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/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: The First Phase Edition

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MAIN TOPIC: You should read the part 7 doc.

Stand Suggestions are OPEN.

>What's this?
Collab /co/ project of JJBA-based stories made out of /co/ stuff.

READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of stuff in JJBA)

>Canon Stand Info
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands

>Stands Doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14_R9UFLN28p0gcpJWiXHztmrhdSswFbsi9H8uhnFrIs/edit

>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg
6 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY
7 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ
8 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ
>Sidestories
CC - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JKNelCoRNbFcSjF8vwha4zaIimnTpMBDTq-gj_GP930
HM - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xNRsbONv9Vs-w9VF0yIhhMPwM6vFMoZN90qMaNI-2dc
MS - https://docs.google.com/document/d/16C58D-OHgdjjtuX_Bhyv_TSv0mGcASsbyTwcclPaK8A

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7

>/Co/Co/ Comic
https://cobizarrecomic.wordpress.com/

>Images
http://ccbabooru.booru.org

>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B-Td-mSKpaCvUjdWM0MxUEU2QTQ

>Voice Impressions (some have expired)
http://pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1

>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLWEiXuZ9FOaYfU_0hIoo6qadB1yEO_Km

Plus4chan thread
http://boards.plus4chan.net/coc/t52034.html
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Well then. We died for the first time in a while. Let's try and not do that again.
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Starting with a reply to an anon who asked how many Mr. Nobodies there are. I found this one, from a movie called Puff and the Incredible Mr. Nobody (he's the duck).

Also, last thread Taffy talked about Crocodile Gena and his stand, and I saw it's very similar to Diesel's [HIGHWAY MIND]. Maybe we could put both together and make Gena the machinist who helps the two Diesels (who could also be part of Dada Party).

And lastly, someone mentioned that we could use the Betty flick which Mr. Nobody debutted in Part 7. Since Mr. Noboy already won against Loki, maybe Betty could be the previous President of the United States, who won against Nobody in an election in the past (may the previous one?). This way we could mention the episode and put Betty as a charismatic ex-President who Mr.Nobody hates since she beat him and delayed his plans.
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>>87116130
Yes, let's.

It seems to have died probably an hour before I woke up.

>>87113671
Alright, so V's not a racer, just an observer in the race for the Dada Party.

>>87116446
I think we'll need to make a distinction between the Dada Party and Dadaists.

There are members of the Mr. Nobody cabinet and there are supporters of the Mr. Nobody cabinet.

I don't think Mr. Nobody would've hated her for losing against her, he's not that sore of a loser when he doesn't win unless the person who did win is a stale minded boring piece of shit.
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>>87117301
>Alright, so V's not a racer, just an observer in the race for the Dada Party.
I though he started as a minor character and joined the Dada Party later on?

Maybe V decides to join the cabinet of Nobody in the run up to the leg taking place in Tulios country. Presumably while everyone else still in the race is on the airship.

I'd assume he does it by taking the form of a pile of pointless paperwork and surprises the Blue Meanie in the process.
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>>87117509
V would need to be a SUPER minor character for him to work since otherwise we're going to fall into the same trap we fell into with part 4: too many focal characters.

If V is just a background racer who manages to stay in the race because of his alliteration powers, that's fine.

If V is just a Dada Party member who is keeping an eye on the racers, that's fine.

But we can't do both without having a lot of attention heaped unto V at some point.

So unless he's just a background gag until Tulio's country where suddenly he gets swept up in the revolutionary fervor and rises to plot prominence, I just don't know how we can do that without focus problems arising.
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>>87117301

Sorry for the confusion, what I meant to say was that they would be Dadaists.

I think that the word I used to describe Mr.Nobody relationship with Betty (hate) is indeed an exaggeration. However since Betty wouldn't be the most open minded/unique person Mr. Nobody has met, I think at least it would difficult to see her more than an plain person who was capable of beating him, and thus making him resent her.
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>>87117668
There's a page I keep trying to retrieve from the archived storytime of Doom Patrol from this past summer where Mr. Nobody is talking to Cliff about how the Doom Patrol lost and that they shouldn't be sore losers, but dusuarchive just refuses to cooperate with me.
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>>87117654
>So unless he's just a background gag until Tulio's country where suddenly he gets swept up in the revolutionary fervor and rises to plot prominence,
That's he idea, hell he even takes over Tulio when Tulio says the name of his Stand a confused tone of voice and then he proceeds to broadcast a message through [TVRTN] which makes everything in the country go to hell, this is what leads to Tulio being decapitated.

Unfortunately when he leaves Tulio, Nobody is a bit miffed that he didn't bring the Skull with him, which is when V explains that he couldn't do it if he wanted to.
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>>87117723
Here we go.

>>87117861
Alright, that's good then.

Just as long as he's just a background gag until he rises to prominence during that arc.
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So what mode of transportation will Pym and Jonah be using? I know Pym as originally suggested as using his ant chariot (because it's too good to pass up), but will that change at any point?
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>>87117950
Pretty much every page Mr. Nobody appeared on gave you an idea of the kind of guy he is.

I don't think he ever used sarcasm.
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>>87118163
Well since Pym (I'm avoiding calling him Hank because we used Hank Hill before and I just know someone is going to get confused at some point) doesn't start off with a stand, unless he has technology to make giant ants, he should start off in just a regular suped up car of his own design which he brags about.

But if he does start off with giant ants, then his stand will need to be changed since right now it seems his size manipulating powers are tied to that.

So that's a choice that needs to be made.

Either he starts the race with giant ants which are the result of science and we need to change what his stand does.
OR
He starts the race in an actual car and then gets giant ants later after he obtains a piece of the corpse and a stand, after which he and Hex ride giant bugs like horses.
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>>87117950

Got it! Then Mr. Nobody would be in friensly terms with ex-prez Betty since she won fairly.

>>87118243

Imo the second option take the.good parts of both ideas.
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I was looking through the archive for Dan's [ROUNDABOUT] and found this: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/82508217/#82512000
https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/83391915/#83470477
And there was also the old idea of using 「A HARD DAY'S NIGHT」https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/81007804/#81072076

>>87116446
that image looks so wrong, is Mr. Nobody in jail in that universe?

>>87117509
So, the big blue meanie is gonna be our Agent "!"?
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>>87118243
There's always ROVER, the talking bug jet car thing Pym built back in West Coast Avengers.

Actually, West Coast Avengers Pym is one of the main inspirations my idea of Pym in this project.
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>>87118892
He only really cares about the outcome after the fact, when getting to the outcome anything goes

>by fair means or foul

but after it's all said and done he will accept whatever the outcome was even if it's not the one he wanted.

>>87119841
As long as it doesn't fly, it's legal in the race.

Seems like a good thing for him to start with, a rocket powered ant head on wheels.
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>>87119057
Between the 3 of those, I like this one the best.

>[ROUNDABOUT]
>Ability: [ROUNDABOUT] allows Dan Backslide to become more difficult to detect the louder and more exaggerated he speaks and acts. For example, a simple punch from him would be pretty visible, but when he REALLY telegraphs a punch, wind up with unneeded attack name and all, it somehow becomes much harder to see coming.
>On the flipside, if he tries to do anything with a hint of tact, his chances of failing will increase dramatically.
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>>87119057

According to the movie description at Wiki:

"Puff finds a young boy named Terry who has an overactive imagination, and who therefore has trouble making friends with other children, instead having an imaginary friend—a duck wearing a saucepan with a feather as a hat, named Mr. Nobody. When Terry's imagination starts to get him in trouble, he begins to blame Nobody for imagining the things that Terry has dreamed up, until Terry ceases to believe that he has any imagination of his own. Eventually, Mr. Nobody abandons him and Puff must take Terry on a quest to find Nobody, teaching him along the way to embrace his creativity."

Guess it's only wrong in our minds. In the eyes of lil Terry that duck's as normal as anything else in his head.
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>>87116446
Just typed "Mr Nobody cartoon" on Google and found this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cn6-EwsSfPg

I actually doubt we're going to use this one.
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So how should the fight between Hex and Shocker before registration go down?
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>>87122222
Shocker is using his canon weapons, right?
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>>87122301
Dunno, is he?

We haven't established anything yet, so if you want him to, then he is.

And just a note, this fight isn't taking place in Hill Valley City, this is a few days before they go there for the start of the race.
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We should figure out just how much of the tech the super hero/villain characters are going to have in this that they already had in their source material.

A character like Hex can work in any setting since he's by and large a normal human with tenacity.

But someone like Pym is tied to a specific power caused by science, same with Shocker.
Should they retain technology that lets them do the things they do in their comics and gain stands that augment those abilities, or should it just be all stands all the time?

I'm more in favor of stands that augment a person's pre-existing skill set in this part since SBR had a lot of that.

There's also the time between parts 6 and 7.
How many years into Mr. Nobody's presidency are we at the start of part 7? At the end of part 6 he was still running for office.
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>>87122837
Well, Shocker doesn't have a Stand for now, and Jonah doesn't get his Stand until finding the eye, so I assume both are using more conventional means to fight.

>>87123860
I think is the first or second year of his term
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I'm thinking well ahead but

The Wizard should be the one to catch the wishing star as it crashes towards Earth. He acquires the star and wishes for the clarity to become someone who considers a hero, ala a throw back to LeTerally's wish in Starduck.
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>>87123999
I think we should save who catches the star for when we get to that since the wish might be necessary for preventing Stardust the Super Wizard (who emerged from the corpse) from dispensing his brand of justice upon the Earth.

>>87123911
Alright, so Shocker has his usual tech?

Might be worth Shocker having a stand that he doesn't like to use though to get the "what the hell was that" reaction from Pym when Hex looks like he's about to catch Shocker during the first leg of the race only for some invisible force to save him.
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>>87123999
Speaking of the Wizard (Daffy), what is gonna be his Stand?

>>87124187
Their fight could involve a lot of collateral damage from Shocker's attacks, as he tries to crush Jonah with the debris of nearby buildings. Then after entering the race and receiving clemency, he will further gloat about getting away with his crimes and being untouchable.
At one point in the race, someone should call Shocker a "pantyhose ninja" which prompts Shocker to yell "Don't mock the Shocker!".
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>>87125046
The clemency is only in effect for the time spent before each phase and during the racer's stay at the check points.
So it's already in effect from the moment Shocker registers to the moment the starting bang kicks off the race.
Then it goes back into effect the moment he crosses the check point line and stays in effect until the next starting bang.

During the race any of the other racers can try to claim the bounty's on the other racer's, but not anyone else. It's an intentional loophole left in to make sure criminals in the race stay on their toes.

So when Hex first tangles with Shocker during registration, Hex would be the one in trouble if he tired turning Shocker in.

I like the pantyhose ninja idea.
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So at both San Fransokyo and Aberdale, Shocker should mock Hex for not being able to capture him during the race.

Hex or Pym should turn that around on him when he's finally caught and turned in for his bounty.

So who is going to be eliminated from the race between Hill Valley City and San Fransokyo?
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>>87125877
In one of the checkpoints:
>Shocker: try to lay a finger on me, cowboy, and the one behind the bars will be YOU!
After geting captured:
>Shocker lies in the ground defeated
>Hex: Hey look, I can lay a finger on you after all. You know what else I can lay on you?
>Then Hex kicks Shocker in the face/stomach

>So who is going to be eliminated from the race between Hill Valley City and San Fransokyo?
We should check what background racers we have now.
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>>87126091
Well it can't be anyone we have plans for later, any of those guys aren't on the chopping block until after their arcs.

We could have Dan Backslide and Spongebob "Dirty Dan" Squarepants get into fight during the first leg of the race that ends with Backslide blown up and flying through the air in a destroyed runabout with him left just holding the steering wheel.
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>>87127003
That's before or after getting the random runabout that's actually V?

I recall that Krosh was suggested to take the lead earlier on, only to crash and get retired.
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>>87128111
That would have to be after since whatever car Dan Backslide entered with got sabotaged by Dick Dastardly.
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>>87128421
Then V would need another alliteration to avoid being discovered
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>>87128545
Good, that'd keep us on our game then.
He could become the barnacle that buried Backslide. As in the ones on the rock Spongebob is driving.

Does V start off with a vehicle that also got sabotaged?
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>>87116114
Why wouldn't CN City be in Atlanta?
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>>87129054
CN City was often shown to have used parts from EVERYWHERE in any of Cartoon Network's shows.

It could be wherever we need it to be, and right now we need it to be in a place that puts Nowhere Kansas right in the path from Aberdale to checkpoint 3 of phase 1.
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>>87128750
He isn't a racer, he probably infiltrated the race as another alliteration.

>>87129054
Unlike the other fictional cities, we don't have a clear reference of his location besides the Cul-de-Sac being a suburb of the city which, according to the show, was somewhere near the New England area, since it was founded by pilgrims.
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>>87129414
OK, so why is V there at the start?

Is he working for the same firm as Rorschach, only as a man not entered in the race?
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>>87129834
Maybe, or he is conducting his own research
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>>87130019
So he's just studying Mr. Nobody from a far?

Also, Dick Dastardly was hired by Mr. Nobody to keep the race interesting, so any racer who can't fix their car in a hurry or find an alternate means of locomotion to get to the check point in time is clearly not going to get very far in the race to begin with.

I'm thinking Pym catches the sabotage and fixes it before the race even starts so he's unaffected.
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Remember to watch these movies if you want inspiration for writing part 7:
>Robocop
>Total Recall
>Mad Max 1 & 2
>Starship Troopers
>Death Race 2000
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>>87130168
>The Great Race
>REDLINE

Seriously, REDLINE's soundtrack is what plays in my head when thinking of how the racing parts go.

Like they arrive in San Fransokyo going at full speed, they need to cross the Golden Gate Bridge, Dick Dastardly is already way ahead of them and has set up traps (he's actually taking a nap when the others finally get there), the bridge explodes, racers go flying off of it, some of them get turned into road pizza, others hit the water and their cars keep going because they thought there might be water to cross, Dick hops back in his Mean Machine and begins speeding away from whoever is making it through his land mine field, there's explosions behind him as he's laughing and twirling his mustache, other cars shoot out from the smoke, Shocker is pissed and begins firing at Dick with a hand cannon out the side of his car window, Dick lays down an oil slick.

Mr. Nobody is in a blimp watching through those binoculars with the long handle, the old timey type, and comments on what a classic move that is.

Sylvia, with Wander and Jack on her back are hoping from car to car, moving ahead in the pack and swinging from the cables, Spongebob took the underwater route, Goofy pulled the river sides together to shoot out in front, Hex and Pym are moving across the water too having arrived right after the mines took out the bridge.

They get closer to The Big One bar which has land and sea entrances, giant kaiju are just getting off work and rise up out of the water sending all of the water skippers scrambling as they're not 50 feet in the air and ride the kaiju as they go through the massive doors, they can see the finish line for this leg now, it's way the hell on the other side of the establishment up on the bar counter.

You know, like that.
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>>87129834
I don't think Rorschach is working for a firm, he doesn't seem the type. He's basically a crazy /x/ browser that has the opportunity to try and prove his conspiracy theory.
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>>87131792
So what kind of car is he driving then?
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>>87130160
So, the race starts and half of the racers remain in the starting line trying to fix their cars, Jonah and Wander are unaffected by this since they aren't using cars, Pym fixes his car in time and Dan Backslide steals a car, which is actually V in disguise.
Is during this part that Jonah's horse is blasted by Shocker and Pym decides to share his car with him? Where is Crazy Jane?
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>>87131904
Crazy Jane, Cybersix, Navis, Songebob, Shocker, Goofy, Aunt May and whoever else are all out there in the pack.

Anyone who we don't mention where they are is in the pack. They remain in the pack until we need them in the forefront for whatever plot or action related reasons we come up with.

I think Pym would've detected and fixed the sabotage before the race starts.
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>>87131897
Probably a junker. Something really shitty that blends in, he's trying to avoid drawing too much attention to himself. Hell, he probably races as Kovacs.
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>>87132415
I don't think he'd be able to make it to the next check point in a junker.
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Alright, so I'm going to bed.

Is this thread going to still be up when I wake up is the question.
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>>87130396
That's pretty good.

>>87123860
Yes, it would make sense to have their Stands have powers that are were made to improve their existing powers/assets.

Also, considering this is going to be a bloodbath competition thing, I think we could think of using Chris as one of the managers of the race, maybe have him explain the hazards/traps/places of the race if we ever put some in there or even just as one of the people funding it. I just think this is becoming too fitting for him.
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british bampu.
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>>87133426
Well then it looks like a junker but has enough horsepower hidden away to make him a solid middle of the pack racer. Good enough to not get eliminated, but poor enough to not attract too much attention.
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Can we make the villain that tried to get Bugs' luck people foot DeDeDe (either from Kirby Right Back At Ya or Brawl In the Family)? He was supposed to appear in this part or part 8, I think.

It ties with that other ideia I had in a later thread about Nobody gathering envious characters with overshadowed [identities] as his minions.
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>>87134704
Funding it, maybe, but TOM is the announcer.

>>87135574
How far in the race is he making it?

>>87136700
I'm not sure if we can use him yet since I think web comic characters aren't supposed to show up until part 8.
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>>87137427
Rorschach dies around the time Scud and DAVE reveal themselves, so... second leg, I think? It should be on the doc.
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>>87138085
>Scud and DAVE make a dramatic entrance.
>Scud lands next to Rorschach.
>Rorschach lets out a cry of surprise and alarm and blasts three of his limbs off with a shotgun.
>Scud: "Well that was horrible and insensitive."
>And then DAVE lands on Rorschach and crushes him to death.
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>>87138544
Just for the ridiculousness of it, this is also where the Scud having the Arm is introduced.

Because Rorschach ruined one of the arms he blasted off, Scud needs to call an Arms Dealer friend he knows to get a replacement, this replacement is the alternate arm he's usually seen with in the comics...but this time it's contains the Arm of the Hero.
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>>87138085
No, Scud and DAVE don't show up until leg 5 of the race. That's in Spain/France.

>>87138750
And Scud doesn't get the arm until after leg 6 of the race, that's in the sunken Looniversity, fighting over the arm with Gatlocke.

There's a thing set up in the doc explaining this.

I also don't think Scud should lose one of his arms beyond the point of no repair until leg 6 of the race since his stand let's him make a restore point for his body.
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>>87116114
Isn't San Fransokyo supposed to be in the same place as San Francisco?
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>>87139123
I'm still surprised that map was used to make the thread with.

When I threw the dots onto that map last thread I was just approximating with the correlating locations.
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>>87139045
My bad, I guess Rorschach makes it til then. Either that or we make his death look like an accident and retroactively attribute it to those two.
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>>87116114
>no left turn at Albuquerque
>no Townsville
>no stop in Jersey with the party desperately trying to avoid Hoboken
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>>87139506
God damn, the map isn't finished.
I just put the locations we have confirmed 100% on there and then OP decided to make the thread with it for whatever reason.

And Townsville might as well be part of CN City.
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>>87139573
>And Townsville might as well be part of CN City
Or Molly's Gamble
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>>87139723
We don't know where that is though.
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>>87140212
Don't worry, no one in the town knows either.
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>>87140860
And if Danny incorporated the entire town, it could very well be on the move now.
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>>87139374
Yeah, since he warns Pym about what's going on in CN City, I think it'd be best if he didn't get killed in the arc immediately after that.

Instead he gets killed or "crashes" in Spain somewhere.
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>>87134704
So who do you think should come in first place for the first leg of the race?

And how much time should still be on the clock when the leaders of the pack cross the checkpoint line?
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>>87145469
Dirty Dan, give him some reader interest before he gets merked
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>>87145520
He's getting dried out during the third leg of the race.

A bit disappointing if he were to come in first for the first leg of the race only to not make to the end of even the first phase.

Or is that just part of establishing "any one can die" in this part?
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>>87116114
these guys are stand users for sure
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>>87142599
I'd say he only decides to move Molly's Gamble because Ed warns him that "Gene Wilder is coming!"...and then he taps into the digital traffic with his Stand (he's incorporated every wi-fi hotspot and digital cable in Molly's Gamble into his stand, finding things digitally shouldn't be too hard.) and see's all the shit that was happening during Part 6.

He also has Double D [label] the entire town in case getting the hell out of dodge doesn't work.
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>>87145706
I mean, the race itself isn't necessarily the big deal. It's the motivations behind the race. But if you're thinking like that yeah, it would be a good idea to have Spongebob be a lead racer until he gets killed.
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>>87139573
>>87139506
There's also Springfield, Dimmsdalle, Gravity Falls... There's a ton of places that we could include in the US phase.
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>>87148855
Alright.

So who gets second and third in the first leg?

Which rankings are relevant enough to be relevant to include?
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>>87150500
We can't include Gravity Falls, it's too far out of the way. It's way North of the starting point.

Springfield has been discussed, but no one has said anything about what might actually happen there.
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>>87150508
Dick could be one of them, the other one could be the Wizard, Rex, or Crazy Jane.
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>>87150546
We could make them pass through the Simpsons' opening in Springfield. Also, we could call that section the "Springfield Hit and Run(tm) Section".

Maybe we could also include Burns tormeting the racers with something nasty too. Maybe also have Nobody fuck him up at one point.
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>>87151638
Burns was killed in part 4
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>>87151655
Good to know

Maybe we could have Smithers then? Who could be funding the Springfield leg of the race besides Burns, we have many characters to choose from on this specific cartoon.
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>>87151627
Dick's in the top 20, for sure.

I think the top 100 get the Varrick Industries capsule prize that let's them shrink and pocket their vehicles. Maybe someone takes it off of Spongebob's body later in the desert.

>>87151730
I think Jojo's Circus is currently in Springfield when they pass through?

Should Loki be banished before or during CN City?
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>>87151959
I think before, a member of the Brotherhood should be the end boss of the US stage
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>>87152238
Alright, so Loki gets taken out somewhere along Highway 61 or during the Jojo's Circus event in Springfield.

Who is the "boss" of phase 1?
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>>87153055
I keep asking if our current line up is gonna be the definitive Brotherhood of Dada, outside of V and Dr. Killinger there is no much discussion about them.
There is also Big Bones among the suggestions.
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>>87153243
Well I tried to work in Mirror Master when Mr. Nobody paints the corrupt hill business man.

I think he's good for a guy always ready to jump out of anything to aide Mr. Nobody.

Aunt May needs to be his Racer X who he calls every so often to see how things are going "down on the path" which would make Goofy more like her subordinate or direct underling.
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So what do we need to do to actually get started?

What do we still need to plan out?

I have read the doc, but I'm still asking since most of the unplanned stuff is far enough away that we could at least work on the first leg of the first phase.
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>>87155915
Well just quickly

Action that happens on the road- since Loki is the only stand user at this part should some racers in inept stands with or without the use of jaw breakers? Obviously the corpse gives stand powers but much like Johnny and others in Part 7 there were still stands even when they did not come into contact with the corpse. I feel like we need to clear the air on that and decide when Pym and co. powers being to develop
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>>87156247
Jonah gets his Stand from the eye which right now is in the Atlantic stage.
There are others Stand users in the first stage, but they aren't the focus for the moment (except, maybe, Dirty Dan and Shocker if he has a Stand)
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>>87156247
I think it'd keep things interesting for them if they were going in blind for a while.

Pym will be using his technology until I think Paris.
By then Hex will have already gotten the right eye and Pym will begin to get too curious about what these new powers are and decide to get a piece of this corpse to study.

So after Paris both Pym and Hex with have stands.

OR, we do it sooner since a bag of stand jawbreakers is supposed to be a prize for one of the legs of the race. Hex doesn't care for them, but Pym might eat one just to see what it does.
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>>87156919
The original idea for Pym (back when he was a minor character) was that he had a Stand before finding a corpse part, then he gains the ability to shrink himself from the part.
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>>87157644
Let's have him get a stand from a jawbreaker and then the corpse part does something weird to his stand, like it unlocks an Act 2 or something.

It'd also give us a chance to highlight the differences between corpse part stands and jawbreaker stands if we're still going with that idea.
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Updated the stand doc with the latest batch (and re-added the list of characters without a given part), did I miss one?
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I reformed that Stand I had into multiple less overdone Stands, as suggested by Reviewfag.

Name: something about drawings/paper
Ability: This Stand can casually affect the STAR of a character by messing with their artstyle. This can make the user alternate beetween paper (as in original/sketch form) or normal forms, which might be useful sometimes. If used as a attack, it makes the affected area (hand, leg, etc) regress to a paper drawing or to a overcartoonized mess, which is remarkably painful. The affected area wears off eventually depending on the exposure time. This is a great way to incapacitate the opponent, but it doesn’t really affect the opponent’s powers at all.

Name: [Maquina do Tempo] User is still Jimmy Five, but if anyone can come up with a better ideia for this Stand, we can change it
Ability: The Stand can look at the future of the story by taking the user to the "fourth wall" (akin to fourth dimension), making the user able to see the story from the reader's perspective. When the user is "in the fourth wall", he sees time as a gigantic paper with infinite comic panels of the place the user was initially standing on. He can't stay on it for long, predictions go up to 60 seconds at max. This Stand is perfect for making unfallible plans, but can also be used as a dumpster (things thrown in the 4th wall will reappear at a random location in the future).

Name: no ideia
Ability: This Stand can cross the panels of the comic, this effect permits it to touch/catch objects using the future or the past of a place. It is also capable of interacting with the "corners of the screen". From an outsider perspective, it looks like some sort of teleportation or reality-warping power.

Name: something time travel maybe
It makes the user able to leap stuff from a panel to another within a range of two panels. If this is done with large objects or with the actual user, it will slip on a random space-time location, but sometimes it might just not work at all.
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So maybe Dan Backslide makes it to the check point, but he gets there after the time limit expires.

He's chard, roughed up, has a black eye, and lets rip "CONFOUND THESE RACERS, THEY DRIVE ME TO DRINK!" and promptly takes a swim in a meant-for-a-kaiju sized glass of some liquor to drown away his problems.

Later he walks out of the bar drunk as can be and stumbles into Loki.
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>>87162734
So Dan makes a deal with Loki, a demon in this setting, and that... upgrades his stand?

Dan Backslide isn't making it past San Fransokyo, but before he fails and either loses his stand or his soul or his life, he has to cause some trouble.
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Last bump from me before bed. It's on someone else now to keep the thread from dying.

>>87164127
And baybe Ghost Rider is going around giving out stares to whoever Loki is controlling.

The race from San Fransokyo to Aberdale across the desert should be kind of trippy.
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