Incest

sick shit

Writefag, any suggestions?

>>2403317
Hanzo skullfucking Genji until the latter passes out. Out of character is fine as long as Hanzo is power top material.

>>2403381
Ok, I have some stories queued up but keep an eye on my tumblr https://yaoiwriter.tumblr.com/

>>2403395
I got a good start on it, but I'm going to sleep now. I'll have it done tomorrow morning.

>>2403400
Fuck it, thought Id finish it tonight https://pastebin.com/xwduFCMV

>>2403315
O hey, we meet again. Haven't seen this for years. Legit 2007-09 material here.

>>2403480
>tfw remember that image being one of the first few high quality images i fapped too
I was too young to know anything other than "gay cartoon sex . com" but when i found that, goddamn my life forever changed

>>2403119
Damn, any chance you got more of dragonboysclub's works? They deleted everything off their tumblr and rule34 doesn't have all their old works.

>>2403404
Jfc that was awful lol

>>2403500
Ok, think you could give some tips then? It's pretty fucking hard to make anal sex unlike the millions of other stories just like ti but with different name.

>>2403860
To be fair... this isn't writing, necessarily. This is more sexting/RP format. This stuff can be awesomely hot, especially if it's in real time: thing is, though, that I think the thread was expecting stories. Narrative and the like. So I suggest going back to the drawing board - or, if you enjoy that sort of thing, finding people to RP with.

>>2403860
I, for one, agree with >>2404461
I've seen your stuff all over /y/ lately, and it reads like a script sorta. Some of it is pretty hot, but it gets a bit boring to read. Try changing up your writing style. Instead of :
Person1: Let me fuck ur hole
Person2: gets on knees
try more like
""A...anon" he moaned, getting close to the edge. The warm, supple tightness of the young hole swallowed his cock with ease.
"Do it" whispered Anon, "Cum inside your son""
It just reads better. I'm trying to give constructive criticism instead of just saying "kys fagot" because you have some really good ideas for stuff here, just executed in a poor way.

>>2404465
I've been told that and I've recently (As in like written 2 stories) switched to writing like you've recommended.

>>2404467
Oh, cool beans. Like I said, I've only seen your stories around, I don't read every one. I'll go find some.

>>2404467
Did you delete your tumblr??

>>2404471
Yeah, wasn't getting any requests so I thought I'd stick to here.