Nudist beach ni shūgakuryokō de!!

>>3810096
The important thing is to get chapter 3 translated. But just noting some issues I have (again):

- Chapter 1 is a lower resolution and thus lower quality scan than chapter 2. Can't be helped. Wish we get a better scan in the future, so the complete release of this story can have consistent pages.

- Similarly, the raw scans of chapter 3 are not as good as the scans of chapter 2. Maybe wait for a better one before finalizing the pages?

- The raws of chapter 1 and to a lesser extent chapter 2 are lighter than the English version. The Chinese scans are also lighter. But this doesn't show in Firefox for some reason. Only other programs. I'm just concerned about the real or intended colors.

- There are still some artifacts/specks/scanlines left, I'm trying to clean those up more but I can't fix everything.

- Another guy said the translation of at least one page needs work. Don't know who to believe, him or our Translator. Anyway, it's just one page so far that -might- have sentences too far from the original.

>>3810096
this sendspace is a little fishy, got some alerts for malwares

>>3810366
Works fine for me, maybe you're downloading their accelerator. Use Adblock or something to avoid it.

Nerd more!

>.exe

Yeah fuck you. NO ONE DOWNLOAD THIS SHIT

>>3811739
Pretty sure you're doing it wrong.

But in case you can't download from sadpanda, there are mirror links in the last thread:

http://www.mediafire.com/download/88luipcuzb4un6q

https://mega.co.nz/#!9NtB2aZB!By8kWLW0q2PcF-uWBF3tbTuqE29cAbWmRNels6xGVlE

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Might as well post the old chapters here while nothing is happening.

>>3811865
Hurry it up.

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End of English ones so far, hope there will be more. Credits page posted by OP.

>>3811888
Any idea when the next chapter will be translated?

>>3811891
Until the translator shows up again, all we have is this temporary translation >>3796398 based on the Chinese scan, which he also did.

Can't wait for teacher's part
I hope...

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>>3812214

Glasses guy is gonna get all the pussy, don't worry

Isn't the issue out? How long until raws?

>>3812251
Fucking boring.

where will this first be uploaded?

I tried to look for raws everywhere, but only found this site:
http://mangatown-zip-torrent.doorblog.jp/archives/40416220.html
The download was sketchy as hell. Something about converting what I found in the rar. I recall that stuff being a virus in an earlier one of these threads. Should I delete and move on?

>>3813236
The latest Aun issue is already on sadpanda.(though it will probably be scanned better by another group)

It's in the OP.

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If the raw is posted here, will this pick back up? If the anon team isn't simply busy right now, is it an issue of access?

Anyway here we go. Rawest raw, no color corrections or cleaning yet

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You'll notice that the Chinese version >>3796398 has more clear blacks (though some nipples look too dark as a result IMO) and is cleaner

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And there's a script based on the Chinese version already but it won't be as accurate. Despite the quality, this should be enough to get the real script, I hope.

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>>3813251
Poor Akiho, this is a harem story

I think this raw generally shows a little more of the art on the pages than the Chinese one,

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Plot bomb

>>3813243
That's last month. We are on chapter 4 now (two Otaku girls)

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>>3813255
Oh, right.

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>>3813257
Sex training

I think it's implied she's not a virgin

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Are you a bad enough dude to redraw their bodies?

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>>3813263
I love her expressions

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Such a caring friend, breaking in your crush before you fuck

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I wish the first penetration scene wasn't rushed unlike this, though it was for comedy.

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>>3813277
That condom supply weren't in the earlier chapters. Sensei thinks of everything

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>>3813278
*wasn't

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And done.

>>3813288
Thanks.

We should be seeing chapter 4 soon, right? It dropped at the end of last month?

How come we don't have digital rips of Comic Aun with this story, just scans? There would be no worrying about colors and cleaning.

>>3813594
Probably because of DRM on digital versions. It's easier just to buy a paper copy, tear it apart, and scan it than it is trying to crack a digital copy.

Also, isn't all digital hentai required to be mosaiced?

Ok, if anyone is out there, is the guy with the glasses the only person who gets laid? because that would be shit.

>>3813821
I mean, a whole beach filled with men and women, and one guy is getting laid. That is just fucking garbage.

Never thought i would have hype for a doujin series. But this is just too good and caters too much to my vanilla-ish fantasies.

>>3813827
>>3813823
You can answer this shit?

>>3813830
the girls are still good and nothing says there won't be an orgy at the end. At the very least, I think they'll start having sex in front of others at some point. They also need to explain why the other males are not getting erections.

Where are the raws?

>>3813827
it's not a doujin.

>>3813830
>>3813913

remember this? http://exhentai.org/g/688906/acc91670fd/

The mc was the only one getting laid

Somehow it doesn't even feel like Naotatsu's the main character here...

If it's just the glasses guy getting laid, this would be so disappointing

While I too would like more of the guys to get laid, isn't the whole point of nudist beaches (in this story anyway) "pls don't sexualize nudity"?

If getting erections in public are against the rules, the same goes for all lewd activities in public. If they're not in the tent all they're allowed to do is check each other out and act casual.

(Though of course this is fiction so it only matters if they get caught, and they could swim out further for some underwater action)

>>3813823

If you need more than one dick, your self-insert's, to fap, you might have problems.

The work is fucking boring but not because of that, the scenes are short, inconsistent and fucking condom.

>>3814208
>inconsistent

what

>>3814222

Look at all sexual action in the three chapters, that's what I'd expect from a single one. This is one of the stories I read once, then I have to squeeze all the little sex there is into one other folder to fap, it's very weak and the build-up goes in places. Doesn't help that best (slim tall) girl gets a too short in-between condom sex scene, only to later go all out on the loli. I like loli but not when you deliver me that hot bitch before.

I've gotta give it to SnO though, to milk that little content into nearly half a tankoubon is remarkable.

Every time I see this thread bumped, I hope it is to announce the scans are online, but no...

>>3814574
Chapter 3 raw is posted right in this thread, at least

New chapters will come in time, I'm more concerned about the translation, hope the group isn't kill

>>3814234
I'd have preferred the previous two girls to have more page time too but the story is just heavy on setup.

The whole first chapter and much of the second and third is setup and blue balls.

>>3814650

Pretty sure that's the two girls with boyfriends:
>>3811843
>>3811844

>>3814667

you sure? idk those humongous tits remember me to the Otaku girls

http://exhentai.org/s/ffeac84b3b/744992-39

Chapter 4 raw

>>3814684
Huh, the Chinese aren't first for once. Looks like it's by the same people who scanned chapter 3, same resolution and all.

So the people who scanned chapter 2 in the best quality so far are 2 chapters behind now. I mean the group who did this: http://exhentai.org/s/7eeea27f4e/725425-52

I actually went to their forum and asked them if they plan to scan the June issue of Aun with chapter 1, but they don't. Ah well.

The previous thread hasn't 404'd yet but it's close. Instead of posting the Chinese version and its secondhand panel by panel translation here again, check them out here: http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3788946/#q3796397

(There's also nsfw.archive.moe but the older threads we made don't have all images saved there.)

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Just one page for Sensei again. Best woman.

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And that's chapter 4 raw.

Thanks man

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Been working on this.

Tried to redraw the part of her breast cropped by the margin in >>3811833

Also tried to clean up some uneven scanlines/specks/artifacts.

Thoughts?

>>3814802
In Firefox, the text looks thicker/darker than in >>3811833 for some reason, but not in GIMP. How can this be...

>>3814712
>>3814713
>>3814714
>>3814715
>>3814716

I love these parts, I WANT A ORGY DAMMIT

getting bored of being in the tent

>>3814816

Next chapter is definitely in tent. I'm guessing he fucks the other otaku girl, then the two girls with boyfriends. I actually thought those two would be the only one he doesn't, guess that means he is getting all of them (least likely would be the two volleyball girls). Also I have random theory that the teacher will not get fucked by him, but instead do a huge gangbang with the rest of the class. Don't know why I think that.

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Also another preview, proving that it is the two girls the other guy thought it was.

The author's blog has a link to a free digital version of the first chapter.
It's low resolution and mostly unremarkable except for the ridiculous double-censoring. They put mosaics on top of the already-censored parts, producing in some cases, dicks that look like zebras.

Is this series monthly?

>>3815232
http://www.hitpub.com/aun/contents/web/aun201406_okina/

Censoring is ugly, but since it's digital you can get an idea of the intended colors. Lighting, shading, nipples, that's important.

>>3815236
Chapters 1 to 3 were a month apart, but 3 and 4 were consecutive. It depends I guess.

Bottom of the last page of the 4th chapter says, that the next chapter is gonna get released this month.
Maybe, probably, hopefully they'll release the rest of the chapters monthly as well!

>>3815390

Shiwasu no Okina is one of the most productive hentai artist I've ever seen. Unless there is specific reason, you can pretty much assured that there is a chapter of Shiwasu's manga in Comic Aun.

What is the japanese term for nudism? I mean like hentai, ecchi, doujin etc. in this manner. I saw it on /s/ once... Can't remember. :<

>>3815575
I've seen "zenra" being used in image galleries, not sure if that's what you were looking for.

>>3815575
I think it Zenra

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Yo. The scan group who did chapter 2 did the Aun issue with chapter 3. They haven't put it on sadpanda yet but it can be downloaded from:

http://rapidgator DOT net/file/b7a5a6369058369519aeec8d4505a812

Compare this page with >>3813246, the scan already on sadpanda. For consistency we should use these scans. Though the colors are different, so I hope this one is more accurate.

I hope the other team members are fine and show up soon. The last thread 404ed.

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>>3816519
You can see the edges are kind of skewed.

Instead of cropping the page and losing some detail not in the other raw and the Chinese scan, I tried to adjust the art around the extra space.

Just an experiment like >>3814802 (which is too light, I'll have to fix that). I'm also still trying to clean chapter 1 more.

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>>3813262
>neck biting

dear lord, this is my ultimate fetish

I'm most interested in that girl who is silently pining over dicks. I hope she just stats diddling right in front of everybody.

>the same guy again
This shit really kills my boner. If all the rest of the boys get on an orgy with the teacher this manga will be really low on my list even though it has an amazing art.

Yeah, I'm reading this for the boys, not the girls.

>>3816636
The point is it is too much cliché, even for a hentai. I really don't thisstuff of a guy cumming 10 times in an hour.

>>3816639
>don't like
Fix'd.

>>3816636
If it's not just masturbation, then sex involves at least two people doing something or a variety of things.
If you care about anything other than OH MY GOD A PICTURE OF A VAGINA, then it is not unreasonable to want more male characters involved, because they're a big part of what is going on.

>>3816635
>>3816639
all these entitled hentai fans coming out lately. not everything is for you, move along.

>>3816659
>waah someone post an opinion I don't agree with

Is Translator-kun kill?

>>3814816
>>3816635
>>3816639
>>3816659
>not hoping for a pseudo-NTR where the class rep gets fucked by the other boys before muscle nerd gets to her

its fucking 2014 already, why cant japan change this fucking stupid censorship law already. Artists already abusing it to the limits.
just why.....

>>3817219
because you touch yourself at night

>>3814865


This is worse NTR than Tachibana.

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>>3817219
I don't like the white-outs but but least it's not the huge black bars Comic Aun had in between the new installments of this.

>>3816540
>>3816519
Tried fixing this again, this time I cropped the black spaces at the bottom, but slightly moved the art -up- to minimize the loss.

If you compare >>3816519 (scanned by Team.Comic ONE) to >>3813246, the latter cropped out some art at the bottom (pubes and navel), the other keeps more of the art but is more skewed. This is true for all the pages. So I tried to keep more of the art. Is this over the line?

Saved in greyscale with GIMP, the pure raw is RGB.

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Posting the bigger raws for chapter 3. Not grayscale yet. If I do more tweaking like >>3818073, they will be.

First page is >>3816519

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That's the bigger raw.

Less than 100 posts until autosage again, and still no real new scripts. Please show up, editor, translator, typesetter anons...

Besides trying to fix the pages we have, I'm thinking of making a temporary English version using the translation from the Chinese by Translator-anon. *Something* to liven up things during this downtime. To save space here I might post that and the raw page edits I do in an imgur album if we're allowed to link that site here.

Because it's not the "official group release", I'm not redrawing stuff (job for typesetter anon), it would use the smaller Chinese scans, the fonts would be different and the script would be a little liberal. It shouldn't go on sadpanda either.

These threads did produce a French to English version of chapters 1 and 2 before Translator-anon came along (which other sites have posted instead of the revised one).

Here's the Chinese to English panel by panel translation, copied from the previous thread:

http://pastebin.com/xv1D965v

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>dat neck biting fetish

Why no translation?

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>>3818504
Like I said, here's a Chinese-to English version of chapter 3 based on the earlier posts by Translator-anon, using the Chinese pages. But it's not finished yet and to show it's a "beta version" I didn't replace the sound effects. Cross-check it with the pastebin if you like.

http://imgur.com/a/T18wu

Please show up again, guys, so we can start for real...

>>3819935
Good enough for me and my boner. You and other anons are doing god's work.

So much potential for a mass orgy and we end up with a "guy get's all the girls" scenario...
geez

>>3820804
The artist lacks imagination.

>>3820966
>Shiwasu no Okina
oh no you didn't nigga

>>3819935
All the pages for that "beta version" are up at the link now. Should I post it here anyway?

Imgur seems neat. I also uploaded chapters 1 and 2 in English to the same account. Plus all the raws, all the preview pictures in these threads so far, the works. Will add new stuff as I find them.

See http://zvqk.imgur.com/ for everything, it's organized.

All the stuff is there, we just need the people to work on it, so please come back guys... ;_;

>>3820966
You should actually trying reading all of his material before you state your opinion about it when you're saying it to people that actually have.

You only make yourself look like a dumbass.

>>3812251
jeez, I love it. So much teasing ans suspension.
11/10

>>3821154

But it's true what he wrote. Stop making yourself look like a dumbass?

I really like the art style. Any recommendations?

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>>3821343

I can´t help it but feel bad about the rest of the boys, how the fuck they don´t get hard??

this is amazing

>>3821362
Beta dicks they are too intimidated by the alpha dick.

>>3820804
Yeah. The having everyone go to a nude beach plot seems like a huge waste if it's just Glasses-kun nailing each girl in the tent, one after the other. Why even have all the other guys around?

Gotta admire his stamina and virility though, I guess.

>>3821499

Hentai protagonists always have horsecocks that don't hurt any vagina and can cum 5 litres of cum two dozen times a day.

After the buildup from the first two chapters, it really feels like Okina intended for this to be another orgy series, then decided at the very last minute that he didn't want to exhaust himself again.

>>3821642
I disagree. All of the boys' dicks are drawn incredibly unflattering. There's no way he wanted it to be an orgy.

>>3821642

*she - herself

>>3821499
My only real problem with it is that if you don't even bother to justify the girls' attitudes (first they were super embarrassed to be naked, but now they are just taking turns getting fucked by this guy with no concern for exclusivity), then that defeats the purpose of the premise.

Can anyone give a very basic translation, like a summary, of what goes down in the latest chapter. Sad that nothing has happened on that front.

Someone has a direct link to Chapter 4 raw?

>>3821807
>Sad that nothing has happened on that front.

Yeah, I would say we've reached the point where input from anyone would be welcome. Chapter 5 probably soon. If I could translate, I would.

No offense, but only "Other guy" from the chapter 1-2 team is still showing up, the others haven't shown up for a long time.

If new anons offer to help and they return, they can all just divide the workload or something.

>justify the girls' attitudes

I thought the third chapter did it pretty well, accuracy issue aside.

The first two girls were looking out for their friend who wanted the dick. The first girl wanted to stop the dick, the second girl wanted to train the dick.

>>3821820
It's already in the thread >>3814712 but anyway:

http://exhentai.org/s/ffeac84b3b/744992-39
http://exhentai.org/s/ffeac84b3b/745540-77
http://imgur.com/a/iislI (from Other guy's account)

>>3821704
well, I'll be damned

>>3821704
[citation needed]

>>3821807

No fucking reason, I stopped caring about sene when I read her last work

How many chapter's are expected?

bump

>>3821807
>>3821826
any help with this would be nice.

>>3813286
this page made me barely remember the real thing...
:/

>>3821966
Two more at the very least.

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New preview from his/her twitter.
Without censorship bars \^^/

>>3821826

>The first two girls were looking out for their friend who wanted the dick. The first girl wanted to stop the dick, the second girl wanted to train the dick.

That only justifies their actions, not their attitudes. They're still inexplicably turning into cock-hungry semen demons as soon as they step into the tent.

>>3823138
You know, that more or less describes every plot in any hentai manga ever. Not that this is a point of complaint though..

>>3821807
Not to mention that sex starts feeling awful after you bust a nut the third or fourth time in a 24 hour period. And is nobody concerned about diseases? Two of those girls have boyfriends, they whould require some convincing which most likely won't happen. There's no convincing in general, you'd think the two nerd girls would be super reluctant and ashamed at first, but no. It's the little touches of realism that make a work great, this had that potential but it fell flat on it's face.

>>3823064
>his

>>3823495
are you new to hentai or something?

>>3821704
incorrect. shiwasu no okina has female assistants, he is male.

>>3823495

please stop trying to make sense out of this, we all know girls love dicks

>>3823501

I was pretty sure he/she was a girl, I guess that "uso" at the end is that he's joking

https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/500835563113431040

Discussion is cool but getting this done is cooler. Anyone else willing to help right now? Been over a month since the rest showed up, wish they would. We need to at least get scripts for the new chapters but rechecking the older ones won't hurt, we could revise them for the complete version if needed.

>>3823138
>>3823495
...No? All the girls in the translated chapters have their own attitudes in this. Akiho is forced to help him cum and it's awkward, but "if it's him it's okay". Out of all the girls, she's the closest to him and she secretly likes him. Ayame volunteers in order to spare Sanaka, but she's uncomfortable the whole time. Sanaka volunteers because she's attracted to his body, but she's also uncomfortable with her urges. Keika volunteers to take his virginity so it will be better for Sanaka if her first time is with him. She seems to be the only non-virgin so far, so she's relaxed about it unlike the rest. As for the rest, we won't know the full story until someone translates their parts. The otaku girls were already perving over celebrities and the girls with boyfriends are probably up for some fooling around.

>>3823602
>rationalizing porn plot

lol virgin

>>3823631
lol implying virgin is a bad thing

So when's it gonna be senseis and waterball girls turn?

>>3823708

You mean loli and the tomboy?

I hope soon

>>3823602
>The otaku girls were already perving over celebrities and the girls with boyfriends are probably up for some fooling around.
So shitty writing. Just because the girls in your algebra class swoon over Chris Evans doesn't mean they'll fuck the shy kid who wore a Captain America shirt everyday, even if his dick is huge. Same with the girls with the boyfriends, it would be easy enough to include one of them in the class for some romantic vanilla and ntr the other one or whatever, but no, just make the whole thing one-note.

>>3823847
The otakus aren't just getting off on celebrities, they're getting off on yaoi, they're probably thinking about how dicks feel like.

>the two nerdy girls go to emcee instead of the nerd guy who was crushing on them earlier

I don't wanna believe

>>3823947
Every guy's getting frustrated so I also hope this turns into an orgy.

But lack of progress with getting this scanlated is the worst part. Anyone?

Here's my shitty translation.

First time trying.
http://freetexthost.com/yeh5kqs2dy

>>3824007
It's a translation for ch 3 BTW

>>3824007
And I did it from Japanese to English

>>3824010
nice job thanks

>>3824007
I can type set this just fine if some one gets me some cleaned up raws

>>3824007
and I'll use my translations with the chinese one as reference. I'm reading it now and I'm noticing things.

>>3824007
Thanks! Now this is progress! It would be great if you can do chapter 4 also.

And it's all right with me if other people still volunteer their own translations. Like with translations of books, the more opinions we have the clearer it can become right?

Like before, here's some comments:

- All the honorifics are in place?
- Some interesting differences here from the Chinese to English script.

>It's like an ogre's. Hide it already!
Oni? Demon could work too.

>He's going to cum soon. But I need to calm it down. I don't want Sayaka to face this.
Aya's not saying it to him, she's just thinking it? (It's Sanaka, right?)

>Typical virgin mistake there, Aya.
What did Aya do wrong? Interesting that Keika sounds more mean to her. And it's implied she's not a virgin herself?

>Before you know it, Sayaka could disappear right before your eyes...
Does she mean another guy could take her?

>I'm cumming from a cherry-boy.
Yeah, cherry boy means virgin. Is it more of "I'm going to cum", or is she in fact already cumming?

>This back is just too sexy!
>I think it's sexy, too. I love it!
Her back, or their sex position from behind? If he's talking about her body her response is funny.

>Seriously... There's no one else that can match that. Are you still hard?
What's "that", the way he had sex with her, or his dick?

>This is my body. We'll have to train really hard if we want to get rid of all these overflowing perverted feelings of mine.
We, not I?

>I'm also interested in women's bodies. And because of that, I'm also interested in this pervert.
So he admits he's attracted to her like the other boys?

>Your dick is so intense. It's like a piston!!
She's the one saying it?

To keep a place open for the old team, I'm thinking we shouldn't put it on sadpanda yet, just keep it here and on imgur, what do you guys think?

>>3824041
You can read Chinese too?

>>3824037
I can clean the raw and try to mend some torn parts. Do you have Photoshop or GIMP?

Two options for raws here: >>3818437 is bigger but pages are more skewed and there are black spaces. >3813246 is smaller, some of the art on pages isn't scanned, and colors are off but the pages are more aligned.

Chapter 2 used the scans by the group that did >>3818437, so I suggest we go with that, but like I said earlier in the thread I don't want to lose art in the process of removing the black spaces.

The font we used for word balloons last time was Wild Words, I don't know the other fonts.

And we're gonna reach autosage with 300 posts soon.

>>3824051
Yeah, I made sure to use all the honorifics I saw

I thought about demon, but I think the absurdity of the situation called for something a little more silly.

I've fixed my version to say "Sanaka" now after I doubled checked it. Probably because of a google translate mis-translation.

No I guess she's not just thinking that. I'll change it to “Hurry up and cum. I can't let Sanaka face something like this.”

Aya is no virgin :D . I think a better way of saying it would be “You did a pretty good job... for a virgin.”

Yes, I think she is implying about someone else taking Sanaka.

I guess she's not cumming, just getting off. “I'm getting off to a cherry-boy”

I figured that since she is a model maybe she actually likes her own back? Literally he is saying “This back is too erotic” and she says something like “I understand, backs are sexy. I love them to.” Maybe that's better?

It doesn't say what she is so impressed about, just that he is peerless in something.

Yes, after reading the chinese to english translated version and remembering the second chapter, yeah, he's talking about himself. Oops :P

Yeah, he says “this bitch.” Bitch is the term that they are using for pervert. It makes it sound kinda awesome, but out of character to use bitch instead of pervert. He never talks about himself being a pervert in this one, even though the chinese to english version has him doing that.

Yeah, the piston thing is probably him saying it. I mean, in the next frame she's starting to get really overwhelmed and maybe a bit scared. It'd be weird to be scared like that right after complementing on how rough he's being.

I can't read chinese, I was just going off of the chinese to english version.

I have photoshop, just need to reinstall it.

I can do a lot of the photoshop stuff myself once I get it reinstalled, but if you are more skilled by all means, get a head start on it.

>>3824128
>>3824089
Post your revised script first then I'll post my suggested revision of it, if it's alright.

We should coordinate. It's around 3:40 PM GMT. On weekdays I'm occupied until around 1 pm GMT, and available for around 3-4 hours, I'm free anytime weekends.

>I can do a lot of the photoshop stuff myself once I get it reinstalled, but if you are more skilled by all means, get a head start on it.
What do you feel you can't or don't want to do? I have no tablet so I can't redraw stuff that much and I get by with copy/paste.

Should I blank out the moans and other sound effect bubbles too? Two raw sets, >>3813246 or >>3816519?

>Yeah, I made sure to use all the honorifics I saw.
I noticed he uses both -chan and -san with Keika, is that right?

>Aya is no virgin :D . I think a better way of saying it would be “You did a pretty good job... for a virgin.”
You mean Keika.

>I figured that since she is a model maybe she actually likes her own back?
She is? In the first chapter the guys thought she just looked like one. Can you check the translation of the old chapters too, not just the new ones? There might be something we missed.

>Yeah, he says “this bitch.” Bitch is the term that they are using for pervert.
Even him in the second chapter? I've seen bitch used to mean slut but I don't think slut works as well as pervert here.

>I can't read chinese, I was just going off of the chinese to english version.
The text version or the combined one I did? The translator said his translation was crude and when I put it on the Chinese pages I took some liberties myself.

http://imgur.com/a/bcXdK - his
http://imgur.com/a/T18wu - mine

I plan to post the cleaned raw on there, my account has all the raws and translations of this story - http://zvqk.imgur.com/

>I've fixed my version to say "Sanaka" now after I doubled checked it. Probably because of a google translate mis-translation.
Uh oh, how did you use Google Translate? You did translate straight off the page?

>>3823495
>It's the little touches of realism that make a work great
Sadly for all of us, Tachibana was a one-in-a-decade thing

>>3821499
I think the story went off the rails early. He's the only guy fucking all the girls one after the other. I was enjoying the shit out of the voyeuristic aspect of the first chapter and it threw that all away.

At least the art is great. the girls are varied and cute, and I love seeing girls penetrated by huge dicks in manga.

STOP IT

STOP REPOSTING THE SAME FUCKING PAGES OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER

THE PREMISE AND ART STYLE IS HOT AS FUCK BUT I SWEAR TO SHIT THIS IS THE 12TH TIME WE'VE HAD THIS FUCKING THREAD AND IT IS ALWAYS THE SAME FUCKING PAGES REPOSTED WITH TRANSLATIONS OR WITH SLIGHTLY HIGHER QUALITY OR SLIGHTLY LOWER QUALITY OR SOME BLOOM EFFECT ADDED

JUST POST THE NEW STUFF ONLY AND LET IT FUCKING REST GODAMN

I'll post that new script in just a bit here.

I can redraw a little, but it's not
The >>3813246 set probably would work better. The other one, though it is nice to have things darker and bigger, definitely loses detail.

I got photoshop reinstalled. I have a pretty nice touchscreen, but I've never used it for art before and I don't have a stylus. I've been using photoshop for art for quite some time now so I think I can do a little redrawing.

I used a combination of like 15 sites to translate this.

For what I couldn't read outright I sent through sentence by sentence, then parsed as individual words, then checked the meaning of some of the kanji on denshi jisho, then used the Jaded Network to look up some of the onomatopoeia, and about a dozen other websites for grammar. I've been living in Japan for about 6 months now, but my kanji is still pretty bad.

Ooops. My mistake, that was supposed to be a “-san”

Yes, I meant to say that Keika is no virgin.

I guess I was remembering the first chapter wrong. It kinda sucks that I was just poring over this chapter over and over again with out translating at first. My brain just kinda made up back stories for everything all by itself.

No, he uses “sukebe” for himself and they both use “bitch” for her. And yeah, that's exactly what I was thinking, slut just didn't sound right. I thought about nymphomaniac or nympho, but even though the word doesn't imply any actual sex going on, most people would probably think it sounds that way.

I took your combined version, not the text version.

Google translate was spitting it out as Sayaka, not Sanaka. Even denshi jisho puts it out as “Sayaka” I think chapters 1 and 2 have it wrong. I looked up that kanji by itself and it doesn't seem to have the “na” sound associated with it. The only other way I think it can be said would be “Sakaka” and that sounds funny. I had just assumed that the first two chapters were right.

>>3824510
This

>>3824130
>>3824670
OK, new script. Hopefully this will be the last. I guess the only changes after this will be during the typesetting to make things fit.
textuploader dot com slash oqth

>>3824718
I think probably the best course of action here is to erase all of the text in speech bubbles and boxes and maybe a few of the really easy SFX and typeset this ASAP. Since there will be a tankoubon eventually there's no reason to put out a ton of effort into redrawing a ton crap. I'll just put the translations for the difficult-to-clean sfx in the margins.

Welp, autosage. New thread? Sorry I couldn't post yesterday.

>>3824670
You prefer the >>3813246 set? It crops out part of the art... what if I just clean both sets then you choose.

>Google translate was spitting it out as Sayaka, not Sanaka. Even denshi jisho puts it out as “Sayaka” I think chapters 1 and 2 have it wrong. I looked up that kanji by itself and it doesn't seem to have the “na” sound associated with it.

Oh dear... We got the name from the French translation and nobody brought up issues with it until now.

For these and other reasons I think this should be a separate gallery from our old one on sadpanda if this gets there.

>>3824718
Is it alright if I clean that up a bit? Not going to contest the gist of your translation, just grammar and stuff. Like "erotic and arousing" is redundant.

You up for doing the other chapters?

If you want a credits page I guess you can leave me off it or just call me Anonymous, but I want to help out with this story until it's finished or a more formal group picks it up.

>>3824727
All right, getting on erasing the text. But spelling out the sfx phonetically, don't you prefer just "moaning", "sucking", "pounding", etc.

And yes, the tankoubon will hopefully be the final word on this.

>>3824727
>>3824896
Will post cleaned/textless pages on my imgur account

http://zvqk.imgur.com/

>>3824718
Just a few suggestions

http://pastebin.com/LdfntR1i

>>3824670
>>3824896
>It crops out part of the art...

I mean stuff like Ayame's pubes and Sanaka/Sayaka's nipple on page 1. I'm bummed at losing that.

Eh, I hope the tankoubon scan is the best possible one.

>>3824718
What happened to “I'm getting off to a cherry-boy”? The line is something about pounding now.

>>3824963
I liked that line too, but the problem was that google translate was spitting いいとこ out as "cherry" (really should have been spitting it out as cherry picking). The sentence is saying that his coming (not cumming) and his hitting are his good points.

>>3825093
Erasing text and cleaning right now, maybe of both sets. Will post here and on imgur if possible.

>>3824920
updated that pastebin,

>>3825093
What fonts are you going to use?