ITT

>>31305871
>Literally my mom's Blaziken+Decidueye hybrid
>Literally my mom's Landorus
>Literally my mom's Lugia
Shit/10

>>31305912
>Landorus
>Not my mom's pyroar

>>31305912
Now, explain why they're bad.

>>31305912
>Lugia
>Not my mom's Reshiram

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It's another "it just get's bigger" fakemon thread.
>>31305946
>Landorus
>Not bad
Unovabort detected.

>>31305973
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>31305946

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>Blaziken+Decidueye+Koga
>Pyroar with Pumpkaboo for a head
>Lugia+Reshiram+Aurorus

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Please rate.

Does anyone actually have any GOOD fanmade Pokemon?

>>31305871
The baby bird's head is way too big. It's evolution is pretty Grovyle-ish. The arrow thing and it's "hair" with the final stage doesn't look cool. Without it it would be a sympatic Grass/Fighting.

The fire starter is too classic.Litterally my mom's Litleo line with a scorpio tail.

I like the Water line but we're going from something similar to a tadpole (according to the tail) to some sort of bird. Tje wings of the final stage are ugly, otherwise it's cool.

>>31306008
Pansage/10
Alright/10
Why are water types still a choice for starters/10

>>31305871
>Actually cool, better Tengu Pokemon than Shiftry ever will be
>Literally bigger Pyroar
>Reshiram and Lugia's love child
1/3, they're shitty

>>31305871
Why? It's not like the artists are in this tread.

>>31306008
>Literally my Mom's Pansear, Pansage and Panpour

>>31306097
Curiosity. I literally just picked whatever the first thing was on Google Images when I typed in fan pokemon.

I've never even seen anyone on here actually see a fanmade pokemon and say it looks good.

>>31305973
For the Water starter, yeah. The Grass and Fire lines seem to avoid it.

>>31306008
Chimpanzee with tail/10

shit bear
0/10

Surfing Aipom
kek/10

>>31306008
oh hey I remember you

imo middle one is bretty decent, monke is ok and eldritch being is bretty bad

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>>31306052
I depends on how you define "good". This line is one of my favorites in the web atm.

http://pokengine.org/pok%C3%A9dex/Beaniscule_(Atlas)
http://pokengine.org/pok%C3%A9dex/Beanormous_(Atlas)

>>31306061
>he can only criticize other pokemon by comparing them to other shittier official pokemon
into the trash it goes

>>31305871
>in comparison to official pokemon
Give me one example (1) where doing this was even a tiny bit helpful. Every pokemon should be taken on a case by case basis, and the most /vp/ ever does with comparisons anyway is pointless and easy "literally my mom's diaper beam" shitposts.

>>31306052
I do. All my fakemon are great. :^)

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>>31306052

>>31306238
I like the concept more than I like the execution. The best fakemons are those based on things rather than just designs like OP's who look like a furry made them.

>>31306390
yeah i really like the pokemon that looks like a set of keys

you're an idiot

>>31306336
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGDcqNk36Rs

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Smolfin, squalfin, and walestrom

>>31306390
isnt it based off the beanstalk in that one folktale that leads to the giants domain with the harp and shit, hence the white fluff around its neck?

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>>31306520
Not a fan of the middle evo, but the first and last are 10/10

>>31306578
>10/10
they look like shit

>>31306602
how so?

>>31306138
They only like fanmons when they are fron Sage. /vp/ generally enters an autistic rage when you tell them their fan region is even shittier than Unova. They just can't accept the truth

>>31306618
>blue and white water type
>first evo has it's eye on some sort of spot and looks ugly
>head to big for body
>awkward placement of blowhole
>another dragon water-type pokemon

>>31306560
That's why I'm saying I like the concept, it has a base on something existing. A lot of great pokemon designs are like that.

>>31306410
you don't even know what you are talking about, you gigantic cunt. Most pokemon have are based on things from real life animals or fantasy.

>>31306692
nice bait

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>>31306684
So /vp/ approves of all of this? Half of these are either based off of 4 legged animals or gorillas.

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>>31306692

>>31306744
stupid

>>31306740
>/vp/ is one group of people

>>31306740
you can evolve the lines fully in the demo?

>>31306520
wasn't this in a draw thread

>>31306740
>>31306772
Literally just read archived threads about Sage. Any remark about how ugly the game's dex is will be received with autistic screeching and being called a GF apologist ot some shit. Even the responses from the dev team are absolute cringe

>>31306740
id train aquanaut and snogre, maybe even kobalt

>>31306692
>blue and white water type
see >>31306744
>eye on some sort of spot
caterpie
>head to big for body
fennekin
>awkward placement of blowhole
Wailord
>another dragon water-type pokemon
literally only two, one of them's a cross-gen evo and the other's a legendary.

>>31306866
Link if you could?

>>31306949
they're shit and so is your taste

>>31306740
Kidling is the only well-designed pokemon there. And just Kidling, it's evos are shit too.

Also why are water starter fanmons always so shit?

>>31306929
cool design but it looks like it'd just be bidoof

>>31306740
Those starters are no way better than these
>>31306008

Also love that /vp/ shits on "it only gets bigger" but the sage starters follow that exact method

>>31306974
I wasn't really defending them, I was just pointing out that your criticism of them is shitty.

They're bad, but not for the reasons you described.

>>31306977
i dont like aguade but im in love with aguanaut, not sure how anyone can not like that design

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>>31305871
Posting some of mine

>>31307022
kidling is better than fire bear, although I cant say im a fan of those other two designs

then again, i can say the same about all of your designs

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>>31307064

>>31306957
Don't have one, there's too many. Just look for them. I once tried to do constructive crticism about the design of a shitty mon called Magnitogre and the response from the devs was some "tehe thanks for filling your complaint, we will know mold our game to your specifications" copypasta. I wasn't even trying to shitpost, it was actual insight on the design. Fuck Sage, seriously.

>>31306740
From cubzero to penglacier they look ugly, the concepts are okay but the design should took another direction.
The rest of the ones shown are okay but some of the other not shown also suffer the problem from above.

>>31307049
i like all their designs but not together, ya cant have all 3 of the starters be furry animals

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>>31306238

It's fucking trash, this one is way better execution of that concept.

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>>31307095

>>31307049
The grass one is just retail Deerling. The fire one seems too goofy for a starter, but i'd use it if it was an early route-mon. The water starter is spot-on, though

i have loads of ideas for fakemon but i can't draw so nobody will EVER KNOW

>>31307125
does it have an evo, cause I think i'd agree if it played on what its referencing more, like the other beaner

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I made some autistic shit the other day, too

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Some of these FUSE designs are laughably bad.

>>31305871
There was a time when Decidueye didn't exist and some Anons actually liked the grass one. Look at us now...

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>>31306740
I think most of the Sage concepts are really good, but the designs hardly ever do those concepts justice.
For example, the idea of a marine iguana with salt armour sounds awesome in theory, but the Aguade line don't capture any of the greatness of the concept at all. Hell, they don't even really look like marine iguanas. They just look like any old generic lizard Fakemon with some white plating. It's a travesty that such a cool idea is held back by such an uninspired design, and it's even more of a travesty that I could use that line to describe most of the Sage dex.

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>>31307125
>Its looks badass and reptilian so it's better!
No. Just no. Do you have a problem with "goofy" designs when they bring aesthetic variety?
>>31307193
It has a pre evo. Looks like ass though.

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>>31305871

>>31306520
>Let's remove Lapras' shell, and make her more spiky and angular

>>31307124
I agree with this but I wonder if they did that on purpose. It could be the point of the region or something.

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I'll get the eeveeluution out of the way.

>>31307147
I really like the fir tree owl, but I think it looks too similar to a Zelda character

>>31307666
>aesthetic variety
I'm sure that's what they said about the special ed kids in standard education classes.

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>>31307625
Honestly, I think that's fair criticism

>>31307673

>>31306740
>mostly are pokemon rip-offs

>>31306578
Weird, I only like the middle one

>>31307399
That one isn't even that bad, just remove the ponytail and skirt/armour and you have yourself a good-looking mon

>>31307064
So would this be the Grass starter? A+ for the unique concept, can't say I've seen anything like it before.

>>31308979
At first I was wonder what you were on about, since it would diminish the presence of Samurott in the design, but actually think about it, it would make it look more Anubis-like than Lucario actually is.

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Rate them. Their names are Monew and Bimeow, respectively. They're also both Normal/Psychic types.

>>31306008
I love the bear, bur the other are very similar and look like 5Gen monkeys, the water one is ugly af

>>31306171
Clovermon/10
They aren't fat enough, though.

>>31306520
I love the first two, but what's the point of making it a masculine Lapras

>>31307666
funny you say that, cause the creator has stated that he's gonna redo several of his designs, including Jumbean

>>31310205
First stage is weird, but pretty neat. What's it based on (apart from a cat, obviously)?
Second stage looks like a Chinese rip off Meowth. Definitely needs improvements.

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>>31310453
Monew was based on this kitten.

>>31307695
>any plesiosaur must be lapras
I mean I know you just wanted a (you) but in this case that was actually the point. It's meant to be a distant divergent ancestor of modern lapras designed to explain why lapras are so whale-like what with the pods and the singing and the overhunting. It's also a water/dragon pseudo legend so it was designed to be viable where lapras isn't.

>>31307625
I think they were supposed to be kaiju also. Not that I totally disagree

>>31307399
>Edge master

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I had an idea for a Pokemon, but I have zero drawing tools (or skill) so here's a potato doodle of the general idea.

It starts off as a Steel/Normal type, and looks like a little lizard with a bucket on its head. Basically a rowdy little lizard that lives by factories and big cities and salvages metal to make armor. As it evolves, its armor becomes "refined" but it gradually becomes more savage and violent. In its final stage, it's Steel/Dark and is entirely machine.

>>31306171
Slow special attacker with a sword? Ok

I thought it was a Hacidic jew at first

>>31307049
the shiny are
>grass starter is red/beige with orange leaves
>fire starter is yellow/orange
>water starter is lime and green

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I just got finished designing this gal.

Cynardiac
Grass/Fairy
Based on an artichoke flower.

>>31313524
damn she thiqq

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10/10

>>31307049
Grass starter needs beeter eyes and a facial expression. I get that its supposed to give off a deer in headlights vibe but it just makes it look a bit unnerving and bland in a way that starters shouldnt be.

The bear is a bit too much of just a literal bear, and also just looks like a tiny version of an adult bear rather than an actual cub.

Water starter is almost perfect but the eyes need to be changed. Right now it looks sinister, something that no starter does. The closest you can get is Litten and that's an expression of apathy more than anything. It just looks a big too evil to be a starter. It'd work as some other pokemon but not as a starter with it's current design.

Basically make the starters fit more into the Cute/Cool/Goofy archetypes the starters have often have (especially gen 3 onwards)

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>>31306740
>>31306772
>>31306787
>>31306866
>>31306910
>>31306977
>>31307022
>>31307625
>not posting the full dex

>>31307853
The only fakemon in sage that's even remotely arguably a rip off of an official pokemon is magroplex

>>31307114
>I once tried to do constructive crticism about the design of a shitty mon called Magnitogre and the response from the devs was some "tehe thanks for filling your complaint, we will know mold our game to your specifications" copypasta. I wasn't even trying to shitpost, it was actual insight on the design. Fuck Sage, seriously.

How long ago was it? You have to keep in mind that sage designs have been finalized for like 3 years already, and the devs have sort of gotten tired of people asking to change them. For what it's worth, I agree magniogre is terrible, but overall, I think out of any fakemon dex, sage has the most amount of good designs that actually feel like pokemon.

For example, >>31306520 and >>31307673 look really cool, but neither of them styalitcally feel like a Pokemon design,

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>>31313731
And the newer Vectol.2 design

>>31313731
>p-please like my sage fakemon p-pls ;_;

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>>31313737
newer paramoth

>>31313747
I'm not a part of sage you faggot, did you even read the post?

>>31313781
Did you? Go back to your private Sage Skype you faggot.

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>>31313792
not anon but

what the heck, man

>>31305871
Blaziken/10
Pyroar/10
Reshiram/10

>>31313731
Shill harder

>>31313853
>Shilling for a fangame made by autists on 4chan

I just like the dex for the reasons I said in the post. This is, after all, a thread about fakemon. Why wouldn't I post fakemon I like?

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>>31313853
>Shill
you do know what that word means right newfriend?

>>31313737
I'm actually unsure on this one personally. I liked the first stage being a mouse, but I feel 2 doesn't need it. Ah well.

>>31313917
what's wrong with his chin?

>>31305871
They look good. No starters have a real theme that applies to every generation of starters. If the other mon fit the design style would be fine.

>>31306238
huh, this site is nice. I like a lot of the mons here.

>>31305871
I hope, the fire lion won´t appear as starter in the next 2 generations, because it´s just everywere in Pokémon. I know, it´s a manticore, but it´s boring.

I would pick the the grass pokémon. Looks a bit like Blaziken.

>>31313731
The Phlask line is fantastic

>>31305871
those all look like absolute ass
>>31306008
>more fucking monkeys
>>31306238
potential
>>31306520
I like it
but why dolphin into a plesiosaur?
>>31306740
They look like they got the formula down better than gen 7 did,
>>31307049
I like where this is headed

>>31313632
cute

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>>31313729
>The grass starter needs beeter eyes and facial expression. I get its supposed to give off that bored toad vibe but it just makes it look a but unnerving and bland in a way that starters shouldnt be
>The turtle is a bit too much of just a literal turtle, and also just looks like a tiny version of an adult turtle rather than an actual hatchling
>Fire starter is almost perfect in desing but the eyes need changed, right now it gives off the deer in headlights vibe, something that no starter does. The closet your can get is Treeco and thats an expression of boredom more than anything. It just looks too bored to be a starter. It'd work as some other pokemon but not as a starter with its current design

>Basically make the starters fir more into the bored/uninterested/sleepy archetypes that have often have (especially gen 1 onwards)

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Well now I'm curious. This is a fire/ice pup I did for fun a while back
It's not really supposed to be a starter, just a random doggo I drew on my own style

/vp/ doesn't even approve half the alola dex, much less a fakemon dex.

I don't even think there's one pokemon /vp/ unanimously likes, but I wish it was Corsola

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>>31305959
>Literally a Lugia and Reshiram hybrid

>>31313917
I'm sorry but are you implying anon wasn't trying to make me suck sage's dick then?

>>31316212
I wasn't, I was sharing my opinions you fagmuffin

>>31313737
Remind me why this thing isn't Poison/Electric-type.

>>31316360
Because pokemon concepts were decided before designs for a lot of the dex. IE, it was said "poison type virus pokemon" was agreed on before the design itself was finalized.

In Vectol's case, the concept originated it being more as an actual organic microscopic virus, and designs only gradually shifted to include more electronic virus elements. By then, it was too controversial for changing the type to actually happen.

It end end up getting Volt Absorb though as a result.

>>31305871
so is no-one going to mention the anal beads tail?

>>31316433
No, we have you for that purpose.

>>31316449
well fuck.

still a better deviancy than 90% of this board.

>>31315486
The gen 1 starters have hardly any of those problems though.

Bulbasaur only looks like that in this one image, which is semi famous anyways for how spaced out he looks.

Squirtle has a fucking curled tail, a humanoid face, and a very unnatural bright blue colour. It's far more than just a tutle.

Charmander doesn't look bored or like a deer in headlights at all. It looks a bit dopey and similar to a baby, which is a desirable trait for a starter.

>Basically make the starters fir more into the bored/uninterested/sleepy archetypes that have often have (especially gen 1 onwards)
This only applies to Bulbasaur really and in an image famous for how bad it is. Even his fucking Green sprite is better.

>>31305871
grass: 8/10, replace arrow with leaf sword and it'd be 10/10, ie, it suffers retroactively because of decidueye.

Fire: 9/10: tone down the final form beard.

Water 3/10: No idea what's going on here.

>>31313632
Jesus I need this. It could be what Jangmo-o should have been.

>>31305871
anal beads can't be unseen

>>31310205
I like it but bimew is just a regular car with two tails. It need at least a third eye to be as weird as the preevo

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Rate my fakemon
Water/ice, based on the ningen

>>31313803
FUCKING PIDGEOT

>>31313731
and harambe is machamp rip-off

also don't forget nidoking,etc.

>>31306008
Orchimp 7/10
Not very original, but nice design, no forced cuteness but still cute in its own way, also we need a grass type monkey other than the stupid trio's one

>Charkui 5/10
not very inspired, too humanoid, I hate mons with fake clothes, but it's not the worst there is, it's okay

Serfin 9/10
Very original appearance, I want to play it

>>31307147
>That bubble owl
Holy shit that's perfect, was this done before Araquanid or inspired by it?

>>31305871
>Manticore
>no wings
fuck
These would be the first time I'd pick a fire type.

>>31313731
they arent too great but better than any other fakemon

>>31317050
>better than any other fakemon
There have been better fakemon posted in this very thread.

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There's going to be one more final evolution, but any hate in the meantime?

>>31317229
Looks interesting, I'd give it a 9/10 for the evolution not being "it gets bigger". What are they supposed to be?

>>31317229
I love how the first stage looks like a hand grabbing a sword without looking tacky. Nicely done.
Also love the face on the second stage, glowing eyes in a black void is always really endearing to me for some reason.

>>31317229
Cool idea but looks more like a kingdom hearts monster then a pokemon

>>31317284
It's a line based on the stages of Knighthood. The Page would carry a knight's weapon, and a Squire would maintain a knight's shield and armor, so these two take on those forms.

>>31317353
I feel somewhat the same way, but a pointy-headed helmet monster with glowing eyes is probably going to look like some kind of Heartless no matter what direction I took it.

>>31316730
NINGEN!

>>31306520
I really like the first two.

>>31315591
The style is nice enough, but I take issue with the concept and execution. Fire and Ice are probably the two most opposed elements in the series, so I'd expect a Pokémon of that type to be interesting, not just a dog with flames and ice on it. I'd drop one of them and make it pure Fire or pure Ice.

>>31313731
>The only fakemon in sage that's even remotely arguably a rip off of an official pokemon is magroplex

Diamat is literally fat Dialga

>>31315318
based gastly

>>31313731
>The only fakemon in sage that's even remotely arguably a rip off of an official pokemon is magroplex
I'd say that Warquila is VERY similar to Braviary, though neither of the prevos look like Rufflet.
I acknowledge that Magroplex is totally just Steelix but it's also my favorite mon in the dex for some reason.

>>31321013
I mean they're both diamond dragons but, well... Diamat actually looks like a Dragon. And a Diamond.

Dialga is cool and all but the stone it's game is named after isn't exactly the main idea behind it's design. Mind you I have no idea what the main idea behind the design is but what I'm trying to say is they're visually distinct enough.

I'll list my personal least favorite Sage designs
>Rocano
It's just kind of generic. Evolutions are cool though.
>Orangutao
Just kind of Ugly, not in the sense of designs like Barbaracle that I actually like, but in the sense that it doesn't look too much like a Pokemon I guess?
>Necronite line
The concept is cool but the execution feels kind of boring.
>Magnitogre
I can get why people dislike this one, I don't find the design too horrendous but it's "Industrial" theme is already filled by Erion, and the Huge Pure Steel type thing is already filled by Magroplex, it feels kind of redundant.

Some of my favorites are probably Magroplex, Ankillosore and Flarrapin I guess? I like big monstery types.

>>31313731
Just like Pokemon Sage, this image is never going to be updated.

>>31306008
All of these could pass for actual starter designs, dunno why people are bitching.

>>31321426
bait

>>31321436
>posting opinions and criticizing people for nitpicking is bait
Go to bed, school starts early.

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R8 or H8

>>31313886
It's not just that you're posting fakemon. It's the way you're doing it by quoting every post that mentions sage in the thread and white knighting the devs that makes you an obvious shill or probably a dev yourself.

>>31305946
The grass starter starts off good but ends up fucking awful looking. Why does it turn into a humanoid when the second stage is more bestial looking? It literally just screams "Digimon".
The fire starter is alright, I guess they're going for a manticore type of design? But its still pretty boring looking, probably because we already have a million lion pokemon lying around.
The water one also starts off pretty good for the first two evolutions, but again looks like shit for the last one. It just looks extemely awkward and makes no sense, would probably look like shit in 3D and animated.

>>31306008
two monkeys/10

tell the artist to kill himself

>>31307049
>it's blue so it's water
ugh

>>31306740
>mountain goat starter
>snow hat rodent
>reindeer
>koberus & cowatti have thick fur
>eight (8) ice types

Is this supposed to be a snow region?

>>31321966
Actually yes. If you played the demo it's all snowy, and the first gym leader uses ice types.

>>31307711
looks too much like it's been drenched in blood

>>31321513
Flamu is cute, but looks a bit "digimon-esque" mostly because of the eyes, try to make the eyes a bit more unique and cartoony if you're going for the authentic pokemon look
The other two are alright in concept, but they have almost identical body types and vague ones at that
Try drawing them in different poses and give them more dynamic body shapes to fit their themes

>>31307711
I like the oriental dragon design (a lot) but it's too busy for an eeveelution
It looks like it would have a lot of personality, but for me it would work better if it wasn't constrained by eevee's concept

>>31305871

I love the manticore, but I also just love manticores in general.

>>31316859

In my opinion, I think wings would overdo it, ya know? Don't want it to become over-designed.

i am pretty pisspoor at art but i spent too much time on this not to post it

this would be part of a legendary pair with a fire/fairy type

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>>31322353
oh balls

>>31305871
Grass is a little Digimon/10 but I like it.
Fire is the most generic but it's decent.
Water I like, but it's pretty much Zerkrom + Reshiram water edition.

>>31322369
I quite like it. Maybe not as a legendary but I'd totally use it just as a standalone.

>>31322369

literally my mom's Groke

I like the ability though.

>>31322631
i didn't want to overdesign it but i'm not really good enough at drawing to make it look properly legendary. such is life

>>31322754
er yeah in hindsight the groke inspiration could've been a little less obvious but it is also based on a catobleplas and you probably don't know what THAT is without looking it up

>>31310205
It might make it too cluttered, but maybe the second evo should have two of every body part. Maybe make the evo literal Siamese(cat) twins?

>>31305871
I like the bird but probably because it's more or less Blaziken.

>>31306008
Every time.

>>31306520
I'd use.

>>31323319
is this a wallet

>>31323991
I'm pretty sure it's a tent.

>>31323991
It's a tent.

>>31310753
>viable where Lapras wasn't
h*ck you

>>31313731
>The only fakemon in sage that's even remotely arguably a rip off of an official pokemon is magroplex
The second row literally starts off with Not Braviary, bud

>>31324290
It was also designed back before B/W released.
A sad coincidence.

>>31324329
Ah fair enough, I didn't realise it was that old. Guess the lack of Fairy-type should have tipped me off.
Really, the Sagedex just seems to be too focused on "we're the COOL Fakemons, we don't have lame or goofy ones like all those other Fakedexes!". Like, I don't know how to explain, but the whole thing feels "try-hard" to me.
and the existence of the names Vultergyst and Coltergeist so close to each other unironically #triggers me

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>>31324398
Doppole makes up for it.

I'm bad with numerical ratings, so fuck you.

>31305871
These are all bad.
Silhouettes are very busy.
Except for the 2nd stages, the bodies are very flat and rely on markings to simulate detail.
Too many colors.
Grass and water 2nd stages are built like legendaries. I think it's partly a posture/personality thing. Starters all have either a 'fun' or 'badass' attitude about them. E.G. the gen 1 starters are all the latter while Bayleef and Feraligatr are the former. These have a stoic, haughty air. The fire starter doesn't have this, but waffles too much on the manticor theme.
>grass
Black feet, black talons; black feet, white talons; white feet, black talons.
Doesn't need orange, or at least as much. Make it a detail color. Doesn't need the Charlie Brown waist stripe.
Squid/arrow hair has to go. Make it sell "feathers" again. Super saiyan vest. The baggy pants look is bad for a bird and is in fact the opposite of how bird legs look.
Basic and 1st have a tail and wings that the 2nd drops. They also imply more of a dragon final, especially the basic form. Collar ruff on the basic and 1st stages is dropped by the 2nd stage.
>fire
Basic is fine, though it feels like it attempts to tease a final evo too much. (Look at these things coming out of my mane, what could the end up as? Look at this tail.) Mane things are dropped, by the way.
Extraneous shoulder markings. Just detail some fur.
I dislike the color shift in all stages. Especially that fur goes yellow->orange->black and hair goes orange->purple->same.
I want it to be a lot more of a manticore. It just doesn't push it enough.
Stoutland beard.
Basic stage's face is so much different than the other two's. The basic's ear design, which is echoed by the tail, is completely dropped.
>>water
Dinosaur tadpole. Markings are meaningless, as a whole it's a flat color. Think about why Mudkip is better. Eyes weird me out.
1st stage grows more markings, but the markings also grow fin/feathers. Pushes dinosaur a bit more.

CONT

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People tell me my character designs look too pokemon-esque. None of these are intended as pokemon.

>>31325078
Can't say I agree with that sentiment. I could definitely see your designs being from a mon game, but not Pokémon specifically.
They're pretty neat though, I like the space whale thing on the right and the skeleton angel on the second row.

>>31306238
i like these a lot. unique. layers of meaning. fun and cute.

>>31306520
not bad but very one dimensional

>>31307049
good but forgettable

>>31307147
are these all yours?

>>31307267
could be worse

>>31307673
not bad

>>31313731
lots of good designs but really should have some cuts. i worked on this project for a long time and the quality threshold is high but the dex still could lose 30 mons and be better.

>>31325078
Most of them remind me either of digimon, kirby enemies, or Ben 10 aliens, but not of pokemon
Maybe it's just because any cartoony mythical creature is usually equated with pokemon by a lot of people

>>31325078
something like hyperlight drifter is a more accurate comparison. what are these for?

>>31325214
Just random designs; mostly shooting the shit. Although the little guys on the bottom left are all intended for an SMT clone I wanna make.

>>31325378
have you ever made fakemon or done pokemon sprites?

>>31325431
Not really, desu. I mean I've thought of ideas, but they're really not any different from my normal stuff. Why do you ask?

>>31325483
just wondering. you seem like an industrious person. i've been making some fakemon designs possibly for a modest romhack. i'm terrible at spriting though so i've been thinking about trying to find somebody to do the sprites for me.

your sprites are good.

>>31325594
Well, how far along are you in the hack? I could help out I suppose.

>>31325967
i'm still making the dex. i'm not super familiar with rom hacks to begin with. i worked on sage for a long time but only on the creative side.

you just seem like the kind of person who enjoys making shit in your free time. i'm the same way.

>>31315593
It's Rayquaza.

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i found this on a previous thread

>>31307267
I like fuzzy bug.

>>31325078
well I love all of these and selfishly hope you do character design for a game someday.
an indie game company could really use your art direction.

>>31306008
>>31305871
10/10 water starters (only the basic stage)

>>31307673
I could honestly see these as UBs.

>>31316827
Just before, day after it got leaked and i got depressed
>>31325139
All mine

>>31315431
I think that is more of Ichthyosaurus. Maybe the blue "hole" on its head is just its spot.

>>31313632
Imagine it making little peeping noises.

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>tfw these starters aren't real
>tfw we will never get such amazing grass starter
Why

>>31305871
Im a cat person and that cat is not impressing me. I will say the cub is at least better designed that litleo. The bird one is merely okay. I guess I could accept it but I am glad I do not have to. What the hell is the water one? A bootleg resriram? Its kind of cute to be honest though its prevos look the worst.

>>31306520
Looks pretty cool

>>31306740
>goat starter
YES FUCK YES FUCK YES BUTT FUCK YES

>>31325078
You're the guy who made your starter a Hindu god or something, right?

>>31305871
Grass Line 4/10
Fire Line 6/10
Water Line 2/10

>>31306008
Grass 9/10
Fire 4/10
Water 4/10

>>31306238
7/10

>>31306520
4/10

>>31306740
Don't really like any of these but nice colouring

>>31306929
4/10

>>31307049
Grass 6/10
Fire 5/10
Water 5/10

>>31307064
2/10

>>31307095
3/10

>>31307125
4/10

>>31307147
5/10

>>31307267
The Ice Fire Dragon is fantastic

>>31307399
Sakuyamon is already in Digimon

>>31307666
2/10

>>31307673
3/10

>>31307711
This looks like a straight up fursona 2/10

>>31307779
2/10

>>31310205
2/10

>>31313524
Looks like Vegimon

>>31313632
6/10

>>31313737
3/10

>>31313765
3/10

>>31315591
cute 5/10

>>31317229
6/10

>>31323011
2/10

>>31325078
don't look Pokémon at all

>>31329921
actually pretty cool but I don't get how the water starter is water when it's just a blue goat ffs

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>>31329921
The problem I've always had with these is that they look more like legendaries and the mid stages look more like final stages

>>31330299
> I don't get how the water starter is water when it's just a blue goat ffs
It's based on the Chinese water deer