Own creation

And I must say that one image is inspired by Berserk from Yonekura Kengo

>>2332038
nice post OP, glad to see some OCs

holy shit if this is a ruff draft can't wait to see this completed!

not half bad
do go on

okay this shit is amazing, but like has anyone had that moment once your thinking about the porn and this is especially for yaoi or gay porn ...is this like the gayest part of england ever or like what cuz wouldn't you get like fucked up if you did this and i mean this in a gay way not the rape way as i understand from minimal history classes that shit was free game with chicks, AGAIN this is amazing and i would love for you to continue but it's fucking hilarious when your thinking about yaoi comics with logic of the time they are set in.

Keep it going! *GRIN*

The cousin coming along was a great twist.

Hope this turns into a soldier dominated orgy with the three commoners shamefully side-by-side as bitches!

Definitely a family secret and hot spot for the military!

How can they look at one another after this?!

Does it have a title yet?

ooo woah, this is great !
i really like the story, really hot
please continue it ! wanna see more !

>>2332038
Definitely stay! Your art is pretty good, could use some work on the faces desu but I would love to see more of it around here, or if you have a blog I'd be glad to follow you

+1 because of medieval armors. Doesn't get porn of that very often.

>>2336138
I agree, I'm still working on the faces. I hope I get them right in the near future

>>2332038
OP is doing well, but you need to keep working on your fundamentals for story telling and anatomy, etc. This doesn't look professional, even for a rough draft.

I posted the next few pages of my comic. Hope you like it!

fuck yes! thanks for the new pages , it's coming along great!

>>2332038
Oh, its so fucking awesome!
Yet on my personal mind, younger brother could be more boy-ish :)
But still awesome anyway.

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A+ work, lovin' it. The only thing is, though, from an artistic pov you're gonna want to put tons more work into general proportion and anatomy, but that's gonna take forever, so don't leave this work delayed, but don't forget to practice those elements very often, either. otherwise you're doing splendid! Yummy, anon!

Excellent continuance!

Hope you're not leaving the cousin out of it. He got a free knobjob and has to pay up. He's got an untapped young ass too.

A little blackmail will easily sway his simple mind.

3 soldiers + 3 peasant pigs + A secluded farmhouse = A nasty, demeaning, and spirit-breaking 6-man orgy.

really great work OP, its nice to see some OCs from /y/, hope you improve more

this is soooo cool! could you make a footjob page too?

OP you just keep drawing what YOU want in it. It's great as it is so far. You're vision is just fine.

More please !!
It is aweasome !

We CANNOT let this thread fade. The story was getting really intense!

Please tell me you're still here. Your work is great!

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Three more pages

HUZZAAAAAH!!!

this brings up a good question
should we have OC threads? are there even enough anons making OC?

3 horny big wang soldiers looking for any available hole - 3 fine strapping young peasants turned into cock pigs.

Put'em all together and we got ourselves an orgy.

Fuck 'dem sluts, men! Fuck'em!

>>2344835
Honestly, I don't think so. I mean you could start one and it may draw in some takers, which is always good, but that means you'd have to start it with 5 originals of your own.

We're just lucky OP decided to post this here.

We can only hope others do so. Love good original stuff.

>>2344843
honestly if there were these threads id be encouraged to do shit even more
assuming we can also get some c&c in there

>>2346640
Same here actually, and if I had more free time alone from the general public too.

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>>2344482
I hope you do not mind, if I will cum on this one, sir.
:3

>>2344481
I love the cousin's face and dialogue in this one, really great comic!
>>2344835
I agree on the OC thing. Starting threads like these could be good for getting feedback and trying to see what people want more of, especially since asking what people want on other sites gets you nothing.

>>2347145
>>2349068
id like this a lot actually, theres a lot you can do with it-comics, stories, prompts ect. the best place to ask about your pay shit is from gay shit readers
though thered be more discussion than porn, can /y/ even handle that?

>>2350181
Haha true, maybe just add in your thoughts with a "and here's a random picture since this is an image board"

>>2350182
worth a go i suppose
ill make one tonight or tomorrow, call it OC thread or some shit

9/10 i really like it m8

>>2350187
Looking forward to it! Sometimes I think about making an OC or feedback thread but I gotta stop worrying about trolls first lol

Not bad, not bad at all
There's a few word choice and layout issues, but this is a rough draft, so it's okey
I'd enjoy seeing more

>>2350483
ok, thread up
>>2352109
>>2352109
>>2352109

get to work, faggots

>>2344482
Holy shit I love where this going.

Is this still going?

>>2344835
Actually, I have some OC, but it's shotacon so 4chan will fuck me up if I post it.

>>2359765
Is it up anywhere else?

You could always zippyshare it all and link it in this thread.

http://www.zippyshare.com/

I so hope this OP is still here. I love his work.

Wish this guy had a gallery somewhere.

six more pages coming up

Needless to say: ALL characters are above the legal age of 18

SO HOT!

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oh god, so hot ! wanna see more !
please keep up the good work !

WHOA! This suddenly took a definite turn! 8D

Loving it! Loving it!!!

most of the pages are gone /:

>>2332038
can you or someone reupload all the pages?? i wanted to see it aaaall

bump!!

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anyone save the rest of the pages before the server shit itself?

Please sir, can we have some more?