/efg/ - Erotic Fiction General

So, how's everyone's progress with the smut-off prompt?

In case you've forgotten, the prompt was "two outcasts bonding over something small".

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>>7083688
Got halfway through it, looked back and thought "This is shit" and stopped writing. So, quite well, I'd say.

>The R-Virus: Trespasser
Sequel when?

>>7083688
I'm like two pages into it. The writer's block is real.

You guys will still read it if it's way past deadline, right?

>>7083693
What is the deadline?

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Snekguy, you should introduce the Borealans to Hockey. I'd imagine they'd enjoy a sport where half the fun is demolishing other players.

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3000 word update, new content at "She stumbled awkwardly to one of the beds at the far end of the longhouse"

Fineprint 2: Republic
http://pastebin.com/PKJnSGaW
New tags:
>face sitting, threesome, girl on girl, blowjob, drunk, female ejaculation

>>7083735
Huh I guess they would probably have sports. Didn't think of that!

I had another try at writing something, so here you go, /efg/:

Title: Venus Girltrap
Tags: F x plant, tentacles

http://pastebin.com/LT5W0DNQ


It's a bit over 3000 words, just one scene.

As we all know, comments are oxygen to writefags, so I'd be interested to know if anyone liked it (or not).

>>7083697
Next thread should be the deadline; I think. That should give everyone at least another week to get it done.

>>7083745
one typo
>she rubber
paragraph 346

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>>7083824
cheers

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I uh, write some of this stuff. this is the first time I've shown these to anyone other than a few lewd people I know online so please be gentle with the feedback, but if it's bad just say so. They're not really finished. I write p much anything so that's why these two have some rather extreme themes.

I don't name my stories. Here's the one that pic related is for, since I wrote it for an artist. WARNING: Brutality, bone breaking, noncon, incest, huge futa on not so huge girl.
https://titanpad.com/EL9LdPuOrR

And another story. Warning; humantaur, udders, lots of dicks, anal, multi-bits, Incest.
https://titanpad.com/OgUlUj9eOF

One day there was a sexy girl who wanted to do sex. So she got naked and did the sex with a monster.

The End.

>ideas and nothing to do with them

I want to write about either a female superhero or a female spaceman. I have ideas. But I have no idea how to properly start a story.

How do?

>>7083854
I usually get started by finding a good first line, then letting it grow from there.

>"Well, that was interesting."
>One day, it all changed.
>There wasn't supposed to be anything in the room.
>Having fun wasn't supposed to be this hard.
>I always knew this was coming.
>Is it possible to start a day at rock bottom?
>I love my life.
>My friends are idiots.

Hope one of these starts things rolling for you.

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Inker made this for me earlier today. I gotta say, he's been improving since he first showed up.

>>7083983
is that macha and gabe?

>>7082918
I've read Avery and Luca's stories. Both were interesting, but I hope you don't plan to just stop with that, as they both seem like things that you could write for a while about.

Both stories have tragedy, which is interesting in that neither ends on a dark note. I found Luca's story to not make a lot of sense (possibly a situation of an unreliable narrator, possibly what she remembered actually happened) due to the appearance of the wolf and the reappearance of her acquaintance not really making any sense. Its ending also doesn't sit quite right due to details as to why she feels this way or just ignored certain elements of what happened to follow the wolf.

Either way, both were written well besides what was previously mentioned. I look forwards to more.

>>7083989
Yep, that's Macha in her DoW3 hairpiece.

Inker didn't identify the guy she's with, but I guess you can pretend it's Gabe if you like.

Time for discussion!

When all else fails, what is your favorite erotic fiction/erotica topic. Maybe it is even something that doesn't work as well visually, but in written form you find it absolutely enthralling.

What is it /efg/? What is your textual turn on?

>>7084007

Oddly enough, it's shapeshifting women (NOT the ones who can only turn into animals) getting fucked that gets me going. This is kind of weird, given that this place tends to not have what I'm looking for.

>>7084007
I am a shameless vanillafag in most ways, though I find myself particularly drawn to human-nonhuman relationships. Unsurprisingly, most of my work constitutes exactly that on both counts.

>>7084007
Cute, drama-free /u/ stories. It's my fluffy junk food, and I don't care.

And like >>7084094, this is definitely not something that shows up often here, but I have hope.

>>7084007
second person male sub getting raped by a dickgirl

most of my fics are rape and the other two are still power emphasis (sex cult 'baptism' and tavern slut)

>>7083990
Thanks for the read. The Avery story was more recent, but the Lucas story was one I realized I never shared previously. I honestly don't know... where my head was at at the time. I'll have to read it again and figure out where I screwed up. I'm sure I thought I was real clever at the time.

>>7083745
Damn, Ursi a sexual monster. I could see her using Dennis has a sort of strap on to fuck other Borealen females. Her humping/pushing against him to make him fuck another girl for her by proxy.

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Shadowrun is still /tg/ right?

>>7084137
Well, I'd like to see more of both. I assumed that the guy might have been more than he seemed, but then...he wasn't. Maybe she should follow the wolf and remember as she follows instead of how it was written way-back-when?

Don't forget about Avery, either, I want to see more of that world too.

>>7084139
Ursi is pretty good, although I kinda like the temperate borellians as I haven't seen what your average joe/jane acts like.

>>7084123

I lurk around these threads for stuff like edge-braak's hitomi series or grotto's two become one, but edge-braak lost interest and grotto JUST posted part of the latest chapter this summer, and as much as I'm glad that he sees so much praise for it, I don't want to be the asshole who ruins it for everyone by getting impatient.

>>7083751
> his small army of scientists, who were plenty motivated to put in sixteen hour days as part of the constant struggle for research funding and recognition of their own
this was too real, anon, I almost had to turn back at the first paragraph. are you a grad student?

Anyway, good shit, I liked it. I could see a sequel where Anna takes revenge on Marie somehow.

>>7084157
Of course.

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Couple more.

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>>7084222
>this was too real, anon, I almost had to turn back at the first paragraph. are you a grad student?

Lel, yes, I have lived that life. The subject I studied is also probably obvious.

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Is there any erotic fiction inolving a womb/vaginal prolapse ( see: >>7072984 )? Ideally, I'm looking for one where the first person narrater is a woman with said prolapse getting into public yuri situations.

>>7084474
How did you even get this fetish?

>>7084007
I don't actually read that much erotica.

Based on my own output, I clearly have a hangup on futa, or at least lesbians, public nudity and mild humiliation, abnormally strong and sometimes eccentric women (Odile definitely counts for that)... and, of course, silliness.

>>7084474
Did you search the list in the OP?

>>7083688
Rough cut is done. Needs polishing, a better intro and outro and some proofreading. Should be ready for next thread.

>>7084479

I stared too long into the abyss.

Also this series: http://g.e-hentai.org/g/69414/4ec19df7bb/

Do many writefags post their stuff on hentai foundry?

I always assumed it was just for pictures but I could do with somewhere else to put my stories besides adultfanfiction, which seems to be a bit of a wasteland.

>>7084499
It's not unheard of, but the formatting stinks over there.

>>7084499
The formatting is really bad, I made several attempts to use it then gave up.
I recommend FurAffinity and StoriesOnline.net.

>>7084528
>FurAffinity

>furry

Nigga you best be trolling

What exactly is bad about hentaifoundry's formatting? Does it mess up line breaks/tabs?

>>7084540
Not trolling, the Furries have consistently been incredibly polite and supportive towards my writing, and their upload system is probably the best I've ever seen. Probably half of my Patreon subs came from FA even though I get like 1/1000 of the views there that I get on SOL.

Yeah HentaiFoundry just strips all of your formatting and dumps the text as a massive block. You would have to go through the text and manually reformat it all, which if your story is only like 4000 words long, that's not so bad, but if like me you regularly release 20-60k stories then it's just not feasible. I totally gave up after talking with the site admin about it on the forums. It's to do with BBS code, or something like that.

>>7084575
Furries are one group who do seem to overwhelmingly support their artists. I guess the more niche you are, the more necessary that is.

But how supportive are they of work that can't be seen as furry at all? Still plenty of that on FA?

>>7084669
Yeah they love my stuff, and only maybe 50% of what I've written could be construed as explicitly furry.
View count is very low compared to sites like SOL or Literotica where you get views by the thousands, but they're just so damn nice to me that it makes me want to pay special attention to maintaining my FA page and respond to feedback and comments.

It's been a long time since I wrote anything, I've been trying to shake myself out of my funk by going back over some of my stories. I've posted most of these around, so you may have seen them in /tg/ or /a/'s monstergirl threads before; any comments, critiques, etc would be appreciated. These are just my most recent and more original stories, most of my older works are all anime fanfiction.

Hen in the Foxhouse [F/m, Fdom, Monstergirl(Inari), trap, shota]
http://pastebin.com/90WvCkPr

Forewarned is... [FF/F, F/F, Monstergirl(Tetra arms), Fdom, BDSM, Corruption/Mind Control, Yuri, NC]
http://pastebin.com/QwQSBaK9

Cocharan Gets a Head [F/F, Monstergirl(Dullahan) on Monstergirl(Zombie), Yuri, Cunnlingus, Necrophilia kind of... it is a zombie, just saying]
http://pastebin.com/aNGfGgCz

>>7084381
>>7084382
Where's that from ? It's not from his tumblr.

>>7085240
I remember he posted them on the Discord the other day. Maybe he hasn't uploaded them to the tumblr yet?

>>7085268
He hasn't posted anything since the 7 of September.

>>7085024
Wow, these are nice man! I love the story set up and dialogue between the character. My favorite by far is the shota/Inari story (but thats because I like /ss/)

Are you interested in taking request?

>>7085298
I'll have to remind him to update his tumblr next time I see him then.

Anyone know any good Girl gets caught and dragged into slime blob or cube and gets screwed real good "underwater" in the slime?

Alternatively, saw some slime vore last thread, know any good ones?

Any good stuff with thicc, big butts and/or giantess?

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>>7085359

Did you see mine?

Hell, let's repost it. Why not?

Slime of Your Life
http://pastebin.com/utmXWknh
>tags: slimegirl, slime tentacles, fantasy, fantasy races, interracial, condoms, elf, centaur, futa-on-female, multiple penises, female-on-slime, slime vore, lots of semen, anal, oral, stomach bulging, public, engulfment, doctor

>>7085379
Probably not quite what you're looking for, but this is a (non-fatal) vore story with a thick, MILF-y giantess.
http://pastebin.com/W2sSZpzC

>>7084007
>What is it /efg/? What is your textual turn on?

Consensual sex in the missionary position for purposes of procreation.

Or snake hugs, that works too.

Anyone have any dullahan / head removal stuff, or is willing to draw/write some? I love the little degradation of dignity when their head is stolen and, despite whatever extraordinary powers they had to turn themselves into the nigh-immortal being they are now, they find themselves turned into a literal cock holster, being utterly incapable of fighting back beyond biting and flinging curses.

>>7085557
I feel like biting would be real useful in that situation.

>>7085557
I'm slightly interested, but... the notion of the head being helpless would, in my eyes, have to lead to some sort of retribution to the abuser, that the dullahan was in control the whole time or simply let it happen because it was what she wanted.

It sounds like that's not what you'd be looking for. You'd want her to be put on a high shelf or into a bucket of brine where they're pickling eggs or something else. I'm not really about the bad ends.

would any one be interested in doing a story about a girl getting hyper hairy?
like shes drug testing some new birth control pill and it super fucks with her hormones. you can put in any other fetish you want.
i would be forever in your debt.

I've been away for a bit. I've missed you guys. Gonna be making a new story soon enough. Either Deathclaw, the crow woman from Dark Souls 2 or a mystery. Or some combination of all three.

Also >>7084686
Thanks for the complement on my tense issue, I'm glad to hear I'm getting it!

>>7085598
Oh no, I imagine the body would probably find the head soon enough and give the thief a good what for when she's had enough, I just thought I'd leave the aftermath nebulous in case someone else had different ideas to me. I love a 'rough' story with a happier ending, but I think some people prefer it to start badly and end the same way.

Also, I wonder if it means something that you've expressed interest in the only two thingos I've posted here...

>>7085635
>Also, I wonder if it means something that you've expressed interest in the only two thingos I've posted here...

What was the other? Are you the Slime anon?

>>7083837
I meant to get to reading this over today, but I've been traveling for nineteen hours and pretty much just want to die. They're not exactly my thing, but I like to give the new guys feedback. I'll give the first one a read tomorrow and let you know what I think. I don't do "gentle" very well, but I've been told I'm very helpful.

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>>7085647
Yep - I'll just say how cool it is to have a stranger be interested in my idea, let alone actually enact it, so thanks again.

>>7085605
I'd be down. How long should it be? And how hairy we talking?

>>7085667
Well, it was a very vivid idea. Thank you for the inspiration.

>>7085324
I'm hesitant on the request front if only because even when I was writing more regularly, I was never a "sit down and pound it out" writer, I tended to be tied more to the whims of inspiration.

But, if you happen to have some ideas or basic settings, I'd be happy to hear themout as long as you understand the answer right now is "maybe, I'll see what clicks".

to there was a story someone wrote here on a board about a knight who couldn't talk and couldn't be a faggot cuz rules. I'm trying to find it again and was wondering if anyone knew where it was.

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>>7085671
ill let you decide the length of the story, the length of the hair on the other hand i would love if you could go from clean shaven to pic related or so, maybe have the legs get just as hairy too, its all up to you man. thank you so much for considering!

>>7083688

sounds fun, i will also write smut for this

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>mfw reading stuff I wrote years ago when I was just starting out
>mfw reading the phrase "wracked with tempestuous climax"

>>7086515
The first thing you write is always the worst, I've found.

>>7086519
Well like anything, you get better with experience.

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3000 word update, filled in the roofing scene (went with sod, thanks guys), edited the threesome scene to make Ursi more drunk on request of the commissioner. I'm experimenting with some weight gain stuff, trying to fulfill the request without making it off-putting for my regular readers, tell me how I'm doing!

Fineprint 2: Republic
http://pastebin.com/PKJnSGaW
Tags thus far:
>kissing, biting, handjob, light bondage, femdom, size difference, doggystyle, large breasts, chubby, muscle, vaginal, fur, denial, face sitting, threesome, girl on girl, blowjob, drunk, female ejaculation, weight gain

>post commission requests for 2 months off and on
>typically pertains to futa / absorption vore
>no replies

>write a 3k words
>somewhat ok quality
>can't fap to it because I wrote it

Fuck

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>>7086660
Those tags. What kind of weight gain are we talking about?

>>7086732
Minor, I'm trying to fit it in without making it obscene or overly fetishized
They're gaining weight, as they naturally would because of the higher temperature and lower gravity, and there's a subplot about Ursi enjoying human food a little too much. We're not talking inflation or anything, just more fat on her tits/ass.

>>7083688
A deathclaw and wastelander who love fisting.

>>7086726
I would love to help, but your request tags are like the same as my nono list. More so if the vore includes death.

>>7086660
random thought that occurred to me while making dinner: can Borelians taste/feel spice-heat like humans or are their nerves just different enough?

Either could be fun, honestly.

>>7086660
>World War III
>Russian polar squad is decimated by crates of american cheeseburgers

>>7086515
>>7086519
Interestingly, I still consider the first thing i did to be the best.

Well, ok, not the first thing I ever wrote period, but the first time I ever sat down and said "I'm going to write some absolute smut".

Which, looking back, kinda makes me sad.

>>7086735

I saw stuff about possibly gaining weight, but no actual weight gain. Where was it?

>>7086906
I kind of like the first thing I wrote. But like most of my work, it is part of an unfinished series. So I still look at it with shame.

>>7086909
I'm very much testing the waters, the commissioner requested it but it's not something I'm familiar with. I'll see what he says and how people respond.

>>7086909

He's probably confused on what weight gain is, considering the update never made it to the next day where the actual weight gain would have been visible.

>>7086933
Did I do it wrong? I thought weight gain was what it sounded like, the character getting fatter?

>>7086909
reread paragraph 414. Snek said it wasn't a huge amount of weight, but it did get mentioned

>>7083837
As promised, I read through the first unnamed work (you really need to name shit; it makes it easier for readers to find what they like). I have quite a few comments.

First of all, you really need to learn how commas work. It would be optimistic to say that half of all the commas in this story were used correctly. The language is very disjointed, the narrative style consisting of little more than [noun] [verb] [noun]. Description is the lifeblood of smut, and without detail and scene setting, you might as well just write captions. The few details you do give are essentially limited to low-involvement adjectives like "huge". There is no description of experience or sensation, making the story read more like step-by-step instructions to brutal throatfucking than smut. The result is a story thoroughly uninteresting to anyone who does not have an extremely specific fetish and already has a pictured scene in mind. It is entirely possible to write a story this extreme and still have relatively wide appeal. This is not how to do it. The story reads as if it were just ripped off some Dimitrys caption. If you want to make any progress at all in improving your smut, you will need to fix this.

It is also important to consider your intentions and audience. This is an erotic fiction thread. As the name implies, eroticism and fiction go together in roughly equal measure. This is not erotic fiction, as there is no fiction to be had. This is not necessarily a bad thing, but you do need to consider why and for whom you are writing. For many (and probably all here), a good setup is a necessary component of smut. It is what separates a quick masturbatory aid from something that you'll remember and come back to. I'm not saying that anyone needs to write a novella, but a setting and a story go a long way, even if the primary purpose of the story is smutty.

(continued)

>>7083837
(continued)
I keep a rather large local collection of stories pruned from here and elsewhere that I keep coming back to. Some of the stories are hundreds of pages long, and some barely make it to four. Regardless of length, every one of them has both a smutty component and some amount of story. Even if the narrative is just there to excuse the fucking, its presence can go a long way to making a story more memorable and even sexier. Remember that not all fetishes are strictly visceral, but can arise instead from simple exposition. Corruption, incest, and rape all benefit greatly from nonsexual exposition.

In any case, if you wish to develop as a writer and not just a guy who writes one-handed, you really need to keep an eye on consistency and accuracy of information. There are three sisters, yet two are never described. There is nothing "Milfy" about a 10' woman with a bone-breaking dick. Sex that leads to irrevocable harm or death should not appear "normal". The language at the start implies that this sort of thing happens frequently, yet the ridiculous amount of physical damage would definitely lead the reader to believe otherwise. There is always some suspension of disbelief acceptable in smut, but this basically requires a lobotomy.

You also need to beware of cartoon fetishism. There is nothing wrong with having or writing extreme fetishes. I've written my fair share of obscenities and we have no lack of them here. However, there is a line at which a fetish transitions from being over-the-top to being ridiculous to the point of being a turn-off. When a fetish so thoroughly suffuses a work that it becomes the only element, you have definitely crossed the line. This entire story serves only as a necessary backdrop to ludicrous hyper fucking. If I had to draw the scene from what you have given, all there would be is a giant, poorly formed futa throatfucking a featureless blonde girl on a bare white background.
(continued)

>>7086855
I assume they would yeah. I read that cats and dogs react really badly to spices.

>>7083837
(continued)
When you reach this level of saturation, even people who share your fetish will start to be turned off. There needs to be some kind of framework in there somewhere. You don't even really need to create a setting. You just need to make sense. We're given a story with no background and no explanation, populated with somewhere between one and infinity enormous futas, and at least three other people of indeterminate age. Again, you don't need to try to write a novel. Just give us something to work with. At this point, you may as well just jerk it to a single picture.

The advantage of written smut is the ability to describe the scene as the author sees it, without distractions. Prose acts as a magnifying glass on whatever you find most attractive, be it the sights, sounds, smells, or sensations of whatever kind of unspeakable sex you crave. If you don't take full advantage of this, you're just wasting your time. Think about what makes the scene sexy and focus on that. Describe it in vivid and consistent detail. You have to remember that smut is not just about writing down your fetishes. It's immediately obvious that you like the tags you use, but that is hardly enough. A reader should be able to glean quite a bit about how you conceptualize sex just from reading your smut. Try to watch or read porn and make note of where your eyes or focus wander. Pick out those portions and describe what you find so appealing. There is a lot more to sex than "dick goes in hole". I would argue that the actual penetration is the least arousing part of the act. Learn your preferences and write with them in mind. I guarantee that other people will see the same. I routinely critique or just read smut that doesn't strike any of my fetishes, yet is still enjoyable because the author picked and shared the right details.

That took a bit longer than anticipated. I hope I can be of help. If you need any clarification on anything I've said, just ask.

>>7086932
I'm not super into it personally. I love the polar Borealans disposition and how they handle sex. I just wish I could fuck their abs. I guess its just a trade off.

>>7087014
>stories are hundreds of pages long
are these in the masterlist? if not, can you provide links? long-form smut is a long-time love of mine, but I've found so little that is truly engaging

>>7087033
I'll definitely revisit the Equatorials for some ab fucking after this story.

>>7087035
I have a series that is going on 160k words right now, you could read them back to back.
Longest individual entry is 68k words.

>>7087039
is it fineprint or the one with the defecting lamia? because I love them both to bits. If it's neither of those, could you link, please?

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>>7087050
Nah it's the Pinwheel series, with Fineprint, Splashdown, etc.
Great to hear you're enjoying them though, I'll keep up the pace.
I had some requests to make Warband into a series too, I might do that if I ever have the time.

>>7087035
We don't have much in that range in our archive. I've spent quite a bit of time suffering through LIterotica in hopes of finding something engaging. For longer stories, I suggest:

The Sacrifice, by Pandarus (long unfinished)
any of the longer works by DreamCloud
Big Flipping Deal by IanSaulWhitcomb (trap)
Celestial Matters/Wars by Noble Truth
Submission by Goldeniangel (the rest of his stuff is long and looks like it might be good as well).

There's more out there, but I don't keep sources, so it takes me a while to dig these things up. Outside of Literotica, I would suggest Pierced by Tabico on MCStories, if you're into that kind of thing, and pretty much anything by RSAnon (pastebin) or Taiyakisoba (Archive of Our Own).

>>7087057
>>7087068
thank you both

What're the best... let's say three stories in the archive, in your opinion?

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Autus series by sexgundam666 on Literotica

Thank me later

>>7087292
Who is that guy, and why should we care?

If you don't even give enough of a shit to say what the tags are or even the link, we can't be bothered to care enough to look those up.

>>7087277
Strange Bedfellow
Seeding Midnight
A Wedding Sinister
I have no idea why it's those three, but they've always stuck in my mind.

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>>7087294
Futa, cum inflation, dick growth, cum bath, cum denial, testicular inflation, giantess (near the end of the series)

He also does other stories that include slime girls, dick nipples, plant stuff and much more.

Honestly the best part of his writing is how he can make a generally good story that actually interests you with its characters.

Besides him my other favorite authors include shadowwolfe, and whoever did the Churned series on literotica that has amazing cockvore and unbirthing scenes.

That and Chelsea for giantess stories.

There are so many that I have saved it's not funny, comics by redfire d0g is also good (pic related) and also anything by mamabliss

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>>7085557
If I don't post this now, I shall lose my nerve and think better of it.

What follows is probably the stupidest thing I have ever written.

Come to a Head
http://pastebin.com/gL3b6S1H

>Tags: short story, male-on-female, blowjob, severed head play, magic, dullahan, Irish? Scottish? stereotypes, really really stupid

I really hope this doesn't ruin the idea for you as something with erotic potential.

>>7087277
I always forget my favorites. I better go down the master list again... just to be sure.

>>7087309
Link to those giantess stories?

Futa on Male

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Majalis/5038/Raquel

Does anyone have any similar stories of futa forcing themselves on an unwilling male?

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>>7087325
>Aye

>>7087347
Which ones?

>>7087347
Not the guy who posted that, but I'm pretty sure redfiredog's stories are still on giantessworld. Not sure about sexgundam666, though.

>>7087325
You cheeky fuck, this was great.

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Me and a buddy have been working on a flag for the Borealan republic in Siberia, what do you guys think of it?

>>7087723
Looks pretty nice

Where to go for some good bestiality, like that Catholic Bitch thing in the smut list?

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First time here. I started writing a story (Gentle Freedom, Role Reversal, Minor Yandere, Monster girl) It's the prologue + first chapter, and just almost 13000 words. I haven't gotten to any lewd scenes yet, but it's still one entirely completed part of the story. Should I post it even if there's no lewd content yet?

>>7087869
That sounds like a really good length, and lots of people round here like longer, slow build stories, so sure.

>>7087871
http://pastebin.com/M1By6hW8

I have some other smaller stories on my account, but they're not up to my new standard

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>>7086660
2000 word update, no new tags.
New content at "Borealans ate when they were hungry, until they were full."

>>7087900
Formatting and dialogue are flawless, characters range from likable, to adorable. Most importantly they feel natural and their interactions are believable. Really good story so far, to the point that it makes me wonder why I've not seen you posting before. This can't be the first serious thing you've written, it's far too polished?
Not finished reading it yet, but I can tell I'm going to enjoy it. It has to be one of the most competent fics I've seen posted so far.

I'm curious to see how you handle the sex scenes when they eventually crop up.

>>7087905
Woah, thanks. I used to post exclusively to the /gfd/ threads, as all my stories involve gentle femdom, but I was only recently told this thread exists. I've been working on this since the start of September, and I only took up writing erotic stuff as a hobby in May. I'm actually an cartoon artist (though not a terribly good one) by trade, and I'm currently studying an art program in college

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>>7087909
Well don't be afraid to link your other stuff if you think people won't have seen it yet. /gdf/ and monstergirl shit is probably the most popular subject in these threads at the moment.

I feel kid of weird critiquing your work because it's quite clearly technically superior to most of what I've written, lol, but I'm definitely impressed. I didn't even figure out breaks until like my third story.

If you do art too you should consider doing some illustrations, that would be baller, even if they're just sketches.

I'm new to this general, and maybe this is a stupid question, b does the fiction has to be /d/ related?

>>7087918
Nah not really, if it's a story that has sexual content that's fine.

>>7087900
>Cynical Writefag finally got gud
Today is a good day

>>7087920
uh Thanks? Are you familiar with my work?

>>7087911
Well, two of my other stories have been mostly well received, but they are a lot shorter and don't have as much character development as my current has. These were written back before I raised the bar higher for myself

http://pastebin.com/Lq4aqCfH
http://pastebin.com/nqUQQrjL

They both have tags at the top of the page, but it's still mostly vanilla/gfd stuff

>>7087922
Yeah, I'm the guy who critiqued "Love and War" at length a few months ago.

Your writing has improved immensely, and I'm glad to see it.

>>7087928
Thanks, This is my standard for all my future stories

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>>7087352
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/PENISADVENTURELAND/20921/Pleasure-Priestess
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Dudetl/20755/Authority-Abuse
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Kuroshio/20326/Cats-and-Hooves
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/gber1/8084/A-filled-hole
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Fuckasaurus/19644/Young-Love
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/XxaxX360/12888/The-Right-Girl
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Umbrae/17900/Journey-to-North
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/DraceDomino/17528/Wild-Hearts
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/futadom/17176/Harry-Potter-Futanari-One-shots
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/XxaxX360/16725/Andromache-Barbarian-Conquerer
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Girly-boy/11500/Katie-gets-boyfriend.
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/supersecret/11390/Trick-Or-Treat-Everything-Has-Cream-Filling
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Kaylus/10979/Police-Brutality
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Lambubu/11721/Plunderin-booty
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/gber1/8346/The-Principals-Choice
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Frocto/9489/Garnets-Abuse
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/irradiatedd/6438/Turned-Out

Some aren't really rape, and some are quite short, and a few are badly written

There's also this;
http://touchfluffytail.org/?tag=futa-on-male
https://chyoa.com/story/Futanari-World.8752
https://chyoa.com/story/The-Swollen-Root-Boarding-House.7753

I also highly recommend Futanari Palace, althought some of it is shit, if you dig well enough you'll find stuff that'll tickle your fancy

Also /r/ more futa on male stories pls I might have missed some

>>7087905

While small, this was a good update. For someone brand new to weight gain, you're getting comfortable with it pretty quickly

>>7088005
Thanks, I just hope I'm succeeding in striking a balance so that it doesn't put off my regular readers.

>>7086993
Wow, critique well done. I'd love to have you in the Critique Thread over on /qst/.

>>>/qst/742296

>>7086515
It could be worse! Wracked with tempestuous climax could work in the right context.

>>7088016
Nowhere is safe

>>7088024

I don't know man, it's so purple it's into the ultraviolet

>>7088044
Purple works to set a romantic mood, it's absolutely what a teenage girl would recount about her tryst with her crush.

>>7088032
It's not meant to be safe, it's meant to be educational.

>>7088014

I think they'll survive, it's not like Polars are the only Borealans in the story forever.

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>>7083678
this general was purged from /tg/ so you settled here, on this board, and then go ahead and insult us with this? explain yourselves, lest we bring down wrath upon you.

>>7088050
You came to the wrong neighborhood, anon.

>>7088050
Slaanesh is strong on /d/, the Emperor's holy light does not reach us here.

Hey Parallax?

Sorry I keep asking but... how is Orc Trouble going?

http://pastebin.com/wF2uSFCC

If it's giving you trouble you don't have to keep working on it

>>7086660
>I'm experimenting with some weight gain stuff, trying to fulfill the request without making it off-putting for my regular readers, tell me how I'm doing!
Gaining a little weight due to needing less effort to move around and being unused to this is fine, it'd just get weird if it affected all of them uniformly. The amount you eat is mostly a matter of habit (though hunger from exertion can override it) for organisms brighter than your average bug, so it should affect some more than others and be easier to break for a better habit for some than others. Younger Borealans would presumably have a major edge in not developing a tendency to eat too much for the lower gravity to begin with.

Plus even if they're less aggressive than their equatorial cousins, it'd still feel jarringly out of character if they really let their physical state go from what we've seen of them previously.

Whether this conflicts with the request really depends on how realistic/subtle versus how over-the-top and blatantly fetishistic the requester wants it to be.

>>7085709
Oh ok. Well thanks for hearing me out anyways. How comfortable are you with Dubcon and impregnation stuff? I love dubcon but I suck with thinking up excuses for ladies to not wanna run away from sex, despite them not wanting sex

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>>7088075
I'm aiming for fairly subtle, right now her body type is somewhere around here.

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>>7083688
Well I'm not writing for the smut off, but attempting fan-fanfiction of what's possibly my favorite piece of smut. Except I've never written anything before so I'm months in without a rought draft and it's starting to look more like regular fanfiction than smut and I STILL can't find a way to insert my preg fetish without it coming off as heavily magical realm.

Anyone has suggestions of things to read involving snow, snow (or night)-related folklore and creatures, and possibly some romance?

Funny thing, that, I don't really like the settings of some of my favorite smuts, and they've got smut but not only.

Have a deviant pic for the blog post.

>>7086660
>Ursi getting THICK in her new environment
>ever-growing tits spilling out over her elegant clothes
Dear god more.

>>7088114
I feel like if you can be magical realm anywhere, it is here. Magical realm away.

I mean, I have a race dedicated to incontinence in one of my series. Magical realm is our general crime.

>>7088126
My problem is that I don't WANT it to feel magical realm. Problem is, at the rate I'm going in, I'm gonna end up giving with something that isn't smut when I explicitly set out to write an impreg happy end followup to some guy's smut. Because it doesn't feel too much like magical realm in his story, y'get me? I don't want to make a u-turn with someone else's work which I like.

>>7087900

No sex, and yet it still pushes all the right buttons for me. I love it!

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>>7088125
Glad to see more people enjoying that aspect, I am emboldened.

>>7088125

We've got to help snekguy get over his fear of the average reader, he's way too good at this to leave this source if sexiness untapped.

>>7088138
Thank you! what about it did you enjoy?

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Working on something spooky for Halloween.
Dunno if it'll be done or even have smut by then, but I'll share what I have when the date comes.

>>7088139
As long as she doesn't get rolls, dimples or bad health the wg is hot as fuck. Don't be afraid to continue that.

>>7088168
Ah, is cute still out there? Good to know.

>>7088172
He's on the flockmod now, actually. Come join us, we've got room to spare.

>>7088176

whats flockmod?

>>7088176
I would, but I don't think my employer would appreciate it.

>>7088179
flockmod.com/tgwst

Just go here.

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>>7087325
>“Aye, you're a man?” Cennetig shouted.
>“You bet I am.” The dullahan said. “That means you're gay now.”

>>7083989
No Black Carapace, so it's a regular human.

>>7088256
black carapace is a subcutaneous implant.

>>7084094
What kind of shapeshifting are we talking about? Change into anything as long as it's made out of flesh and bone? Can change into Can change into any human shape? Can change into any human shape, but can't change mass? Can change into anything made out of flesh and blood, but can't change mass? Can change into anything, even a puddle of water, and still be fine? Sometimes constraints make things more interesting. That and they give some focus. That last one might be perfect as a wish for a superpowered waifu goes, but for story purposes, there's just too much ground to cover.

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>>7087869
>Gentle Freedom

>>7088275
whoops

>>7088050
Nigga what? Snekguy is a native /d/eviant. Don't blame us for your furfaggotry.

>>7087900
More please anon. I need it. All of the gentle holding and kissing is top notch.
>>7088111
Holy shit, I can 100% get behind this.

>>7088050
>>7088278
can't you niggers just enjoy a fap without worrying about what other people are fapping to?

>>7088142

You never rushed into, you let everything happen naturally and made sure your characters were developed and set the stage to actually make it special when it does happen.

>>7087869
Anon, people here love a good bit of Plot. Posting that is fine, as long as the content is erotic in some way.

>>7087900
Pretty good. The characters shout a lot, but it... seems to work for a fluff-and-cuddles story like this? I can't really explain it.

Though, the lamia panties at the end gives me a strange mental image, since I can't imagine much more than a loincloth being workable. Maybe I'm not being creative enough here.

>>7088429
The shouting, mostly near the end, is their emotions taking over because they finally confessed to each other

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>>7088429
Is it the panties from everyday monstergirl?

First commission I've done! And I didn't even have to sell my soul to furfags to do it.

>Trap Train
First person with male MC getting lured onto a subway train filled with dickgirls and fucked by one. Anal virginity stuff and emphasis on 'straight guy realizing getting fucked isn't bad'
http://pastebin.com/wuYWiy6M

>200 words in on my first story ever
Feels good.

Out of curiosity: How long do you usually take to get to the smut in a story, length-wise? I'm writing this more directly smutty than I'd normally like, but I get the feeling it'll be a little while either way.

>>7088465
Stick the smut in when it feels natural anon.

Writing smut is like fucking.

>>7088465
It depends. I usually write straight-up sex scenes. Sometimes with no intro at all, sometimes with 100-500 words of intro.

>>7087068
To add to that, It's always time by Oblimo is one of the best googirl on guy story that is decently long. Dude used to frequent here but he fell off the face of the planet.

>>7088111
I thought that she was that thicc previously and was worried for her health due to assuming that future burgers might be slightly less healthy than current ones (lacking in the proper fat to digest the meat, cheese that's about equal to the restaurant quality of today). That level is more than acceptable, carry on Snekguy.

Is the master smut list and the recent entries the only two locations someone would post a request delivery or do some go unnoticed?

>>7088268
There should be interface ports (to link the marine's body with the power armor systems) visible through the skin at least.

>>7087325
lol.nice

Are you redrafting the croc story again? it is not public.

>>7087900
you have improved.

I applaud you for also keeping your older stuff many writers like to pretend they were always this good.

>>7088349
But I fap to the thought of ruining other people's fapping.

>>7088444
"straight" guy

>>7088557
The list also exists on 1d4chan and titanpad, but those aren't updated as much. And of course there's right here.

>>7088513
I forgot about him somehow. I really hope he goes back to writing someday. That was a great story.

>>7088671
No, I put them all as "unlisted" because someone said that there was a chance they would delete them.

Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels
http://pastebin.com/n7wZkdNU
>tags: crocgirl, male-on-female, orgasm denial, humiliation, public nudity, cunnilingus, breath play, fingering, animal death, menace, Florida

Should I post a public Pastebin that links to all my unlisted ones? Or would there be no point to keeping them unlisted at that point?

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>>7088315
>>7088548
>>7088144
>>7088141
>>7088125
>>7088075
>>7088005
I'm relieved that it's so well received, but on the other hand I feel like I've failed to give every reader an accurate mental image of how big Ursi was and is becoming.

Is there a way to do that without simply stating her dimensions and weight, which wouldn't really be easy to calculate, or even be very valid because of her exaggerated height?

I feel like calculating the BMI of somebody who is 9 feet tall is going to be totally redundant.

Me and Shiny have been trying to find an artist to commission a picture of her, but no luck on that front yet (and it isn't really a solution to my failing to convey her appearance in writing).

>>7084007

>>7084123
>>7084118
These have it for me. Generally, I'm all about the characters having a mutual good time & romance. Can't do /y/, but other pairings are fine.

>>7088808
>No, I put them all as "unlisted" because someone said that there was a chance they would delete them
Who is going to delete what? Pastebin delete your work? Should never happen. Hell if you don't even want it to show up on the right with other public pastes for a few seconds just throw it up as unlisted and then list it half an hour later. It'll bypass all the bots that way.

>>7088854
You could have her notice the weight gain and comment on it herself (the best is if she's annoyed, but not enough to actually do anything about it).

Or not notice and then try to wear clothes she's just a LITTLE too big for.

Both of these have the bonus of being hot as fuck.

>>7088854
>>7089048
Need to work on describing how big her boobs are and the interaction with them too. Descriptions are nice.

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>>7089049
Well you should be happy, working on a boobjob scene.

>>7089053
my two cents (that you have absolutely no obligation to listen to): I'm really curious about her tail...

>>7088111
That's a little too much for me. I do not find rolls of fat attractive. The line is definitely before the point where hygiene becomes problematic, though.

>>7088923
It has happened before.

>>7088923

Wasn't there some sort of scare that Pastebin was deleting stuff? I seem to remember that?

Can some other anons weigh in before I un-unlist them? I don't want to do it in err.

>>7089060
How so? They've used their tails previously to bind people's hands or jerk them off.

>>7089082
I was told the same thing, that if I left them public they might be deleted. Can't comment on the validity of the claim but I've kept mine unlisted.

>>7089088
the tail tweaking, is it startling, pleasurable, what?

sorry, I didn't explain myself very well

Are there any stories in the list with a significant focus on bondage?

Just wondering haha

I-I'm asking for a friend

>>7089097
>I-I'm asking for a friend
but you should give it a quick once-over to make sure it's good enough to pass along, right? ;)

Can someone post Snek's other stories?

>>7089093
Oh I see.
Well, the base of the tail is a very sensitive zone on animals, it's an accupressure point, or maybe a nerve bundle.
Cats and dogs will freak out if you scratch the base of their tail, and my cat has skin conditions that often arise there first.
I've heard people say that cat breeders can take their females out of heat by applying pressure in that spot too, essentially making them react as if they have copulated.
Hard to say if it's always a sexual reaction, but it's definitely extremely sensitive.

>>7089110
Hang on, I'm just gonna do what D. suggested and make a Pastebin with all the links and ebooks. Gimme a minute.

>>7089110
Check the smut list.

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>>7089110
http://pastebin.com/dHd9iFCN

I think that's everything.
Not every story has an Ebook yet but I'm working on that.

>>7088854
>I feel like I've failed to give every reader an accurate mental image of how big Ursi was and is becoming.
I don't think that's necessarily a problem (unless being too fat to do something is an upcoming plot point or something), since it allows your readers to imagine her as muscle-y fat or thick or landwhale or whatever they like.

I mean, I enjoyed your stories much more before you had images that revealed them as furry. This is similar.

>>7089144
Oh they're not all furry.
Only the Polars have fur, the Equatorial race is as naked as humans. There's only really Ursi and her concubines who are furry in the stories so far.
You're right, it's best to imagine whatever you personally like, they're only stories after all.

>>7088854
The thing about an image is that you 'get' what's there easily. She's going to be more squat than a human, because 1.3Gs, so that's an effect, but she has two arms, two legs, a torso, and a head, so things will line up.

My suggestion is to get general info on the various Borealians (male & female equatorials and polars, a few major characters). Also, see if Inker can at least do some sketches, possibly.

>>7089053


>boob job with clothes on

Holy fuuuck my diiiiiiiick

Put this shit in Snek, I don't care how, just do it

>>7087900
Alright, so one thing that gets me for one reason or another is Amber's use of 'my love' instead of Cecil's name. She just starts using it after their date and it comes off as creepy, despite how committed their are to eachother.

>>7089151

Good, now apply this thought process to the rest of the story and quit worrying about who will enjoy it or not

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I'm not a frequent poster, I think I've only posted once about a multi-chapter googirl story I've done (The Geelien's), but I've done a growing series of Tinkerbell /u/ stories, based on the movies, though the latest upcoming chapter ventures deep into /d/ territory.

Of the 5 stories, 11 chapters total, it's primarily yuri and masturbation, with anal (Tink), squirting and watersports (Peri and Gliss)/pee-drinking (Gliss) being secondary, though one scene in the second story of the series features a brief assault and near rape of Tinkerbell by a male fairy, who get's severely punished afterwords, though not described.

The upcoming chapter is complete, I just need to make final adjustments here and there. The story stars a Zarina/Silvermist pairing for the main event of the story, however, aside from yuri, it's secondary theme is futa, magic-induced futa, to be more exact thanks to Zarina and is planned to involve a ridiculous amount cum. (pic related)

I posted this on /u/, but given the /d/ theme the upcoming chapter has, I figured, I'd post here for those interested.

If you'd like to check the series out, before reading the new chapter when it's ready (which I hope is within the next couple days), here's a link to the first story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11302067/1/Tinkering-Tink

The order of the series goes as such:
Tinkering Tink
Where Fairies (also) Come From (1,2,3)
Teaching Tink: The Mystery of the Queen
Teaching Tink: The Benefits of Sister's
Teaching Tink: Show and Tell
Teaching Peri (1,2)
The Binds of Sister's (1,2)

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>>7083751

I don't know what /efg/'s appetite is for tentacles, but it occurred to me that I had another tentacle story knocking around that I wrote for /lit/'s ezine back when that was a thing.

http://pastebin.com/krgyvYgP

Tags: non-consensual intercourse with appendages like those of a squid

If there is any interest at all, the chapter that follows this is consentacles, and after that there is egg-laying and then I wrote myself into a corner and could never work out how to finish it.

>>7089173
I changed the last scene she isn't calling him "love every single time. But you also have to keep in mind, they sort of just "re-propses" to each other, and Amber is established as a yandere

>>7089134
Hey snek, did you end up enjoying the first chapter, cause I remember you saying you weren't finished reading it in your response

>>7089195
I have no idea how to navigate ff.net.

Oh I see, these are buttons that aren't really buttons. What a weird design.

As the only person here who does any watersports, I'm going to read teaching peri, I guess.

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3000 word update, new content at "She turned to face him, her massive head moving to nuzzle his neck"

Fineprint 2 - Republic:
http://pastebin.com/PKJnSGaW
New tags:
>boobjob

>>7089251
Oh yes, very much so. You're really a top notch writer and I hope you'll continue. I think your strongest point is just really natural, flowing character dialogue. The story is very cute, and I feel like the two characters have real chemistry, which is something often lacking in smut fics for obvious reasons.

I'll read the other stories that got posted too but I got clannies breathing down my neck, gotta go play with them.

>>7089160
Well next I want to write the Tourist Guide, kind of a mini FAQ and guide for people who want to write in the setting, as I've had a couple of requests.
Perhaps I can incorporate that into it.

>>7089277
Why thank you! I'm hesitant whether I should only post if I've finished a chapter, or if it's acceptable to post an "update" if say I got three or four scenes done

>>7089282
Each to his own, but I only update if I have at least 2000 words to show, gives people something substantial to read.

>>7089287
okay, I'll keep it in mind.

>>7089277

>>7089277

Snek, Shiny here, if you actually do that tourist guide thing I'll pay you for that too, same rates as before.

>>7089291
Oh sick, really?
I've been wanting to do it for a while, it wouldn't be especially large, it would be a kind of stylized fact sheet modeled after the tourist guide from Fineprint with lots of info about Borealis and the biology/culture of the cats.
I wanted to include a few basic illustrations and some pictures that Shiza made for me, since my buddy who does Ebooks for me figured out how to insert images, so I'll email him and see what he thinks. I could always give him a cut.

>>7089295

You know the drill. Make it as large as you want. All I ask is that you include Polars too.

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>>7089297
You got it.

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Has anyone tried to write about zero-g sex?

>>7089307
Wouldn't that be really unfortunate?

I remember something about 'intimacy suits' prototyped for some future where couples are in zero-g. Since it is hard to keep two people close to each other to even snuggle.

They had like, velcro connectors, so you could open them and attach them to the person you want to stay close to, and that would keep you close enough to at least get a fondling in.

I have trouble imagining trying to do any penetration without it turning into a blooper reel.

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>>7089313
I've been reading Snek's Pinwheel story and just been wondering how shit would go down if the gravity failed for a bit. I'd imagine Raz could use her tail or something.

>>7089244
I know, and if Cecil wasn't so dense, he'd realize it.

>>7089313
whatever else you do, make sure all sharp edges and corners are padded. With a little creativity, I think you could get away with just grabbing onto the other person's limbs and locking legs, but keeping control of your direction would be another matter entirely.

>>7089317
Essentially, each person would have to keep several points of contact with opposing surfaces or be trained to balance-out their movements in zero-g.

Sex would be pretty involved.

>>7089317
everyone would be puking from vertigo, probably, because 0-G feels like you're falling according to astronauts

>>7089323
Oh, is there a problem with Cecil's characterization?

>>7089331
Nope, there's no real problem. He's still incredibly naive. One thing that I WAS wondering about was why they didn't keep in touch.

>>7089335
I guess you can chalk it up to how sudden Cecil had to leave

>>>>7088091
Impreg I don't have a problem with, though I've never actually done anything with it. Dubcon I had to look up, which seems to be Dubious Consent as a tag. I don't really get the idea of dubious consent; I mean, either you are or you aren't down to bump uglies. Things like power disparities(boss/peon, jailer/inmate, etc) and other forms of duress or impaired faculties make a story NC to me.

For example, I'm brainstorming a new anime fanfic for a show this season at the moment. Girl A is a futa unused to her new penis(an "its not going to go away until you finish with it situation"), and Girl B wants to play with Girl A as her new toy. She physically and mentally teases and manipulates Girl A, who never specifically says no, but doesn't actually want to have sex. She just can't think clealy until she calms her lust, and goes along with Girl B to get rid of it.

I mean, is that dubcon? Is that the essence of the idea, or am I missing some aspect.

>>7088795
Well damn. Was just hoping by some odd chance that the writer who had taken up my request would have posted it there. I only think I've missed one thread, but I'm assuming at this point it just wasn't done. I have no idea how long this sort of stuff takes, but from watching others, not this long.

>>7089342
You'd be surprised at how long it can take. Just as a reminder, what did you request anyway?

>>7089259
If AO3 is better, then I have the series posted there as well, It just lacks the formatting (italics and bolding) that I use in my stories that FF.net allows. But I might have to start posting the AO3 link as my primary because it's also organised better there, it's posted as a series, so all the stories are under one link. By the time I realized this was turning into a series on FF.net, it was too late to delete and reupload as I didn't want to lose the reviews I had.

http://archiveofourown.org/series/333403

>>7089346
Ah well maybe you're right. I'm not a writer so I don't know. It was a request for a summoner lalafell from final fantasy growing into a tall and sexy hourglass body and growing a second head with an actual horn instead of a summoner horn. I made the request a couple months back and the write said that they had some stuff to do beforehand.

>>7089195
>>7089259
I'm sad, I'm not really into this. Like, small ticks of arousal, but no.

Critique time:
Honestly, the writing felt like it was maybe too based on the source material. Being aware that these are the Tinkerbell characters from the kids show, I felt like I was reading a sexualized script from that show. The dialogue was repetitive at times. You know, in that way Dora the explorer has to repeat everything that just happened so the child audience can memorize it.

If an action just occurred, you don't need to have the character both repeat out loud what just happened, and then have that just described. Like 'Chelsea had an orgasm. "Oh my goodness I just had an orgasm," said Chelsea while having an orgasm.' We got it, thanks, please resist.

Also, since these are old stories I understand it is in the past, and who cares, but there are a lot of missing words here and there. Mostly conjunctions and prepositions (I think, my parts of speech are terrible), like at, a, and, the. All that can be said is to let a story stew overnight and give it another read before publishing it to whatever site.

Stuff you can just take or forget: A lot of people hate stuttering in text. Like, it is often better to just say someone is stuttering than constantly m-m-make t-t-t-them r-r-r-read through repeated letters. Like 'why make them read through repeated letters?' FUBOT asked with a slight stutter.

But overall, I'm glad the story was written in general. I'm always excited to see any other watersports at all, just because it makes me feel less weird. Though, I guess being on /d/ counteracts that a fair bit.

>>7089160
>>7089277
Honestly, 1.3 G would have a pretty negligible impact on build. That degree of increased gravity would be absorbed by minor changes in cartilage physiology and bone strength, with a dash of extra muscle mass.
Other primates on earth can be way stockier and far more gracile than humans, and it's mostly a side effect of their evolutionary survival strategies. As intelligent bipedal hunters who understand how to throw objects and would want to be able to leap on a target with their claws and operate with good agility, fairly long limbs for leverage would be one of the most critical factors, so you'd expect them to have a similar build to a human gymnast. If pouncing is a style of attack they would like to use when unarmed, you'd expect them to have slightly longer legs proportionally, and larger hips to power jumps.

>>7089361
If he hasn't said anything at all since then, it's best to assume he just wasn't able to do it. Sometimes shit just happens like that, nothing you can do.

>>7089368
Yeah you're probably right. I suppose I'm just happy that someone thought the idea was good enough to do.

>>7089366

What about calorie intake?

>>7089364
thanks for the interest and critique.
I wasn't aware of the repeating dialogue, but that example you gave, certainly sounds like a line I would write, so thanks for bringing that to my attention.

The stuttering comment I feel a bit mixed on, just saying someone's stuttering without showing it is just weird to me. I could tone it down some, but I wouldn't do away with it.

I've done plenty of watersports and scat themed stories. but the one-shots ones are fairly old and thus, not particularly well written imo, I've mainly been alternating between my googirl series and my Tinkerbell series for the last couple years. my googirl series has some watersport and a bit of scat, but it's not focused on like my old one-shots.

My last fetish one-shot was done back in 2013 and it was a FFX-2 cross-over in which Yuna, Rikku, Garnet, Tifa and Yuffie have a pooping contest.

>>7089339
Yep that is essentially dubcon. In a way, the person has an option to run away and is not being threatened with their lives and/or bound, but due to circumstances in spite of themselves, they chose to stay even when they don't want to.

Blackmail/bribery/coercion are a few examples of excuses for dubcon though I am pretty sure other excuses exist too. And the lady is usually angry and/or anxious despite eventually giving into sex

Vandalized from SunSetRiders7 comes to mind...

>>7089433
Yeah, the stuttering situation is one of those where some readers will hate it, and others won't care. Like I said, take it or leave it. You're already writing stories about fairies or FF characters pissing themselves, losing some reader because of your 50/50 choice on stuttering isn't worth losing sleep.

So, I noticed there's been some crossposting to the /xeno/ thread from here, and I figured I'd return the favor by whoring out my latest sidestory.

Enemy Space: http://pastebin.com/Mbf2RPKh
[F!Xeno x M!Human, space opera, very light femdom/RR]

This is the first time I've tried something with gentle femdom/RR (it's not a fetish I really have), so I'd appreciate feedback on how to improve that aspect.

Anyone have any Chubby BBW on smaller male.
Like this but more erotic. >>7089544

>>7089557
>like this, but not terrifying

>>7089391
Well, if you're working against 1.3 G, you'll get a more-or-less proportionate increase in energy cost to hold yourself upright and move against gravity, namely any upward motions. Shoving something sideways would be as easy as ever, but if thrown it'd land faster, so to get it to travel as far you need to throw harder.

Plus the obvious fact that a bigger creature needs more calories, as does a similar sized but more active creature.

>>7089586

So in reverse, if you go from 1.3g to 1, and your caloric intake doesn't change, that adds up to weight gain?

>>7089625
You gotta burn calories moving around, higher gravity + larger body = more calories burned.
You'd be burning fewer calories performing the same activities in 1G, because it takes less energy. Ergo, if you keep eating the same amount that sutained you in 1.3G, you will put on weight in 1G.

>>7089625
less gravity means that you don't need to spend as much effort staying upright and moving around, and using less calories to move around and eating the same amount means that you're going to be consuming more than you're using, ergo: weight gain

>>7089625
Sure, though hunger is fairly tightly bound to energy expenditure for critical survival reasons. If you're getting more active for whatever reason, you get hungrier to drive your calorie intake up to keep you functioning, or thirstier to replace the higher than usual fluid loss from sweating. You also get hungrier in cold weather since your system needs to burn through more stuff to keep your body temperature stable. Conversely, the mechanisms that make this happen mean if you start having less physical exertion, you get less hungry. Likewise your appetite tends to go down in hot weather.

>>7089738
Inker, dude, when are you going to do more Gabe and Macha stuff?

>>7088808
Yeah I thought that Pastebin deleted lewds too, but others have told me that theirs have stayed up for a decade.

As a newfag I would love to see what other stories you have, especially if they are like croc.

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I threw together a small sketch of Amber and Cecil from my story. Pls don't bully too hard I'm not a good artist

>>7089366
I disagree
The effects of strength training on growth were exaggerated since even /fit/ ppl know how to exercise efficiently for less than two hours a day.
However skeletal problems have been found in Indian children carrying 20% of their weight in bookbags for most of the day.

Besides the fa/tg/uy in me wants to present dwarfism as an evolutionary tradeoff, not a deformity that condemns them to Willy Wonka movies.

>>7089808
I object to the concept that creatures evolved for higher gravity will be squat and short, because it treats humans as the baseline, when even on our own planet we really don't represent the median at all. We've had animals as large and heavy as a brachiosaurus walking around, so even if you increased the gravity by a factor that would exponentially lower the maximum possible height and weight of an animal, you still have a lot of breathing room based on what we've seen on Earth.

>>7089813
> I wont go on much longer since this is already derailing.
So in /d/ aliens can have dicks, breasts and mammal hair that work by human rules. But for some reason muscles and bones don't?

I hope we drop this line of conversation before you convince snekguy that his lewds are anthropocentric and the MC's final love scene is jacking off into a river full of unfertilized eggs.

>>7089840
Well we know that mammalian features evolved independently more than once on Earth, marsupials have fur and produce milk. Therefor, it is not unreasonable to assume that aliens might convergently evolve in the same way.
Having a race of furries with massive knockers has more evolutionary basis than squat midget people, as so far we've seen nothing to suggest a that the size range for animals would become dramatically limited in a higher gravity environment.

>>7088143
Fucking awesome, now I've got something to legitimately look forward to this Spookyday.

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>>7089792

The Player Witch Augment
http://pastebin.com/bPDQRrM1
>tags: cock growth, huge penis, small penis humiliation, masturbation, exhibitionism, witchcraft, futa, autofellatio, walla walla bing-bang

Player Witch Augment 2: Paranormal Virility
http://pastebin.com/Fnfk6knG
>tags: cock growth, huge penis, small penis humiliation, lots of come, eating come, come in food, witchcraft, exhibitionism, autofellatio

Player Witch Augment 3: Sometimes They Come On Your Back
http://pastebin.com/tE2wtWGg
>tags: cock growth, huge penis, small penis humiliation, oral sex, premature ejaculation, eating come, witchcraft, exhibitionism, female-on-female, female-on-futa, handjob

The Player Witch Augment 4: Hocus, Poke Us
http://pastebin.com/tCPmkVgh
>tags: male-on-female, female-on-female, huge cock, small cock humiliation, other humiliation, public nudity, large insertion, anal, magic

The Prayer Witch Augment 5: Miss Peregrine's Homo for Peculiar Adults
http://pastebin.com/034cvbMP
>tags: female-on-female, female-on-futa, futa-on-futa, exhibitionism, fellatio, anal, huge cocks, cock expansion, magic, come to beautiful hawaii

Out of the Bag
http://pastebin.com/69PdJVLf
>tags: female-on-female, catgirl, transformation, public nudity, exhibitionism, pussylicking, get it?

Slime of Your Life
http://pastebin.com/utmXWknh
>tags: slimegirl, slime tentacles, fantasy, fantasy races, interracial, condoms, elf, centaur, futa-on-female, multiple penises, slime vore, same-size vore?, lots of semen, anal, oral, stomach bulging, public, engulfment, doctor

I hope you like it.

>>7086726
Fuck, I sympathize. Give me some keywords and I'll get on it.

PS: I suck, but I want to ease your pain, also I am into the same stuff.

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>pic related as proof of identity

So anyway, just wanna let you guys know that I'm available for commissions. Link to my stuff is on the master list, or you can hit up notreallybuttpants.tumblr. Commission info's all there too.

>>7090435
When did you get so good?

>>7083688

How many words are people aiming for with this?

>>7089808
>However skeletal problems have been found in Indian children carrying 20% of their weight in bookbags for most of the day.
True, but that's largely because they have serious dietary issues that make their skeletons fairly weak (India is pretty bad for rickets), combined with it being an external weight to the body attached high up rather than internal and distributed. Displacing the load around the entire body massively increases what can be handled, which is exploited in the design of military webbing systems, and you can be overweight to the tune of 30% above an ideal weight and not suffer skeletal problems.

An interesting exercise is to take what you might wear on a winters day, coat, shoes and all, cram it all into a bookbag along with what items you'd normally have with you, and try wearing that. It's not hard, but considering most people don't really register the mass of that stuff when worn across their body it's heavier than you think.

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SNEKGUY HURRY UP! I NEED MORE URSI

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>>7090531
Another 500 words and I can post an update.

>>7090435

Can you post your prices in here?

>>7090539
Chubby Ursi incoming.

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>>7090539

>>7089557
That's not chubby. That's a hamplanetoid.

>>7089757
That wasn't Gabe.

>>7090331
Wait. Is there TG? That's the only way I can get all of those tags to work in my head without more characters than makes sense.

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>>7089366
Nice post, fellow biobro.

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>>7090531
>>7090603
>>7090604
2500 word update, new content at "She started to move, slowly at first, then faster"

Fineprint 2 - Republic:
http://pastebin.com/PKJnSGaW

Also we may have found someone to commission a picture of Ursi, big thanks to the guy who emailed me the artist's contact info.
Just waiting for a reply to see if he'll accept.

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Also, the Warband ebook is ready for those who want it:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=7101825&i=639785

>>7090772
Snek, I noticed you have patreon. I'm not saying I would right now, but would you suggest I'd eventually open one myself? After I gain some momentum, I mean.

Thinking about writing a fapfic about Link from the Legend of Zelda. Maybe Breath of the Wild Link. Anyone got suggestions?

>>7090821
Yeah definitely, I recommend everyone use one.
Even if you get zero patrons you can use it as your blog so people can keep up to date on your work, and you can use it to host files with direct download links.
Some people can be dicks about it and put up paywalls, but that's entirely optional, I keep everything free.

>>7090833
I wasn't going to have paywalls, I was just curious is all. I genuinely just enjoy the feeling of people reading my work

>>7090821
If you're putting stuff out regularly, go ahead.

>>7090834
It's definitely great for hosting, and allowing people to easily follow you.

>>7090835
There's a setting where the person only gets paid with a content update, which could work for me, I don't have the time to try and make it a full time job.
https://www.patreon.com/Cynical_Writefag

>>7090828
write about something that interests you, involving things that turn you on?

>>7090828
I'm pretty straight, but something about too cold shirtless Link does something to me.

>>7090850

I'm drawing a blank right now, and I like hearing other people's ideas.

>>7090855

Here's a good start.

>>7090839
How do you go about putting your stories into an ebook format?

>>7090872
I have a friend who helps me out with that, he uses Calibre to convert them.

>>7090888
It isn't the hardest thing to do, if you look up some guides online.

Never 'fun', since depending what you transfer it from it can destroy formatting. But it isn't Hitler.

>>7090438
Th-thanks anon.

>>7090566
For a full body shot lineart with simple shading, I start at 15-20 usd and then go up according to how complex the final picture gets.

>no proof of identity pic because phoneposting

>>7090932
Inker, dude, will we ever see the return of streaming?

>>7090614
All the tags for PWA?

There are magical made penises that are attached to women, if that's what you mean by TG.

>>7091001
And the male remains a male?

>>7091013
In these five, yes.

I'm not into male-to-whatever-else transformation, or even futa-on-male so... you're safe for now.

>>7090936
I'm back at university for the next few months, and sadly it's just too much bother to rely on phone data to stream, that and the landlord won't install broadband for the house.

>>7091150
that sucks, man.

I really loved all the stuff you showed us on your channel.

>>7090626
Why do I get the feeling that Dennis is going to be in a big borealan sandwich again. Maybe even three again.

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>>7087900
The cute/sweetness levels are so high I think I'm going to have a heart attack before I reach any lewd stuff.

>>7091251
So you enjoyed it?

>>7090932

When I see you do a commission for someone in this thread, I'll toss a few in myself

>>7091165


I may need to have snek plump up another one to make this happen.

Possibly. Maybe.

>>7090626
Dennis really should get to learning their language and/or teaching the polars a human language

Second commission. We dogfuckers now.

>Bestiality, rape, dog on female
http://pastebin.com/nWPxrQA9

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>>7091261
Well, none yet for this thread, but from back when we were still on /tg/ I did this.

>>7091413
Still not worse than drowning in piss or botfly removal.

>>7091505
>botfly removal
I miss the "/tg/ worse than /d/" memes.
These threads used to be so much freakier.

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Bloodletter.

>>7091578
Noice inker.
[spoiler]Pls do a daemon-baby womb-burster.[/spoiler]

>>7091578
hey, inker, are you still taking random anon requests?

I wonder if inker might draw us a nice picture of Cultist-Chan

That would be neat

>>7091579
That sounds painful and bloody.
>>7091588
>>7091630
Next thread I guess.

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>>7091264
>>7091165
Starting to run out of steam on this one, but I can get that in there.
Bit more WG stuff, one more sex scene, then I'll probably wrap it up.

Next I'll do the tourist guide, which shouldn't take long. Can't really post updates for that since it only works as an ebook because of the pictures and weird format.

After that I should really do the Krell story I've been teasing for so long, but I have a hankering to write some action scenes so I might end up doing the one I stitched together from the ideas you guys pitched, with the Polar medic who loves human culture and the amputee who is having prosthetics fitted.

>>7091632

What would be even more neat is a picture of Cultist-Chan having been captured and tied up

Just speculating

haha

>>7091632
>That sounds painful and bloody.
Blood for the blood god.

New thread time?

>>7091673
When this one falls of the board.

How do you search to tags in the master list? I looking for some futa x male stories.

>>7091779
ctrl + F

>>7091634
Blowjobs with a visible tongue is my fetish.

So is there any tips on how to overcome a skill plateau, or am I boned figuratively?

>>7091634
With how many dick pictures there are I wish I liked seeing them. That picture is so nice minus the damn dick.

>>7091578
Nice to see you back !

>>7090626
I kinda wish Ursi would have a bit more of a oral fixation like last time. That kissing till he cummed thing. Really rattled my bones.

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>>7091505
>Botfly removal
Is it a bad thing I've managed to fetishize that?

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>>7091822
Can do.

>>7091505

>botfly removal

Did anyone ever write this in the end? I suppose if not it's become such a meme now that if anyone ever did it would inevitably be a disappointment, probably the same situation for /tg/'s "rape factory".

>>7091831
XS gave it a shot, IIRC.

>>7091833
Huh, I thought I had read all of her stuff.

I might be insane enough to attempt it after enough liquor and stimulants. I pluck my pubic hair, so imagine the appeal is somewhat like that.

>>7091825
F-fuck.