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>>2313410
reported for pornograhy
>>2313426
reported for newfag and/or idiot
Great start guys.
>>2313431
infinite loop
>>2313433
kek
>>2313437
glorious space tities
>>2313437
her skin looks like car paint, the ear is really low, and her left boob looks like it's out of perspective. Her left leg may be too short also.
>>2313437
Is that a donato homage? Lol
>>2313451
reaching so far you almost discovered a new continent
>>2313437
you suck
>>2313470
are you trying to start a bbc meme?
should i post this here?
>>2313474
Nice. Is this traditional or digital?
>>2313461
Seriously? you don't at least think her skin looks like car paint?
>>2313474
that's great! blog?
>>2313479
that was the most reaching part imo. to me it doesn't seem like car paint. if anything, it is very stylized and it isn't rendered well. calling it car paint? reaching.
>>2313483
>muh style
>>2313483
So you're just fucking blind lmao. ok.
>>2313488
which program are you using?
can you share the brush?
>>2313490
its /b/
they linked this thread on /trash/drawthread while /b/ was invading it
>>2313492
yeah, it's the Pencil - Layout Blue 2 from Frenden's brush pack for MS5
https://www.sendspace.com/file/s54jpl
it only draws in blue, which is nice if you do the certain things i do with it, where i constantly flip between it and a white pencil to "erase"/cleanup, i highly suggest something a little blurry around the edges as well as some slight opacity on the pressure setting to get a more natural eraser feel.
when you're done you can flatten all the layers together (I USE A LOT, I AM VERY INDECISIVE) and hit it with "Convert Brightness to Opacity" under the edit tab. this will strip it of all color unfortunately, tho you can then change it to any color you want through "Tonal Correction" (also under the edit tab)
>>2313498
Thanks anon!
Armpit guy from the second last thread is back.
I think I may have over comitted on this one and now it neither looks good nor erotic.
Rate from 0-10?
>>2313537
This was the wip when I posted it to the previous porn thread. Thanks for the kind anons who offered their critique.
>>2313537
the shapes in the background are not really helping to read the silhouette
I want to get into cartoony drawing. When you colour do you just use a highlight, a midtone, and a shadow with no gradient?
>>2313556
I tried my best exercising the redline guide you guys gave me but I figured hinting every muscle countour drawn would be detrimental to the soft and kinda chubby body I had in mind so I kind of mixed it up a bit.
>>2313600
thats a horrible redline, that torso is too fucking big.
Any major mistakes?
>>2313671
are you a woman? Those balls are wrong. Also whats up with the uncircumcised nob?
>>2313677
>Also whats up with the uncircumcised nob?
Go away Chaim.
>>2313671
yeh she has a penis
>>2313671
Several.
If you think the OP picture is porn, you need to kill yourself ASAP. You are officially worthless. Anyone who gets off to that shit is a disgusting cunt. Pedophiles are better.
>>2313690
Depicting a healthy penis on pornography would help promote awareness of what an actual normal penis would look like and young men would reflect that as a positive role model on what a true man ought to look like thus preventing future male genital mutilations.
>>2313451
>her skin looks like car paint
wtf
A little paint before bed
>>2313692
I was defending foreskin, don't know if that was clear from my post. I hate circumcision.
>>2313677
>>2313684
>>2313687
thx for the very helpfull critique. Here is the improved version.
>>2313671
Korra appears to have some type of growth between her legs.
>>2313694
Colors and values are great. It's a shame you don't have more confident with details like hands and genitalia, which are all crucial to good porn.
>>2313437
The forearm with the glove still on it looks a little distorted and her back hip looks like it's out of perspective.
Not nitpicking, still way better than much of this board.
suck my gay
>>2313804
Nice linework. Sloppy anatomy, no matter the stylization.
>>2313804
You know how I see if an artist knows his shit? I look at the hands and feet. You don't know your shit.
>>2313804
Why do they have animal heads and feet, but human anatomy?
What is the best software to draw lewds? How do you best get that gentle smooth rendering ? I feel like photoshop is not that strong at rendering very neat smooth stuff like juicy thick thighs etc.
How to get followers on furaffinity? I'll post stuff but only get few followers
>>2313898
Photoshop is completely fine for it.
If you don't like the default brushes you can mess around with them or get new ones.
PS has an incredibly in-depth brush engine, you can pretty much get whatever sort of effect you want with them.
For example wanting to paint those smooth soft thighs. You could just get the default round soft brush that's bound to pressure, and lower the flow to something low like 5%-35%, depending on preference and paint in the area, using lasso selection or clipping masks to retain the edges and not have the soft brush spilling out everywhere else besides the intended spot.
>>2313916
Try not sucking
>>2313916
Get good, focus on improvement and success will only follow then.
>>2313916
fetishes
i did an iflated lizard thing but wasnt even fetish driven, the little thing inflated naturally to float and transport itself through the atmosphere
u kno, exobiology
next thing i see is a guy who is into inflation fetish faved the thing and watched me
i literally had just started with less than 10 pics posted
fetish is love fetish is life
>>2313612
>You have a strange definition of chubby.
i know right?
>>2313916
Go to Weasyl, look at the popular submissions, take mental note of the kind of stuff that shows up there, pick the subjects and fetishes/genre that appeal most to you and go with that. Take mental note of the artists that consistently show up on the popular submissions page and copy what they do.
If you want the easiest answer: Hyper genitalia/boobs/futas and fat gfur stuff
>>2313410
Is that an Asura from Guild Wars?
>>2313484
No I agree with this guy, her skin does look to brilliant, like she was covered in a thin layer of oil, but its not a huge deal, just try to blend your tones a little more
>>2313843
Are you that behind on The Furfag Train?
>>2314063
yes.
>>2314063
Yes, I don't know who made it OP though.
Normally i can't draw for shit without a ref but this seemed to turn out ok. Just some random chick from imagination...spent about an hour coloring it after scan.
>>2314352
things tit-down seem a bit weird
but face is dang fine son
>>2314352
just learn to draw ears m8 dont you wing it
Arms look kinda off but I can't really see if it's wrong or should I fix anything, what do you guys think?
Anyone here knows who to animate boobs? Im having a hard time with that
>>2314425
You try using references
>>2314358
if you like horse faces without a skull.
>>2312326
The anatomy is off at many places, my redraw is not perfect by any means but should give an idea for improvement. Do anatomy studies and use references for poses.
The perspective of your nipples are off and look like if ya'd invert the fingers of rubber gloves half way.
Also don't draw single hairs on the balls, it looks bad. Either solve that through shading, indicate through contour or draw them all like that nerd inCase.
Ya, arms are off, in that pose ya'd see the elbows more frontally.
The pose looks stiff, try curving it more.
Learn the difference between how ribs and serratus anterior muscles look like on a torso because one makes a body look weak and the other buff.
>>2314642
that fucking pose though, one foot front one foot left gives me cancer.
>>2314666
Because you fap to /d/ at night and you came across a futa with a similar pose if not the very same exact pose and the faggot copied it off of it.
I was so stoked to be commissioned this I added the side panel for free
I wish people would commission me more cool xeno shit and less colorful fursonos
>>2314726
reminds me of this guy
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51456955
>>2314726
How do you get that filename?
>>2314642
You should really reconsider doing these redlines. Even though you fix some things, you are showing lack in understanding perspective and anatomy, and some of the stuff you try to correct turns out wrong. You are helping but at the same time you are giving bad advice to this anon.
>>2314726
>This exists
Anon I...
Any feedback on this?
>>2314726
How much do you charge for something like that?
>>2314726
ily gabe
>>2313804
fix the left eye on the guy on the right. otherwise hot as fuck, blog?
>>2314726
Gross....
I am trying to draw females but a friend of mine tells me I'm drawing guys with tits. Any advices?
>>2314726
sometimes this place is worse than /d/ and /b/ combined.
>>2314795
you are drawing shit with shit tits
>>2314795
learn proportions nigga
>>2314726
is that lord Cthulhu?
>>2314795
Study some anatomy and learn what makes a female figure different. Usually females have wide hips. You'll gain more knowledge by studying anatomy books.
>>2314726
That's fucking rad man.
>>2314795
Your friend is very kind since the term he should have used is shit.
Would love criticism.
>>2314743
not him but i think he is rock bottom that ill tolerate .
>>2314885
shading seems a bit off if you ask me
just a little bit
>>2314741
Yeah, I'm aware that I'm pretty bad. That's why I hang around here. I did the red lines to figure out things for my self too. Guess, they aren't a good way to practice. Welp, gotta try something else then :)
how do i make my art more dynamic? like, i keep losing the movement when i do the line art, even when i try and keep it sketchy
>>2314885
stop trying to whore yourself out this is an anonymous board and you watermark your fucking WIP fuck off.
>>2315076
exaggerate gesture before building figgers, study some composition too
>>2315076
>keep it sketchy
NO BAD
remove that especially if you want your art to be more dynamic, try playing around with new perspectives
>>2315082
lel
Is there some good way of drawing autofellatio without using a hyper dick or breaking a spine?
>>2315246
probably not as its kinda impossible IRL
>>2315260
Yeah I just looked at a thread full of it on /d/ and I'm really not sold on it. All the ones without a hyper dick have the person so folded you either can't tell what you're looking at or they look like they have no torso. There was one pose that kind of appealed to me so I guess I'll just have to use that and make the dick bigger.
>>2315260
I could get half into my mouth at 13. I was Like a foot shorter then with a fully grown cock, so... Yeah. Doable.
>>2315323
damn you and your luck
Armpit guy is back in need of guiding again..
>>2314726
that is really fucking kick ass
seriously, nice job!
fave parts are the skin at the base of the cock, and the patterns on the top of the head
some loli
ye
>>2314885
Fundamentals, figure drawing.
>>2314726
name
>>2315437
>lined paper
>green highlighter
>ballpoint pen
>yellow sticky patch
do you even tools?
>>2315402
The lats inserts into the arm between the triceps and the biceps. Your picture looks like the lats connect to the arm behind the triceps (I don't know if I am using the right english word for biceps and triceps .. sorry if it's not clear)
Very nice right hand by the way. The right forearm looks a little short, but I can be tricked by the foreshortening.
>>2314726
bravo!
Can people recommend some good anatomy tutorials/books/videos?
>>2315484
hey man i mean it looks like he's making pretty good use of what he has
how do i tag a post thats a reply to anon ask. Its a reply with picture. I cant see the place to put tags in.
Finished, over did the paint process tho.
Some sketches.
Any recurring errors?
>>2315842
That's pretty good, hands could be a bit more feminine/elegant I guess. And those eyebrows look really weird
>>2315786
This feature is only supported by units running Windows 95.
>>2315879
It's just an inside joke. When I was streaming this, someone said that SAI has a better color mixing engine than Manga Studio, so I drew that. I'm joking of course. SAI is awesome, I just came to like Manga Studio better because of it's brushes customization and tools for comics. Plus SAI doesn't work for me for some reason. Probably because either Win10 or Cintiq or both, a lot of people have the same problem.
>>2315884
you are the epitome of shit taste.
>>2315890
Manga Studio is better. Get over it.
>>2315484
Are you implying those aren't tools? His art still looks legit. The best tools in the world won't save you when you draw like shit.
>>2315890
Since when taste is relevant to this board?
>>2315890
>being this obtuse
get out of here, you fucking cancer
>>2315929
the way you make flesh interact with itself is kinda weird to me
the boobs look kinda deformed and the dick entering the futa seems too big, as if her hole was thanksgiving turkey wide, too wide for how together her butt cheeks seem to be
but thats just my opinion
>>2315929
hahaha, omg, my sides are cracking. dat leg anatomy. oh jesus. hahaha.
Does anything look broken?
>>2316050
No
I really liked it, nice lines, link me ur blog
>>2316050
Ankles and feet are broken so thoroughly I can't even see them.
>>2314760
f*chur?
Wait I changed some stuff, does it still look ok?
>>2316058
Thanks anon. Please forgive me not sharing a link just now, I just need advice. You're not missing out on anything much though, there's a huge gap between now and the last time I updated, and the style of my drawings has changed I think kind of a lot, especially in the lineart. Not that I'm saying this is clean but what's there is definitely not this clean.
>>2316060
I ran out of room because I drew too close to this other thing. Maybe I should put them in though?
>>2316083
could you maybe post something without dicks?
>>2316083
>Please forgive me not sharing a link just now
No problem, keep up woth the good work
>>2316087
I don't want to spam, I'm just posting stuff I want people to check and help me with. I posted something dickless last thread though.
>>2316092
Thanks for understanding anon. I think I need to move her ear back a little. I still feel like maybe some stuff is off but as long as it's not super immediately broken looking, that might just have to do for this one. If you notice anything really off please let me know.
>>2316087
could you maybe stop being a requesting poorfag?
>>2315842
bbc is slowly leaving his old style behind..they grow so fast~
>>2316128
Thank god, the lips were awful
>>2316128
it looks terrible compared to before desu
stick to the american style
>>2316104
Very helpful critique. Keep it up anon.
>>2316158
Another very explanatory and useful critique. Guys, you are totally rockin' it.
>>2316161
>>2316166
Such an exquisite post, anonymous. What will we ever do without your contributions to channel 4's artwork and critique board?
>>2316173
>so angry
all my sides haha
Guys how hard is it to reach a point at which you get one comission per day?
So I'm trying to figure out wether porn is financially worth pursuing. There clearly is 'some' money to be made there, I think there's no need to argue about that. And assuming you are skilled and can charge 100$ per comission, and are fast and skilled enough to crank one out in 3-4 hours, the only really limiting factor of course will be how many comissions you get. One per day would allow you to live ... quite well actually.
Is it hard to farm a level of popularity so high that you reliably get aroud 20 comissions per month ?
>>2316199
you might get one commission a day, but whether you can deliver one a day is really up to how skilled and how determined you are to work very very hard.
Dont expect to live off commissions, theres a reason why so many faggot artists are begging to be paid to exist on patreon, because its easier than having to work to get your money.
>>2315260
I could do it just fine like a few months ago and I'm a fully grown, not that flexible adult with an average cock.
>>2316204
Well I make 10$ an hour at my day job. That's an 8 hour shift to make 80$. I charge around that for a comission, which takes me 2-3 hours max. I know time wise I could easily deliver. But atm I get maybe 3-5 comissions a month ; (
>>2316218
Git gud -> build a fanbase -> get more commissions.
Yeah, it's that easy.
>>2316218
Do a lot of work for draw threads, if you are decent at drawing, people will know about you and you'll get more commissions.
Lots of prominent figures started participating in draw threads. I know doing drawings for free might sound like a waste, but in the long run it builds a solid fan base.
I'm not all that good and i have almost 1k followers on my pixiv just from participating in draw threads and getting name exposure that way.
Inking this tonight, sketched it this morning.
I wanna try painting digitally again, might do that with this
>>2315842
Head looks too big and she's a bit too stocky for my taste.
Otherwise, I'd say this is a step up from your usual stuff, which I generally don't like. Has more personality too.
>>2314352
>>2314358
>>2314389
>>2314464
Went over it again and added more volume to the top of the skull. Redid the ear, ribs, and nose just a bit. As for having a horse face...maybe but i'm not wanting to get into drawing sameface animu chicks with < noses.
>>2313498
you mind uploading the rest of the brush pack?
>>2316071
If that a name, it's a nope, I'm Drawer from drawersden.
>>2316354
Any head in particular, or all of them?
Maybe it's the neck being too thin again?
i feel like i hit a follower wall. I used to get a lot. now i bearely get any.
>>2316507
How many before and how many now?
>>2316539
1-3 now
50-70 before
per image.
nobody watches me stream either. maybe one or two guys.
>>2316548
get better?
>>2316548
you used to get 50-70 followers per image?? wtf that is insanely much.
>>2316562
>>2316548
Try to pander to a larger audience. Business101
>>2316569
how do i sell furry commissions
>>2316548
Per image? What kind of numbering is this?
I know followers increase if you post artwork, but how can you determine accurately how many of them started following you based on a certain post?
How many followers do you have?
>>2316575
you have two options
option one
1. have mediocre or bad art
2. promote like crazy in relevant places (fur affinity, so furry, hentai foundry, tumblr, 4chan and other relevant boards, etc.)
3. get commissions
option two
1. have good art
2. promote a little less in relevant places
3. get tons of commissions
>>2316584
theres thing called activity on tumblr.
1k.
>>2316574
why are you bitching about attention for your nonporn art in a porn thread? do you have any h to show?
>>2316589
>being this new.
>>2316589
sorry anon but you just got memed.
>>2316589
>why are you bitching about attention for your nonporn art in a porn thread? do you have any h to show?
>>2316588
Yeah, which doesn't tell you exactly how many followers a certain pic brings you. You can only approximate.
It's strange that your following fluctuates so much. Maybe the quality of your art is inconsistent.
>>2316610
its realy easy to approximate when you stop getting followers then post image and see after few days how many new followers.
>>2316628
>when you stop getting followers
Didn't think about that. I guess it's easy to figure it out in your case, yeah. My bad.
Need some help wit this, I know there's something wrong about it, specially perspective but can't put my finger on it, any help?
>>2316658
do you want to break my neck ?
>>2316658
stop using your free officesupplies to draw porn
>>2315964
can i get a redline tho?
>>2316588
This makes no sense. If you were getting 60-80 followers per post, then you'd be at 1k followers after just over a dozen posts, which means you just barely started, and you're already lamenting that you've hit some kind of plateau? It also makes no sense that you wouldn't shill your art and blog link when someone asked if you were really that thirsty to be raking in followers. You're clearly just having a giggle.
>>2316724
god damn im trying to but i dont even know where to start with this
>>2316746
ehhh
>>2316744
well when i started i didnt get any followers. I improved a bit over months and then started getting more per image. But now its back at getting none.
>>2316724
Giving you a redline is a waste of time. Your fundamentals are non existent. There is no way you'll learn anything from a redline. You'll just have to make a step back and learn your basics anon. Sorry.
>>2316767
clearly you are not promoting yourself well enough.
or you are drawing subjects that are less popular now than they were before.
hows this looking?
>>2316826
gay as fuck, good job.
>>2316827
could i get a redline on the gay part? i dont think i see it
>>2316829
I bet you're a pervert who gets off on molesting red line artists by forcing them to draw on top of your furry anuses
>>2316104
but why would you think that in a thread mostly comprised (contribution wise) of people trying to learn to draw purely for the sake of their personal fetishes that any of them would care about anyone's tastes other than their own tho
>>2316548
could be your timezone/date choices, streaming when most of your followers at work/sleeping
also people tend to only really go into streams if they're interested in sneak peaks/pulling back the curtain on your process/want the chance to talk to you in reAL TIMe
do you do commission? offer commission streams, that tends to bring in more if you want company while streaming
>>2316548
how many are actual people and not just bots?
how many actually interact with your content (favs/reblogs)?
if you switch up your subject/fetish a lot, you could just be posting work that doesn't really appeal to your current follower base
also remember that the site wide search on tumblr only counts the first five tags on a post, so make them count (but also avoid being too blasé, lest you get buried in the major tags (or worse, spammed with bots that inflate your follower number and distort your view of people's interest, hence why i'd say pay more attention to likes and reblogs in tandem with follows))
>>2316575
find your niche within the community
>>2316352
I like it. Not qualified to offer a critique, but it looks good to me.
>>2316826
The perspective is cool but I think you messed up the arm a bit it seems a bit small especially around the shoulder
Developing this hackneyed style of coloring with the spray brush/soft eraser because I can't paint for shit.
General critiques would be nice.
>>2316452
>What's wrong with it?
You probably just ruined Bob's Burgers for him, that's what.
>>2314795
Late response, but the shoulders are too wide for females.
Guys, someone is commissioning me to draw porn of someone they know irl. Wat do.
>>2317108
i think the head is maybe a little big for the body, but that could just be the style youre goin for... i get what youre saying about coloring, but i think you could use harder shadows under the breasts and the chin. also, put some thin inks around that nipple piercing.
otherwise, i like this character. are you making her for anything in particular, or just a sketch?
>>2317186
assuming the subject doesnt know... i wouldnt. using someone you know as reference for h for yourself is ok, but someone else paying you money to do it for them is like that one episode of DS9...
>>2317008
thx anon.
heres an update.
>>2317186
tell them you're not comfortable doing that (i'm presuming you are, or else you wouldn't be asking for help here?)
>>2317236
yeah her head is a bit too big, didn't notice before coloring.
Harder shadows is a petty good idea, ill put a few in next time.
She's a character from the game Life Is Strange. just fan art.
>>2314642
ignore faggots trying to discourage your redlines. They're not limited to masters, and the idiots that think like that also refuse to believe that you can learn from people at every skill level. In fact, learning from someone a little better then you can be the best, since they don't overwhelm you with suggestions but help nudge you in the right way.
These are very good nudges. It's very helpful to see how another artist see and draws what you're trying to draw. Keep it up. You didn't redline my shit, but thanks for doing it.
Some lesbians for a change.
>>2317301
sucks
>>2317301
i think its awesome. clean it up and lets see it
>>2317301
nice perspective
>>2317302
haha jelly anon ftw
>>2315402
Something is bugging me as I shade this. I feel like something is off about the proportion in conjunction with the perspective but I cant pinpoint what.
>>2317082
thanks for the input, i'll work on it.
>>2317371
I really really like this artwork. That's why I think it deserves some attention anon. I hope the redline is enough self explanatory.
Just a thing. The rotation of the head and face is optional, just to show you a more dynamic and interesting pose. The way you positioned it is totally fine, even though there are some perspective issues there.
I rotated her hand too because usually we dry our sweat with the back of our palm and this way it reads better what you were trying to convey (maybe I got it wrong and she's just covering her face from the sun, not sure). Anyway, both those elements are a nitpicky thing.
>>2317406
I like your redline except for one thing, I think the fingers were already posed correctly in the original....your redlined fingers look like a toy soldier with a flat grasp on their trumpet.
Nice work on the left arm by the way, the shoulder in the original was looking really odd.
>>2317410
Then you're wrong. Her fingers make it look like her entire arm is at a wrong angle, like she's lifting it straight up, then having it bent forward along the side of her head.
>>2317371
>>2317406
Hand looks like a nigger's. Delicious body otherwise.
mistakes ?
>>2317654
as an illustration this passes, anything els would be nitpicking. There are anatomical errors and proportion errors, but none that actually matter for anyone to give a shit.
>>2317659
gib nitpicks.
gib opinions
gib what dosent appeal to you (most important)
gib tips
its still in sketch phase.
>>2316352
>fat girl looking at you
>random dick next to it
>>2316826
adding an accurate right arm would be a start.
>>2317654
The style of the lineart and the proportions are very appealing. However I think this needs to be spiced up a bit, because right now it's just too boring. Probably a more dynamic pov (higher or lower than it is now) and a more suggestive expression (either more seductive or more lustful) would make the trick I can do a quick "redline" to show you what I mean, if you want.
>>2317686
she will have a mouth full of cum. Yes I agree the pov and composition is boring but im making it as practice thing.
to change the pov would be to make a new drawing from scratch. you can make some blue line tips for me if you feel like it tho.
>>2315790
You take requests bro, or got an email?
Poke-porn, any crits are welcome!
>>2317699
[email protected]
I don't take requests tho, sorry.
>>2317690
Some tips that might help you.
The two exagerated povs are pretty shitty, so try to overlook the anatomy. Just wanted to give you an example..
>>2317796
this is great thanks bbc. No they are not shitty. Can I use those as hard reference ?
>>2317796
I'd run backwards through a field of glass-shards and dicks to get BBC's inks jesus chrust
>>2317796
work on your anatomy before redlining, your torso and pelvis dont make sense.
>>2317818
>>2317788
Quite alright
I hope i can see you in a drawthread
>>2317804
>Can I use those as hard reference?
Of course.
>>2317818
I have some issues with the torso-pelvis connection when it comes to foreshortening. Especially when the body is bent/contorted like here.
I'd love to get a redline of my redline if it's possible. Thanks.
Pointers/critique please
More porn.
Tear me apart.
>>2317945
that fucked up arm
I drew a penis...
I've never really drawn cumshots before so I just want an opinion on which looks better here, or what I should do to draw it better in general.
>>2317945
I like this, I wish she had more nose though.
>>2317951
I know it's flaccid or chub but I wish that dick was a little more shapely.
>>2317951
Is that Chowder?
Still a sketch, just trying to get some crits before I ink this
>>2318003
>>2317951
Your pornography intrigues me and I would like to subscribe to your newsletter.
>>2317975
Could someone just tell me whether to keep the bottom or top please, I'm about to cross the point where I can't change it back if I want to move forward.
>>2318030
The top is the best one of them.
The lower makes the cum look like water, based on how it splits like a fountain.
>>2317972
everybody has drawn a penis, stop feeling special
>>2318032
I had a feeling it looked more like water. Okay, I need to try to make it more like strings or streams from now on. Thanks anon.
>>2318030
I like the bottom
>>2318024
I dont really have a tumblr and I don't post frequently enough to keep any followers satisfied. Its just better this way guess to just post randomly on 4chan.
>>2318038
Never wrote that it was special, just that I drew it.
>>2318004
wtf how can you simultaneously be so good and bad? How are you cheating?
>>2317818
fuck off seriously hes WAY above the level where you need to be to redline
>>2318039
Eh, even though I like the bottom one too for drafting reasons, I agree with the other anon that it looks like water and I don't want that. Even though I don't think the top looks all that great, I still think it reads better as cum, and really I just wanted confirmation of why so I wouldn't make that mistake next time.
>>2318051
It usually takes me a bunch of tries to get anything right, that's my second try on the full body shot I'll give it another go.
it's pony time
>>2318093
You sold out?
>>2318112
betraying all that integrity you get for drawing porn of other licensed properties
>>2318093
what's wiggin me out is that one of them is a horse and the other is a humanization, some bioshock infinite shit goin on here
also the inner thigh muscles are connect right to the pubic bone too low, also don't put a contour line on the bottom of that connection on legs this chubby, just imply the indentation with some shading
>>2318052
No, hes not. go study loomis
>>2318131
>are connect right to the pubic bone too low
are connecting too the pubic bone too low
>>2318132
Yes, he is. show your work
>>2318136
>interracial cuck porn
>once you see me doing that, I'll have lost my soul
uuuu shots fired
poor bbc
>>2318139
I didn't mean it as an insult to bbc.
It's just something that makes me personally uncomfortable.
>>2318140
dang, i was hoping for a catfight
>>2318093
faggot
>>2318143
Go back to bed, Anon.
>>2314726
>>2314726
Fuck, dude.
I mean... this is good art, but come on. Just, why?
>>2318136
>Cheating is ok
>Interracial cheating triggers me
You make no sense. But that's typical for women.
>>2318193
You gotta draw the line somewhere.
>>2318093
What the fuck is going on with that anatomy on Fluttershy? This is a pretty shit piece Kep, just being honest.
>>2318213
I'm sorry senpai
>>2318210
I'm sure other tumblrinas feel the same way.
>>2313410
Just an update so far. When do you guys consider scraping something entirely? I had the urge to at least try to make this better
SU porn anyone?
>>2317749
lmao this shit is prob the best thing in the thread besides BBC-chan's red lines
Hey guys, I delivered all those requests. I just wanted to say thanks for your help spotting problems with them and stuff. The requester of this one seems to have really loved it. So thanks!
>>2318136
kepp is a good girl.
>>2318215
Stop being a slacker you filthy hambeast.
>>2318346
That looks great, so I can see why he would be pleased!
>>2318346
Looks great. Love the eyes.
>>2318346
breasts defy gravity
>>2318532
Appeal >>> absolute realism.
That's why "fine artsy" faggots will never be good at drawing porn.
>>2318586
drawn breasts are so much more appealing when they look like they have weight, i.e. obey gravity.
>>2318591
Those breasts look totally perky and natural. Even thought they should sag just a little more, they are perfectly fine already like they look atm. What anon pointed out is total nitpicking.
>>2318210
Wait, so you have no problems with cheating? People might say that scat is where you draw the line, not race. Are you racist or something?
>>2318598
Agreed, if anything they should be positioned less apart. The lack of sagging isn't na issue here imo.
I wish these threads were faster..
>>2318605
This foreshortening is pretty bad man. Try drawing a quick frontal stickman in the same pose, and then stretch it into that perspective with the deform tool. You'll see what I mean.
>>2318610
True, thanks for the stickfigure tip, I'll use that next time I'm struggling with difficult poses.
whips out dick
>>2318660
>whips out dick
You use cum for erasing anatomy errors?
>>2318478
>>2318529
Thanks anons, I appreciate it.
>>2318532
The way I was looking at it, I felt like gravity would be pulling her boobs up and out with her being rolled back like that, and she's a pretty small cup which tend to be stiffer so I thought they wouldn't flatten out much, but I admit I didn't think all that far into it. I'll keep an eye on that kind of thing for the future though.
>>2318680
is that not how it works
>>2318422
yes massa
>>2318600
Well I have drawn scat and guro commissions before.
of course I don't like cheating. I'm not into any of that other stuff either.
I just don't like the implication of NTR shit. Makes me uncomfortable drawing it. Scat and gore have shock value, but that's about it. NTR hurts your soul.
>>2318881
>NTR hurts your soul.
Haha, that's exactly how I felt while I was drawing the latest comic.
All the feels while you draw a cute looking girl that is nothing but a cheating scumbag. Pic related.
>>2319071
I might be wring, but should't the opening of the vagina be a bit further down? Don't think the tongue would be strong enough to push it up that much.
>>2319093
Probably you are right. Didn't even pay attention to that.
>>2319070
and now bbc is mindbroken and loves to be cucked.
>>2318346
This is really nice!
Great work!
>>2319145
Not gonna happen, sry.
>>2318881
>NTR hurts your soul.
Maybe if you're autistic and can't separate reality from fiction.
>>2319315
You have to be a good artist to understand that.
>>2319317
>implying Kep is a good artist.
I question your standards.
gabe why didnt you post your is finished cthulhu hi-res yet
>>2319388
>am i getting may mayed ?
yes
>those redraws are good
I know right
>whats with other annons bitching
saltybutthurt and jelly sandwiches
>>2319388
>am i getting may mayed ?
Yes. That's all the porn thread is. This is the most worthless thread on /ic/. Worse than stylization general.
>>2319412
>Worse than stylization general
I don't know anon, I just went and looked at it and it's practically in flames right now. At least this one's having a moment of calm.
>>2319435
>in flames
This thread is already a pile of ash.
>>2319438
Bleak.
>>2319324
I'll prove you wrong
>>2319388
The main problem with those redlines is that they don't address the main problem of your illustration, which is the stiff pose. Also, fixing some slight anatomy errors adding other errors is counter productive, especially if you are trying to "help" a noob that won't be able to filter them out. If you want to see what a good redline is look at bbc chan's in this thread.
>>2319472
Anatomical correctness is still valuable. It's not counter productive. The shitposts in these porn threads that offer no solutions at all (aka the shitposts you're defending) are counter productive. Now shut up and draw faggot.
>>2319484
Good critique is what is valuable. Not really sure how am I defending shitposts with my commentary. All I am trying to say is that anon didn't address the main problem of the illustration he was trying to redline, which is the stiff pose. A fucking stickman in a better pose would have been more beneficial, than those redlines where he tries to correct small chunks of anatomy.
Again, those redlines have close to zero value.
>>2319491
You're trying to detract from the fact that anatomical correctness is valuable. There were multiple issues with the original works, the pose was 1 element, that redline addressed the anatomical problems, which were another issue. You're trying to detract from that as if that wasn't an issue at all. Fact is it was. Get over it. That redline was more helpful than the dumb shit these threads consist of on a constant basis and you trying to denounce that makes you a part of the problem.
>>2319492
You are totally delusional. Seriously. I said that
1. the redline didn't address the main issue of the stiff pose (which would be MORE veluable than the sole fixing of anatomy)
2. while it fixed some anatomy errors, IT CREATED NEW ONES, which is COUNTERPRODUCTIVE.
I am not saying fixing some anatomy isn't valuable or less valuable that not giving a valid critique. I am saying the two points I mentioned above make the redline closely valuable to zero.
I capsized the parts you seem to be having problems with.
Seriously, can you even fucking read?
>>2319507
>created new ones
This is why you're full of shit. The red lines did nothing but fix errors. For you to say it created NEW ones is to imply those issues weren't already there in the original works, when they were. Those redlines were ONLY an improvement even with the flaws and the lack of mentioning gesture. Now seriously, shut the fuck up and draw, you clearly have no fucking clue what you're talking about. Your input is far more worthless than those red lines, specially since you clearly aren't capable of demonstrating any corrections of your own. People like you are the reason /ic/ isn't good for a damn thing but the resource threads. Fuck off and ride BBC-chan's dick some more, faggot..
>>2319510
>the red lines did nothing but fix errors
Hahahaha. Ok, I see why you are so mad. You can't even see the errors he did. Keep on riding your own clueless dick anon.
>Sees more pointless bickering about redlines than porn.
Get back to drawing and shut up.
>>2318093
posted a pony drawing once..and got banned, nice to know how yah feel mods...
>>2319726
it probably sucked, faggot
>>2318660
I like it but I'd tone down the detailing. Shit's got so many lines it may as well be by Rob Liefield.
>>2319976
>>2319977
>>2319519
>lacking reading comprehension this badly
The anatomical issues present that the redline didn't fix were in the original works already, you claimed they were new. No one's mad, you're just an idiot. Shut up and draw.
>>2320037
thanks, i figured it'd make sense to give her a bit of muscle
>>2320039
Do studies on musclegirls, especially the muscles of the back which I particularly like. Its also one of those things where if you fuck up it stands out way more than subtle proportional quibbles. Your first picture's pussy seems a tad high.
What's the characterization behind these subjects? I recall you having thought out mythologies for your works.
>>2320041
i felt the pussy might've been a bit high, but i wasn't certain, and they're a trio of mercenary monster hunters, she's a mage and the brown guy is a fire elementalist while the white guy is an air elementalist
>>2320045
Neat. Not sure how much stuff i'm not seeing but I'd say get in the habit of drawing and redrawing characters to really nail them down.
Also, its entirely style based but maybe experiment with drawing lips with thickness sometime to add some verity to your features. Lips can add a lot of verity to characters. Though maybe not to BBC's level, who while fine, reaaaaaaaaaly likes lips.
Also I felt like I said this last time but your style reminds me of Kohta Hirano.
>>2320054
i remember someone saying that, which kinda fits as he was one of my earliest influences.
i always try to add lips, but man do they always look silly when i draw them...
>>2314648
Couldn't thank you earlier but your redline helped so thanks, hope it looks better now.
>>2320267
Did I do anime right?
>>2320293
the head shape is a bit wonky, but that's an easy thing to clean up
>>2320299
the hair is messy or the actual shape of the head is off
>>2320303
it looks like the top right quadrant is bulging out, it could be taken care of real simply
>>2320267
what, you don't like interracial?
Alright will someone be willing to be drawing buddies? honestly I just need someone who can help me with suggestions on what to draw, what I should work on. Anything really, you don't even have to be an artist. Here's a recent doodle I did for a thread. It's pretty rough but its an ok example of my work. I just need someone to contact over email or deviantart to chat with about my artwork bc I'm lost rn in terms of creativity.
>>2320450
do you have a skype? I need someone who can look over my draws and give me feedback or a double-check on it. I can't use /ic/ all the time because it moves too slow and I don't like using my friends because I can't show them the... weirder things
if you dont have skype imma just say the one thing you need right now is proportions and anatomy, nigga
>>2320450
btw if you do have skype, add me and stuff: teais.delicious
Is pose sexy? Where can I get more poses for lewd draws?
>>2320592
when will you samefag idiots realize this doesn't prove anything lol.
>>2320605
I post in both
>>2320622
Please, consider posting only in the beginners one, thanks.
>>2320627
just thought maybe the porn thread would know more about porn. Obvious reasons are obvious.
Speaking of which, porn refs?
>>2320633
Look, you are on /ic/. Here people actually care about art. If you want to improve art-wise, then stop trying to draw porn even before you learn ANY fundamentals about drawing. If you don't care about being good, please stop wasting our time. Thanks.
>>2320641
Just because you know the fundamentals doesn't mean you'll be good or even use them. I want to draw porn and I want to get better.
So why not help me out. So I use them all and use them well.
Ps there are six fundamentals and this has half of them. Which ones I wonder.
>>2320659
>>2320659
>those tits are bigger than my head
>I have no spinal cord 1
>I have no spinal cord 2
>oh god my neck snapped somebody please help me
Are these... fundamentals?
>>2320659
you are either a troll, too young to be posting here, or a fucking troglodyte. either way you are not wanted so please get off of my internet. and since you're at it, why don't you also kill yourself.
>>2320641
>stop wasting our time
As if you niggers even provide worthwhile input.
>>2319070
stop making every chick you draw bite down on her lip
>>2320557
lol, not actually smaefag
>>2320197
Looks really good. Crotch sticks out a bit too much though. Or at least, it looks more like a dick bulge currently.
Is it meant to be a dick bulge? I should probably have asked that first.