I made a video

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;p lol is this color bars?

The only scary thing in this is that the aspect ratio keeps changing and you just let it.

>>18123623
Don't use cliches unless you know how to do them well. Color bars, static, tones, jump cuts; your use of all the them sucks.
The stumbling through the forest at night bit is decent, you're doing that properly (focused on the ground, no flailing).

3/10, mostly for effort. Keep trying, but stop imitating.

The problem with these kinds of things is that if you can't do anything original, and you can't do the unoriginal stuff better than the source you're copying from, then the existence of your video is superfluous.

Op here, thanks for the constructive criticism, sorry about ratios I barely know how to make videos, just learning

Also I know it's no die in 7 days kind of video, I was just going for a weird vibe really

Looks like you're copying Meatsleep. Try something original.