how do i make this better /wsr/

>>96267
What do you mean?

hmmm make it more "dope" or some shit like that. different font maybe??? this is the only font i got that looks nice on this. any other fonts that might do so too ??

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>>96270
>make it more "dope" or some shit like that

>>96267
Centering the test would be a start.

>>96283
the text*

>>96267
I actually think the font is fine. the black rectangle is too plain though. needs one of the following, or something similar:

>change rectangle to a baroque shape but keep the clean plain lines.

>change flat black to a very dark near-black but subtle pattern that is distinct from the background floral pattern. like a leather or a very faint repeating line pattern. you want it to be dark, simple, and low-contrast to keep it from being too busy and fighting with the floral pattern.

>keep the rectangle the same basic shape but make the border more elaborate, and also change those em dashes to some kind of very simple flourish or wingding.

>>96283
also seconding this, I didn't notice at first but now I can't unsee it.