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So take Steven Universe

>gender swap the cast
>make them metallic terminator esc beings
>give it a future version cyber punk earth
>have them be actively at war with homeworld
>no townie episodes

This is a follow-up to a previous thread >>89032243
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Why can't you come up with an actual original concept that has nothing to do with a previously established property
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>>89098673
Already better than the piece of shit original.
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>>89098683
Because nothing is original
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>>89098683
I have plenty of other original concepts. This is just fun. Besides every story or work of art is derivative of something else.
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>>89098714
That's the perfect excuse to create a cringey, direct rip-off of something
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>>89098733
cringy by virtue of what? the more attractive character designs? more action oriented premise? less overt sjw agenda pushing?
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>>89098788
Your neck must hurt from sucking your own dick that hard
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>>89098673
Is Stefanie a biker chick?
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why the fuck is this getting it's own thread again?
keep this shit where it belongs

>>89097476
>>89066328
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Crying is such a well-known element of Steven Universe that you could almost say it's part of the show's DNA- you can't do a parody without it.

So I say keep it, and continue to follow the pattern of nobody being exempt. But every time one of the Metaloids cries, have them give a dramatic "I KNOW NOW WHY YOU CRY, LITTLE HUMAN...." T2 style speech, with Stefanie getting increasingly annoyed as the series goes on.

>"It was never our intention to keep the truth about your father from you, Stefanie. This war... It has taken a terrible toll on us all..."
>"Oh my god, Platinum, not this again..."
>"STEFANIE, I... I BELIEVE I UNDERSTAND... AT LAST..."
>"Platinum, please..."
>"IS THIS... THE HUMAN EMOTION... CALLED SADNESS?...."
>"PLATINUM..."
>"IF THIS WAR TAKES OUR LIVES, THE WAY IT TOOK THE LIFE OF YOUR FATHER... WILL WE SLEEP? WILL WE DREAM?"
>"... Are you done?"
>"... Yes, I believe so."
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>>89098683
>>89098788
>>89098733

>In which the Internet Culture hates it when people try to create and enjoy things.

The IC has been so conditioned to snark, sneer and deconstruct, they froth at the mouth because a thing from one for of fiction is happening in another.
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>>89098673
It's incredible how in trying to make it less gay, you ended up making it look even more gay.
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>>89098673

I think your idea is kinda bad and I'm not particularly fond of your art style.
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>>89098733
>>89099225
>>89099274
Do you anons even know how to have fun anymore?
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>>89099274
I prefer interesting gay dudes over boring chicks.
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>>89099257
Given the tweaks to the setting, I could see Stephanie getting tired of the Metals learning the ways of the Hu-Man after the fourth or fifth episode.
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I'm trying to draw this, and I realize all of the hairstyles made for this are fucking awful.
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>>89099500
Maybe you are just a bad artist.
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>>89099531
I guess.
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>>89099348
If I wanted to have fun I wouldn't come to /co/ first place.
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>>89098673
I'm seconding this design for Mercury but maybe give the clothes the liquidy feel of the other picture.
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>>89099500
You could always tweak them slowly and maybe more people will prefer that design.
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Ay, what are the CG's weapons in this? asking for a friend
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>>89099500
>>89099650 is right. You can always take liberties with the designs. Look at the storyboard artists on the show.
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>>89099622
another mercury concept design
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>>89099721
The Metalloids don't have weapons like gems, instead they have different properties that relate to their metals. Some have magnetic powers, others electrical, some are good shapeshifters while others are nearly indestructible. Nichrome has electrical powers, Al is good at shapeshifting Colbalt can use magnetism. When Al and Colbalt alloy they become Colbalt aluminate who's very blue, good shapeshifter and immune to electrical attacks.
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>>89099973
I'm not being completely scientific here but I'm taking inspiration from chemistry.
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>>89098673
Even when she is a boy I still want to fuck Pearl.
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>>89100330
Of course, who wouldn't?
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>>89100375
Al is best boy.
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>>89099918
I like this one
>>89099622

more. It seems to fit that innocent/broken look more.
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>>89098673
Logo is hard to read, but I really like the design.
It really doesn't feel like a parody, just a reimagining.
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Tis my time to post arts.
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>>89100592
Yeah pretty much, I just took the basic concepts and ran in a different direction with them. Also I tried my best but I'm not very good at logo design.
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Well, that's all I got for now. Spit me some ideas.
I may get to them before I pass out.
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>>89100719
Either do some kickass alloys (not!fusions, which should have been called inclusions to keep with the gem theme but whatever I'm not bitter) or the "NOW I KNOW...WHY YOU CRY, HU-MAN" thing peeps were talking about
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what does Mercury have to do with terraforming?
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>>89100890
Nothing, Metaloids don't teraform shit they mine and kill anything that gets in their way.
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>>89100824
Also yes, their called alloys and I already have an idea for a cobalt laminate alloy. Side note Stefanie can't from alloys, (unless it was with another copper metalloids I geuss)
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>>89100890
Mercury could be important in creating the metal's visions of kindergardens since they could just say fuck organic life in general an not bother teraforming it to suit organic life.
>>89100922
Well I already typed this much.
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>>89100922
Mercury was a spy.
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>>89100941
At least that one was anyway
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Don't let it die, see you when I rise.
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>>89100676
I like this design the most.

>>89100719
This is cute.
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Gotta go to bed, too late to finish this. But I've got Al's backstory in mind. Pearl was in love with Rose because she was a slave class and rose gave her a sense of self-worth. Al was used for core experiments for several years after an injury qualified him to be a test subject. Copper helped to get Al out of there, however, most of the other test subjects were dead by that point or died shortly after. Al is also terrified of dying (wich is kind of opposite pearl who seems not to care what happens to her) I'll probably more thoroughly flesh out this concept at a later date.
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>>89101185
So they melt through their chests to reach their core? That's metal
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>>89099622
>>89099918
>>89100676
>>89101185
The only thing you did was to make SU even gayer then it is now. Only because you want to be pounded by dark skin colored iron hard dicks doesn't mean you have to invent this shit.
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>>89102990
Uh oh, We got a badass over here!

I like the idea, the art is nice, and it's more fun than the stale memes and waifu shiposting at sug. Its a bit dumb, could be a lot worse, Why don't you go be the fun police in a Loud house or Star Vs thread?
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Just dropping by to say this au is shit and OP is a faggot. By all means continue but this self fellatio is pathetic
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>>89098673
I don't watch SU but I would watch this

I am already headbanging to metal in my head
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>/co/ tries to make a Rule 63 parody of SU
>It comes out even gayer than the original
Never change.
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>>89099271
No just 4chan, where people tell you when you are a dumbass.
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>>89098673
I've seen this concept like a dozen times before.
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Here's a better concept for a SU parody; Just replace Steven with this guy.
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Couple of suggestions, perhaps the White Diamond analogue should be called Palladium since; while it is not commonly considered a precious metal, it is the fourth metal that is commonly used for investment purposes and is the one that usually has the highest value by weight. Also, I don't have a specific idea for what the name of the main group of metalloids should be called, but I would suggest something based off of "Rare Earth Metals".
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>Opening song would be death metal
I can dig it.
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>>89103486
>No just 4chan, where dumbasses call everyone else dumbasses regardless if it's warranted or not.

ftfy
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who will Steffanie's love interest be?
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>>89104868
I'd figure male Connie but idk how he'd fit into the story.
Any way we can squeeze him in probably.
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>>89104868
Little punjabi boy whose parents push him to be a highly paid, highly respected cyborg mechanic and have long since implanted monitoring devices in all of his vital organs to make sure they function properly.
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>>89104868
Either a obnoxious parody of the token hood black guy trope, or a obnoxious parody of /pol/
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>>89104868
Conroy is a nerdy wealthy kid from a wealthy city who falls hopelessly in love with Stefanie and decided to run away with her and the guys to help them find that super weapon. He's kinda of a wimp and a liability at first but gets himself a weapon and works his but off to become a badass to impress Stef.
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Why is this thread even here

Everything about this looks like ass
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>>89103560
As aposed to white diamond chrarecters, the metaloids have a giant super computer that's older than any of them and was supposedly created by the people who invented the metaloids in the first place but since died out.
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>>89106329
Because it's fun.
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>>89104868
Basically Male Connie, but instead of Indian girl he's a black Jamaican boy whose parents are the wealthiest doctors in the uptown city. Starts off wimpy nerd but grows into a powerful warrior.
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>>89106408
Why make it literally 100% the same as steven universe
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>>89106419
Some elements should stay the same to make it a true parody so later something can contrast or conflict with it.
Otherwise it's just something with a similar premise and a derivative.
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>>89106520
>Otherwise it's just something with a similar premise and a derivative.
That's exactly what it is though
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>>89099622
>>89099918
Looks gay.
Perfect.
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>>89098673
So you want to take it from Lesbian Space Rocks to Gay Space Metals.
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>>89106823
It has a cool Terminator vibe though.
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>>89104818
Go back to fucking reddit. I am sure someone there cares about your gay AU.
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>>89106868
>It has a cool Terminator vibe though
"cool" Sure yeah.
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Bump for interest
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I drew a comic again but I'm on Mobil and I don't want to post huge images, so have this little snipit.
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>>89098673
Can someone repost what lore we got from the last thread?
And is it still a parody?
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Well that took way too long.
And still not done.
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>>89110170
I gave up on editing them too much.
Might go back and make them digital later.
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>>89109112
In a distantcyberpunk universe, the human race has colonizedmultiple planets. They end up at war with a race of aliens called the metalloids. The war wages on for years and amidst it a group of metalloids rebel against their leaders and a Copper soldier kills leader Platinum. Copper and his companions retreat to earth 5. At some point he’s separated from his friends and damaged. A human woman named Georgia repairs him and he stays with her in hiding. They fall in love and conceive a daughter Named Stefanie. Shortly after Stefanie is born though Copper realizes that while she is half metalo8id she lacks a core (wich is what allows metalloids to move and use their powers) Without a core she wouldn’t live very long. He sacrifices himself by giving his core to his daughter to save her. Stefanie grows up with her mom but around 14 or 15 her dad’s old friends come to find her and run off with her on a search for a super weapon that her father had hidden away years ago. They travel the worlds together with Georgia chasing after them trying to get her daughter back. Meanwhile Characters like Tungsten are sent on a mission to hunt down and retrieve Copper’s old core to gain the information contained inside.
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>>89110404
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>>89110598
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>>89110624
And thus ends my little art show.
I may draw more later.
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>>89110447
Holy crap that's so cool 10 out of 10 someone draw more stuff of this concept!
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magnets already sounds like a huge disadvantage for this species
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>>89098683

You could say that about Steven Universe
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>>89112105
Indeed, like if you use the magnet powers is it like an electron magnet you could turn on or off?
Would the metalloid using the powers move rather than whatever they want to pull?
Or does it run on rule of cool and pull whatever they wants towards them?
Or does it work on some magic level?
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>>89112105
On the flip side they don't have a massive weak point like the gems do.
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>>89103559
Golden.
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>>89113088
Maybe it should be similar to this >>89110598 comic where Stephanie brings up some illogical science thing but no one really answers her to what is going on other that vague magic bull shittery.
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So is this the new /co/co/?
I'm cool with this replacing /co/co/.
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>>89115152
But /co//co/'s not dead yet,
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>>89098673

None of those metalloids look like men though. Why would an artist be capable of drawing well like that but incapable of making characters that look male?
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>>89101185
THAT'S A FUCKING ZOID CORE
WHY YOU RIPPEN OFF ZOIDS?
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>>89115297
Holy shit, you're right anon.

Damn, artist guy, you could at least try and not ape off of other well known properties so blatantly.
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>>89115470
Hey, we're just following Sugar's lead
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>>89098673
All this does is remind me David Bowie is dead and will never voice a metallic man from the stars.
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>>89098673
But why is Steven still fat?

And is he still retarded?
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>>89115263
the designs are inspired by 80's glam rock. And Al is supposed to look effeminate.
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>>89115263
You've obviously never heard of hair metal, my dude.

Heh. Hair metal. Get it? -slaps knee-
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>>89115800
Stefanie is chubby too, but way smarter than steven. She's actually a mechanic and has a pretty advanced understanding of machines, physics, and a bit of chemistry.
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>>89115938
indeed, all the 80's rock and cheese.
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>>89115955
Oh cool so she went to school?
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>>89115994
How about no.
Let's just make her street smart and good with machines.
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>>89116063
Wait then how'd she learn about machines, physics, and chemistry? Did someone in her family teach her or a friend?
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>>89115994
yes she did, and her mother raised her most of her life, unlike Greg Gorgia is actually allowed to be more proactive in the story.
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>>89098673
Just draw lewds of female Greg and Steven.

Seriously.
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>>89116190
Her mother owned a repair shop so a good chunk of her mechanical knowledge is from her mother. But yes she did still go to school, mind you it was in a small podunk nowhere town but still.
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>>89115955
>She's actually a mechanic and has a pretty advanced understanding of machines, physics, and a bit of chemistry.
>Mary Sue/10
Please no, that would just make her insufferable as hell from the beginning. Make the kid learn about her companions and their world, not already know everything about them.

>>89116063
This sounds better. She'd be good with machines(not great, but knows a good deal and is learning as the days/months go by) and she's street smart, as in she can cultivate friendships with strangers and keep a good head on her shoulders in tough situations.

>>89116190
By asking questions and learning.
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You guys do know that metals are made up of CRYSTAL lattices, right? It's entirely probable that the reason why the only reason we see female gems is because the masculine counterpart, metals, exist in-universe.

Imagine that there's a toroidal space station that exists as a secret resistance base, bolstered and defended by the metals, with a superweapon being developed by the gems.

The Ring.
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>>89116293
>By asking questions and learning.
Who'd she ask?
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>>89116293
she doesn't know everything or realy much at all about metalloids. But her being familiar with machines and basic science concepts she catches on a lot quicker. I call her knowledge advanced, but for her world she's not a genius just more tech savvy than the typical 14-year-old.
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>>89116397
her mom and the metalloids presumably.
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>>89110404
>These metal-ass faggots
I'm enjoying girl Steven's characterization in this.
>>89110650
>Berserk_Eclipse.png
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>>89098673
this really is every single 'make a show for boys' cliche at once.
frankly /co/ sometimes I don't think you're even human. just a meme with a keyboard
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>>89098683
Because SU is so original.
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Stefanie and Conroy, just him in his school uniform, for now, I'll draw him in his more regular outfit later.
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>>89100941
This reminded me of how people say Jasper redemption in Steven Universe would ruin it in that other thread.
Maybe in the Metalloid universe Mercury seems to be on the good guy's side but ultimately evil at heart or Silicon tries to be a good guy but it's shown to be a forced or die decision and not the best he could have made.
Basically redemptions are not good and used only as satire of the original.
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>>89115207
>go to /co/co/
>ctrl+f bump
I don't even like them but that's just sad.
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>>89117463
Is he younger than her but taller or shorter?
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>>89118054
perspective is a bit off here but he's a little taller than her and about the same age.
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>>89117812
Unfortunately for them they do this thing where they throw /co/ memes on the walls and make stupid fucking plot changes for no apparent reasons. The damn thing forgot of be fun and became contrived and mismanaged to the point of it being a convoluted mess of stupidity.
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>>89098701
>>89098704
>t. uncreative hacks incapable of original thought
original
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>>89118172
Go back to making a cartoon, Sugar
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So how do the metal monsters and corruption work in this thing?
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>gender-swapped Steven and Gems with elemental metals replacing the gemstone component of Gems.

So someone is finally making something of that concept that /sug/ came up with a couple of years ago?
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>>89115297
The magic gemstones are more than a bit inspired by the star seeds in sailor moon, so it makes sense that the genderswap is also subtly aping a less feminine anime.
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>>89119365
I know that you baka. I'm just saying this parody is riping off Zoids instead of Sailor Moon
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>>89119184
Maybe it's related to the experiments the homeworld did on cores.
Or they humans and other lifeforms made robots and stuff out of the melted (and then hardened) fallen mettaloids and they go nuts and turn into weird monster robots.
That's actualy what I was thinking when I drew >>89110650
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>>89119184
Why not have them turn into machine like monsters?

The Centipeetle would be something like a subway train.
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To keep with the 80s scifi aesthetic Nichrome should take design cues from robocop, and Aluminum is a glam rocker like Bowie.
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>>89119184
well most metalloids you'd see on the battle field looks like monsters. Unlike gems their shapeshifting is only really restricted by how long it takes them to melt and reform (so higher melting point metals take longer to shape shift) the humanoid metalloids look human out of an attempt to blend in better (also there are humans on some planet that may have weird skin tones due to environmental factors or evolution. As far as corruption, damages to their core can result in various problems from being stuck in a liquid state to unable to move. And core viruses can result in mental symptoms.
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>>89119923
" the humanoid metalloids look human out of an attempt to blend in better" and or they're working in positions where a humanoid form is more preferable for what they're trying to do.
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>>89119244
If not us, then who, really.
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>>89098683
SU is just transfomers.
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>>89118172
Sure is /co/mblr in here.
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bump
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>>89119807
I like this idea and >>89119748 one.
Was is it so hard to choose out of so many good ideas?
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>>89127598
Why not a little of both?
How about the homeworld experiments are what made the corrupted ones, and over time they start to resemble metal objects they see. Ones that have been locked away for hundreds of years might look like suits of armor and ones that have recently come in contact with civilization look like modern machines like cars, trains, park benches, or anything made out of metal.

The equivalent to the fusion experiments should be man's attempt to harness their power, and that resulted on ones that look more humanoid with fragmented minds because they were melted down.
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>>89129445
>forgetting to remove trip
I really hate it when I do that.
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>>89129445
Sounds cool.
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Was this robodog from the last thread meant to be the counterpart of Lion? Did we get a backstory for it?
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>>89131561
Kind of hard to when we don't even know what loin really is.
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>>89131561
Yes, the dog was built by copper to be a body guard for Stefanie and Gorgia in his absence.
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>>89131657
Yes and that's kinda bullshit.
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>>89131657
>>89131561
So the doggo is a robot but was it Georgina's or Copper's thing?
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>>89132853
Copper built it, though Goergia ends up traveling around with the dog looking for Stefanie.
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>>89133453
Man, this story is really bad.
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>>89098673
The male version of amethyst reminds me of Jack Black
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>>89133529
Maybe it's best to not give it any back story.
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The counterpart of bismuth should be bismuth.
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>>89136424
Fine, but as a parody, we should crank up the home world hate boner to 11.
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>>89131561
That better be a goddamn dogcopter.
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>>89098673
All I can think of is how much I want a Metal men comic book and how I'll never get it... Damnit. At least Gods and Monsters was a fun movie.
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>>89098673
It doesn't really sound like parody so much as you being mad at SU for having a female cast and not being generic action garbage. Too me at least
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>>89098673
> male pearl will never be voiced by bowie
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Okay, we got T-1000s, a chubby girl, and 80s-eske style. Throw in some synthwave, and we're all set.
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>>89140640
Steven universe wants to be a funny cute slice of life. I'm not annoyed that that's what it wants to do, I'm annoyed that it's bad at it. This is really just taking some of the concepts I like and recreating it into something with a more solid plot. On an added note I have no problem with the female cast, but I gender flipped the show to draw some attention to some of the sexist double standards that come up in SU that get over looked. If Greg was a woman people would bitch that the mother wasn't allowed to raise steven for example. Steven would be sexist if you made him a dumbass little girl. As a result, certain things are changed. Stefanie is much smarter than steven, Georgia raised her daughter herself and is more involved in the story. Characters like Al have to be handled differently because the way we treat and respond to male characters is inherently different from how we treat female characters.
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Bump, this thread will not die. Also what kind of transportation do they use to get around?
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>>89146939
>>89098673
You're right, that picture has some sort of hover craft in it but no one's explained it yet.
I guess since only one has shifting they can't just use him as transportation.
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>>89147451
They're world has hover vehicles and space ships. We'll likely get to visit multiple planets (mostly other human colonies or war zones, and later seeing metaloids owned planets)
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>>89146939
Motorcycles are pretty metal.
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>>89098673
so turn SU into a shonen series?
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>>89104868
Genderbent Kevin
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>>89142677

>This guy is taking his "creation" seriously...

LOL
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>>89142677
>Steven would be sexist if you made him a dumbass little girl.
What? Steven isn't a dumbass, he's just a kid.

What you seem to be making is a Mary Sue filled mess that seems to be getting more retarded as you go on making your shitty MS paint-tier "art".
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>>89150534
Steven is or rather was a dumb ass in the pilot he's gotta the dumbest fucking kid I've ever seen. If get it if he were 6 or 7 but not 12 going on 13.
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>>89150534
Actually I think he could have been smarter if they told their story better.

I think Steven Universe would have benefitted heavily from a narrator.
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>>89150758
To be fair he's never been to school and beach city isn't the kind of place where a kid needs to be street smart.
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>>89098673
This is an improvement but I think Steven Universe is not worth saving.
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This needs some corrupt businesswoman secretly working with the alien's to give her power.
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>>89098673

But who are the counterparts of the Diamonds?
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>>89100719

"Colbolt"?

Are you kidding me with this?
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>>89110650

When I was your age I did Samurai Pizza Cat stuff.

Work on your spelling. For one thing it's Cobalt, not 'colbolt'.
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>>89116613

....What if that's literaly true?

True AI emerging from the Internet?

>>89121884

...Not really though.
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>>89098673
I will be honest

Your concept sounds a lot like a bad 80s or 90s cartoons, think Silver Hawks, Captain Simian, or any of the other endless number of forgettable action shows they made back in the day

I get that some people have nostalgia for that and think those shows were actually good, but they weren't even the popular and well made ones like Thundercats and He-Man were terrible
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>no townie episodes
Don't you like characterization?
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>>89153079

this 100%
this is like a shitty 80s cartoon that takes itself way too seriously, and being a ripoff of another show makes everything even worse
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>>89103385

Only /co/ could take the gayest cartoon ever created and make it gayer. It's actually kind of impressive.
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Don't know why but I kinda hear rigby's voice on colbolt.
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>>89153158
Well it is a parody.
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>>89153141
I find that kind of charming though. I think that's the whole point of the parody.
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>>89152944
Noble metals like Gold, Silver, Platinum
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>>89153158
It's all part of the 4chan magic.
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I like it.
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>>89117199
It literally is. The anime meme is dead
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>>89098673
so you're saying to turn it into shit
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>>89098788
>more attractive character designs

go home, anon
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>>89150055
Multiple ares so maybe they could be trapped on a planet where a motorcycle is the most efficient thing to ride.
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Hey Stefano And The Metal Men Anon.
Maybe it would be better to focus on the conceptualization rather than diving into DEEPEST LORE.

Subvert a few key scenes and make a couple on your own for shots and googles.

>Al Repeatedly uses steff as a chubby meat shield rather than pearl being over protective of Steven.

>Laughing at Key Emotional Plot Moments instead of crying.
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>>89159893
They are too manly to do either.
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>>89161083
I'm fairly certain you mean too manly to cry or laugh at emotional moments but I read that as Al would be too manly to use Steffanie as a meat shield but I think with the right handling that could be a funny little gag that ends up never working out.
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>>89136622
>metal bismuth hates homeworld so much, he goes just hearing someone say homeworld makes him mad
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>>89150275
An extremely gay shonen, but a shonen none the less.
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>>89161470
Yeah that's what I meant.
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>>89162971
well that's sounds pretty boring then.

90% of shonen is either shit, becomes shit.
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