/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Time to start getting wacky Edition

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I was thinking that we could incorporate Space and Stretch into the Stands of some characters in this part, Goofy and Pym's Stands already have abilities similar to the Stretch. Jonah could develop a Space-related ability as a mirror to Tusk act 4.

>>87100031
Part 7's doc revision and the OP are pretty good. Good job, Anons.

>>87100427
I keep imaging Hex's stand adding a lot of arrows to his vision.

When it evolves the arrows could begin pointing in places where there's no one for Hex's shots to hit, but they're actually pointing to other panels of the character he's aiming for.

>Tulio's backstory mentions a previous president that blew his head off
[laughs in chilean]

Ok, I was checking the doc and here some stuff:
-Cybersix Stand is 「ACROSS THE UNIVERSE」, is in the Stand doc
-Scud's Stand is 「Panic Switch」 , ditto
-D.A.V.E. Stand is 「One Last Time」, we still haven't decided what it does
-Goofy's Stand is 「Under pressure」
-Tulio's Stand could be a metallic frame similar to Madame Web chair, but covered with mics, cameras, etc. around Tulio's body.

>>87101341
I tried to get as much as I could when I updated doc 7, but I knew there were things I missed.

I'll update it again later if no one else has.

Someone is going to need to explain a lot of the Tulio jokes to me since I'm not familiar with him outside of the local /co/ memes.

How's part 7 looking to you now that you can see all (or at lest most) of the ideas put into an order? There are gaps in the plot still, but at least this is something we can begin from.

>>87101603
Is looking good. What needs to be hammered in the first stage?

>Someone is going to need to explain a lot of the Tulio jokes to me
There was a chilean left wing president, Allende, that blew his brains off when a military coup (backed by the US) happened, that's the joke.

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>>87101722
Oh. Huh.

Well anyway, do you mean the first leg or the first phase?

There's still some lack of consensus of where the race is starting at. I put Hill Valley City down in the doc, but there was never any strong feelings one way or the other.
I do like the idea of Mr. Nobody getting a moment where he displayed how dangerous he can be to the local corrupt hill rich people when the scales of karma finally tip enough for him to act without worry of any narrative retribution.

I think it'd be neat if Dr. Henry Killinger actually had a small set of scales he could pull out of his magic murder bag to let Mr. Nobody know when karma would be in his favor.

We need to decide on time limits between check points.

Hill Valley City to San Fransokyo is about 200 miles.

San Fransokyo to Aberdale is roughly 750 miles

Aberdale to CN City is roughly 2,400 miles (assuming CN City is where NYC would be)

So based on these distances, what's a good time limit for each leg? The first leg should have a very short time limit.

>>87101947
Well, assuming that Aberdale takes the place of Prescott, google maps says that it takes roughly 12 hours to go from San Fransokyo to Aberdale on a car. I don't know where are Nowhere and Smallville located.

>>87102534
Nowhere and Smallville aren't check points, they're just places visited along the way to CN City as detours.

But they're both just located somewhere in Kansas.

And these are wacky racers, so the time limit will probably be less than that since there's no way they're obeying the speed limit or even driving on the roads.

>>87101947
I'd want to see interactions beetween George Klimer and Nobody on Hill Valley City to show how Nobody isn't a villain early in the story. Also, we should probably put something that implies this is where The Oblongs takes place at, mostly because it isn't a very well known place.

>"What? Of course we can will take care of those environmental accusations, Mr Nobody. We have been holding up some biologists to write an essay proving that the grey radioactive landscape is merely the natural biome of the Valley for some time now."
>"You don't seem to understand the urgency of this sudden intervention, Mr George Klimer. How else am I going to erase the outdated, predictable conventions of the narrative genre if the potential protagonists of the story are stuck on a eternal biochemical-induced status-quo? Which constantly sucks out their will to stand up and make up their own story."
>"Wow, now that sounds like something you should put on the suggestion box. It's getting a little chilly in here~~"
>Klimer opens the suggestion postcard box in the wall, revealing a fireplace/furnace behind it.
>"My employees kept these flames going for years with no end."

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKVAs2J84w8

>>87103167
It's right then that there's a chemical explosion from one of the plants that sends Wander, Sylvia, and Jack flying out into the distance as other people run for their lives to escape the gas.
Something they all witness and Klimer plays off the potential loss of life as if it were nothing.

It is at this time Mr. Nobody looks to his aide, a man dressed in a dark coat, wearing a black skull mask, and carrying a pitch black bag.

The aide reaches into his bag and produces a set of scales that have now tipped to one side. Mr. Nobody's eyes go from red angry to relaxed and jovial as he begins to glow with stand power and takes out a paint brush.

>"Oh happy day, it seems that karma now favors my course of action and I no longer need to hold back for worry of narrative repercussions."

Klimer looks a little nervous before glass window beside him ripples and out comes some of the Dada Party (or at least I think that's how Mirror Master is working in this setting) members to hold him as Mr. Nobody approaches with the paint brush.

Next we see Kilmer his eyes are black out and he's smiling as he's giving away all of his fortune, calling up all of his accountants, blowing the lid on all of the hill folks tax evasion, environmental destruction, bribery, and anything else they've done to prolong the unnecessary misery of the valley folk. The SWAT teams pour into the valley and begin arresting the hill folk en mass as Mr. Nobody leaves the city.
>"Nothing more satisfying than washing the windows yourself."

And someone else should make a joke about all the blood stains now appearing on the glass steagall as the corrupt begin to crash into it.

>>87103538
Sorry, I edited the original. You probably meant to reply to >>87103407.

I should really stop doing this now, shouldn't I

>>87103775
That's a testament to how often I update the thread before replying.

>>87103407
So he thinks he can get away with being an asshole to the President of the United States of America just because he has a lot of money?

Too bad for him Mr. Nobody has an economic policy that doesn't give a shit about those scraps of cloth/paper.

While in Paris I suppose Madeline could make an appearance.

Well, let's get the ball rolling

-what's gonna be the Wizard's Stand?
-Who is/are the guardian(s) in the bonkle island?
-Who are gonna to be the remaining members of the Brotherhood of Dada?
-What is the corpse part guarded by The Beast? Does he have a coffer full of canopic jars?
-Why Serenity and TOM is the best ship?

>>87107052
I think The Beast will have the pelvis as well as the organs that are around/above it so we can have the liver angle with Haddock.
He could be guarding an overgrown graveyard with a mausoleum leading down into some underground caverns.

I suppose we could have The Beast guarding more than just one part of the corpse if the organs are all in jars, but I think it'd be best if Hex and Pym don't ever become aware of this or the significance of it until, at the earliest, Nowhere.

And I don't think either of them could get corpse parts until phase 2 of the race.

So the Serenity and TOM ship is being used after all?

>>87107241
So Haddock gets one of the jars and leaves the rest untouched? After the Beast is vanquished and the racers leave the place, a member of the Brotherhood could come to the mausoleum and retrieve the other jars, like that group that tried to take Bugs corpse part.

>spoiler
I'm hip

>>87107445
Yeah, that works.

Clarence, Sumo, and Jeff are also in on this somehow. They're supposed to kick off the spooky events, and I guess they convince some of the racers to go to the graveyard, then The Beast appears.

Maybe the racers have to fight off the undead or something while spending the night in Aberdale waiting for the next check point to be announced in the morning.

Whoever collects the other pieces The Beast was guarding couldn't get to them because of The Beast and Mr. Nobody couldn't act on it because then his actions would've caused the undead to rise, which would put him in a karma deficit at a bad time.

So what are Pym and Hex doing at the check points during the down time for the racers?

>>87109598
In the first checkpoint there's the parade where Sam and Max get genderswapped, I don't know if Pym and Hex get involved with it.
In Aberdale, they probably deal with the Beast.
There is nothing for CN City right now, maybe they encounter an agent of the Brotherhood after Chameleon overhears Pym talking about the Corpse.

>>87109793
>>87107445
Oh, hold on a sec, Mr. Nobody's grunts should be called The Front Men. They're not Dadaists, just hired hands.

Tulio was a Front Man. Dick Dastardly is a Front Man, so is the Chameleon.

Don Karnage is a third party, like outsourcing.

>>87109793
I guess Hex and Pym don't get involved with that.

One of my concerns is figuring out when it should become apparent who the main focal characters are.

I like what we have so far, but we should assert who the main characters are sooner rather than later. It becomes obviously apparent that Hex and Pym are the main character by the time they're in Nowhere, but should it be made more apparent before then?

Should Dan Backslide be some sort of Melody user? Given that he [Smears] all over the place it makes perfect sense.

>>87111471
What kind of role does he have in this part?
I assume he's just another racer with his own motives that won't be deeply, if at all, explored.

And his stand wasn't on the stand doc.

>>87111501
I believe his Stand made more absurd actions more likely to happen that normal ones.

>>87111556
Also he's the reason that V is even participating in the race at all (Dans car is listed as a Random Runabout).

Also speaking of V, when he joins Nobody, after Nobody asks him why he wants to join them, he should speak entirely in alliteration...which in the docs is set up to look like his mask.

Last bump from me before bed.

>>87111556
>>87111654
Yes, it was called [Roundabout].

I think at the start of the race many of the entrees find that their cars have been sabotaged, so Dan Backslide steals a new one.

On a different note, I think Mr. Nobody or someone with him should call the Hill Valley City hill dwellers Lonely Hearts Club wannabies who couldn't even commit fully to the role they find themselves in, so they, the Dada Party, won't have them serving anymore of a role in the story they're currently in.

>>87111825
>so Dan Backslide steals a new one.
And no one will ever know?

>>87111835
Of course he shouts that before driving off in it, then he announces "In this Random Runabout I've stolen, I'll be sure to finish this race a head of those fools still stuck at the starting line!" or something.
And as he says this, we see V's face forming somewhere on the car.

But is V participating in the race at all or did he just start as a member of the Dada party? Because it seems to me he wasn't ever a racer.

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Heya. Illness got me way more than I expected. Looked through the dock, didn't find Crocodile Gena. He was accepted by Reviewfag at one point.

STAND USER: Krokodil Gena (Cheburashka)
STAND NAME: [BLUE WAGON] (Song from aforementioned Cheburashka) or [DROPS OF JUPITER] (Train)

Appearance: A completely blue ethereal humanoid form, with its' base located inside Gena's vehicle's chimney. (whatever that thing where the coal is shoved in)
Ability: [BLUE WAGON] has the ability to produce [TRAIN TRACTS] on any possible surface in 10 meters around him. On them, [BLUE WAGON] and the user can move with a speed of sound. While they are on the tracks, the pipe produces thick black smoke, that blinds and suffocates the targets.

Vehicle: [TCHAIKOVSKY]
Appearance: Red and Black locomotive.

Although I think a stand with similiar power showed up.

Once more, sorry. Will return to Corge as soon as I get better.

>>87106304
He probably believes Nobody can't do anything to him because legally he's not allowed to and there's nothing Nobody can do to him at this point. Also because Klimer hates Valley sympathizers.

But yes, like you said, Nobody isn't a common businessman.

>>87111654
If I remember correctly, It was basically a reverse Hey Ya!, it gives bad luck to the people around him.

>>87111909
V is just another member of the Brotherhood, the Agent None stand-in to be specific