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So, how is your kino screenwriting going?
I am having problems with Act 2. The most interesting parts happen in the beginning and in the end but I can't seem to get any meat in to the middle part.
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>>85287109
"Can't you see, the exits are blocked"
"We have to get out of here"
"We're Doomed"
3x "No!"
And all this expository dialogue. You're going to need to rewrite, rewrite and rewrite.
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A lot of people struggle with act 2. Usually it indicates that you had a "cool idea" in the sense that you had some interesting setup/setting, but not something people would actually watch. Your premise should be flowing with cool ideas that people want to watch. "Trailer moments" or whatever.
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>>85287028
Act 2 is where the actual story is.
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>>85287175
I see what you mean. I guess I just have think of something good or just try a different story altogether.
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>>85287109
this is fucking awful
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