/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Interpol Edition

I'm going to be so pissed if someone just made a thread at the exact moment I made this one.

Because whenever the thread dies before someone makes a new one there's always that chance that multiple new threads will show up all of a sudden after waiting and checking over and over again to see if someone else made the damn thread.

We are on the Interpol arc of part 6, frequently called an Intermission. Here is what we have so far:

>scene is either a remote mountain area in the Old Country or a even more remote desert
>Swiper is sitting in beach chair sunbathing with a mirror
>Swiper: "Ah, this is the good life, I tells yah. No rules, no responsibilities. Just me and my connections.”
>*laughs*
>Close up on Swiper’s face, eyes closed, a content look about him
>His mirth is interrupted by the sound of the vault door creaking open
>Swiper’s eyes open wide instantly, he’s thinking (No, that can’t be possible, no one knows about this place, no one free anyway, I never told anyone where this cache was. It can’t be Dora, there’s no way.) Swiper is now hiding behind a rock, watching the door, he’s sweating bullets
>Penny exits the vault, Swiper breaths a sigh of relief, but then starts sweating again when Penny looks over to him
>Penny: "Oh, Agent Swiper, right? What are you doing here?”
>Swiper: (Crap, she knows my face! Gotta think of something, small talk, yeah, that’s the way to go.) "Ah you know, just snooping around like a good little agent."
>Penny: "That's bizarre. As far as I know I'm the first agent to ever find this place. This cache isn't listed on any documents or the database or anything."
>Swiper: (Shit shit shit!) "Ah. Well. You see, I am an undercover agent. So I've been able to get the locations of a few jawbreaker locations here and there. So I figured I'd check it out myself..."

2000 characters is just not enough.

>>86028907
>Penny: "Didn't you… tell anyone?”
>Swiper: "I didn't want to bother you guys, that's all! I wanted to make sure it was the real deal first, yeah?"
>Penny: "Hmm… you really are one of the best undercover agents, huh?"
>Swiper: (You’re damn right I am, I’m the best goddamn undercover guy on the face of the planet! I’m so undercover even if the guys I used to work for are gone, no one is still any wiser to me!) "You know it! I've got a long term plan to maximize prof-ur-justice! Hell, I even busted that Dora girl, got her sent to jail!"
>close up on Penny's widened eyes
>Penny: "...Dora?"
>Swiper: "Yeah! She's the broad that helped start this whole jawbreaker disaster! Can you believe it? But don't you worry yah pretty little head, tootes! Everything's going according to my plan! It was all part of my mission."
>Voice from off panel "Really now, that's why you did it?"
>Suddenly blood starts gushing out of Swiper's back as he screams in agony.
>Swiper: "What's g-going on here… why am I b-bleeding..."
>A shadowy figure appears from behind another rock. "You shouldn't have lied, Swiper..." The figure reveals himself to be Rex Banner.
>"...because scum like you are not match for my 「Stand」!!"
>Swiper: *finger snap* "Aw, man!"
>Penny starts stepping towards Swiper, the aura of STANDO POWA around her
>Swiper starts to swipe his hands back and forth, he’s walking backwards and trips over this chair
>Swiper: "Hey, uh, I-I can e-explain!"

Cliff notes

>Swiper was originally an agent for the WB. They sent him undercover into Interpol.
>Interpol sent him undercover into the criminal underworld, whatever cartel he was in.
>The Cartel sent him undercover into whatever cartel Dora was a member of. Probably after the WB had fallen.
cont.

>>86028933
>When the WB fell, Swiper was one of their loose ends which no one could tie up since no one knew about him. His handler was long banished and there were no demons left to collect on any deals he had made. This left him in a very VERY good position since he was still getting information from Interpol and various cartels, he was able to play the field.
>To score points with his initial cartel and also Interpol, he planned a sting operation to get Dora caught. He knew that without Dora, the cartel she was a member of would quickly lose power as their supply of jawbreakers diminished, letting the first cartel either destroy or absorb them. It also scored him points with Interpol since Dora was someone in the jawbreaker smuggling ring.
>To keep Dora from outing him as a member of the cartel to whoever she was caught by, he used his old WB connections (there were still other plants around, but no one powerful) to learn about some private prison looking for stand user inmates, from there they got in touch with the leader of Strickland who gave the OK for the Warden to have Dora sent to his prison without any due process. This is why the Frizz came to personally collect her in a Jailbot like fashion with her bus.
>Now Swiper still had a couple of the cache locations memorized and was able to give those locations to his cartel bosses and continue to rake in the money.

>"How could you have known all that already?!"
>"Inspector Gadget told me all about it."
>"Impossible!" looking over to Penny "There's no way she could've known!"
>"Wrong Gadget, scum bag."
>"He's been dead for years!"
>"Yeah, what of it?"

>Gadget is how they know there's corruption in Strickland since before the Red Guy went down Wassanasong made a deal to take over, but there was no one left to collect on the payment, so he got away with it scot-free.
>The testimony of a dead man isn't worth anything in the courts of the living though.

Work on the Interpol stuff now.

>>86028969
Ok. Thanks, Anon.

You know, threads sink super duper fast on /co/ right now.

And I don't know if I'm even able to bump this thread until someone else posts in it.

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I tried to make he have a fitting Pillarmen/ElDorado style for Dan. The hat is supposed to look more like a Astec crown, a little like King Julian's or Kuzco's crown.

Also, could anyone post a link to the CLIMATE CHANGE and BAD MAN songs? I couldn't find either because they're too ambiguous without the band names.

>>86028969
>Swiper nervously looking between Penny and Rex
>Penny points at Swiper
>"「TECHNOLOGIC」!"
>「TECHNOLOGIC」grabs both of Swiper's arms
>Rex steps forward. He looks pretty much the same as when he last appeared, except maybe a few fabulous pins like Jotaro had in his hat.
>Swiper is now bleeding profusely from the wound.
>"How...how did you know?"
>"「POLICY OF TRUTH」. That's my Stand's name. Very fitting, don't you think? Any bastard tries to twist the truth gets stabbed."
>「POLICY OF TRUTH」twists the knife a little to prove Rex's point. Swiper yelps in pain.
>"We've been on to your little game for quite a while, Swiper. Just had to wait for the right time ta bust yah. So if you'll be kind enough to go quietly..."
>Swiper puts his head down in what appears to be defeat
>then suddenly a a cloud of dust appears around him.
>Penny and Rex looked shocked
>silhouette of something punching 「TECHNOLOGIC」
>Penny shows signs of being hurt
>dust settles and Swiper is being held by 「TECHNOLOGIC」 again
>Rex slowly walks up to Swiper
>"Okay, now that that's over with, let's just you in some c-"
>Rex cries out as it's shown Swiper is behind him

So I had the idea that either Swiper would cause a distraction so he can switch himself with a copy or just have him be one the whole time. Which would be better?

>>86030099
The original pitch says the name is from the Pitbull album, so I assume this is it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QpAGSi8fd88

>>86030167
It'd need to be a switch since the copies have masks that make them easy to identity as copies.

The knife should remain in Swiper's back even if he's able to instantly swap places with a copy.

>>86030167
Wait a sec, does this adapt from the cliff notes, or take place after "Yeah, what of it?"

Because the cliff notes need to be adapted to story, not just left as cliff notes.

>>86030167
>>86030449
Takes place after. Working out how the battle will go before I get into the cliff notes because it's late and I need to get back into writing.

>"No need to explain. Got enough dirt on you to fill Duckburg Lake!"
>Swiper is shocked, Penny is surprised
>Rex starts to explain Vento Aureo flashback style
>"Renard N. Swiper. A problem child who hated sharing. He had a knack for swiping, which meant you also had a knack for sneaking. He worked his way up the food chain to become a major player in a cartel. Eventually, he was approached by strange men cloaked in shadows. They said they could offer him more then he could ever dream of. And he only had one task, just a single one: infiltrate Interpol.
>"But Swiper wasn't an idiot! He managed to convince Dr. Director to send him back form which you came: his old cartel!"
>"But Swiper got even luckier. WB fell, leaving a many assets unaccounted for. One of those assets was Swiper. Realizing how much information he had now, he decided to use it to his advantage and increase his rank in his old cartel and Interpol."
>"Using the what he knew about jawbreakers from his time with WB, Swiper pinpointed exactly where they were being trafficked from. He figured out there routes and planned a sting operation of the member most responsible for this lucrative trade: Dora!"
>"Just to be cautious, he looked through old WB documents and found a special facility built to house Stand users. A little paperwork and a few phone calls with the head of Strickland was all it takes to send a famed jawbreaker smuggler to jail without so much as a hearing."
>"With Dora locked away and dozens of caches at his disposal, Swiper was poised to take his place in the sun."
>"Unfortunately for him, they don't just let anybody be an Interpol agent."

>>86030203
So, his definitive name is gonna be [Bad Man]?

>>86031306
>Got enough dirt on you to fill Duckburg Lake!
Nice touch

>>86031306
So where does this piece take place at?

I assume before the first bit you posted.

>>86031357
Yeah, it's [Bad Man]. No one suggested anything else, but I don't think Dan ever actually says the name of his stand in the part.

>>86031306
>"Inspector Gadget always kept a Go Go Gadget Ear out for anything that sounded too suspicious. There was something always a bit off about Wassonasong to him, and Gadget wasn't so naive as to believe Strickland was free from corruption. After investigating, Gadget discovered Wassansong's plan to take over, as well as his connection with the Red Guy. After it's fall, many who made deals with the devils found themselves without a business partner, and Wassansong was just like the rest. He was able to hide it from most, but not Gadget."
>Rex let's out sigh and looks at the sky.
>"He might not be any good in court now, but what he had to say has sure saved the skin of our asses more times then I care to count."

>>86031357
Glad someone caught that.

>>86031385
Yeah, before. I've been wanting to do a whole flashback backstory for a while now.

>>86031452
Even in death Inspector Gadget will still Go Go fuck your shit up.

Seriously, Gadget has to be one of my favorite parts of this whole crazy romp we're on.

>>86031434
[Climate Change] was also listed as its potential name.
Gonna add the Stands reviewed from the previous thread, should I add both versions of Jonah's Stand?

>>86031782
I know it was, but it was forgotten.

Until we figure out which version we're going with for Jonah, just add both with a note to pick one or merge them later when we're closer to part 7.

>>86031857
Done, also moved Skarr to the current character list, is he still in charge of the prison's armory or should I remove that part of his description?

>>86032301
It seems he's going with Frizzle on cache runs, I think. No one has wanted to discuss that yet.

Then later he's in charge of the Warden's robot army and upgrades them to make them less shitty using his stand.
The armory might still be in play, but it could just as easily have been dropped.

How will the Vicky fight play out?

>>86032804
The fight is still TBA, but the most non-lethal, non-destructive stand (Sticks') is what beats her.

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>>86033360
So the gang and their allies all try to use brute force against Vicky but fail, then she only gets beat when Stick's stand immobilizes her as they make their getaway out of PI?

Speaking of which, what happened to Summer Smith?

>>86033798
Summer is up in the air.

I laid the ground work for foreshadow her during the El Oso stuff. If we're still using her then someone will need to make an effort to include her, otherwise she's not likely to make any contribution to the plot or appear at all.

I'll give this a bump before bed and hope for the best.

Current thread drop time is only 2 hours and 15 minutes it seems.

>>86032353
Speaking of him, Is he with Frizzle's group when they raid the vault?

Morning bump

>>86031357
>>86031782
I think Climate Change is better purely for being a little more subtle. Feels like something that Araki would do.

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>>86033360
>>86033798
>>86032353

One thing that should be clarified before that fight is written is if Vicky will K.O. everybody but Sticks, given Dora's group will be quite big at this point and fights which more than 3 characters vs. 1 character are rarely done well.

>>86037763
another alternative is that part of the group is forcefully separated from the rest, probably to deal with Daffy's sons (Woody fights Droopy)

Bump. Live, /co/co/. Do not die.

I just realized that Nemesis/Deadlock still hasn't a Stand, who's gonna have a Stand anyway? the demon or the robot?

>>86036159
You could answer that question yourself since right now it's either or. He could be there for the fight against Penny and Rex, or he could be somewhere else raiding some other vault.

>>86037763
We're still not even sure who is participating in that fight, and that fight isn't even anywhere near being next up.

Maybe Giffany's robot body gets blown up?

>>86038788
I thought it was going to be a case of confusion where other characters would mistake Nemesis for Deadlock's stand.

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>>86037754
I don't get Climate Change, how does it reference the Stand/Character/Cartoon? Do you know the song? If only I had the song, maybe I could compare it to Bad Man.

>>86041547
It's from the same album as Bad Man.

Or so I assume based on the post originally pitching the idea.

All it said is they were both from the Pitbull album.

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Did Dan free the Caveman at the end or was he just monologuing with the frozen Caveman?

>>86041753
he killed him if I remember correctly, the Caveman was still in his block of ice but covered with holes

>>86041753
He gloated at him a little bit before blasting him full of holes, then moved far enough away for the holes to become permanent, killing the Caveman.

Dan murdered him before leaving and used the ammo his stand got from blasting holes in him to blast up through the layers of prisons.

>>86041547
>>86041717
Climate Change IS the album.

>>86041849
It's not like the first results on google for "climate change song" give you album results.

>>86039569
Some anon suggested that Vicky's fight ended with one or more party members gravely injured, needing the help of Toki's healing Stand.

>>86044638
Wouldn't Toki be in the middle of a concert at that time though?

When Dredd discovers that the Warden is using Jawbreakers to power the robots? before or after fighting Nemesis?

>>86046217
He finds out about it when Penny gets the Warden monologing and I don't think Nemesis shows up until after that.

>>86046601
Does that beating takes places inside Pure Imagination or the Warden's Stand is in that point strong enough to subdue Dredd?

>>86047838
Takes place in the Warden's office in the real jail since Penny was able to escape into the real jail.

If they were already in PI when it happened, Penny would not have been able to escape.

And the Warden's office is located at the top of the watch tower.

Makes me think he has a zip line installed somewhere.

>>86049855
>after pummeling and taunting Dredd he walks away from the office menacingly
>then he rides the zip line saying "weeee!" in a childish manner all the way to the ground floor.

>>86030099
>>86041547
>>86041753
Is that a real character from something? Is it Scooby-Doo? Flintstones?

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>>86051232
Dinosaur Dan from the Tex Avery cartoon "The First Bad Man".

>>86050142
It probably goes to one of the mid levels of the surrounding panopticon walls.

>>86050142
And when the watch tower falls, the Warden lets out a "NOOOO!" but is really just lamenting the loss of his zip line.

>>86053529
And realizing that the watchtower inside Pure Imagination with his giant head is no more.

>>86053677
That's probably still there, or he immediately rebuilds it as something that requires upkeep inside of PI like everything else in there that isn't copied from the real jail.

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We needed more art of jazz wolf. What are we working on now?

>>86053912
Nice.
We are in the fight of Penny and Rex Banner versus Frizzle's group.

>>86054013
Nope, we're not even to Frizzle yet.

Still on Penny and Rex interrogating Swiper which provides much needed exposition for the plot, establishing character motivations and what the actual goal is of the main bad guys of part 6.
The beans Swiper spills finally begin adding up to all that, revealing what's actually going on.

>>86054202
Great.
What are said plans and motivations? Is it the expand PI thing or something different?

>>86054945
That's for the Warden, there is also Wassanasong's reasons for funding the prison.

>>86054945
After the cliff notes >>86028933 >>86028969 are adapted into proper story, Penny and Rex need to do some deductive reasoning and ponder what Wassanasong's motives for allying with the Warden might be.

Then Frizz shows up, that happens, Penny is brought to the jail, other shit happens that isn't important to the line of thought we're following right now (mostly about Wassanasong's conversation with Mirage that goes over with his role has been), the Warden meets with Penny, and lays out his plans to expand PI all over the world.

Swiper puts the pieces on the table and Penny begins putting them together until those two scenes happen, finally finishing explaining what the Warden's end game is.

Wassanasong is with the Warden on this because "gods of the new world" and that kind of shit.

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>>86055584
>Wassanasong is with the Warden on this because "gods of the new world" and that kind of shit.

>"The Warden spoke of the mythical City on the Hill. Soon that city will be a reality, and we will be crowned its kings. Or better than kings. Gods..."

>>86056228
And he says these lines to Mirage.

Maybe we have some scene switching between the Warden monologing to Penny and
Wassanasong letting Mirage know just how expendable she is now.

>>86056891
Something like that, since that's a quote from Deus Ex.

>>86056981
We should also keep in mind this is Chane Wassanasong, not his father, Ted.

Did that kid have any personality outside of just wanting to make Bobby's life miserable at times?

>>86057709
>The whole plan was just Chane's elaborate Dio-style quest to fuck over the Hills

>>86057709
He was an spoiled kid and an overall jerk, he also flirted with Connie.

>>86058350
Oh my god, it's so petty.

It's perfect. He'll have to reveal that right before Bobby finally kicks him in the balls.

Current thread drop time is about 2 and a half hours. I can't stay up any later.

So the information they get out of Swiper confirms Wassonasong's corruption, when the Frizz arrives and Swiper recognizes her, that confirms he's in cahoots with the Warden.

After Penny lets herself get captured to get to the jail again, Rex brings Swiper back to Interpol?
Do they begin mobilizing something from there on the Interpol side to take out all of Wassonasong's guys?

Which one of you is responsible for this?

>>86052088

>>86059734
Well it wasn't me.

>4chan carks is for about 3 hours on my end.
DAMN YOU HEUGH!

>>86059318
>Rex brings Swiper back to Interpol?
If we want to wrap up his story here, then yes, the other option is that he gets away and is caught in the epilogue.

>Do they begin mobilizing something from there on the Interpol side to take out all of Wassonasong's guys?
That's a possibility, with the exception of Wassanasong (who is being escorted to the prison), any other Strickland employee involved in the plot should be an easy target.

>>86061914
This is why I want the stuff in the first section of the part finished before going any further.

Swiper being in the epilogue is only worth it if Dora knew him and knew of him betraying her.

So, if we use Yellow(Jack)et in part 7, whether he's a protagonist or not, should his Stand be [A HORSE WITH NO NAME]?
Or maybe that should be his vehicle?

>>86064345
I think he starts off just riding around on a segway.

If Dredd's Stand is [I am the Law], does that mean that when Warden beats him, he is [Breaking the Law]?

>>86064588
yeah, we gave him a segway back when we assumed he was just a guy with a towel for cape.

>>86065753
The law was already broken by the Warden before the fight began, Dredd just didn't know it yet.

Afterwards, Dredd will be some other law based play on words about mending or restoring the law.

>>86066666
Witnessed.

>>86066666
Nice quints.
>Warden wipes floor with Dredd
>"Well, you fought the law... the law won!"
>Dredd has to call his stand [FOUGHT THE LAW] as a badge of shame from then on
>when he resists Warden at the end he gets a triumphant moment where he changes the name back

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Updated Susie and Dora. Boots is a lot more difficult to do since this is the first time he's getting a despiction.

>>86067601
Is [Boots] supposed to be purple or not in our story?

>>86067568
Sounds good.

>>86068233
the description doesn't give an specific color besides the red boots (colors aren't consistent in JoJo anyway)

>>86068233
I don't know, I can change the color if the original concept says it should be purple.

The color of Stand-related things in that artstyle is supposed to be purely thematic, so their real colors may not be used. I thought that orange looked good for Dora's character, so that became her thematic color, for example.

>>86068482
I like the orange version. Feels kind of Sun Wukong-esque.

>>86068482
>>86068331
It's described as purple a few times through the part.

That's the only reason why I brought it up.

Here's some commentary.

>He may have size and power, but Dora has mobility
Grizz: "Woh-hoh-hoh, those are some serious moves! Ain't many people can dodge my man's hits like that! Hate to say it, but this girl's got [STYLE]!"
Bender: "That's a [STAND], meatbag." (takes a swig of beer)
Grizz: "You know what I mean, man. She's more flexible than Eel O'Brian."
Bender: "That's for sure. Not a great rack on her, though."
Grizz: "Aww, true that."

>"YOU NEVER *STOOD* A CHANCE AGAINST ME, LITTLE LADY."
Grizz: "Shit, what did I tell you? Three hundred confirmed kills! Never underestimate El Oso!"

>Dora lands on top of El Oso's head and begins whaling on his face ineffectively with her own fists
Bender: "Looks like the big guy isn't as good as you thought, hairball."
(Grizz is shocked, but regains his composture.)
Grizz: "Well, all that mobility isn't doing anything for her when she can't scratch him. And if she takes a hit it's over."

>While he's doing that Dora has [Boots] repeatedly kick him in the back again
Grizz: "Oh, a stab in the back!" He mimes fainting. "That ain't fighting fair. Guess she needs all the help she can get, though, 'cause those messed up tricks ain't gonna make Oso care about hits like that!"
Bender: "Looks like she's got a few tricks left to me. Hey, meatbag! I'm rooting for ya, kid."
Grizz, aside: ("You seriously think she can win this?")
Bender: ("Nah, she's gonna get pulped. Be funny if she did, though.")

>El Oso is down, Panic approaches him and begins the count as Dora begins walking back over to where Susie is
(Grizzly is staring, open mouthed.)
Bender: "Close your mouth, fursuit, you're embarrassing yourself." (Swallows his beer bottle whole)

>>86068698
>>86068331
>>86068482

Well, Araki likes to test different palettes with the Stands in the volume covers and chapter covers, so it shouldn't matter that much anyway.

Besides, the orange fits rather well with Dora in that pic.

>>86069228
Very [Nice], Anon.

>>86069228
Good job.

So >>86031306 then >>86031452 then >>86030167 ?

I feel like I have the order wrong.

>>86071497
I think that's the correct order since the last one is after Swiper switched places with his copy

>>86069228
>Not a great rack on her, though.
>Aww, true that.
I understood that reference.

>>86069228
>"Close your mouth, fursuit, you're embarrassing yourself."
Kek. What's going to happen with Bender after the whole prison explodes? Does he join the Stand wielding robots in his weird sect?

>>86075052
Bender as the leader of a cult of Deadlock following robots cameo-ing in part 7?

>>86075052

He and Grizzly will probably escape along with Dethklok once Nemesis/Deadlock has had enough of PI and chooses to escape the place before the implosion happens, because really I don't see Deadlock wasting time once he realizes what will happen to the Warden in the finale.

>>86071497
So next up is the interrogation of Swiper and fight with Frizzle, right? So something like:

>Rex uses the fact that his Stand is still stabbing Swiper to catch him again
>Penny preposes they interrogate him for more details before taking him in
>Swiper finally gives the details of what's going on
>before giving out one final important piece of info, Frizzle shows up
>Penny fights Frizzle while Rex keeps Swiper at bay
How's that?

>>86076913
Is that Swiper the real one or a copy?

>>86076954
The real one. He used his copy as a decoy, but Rex's Stand kept on stabbing the real one. A kind of "I outsmarted your outsmarting" deal.

>>86076913
That's pretty good. But how did Frizzle found out where they were. Did Swiper contact someone maybe?

The writing is going pretty well so far.

>>86076913
Well, I'm still confused over what comes after "I can explain", because the idea here is Rex can only stab someone when he already knows the truth.

I'm thinking they have the knife in his back and he starts spilling the info, some of it should be things they didn't know about, but they pretend they already knew about all of it.

The final question they ask him before the knife comes out of his back should be one they already know the true answer to.

>>86077328
Penny and Rex came to this vault to set a trap for whoever was going around collecting the caches, they didn't know Swiper was there, but they decided to deal with him before their real target showed up.

Penny already knows who Frizzle is since she rode the bus to the prison once before, so they know that the Warden is the one before the "terror attacks" now based on that.

>>86063298

According to what is in the doc, there is this scene in the part where Dora meets Susie for the first time.

>Dora crosses her arms. "Well. I know all about being abandoned by people you thought you could trust." Flashback panel of Swiper leaving Dora to the cops. "Maybe we should take it from the top, huh?"

>>86078413
So we really need to expand the very first section of part 6 before we can get into the Interpol stuff proper.

So how many months or years did Dora and Swiper work together in the same cartel trafficking jawbreakers?

We need to work out Dora's life from the end of part 5 to the start of part 6, or at least enough of it to fill the flashbacks we need for the bus ride to the prison.

>Dora finds the stand jawbreakers, she finds out what they are from the underground/blackmarket news and knows their value
>She gets some people together, maybe from the cartel where she was a drug mule for
>They start moving the things across boarders, their operations grows, whenever one cache starts running low they let slip where it is and move to the next one to let the other cartels fight over the scraps
>Swiper joins up with them
>Maybe some montage of them getting into scraps and saving each other
>Maybe Swiper and some other members of the group eat jawbreakers on a dare, not all of them survive and Dora decides it's for the best she not eat one
>Cut forward a few years to crossing a boarder
>Pretty standard, until Swiper disappears and the rest of the group are surrounded by robots that either kill everyone else or stop once Dora is captured
>As she's smacked in the head and losing conscious while being hauled onto the bus, she sees Swiper getting a pay out from someone while smiling greedily and coyly waving goodbye to Dora

Well, anyone else have any ideas for the flashbacks she should have at the very start of the part?

>>86080061
that seems enough, maybe the group She joins was made of refugees from the Old Country that survived the tower's collapse.
Another flashback could be about Dora hearing rumours about the prison's construction.

>>86080061
Maybe a bit about her family or time before she started working as a drug mule.

>>86080600
We have that covered already in the Ward arc.

What's really relevant right at the start is establishing what Dora did to get sent to prison.

>>86080565
Best if she doesn't know about it since it's really far away from where she's been operating out of.

So who was even in Dora's group before being captured?

This is saddening. B0rf Star has been cancelled.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xl2shdijDGk

I'm going to keep going with this stupid project of ours until all the parts are fucking done, even if it comes down to me having to do it all by myself, which I sincerely hope does not happen.

>>86080600
When she is piecing together what happened before being put in the bus, she realizes that every time things went wrong, Swiper was always involved and both him and she eluded capture/death.

>>86082060
Since they are minor character they could be nameless nobodies, otherwise they could be the other characters from her show: the calf, squirrel, and iguana.

>>86083037
I like to avoid nameless nobodies since we have thousands of characters available to us.

Sure, let's go with the calf, the squirrel, and the iguana. Do they all die or are their fates left ambiguous? If they were people Dora actually cared about then she would've been more shook up about their deaths at the start of the part.

>Scene is of Dora asleep on the bus.
>Close up of her face, then flashback boarders on the following panels
>She's walking into the distance, she looks younger than she was on the bus (like how her older self appeared on the show when she had longer hair; she's older still in the present), she's looking at a map while in the distance is a building
>Panel of her finding countless jawbreakers inside
>Panel of Dora, Tico, Benny, Isa, and Swiper moving crates of the things out of the building
>Panel of them crossing the boarder in the dead of night
>Panel of them selling the things to crime bosses (maybe ones from Looney Toons?)
>Panel of them with a shit load of cash, like it raining down all around them
>Panel of Dora looking as old as she is now in the present while moving the product
>Panel of her being jumped by mechanismos with Tico, Benny, and Isa getting their shit smashed in
>Panel of Dora hastily shoving a jawbreaker into her mouth before getting clubbed by one
>Panel of Dora blacking out as she's carried onto the bus
>Now it's from her POV, she sees Swiper getting a fat sack of cash while smiling greedily
>He coyly waves goodbye to Dora as she finally blacks out

>Dora then wakes up on the bus with a start
>It's an ordinary looking bus, but she finds she can't get out of her seat
>The woman driving the bus speaks "Big chance you took back there, hope you won't think of it as a mistake since things are about to get messy for you."
>The woman is revealed to be Mrs. Frizzle
>Dora looks out a window and sees the world distorted, roads disappearing behind them and forming in front of them, strange forests, and weird shaped clouds until one forms a face and eats them.

Is that enough?

>>86083604
I think so? I dunno.

>>86075250
Will this include Tina from the Metal Men?

>>86086917
She's suffered enough.

>>86082239
Wow. This really sucks. I really liked this thing. Should they have a memorabilia of sorts in part 8?

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>>86082239
I'm going to keep with this project until the 8 parts get finished at the very least. This would be the first completed /co/ project, right?

>>86082239
F

>>86087623
I think this is a good ideia, especially now that the series has officially ended. Can we imply it happens in the same universe as /Co/Co/ or do we let it ambiguous or maybe just make a reference to it?

>>86089168
>Shit is about to reach the point of no return between the Scopemen tribe and modern society.
>Their leader begins to retell all the incidents between them and the rest of the world.
>One of them is the scopemen being hunted down by the King of the Sundy Funnies, Gafrindle.

>>86089410
Perfect. But we could use just a little more.

Do we imply that it happened before or during part 8 though?

>>86089168

Making references are the better option. Implying they share the same universe only works when both stories were made by the same person, otherwise it would come out as cheapy and tacky. We aren't even sure if the creator of Borf like this project or not.

>>86089527
Probably long before, what happens during part 8 is the straw that breaks the camel's back.

Another reference could be Ethan mentioning a postponed search for The Orange King's tomb, or how trying to teach their acolytes the "orange king's art" was a failure which led to the deaths of their newest batch of cultists.

>>86089556
It should work as a homage to it, so I guess you're right. Lets just let it ambiguous with some references. Maybe some characters use some techniques from B0rf characters at one point.

>>86089784
This would work since its so ambiguous.

>>86089784
Even Ethan didn't dare trifle with the power of lasaga.

>>86083604
Sounds good to me.

>>86089945
>there is an offhand comment about having a very hard time trying to translate the texts they found, especially the king's name.

>>86086735
>>86090374
Well as long as it's good enough.

My idea is that the flashbacks are wordless and are more to convey what emotions she's gone through.

Keeping what's there in mind, are there any tweaks we need to make to what we currently have for the Interpol arc?

>>86091894
I think the next thing to do is the scene before Frizzle storms the vault, where Swiper is either captured by interpol or runs away with the help of his clones

>>86092683
I'm still having a really hard time following what exactly comes after
>>86028933
>Swiper: "Hey, uh, I-I can e-explain!"

Does it go into a flashback? Is it more Rex talking? Does Swiper immediately try to escape after saying that using his stand?

It's just not clear what happens next based on what has been written. It's like there are some critical pieces missing.

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Name: Stardust the Super Wizard
>Stand: [STAND PROUD]
>Appearance: Bound to Stardust's body
>Ability: [STAND PROUD] grants Stardust the Stand powers of any Stand user that he touches. Though his imprisonment in the Corpse robbed him of the abilities he had before, he has absorbed the abilities of those who were empowered by or guarding the Corpse Parts. (This means that he has the Stand powers of anyone who got their Stand from a Corpse Part (Jonah, Jane, Haddock, etc) and all the Corpse Guardians, as well as anyone he touches after being released.)
>Additionally, Stardust can mix and match elements of whatever powers he has to create new ones, in the style of Wall Eye/[WEIRD SCIENCE] fusions, essentially making him exponentially more dangerous the more powers he gains.
Role: Released from the Corpse when it's fully assembled. Probably serves as an arc villain before being killed by Nobody?

I figure this way we can see why he was so dangerous that he had to be sealed in Supes' body, while also making it reasonable that our heroes and/or villains could beat him (because he's lost most of the powers he had before his defeat).

>>86093000
He feels more like an endgame for part 7 to me.

President Nobody wanted to use the corpse's power to carry out whatever his plan was (giving everyone powers?) but he didn't know Stardust was in there.

>>86093000
I like his power, though he seems too OP to appear as just a arc villain.

>>86093820
I was actually feeling the opposite - he's so OP that he CAN'T be more than an arc villain or he'd overshadow Nobody, Wizard Daffy, etc.
We've got a lot of big concepts in part 7 that all seem worth using, but they've got to be carefully managed so they don't overshadow each other. I thin we've got, like, 3 Diego analogues at this point.
>>86093771
IIRC it was to erase the body with Paint It Black, thus wiping the ideal of heroism from the world. Though that gives me an idea for a Nobody quote...
>"When I erase the body, nobody will be [super] anymore. And when nobody's [super]... everyone will be."

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>>86094091
That's kind of a lame plan.

I don't think whoever keeps coming up with Mr. Nobody's stuff in part 7 is really familiar with his personality.

Based on how [Paint it black] has been described so far in its use, I don't like it.

>>86095188
Well, what did you have in mind?

>>86096873
Mr. Nobody is all about making every moment an event, freeing people from the monotony of life's self-imposed tediousness, making the world a more bizarre and fun place to live in.

He's also charismatic, he never once needed to force anyone to join him and his merry band, all it took were some kind words and maybe an air tight suit to keep the dirt away.
He was all about making people feel special to join him in his cause, he respected his comrades and even his enemies.

All Mr. Nobody would have to do to get Pym to join the Dada party is give him a machine that predicts his bi-polar disorder, he wouldn't need to "remove all the good from him" or whatever.

That's not how he works, Mr. Nobody believes good and evil are outmoded concepts of a bygone era.

The trick with him is giving him a motive that the main characters are against for personal reasons, but can also kind of agree with on some level.

He'd want to not only erase the concept of "heroism" but also of "villainy" by giving everyone the power to do anything they want. He wants to give everyone in the world the super power to "say no" to whatever reality they're facing.

>>86097325
And such a reality would be so inherently chaotic everything would fall apart at the seams, so our heroes have to stop it?

>>86097325
>He'd want to not only erase the concept of "heroism" but also of "villainy" by giving everyone the power to do anything they want. He wants to give everyone in the world the super power to "say no" to whatever reality they're facing.
That's sort of what I was trying to imply through the Incredibles reference.
Honestly, by this point I'm not really feeling Nobody as our villain at all. We're kind of locked into using him, but it's feeling like part 7 is really just going to end up as "a Mr. Nobody chapter of Doom Patrol, with a race".

>>86097876
I think the issue is that Doom Patrol is tonally very close to what we're doing here.
With all previous major heroes and villains, we've had to alter them dramatically to fit them in; the one closest to his canon personality is the Warden, and there the dramatic is changed by positioning him as villain against a group of genuine heroes.
With Doom Patrol, though... /co/co/'s wacky, DP is wacky. /co/co/ is an action/adventure story, DP is an action/adventure story. /co/co/ exists in a world of superheroes, DP exists in a world of superheroes. Nobody's the big bad of his DP arcs, Nobody's the big bad of part 7.
All this means is that 1) we're not really doing anything interesting with him or recontextualising his character, and 2) we can't really change anything about him because it'll stop feeling like him (unlike our other villains, who came from hugely different settings and thus were able to feel like themselves because they were visibly altered to fit their story role).

>>86097876
I still want to use him, I just think we should only use him in small doses until near the end where his actual motives are made clear.

He has people working for him who have their own motives and own interpretations of the plan.

He plays the antagonist role up to them simply by the virtue of being the one who makes the race more difficult for the racers (putting obstacles in the way, hiring eliminators, making the next check point be somewhere impossible, etc.)

>>86097817
Which is a good enough reason to want to stop him.

The corpse parts are dangerous, history has shown time and time again that attempting to gather them causes untold distastes.
They should becomes aware of the corpse parts after they stop by the old ruins of the Bagge farm where one of the parts was buried, Samurai Jack was serving as its guardian and, after it is stolen, that's when he enters the race and the main characters find out about these dangerous body parts.

But we're still not on part 7 yet, we're in part 6, like 2/3rds of the way through it.

If I get a free chance tonight I'd like to give a shot at embellishing and scripting the Hong Kong Phooey vs Johnny fight, give it some zing and some jojo since I loved part 3 so much and can't let it go

>>86099140
Sure, it's better than nothing happening and part 3 does still need embellishing.

>>86099140
Based, anon. I'm kind of lacking in inspiration for part 6, so I might go back and try fleshing out part 4 some.

>>86099140
Part 3 embellishments are fine by me. Been meaning to take another look at the last Lowly fight for a while, actually.

>>86101182
Lots of early stuff in Part 3 needs some nice touches, especially the fights sans Yosemite Sam

Question, since Fred was the villain of Part 4, and I just finished reading that, I honestly didn't notice anything relating to Muriel's death in part one. Does that mean that Fred didn't know about it?

Cause honestly? Since Fred apparently liked his aunt Muriel, I'd expect her death having a hell of a toll on him, right?

>>86101409
I thought we did have something like that in there.

I remember discussing her death being one of the things that pushed him closer to his breaking point.

There was a lot of stuff in part 4 that we talked about but either didn't include because of pacing problems or couldn't include because anons lost interest in working on part 4 before it was really done. Which is kind of like what's happening now with part 6, so that just happens with every part.

>>86088965
Depends on one's definition of "complete", probably.

What parts in part 6 are anons excited to work on?
That'll give me a gauge on what sections I'll need to focus on just to make sure part 6 is "done" before we move on to part 7.

Actually finishing part 6 in a week now seems like it's unlikely to happen.

>>86093000
>superman went down like the dark wanderer in Diablo: sealing an ancient evil in his own body
I know that superman's death was supposed to be left unexplained, but dammit, that's a good story. It also sheds a new light on the role of the corpse part guardians: they weren't only tasked to watch over such powerful artifacts, but they also prevented the release of Stardust.

>>86095188
[Nowhere Man] was one of the earliest things defined for part 7, given that said part revolves about the theme of identity, the big bad's Stand is anathema to the concept of identity.

As a side note, it looks like we are before another "age" in our timeline: a time when supes and his expies roamed the land.

>>86102134
That must've been more than 50 years ago by the time we get to part 7 since it took place before part 1.

And reading what [Nowhere Man]'s actual abilities are, it seems most situations proposed in using it are from anons who did not read what its abilities are.

I'd really like to get part 6 "done" by the 15th, but it's just not going to happen. I think we've been on part 6 now for longer than any other part.

>>86097325
>>86097876
Honestly, the more I read about how Mr. Nobody actually is the more I'm convinced he'd be perfect to use for Part 7. He reminds me of Valentine in the sense that he's often more "noble" then the hero.

>>86102549
Yes, but Nobody would never attempt to rape Jane though, like Valentine on Lucy.

Would he?

>>86102606
Nah, I don't think so. I meant in a more general since. Nobody's aim is much broader and he's generally more friendly then Valentine, which could lead to some interesting chemistry depending on who the CoCo of the part is.

Anyway, what's on the agenda for 6 right now?

Ya know, I got an idea for a stand, but... no idea about a user yet.

[Yakkity Sax] (named for the tune used as the end-credits theme for the Benny Hill Show.)
Appearance: A clockwork, four-armed Demon-Yak in a fedora, black suit and tie and sweet ass trenchcoat cape with a saxophone in one pair of hand a tommy gun in the other.
Ability: The primary ability of Yakkity Sax is to speed up time by playing it's saxophone, usually when the user is being chased by a person or an angry mob. While This ability is in effect however, the user must run and move to the music and also pull off a few shenanigans of comedic value in order to increase the size of the mob and also lessen the energy drain the User may suffer when the ability is used. This ability can be used to travel long distances in a seemingly short amount of time or if used with a stand that simulates the hall of doors from Scooby Doo, could lead to several silly shenanigans. If the user misses an opportunity to pull a shenanigan, the effect of Yakkity Sax's Primary ability weakens the lowest possible percent proportional to the size of the mob chasing the user.

The secondary ability of Yakkity Sax however, revolves around the tommy gun it uses. Depending on the number of people the user pissed off enough to chase after them, the tommy gun will fire off 5 bullets per mob member before needing to reload. The strength of the bullets however rely on the number of shenanigans pulled during the chase before the User stops the music and opens fire.

This came about in like... five minutes while walking my dog. Most likely needs a lot of tweaking if it seems like a stand that can be used in this project. And well, a user that this thing might fit best, cause I don't have a clue.

>>86102719
Yakkity Yak.

>>86102735

No, Yakkity Yak is a different song completely. Though, if there's a stand called [Yakkity Yak], and whoever gets [Yakkity Sax] meets them, it could cause a weird "Who's on First?" kind of gag, right?

>>86102719
Reminds me that there's a cartoon character named Yakkity Yak.
...Actually, he's pretty much forgotten about, he might fit in Part 7 somewhere.

>>86103563
Really? Huh. I certainly forgot about him. Though, Yakkity Sax may be OP for Part 7 if we do the race plotline, or something similar to it for /co/co/ considering Yakkity Sax's thing is range, speeding up the user (even if a mob has to follow them and using comedy to power it up, maybe as a remnant of [MELODY] back in part one?), and probably punching things if it has a holster for the sax or something.

>>86102699
Still on the Interpol arc.

I knew we were going to drag at this arc.

Might have to just do it myself soon.

After the "I can explain" I think that's when Swiper should kick up some dirt and try to escape by using his stand. He switches positions with one of his copies and they catch up to him because the knife is still in his back. He tries to lie his way out of it and that's when the knife twists, then we go into flashbacks and exposition.

>>86028933
>"No need to explain. Got enough dirt on you to fill Duckburg Lake!"
>Penny begins advancing on Swiper, she's glowing with stand power
>Swiper's eyes are darting around, looking for something, anything, he spots a small rock and dives for it
>He swipes the rock up off the ground and also kicks up a could of dust and sand
>Penny sends in [TECHNOLOGIC] to grab Swiper, who is still visible in the cloud
>What they grab looks like Swiper, sounds like Swiper, moves like Swiper, and even smells like Swiper, but it's not Swiper
>[TECHNOLOGIC] disassembles it on the spot with a flurry of punches revealing it to be nothing more than a pile of rocks wearing a mask
>Rex spins on his heels and faces behind them
>"Where do you think you're going, scumbag?"
>Swiper falls out from behind a rock, the knife twisting in his back
>Swiper: "OK, I give! I give!"
>Penny and Rex throw Swiper into his beach chair and close it on him, trapping him in place
>Rex: "Now, I'm gonna tell you a story, and you're going to give me your honest critique of it."

Then it goes into the flashback here >>86031306

I'm not sure if Rex should be the one telling it though. Shouldn't Swiper tell the story like he's a canary or something?

Okay- here we go.
Hong Kong Phooey vs the Gang

Chapter: The cat’s in the cradle
>As Mr. Ratburn lays passed out in the alleyway, the gang collects themselves and continues on foot a few blocks down the street
>Tom takes a look at all the delis and dinners as they look around, at which Edd catches a glance of
>”Hungry Tom? Don’t tell me all that cake talk actually gave you an appetite”
>Tom responds to Edd, not taking his eyes off the passing stores “Could use something to drink- heard a recommendation for this little Café…”
>Ed gleefully responds “will you be having cake with th-“
>Eddy elbows Ed before he can finish- “Zip it chinless!”
>A few minutes of awkward silence ensues, waiting for street lights to change, busy traffic jams, lots of sights and sounds catch the boys attention, but Tom just shrugs it off. Until Ed’s ohs and ahs tick him off enough to respond
>”never been to a big city before huh?” Tom questions
>Eddy takes his eyes off a shiny dime on the ground- “Well we’ve seen pictures… I bet there’s a ton of opportunity and suckers…”
>Edd chimes in ”While this may not be as big as CN city, it is certainly more grandiose than our humble little cul-de-sac, we even tried our hand at making our own city once with quite a mad turn of events! You see there was this—
>Tom internally “Christ, this guy’s like a broken record- a broken record of a used car salesmen reading the phonebook…”
>Tom ignores much of Edd’s story while he looks for the café, a few minutes pass until a big blue sign reading Café Lune du Pere catches his eye.

>>86105143
>”Finally! The stinkin place…”
>Eddy responds “Hey- didn’t you say-“
>Tom quickly responds “Lay out shortstack- you three wait out here.”
>Edd looks at Tom with a puzzled face, “But wait! You’re going to get a bite to eat alone! What if a Stand user
>”…hits us from behind while we’re all in one place? That’s why you’re staying out here, you’re my backup ya see?” Tom finishes Edd’s question without giving him a look.
>The boys stay silent until Ed quips “Do you think he’ll bring us back some buttered toast?”

>The next scene, the bell chimes as Tom walks through the door, Tom looks annoyed as he stares at a large “no smoking” sign. He shrugs it off and looks down the corridors of the diner. It’s casual, a little dirty and reminds him of Pop’s joint back in the city. A hostess approaches Tom with a menu in hand
>”Good afternoon sir! Looking for a bite?”
>”Actually sweet cheeks, a blond- well he mighta been one once upon a century ago. His name’s…
>”Mr. Bravo?” the hostess responds, catching Tom off guard
>”Yeah, big guy, might weigh a ton?”
>”He told me you’d be coming this way… he told me to look for a kid in a zoot suit spitting up hairballs… you know it’s funny I’ve never known his name until t’day and he’s such a regular-”
>”Got it toots, show me where he’s chowing down.”

>>86105172
>The waitress passes down a corner Tom didn’t look at before, he follows her and stops midway when he sees that large mass of hair from behind a booth near the back of the otherwise empty room. Thoughts run through Toms head, he clenches his fist as his heart beats faster and faster, lungs trying hard to keep up with his anger. He tips his hat up and steps forward, his eyes never leaving that stack of hair and his fist never letting go of their grip on nothing but rage. Que to Johnny, sipping tea out of a comically small cup.
“Can’t you move any faster kitty?”
>Tom pushes a chair out of his path and finally stands at the edge of the booth. He finds the booth clean save for the used tea cup, tea pot, a plate of pastries stuffed with something green, and a loose comb sitting near the spoon and knife. He turns and looks Johnny dead in the glasses.
>”Well don’t be so rude, this nice little honey showed you to your seat, why don’t you plop down in it?” Johnny responds, now looking at a collectible record hanging off the wall
>Tom speechless, slides into the seat opposite Johnny
>”Care for a spinach puff? They’re not the best I’ve had, but it’s better than the nachos.” Johnny responds, finally making eye contact with Tom
>Silence surrounds the booth, a full 20 seconds goes by without a word from either father or son. A waitress pours Johnny some more tea and then turns to Tom. “Good afternoon sir, may I start you off with anything to drink?”
>”Hardest Mule ya got-“ Tom’s request breaks his silence
>”You don’t need to get some big boy drink just to try and impress me.” Johnny quips back, and besides this town’s nice and easy- they aren’t going to sell any booze until later.
>”I’m so sorry but I’m afraid he’s right- we can’t serve any alcohol until-“
>”whatever hun- just… I’ll take a…” Tom struggles to continue. The waitress politelty asks “Sir?”
>”Speak up boy, cute little sister can’t hear ya”

wait I think I missed a chunk hold on

>>86105196
>”m—milk…” Tom says a little louder, turning a bit red from embarrassment
>”Milk commin right up sweetie!” The waitress gleefully responds as she makes a note in her check book
>She turns to walk away as Johnny responds “Excuse me sister..”
>The waitress turns around, lights dash into her eyes as she lets out a tall and strong OOOHHHHH
>Cut to Johnny, striking a magnificent pose- while behind me floats 「MONKEY BUSINESS」striking a similar pose
>”I’ll take a mule! Strongest ya got”
>”Y—YES SIR!”
>She skips off to the kitchen out of sight, cut to Tom nearly seething with rage
>”So that’s it- your 「STAND」…” Tom tips his hat down to cover his face and collect himself
>”You know it shortie! This here stands pretty darn reliable it has its perks…”
>”Cut the jib” Tom cuts off, slowly behind him floats 「ONE MORE TIME」 ”This one’s mine… now tell me what you know. This isn’t an afternoon affair.”
>”Johnny takes a hard look at OMT, studying it. “Hm, looks a bit flimsy- is it made of paper… cloth?”
>Tom stays silent, glares at Johnny the entire time
>”Doesn’t look too sturdy that one, but the trumpet looks like it’s worth its weight in brass. I’m guessing that’s the key. Seems a little simple to whack someone with it but I wouldn’t hold it against you. If that’s you’re only line of defense you’re shit out of luck. There’s gotta be another way to use the trumpet, do you play it? With such a flimsy looking guy I bet it makes up for it with technique. The range doesn’t look too great either, does the trumpet shoot something? Maybe that’s its main attack--- shooting music like a fist? Strong close up but pretty weak far away… I wonder if there’s a way you can close the distance…”

>>86105340
>Tom takes a look at 「MONKEY BUSINESS」and tries to do the same as Johnny’s judgement. “It’s big dumb and purple, looks just like a look you’d go for.”
>”Don’t be sly cat- you know I’m right about your stand, believe it or not you’re not so high and mighty.” Tom raises an eye brow to this observation
>”I could run circles around you geezer!” Tom’s voice raises.
>”Is running all you can do?”
>”LOOK WHOSE TALKING!”
>Silence looms in the air again. The waitress finally returns with drinks, Johnny’s Mule and Tom’s skinny glass of milk.
>”Another act of puffs miss.” Tom breaks the silence and the waitress walks away.
>”… mom’s favorite.” Tom says, grasping his milk bringing it closer to his mug.
>”I didn’t forget kiddo.”
>Tom takes a spinach puff and chows down on it. His face makes a slight grimace, but eventually swallows. “Nothing like Kronk’s…”
>”How are they?” Johnny asks
>”They’re fine, mom’s got nine lives but it looks like she’s at the end of her last… she’s just had it really tough, and Kronk’s still there to support us.
>”I meant the spinach puffs.”
>”No, you didn’t.”
>Johnny looks silently into his tea. He takes a look at the mule and then back to Tom. “huh… ya got me.”

>>86105386
>Tom takes a sip of milk and looks around at the diner décor, a record hanging off the far wall catches his eye.
>”Hey- Tito Puente… (this could be Tito in his Simpsons appearance) I remember that old cat from that record you got me once. Not too jazzy, but still some nice horn work. You said it reminded you of South of the border.
>”Sure does…” Johnny looks a bit down now, his reflection stirring in his hot tea
-Meanwhile, outside the diner-
>Ed stares deeply at three pigeons peck at garbage. Edd looks a bit uncomfortable, as he doesn’t believe the boy’s time will be a nice adventure. Eddy is still in his scam mode, and wants a sucker to bite his lure soon enough.
>”Excuse me sir, madam… miss… anybody! Oh come on who wants to see me jump over this tall guy with the birds!” Eddy yells at busy looking pedestrians. A bird is now on Ed’s head pecking at his few hairs, while Ed continues to stare at the pigeons.
>Edd blurts out at Eddy, a bit peeved off. “You know Eddy, last time you pulled this we were directly thrown into a battle with a stand user, and we very nearly were defeated!”
>”Oh my gosh!” “It’s him!” a crowd of people stampede towards the Ed boys
>”As finally, an audience, ladies and gent—“ the crowd rushes pass the boys and nearly knocks them off their feet. “Hey egg heads! The shows right over--- here…” Eddy turns to look towards the crowd
>A voice shouts over the cheers. “That’s right folks, the master of high kicks, short punches, tough muscles and soft love- the number one super guy HONG KONG PHOOEY- MARTIAL ARTS MASTER”

>>86105424
>The cheers grow to roars, the fans notice HKP from his recent movies and championship record.
>Ed gasps and then turns to Eddy- “Shoot! Is this the stand user Ratburn warned us about?”
>Eddy looks over to Hong Kong Phooey, who is not clearly visible in a gap in the crowd as his waltzes down the street, in a MENACING pose.
>”Oh nuts—BOYS!” Eddy yells, the trio then hops into formation and stare down HKP
>I was thinking of a panel resembling Dio and Jotaro walking down the street towards each other as the trio and HKP draw closer to each other.

>”Now looky here, if it ain’t the little cats I warned myself about…”
>Edd takes notice to HKP’s remarks and responds back with a bit of hesitation. “You’re just like Ratburn and the Afro freak…” Edd then turns to Eddy and whispers in his ear. “Let me close the gap, Hong Kong Phooey is famous enough that perhaps my 「THIS IS IT」can snap him back to his senses.”
>Eddy grins but does not respond to Edd. “Hey dog breath, wanna give me a moment of your time?”
>HKP grins back and scoffs “Oh no no no little short one- it’s you whose gonna be giving me something.” Eddy twitches and internally thinks “What! He didn’t fall for the scam?”
>”Now listen here boys, I’m ‘bout to throw a show for our nice little audience here, and you’re gonna be a part of it- as the stunt dummies I chop in half ya see?” The crowd cheers and begins to chant. “HONG KONG PHOOEY!”
>HKP suddenly turns around to an empty street corner. “Huh, how come no one’s over there… and how come I’m looking over there, and a wh—
>”DOGGY PILE!” Ed and Eddy jump towards Hong Kong Phooey, Ed had used Spoon to distract HKP and begin the attack
>”AAAANND ACTION!” HKP catches the boys in one hand each, and tosses them up as the crash into the ground
>The crowd loves this and cheers again.
>”Woah! Guys gotta nice arm.” Eddy looks up, rubbing his head. “And he has big ears Eddy!” Ed chimes in, quickly shooting up.

>”Haha! Thank you thank you, these boys can sure take a beating, especially the bigger one- I think I’ll knock em down a few pegs!”
>Edd assess the situation from a distance, and sees a creepy looking cat’s smile near HKP’s back. “His stand! It doesn’t look like it’s left his back when he attacked. It doesn’t look like it attacks directly, I’ve gotta find out what it does…
>Edd charges towards a trash can looking for supplies. HKP continues to pummel Ed like a punching bag while Eddy scurries away towards the crowd.
>”Trying to run there, small fry?… HIIII YA”
>HKP hops in the air and flies towards Eddy
>Eddy looks at an ogling onlooker. “Hey miss, give me a hand, and I’ll give you an autograph.” She lets out her hand as Eddy grabs on and hops up on top of her, avoiding HKP’s crashing chop.
>”Hey lady gimme some balance!” To which she unquestionably helps. She sturdies up and holds onto Eddy, who is now visibly taller than HKP.
>”You wouldn’t whack a fan would you dog chow?” HKP stares Eddy down as the crowd wonders what the next move will be. HKP hops up and attempts to round house kick Eddy. Eddy quick falls down to avoid the blow and yells at the women. “Hey lady, gimme the purse would ya.” The women shrugs and hands the purse to Eddy, who quickly hurries into the crowd out of HKP’s sight. He greedily shuffles through her purse and finds a wad of small cash which he pockets, he also finds something else that would help.
>The crowd moves out of the way and eventually blocks off HKP. The two are now face to face in the crowd of bystanders, who have circled around the two.
>HKP shouts in rage “You THEIF! You CRIMINAL! You won’t escape ME! HIIIIII YA!”

>>86105502
>HKP rushes towards Eddy at quick speed, ready to deal the final blow. Eddy quickly responds. “Hey Phooey, need some pepper on those eggs?”
>Eddy grabs a bottle of pepper spray he got out of the women’s purse. He sprays directly into HKP’s eyes which he cannot block quickly enough. The pepper spray burns HKP’s eyes as he yelps in pain
>”YEEEOUCCCH! You little devil” The crowd gasps and boos Eddy, who grins and scuttles off towards Edd and Ed. He quickly catches up to Edd who has a couple of trash components ready to use.
>”I got him off me for now Double D, but he’ll be back before long. I just can’t keep him down!” Eddy catches his breath in his explanation.
>”I think I’ve got a plan, Ed- draw him back here- I’ll be ready!”
HKP walks down the street rubbing his eyes, he stares down the boys who are now standing close together.
>You little rascals, your trick was effective, but just lucky! I’m Hong Kong Phooey- and simple tricks aren’t going to topple me!
>HKP rushes down the street towards the boys- he then accidentaly trips over seemingly nothing, and complete avoid projectile trap that shot out of the hole Ed left when he was originally slammed by HKP
>”It missed!” Edd yells, what did he trip over, he tripped before he hit the wire I set up!
>”Way to blow it sock head!”
>”Does his stand make him trip?” Ed asks Edd
>”I—I don’t know… tarnation! Is that what his stand does?” Edd yells to the boys
>”Makes him trip?” Eddy asks
>”No--- does it give him immense luck? Think about it, he’s already recovered from the pepper spray which should have blinded him for much longer, and he goofily avoided the trap! It has to be luck- Eddy… how can we beat luck?” Edd struggles to understand the full force of HKP’s power.
>Eddy gives a worried look to the charging HKP, “I don’t know Double D, but we gotta get out of the way NOW!”
>Eddy and Edd both try to run away but run towards and crash into each other. “Crap- his luck-“
“HIIIIII YAA!”

>>86105556
>HKP hops up and begins to drop a sick chop, ready to crush Eddy and Edd.
>「SPOON」!
>HKP takes his eyes off of the boys and directly onto Ed. “Oh, you want some too.”
>”Don’t hit my friends anymore doggy—“
>Ed is suddenly shocked with a quick kick to his big head. He goes flying down the street into a mailbox, the crash looks fatal.
>”That’s one egg cracked, now two more for a perfect omelet…” HKP turns towards the other Eds but sees that they’ve vanished.
-Back in the diner
>The next tray of spinach puffs drops to the table. Tom and Johnny don’t seem to notice.
>”So, how many other stand users are out there?” Tom asks in a mocking tone
>”Lots more, even I don’t know- but don’t get cocky. Some of these powers are pretty nightmarish.”
>Johnny pushes his mule he hasn’t touched since he ordered in, and places his elbows on the table, his hand on his eye lids, he looks somber, almost as if he were mourning.
>”I left to find them… to fight them… the 「People who talk to themselves」… Strickland gave me the skinny, told me these guys were some bad dudes, and had weird powers. It was me who discovered that they had stand presence. It was a swift kick below the belt let me tell you. I knew there were a few stands but they were always on my side, Nigel… even Milo…
>Johnny goes silent for a few seconds before letting out a sigh and continuing.
>”… your momma doesn’t stand a chance against them… I had to leave… I had to track them down without them knowing about you two, you’d have been sitting ducks…”
>Johnny begins his next sentence, sincerity riding on his every word
>”I’m s-“
>Suddenly, the same bell that rings catches the attention of the two, as Eddy and Edd rush in.
>”Tom! There’s a stand user! He’s practically invincible!” Eddy yells.

>>86105599
>Tom quickly gets up from the booth. “Sit here gramps, this aint shuffleboard.”
>Johnny quick bites back “You’re using jokes older than me kiddo, let me see if you can actually whoop a stand user or if it’s just beginner’s luck.”
>The gang out of the diner and into the street, where Hong Kong Phooey waits, smirking.
>”Even more chickens to chop? Sounds good for me!” Hong Kong Phooey takes up a martial arts stance as the crowd cheers and chants.
>Tom steps forward in a daring pose, as 「ONE MORE TIME」 appears behind him, trumpet at the ready.
>Hong Kong Phooey simply scoffs at Tom “Oh another 「STAND」 this is just priceless! I didn’t even have to use my stand to beat your friends before!”
>Edd turns to Tom and panics- “Tom you’ve gotta be careful, his stand… I think it has something to do with luck- it drops yours and raises his”
>”Luck, huh…” Tom pulls a quarter out of his pocket and stares down HKP. “Tails.” He filps the quarter up into the air and catches it. He then sets it on his opposite arm and asks HKP. “Am I right?”
>”It doesn’t matter if you’re right- you’re about to get knocked so far you’ll fly past the old country! HIII YA” HKP rushes towards Tom with his arm raised for a mighty chop.
>Tom lifts his hand as OMT blasts the quarter with a mighty guts that rockets towards HKP which he catches quite easily. “What on earth was that supposed to do? Are you paying me to spare your life?”
>”Not so shorty… I’m just saying that once that quarter drops, it’ll be tails.”
>HKP thinks hard about the quarter. “This has to be your attack! You’re just trying to trick me into dropping this! Is it a weapon? What did your stand do to it?
>HKP then fuddles his thoughts around for a moment… “Or am I supposed to keep it, as that’s part of your attack!?”

>>86105645
>Tom stares, not even blinking
>HKP’s stand creeps outward from behind HKP and stares directly at Tom, Tom notices and gives a slight grimace to the cat’s twisted grin
>”Never seen a cat that ugly, and I’ve been to the bad side of town.”
>Suddenly, the quarter comes flying back at Tom, who deflects it easily and knocks it away.
>Johnny complains aloud, “come on kid- you fell for that distraction?”
>Tom looks a bit embarrassed, and back to HKP
>”So that quarter was just a trick to distract me! I’ve told your friends, I DON’T FALL FOR TRICKS, HII YAAAA.”
>Tom readies OMT to pummel HKP. The two rush towards each other and being an ORAORA rush. The two seem evenly matched. Tom scurries back a bit to catch his breath, to which HKP mocks.
>”Do you need a breather? Need a hug from mommy? Did your friends tell you my stand is invincible? Because truly it is!
>Tom rushes and connect with a corner on the side of the street disappearing from sight.
>HKP crashes one of his chops into the side of the street, cracking it. This ruins the corner and Tom pops out of the corner taking some heavy damage.
>”Shit—not fast enough—“ HKP then directly strikes Tom in the gut. Tom spits up some blood and gets back into his stance. OMT flies forward trumpet in hand to pummel HKP, and the ora ora rush begins again. This time, Tom feels as if HKP’s stand has gotten a tad bit stronger. He loses his focus and takes a rough hit to the jaw, staggering him back.
>”Sit down boy.” Johnny explains to Tom. Double D then quickly realized. “Wait- you saw the stand both times didn’t you--- are you a—“
>”Get back and help your friend across the street… Sockhead, I’ll show you who I am.”

>>86105680
>Double D scurries towards Ed across the street, as Johnny moves in
>Johnny then stands between Tom and HKP, and surely 「MONKEY BUSINESS 」floats behind him.
>”Outta my way wise guy! You’re going down right after I’m done with him!”
>”Try it biscuit breathe!” Johnny mocks. HKP rushes towards Johnny and shows off some killer kung fu moves to try and psych Johnny out, to which Johnny doesn’t flinch. HKP then hops up and collides his killer chop to Johnny’s hair
>”HIIIIII YAAAAAAAAAA-“
>”Hands off rover.”
>HKP’s attack seems like it’s stopped- when suddenly he is forcefully blown back!
>That’s my 「MODE」baby- 「BOUNCE BACK」! Good to put it to use again, it’s been too long,
>HKP picks himself up and dusts his gi off. “Why you little!” He dives a kick into Johnny’s torso, which again is pushed back at him
>HKP looks shocked and asks- “h—HOW! How can you be deflecting my attacks!”
>Johnny gives a stern look behind his glasses and strikes his classic pose
>”Listen up mutt! I’ve got an ability that cancels out attacks! You may have a stand that can attack but you rely on your martial arts just too much! Your power isn’t physical, it’s all mental!”
>HKP looks shocked- “NN- NANI????” (or non weaboo if you care)
>”Am I right chump? You got so much tougher when the skinny one over there said you were invincible. When you smacked Tom he thought you were getting tougher. The tougher someone thinks you are, the tougher you are! It’s just a Stand trick, nothing but an illusion!
>HKP stares mouth agape… he then closes his mouth and stares at the ground and lets out a huge shout
>”LET ME HEAR YOU! HONG KONG PHOOEY!!”

>The crowd then chats louder and louder, as Hong Kong Phooey straightens himself up and gives a menacing look- “you fool- they’re on my side! And they’re buffing me up because they think I’m perfect! I’ll kill them all and you’ll be to blame grandpa! I’ll get away because I’m perfect. I AM PERFECT! I am! I AM! I AM LITERALLY PERFECT! I AM LITERALLY ME! AH HAHAHAHA HIIIIIIII YAAAAA”
>HKP charges towards the crowd with killing intent. Suddenly a chant begins to rattle around, it gets louder and louder until HKP stops in his tracks to notice.
>”Colossal Cool! COLOSSAL COOL! COLOSSAL COOL!”
>Hong Kong Phooey’s jaw drops again.
>”Hey, looks like the senoritas are my fans now… You girls can call it CoCo for short…” Johnny all the while exerts a fabulous pose
>The chants grow louder and louder and drive HKP insane… he is literally frozen in shock and doesn’t know what to do next. Johnny takes a brisk walk over and stands directly in front of him. “Now there chow head- wanna tell me who you are?
”I’m…. me….”
>”knew it… the 「People who talk to themselves」
>”Gimme a straight answer and I won’t knock you and whoever you’re supposed to be clear off the block”
>”I just told you…. I’m me. Lit---“
>HKP is then socked in the jaw by 「MONKEY BUSINESS」. Johnny then begins to pummel HKP clear into the air until he delivers one final snap, driving him straight into a dumpster, piling him in trash.
>”Down doggy.” Johnny walks over to the boys, noticing Edd tending to the wounds of the others with makeshift medical supplies.
>”Lemme tell you boys something. Everybody you meet from here on out is going to have a stand, and they’re gonna tell you it’s invincible. But I’ve taken down PERFECTION before, and I plan on doing so again. Get up and walk- we’re wasting time here.”
>Tom looks visibly pissed off as his drags along clutching his gut. He’s mad at Johnny for sticking his nose out and saving them, but he’s also relieved he did- not that he’d ever admit it anyways. 「TO BE CONTINUED」

I Should have proofread it a bit more but thats what happens when you're up for too long like I've been. Hope you enjoyed it-would love to see more old work embellished if we can find the time when nothing else is going on

>>86102382
Long before part 1 but after the pillarmen empire went into hibernation, which explains why none of these supermen were around when the mask or the pillarmen appeared.
And if we are making that fist of the borf star reference, that's another period in the timeline.

>>86105925
Nice work, anon. Don't worry, I spell check the docs once in a while.
I also realized that we didn't name the chapters until later on in the project, it usually was X vs Y.

>>86105925
I like it.

>>86106147
So are you going to add it to doc 3?

And bOrf star did use corpse parts when Garfindor was revived, so maybe there's a certain method to preserving a corpse to prevent certain events from happening again as long as the pieces are kept separate.

We really need to focus on getting part 6 "done" so we can move on to part 7 as it keeps getting brought up.

And I added it to doc 3.

Anyway
>>86104519

I've replied to >>86031306 too many times, but now there are some changes I want to make.

>Rex starts to explain Vento Aureo flashback style
>"Renard N. Swiper. A problem child who hated sharing. You had a knack for swiping, which meant you also had a knack for sneaking. You worked your way up the food chain to become a major player in a cartel. Eventually, you were approached by strange men cloaked in shadows. They said they could offer you more then you could ever dream of, and all you needed to do was one simple task: infiltrate Interpol."
>"But you weren't an idiot! You managed to convince Dr. Director to send you undercover, right back into your old cartel!"
>"Your luck didn't end there, oh no, then the WB fell, its assets set free like the autumn leaves. One of those assets was you, Swiper. All that information was right at your finger tips, you were the inside man with all the connections and no one to answer to, you took advantage of this to increase your rank in in both your old cartel and in Interpol."
>"You knew about the jawbreakers from your time with the WB, you knew exactly where they were being trafficked from. You buddied up to the person spearheading the whole operation, one Dora Márquez."
>Swiper is sweating bullets
>"Is anything I've said so far wrong?"
>Swiper, looking over his shoulder at the knife still in his back "N-no..."

still more to adapt, and of course I over looked >>86030167

>>86101964

Personally I want to figure out the problem of some future fights, like Snatcher, Giffany and Vicky since Dora has too many allies at this point and making fights where a huge group goes against 1 character has been a major issue in this project, especially in Part 4 from what I've seen. I remember there was a struggle to write fights like Ratigan and Glomgold because it involved too many characters, and in fights like those two or three characters had to job or being horribly clumsy so there could be a balance and the antagonist character could show a potential level of threat.

I was scribbling some notes about the fight of Dora's group vs. Snatcher, which will happen just after this Interpol bit, and I'm having problems in how to distribute the roles of everybody but Snatcher in this scenario, especially because it also involves Dethklok's group. So it will be like 10 characters vs. 1 single character, and from what I've read Snatcher's Stand may not be able to assault so many characters at once.

Cont.

>>86107709
>"Good, because the story doesn't end there. You weren't happy with the way things were. The money was pouring in, but you still wanted more."
>"So you began plotting. You were cautious, you dug through your old WB contacts and also your Interpol clearance to find a special facility built to house Stand users. A little paperwork and a few phone calls was all it took to set up a sting."
>"Now, Swiper, let's hear you say it, why don't you state for the record the name of your fellow WB deal maker? Might make this easier for you."
>Swiper is looking down now, he's shaking, "Wa..."
>Rex: "Speak up now."
>Swiper: "Wassanasong! Chane Wassanasong!"
Rex: "Chane Wassanasong, the current president of the Strickland Goodwill foundation. A man who mysteriously rose to the top about 6 years ago shortly after Mr. Hill passed. You blackmailed him with your knowledge of his literal deal with the Devil to send a famed jawbreaker smuggler to jail without so much as a hearing."
>"With Dora locked away and dozens of caches your disposal, you were poised to take his place in the sun."
>"Unfortunately for you, they don't just let anybody be an Interpol agent."
>Swiper: "How could you have known all that already?!"
>Rex: "Inspector Gadget told me all about it."
>Swiper: "Impossible!" looking over to Penny "There's no way she could've known!"
>Rex: "Wrong Gadget, scum bag."
>Swiper: "He's been dead for years!"
>Rex: "Yeah, what of it?"

And next I'll get into the post that talked about Gadget.

>>86108362
I think Snatcher is supposed to get his shit kicked in fairly easily, but Dora is suffering from a burn wound which slows her down a step and gives Snatcher more openings than Dora would've presented otherwise.

Also, only two members of Dethklok have stands: Toki and Murderface.

>>86108362

I know I want to Dora go to state of shock after Snatcher attacks her by going directly in her burning injuries, and Wall-E and Inch are automatically removed from the fight since Wall-E would be very vulnerable against Snatcher's Stand and Inch's Stand is not designed to a big fight. So that leaves Susie, Pericles and the Dethklok whose only established Stand user so far is Toki, whereas the other are just regular joes who would have no idea what the hell is going on and might be easy targets to Snatcher. But then there is the issue, how Snatcher will be able to attack consisting of 7 characters. I know Murderface was supposed to be a Stand user in the old script, but reading it says it is not very useful against long fights. Still, the big group is pretty large at this point and therefore I don't see how Snatcher can't show any threat to anyone here, he might as well turn just another joke villain.

>>86108547
Inch is still out of it up until probably the Vicky fight at the earliest. Up until that point [Sunday Clothes] is busy attending to him.

Snatcher should flee when they first encounter him and comes back with reinforcements. He should be able to get all kinds of backup inside PI.

>>86108442
>>86108547

That is another concern I've been having with the future fights in Part 6. The antagonists are very likely to become jobbers because anyone can be crushed by a massive group of Stand users, except maybe Vicky who is established to be the Lowly counterpart of this arc.

In Jojo the group fights are usually done involving just 2 or 3 characters because it looked easier to the enemy corner them, except in cases like Death 13, Green Day/Oasis and Grateful Dead/Beach Boy because their Stands were dangerous enough to assault such a big group. I like the suggestion of this anon here >>86037805 saying they should be separated at some point so the level of threat is still out there.

Mind you I'm just an anon who likes checking this project every now and then and I try to contribute with it as much as I can, but I still feel like I should point what could be future problems in the writing, since some issues there are kind of similar of what happened in Part 4 when it came to write group fights.

>>86108610

>Snatcher should flee when they first encounter him and comes back with reinforcements. He should be able to get all kinds of backup inside PI.

Snatcher having one more character to assist him should be enough. They could stay hiding somewhere as their Stands assault Dora and her allies, and the conflict should be the main group locating them and stopping them before Snatcher and his partner are successful in killing them all.

Fuck me, firefox crashed while doing this and I had to do it all over again. It doesn't feel as good as it was the first time.
>>86108404
>>86031452
>Narration Boxes over an image of Gadget: Inspector John Gadget, Interpol agent, status: Deceased
>We see the blast that killed him in part 4
>Narration Boxes: A man who always looked out for the well being of those around him, who always put the common good above his own safety
>As his soul is going up to heaven dark hands grab him and start putting him back down
>Narration boxes: The Deadman's Party wasn't about to let him get dragged to hell without a fight
>We see Beetlejuice leading the ghosts of Johnny Bravo, Milo, and whoever else as they break those arms turned into black chains and take Gadget with them
>Narration Boxes: John Gadget, deceased, member of the Deadman's Party
>We see him with an entourage of ghosts of dead characters from previous parts
>Narration boxes: Inspector Gadget always kept a Go Go Gadget Ear out for anything that sounded too suspicious, and he wasn't so naive as to believe Strickland or Interpol was free from corruption. With his new role in the afterlife, he was in a unique position to begin investigating. Gadget uncovered the identities of hundreds of individuals who made deals with the Red Guy in a short span of time. With the fall of the WB, Gadget finally had his chance at the Red Guy's trial.
>We see a flashback of Gadget's ghost talking with Rex and Morocco Mole

>Scene changes back to the present
>Rex let's out sigh and looks at the sky "He might not be any good in the courts of the living, but what he had to say has sure saved the skin of our asses more times then I care to count."

>>86109166
I agree. PI is so insane it would be easy to split people up, I'd rather go ahead and do it than scramble over how to keep shit interesting.

>>86109552
>”Now, answer the question, Swiper. Is any of this untrue?"
>Swiper is looking down and very clearly in pain, he's been caught, he's been caught in a way he never expected. Ghosts? Come on! But it was all true.
>"It's true, all of it. Every last stinkin' word."
>Rex: "That's all I needed to hear."
>The knife in Swiper's back disappears, there's not even a wound or any sign of damage
>Penny is staring into the distance "Looks like our real target is approaching now."
>Swiper: "What?" as he catches a glimpse in that direction "Oh no, not her, not this shit again!" he's struggling now in the chair, "I'm not getting sent to the same hole I sent Dora to!"
>Swiper gets tapped on the head by [TECHNOLOGIC], knocking him out as Penny and Rex drag him out of sight and watch the bus' approach

Now we're finally to that fight, the fight of Penny and Rex VS the Frizz and whoever is with her.

Had a Stand idea I just had to get out before bed.

>User: Anonymous
>Stand: 「HEARTBREAK HOTEL」
>Appearance: Pepe's appearance is already taken, so beats me
>Ability: Whenever Anon is in a room, 「HEARTBREAK HOTEL」bounds itself to that single room. Within that room, the 「gravitational pull」will increase depending on the level of depression and/or frustration the user feels. This only increases gravity, so when Anon is feeling joy (i.e. never) the pull of gravity is normal. But when he starts to feel more and more anxiety, gravity becomes stronger in the room he is in. Anon himself is not effected by this gravity change, but since he's a worthless piece of shit, he never leaves his room and lets the gravity take care of any fucking normies.


Destructive Power: B
Speed: E
Range: D
Durability: E
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: A

>>86110293
very niceu

This is where we are right now in part 6

>Frizz arries. Penny and Rex begin fighting her since she’s their real target.

>Frizz could retreat leaving her forces there, but Penny could get on the bus before she's able to escape. Penny didn't know that there are two stands in play with the bus though: the one that moves things out of the way and the one that forces people to follow rules when on the bus leading to her capture, or fake capture since she could break free at any time using her power to disassemble things.

>Her plan all along could've been to get caught so she could infiltrate the jail.

>Wassanasong arrives at the prison accompanied by even more Mechanismos (Dredd hates this), he should have a meeting with Mirage and excuses himself before Penny is brought in.

>The Warden decides to have words with Penny, who gets him monologuing, and he explains his plan to use the stand jawbreakers to beef up his stand, then spread it all across the whole wide world.

>>86110341
I mostly just retooled what you came up with near the top of the thread. It's in better order on the doc.

Hopefully we can get moving again now.

Well, here's a bump before bed.

Maybe someone will keep the thread from dying in the night.

>>86088965
Who are these thugs? Is it that one duck from Endtown, and that imaginary monster from Dexter's Lab?

>>86111675
>not knowing Ludwig Von Drake
Look him up, shit's gold.

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Here's a thing for the thing that we're not supposed to be working on.
>Name: Freddy Freeman/Captain Marvel Jr
>Stand: [VIVA LAS VEGAS]
>Appearance: A neon outline of the wizard Shazam, with a roulette wheel embedded in its chest
>Ability: If [VIVA LAS VEGAS] knows a person's name (either their birthname or the name they go by), it can take control of them by speaking it. As a second ability, [VIVA LAS VEGAS] allows Freddy to assume his "Captain Marvel Jr." form; this form has no additional powers, but is permanantly at the age of a young adult.
>Role: One of the Corpse guardians. The only member of the original group of heroes that divided up the Hero's body to survive to the present day, thanks to his eternal youth. He'd presumably learn Jane and Jonah's names some time prior to him being revealed as a Corpse guardian, but be defeated because Driver 8 and Jane's other personalities don't come under his control.

He fits the identity theme, not only because he's assuming the [identity] of Captain Marvel Jr, but because of Elvis, whose costume was based on his, but is far better known (in other words, his [identity] was stolen). Hell, we could have him try to kill the heroes because Hex called him an Elvis impersonator.
(The power, incidentally, is derived from the fact that he can't say his own superhero name without losing his powers.)

>>86111675
The Stand is Puff the Magic Dragon, by the way.

>>86107709
Alright, i'll continue the spell checking later

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>>86028808
The gangsta spectre of defeat, has he been used yet?

>>86105196
>>86105340
>>86105386
This is pretty good stuff, man.

>>86112961
and done, though I have a question: who said "knew it… the 「People who talk to themselves」"?

>>86105705
>That’s my 「MODE」baby
「STYLE」.

Alright, so I was think about how to start the Frizzle fight. There has to be some way Frizzle knew about where they were. Could one of them have had a tracking devise on them? Or would there be another way she'd know of Penny and/or Swiper's location without introducing another Stand user?

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>>86110341
>User: Anon Y. Mouss
Maybe we can use the JUST meme, or the REALHOURS emoji, there's a ton to choose from. Though yea, either pepe or wojak would be the bestest choices. Can't we just have two Stands with similar designs?

>>86102719
>>86103678

Question, is the [STAND] described in these two posts a good idea or not?

>>86114642
She knew where they were because the Warden has the map showing him where all the caches are.

Penny found this location because Inch sent her a picture of the map.

Penny and Rex are at this location waiting for someone to show up.

Swiper being there was coincidental, but they interrogated him anyway to see if he was involved.

>>86114042
Johnny said that.

>>86115539
And I mean Frizzle didn't know they were there waiting for her to show up.

They knew someone would show up there, so they went there, checked to see if the jawbreakers were still there, then waited for the "terrorists" to show up.

Threads are sinking super fast right now apparently.

Here's the break down just to bump the thread and be absolutely sure we're all on the same page.

-The Warden obtained [GLORY ROAD] and it showed him where all the jawbreaker caches are located.
-Inch High took a picture of this.
-The Warden sent his forces out on a glob trotting jaunt to collect those caches
-Interpol attributes this collection as terrorism, but can't figure out the pattern since they don't know which former WB locations are caches sites
-Penny gets a transmission from Inch High with a picture of the map. By overlaying the locations on the map with the locations already attacked, they now know which locations are going to be targeted next
-Penny and Rex go to one of these untapped locations to set up an ambush for whoever is responsible for the attacks, they find Swiper there and since they already have dirt on him, decide to see if he's involved. Turns out he's not directly involved with it.
-Their real target shows up: the Frizz
-Sting operation is a go, Penny recognizes the bus driver and so now they know the Warden is behind the attacks, they confront her while the robots are raiding the vault

>>86114932
It feels a little too... literal. Like, it's purely "Benny Hill chase scene as a Stand".
See what Reviewfag has to say about it, I guess.

Question:
>Once the user decides on a destination, Get It Hot will steadily transform the user's surroundings to progress them on a path to their destination, for example, overpasses suddenly dropping down to let the user on or off, buildings sliding apart to create a shortcut right to another road, garage doors moving around to create a passage through houses, even roads stretching out across waterways to bypass them. Whatever transformations Get It Hot performs don't damage any of their surroundings and return to normal once the user passes through
>Get it Hot can come out of the bus’s interior to grab/hinder passengers
What exactly does the last sentence here mean? Does it, like, affect the surroundings while the bus isn't in motion, or does the bus grow arms, or...?

>>86117831
Well I think the bus grew arms in the cartoon at times.

What I've always been confused about is if Liz is meant to be the Frizz's stand or not.

I thought Liz was the stand and [Get it Hot] (which only activates when the Liz stand is inside a vehicle and the vehicle is moving) was an ability of its, then it has another ability that comes into effect for whoever is inside the vehicle.

It's pretty OP, but having the weakness that it can only activate its powers if the user is inside a vehicle evens it out.

>>86118029
I read it as "Get It Hot is bound to the bus, and Paradise City is a deployable sub-ability in the style of Sheer Heart Attack".

Anyway, I'm imagining the bus's arms as looking like arm-shaped video game model glitches emerging from the sides of the bus, so I hope that's canon.

>>86118139
OK, so [Get it Hot] is the name of the stand?

What it does it warp space around any moving vehicle the user is inside of so they always have a clear path.

It has a sub ability [Paradise City] where passengers are bound to the rules of the bus (or whatever the Frizz is driving) and can only move by answering questions.

Is that right?

We might need to add a bit more to >>86083604 then with the Frizz asking Dora questions and her refusing to say anything.

So if [Paradise City] is a sub-stand like [Sheer Heart Attack], what does the main stand look like?

>>86118139
>>86119675
Or like Epitaph and King Crimson. I have the feeling that the Stand is actually a punchghost that can bind itself to the bus since it says that 「Paradise City」 can "inhabit any vehicle she is in".

>>86119703
>Get it Hot can come out of the bus’s interior to grab/hinder passengers
I think [Get It Hot] would be the punchghost possesing the bus and [Paradise City] would just be the lizard.

Also, it's not like we can't change it or add things to the Stand if we need it. Maybe the actual Stand has a glitchy appearance to sync with what >>86118139 suggested. And >>86118029 's ideia is pretty good too.

>>86120379
Sounds good, since the bus changed its appearance in each episode, it could be a yellow humanoid with a pattern that changes each time it appears outside the bus.

Alright, let's tweak this to make it better understandable.

Mrs. Frizzle
>Stand name: 「Get It Hot」
>Appearance: The stand is bound to whatever vehicle the user is currently occupying causing it to take on semi-anthropomorphic qualities (eyes, mouth, etc.) without changing its basic shape.
>Ability: Once the user decides on a destination, [Get It Hot] will warp the user's surroundings into a direct path to their destination. For example, overpasses suddenly dropping down to let the user on or off, buildings sliding apart to create shortcuts to another road, garage doors moving around to create passageways through houses, even roads stretching out across waterways to bypass them. Whatever alterations [Get It Hot] makes to its surroundings do not damage them and they return to normal once the user passes through
>[Get it Hot] has a sub ability called 「Paradise City」 which takes the form of a small horned lizard. It is bound to the interior of the vehicle [Get it Hot] is merged with. [Paradise City] imposes restrictions on the movement of passengers within [Get it Hot] (for example, not being able to stand up, leave their seat, progress past another seat, ect) and these restrictions can only be bypassed by answering a trivia questions. Frizzle can change these restrictions freely, so multiple answers will need to be given to escape from [Paradise City]'s control.

Does that make more sense?

>>86110373
And after revealing his plan, Dredd confronts the Warden for the numerous times he broke the law. Warden doesn't give a fuck, which prompts Dredd to attack him, only to get curbstomped by Warden. Penny takes advantage of the conmotion to run away.

>>86121106
yeah, looks fine

>>86067568
Alternative idea: /co/rge /co/star Dredd turns against the law, and obtains the Remastered version of his previous Stand, [I FOUGHT THE LAW]. Additionally, his first name is revealed to be Rico.

>>86121106
Looks good, but more boiled down than the original.
I suggest that we don't completely replace the original, just add the new things.

>>86119703
>>86120379
How about it looks like the bus but glitched into a humanoid shape?
It doesn't have any form and can't touch anyone when not bound to a vehicle, so it just grabs people and pulls them into its interior (by "eating" them?).

>>86121958
/co/rge /co/estar is supposed to be a story made from rejected /co/co/ ideias, right? I have some ideias I find interesting but that wouldn't fit into canon /co/co/ for eing too stupid.

>The main villain must do something "villanous" or "evil" to be a true villain, so he decides to find a way to unleash an old evil on the world of /co/co/.
>He/She wishes to fight the legendary Stand [NEVER EVER] (which is the name of several books, thus keeping the theme that all stands here are from books) and completely unbanish the characters from the forbidden cartoons.

>The characters somehow leap into the real world, maybe through the internet.
>This makes them find out the truth about /co/co/ and why their universe was created.

>The characters leap into the world of B0rf.

I understand if none of this works out. Taffy was one of the Anons that were interested in writing /co/rge, right?

>>86122318
Yes, his form is basically what you get if you take out the bus from the magic school bus, which keeps the googly eyes, the weird car mouth, the overall cartoonish style and the constantly changing drawings/symbols on its surface. All of this while being yellow and glitch-looking, right?

>>86116906
Well, I did say it'd probably need a lot of tweaking. I was trying to make it something that didn't rip off of Jojo stands, and also fit into /co/co/. Don't think it'd get used by a main character though. Probably a supporting hero at best I think, if it gets used at all. I mean, it's got an offense attack with the machine gun, maybe it's fists too. I also like the clockwork stand idea too since well... Clockwork machines are kind of cool to me?

Hmm... keep the four armed clockwork robot thing, make it a hybrid between range with the machine gun and a punch-ghost, but lose the sax and the abilities I originally described, and it might be a more offensive stand.

Maybe call it [The Warrior] (Named for a song by Scandal, from the 80s), and it's main ability is that the user can wield certain objects like a weapon, and even attack with those objects like that weapon he or she wields it as?

For example, an iron poker could be used as a one handed sword such as a Rapier, a 2x4 plank as a two-handed sword, an electric guitar as a literal axe. a marshmallow gun as an actual gun, and maybe a large pipe as a bazooka. However, it can only be used as a weapon if the user is holding it in their hands, and the weapon used is limited by the user's imagination.

Maybe it's special move would be called [Shooting at the Walls of Heart Break (Bang! Bang!)] where the stand just goes all out on an opponent, firing the machine gun until it's out of ammo, summoning swords into all four hands for slicing, dicing and juliening, and finally just pummeling it into a fine paste.

... does this sound better?

hey what's 「DO THE BARTMAN」do

>>86122007
It mostly is the original, just with some re-phrasing to make it clearer what the stand is.

>>86121548
Yeah, but the Dredd VS Warden fight is after what we're currently working on.

>>86122743
I like this Stand, it looks like fun.

>>86114932
I agree that its weirdness actually works well for Part 7. Though it looks like an advanced set of Melody skills at first sight.

>>86123579
Lol, thanks.

And you're right, it may look like [MELODY] at first glance if the non-stand user who witnesses it is familiar with that style, or was in Part One. However, I also like the revamped version of [YAKKITY SAX] called [THE WARRIOR], so it may end up being two separate stands, but to siblings or something?

Either that, or it ends up with [YAKKITY SAX] somehow mutating into [THE WARRIOR] somehow.

Again, I don't think either one might end up getting used at all, and best case scenario is that at least one of them ends up being used by an ally of the Protag.

>>86122485
>He/She wishes to fight the legendary Stand [NEVER EVER] (which is the name of several books, thus keeping the theme that all stands here are from books) and completely unbanish the characters from the forbidden cartoons.
This one is pretty good.
We're not doing B0rf out of respect; nods are as far as we go. Real world jumping feels unnecessary, as the main plot is already "villain tries to fuse the timelines and make /co/rge canon". Plus I'm pretty sure the plan was for the characters to outright state the fact that their world is fictional at the end of part 8 anyway.

I noticed Cybersix is listed as another racer on the part 7 doc.

I'm also well aware that we're having trouble focusing on part 6 right now, but I still want to throw this idea out there before I forget.

What if she were another from the WB's atomic supermen line? Like she and a bunch of others were rescued from other WB facilities by the Loonatics between the ending of part 5 and the start of part 7?

She could be a tag along character to the main characters for the arc where they go to the Looniversity. For her, it'd be like finding some closure to her existence, but after that she drops back to being a background character as another competitor in the races.

>>86125167
Yeah, that could be neat.
>There's an entire town of atomic supermen who've set up a tourism industry based on visiting the Looniversity Canyon

>>86126201
Would have to be made up of characters who were either clones or "future decedents" from their series of origin.

When that /tg/ anon updates his thing, he should include atomic supermen in the next version.

So should Skarr be with the Frizz for this vault raid?

I'm thinking Penny and Rex didn't come alone and have reinforcements hiding somewhere.

>>86128383
>An army of guards/mechanismos pour inside the vault
>Frizz: "give up, child, you are surrounded"
>several interpol agents jump out of hiding around the vault
>Penny: "give up, old hag, you are the one surrounded"

I also had the silly idea that Skarr's Stand could affect the jawbreakers inside the vault, turning them into a makeshift Bad Company.

>>86128642
I was thinking Penny and Rex don't engage until after the Frizz's forces have already entered the vault, then they try to take out the bus before they can load it up.

This gets them into a fight with the Frizz and then the robots come back and the numbers game gets played before an all out brawl begins.

>>86130177
Threads are falling off the board just an hour after last bump right now.

>>86125167
Considering what her Stand can do, maybe she can be like Blackmore and act as an agent of Nobody sent to look into any trouble.

>>86131316
There was no stand suggested for her on doc 7, she was just listed under the racers section with nothing under her.

I imagine her stand would look like Data 7, the black panther the mind of her brother was placed within.

Puts her as having a similar stand as the one suggested for Navis since they'd both be big cats. Could lead to some interesting character interactions since we've been avoiding characters with similar stands (appearance wise) meeting.

>>86131988
There's one in the Stand doc
>Cybersix
>Stand:「ACROSS THE UNIVERSE」
Appearance: I was thinking something along the lines of this version of Starboy, but with lines around it that look like waves.
>Ability: Transforms objects, including the user or another person, into「waves」. These 「waves」are similar to sound or radio waves, but slightly visible depending on the density of the object. For example, the user could turn a tree into 「waves」 and direct them at someone, then when the 「waves」 have passed half way through the person, turn it back into a tree. Boom, Kakyoin on a stick. The user must be in direct contact with something to change it, and must be able to see where they are directing the waves to.
>Role: Either a Part 5 enemy/ally or a Part 7 character. I was thinking she'd be cool as a character that occasionally helped the heroes but wasn't necessarily on their side.

Marvel's Chameleon is also on the list, and his Stand is pretty cool.

>>86132355
Since my last post I kind of want to see a cat fight between Cybersix and Navis now.

And I mean two girls with big cat stands fighting for whatever reason.

But anyway, I think she'll really work in part 7 as an atomic superman who entered the race to find some answers, or maybe use the wishing star to make life better for the other atomic supermen.

The atomic supermen and the stand jawbreaker powered robots are looking like they're shaping up to be two minority groups in the setting struggling for equal rights. If we do it right it could come off as really cool (they'd show the kind of people really benefiting from President Nobody taking office and making the heroes question if Nobody is really a bad guy), but if we do it wrong it'll come off as super preachy and a real project killer at worst.

Pillarmen, Scopemen, cyborgs, atomic supermen, sapient jawbreaker powered robots, I love how we keep making a point to use these things rather than just shelving them after the part they were introduced in is over.

Hey guys, a /v/tard vandalized the /co/rge doc apparently. It was a little funny though.

>>86133419
and the stand doc, dunno what else

Thread keeps stinking like a rock.

I'm going to work on part 6 some more later, but first

>>86133329
It would be interesting if the atomic supermen took in the stand jawbreaker powered robots considering them kin of some sort since they all came from Farnsworth's research during his time at the WB.

They could have a city near the pit the Looniversity sunk into.

If on the the prizes for a leg of the race is a bag of stand jawbreakers, that could be a gift to them to win their trust.

>>86132355
>Appearance: I was thinking something along the lines of this version of Starboy, but with lines around it that look like waves.
wait, what's Starboy?

>>86135752
weren't the Stand wielding robots a project of Wernstrom?

I think we're being raided by either /a/ or /v/. Tell them to stop.

>>86137150
Right, they were.
Then Membrane improved on the designs.

They'd still take them in as kin for being another byproduct of the WB's dickery.

>>86137272
Just ignore them then.

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>>86137150
This guy. But like >>86133329 suggested it could be a big cat if she ends up keeping the Stand. I just suggested the Stand for her because I thought it'd look cool.

>>86137450
>ignoring vandals
Wow, It's no wonder /co/ could never finish a project.

>>86110293
>The mountains part and close while the rocks form a road stretching straight to the vault
>Penny and Rex have taken cover behind some large boulders
>A very familiar looking yellow bus pulls up to the vault, phase 2 Strickland issued mechanismos pour out and enter the vault
>Penny and Rex are observing from a distance using fancy binoculars, they zoom in on the bus
>Penny: "No doubt, that's Valerie Felicity Frizzle, a.k.a. The Frizz, the main bus operator for Belle Reve."
>Rex: "And I count at least two dozen robots issued to the prison with her. Looks like the Warden is the man behind these attacks."
>Penny: "So we have the who, now we need the why."
>There's the sound of rocks falling behind them, Penny and Rex turn to see Swiper still trying to crawl away up the mountain side
>The mechanismos guarding the bus all turn and two advance in their direction
>Rex shoots Swiper a glare before turning his attention to the advancing robots
>As they are about to be discovered, Penny summons [TECHNOLOGIC] and has it pummel one of the robots from both sides, quickly reducing it to a pile of parts
>Penny then throws a device that latches onto the other robot, shorting it out
>The other mechanismos guarding the bus begin firing in their direction while the rest come running out of the vault
>Penny and Rex have already ducked around the building to find cover
>Frizz, from a megaphone from on top of the bus: "Give up kiddies, you're surrounded!"
>Several Interpol agents (Providence Soldiers from Generator Rex make for a good mook army) jump out of hiding around the surrounding landscape
>Penny: "Give up old hag, you're the one surrounded."
>The Frizz grits her teeth and the bus does a backfire as she drive it straight at the vault, a tunnel forms through it forcing Penny and Rex to dodge the bus as it emerges through the other side
cont.

>>86138372
>The Interpol forces have already begun shooting down into the mechanismos as the Frizz continues straight to the mountain side
>Penny: "You're not getting away that easy!" as she pulls a grappling hook out and fires it at the bus, hooking its rear bumper. As the line is quickly loses slack "Rex, make sure HQ hears about all this, I gotta go deal with my previous assignment!"
Rex: "God speed."
>The line is now taught and Penny is off, she uses her stand to quickly pull herself to the bus and avoid being bumped on the ground

And that's what I have so far. I figure the real Penny VS Frizz fight will be her getting on board the bus and then discovering [Paradise City].

I'd like some input before continuing though, which I probably won't be doing tonight since it's late now.

>>86137644
Google docs are easily restored anon. This has happened a dozen times before and will probably happen even more by the time we're done.

>>86137644
The docs are so easy to fix eventually they get bored and stop. It's not really worth causing drama over, I think part of why we've lasted this long is because we usually stick to our little autism bubble.

>>86139117
But one point or another you're gonna snap.

>>86139211
We've been here this long Johnny. I don't think vandalism will deter us. We've put too much time and effort into this project already. It's probably /co/'s longest lasting project so far. It's almost been a year since this started, hasn't it?

>>86139211
Anon, we are working on a project filled with the weirdest, dumbest, coolest, stupidest shit we can come up with.

We've been at this since February (I think). We snapped long ago and just kept going.

Well here's a bump before bed.

Looks like the current drop off time is about 3 hours.

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The day bump. Live, /co/co/.

Now. here's another character.

Stand Name: [BLACK SUITS COMIN']
Stand Master: Mr T(Mister T cartoon)
Appearance: An outline of Mr T's clothes that follows him.
Ability: [BLACK SUITS COMIN'] gains power while doing nothing. When the user starts doing something, the stand immediatly separates itself from Mr T, generating a certain number of Mr T's clothes, that are essentially invisible clones of him. Albeit, to attack or do anything the clones use up their [CLOTHES]. The more Action-y rhings they are doing, the less they are used. For an example, doing household chores wastes the clones pretty fast, but fighting increases the time by a substantial amount. When Mr T stops for more than 30 seconds, the clones immediatly disappear and the outline returns back to Mr T.

Role: Part 8. Pretty sure he can be integrated into Scope Men.

Does Chane need the Frizz to reach the prison?

>>86139296
>We've been here this long Johnny
I miss Johnnyfag

I'm going to fix the Stand doc, rearrage it and add the new stands there since no one ever does this.

Do you guys use the Stand doc from time to time? Also, what happened to the [NEVER EVER] Stand description?

>>86143827
>since no one ever does this
Lies! I updated it after the last thread, though I can't access the rollback function.

>>86143827
I've done s bit on Part 1 seeing as the cunt that raided us only did the changes because "Haha, cum, niggers and fuck is so funny XDDDD"

>>86143886
>"Haha, cum, niggers and fuck is so funny XDDDD"
Remind me again, Is still summer in the northern hemisphere?

>>86143912
Yes I think it is. Also think this was from /v/. Not even the people who fucked us over from /a/ were THIS uncivilised.

>>86143849
Aw man, violations might become very problematic without that function. Also, good job.

>>86143958
>Implying

>>86143958
What the fuck /v/ has against us?

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In what section of the Stand docs should I put Stands like this?

Shen (Owlturd.com artist)

Stand name: [BRING ME TO LIFE]

Appearance: Silhouette hands coming from the user’s head.

Abilities:

[WAKE ME UP INSIDE]: The Stand can personify abstract concepts by having its hands pull a cutesy [personification] of the virtual object. It can be used to interact with personified versions of a computer’s software or of something as abstract as the user’s own luck. This can be used to attain handy information or manipulate the personifications into doing something you want. The user can only pull one personification like this at a time.
[SAVE ME]: The user can pull multiple [personifications] from its own mind faculties to help him, more or less three personifications like this can be summoned. These personifications have the atributes they represent powered up. Shen has some recurring personifications that he uses as minions/helpers:

[SAVE ME] EMOTION: Emotion is a goal-oriented, intense and ironically unemotive ally that acts as the user’s first-in-command. Has a unbreakable will and is a ruthless fighter.
[SAVE ME] LOGIC: Logic is a intelligent, technical and ironically very excitable ally that acts as the user’s second-in-comand. Can create weapons out of anything.
[SAVE ME] ANXIETY, SADNESS, ANGER: These guys act as common minions that occasionally appear to aid Emotion and Logic in fights. They don’t last long when summoned.
[SAVE ME] APATHY: This is Shen’s special weapon, it uses up all the user’s focus. Apathy is a gigantic grey monster with immense strength, but it is remarkably slow. (Maybe he tries to use it in the protags, but then realizes Apathy is too slow to do anything at all and is defeated because of this)

Role: He represents your average tumblr artist. Shen in /Co/Co/ is a somewhat depressed, apathic everyman that is known for wasting a lot of time mumbbling to himself or to his Stand. Might be used as a minion of Ethan in part8.

>>86144279
>>Implying
Seriously, even when Inspector Redwood was pelting the project with tomatoes he had the decency to use proper grammar.

>>86144291
Because they are? Have you been to /v/? Never has there been a more wretched hive of scum and villainy.

>>86144291
No idea, either way I fixed it.

Having an account with google is really useful for this sort of thing.

Do I put the Stands suggestions for parts 6, 7 and 8 on the doc of its respective part or do they go in the Stand suggestions Docs?

>>86145173
You post them in the threads for review.

Stands should be added to the stand doc after they are reviewed and approved.

Stands don't get added to the parts docs until they are confirmed as being used in that part.

>>86143593
Gameboy could've escorted him to the prison.

It'd make sense since Gameboy's role becomes protecting him.

There we go, all the docs are now fixed.

>>86056228
Reworked this a bit for the scene with Mirage:
>Chane: “The Warden showed me a perfect world, a world of [Pure Imagination]. Did you think all this was just to incarcerate these so-called Stand users? Don’t be silly, this was nothing but a stepping stone in the way to make that world a reality. It was my duty to help the Warden to achieve his vision: only the [Mighty] are [Worthy] to rule the Perfect World, and I will stand next to him as a king of this New World…no, we will become more than kings…We will be Gods!”

>>86147608
OK, thanks.

>>86147924
Now how does Mirage react to this?

And I'm still waiting for some feedback >>86138432

>>86144479
Wait for Reviewfriend to give his take on it.

>>86147608
The Stand suggestion docs was already fixed though, I even added the new stands in the review section. Can't you change it back?

>>86148477
>Now how does Mirage react to this?
I'm waiting for the scene before Wassanasong's arrival to elaborate on the first part, but this comes next:

>Mirage stares at Chane, visibly disturbed: “Yeah…yeah, sure. Now get me outta here, God-King, I spent too many nights inside this cube”
>Chane looks at Mirage with a smug smile: “Oh, but why I should do that? You are no longer useful for my plans, little kitty”
>Mirage: “What!? Enough with this crap, Chane, you are starting to piss me off!”
>Chane: “You failed to retrieve the specimen under the prison and the one that was posing as a mere inmate! Well, at least you managed to stir things up a bit in this jail”
>Mirage: “Yes, just as we agreed; I caused mayhem inside this prison so you and that wacko running this blasted place could get even more control of it. I fulfilled my part of the deal, now fulfill yours”
>Chane: “Oh, really? I made a deal with you? Seems unlikely, hiring thugs and mercenaries sounds like something the OLD Strickland would do, not MY Foundation. Sorry, but there is no way I had made a deal with scum like you”
“You are dead meat!” She lunges towards the entrance of her cell, only to receive a jolt of electricity upon touching the bars; on the other side one of the mechanical bodyguards is shown grabbing the bars and passing electricity through them.
>Chane: “Now please, enjoy your stay in the prison. I heard that is gonna be a long time” He laughs as he walks away flanked by his improved Mechanismos.
>Back to Mirage's cell, She is on her knees staring furiously at the entrance of the cell with her Stand’s silhouette glowing behind her.

>>86149550
crap, meant to reply >>86148138

>>86149550
I'm slowly making my way there.

Later today I'll hopefully be able to work more on Penny's "capture" and then their attempt to incarcerate her.

>>86148477
Aww... just checked the stand doc and didn't see [YAKKITY SAX] or [THE WARRIOR].

Do I need to repost their info as an actual [STAND] profile before it gets added to the doc?

>>86150235
Once the thread goes over 400 replies standreviewfag will show up and start going over the new stand suggestions posted in the thread.

>>86150514
Ok, thanks. Still going to try and write up a profile for both of them so they'd be a bit better organized at least, ya know?

>>86149866
Alright, anyway here's what's before the "gods of the new world" speech, so the meeting itself is complete:

>Cut to an isolated cell somewhere in the prison, inside the cell is Mirage, who is using 「Desert Rose」 in a fruitless attempt to shatter the walls. She drops to her knees exhausted after a barrage of punches.
>Chane: “Is useless, these containment units were designed to withstand the punishment that an individual with freaky powers like you could dish out. They are based on designs liberated from the Warner Brothers’ Looniversity”
>Mirage raises her head to identify her visitor, her eyes widening upon realizing who he is. The president of the Strickland Foundation stands at the other side of the door, accompanied by a couple of heavily armed mechanismos.
>Mirage: “Mr. Wassanasong! I was getting worried that you never show up. Listen, the whole excavation… there was a person sealed in the bottom, He said it was a Scopeman, and the boss of the gang I infiltrated was a thing called Pillarman…”
>Chane: “Save your breath, deary, I already know that. I came here only to oversee the final phase of our plan”
>Mirage: “Final phase of our plan? What are you mumbling about? You are sounding weirder than usual”
then comes this >>86147924 and this >>86149550

If anyone is wondering about the mechanismos mentioned, I had the idea that Chane arrives to the prison with a group of next-gen mechanismos, they are either an actual new line of robots or just his praetorian guard.

>>86151191
>Chane arrives to the prison with a group of next-gen mechanismos
I planned to do that as well.

The "on the books" reason for his visit is to show off Strickland's new product.

I suppose these would be gen 3 PNs. There might've been some prototypes in the prison already (Dan destroyed one of them on his way up), but these are the finished versions.

Alright, here's a possible non-stand user.

>Name: Slappy Squirrel.
>[STAND]: She ain't got one, she's probably too old for all that posing and oraoraora-ing shenanigans!
>[STYLE]: Well, she may think she does, for the sake of a pun. :P
>[MODE]: None. She's probably as ornery as a Pillarman though.
>[MELODY]: COMEDY! And boy, does she know how to use it!
>Part: Dunno yet.
>Possible Role: A Master of [COMEDY MELODY] who is training her nephew, Skippy in the art of [MELODY] in attempt to keep the art alive after her brother, [SCREWY SQUIRREL] bit the dust somehow/got arrested/Started using [MELODY] for EVIL! or something and had to cause Skippy to go live with her. Either way, she's getting paid by the government to raise Skippy (Who she actually does care for) and probably also by the parents of other young Toons who want their kids to be able to have a way to defend themselves when they can't manifest [STANDS] on their own.

>User's Name: Don't know on this one yet.
>[THE WARRIOR] (Named for a song by Scandal back in the 80s.)
>A Fully Clockwork humanoid stand with six arms and two legs, and holding the following weapons: A sword, spear, axe, knife and Tommy Gun.
>Abilities: [The Warrior] allows its user to have the ability to use whatever object they put their hand on as a weapon they can use instinctually. If the object is not an actual weapon though, the user will end up using it as the closest type of weapon the object correlates to. For example, an [IRON POKER] can be used as a [ONE-HANDED SWORD] while an [ELECTRIC GUITAR] can be used as a literal axe. This ability is limited to the user's weapon knowledge, and imagination. So, if the user picks up something and doesn't know what kind of weapon they can equate it to, then the user won't be able to do squat with it.
>Stats:
Power: A
Speed: C
Durability: A
Range: E
Precision: A
Potential: A

Head's up, someone just defaced the everloving shit out of the part 3 doc.

>>86153737
Part 1 has it worse. Half of me wonders if they're doing it just to make sure we're paying attention.

>>86153533

And here's stand number 2.

>User's Name: Skippy Squirrel
>Other abilities: [COMEDY MELODY]

>Stand's name: [YAKKITY SAX] (named for the Benny Hill's Show end theme.)
>Takes the form of a half-clockwork, humanoid cyborg squirrel in a nice suit with four mechanical arms, and a bag tied to its waist. It also seems to have 5 power bars across the chest, and a will of its own since it can talk to Skippy and also show its own emotions.
>Ended up manifesting in an accident involving a nut log, a flaming banjo, an anvil, a kidnapper and a snooty art major's swimming pool filled with lime green jello lemmings.
>Abilities:
>[THE CHASE IS ON!] As Skippy starts running either as the pursuer or the pursued, [YAKKITY SAX] will pull out a Saxophone (or other instruments if it feels like it) from its bag and starts playing music whiel conjuring up a phantom audience. While this ability is active, Skippy and everyone involved in the chase not only run at a faster speed than normal, but also must keep the audience entertained by making them laugh and also keep moving in time to the music in order to fill up the power bars on the stand's chest. If the [AUDIENCE] gets bored though, they will start throwing things ranging from tomatoes, banana peels, tools to help Skippy and his allies (or their opponents if they catch on) and even nonsensical ones such as boulders, anvils, and very rarely the ghost of Slappy Squirrel in her hot rod from the "Little Old Lady of Pasadena" short. Whichever is funniest for the moment really. The effect lasts as long as Skippy can keep moving with the music, or until the kid ends up tripping over his own two feet/gets to wherever he's going. If no power bars are filled up when the chase is done and the opponent is still around, then [YAKKITY SAX] will just beat the crap out of an opponent with his fists and whatever hand-held instrument he was playing before.

>>86154040
>[MERRIE MELODIES] is what happens when at least one powerbar is filled up to max on [Yakkity Sax]'s chest. This will cause a random variety of gags, ranging from a pie in the face to a target slapped onto the opponent and letting a random heavy object fall on them or hell, even a present that lets loose a boxing glove attached to a spring hit an opponent. The number of bars filled up dictate the amount of power in the final result, with one being the weakest and five being the strongest.
>[HERE, LET ME HOLD ONTO THAT FOR YA PAL!] A secondary ability of [YAKKITY SAX] that lets him store things in his bag in the same condition they were in when placed in storage when he fishes them out. So, a bomb that was just lit when placed inside, will start burning down once removed, as an example. Skippy however, has his stand use this to store supplies like food, drinks, a tent and a sleeping bag. There is an unknown limit onto how much stuff [YAKKITY SAX] can hold.
>[YAKKITY SAX can also move on it's own up to 40 meters away from its user.
>Stats:
Power: B
Speed: A
Durability: A
Range: C
Precision: D
Potential: B

>>86153947
Yeah, I saw they seemed to replace everything in Part 1 with the Steven Universe theme song.

>>86154415
We really should just lock the parts 1 and 2 docs since they are done now.

Two less things we have to deal with reverting back after the vandals finally get bored and leave.

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>>86151652
>There might've been some prototypes in the prison already (Dan destroyed one of them on his way up)
The one that got turned into swiss cheese the shortly after appearing? that's a good foreshadowing.

I imagined one of the elite mechanismos like pic related: with tesla coils coming out of a backpack, a lightning weapon connected to it, and a Deadshot-like scope in one eye. Also, somewhere in its chasis, it has the Strickland logo with the blue flame replaced with an electric symbol.

>>86156012
Yeah, that one.

Man, when part 7 rolls around Bobby might be too busy getting Strickland back on the right path for the foundation to make anything more than a minor appearance in the part.

So the MK 3 PNs are STILL inferior to the original Propane Nightmares?

>>86156185
In part 7, Strickland could sponsor a racer in an attempt to regain some PR.

>So the MK 3 PNs are STILL inferior to the original Propane Nightmares?
I have the feeling that they could be getting closer to the original Propane Nightmares in combat terms, but their power source makes them unreliable.

>>86156369
So it's a less efficient source of power for the robots than pillar propane despite being able to outperform the MK 1s in small bursts.

I guess they sacrificed stamina for raw destructive power. Skarr being able to upgrade their weaponry makes them an actual formidable force around the endgame.

We should probably figure out how and where to introduce Skarr since him just showing up near the end with no foreshadowing or build up feels cheap to me.
He didn't really work with the vault raid with Frizzle.

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Idea for an /ñ/ stand user, probably gonna get shot down but given there's a thread still going I just thought of it that he could be at least a minor user that can be used somewhere:

>Name: Condorito
>Stand: [LOS PRISIONEROS]
>Appearance: A humanoid Stan with huge teeth and a dull expression (Based on Ungenio)
>Ability: If the target is meets in direct eye contact with [LOS PRISIONEROS], it messes with the friction and movement of the target, causing to enter a state known as [Plop!] where the target's feet become slippery and his/her body is thrown backwards by a mysterious force, causing him/her to fall.

Pic sorta related but not with that outfit. Just was the first thing i found with him + JoJo

>>86156550
>Condorito
Mi hombre de color chocolate

Funnily enough, Condorito was in the list of potential sons of Daffy.

>>86156550
Eyyyyy.
Bobby's Style is based on the same principle, though.

>>86156610
>>86156772

Well, I'm open hear ways to concepts for the stand as well as a good role. For the ones non /ñ/-saavy Los Prisioneros are a Chilean rock band.

>>86156809
I like it, and we could probably put him up against Bobby to have the two similar powers going against each other.
Also, he should be Pure Imagination's janitor. He never does any work, and the Warden doesn't even realise he exists.

>>86156958
He is usually depicted as poor so could see him as the Janitor. Probably not very happy about it and ends up quitting.

>>86156514

Skarr being associated with a member of the LHC (Hector) should cause a tension between him and Dredd, as Dredd wouldn't like the idea of someone that had connections with a well-known criminal working with the prison's weaponry.

Should have a moment where Skarr mocks Dredd for being the Warden's lapdog and personal punchbag, only to Dredd point out he is still being investigated for being friends with Hector Con Carne. Skarr then would have an inner freakout, yelling to himself how Hector never liked him and saw him as a friend. Like video related.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CX6PID8vOkY

Uh... looks like some bastard took out the part six doc...

Apparently the same guy who messed with the Stand doc earlier, and he seems to be confused about what /co/co/ is about.