Story so far: http://lom678.deviantart.com/gallery/61172531/MoonQuest
Twitter: https://twitter.com/NotQuesty
Are you autistic?
>>30244171
How new are you?
>>30244214
Not new at all. Just never actually clicked on one of your threads before. Didn't know how fucking bad your art was and how autistic your writing was.
>>30244236
Let's see you do better.
>>30244264
I don't need to be able to do better to criticize your art.
>>30244264
In fact, I admit I'm a shit artist. However the diference is I have the self awareness not to post my shitty art on to the Internet. You're like the Sonichu guy. You unironically think your work is good.
>>30244293
No, but it shows how irrelevant your opinion is. If you actually gave some proper and well thought out criticism then I would take you seriously.
>>30244353
I love my work because I get to practice drawing and writing. I'm not spectacular at drawing but I have gotten better over the years and NotQuesty has helped me. I make NotQuesty mostly for the story and I'm working on character voice and grammar most of the time. It's a real challenge trying to take several suggestions from people and trying to weave them all together into a coherent narrative.
I know the art style is lacking but that is part of the humor. Also, I'm not going to break my balls working super hard on a comic series that needs to have constant updates. I'd rather the reader just look at the pictures and fill in the blanks with their own imagination.
The picture I've posted is how someone interpreted NotQuesty.
>>30244353
>>30244293
Also, the most important thing about my comics is to just have fun. You can spend your time being negative but it would be much better for you to join into the series and give your own suggestions to make the story better. I hope you'll join in.
>Stop making so much noise, Lilie, you'll wake up my parents !
Oh god this is so bad. The art is garbage, the writing is cringeworthy and the execution of the post is trash. Using questy's name for this is awful.
>>30244515
>I know the art style is lacking but that is part of the humor.
Don't give me this crap. There is a difference between making a simplistic art style to get things done more quickly and what you do. You draw Chicken chan as if she was a 40 year old midget whore. And Kukui's face looks like it belongs to a landwhale. The limbs are also awful. You make no attempt at making them look like they portray what is happening or to make them look like they belong to the characters. Don't pretend you get to practice drawing if you don't make any effort at all. You're keeping yourself in your disgusting comfort zone, not practicing to improve.
And if this is your best attempt at writing, I'm fucking glad I never entered one of your threads before.
>>30247389
As much as I like Questy AND NotQuesty, I won't be his defence force here, I think you may have a point about comfort zone drawing wise, but his shitty stories gave me the feels, nobody will force you, but you may try to look into his first quest. Granted it's goddamn long, but might be worth it. I'm not loving his newer things (yet?) but I'm giving him the time. Of course if I don't like it, I'll call him on his bullshit. But you're free of doing what you want, I won't speak for NotQuesty, but somehow I'd be glad that even guys like you come here and say they hate the things, because criticism may be good and it prevents the thing to turn into a hugbox.
tl;dr : do whatever the fuck you want.
>>30247389
Meh,I like my writing but you're entitled to your opinion.
Chicken impregnates Lillie
>>30247711
I was actually a bit iffy on commenting about plot because the beginning of both questy's stories and other similar ones are always awkward. Maybe I was only unfortunate to stumble across an extra shitty page. Because damn, this one was bad. I may try checking out the other stuff some time in the future.
>>30250387
Well, I can only tell you to try with its original comic, but yeah, so far, moon quest is meh, but I think it's because it's still in the "there's no plot yet so we do whatever the fuck comes across our minds" part of the story.
Let's hope NotQuesty will come up with something soon, or a suggester will do.
>>30250605
We're only at part 9, so there's so much time for things to happen. We don't even have a starter pokemon yet.
The thing about NotQuesty's Quest, especially Kanto onwwards, I knew where I was going. I have no idea what I'm going to do for MoonQuest yet but just give me some time.
>>30250605
What part made you feel for the original?
>>30250774
That's what I meant, but poorly I guess.
>>30250798
Already told you ages ago man, some characters' death, some others' not death, and stuff, when I meant feels, I meant feelings in the broad sense, sadness, happyness, anger, curiosity, all that kind of bullshit that a story is supposed to devellop in you.
But I haven't cried yet for your comics. If you achieve that, you'll gain all the respect I can give to you. But don't make this an objective, just do your thing.
part 9
I need a kahuna and three starters
>>30251493
Kahuna: Shield Knight
Water Starter: Ballio
Grass: Plague Knight
Fire: Harambe
>>30251493
Kahuna : Kakuna
Grass starter : Oddish cosplaying Solid Snake
Fire starter : Prehistoric Litten
Water starter : A glass of water
>>30251493
one of starters is shiny
>>30251493
Kahuna: Hermoine Granger
Starters: Masculine AF Popplio, emo tween Litten, Comfy Rowlet
>>30252124
Picturing Popplio with 5 o'clock shadow and a cigar. Emo tween litten is self-explanatory, Rowlet has a blanket and tea
Can someone post all of the other parts? The link isn't working for me :(
>>30251493
Kahuna: Nigger Oak
Starters:
>>30252124
This, but make the Litten a femboy slut.
>>30251493
Kahuma: Waluigi
Starters: Clint Eastwood-esque Popplio, Agumon, and Woodman
Kahuna: Masked Royal
Starters: Larvesta that only speaks Egyptian, Paras that has truffles growing on his back instead of Cordyceps, Wimpod that talks like the Fonz
part 10
>>30254486
Shiny balleo is a fedora tipping gentleman. He lavishes Lillie with niceguy speak
>>30254486
Fucking easy, baby. Ballio all day long. Lillie wants Solid, but it ends up being Nebby in a suit.
>>30254486
I MADE THIS HAPPEN
Ballio
Ballio's ability is debonair. It's auto attract upon entering battle
>>30254666
>Lillie wants Solid, but it ends up being Nebby in a suit.
Seconding this
bampu
Ballio picks Lillie as his starter Pokèmon.
Tapu Koko is Barry Bee Benson with a lightning bolt on his wings
>>30256720
oh please, yes
part 11
plague knight used poison gas
lmao no one wants to read your autismquest kill yourself
>>30258159
no one wants to read your autistic post kill yourself
why does this thread still exist
>>30258000
Prehistoric litten has strong jaw and immediately crits with "ancient fang" the rock type bite clone. Lillie feels bad and cries
>>30258159
>>30258262
lmao h*ck off.
>>30258000
>>30258363
Nebby comes out of hiding in Lillie's butt to console her and suggests they go visit the ruins