Commenting on Starters

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>>28224512
Cuburn
Type: Fire
Species: Fire Cub Pokémon
Ability: Blaze
HA: Sheer Force
Stats: 51/68/54/47/50/40

Urseara
Type: Fire
Species: Fire Bear Pokémon
Ability: Blaze
HA: Sheer Force
Stats: 73/95/65/60/65/52

Barbear
Type: Fire/Dark
Species: Savage Pokémon
Ability: Blaze
HA: Sheer Force
Stats: 95/125/84/85/83/62
Theme: Power

>>28224512
can we see the other starters?

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>>28224739

I see what you did there.

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>>28224739
>barbear
>bara + bear

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>>28224739
>>28224512
>Bipedal
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love the designs and the ideas.Are they based on anything other than bears and werewolves.

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>>28224782
>Assuming

God I wish this fakemon autism was bannable.

>>28224512
turning into a werewolf kinda shits all over the courage theme
no one sees a werewolf and thinks courage

>>28224827
Why?

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Bubbawn
Type: Water
Species: Rain Fawn Pokémon
Ability: Torrent
HA: Magic Guard
Stats: 55/44/52/58/56/44

Raindeer
Type: Water
Species: Rain Deer Pokémon
Ability: Torrent
HA: Magic Guard
Stats: 72/66/64/76/74/53

Elkelder
Type: Water/Psychic
Species: Moose Pokémon
Ability: Torrent
HA: Magic Guard
Stats: 100/77/83/108/92/70
Theme: Wisdom

Grass and water are legit 10/10s would use.

>>28224512
I think Lulup don't look like a wolf or even a Wolf.
I like Howleaf.
I don't really like these red thing next to the eyes of Wererazor

>>28224739
Culburn is... just an orange bear.
Urseara is more fire-like, I like it.
Barbear lose too many things urseara gain.

Wasn't the grass starter a deer yesterday? maybe OP's not the same guy but the artstyle and the pictures are nearly identical.

The bear is not bad IMO, starts well with cuburn and urseara, but barbear to me looks like:
>Ursaring
>Wearing black fur patches
>With the face of a lillipup

Is not bad for a start but you could build it up into something better. The name "barbear" is a bit weird-sounding too, IMO. I know it's barbarian + bear but it sounds sillier more than it sounds menacing.

The elk-like deer looked better than wereazor here, but it's not bad, just the deer was better.

>>28224858
The best of the three I think. Not so much to talk about, but 8,5/10

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>>28224858
>elk pokemon

These are actually pretty cool. They look more natural and Pokemon-themed than most fakemon and aside from the bear they're pretty creative. I'd like to see something that switches it up a bit with the Courage/Power/Wisdom thing though, as obviously they would go Grass/Fire/Water respectively. It would be nice if they did a 180 halfway through and suddenly became Power/Wisdom/Courage or something like that.

>>28224512
I kind of prefered the elk, though it was a bit close the the Deerling line

>>28224739
These actually look pretty sweet, though they feel a bit similar to teddiursa and ursaring. The middle stage is probably the best, as it gets across the fire aspects well, though it's lost in the last stage.

I'd almost say to flip the two.

>>28224858
I think I like these the least. While the designs are okay, Deer don't really scream water, and the names are meh.

>>28224512
keep it a wolf all the way

>>28224739
make it fire/rock and give it big rock claw, maybe a little rock armor looking shit. that's powerful looking


>>28224858
final form has too much blue
throw some of that cream back in
maybe add some pink/purple mystical shit on the horns so it actually looks psychic

>>28224782
It's a pun of barbarian. You're letting all those buzzwords go to your head.

>>28224858
"Raindeer" is a genius name

>>28224834
It's Pokémon. You can do whatever you want.

>>28225219
It's called constructive criticism anon.

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>>28224858
I kind of liked the Grass/Psychic version more

>>28224858
>Raindeer

>>28224512
>>28224739
>>28224858
>all three are mammals
ew

These are just animals with green, red, and blue colors. There's nothing very interesting about them.

Yeah the GrassMoose yesterday was much better than any of these. Why would the Elk be Water? It makes no sense. Also the little trees on the head of the mid-stage was the best part.

>>28225787
>>28225911
This. The face on the grass one and the purple hand antlers feel a lot more "Psychic" than the cartoon moose water type.