/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General

>>7162021

I'd imagine he'd get his bones broken and toss around like a toy, 117 vs ODST style.

>>7162024
Not snek, but I'd reckon that it would be pretty much pic related
Might not be quite tonally appropriate for what's at it's core a lewd story, though

>>7161623
Seems decent, are you planning on continuing the story?

Alright guys I'm working on a western isekai. I assme most of you can guess what that would mean.

How many video games should I reference?
On a scale from goblin slayer to sword arts online?

>>7162162
do not be as obnoxious as the cancer that's SAO

To everyone who fapped to fineprint, purple heart, or outpost


[spoiler] http://i.imgur.com/OHfa7Wl.gifv [/spoiler]

>>7162189
I'd like to but Snek doesn't really put any sex into his stories anymore. Sad.

>>7162201


You know that's because outpost is my commission and I specifically requested that right?

>>7162203
Doesn't change the fact that there's no porn in it.

>>7162214


That's not what you said before. You said Snek doesnt put sex in his stories anymore, which is complete bullshit because this is the only story he's written that doesnt have sex in it, and that's only happening because I instructed him to as apart of his commission

>>7162216

*of this commission
derp

>>7162216
There's still less and less of it in every new story. I preferred the ones that had a lot of it.

>>7162218


And he's writing less because more of his fanbase wants less of it. It was getting pretty bad and making his sex scenes boring because he was repeating the same acts over and over from how many scenes he was putting in. Don't worry, there will be more in whatever he does next, there's only less of it in outpost because I asked for that.

>>7162222
And to you less sex means none at all. I'm pretty sure most people on here like sex in their stories. Otherwise they wouldn't even be here.

>>7162225

Actually, I just want one sex scene, and it's being saved for later. There will be sex in outpost though, fear not.

>>7162229
You realize /d/ is a place for fetishes, right? It even has hentai in its title.

>>7162233


Yes, hence the inclusion of a sex scene with an alien race.

>>7162235
One 2k word scene in a story of 50.000+ words doesn't really do anything for anyone. At that poiint it just feels out of place.

>>7162236

That's your opinion and not how the board works. Commission snek yourself if you want a story with more sex, his prices are very affordable.

>>7162236
Also, If you think his sex scenes don't have enough variety why not let him work on different ones instead of forcing him to not improve at all.

>>7162240

I was more concerned about other things he needed to improve over his sex scenes, which are fine until he starts cramming in too many of them. I'm also asexual, so yeah,

>>7162243
Wait, what? You have no interest in porn, then go to a board about porn to pay an author of porn stories to write a storiy that does not include porn? The hell.

>>7162249

Snek has actually been stuffing the commission with what I love the most: the intimacy and emotions that naturally occur in a relationship. Stuff like that is actually why I'm even here in in /efg/, these stories tend to have a whole bunch of those things.

>>7162251
And you can't see how shitty of a thing to do that is?

>>7162254

People who can't enjoy good writing without it being "story added to sex" are of no concern to me. No one cares that I would prefer less sex, nor do I expect them to. It's the same for both ways

>>7162257
This is a place specifically about sex, If you want all ages stories why not go to an all ages site instead of forcing someone to write a story that isn't about the thing the place is actually about.
And I say force because throwing a few hundred bucks at a person without a job is essentially forcing.

>>7162260

I don't want all ages stories. Please actually read my posts if you want to be an internet tough guy, I specifically stated why I, as an asexual, came in to the erotic fiction general thread in a porn board for stories.

At no point did I force Snek to do anything, and he has actually turned down specific things I asked for in my commission because he didnt feel comfortable writing them. He can do that since you know, he's not being forced to do anything. Is there anything else you want to make yourself sound retarded about?

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>>7162140
Thanks man. Right now I'm looking to go back and edit the story, looking for spelling and grammar mistakes that I've missed, and after that maybe I'll try my hand at one of the requests to get some experience. But yeah, I'll continue it sometime.

>>7162262
Hey poor person, here's a few hundred bucks that you get if you do what I want. No sex or you won't get anything. Not forcing at all.
Also, have you ever pressed on that "catalog" button in the bottom left and thought that maybe this might not be the place for you?

>>7162266


I see you went with the "yes, I want to show more of how retarded I am" option.

My exact words to snek were

"This story needs to be written naturally. Do not put sex in where it doesn’t belong, and don’t leave it out if you think a spot would be a good fit for it."

But please, keep going about how I dont want any sex at all, I kind of want to see the full extent of your retardation out of morbid curiosity.

>>7162267
Early your words were that you only want one scene at the very end of the story.

>>7162269
>>7162267
Could you stop wasting posts on this argument which is obviously going nowhere? Pretty please?

>>7162269

Yes, that's a bare minimum, not a maximum. Snek is allowed to put in more than one if he so chooses.

>>7162270
Yeah, I guess arguing with a person that doesn't like porn on a board about porn doesn't really get you anywhere. Sorry to take up so much space.

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Once upon a time I wrote a story based off of this picture by InCase. I rediscovered it when I logged into my HF-page for the first time in a hundred years. Hopefully there's one or two of you that will enjoy it.

Link: http://pastebin.com/SWhFGa0U
Tags: Sissy, Gangbang, Forced, Spanking, Crossdressing, Bullying.
Length: 5000~ words

>>7162277


Let me help you see things in a different light: Did you like the amount of sex in fineprint 2?

>>7162287
Hm, I guess 2 was a little like the porn heavy epilogues in a lot of VNs. Fun for fapping but not meant to progress the story. Wasn't the biggest fan of cheeseburger Ursi.
If you're asking if I want that amount of sex in all stories, then no. Sex scenes(for fapping) should be very long scenes every once in while. Intimate scenes more often, especially in these kinds of relationship-based stories.

>>7162297


2 was also my commission. I actually agree with you with literally everything you just described about sex scenes.

>>7162229
>I just want one sex scene
>just one

>>7162303

Minimum one. If you guys are seriously hankering for at least one more, I can check with snek on his plans and ask him to toss in another if he wasnt already going to do it. Lord knows there's enough sexual tension going on to make it happen

>>7162271
I hope he puts in at least 2.

The story is already at 35k words and there hasn't been one scene. That's just not the way I like it.

>>7162310
Then read something else.

>>7162312
make me!

Any mermaid stories that aren't on the master list by chance?

Hey guys, I am thinking about continuing this story I posted a while ago, but I'm not sure if the weird "narrated" style I'm using will hold up on a longer run. Should I change it?

>http://pastebin.com/JvByxnjW
>Premise: Guy wakes up to find his equipment grew huge overnight.

>>7162325
None that I'm aware of.

Also, I rewrote the first section of Divine Love earlier in response to the feedback I got last thread. Does the dialog sound better now than it did earlier?

Link is https://docs.google.com/document/d/16KevErEaG7glBQ_SQyWLSQQLkiiPKUTT2EleZA51OrE/edit

Tags: none yet

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>>7162305
>>7162306
Well the whole point of this story is that Schaffer has to be eased into the sex because he isn't comfortable with it at first. One of the complaints I got frequently was "how come everyone is just down to fuck these giant cat aliens?"
I'm probably about 60% done with the story so far.
If Shiny permits it I will have more than one sex scene, but they'll likely be clustered around the tail end of the story.

I was going for a big orgy with all the characters, but now I feel more like individual scenes with a couple of them might be more fitting.

You know me well enough to know he's gonna be fucking Osha and Scarface at minimum.

>>7162281
>bullying
Best tag.

>>7162042
>>7162095
Ok well I'm gonna have to do that now.

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>>7162035
Hmm, you know, I always see edits of that pic, but never of the follow up pic.

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Also here's a thing I wrote on the bus.
If you guys like it I'll continue it after I'm done with Outpost.

Hostage:
http://pastebin.com/4sPqykcU

The pitch is Rebecca is gonna get railed by her guard.

>>7162401
>he's gonna be fucking Osha and Scarface at minimum

>>7162443
>ships weren't made for atmospheric entry
>has his ships do it anyways

The Patriarch really is a retard.

>>7162203
>>7162216
>>7162222
>tripfags in charge of taste
You suck.

Also checked.

I once read a wonderful story on literotica about a girl with a dick and she and her sister (who might be either adopted or her step sister I can't remember) and it's multiple chapters and one they go to the doctors and the doctor examined the futa and she got her to Cum all over her and while that happened the mom and sister watched and the sister fingered herself through her pants
The dickgirl/futa hides her cock by putting it in her pussy and at one instance her sister just rips it out of her pussy in front of their neighbor who is a girl.
Uhh let's see what else I remember, she was going to have sex with her boyfriend in the beginning but he found out that she had a dick so he broke uo with her and she went home and I think her sister found her
Her her sister and their neighbor all do it at least once
God that had to be the greatest story I had read and that was like 7 years ago and I never found it again so any help would be greatly appreciated

>>7162458
>in charge of taste
No. He's just in charge of how he spends his own money.

>>7162325
Those had better be waterproof.

>>7162401
Do you prefer to bully or be bullied?

>>7162478
Depends on what side of the bed I got out of.

>>7162400
It's a whole lot better. The only thing I would really question is the overly familiar tone, but that could just be the characters.

>>7162550
It's more a reflection of Haniel's personality- I'm picturing her as being a bit more relaxed and laid-back compared to the stereotype. That said, I still am a little concerned the backrub thing doesn't quite fit. My plan is/was to transition from it into the foreplay as advised last thread, so I could work in the sensory details better.

I get the feeling that there are better ways I could go about doing it that I haven't thought of, though, so I'd like to know if you have any other ideas I could use in its place.

>>7162556
I'd say just keep writing. I tend to get caught up in making sure that every piece is "perfect" and end up spending hours writing a paragraph or two. From what I can tell, you likely have a similar problem. I would just keep writing and see where this path leads. If you like it, keep it. If not, we'll see what we can come up with.

>>7162558
>I tend to get caught up in making sure that every piece is "perfect" and end up spending hours writing a paragraph or two.

That's exactly what happens to me far more than I'd like to admit. I guess I'll just try to come up with something and post an update when there's enough to justify it.

>>7162426
Schaffer should be the one to use his newfound stronk to trash the admiral, but I think that most of us would like to see moralez literally tearing through a squad of goons

>>7162035
How come /wst/ came to /d/ but /erpg/ went to /soc/?

>>7162618
Because you touch yourself at night.

>>7162618
Because /erpg/ was about hooking up with people to have cybersex. /wst/ was about posting smut, often skirting /d/ territory.

>>7162401


Do it, snek. You have my blessing and funding.

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>>7162401
>Now I feel more like individual scenes with a couple of them might be more fitting.

This is a good change.

>You know me well enough to know he's gonna be fucking Osha and Scarface at minimum.

This sounds good. I hope he does. Those large ladies need some loving.

Maybe the twins at some point?

Lastly, I find it strange that people are picking at the fact that people want to fuck in porn stories. I've read the other stories on here. They really don't deviate from the norm there.

>>7162621
How is roleplay not "skirting /d/ territory" in any way other erotic creative writing is?

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>>7162643
You can have that in color now!
There was always going to be porn, I just really wanted to build up to it.

>>7162640
Roger that.

>>7162648
Because it was still more about hooking up than actually telling good stories and sharing them.

>>7162653
This is true. Most of the /erpg/ threads I saw were more about looking for people to ERP with than the roleplaying itself.

>>7161623
Pretty good. The prose is maybe a little on the flowery side, but it seemed appropriate for the gothic setting you seemed to be going for.

>sleeping for just an hour and several days
should be
sleeping for just an hour or several days
though.

>>7162281
Pretty good story, I love the inspiration too.

Opinions: You start off with a pretty big info dump, that would be better to break up. There is a lot of tell, which breaks immersion for me. Instead of saying "A sudden fear overcame her", show it? For example:

As she heard the voices, her heart beat faster and sweat prickled her brow. She resumed her efforts to break free from the cuffs while keeping them from rattling.

Minor punctuation and grammar (breath instead of breathe). "think so[,] [P]rincess" is another example. The transition of time between lines 113 and 115 was too abrupt.

Now, I really like submissive boys and the fucking was hot and lovely. The domination lovely and sexy. Thank you.

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Been having some trouble finishing something off lately, and I think I've just realised why.

I can't seem to pin down, in my own mind, what it is about the particular fetish I'm writing about (sorta Alien impregnation/birth) that turns me on. Thus, I don't know how to reproduce it in my writing.

Anyone have a problem like this, or an idea of how to get around it?

Pic related.

>>7162716
Try doing twenty questions? Or start with the general parts. Is is the hunt of being chased and caught? Or the pinning down and preparation? The sense of helplessness and the growing realization that she is going to be raped. Or the actual penetration/rape? The egg laying is also a good part, do the details of having eggs or aliens impregnated turn you on? There are also the details of it growing, the despair and realization. You also have the actual birth, good for lovely details, and then the follow up. Each one has its merits. Personally, I'm turned on by all of it but I really like the fucking/oviposition parts of alien.

Once you figure out the parts you like, you can then try to figure out which details you like about it? Each one has different parts that make it interesting.

One approach is find the stories that really turn you on and see which parts are the ones you keep envisioning in your head. You could use the stories with Newt becoming a breeding slave to the aliens (forgot the name), TDM's Spider Attack, or other related stories to map out your turn-ons.

>>7162724
Argh, god, the way you go on you make me want to try and do it all over again.

Honestly, it was that bit in AVPR that got me into this fetish. You know what bit I mean. Hospital and such. Aside from the actual snuff part, that always seemed kinda illogical to me.

I've been looking at the scene again, trying to figure it out, but I just can't put my finger on it.

It might well be the whole idea that does it for me, and that could be why I can't reproduce it myself. I'm biased, sort of.

I mean, were I to give you a large amount of dirty, dirty money, how would you do it? Esteemed horror-fetishist that you are.

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>>7162716
To me, it's the difference or contrast between the two partners. On one hand, you have a human female, and the other, a humanoid or animalistic being that gets to mate with her.
As for birth, it's more of a domination thing-- you essentially own the female when you make her carry your offspring, and again, if it's an alien doing it, it's more arousing since 'they're not supposed to breed since they're different'. Taboos are exciting. Anyway, that's just my thought.

I have a similar problem. Right now, I'm working on an age difference/straight shota story, and I totally know why I enjoy about this particular fetish. However, I am writing it for you guys (and a bunch of friends), and I still don't completely understand what others like about it.

>Pic unrelated. I was just browsing my '/h/' folder and this gave me an idea for a new story.

2000 word update, new content at "It took them a while to get back to the longhouse"

Outpost:
http://pastebin.com/J0xWt8Dj

>>7162734
>I have a similar problem. Right now, I'm working on an age difference/straight shota story, and I totally know why I enjoy about this particular fetish. However, I am writing it for you guys (and a bunch of friends), and I still don't completely understand what others like about it.
I've wondered about that myself sometimes (that is one of my fetishes) and, honestly, I think I don't want to know why I like it. Goodness knows it bothers me enough normally.

>>7162730
Yeah, I never liked the idea of snuffing at the end of that. It was always a hotter story of them breed again and again, tortured until the end of time with endless fucking/impregnation.

If I had lots of money, I'd probably do the same thing. Break it into those parts (setup, hunt, capture, prep, breeding, pregnancy, birth, conclusion) and then focus on each one. I like a lot of set up, so you have the scene and setting, get an emotional hang on the character. Then you need to get into the hunt, which usually means put them into a bad position, so build up the creatures and their abilities (foreshadowing is good by seeing or rescuing a former one). And then that would ram right into the actual scene itself. If I was really into it, I'd probably have another cycle after she was "rescued" and have it start over again, or find out it wasn't over.

Now if you mean in a non-hypothetical manner, I usually charge $100/5k word minimum (I usually go over). A lot of it determines how much details, build up, or scenes you want. I have many of them up at https://tsade.com/categories/commissioned/

>>7162744
Yes, I'm familiar with your chamber of horrors. Been there before, many times. One of TDM's stories was what got me into smutwriting in the first place.

Actually, you know what, might as well put up what I did on here as well as everywhere else. Like to see what you think of it, if nothing else.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13IhJ3_M7eDSMFUoAilrnJHnzQWoZfNLbC_rxZ-Uff0o/edit?usp=sharing

>>7162738
fucking batman utility belt

I've decided to start writing a bit, and would love some feedback. This is the segment in question, 645 words long, so not much to go on, but generally indicative of my writing style.

http://pastebin.com/4wJVfqVh

I haven't written much in English before, especially not fiction, and am primarily wondering if my language is too stilted? If this were to go anywhere, it would be a multi parter. You might notice that I don't describe either character in any great detail. I find spending describing the appearance of characters in early paragraphs both awkward and difficult. So that's something I would definitely like to learn about, if you have anything to say about it.

>>7162734
Did she kill that guy?

>>7162811
The language is fine, but the setup feels like a Monty Python sketch. You really don't give us enough to go on. Critique is almost impossible with so little. I understand the idea that you want some feedback before you write too much, but it's extremely difficult to give any helpful advice about a story when you only give us 645 words.

>>7162738
You're killing me here snek. I can barely stand balls this blue

I'm a bit sad you opted for no gay stuff in this one, because a MMF scene with borleans would be super hot

>>7162881
>mmf
Does snek even do man on man?

>>7162876
I'll keep mucking around until I have something more substantial to share.

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>>7162892
Kinda?

I want to do some trap stuff in the next commission and in the Krell fic I keep putting off.
I don't know how good it will be though.

I'm not into straight up gay stuff, and I feel like since I have a fairly large established audience now, I might put people off if I throw a random gay scene in my femdom story.

I dunno maybe I'll do like an optional scene just for Shiny and you guys, and not include it in the main release so it doesn't bleed out. That way only the people who want it have to see it, and if it ends up sucking it won't ruin the story.

>>7162747
Good job. I added a few opinions while I was reading it. They are just from my experience, feel free to ignore them.

>>7162182
What do you mean by obnoxious?

I'm really just trying to get a feel for how much video game terminology anons can handle in a story.
Less is more etc

>>7162952
I'm looking at those now, thanks.

Starting to wonder now if I shouldn't leave this story and try and nail down what I want to do in a separate one. One problem that I think I've identified is that I don't quite know how to translate the visuals (from the scene I have in mind) properly into the text.

Maybe. You're good with this visual stuff, what do you suggest?

>>7162970
One of the best things to learn something is do it, finish it, learn, and move on. Endlessly working on the same piece gets you lost. I would only do minor thing, read what works for you, figure out what doesn't, and then write another. And another. Just keep writing. It is the iteration that is important, not the goal of a single perfect story.

Visual stuff. I think I'm decent at it, but you have to decide for yourself. Mainly what I do is I imagine myself in a given scene and only write what I would feel, what I would know. Using your example, when she wakes up, she doesn't know there is a monster poised to rape her face. Instead, she knows there is something grabbing her face, claws on the side, and something pressing up against her lips. She can taste it, feel it. The same is that she can feel the air around her, the pressure of the others coming up her legs. She can hear the crinkle of paper, the slosh of its egg sacs.

Try to imagine what you would sense, but keep it paced. Give those details. Also what she is feeling. A really good book about this is Techniques of a Selling Writer, it also talks about this idea of a MRU, basically humans almost react to something. So write a motivation (something that triggers), then react to it. Then that reaction is the other character's motivation and then they respond. It draws the story further along because it becomes a push and pull of detail and reactions.

>>7162957
SAO is badly written trash, avoid it.

As for references, as many as you're comfortable with. It's not like 4chan is short on fucking nerds.

>>7162957
What's the setting? If it's an isekai without game features, don't fucking reference games all the time.

>>7162981
This meme needs to die. It's no worse than most of the game-related LN shit that's getting published nowadays. The only thing that makes it worse is the unwanted harem. If there's going to be an unwanted harem, there should at least be character development. Well, that's why Sinonon is best girl.

Lara Croft/Werewolf writeanon about?

>>7162650
oh man
>>7162936
OH MAN

>>7162992
It's a game isekai, but there's degrees to which the game mechanics can be referenced along the lines of classes and levels.

>>7163004
I didn't think anyone on /d/ would call a harem unwanted.

>>7162334

Anyone?

Does anybody have a free download link for a tg fiction ebook called "Hand Me Downs" by KK

>>7163110
You're going to have to be way more patient than that. There's about two of us who actually regularly give feedback and there are only so many hours in the day.

It never ceases to amaze me the amount of drama these threads accumulate. And I guess I'm no better since I'm going to perpetuate it. But I don't like seeing bullies go unopposed.

>>7162266
>Hey poor person, here's a few hundred bucks that you get if you do what I want
Welcome to the free market.

>>7162310
>That's just not the way I like it.
>waaah this creator isn't doing what I want
Kill yourself or get a job you entitled commie poorfag.


>>7162233
You realize that fetishes don't necessarily involve sex, right? And that often, they're strong enough to completely sublimate sexual desire? So what the hell are you doing on the fetish board if you want vanilla shit? And last time I checked, it was called erotic fiction general, not sex fiction general.

>>7162305
You're a better person than I am. I probably would have doubled down on the no sex request just to give that other anon blue balls after that tirade.

>>7163156
Please don't engage them, we don't need these threads going to shit again like when whine-anon was bitching about snekguy.

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>>7163156
>>7163161
How about you both shut up and post smut, instead of worsening the drama you claim to hate so much?

Pic semi-related, Christmas is going to be in another week, which is close enough to justify posting this.

>>7162334
Writing seems fine. My only criticism could be that before reading it I don't understand why this fetish is hot, and after I read it I'm still not sure, and now it sounds more painful and annoying than I was imagining. Try to illustrate better what's arousing about it in the story, maybe? I was almost with you when you started talking about how his normal hands suddenly looked girly while stroking his new monster cock, but then you quickly dropped that.

>>7162491
This, best taste is adaptable taste.

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>>7163170
>asking people to stop engaging drama creators in order to avoid more is worsening it

OK chief.

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>>7163191
The very act of asking people to ignore drama creators draws more attention to them. Just ignore and report them next time.

>>7163170
Very nice! Good proportions overall.

Only criticisms I might be able to make - and I'm not even sure if they're valid - are these:
- on the lower foot, the one belonging to the elf on top, the distance between the thin portion of the ankle and the bottom of the heel looks a bit too short and the toes look too short as well.

- bottom girl does not appear to have ANY calf muscle?

- shoulder looks too narrow from front to back on top girl, but I may just be used to my own musculature

>>7163196
Flattering, but I didn't draw that. That was something Muju did back in the day.

Suffice to say the few attempts I have made at drawing ought not to be seen, as even I cannot look at them without hurting myself.

>>7163156

Doubling down was temping, but I know that would have sucked for everyone, not just that one whining guy.

>>7163161


To be fair, I commissioned outpost specifically to piss off whine anon, as I promised I would

>>7163200
>To be fair, I commissioned outpost specifically to piss off whine anon, as I promised I would

Am I the only one who thinks that's an incredibly petty thing to do? I mean, I'd think you'd want to commission something for your own pleasure, not to piss someone else off.

>>7163202


Oh god no, I have tons of ideas at any given time that I'd love to see, whine anon was just a great excuse to commission one earlier than planned

>>7163205
At any rate, if those people are annoyed that your commission is what it is, they are free to commission Snek themselves.

Or better yet, write their own fics because it's not like he copyrighted Borealeans or anything. Hell, I could write something with them myself if I didn't dislike furries.

>>7163202
What if it's both? Double the pleasure, double the fun :^)

This gives me an idea. If I were more into chastity/orgasm denial, I'd write a fic about a writer stringing readers along, making them think a sex scene is coming, then denying them every time, but the story is so good they can't stop reading. Perhaps this is what motivates sitcom writers when they do "will-they-won't-they" relationships (I know it's just for the suspense value, but it's a funny idea to imagine the writer getting off on the idea of denying so many people).

>>7163193
>ignore and report them
What rule are they breaking? Even though I hate the posts, reporting them seems a bit too close to the "delete everything I don't like" mentality.

If I were a mod, I wouldn't want to deal with deciding whether or not to delete someone's posts saying "I don't like this". I think we should try to police our own community where possible since I don't want the reputation of the general that was run off of 2 boards.

>>7163207
> If I were more into chastity/orgasm denial, I'd write a fic about a writer stringing readers along, making them think a sex scene is coming, then denying them every time, but the story is so good they can't stop reading. Perhaps this is what motivates sitcom writers when they do "will-they-won't-they" relationships (I know it's just for the suspense value, but it's a funny idea to imagine the writer getting off on the idea of denying so many people).

How head-implodingly meta.

>What rule are they breaking?
I think it falls under global rule 6, but you have a point about community policing- especially since we may not have another board to move to. Where are we supposed to go in that case, /b/?

On a completely different topic, have we taken a survey of this thread's participants recently to see what kinks/pairings everyone is into? I'd be curious to see what the audience is for xyz kink - I still won't write something unless it personally interests me, but it helps to know that there might be a larger audience for it.

>>7163215
>How head-implodingly meta
Yeah, that's the other reason I wouldn't write it. Seems far too twee. Then again, I have started writing exhibitionism stuff even though I'm not into it at all, so maybe in 10 years I'll be capable of pulling it off without making everyone grimace?

I guess I haven't seen antagonistic posts get deleted here unless they're REALLY bad.

>/b/
God fucking forbid. I do hang out there sometimes, and we'd drown in shitposting.

/trash/ most likely. Don't want to see it come to that.

>>7163223
Actually, yes. The results are right here.

http://www.strawpoll.me/11677022/r

>>7163226
I always find it strange that that poll doesn't have domination or bdsm considering how popular femdom is on here.

>>7163226
># of votes: 216
>but 10 multiple choices
WTF? Is there any way to determine how many unique IPs voted in this poll?

>>7163231
Yeah, I would have separated f/f and m/m, and also made femdom a separate category. Some people who would tick the femdom box would not tick the 'rape/bdsm' box. But such is the nature of trying to measure kinks in the population, I guess.

>>7163226
Since you said
>other, please specify in thread
I'm gonna, and say that I THIRST FOR THE BLOOD OF THE ANCIENTS and even more so for 100% consensual, preferably romantic and cuddly sex

>>7163284
>I THIRST FOR THE BLOOD OF THE ANCIENTS
What does that even mean in smut terms?

Khorne, is that you?

>>7163226
>other
I have a MASSIVE thing for mutual defloration/virginity loss stuff, rare as it is, and also for preexisting friendship and kissing and general sappy vanilla shit.
Also, non-rapey monstergirls, monsterboys and general romantic nonhuman stuff

>>7163289
I was just making a lame MGS-webcomic joke [spoiler] (this: http://www.doctorshrugs.com/foxhound/comic.php?id=57)[/spoiler] because I'm very drunk and thought it was funny

>>7163298
Holy fuck, I remember that comic. I saved a few pics from that, particularly the one about Psycho Mantis saying "You'll never know whether I pissed in your coffee or not" and "Outer Heaven? More like Outer Jersey".

Thanks for the trip down nostalgia lane.

>>7163292
>mutual defloration/virginity loss
So vanilla it crosses the line twice and becomes massively degenerate.

>>7162162
The amount of video games you refrence would be largely based on what kind of isekai world you're doing. If the world is a Mashup you're going to have to refrence more games.
I would try to limit it to a few relatively similar games,otherwise it comes across as rather directionless or becomes a name dropping festival.
>isekai
>dark souls
>hollowing intensifies

>>7163207

And how do you plan to "police" it? What can you do to prevent shitposting except 'report, hide, ignore'?

No, shitposting yourself isn't a solution.

>>7162747
TDM?

This is really hot. I agree with most of t'Sade's comments, particularly those about detailing sensations, and I understand why a third person limited perspective is preferred because it focuses so much on one person's experience, but this piece was very effective at painting a picture in my mind, like I was seeing it take place in a movie (particularly the first two pages, for example: "Behind her, fat droplets of moisture began running down the sides of the crate, forming an ever-growing puddle around it." added to the tension), and that was very stimulating and kept me reading.

>>7162682
I appreciate that, thank you so much for the feedback.

>>7162747
I just finished this story and I must say that I really liked it. Great stuff.

>>7163206
>it's not like he copyrighted Borealeans or anything

Well the stories are copyrighted by virtue of being on some of the hosting sites I use, and I assume their contents are too as a result (not that it's enforceable).

That said, anyone can write in the setting if they want to, and I've been writing the Tourist Guide specifically to facilitate that and give people easy reference material.

I'm in the phase of converting it into a PDF and formatting it right now, because Ebook readers scrambled the pictures.

>>7163236
I set the poll to disable IPs voting more than once, though I also allowed people to select more than one choice if they wished. I figured that would give a somewhat better representation of what people wanted. After all, most of us have more than one fetish at any given time.

>>7163345
https://rodo.tsade.com/tdm/

I've collected the TDM stories. They like things a bit rougher (fair amount of snuff) but huge cocks, impregnation, and alien intelligence. Oh, and a girl-eating couch. Some people really like it, but TDM disappeared, which is why I have it archived on my site.

>>7163623
>They like things a bit rougher (fair amount of snuff) but huge cocks, impregnation, and alien intelligence. Oh, and a girl-eating couch. Some people really like it, but TDM disappeared, which is why I have it archived on my site.
I got so narked about how the couch one ended so abruptly, it was perfect up until then.

I think reading TDM's stuff was what left me with my distaste for snuff in things like this. It feels like slamming the book shut when you're only halfway through reading it, y'know? Cuts short what could be a good deal of potential, most of the time.

>>7163628
Yeah, that is one reason I drifted from the Dolcett communities. I have a couple where it keeps going after that, but in general, I like it when they hang around. :)

I know what you mean by TDM's couch. *sigh*

>>7163640
It's like how I said last night, it was one of his Space Babes stories (the one with the three-headed dragon and the planet of sperm) that actually started me doing this.

I read that, felt unsatisfied by the ending, and wondered why I couldn't try and do something more satisfactory. Sorta worked, although I ran out of steam before long.

>>7163644
That is one reason why I have epic endings to my stories, I don't like 5-6 paragraph finales. Of course, most aren't as bad as the 25k word chapter in Puppy Mill, but still, I like a good, satisfying ending. A noble goal.

>>7163659
By the way, I've been looking over the suggestions you made to Unwanted Encounter last night (thanks to all the people who read it, btw!) and something's occurred to me.

I was kinda writing the story, originally, for that Sparrow pic I posted up yonder, and that plus how most people know what a facehugger looks like meant that I didn't feel like I needed to bother describing them in much detail.

Would've just felt like I was repeating what they already know, to me.

>>7163691
True, but *she* doesn't know what they look like. It is one aspect of writing third-person limited is that you have the chance of describing of it from her point of view. So, she might see a flexible cock with a bunch of legs. Or crab legs and it has a strange tail. Or a pair of sloshing sacs with some sort of tail. No matter what, you are showing the face huggers from a new light, one that can hint to what is going to happen to her (it had long claws that looked like the fingers of a horror monster who strangled people).

You don't have to go into major detail, but sprinkling details is pretty good. We've seen it on the screen, but how does it feel, how does it smell? These are things that aren't in the movies and add more.

Mainly, describing the face hugger from her point of view helps the reader get "into" the character's head which helps establish an emotional connection to them which makes it a hotter story when she gets raped. It's all about getting that connection.

>>7163714
You know, this'd be easier if you go back on the doc, we could talk there more easily.

>>7163741
Or just email me at [email protected]. Using Linux and Google Docs is not unlike ripping my genitalia out with a rusty spoon.

>>7163749
Emailing you will take even longer. What's wrong with using the chat in the doc?

Been working with another board to make a wiki for storing lewd SCPs.

The backstory we've managed to cobble together thus far is that we're a subcontractor of The Foundation and take over when an SCP is too sexually predatory. BMC (Black Monastery Containment) is designed specifically to handle these kinds of anomalies, since it's an old group formed by the Vatican to hunt down succubi, pacify them, and then either contain or eliminate them. There's even gender-segregated facilities run by all-male or all-female staff. For the extreme cases, there's also a facility run by surgically castrated/neutered individuals, to the point where they all have had lobotomies to avoid be controlled by sexual urges.

These days, BMC is secular, but maintains some of the former Catholic titles and themes out of a sense of tradition. It takes its job seriously, writing dry, clinical reports and using Templars as its internal "fun police".

If you're interested in writing, the wiki is being trialled at http://bmc-wiki.freeddns.org/wiki/Main_Page and there are 3 BMCs up at http://bmc-wiki.freeddns.org/wiki/BMC_Series_1

Sorry about the shilling, but since it started on /trash/, we need some fresh blood to make things more "interesting".

>>7162334
I found this very hot and would be interested in reading more like it. Can't offer much more than that.

>>7163091
"Unwanted harem" is where the guy isn't interested in the girls, especially where he's in love with one (or someone else) already. The author said that the heroines would all get a happy ending, but there's literally no romantic development between the MC and any of the girls except the main girl.

>>7162162
IT'S CALLED PORTAL FANTASY

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>7163927
No it isn't.

>>7163968
Not the reincarnation-type, but certainly the summoned type is called "portal fantasy" and has been around much longer in Western literature than in Eastern literature.

Bumping out two or three, free, shoooort stories to put up as examples on my (Currently non-existent) NSFW commission page. Anybody here got a little request they want written up as a several page-ish fic?

>>7164210
Let's see those stories first, then it'll be easier to decide. Plus, more content is always better.

>>7164220
>(Currently non-existent)

>>7164223
Right, overlooked that. It's just easier to see what a writer's strengths are firsthand, is all.

Anything in particular you prefer to write about, might I ask?

>>7164225

All good; I'm reasonably versatile, but I'd say the more '/d/' the request the better, I'm trying to push my boundaries a bit for practice because requests are things I have no interest/experience in like 99% of the time.

Hell, first writefag commission I ever did was Homestuck schoolgirls with dog cocks engaging in watersports; so yeah, whatever your dick desires anon.

>>7164236
Can you write that Lara croft/Werewolf story so that anon will stop bothering me about it?

>>7164243
Sure thing, seen that post a few times. Any further details about the request to jog my memory?

>>7164210
>generic modern fantasy setting
>girl is hanging out with her dragonboy friend
>he accidentally finds her dragon dildo
>offers her the real thing
>they fug
>they fall asleep together
>the end

ok dudes

wrote this finally

warning;;;; tags

>Permanently pregnant shemale
>absorption/assimilation/unbirth
>transformation/growth
>lots of fucking

>>7164251
woops

http://pastebin.com/K1uxUWHY

>>7164210
Fairly standard fantasy world, female rancher watches as a minotaur slave tends to her cowherd, admires his oddly pleasant physique and fantasises about how he would bed her - if only she wasn't a married woman. She works up the nerve to flirt with the minotaur when he moves into the sheltered pens, thinking she'd stop at flirting but finding herself more fully drawn to the bull-man - and incredibly horny, as her husband has been neglecting some of his marital duties - and finally sets to breaking her wedding vows in the cow shed.

>>7164210
A super-slutty space pilot goes to a space station glory hole and sucks and fucks a bunch of weird alien dicks

>>7164256
Got any pics of the dicks you'd like to see?

>>7164249
Half a tick, I'll get my notes.

Yeah, here we go, the idea was that Lara is transported to this pocket dimension, populated by werewolves and other creatures that have been dropped there from across the multiverse (like her).

The tribe of werewolves that she meets immediately upon arrival are the last "civilised" ones left, and as such don't rape her. Instead, the focus is on her teaching them the joys of consensual sex in return for protection/help, as she waits for the next conjunction that will allow her to return home.

That enough?

>>7164263
not him, but hemipenes & ovipositors would be cool imo

>>7164263
I dunno, maybe just whichever two bad dragon toys you think'd be most fun in the mouth, another one that's horse-like but pleasantly slimey, maybe some hemipenes, maybe straight tentacles, and definitely one very large but otherwise normal human cock. Sound good?

>>7164243
>>7164250
>>7164264
>>7164255
>>7164256
>>7164266
>>7164311
The plea of your boners has been heard, keep an eye out.

Also got a CoC-ish style text game I've been putting together for a couple weeks, I may include a few of these as scenes rather than standalone fics; will update you if I do so.

>>7162459
>I once read a wonderful story on literotica about a girl with a dick and she and her sister (who might be either adopted or her step sister I can't remember) and it's multiple chapters and one they go to the doctors and the doctor examined the futa and she got her to Cum all over her and while that happened the mom and sister watched and the sister fingered herself through her pants
>The dickgirl/futa hides her cock by putting it in her pussy and at one instance her sister just rips it out of her pussy in front of their neighbor who is a girl.
>Uhh let's see what else I remember, she was going to have sex with her boyfriend in the beginning but he found out that she had a dick so he broke uo with her and she went home and I think her sister found her
>Her her sister and their neighbor all do it at least once
>God that had to be the greatest story I had read and that was like 7 years ago and I never found it again so any help would be greatly appreciated


this sounds great...I've tried searching for "futa incest" and that sort of thing on Literotica but no luck yet. I'll keep looking but if other anons find out we'd all love to know

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>>7164250
That sounds cute.

>>7162459
>>7164463
Unfortunately,this thread is more about making new erotic fiction than it is about finding old stuff, so you'd be better off asking /r/ or someplace like that.

Once again, I'm switching the master smut list google doc to "suggest only" due to vandalism issues. Remember, your suggestions can still be added to the list, it'll just have to go through me first.

I apologize for the inconvenience once again, and advise that you blame the faggot who thought it would be funny to delete the entire list and replace it with (and I quote) "RIP U WEEB FAGS".

Twice.

In the same day.

>>7164250
thirding

>>7164431
>CoC-ish style text game I've been putting together for a couple weeks
Neat. Got any samples to show?

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>>7163202
Don't worry, I also commissioned Snek in protest of whineanon, but there will be tons of lewd--a veritable cornucopia all expenses paid trip to the 24-hour lewd mart. Fuckin' ayy lmaos, robots, elf rent boys, tentacle monster mating ball orgies, fungus among us, and a little something for the fujos. Tch. Probably won't have time till Janaury. But I am gonna crack the whip, even if I have to rub Tiger Balm into the man's joints and blackmail a doctor to write out a Flexeril script. Though don't get me wrong, I love blue-eyed space cat power-lifting muscle daddies as much as the next faggot.

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>>7164580
>robots

You have my attention. Elaborate.

>>7164513

Nothing tangible enough to post, It's mostly been setting up a system that reads from a single 'master' text file, so I can add content with minimal tweaks and hopefully it'll remain simple enough for anyone to make their own custom 'adventures' just by editing the text file.

Still kinda undecided on what it should be, like whether it should include combat/exploration or just be a VN style fuckventure with no stats beyond physical appearance and relationship status with NPCs.

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>>7164588
Alright, so I'm just rough drafting this stuff. Not sure exactly what Snek is gonna do with it. But the tin can in question consists of the mind-transfer of an engineer, in a chassis built to serve as the herald of a megalomaniac AI. The two of them are relics from the height of human technology and expansion. They meddle on an alien planet where colonization went horribly wrong, and life is more or less a grungy medieval RPG campaign. Anyway, to get to the god damned point: she takes the visage of an angel. She's an ice queen, but she loves toying with guys and blue-balling them. Is she equipped? Um--stay tuned! There should be a subplot involving a religious sect who worship her. ~Ooh~ but the cycle has broken and everything's gone to shit. She hasn't shown up for the centennial rite. You're probably wondering... is that a lewd rite? Why yes, it is.

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>>7164638
I'm a little confused, so is the guy (who said AI is almost certainly going to fuck) a human or a robot with a human's mind uploaded into it? And just as importantly, is he equipped?

That also reminds me, I really ought to finish Electric Awakening Part 3 one of these days. I haven't given up on it, but I'm in the awkward position of having to reread my own fics just to remind myself of the story so far. Has that ever happened to anyone else?

Oh well, on the bright side at least I might be able to revise some of the old material as well.

>>7164599
>or just be a VN style fuckventure with no stats beyond physical appearance and relationship status with NPCs.
Probably better. Getting overambitious with this shit is what kills projects. You don't have infinite furry money and actually competent people to do the work for you that fenoxo does, so don't even try and operate on his level

>>7164652
Besides, Fen's stuff turned out badly at the end anyway.

>>7164650
I didn't mention the guy: a cliche human rogue who finds himself in the right place at the wrong time. Or is it vice versa? He'll be fucking a lot of things. He's a tetrachromat--four cones in the eyes. So I will be on Snek's ass to make sure he ups his color vocabulary game.

>>7164678
As long as robo-sex is involved it'll be good in my books.

>>7164678
>in the right place at the wrong time. Or is it vice versa?
The RiGhT DoNg in the wRoNG PlaCe cAN maKe All The dIFF-ER-EnCE IN THE WORLd

>you're reading this in my voice

>>7164686
we need G-man smut now

>>7164686
>YFW you're a resistance fighter and finish inside your battlebuddy/GF for the first time, only for time to stop and you hear this

>>7164599
Probably best to stick with the simpler, easier option. I don't remember giving much of a shit about the combat in CoC beyond just jacking my stats up to max so I could breeze through it to get to the actually decent parts of that game, so unless the mechanic is intended as a core feature of the game, rather than a tax you pay for the good bits, just go with the cut-down version.

Beyond that, there'll be at least one person around here who's interested in seeing you finish it, and I'm sure there'll be plenty more willing to offer any technical insight they might have.

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>>7162936
I'm just one person and obviusly don't represent the rest of the community, but would like to make my voice heard and say that I totally don't mind some gay content, especially if it's optional. Whether it's Zagza the catbro or a snugglefest with Yuka and Yura after a night of drinking, utawareumono style, it'd be nice to see some male borealans getting in on the fun. It'd only be fair after all. Can't have the women being the only ones benefitting from these cultural exhanges.

[Here's a little drabble I made recently. let me know if any of you would like more. And It's not meant to be an attack on any other writers here, This character is just a fan of 'bodice ripper' romance novels as a kind of mental junkfood and compares her experience with them to reality.]

Allison's lips part readily, eager to meet her lover on the doorstep, Arms spread wide for the ensuing and all encompassing embrace.


Kisses are an odd thing... You try to get a writer to describe the best ones in the world, and the descriptions fall flat, time and again. Why?

Allison chuckled as she mused on this, still smooching away as she did so; She knew why. It's because those writers shied away from the facets of kissing that, to put it bluntly, were somewhat off putting. Who wanted to describe the way one's tongue could glide across their lover's teeth, Pressing between each one of them to graze against their gums and send electric shocks that gather at the roof of your lover's mouth.

They don't talk about the way you can press your tongue as far as it can go, turning your head and spreading your lips to press just that much further, nor can they describe how it feels to have the back of your mouth caressed by that same lover's tongue.

Drool trading places, Teeth clinking gently, the grip of one another's hands against the back of your heads... there was a lot to kissing most writers could not handle... or maybe they just suck at kissing. Allison gave them a moment of worry before she purged her mind of the thoughts of other's. For now she was Kissing her lover, and that was more than enough to think about on it's own!.

>>7164960
Your name seems vaguely familiar. Have you posted stuff here before?

>>7165000
yup, here's the stuff i used to have posted for you nerds
http://pastebin.com/u/Nirguy

>>7164210
>>7164431
Do you think you can add ome more request?

Milfy/mature woman consenting but reluctantly/unwillingly having sex with an eager futa girl complete with nipple fucking and impregnation

>>7164466
M-more giantess stuff please.

>>7164960
>writers shied away from the facets of kissing that, to put it bluntly, were somewhat off putting.
>tongue could glide across their lover's teeth
>press your tongue as far as it can go
>back of your mouth caressed by that same lover's tongue.
>Drool trading places, Teeth clinking gently, the grip of one another's hands against the back of your heads
But... those are all incredibly common descriptions of kissing, not only here but in probably every 'romance' novel I've ever read.

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>>7164960
Read Snekguy's stuff, has the best A+ kissing.

>>7165197
>Snekguy
>Best kissing
I know you people like the guy for some reason, but telling people he has 'the best' anything is just going to waste their time in most cases. Someone told me to read his stuff a while ago, and it's just so dry and dull.

>>7165160
Do not question mod fiat, as it is likely to get you banned.

>>7165143
haha, No doubt, no doubt. I'm really working off of a bare-bones understanding of how... sensuous bodice rippers get into it. ALl I know is that the level of detail I go into has off-put people before so I accepted that as my bar for normal.

I shall implement this information into my future writings. I'll either change my tone to be less 'hoity-toity' or go full bore into detail work. I just have to keep a good flow going, and not get lost in purple prose.

thanks annon.
>>7165197
I'll give 'im a gander.

>>7165197
I don't know if getting throat-fucked by a foot long tongue qualifies as kissing.
Not that it isn't hot.

>>7165270
I think if you want to go into the whole 'things writers shy away from' route, you should go full bore and include all the little unerotic oddities of the act. Like, sometimes you accidentally headbutt the other person, or there's a weird spot on their face, or their breath smells like ass, or you linger too long and start thinking "This has to stop".

>>7164678
>male tetrachromat

>>7165295
hmmm. perhaps, honestly what I'm writing about is base don my perceptions of the act. that post was a little sanitized from the focuses and fetishes I have about oral stuff. Specifically treating my partner's mouth as if it were my own in terms of comfort and movement. it's an extremely sensual area, constantly giving us stimuli and information during our day to day lives. it's a very fundamental aspect of a human's perception of the world. To imbue a sense of ownership over such a space is one of my mental focuses.

Doing stuff like only Licking along the gums, Pushing pressure-points along the jaw line as we kiss, adjusting to their mouth is held over as I pay particular attention to the insides of one cheek or another. It fluctuates between a benevolent ownership and objectifying ownership depending on the partner... but yeah.

>>7165302
Genetic engineering, friend. They copied over the extra cone data to the Y-chromosome. Though the population in the story lost the tech, so they can't fix any unintended consequences that may have arose due to vanity children. And there's some bottlenecking going on.

>>7165227
>mod fiat
Oh right. The other guy seemed to be saying there was some logic to it.

Does anyone remember a story about a paladin getting seduced by a succubus and having a threesome with a rogue? The rogue was pegged and killed in the end.

2000 word update, new content at "They sat together for a while, Scarface's body heat warming Schaffer as they waited for a bite."

Outpost:
http://pastebin.com/J0xWt8Dj

Newfag here with a really dumb question;
I'm trying to write on Pastebin, and put up some stuff this morning, but now that I'm back and trying to write more it won't let me. How do I update without just creating a whole new page?

>>7165613
Look for the little button that says edit. Probably in the little row of buttons either at the top right of the paste, or the bottom right.

>>7165613
You need to edit the paste, which you can only do if you submitted the paste with a pastebin account.

>>7165619
Well damn. Guess I need to go make an account then.

>>7165302
I appreciate that someone other than me got triggered by that

>>7165624
An account is pretty much mandatory for /d/ browsers.

>>7165688
FTL and AI don't trigger you, but genome editing does? It's the only one of those we actually know how to do.

>>7165821
>>>/h/

>>7165738
You know what I mean. His being a gene edited person was not explicitly stated in the original post. And the idea of a male tetrachromat defy's what is possible naturally and sounds at base like a Mary Sue characteristic.

I don't actually care really, as much as the length of this post implies otherwise, it was just something the biologist in me latched onto

>>7165563
I am near death from all this blue-balling, but the writing continues to be good

>>7165840
As a biologist, wouldn't you assume in the far future that designer babies would be the default? A Gattaca type situation.

>>7165868
No.

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>>7165899
You've got women who name their children after whatever's hot at the moment--Daenerys, Galadriel. And given the opportunity to give their kid elf ears, I'm pretty sure they would.

>>7165906
>>7165868
I wouldn't make assumptions about the future of biotech. Genetics is a much more fickle thing than people think, and regulation will play a huge role in how it pans out. There is too much potential for abuse for it to be de-regulated to the point of anyone can get mods. (I guess that is an assumption too though)

>>7164243
Dude, I waited 2 weeks before posting so you would have time to think. I just wanted to perhaps trade ideas.

>>7165868
As an amateur part-time 4chan poster I can unequivocally state that women absolutely will use every means of genetic enhancement on their children. They'll probably spend entire fortunes on it.

Is there any erotic gender bender stuff out there that doesn't suck? I mostly use fictionmania, but most of the stories there are about domination and humiliation and are horrifically written, lacking an element where the characters actually enjoy the sex at all.

Anyone know a good site for this? Or can link good stories? Fictionmania pisses me off, and their search functions suck.

>>7166016
>implying men wouldn't as well

With the number of third world countries and china who don't give a fuck about morals there is definitely genetic manipulation going on already.

>>7166063
TG storytime is another site that you probably may have checked out. It is pretty much like fictionmania in the way that it has the content you want buried under the content you describe. Could be something that you may want to trawl through. TG storytime also has an easy tag system which helps in avoiding the dom/humiliation.

Any writefags that primarily write tg content?

>>7165965
Oh, I'm sorry man. It's just, well, I *haven't* had much time to think lately. RL has been applying some serious pressure lately, and I just don't really have the time for something like this now.

>>7166063
>Is there any erotic gender bender stuff out there that doesn't suck? I mostly use fictionmania
Literotica, TG Story Site, there's others too.

>>7166299
No sweat. Take all the time you need or hand it off if you feel tapped out.

>>7165868
As a biologist, I know how far society will have to go before even most biologists are for designer babies.

>>7166428
>As a biologist, I know how far society will have to go before even most biologists are for designer babies.
Explain?

I think the Warhammer 40k fandom is lacking in HumanxEldar smut stories. Lots of it exists, just less than you'd expect for how rich the lore is for the Eldar in universe. It especially feels like there should a good amount of material to work with in GuardsmanxRanger and GuardsmanxHarlequin stories but they're so rare.

If I could make a request of some writefag, there's an idea I've had kicking around in my head for a GuardmanxRanger story:

>The MC has been deployed to a deathworld to hunt down suspected Exodite inhabitants
>Company is assigned to recon for enemy presence in the deep jungle
>Company gets wiped in an ambush by craftworld Eldar
>MC gets knocked out and wakes up hours later
>Starts wandering in the jungle to find his regiment and becomes more lost
>Narrowly spots an Eldar Ranger resting in the canopy
>He catches her unaware and beats her into submission
>Looks through her belongings for a map but doesn't find anything
>He realizes that he might be executed just for trying to use xenotech to find his way back
>He'd rather just dissapear somewhere than risk dying to a commissar after returning to the guard
>He becomes visibly paranoid
>The Ranger capitalizes on this and offers to give him a spot as her crewmate if he lets her take him back to her ship, or something to that effect
>The MC is suspicious but receptive to the idea of having her take him off world
>Maybe he keeps her restained, and has her guide the way to the ship
>The trip takes several days and the MC becomes pent up on the way and things develop from there when they stop to rest

I don't know if this is a good request or not, but I'd love to see an experienced writer pick up a story like this and run with it.

>>7166488
They're either "muh agency", "muh poor people", or "muh playin god". Most stop at curing genetic diseases.

>>7166606
But I want women to have dicks.

>>7166581
A few notes.

Deathworlds are no joke.
Rangers don't often own ships. They're vagabonds.
If your group of 100+ buddies were just killed by ayylmaos, you'd probably kill some ayylmaos.

A far more workable premise would be the soldier getting separated from the company from a mud-slide or predator attack or something.
Separation is likened to desertion by the Commissar, so he stalks around looking for a way back and a way to prove his innocence.
Rushing towards a voice calling for help in the distance. Finds a Ranger stuck to her waist in muck while something is swimming towards her. Guardsmen drives off the monster (because its a deathworld, thing's not gonna die to just a few lasgun shots) and pulls her free after disarming her. Tussle ensues as they both try and get the rifle once back on solid ground. It is interrupted by the predator returning.
They both decide not getting eaten is probably more important and flee. The chase goes on for a bit, but they're losing ground, so the pair decide to try climbing a tree.
Guardsmen helps the lighter Eldar up, then is pulled up after a momentary argument by the Eldar.
Safe(ish) in the tree, they both have time to kill while the predator gets bored and leaves. Midway through, they notice the muck on the Ranger is corrosive, and her pants are getting reduced to nothing slowly. Guardsmen gives her his overcoat to tie around her waist.
Ranger states she'll guide him back to his Company and give him her rifle if he helps her kill the monster. It ate another Ranger and she's trying to get his soul stone back.
Tracking ensues, lots of upskirts from her new less-than-perfect skirt, nights spent up in trees or in caves, spooning for warmth.
Gets hot and heavy night 3, and night 4. Finds the beast on day 5.

From there, the MC needs to decide if he wants out with the Eldar, maybe live on a border world, or go back with his prize and memories of three very nice nights.

>>7166675
But when does the Eldar start lactating?

>>7166675
Most of their analogues to our bodily fluids are actually crystalline powders.
So it'd be powdered milk, I guess?

>>7166698
meant for >>7166689

>>7166689

Never you god damn furry

>>7166689
You're a persistent fellow, sure

>>7166063

bigclosetr(space)us

This is the absolute best, it has by far the largest repository yet for some reason no one really mentions it. I highly, highly, highly recommend you read Morpheus's stuff. He has a stupid high work ethic, his library of work is probably larger than the entirety of the Google doc in the OP. And it's all stupid long. I am talking like 10k word long chapters, and there is 50 of them, kind of long.

My only issue with the man (?) is that he usually only puts in one or two sex scenes in his longer stories, but man are they worth it. Even his non-erotic stuff is fucking great to read. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if he was an accomplished author writing under a pseudonym.

>>7166289
See: >>7166841

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Ok this is gonna be a bit of a complicated update.

There's a 3500 word update, which includes a gay scene on request of the commissioner and a few people in the thread.

I've made the gay scene (and all future gay scenes) optional, and won't be including them in the main story updates so as not to gross out people who don't like that and just want the femdom. It's all self-contained so you won't miss any important plot points.

So, if you don't like gay stuff, just follow the updates as usual:

Outpost:
http://pastebin.com/J0xWt8Dj
New content at "The aliens were at it again"

Optional gay scene is here, and directly follows the aforementioned update:
http://pastebin.com/aA6XzmaK
Tags:
>gay, blowjob

>>7166974
How about when this story is finished you make two separate paste/links that have the complete story, but one of them has the gay scenes included. Makes it flow better than needing to go to a different link to read a part.

>>7166989
Yep I can do that.
There will probably only be two such scenes, at least that's what I have planned right now.

I can probably make two Ebooks as well.

>>7166993
Who knows, you might find out you're fine with gay stuff has long as it's with a nonhuman guy, but still have no interest in gay stuff with a human guy. Fuck, that's pretty much why majority of furries are bi.

>>7166974
Small suggestion if you're willing to entertain the idea. Schaffer fucking/topping Zagza.

>>7167022
Dynamic isn't quite right for me, but I'm planning to sandwich Schaffer between Zagza and Osha at some point.

>>7166974
>that scene
I am completely erect.
What would be absolutely perfect would be a scene with schafer returning the favor.
>>7167024
Also, another unsolicited MMF suggestion, but what about schafer inviting runt into bed with him and someone else, maybe scarface if that works with what you have planned for her.
Or, another random idea, a MMFF scene with schafer, runt and the twins

>>7166995

As a furry, this is exactly it. You'd be surprised at how many of them are only gay/bi on the internet but not IRL.

Although lol at all of the sudden gay scene requests. And here snek was, worried that people wouldn't like it

>>7167024

Allow me to correct the dynamic:

Zagza is still in complete control from the bottom, and it's more Zagza fucking Schaeffer than the other way around

>>7167082
It isn't even just furries, a lot of people are like that in general with drawn stuff. There are a lotta guys who are into the abstract idea of cock, but aren't particularly interested in fucking actual, real-life men.

>>7166689
I'm horribly writer's blocked and I'm desperate to try anything. Explain to me how would this work?
Isn't most eldar stuff crystals?

>>7166698
>Most of their analogues to our bodily fluids are actually crystalline powders.
>So it'd be powdered milk, I guess?
Interesting. Time for some reading.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liquid_crystal#Biological_liquid_crystals
>In particular, biological membranes and cell membranes are a form of liquid crystal.
Mind=blown

>Many other biological structures exhibit liquid-crystal behavior. For instance, the concentrated protein solution that is extruded by a spider to generate silk is, in fact, a liquid crystal phase.
Holy shiiiiit. Now I wonder what freaky spider stuff Dark Eldar get up to.

I need to think this over. Lactating Eldar Anon you keep hanging in there.

>>7167142
It's truly remarkable the things you learn in the pursuit of writing pornography for nerds, eh?

>>7167129
This, the dick is an interesting sex organ but dudes are gross.

>>7167070
>>7167024
>Threesome with dudes involved.
Please no. Then again it is a comm. Can't say I'm terribly interested.

I'd find it sad if all this build up leads to far to many dicks. Seeing how we kept getting teased.

>>7167444
Luckily for you, the writer is specifically releasing two separate versions, one with the homosex and one without

>>7167142
>>7166698
All this leads to some very interesting points about Eldar physiology and biology if you examine it closely enough and cross reference with established lore.

Realistically, the Eldar body could either produce a powder as a solute and dissolve it into solution before passing it through the ducts and glands of the breasts, giving it properties similar to unfiltered honey, or it could use proteins and some components with other nutritional values to produce a silk-like substance with a likely smoother texture.

I'm kind of intrigued by the idea of milk with the texture of honey, especially if it has a viscosity closer to milk. I expect it would have a sweet taste with a slightly grainy texture caused by the solid components precipitating into crystalline form in solution.

Interestingly, a more silk-like milk would be similar in consistency to human milk but completely different in structure and formation, indicating that they evolved the substance through convergent evolution and that the glands which produce it aren't mammary glands at all but, in fact, structures more similar to spinnerets found in Spiders. This would make sense as it coincides with the Eldars' belief that they are distinct from and above all other life in the galaxy on an evolutionary level.

The later theory makes even more sense when you consider that Eldar possess a unique DNA structure with a triple helix and 20 nucleotide bases. In either iteration though, those traces of biochemicals foreign to our Human biology from their DNA would either give the milk a slightly "off" flavor and/or a minor laxative effect. There's also a high likelihood that milk would be carcinogenic as well since at least some of these extra nucleotide bases would be so similar to those in our own DNA.

In conclusion, either the Eldars' milk tastes and feels like honey and gives you cancer or the Eldar have Spider-Tits and their milk still gives you cancer... Biochemistry is a bitch.

>>7167517
>In conclusion, either the Eldars' milk tastes and feels like honey and gives you cancer or the Eldar have Spider-Tits and their milk still gives you cancer... Biochemistry is a bitch.
I'm now imagining a naked eldar chick with "this product contains substances known to cause cancer in the state of California" tattooed on her tits.
We need a drawfag

>>7167526
Brb, Making a request in all the drawthreads because that sounds awesome.

>>7167526
Check if Inker is on the discord, it should be right up his alley.

Ork/Sororitas has so much potential

>>7167610
Do you have a single fact to back that up?

>>7167613
I think he's got a point. There's some material to work with there.
Since the Orks are asexual, you could work the angle that they would find such large breasts on a fighter amuzen' when Orks have just a precursory understanding of what sex even is, much less secondary sex characteristics.
The Sororitas are also supposed to some great warriors, wearing power armor and using weapons more commonly associated Space Marines. Then throw in that Orks are supposed to enjoy the thrill of dominating powerful opponents...

I don't think that canon Orks could engage in anything traditionally smutty with the Sororitas, but maybe you could write a good domination/sexual humiliation story with them.

>>7167517
>I'm kind of intrigued by the idea of milk with the texture of honey, especially if it has a viscosity closer to milk. I expect it would have a sweet taste with a slightly grainy texture caused by the solid components precipitating into crystalline form in solution.
That's more or less what I was thinking. I'll probably be going with this.

>and/or a minor laxative effect.
I suppose there's a market for that.

>and gives you cancer
Well that's not sexy at all.
But following that logic wouldn't any kind of physical activity between a human and eldar be hazardous?

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>>7167517

>>7167427
>>7167444
The gay stuff is optional and won't be included in the main updates.
I'll be posting separate links for those scenes, and then probably releasing two finished versions of the story.

If you don't like gay shit you won't have to read any, and you can keep following the updates as usual without fear.

>>7167736
>But following that logic wouldn't any kind of physical activity between a human and eldar be hazardous?

Perhaps. Though, the Old Ones did create the Eldar with the ability to read minds, see into the future, and routinely live to the age of 1000. We don't really know the exact details of Eldar biology and genetics, so it's entirely feasible that the Old Ones would also ensure that their creations could come in to physical contact with each other without dying from exposure to one another.

There's not a lot in the lore that says anything one way or the other, I just think it's fun to speculate on this sort of thing.

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>>7167897
Simon Spurrier's book Xenology is our only real source for that stuff, and given that the writer of that book in-universe is completely insane by the end of the book and openly contradicts several other things we know (e.g. Tau described as having toes when even the models show they have hooves), I'd take it with a grain of salt. Like, the kind you need a donkey to take out of the mines.

With that in mind, here's the basic summary of what it says about the Eldar:

>DNA is a quintuple helix instead of a double helix, with 20 nucleotide bases compared to the 4 shared by life as we know it. The mind boggles as to how that even works. (I know Biochemistry Dude noted it was a triple helix, but it says it's a quintuple helix here. It's anyone's guess as to which is the right number, but it sure isn't two.)
>Highly efficient physiology, with no redundant organs or vestiges.
>Can somehow subconsciously change their DNA (a possible attempt to explain the Paths?)
>The "shitting crystals" thing, which I'm sure we all know about by now and is no less stupid for it, because wouldn't that shred their intestines?
>Pic related.

So at the end of the day, there's nothing that explicitly says sexual activity between a human and Eldar is dangerous, so that leaves us free to make up whatever we want.

>>7167909
>>7167909
>So at the end of the day, there's nothing that explicitly says sexual activity between a human and Eldar is dangerous, so that leaves us free to make up whatever we want.

I feel the same way. Still though, how bitching would "Consorting with Eldar causes cancer." be as imperial propaganda?

>>7167919
Not quite as to-the-point as "HERESY!", but still bitching.

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2000 word update, new content at "He felt ready to continue, and gave his customary thumbs up"

Outpost:
http://pastebin.com/J0xWt8Dj

Osha sex scene probably tomorrow.

>>7168290
Shit's looking good bud

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>>7162035
Was a story ever made to go along with this picture? Because I really want a story that goes along with this picture.

>>7167909
This was definitely written while on drugs. All of the drugs.

>>7168363
It's a one-off joke. What do you think?

>>7167610
>>7167620

Orks don't have dicks.

They are fungi.

>>7167620
How about Ogryn/Ork?

"Dat Bug digga zure haz some awezome pecktoralz on 'er!"

>>7168412
>>7167610
>>7167620
Fine. Then Blue/Sororitas.

Idea for a 40k fic.

Venerable Dreadnought, probably Black Templars (yeah, you already know where this is going, dontcha?) is receiving a post-battle oiling by a pair of Soroitas Novices (let's say they agreed to do it as a favour for the overworked techmarine).

Out of a mingled sense of boredom, playfulness, and the classic "I'm old so I can get away with anything attitude", he starts cracking lewd jokes.

Stuff like "I'd have given anything to have a pair of young women rub oil all over me when I still had flesh."

The novices (I'm seeing them as being about midway through puberty, so mostly developed physically, but still in the "figuring everything out" phase mentally. This is relevant, don't make that face.), find the old dread's playfulness infectious, and decide to give him something of a show before he gets put back on ice.

What follows afterwards is less well-formed in my mind, but I see the first part being a slightly awkward (on their part, not in terms of atmosphere) strip-tease, probably using some of the stuff they were utilizing for the oiling earlier to liven things up.

I guess they could start getting it on with each other in front of him next, if you could explain it in a way that made sense, but I'm not that fussed.

Any takers?

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>>7168498
Perhaps better with the /tg/ style Blues that are more Drane-like rather than the traditional GW ones. Hot showers with them washing each other's hard to reach places..

>>7168549
No. Blue as in the /tg/ OC Blue.

>>7168547
I'm pretty sure something nearly identical to this is already in the archives.

What is your guy's favorite erotic story on all of the Internet?

Mine is Eudaemon by Evil Dolly.

>>7168908
The garden of eva series, just because it was the first erotic fiction I ever encountered back in the days of dial up.

>>7168908
My Sister's a Dickgirl. First erotic story I ever read.

I feel really crappy right now, can you recommend something that would cheer me up, some happy and uplifting story of happy people having happy time together in happy place and happy world. Would be greatly appreciated.
(I know you will link the sickest, most revolting and most depraved shit in existence, but this was worth trying)

>>7169004
This is very happy in a weird way >>7168908

>>7168908
>Eudaemon by Evil Dolly.
>>7168981
>My Sister's a Dickgirl
Links to both pls?

Is Eudaemon a TG story? I want to read some non-shit TG.

>>7169020
Sister:
http://gregoryhousemdr.livejournal.com/1124.html
Be warned it has incest, no receiving anal, and word filters.

>>7169023
>gregoryhousemdr
what

>warned
>it has incest
Sure, thanks for the "warning" anon!

>>7168792
Yes, but I don't like that one.

>>7168908
S-seriously? I read about a third of that and it freaked me out so badly I couldn't go on (that and I'd already figured out where the plot was going).

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>>7169027
>he's not dead

>>7168944
I remember that, Rei the turbo slut

>>7168908

I like,

Borrowed Fertility
Scene under a desk
Scene in a bathroom stall
all by conroy39

the Turned Out stories by irradiatedd

Various Vore stories, Not into furry vore, but shyguy wrote one really good one where his dragon character ate a mouse guy. There was also a Giantess vore story about a girl that shrinks her friends, makes one feed her M&Ms before eating her too. hot.

Finally, I have been really into the Sex Mage Series By Salamando Flame, so much so that I have kinda wanted to write my own Sex Mage stories.

>>7169004
https://www.literotica.com/s/nothing-between-us
As >>7163306 said way upthread, it's so vanilla it loops back around to being massively degenerate. It will also probably give you actual diabetes

>>7169054

Freaked you out how?

>>7169325
The whole idea of basically being locked out of your own body, your own brain turned against you to the point where you can't so much as speak or even write anymore.

It frightened me.

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Boom, 4000 word update, new content at "It seemed some of the aliens had elected to remove the mattresses from the bed frames"

Outpost:
http://pastebin.com/J0xWt8Dj
New tags:
FFFM, group, girl on girl, kissing, biting, scratching, light bondage, size difference, blowjob, long tongue, large breasts, snowballing (I think that's the term), creampie, 69

>>7169343

I guess it didn't bother me so much because I am an ardent stoic practitoner. That being said, it gets a lot better for the MC and is really a touching story by the end.

>>7169404
Yeah, I figured where it was going pretty quickly, and decided it wasn't worth carrying on.

Also, I tried stoicism for a while, but I gave it up because no-one would ever talk to me and I got lonely.

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>>7169385

>>7169027
>>7169167
Nice !

>>7169385
The guy isn't involved directly with the snowballing, right?

>>7169623
no, he just provides the snow

>>7169624
Good.

>>7169623
>>7169624
I was trying to be festive.

>>7167736

So, why would Eldar ranger lactate?

Rangers seem like the young, stupid and rebellious of the folk, and given the gimmicky eldar reproduction, females can't really get pregnant on accident. And in case of a ranger, they probably won't. So what we would have here would be more of an Eldar equivalent of a young, rebellious punk of girl, not a milf or anything like that.

I think it's plausible an eldar female could lactate at will through use of any psychic abilities she has, which would mean she would want this to happen over here for reason or another. Or there are either your standard physiological issues, or some weird eldar psychological stuff which cause her to start lactating 'involuntarily'.

>>7169735
Well I wasn't going to use the Ranger premise for it since the guy wanting lactating Eldar doesn't seem to much care what leads to it.

>>7169741

>doesn't seem to much care what leads to it.

Well he should because all that wet disgusting anatomy and alien psychology is some seriously hot stuff.

>>7169701
Oh you

>>7169894
the poor bastard is never going to be able to sleep again without something big and furry spooning him

>>7168908
Schadenfreude by Nineteen for sure.

Tags: m/m, noncon, historical, ww2, nazi, captivity, twisted romance/stockholm syndrome, medical kink in some parts

It was so well written and made me feel so good to know that there were people out there who got turned on by the same relationship dynamics I do.

I couldn't find it except under a smashwords link: smashwords dot com slash books/view/354419

The same author has written some other stuff that's still free though: http://thenineteen.deviantart.com/gallery/36373530/Hero-s-Torch

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>>7169385
Those tags, now we are talking.

>>7169897
[spoiler] well hopefully runt will follow him back, then [/spoiler]

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>>7168908
Of Heroes and Villains.
Classic "Come for the smut, stay for the plot" scenario.

>>7170197
Never heard of that, what's it about?

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>>7170235
http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=1423&ageconsent=ok&warning=3

>In which a villainess sets out on a quest to seduce a hero, a hero must come to terms with the secret identity (s)he'd rather deny, and a mad scientist just tries to get some mad science done without getting distracted by the antics of her magical minion.

The Paragonverse feels like it would fit right in snug next to the /co/verse.
And slowburn romance is my fetish.

>Finally get a laptop to write on the go
>writer's block

>>7170238
>tgstorytime

>>7170320
Welcome to /efg/, brother!

>>7170320
Could be worse. I was doing great writing something the other day, cracked out like three pages in an hour before I went to bed.

Now, despite having the day off, I can't write a thing. Totally lost my groove.

>>7170320
At least you got a laptop that works.

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Hi, /efg/!

I'm a visitor from another general, namely, /agdg/ from /vg/. They are amateur game devs. Part of the culture there is to give fan arts to other's OCs occasionally. It's good for motivation, not to mention that they end up pretty lewd most of the time. I thought, hey, I haven't wrote anything for almost 3 years now, so I decided to write some fan fics for them just for fun, because why not. It turned out to be a therapy for me. When I stopped years ago it was because of a burn out, even though I've just started to gain ground in my mother tongue's literature. But now I feel like a child again, just as when I started. I write simply for the joy of creation, and it's amazing.

However I'm not sure if my English writing is good or not, so I started to seek where could I get some feedback. I don't think these writings are /lit/ material, and in /u/'s fan fic general it's all shitposting at the moment. Lucky for me, I always loved /d/'s community, and I was happy to see that you have these generals, and they're also very active.

So, I've wrote these so far (in chronological order):
http://pastebin.com/DUi5x2QD
http://pastebin.com/EhEWSzjv
http://pastebin.com/3Mwp4xpR

These are rather fictions with sex in the end than straight up porn, but if I really had to tag them, I would say: rape while sleeping and yuris, with occasional femdom.

Since we are talking about games, I would like to list the ones in question, so you could get a better idea about these characters.
https://jcs.itch.io/vampires-bit-demo
https://asaragi.itch.io/charlottes-dream-v02
https://squaredev.itch.io/idol-commnder-ddx-edition
https://arikado.itch.io/clarent-demo

The pic shows one fan art or a concept art for each character, some lewd, some isn't, just for illustration.

>>7170367
Be sure to post it next thread, this one's near the bottom of the catalog.

>These are rather fictions with sex in the end than straight up porn

That's just the way most of us like it, actually- you'll fit right in.

>>7170434
If you don't mind double posting, okay then. I always forget what's the life spawn of a regular thread, and hoped I'm not late around the 300th post, so thanks for mentioning!

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Only had time for a small update today, gonna be busy tomorrow too because holidays.
I'll be back with more on Sunday, Merry Christmas!

>>7170698
Why do snek-girls have Elf ears?

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Boo, suddenly I appear.
Last story of the year for me.

A rumble in the jungle
Tags: SOMEWHAT STORY HEAVY, Male/Female, Cathar/Human, Outdoors, Size difference, Oral, Face Sitting, Doggy style, Consensual, Excessive use of puns, Star Wars: The Old Republic
http://pastebin.com/yGUTYX45

>>7162035
A question: where do I go to get gore request done? I'm merely curious as to where.

>>7170900
Not on 4chan, it's against global rules.

>>7170714

jap way of saying "monster girl"