/drg/ Danganronpa General: Dis Pair Edition

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Paradise.

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I love her so much

kyoko had an image song too.

>>149677669
Is her image song just "Tell 'em Naegi", followed by Makoto's image song?

>>149677724
That's Byakuya's, you dolt.

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>>149677640
I want her to hospitalize me and keep me chained to a bed so i need her to care for me for the rest of our life

>>149677864
Anon, please. Don't remind me of the despair looming on the horizon.

What if class trials were rap battles?

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>>149677864

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>>149678073
Get out.

>>149678385
about time

>>149678190
Did anyone shop a dildo yet

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>HIIT
>On a track
>Outdoor
>Under 35°C
I lost around 4L of water weight (4kg,5lbs).
How was your day /drg/ ?

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MOM GET THE CAMERA!

>>149678574
I am sad.

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Hi hi, /drg/! How are you doing today?

>>149678574
Slept in late, cooling by the fan with my dog right now. Pretty nice day.
Good job on your workout, anon!

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>>149677620
holy shit

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>>149678574
Relatively cool. Quite the relief after how this summer has been. Actually managed to write and finish something, so that's good, but I still have to work on the important stuff. Ah, well; one step at a time.

>>149677864
Is Chiaki the only female Ultimate Hope?

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>>149678750
What makes you sad anon ? I'll tease you about it, and bully you so it can pass
>>149678810
Sleeping in is the absolute best
And thanks. Waiting for the beer to get ice cold atm. My friend that lead us was a fucking tyrant. Almost made me hurl
What kind of dog ? I hope it a bigass chill dog
>>149679027
Yeah midsummer is pretty cool all over the world it's quite good

>>149679169
Well nagito try to make Komaru that but she rejected Hope and Despair ala Hajime

here's kirigiri's image song if anyone curious

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0UAH6iJ4avz

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>>149679529
>Expect it to be a joke of some kind
>It's legit

NEAT.

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>>149679529
song sung by the same seiyuu =/= image song

Aozora no Monologue (蒼空のモノローグあおぞら の ものろぐ) or Blue Sky Monologue is a "Character Image Song" performed by Mio Akiyama, produced by Pony Canyon and published on 21 September 2010 within Mio's Character Image Songs album.

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>>149679952
why you gonna spoil my fun

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*cough*

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I'm replaying through DR1 and I lost my old file so no skills. Who's free time events should I do first to get some good ones?

>>149680424
Celestia for double focus

>>149680424
Saionji's Pivot turn is handy. So is either of Chiaki or Gundham's skills affecting the silencer. Mahiru's auto-focus can be a bit unwieldy, but it can also work in your favor if you use it well.

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posting underrated beta design

>>149680424
kyouko, hagakure, celestia, hifumi

>>149680306
Why? Why do you have to remind me she's gonna die and this'll never happen?

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>>149679185
>What makes you sad, Anon?

I was typing a big spoilered paragraph but deleted it all because it sounded really gay.

Let's just say I don't have company.

>>149680550
>confused DR1 with DR2 due to the image

I'm sorry Anon, I failed you.

>>149680705
I literally wrote gay pornography last thread. We're all kinda homo here.

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Daily reminder that hope will prevail!

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>>149680684
When are we going to do something to stop him?

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>>149680907

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>>149680843
>>149680705
And I commissioned it ! So don't feel bad
Outing always feels great. Grab a glass of whisky and let's talk

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>>149680907
Nah.

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>>149679185
Hurl? That sounds kinda extreme, take it easy now! And she sure is big, she's a German Shepherd, but as a semi-guard dog, she has no chill except for when she's with me.

>>149680843
Where? Link?

>>149681007
The SHSL Mastermind AKA "Sam Hyde" can't be working alone. How else could he keep getting away with it?

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>>149680843
>>149681098
Err..

By "gay" Anon I meant jokey loser kind of gay, not homosexual gay.

Now I feel like more of an asshole.

despair arc's op is so good

terutu~

>>149681173

ah.

>>149681228
http://pastebin.com/jj7v0p4v

>>149681309
Ah. Well, still. I'm about five minutes away from a mental breakdown/total despair myself, so go ahead and vent.

>>149680843
>We're all kinda homo here.
mmm im not

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>>149678907
woah...the resemblance is uncanny

>>149681228
anon please show pics of your dog! she sounds adorable

>>149681048
Do you have more crazy Chiaki?

>>149680843

>/drg/
>gay

Pick one, we are all girls in here

Correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't Byakuya totally willing to pay Naegi to do nothing but hang around him in one of his free time events? I think he offered him a job after Naegi refused the secretary thing.

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>>149682021

I think Togami was testing him, or he wanted a pet fuccboi.

>>149681795
Oh. So I should be writing yuri then?

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>>149682230
Please.

>>149682230

Absolutely dyke.

the best chihiro ship is with teruteru

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>>149681309
Yeah that was pretty obvious but the pheromons from last thread are still hanging in the air
No homo
Argh don't make yourself desired ! Just go and speak your mind bruh
No homo
>>149681460
It started at a joke at first because of my edit of pic related ,like MANzono not just being r63 Maizono but a manly man and all

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>>149682230
You should be writing the fuck out of pic related, yes.

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>>149681795
That's true, with the start of /drg/ fandub I was surprised how many girls are here.

>>149682319
>>149682389
>>149682485
I mean, I did some Ibuki/Mahiru and Peko/Mikan for the unfinished Soup fic. So when that drops, you might get your fix.

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>>149681460
>>149682456

This general, and Danganronpa itself, makes me feel lonely. Lonely in the sense that, I feel useless as a human being because well.. Aaugh! I can't articulate myself well. Let's just say I'm scum. I'm a violent, law breaking, overreacting scumbag. I don't think I deserve anyone.. But..

This may sound weird.. But one of the things that keeps me going in life is love. Not my love, but their love. God's love. The people's love. True love. His love.. Her love. I have a huge debt to them.. A debt that I can never repay, but I try. I try real hard. The problem is.. I don't have anyone's love to try for. Not at this moment, at least.

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>>149682865

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGbNbn8tB5k

>>149682501
I've noticed that female authors and artists tend to be drawn to misery. The amount of times I've seen them mutilate and abuse characters especially their self-inserts is staggering. Not sure why, to be totally honest.

>>149682865
The only love you need to strive for in life is your own. Making yourself dependant on another's love will only lead you to misery. Better yourself, grow strong and love the person you can -no, you will- become.

Someone uploaded the full version of the Despair OP song on Nico: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29324164

>>149682865
sounds like you need to get a job and socalize with coworkers

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>>149682865
So basically you just feel undeserving of the love and affection the whole world gives you ? Such is life. It is never really fair.
Have you tried joining a charity ,or volunteering for something like that ? Doesn't even have to be at the contact of people directly ,but that may heal your soul. I personally helped as an all around charity for cripples and blind people and it was fucking awesome.
>>149683460
Same reason women aren't funny. They can't write for shit ______:^)

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>>149683279

Guys, just a thought
What if the theater isn't just a narative tool?
What if the future arc is another vr program intended to weed out the traitor, and the "dead" players are watching from the sidelines?

>>149683958
So far its only been used once, so I can't really comment on it's narrative significance.

>>149683958
I'd think this series has a really terrible ending, probably.

>>149683958
Yeah, all this game and deaths definitely smells fishy, I feel like there's some other purpose than just "loldespair" this time too.

Am I the only one who thinks that the Mastermind may not be connected to Ultimate Despair at all, and may have an entirely different reason to set up this game than from the norm?

>>149683958
I'd be pissed. The "It's all a simulation nobody really dies" used twice in a row would be fucking shitty. It just takes the weight of the anime completely.
Just let people die ffs. Or else there is no point in anything

>>149683958
the theater was only use once

>>149683958
Wait, what if that's why gramps isn't concerned, and not!usami ignored her forbidden action (as in she didn't just lie)
What if they're running the program?
Small chance fedora-sensei might be involved too

>>149682230
Fuck that write so baby making shit i, sick of Yuri

>>149684852
But AE exists, so it will not be twice in a row.

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>>149685053
Are you okay anon ?
You shouldn't take another drink after this one

>>149685053
From what I can decipher this is a plea for hetero pairings from someone who has suffered and overdose of yuri.

>>149680907
Is it me or does Komaeda wear eyeliner

>>149685101
What ? Isn't AE before SDR2 ? I haven't played it but I remember seeing screenshots of the UD version of SDR2 ,mainly Nagito.
Or do you mean the release order ?

>>149685053
>>149685145
>>149685205
I mean, I have a PoV Mikan fic I can offer.

>>149685353
He means release order.

>>149682501
There's no way there are girls in /drg/. I don't fucking believe it. Girls are a myth.

>>149685353
Release order, yes.

What if the reason seiko hates ruruka is because she got sonosuke ?

>>149685365
What's the pairing?

>>149685365
Hit us with that shit, Anon.

>>149685551
ReaderXMikan. Based off of her appearance in Ep. 1 of Mirai-Hen.

I think Souda would be a good bf

>>149677620
Izuru's actually got a really good character design when outside of his normal artstyle. Like, the idea behind it is really cool and it tells you everything you need to know about him.

But man, the fucking seaweed hair.

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>>149685442
>>149685408
Ah alright scrap that then.
I still think that out of 5 separate entires, 2 of them are VR ,it's too much and would turn everything to be inconsequential bullshit. DR2 is already plagued by over the top murder and atmosphere (something better done in DR1), don't go even more full retard in DR3
>>149685413
This. Remember the impersonation of Nanami by Nidai-meanie.
It is just very cute boys with feminine penis

>>149685671
But would he be truly devoted to his girl instead of using it as a way to make Sonia jealous?

>>149685476
My guess is that they were collaborating on some kind of candy-drug and the reason they both think they were betrayed is because it had a bad result because of something that was added that neither of them expected. In this scenario it would've been Sonosuke who tampered with their product.

And he knows this but keeps it to himself because he's a shitbag.

>>149685739
you're supposed to break him until he loves only you

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>>149681560
delievering
http://i.imgur.com/PjduXeY.jpg

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>>149685686
His hair is beautiful

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>149685205 yea is sometimes i get sick of titty so i switch it up to Big asses


>>149685365>
is she getting Preggers ? also i am up for some condom fetish too

>>149685825
SoudaXMikan confirmed?

>>149685551
>>149685663
http://alexmarkovxxx.tumblr.com/post/147657947256/the-naughty-nurse

Tumblr because fuck it I need exposure.

Yes the optional ending is cheesy and stupid. I had a thing about Non-con stuff that I've since gotten over.

>>149685953
I have written some pregnancy stuff in the past, but not DR. I could, but I have a massive backlog.

>>149685837
German shepherds are beautiful dogs.

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>>149686075
>tumblr

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>>149685837
She looks cool but I wouldn't fuck with her.
Wish I had a dog but the only thing I ever had were cats

>>149686438
why do people make this freaky shit

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>>149685686
>>149685929
i think his hairs pretty cool and like it a lot, but he does look nicer with a bob or something similar

>>149685837
shes adorable! thanks for delivering

>>149686075
il give it a try

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I want to hate-fuck Monaca.

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>>149686438
It's a plateform of choice for various content creators. Don't be so hard on him
>>149686819
Hell Hatefuck anon. How are you ?

>>149686438
I don't like it that much either, but the community is thirsty as fuck.

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>>149686819

>>149686075
How long have you been writing stuff anon?

>>149686438
You do know the majority of the fan art posted here is from Tumblr, right?

So if the traitor doesn't sleep while carrying the murders, shouldn't they be getting sleepy considering they don't sleep?

>>149687035
and tumblr steals shit from here too

>>149687129
but they get sleep they just wake up before the others and get a time limit

FUCKING INTERNET STOP FUCKING IT UP!

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>>149686936
>>149686982
>>149687035
Sorry but it's mandatory.

What would different DR characters be like on Seiko Pills?

Aoi turns into literal titty monster?

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>>149687004
Lesse... I've been writing as a hobby for a fair while. The first smut I wrote was a couple years ago as a request from my SO. I figured I could manage since my style was rather descriptive/poetic. I wrote a passion piece for another fandom and posted it to the appropraite /aco/ thread, and from the positive response there I just moved on to taking requests when I could. That was... oh, December of last year, I think?

I like to think I've improved, but it's kind of hardot tell since I can't exactly show anyone I trust my smut. wouldn't beleive them anyway but I digress

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is wrong for me to be too critical of the anime and the fact that i dont feel bad when characters i dont know shit about dies ?

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>>149686936
Fine, fine, how about you?

>>149687469
I want to see Kyoko hulk out

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Kohacka doesn't have the balls to make V3 a series reboot.
The twist is that it will all be connected with DR3 and stuff.
He's already created a universe with established characters.

V3 will be the Apollo Justice of the series.

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>>149687521
I had an intense session of exercise outside under 35°C so I'm dead tired. Also hungry but i'm eating french fries later. It's a bit annoying to peel the potatoes tho.
You're not the only to have a cripple fetish. I'm with you in your creative project

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>>149687693
i am thinking the same to be honest

>>149687623
Then it turns into an Arkham game with Monokumas as thugs.

>>149687693
I still cant get over how cute this edit is

>>149687517
you're you, anon
it's ok to feel bad or not feel bad because a character died
I don't feel too bad for Gosu because his role in the story was to be likeable and then die, but i'm not happy about it either (would kill him 10000 times over for asahina tho)
I also felt pure hope when the black guy got what he deserved, couldn't stand his voice or his random shitty sayings

>>149687943
I'd play the shit out of it

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>>149687918
>Monokuma
>Monomi
>Shirokuma
>Kurokuma

AND THEY WILL ALL BE JUNKO

DID U RIKE IT

Why are all the nice characters dying first?

>>149688164
because life's not fair

>>149687918
>V3 is the actual return of Monaca when she doesn't appear at all in DR3

>>149688164
>characters die in order of how nice they are
>juzo dies, leaving Miaya

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>>149688250
>set in the future
>Monaka is a grown girl and the kid plot armor doesn't work anymore

Yeah, new universe my fucking ass.

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>>149688250
>but muh hopes peak link

>>149687469

>Munakata hair grows longer and he turns into Sephiroth.

All he needs is to borrow Juzo's coat.

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Well /drg/?

So this >>149688353 was posted next to this >>149688361 and I just realized they both have green hair and red ribbons in their hair
holy shit

>>149688443
Because the games are on PC and Vita library has nothing interesting.

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>>149688514
that just that image lightning but is still interesting

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>>149688443
too poor

>>149688603
This.
Being a poorfag is suffering.

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>>149686819
I want to love-hug Monaka!

>>149688716
Is that supposed to be Mukuro?

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>>149688084

>>149688594
She looks better with green hair.

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>>149688881
She looks good in anything.

>>149688443
I owned a vita but I didnt buy the dangan games till they hit steam

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Takeuchi

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>>149687478
Here http://pastebin.com/dv9TM62i
This is what I wrote and posted during the dead hours, nobody has given me any real feedback on it.

I am reading it but I feel im not really in a position to provide helpful critique because I stay away from erotica in general. So I don't have experience in this type of field. However I can assist with some formatting and wording because of my higher vocabulary.

When you start a new paragraph, keep a large space in-between so it doesn't look like a wall of text.

It's easier on the reader because sometimes they get lost where they were and its easier for them to find their progress in small chunks instead of one connected part.

I like how you are avoiding on using the same words over and over, and finding synonyms, looking for different ways to describe the same thing.

It reads fine and sound fines as I read it out-loud, but im no expert when it comes to smut at all. I keep to personal experiences. More of a realist writer and only really work with situations ive been in, or researched. Its hard for me to make stuff up at all.

My only real experience was a hooker I bought in vegas in 2011, and all she really did was step all over my back in a pair of shoes I brought with and penetration for 10 minutes.

>>149688443
I'm sure we'll get a V3 Steam port so I'll just watch a video and then buy it when it arrives there.

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>>149688443
I actually was concidering to buy Vita maybe a year ago with Danganronpa being the main factor behind purchase, but all the nice indies are better and cheaper on pc and some other things like Persona aren't as interesting to me. And now mainline Danganronpa games are on Steam so why even bother?

>>149689114

>nobody has given any real feedback

Well, i said it was good, didn't you saw it?

Celestia's drills are fake, pass it on.

>>149689629
I need more than one person to give feedback on it. Particularly advice on improving it or anything negative so I can find the flaws.

I appreciate you liking it but I need somebody to destroy it and rip it apart so I know how to improve it.

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>>149689679
No shit

for real?

woaaah

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>>149690373
Why is Dio so small?

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>>149689114
I'm on it tokopasta

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So my laptop went to shit while I was on vacation, all my theories weren't backed up so they're gone ;__;.
I did find this though in my DR folder in my main comp. I should go back to insane theories again

http://pastebin.com/EtHqL2mf

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>>149689114
Erotica is a bit of a taboo subject for a lot of people, so don't worry about it. Thanks for the formatting advice though.

Lets see...
1) You have something of an over abundance of commas. Semi-colons will be your best friend. The poor dears are more ignored and abused than your waifu. I see a few, but the first few paragraphs really need them.

2) You do a lot of telling instead of showing. This isn't wrong, so to speak, but it feels more like you're reciting a list rather than building a narrative. You also use a lot of "He did" and "She said" in short sentences. Sometimes its better to refer to the characters by titles or descriptions, or even cut out the pronouns entirely if you can get your meaning across by context alone.

3) Minor one, but there's a couple of egregious spelling errors. "barrow" instead of "borrow" in paragraph 35, for example. Don't worry too much about this, as it's sjut a matter of proper proof-reading. And a lot of the time you'll need someone else to double-check for you.

4) Only describe what needs to be described. The first line of Paragraph 38 is totally unnecessary, and actually kind of immerson breaking. More often than not you're going to want to be intentionally vague so that the reader can fill in the blanks themselves. A lot of great authors make this mistake (Looking at you, Tolkein.), and it can be very hard to know what needs to be included at all.

All in all, I like what you're going for. The idea is sound, you have a pretty good understanding of your characters and everything seems to be consistent (Which is really hard to manage, trust me.) You are making a few... well, I won't call them rookie mistakes because a lot of famous writers will commit these sort of sins to various degrees. Hell, calling them sins is kind of pretentious

You're not a bad writer by any means. I have seen some... memorably bad authors in my brief time. You just need to study other, more successful authors to see their habits.

Hey /drg/, I'll sketch something for whoever rolls a 7.
no lewds though. I'm no good at that.

>>149691290
Do you have any recommendations on reading material?

>>149691397

sketch something about yourself, since you rolled a 7

>>149691397
kirigiri hanging

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>>149691397
Can you sketch a happy ending for Mukuro ?

>>149691397
Draw me a rule 63 Nidai.

>>149691397
Seiko

>>149691397
Aoi killed by bracelet poison.

>>149691397
Brozu

>>149691397
Monaka being cute

>>149691397
Sad Akane

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"Yes, there's a chance I could be killed. But... could any of you really kill me? I don't think I'll die that easily."

>>149691397
Hagakure being cute

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>>149691397
Welp, guess you draw whatever the heck you want.

>>149691452
Hmm. George R.R. Martin is a favourite of mine, same with David Eddings. Pratchett is the inspiration for a lot of my humour, same with Douglas Adams. Arthur C. Clarke is a hell of a slog to get through, but his vocabulary is astounding.

Another exercise you can do is try to describe movie or manga scenes. I do it unconsciously a lot, so I end up practicing way more than I should.

>>149691397
Gozu and bandai being bros

>>149691397
Peko petting a bunny

>>149691397

A date between CxT and tokofriend, they seem to like each other, like candygirl and vash

>>149691397

Mukuro Hanging out with fenrir mercenaries.

>>149691397
Mikan kissing junko

>>149691397

>>149691397
Just draw Chisa

>>149691397
Hiyoko being cute

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>>149691397

The guards from ep 1 of future saluting munakata.

>>149691397
Kirigiri's dead body

>>149691397
Hinateru

>>149691452
>>149691857
Oh! And read/write poetry! That's where I started all those years ago, and a lot of the same skills are pretty transferable.

>>149691857
Well you heard the man.

>>149691397
Ishimaru

>>149691397

Chihiro dressed as Hitler

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>>149691397
Mikan

>>149691397
Makoto x sakura, celes, or chihiro

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>>149691857
>>149692227
What the fuck. Did I just steal both sevens?

>>149691857
I have actually been trying to get into Rama.
But I just haven't had the motivation to sit down and read.
I usually read on bus rides or waiting.

Not really a fan of Martin's work, I really like Dan Abnett and Max Barry. I have read Thomas Harris's Hannibal's trilogy.

Would you mind having a discussion with me on a more responsive format? I have some questions on your critique and would like some clarifications.

>>149691397
write about the miami mutilator

>>149691930

Rerolling

>>149691397
akane x teruteru

>>149691592
Come on lucky 7.

>>149691397

Pekoyama in samurai armor. (sengoku jidai preferably)

>>149691397
Junko x Akane

>>149691397
Seconding >>149691914

>>149691397

A giant turd

>>149691397

Izayoi x Seiko with ruruka getting cucked.

>>149691397

Draw CxT with Miaya's clothes.

>>149691397
Bedhair Peko

>>149692413
I'm really bad at critique, to be totally honest. I'm surprised I was so eloquent there. Your best bet would be to find an active community. Reddit is surrprisingly good at this sometimes. Excuse me whilst I hide from the anons for a few minutes.

I wish I could help more, but I'm in a pretty similar situation to you. I'm terrible at finding/looking for help.

>>149692937
Ding, ding! We have a winner.

>>149691397
Izuru making contact with aliens

>>149691397

Lets go madman mode, don't draw anything.

>>149692937
Fucking finally. Winrar.

What are some instances where its better to write than draw

>>149693142
History, word banks, documenting, accounting, screen plays, scripts.

>>149691397
Happy warriors of hope

>>149693142
Horror, imo. It's easier to keep things vague and build atmosphere with words than with a picture.

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>>149691857
>>149692228
Well then. Here's Chiaki yelling at Hajime for sucking at video games.
>>149692937
Coming right up.

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>>149693453

>>149692982
Still I have some questions and would like you to re-word some of it so I can better understand what you mean.

This is best feedback ive had so far and I really dislike tumblr and reddit.

>>149693453
Amazing.

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>>149692376
You must believe in your Ultimate Luck, anon!

>>149693587
Alright, give me a second and I'll give you my interpretation of the first couple paragraphs.

>>149693453
Your style is cute.

>>149693642
Well, we ended up with >>149692937 so I guess my luck holds out.

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>>149693453
I want Chiaki to yell at me for sucking in video games

>>149694139
I can scream at you for sucking at video games if you want anon.
I am not 3.14 qt gurl but I have years of experience of dealing with mediocre effort. And can guide you on how to git gud.

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In the intro when they show each character facing upwards or downwards: bandai, chisa, and brozu are all facing upwards.

Edgelord is also facing upwards, I think we found out who dies next episode :^)

>>149693754
Would you mind holding this discussion in here with me so we don't derail? http://taima.tv/r/drg

He a pm function if you don't like it being archived.

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>>149693548
Shit. Sorry. Posting from phone
>>149693453
Let's try this again.

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>>149694587

>>149694361
A tempting offer, but can you endure all the "cyka" and "blyat" shouts every 5 seconds while we playing Overwatch? No other game make me as salty as this and I played Dota for like 8 years.

>>149694587
Why did Komaeda fall into despair? Hes always like "HOPE" but in the end he cut off his own arm for Junkos

>>149695272
I was ranked 60 on competitive and got deranked to 55 because ana update, I got a storage facility of salt for that game.

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>>149695415
Play or watch AE

>>149695415
Because chiaki dies. It was the hope that he and the rest of the class held on to. Once she was gone, junko took her spot and fed them the false hope that despair pretends to be

>>149695272
Oh, if you're Russian I can scream at you in russian language, but I don't own Overwatch

I assume with the five knives in the op that there will only be five murders

based on the fact that both chisa and asahina (+makoto, maybe ryouta) has pink blood, and asahina has a fake death, i'm gonna assume that chisa and makoto will have fake deaths at some point.

also, I should have figured Asahina had a fake death with the fact that she's never seen in her tank top before it.

>>149695415
It's kind of ambiguous how brainwashed he ever was. Both in dr2 and udg he seems to have a pretty consistent philosophy which is similar to Junko's idea about how bigger hope leads to bigger despair and vice versa and how you can force the process in one direction to make it swing over.

He's just aiming in the other direction, so by assisting the Ultimate Despair he could eventually become Ultimate Hope, like he said he wanted to be in the game.

>>149695895
>watched prologue of AE
>Nagito's role saddens me
>See his obvious fourth wall breaking
this must be another plan

>>149695972
Junko wasn't even in the same class. I always wondered how did she had so much time to influence them all.

where the mafia lobbies at

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I want to kiri her giri

>>149696816
We all do, anon. We all do.

>tfw preferred the dub in the first game and the sub in the second
>no matter how I watch it, one half of DR3 will feel 'off' to me

Same shit happened in Despair Girls, played Dub since I knew Touko would be a major part of it but still ended up getting burned by how comparatively awful Komaeda sounds in English.

>>149696793
https://epicmafia.com/lobby#?id=292

click the star next to its name if you want to favourite it

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>>149695972
Do you think Nagito would have fallen in love with Chiaki like he did with Junko?

>>149697380
I hope not. I don't need the weird-ass crazy fuck anywhere near my waifu.

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>>149696910
hopefully not all at once

>>149697530
don't call chiaki crazy

>tfw you love the series but still hate how it acts like despair is some magical contagious mental illness that can spread through the fucking air

I just wish they'd come out and say Junko was a witch or something. Magic I could swallow, characters talking in a serious fashion about depression as if it's a sentient force of nature completely ruins any scene it happens in for me.

>>149683473
>private video
does that mean no-fun-allowed police got to it? is it anywhere else?

>>149695572
I am 49 scrub and IIRC we are from different continents so besides random raging and screaming doubt it'll be a good experience.

>>149696031
It is not sounds as amusing actually because there are plenty of people who do the same to me be it vidyas or not.

>>149697149
I played the dub for both games, and I don't even care, since the Jap voices are really good anyway.

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I lost my Seiko folder

Please help me, /drg/

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>>149697672
Fool, isn't it obvious?
This despair must be the work of her Stand, Everybody Hurts!

>>149697672
At this point I'm expecting we'll get to visit Hope's Peak in Kingdom Hearts 3 before finding out Junko was a Heartless all along

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>>149697915
>saving pictures of my girlfriend
You better be fucking with me

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>>149697672
I think some characters just needed a little push

>>149697672
Junkos shtick isn't as much depression as it is dramatic irony

>>149697915
Give me 5 minutes, im cooking pizza.

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Hello /drg/
How's your day been so far?

>>149698475
what type of pizza?

>>149698583
Sausage

>>149698475
i bet its microwaved

>>149698573
Missed some cool discussion in the thread and I'm currently being incinerated with the weather. But the more important question is how YOUR day been?

>>149698680
I cook my pizza's in the oven thank you.

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>>149697530
They look pretty hot together to be honest. Chiaki is natural born Hope and Komaeda is crazy for that kind of thing.

>>149698938
pics pls im a slut for food

>>149699051
God /drg/ is fucking weird some times.
Sure give me a few minutes.

>>149699120
>God /drg/ is fucking weird some times.
its a fun weird though

>>149698573
Kind of quiet. Nice and cool. Also got to know Tokoposter, which was pretty fun!

It feels weird being part of a community.

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>>149699120
>/drg/ only weird sometimes
this has to be fixed

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>>149698782
Well, it's my first day officially back home and so far I haven't done anything to really consider this any kind of day.
Over the past weekend I've had a mixed bag though. Was in Florida to visit some family and honestly it felt like those days flew by because we didn't do much but eat and occasionally watch my brother and dad bicker about money

>>149699120
>some times
it's an anonymous board. Automatically everyone is gonna be weird.

>>149699268
You seem new. I don't think we have met

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I cannot believe I took a picture of my pizza for some guy on /drg/

>>149699541
Be thankful that it's just a picture of your pizza. It could be way worse

>>149699330
I can't stop seeing her ear with a really long earlobe.

Also fuck off.

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>>149699541
You should have gotten Pineapple Pizza

>>149699535
Yeah, I decided to adopt a name if I'm going to be taking more requests from the thread. I've been knocking around for the past few days thoguh so... hi. I'm your friendly neighbourhood depraved pervert.

>>149699726
I am not taking dick picks.
Go google giant ginger freckle dicks if /drg/ is so curious.

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>>149699541
O-oh sunpie c-check out my pizza.

>>149699541
it looks okay. the toppings overflowing the crust is kinda bad though.

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>>149699541

That's not a bad pizza for a reserve course! Allow me to complement your meal with a 7

>>149699795
>Go google giant ginger freckle dicks if /drg/ is so curious.
The results are pretty shitty.

Anyone know what happened to Bandai's body after episode 2?

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>>149699846
So close

>>149699846
You gave me a 6 you useless sack of shit.

>>149699951
Your right, its just a bunch of women giving fellatio. What the fuck google?

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>>149700075

>6

Haha sorry about that, I guess you could say it's just not my lucky day

>>149699795
gingers are cute, but they tend to have terrible hair cuts for some reason

>>149699834
that's not a fucking pizza!!

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>>149699774
>more requests
So your an artist huh? Interesting.
I'd consider myself an artist too but it's kindof a side hobby

>>149699795
I imagined that as an actual porn title. Like a giant ginger is "freckling" dicks or something
I can be weird too sometimes

>>149700312
Ah, no, not an artist I'm afraid! Author. Although, I suppose that's a kind of artist, if we stretch the term somewhat.

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>>149700418
Oh sorry, my bad
Are you the CxT guy? If not I'd enjoy seeing some of your work sometime or another

>>149697915
I haven't forgot about you.
https://a.pomf.cat/udyghw.zip

>>149700301
>gingers are cute
It depends. 90% of gingers are either really good-looking or ugly af

>>149700312
>I imagined that as an actual porn title. Like a giant ginger is "freckling" dicks or something
I have no words. Wth Celes?

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Is she right?

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>>149700735
Of course not

>>149700618
Nope! A returning customer, shall we say. I was here back when Mukuro-Anon roamed the threads. I took a break and came back about a week ago.

I did post a couple examples of my work earlier in the thread, I believe.
>>149686075
>>149681460

>>149700735
Seiko is best DR3 girl.

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>>149700735
She's a total dork. I love her. Best character in DR3 currently

>>149700953
I'll have to check it out sometime. I'm currently busy at the moment but whenever I can I will

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GREETINGS DEAR ATHLETES!!

HOW IS YOUR TRAINING COMING ALONG?!

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>>149701272
She is adorkable.

>>149701272
Take your time, I'm not planning on going anywhere.

>>149701320
Oh god, he's back. I swear, coach, I'll start walking again tomorrow!

>>149701320
Manager, I want to train my lines in /drg/ fandub project! When it will be started?

>>149701320
Pretty well. Played basketball this friday, went to the beach sunday and tomorrow it's gym day again. I should've exercised today, but some stuff came up.
I need to fix my diet though, I can't seem to be consistent and I'm missing calories everywhere.

How you doing Coach?

>>149701320
My current jog time is 6 minutes uninterrupted where it was 5 before.

But I put too much strain on my right leg so I was only able to jog for 15 minutes.
But I was not out of breath or exhausted so I look forward to going past 6 next time.

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>>149701320

I honestly only workout to keep my body looking nice to impress the chicks. ironically, I got strong physically but I'm still insecure and shy

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>>149701320
Hi hi, Nidaibro! I ran around the garden with my dog today, that's about it for physical exercise.

>>149701320
It gets hot inside a cast... I miss using my right leg too. Besides the whining I'll be back in action in a few months.

Time passing is inevitable
While you can enjoy the moment, eventually you will see your favorite characters fall into despair and or die, and eventually You will have to face rising student debt that you will spend the rest of your life paying off

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>>149702101
>american universities

>>149702208
We didn't choose to be American anon.

>>149702101
>and eventually You will have to face rising student debt that you will spend the rest of your life paying off
If I never earn above a certain weekly wage for something like 25 years then the debt is written off. So I don't have to pay anything back until I can actually afford to do so.
Also it's only about £12,000 in total

>>149702208
Trick question.

What direction is this gif rotating to?

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>>149702101
>implying I'm even a student

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>>149701582
WHY WAIT?

>>149701592
WE CAN TRAIN ANY TIME!! JUST POST IN THE GROUP AND I WILL WORK WITH YOU!!

>>149701647
I AM QUITE WELL!! DIETING IS IMPORTANT BUT IF YOU WORK HARD ENOUGH YOUR CALORIES WILL ADJUST ACCORDINGLY!!

>>149701678
VERY GOOD!! I AM PROUD OF YOUR PROGRESS!!

>>149701713
THEN TRAIN YOUR SPIRIT!! A HEALTHY BODY IS NOTHING COMPARED TO THE IMPORTANCE OF LOVING YOURSELF!! TAKE TIME TO REFLECT ON THIS.

>>149701752
IT'S SOMETHING!! YOUR DOG IS A GREAT TRAINING COMPANION!!

>>149701894
UPPER BODY AND LEFT LEG STRENGTH AWAIT YOU!!

OVERALL I AM INCREDIBLY PLEASED BY WHAT I'M READING!! GREAT WORK EVERYONE!!