Exploding Rats

>>28365267
>4 legs to bipidel
it's shit

Get rid of 3rd stage or make that its own thing

Also fire type

>>28365267
first stage is literally rattata

>>28365267
Uh
http://smiley-fakemon.deviantart.com/art/4-Dynamouse-313384559
http://smiley-fakemon.deviantart.com/art/5-Pyrode-313434090
http://smiley-fakemon.deviantart.com/art/6-Raxplode-313853792

>>28365427
Yeah I didn't think this through. Trying to think my own bomb rat line.

>>28365267
I really really like the concept and the names. That said, some criticisms:
- Tail looks the exact same for all three stages
- The colors / patterns seem like they're supposed to communicate something but to me they seem just kind of haphazard. If Dynamaus is a stick of dynamite, maybe give it a longer body rather than one that tapers. Is Explodent supposed to be a rocket? I think it has a little too much going on in its face.
- Pyrat's design is just really on the nose. Do your best to make it look like a rat that resembles a bomb, rather than a bomb with rat face / legs. Maybe even use some pics of hamsters as references since they're already basically ball-shaped.
Keep at it, these have a lot of potential! Looks like something I'd love to pick up early in the game.

>>28365427
except that's houndour/houndoom

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>>28365356
>a picture of something standing on its back legs means its bipedal

Have you ever seen a rat? They stand up all the time. I guess pic related means irl rats are bipedal tho... who knew?

>>28365267
cyndaquil?

>>28365267
Design:
>stage 0 is good
>stage 1 is too similar to stage 0. It needs to build on the concept in smoke meaningful way, not switch out the abdomen for a stick of dynamite.
>stage 2 needs the most work, it also doesn't seem "big" enough to me. Needs another layer of conceptual development from stage 1 to stage 2

Naming
>Pyrat is perfect
>Dynamouse is more perfect, but going from rat to mouse might bee too inconsistent. Then again croconaw-feraligatr exists so. Maybe you're fine.
>Explodent is annoying to say and should be scrapped for something better

Overall not bad op, these are my opinions hopefully they're useful to you

>>28365267
Explodent's name is perfect