I'll start with Team Flare. They're pretty easy to '''improve.'''
>AZ cooperates with them out of revenge towards Xerneas/Yveltal, and pretty much becomes the N of X/Y.
>Lysandre wants to take over the energy industry of Kalos, so he sabotages the solar power plant and uses it to promote his new energy project.
>He develops Geosenge Town into a boom town that will oversee the ultimate weapon's conversion into a power plant.
>Around the middle of the story, the player will hear news about a dying forest/a wasteland coming back to life, disturbing the local ecosystem.
>If they go there, they will see a site guarded by Team Flare, and a crater/empty nest at its center.
>Upon visiting the poke ball factory, the player is ambushed and caught by Team Flare, forcing them to do an escape without Pokémon.
>After getting back your Pokémon and ridding the factory of Team Flare, the owner gives you a Master Ball as a reward
>At Team Flare's secret hq, it is revealed that Lysandre got a Master Ball from the factory to control Xerneas/Yveltal
>He explains how the legendary pokemon ignored the needs of others/caused harm to others and says that they need to pay the prices of their actions.
>Upon the power plant's activation, the lights of Luminose city-turned off for the activation ceremony gradually turn on as the legendary pokemon's agony worsens.
>Of course, AZ changes his views as he interacts with the player, betraying lysandre by breaking his Master Ball.
>He then fights alongside you against Lysandre's four mega Pokémon
>With the legendary pokemon freed, the power plant destabilizes and collapses, just like the actual games.
What evil teams will you people improve with your QUALITY writing skills?
You posted this like 8 other times and just like the other 8 times i stop reading at the first point because it's fucking dumb.
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I thought I recognized this. Flare doesn't really need that much fixing, the storyline as a whole could be improved.
Az should be fought at the desert area and then become a superboss later on.
The plans of Flare just need to line up better. The Pokeball factory raid should be linked to the future capture of Legendary Pokemon.
A new area (Sacred Grove/ Dark Cavern) Flare encounter should exist where they stall the player as they steal the Legendary Pokemon. First encounter/battle with Xerosic.
Overall any improvement to Flare has to have an improvement to the region in general. Areas and history should sync up better. AZ half destroys Kalos over a florette yet no architecture exist of it? It should be the national fucking symbol of Kalos.
Also for fuck sake give Lysandre a white suit or something at the start. At least pretend he isn't evil for a while.
Its the only team that has an ELITE 4 MEMBER in its ranks yet nothing fucking comes from it. Even a throw away line about Malva distracting Diantha from interfering with the final plan would be good