Is it against the rules to post a nosleep story I just wrote

>>18450926
nah, you should post it. most people will tell you to fuck off because obligatory reddit hate though

>>18450926

Depends on how long you went

Fuck off and post it, in that order

>>18450990

kek

https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/5jw5dx/christmas_eve_part_1_1996/

>>18450990
Done and done ^

>>18450994
I would recommend trying to build suspense a bit more, make the reader wait for the spooky pay off. I mean at the end mostly I guess. It went from hanging out to being murdered in such a short time. There wasnt really enough time to be frightened. I personally dont find the subject of slasher killers scary or interesting either, it's too conventional.

I'd read all of the best stories posted on there, and ask yourself why they got voted the best. I think your main area for improvement would be pacing. Theres an area where nosleep faggots give each other advice, you should ask them

I didn't read your fucking story but whatever you do, keep it simple and not too long. A lot of these stories are good but people want to keep them going and going and have all of this major shit happen. Too much gets explained, suspension of disbelief is lost, etc. It ends up ruining lots of stories.

Thanks for the input guys. I do need to work on suspense I know that. I just go to impatient which sucks.

>>18450926
>Should I fuck off?
y

>>18450926

If you want a shot at non-retarded reviews /lit/ might be a better venue, but /x/ is fine for spoopy stories 'n shit.