Can anyone help me improve this.
Remove the graphic on the right, center the text, use a better font and darken the red in the logo.
If you need to make sure people know you're running a hair salon, reword it to Hair care for men and women. Don't beat us over the bread with it
As it stands right now I can smell the Chinese restaurant next door to your establishment just by looking at your card.
Can't make the changes for you because I'm taking a shit
Start over.