Help wording out something differently

put as much effort in as i could have.

achieve things to the level i could have

work hard

reach my potential

>reach my full potential

>excel

>meet the requirements expected of me

>>304544
Thank you, I highly appreciate it.

>>304542
Thank you.

"endeavored"

>>304568
>in high school i struggled to motivate myself to endeavored

>>304581
>"In high school, I struggled to motivate myself to ____"

"In high school, I endeavored to____"

Cuts out four words. Concise. Polished. Suck it.

>>304592
except thats not whats being said you dipshit. learn to fucking read. "i endeavored" and "i struggled to try hard" are essentially opposite in overall meaning.

"In high school, I struggled to motivate myself to fail at everything I do."

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>>304592
>>304600

>>304600
>except thats not whats being said you dipshit. learn to fucking read. "i endeavored" and "i struggled to try hard" are essentially opposite in overall meaning.

Where do you see anyone suggesting the phrase "i struggled to try hard" or "in high school i struggled to motivate myself to endeavored"?

I suggested "I endeavored to [practice, study, get enough sleep]." to avoid wordiness.

See:

>>304542
>>304544
>>304546

>>304627
>he cant even read the OP

>Sentence: "In high school, I struggled to motivate myself to

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>>304638
You're saying he wants to say "I tried hard to try hard."?
Well fuck me.
I think I'm helping someone make their college admissions essay sound good, and they just want to whine on /b/, is that it?