RATE MY MUSIC

ouch, sry

>>302367
first person to anser im am so happy

>>302364
>Published on Apr 12, 2014
Have you made anything since then?

>>302375
i have been trying to be noticed since i released it. i got no attencion so i tryed and tryed. I did not release any other traks online becaus i did the other ones for college but i want to release more online.

here is one of my other test beats i done

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUUZKjdg2GU&feature=youtu.be

>>302364
This song is pretty basic. There's not very much variation. It sounds like a simple thing a beginner would make. It's not terrible, but not very good either.

Also, the part where it stops and the guy says "we need a beat" I was expecting some kind of change to, at the very least, the beat structure. That line seems misplaced. Or maybe you can change the beat there??

>>302376
It sounds like you're going about this backwards. Do you want to make music or do you want attention?
>i did the other ones for college
Post one of the ones you did for college here in this thread.
Use picosong or something to share it here.

>>302378
Did you just make this today?
How long did you spend on this?

>>302381
i upload it today becaus i had them on mp3 files and never put them online for everybdy too see.
and to anser youre question i spend a hour making this i tink

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>>302384

>>302379
thank you i will use picosongs :)

one more

https://youtu.be/tliJUreM-vg

>>302364
It feels incredibly soulless. It's a very basic beat that sounds like it was spliced together in Fruity Loops without much thought or intention. Music doesn't need to have a purpose but it needs a soul or something to hold onto more than just some looping beeps and an awkward song break.

>>302364
I liked it.

i think that you should go somewhere else with your music, the 8-bit sounds aren't gret and having more of an'umpf' would be good. Some strings or something would add more emotion and having a looping sounds is okay, so long as yo change its volume and tone every once in a while. Find somewhere that you want to put your music and don't just make sounds because you want to, make music because you want to.

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>>302378
>>302403
well this takes the cake.
what an insult to music.
i didn't think music could be objectively bad until now.
thanks for changing my worldview.

first, you are brave to put anything up, but relying on sequencers lets it down. i would advise you to learn how to play a real musical instrument, guitar or keyboard, then use that as a basis for music. anyone can poke a sequencer to make something that sounds like a tune.

Im am happy too see that there is suport the thread i put on /b/ was full of trolls :-)

Bland.

>>302375
you know thats pasta right ?

>>303025
look david. you not gonna make it if you dont think for your own.

>>302364
it seems very disorganized

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