/x/ paranormal comic thread

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>>17461226
>The protagonist
>The protagonist of the series is a rebooted version of X tan. Pretty similar to regular X time but with a few artistic liberties taken.
In my notes I refer to her as X-tan Prime but I think I will leave the character nameless in the story. The protagonist is is basically just a person who narrates the stories and ties them together. Her job is to take pictures of the happening and archive them.Her true purpose will be revealed a little bit later in the story.
>The first Arc is short and takes place on a train. It is a sort of Mystery Train type deal because all the stories are based off of riddles and whatnot where there's maybe one or two things wrong with the story that the audience can figure out.

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>>17461232
>The second part takes place in a hotel of sorts and each of the guests in the hotel are Creatures from copypasta and survivors of copypasta stories. It will also include just random pictures of short stories that fit the tone of someone like in unoMorales or Itou Junji.
>Part 3 I plan on being a sort of road trip type story where the protagonist crisscrosses multiple countries looking for real monsters, Cryptids, and kaiju and what not.
This arc steps away from copy pasta like characters and leans more towards sort of like historical creatures ,old myths, and urban legends. What I like most about this party Saturday with a lot of different cultures I'm a sucker for urban legends and older stories past.The kind of stuff that has historical roots.

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>>17461236
>Four part four in the last thread it was recommended that I do an arc on the SCP Foundation. I think this could be pretty cool. I hadn't even considered something like this before. I had planned on doing I heard about aliens but I think I will just include aliens in with the SCP Foundation arc.
>For part five I'm not entirely sure on whether or not it will be the final arc but I do on plan on ending the series with a sort of Eldritch Horror / old gods type thing. That is unless it seems a little cliche. Not really sure how I was going to end it or what sort of thing would be in the final Arc but I feel like I should at least do a nod to the concept.

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The script:An excerpt from Part 1: A Wild Ride
w:Tha’s a nice camera you got there
x: I do photography .
w:Me too. I used to be a journalist but I quit. The job was too much for me.You see a lot of weird stuff on the job. I was doing a story on a murder in a hotel which was nothing too weird about it except that it was in the penthouse on the 13th floor. I was already a little superstitious but then I was really spooked when I found out that there was no footage of the Killers escape. It was like he vanished inside the place. I knew the circumstances were weird so I took my best photographer. Just to be sure I brought my own camera for two times the pictures. So me and my photographer went around observing and taking pictures of the scene. It was a large place and there wasn’t much to take pictures of so at one point we decided to split up.I took some pictures and was ready to leave but I couldn't find my camera. I met back up with my partner and we looked all over for my camera. It was a little creepy how it just disappeared like that and it's even weirder how we found it. We entered the master bedroom and for some reason something didn't feel right about the room. As we entered the room the air became very still. I heard some tapping and knocking and went to investigate in the direction of the noise. After a few steps in the dark there was a series of flashes all around us. Then it just stopped suddenly. Something flew between us and we decided to get out of there. As we were running out of the room I saw my camera lying on the floor. I picked it up and ran out of the penthouse.

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Yhat was spooky, but thats not even the weirdest part. The next day I went to get the pictures developed. As I was coming home I went through the pictures and found something very disturbing. I stopped immediately and went to go see my partner.When we met I showed him the stack of photos. As he was going through them he stopped on the same picture I did. On the 13th photo was a picture of us when we were in the master bedroom. One of the flashes that were in the room when we had entered was caught in the picture. The creepiest part was that the flash looked like a face to me. I told my partner that it looked like a ghost. At first he didn't agree but after going through the pictures again he froze up. He asked me if these pictures are real or edited and I told them these were the original pictures that the two of us had taken that day. I don’t know what happened to him after that but I guess he was so spooked by the ghost in the picture that he quit the same day. The event spooked me at first but now I’ve gained interest in creepy stuff. I'm trying to find more creepy hotels to photograph. Here’s the picture that got me interested.
x: It's kind of weird how this photo was taken
w:What do you mean? The angle of the shot?

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>A lot of the Mystery Train stories are like this but a little bit shorter and most of them are simpler.There a lot easier to figure out when there's a picture to go along with it. It really helps that I'm doing this in comic book like format.

Currently finishing the draft for this chapter. If any suggestions or critique I'm open to all ideas.

/x/trordinary

>>17461373
thanks

>>17461373
/x/actly what I needed

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Story 2
Apartment in the Sky
I had to move I moved out because of the bad memories. That and I just didn't like the atmosphere of the place. I’ve lived on the 3rd floor of my place since I was six. My parents and I lived in an apartment on that floor. Never really liked that place by I was stuck there. Despite all the bad memories for some reason I couldn't see myself leaving. it was almost like I was tethered there and it was the only place I knew. Even after my parents were gone I never left. I didn't live in the same apartment but I did live on the same floor. But recently this last experience really changed what I knew about this place. The room was small and empty from the time I moved into town I moved out. In that one room I had a bed against the wall with the door leading outside by the head on the next wall that was a window right beside my bed.exactly opposite of that window was a mirror and on that same wall a few feet away was the bathroom door. I slept there in the smaller room every night with no troubles.

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>>17461432
>currently posting rough drafts
But one day not too long go over to wake at 3:33 every night here and every night at that time I would hear three knocks and three Taps on glass. This would go on Until 3:36 and it would stop. After she assumed it was just the room settling but one night I saw something absolutely terrifying.

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I glanced over at the mirror that was parallel to my window and there was a person standing in the reflection tapping on the glass I would just sit there eyes wide open looking in the mirror until 3:36. And the person would walk away and and then knocking with stop for the night. This doesn't seem so creepy but what kept me up was the fact that I lived on the third floor . >>17461440

Truly/x/scruciating

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>>17461447
After many nights of this person appearing in the window I decided to do something risky to make it stop. I went to bed like I normally do but before I went to bed I left the window open. I assumed if the window was up there would be nothing to knock on meaning no tapping.

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>>17461454
I was having a peaceful sleep until 3:33 crept around and I heard the knocks. I wasn’t sure if I was upset but I quickly turned over in my bed to finally face this pesterance. Despite my prior courage I sat there frozen in fear and confusion. I looked at the window and it was wide open. There was glass on the window and yet the sound persisted.

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>>17461463
Enveloped in fear, I jumped out of bed and sat on the opposite side of the room. The strangest part is that the nocking and the tapping seemed closer on that side of the room. For the rest of the night I sat there looking at the empty window.

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The tapping and knocking did not stop til 7:06 the next morning. The knocking stopped and I got up to leave the apartment. As i was approaching the door I caught a glimpse of the mirror. I looked over and there it was in the reflection.

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I turned quickly to see if the monster was still in the window but they were gone. To this day I will never understand how they were able to tap and knock without the glass of the window.
>before each chapter I plan on leading with a teaser image that is usually just a panel form the chapter but with an edit of some sorts. For example I was gonna plan to have the caption "Hey is Mikey Home, wanted to know if he could come play baseball with the gang?" Something cheesy to keep the mood a little cheerful.

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roughs to go a long with first story

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>>17461590
skipped a few pics

ITT: edward gorey draws he-man

>>17462136
Thanks now I have another artist to stea-I mean be inspired by.

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>dumping more roughs
Chilly White Knight
Talk about creeps. If it weren’t for that mirror you wouldn’t even have known what was going on. Glad youre safe.I moved for simpler reasons. I used to stay in a hotel and
my place was small, dangerous, and cramped. I hate crowded places. On my last day there the place was picked. It was in the middle of summer and there were a lot of power outages so people were checking into hotels and moving into apartment with more reliable and stable power. People were losing it, but a guy like me knows how to keep his cool.One night at the hotel I decided to go downstairs to get some ice to cool off. As I was getting to elevator I realised it was jam packed full of people. It was awful.

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>>17461595
I was pretty sure they were near the 8 person limit. I would’ve taken he stairs but by the time I would've gotten up the stairs my ice would’ve melted. As i was about to get into the elevator a cute girl in a white dress hopped on.She looked at me and gave me a strange smile and I respectfully responded with a smile cause she was really cute.

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After she got on I followed and then the max people buzzer went off and the doors didn’t close. I decided to count the people on the elevator. I saw an old man who was at that age of vulnerability to where even the slightest trauma would put him out, a woman and her husband who marriage appeared to be held together by a thread,a couple in a loving embrace so tight that there were few bonds as tightly woven,

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>>17464138
, a businessman who looked he'd be well of even if the economy came crashing down on him.,a repairman who looked like he caused more problems than he fixed ,and old woman who seemed frail and near the end, but seemed to appreciate the long ride that was her life and finally the pale girl making nine people.

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>>17464142
The buzzer was getting annoying and the elevator wouldn't move. I knew the max was eight people so I decided to do the gentleman like thing and subtract myself from nine. As I was about to get off I looked over at the cute girl and suddenly I got chills and a tingle going up my spine. I guess I was holding the bag of ice to long. I hopped off the elevator and just as I was doing so the elevator doors began to close like they normally do.

>>17461240
>For part five I'm not entirely sure on whether or not it will be the final arc but I do on plan on ending the series with a sort of Eldritch Horror / old gods type thing. That is unless it seems a little cliche. Not really sure how I was going to end it or what sort of thing would be in the final Arc but I feel like I should at least do a nod to the concept.

It would be less cliche if there were some sort of twist to it. Say, a mindbreaking Eldritch Abomination fails to make one person go nuts because they are a Zen master who can make their mind totally blank or something like that. Little, unexpected things, stuff that goes against type.

>>17461260
>I don’t know what happened to him after that but I guess he was so spooked by the ghost in the picture that he quit the same day.

It would be interesting if he shows up again later in the comic.

>>17461483
>before each chapter I plan on leading with a teaser image that is usually just a panel form the chapter but with an edit of some sorts. For example I was gonna plan to have the caption "Hey is Mikey Home, wanted to know if he could come play baseball with the gang?" Something cheesy to keep the mood a little cheerful.

Not a bad idea.

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>>17461226
He looks fab

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I gave one last look back at the elevator in hopes of seeing the girl and as soon as I did he power suddenly went out. I then heard a knocking and scraping noise come from in front of me and then the power came back on. I looked in the elevator but the pale girl was nowhere to be found. I figured she got tired of waiting and took the steps. I raced up the stairs to see If I could catch up to her, but she was nowhere to be found. I decided to give up and call it a night. As I got to my floor I heard a tapping noise, a long low screech and a big crash.

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>>17464147
The character in the second story will be present for the rest of the series, but as a overseer of what goes on in this crazy universe.
In reference to the Eldritch horrors and what not I'm not sure what I'm gonna do for that part. Each arc is comprised of a bunch of random stories, but I don't really know how to do a story on that without each one resulting in world ending type stuff. Maybe different perspectives of the end times.
btw here's an example of a teaser. It's a little sloppy but I'll fix up the stuff in the final drafts.
>>17464148
Thanks.

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I didn’t think much of it but I decided to return to the lobby to investigate. When I came into the lobby a huge crowd of people had formed around the elevator. The elevator broke and fell all the way to the ground floor killing all of the people inside. I watched as they pulled the bodies out of the shaft. I saw the poor misshapen old man, the woman and her husband who wanted to be far from each other and yet died right next to each other, the couple still locked in each other's arms. I couldn’t take anymore of it. I guess I lost my cool. I didn’t stick around to see the rest, but I was told they took out all eight bodies. I guess that girl never got off. It’s a shame that eight people had to die that night.

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>>17464150
Not really that original...

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>>17464172

>>17464172
In the old thread I was stating that the first arc is just short stories that I adapted. Half of them are exactly the same and others are just fleshed out. I still have the credits for most of the stories and I don't plan on claiming any as my own. That is except for like the three riddle stories that I did write on my own. That story you posted in particular was my favorite growing up, but it's not the one I was adapting. If i can find the picture I 'll show you the one I'm talking about. The story was kinda weak and the riddle wasn't that good so I came up with a rough draft that had a similar concept which happens to see what you see in this thread.

>>17464195
Not trying to criticize you too much, since it looks like you're actually putting a lot of thought and effort into this, unlike most people who say they're going to do a comic around here, it just bugs me a little when I've heard the same story told in pretty much the same way so many times. It's just my opinion, though, I am interested to see how this turns out.

>>17464209
That's perfectly fine. All the arcs after this will be original stories with maybe an /x/ related cameos sprinkled here and there. The only ones that won't be completely by me will be copypastas written by anon's from here If I get their permission. But that only applies to big pastas that are going in the urban legend/folklore arcs. For example, I'm not sure If you saw but a few weeks ago there were two threads about these two guys talking about their upbringings and their encounters with the supernatural. One guys was a decent length tale about his summers he spent with his Grandpa and his encounters with Asian folklore. I was able to talk to the other guy who's story was about a winter he spent with his Grandpa in Europe I believe and my plan for that arc is to replace the anons with the protagonist of the comics if its okay with them. That way I can explore a bit more with the folklore they didn't include and I can avoid offending anyone. I think I'll just have the character go through many different countries experiencing many different cultural supernatural stuff. Basically, most of the storie will be original and a bunch will be fleshed out pasta adaptation.

>>17464270
Sounds good.

Most of the stories in the other arcs are gonna be very very short. Most of them should be shorter than the ones posted here and there won't be much continuity unless the story relates to the protagonist.

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ALRIGHT! ENOUGH SHILLING TIME FOR SUGGESTIONS!
>creatures
>characters
>setting
>pastas
>whatever you want to suggest or criticize, please do

>>17464469
Avoid catering to shitposters, like this one.

>>17464469
>>17464488
I could reference it in a way. Although the series is supposed to be about spooky paranatural series, If your'e very familiar with /x/ or the supernatural you know how ridiculous somethings can be or sound. I'm making the series a inside joke but also keeping in grounded enough for anyone to enjoy. The stuff won't be seen as references if one doesn't know about /x/. For example the Train that the characters are on is named Timothy after the train in the lost episode of Thomas the Train. The train is taking them to a purgatory of sorts and basically 'the ride never ends'. The conductor is a skeleton who has been driving the train for etrernity and he is referred to as Mister Bones. The protagonist makes a deal with the conductor to be one of the photographers for the "/x/ files" (or something I don't have a name yet.)freeing the protagonist from the eternal ride. All of these are still seen as creepy if you don't know their backstory or visit /x/.

>>17464469
Comedy and what not will be light, but present in the series. But mainly as inside jokes.
The Hotel in the second arc is a place you can check into, but you can't ever check out of. When I was a kid the song 'Hotel California' scared me. I guess the mood of the song is what got me. I liked the idea of a place full of crazy people and creatures that have gathered in one spot over time so i chose a setting like that. The Hotel has a design like that of the Dark Lodge in Twin peaks. When I was first writing the series it was meant to have little stories to mock creepypasta and 4chan. As I continued to develop the series, I decided to keep those elements in there, but lightly as a nod to /x/. Since the place is supposed to reflect 4chan I was going to have 'management' be like mods in a way, and as the series goes on you will see a more Asian influence in the hotel to reflect 4chans Japanese roots, its switching of management from moot to Hiro and also to set up the transition from creepypasta stuff into the next arc which will be kicked off with Japanese folklore.

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>>17464583
In the hotel of the copypastas could you make a reference to pic related?

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>>17464595
also you could use pic related as inspiration for one of you stories

>>17464595
One of the first ones I did. Short and sweet and really comes off as creepy if you don't know 'WHO WAS PHONE'

>>17464600
Sounds good. Not sure if I'll illustrate it word for word or if I'll adapt it. Seems great enough on it's own.

>>17464556
That stuff all sounds fine, I just meant don't use the really shit memes only used to derail threads.

>>17464583
>I liked the idea of a place full of crazy people and creatures that have gathered in one spot over time so i chose a setting like that. The Hotel has a design like that of the Dark Lodge in Twin peaks.

This sounds like a cool idea.

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>>17466380
>>17467268
Thanks for the bump
I wasn't able to do much today but in terms of doing a shitposting like story it would play out like this.

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>>17468141
I figured I set the story up as a alien or just strange creature story. Some strange object is floating around a town and before people can point out what it is, it appears to rain on them and turn them to stone/freezes them in place. This results in them being unable to finish their sentence that way we can keep the 'its a fucking' in the story without compromising the actual strangeness of the story. Sort of like a nod to it without directly referencing it and throwing off the mood. That's what I've done with a lot of the shitpost like stories.

>>17468141
>>17468159

Well, that sounds better than it could've been.

I really like this art style. I would totally read the whole thing if it was a series.

Some of these faces are gold.

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>>17469343
I like this one.

>>17464463
Where are you gonna post the comic?

>>17469654
srsly though... this is not the place

>>17469669
Well I was referring to a more permanent home, maybe a pdf download

>>17469669
There's no reason he can't post it here and have a more permanent place to host it elsewhere. /x/ is pretty starved for OC these days.

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Bump.

OC on /x/ that sounds good? Fuck yeah, I'll take that!

I like the art, OP. I think you got some great ideas here.

autism

>>17472417

oc??? these are all characters from cartoons shows just made to look adult instead of the kids and teens there based off of

this fucker is dipper fan art from gravity falls: >>17461551

ffs

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>>17468493
Thanks
>>17469133
Gotta work a bit on keeping stuff clean,but I've come to love my style.
>>17469579
One of my favorite pages that I've drawn so far.
>>17469654
I'll probably post it to a blogspot, tumblr,and a thread here once a week.
>>17472442
You are right on that character being based off of Dipper. I made no effort to hide that. I n the past I had trouble with same-face and would base a characters face off of one that already existed to help, but aside from the reference, it's a totally unconnected character.

>Thanks for the support guys. If you guys have any ideas for stories or anything throw em my way and if you want to be credited we can work that out. By the end of the week I'll have a blogspot/tumblr set up. I should be done with 80% the art for part 1 this week and I'll start posting at the latest on Monday-Tuesday of next week.

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By the way on another note is there an /x/ chat still. I remember being added to it years ago and I got kicked I guess because I was never active.

>>17473753
There are chats, mostly Skype, being spammed here all the time, but I couldn't tell you if any of them are good. There might also be a few IRC rooms. Try searching "chats" on the 4plebs archive.

Bump for OP

>>17473919
Thanks for the info
gonna dump a few roughs in a bit and might drop a chapter or two soon.

Sounds pretty damn nice, are you making it a webcomic, are you gonna publish it in print or just gonna post it here?

>>17476628
webcomic/post it here
>http://archive.4plebs.org/x/thread/17256782/#17256782

found the original thread if anyone wants to read anymore info

>>17461226
let me do some Voice Overs ;)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EsUixokNoZ4

>>17476673
I'm about four minutes in and I like your stuff so far. I didn't expect much popularity and figured collaboration wouldn't happen until late in the game so you've got me really excited. I just haven't planned on how I would credit people. If you've got a website or something I could credit you on that would be great. I figured I would post the pages to the blog/thread and then have post dedicated to others contributions. So like after every chapter or with depending on the time frame, I could post it along that way the audience has a variety of ways to experience the stories. If you want to I'm all for contribution. Start whenever you please. I'll start a blog forthe pages sometime before Monday-Tuesday so just leave me any info/questions in the thread.
>Btw you reminded me I have more text/stories I can post in a few, its just that a few need polising in terms of spelling and grammar.

bump
post chapter one text tomorrow

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>>17478396

Bumpity bump

>>17461226
I wrote a few stories that I posted on reddit.
I think "The sweetener" would make a good comic
because it features an artificial sweetener that turns people into mutant clowns.

https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/255hlk/the_door_behind_him/
https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/2i1uce/the_sweetener/
https://www.reddit.com/r/libraryofshadows/comments/277di6/video_on_demand/
https://www.reddit.com/r/libraryofshadows/comments/259syx/tuesday_dinner/
https://www.reddit.com/r/libraryofshadows/comments/257h5p/summer_vacation_part_1_of_2/

bamp

>>17479696
Just read 'the door' and I really like the tone, I'll read the rest when I'm done with some homework.

>>17479696
tuesday dinner sounds like it would be fun to adapt, got a few more to go, thanks for the read.

bimp

bemp

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>Sorry for the wait, I've been busy these last couple of days,but I didn't realize I had only posted a few of what I'd written. Well here's another set of rough draft sketches and script.

Park 4 wheels of fortune
I couldn’t stand where I used to live so I decided to move I was in the middle of moving out and decide to live with my mom while I was making the transition. I used to live my dad and he used o take care of me. Along with my parents divorce I guess taking care of me was to much for him to handle. Afterwards I had to move in with my mom in her apartment back when I couldn’t afford my own place and it was great. I didn’t have to pay for anything and my mom always made sure i was fed well. I guess she felt the need to take more care of me after dad had killed himself.

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>>17484931
round the time that I had first moved out she was depressed all the time. I can't imagine how she felt when I left. When I told her I was moving out she said she was very happy about me moving out, but she seemed way too excited. Almost like her emotions didn't seem genuine. I think she was actually upset. So I figured moving back into her apartment, while I was trying to find a new place would make her feel better.

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>>17484936
I was taking classes before I had moved in and I was always late because I overslept. Moving back in with Mom was a great. I could be a slob that overslept and still get a ride to school on time. I would wake up late and my mom would already be in the car. I would get ready, rush downstairs and she would take me to school. She would always scold me for oversleeping but always left with a nice big smile as I exited the car. Probably proud of her son being an active and contributing memeber of society.

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Anyway she would pick me up from school with a frown on her face sad from not seeing her son all day I guess. And this cycle repeated for a while over the next few weeks. Wake up late, get scolded, then a smile, a frown and then finish. My emotional tank was on empty and I was tired of the scolding and the routine and it was about time for me to move out. I decided to surprise my mother by waking up on time. I figured since I was leaving her again it was best to leave on a positive note. So I decided the night before to jump start my day and be punctual.

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>>17484956
I got up early and didn’t see my clothes laid out on me so I figured I’d slob it out and just not iron like when I used to live alone. I went to get dressed and then I went downstairs for breakfast and once again nothing was laid out for me. I didn’t have time to make an actual breakfast so I threw a breakfast burrito in the microwave. It was cold in the middle but I quickly ate my breakfast and figured by now I would probably be late again. I looked at the clock and it was 8:15. I hopped in the car to wait for my mother but to my surprise she was already in there. Strangely it appeared my mother had those off in her to sleep in the front seat. All those times she had scolded me for sleeping in and and here she was asleep in the car. I checked the clock and realized we had 45 minutes before it was time to leave I thought the clock said 8:15 inside the house but I guess I was wrong because the clock on mom's car wouldn't be wrong unless the battery was dead or something. Well she was already asleep and with over half an hour to spare I decided to catch up on my sleep. It wasn't too difficult to fall asleep despite a the thick gasoline odor in the air. I guess Mom fell asleep while warming up the car. Or maybe she needs a tune-up. It could be that her gas tank is leaking or something.

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>>17484962
I've got more but I'll post them later. On another note I need to buffer the text of the stories. I'm also gonna try and give the narration a little bit of variety because were getting these stories from different people, meaning different perspectives.

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Gonna finish some art, eat dinner and then I should be back for more

I'm reminded of some of the comics from the early 70's-80's issues of Heavy Metal. They're weird and the art is weird.

>>17485114
We'll be waiting.

I ain't got much to say, but goddamn I love this art style you got OP.

>>17484962
I think I know where this story is going.

So are you still using the mic for these posts instead of typing them, OP? Is that to give your hands a break after drawing or something like that? Some parts of your posts don't make sense.

>>17487824
Not anymore, I'm proofreading all the stuff and fixing them in a doc right now. I'll have the stories re-written a bit to give each one a little bit of variety in tone. I've got one more to write, a paragraph or two of dialogue to tie together the gaps in the stories, the roughs to draw for one story and the art to tie up the arc. I should be done by sunday at the latest and ready to start posting on Monday/Tuesday. I keep saying I'll be back but my bro keeps asking me to go do stuff with him so that's why I'm not so active in the evenings. Btw feel free to take a guess at how it'll end.
>>17485829
I never got to read much of Heavy Metal, but I have seen the first movie. I aught to check out the stuff when I get the chance. Thanks for the compliment.

Officially done writing the longest of the tales. I didn't really like this one when I first wrote it, but I've completely redeveloped it. I'm going to do the art for this chapter, and then do the links between the others. Finish up the ending for the whole arc and then I'll start working on the next arc/developing the site for the comic, and go from there.

>>17487867
Clarify this sentence, please:

>>17484962
>Strangely it appeared my mother had those off in her to sleep in the front seat.

>>17488247
Sorry. Sometimes when I was originally getting the text down, I would catch a line that I didn't like and add a better end to it. I would forget to go back and fix the sentence.
>It appeared my mother had left the car running and had fallen asleep in the front seat.
If you see any others errors, feel free to point them out. I've gone back and fixed most of my mistakes in the final drafts, but It's absolutely possible that I could've forgotten or overlooked something.

>>17488273
I tend to notice things like that, so I'll watch for it.

>>17488299
Any help,criticism,or opinions are appreciated. I'm really thankful for all the people who are even giving this comic the time of day.

>>17488313
There have been a lot of people who say they're going to make an /x/ comic and then never follow through. You look like you're really committed to this, so I, for one, want to see it happen.

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>>17489472
Out of curiosity do you have any examples,I'm just curious cause I love /x/ related stuff and would love to give a little props for even the attempt. At least to give reference to it.
>To go off topi for a sec, I just really love /x/. It was the board that got me on 4chan. After being on for a while I gradually saw the board decline in popularity, and saw more and more shitposting (which wasn't a surprise to me because that's what happens to most boards when you stick around to long.) and at one point I just completely stopped coming to /x/ altogether. But after a long break I came back one day and realized that the shitposting was not only a part of /x/, but also a part of 4chan. Now I'm not condonign it, but I understand that it's part of the community and it can't hurt to have a little fun every now and then. What bothered me over the years was that /x/ has lost some popularity, and has kinda fallen into a sort of loop where there's more shitposting than there is OC. I can understand that and my main desire is to bring a little bit of love back into /x/. I'm not trying to change it's community, because I've grown accustomed to the new /x/ and kinda like it, I just want a little bit more of the old here. That's why I'm making this comic mainly. The most present theme is returning to the beginning or one's roots. A decent amount of the comic is based upon callbacks,but t also showcases many different environments to reflect the changes that the paranormal world/4chan/x/ has gone through. The series isn't ridiculously deep, but it does get pretty real/intense after the first arc. I just hope rekindle a little bit of interest and love into the investigative and curious paranormal community. If that doesn't happen at least I can say I had fun making a comic.

>>17491280
>I came back one day and realized that the shitposting was not only a part of /x/, but also a part of 4chan.

Even if this is true, it's still no excuse for how bad things have gotten these days. The cancer has leaked out of /b/ and other boards that tend to attract more shitposters and now it's metastasized. 4chan is killing itself.

>Now I'm not condonign it, but I understand that it's part of the community and it can't hurt to have a little fun every now and then.

See, there's a difference between the occasional silly thread, or hijacking a really stupid thread to screw around and have fun, and the continuous deluge of constant, dedicated shitposting we've got going on now.

>What bothered me over the years was that /x/ has lost some popularity, and has kinda fallen into a sort of loop where there's more shitposting than there is OC.

/x/ was never really "popular", you obviously weren't here that much. /x/ was only popular to raid. Now mods are better at taking care of it, but the trolls are more dedicated. We've always had cycles of good and bad periods, though. Your comic helps contribute to the cycle of good content.

>>17491755
Thanks for the observations. Like I said all feedback is helpful and considered. I figured chaos is to come with anonymity and not having to be accountable for ones actions on a website. I don't really like seeing the same old 'how to summon succubus plz' on a daily/weekly basis but I understand that theres always gonna be a few of those lying around.
>Finishing the final script for arc 1, little bit more to draw, finish the blog and then on to Arc 2 The Hotel.

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oh, hey, i remember when you were first posting about this! you said some kind things about a short comic that i posted too. i'm still very excited for this thing to happen. are you planning on doing the final comic in ink or digitally?

also, x-tan' design is perfect and you should be proud

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>>17492515
I remember you and your work. Truly amazing stuff. I'm absolutely jealous of your style. For now I'm penciling and then going over digitally, but between arcs I plan on re-doing pages/chapters I don't like as a sort of directors cut like thing purely in pencil/ink. By doing it in digital, I get to cut a lot of corners,but I'm aware of the loss of quality. It does speed up the process and allows me to skip over errors. I really want to get good at inking and I really want to better my anatomy work. But that also requires the proper tools which will hopefully come soon.

Nice "art", fag.

Stop trying to be Junji Ito. You're not good at it.

>>17492584
Now why would I wanna go and be like someone successful. It's much funner being a starving hack.

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>>17492583
yeah, digital is a lot more forgiving when it comes to defining forms and creating tones. if you're feeling nervous about inking, i recommend investing in a white marker. it's saved me many times when an image was generally good but there was just one lil bit that needed to be done over. but it's important to pick the right brand; the sharpie one i own is a mess, i'll try to remember which one i had that actually worked

>>17492584
it's funny that you'd choose junji ito to be the perfect untouchable horror comic artist, considering that his work also wasn't the clean stuff we appreciate today. take a moment to appreciate the awkward lines and tones in his early work, and you'll see why everyone needs to start somewhere

(desu i find his early stuff more charming and inspirational than his current stuff, but i also like that grungy alt comix look -w-)

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>Well, script is done aside from a little bit of proofreading. 9 whole chapters, one based mainly on dialogue. Roughing needed for 2 1/2 chapters. Blog should be up by tomorrow and first chapter posted by Tuesday at the latest.
It's kinda funny. I've put in all of this work and I still haven't given the series a proper title yet. If anyone wants to take a crack at names feel free to do so.
>>17492633
Strangely enough I was reading through some of his old stuff not to long ago, and I came to the realization that I like his old and current style. The whole metamorphosis that his style has gone through is impressive.

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>>17492647
http://heavymetalmagazine.tumblr.com

here's a blog i follow that posts scans from heavy metal. the drawings and layouts are very attractive, even if the storytelling is sometimes ???

junji ito's understanding of light definitely came a long way. he mixes screentones and inking really smoothly in his current stuff to create a wide variety of moods, but part of me favors the comics that take place in a squiggly flat world of stark blacks and washed-out grays. another part of me wants to see him forget the screentones and go full moebius on something, but he works in a low key most of the time so he'd just end up with lines all over the place.

>>17492907
wow thanks. I've been meaning to pick up some Heavy Metal. Contrast is something that I've felt would really make my stuff pop. I just wish I had more markers to do so in the rough drafts. Junji Ito could do his work in either of his styles and it could still work. Both sort of have a strange enigmatic look to them.

>>17492907
rule 34 when

>>17492985
I never wondered what I'd do if this question came up. Seeing as the character is based upon x-tan, and I didn't create x-tan, the existence of rule 34 of the character is out of my jurisdiction. If it happens it happens.

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>>17492985
Well I'm departing from work for tonight. Drop any questions or suggestions if you feel like it. Gonna work on the blogs/sites tomorrow.

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>>17492985
everything in due time, anon

>>17493203
important question; what color is x-tan's outfit, anyway? i feel like sticking with the original rainbow socks might not work with the tone you're going for

(if you're looking for more comic art inspiration, check out brandon graham's wordpress. his own comics are mostly good for his interesting layout and commentary, but he showcases a lot of interesting comics by other people too)

>>17493585
Glad I came back when I did. Interesting question, I never really put to much thought into it and when I first started the comic I debated for a long time when the rainbow socks would come in until I finally decided to have them in from the start. I figure a white shirt, brown trench coat, and I've juggled between using red and green for the tie. I usually have gone with just red, but it's still up in the air. I figured each arc would have a slightly different color scheme, so that could help solve the problem, but I always mentally saw the tie as either red or green. I could maybe cyle out the color of the socks also. I always imagined XTP as a Helblazer fan so I decided to base some of her clothing off of early Constantine stuff. I also had it planned that y the end of the series X-tan would have her original clothes back along with her tendril like-hair. Thanks for the Brandon Graham thing. There's some really cool stuff on there.
>that X-tan pick
umf

>>17492584
Fuck off, asswad. Even if OP's art isn't the best, it has its own charm and at least he's putting some effort into this, unlike you who just sits on your ass at the keyboard acting like you're the art critic of /x/

>>17492633
>it's funny that you'd choose junji ito to be the perfect untouchable horror comic artist, considering that his work also wasn't the clean stuff we appreciate today

That's because he has insufferable fanboys here on /x/ who masturbate furiously to even his worst material and think his work is the standard to which all creepy comics should be held.

>>17493585
By the way it's always been my intention to have some sort of feature with each post. Something to go with each chapter or page. Maybe music to listen to while reading or what I watched/read while doing a page. That or something along the lines of a movie recommendation or something on a weekly basis to keep the paranormal juices flowing.
>>17493689
Thanks for the support. Well on the bright side of things criticism is just another reminder to keep improving myself.

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>>17493719
>By the way it's always been my intention to have some sort of feature with each post. Something to go with each chapter or page. Maybe music to listen to while reading or what I watched/read while doing a page.

Not a bad idea. It helps to understand where an artist's inspiration comes from.

>Well on the bright side of things criticism is just another reminder to keep improving myself.

There's criticism, and then there's being a dick.

>>17493203
>shake hands
Fucking slut.

http://exit-abyss.tumblr.com/
Nothing posted yet, but I do plan on changing the header image and a few other things.

>>17495900
changed to exit-the-abyss
added a playlist which I plan on adding more tracks to.

>>17496621
>undertale music
quelle horreur!

the playlist sidebar is open automatically when i visit the page, and i have to click to minimize it. with other blogs i've seen that use the same music player, the playlist starts out minimized. i feel like the latter option is provides a cleaner experience, if you can manage it

>>17496743
I think I can change that. I'll work on that soon. Not really a huge fan of undertale,but I do remember coming across a couple of tracks that just sounded really creepy. The list is going to be rather large with an extremely large variety in terms of genre.

>>17496867
At some point, you need to have that Spooky Scary Skeletons song. It's practically an /x/ theme song.

>>17497256
I added it last night. If anyone has anymore suggestions/recommendations for music or anything in general feel free to drop them.

is this a boy or a girl? characters loook like traps/gays wtf.

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>>17499263
But half the fun is finding out!

>>17499263
>>17499273
Girl. I intended for the character to look somewhat androgynous. Either that or at least simple and flat frame. Also I'm pretty shit at drawing girls and there's a funny story behind it your'e willing to sit through it.
>back in elementary school
>participating in a fire safety contest
>decided to draw my mom burning stuff in the kitchen
>think I'm hot shit because I can draw stuff from side instead of just flat
>end up drawing my mom from a side angle(keeping in mind she's a thick woman)
>get to the chest area and kinda worry how I'm supposed to do this
> keep erasing and redrawing because I feel chest is weird
>girl beside me looks over and points out how big the drawings chest is
>'Wow those are HUUUGE boobies! Why do you draw boobies so big"
I felt self-conscious about drawing women from third grade all the way to high school. I drew girls in middle school but they were essentially boys with longer hair and eyelashes. To this day I have trouble drawing thinner women because they just end up looking like boys with a few feminine details.

>>17499291
Funny how little things can make you self-conscious for a long time.

While I will say your art is not the best, it still has its own charm, and I kind of like the androgynous look of the characters. I'm sure if it were up to that other guy, it would all be /x/-tan in her rainbow socks, a thong, and the smallest tank top you can get away with on a blue board. Her tits alone would be paranormal with how they defied the laws of physics and gravity while managing to remain hidden under her shirt. And all the guys would basically be Rob Liefeld clones with tree trunk arms and pecs bigger than their heads.

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>>17499311
Hopefully I'll get better soon. I'm in a bit of artistic rut right now. Also when I was first writing the series I had planned for the character to be as an ayy by the end of the series, explaining the weird formless like body shape. In reference to clothing, at some point during the story she gets her trademark clothes but I' decided to go with something like pic related. A little bit more tasteful, with a bit of Japanese influence like the website, while still keeping the skimpy sorta feel that /x/ is used to. I figured that outfit would only appear for a short while, but it's kinda grown on me.

>>17499329
That's a gym outfit. Having her wear it anywhere else would be weird. You can, of course, draw her in different outfits in different places/situations, it's not like she needs a standard uniform. Classic outfit with thigh-high stockings at home, gym uniform when at school (flashback? posing as student?) and more practical wear for other places. Maybe short-shorts if it's summertime. She could also have rainbow bracelets or anklets while wearing them to invoke the image of her stockings.

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x-tan is sort of boyish/nerdy but still cute

nice job OP! keep it up

>>17499346
As far I've story-boarded she only has on during the train ride and that's because she's ripped straight from her home to onto the train. They're kinda like pajamas at that point. During the ride she get's regular clothes. And I've drawn a couple of alternate outfits to be worn throughout the series.
>>17499352
Thanks.

>>17499380
That works.

Also in terms of the boyish look of other characters,like I mentioned earlier not to good at drawing women without curves. That and I'm a sucker for short haired girls.
>http://exit-the-abyss.tumblr.com/ is set up and I'll post some pages later. The alternate site will be up sometime before Saturday and I don't think another is necessary, but I make a side blog for questions and general discussion of the series.

Bump all day, all night

Well the good news I've started posting pages. The bad news is that I'm not really like the end result of the editing. Really wishing I hadn't cut corners, but I guess I can make up for it by redoing pages in simple ink during hiatus'. Blogspot/alternate site should be up by friday.

>>17504001
What do you mean? Can you just re-edit it to your liking?

>>17504001
You wouldn't by any chance be the artist that spoke to me about a collab in a previous thread, would you? Even if not, I'm looking for people to collab with, and I'm loving what you've posted so far. It's got a certain Tales From the Crypt vibe to it.

>>17505102
No I plan on going back and completely redoing pages but without the digital editing and done with ink. A lot of the earlier pages are below what I wanted in terms of quality so I figured I could just fix it up digitally and because of that I got a lazy and the end result is a little sloppy.
>>17505121
I'm not, but I'm totally up for a collab. Just link me to your stuff and you can talk to me here or on the Q and A page.

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There was a webcomic, a single strip not a series, about the history of a demon/killer that is passed on through time by writing about it, and then someone else reading it.

It starts in ancient times, and works its way up through the dawn of the printing press, radio, television, internet, always being passed on by someone to save themselves.

Probably about 15 panels or so and that's it...

>>17510276
Wow seems cool. That's a pretty interesting concept.
>>17510370
>menacing

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>>17510276
You mean this?

>>17510820
Yes! Thank you xox

>>17510826
You're welcome, it's a good one. I'd like to find out who drew it some day and if they have anything else like this.

>>17510833
good stuff

>>17510900
How goes the comic?

>>17511235
Well I've begun posting pages, come to the conclusion that I don't love how the stuff looks after editing, confirmed a few collabs and decided to do the series in ink during hiatus. Long story short: I've finally started. To be honest things are going better than expected.
>>17511849
Thanks for the bumps

>>17514093
Thanks for the update.

>>17514093
by the by; tumblr allows you to search through a tag chronologically by adding /chrono to the end of a url, but it doesn't let you do the same with untagged posts. if you want to give readers an option to read the whole comic in chronological order, you might want to give all of your posts some tag and then put a link in your sidebar that lets them view the thing from the start (i. e, tag all of the posts with "story" and then link exit-the-abyss.tumblr.com/tagged/story/chrono)

>>17516209
Thanks for the tip I'll work on it next chance I get. New pages coming up on Monday.

>>17516209
>>17517094

Regardless of what you think of the people who who use it, tumblr is really a terribly designed website. You should consider getting something else too. Maybe a blog?

>>17517667
I was gonna setup a blogspot last week but I was busy from Thursday to Sunday. I'll try to do it by Wednesday. If you've got an alternative suggestions i'll take em.

>>17520103
Blogspot sounds good.

>>17520108
Alright thanks. I'll work on that tomorrow.

>>17520108
>>17516209
fixed it to have a chronological story tag. I'll work on the blogspot today and post chapters 2 two today and three later this week.

The next chapter is up. I'd like to thank you all for your support and criticisms and other stuff so far. You've all been a big help.

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>>17461226
Hello my friend, I'm new this board but I think this thread should be in /co/.
By the way, looks great!

>>17520358
I figured it would come off as shilling because it's a solo project on /co/. I would totally dig a big fat /co/x/ thread. There's a lot of decent supernatural reading material. I just wish some of the stuff was a little bit more popular. Thanks man.

>>17520358
>newfag who doesn't know paranormal comics belong on /x/ and that we welcome OC

LURK MOAR

>>17512409
>this guy went on to make homestuck

>>17523603
I don't remember, but I think he might not be a fag. I think he's even made fun of it's fanbase. Might be someone else I'm thinking of though.

>>17524760
>but I think he might not be a fag.
the speculation cotinues

>>17525040
I basically meant he might be a pretty cool guy m8.

>>17464463
Your art is good.

The story was so badly written and dull that I gave up after a few minutes.

You should illustrate other peoples' stories.

>>17528454
Thanks. Writing is not my strength and that's why I didnt plan any story after the first arc. The rest of the series is textless for the most part with limited continuity. When I was originally making the series I had planned on the series being completely restless but didn't consider adding a story to the first arc until recently. Basically the rest of the series is stand alone images, short sets of panels that need no description, and adaptation and collabs from different sources. I must admit that I'm rushing through the art, but once I get some pens and time I plan on redoing the whole arc. Thanks for the comments and criticism. I rely appreciate it.

>>17528374
If you're referring to the comic I've already begun posting pages and I've posted the site a couple of times in the thread already.

>>17528801
You should post more stuff here instead of just to the site. Or at least mention when you update.

>>17529446>>17529446
I really do need to work on the way I post stuff. This comic is the first art I've shared in a long time so I'm trying to keep in mind that I've gotta explain things instead of expecting people to know whats going on. I'll post here every time there is an update. Someone suggested I post the text with the pictures and I'll do that I just have to fix the writing because I've posted the rough draft instead of the final. Not really improved story but the gramatical errors should be fixed.

Also Posting the next pages now.

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Story 3
Chilly White Knight
Talk about creeps. If it weren’t for that mirror you wouldn’t even have known what was going on. Glad youre safe.I moved for simpler reasons. I used to stay in a hotel and
my place was small, dangerous, and cramped. I hate crowded places.

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>>17532598

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>>17532787

>>17532498
Good idea. I can try to help with spelling and grammar errors.

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>>17532796
If you're up to it I can share the file at some point. I plan on rewriting some stuff because it's kinda formatted weird and some stories are kinda mediocre. But I've got no problem with receiving help. I'll drop it this weekend hopefully.

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>>17532814

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>>17533170
>>17533170

>>17532814
How big is the file? Is it a bunch of pre-written scripts or something?

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>>17533203
no its just the stuff from part one and this section is small.

>>17533243
Okay, that should be easy to manage.

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>>17533257
Okay cool when I get some free time I'll share it

Big thanks to the bumping task force in this thread. You all are a great help.

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well done op
keep up the good work!

>>17535863
Thanks.
>On a random note I'm excited for part 2 and hype for part three. Part one was heavy in text but most of the other parts are very limited on dialogue and text. Part two is when the series gets very weird and every arc after part one is a huge change of pace.
I'll work on making the blogspot today after I'm done with some work.

>>17535816
You're welcome, Tyler.

Heres a random sketch I did for a monster that will appear in part 2 or part 3. I'll probably upload chapter 4 soon early if i get the time to this weekend.

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>>17538382
Forgot the pic so as punishment here are multiple sketches instead.

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>>17538389

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>>17538454

>>17538385
I think he would have a exquisite collection of gloves.

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>>17539201
sounds about right.
>Blogspot aught to be up by Monday at the latest.

Liking the new monster(s), OP! They look great.

bamp

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Website should be up in a day or two and chapter four should be ready by about Tuesday.

>>17542018
Random question.
>Any creepy pastas,cryptids, monsters you'd like to see in the next arc or future arcs? Or any copypasta you'd like to see referenced or adapted?

>>17542684
Some creepy stuff like in Fuan no Tane. Or maybe that one story about a kid who saw a fat, spastic version of Slenderman in a parked car. Like, his head wouldn't stop jerking every which way, and has no face.

I personally like the stories that was just 'it happened' without providing explanations. Y'know, let the horror happen in your mind.
Like that Fuan no Tane story about a two girls who saw an oddly-shaped smoke in the sky, and when one of them pointed their finger at it, the finger was bent in a very unnatural way - and the smoke disappeared. But that's it, no explanation as to what the smoke was, or why it affects the finger that way. It just happened.

This is really random, but this art style looks weirdly similar to someone I was friends with in school. Does your name start with a K by any chance?

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>>17542684

>>17543576
Dude, yes, we definitely need the Ghostpuncher!

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>>17543576
>>17543668
Ghost Puncher has become a new found favorite of mind so keep your eyes open for a couple of appearances.
>>17543231
Seems like some good ideas and I've got one story that I can mesh that with.
>>17543277
Nah. My name is Ben but don't tell anybody.

>>17545031
>Ghost Puncher has become a new found favorite of mind so keep your eyes open for a couple of appearances.

I'm looking forward to this more than ever now. Make sure you really capture his douchey /fit/izen outfit in the last part of the story.

>My name is Ben but don't tell anybody.

Did you drown?

(Sorry, I had to.)

bmup

>>17545057
Strangely enough I almost did When I was five or six.
>Must be a lot of west coast fags here considering all the late night responses. Easy coast fag here, where are you guys from.

>>17547197
I just don't sleep much these days, to be honest. Not like I'm the only one bumping the thread, but I probably do about half of it.

>Strangely enough I almost did When I was five or six.

Creepy.

>yfw you are the real Ben and you don't even realize it

>>17547630

This is new spoopypasta

Also, bumping for progress, loving this art

>>17499291
>'Wow those are HUUUGE boobies! Why do you draw boobies so big"

Fuck, I had this same shit happen to me a long time ago. Drawing fan art for a game, sister comes in and the only thing she says it "wow why are her boobs so big". Character's pretty flat and I didn't think I was drawing them that big. Really killed my desire to continue.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

>>17547811
Random thought, it could be because Western cartoons always make female characters rather flat-chested (or at least used to) so they don't seem overly sexualized, so she wasn't used to seeing proportional breasts.

Or maybe you just watched too many of your chinese girl cartoons and drew them like beach balls, idk.

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Continuing the anatomy conversation, because why the hell not, here are some tips for drawing realistic boobies. Art tutorials like this are usually good to learn from, and you can also use actual photographs of non-porn-stars to get a good feel for things.

http://online-drawinglessons.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/Female-Anatomy-Study-of-drawing-lesson-and-tutorials-with-video-lower-body-915x1024.jpg

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/eb/bd/68/ebbd684517c69761344195f052de6f9e.jpg

http://www.kitsch-slapped.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/how-to-draw-breasts-by-Ovens.png

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>>17547630
>>17547757
I would definitley love to do that as a story. I just cant think of how I could make that even a thing though. A frame story inside a frame story sounds cool. I'll throw a couple of nods to it if I wants develop it.
>the next arc will be in ink and I'm getting some huge paper soon so that means I can illustrate be the and work stuff into the backgrounds. I'm gonna work most of today to get the next chapter illustrated.
I had all of them illustrated and there was one that i wasnt sure I as gonna do and I ended up writing it. I didn't like telhe concept to much but it ended up being the most detailed one out of them all. So now I feel entitled to rewrite the cruddy stuff at some point in the future. I do appreciate all of the compliments and help though. If I dont I'll get done 39th the art for this next chapter I'll jusr throw it to the end and continue with the art that ice altready finished.

>>17549483
Sounds good.

>>17464463
Dude, do that one an anon posted here, about a book that turned into what the person wanted most.

>>17549887
Is it in this thread?

>>17549906
Found it in the archives.
http://4chandata.org/x/Gozu-2-a839132
This momo had a site or smth like that with his whole pasta but i cant remember it, sadly.

>>17549963
Thanks when I get some time ill read it.
>If I update the comic it's gonna be really late tonight so look out for that. There are updates to the other blog about work and other crud if anyone is interested.

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>>17549977
Aight, ill lurk

>>17548684
I appreciate the advice but I'm not so sure the artist in your picture is the best example.

>>17461232
>no tits
>looks like male
your women look like men, how is your men look like?

she looks like a man or not passable crosdresser/tranny.

>>17461551
on the left is a man. on the right another masculine transvestite >>17461574 no tits because this is a man.

>>17550156
Even if the illustrations aren't the best at least the information has a bit of knowledge behind it.
>>17550410
Your'e not wrong there. Despite the fact that I openly admitted on being lazy with the original drawings because I could fix them digitally ,doesn't excuse my lack of skill and lack of effort put in. I personally regret being a lazy schmuck when I was doing the earlier art, but I was also limited in materials and time. Hopefully in the future I can get shit straightened out.

>>17549987
Please, what is the artist?

>>17550156
I only posted that one because it was the most SFW, but I admit it wasn't the best example. The other links are better.

>>17550410
If you had bothered to read the thread, then you'd know why. We've already talked about it. Also, woman who isn't super-girly with DD tits =/= "tranny". But I guess I can't blame you, seeing as you probably don't meet many girls in real life.

>>17550489
http://sunnyclockwork.deviantart.com/gallery/56301635/SCP-Tarot-Cards

>Didn't finish the art for that extra chapter so I will be updating the comics in regular order and Ill work this on into the end. Seeing as I've been so busy this week I'll just hit you all with a huge update with two or three chapters over the next couple of days. Here comes the next one in a few.
On another note I've been really drained these last couple of days and I plan on finishing the site soon,I just haven't had the time for it.
>>17553620
Hell yeah these are awesome. I don't know why I love Tarot Cards.

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>>17554215
>Chapter 5 Wheels of Fortune
I couldn’t stand where I used to live so I decided to move. I was just so tired of the environment and it was to much work getting around. I just wanted a comfortable spot to live in. I was in the middle of moving out and decided to live with my mom while I was making the transition. Before I had my own pad I used to live with my dad and he used to take good care of me. But after some financial complications that my dad was going through I got kicked out. Thats pretty rude of someone to do to their only son, but I guess the divorce took more out of him financially and emotionally.

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Along with my parents divorce I guess taking care of me was to much for him to handle. Afterwards I had to move in with my mom in her apartment back when I couldn’t afford my own place and it was great. I didn’t have to pay for anything and my mom always made sure I was fed well. I guess she felt the need to take more care of me after dad had killed himself. Around the time that I had first moved out she was depressed all the time. I can't imagine how she felt when I left. When I told her I was moving out she said she was very happy about me moving out, but she seemed way too excited. Almost like her emotions didn't seem genuine. I think she was actually upset.
>Btw this is still the rough draft version, but after all the postponement i figured you guys deserved something at least.

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So I figured moving back into her apartment, while I was trying to find a new place would make her feel better. I was taking classes before I had moved in and I was always late because I overslept. Moving back in with Mom was a great. I could be a slob that overslept and still get a ride to school on time. I would wake up late and my mom would already be in the car. I would get ready, rush downstairs and she would take me to school.

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She would always scold me for oversleeping but always left with a nice big smile as I exited the car. Probably proud of her son being an active and contributing memeber of society. Anyway she would pick me up from school with a frown on her face sad from not seeing her son all day I guess. And this cycle repeated for a while over the next few weeks. Wake up late, get scolded, then a smile, a frown and then finish. My emotional tank was on empty and I was tired of the scolding and the routine and it was about time for me to move out. I decided to surprise my mother by waking up on time. I figured since I was leaving her again it was best to leave on a positive note. So I decided the night before to jump start my day and be punctual.

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I got up early and didn’t see my clothes laid out on me so I figured I’d slob it out and just not iron like when I used to live alone. I went to get dressed and then I went downstairs for breakfast and once again nothing was laid out for me. I didn’t have time to make an actual breakfast so I threw a breakfast burrito in the microwave. It was cold in the middle but I quickly ate my breakfast and figured by now I would probably be late again. I looked at the clock and it was 8:15. I hopped in the car to wait for my mother but to my surprise she was already in there. Strangely it appeared my mother had those off in her to sleep in the front seat. All those times she had scolded me for sleeping in and and here she was asleep in the car. I checked the clock and realized we had 45 minutes before it was time to leave I thought the clock said 8:15 inside the house but I guess I was wrong because the clock on mom's car wouldn't be wrong unless the battery was dead or something.

Well she was already asleep and with over half an hour to spare I decided to catch up on my sleep. It wasn't too difficult to fall asleep despite a the thick gasoline odor in the air. I guess Mom fell asleep while warming up the car. Or maybe she needs a tune-up. It could be that her gas tank is leaking or something.
>I decided to extend the story to give it a more understandable ending. It makes it a bit easier to find the flaw in the story.
~well my phone alarm went off and I realised we must have overslept in the car. I went to wake my mom up and she jumped. She hopped out of the car and she seemed very angry. She kept yelling at me asking me why I woke her up. And she would go back and check inside the car and she would ask again why I had to wake her up. I don't know why she was making such a big deal about her being woken from her slumber. When she wakes me up I only complain for a few minutes.Well this was very upsetting and I decided to stay home for another day.

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She seemed upset the whole day. Well the next day I tried the early rise thing. Once again no breakfast, no clothes, and I had to do it all by myself. And just like yesterday it appeared that my mom had once again fallen asleep with the car running. I went over to the driver’s side to take the keys out of ignition and found a hose from the tailpipe leading into the front window. I opened the door, but when I went to see if my mom was alright, she was long dead. The strangest part about the situation was that she had this huge smile on her face. Kinda like the one she would have when she was dropping me off for school. I’m glad that in her final moments she at least appeared happy. I like to think she was thinking about me when she was ending her life.
>There are a few stories that I will re-write when all is done because some of these were done in a rush and its hard to solve the mystery when there is so much filler and stuff. I probably need to add a picture or two to this chapter.
>On the bright side of things I found a way to work /fit/ ghost puncher into the next chapter. I had intended for his story to appear in the next arc, but I realized I can change the next chapter a bit, have him in it, and then have him as a re-occurring character. [spoiler]I had planned for the whole cast on the train to die at some point, but I figured that might not be necessary. But I think I'll go with that but have the /fit/izen survive because he's immune to spooky shit.[/spoiler]

>>17554366
I'll update the Q&A site tomorrow and I should have another one or two up before the weekend is over.

>>17554366
Looks like I was right, when you first posted this, I figured the mom was trying to kill herself. But I also thought the kid was going to end up dead too, or the ending would be ambiguous, but this works. And maybe you could explain how and when the dad offed himself? You went from having him kick out the kid to being dead rather quickly.

And spoilers don't work on /x/, as you can see, but I doubt anyone here will worry about it too much.

>I had planned for the whole cast on the train to die at some point, but I figured that might not be necessary.

Yeah, that would be pretty lame if it happened to EVERYONE.

>But I think I'll go with that but have the /fit/izen survive because he's immune to spooky shit.

Of course he survives, you can't kill the Ghostpuncher!

Glad to see you're still working on this, OP. Thanks for the update!

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>>17557338
Just got home. Good news is that I'm about to update the QnA page with some info on chapter four. The bad news is that I might post the new new Chapter.The bad part of that is the fact that in probably gonna be up late doing this. That's not to bad though. If I can't finish the pages I'll do as I did yesterday and post the chapter that I've got finished. Just be on the look out for new stuff here and on the site.

>>17558790
We'll be looking forward to it.

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>>17560609
Sorry about all the post-postponement and set backs. Iv'e had a busy week but I was able to update the QnA site this morning. I've done all my work for the week so I'll post the next chapter soon.

>>17562353
Sounds good, thanks.

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>>17562641

Take your time, mate.

Bumping, also.

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>>17564475
New one will be up in an hour. Gotta finish a a bit and my dog just came into my house covered in mud so Iv'e gotta take care of that.

>>17565199
Which one specifically?This is a very important question.

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>>17565200
Stop replying to them, you know better by now.

Here comes the next chapter.
>>17565318
I figure that despite how harsh or ridiculous there's a little truth in all criticism. But at this point your'e probably right.

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Chapter 6 Shower Slipup
Speaking of killers I moved out because my place was too sketchy. I felt like my own life was in danger. Like, I wasn’t scared I just didn't trust the place. My scrub parents had come over once again for their weekly family dinner. They said they wanted to keep our family ties strong. Well that doesn't mean anything to me if you’re not strong in real life.

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>>17565398

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>>17565412
I always hated these family dinners because they were pointless. We’d just sit there and talk about the same boring things every week. It was super lame. What made it so bad was that they were always tryin to size me up. They wanted to criticize everything and wanted me to slow down. Stacked on top of that they brought nothing but fat and empty calories every time.

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Usually I would rush through the meal so they would leave, and before the night was out they would always say something out of line, i'd get pissed and I'd go straight to bed. But this last time they were always so offensive but this time they really got me by the throat. This time they really pushed me over the edge. I didn't know they could cut into me like that. I got so angry that I slammed my hand down on the table and broke a glass. The fact that it was one of my favorite cups, the chunks of glass is in my hand, and the whole situation made me furious.

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>>17565430
I was too angry to do anything with the mess and I left them at the table and hopped in the shower. The entire time I was in there I was hoping they would be gone when I got out.I felt like I was always surrounded by weak-asses that always wanted to hold me back. I hated the whole situation all the hypocrisy and all the violent yelling and it all happened so quickly. I didn't know what I was gonna do about the mess that my life was now. I was in the middle of my shower when I heard movement again in the other room. I heard tapping and then the sound of glass breaking. At first I assumed mom or dad had dropped some dishes but then something didn't seem right about the situation.

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Suddenly I heard a scream and I ran out of the bathroom. I came into the dining room to find a burglar standing over the bodies of my parents. I panicked and grabbed a bloody knife off the table. I guess the burglar was more scared of me than I was of him because he ran out of the house right after I had picked up the knife. I guess he was intimidated by my killer body.

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I didn't want to call the cops because the damage was done and I really didn't feel like a bunch of donut eating skrubs were gonna help but I did anyway. I reported the burglary and moved out the next day.
>There's a few grammatical errors and character inconsistencies, which I should straighten out before I send em to the site.

>>17565453
>A few more stories and then we'll actual get to the plot of the series. Or at least the part that ties the stories together. After that pt 1 will be finished and then we can move on to the fun part.

Great job, I always thought that was a pretty good pasta/riddle. Did you mean to make the burglar look so stereotypically cartoony, though? Works either way, I just think it would be a little better if he didn't resemble the Hamburglar so much.

>>17565597
I did but only because he's a reoccurring character. We find out in the second arc that he's cursed. Every door he enters apparently leads him to a killer's home. I wasn't sure how I was going to have him cursed, but I figured he would have to steal a certain amount of items to gain freedom. Sort of like an old voodoo tale or something.

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>Anymore suggestions for the next? If so feel free to drop them after each update because that's when I'm usually lurking. Or you can DM me on the site.

>>17566200
>We find out in the second arc that he's cursed. Every door he enters apparently leads him to a killer's home.

lol, sucks to be him, not a bad idea

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>>17565453
Censoring the butt after the image is already pixelated adds a better comedic feel than just showing off a butt.
>Next chapter coming soon today.

>>17568548
>Censoring the butt

No. You must leave dat ass in tact.

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>>17568605
I'll try my best to incorporate butts into the upcoming parts.
>http://question-the-abyss.tumblr.com/ blog has been updated, and next chapter coming soon. I'e had to postpone completing the blogspot because of how busy I've been, but I will finish it soon.

all the drawings have autistic faces

>>17568705
So are you the same guy that deleted that post back then? I'm just honestly curious about the nature of your criticisms.

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>>17568755
You're killin' me, Smalls. Learn to differentiate between honest criticism and the most goddamn obvious trolls ever.

>>17569292
I figured I'd attempt to resolve it by confronting the person. That usually helps to stop it because you either get an actual explanation or because they don't have an actual response they just stop. Seeing as there's no actual nature to this I guess I can ignore it and treat it as a free bump.

>>17549963
If anyone knows where the rest of the Gozu story is it would be absolutely grand.I'll keep looking for it.
>I'm considering posting the next chapter tonight, and after this one there are two more and then the arc finale.

>I'll post the next chapter tomorrow and that should leave us with like two more and the finale. Hopefully the thread will still be here, and if not it does feel like its about time to start anew. I'm really thankful for all of you sticking around for the ride. Stay spooky, /x/.

>>17570679
Okay. This thread is almost maxed out, so if it does die, go ahead and make a new one.

>>17570679

We'll keep bumpin' if you keep on truckin'

Agreed

Updated the site with the next chapter and will update the QnA page later today. I'm going to drop the new pages in a second.

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Chapter 7 Death in the Doorway

x:So what’s your story? Why are you riding this train to nowhere?

L:I’m on my way to a new hotel while I’m searching for a new place.

x:Well, I think its fair to assume you also have a strange tale as to why you’re searching for a place.

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>>17573261
L:Well, much like the last guy, I left after I had a terrible encounter with a burglar. My husband and I finally decided to move out not to long ago because of it, and shortly after my husband died. Before then we lived in a this wretched apartment complex.It was an ugly,old, and full of trouble,and yet for some reason he loved it.

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>>17573263
He said he liked the place because it reminded him of his roots. He preferred to described it as historic,experienced, and full of variety. I viewed it differently. I wanted to get a better place and he didn’t. My husband and I had been getting into many arguments about apartments and one day we really got into it. He got so upset that he just stormed out of the room and left for work half an hour early. As he left he gave me an ultimatum, and he wanted an answer or some sort of compromise when he came in the door. After he left, I went to the kitchen to prepare a response to the ultimatum.

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>>17573270
Well I worked and thought until it was around the time for him to come home. He comes home at 3:33 everyday, so at 3:32 I was waiting at the door with my response. The doorknob jiggled but it did not turn completely and the lock made weird noises as if it was broken or something. There was a couple of loud taps on the door and then some really hard knocks. I guess he couldn’t get because he was really struggling with the door.

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>>17573275
After hearing him struggle with the door for a few minutes I swung the door open in anticipation so I could give him his answer, but to my surprise instead of my husband standing in the doorway, a masked man stood there instead. I was caught off-guard and picked up a knife that I had set by the door and stabbed the man. 6 minutes later my husband came up the stairs.

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He saw the scene and we called the police. By the time the police got there I had already watched the man bleed out. Of all the days for husband to be home late it had to be that day. I’m mainly upset that someone had to break into our home before my husband realized it was time to move out.

x:But when you think about it, all you had to do was kill somebody to convince your husband that it was not a good environment.

Looks like we hit autosage. Make a new thread and link it here?