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Nudist beach ni sh?gakuryok? de!!

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Nudist beach ni sh?gakuryok? de!!
by Shiwasu no Okina

Old thread almost full:
>>3786874

DL link of the (temporary) first chapter:
https://www.sendspace.com/file/zyxyv5

Chapter 1: http://pastebin.com/MZy3ZN5X
Chapter 2: http://pastebin.com/c4Zka4aA

Let's continue the revising of the second chapter.

>>3788925
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>>3788949
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>>3788952
I noticed that it's supposed to be "Naotatsu Nagato" and "Taniguchi Akiho" if we're going with Eastern order.
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>>3788955
>>3788957

No, it's Nagato Naotatsu even in the raws, I think is just his first name. Regarding Akiho, yeah, I got the order wrong.

>Box in the middle panel, another "Natotatsu".
I just pasted it from the script, I didn't checked lol.
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>>3788967
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>>3788968
>>3787089

Ok, page 41 remains like it was.
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>>3788969

Later I'll do the version with the english words in a different words.
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>>3788970

And that's the last one.
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Here's the credits if you want. I listed all the major players I can think of.

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Credits

A translation effort by /h/.

French Anon - Translating French version to English
Typesetter !ozOtJW9BFA - Typesetting
Translator - Crosschecking Japanese raws for accuracy
Other guy !amNjNJWXH2 - QC, writing
Editor guy !H1r0WMOI1c - QC, writing

-----------------------

I also have a lel-worthy crop to go with it.
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>>3788730
TL note needs a period

The page at >>3788902 is all right but can you use this? Another version of >>3788842 where I moved all of the But!! so it's straight.

Now I trimmed a little of the B because it looked a little bumpy last time. Also left the variable word spaces blank.
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>>3788974
You should be listed before me.
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>>3788973

Ok, that was the last one.
Can you please check the chapters a second time? Just to be sure.

Also, about page 02-03 and 25, should I add the romaji and/or it's translation?
I think it would be something like "Class trip to the nudist beach!" but for this I think it's better to wait for Translator opinion.

>>3788974

Ok, should I just make a clean page with the credits and the image?

>>3788976

Ok, just a minute.
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>>3788976
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>>3788974
Can you put this in too? It's the same height.
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>>3788981
>Ok, should I just make a clean page with the credits and the image?
Yeah, a blank page with the pic and text is good enough. I know some bigshot scanlators have fancy templates, but really we're just a bunch of dudes on an imageboard.
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>>3788983
It can be the ch 2 credits. Not sure how sadpanda handles multiple credit pages though.
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>>3788983
more readable text I hope
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>>3788985
I dunno, but I can put the two of them in the same page.
By the way, will you upload it in an DL site when we finish?
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Something like this for the credits:

Credits

pic


Mango title + chapter

A translation effort by /h/.

LOTS OF DUDES
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>>3788986
>>3788985
smaller one

I see galleries being updated with a single one once more chapters are added. Maybe we can have individual and combined credit pages.
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>>3788987
Yeah, I'll upload to Sendspace like last time. Normal version where the sensei has a consistent font. If you're going to use one credits page, I'll bundle both chapters together for convenience. Someone else can upload to sadpanda.
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When the other chapters come out I'll try my best to help out again, same name/trip

Checking the rest.
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Credits

A translation effort by /h/.

French Anon - Translating French version to English
Typesetter !fY1fA2g/5g - Typesetting
Translator - Crosschecking Japanese raws for accuracy
Editor guy !H1r0WMOI1c - QC, writing
Other guy !ITXIu5fxfA - QC, writing

Updated with current trips.
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>>3788981

>Also, about page 02-03 and 25, should I add the romaji and/or it's translation?
>I think it would be something like "Class trip to the nudist beach!" but for this I think it's better to wait for Translator opinion.

That's the title but I don't think you need to redraw so large and intricate artwork. Put the translation text somewhere.

Class trip or school trip.
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>>3788995
What about this?
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>>3788993
>When the other chapters come out I'll try my best to help out again, same name/trip

Yeah, count me in too. Let's hope it'll be out soon.

>>3788999
> hat's the title but I don't think you need to redraw so large and intricate artwork.

Of course, it would need too much time, in fact I wrote only "add the romanji", not to redo everything ahaha
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>>3789001

Forgot to add chapter.
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Listing the current final versions (I think), please check

>>3788378 - p 1
>>3788153 - p 2
>>3787757 - p 3
>>3788158 - pp 2-3 stitch and redrawing by Typesetter
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>>3789009
No worries, I downloaded the most current versions of each image (ex. >>3788578 is final ver. of p. 3). Just waiting on any more corrections before the upload.
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>>3788981
>I think it would be something like "Class trip to the nudist beach!" but for this I think it's better to wait for Translator opinion

.Yes, that would be my translation too for the title.
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>>3789015
Ok here you are.
Ok, I'll add it to the title pages.

By the way, what about the credits? Do you want to write something else?
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Also there's a good chance chapter 3 will be available in the next issue of Comic AUN, which will be out Japan in exactly one weed.
Unfortunately there's also a good chance we will have to wait several weeks for the scans to appear. But I'm on board to continue translating!
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>>3789016
By the way, what about the credits? Do you want to write something else?

Nah, I'm fine with how they are now. Good job on the chapters, once again
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>>3789010
>>3789016
The final concern for me is using >>3788976 or >>3788902 for p. 22, both with Engrish versions

The Engrish version should probably have

"TL note: Spoken in English. Other such words are written in this font"

after the first one.

>>3789016
You want to upload this to sadpanda?

>>3789017
Yes! Thank you! Are we all on board?
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>>3789019
Wait I guess I can try to put half and half of >>3788976 and >>3788902 together myself. If Typesetter doesn't do it, let those be the final p. 22s please.
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>>3789017
Oh! I'm happy to hear this!

>>3789019
> Yes! Thank you! Are we all on board?

Yes I think so, what about Editor guy?

>You want to upload this to sadpanda?

Dunno, I should register and all.
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>>3789021
Lol man wait a bit, I'm going to lunch right now give me the time ahah
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>>3789022
>Yes I think so, what about Editor guy?
I'm on board. I don't browse /h/ as much as I used to, but I'll keep an eye on sadpanda since raw dumps happen quickly there and use the catalog to find the /h/ thread once it drops.
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>>3789023
Okay thanks!

I'm already registered but I feel like I'm hogging the e-fame or something if I upload it.
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It's almost dawn where I am. I'm going to bed. If there's any changes (such as the title translation note or >>3789019 I'll replace the pages and start the upload once I'm up.
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>>3789021
Did you mean something like this?
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>>3789052
Or like this?
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By the way, Shiwasu no Okina usually posts sketches of his current work on this twitter account, and I found a few that are relevant here.
First, Tanaguchi Akiho (to be honest, she looks a little different on this picture but he said that was her)
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Next, Kotegawa Ayame
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>>3789063
>>3789065
Can you please link it?
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>>3789052
>>3789054
Ah thanks.

In the Engrish one though, you missed "normal cock" and Hey! could be as big as Don't Worry!
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And now two sketches that I believe are previews from the third chapter (he posted previews for the two chapters before that), although he didn't say explicitely that was from "Nudist beach".

This one is Kotegawa Ayame once again (because of her hairstyle)
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Last picture is Ueda Keika, I think. Incidentally, these two girls are on the last page of chapter two, so I guess they will join the blonde one in the tent

>>3789066
Here is his twitter account: https://twitter.com/siwasunookina

Unfortunately, these sketches were posted weeks ago so I don't know how to find them quickly, I just downloaded the pictures when I saw them.
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>>3789063
>>3789065
Nice... Well I think it's fine to put these in the zip as bonus materal but I think it's against the rules for the gallery site we're thinking of.

It's a little odd that Akiho is on a first name basis with Naotatsu whlle he isn't with her.
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>>3789074
Well, I think it's more like "everyone" is on a first name basis with him. Or at least, Soumi-sensei and the two guys in page 9 call him Naotatsu too.
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Found one of the sketckes of chapter 2
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>>3789088
Another one
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>>3789070
>>3789054
Now this is super-anal, but the black area between the letters B and U and the balloon bugged me, so I traced around the letters with dark grey

Is it better? >>3789054
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>>3789092
Meant for >>3789054

Now compare >>3789070 to this
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>>3789092
Yeah, it's better, but if I had not read "the black area between the letters B and U and the balloon" I don't think I would have noticed it lol
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>>3789094
Changed one pixel >>3789054 >>3789092
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>>3789094
Changed one pixel >>3789070 >>3789093
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>>3789110
>>3789112

I see but I repeat, I don't think this is worth the time you are puoring in it,

By the way, translated the title.
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>>3789116
I like it. The colored words match the colored romanji?
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When is the next part coming out, you guys figure?
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I really love this thread where the anons are working together to achieve the greater good. Wish I could help but all I can do is say good luck guys!
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>>3789122

Yeah it should be the same color.
I was going to do the title on page 02-03 but I noticed there is something written on japanese over the title. Any idea about what there is written there, Translator?
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>>3789127

See my post here >>3789017

>>3789142
It says "An intense series starts!!"
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>>3789165
Fixing the shadow of "Class trip to".
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>>3789166
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>>3789028
You should definitely upload it. Someone will do it anyway. Best be someone who actually took part in the process.
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Okay, replaced images with the revised ones up to this post. Barring anymore revisions, this is the definitive version. Also included the Twitter sketches in a different folder for those who want them.

https://www.sendspace.com/file/nn4v7c

Version is the one where sensei speaks normally. I'll upload the Engrish sensei version later in the day.
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>>3789178
God that sensai.
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>>3788946
>I worked out so much to get a body like this to calm my sex drive.

The fuck was he eating? I know japs don't have a lot of protein diets, but damn, no gains at all.

Must have been Cardio.
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Ok, uploaded.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/731139/df929b1479/
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Does anyone know if there are high quality RAWs of the first chapter?
I assume they must exist because both chapters (not just the second one) look great in the Chinese translation.
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What the hell, they removed the gallery.
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>>3789265
We're living in a post-Fakkupalypse age.
Just use mediafire or something, I really want that file.
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>>3789223
Fapping for hours must drench energy quite well...

And, as a random anon I should say it's very pleasant to feel myself among such a cooperation. Awkward feelings from manga quite increase the emotion.

But as a worthless fapper I am I can suggest nothing of help except moral support =)

Thank you for this feeling, good gentlemen!
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>>3789266

>>3789217

Here there is the DL link.
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>>3789268
Ah I see now, someone put the tag "lolicon" to the gallery even if there was not a single loli - well, there is Haruko but she is not exactly a loli - so the system deleted the gallery.
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>>3789265
It's probably because there's a loli. You'll need to go to exhentai (I.e. sad panda).
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>>3789272
Is that the only reason this comic would be deleted? All other versions have been deleted of e-hentai.
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>>3789275
Most "disagreeable" tags such as loli or incest takes the gallery off the main site and onto sadpanda.
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>>3789265
http://exhentai.org/g/731139/df929b1479/

It's here man. Just log in to your account, change the url and you should be able to see it.

Great job guys.
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>>3789309
Right now the site is displaying "Service Unavailable" but that happens sometimes, it will pass.
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I humbly request that you guys continue to upload future chapters to sendspace.
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Nice job, everyone. See you when chapter three is out!
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>>3789251
The Chinese version, whose scans the French version used, does have bigger pages for the first chapter. But the colors are different from the raw and they crop out a tiny bit of the art at times, like more of Sensei's boob in p. 10
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>>3789325
Thank you!
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>>3789325

Thank you, and see you later!
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>>3788970
instead of "Your penis is pointing down"
i think "Your penis has calmed down" would be better

just my opinion
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>>3789272
you should upload the non-stitched pages too.
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Here's the download link for the gaijin sensei version where she inserts random English words in her Japanese speech: https://www.sendspace.com/file/37y3nk

If you missed it, here's the download for the normal version: https://www.sendspace.com/file/nn4v7c

It's finally ogre. Looking forward to working with the rest of ya'll on Chapter 3.
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>>3789514
when is ch 3
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>>3789545
I think it's out already, In physical form. I don't know if the most recent issue of Comic Aun has been scanned yet.
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Wonderful job fellas.
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>>3789354
Translator said "Your penis is pointing down" is the literal translation. I think the directness makes it feel Japanese.
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You guys are the best, thank you.
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The first thing that came to mind when I saw this
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>>3789514
I'm sure you won't mind the other version being uploaded on sadpanda too. Get more people to see it, right?

http://exhentai.org/g/731387/14626d6109/

See you guys.
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He has all the self loathing if a murderer
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>>3788968

>dat position

Nuoh my god

stand fucking and kissing at the same time is my absolute fetish, I mean they don't go all the way, but its a damn shame I never see any half way decent artists draw that in their doujins.

If anybody knows doujins with similar positions, please share, at this point I'm desperate.
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>>3790013
Mind uploading the page with the tl note here? Noticed it wasn't in the download links here >>3789514
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>>3790159
Here it is.
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>>3790159
I put the note there myself.

Also I tweaked the text block of page 23 to match the page 23 of the primary release. Just cut and pasted part of one page 23 to another. Here you go.

What version do you guys like better? I'll ask the others to keep doing pages with the random English if need be.
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You guys are scholars and gentlemen.
Thank you.
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Third chapter sample!
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Thank you guys for the scanlation, you are a really generous bunch!
Also: Nice sample, I'm getting hyped!
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>>3790237
Changed the font of the exclamation mark after "Manners" to Arial Rounded, to match

>>3790496
According to /a/, Shiwasu no Okina is a woman...
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>>3790503

False; I actually met him at Comic1
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>>3790496
So Suemori's gonna pop Naotatsu's mancherry? That's a shame, I thought he and Taniguchi had good chemistry.
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>>3790604

Well, yeah, me too. I was hoping for something between him and Akiho, or at least a threesome.
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>>3790617
>>3790604
Yeah I agree. it also feels a little too soon with the large cast... Maybe they'll go no further than rubbing until he cums again?
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>>3790848
lol think of all the bitching people will do.

I do agree it's too soon, especially since they just finished introducing all the girls in ch 2. Hope there's enough chapters to cover a full-fledged volume, with lots of erotic rubbing and The One Girl to get coitus.
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>>3790854
Personally I'm hoping it ends with a class-wide orgy.
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Translator
Typesetter
Editor and everyone else involved in this great project

Is anyone interested in doing another project ? Specifically the latest REDLIGHT work ?
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Why is the Sendspace link an exe? :O
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>>3791254
...how about you READ what's written on the page before you blindly click stuff?
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>>3791237
Well all I can do is help fix up the English. Get a script going in another thread and I can chip in.

But usually the translator himself does the script, this was just unusual with the French to English one coming before the Japanese to English one, lol

>>3791254
Works for me. But made some mirrors too.

https://mega.co.nz/#!9NtB2aZB!By8kWLW0q2PcF-uWBF3tbTuqE29cAbWmRNels6xGVlE

http://www.mediafire.com/download/88luipcuzb4un6q
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Why are you guys maintaining two versions of the gallery? One gets updated pretty frequently by qazkov aka Other Guy. Simple edits might get your upload expunged. I suggest doing final edits on the gallery after Chapter 3 is uploaded.
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>>3791416
One version is the version where sensei talks normally, Other Guy version is the version where english word sensei said in the original are written with another font.
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>>3791237

is there a new REDLIGHT?

I was the anon who translated Sadako here on /h/
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>>3791416
>Simple edits might get your upload expunged

Shit, well thanks for the heads-up. I'm not touching it again until there's a new one (if we decide to continue with two versions), and until I don't see anything to nitpick for the new chapter.

Last two tweaked pages for this chapter, I promise.

<-- Added a punctuation mark
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>>3791472
>>3791416
<-- Changed font of one "cock" to Arial
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new chapter 3 preview pic
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>>3792243
Oh snap, it does go straight to coitus... well I hope the other boys and girls get busy outside or something.
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>>3788946
What the fuck is with all of this Arial bullshit?
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>>3792243
>intercourse

dropped
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I'm Japanese.
It seems to me too difficult to translate manga,
so I respect the translator.
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chapter 3 when
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>>3792308
[spoiler]
never
[/spoiler]
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>>3788946
>https://www.sendspace.com/file/zyxyv5
Thanks.
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All I really want from Shiwasu no Okina is to reboot Shining Musume. Is that so much to ask?
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two more preview pics
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last one
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>>3792855
>>3792854
>>3792243
>>3790496
Will you look at that. After translating, the next step is getting this decensored.
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>>3792861
Fan decensoring is even worse than censored.
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>>3788946
[SPOILER]oh my[/SPOILER]
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>>3790496
>>3792243
>>3792854
>>3792855
was wondering if this would just be class-rep or not, but did not expect him to get a medley the next chap
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do you guys have a dl link to the raws?

I can help translate
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>>3793030
http://exhentai.org/g/722512/0f37b331eb/
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>>3793030
>>3793046
It's already translated, man. But you can help the current translator anon with the next chapters.

Regular version
http://exhentai.org/g/731139/df929b1479/
https://www.sendspace.com/file/nn4v7c - with bonus sketches, but not the new ones in this thread

Alternative version with different font for random English
http://exhentai.org/g/732223/90937cfb4c/
https://www.sendspace.com/file/nn4v7c - editor guy's official release
https://www.sendspace.com/file/yq195v - with the final edits by other guy
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has the third chapter been released in Japan yet?
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>>3793170
Don't think so but I don't know for sure. I was able to grab the most recent issue of Comic Aun of a Japanese site, but it seems to use some exotic form of compression file so I can't figure out how to get it open and check for myself.
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>>3793180
Hmm, scans might be soon then. During weekdays I should be available to help around this time or later (around 13:00-13:30 GMT) for a window of 9 to 10 hours until I have to leave to do other stuff. Anytime during weekends.
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>>3793180
What is the file extension?
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>>3792891
You should see the decensoring done by belldandy100.
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>>3793314
No file extension. It did come with a txt file named "how to convert" with fucked up encoding that reads something like this:

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ˆÈ‰º‚ÌURL‚©‚çê—p‚̉𓀃\ƒtƒg‚ðƒ_ƒEƒ“ƒ[ƒh‚µ‚ătƒ@ƒCƒ‹‚ð•ÏŠ·‚µ‚Ä‚‚¾‚3‚¢B
‚¨‚¢‚¤‚¾vector‚Æ‚¶‚å‚ k‚Çrevivefilter‚¨jf‚Ÿ‚À‚Ÿdf‚È‚¢dk
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Vector and revivefilter are the only discernible words, and googling that leads me to a Japanese software page, unfortunately I don't know where to go from there.
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>>3793328
Yup, it's just called file.
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>>3793241

I'm free during weekdays around 20:00 GMT for 4-5 hours, weekends from 13:00 of saturday (altought this saturday I have to go out) to sunday night.
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>>3793338
>4-5 hours

On second thought that's more reasonable than 9-10 hours lol. I'm sure I can be free for that time, beyond depends on luck.
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man i hope the teacher gets a turn
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Sensei sure as hell needs some nude beach ponding. So do the Otaku girls (Shizuha and Kiyona)!
btw I kinda like the idea that this class may be from the same school were 'Aibuka! The idol manager with the magical dick' took place :)
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>>3793328
If you haven't already realized, it's a virus. (No, really. If you open the "file" in a hex editor you'll see that it's all zeroes.) Japanese do tend to use LZH compression instead of PKZIP though, just so you know. It's built into their version of Windows. But yeah, probably a good thing you didn't go and download any executables.
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Is this another preview, or is it for something completely different?
(from shiwasus twitter, 16.Aug)
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>>3794311
Probably something else considering the bj girl is wearing a skirt.
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>>3791237

I can supply the source!
So is anyone interested in doing this project ? Let me know and I'll start a new thread.
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>>3794311
Seems like Kancolle
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Next issue when!?
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[Spoiler]
When it's ready
[/Spoiler]
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>>3794350
its like lucie wilde and george constanza
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I hope this isn't just another harem again. Orgies are the best.
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>>3795564
Yeah, class rep guy can't have all the action... I'm hoping for discreet public and private stuff.

Geek boy might try to hang out with the geek girls and he gets a boner. "Cocks everywhere" girl is already flustered, she might ask to touch the other boys' dicks. Distant girl might actually be the most aggressive.

I also want to see them all fully relaxed and casual, just sitting and lying down side by side and stuff. Maybe get some confessions even. What we got is a start.
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>>3794350
Does it come with a textless version? I can be editor. Done a few and posted on Sad Panda.
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>>3795579

Unfortunately not. All images have some sort of text.
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>>3788946
chapter 3 out on Ex-hentai...

http://exhentai.org/s/8483bc5732/734938-1

Things is... it's in chinese -_-
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>>3795748
It appears to be more heavily censored than the previous chapters. Another police crackdown?
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>>3795748
this shit scalated quickly!
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Aww...I was hoping he'd do the girl giving him a hand job.

I love that body type/hair combination
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>>3795743
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>>3796089
I'm sure she'll get what's coming for her.
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>>3795748
I wonder when we'll get ahold of raws. I can't even find last months issue of Comic Aun and all of mangatown's stuff is viruses according to >>3793656

This might take a very long time.
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>>3796201
Yeah, the team that scanned Aun 2014-08 is scanning this month's magazines now, but it seems this story only appears every two months if the Chinese label is right

But at least the team said they have 2014-06 in their backlog, so when that time comes I hope Typesetter anon is okay with redoing ch1 with bigger scans.
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Is chapter 3 up to download anywhere besides Ex-H?
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>>3796225
https://www.sendspace.com/file/qjcarc
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>>3796238
>https://www.sendspace.com/file/qjcarc
thanks man! really appreciate the guys who made this possible. please continue doing so. once again thank you.
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>>3796238
Thanks!
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>>3796238
Do you have the link to the 2nd chapter as well ?
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>>3796212
Well, I think it'll be better to redo the first chapter pages when and if all this will be done as a volume, 'cause maybe there will be some changes etc. so I'd rather not redo all this a third time in that case lol

Anyway, let me know when decent raws will be avaiable so we can continue with this work.
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>>3795743
Ah, that's a bit... discouraging. That'll require a lot of redraw.
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Alright, I'm back. As I thought we got the Chinese version first. While we wait for the proper raw, I figured I could do a very rough translation of what's going in this chapter.
*WARNING*, this is a very rushed thing, I know next to nothing in Chinese, and there are a lot of sentences I'm really not sure about (even when it's not indicated).
But still, I think the general meaning of the chapter is there, so here we go!
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1. Eh!? Suemori Sanaka volunteers!?
2. Our classmate, the petite
3. doll-like, cute Suemori?
4. She will help calm his dick down?
5. So, Sanaka...
6. S-sensei!
7. Please wait! Let me go first!
8. Kotegawa Ayame
9. A-Aya-chan
10. Alright, come on Ayame!
11. Eh? Ehh
12. Hee hee
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1. Her/their hearts can't stop beating...
2. Oh no... Why are you so hard [not really sure here, but it's something about his erection]
3. [can't read those characters]
4. Ah, sorry!
5. You're the only one in the class to have an erection
6. And you still have one... Akiho didn't help you deal with it?
7. I'm really sorry...
8. It's still not going down...
9. I'm hard again...
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1. I will... help you, if you teach me how to do it
2. Eh?
3. Like how to do it with my hand!
4. Anyway, I want to make sure you cum!
5. Hurry, teach me!
6. Y-yes!!
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[generic sex sounds]
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1. K-Kotegawa
2. Kotegawa
3. I-is it strong enough?
4. K-Kotegawa, why are you doing this?
5. ... What do you think about Sanaka?
6. Eh?
7. I think... She probably likes you...
8. Ehh?!
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1. I'm always around her, so I know it
2. Recently she has been looking at you
3. Staring at you, sometimes sighing, sometimes blushing
4. Other people notice that she cares about you [really not sure about this one]
5. She is just watching you, it is probably easier for her than to confess her feelings to you... [again, unsure]
6. But I still don't know how you feel about her...
7. An erection like this really creates an indecent atmosphere, this is not good
8. I'll only do this to make you cum faster and calm you down, and then I'll get back to Sanaka...
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1. This isn't good
2. I-I'm cumming
3. Haha, that was really incredible
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1. Keika
2. Aya-chan, you're clearly still a virgin but you really did your best
3. Y-you talk too much!!
4. It's my turn now, let's switch
5. Eh!?
6. Look, Nagato-kun's dick is even bigger now
7. What?!
8. Nagato-kun, you're a virgin right?
9. That's what I thought
10. In that case, this is your chance to try it [unsure]
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1. Did you hear about Sanaka?
2. Ah, well...
3. She gets really excited just looking at you, but I think she will...
4. End up confessing to you, then you two can hook up [not too sure about this whole dialogue]
5. You think!!
6. Although you didn't have sex with Aya-chan, there is nothing preventing us highschoolers to do it
7. When it is the first time for both people, it's easier to screw it up, right?
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1. So
2. Let me have your first time, it will be good practice for you, what do you think?
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1. Woaahhhh???? N-No way!! No no no!
2. She wants me to practice having sex!? Sex with my classmate Ueda!?
3. We're not even in a relationship, we're only classmates!?
4. Practice!? I can't allow such a thing!!! No way! No! I have to strongly decline her offer!! Refuse it! As hard as I can!! Like a real man!!
5. Guh!! I lost to my dick...
6. Nagato-kun... Well done, you're inside me
7. Try moving? To begin with, you will do as you feel like [unsure]
8. Y-yes!!
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1. I'm having sex with Ueda-san!!?
2. We're having sex!?
3. Yes we are
4. Nagato-kun and I are fucking
5. Oh, you're doing pretty good
6. Moving little by little, like this, this is great [shitty wording :D]
7. This is a girl's
8. Pussy!? This is sex!?
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1. Ohh, Nagato-kun, you're really good at this... Ah!!
2. You're great at fucking
3. It feels so good [also something about 'top', maybe him being on top of her?]
4. You keeping thrusting at me, without stopping
5. You are really strong
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1. You're so big, it should feel good if you take me from behind
2. Come
3. Ahhh, doing it from behind feels so good!!
4. It feels good to me as well, that position is indecent, I love it
5. Ah, Ueda-san, I'm gonna cum
6. You're wearing a condom so you can go ahead and cum
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1. I'm gonna cum too
2. Keep going
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1. This is amazing... You're still hard?
2. That way, you should have no problem taking Sanaka's virginity
3. Ah! Y-you didn't stop him properly!?
4. It's okay, it's okay
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1. Suemori-san?
2. Suemori Sanaka
3. Uh...
4. Although we are in this situation...
5. There's something I would like to ask you
6. I
7. I...
8. I...
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1. Do you think
2. I am a pervert!? [chinese word is actually more like bitch/slut/whore, but I think pervert fits better considering what follows in the chapter]
3. Uh... What?
4. A-ah! I'm sorry!!
5. ...Ah
6. I mean
7. I uh...
8. About a month ago, I saw you while you were changing in your PE clothes
9. Eh?
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1. Naotatsu-kun, you have a really athletic body
2. After seeing it when you were changing, my heart began to pound, nonstop
3. Since then, I've been watching your muscular body
4. I've become obsessed, my heart always racing fast, I haven't been myself, constantly thinking about it! [reaally not sure here]
5. Whether at school or not, I have been thinking about you, Nagato-kun
6. Before that, I had never cared so much about boys and stuff
7. Suddenly, all I have in my head is thoughts of boys' bodies... I don't want to be a pervert!
8. You mean... You are interested in my muscles... And my body?
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1. Oh I feel so good, if you're a pervert then I'm a pervert
2. My body is
3. Like that because I work out to get rid of my excessive lust
4. I feel so good!!
5. Because I'm also really interested in girls' bodies, I'm a pervert! [yeah, my wording on this dialogue is pretty shitty again, but I hope you get the idea, he is trying to reassure her by telling her he is also a pervert]
6. That's it, I understand!! There's nothing wrong with being a pervert! Nothing!
7. Right! H-having a mutual interest in each other's body is very healthy!!
8. Then we could touch each other's body
9. S-sure
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1. Wow
2. Wow
3. Wow
4. Amazing
5. Your back is so broad
6. Boys have really elastic asses [can't find a better word here... just look at the picture to get the idea]
7. This part is muscles too?
8. N-no, it isn't
9. This is called the corpus cavernosum
10. The blood flows from the deep artery of the penis to the spongy erectile tissue, which is how it gets so hard! [I'm too lazy to check wiki about the exact process here, so there's probably something wrong]
11. Ehhh
12. Ehhh [showing curiosity/wonder]
13. A-Ah!!
14. Ah, that's right... I came inside the tent to calm this down
15. R-right...
16. Uh...
17. So we should have sex, right?
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1. Eh? What!?
2. Eh!? Really?
3. Eh?
4. But...
5. Uh
6. Well
7. I-I'm a virgin, is it okay?
8. Naotatsu-kun, it feels really... really good
9. Ohh!!
10. Suemori-san, your soft pussy feels incredible!
11. Ah, this is so embarrassing
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1. C-can I put it in? I mean, to have sex
2. Ah...
3. Ah! I need to wear a condom!!
4. Well uh...
5. Today is a safe day for me so it's okay
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[generic sex sounds]
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1. It's in! Ahhh, it's in
2. How do you feel? Are you alright?
3. Hah, hah, hah
4. I-I-I'm fine, but... you're so fierce [concept of strength here, not sure what word to use, basically she says it's really strong]
5. Ahhh Suemori-san is too cute!!! You're so cute my chest hurts! [second part of this sentence is difficult. something about his heart/chest and repression or something. could be 100% wrong!]
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1. But your pussy is so incredibly tight, I can barely move inside
2. Your inside are so sticky when I rub against them
3. Ah
4. So good
5. Suemori-san
6. Suemori-san
7. I-it's so big
8. I'm going crazy really fast...
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1. Naotatsu-kun, your glans penis is hitting the bottom of my stomach
2. Suemori-san, your voice is so erotic it's exciting me, let me listen to it some more
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1. Naotatsu
2. Naotatsu-kun
3. Suemori-san
4. The inside of your vagina is getting even more slimy...!!
5. Now my dick can begin to move like a piston!! [+ word for fierce/violent]
6. Ahh!!
7. More
8. More!!
9. I want to go crazy!!
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1. Ahh, my dick is melting! I want to cum, I want to cum, Suemori-san
2. Ah
3. Okay
4. Do it
5. Come
6. You can do it
7. I want to see
8. I Want to see
9. I want to see your face when you climax
10. I'm cumming
11. I'm cumming!
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[generic sex sounds]
>>
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[generix sex sounds]
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1. Your dick has finally calmed down [or has it? -.-]
>>
And it's done! Again, very shitty translation, but feel free to do whatever you want with it
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>>3796432
Good job!

I'd hesitate to start any typesetting or scriptcleaning until the Japanese raws show up, but this'll do for tonight's fap session.
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>>3796414
>the ntr face
i never asked for this
>>
So was the girl that took the guy's virginity already experienced, or was she offering hers so the guy would have a little experience to make her friend's first time better?
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>>3796397
I actually read Chinese so let me clean this up for you. But who knows if the Chinese translator actually knew his Japanese anyway?
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>>3796398
1. Eh!? Suemori Sanaka volunteers!?
2. The Suemori who looks just like a primary schooler
3. Just like a cute little idol?
4. She will help calm his dick down?
5. So, Sanaka...
6. S-sensei!
7. Please wait! Let me go first!
8. Kotegawa Ayame
9. A-Aya-chan
10. Alright, come on Ayame!
11. Eh? Ehh
12. Hee hee
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>>3796399
1. The heart beats uncontrollably...
2. Ugh... it's so disgustingly hard!
3. And it's standing straight up.
4. Ah, sorry!
5. You're the only one in our class to get a hard-on like this.
6. And didn't Akiho already fix this for you?
7. I'm really sorry...
8. It's still not going down...
9. I'm hard again...
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>>3796400
1. I will... help you cum. Just teach me how, okay?
2. Eh?
3. How to u-use my hand and stuff... to do it.
4. The point is to make your sperm shoot out, right?
5. C'mon, teach me already!
6. O-okay!
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>>3796401
[generic sex sounds] indeed!
We've got "a a a" up top, then some katakana stuff, then "en wo"

And then he says "gu shou!!" which means literally "ancient hand" and I don't know what it means but a google image search for ?? turns up pages and pages of a blue haired loli schoolgirl so...

then he says "ha a a" "wait!!" "hu wo" "hu" "o o o" "gu wo" "o o"
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>>3796402
OH GU SHOU IS KOTEGAWA IN CHINESE OKAY IM DUMB
1. K-Kotegawa
2. Kotegawa
3. Am I doing it too hard?
4. K-Kotegawa, why are you doing this?
5. ... What do you think about Sanaka?
6. Eh?
7. I think... She probably likes you...
8. Ehh?!
>>
Lol they went crazy in this chapter. Anyway I still have to read the translation but please do consider that I'll begin to typeset and redrawn if necessary only when japanese raws will be out.
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>>3796403
1. She and I are really close. I can tell
2. She's always staring at you lately.
3. She spaces out, sighing and blushing from time to time.
4. She cares about you so much, even the others can tell.
5. That kid only cares about living in the moment. She could go off the rails at any minute. She might confess her love to you directly.
6. But I don't know how you feel about her...
7. An erection like this really creates an indecent atmosphere. Carrying on like this isn't good, is it?
8. I'll only do this to make you cum faster and calm you down, and then I'll get back to Sanaka...
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>>3796637
oh then fuck it. no need for me to fix this bad C-E translation
>>
>>3796639

Aw that's too bad! Any way you can continue when you have time? It will be a great help when the raw comes out, as a comparison point.
Thanks for the stuff you've already done!
>>
Nice work everyone!

>>3796658
Yeah it would help a lot... is the translation really bad?

Nothing big to say for now. I'm just curious about "calming down" dicks/erections since it gets used often here, is it that literal in the raw? We already used it in chapter 2 but did it appear in chapter 1 also? We used "getting rid of erections" instead, but the raw wording may be different.

But more importantly: the English typesetting of the logo in chapters 1-2 is great, but the logo's placement here >>3796399 means too much of the art might be obscured if its typeset too.

The clinical talk mixed with the sexy talk is amusing to me but some might find too much of it a turn-off. The line about penis anatomy is in-character for model student boy but the line "your glans penis is hitting the bottom of my stomach" would definitely be "your dick is stirring up my insides" in some other work. Depends on how the raw really says it and how we do it. And "slimy" vagina is definitely turning me off lol - more like "slippery" or "wetter".

Also lol at the supply of condoms, wish that was shown before, and that SnO had drawn the girls coming out of the tent instead of cutting to them outside. Just quibbles.

>>3796503
Maybe she's not. Anyway, she was having sex with him for fun while Sanaka had a crush on him, so it felt like "fucking vs lovemaking".

>>3796280
I didn't think of tankoubon scans. Hope we're all still here when that time comes.
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>>3796699
Don't read too much into my attempt at translating the Chinese version! As I said, I just did it to give the general meaning of the chapter. But she really says "glans penis" in Chinese, which I have to agree sounds a little weird.
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I would have preferred an orgy to this dude fucking each girl. It's still pretty good though.
>>
I'm starting to get a little bored with the premise. I don't think it would be interesting just to repeat this chapter two or three more times for the other girls, especially after all that build-up. Not as interesting as his previous series.
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>>3796751
But they weren't watching the tent like the others. Thought the other guy with glasses would do them. The girls playing with the ball also stayed apart so I hope they do their own thing. Least I hope it ends with a class orgy.

Well, it will be some time until this is finished.
>>
The dude in the new sketch isn't Nagato (The class rep). His glasses is different. Probably the otaku dude who's friends with the otaku girls.
>>
>>3796895
Hope so but he looks too tall to be the otaku dude.

You guys should wait for the 2500p scans.
>>
Does the translation of chapter 3 going well?
>>
>>3797076
We're waiting for the Japanese raw right now.
But I'm still hoping the anon who began to fix my Chinese translation comes back to finish the chapter.
>>
>>3797136
Ho god, I hope he'll be back soon :)
>>
>>3797253
Read the thread.
Also, warning: what kind of chink are you trying to learn, traditional or simplified? Those are traditional characters.
>>
>>3796860
It'll be completely disappointing if only one dude gets all these girls.
>>
>>3796860
I think I would honestly prefer this series with no sex.
>>
>>3797499

did you read his last translated work?
>>
>>3797933
To ease the wait for the raw, here's a quick English edit of the second sex scene only.
Got a little liberal with the dialogue as this isn't the "official" release, but I hope to work in some phrasing later.
Didn't and can't redraw anything - too bad about one page.

https://www.sendspace.com/file/gpk4bl

>>3797933
I'd read it... though it would be ecchi not hentai.
>>
>>3797463
Both, there's not much difference most characters anyway.
>>
>>3797950
Alright then.
??!
>>
>>3797934
Nope, I'm only here for the classroom-wide embarrassment and to see bros get laid.
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>>3796751

it's otaku girls turn
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from twitter
a little more of sensei's nipple
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>>3798855
Yes! Best duo.
>>
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...Am I seeing wrong or are the raws for ch 1-2 lighter than the release?

The pages look the same in a browser if you switch tabs, but really don't in viewing/editing programs. I don't know why.

Anyway, since we're waiting, I changed the level settings a little for them.

https://www.sendspace.com/file/pfixqw
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>>3799082
>notices more nipple
>not the uncensored pussy
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>>3789166
>>3789179
>>3788982


*sigh* oh Okina, always teasing me with your cute shorthaired gals. but then they'll only be in on or two panels
>>
>>3800228

her time will come, you just wait anon
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>>3799871
The raw is lighter when viewed in Chrome and other programs (CDisplayex, etc.).
The raw and the English pages look the same when viewed in Firefox. Weird.

But I guess Typesetter anon probably adjusted the levels himself first.
So it's best to follow his intentions and not to fiddle with it anymore.
With my leveling, the solid black parts aren't solid.
The text is harder to read the smaller it gets.

Still... Sensei's nipples always seemed too dark to me in the English one.
I think lighter suits her better, since she's white unlike her students.
They were lighter in the Chinese/French scan, and now the raw if viewed with the right programs.
>>3799082 confuses me. Since that's like super raw, is the English one closer after all?

Anyway, I just copied the pixels from the magazine raw and put them in the three relevant English pages:

https://www.sendspace.com/file/rw1liq

While her nipples look like they do in the raw, I didn't touch the rest of each page.
Except for erasing some specks that seemed like scan dirt, not melanin.
Just passing the time until the raw comes.
>>
>>3796624
??
It means right hand.
>>
>>3800980
Hmph, saw the specks there and tone inconsistencies there, removed, and thought I had to do it for the rest.

Well it's just chapter 1 that needed it, it's lower quality than 2. Here's a "cleaned" bundle of 1 and 2 and bonus pages:

https://www.sendspace.com/file/iowq2j

Also I got some tips from anons on /a/ about filters, maybe I'll run chapter 1 through some and post another link here for you to see.

But the best way to have all the scans look the same would be getting the same group to scan all chapters...
>>
>>3801790
>not english
>>
all this talk about "foreskin being pulled off" doesn't make sense.
they're talking about circumcision, right? why the hell translate it like that.
>>
>>3804243
We're waiting for the raw. I have some ideas already if the real script isn't too far.

>>3803736
Not satisfied with this, not all cleaned, there are specks/artifacts left, will update. Sigh.
>>
>>3804289
>Don't both Europeans and Japanese tend to be uncircumcised?

naw, it's pretty uncommen for Japanese to be uncircumcised.
>>
>>3804294
As I understand it, boys are taught to pull back the skin from a young age, and not pulling it back in situations like public baths is rude. This wouldn't be necessary if most get circumcised. Plus there's all the h stories with phimosis.
>>
>>3804361
>As I understand it, boys are taught to pull back the skin from a young age, and not pulling it back in situations like public baths is rude.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, really? I'm not trolling it just sounds hilarious
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ch4 preview pic
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>>3789223
His diet might be a bit bigger than one when he wasn't doing so much work but I don't think he'd be eating anything special. He's just perpetually horny so that really motivates him to work hard and get tired.
>>
>>3805060
monster cock in real japanese standards?
>>
>>3805060
Oh good, he finally gets out of the tent?

The translation is being discussed on the sadpanda forum:

http://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=170572
>>
OVA plz
>>
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>>3805140

Oh god, we have to redo everything again? Ahah I din't expect this.

>>3803736
So you are quazkov?

Anyway, I'm willing to fix all this but I think that first we need a new translation for the first two chapters if there are so much errors.

And obviously we need the raw for the third chapter.
>>
chapter 3 please I've waited so long

I can't keep edging forever
>>
>>3805627
Sorry man. My main concern was how to improve image quality for ch.1, but all that came up.
But if no one points out more stuff to improve, let's just redo the few pages they covered.
And let's finish ch. 3 first. We also need the others to give input/consent before we finalize new lines.

Page 5 is the only one that supposedly needs major changes to sentences.
Like Sensei's dad doesn't own the nudist places in her hometown.
She's also talking about herself going naked there, not people in general.

Also, the line about the Hussite church supposedly says they weren't the first nudists. The first nudists split from the Hussites.
But some history writers count them as Hussites anyway, since the Hussite movement split into many groups.
And the original Hussites (from Bohemia, part of the Czech Republic today) split from the Catholic church in the first place.
So what does the line really say, who is splitting from what church?

The rest of the comments are mainly about being exact with details, and style stuff like the chalk writing.
Like the premise of "class trip to a nudist beach" vs. "school trip for the entire year level where one class goes to a nudist beach last", as in page 4.
It may be more exact but it's not as smooth as the title or when ch. 2 does a recap. If we change the current lines, they're clunkier.
And it's still a trip the class takes to the beach, right? Honestly I don't want to change the lines for this.

Some dialogue corrections also feel unneeded since other pages say the same thing already.
Like "No way!" in page 4 is literally "No way! I don't want to!" but the next page has "I don't wanna!".
>>
I really like how much agency the gals have in this setup.

Like, we're getting to see what each of them wants to do & why. Creates more variety for their dynamic with the guy than, say, the Pisu Hame setup (i.e. "hey this kid's gonna bang you now k")
>>
I can't wait for a teacher chapter myself it's obviously going to happen at some point.
Hopefully It won't be monster cock Naotatsu again, I can foresee some sort of lesson
>>
>>3806576
thissss
>>
>>3796405
this story really jumped the shark
>>
Finally, the chapter 3 raw is out. It's in 2400px height.

Magazine - http://exhentai.org/s/186ff9524d/740985-35

Raw story - http://exhentai.org/s/186ff9524d/741008-45

Though I'd say the Chinese scan is better looking, and the group that scanned chapter 2 will likely do a 2500px scan of this with better quality, tones, levels or however you say it, which is superior to both.

I suggest finalizing the English script first, waiting for them to put out their scan and using whichever is best for the release.
>>
>>3807908
finally
>>
>>3805285
I feel Frencher already!
>>
will this be in the next issue of aun?
>>
>>3788946
I'd really like to see the whole thing in english
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New samples from Shiwasu's twitter.
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Another sample for Chapter 4 from twitter.
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Finally, this one is from Aun's website.
>>
This shit better end with a massive orgy. Hope it's not just girls taking turns with the glasses guy.
>>
>>3809868

so only the prez is going to fuck everyone?
>>
We're gonna autosage in a few posts. Time to make a new thread...

Hope everyone is all right. Now we have the (or a) chapter 3 raw, we're just waiting for translator anon to get us moving again.
>>
New thread: >>3810096

See you there guys!
>>
>>3804294
>>3804289
Yes, it's less than 20% of them, so uncommon:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prevalence_of_circumcision
>>
This series is great, could have been even better if it wasn't a hentai. Its so erotic, especially sensai.
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