I am looking for feedback. I've been inspired by vapor

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>>2718885
2/3

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>>2718885
3/3

It's just bad. There's no symmetry or cohesion and you have to do more than just throw pictures on different layers and stack em. Learn how to use photoshop effectively and try again.

>>2718887
this one honestly feels like bait.

>>2718890
These are just a first round for the style. I did them in an Android widget creator..

What you do think of the aesthetic?

Do you like vapor art?

>>2718897
I like vapor art when it's done well. It's pretty gimmicky but i appreciate it. probably try to work with a better program unless you think you can master whatever you're using and make it impressive

did /gd/ make you feel bad and decide to come here

>>2718906
this

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Oc from today

>>2718885

This ain't vaporwave

0/10

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Posting my vapor art

1/4

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4/4

>>2719433
KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK

This is honestly some of the dumbest shit i've ever seen.

>>2718885
6/10
>>2718886
2/10
>>2718887
4/10
>>2719162
6.5/10

Use higher resolution source images. And put more effort in. The last one is pretty good it would work as an album cover but the resolution kinda sucks.

>>2719162
STOP BEING SO AFRAID OF THE EDGES OF THE CANVAS

GODAMMITFJISLF

>>2719433
BEST

>>2719468
Thanks for the feedback.
I am doing it all on my Android phone in a widget creator app so it's kinda hard to see resolution.

I will keep that in mind though when choosing images but right now I am more focusing on the aesthetic as I only being using a tool like this for the first time.

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>>2718887
Iteration 2.

>>2718885
Another from today.
I am just wanting to get some feed back because I feel like I live in a cave.

I was home schooled then worked for my day for 6 years, lots out of the House. Now I work for my cousin in his support company of 3 in a tiny office.

I just want to know what some artists would think of my style and what tips they would give to improve my art.

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Here's the pic

>>2719539
I'm >>2719468 and to improve your art I would say increase your capacity. All you're doing is making collages. The aesthetic is nice in some of them but vaporwave art has to have high production value to have any artistic merit. You shouldn't use low resolution images and you definitely need to start using Photoshop or GIMP.