Pokemon Fanfiction General and Writethread

Fic recap:

An anon wrote some M/M stuff involving the new professor Kukui. NSFW
http://archiveofourown.org/works/6911761

An anon is doing something involving a guy using some tool to materialize game characters to have 'fun' with. This one is a WIP with Misty. NSFW
http://pastebin.com/sKv0wqwK

Kosatsu (now sickboy) made a oneshot involving some May and Blaziken. NSFW
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11958941/2/Assorted-Pokephilia-Lemons

Updated fics:
Solar's Chapter 10 of Gift of the Protector. SFW
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10121590/10/Gift-of-the-Protector-Radiant-Heart

Keksimusmaximus's chapter 2 of a guy taken into the Pokemon World. SFW.
http://pastebin.com/16ksXM9t

First for the return of bullying when?

>>26589479
>tfw first fic of S/M is M/M
I don't know how to feel about this...

>>26589399
Wait is world building June a competition?

I'd give the Suicune lewds 3-4 days

>TOTT
I don't got time for idle worldbuilding in worlds I don't have. I have shitty fanfiction to make that'll do that for me.

>ToTT
I don't think it's a competition. Comparing my notes with others is nice, but I'm hardly competitive about it. More than anything I use others' entries as a second opinion to see what about their 'verse they wrote about and to give myself inspiration. I'm going for a little of column A, a little of column C. It's been a blast so far, and it's also really good writing practice (especially since I've been out of the game for a while). Some of the prompts don't quite fit the PMD world I'm developing, but I take that as a challenge rather than as a deterrent; I can find SOMETHING suitable to nearly every suggested topic.

If anyone's still unaware, here's a link: http://worldbuildingjune.tumblr.com/

I know >tumblr, but it's just a convenient place to organize it all. I use one to post my entries, as well.

>>26589399
>>26592507
>ToTT
I've never heard of WBJ being a competition. Then again, if we want to compete we can always compete.

I myself am not interested in competing, thanks. I'm more interested in giving and receiving feedback from other people. Also fun, maybe, if it works. And exposure. Exposure is always good.

Today I have to tackle geography and races. At least races allows for some practical cop outs.

Reminder for those who don't want to bork their works in writing, we have pokédics for everyone!

>http://veniasilente.user.tropi.us/_a/pokedics/index.php

They are open for everyone to use, it has a lot to swallow from Pokémon names to item names and franchise-specific terms. Right now it's English only but when I stop being lazy we'll be able to try the dics with Spanish, French and hopefully German tongues.

>CAPTCHA
>CAIRANNE Berry
>Berry
hmmmmmmm

>inb4 pushed down to p10

Recommending Soft Reset. Pretty good read so far, link here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11019737/1/Soft-Reset

Basically, the protag is a guy that lives in a world with Pokemon, but instead of actually training Pokemon, he spent all his time playing the video games and TCG. Then ends up rasing actual Pokemon and tries to apply game mechanics to real life.

How populair do good fanfics get? Like, how many people will read it? I imagine it's a very niche thing and people mostly write for themselves?

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>>26593977
Ultimately, its a matter of audience, and what you consider good. My old account was reasonably accomplished as far as views and readerbase is concerned, but I still would only consider it mildly popular, because some fics have six digit view counts.

After making a new account and switching to writing about different IPs, you have to build a new audience and attempt to carve a niche out for yourself at the same time.

So I'm less successful this time around, but I'm also writing much more for myself, whereas I used to write at least partly for my readers (and not in a good way.)

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>>26593977
I have some fics on FF.net that have hundreds of unique viewers and with all of them combined maybe a few thousand.

I don't update those that frequently anymore though since I haven't really had the inspiration to continue most of them for quite a while now sadly enough.

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New thread, new chapter. I just hope I can keep up this pace.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10121590/11/Gift-of-the-Protector-Radiant-Heart

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>>26589479
Smut-anon here, finished writing the next scene with Misty just a while ago and I just have to write the ending now.

I decided to finish this version despite the fact that most people didn't seem to like Misty's immediate forceful personality change.

In the end though I found the new persona to be easier to write since I haven't watched the anime for quite a while and would probably miss some important details of her character if I attempted to write an accurate representation of her.

Link here (WIP & NSFW):
http://pastebin.com/M4AHPJrH

>mfw came several times while writing this.

>>26594543
So no game-version? Well that's fine I guess.
I do hope you don't rely too much on forceful personality changes

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>>26594959
Oh no need to worry, I don't plan on making the personality change my go-to plot device or anything, I'm just experimenting with it and watching how people react to it for now.

I might do the game version of Misty as well at some point but after thinking about it I've decided that I'll do it in a separate chapter all together [/spoiler]possibly in one with a threesome/foursome.[/spoiler]

Its all just ideas floating in the stormy sea that is my creative mind at this point.

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>>26595166
>fucked up the spoiler

>>26595221
ctrl+s for quick replies buddy.

>>26594474
>phsycic

>>26595239
Are there any other tricks like that? Strikethrough? Emojis? <BLINK>?

>>26595572
not that I'm aware of

It's lit

>>26597421
No, it's /pol/ time...

>>26594543
>greentexts
it's this reason why writing smut fuels me

>>26594138
...which one is the one that netted almost 87k views?

I'm running out of dick/vag euphemisms to use while writing smut, and "manhood"/"womanhood" is just cringe. The sample applies to "member" although I have to resort to that from time to time. You guys got any good, rare ones?

>>26600179
Nope, but people will probably not care if you use the same word a few times considering they're reading a smut.

>>26600195
A few times is fine, but it starts to get repetitive quick. And writing smut isn't an excuse to write badly.

>>26600179
Off the top of my head, and going for quantity over quality

Male: organ, shaft, piece, appendage, limb, vessel, head, probe, barrel.

Female: walls, halls, roof, channel, warmth, depths, core, folds, mouth.

Some of them are pretty flowery and *bleh*, others are pretty circumstantial, and maybe I managed to name only things you already had, but whatever. Maybe some will work.

You can also occasionally work around needing to address those bits of anatomy directly by giving out other sensory input around them. Sometimes a vague, general term with some good sensory information can really help with immersion, if required.

It is one of the unique challenges of writing material like this. You learn your whole life that over-repetition is bad, but need to do so here and do it well to get the detail required for an engrossing fic. It is actually surprisingly effective exercise for a writer or poet.

>the diaper requests in the ideabin
What the fuck /vp/?

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http://pastebin.com/L35imkKy

I lost my trip, but this is the only post I'll be making in this thread anyway.

Suwa here, trying my hand at a bullyfic. I didn't expect to go for human bullying Pokemon, but that's how it turned out.

On a related note, I've realized that using existing OCs in smut before actually finishing their canon fics is probably not the best publicity I could give them. But fuck it.

>>26600451
>Professor going at it already
Only in the Aloha region

>>26601096
Huh. Didn't know you'd give something like that a shot.
Who's the victim?

Updated my fic. Longest chapter so far, by far.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11952351/1/HaremMon-Gotta-Fxxk-em-All

Will start work on the Illumise request next.

>>26604360
Linked the wrong chapter. It's actually https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11952351/7/HaremMon-Gotta-Fxxk-em-All

>>26603425
It's not my exact fetish, but it's close enough to physical/psychological torture that I can kind of get behind it. On the bill for this one is a Scrafty.

>>26604376
>>26604360
have you checked out the list of requests you got from the previous thread?

>>26604450
Yeah. Be working on them too.

>>26604491

i know it's been quite a while since the original post , but would it be ok if I requested something?

>>26605353
Go for it. If I feel like it's something I can tackle I'll add it to the pile.

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It's been almost 7 years since I regularly read fanfictions, but this is actually intriguing me to start reading again.

I remember reading a lot on that one Cave of Dragonflies website. And another that always stood out to me was this one I found on fanfiction.net where a bunch of rich kids were on a reality TV show where they raised their first Pokemon on an island. I always loved reality TV premises when I was younger. I wonder if there's any modern fics doing similar things.

Also, do any of you have any good experiences doing long writing roleplays? I've always preferred that over fanfics for Pokemon because I love the RNG aspect of your character's available Pokemon choices, but with the state of most forums these days it feels like the only way I'll be able to get my creativity flowing again is by solo writing fanfics.

>>26605615
>Also, do any of you have any good experiences doing long writing roleplays?
Since late 2011 and counting, though technically I'm there for a cameo.

Mostly it depends on what kind of RPing are you looking for, if it is more "tabletop set" or more a "ITT: /vp/ in a Pokémon world" kind of thing, and of course on what kind of community you end up in. But there is a certain value to RPing that you won't be able to get with any kind of solo experience, no matter how good it is.

>>26605615
I've got a friend that used to write hundreds of thousands of words worth of RP in a single arc with one other guy, but I don't think he has the time to do any of that anymore. He's also a fag.

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>>26605446
Alright then!

A braixen receives a thigh massage from her trainer, and the lewdness gradually escalates until he just fucking destroys her.

And if braixen could be chubby, that would be great.

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Could any of you guys do me a big favor and come up with some good Ballio fanfiction? A friend demanded a fic in exchange for unrelated porn.

>>26607233
>until he just fucking destroys her
This is my kinda smut.

>>26604431
>psychological
You have my attention

>>26594543
so once you do finish up this chapter, will you go back to doing nonpokemon chapter stuff or go to your other pokemon story?

>>26610451
Just for you anon I'll try to get all psychological

>>26612223
Drunk psychic shenanigans when?

>>26612470
Try striking a balance of sorts if an opportunity arises though

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>>26589399

>Topic of the Thread: So apparently there's this worldbuilding June thing going on. Are you participating for fun, for competition, or just using it as a time to actually practice things you're not sure of?

I am, yes. Using it as an opportunity to play around with my fic's setting a bit and both codify what I have and chip away a bit at some stuff that still needs a bit more thought.

On that note, new chapter.

FFN:
>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/1/Fledglings

AO3:
>http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593/chapters/16128496

Am a little worried that the length drags this one down a little, but oh well. Those sorts of things can be finessed if they really turn out to be that egregious.

>>26600376
>barrel
...That's a first

I've heard some people in the past point out the flaws in Pedestal. In particular, what are the flaws of how the Pokemom are characterized? One individual many months ago said that they were "extensions of the MC", but I'm not sure what that means. Is it that they had no motivations of their own and seemed to live only for and in the context of their trainer's life?

Kostya best character

>>26589399
A while back I told you guys I needed motivation to write my first fic, and you guys really helped. so here it is http://pastebin.com/c2xgD1ky hope you like

Didn't know there was a world-building thing this June. Coincidentally, beginning work on my new fic, which places a large emphasis on world-building.

>>26616246
Do you think the pokemon encountered at the absolute start of a journey fic seem, pretty overpowered, especially for a new trainer? I mean, the MC already has a Gallade to start, despite already losing his first match.

Once upon a time in a land called Kalos, Ash wins the league then fucks Serena.

The End

>>26617556
>Ash
>winning the league
>ever
get that gary stu outta here

>>26617634
you really gotta hand it to that timelord chode, he keeps losing but goddamn does he love it still, he's just like, oh well good luck next time, I'll see you guys in the new region at my fiftieth tenth birthday next year

>>26604376
That's...a lot of people travelling with him then. Do you think that it's too much?

>>26617433
I figured a Pokemon he grew up with should be evolved already. and starting with a 2nd stage evo would make him cocky enough to challenge clearly experienced trainers despite only knowing the basics. like that kid who plays ranked battles with his in game team.

>>26616246
I might find time to read this.
Will you want a critique from me? (I'm not gentle.)

>>26619632
sure anything to improve..

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>>26619661
You have no idea what hell you hath wrought upon yourself.

>>26618736
I'll split em off when it gets too much

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Am I still hated here? Just checking.

Cuz It was dumb of me to do what I did. Just didn't get it soon enough.

>mfw actions have consequences

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>>26620644
If this is who I think it is (and whenever I think it might be, it always is), I'd be interested to see whether you really have made any progress in the realm of writing. Have you got anything to show us to that end?

>>26593682

what kind of dumbasses would want to live on the edge of Sharpedo Bluff if it honestly looks like this

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>>26620846
Well, according to canon...

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>>26620644
?

>>26620814
My motivation pretty much disappeared after realizing nobody wants to see me or anything associated with me, and perhaps they still don't want to. And I know exactly why and regret it.

Regardless, I tried giving the Froslass story some rewriting occasionally (read: completely wipe most of it and restart), but I'm not feeling very confident about it.
Then there was the Ledian story as well, but not sure what people thought of that.

Maybe I need to completely ignore stories from my past time here for now and try something different. I'm thinking I need to do writing exercises through simpler ideas. Anything too big blows up in my face as has been proven.

>>26620982
If I remembered, the OR liked the ledian story.
But tackling something new/different from the stories in the past might be for the best

>>26621045
OR? What's that?

>>26621062
OR is short term for original requester, usually the guy that gave you the idea for that story

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I feel like I'm not really cut out for making smut

http://pastebin.com/CD6U3H0Q

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>>26621756
>"Come around to my lower half and listen well."

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>>26621756
well now, that must have been the longest smut I have read in quite a while that was considered a one-shot, and a good one at that.

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>>26621756
I see you actually took my advice to heart. It's... unique, and I certainly enjoyed the read, if not sexually so. I'm not sure I've ever read a smut featuring a biologically asexual participant.

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>>26624377
It wasn't too difficult to invent. My degeneracy runs deep enough that it doesn't take too long for me to make something inexplicably lewd out of nothing, and my fetish is a good placeholder for a few thousand words. That's why I tagged it M/*Fabulous Curves. More challenge came from the usual stuff, like "What's a decent excuse to get these two to bone?" or "How the fuck is this so long?".'

>>26624291
I don't know what happened.

>>26616246
>Prologue
This isn't a prologue, it's a description blurb.

>“It’s time! The day I get my first Badge!” The boy declared to the world. He had dreamed of the day he’d leave his small village, and now that the day had arrived he stood proud with his partner.
Telling, passive, characters we can't yet visualize.

>(Missing commas and typos, too many to list.)
Proof-reading is vital.

>as she was once a gym leader herself she knew there was no stopping him
How does being a gym leader make her better at predicting his behavior than being his mother does?

>She seemed prepared to keep him there
You said she knew she couldn't stop him.

>Critical capture! The shiny Espur was his. He couldn’t believe his luck
Nor I. The odds are what, 6,000,000 to 1?

>(All caps and multiple bangs.)
She'd better have a sore throat after all this screaming.

>with one of these you can bypass the gold league, the badge requirement, all of it and go straight to the platinum league.
Then why are you here, Lady? Also, let's challenge the heavyweight boxing champ without any fore training while we're at it.

>Sid couldn’t pass up such a tempting offer
Nobody ever offers counterfeit tickets, right?

>began to glow lightly. Gallade attacks … dodges every strike
Tense shift from past to present.

>she throws a full restore on the ground … “Go home scrub.”
Is the med for Pran or for Sid to treat that wicked burn?

—

Your weakness is largely the plot mechanics you choose. Between Shiny Espurr and Platinum Ticket, you burn a lot of suspension of disbelief unnecessarily.

The battle started descriptive but became a summary in the middle; this ruins the pacing.

This chapter's plot arc is cut off at the 70% mark after an abbreviated beginning. You need to complete the climax—does Sid treat Pran now or later?—and offer a denouement: Go home as told, to a center, to a training montage to prepare for a rematch?

You have a framework, but you must add meat to these bones.

Anyone have anything related to shipping that you think was good? Preferably straight, Protag x human whatever stuff because I have shit taste.

I'm mostly looking for recommendations.

>>26628270
You can try taking a look in the catalog for stuff written by the folks of /vp/.

Alright discussion time.

The time has come. Your team of Pokémon have chased a Weedle across the forest, evading random useless mons like Pikachu or the once-in-a-blue-moon wandering Arcanine, and eventually beaten her senseless.

As you catch up with your team and the battle, you stand a distance behind your team, produce your Premier Ball, ready your arm, toss...

And land it perfectly on the Weedle's face, sucking the creature within.

Land it.

Perfectly.

Every time.

How good is human children's aim in the Pokémon world? How would you justify it? Are humans secretly ninjas? Cyborgs? Or do you ignore it? If children human aim is that good, what are the implications for sports like baseball or volleyball?

>>26630241
in gen I I remember missing pokeballs was a thing. Future gens kinda got rid of that mechanic.

It's probably a pokeball mechanic moreso than human aim, where once thrown, said pokeball can home onto a targeted Pokemon (hopefully a wild one).

It's pretty darn easy to ignore though.

>>26630241
You could say Pokeballs are like magnetic to Pokemon if you want to really clarify the point but that'd usually be unnecessary

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>>26630241

>>26630365
That pic makes me kek more than it has any right to.

>>26630277
I have read something to that effect too, something about even the Master Ball having a x/256 counter.

>once thrown, said pokeball can home onto a targeted Pokemon
You know that makes some sense, considering Pokéballs would need some sort of self-propulsion mechanism that would also help explain why Pokéballs 'bounce' back to the Trainer upon release.

Also... Mewtwo's Pokéballs can hover, or even fly, not to mention chase targets.

Presumably your ISO standard issue Pokéball for commoneer use are not first class enough to hover and thus are as subject to gravity as a random donut.

>CAPTCHA
>ROUTE PRIVVY
...What _is_ going on with this thing's AI?

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>>26630241
Not usually one to get too deep into my own headcanon, but since you asked for discussion here it goes.

Part 1

Fields of attraction relate pokeballs to pokemon since pokeballs actually are made by culling a certain type of pokemon created to manipulate matter. Once it is correctly processed, a pokeball bears relation to all pokemon on a molecular level through genetic datasets. The pokemon which the the pokeball is made from processing acts as a gravitational singularity in this regard. The physical location of the pokemon "captured" is then displaced by an acceleration of its material constitution rushing in toward the core of the ball, approaching the speed of light known as the "return" which converts the physical particles into pure energy. This energy remains in constant motion through the use of a "center" which maintains a wobbling rotation pattern within the ball allowing for time to pass extraordinary quickly inside. Taking a pokeball to a poke center allows for this process to be further amplified by use of a particle beam and "heal" the creature through artificially created time manipulation. Of course, from the perspective of the pokemon, minimal time has passed since it was sent into the ether - its body and brain both turned into raw energy by the pokeball's attractive tidal force. In truly rare circumstances a "reset" can be attempted to save a dying pokemon, but it always loses its memories in the process raising a number of philosophical questions surrounding consciousness.

>>26630241
>>26630937

Part 2

And even though the balls act as kerr black holes they only work on matter pokemon are comprised of due to the construction of the pokeball being contingent on a particular pokemon relating to all pokemon. So (un)fortunately trainers can't just lob small black holes at each other in order to prove a point. The creature's code upon entering the attraction field of the pokeball overwrites the pokeball's preset dataset - meaning usually one ball per mon. Devon Corp. has been working on a way to utilize multiple pokeballs in order to transport pokemon across massive distances instantaneously without using the PC data transfer system. The results of their testing: classified as always.

To answer your query: even a poorly thrown ball can capture at a reasonable distance related to the field amplifier on the pokeball's circuit board. This doubles as a plot device since ghost types can indeed be missed due in no small part to their lack of an entirely corporeal form. I have a lot more written on the subject but I think this will suffice for now.

TL;DR Magic needs to be explained by pseudo-science.

ROSE

WEN

>>26630241
Glad you asked. Well, you see, fields of attraction relate pokeballs to pokemon since pokeballs actually are made by culling a certain type of pokemon created to manipulate matter. Once it is correctly processed, a pokeball bears relation to all pokemon on a molecular level through genetic datasets. The pokemon which the the pokeball is made from processing acts as a gravitational singularity in this regard. The physical location of the pokemon "captured" is then displaced by an acceleration of its material constitution rushing in toward the core of the ball, approaching the speed of light known as the "return" which converts the physical particles into pure energy. This energy remains in constant motion through the use of a "center" which maintains a wobbling rotation pattern within the ball allowing for time to pass extraordinary quickly inside. Taking a pokeball to a poke center allows for this process to be further amplified by use of a particle beam and "heal" the creature through artificially created time manipulation. Of course, from the perspective of the pokemon, minimal time has passed since it was sent into the ether - its body and brain both turned into raw energy by the pokeball's attractive tidal force. In truly rare circumstances a "reset" can be attempted to save a dying pokemon, but it always loses its memories in the process raising a number of philosophical questions surrounding consciousness.

>>26631091
>Rose
WE

>>26630937
>Once it is correctly processed, a pokeball bears relation to all pokemon on a molecular level through genetic datasets.

The implication there is that all Pokémon are defined by a genetic dataset (not necessarily a common one). How does this interact with eg.: inorganic Pokémon, or artificial construct Pokémon like the Regis and Castform?

Also since you mention the device only making distinction of Pokémon via datasets, does it mean it is perfectly possible for a Pokébal to catch and dematerialize a human provided it is given an adequate genetic dataset?

What are the implications of the ability to dematerialize and "reset" a creature, Pokémon or not, on aspects such as consciousness and individuality?

>>26626870
Thank you so much, should I rewrite or just improve the next chapter?

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>>26631446

>The implication there is that all Pokémon are defined by a genetic dataset (not necessarily a common one). How does this interact with eg.: inorganic Pokémon, or artificial construct Pokémon like the Regis and Castform?

If you are referring to organic versus synthetic species, both share a common domain of molecular data which is accessed by use of the transform function of the pokeball. A ditto can become a matching dataset for either a regi or a weedle.

>Also since you mention the device only making distinction of Pokémon via datasets, does it mean it is perfectly possible for a Pokébal to catch and dematerialize a human provided it is given an adequate genetic dataset?

In theory it would be possible to do with an accurate enough genetic datasets of the target in question. Problem is: compared to respective species of pokemon, the human species have much more genetic diversity. Human testing results in rather grotesque abominations unfortunately since mismatches in the individual's code are all too common even if a particular subject's DNA is carefully replicated. Also humans grow slowly over time (no spontaneous evolution) which makes the shock of energy transformation very often fatal.

>What are the implications of the ability to dematerialize and "reset" a creature, Pokémon or not, on aspects such as consciousness and individuality?

Too many to enumerate in an online post. I would suggest an introductory reading of "Matter and Consciousness" by Paul Churchland if the subject intrigues you.

>>26631800
Humans all share most of their own genome though, with an average of 99.5% of any two human's genomes being similar. Is the 0.5% variation on average so significant as to prevent the use of a ball on them? Doesn't this imply an incredibly narrow genetic diversity among any given species of 'Mon, and if it does, how narrow, and how is this not impacting their viability in nature?

>>26631800
Not only what >>26632056 says but the genetic difference between a human and a pig is less than the 2%.

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>>26632056
>>26632301

>Is the 0.5% variation on average so significant as to prevent the use of a ball on them? Doesn't this imply an incredibly narrow genetic diversity among any given species of 'Mon, and if it does, how narrow, and how is this not impacting their viability in nature?

When we're talking about aggregate genetic material, 0.5% variation is a huge number. Even a marginal error in exact sequencing would prove disastrous. Doesn't even have to be an essential piece of data to botch up the whole entire sequence.

Given the way pokemon evolve I would certainly argue that they have a more consistent composition of genetic standards - baselines, really. If not then over time they would likely evolve into many other forms besides their conventional stages. The resilience of these particular forms and paths speak to their overall lower level of intra-species diversity. Compared to all the animal kingdom's diversity mere natures and IVs would play only a tiny role in the creature's overall species-dataset. Because of that, a pokemon can be saved and reassessed easily - comparatively speaking.

In my theory, a pokeball would be circumventing this problem by creating a perfect replica of the captured creature, atom for atom by use of a ditto. This internal replica is the baseline which will function as the saved data for the creature in question. Each time you recall the creature, a new overwriting dataset is established. As far as I'm aware a ditto cannot /completely/ replicate a human since they are from totally different kingdoms. Then again the genome of a particular person could be mapped and perhaps used to reconstruct without a ditto datasave. However even if you can reconstruct the human back together the question then becomes: what happens to the original's consciousness and sense of self after entering a state of warping spacetime?

Sorry friends, I'm going to slow down with these long posts sent from my phone. Really need to get back to work.

Updated my fic. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11952351/8/HaremMon-Gotta-Fxxk-em-All

>>26589399
First time anon here looking to write a little thing and I was wondering if fetish fics are allowed here.
Also, does the number of words matter? Like if I wrote a lengthy story would that be bad as opposed to a small 500 thing?

>>26633453
as long as you link to them offsite (post a pastebin/FFN link instead of dumping text) you're fine

>>26633453
Length doesn't really matter I think. I do know that you have to link any fic to another site though.

>>26633505
>>26633517
So in addition to the NSFW tag should I put a trigger warning and spoiler the fetish?

How common do you guys think that Pokemon POV stories postulating human behavior are? Because I feel like something cute could be construed out of that.

I remember reading a story about a Mienshao wondering what humans wore clothes for, for example.

I feel like this premise could also lend itself to drama when Pokemon see humans being nasty to other humans for reasons that seem trivial to them.

>>26633682
A minor heads up would be nice, whether you put it in the post or if it's too extreme, putting the warning at the start of the story.

so is there any interest in things that aren't turbo smut here

>>26633806
Well uh is diapers considered extreme here?
Btw, not that anon who put those ideas in the idea bin. I know it's the same fetish but I didn't have anything to do with that. Pokehumans a shit.

>>26633869
Tons
>>26633910
Diapers is too extreme. Please post it on FFN instead.

>>26633869
Yes. The catalog has sfw and nsfw stuff organized if you're looking for something in particular. Nonsmuts also gets recognition by regulars (who do actually write at least one time) if you are looking for feedback

>>26632545
>However even if you can reconstruct the human back together the question then becomes: what happens to the original's consciousness and sense of self after entering a state of warping spacetime?

What happens to the original Pokémon's consciousness and sense of self? The response can not be too different at a foundational level.

>Sorry friends, I'm going to slow down with these long posts sent from my phone. Really need to get back to work.
>sent from my phone

You are an martir and an hero, and you will be remembered. I can't type in phones unless my life depends on it, not even xat spk.

>>26633757
I've written one or other, the most recent one I sent into catalog. That said, I don't really go too deep into the "wut, humans" aspect of it.

Can't really say how common or uncommon those stories are tho. I know there are some communities like Serebii that are somewhat more adept to them.

>>26633869
I'm interested in worldbuilding and stuff, if that counts.

Honestly, it'd sadden me somewhat if we were flanderized into lol, smut. inb4 as if we weren't already

>>26633910
Pastebin it. No pics though

>>26633938
>>26633939
>>26633965
I'm mostly just asking because I had an idea that I think is cool but my think is gay and I wanted some feedback

>>26634039
post the idea

>>26634039
Post idea anyway. Not like there's much to lose

>>26634063
>>26634102
Basically, my plan is to have a character I'm writing about keep a Porygon Z in a watch a friend of his will make for him. The watch will function as a portable PC and stuff like that. Where my friend and I disagree is I'd like the Porygon to be able to use moves from the watch, but have them affect the wearer. Something that I definitely want to do is Barrier to block gunshots or something like that.

>>26634250
Hmm...it sounds interesting, but I'd rather not have the character be in total control of what the watch does, considering that a living Porygon Z is inside, obviously causing glitches and whatnot, or doing something else entirely. Wouldn't want ot make him overly reliant on the thing now, rigt?

>>26634319
Huh, I kinda forgot that Porygon-Z's are supposed to be glitchy, so I guess you have a point. He's borrowing the Pokemon from the same person that builds the watch, so I don't even know if he'd know about or anticipate glitches.

>>26633453
What fetish?

>>26634558
>>26633910

>>26631446
I think 'genetic datasets' means that the DNA data inside is compressed by only noting individual variations from the entire species' genome as recorded.
Which itself raises more questions about genetics in this universe.

>>26633966
>>26633938
Got it.
Also I wish I could draw then I could help out at the drawthread. It's sad that there are some cool ideas there, but shitposting ruins them everytime. But yeah, thanks for the clarification. I'll try and have it up for review soon.

Pokemon as roommates.

Must be even worse than a wizard roomie.

There's one that I read years ago that I was never able to find again. It was about red and some bitch traveling together and at one point they stop a guy from whipping his absol

>>26635952
>Pokemon as roommates.

Instareminded me of http://www.rarecandytreatment.com/comics/1095041/lord-of-the-slobs/

>>26636132
>it's been almost 2 years since this guy stopped making rare candy treatment.
Fucking time slapping legendaries

>>26631633
If you are serious about this story, I think you should re-write.

Think about this draft as though it were an episode of the animation. Consider how brief and assumptive it is before the commercial break, and how it leaves everything hanging in the second half. Then, imagine it as a proper episode, and when you've got it in mind, write a chapter to tell what you imagined.

http://pastebin.com/Qmcn59qj

Here's my NSFW fic.
Warning: contains diapers and urine
It's more of a one-shot than an actual storyfic, but I just want to know what people here think of my writing style. I know I probably should've just taken an idea from the bin, but that's kinda boring.

>>26639145
The amount of puns in this story are going to be the death of me before the fetish kills me first.

Trigger warning aside, the story seems simple enough and follows good grammar/writing consistency, if a bit heavy on the telling-than-showing side.

>>26640510
Oh you're such a baby anon there's only 3 puns in my story. Way to take the piss on me. Unless I missed one, in which case I'm not much of a math whiz, heh.

But by telling-than-showing do you mean more dialogue between characters?

>>26640820
Relax anon, I'm just poking fun is all.

By telling than showing I guess I meant more on exposition-heavy (notably line 44), though it is understandable considering it's a one-shot. It's just my preference for things to be shown by character interaction rather than told by narration. Of course I'm also just one guy, so I don't speak for everything either.

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>>26640992
I was joking around too, but I guess it's hard to be sarcastic without putting something like XD at the end

And I see what you mean by that, thanks for your input anon. Well, time for me to leaf now. Sleep tight.

>>26634250
Sounds a little iffy since having a watch for a PC would defeat the purpose for pokeballs

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That feel when I want to write a part of my story set in aloha and I need more information unless I'm willing to just wing it and accept that I'll be wrong.

>>26643243
The character is super late game, he's got a bunch of legendaries and victories under his belt so having the ability to swap Pokemon on his team at will isn't that huge of an enabler.

>>26644763
slap an alternate universe tag on the story and you're good to go

>>26630752
I imagine that Pokeballs might have some level of technology inside though, maybe not enough to seek from great distance, but for them to be attracted to Pokemon when thrown in their direction, like a very weak magnet pull

People seem to be imagining some pretty high tech ideas for pokeballs. I usually go with the assumption that throwing skills are greatly exaggerated and people mostly use them on pacified pokemon from a much smaller distance.

>>26630241
What in the world are you on about? If you're a bad enough shot, it's certainly possible to miss a Pokémon. However, all Poke Balls have scanning systems that detect all Pokémon around it in about a three-color radius. Captured Pokémon are tagged and ignored, but when the Ball is activated, it will activate its capture system targeting the first uncaptured Pokémon in range. It's even got a little gyroscope in the back to stabilize itself. The "bounceback" function comes from the air displaced by the sent-out Pokémon, which explains why a freshly used Ball doesn't return. When a Pokémon is returned, the Ball is usually kept in the user's hand. Some people can give a thrown ball a backspin to bounce it back towards them, but they're the exception, not the rule.

>>26597421
It's lit to read fics

>>26621756
If you haven't already, you should submit it to the catalog; it's too creative to be lost to the aether of volatile 4chan archives.

>>26654292
Don't worry, it's waiting to get in there as we speak. This isn't the first time I've gone through these hoops.

And it will never truly be lost. I have like two digital copies on top of a handwritten one.

>>26654314
>handwritten
>porn
Balls of steel

>>26655714
It does show a certain dedication. I would've just printed it out, unless the handwritten version came first.

>>26657035
It mortifies me just to have my smut on onedrive. I don't think I would have the guts to write that stuff in a notebook any time soon.

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>>26654314
>>26655714
>handwriting p0rn

On a related note, how splendid or atrocious is your handwriting, /vpwt/?

Mine is actually legible now because of practice. I blame receiving poor penmanship grades as a child.

>>26657587
I got really self-conscious about my chicken scrawl in 6th grade and reformed it into pretty bubbly girly handwriting. Had it ever since.

>>26657587
Nope
I have messy Einstein-penmanship

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I still exist and I need something to read, whats good?
Preferably something long/multi chapter because fuck city bus schedules

>>26657737
>pretty bubbly girly handwriting. Had it ever since.

Same thing happened to me. Not that I use it very much nowadays. I will say it proved useful in one or two classes where term papers were submitted anonymously to an outwardly feminist teacher. She didn't even grade based on content thankfully.

>>26657795
>I have messy Einstein-penmanship

Whelp, now you need to redefine physics for the rest of us. Orally as well, so that we can understand what you wrote.

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>>26657587
This is my handwriting at peak legibility. It degenerates into chicken scratches after two or three words. I can mostly read my own writing, but some of my old essays have given me pause.

No one I know can read my writing.

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>>26658174

Not bad at all.

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>>26658468
I kinda wish I had kept writing in cursive but printing is way faster. Here's a better example beyond just two words.

I envy my sister's penmanship but I can't be arsed to actually practice.

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>>26658672
Seen far worse. I look for patterns in people's handwriting so usually I can guess what the word is. Context clues too I suppose.

Print sucks when you don't use it on a regular basis.

boop

>>26655714
>>26657587
>>26657035
What's so frightening about having handwritten smut? I've got two of em already, but also a few notebooks more of other fics because that's just how my rough draft system works.

My handwriting isn't that good, but I do a girly thing with my "th"s and I fucking love it.

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You guys and your handwriting are tempting me.

Since the subject came up, how often do you handwrite? I haven't really done much of it since 2004, maybe I write about six to ten words per week. Yes, I need to change that.

My handwriting got so bad at some point that the national registrar here didn't want to acknowledge some documents I had signed because my signature was way too slanted compared to the one on my ID card.

Also

>CAPTCHA
>CHEMIN CHEMIN

Yes, they're onto me.

The time has come.

>>26660570
This anon >>26657035

I was more talking about effort. If you want a hard copy in case all the digital storage goes kaput, printed seemed easier to me than writing it all out by hand. Unless, of course, the handwritten one came first. I just prefer to type out stories now, so I can more easily edit as I go.

As for frightening and mortifying, I wasn't gonna comment cause they don't particularly mention it, but it can be a concern if you live with other people, especially snoopers. Of course, many of us don't, so it's not so much of a problem. But there's still the vague worry that someone will come across our writings somehow. Guests or it gets dropped somewhere or whatever.

Like old worrying about porn stashes under mattresses.

>>26657587
My handwriting is, to quote the inestimable Pratchett, "that which could be expected from a spider on a trampoline during an earthquake." I just get caught up and my hand starts trying to write out the next five words all in the same place and all at once, and it turns illegible quickly.

>>26660576
Lucky for me, I'm forced to write a lot in school. My handwriting has suffered a bit (the chicken scrawl from elementary school is still there, I just hide it with my prettier writing most of the time), but it keeps me busy during. Because I write primarily in a public environment, I wouldn't feel confortable penning anything sexual, especially concerning Pokémon.

If I posted the frame story / plot for a RP I'm starting up here, could y'all critique it?

Right now the main thing I'm struggling with is coming up with a conflict the characters can face / an overall antagonist. I don't really want to have one to avoid the onslaught of edgy RPers that often accompanies Pokemon stories with a villain, but I'm also scared it will be too boring if the frame story / plot is just "go out and catch Pokemon!!!".

>>26662439
there used to be an OC trainer thread for such a occasion, but it seems like the threads have stopped for now. Either way, if it is really detailed/posting the story, keep it in the pastebin.

If you need motivation/conflict the MCs can face you do have options outside of 'catch em all and be the champion' as portrayed in the games and anime.
Pokemon related, they could be on the pursue for one evasive mon in particular, like how that one guy was crazy over hunting suicune. There may be a reason for their search which can be revealed over time (need X's help to heal Y for instance). Alternatively they could be out to make a profit. After all, defeating trainers means a lot of money in the games. Think of any motivation and something to get in said motivation's way and you should be fine.

>>26662439
An antagonist is anything that opposes your protagonist's goals. That could be some other trainer trying to catch the same pokemon, laws and regulations preventing your character from doing it legally, weather making it difficult, etc.

I don't know how an RP typically goes, but I assume two people write for their own characters? If so, maybe just give those character have opposing goals. Ex. There's a rumor about a rare pokemon showing up in a nearby location and both trainers want to catch it, so they're naturally at odds with one another while still being protagonists.

>>26662439
This has probably been done already somewhere but what if there's a group of people who are mercilessly hunting down rare Pokemon and the protagonists get in their way because they want to protect their village/home from being invaded and burned to the ground after they've extracted all of the rare mons from that location. You could call them "The Snatchers" or something.

But if this is some kind of pmd RP I dunno. Some kind of save the world bullshit?

>>26663164
Not the guy you're responding to, but:
>people who are mercilessly hunting down rare Pokemon
Hunting in what sense? Is it different from kids running out and chucking balls at the pokemon? If it's literal hunting, then does it make sense for that to be illegal? If so, what do people eat? Is what they're doing actually more merciless than the typical "beat them until they can't resist capture" usually seen in the series?

>invaded and burned to the ground
Why would they do that if their goal is getting pokemon? Poaching is ridiculously far from razing a town on the scale of crime severity.

>>26662439
In RP in general, the most important thing to keep in mind is that everything will go off the rails. Depending on whether you're going towards more traditional narratives or full on wacky 4chan quests, this will mean differing kinds and degrees of swerves, but the principle is true. It can be hard to predict what people will latch onto and want to focus on.

You'll need to keep an open mind. There should be a seed for them to start with, your basic "here's what you know, what you've been brought here to do, you're starting situation." But beyond that it depends on how enterprising your players are. With, I will is assume this is, text only, free form RP you don't have to worry about things like working stuff for places and shit you didn't expect or having it all go to waste if they ignore it.

In terms of the story and setting itself, if you're worried about an initial villain, throw a few lesser problems at them. If it's a PMD like this anon said >>26663164, you can do a few things. Someone's lost, someone needs to get somewhere, something needs to be found. This can be done even if it's a typical human character RP. Give them a few different kinds of problems and see what they what they bite (you can say there's other people who will handle what they decide not to, if you want to keep them from thinking about handling them all).

I'd say go with classic protag-vs-nature problems to start off with. They need to clear some place, they're lost somewhere and need to get supplies/figure out where they are. A storm is happening, earthquake fucked things up. Depending on the scale you want to go with and it's seriousness, look at disaster movies and the like. Villains can be introduced later too, with someone taking advantage of the chaos. And, since it's Pokemon, maybe someone caused it.

Primarily, remember you're probably going to have to be flexible and long term plans beyond shallow ideas will probably run into trouble.

>>26663341
For your first inquiry, I imagine a scenario where the group would enter a village and find trainers with rare pokemon, challenge them to a battle, with the loser handing over their rarest card- I mean handing over their Pokemon to the winner. If they refuse, they'll beat the trainer with physical force. Basically, battles with an ante rule.

As for your second question, it's pretty obvious why they would do that. For one, to get rid of evidence that they were there. Two, to mentally scar the witnesses of their crimes to prevent them from speaking out. After all, if you saw a hysteric woman running down the street saying her house was set on fire, you're more likely than not to believe she's gone insane, as she wouldn't stop shaking or crying while telling you of how strange people came out of nowhere and took her pokemon. You'd be more likely to believe she needs to go to the Pokemon Center to get a mental test done. Thirdly, to spread fear throughout the region. After the first few incidents, people would no longer think of the destroyed towns rumor as a joke, but as a serious threat. Some would be willing to give up their pokemon just to stop their village from being destroyed, others will try and band together to fend them off. After all, a simple group of theives stealing pokemon doesn't make for a very climatic confrontation. A revenge motive would certainly drive the protagonists to stop the villains well.

>>26664170
First point is fair enough, I assumed they were catching rare pokemon in the wild.

Second point is silly. Committing a crime leads to some sort of law enforcement response on a scale relative to the crime. If you beat up and rob a kid, the response is an officer getting a report and telling their office to be on the lookout for some generic guy with X pokemon. If you burn down houses and kill people to...avoid getting caught for theft?- you get a huge police response for what was originally a relatively small, low-risk crime. If your organization wants to steal pokemon for some sort of black market, they don't want to spread the word about themself by terrorizing the country. Why would they ever want to risk bringing military attention to what should be an underground, low-profile organization?

A common theme in fanfiction and even mainstream media is the skimming of antagonist development and motivation in favor of making them unambiguously evil for the sake of it in order to focus on how good it makes the protagonist look in comparison. A well written antagonist should have motivations that a reader can understand and sympathize with to some extent.

>>26665009
But what if there were dirty cops that were members of "The Snatchers?" They'd be double agents. Just when you thought that policeman would save you, he literally stabs your sense of hope in the back. Bribing the police not to report the incidents could be another possibility. After all, this is an oorganization that makes its killing off of rare pokemon, it's easy to assume they'd be incredibly wealthy.
But for the second part of your response I can agree with. A well-written villain is crucial to a story's overall quality. But this isn't my story at all, I'm just simply throwing out an idea for this anon to play with and see if they like it or not.

>>26665365
If they're powerful enough to not need to worry about the law, why would they need to raze villages to get rid of evidence? Also, intimidating people isn't an excuse either; it's overkill. When you already got the police in your pocket, you don't need to commit mass murder as part of your business just to prove a point. They're some sort of mafia, not the Khmer Rouge. It comes off as stupid RPG cliche.

>>26665484
Again anon, it's a rough idea for them to play with. I know it's full of holes, no need to poke through every single one of them.
Besides, have you ever read a logical rp? No, because every rp is flawed.

>>26651873
Still need a story on this discovery

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>actual discussion happening
what happened to you, /vpwt/?

>>26668124
Well, isn't that what this place of an heros strives for? Plus shameless advertising, I know.

Then again I guess sometimes there's nothing better than being something like... I don't know, /b/'s /wt/ from what I'm seeing.

What's all this about a worldbuilding month?

>>26669155
>>26516602

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What kind of motive would someone need to decide to transform all living Pokemon into robots? I'm having trouble coming up with one that doesn't steal from Eggman's reasoning for his motive to stop the endless life/death cycle caused by the world's food chain

>>26670769
How would you turn a plant into a robot? Just wondering.

>>26670825
A basic replacement of extracting the usual anatomy that makes up plant cells (notably water), leaving only cell wall/cellulose, and replacing/reinforcing it with specialized polymer gel that acts as the substitute for water and other essentials

I'm not good with science stuff though so I'm not sure how feasible it would be.

>>26670769
There's not really any good "feasible" to turn entire ecosystems into robots. The other motives tend to boil down to:

* Control - robots can be non-autonomous, unlike sentient sapient beings. Want to fully control a world, villain? Why bother even letting people be able of independent thought? Just make everything into robots.

* Hubris - the villain decides that robots are superior. Even if the villain is a robot himself, this argument can be brought down very easily as all argument that rely on hubris to maintain themselves.

* Fear - the villain hates or fears death (biological or conceptual) or related concepts such as ageing, and is too blind to see the irony in becoming that which he hates. Because fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, and hate leads to overused memes.

* Allergies - the villain just despises the very idea of biology that much.

>>26671175
Non-ideal robots put into environments typical of biological creatures would likely break down faster than those organisms do. Machines lack the dynamic adaptability of us meat-bags.

>>26670918
You mean the stuff the yellow devil is made of?

>>26670918
You're referring to plastination. It's a thing. It's commonly used for preserving bodies.

>>26674230
>You're referring to plastination. It's a thing.
Is it bad that I almost read that post as?

>You're referring to procrastination. It's a thing.

>>26671368
>non-ideal
Therein lies the rub. But maybe conflict could still be.

>>26644824
I guess that makes sense.

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>>26662502
>>26662718
>>26663164
>>26663341
Wow, just now checking back after a bit and it's cool to see my question sparked so much discussion!

My original question was a little misinterpreted so I wasn't sure if I should respond and put more focus on me, but since discussion popped up anyway there seemed no harm in it. This isn't as much the type of plot where once it's conquered, the RP is over - I more needed to create the setting and needed it critiqued.

But after reading what y'all had to say about antagonists, I decided crime to still be a prevalent issue but in the form of smuggling rare Pokemon. That way, players will be presented with the moral dilemma of participating in illegal black market trade or missing out on the rare Pokemon of their dreams.

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I need a short story about Quagsire's S&M relationship with Florges pronto

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I really must stop forgetting that I'm in charge of the catalog. My deepest apologies to everyone who was kept waiting, but I've just gone through and put in all the fics that were in waiting. Sorry again, I'll try and be more vigilant about it in the future.

>>26679719
A once a month check to add in fics could do

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>>26679719
Cool, thanks.

Thoughts on Pokémon Revoultion?

I think it's shit.

>>26680181
This

>>26678431
This but with her trainer instead

Bumparooni

>>26680900
Cliche edgelord garbage.
It's been awhile and I haven't read much, but it left a lasting negative impression on me.

>>26679719
isn't there another that co-hosts the catalog?

>>26686953
Nah, ancientpower isn't around very often and his job is mostly the back-end of the sheet. I'm the only one who's actually been adding fics to the catalog and stuff.

>>26671175
The ability to manipulate chance might be something to look into...

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>>26670769
Honestly, if I was going to do this I'd go the Skynet route and just have the villain be a robot/computer/machine as well.

>>26689661
A porygon Z that has achieved 'enlightenment.'

>want to post snippets of WIP shit
>realize that I've written everything in such a way that it keeps alluding to random shit out of context
>don't want to post the juicy stuff because of it

G-guess I'll just have to actually finish them

>>26691347
Go full sci-fi and have it take over every computer to stop attempts at it, then introduce characters who don't like it and follow them through their journeys getting derailed, intertwined, and eventually figuring out a way to stop the malevolent artificial intelligence while also finishing their journey.