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Never ever edition.
Thread for discussing English language visual novels and their development.

Do you have a question about a Japanese visual novel or a translation of it?
/vn/ is ready to answer it. We are not them.

>Developer Resources, Getting Started:
http://pastebin.com/7LsCvtq3

>Recommended Reading:
https://vndb.org/v/all?q=;fil=olang-en.tagspoil-0;o=d;s=rating
http://pastebin.com/zGVSpH0B

>For Developers. Huge collection of guides on everything:
https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=42

>Ren'Py Download:
http://www.renpy.org/

Last thread (for janitorial hot-pocket QA):
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>>152858852
First for art.
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>>152858935
You did this or commissioned?
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>>152859006
I made it.
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>>152858935
I may be wrong, but aren't the tree reflections off?
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>>152859082
Tree reflections are fine, but they're a bit too strong, I should probably also do some grass reflection in the low-right corner of the pond.
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>>152859149
Now that he mentioned it - they look off because you highlited ripples and thus, their reflection should also be irregular to follow the flow of water.

If the water was static then it would be fine.

Otherwise, pretty BG, well done.
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>>152858852
Is that a new dev tool? Displaying the line number?
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>>152859464
I doubt it since the screenshot is from like 2011 or something, I forget
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>>152859082
The problem is that the bushes are difficult to see, but the trunks are obvious.
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>>152859030
How long does something like this take you?
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>>152859731
Motherfuckers, how did they do that? Holy shit I feel left behind.
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hai

wassap m8s
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>>152860194
yo
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>>152860194
hi pls share secrets for how you got so much funding
was it purely down to the TFS video, or were there other income sources?
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>>152859923
Depends on the bg. This one took a few hours.
This one, made for Epsilon (kind of a visual novel, but with some motion effects, you can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=up9tsmlgkIs ) Took more or less 20 hours, I believe.
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>>152860510
DEVGRU-P
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>>152860587
What, did they stealth fund like what sekai did for MLanon?
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>>152860782
'Cause frankly, having their name attached to a project isn't going to do SHIT for boosting awareness/reputation - they're literal nobodies.
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>>152860510
I'm still studying it all myself desu lol, but its true that tfs game us a huge boost, but it doesn't explain how we continued to curve up after that.

>>152860587
DEVGRU-P did two tweets related to us lol, that's it. They're cool guys though.

one DEVGRU-P tweet to reach the goal, two DEVGRU-P tweets for massive success, that's the secret recipe pham
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>>152860917
And that alone was enough for you to sign up with them and kiss a share of your profits goodbye?
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>>152860983

Yeah I owe them 300% of my profits and my firstborn, but it will be wurth.

: P

They're partnered to me as much as I am partnered to them. We're tomodachi.
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>>152861418
don't confuse it for Tomo da Cheese though pls
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>>152861418
I see. So they aren't your publisher, you're just partnered with them?
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>>152861418
l-lewd
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>>152861678
Yeah.

>>152861696
DEVGRU-P x Starbeam doujins when
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>>152861745
When they get a mascot like sekai so they can be shipped with girls from your project.
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so everyone's sucking cuddlebeam's dick now?
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>>152862202
More like one guy, relax anon.
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>>152862202
>asking questions = sucking dick
you must have had a lot of action in your life op
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>>152862202
Never hurts to ask and gather some insight
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>>152862202
That's why you work will forever be "in progress", limit your salt anon.
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It took more than an hour for the second thread to die. Wow.
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>>152862756
school was a memorable time for me, yes
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>Not screaming and shitting your pants any time a dev posts progress like an autistic manchild is "sucking dick"
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>>152864846
Everyone has their fetish, I guess.
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Any evns about sucking dicks ?
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>>152865050
What the fuck is going on with that gui?
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>>152865115
Did it leave your blood pumping?
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>>152865115
Music is pressed, obviously.
Why?
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>>152865050
A VN about seducing refined old men you say?
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>>152865050
Dude:
Isn't a bit awkward for her to describe what she is doing out loud? What a weirdo. This kills my erection.
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>>152865435
I think she's a protag, so it makes sense
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>>152865208
It left me with cancer.
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I'm extremely curious about how Harem Protagonist got their KS off the ground. Both Starbeam and Devgru-p has very little social media presence. Where did they find all these backers?

Where do you go to promote your VN?
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>>152865917
I meant that it's not usual to show the name when a character is not talking out loud.
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>>152864952
I don't know how to describe dick-sucking in an appealing fashion. Do you have any tips?
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>>152866041
It's literally "Titilation: The Game". No explanation needed.
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>>152866770
If you watch enough animated hentai some of the main girls will not fucking shut up during the sex scenes...
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>>152866951
Entertaining thick, swollen rod with your saliva.
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>>152866041
some youtuber with big following played their demo
also it's an ~ironic~ titty game so normies don't feel bad about buying it
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Any music person in here? I need a second opinion on some tracks.
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>>152868396
you're better off posting in /agdg/ for that.
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>>152868396
I listen to a lot of music yes
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>>152868942
Email?
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>>152869024
anon no it was a joke
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>>152867343
entertaining, like a dinner party with doilies and all?
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>>152866041

if it helps, the first NG+ and the first Wishstone stretchgoals were massively popular.

because bigger tiddies.

everyone make games with huge breasts growing bigger now pls
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>>152869485
>everyone make games with huge breasts growing bigger now pls
Everyone will if you make HP good. don't fuck it up.
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>>152870376
>if you make HP good
Demo is already better than 95% of evns.
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>>152870376

Oh, you better believe that I've got plans to make this shit one of the most amazing (yet feasible to produce lol) things ever.
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>>152868396
I'm here, on lunch break.

[email protected]
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>>152871530
Sent.
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>>152872037
Replied. :^)
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>>152872037
I replied.

>>152873258
For what purpose would you pretend to be someone else in a situation like that? Very bully of you to make them think there's a reply that just didn't get through.
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>>152872037
Thanks, I'll reply asap

>>152873258
>>152873432
Not cool guys. The second one is pretty creative though
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>>152873258
>>152873432
>>152873661
Guys, what the living fuck. Not cool.
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Serious dickery for no reason.
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Will HP's success demoralize other devs, or will it bump their will?
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>>152875070
It will only demoralize developers who cannot be happy for the success of others. We're in a niche, HB's success will bring new readers to our niche. It's good for everyone.
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>>152875204
>HB
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>>152875070
I will carry on as usually. I can't say I'm not a tad bit jelous, but in the end I'm happy they succeeded.
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>>152875278
>>152875204
HunieBlob, obviously.
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>>152875278
Easy mistake, I wasn't talking about Highway Blossoms. I meant Harambe bankster or whatever the fuck
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>>152875278
Stands for Harem Brotagonist
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>>152875070
It will have no influence at all.
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>>152875070
Gives me hope that if I ever do a KS it might succed.
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>>152875204
>We're in a niche, HB's success will bring new readers to our niche. It's good for everyone.
yeah, sure, it will bring more people who a) think VNs are about jiggly tiddies b) would expect more EVNs about jiggly tiddies and brand the rest "shit"
people who're backing that have no interest in actual VNs or EVNs (well maybe 5% will be)
sakurashit will rise again probably
at least KS led people to read keyshit and similar works, there aren't that many good translated nukiges so all thos newplebs will leave disappointed
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>>152876742

>Why are these games getting funding and not mine
>No one reads my high class VNs because of games like Huniepop
>REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>152877434
Are you new? Exactly the same happened with sakura shit and to this day we have retards asking for patches for games without adult content.
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>>152877434
more or less. Sex will always sell though, that's understandable, but t b h I'd rather see all those moneys go to something like 7KPP or something else that would actually be interesting. Sorry for not joining the dicksucking brigade.
Also I actually read up on haram protabuddhist just now and apparently it's not even an H game, kek. Sakurashit will profit off all this hype 100%.
I just really fucking hate WC, okay
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>>152877652
>Not making a hentai-patch for your VN
Enjoy being poor.
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>>152877652
>not having adult content
what's the point, just write a book then
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>>152877652

>No one's buying my games, everyone has shit taste but me!
>REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Copying this post over from /vn/ because I'm new to /vg/ and don't know which thread is more relevant.

so

played CLANNAD for the first time a few weeks ago and finished Tomoyo's route. Ending made me cry like a lil bitch, heavy feels, etc.

I bought Tomoyo After: Wonderful Life right away, but just got around to booting it up. Been playing it nonstop the last 2 days and just finished it this morning...

That fucking ending

I think this is the most that I've ever cried. Was sobbing for like 2 hours. Christ.

In my imagination, Tomoya recovered from the surgery and went on to make many babies with Tomoyo. sniffle
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>>152878193
hey fucko, give me (you)s too
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>>152877926
oh and it has that ironic narration hipstershit going on too. Welp no wonder yourube audience is all over it. I am now considerably less jelly.
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>>152878321
READ THE OP
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>>152878597
It says Never ever edition.
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>>152878504
"self-aware" parodies are the worst type of parodies.
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>>152879078
>Do you have a question about a Japanese visual novel or a translation of it?
>/vn/ is ready to answer it. We are not them.
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>>152878321
>reading comprehension
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>>152878321
>expecting anyone to be happy in a Key VN
wew laddie
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>>152874064
4chan yay
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Artists!

Show me the contracts you've sent or have. Erase the names, obviously.
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>>152881463
In 3 years, I've signed only two contracts, and they were quite scarce.
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>>152881463
I only sign contracts with myself.......
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>>152881670
I just need a format/examples.
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>>152881463
I never use contracts. At least not formally written ones. I chat over email with client about what they want, when they want it, and for how much. After that I start.
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>>152882218
>After that I scam them.
Here, fixed for you.
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>>152876742
>>152877652
>>152877926

Even the supposedly greatest of the medium like Cross Channel and UnterAlterBach, are all pretty perverse. At this point I don't know if it's possible to make a vn without lewd content. It's part of the aesthetic now.
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>>152883049
Steins;Gate doesn't have H and is better. That said, including lewds wouldn't have hurt it one bit.
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This sure drew my attention more than Sentimental trickster and Seiyuu danshi. I hope this won't turn out to be a trainwreck.
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>>152884816
>S;G shit
>better than cross channel
OVER THE LINE
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>>152885034
So this 'Cross Channel is a masterpiece!' meme is still going around, huh...
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>>152884886
>HuniePop clone
>No tits
vapoware
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>>152886652
More like Puzzle Quest.
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>>152884816
It absolutely would have with huke's garbage.
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>>152886928
Ah, the art. Good point, didn't consider that. Would have been fucking weird scenes.
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>>152886928

>huke doesn't draw overpolished Winged Cloud art with vaseline boobies everywhere
>therefor it's shit
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What is considered lewd by most people anyway?

An accidental panty shot?

A shower/onsen scene?

Full blown nudity?

Outright sex scene dick plowing that pussy?
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>>152888270
>huke draws average art and puts a bunch of filters on it
>therefor it's good
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>>152888321
Look into your heart and you'll find the answer.
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>>152888321

Yes.
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>>152884886
I like the art, but fuck match 3 gameplay.
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>>152888430
he at least has good grasp on composition and knows how to make an illustration look impressive
also his character designs are neat
>draws average art and puts a bunch of filters on it
why aren't you earning thousands of dollarydoos then if it's that easy :^)
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>>152884886
Stop making wizadry games, REEEEEE!
Dammit, Harry Potter! You are to magicians what Twilight was to vampires!
I liked magic before it was cool ;_;
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>>152889374
I'm going off his work in Steins;Gate which definitely fits the description of average art with a bunch of filters.
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>>152889819

He evolved like Takehito Harada and Ooyari Ashito, doesn't stop that when Steins;Gate came out seven years ago he was still one of the best illustrators in the industry? So what if he uses filters, if you've watched him paint, most of those are from photographs he took himself. Or they're patterns/brushes that he made by hand. Every artist who does that now does it because huke did it first, he originated that style.

Stop talking about shit you know nothing about.
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>>152890626
I'm not saying filters are a bad thing. I'm saying his art in S;G is average and the filters trick people into thinking it's better than it is. A polished turd, if you want to be rude about it.

I don't care about his evolution or what he's become today. I am talking about his work in Steins;Gate and that alone.
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>>152890626
>>152889819
now kiss
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>>152891042

He was still one of the top illustrators in the industry 7 years ago. It's much harder to sell an image with filters than just copy past the same character with different hair color/eye color like what Winged Cloud does. Even if he was 'shit' when Steins;Gate came out, it's still miles ahead anything the EVN community has ever put out.
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>>152891364
A-anon-kun...
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>>152891403
Do you even browse /evn/?
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>>152891364
>evn
>dude
You have 1/42 chance to encounter a dude here.
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>>152891674
Well, with my luck...
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>>152891859
>not wanting to kiss a dude
What are you, gay?
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>>152886928
>>152888270
who is huke?
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>>152891674
are you implying /evn/ is girls
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>>152893165
Bruce Banner.
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Hey EVN, which GUI do you like better, this one
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>>152892853
I see your toad and raise you a mutant australian frog.
>>152893165
Steins;Gate illustrator.
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>>152893368
Or this one. What do you think should/shouldn't be changed?
Please ignore possible changes to the parts of the pictures that are not GUI.
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>>152893451
Well, I see your mutant and get you a strawberry mutant with a frown.
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>>152893723
I like this one more since the giant buttons are a bit less distracting.
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>>152893723
I don't think the music motif the first text box had going on was a bad thing, it was kind of nice

maybe having an option for it would be solid

I was the one who pointed out how strong the glow effect looked so I'm obviously happy to see that no longer present

the music icon looks like it could be very easy to accidentally hit, but I'm not sure if it has a better place to be
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>>152893723

Agree with the other poster, also the text is sharper in this one.

BTW is this a 3D rendered background?
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>>152893368
This one looks better.
I'd make the text side panning a bit wider, because it's very straining for the eyes when you have the text so wide on the screen.
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>>152893368
this one
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>>152893831
Shit, too much for my blood. Gotta know when to fold 'em.
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>>152893451
what a qt
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>>152894137
It was a nice duel, my good sir. Ta-ta.
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>>152893723
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>>152894417
CAN'T UNSEE
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>>152894417
Sorry, I should have actually had more circles here.

The curved parts are cut off really badly on all four sides of the play button, and I think it might be the case for the one on the left as well.
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>>152893982
>I don't think the music motif the first text box had going on was a bad thing
Does this look good, or do you think they should be even more noticeable?
>>152894002
>BTW is this a 3D rendered background?
3D rendered and painted over.
>>152894016
>>152894107
What's better about it and worse about the other?
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>>152894635
see that looks much nicer
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>>152894581
Noticed, noted, thank you.
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Fucking documentation, man.

> cps is listed under tags, but not under "how to get a type writer effect".
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>>152884886

Oh man, those LIs' bios couldn't be more cliché if they tried.
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live damnit
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>>152891605
I'm not him, but name me an EVN that has lots of high-quality sprites and CGs both (lots, 2-3 don't count senpai) AND manages to present everything as a coherent whole. You actually can't, because EVN devs are poor and have to either cut down the amount of assets or hire several different people or both. Dischan only pulled it halfway thanks to their main artist being a one man band who did everything. But even their games are very scarce bg and cg-wise.
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>>152898659
Sakura Dungeon
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>>152899058
ah fuck, you actually got me. Well they aren't poor at all so the point still kinda stands.
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>>152899606

No, because you didn't even say "most evn devs".

You stated your opinion as fact.
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Didn't give you permission to die
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>>152904214
shut up you aren't the boss of me
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>>152904702
AND YOU'RE NOT SO BIG
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>all that "progress" in 5 months
https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=37765
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>>152904214
You're not my mom
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>>152905660
Ugh, well, maybe it will be ready in 5 years
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>>152906704
How optimistic, I say it'll never be released.
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>http://steamspy.com/app/375200
>we didn't sell enough for a sequel hurrrrrr
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>almost every single one of the sakura titles sold over 50k
>bundles or not thats still a shitton of money
>10k mo on patreon
>have only been at it for 2 years
god damn these people probably make more than AAA games
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>>152906139
I'm your dad
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>>152909841
but my dad is dead
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>>152908995
seeing as WC acts as their own publisher now, think they'll ever act as publisher for works that aren't their own?
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>>152910523

> company known for making the less effort possible
> become publishers

I don't think so.
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>>152910523
Their stuff is published by Sekai Project.
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>>152910718
>> company known for making the less effort possible
but isn't that sekai project already?
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ugh, winter wolves is making a sequel to their worst game? who asked for it
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that ebi-hime is best writer in evn maymay is really insulting.
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>>152911159
never forget me?
ikr, i couldnt believe it
that dev must love the feeling of bankruptcy
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>>152911159
Which one?
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>>152911409
this fucking shit

>>152911397
is it secretly popular? I mean, it's kinda interesting to make a game about married life but...

where's my sequel to magical diary
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>>152911652
HURR DURR
SUCH A FUNNY
MUH META JOKE
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meanwhile, loren 2 set for 2050.
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>>152911652
I'll always remember it heh as a great time due to playing it with /v/. It's bad in a really funny way. I don't think a pair of options has made me laugh harder than
>cry
>go away
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Are vampires still hip?
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>>152911652
>where's my sequel to magical diary

Soon(tm)
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>>152912237
I want there to be a flag where the only options are
>cry
>cry harder
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>>152911159
inb4 a poll asking why it didn't sell
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>>152911249

>A character said something cute
>Therefor all of her writing is shit.

Writers Don't Write What I Want Them to Write so They're Bad: The Post
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what ebi-hime game is good? they all look really underwhelming.
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>>152913493
ebi-hime pls get out
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>>152913725
none of them
thats what makes the ebin maymay
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>>152912313

only if they are gay.
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>>152913749

The typical response of someone who has no argument.
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>>152914179
What if they're cute girls?
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>>152914459

Only if they are lesbians.

Or if they are in love with their adoptive father and plot to murder said father's boyfriend.
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>>152912324
My laundry list of reasons why it hasn't happened yet is getting pretty impressive by this point.
Maybe I should get pregnant next.
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Anyone else adore reading through your old notes, especially the ones without any kind of context or coherent logic?

I was just going through a small pile of scrawled up napkins, these are some of my favorite bits, misspellings preserved:
>Dragon snowman w/ human hand for a foot
>Spiked catapillar with fists wut

>Neon Genesis Brovangelion?

>[drawing of a circle with a rodent face in the center - labeled "Weasel Shield"]

>If time is money And money is time Then herpderp

>What is "?"?

>Leader - Power
>|
>Council - Peace
>|
>Liutenants - Progress
>|
>Defenders - Safety

>Anon w/ spirit save the wooorld
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>>152920017
your handwriting gave me eye cancer
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>>152920650
I would like to say that it's just because it's scribbled on a crumpled napkin, but it really is that bad.
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>>152920017
>catapillar
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>>152920857
Everyone knows it's spelled capitaller
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question

does it still count as a deus ex machina if it's the antagonist that shows up out of seemingly nowhere and if it makes total sense given the context of the story and there are hints for it everywhere, resulting in the seemingly nonsensical introduction of a previously unknown antagonist who was masterminding everything but could have easily been deduced as present
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>>152921843
Introducing a completely new character at the end never works well, even "huehue I was just pretending to be your kind elderly uncle but I'm actually the villain" is better.
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>>152923037
>even "huehue I was just pretending to be your kind elderly uncle but I'm actually the villain" is better.

I want to point out that the effectivity of this is largely dependent on (other than the quality of the writing) on the culture of the reader. I remeber when Tiger & Bunny was airing, everyone on /a/ (westerners) knew the old guy would be the bad guy from pretty much the second he appeared, while most japs were honestly surprised.
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>>152920017
I found some for an abandoned game that were in French from high school, as if someone was peeking over my shoulder at my char design for a zombie apocalypse otome going "Ah yes, Charles is scared of guns but his ending has him forced to shoot another survivor who's threatening to kidnap you. So unexpected, gotta steal that golden idea."

Did find some emotion lists and poses I worked up on tiny 3x5 sheets from last summer, though, and they were pretty cute and still useful. Probably because they were scribbled during my breaks so I couldn't fuck myself over on the details. Stuff like gestural drawings with "plays with hoodie string when lying or uncomfortable, [example pic], player could pick up on multi plays and realize it's foreshadowing/tells for X?" or the different poses the LIs would have to display the same emotion. Should do it again, I remember it being kind of relaxing/fun and deffo recommend for anyone else having problems with poses.
My favorite old drawings/notes are still the ones where I came up with different (basic) room designs based on the LIs' personalities for a game I've shelved indefinitely.

Everything I do note-wise is all on notebook paper though so none of it looks even close to professional char design shit. Keep all your old shit, though, even on shit paper and date it. Because months later if you find it it'll be fun for you to look through. And if you want to pad out extra content, having images of the development process is always a fun thing to have in the gallery.
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>>152923037
Well that's kind of what it is

It's hard for me to explain, but the basic idea is that the antagonist becomes more and more evident as you go along, the main character tries to figure out what the fuck is going on, and they eventually deduce that it must be this one person who was lying the entire time, which is a completely correct and logical deduction

But then it turns out that the person they thought was lying was actually not really in control of their actions and someone else caused the whole thing, but it's not as if this real antagonist is just someone I came up with on the spot in order to resolve plot points - the entire plot revolves around them and their actions, they just used someone else as a front to accomplish their goals

Personally I think it makes sense and isn't stupid
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Meh, you can figure the antagonist in mine fairly easily.

Hell, she'll even have her own route where you can join her and dick her.
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>>152923382
On my off day (Sat hopefully) I might scan some of it although the thought of people seeing any of my art in its full shit-glory makes my stomach twist, even anonymously and even here. Maybe someone will get a laugh out of it, though. Especially the weird middle style-changed part where everyone had bloated heads and/or tumblr noses for a while.
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>>152911249
Writers are allowed to be weird and imaginative with dialogue in order to get the sound and intention across. If this were imagery or regular prose, then this wouldn't work. But it's fine here.
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>>152908726
>steamspy
>reliable
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>>152924060
>the thought of people seeing any of my art in its full shit-glory makes my stomach twist
Anon, I LITERALLY just posted a spiked four limbed turd labeled "catapiller". Cmon now.
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>>152924752
Not them, but when you actually care about what you're posting, it's way harder to take negative feedback in stride.
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>>152924881
This.
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I wanna feel like shit. Can anyone recommend me something heavy that'll stay on my mind for a while?
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>>152925942
How about the realization that you'll always be a failure who will never amount to anything?
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>>152925942
Try thinking about your life and existence
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>>152925942
http://funnyjunk.com/The+clarissa+comics+collection/funny-pictures/5344817/
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>>152926781
>clarissa comics
>in a section called funny pictures
That in itself is depressing enough.
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god, my state just had a huge scandal about a completely innocent piece of media being satanic and damaging to children, and I think I saw my future for a moment there...
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>>152920017
>adore reading through your old notes
No, I hate it. And I hate my old me for not putting all that shit in .txt back on the day.
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dead thread
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>>152933924
I tried making conversation but writing is hard
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>>152930752
Which cuck state?
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>tfw you spend half your day reading /tg/ writefaggotry.
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Not today.
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Pfft aHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Quick!
Someone post lewd elves.
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>>152944669
elves a shit
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>>152920017
from the old notes file
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If I want to stand a chance of making money, is there a market for straight-up porn EVNs or should I stick to making ecchi shit that I can throw on Steam?
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>>152945414
Yes.
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>>152945414
patch the porn
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If HP has 2.5D tits, I'm going to have 2.5D elven ears AND tits.
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>>152946596
But can I fondle the ears?
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>>152946646
Of course, mortal.
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>>152946596
Post your art, and we will see if you can compete.
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>>152946921
Nah, it's just playing with >>152945136. Nothing solid, for real.
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>>152946596
Any news on 2.5D elven dicks?
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https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=40021

spambot or firecat alt account?
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>>152950129
Why are people replying seriously lmao
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Pmub
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>>152948784
Yaoi games should experiment with this.
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>>152952734
How do I persuade raging lesbos to draw my cute 2.5D elven boys ?
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>>152952941
Pay them
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>>152953003
But, what about passion, devotion, dedication and friendship?
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>>152953003
Come on, yaoi (and otome) games have consistently pulled crowdfunding success.
>>152953147
Those would stop existing once contracts, payments and responsibilities start to appear.
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>>152953253
>artists
>responsibilities
Are you high?
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>>152953340
I'm actually quite depressed lately.
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>tfw super close to finishing demo routes
Just a little bit more to go, me.
Then all I have to worry about are my artists meeting their deadlines.
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>>152945414
Straight-up porn has to be sold in more limited locales, and probably for a very low price since one assumes you have no voice acting, and won't sell a whole bunch of copies. Look into the performance (and expectations) of MG's nukige titles?
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>>152953732
Hey, bud. Wanna join me in massively regretting the past, since no magic anime fairy has come along to give us a do-over?
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>>152953985
>no voice acting = very low price
lmao what the fuck are you on
straight up porn sells well, how else do you think AJ tilley stays afloat?
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I did all my notes in notepad .txt, but then again I'm so self concious that I rarely re-read them and just write what I "remember" from my head. I read them naybe 2-3 times and I always was 'ugh, that shit is so stupid' so in the end I'm glad I dont rely on them
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>>152954093
I get the whole 'past cringe' thing, but I find that by scouring them, there is often stuff in there worth relying on/using. You just have to dig deep.
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>>152954057
Can I join as well in the sad wizard parade?
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>>152954151
It's not like writing notes is useless, because by doing that I engrave the general idea of the story in my mind. It's just the details are often so retarded. I'll have to re-read them soon and it already makes me cringe.
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>>152954069
Uh, AJ Tilley sells steam games. Someone was asking about games that can't be sold on Steam.

MangaGamer sells outright porn games that can't be on Steam, but their audience expects voice acting.
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>>152954216
Things i should not do:
- drive by my ex's house
- buy my ex presents off amazon wishlist
- create fake twitter accounts to make friends with my ex
- drunkenly phone up in the middle of the night and declare my love
- make VNs that are entirely about us
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>>152955341
>their audience expects voice acting.
Not when its an evn, they don't.
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>>152955445
>Things i should not do:
all I'm reading is a list of things you shouldn't do without a gun
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>>152955341
Patch out the porn, and include a link somewhere.
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>>152955341
I don't know a single person who enjoys voice acting in their porn VNs. It's really weird.
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>>152955592
Sure, that's what most people do, but one presumes that for a sufficiently outright porn game, patching just isn't going to work

>>152955460
I've gotten complaints about lack of voice acting in EVNs before. WE know better than to expect it, but we are the elite
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Is IndieDB a site to shill your game on?
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>>152956074
Used to be. You still can, but the site's gone downhill a lot so don't expect anything
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>>152956074
It's nothing but a circlejerk of devs that shill their games to each other just like /evn/
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>>152956074
I preffer GameJolt, it's less clanky and has nice in-build stats.
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>tfw your shortest character's chest is barely above the textbox.
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Thoughts on itch.io?
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>>152959303
iktf
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>>152959978

A good platform, but you have to market your game rather than just wait for people to run into like steam.
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>>152959303
This is why you shouldn't be too autistic with perspectives and raise the sprite a little bit.
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>>152959303
floating textbox?
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>>152959303
post it.
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>>152965031
It's Wurzel
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http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=751409670
lmao nice comments
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>>152964965
>>152965031
>>152963313
Tallest and the shortest character in-game.
Welp. Good night /evn/.
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>>152966080
same shit bruh, can't see tits.
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>>152966401
But she's flat.
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>>152966471
Good, that means they're more sensitive.
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Can someone suggest me a vn like 999?
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>>152966818
ever17
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>>152966080
Raise both slightly? doesn't look too good when the sprites scratch the top, but there is still some space up there.
Just my two cents.
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>>152966818
like in which way, do you want one with puzzles, with time travel, with murder?

some possibilities: ever 17, time hollow, danganronpa
if you want an EVN suggestion... uh, date warp I guess. exogenesis if they ever finish it.
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>>152966818
Danganronpa. The franchise goes more and more retarded as time passes and whores out for easy money. Just so you know what to expect.
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>>152967470
I really like time travel and puzzles..
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>>152967978
Time Hollow, Date Warp, Break Chance Memento, Ghost Trick

Ghost Trick really isn't a VN, though it has some story segments, but it's got better puzzles than the rest of those put together and it's a great game.

I'm not sure how puzzly BCM is. I believe it was supposed to have some, at least, but I never actually played it.

Time Hollow is probably your best overall bet though
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>>152955598
Do you know five people? Voice is absolutely integral to porn. Unless you're talking about English voice acting, in which case, they are correct.
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>>152967978
Seconding the rec for Time Hollow. It's pretty fantastic.

>>152969057
>recommending a game you haven't played
dude
BCM is 80% boring homo SoL shit and 20% actual things happening.
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>>152969172
Porn dialogue is usually awful. But the sounds of people enjoying themselves having sex is pretty crucial to getting the right effect.
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>>152860917
What are you making?
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>>152966080
finally some more wurzel
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>>152966080
I hope Wurzel studied for this.
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I don't want to do anything, so might as well bump.
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>>152972892
I want to do lots of things but they're all very bad ideas.
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>>152976043
right boy is cute.
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>>152976324
you're cute
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>>152977986
Y-you too.
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>>152980412
T-thanks.
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Is HP going to have English or Japanese voices?
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>>152984108
I don't think that even 68k budget is enough to hire a japanese cast
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>>152984360
You realize amateur voice actors exist in Japan, right? It's not like they'd try to hire HanaKana or Miyuki Sawashiro.
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>>152976043
FAT
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Can someone suggest me a horror vn?
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>>152986493
y-you too
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>>152986825
Driftwood
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>>152986825
not dead evn
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>>152993739
Oh, so the answer to "what goes bump in the night" is /evn/
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>>152994510
Wrong. It's 'your mom'.
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>>152994510
It's in the middle of the afternoon, so I'm afraid we still don't know.
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I can hear a couple having sex in the park my windows are facing. There's some slapping involved and the girl's moans are pretty hot.
What they don't know is that the kiosk owner has cameras set up.
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They are gone. Girl talked for a bit and she sounded like she was either drunk or retarded or both. Now I'm sad.
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>>152998076

There, there
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>>152998076
You can write a nice sex scene for your VN from that. Just add some tentacles, rape and voila! bestseller guaranteed.
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>>152920017
Some of the old stuff that I typed up for an early story draft is so disgustingly cringy. Like literally 12 yr old deviantart shit what the fuck.
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>http://store.steampowered.com/app/517000/

more sakura, but no wanaca no buy
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>>153002853
I feel you anon, I really do.
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>>153003693
Imma is bretty gud.
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Is drozofila the correct word for fruit fly in Russian? Anyone know the word for fruit fly in other languages? I need a bunch. I'm worried google translate will fail me on this.
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>>153007185
Muszka owocówka (Owocówka is fine too) - Polish
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Didn't we have a Romania-anon here as well?
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>>153007185
If you need to have a correct term in several languages just check wikipedia and switch between language versions. They're always correct.
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>>153007352
Thanks!

>>153007659
Great idea, thank you.
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>>153007970
No problem
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https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=40029

HEY
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>>153007185
Is there a rotting corpse involved?
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>>153007185
>fruit fly
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sO2WIFTm7n4
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>>153008215
>https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=40029
What?
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>>153008772
Somebody's making a Live2D game.
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>>153008320
Only fly corpses

>>153008514
I'm crying
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>>153008215
>test project has better art than some commercial releases
ayyy
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>>153008827
Tyrano.
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>>153008215
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7iTZyl9Xf4&ab_channel=W.G.CreativeMedia

oh holy shit honestly impressive. that thread looks so sad and barren
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>>153011314
It's BxG after all.
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>>153009528
>https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=40029

> test project uses CC sprites
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>>153012336
It's literally his friend's though.
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>>153012387

and? CC assets don't count.
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>>153012648
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>>153012648
Crepes.
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Mom, I did it again
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Don't pretend you have a life on friday guys, not funny.
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Guys.
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>>153015454
I just came back from work
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>>153015454
I overate
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Where do I start to learn drawing backgrounds?
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>>152931242
>>152945229
>>153002853
>>153004135
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>>153020006
Learn perspective
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>>153015454
I hung around near a girl until she said hi to me. My day is now complete.
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>>153016851
>>153017857
>>153021310

Good. Now back to work on your evn.
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>Artist dies
>Alienworks uses this fact to advertise their game by starting their reaction by noting that she was a large fan of their games and even did guest art for them

How can you guys call yourselves professional if you can't even use the death of a colleague to push your popularity? Are you even trying, /evn/?
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>>153023228
And I here I was, naively thinking they couldn't possibly be any more unprofessional.
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>>153023228
I feel bad for whoever was commissioning them at the time. Not like they can get a refund.
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>>153023991
Eevery time my useless artists fail to post updates for a week I start wondering if they've died and I'm screwed
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>>153023228
W-what? Link?
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>>153023228
this is the internet, my first question is whether the artist will turn out to be not dead after all in a week
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How well do artists get paid in the EVN industry? I'm sure it's different depending on what kind of artist, but regardless, is it good enough to break into?
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>tfw Love Sorcery has another update.
Oui, why is he progressing so fast?
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>>152860064
That's literally just a loop, anon.
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>>153025301
go check raithfyre's twitter ya lazy cunt
do it before he sees that post and takes it down
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>>153026465
How much an artist gets paid in any industry depends entirely on their quality, style, and demand.
Is your art high quality? Do you specialize in a popular style? If the answer to these questions is yes, then you're free to demand whatever pricetag you feel fit, and people will pay it.
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>>153023228
Is this shitposting or do I seriously have to explain why you are wrong on every conceivable level?
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>>153027523
Hi raithfyre.
Please, try and excuse and justify yourself.
I'll wait.
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>>153027523
You'll have to explain since it's clearly not shitposting
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>>153027523
Damage control in 3, 2, 1...
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>>153027337
>goes to read it
>it's not even that bad
/evn/ blowing up shit like usual
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>>153025220
>not signing a contract to be in their will if they die before finishing your commission
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>>153027591
>>153027594
>>153027824
I had something big typed out, but I think I'll just post the links and let people decide for themselves.
https://twitter.com/AlienworksDev/status/769259102476218368
https://twitter.com/AlienworksDev/status/769259148596830208

Someone very sweet is gone. People are paying tribute to a friend in the best way they can. I'm sorry if you think it's anything other than that.
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>>153023228
>>153023717
>>153028223
wow, using someone's death as an opportunity to shill your own game? how fucking classless can you get
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>>153028431
>shill
>a one liner
>salvaging literally anything
I'm glad you guys aren't following me.
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Is Raith of the Fyre even here?
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>>153028223
I'm sorry but if someone dies and the first thing you think of to say about them is "she was a big fan of this game I made!" you are a tool
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>>153028223
>I was going to attempt to make a counter argument but then I realized I couldn't come up with anything convincing, so here decide for yourselves!
fix'd that for you
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>>153028568
>first thing
>first thing was
>a great artist
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>>153028514
he's always here
he just denies it
>>153028568
right? could of just said it was a joy to work with her, but nope, gotta seize the opportunity
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>>153028738
>joy to work with her
>working with an artist
That's not how it works though.
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>>153028650
yeah, that followed by
>that also just so happened to work on my game!
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>>153028223
so your "defense" is to say "here's the tweet where I took the time to mention that this girl was a fan of my game rather than maybe talk about her own achievements or literally anything that isn't about drawing people's attention to my own shit"

very articulate rebuttal
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>An artist dies
>Alienworks makes a memorial post and mentions how they worked with her
>Have to shitpost about it because it's Alienworks and Raithfyre

Great work, guys.
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>>153028846
Only makes sense to identify your relationship with another person in passing or else you seem like another nobody morning.
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>>153028825
the only artwork they did for it was free fanart
sounds like a joy compared to usual artists
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>>153028846
it's even worse than that, the tweet's not even "she did great work for my game" but rather "she was a big fan of my game"

seriously?

the fucking ego on this kid
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>>153028915
Hi raithfyre.
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>>153029045
She'll miss out on the game now. How do you not think that's sad?
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>>153029045
what else do you expect from the self proclaimed best yuri evn writer?
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>>153028965
How does a tweet saying only "she was a big fan of my game" exactly "identify your relationship" with that person?

I think the most distasteful thing is about how it completely takes the focus away from any contribution the artist might have made to the project (a perfectly valid thing to talk about) and instead focuses attention on the game. She was such a big fan! Oh BTW she was also an artist who I guess worked on the game? But the tweet didn't even tell me that.
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>>153029223
>turning this into a personal attack
Please, anon.
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>>153029120
>tfw you die before you can play the best evn the west has to offer
;_;
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>>153029223
Is that really Raithfyre? Or are you guys memeing me?
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>>153029326
It is. I was shocked at first too.
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>>153029120
yes, the saddest thing about this girl's tragic passing is that she won't have another chance to replay the yuri masterpiece that is highway blossoms
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>>153029326
yeah it's real, he was at anime expo this year
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>>153029223
Does all of evn look like this? The resemblance is uncanny except I'm female. Less beard.
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>>153031892
No, pretty sure all of evn isn't white.
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>>153031892
Well, actually...
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>finally got round to making a twitter
wonder how long it'll take for me to get my first follower.
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>>153032187
Link it, and I'll follow you.
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>>153029045
what can you expect from a guy whose ask.fm looks like thinly veiled PR questions:
http://ask.fm/Raithfyre
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>tfw anonymous
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>>153023228
something about those tweets really bothered me and this was it. i don't epect any class from those people but this is a new low
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>>153032264
Alright, but pls no bully:
https://twitter.com/officer_you
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>>153032424
>tfw opens it up and sees bully potential already
Just know it wasn't me. It was some other guy.
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>>153032402
You'll have to go public eventually. We all will.
Then will come the dignity shattering shilling, the PR bullshit, the pretending you care about some retarded 14 yo "feedback" on steam, the ass tearing inflammatory reviews from JP and the "yo mama" yokes from evn.
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>>153032696
I have no idea how to pull off personality, I'll bomb instantly even before my game is released.
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>>153029223
he looks like an oblivion character
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>>153032696
*jokes
Man, this 90 sec wait between posts is really humilliating for us dyslexics.
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>>153032318
He asks his own questions.
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>>153028431
>She

>Woman

Nothing valuable is lost then.
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>>153034253
You're worse than him.
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>>153032696
>Then will come the dignity shattering shilling, the PR bullshit, the pretending you care about some retarded 14 yo "feedback" on steam, the ass tearing inflammatory reviews from JP and the "yo mama" yokes from evn

Not if what I'm releasing is entirely free and will never be distributed via steam or any other platform except download links such as mega or mediafire
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I just got into tumblr and know nothing about styling. What's a good simple minimalist theme, single column with a lot of white space? Mostly going to do text (point of the tumblr is to share longer posts that wouldn't fit on my twitter) but I'll also be posting art from time to time.
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>>153034472
>mega
>mediafire
>not a direct download
Not gonna make it.
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>>152858852
>Cradle Song will never be made
Fucking poor management man.
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Some of the artists scammed so many people, they have to fake their death.
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>>153034594
What is this? Looks like a scene straight out of Evangelion
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>>153034547
ain't manageable

everyone would shit on it that way
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>>153034728
Cradle Song
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>>153032424
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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>>153034764
If everyone is going to shit on it, might as well drop it, and start a new project
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>>153034878
not in that sense

it's not something that would be smart to have on a dedicated page
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>>153034594
>>153034847
Is this art considered good ?
How much would you pay for a CG like this?

Honestly asking
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>>153035080
I'd pay doomfest a fair amount.
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>>153035080
it looks really good to me
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>>153032424
Header picture is low quality
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>>153035159
That hand though
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>>153035261
I disagree with your views
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>>153035080
100$ probably. Although I'm a poorfag.
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>>153035080
It's not bad, but I wouldn't call it anything special either. It's more just somewhat distinctive than anything.
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>>153035080
It's good enough, I guess. It doesn't look like professional art you would seen in a Japanese VN.
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>>153036801
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>>153037051
That quality, I mean just look at the shading.
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>>153028431
>Kenneos

Well fuck...
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>>153037121
it's a jvn
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>>153037051
LIFE BEGINS AFTER SCHOOL
THAT'S WHEN WE BEND ALL THE RULES
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>>153037269
Are you ok anon?
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How to find BG artist who can accurately depict maps?
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>>153037051
>muh cherrypicking
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>>153037570
Usually you look for them yourself. or place out an ad.
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>>153037570
You're looking for a cartographer, not a BG artist.
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>>153035080
I've seen a good number of better artists in this general.
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Raith looks like the type who would rage hard. Why hasn't he done that here? Does he even exist?
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>>153038436
Despite all his rage he's still just a rat in a cage
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>>153035393
That everything though
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>artist applies for job and introduces themselves as artist of X game
>they only did fanart

whew
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>>153041515
Why would anybody do that?
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Oops, almost ded.
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Wrote 3k words this evening. Feeling pretty good about how the weekend is going so far!
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>>153045260
>joined some shitty local jam
>writer did only 1k words in a month
At this point I don't know who's the worst, writers or artists.
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What do you guys think of the KS art book?
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>>153045442
At least it's easy to change a writer
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>>153045559
Never seen it
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>>153045559
What KS art book?
>>
Is it okay to have one route way more sexual than the other routes?
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>>153048076
Maybe, depends on why.
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>>153048076
If it's the secret harem route it's kind of expected.
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How do I Greenlit my evn on Steam. Is it very hard?
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>>153048123
>>153048272
Not a harem route but the flirty older guy route. All the other guys' routes are just typical cute stuff but dunno if I wanna settle with just that in his route.
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>>153048608
>older guy
is this homo
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>>153048754
I dont think so
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>>153048608
I think it's fine
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>>153048936
Count me interested
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>>153048754
Yeah, sorry no. Just basic hetero.
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>>153049080
What are you apologizing for? This is a good thing.
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>>153048608
As long as he doesn't end up with more content than the other guys it's fine I think.
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>>153048419
Word around the school is that now it is quite easy senpai
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>>153032318
"What rating would you give Highway Blossoms? How do you think it compares to other yuri EVN's?
I think it's pretty firmly in the 8/10 range. There are multiple things that I think we could've done better or differently, but overall I'm really happy with it. Some of those were things kinda beyond our control or that we couldn't have foreseen, but that's just how development goes. Obviously it's not perfect, but I think its good qualities far outweigh the bad."

>rate your own game 8/10
>8/10

Is this guy serious?
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http://www.indiedb.com/games/episicava/news/episicava-update-10

The backgrounds look like they've been posted here once.
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>>153049294
Are you offended that he didn't give it a 10?
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>>153049294
I'm not sure what troubles you.
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>>153049350
What is Gil doing in there?
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>>153049294
What's wrong with that?
>>
Should I put my game on Steam Greenlight even if I don't have to?
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>>153048419
>>153049493

If it's a e s t h e t i c then go for it.
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>>153049294
I haven't played HB, so I don't know how it is, but if you ever have the disgrace of meeting one of these new age hippie professors that makes this "self-evaluation" thing, where you decide your own grades, 8/10 is by far the most common response among alumni. It's good enough to be plausible and doesn't sound too arrogant. Pretty much everyone grades their own stuff like that unless they feel either very proud, guilty or are shameless narcisists.

Psychology is a perverse thing.
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>>153049858
It's a werstern thing to do then. If you do it here you are considered a self absorbed asshole.
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>>153050625
Being expected to always evaluate yourself as "oh, no, i am shit, most honored sensei" is just as dumb.

Asking ANYONE to rate themselves is pretty stupid. How are you supposed to be objective?
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>>153051598
I meant, that we don't have self evaluation here. Only maybe in some hipsterprivate schools.
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>>153051942
Ah okay yeah. It's a dumb thing to do.
>>
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=752664579

Why won't /evn/ curate again?
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>>153052265
what?

that music is so painful to my ears
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>>153052265
I like goth lolis
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>>153032696
>"""""commercial""""" devs
>making very niche weeb vidya for money
just go flip some burgers or something
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>>153052265
The clothes are cute, approved.
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>>153052265
>>153052789
I like the look too.

On an unrelated note, is an 8 hours demo too much?
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>>153052998
Yes.
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>>153052889
Tell that to WC, you poor, poor wageslave.
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>>153052889
Uh-huh.
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>>153052998
>is an 8 hours demo too much?
Yes, definitely.
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>>153052265
curate how?
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Lol some comments removed from the Paranormal Teens Greenlight page.
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>>153053282
Apply shitposting as means to examine, select, and present choose EVNs?

nah too edgy.
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>>153053156
that' not supposed to go to their own pockets though, right?
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>>153053519
i mean, anyone could make a steam curator and claim they were /evn/, but it wouldn't have any effect on what gets onto greenlight
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>>153053046
>>153053232
I guess I could cut it at the 2-3 hour mark, but with 7-8 I can introduce a few additional mechanics that would feel rushed and out of place otherwise, and make the players that stick around more invested. It's not like I'd be running out of story, in any case.
It would be like releasing a free first game of a series without the "episodic".
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>>153053810
-KS fees
-Bank fees
-DEVGRU-P fees
-Country taxes
I bet he will only receive around 40% (which is still the most successful evn KS).
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>>153054040
>the most successful evn KS
megotokyo
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>>153052998
>is an 8 hours demo too much?

Yes. Specially is the saves don't carry over, in which case expect 90% of the people to not even bother.
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>>153054231
What if the saves are not an issue?
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>>153054036
So you're just calling it a demo to get around the episodic stigma?
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>>153054197
>megotokyo
Holy shit, those numbers.

Was it actually released?
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>>153054340
it occurred to me as an afterthought, but pretty much yes. And it's going to be the demo and then just the main game, so calling it a series with just that would be a little pointless too.
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>>153054036
Most people will make up their minds to buy or not to buy long before they'll get to 2-3 hours. By 8 hours, a lot of the players you'll have left are dedicated free-only players, who will nag you for more free content.

You'd probably be better selling it as a first episode without the "episode one" in the title. If it's a demo anyway, you could just wait for the next bit to be ready and therefore dodge most of the episodic stigma.
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>>152967395
>>152966401

Adjusted it up 0.06 points. Wurzel's chest has cleared the textbox.
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>>153054503
What do you mean, is the "demo" stuff included in the main game or are they separate? Does it come to a satisfying conclusion on it's own?
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>>153054842
Achievement unlocked
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>>153054836
Good point.
>>153054854
The main game encompasses all the stuff you see in the demo.
>Does it come to a satisfying conclusion on it's own?
Both the 3h and the 8h marks drop a cliffhanger on you. The 3h one is a little too mean to leave them waiting for another 1/2 years, so I kind of don't want to, but the other anon makes a good case of doing so.
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>>153055356
You could always post a 3h version first and then after a few months later post another 5h to keep the interest. They're going to drop out if they wait for 1-2 years either way.
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>>153055657
Hm, yeah, I could do that too. If I go patreon instead of kickstarter that is an interesting option.

Thanks guys. I'll think about it.
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>>152869485
>because bigger tiddies.
This better work in the opposite direction as well.
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>>153057142
Well, there was even one successfully funded futa game, so...
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>>153054842
bravo Wurzel, I believed in her
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>>153054842
post more wurzel
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https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=40006

What is going on in this topic
Why do they think it's actually a good idea?
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>>153060521
>What is going on in this topic
i don't know, why don't you tell us instead of posting a blind link
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>>153060521
I read that earlier and cannot figure out the point of it.
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>>153060521
>>153060648
Someone has set up a steam account in order to gather other, non-related developers to publish on steam via this one account, he even wants to share the password with everyone who's involved.
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>>153059554
>>153060397
On paper, 4 years ago.
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>>153061085
das pretty kawaii actually
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>>153061085
ORIGINAL WURZELS
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>>153061085
R
A
R
E
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>>153061085
What's written on yellow sticker?
I can only read 2nd word, which is "Whore".
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>>153061928
Angelica Wurzel 2nd Version.

I have the worst handwriting among my peers lol.
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>>153061085
saving this for my grandchildern
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>>153059554
Post screenshot
>>
page 10 in 30 min evn
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You guys are still pretending you have a life, stop it.
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>>153066486
Don't worry, I don't have one. I ate a giant pizza and now I'm sleepy. This is the most interesting thing that happened to me in weeks.
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>>153066945
I hope it wasn't a hawaii pizza
>>
We already did Katawa Shoujo once, why can't we do it again?
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>>153067209
Would imply all of us banding together and probably doing it for free.
Maybe once we all are set for life.
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>>153067209
>spend 10 years on a free project idea stolen from some nip artist's brainstorming
give me 10 years, an idea and a bunch of people who flake out during that time and maybe we can do it
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>>153067501
>give me 10 years
Here, have some.
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>>153067501
If we'd started 5 years ago, we'd only have 5 years left to go.
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>>153067501
It was six years, not ten.
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>>153067501
I'll flake on you senpai.
Now all is left is to browse exhentai looking for ideas in postscripta
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>>153068409
>>153067501

How about a game about cute dictator girls doing cute dictatorsip things.
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>>153068747
Can't sell that shit in first world countries.
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>>153068747
Isn't someone already making one?
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>>153067176
No, it was cheese with cheese. And then some.
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>>153068747
>>153068901
>>153068956

How about a game about cute scientist girls doing science cute things
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>>153068747
Literally already being done and inspired by that exact same thing.
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>>153067176
i love hawaiian pizza
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Really, just pick any profession and turn a bunch of dead people into cute girls. You just cannot go wrong.
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>>153069248
Are you referencing that doujin where tesla captures Edison, transforms him into a girl and fucks her silly?
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>>153069248
Science Girls didn't turn out that cute.
It did have vore in it though.
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>>153069717
They don't look like science girls at all, just random hi-schoolers
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>>153069248
I could fap to this.
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>>153068747
Only if Churchill is portrayed accurately.
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>>153069248
If someone writes it nicely I can draw one of the girls sprites + cutscenes for free
>>
Hear me out: what if we flipped this whole thing on its head and made a BL game where famous women from history were reimagined as handsome dudes?
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>>153069657
Not believable unless she dies of pneumonia because the queen of Sweeden wakes her up at 5 am for her lessons.
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>>153070702
What, all three of them?
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>>153070702
Good look digging up historical figures other than Hypatia and Marie Curie.
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>>153070702
I'd go more for Sklodowska-Curie flipped gender into a handsome dude who seduces other scientist girls
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>>153070936
I think Elizabeth Bathory would have great appeal.
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>>153034472
Is that Woody Harrelson?
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>>153071054
Oh, if you meant famous in general you have more options. I thought you were going for famous science girls of yore.
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>>153071054
>>153071895

Sengoku Rance styled VN/RPG with famous female generals/queens to conquer
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>>153072212
You could use /hgg/'s matron saint Julie d'Aubigny. I read her bio in wikipedia and she was pretty kickass.
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>>153072212
>Sengoku Rance styled VN/RPG with famous female generals/queens to conquer
https://vndb.org/v6458

Too late bud
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>>153072521
>I bet it's Eiyuu Senki
>it's Eiyuu Senki
Almost all of those are men turned women.
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>>153072521
>https://vndb.org/v6458
Yeah, but it's done in a fictional world. I was thinking more of something that could happen in Europe, possibly in one period of time.
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>>153055356
>demo for a VN that is still 1-2 years away from completion
lad
my dude
anon
what the FUCK are you doing?
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>>153070702
>turning influential females into men
#triggered
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>>153035192
Tinkered around with resolutions. Hopefully its not too blurry now.
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>>153072824
I don't have enough money to upfront everything before releasing the demo, and with the amount of writing and art required there is no way around.
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>>153073274
I'm not a dev so my perspective is limited, but I would think that no one would give a shit about your game after a 2 year gap.
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>>153073492
Yeah, I know. Trying to get creative about what to do.
Or I could do the art on my own too and release something subpar in 20XX.
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>>153070702
>Hear me out: what if we flipped this whole thing on its head and made a BL game where famous women from history were reimagined as handsome dudes?

Why? You have plenty of historical gay/bisexuals dudes that plenty of people want to fuck.
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>>153073792
Innovation.
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>>153073492
Unless you're a famous shill, like the dude from megatokyo.
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>>153073701
I guess putting out the demo just for the sake of generating revenue makes sense. I just thought of them as advertising for the final product.
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>>153073171
Can't see nigger woman's tits.
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>>153074385
That's the point.
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>>153073171
When is your game coming out, again?
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>>153074451
I want to bully you, nerd!
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>>153074553
Demo release in early January.
>>153074584
;_;
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>>153074451
I can still see them with my mad haxx0r skillz.
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>>153075081
Here, if you're so desperate for tiddies.
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>>153075356
Thanks, I appreciate it.
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>>153075356
Nice tiddies. I'm looking forward to it.
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>>153075442
Anytime.
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>>153075356
>muscled lesbian tiddies
I am really looking forward to this as well. Best of luck to you.
>>
>>153073274
How is releasing a free demo supposed to do anything for your money situation? Is this a kickstarter demo, or fodder for hopes of luring people to your patreon, or 'begging a publisher to fund me' demo, or what?

>>153073913
But anon, there aren't any famous women in history.
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>>153076364
Kickstarter or patreon luring, obviously. The point is to give prospective players a taste and hope they like it enough to support the project.
I thought this was standard procedure.
>>
>>153075356
What's the name again?
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>>153077580
Alpha's Adventures
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>>153075356
>only 1 white female
>she's an elf
2016 ladies and ladies.
>>
>>153076609
Kickstarter demos are generally super, super short. People make kickstarter demos that are five minutes long, since the last thing you want to do is give people a solid reason to dislike your product and/or think they can't affect its shape.

Demos used to be the things you released when your game was DONE, so that people played through to the cliffhanger and then bought the game, in which case releasing them way in advance is counterproductive.

A lengthy demo might be useful with patreon, I don't know that market as well. However, I suspect they're better milked by releasing constant updates, not by handing them a huge free thing and then saying 'suport me plz'

8-hour demos aren't standard procedure anywhere.
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>>153078318
>still the hottest one
>>
>>153078318
poor little white chick
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>>153078318
>how dare anyone cater to a fetish other than mine
>>
>>153078545
>niggers
>fetish
You alright ?
>>
>>153078318
I think the dev mentioned she can change her skin color as well.
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>>153078619
How is it not a fetish?
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>>153078351
>A lengthy demo might be useful with patreon, I don't know that market as well. However, I suspect they're better milked by releasing constant updates,

considering that patreon pays by update, yes.
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>>153078318
I did it to subvert expectations. If enough money is raised, you can have your brown elf.
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>>153078808
>charging for a palette swap
s m h
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>>153079036
> I don't know how stretch goals insentives work.
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>>153078318
FUCK YOU, LET ME HAVE A GAME FULL OF BROWN
>>153078808
Don't listen to him.
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>>153078351
I pretty much scratched the 8h unless adapted for patreon format. Or as a pre-release demo for shilling purposes.
Also:
>Kickstarter demos are generally super, super short.
>the hook of my VN is worldbuilding and scope
I'm screwd I guess. I suppose if I sell my grandma's silverware I could commision some pretty OP with dragons and cute girls.
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>>153079036
What, you think my artist is willing to recolor CG's and sprites for free? I wish.
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>>153079081
A palette swap for a single character is a pretty lame stretch goal senpai
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>>153078693
beastiality is not allowed here.
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>>153079226
> option to make character more appealing to you is lame

anon, I don't know what to tell you.
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>>153079226
If people want it, it'll get funded. If they don't, it won't. Would you rather the stretch goals were feature creep?
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>>153079161
What artist charges enough money to include it as a stretch goal to change hues around? It's five minuets worth of effort.
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>>153079524

> five minutes
> per image

see the problem?
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>>153079524
Lots.
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>>153079661
No. She's not in every image, and it's not like there are a ton to begin with.
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>>153079524
Like the "more choices!" thing. You add 50 new flavor text lines and you are golden.
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>>153079524
My artist.
But really, you're implying that a stretch goal has to be expensive which is silly. To me, a stretch goal is just an extra feature that isn't needed to make the base game, therefore it isn't included within the intial funding goal.
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>>153078318
no SJW shit as far as I know, dev just pandering to their own fetishes
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>>153079860
I'm implying that it's lame because it is. At least make it for all characters or something.
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>>153079831
>She's not in every image
She has at least 10 CG scenes planned.
> it's not like there are a ton to begin with
I have 9 CG's for my demo alone. I'd say that's a fair amount for evn standards.
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>>153079939
This. I'm simply making what I think is appealing.
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>>153080372

> 2016
> people don't realize it's possible to have a brown fetish
> it must be pandering!!!

we've come full circle
>>
>>153080372
And I like brown, so keep at it!
>>
>savior of BL has brown homo as the protag
>savior of yuri has brown homo as the protag
jump on that wagon, heterodevs
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>>153081994
what was saviour of BL again?
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>>153082690
>>>/out/
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>>153081994
I'm kind of a racist, so no.
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>>153082768
>being racist
>not viewing the race as cumdumpsters and beasts of burden
Why even bother? What a garbage-tier racism.
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>>153082768
Some girls are really into being racially abused while you fuck them, oddly enough
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>>153083402
It's called race play, yes. Though it's only supposed be done in the bedroom and for pretend only.
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>>153083724
So is BDSM in general, but you still get lifestylers.
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>>153089443
Can I fuck her eye socket ingame?
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>>153089443
>cuts in clothing without underlying wounds
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>>153090378
Maybe they were made after she was turned into whatever?
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>>153090648
Maybe she tore the shirt off another girl and put it on
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>>153090378
Her skin is stone hard, of course only the clothes are ripped.
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>>153090648
>>153091503
If I can't play as an anime girl and become a vampire I'm never going to forgive small details like this, even if they're justified
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>>153090378
according to the lemma thread, the game takes place during halloween or smth so maybe it's just a costume?
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>>153090378
You can rip your clothes without getting hurt, you know.
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>>153092619
NO THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE

YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND
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https://twitter.com/JkaplanAW/status/769656544711409664
What did he mean by this?
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>>153098449
That he doesn't like the username and wanted to change it?
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