least help with it being more attracting to the eye. i guess keep experimentingf

WHAT FUCKING TEACHER GOT THE BRIGHT IDEA TO TELL TO HIS ''ART'' CLASS TO SEARCH FOR CRITIQUE ON THE INTERNET?

AND WHY WON'T YOU LURK THE BOARD A WEEK BEFORE POSTING HERE?

TAKE YOUR SHIT AND YOUR CLASSMATES' >>2718885 >>2718568 >>2718860 >>2719305 AND LEAVE THIS BOARD

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WE HAVE TO CHANGE THE NAME OF THE BOARD TO STOP THIS SHIT. WHEN IT WAS CREATED WE DIDN'T HAD TO WORRY FOR NORMIES FINDING IT SINCE INTERNET WAS NOT AS WIDE SPREAD

SHOULD BE LESS GENERAL TO STOP THIS SHIT >>2719208 >>>>2719445 >>2719445 AND THE ''WHAT IS ART'' BS

recommend something like ''illustration training'' or a less obvious to the english speakers, how /i/ has

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